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amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 14:48
http://syosetu.com/

"Syosetsuka ni narou" (小説家になろう) or translated as "Let's become a novelist" is a web-novel posting site. With some publishing light novel companies printed several titles, I think this site need to be recognized more. Who knows? you might find any interesting title here and then find that its adapted into other media (Hopefully). Some titles from this site that has been published: Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei, Log Horizon, Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari, Next Life, Mushoku Tensei -Isekai Ittara Honki Dasu, Re: Zero Kara Hajimaru Isekai Seikatsu, Nee-chan wa Chuunibyou!, etc etc

This thread is for discussing several other titles that doesn't have their specific thread. Feel free to discuss, suggest, introduce, or talk anything else about Syosetsuka here.

As a start, I'll introduce one title which is quite new and I really loved this one

Original Title: モンスターのご主人様
Romaji: Monster no Goshujin-sama
Alternative Title: Master of Monster
Author: Chocola Mint (ショコラ・ミント)
Status: Started on 2013/12/14 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9543bw/)

Majima Takahiro didn't know if he is lucky or unlucky. Suddenly transported to a forest, he and the other students and teachers are soon attacked by a dragon. He is pushed back by the masses and falls down. When he was about to accept his death, one student managed to kill that dragon with one attack, and he is saved, thanks to luck. Students and Teachers start to gather and to survive in what they perceived as another world, they decided to work together and make a settlement there. They called themselves as "Colony". The colony are divided into 2 group: Exploration Group (around 300) who possessed "Cheat Ability" and Resident Group who didn't (around 700). Unluckily, Takahiro are one of the latter. One weeks had passed, and the Exploration Group decided to start an expedition with mission: to find a way out from the forest and meets with resident of that world. But unlucky tragedy happened, as soon as half of Exploration Grop depart, several members of "Exploration Group" who stays behind, start a coup d'etat and as a result, annihilated the only place they can live in. That day, the Colony is gone, a violent fight occured between 2 parties, and the "Resident Group", who didn't possessed any power to fight, are forced to run. The tragedy didn't stop, victim of the uproar started to appear between "Resident Group" and some of them started to assault the others, Takahiro are one who is attacked, by his own classmates. He falls to the ground, and by luck, didn't get killed. He then run and loiter in the forest for 3 days, before he finally found a cave in the morning to shelter himself. His body injured and fatigued from stress and hunger, his mind wounded, which started to hollow from sense of powerlessness and being betrayed, he then realized: that human being are just trash, he can never and ever believe humans. In that state, a monster approached him, a slime... closing on his hand, the slime attempted to swallow him. Finally realizing that his luck may have just run out, he squeeze out his feelings, "......Someone, please help me"

This is the story of a fantasy, of a human, and his "family", finding the light of love and trust even if the light was surrounded by the darkness of human hearts.

Another Tenshou, I wonder why this theme of "transported to another world" is so popular? I also wonder why some titles have similar setting? but I don't care about it anymore, as long as the story good, I'm in! To me, reading a story is like eating a cake (I love cake~ :meh:) as long as it's delicious, the topping doesn't really matter be it tenshou, tensei, or Isekai :smile:

Why do I like this title? Fantasy is a man romance they say, and then the theme about human hearts, and then the Heroines are just cute~~ :hyper-^v^:

My search keywords usually are: fantasy, ongoing, arranging from title with the most evaluation or arranging from title with the most unique users.

EDIT:
Here (http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=5040796#post5040796)

Ougon
2014-02-13, 14:57
The MC seems to be really weak from the synopsis. Being a chuu2 lover, will I enjoy this?

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 15:03
Psychological and Slice of life should be the tags of this title, protagonist power is to "communicate with certain monsters". This title is not really that chuu2 but it still has some action. Kouen like Chuu2 story with very strong protagonist right? wait a sec, there are several titles that might be your cup of tea~

BW95
2014-02-13, 15:14
Psychological and Slice of life should be the tags of this title, protagonist power is to "communicate with certain monsters". This title is not really that chuu2 but it still has some action. Kouen like Chuu2 story with very strong protagonist right? wait a sec, there are several titles that might be your cup of tea~

Ah. So he had a power to begin with. He just didn't realize it.

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 15:28
Yeah, he didn't realize it at first, but thanks to that power, the slime became his first "family member" and saved him. He named the Slime, Lily.

BW95
2014-02-13, 15:31
Yeah, he didn't realize it at first, but thanks to that power, the slime became his first "family member" and saved him. He named the Slime, Lily.

So he lost his faith in humanity and now he only trusts monsters? Usually, it's some harem member that gets this sort of ability. Interesting.

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 15:53
He develop a PTSD from the event and unable to trust human, along his journey, he will meet new family member, and also people from his school. His journey is not just to survive, but also to fix his problem. His family will also faced problem about "emotion" and "feeling" (granted by Takahiro power) and learn more about this "feeling", as they grow humanly.

Second title that I recommend to read.

Original Title: ありふれた職業で世界最強
Romaji: Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou
Alternative Title: From Common Job Class to the Strongest in the World
Author: Chuuni Suki (厨二好き)
Status: Started on 2013/11/07 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8611bv/)

Among the class that was transported to another world, Nagumo Hajime is an ordinary male student who doesn't have ambition nor aspiration in life, called by his classmates as "Incompetent". The class is summoned to become heroes and save a country from destruction, students of these class are blessed with cheat specs and cool job class, but that's not the case with Hajime, his job class is a "Synergist" and his stats are very normal (mediocre). "Synergist", to put it in another word is just artisan class. Being the weakest, he then falls to the depth of the abyss when he and his classmates are exploring a dungeon. What did he find in the depth of the abyss and can he survive?

This is my most favorite title that I really liked right now (with Monster no Goshujin-sama as the second). Lots of templates, but it didn't reduce the enjoyment of reading this!

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 16:30
Third Title!

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Original Title: この世界がゲームだと俺だけが知っている
Romaji: Kono Sekai ga Game dato Ore dake ga Shitteiru
Alternative Title: Only Me who know this world is a game
Author: Usubaa (ウスバー)
Illustrator: Ichizen (イチゼン)
Publisher: Enterbrain
Status: Started on 2012/04/10 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9078bd/)

[New Communication Online] (AKA Nekomimi Neko Offline) is a popular virtual reality game known to be fully-loaded with bugs. Sagara Souma who is a fan of this game, is thrown inside the game thanks to a mysterious tools activated by his sulky cousin. Surprised at first, but that's the world of game he know. This is the story of Souma who uses the world bugs against it's inhabitants and gaining fame for himself.

Comedy fantasy story. The idea is unique, and it's quite funny, I laughed quite a lot when I read this.

Ougon
2014-02-13, 17:00
Wait, Amacchi, create new threads for those, for they deserve it.

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 17:13
fue~ which one?? :confused:

Avrorrange
2014-02-13, 17:49
Traveling to another world is popular these days, isn't it?

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 17:54
It's the most popular setting to be used in Narou. I guess writing those kinds of story are easy compared to making renai stories.

Ougon
2014-02-13, 18:00
fue~ which one?? :confused:

Both of the other two titles.

Avrorrange
2014-02-13, 18:00
It's the most popular setting to be used in Narou. I guess writing those kinds of story are easy compared to making renai stories.

Yet, most of them are harem too it seems.

amatsunagi
2014-02-13, 18:05
Both of the other two titles.
Roger that~ :nod:

Yet, most of them are harem too it seems.
Yeah, it's author fantasies~ but I also like it so no problem there~

HasNoLove
2014-02-13, 22:28
Ama-san in full trottel...!!
TYVM..!! :D

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 17:20
Fourth Title!

Original Title: 邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語
Romaji: Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari
Alternative Title: The Tales of Wickedly Vicious Underground Empire
Author: Haamitto (はーみっと)
Illustrator: Unknown (???)
Publisher: Alphapolis
Status: Started on 2013/03/10 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1890bo/)

It's 5 years after the falls of Magic Empire.
The Holy Kingdom who leads the Union of several countries, While restraining the other powers, neglected to keep peace. The people of Holy Kingdom dreams of perpetual peace, with the wealth taken from Magic Kingdom, buying all slaves from minor powers, pillaging and indulging themselves with the territory they snatch. However...
Unknown to them, there are forces that moves behind the darkness.

These people, are memento from the dead Empire.
The prince and princess of the long gone empire, a siblings.

Harva, the princess, is a weak but lovely and energetic little girl
Alarc, the prince, is a handsome young man with beautiful kind smile.

"That day, is the unforgettable day for us right? brother!"
"Yeah"

The siblings escaped that day, the day when their loved country turns into land of nightmare, the day when the white sacred walls turn intos crimson walls of blood and fire, and the day when they lost everything. The siblings trained themselves, enduring pain, sadness, losing soul and sanity, selling their soul to the darkness and evils, and know... losing their former self, they create the foundation of what would be their last and dearest wish...

""To grant our wish (revenge)..., ---we create the, wickedly vicious Underground Empire""

....thus, start the dark tale of revenge and retribution.


Okay, you might have realized from the synopsis that this title is different from what I have introduced before, but I'll say it anyway: this title is dark, so beware. In short, this is about siblings who sold their soul for revenge: the sister became sadistic and vengeful, the brother became cold and emotionless. These siblings create a dungeon, gathering monster, killing any intruders to train the monster they gathered, capturing the useful ones to work for them, and then raise them into army to defeat the enemy and bring upon them retribution. Alphapolis is going to publish this, and set to be released february (or maybe march?), illustrator is still unknown.

bludvein
2014-02-18, 17:34
I have to ask before I check it out, but this isn't an incest title is it?

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 17:43
I have to ask before I check it out, but this isn't an incest title is it?

AFAIk, no. You don't like incest bludvein? :confused:
By the way, this is another harem. ;)

BW95
2014-02-18, 17:49
AFAIk, no. You don't like incest bludvein? :confused:
By the way, this is another harem. ;)

So the prince is the main character?

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 18:09
Yes, the prince is the protagonist. :smile:

bludvein
2014-02-18, 18:15
AFAIk, no. You don't like incest bludvein? :confused:
By the way, this is another harem. ;)

Not a fan, no. Bro-cons can be funny on the side, but any more than that gets too squicky for me.

Ougon
2014-02-18, 18:23
Same here, incest turns me off....

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 19:14
hum~, as for me, I have no problem with incest ^^a

Fifth Title!

Original Title: 金色の文字使い ~勇者四人に巻き込まれたユニークチート~
Romaji: Konjiki no Word Master ~Yuusha Yonnin ni Makikomareta Unique Cheat~
Alternative Title: Golden Word Master ~4 heroes involved by Unique Cheat~
Author: Toomoto Sui (十本スイ)
Status: Started on 2013/7/30 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n7031bs/)

Okamura Hiiro is introverted and loves books. To him, books are his raison d'etre. His story starts with usual gimmick of Heroes summoning. Five people summoned, but one of them is just an outsider dragged in accidentally, that person is Hiiro. 4 others are his classmates, but it's not like they are friends. Unlike him, they are Riajuu's. Hiiro decided not to help the country, reason? "I don't believe you, I'm not friend with them, It's not my business, and I'm an ordinary person who cares for his life, so bye", and he set for his own journey. Little does other knows, that this ordinary person, Hiiro, actually hides a power which could change the world!

Yeah, the usual gimmick of Tenshoku. The plot is light, simple and straightforward, protagonist adventuring, learn about his power, dragged into war of races, slowly became the true hero the world need. Protagonist? Awesome, he is cool and arrogant and badass and incarnation of OP and wear glasses. Lastly, I ROFLed at the harem~

Anyway, this title is the cause of 2 days MIA~

Im Otaku
2014-02-18, 19:21
It's the most popular setting to be used in Narou. I guess writing those kinds of story are easy compared to making renai stories.

Not an incest? Shame I'm a fan of those as I am a fan of harem.

Im Otaku
2014-02-18, 19:22
Not a fan, no. Bro-cons can be funny on the side, but any more than that gets too squicky for me.

Bro-cons arent that entertaining to me, I have this odd craving for the brother to actually get together with the sister. The only good thing about it in my eyes is the fact that you never know if it'll happen. :smile:

BW95
2014-02-18, 19:45
I see. This is sounds somewhat similar to the Sendai Yuusha you introduced a while back and after reading your synopsis I can see how you'd be immersed in it for 2 whole days. Let me guess. The guy's OP powers have to do with books?

zerodragon
2014-02-18, 19:48
Original Title: モンスターのご主人様
Romaji: Monster no Goshujin-sama
Alternative Title: Master of Monster
Author: Chocola Mint (ショコラ・ミント)
Status: Started on 2013/12/14 - ongoing



Another Tenshou, I wonder why this theme of "transported to another world" is so popular? I also wonder why some titles have similar setting? but I don't care about it anymore, as long as the story good, I'm in! To me, reading a story is like eating a cake (I love cake~ :meh:) as long as it's delicious, the topping doesn't really matter be it tenshou, tensei, or Isekai :smile:

Why do I like this title? Fantasy is a man romance they say, and then the theme about human hearts, and then the Heroines are just cute~~ :hyper-^v^:


could you give some information about the heroines in this?

BW95
2014-02-18, 19:49
could you give some information about the heroines in this?

Bet all the girls are all monsters or some different species.

About this series, did these guys have some breakdown like in Lord of the Flies?

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 20:55
I see. This is sounds somewhat similar to the Sendai Yuusha you introduced a while back and after reading your synopsis I can see how you'd be immersed in it for 2 whole days. Let me guess. The guy's OP powers have to do with books?

Nope...
the magic in that world is divided into 3 types:
Normal Magic: Usual elemental magic
Unique Magic: special magic, like dancing, illusion, dream.
Absolute Magic: Stronger version of Unique Magic, bypass Anti-magic.

Basic of Magic, the important thing is imagination and controling MP. If something wrong happened, the user will receive penalty called [Rebound], death is possible. Magic are not all-purpose. The power Hiiro got is called Word Magic, he can create anything he imagine while writing the kanji that represent it. For example: if he wrote 「炎」 which is the kanji for flame, he can create fire. At first, his magic is limited, but as he get stronger, his magic restrictions are lifted one by one. His magic is all-purpose, and truly the incarnation of cheating.

could you give some information about the heroines in this?

The first heroine is Lily: A slime. At first, she is just a simple slime, her power is "Copy", she can copy completely (although weaker) living object she eats. Takahiro and Lily then found the corpse of Mizushima Miho, one of a student from Takahiro school. Miho killed herself to protect her dignity from being raped. He asked Lily to process Miho body, which result in Lily gaining Miho appearance and memory. Lily is a cheerful and beautiful girl, also a big-sister figure in the family. Deep down, she is envious to Katou Mana, another girl student who travelled along with them. The reason of her envy is caused by the complex of "not-fully human" despite taking the form of human, and she is scared of being abandoned by Takahiro. After the confrontation against Mana, it is hinted she is slowly taking the personality of Miho.

The second heroine is Rose: A magical puppet. Her appearance is a boorish wooden mannequin with no face. Her ability is "Magic Smithing", she can create weapons, armors, and forged them with magic. She is calm and very diligent, a sport / military type. Respect Lily as her big sister. She lack understanding of humans emotion but grow to learn more of it. Mana teach her to understand about "desire and wish" as part of being human. Rose admitted to Mana, she wishes to be hugged by Takahiro, Mana then supports her by saying that she only have to be cuter. By the way, at first Rose cannot talk, because she doesn't have vocal organ. Then she created it to answer Takahiro wishes to speak with her.

The third heroine is Gerbera: An Arachne. High monster, taking the form of half woman-half spider, with white as her color, and red as her eyes color. At first she is the enemy of Takahiro and "his family", intended to monopolize Takahiro for herself, but Mana confronts her directly and told her that being happy is not only "to love but also be loved back". A sweet childish female who tried her best to learn things other than violence. The type to easily let her mind slip from her mouth, and then getting embarassed by it.

That's the current heroines. Everyone is so cute~ Lily's jealousy is adorable, Rose effort to change her form closer to human and became cute, is adorable. Gerbera's embarassed moments is adorable hau~ hau~~ :hyper-^v^:

Bet all the girls are all monsters or some different species.

About this series, did these guys have some breakdown like in Lord of the Flies?

fue~? breakdown? :confused:

BW95
2014-02-18, 21:04
Nope...
the magic in that world is divided into 3 types:
Normal Magic: Usual elemental magic
Unique Magic: special magic, like dancing, illusion, dream.
Absolute Magic: Stronger version of Unique Magic, bypass Anti-magic.

Basic of Magic, the important thing is imagination and controling MP. If something wrong happened, the user will receive penalty called [Rebound], death is possible. Magic are not all-purpose. The power Hiiro got is called Word Magic, he can create anything he imagine while writing the kanji that represent it. For example: if he wrote 「炎」 which is the kanji for flame, he can create fire. At first, his magic is limited, but as he get stronger, his magic restrictions are lifted one by one. His magic is all-purpose, and truly the incarnation of cheating.



The first heroine is Lily: A slime. At first, she is just a simple slime, her power is "Copy", she can copy completely (although weaker) living object she eats. Takahiro and Lily then found the corpse of Mizushima Miho, one of a student from Takahiro school. Miho killed herself to protect her dignity from being raped. He asked Lily to process Miho body, which result in Lily gaining Miho appearance and memory. Lily is a cheerful and beautiful girl, also a big-sister figure in the family. Deep down, she is envious to Katou Mana, another girl student who travelled along with them. The reason of her envy is caused by the complex of "not-fully human" despite taking the form of human, and she is scared of being abandoned by Takahiro. After the confrontation against Mana, it is hinted she is slowly taking the personality of Miho.

The second heroine is Rose: A magical puppet. Her appearance is a boorish wooden mannequin with no face. Her ability is "Magic Smithing", she can create weapons, armors, and forged them with magic. She is calm and very diligent, a sport / military type. Respect Lily as her big sister. She lack understanding of humans emotion but grow to learn more of it. Mana teach her to understand about "desire and wish" as part of being human. Rose admitted to Mana, she wishes to be hugged by Takahiro, Mana then supports her by saying that she only have to be cuter. By the way, at first Rose cannot talk, because she doesn't have vocal organ. Then she created it to answer Takahiro wishes to speak with her.

The third heroine is Gerbera: An Arachne. High monster, taking the form of half woman-half spider, with white as her color, and red as her eyes color. At first she is the enemy of Takahiro and "his family", intended to monopolize Takahiro for herself, but Mana confronts her directly and told her that being happy is not only "to love but also be loved back". A sweet childish female who tried her best to learn things other than violence. The type to easily let her mind slip from her mouth, and then getting embarassed by it.

That's the current heroines. Everyone is so cute~ Lily's jealousy is adorable, Rose effort to change her form closer to human and became cute, is adorable. Gerbera's embarassed moments is adorable hau~ hau~~ :hyper-^v^:



fue~? breakdown? :confused:

Yeah. That's what I actually meant. A power related to words. Predictable and truly monstrous.

With these heroines, particularly Rose, we might hit the uncanny valley. Empathy takes a sharp drop just before something reaches being human and rises again as it get closer. How are they power-wise?

I was referring to how some of these would-be jerks rampaged and destroyed the village. Were their motivations ever explained?

omegasereon
2014-02-18, 21:09
Gahh need to use GT even more now.

HasNoLove
2014-02-18, 21:11
hum~, as for me, I have no problem with incest ^^a

Fifth Title!

Original Title: 金色の文字使い ~勇者四人に巻き込まれたユニークチート~
Romaji: Konjiki no Word Master ~Yuusha Yonnin ni Makikomareta Unique Cheat~
Alternative Title: Golden Word Master ~4 heroes involved by Unique Cheat~
Author: Toomoto Sui (十本スイ)
Status: Started on 2013/7/30 - ongoing



Yeah, the usual gimmick of Tenshoku. The plot is light, simple and straightforward, protagonist adventuring, learn about his power, dragged into war of races, slowly became the true hero the world need. Protagonist? Awesome, he is cool and arrogant and badass and incarnation of OP and wear glasses. Lastly, I ROFLed at the harem~

Anyway, this title is the cause of 2 days MIA~

wow..,
maybe I got a touch with tis novel....

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 21:24
Yeah. That's what I actually meant. A power related to words. Predictable and truly monstrous.

With these heroines, particularly Rose, we might hit the uncanny valley. Empathy takes a sharp drop just before something reaches being human and rises again as it get closer. How are they power-wise?

I was referring to how some of these would-be jerks rampaged and destroyed the village. Were their motivations ever explained?

===Word master===
That Word Magic is really a cheat, but Hiiro still haven't unlocked the full power of Word Magic yet.

===Monster Master===
Lily is strong, thanks to her ability and her body structure. She is basically an all-rounder. Rose is the blacksmith of party, but she is also the main attacker of the party, being skilled as well. Gerbera, is the strongest, having the status of High-Monster.

The Breakdown of "the colony" is caused by coup d'etat, reason: dunno, but they might be unsatisfied with how things going. The situation becames worse, with normal students attack the other normal students as well, either killing male, or raping female. That day, the civilized turns into uncivilized, resorting to "survival of the fittest". No wonder Takahiro developed PTSD and unable to believe other humans anymore.

This title puts emphasis on Psychology part, but still has some battle scenes, although not as intense as the usual fantasy story.

Gahh need to use GT even more now.

which one catch your interest? :smile:

bludvein
2014-02-18, 22:29
So I'm guessing the protagonist in your latest rec will eventually be able to cast just by speaking instead of writing? Or carry some general Kanji on his person.

Okashira
2014-02-18, 23:05
which one catch your interest? :smile:

Everything sounds interesting, though Souma's story (the video game one) doesn't fit my style as much as the others (unless he is a closet siscon :heh:).

edit :
金色の文字使い ~勇者四人に巻き込まれたユニークチート~
I ROFLed at the harem~

Don't leave out the juicy bits!

omegasereon
2014-02-18, 23:26
===Word master===
That Word Magic is really a cheat, but Hiiro still haven't unlocked the full power of Word Magic yet.

===Monster Master===
Lily is strong, thanks to her ability and her body structure. She is basically an all-rounder. Rose is the blacksmith of party, but she is also the main attacker of the party, being skilled as well. Gerbera, is the strongest, having the status of High-Monster.

The Breakdown of "the colony" is caused by coup d'etat, reason: dunno, but they might be unsatisfied with how things going. The situation becames worse, with normal students attack the other normal students as well, either killing male, or raping female. That day, the civilized turns into uncivilized, resorting to "survival of the fittest". No wonder Takahiro developed PTSD and unable to believe other humans anymore.

This title puts emphasis on Psychology part, but still has some battle scenes, although not as intense as the usual fantasy story.



which one catch your interest? :smile:

Monster madness and word master(looks smimilar to tate no yuusha.
Isn't mana also an heroine since you mentioned her join the group?

amatsunagi
2014-02-18, 23:40
So I'm guessing the protagonist in your latest rec will eventually be able to cast just by speaking instead of writing? Or carry some general Kanji on his person.

Hmm, He still have to write it. But the number of Kanji he can write is increased, or using kanji simultaneously, etc.

Everything sounds interesting, though Souma's story (the video game one) doesn't fit my style as much as the others (unless he is a closet siscon :heh:).

That one comedy, I read it as a snack between serious stuff (Lately, I've been reading only serious stuff :heh:)

EDIT:
Monster madness and word master(looks smimilar to tate no yuusha.
Isn't mana also an heroine since you mentioned her join the group?

Yeah, Word Master is similar to Tate Yuusha in plot device, but that's it. Differences, in Word Master: plot is a bit lighter but does not lack plot twist, Hiiro luck is not bad like Naofumi.

Mana is more like a sub-character that help Main characters develop. She knows Miho and become her friend, she then lost her, and raped. She is saved by Takahiro, but Takahiro, Lily, Rose didn't trust her. Mana is envy of the bonds between Takahiro and his family. She actually want to join the circle, because she is the only one not considered as friend by Takahiro and his family. She is quiet, but very perceptive of other feelings, this trait of her help her gain trust and become friend with Rose, but not with Takahiro, since Takahiro himself has PTSD. Also, her stare sometimes can raise boogies to others.

omegasereon
2014-02-19, 00:09
Wow you serious word master 239 chapters.......but each looks pretty short compared to arifureta. Guess i'm gonna be pretty busy with this..
Edit:Also 1 chapter a day too? Thats pretty sweet.

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 00:24
edit :


Don't leave out the juicy bits!
This guy is worse than Naofumi. At first, Hiiro didn't have harem, unlike Taishi ( one of the 4 heroes, the other three are girls) who has harem (and also Title as Harem Creator). Midway, Hiiro gained title: Little lady Killer (Youjo Killer / 幼女キラー), after that, several months and his Title evolves to: God that brings down Little Lady (Youjo Otoshikami / 幼女落とし神). So, what I'm trying to say, this guy is loli magnet, I've counted the numbers and:
1. Myua (Loli, 8 years old)
2. Mimiru (Loli, 8 years old)
3. Mikadzuchi (Loli, unknown)
4. Lyrin (Loli, 300?)
5. Nikki (Loli, 8 years old)
6. Ionis (Loli, 8 years old)
7. Iveam (Girl, 18 years old)
8. Kukuria (Girl, 18 years old)
9. Hime (Girl, unknown)
10. Kuroichi (Loli, unknown)
11. Putis (Loli, unknown, interested?)
12. Kamyu (TRAP, age unknown)

That's: 8 (little girl) + 3 (girls) + (1 boy)
And it still growing. By the way, I forgot the exact age, so I guessed them.
Kamyu is adorable~~ :love:

Wow you serious word master 239 chapters.......but each looks pretty short compared to arifureta. Guess i'm gonna be pretty busy with this..
Edit:Also 1 chapter a day too? Thats pretty sweet.
Yeah, 239 chapters, updated daily.
Yami Ou is worst, 400 chapters+...

HasNoLove
2014-02-19, 00:31
This guy is worse than Naofumi. At first, Hiiro didn't have harem, unlike Taishi ( one of the 4 heroes, the other three are girls) who has harem (and also Title as Harem Creator). Midway, Hiiro gained title: Little lady Killer (Youjo Killer / 幼女キラー), after that, several months and his Title evolves to: God that brings down Little Lady (Youjo Otoshikami / 幼女落とし神). So, what I'm trying to say, this guy is loli magnet, I've counted the numbers and:
1. Myua (Loli, 8 years old)
2. Mimiru (Loli, 8 years old)
3. Mikadzuchi (Loli, unknown)
4. Lyrin (Loli, 300?)
5. Nikki (Loli, 8 years old)
6. Ionis (Loli, 8 years old)
7. Iveam (Girl, 18 years old)
8. Kukuria (Girl, 18 years old)
9. Hime (Girl, unknown)
10. Kuroichi (Loli, unknown)
11. Putis (Loli, unknown, interested?)
12. Kamyu (TRAP, age unknown)

That's: 8 (little girl) + 3 (girls) + (1 boy)
And it still growing. By the way, I forgot the exact age, so I guessed them.
Kamyu is adorable~~ :love:


Yeah, 239 chapters, updated daily.
Yami Ou is worst, 400 chapters+...

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WHUT..!!!
LOLIS...??
how come so many lolis gathering to him..??

larethian
2014-02-19, 00:36
"Syosetsuka ni narou" (小説家になろう) or translated as "Let's become a novelist" is a web-novel posting site. With some publishing light novel companies printed several titles, I think this site need to be recognized more. Who knows? you might find any interesting title here and then find that its adapted into other media (Hopefully). Some titles from this site that has been published: Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei, Log Horizon, Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari, Next Life, Mushoku Tensei -Isekai Ittara Honki Dasu, Re: Zero Kara Hajimaru Isekai Seikatsu, Nee-chan wa Chuunibyou!, etc etc

This thread is for discussing several other titles that doesn't have their specific thread. Feel free to discuss, suggest, introduce, or talk anything else about Syosetsuka here.

As a start, I'll introduce one title which is quite new and I really loved this one

Original Title: モンスターのご主人様
Romaji: Monster no Goshujin-sama
Alternative Title: Master of Monster
Author: Chocola Mint (ショコラ・ミント)
Status: Started on 2013/12/14 - ongoing



Another Tenshou, I wonder why this theme of "transported to another world" is so popular? I also wonder why some titles have similar setting? but I don't care about it anymore, as long as the story good, I'm in! To me, reading a story is like eating a cake (I love cake~ :meh:) as long as it's delicious, the topping doesn't really matter be it tenshou, tensei, or Isekai :smile:

Why do I like this title? Fantasy is a man romance they say, and then the theme about human hearts, and then the Heroines are just cute~~ :hyper-^v^:

My search keywords usually are: fantasy, ongoing, arranging from title with the most evaluation or arranging from title with the most unique users.
You forgot the ka in your topic, and I think you should provide a link to the site in the opening post and hotlinks to each series.

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 00:41
FUEEEE!?!? h-how can I not realized it!? OTL

awawa~ need to fix it~~ >_< thanks for noticing!

eh, by the way, about links, wouldn't it be deleted by mods? :confused:

kidswable
2014-02-19, 00:47
I thought if it was the link to the original web novel it will be allowed.
I am wondering if many people outside japan open that site to read the novel will help to publish the proper light novel from the web novel? Like mahouka and sao

bludvein
2014-02-19, 00:48
Why would they be? It's not a link to a scan or anything illegal...

larethian
2014-02-19, 00:48
FUEEEE!?!? h-how can I not realized it!? OTL

awawa~ need to fix it~~ >_< thanks for noticing!

eh, by the way, about links, wouldn't it be deleted by mods? :confused:

Normally only licensed and illegal content like raws and scans. ncode.syosetu is a public free to read site. Even for those newly licensed series, if the web version of the novels are yet to be removed from the site, it's legal to read them (from the website) for all. As long as it's legal and no unauthorized infringement, it's okay.

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 00:57
Hmm, before, I posted one in Mushoku Tensei since I know it's free, but the link got deleted, so I thought it's not okay.
But thanks for the clarification ^^

@kidswable:
Not necessarily, but it might help, there are 3 factors (IMO):
- Evaluation
- Page View
- Unique users + reviews

Most publishers search for "Entertainment" titles or those that can easily catch attention: like ecchi stuff for example?

Mars Mode
2014-02-19, 01:10
Fourth Title!

Original Title: 邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語
Romaji: Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari
Alternative Title: The Tales of Wickedly Vicious Underground Empire
Author: Haamitto (はーみっと)
Illustrator: Unknown (???)
Publisher: Alphapolis
Status: Started on 2013/03/10 - ongoing


A question, why does this one doesnt have chapter one?

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 01:15
Because it's Alphapolis. for titles published by Alphapolis, the published volume (part) must be exchanged with Digest / summary. So the chapters have been taken down.

Mars Mode
2014-02-19, 01:19
I see, thanks then I will have to wait for the novel to be published, I have been looking for something with some dark content and the like to change my mood for a while, so this came as something to look forward to.

cloud04
2014-02-19, 01:57
@amatsunagi
you really want to increase my "on the look out for more stuff" work huh ._.

larethian
2014-02-19, 04:19
Hmm, before, I posted one in Mushoku Tensei since I know it's free, but the link got deleted, so I thought it's not okay.
But thanks for the clarification ^^

@kidswable:
Not necessarily, but it might help, there are 3 factors (IMO):
- Evaluation
- Page View
- Unique users + reviews

Most publishers search for "Entertainment" titles or those that can easily catch attention: like ecchi stuff for example?

The mod may have thought you were posting to illegal infringement sites? It's petitionable.

Mars Mode
2014-02-19, 09:08
hum~, as for me, I have no problem with incest ^^a

Fifth Title!

Original Title: 金色の文字使い ~勇者四人に巻き込まれたユニークチート~
Romaji: Konjiki no Word Master ~Yuusha Yonnin ni Makikomareta Unique Cheat~
Alternative Title: Golden Word Master ~4 heroes involved by Unique Cheat~
Author: Toomoto Sui (十本スイ)
Status: Started on 2013/7/30 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n7031bs/)




Can he use any other magic apart from the one he uses with words

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 18:06
@amatsunagi
you really want to increase my "on the look out for more stuff" work huh ._.

ahaha~ "It's otaku job to introduce the things he/she likes to others" :heh:

The mod may have thought you were posting to illegal infringement sites? It's petitionable.
Yeah, I'll do so. ^^


Can he use any other magic apart from the one he uses with words

Nope, he can't, but even if he can, he doesn't need to~ :smile:

omegasereon
2014-02-19, 18:26
Just wondering for master of monster, if Majima finds one of his classmates who has cheat ability, wouldn't his party be basically get wiped?

Mars Mode
2014-02-19, 19:02
So If im reading correctly the demons want peace, but the demon king wanted a world with only women and thats why they assasinated him, but now they are in a pinch because nobody believes that they want peace?

BW95
2014-02-19, 19:04
So If im reading correctly the demons want peace, but the demon king wanted a world with only women and thats why they assasinated him, but now they are in a pinch because nobody believes that they want peace?

That poor demon king.

Mars Mode
2014-02-19, 19:08
You know I actually hope I read right, because thats an awesome dream.(only applicable in fiction:T_T:)

amatsunagi
2014-02-19, 20:17
Just wondering for master of monster, if Majima finds one of his classmates who has cheat ability, wouldn't his party be basically get wiped?

Possibly, since one of the classmates has power to kill dragon in one strike. Latest update (yesterday). There's big chance Takahiro will power up, as he can sense magic power now.

So If im reading correctly the demons want peace, but the demon king wanted a world with only women and thats why they assasinated him, but now they are in a pinch because nobody believes that they want peace?

Hmm, I don't really remember about the previous Demon King, but if I remember it correctly, Evila (Demon race) went through moment of peace with Humas (Human race), however, Evila betrayed them and the war continued. The Demon King is then killed, and the new Demon King rise to the new throne. This New Demon King wanted peace, but Humas did not believe it, and just ignoring the proposal of peace they sent.

dragon1412
2014-02-19, 21:42
This guy is worse than Naofumi. At first, Hiiro didn't have harem, unlike Taishi ( one of the 4 heroes, the other three are girls) who has harem (and also Title as Harem Creator). Midway, Hiiro gained title: Little lady Killer (Youjo Killer / 幼女キラー), after that, several months and his Title evolves to: God that brings down Little Lady (Youjo Otoshikami / 幼女落とし神). So, what I'm trying to say, this guy is loli magnet, I've counted the numbers and:
1. Myua (Loli, 8 years old)
2. Mimiru (Loli, 8 years old)
3. Mikadzuchi (Loli, unknown)
4. Lyrin (Loli, 300?)
5. Nikki (Loli, 8 years old)
6. Ionis (Loli, 8 years old)
7. Iveam (Girl, 18 years old)
8. Kukuria (Girl, 18 years old)
9. Hime (Girl, unknown)
10. Kuroichi (Loli, unknown)
11. Putis (Loli, unknown, interested?)
12. Kamyu (TRAP, age unknown)

That's: 8 (little girl) + 3 (girls) + (1 boy)
And it still growing. By the way, I forgot the exact age, so I guessed them.
Kamyu is adorable~~ :love:


Yeah, 239 chapters, updated daily.
Yami Ou is worst, 400 chapters+...

i have to go and read this.

bludvein
2014-02-20, 00:05
Im reading the Word Master WN right now, and I just got to the part where the MC completely browbeats the "heroes"(his classmates) with their lack of skepticism. Harsh, but appropriate. The series as a whole is ok, but not as good as the Mushoku Tensei title or Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou imo.

amatsunagi
2014-02-20, 08:13
I agree with you. Plot wise, the story is straightforward and lighter. It's steady with interesting characters, and cool protagonist ("There's nothing impossible for me to do!"), but not on the same level as mushoku tensei and arifureta. Another good thing from this, is about magic, magic is strong but dangerous at the same time, "rebound" is a good thing to remind about that. Author thought the story quite well~
The first thing that draw me is the "Loli harem", since it's quite rare~ :smile:

Avaricia
2014-02-20, 08:24
The first thing that draw me is the "Loli harem", since it's quite rare~ :smile:

Oda Nobuna no Yabou :nod: semi loli

dragon1412
2014-02-20, 11:24
The first thing that draw me is the "Loli harem", since it's quite rare~ :smile:

how... how could such a masterpiece escaped my radar:(

amatsunagi
2014-02-20, 15:12
Oda Nobuna no Yabou :nod: semi loli

Oda Nobuna no Yabou... yeah...Wanko~! :smile:

how... how could such a masterpiece escaped my radar:(

there's this tag, "幼女ハーレム" :smile:

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So, just finished reading OSO volume 1... hmm, how do I say it, this is simply genuine "honobono" Online game? Definitely not for those who is searching for deep plot.

amatsunagi
2014-02-24, 15:53
I'll post some titles that I have scooped this far that I think are interesting. Some are similar, so it may not be fresh to others:

I'm still trying to scoop some titles that are not "tensei" or "tenshou" but with no luck so far.

Original Title: 魔物娘たちの御主人様!
Romaji: Mamono-musume tachi no Goshujin-sama!
Alternative Title: Master of Monster-Girls!
Author: Yoake (よあけ)
Status: Started on 2012/11/28 - ongoing
Current chapters: 54

Tarou, an otaku is forced between two choices by mysterious salaryman: death, or transportation to another world. The mysterious salaryman then give him several power-ups, so that he can survive in another world. After transported, the first thing he thought of is to make harem of monster-girls, however... the world he lives in are divided into 2 sides: The winner side: Humans, and the loser side: monsters. Will Tarou be able to fulfill his dream then?

rare monster girls: Cyclops, Pink Medusa, Undead Dragon, Dullahan, Skeleton knights. Unexpectedly, protagonist is quite cool. Very simple story. However, this title is not updated at regular interval. WARNING: this title is quite erotic.

Hmm? why do I read this title? :eyebrow: umm~~ unique monster girls.

Original Title: 魔王(?)ゴーマン・バレムの冒険
Romaji: Maou (?) Goman Balem no Bouken
Alternative Title: Adventure of Demon King (?) Goman Balem
Author: Koinumaru (小狗丸)
Status: Started on 2012/8/04 - ongoing
Current chapters: 124

A man wakes up with no memories. He then found a secret diary of making a pact with wild monsters at deserted village. With the help of the knowledge he got from the book, he managed to make a pact with monster in form of female body, called "Witch". Naming himself Goman, he then started a journey to find his lost memories, as a monster tamer.

Same as above, full of monster girls: Lamia, Harpy, Centaur, Scylla, Banshee. The comedy is quite funny. Ah by the way, I guess this is the most life-threatening harem life. The same as above as well, not updated regularly.
WARNING: being an ero-come, this title is quite erotic.

Original Title: 進化の実~知らないうちに勝ち組人生~(仮)
Romaji: Shinka no Mi ~Shiranai uchi ni Kachigumi Jinsei~ (Tentative)
Alternative Title: Fruit of Evolution ~Before I know it, My life is already a winner~
Author: Miku (美紅)
Status: Started on 2014/1/25 - ongoing
Current chapters: 14

Hiiragi Seiichi, is the loser of his life. Unattractive, gross, smelly, disgusting, and fat. One day, his class is teleported by the god of his world, to another world. However, Seiichi, who is rejected by the class, is transported alone to a dangerous place.

Ah typical "tenshou" isn't it? This is obviously similar to Arifureta, but far more worse. One original thing about this title, which I like and made me read this is a gorilla as main heroine. Interestingly, I didn't find the "power of love" to be annoying in this one, dunno why... Sadly, the author decided to not update this regularly.

Original Title: もしも龍になれたなら
Romaji: Moshimo Ryou ni Naretara
Alternative Title: If I become a Dragon
Author: Akarui Mirai (明るい未来)
Status: Started on 2013/12/28 - ongoing
Current chapters: 62

After dying saving a girl, a boy is reincarnated to another world as a dragon. Without knowing left and right, he then tried to survive in that world, and if possible, learning about his origin and his place among another beings in that world...

Now we have "Tensei". First, protagonist Ren when he is still small is so Hauuu~ omochikaeri~~ the idea of dragon weapon is cool~ and the latest chapters really surprised me! The cons, this title are quite short each chapters, so it kind of killed the mood. Lastly, the author decided to not update this regularly as well.

Original Title: 軍オタが魔法世界に転生したら、現代兵器で軍隊ハーレムを作っちゃいました!?
Romaji: Gun-Ota ga Mahou Sekai ni Tensei shitara, Gendai Heiki de Guntai Harem wo Tsukucchaimashita!?
Alternative Title: When Gun-Nerd is Reincarnated to World of Magic, He established Harem army of Modern Weapons!?
Author: Meikyou Shisui (明鏡シスイ)
Status: Started on 2013/11/22 - ongoing
Current chapters: 104

Lute, an orphaned boy retained the memories of his past life, a japanese men who is killed by bully. He remember the pain and regret of losing his best friend who died from suicide. Not wanting to repeat the same mistake, He dreams to become strong, however, he lack magic talent. In pursuit of knowledge that will help him achieve his dream, he learns about a special substance that will help him develop weapons from Earth

"Tensei" again. Interesting plot similar to Mushoku Tensei. Fans of firearms should check this out. Overall, this title is pretty balanced, which placed 4th in my current favorite read for Narou. Updated daily. 壁ドン!ドン!ドン!

Original Title: ハンドレッドハンド ~イーグル公遠征記~
Romaji: Hundred Hand ~Eagle-gimi Enseiki~
Alternative Title: Hundred Hand ~Campaign Chronicles of Sovereign Eagle~
Author: darnylee
Status: Started on 2014/1/25 - ongoing
Current chapters: 28

Takagi Washio, a salaryman, encountered a robbery at stationery shop. In an attempt to save the hostage, he is stabbed. In his last moment, he killed the robber with his bare hands and shortly died. The next thing he wakes up, he found himself in another world, and is taken as slaves by a group of bandits. During the trial, Washio discovered his power to control chakra and display a great power, which earns him respect from the bandits. He then decided to live in this world as much as he likes

kukukuku, kuku, ku, ahahahahaha!!! FINALLY! I found what I searching for! eh!? *cough* sorry... I lost control. Uhmm... so basically this is "tensei", and the story of a rising of man to the highest supremacy. If you like strong merciless protagonist, then this is your thing. Otherwise, if you can't stomach protagonist merciless way I suggest you to back off. This title is not updated regularly. Me? I don't really like brutal violences. Why I read this then, you ask? Obviously, it's because Polaris-chan, Polaris-chan, Polaris-chan Polaris-chan Polaris-chan, Polaris-chan and Polaris-chan.

Will add the rest later~

Richocet
2014-02-24, 17:02
All of these seem to be the same settings

amatsunagi
2014-02-24, 17:09
All of these seem to be the same settings

ahaha, yeah, I know what you mean. Well, that's how it is, lots of them used the same plot device to start, but after that, each go different ways. Or something like that~

Richocet
2014-02-24, 17:12
Monster-girl is something up my alley lol
I'll check those out some time

omegasereon
2014-02-24, 17:18
Hmm.. still reading monster master(vol 2). Which title do you recommend out of those?

amatsunagi
2014-02-24, 17:22
Well, I like the theme of "Weird love", and monster-girl just happen to be one of it. ^^

It's hard to scoop title unrelated to "tensei" or "tenshou" <(=~=)>

@omegasereon:
Gun-ota and Hundred Hand. The rest are snacks, by the way, how's monster master? ^^

omegasereon
2014-02-24, 17:28
Well, I like the theme of "Weird love", and monster-girl just happen to be one of it. ^^

It's hard to scoop title unrelated to "tensei" or "tenshou" <(=~=)>

@omegasereon:
Gun-ota and Hundred Hand. The rest are snacks, by the way, how's monster master? ^^

Ok cool thanks. I like it so far because of monster harem.

amatsunagi
2014-02-24, 17:30
I'm surprised, looks like there are lots of monster-girl fans here ^o^
how about animal harem then?

omegasereon
2014-02-24, 17:50
I like any kind of harem as long as there is a nice protag ^^

amatsunagi
2014-02-26, 13:34
YES! Shinka Mi (just realized, it could also be read as Shin Kami) updated!!
Really glad that Heroine Saria is still a gorilla~ expecting lovey-dovey with Gorilla~! as usual, good jokes (although too much tsukkomi, his tension is too high!), tempo is nice and does not get rushed. That last scene: "Final evolution + Special evolution + Bonus evolution" and Seiichi could only say "ah", is just ROFLMAO. namu namu, Seiichi, RIP.

Finished reading Waka Ikusa Kami this early morning, and it's not bad (Flag breaker is a good and bad thing I guess?). (new) God of war traveling with goddess of war to fantasy world. nice set of harem: Legal wife Floria, Cool deredere Brenda, Yamato Nadeshiko Elvira, Innocent mascot Tershe, Loli schemer Anrietta. It would be amazing if the story flow like ore ga heroine with slower pace~. OP protag with natural lady killer lines, no complain on that~

Currently reading 2 titles from Arianrose (Madoushi Heibon, and Imouto Yuusha). As a fan of otome love stories~ I have to read those!
Also currently reading : Explorer, Dragoon, Isekai Kansha, Arc Encounter, Metal Hagure, Hachi Otoko, Death Match, etc... dunno will I be able to finish them all this month!

邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語 (Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari)
http://i.imgur.com/IftiRQe.jpg

異世界転生騒動記 (Isekai Tensei Soudou Ki)
http://i.imgur.com/f1W9OXj.jpg

平兵士は過去を夢見る (Hira Heishi wa Kako wo Yumemiru)
http://i.imgur.com/1tZ72TF.jpg

Looking out for today Arifureta release!

HasNoLove
2014-02-26, 13:57
^ hey Ama-san, does Lulu(Lelouch) gone blonde right now..?? [first picture]

amatsunagi
2014-02-26, 14:13
Ah yeah, he does remind you to Lelouch huh? his appearance reminds me to the 1st prince of britannia tho' :smile:

HasNoLove
2014-02-26, 14:23
oh yea.., Lulu elder brother more closer to him huh..
anyway, I dont know what kind WN the other 2...

bludvein
2014-02-27, 08:31
Just read Shinka no Mi. TBH it was too much wish fulfillment for me. The protagonist is a pretty standard nice guy with no other redeeming features. I liked Arifureta, but the way this protagonist just lucks into power irks me. There is no training, skill, or cunning of his own. He wins his fights so far through sheer luck. Talk about unappealing. I could buy the whole getting more attractive thing, but him being a bore wasn't fixed. He has no real personality to me.

It also goes way beyond "game-like." Defeated monsters turn into gold, items, and skill cards. Like, what?

There is also the gorilla thing. Yeah, Saria somehow gets the power to turn into a perfect 10 woman through the power of love. Blegh.

I like most of your reccs, but this was a swing and a miss.

amatsunagi
2014-02-27, 09:58
Just read Shinka no Mi. TBH it was too much wish fulfillment for me. The protagonist is a pretty standard nice guy with no other redeeming features. I liked Arifureta, but the way this protagonist just lucks into power irks me. There is no training, skill, or cunning of his own. He wins his fights so far through sheer luck. Talk about unappealing. I could buy the whole getting more attractive thing, but him being a bore wasn't fixed. He has no real personality to me.

It also goes way beyond "game-like." Defeated monsters turn into gold, items, and skill cards. Like, what?

There is also the gorilla thing. Yeah, Saria somehow gets the power to turn into a perfect 10 woman through the power of love. Blegh.

I like most of your reccs, but this was a swing and a miss.

Ahaha~ as for me, Shinka no Mi is just one of "sweet snack" instead of a "main dish" to enjoy. I guess I forgot to add "which one has real plot or not". As for this title, to be honest: the plot is not clear. It's safe to say this is just another "honobono"~ Maybe you want to check gun-ota then?

Kleeyook
2014-02-27, 10:10
邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語 (Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari)

^^ That LN looks like an adaptation of turn-based strategy eroge with dungeon setting...

Is it 18+?

amatsunagi
2014-02-27, 10:50
邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語 (Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari)

^^ That LN looks like an adaptation of turn-based strategy eroge with dungeon setting...

Is it 18+?

15+ (well maybe a little bit over, but not that explicit), although it's a little bit gore and dark.

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When I read gun-ota latest chapter, I'm surprised to see
ただの雑談なのですが――友人が『軍オタが魔法世界に転生したら、現代兵器で軍隊ハーレムを作っちゃいまし た!?』でグーグル検索したら、海外の方も感想を書いていたと教えられました。
グーグル翻訳なので大雑把ですが感想を読むことが出来ました。一番驚いた点は……海外でも『壁ドン!』は、 『壁ドン!』でした。
まさか『壁ドン!』まで海外展開しているとは驚きですわ。

I was like: "......wait, is He talking about my post...?" :eek: and then, awawawa~ I should have write "I really like his works" or "It's very interesting!" and add more detailed impression there or something like that~~ but, I guess it's talking about another person right? :smile:
In any case, I'm surprised!

dragon1412
2014-02-27, 11:01
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When I read gun-ota latest chapter, I'm surprised to see
ただの雑談なのですが――友人が『軍オタが魔法世界に転生したら、現代兵器で軍隊ハーレムを作っちゃいまし た!?』でグーグル検索したら、海外の方も感想を書いていたと教えられました。
グーグル翻訳なので大雑把ですが感想を読むことが出来ました。一番驚いた点は……海外でも『壁ドン!』は、 『壁ドン!』でした。
まさか『壁ドン!』まで海外展開しているとは驚きですわ。



are you really sure he isn't talking about you :)???

amatsunagi
2014-02-27, 11:13
Apparently, with 『壁ドン!』" added to search terms along with title of gun-ota, this thread appeared on Google first page. :heh:

ドン!ドン!ドン!ドン!ドン! *banging head on wall, Steph style

*EDIT: currently adding "Youjo Senki" to my next read list. :smile:

Ougon
2014-02-27, 12:14
15+ (well maybe a little bit over, but not that explicit), although it's a little bit gore and dark.

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When I read gun-ota latest chapter, I'm surprised to see
ただの雑談なのですが――友人が『軍オタが魔法世界に転生したら、現代兵器で軍隊ハーレムを作っちゃいまし た!?』でグーグル検索したら、海外の方も感想を書いていたと教えられました。
グーグル翻訳なので大雑把ですが感想を読むことが出来ました。一番驚いた点は……海外でも『壁ドン!』は、 『壁ドン!』でした。
まさか『壁ドン!』まで海外展開しているとは驚きですわ。

I was like: "......wait, is He talking about my post...?" :eek: and then, awawawa~ I should have write "I really like his works" or "It's very interesting!" and add more detailed impression there or something like that~~ but, I guess it's talking about another person right? :smile:
In any case, I'm surprised!

Lol, this is hilarious, hysterical! I wonder how much he was able to understand from GT (since it's no better at TL-ing English>Japanese, then it is at TL-ing Japanese>English). :heh:

Libros
2014-02-27, 12:17
What does it say?

Nevermind. I GT+Bing'd it.

Kleeyook
2014-02-27, 12:24
^^ How do you use GT, Bing and ATLAS (for those who have it) to translate from Japanese to English? I mean to ask if you simply translate text in each translation engine and compare the text, or somehow able to combine their result. ^^

BTW, about 邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語 (Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari):

How do they raise an army or using the captured ones? Brainwash and tentacle? I have never seen any novel like this that isn't a one or two volumes hentai novel adapted from eroge. :p

Ougon
2014-02-27, 12:32
For others (a rushed TL),

It's just small talk but---- A friend told me that he googled {Gun-Ota} and found that a review was written on it overseas, too.

I was able to read the review through GT, though it was messy (since it's GT). The thing I was most surprised at was.... 『壁ドン!』 was still 『壁ドン!』 even overseas. It's really surprising to find that even 『壁ドン!』 was spread over to overseas.

Libros
2014-02-27, 12:33
I just compared. It was my first try doing so. Far, far more effective than using just one or the other. I wish I had done so earlier, but well, too lazy~

^when I GT'd I thought it was the author that googled "Gun-Ota". I wouldn't have guessed that it was his friend.

amatsunagi
2014-02-27, 22:17
Lol, this is hilarious, hysterical! I wonder how much he was able to understand from GT (since it's no better at TL-ing English>Japanese, then it is at TL-ing Japanese>English). :heh:

I wonder about that as well... translating from English > Japanese :heh:

^^ How do you use GT, Bing and ATLAS (for those who have it) to translate from Japanese to English? I mean to ask if you simply translate text in each translation engine and compare the text, or somehow able to combine their result. ^^

BTW, about 邪悪にして悪辣なる地下帝国物語 (Jaakunishite Akuratsunaru Chika Teikoku Monogatari):

How do they raise an army or using the captured ones? Brainwash and tentacle? I have never seen any novel like this that isn't a one or two volumes hentai novel adapted from eroge. :p

So after they created a dungeon, using their soul, they found several Goblins who went to hide inside the dungeon they made. Monsters are persecuted by humans and ever since the fall of Magic Kingdom, they lost their guardians, and get hunted. Back to the siblings, they convince (more like tempt) these goblins to submit to them. Then, the pursuer of the goblins enter the dungeon. The prince summon a dark knight and order him to kill several intruders and let go the rest. The Knight ask if he is allowed to keep some of the intruders and the Prince give his permission. The knight managed to kill 3-4? intruders, and capture all of the girls (6 person). The knight used his power to make the girl submit to him and he treated them like dogs. 2 of the male survivors are brought in front of the Prince and Princess. One of the guy become a subordinate (thanks to his resourcefulness) in exchange for the Prince to spare the girls live. The other guy (who is so scared and begs for his life) is presented to the goblins, who happily accept it (He is tortured as part of revenge, and end up became goblins food). The prince order the 3 girls to return to town and spread rumor of the dungeon so that more adventurers will come. The other 3 girls stays behind (one of them falls in love to the guy who save their live). After that, The goblins started to increase in number (their reproductive abilities are high, just like orc) and one of the girl who stayed behind, trained them how to fight. The prince summoned monsters (such as giant spider, slime, etc) and the Princess modified the dungeon. So what's the point of inviting adventurers to challenge the dungeon? 1. food source for goblins, 2. Equipments to loot, 3. real combat trainings for new goblins. They slowly build their army to take over the other city.

BW95
2014-02-27, 22:21
I wonder about that as well... translating from English > Japanese :heh:



So after they created a dungeon, using their soul, they found several Goblins who went to hide inside the dungeon they made. Monsters are persecuted by humans and ever since the fall of Magic Kingdom, they lost their guardians, and get hunted. Back to the siblings, they convince (more like tempt) these goblins to submit to them. Then, the pursuer of the goblins enter the dungeon. The prince summon a dark knight and order him to kill several intruders and let go the rest. The Knight ask if he is allowed to keep some of the intruders and the Prince give his permission. The knight managed to kill 3-4? intruders, and capture all of the girls (6 person). The knight used his power to make the girl submit to him and he treated them like dogs. 2 of the male survivors are brought in front of the Prince and Princess. One of the guy become a subordinate (thanks to his resourcefulness) in exchange for the Prince to spare the girls live. The other guy (who is so scared and begs for his life) is presented to the goblins, who happily accept it (He is tortured as part of revenge, and end up became goblins food). The prince order the 3 girls to return to town and spread rumor of the dungeon so that more adventurers will come. The other 3 girls stays behind (one of them falls in love to the guy who save their live). After that, The goblins started to increase in number (their reproductive abilities are high, just like orc) and one of the girl who stayed behind, trained them how to fight. The prince summoned monsters (such as giant spider, slime, etc) and the Princess modified the dungeon. So what's the point of inviting adventurers to challenge the dungeon? 1. food source for goblins, 2. Equipments to loot, 3. real combat trainings for new goblins. They slowly build their army to take over the other city.

Impressive. Top be honest, I thought they were going to fool around with silly adventures like in Zvezda. So is this new subordinate planning on double-crossing the siblings or what? I hope not.

amatsunagi
2014-02-27, 22:58
No, they are not, because they are powerless and wouldn't try stupid things. The guy who became their subordinate, at first felt forced, but as time goes, he started to be enchanted by both of them and thought that he must have been corrupted. He wants to convince them that revenge is not the only way but seeing that both of them didn't yield to his persuasion, he gave up. As for the siblings, both of them already sold their soul and became inhuman for the sake of revenge. Their reason to live are revenge, therefore they will continue to spread the flame of revenge, and will not end until either Underground Empire, or Saint Kingdom burned to ashes.

Kioras
2014-02-27, 23:14
I wonder about that as well... translating from English > Japanese :heh:



So after they created a dungeon, using their soul, they found several Goblins who went to hide inside the dungeon they made. Monsters are persecuted by humans and ever since the fall of Magic Kingdom, they lost their guardians, and get hunted. Back to the siblings, they convince (more like tempt) these goblins to submit to them. Then, the pursuer of the goblins enter the dungeon. The prince summon a dark knight and order him to kill several intruders and let go the rest. The Knight ask if he is allowed to keep some of the intruders and the Prince give his permission. The knight managed to kill 3-4? intruders, and capture all of the girls (6 person). The knight used his power to make the girl submit to him and he treated them like dogs. 2 of the male survivors are brought in front of the Prince and Princess. One of the guy become a subordinate (thanks to his resourcefulness) in exchange for the Prince to spare the girls live. The other guy (who is so scared and begs for his life) is presented to the goblins, who happily accept it (He is tortured as part of revenge, and end up became goblins food). The prince order the 3 girls to return to town and spread rumor of the dungeon so that more adventurers will come. The other 3 girls stays behind (one of them falls in love to the guy who save their live). After that, The goblins started to increase in number (their reproductive abilities are high, just like orc) and one of the girl who stayed behind, trained them how to fight. The prince summoned monsters (such as giant spider, slime, etc) and the Princess modified the dungeon. So what's the point of inviting adventurers to challenge the dungeon? 1. food source for goblins, 2. Equipments to loot, 3. real combat trainings for new goblins. They slowly build their army to take over the other city.

Woot, Sounds like the author is a fan of Dungeon Keeper.

amatsunagi
2014-03-01, 15:57
Uum, This year new publication started with: Mushoku Tensei (MFbooks), New World (Alphapolis), Re:zero (MFJ) on January, and then Chika Teikoku (Alphapolis), Hira-Heishi (Alphapolis), Isekai Soudou (Alphapolis), Musou Kane (HJ Bunko) on february (not to mention there are several others from Ponicanyon books, Regina books, and Arianrose, Kadokawa, etc).

New announcement for titles that are going to be published: Only Sense Online published by Fujimi Fantasia, and Illustrated by Yukisan (Hyakuran no Haou to Seiyaku no Valkyria). Also, there are two new titles also from Fujimi Fantasia, and 2 new titles from Overlap Bunko.

Lastly, about manga, AFAIK there are 3 titles: Tate Yuusha, Mushoku Tensei, and Shiro Koukoku. Guess that's all for today info I want to share.

BW95
2014-03-01, 16:11
So where are these siblings in their quest for revenge? Have they expanded beyond the dungeon yet and have any antagonists appeared yet?

amatsunagi
2014-03-01, 16:27
So where are these siblings in their quest for revenge? Have they expanded beyond the dungeon yet and have any antagonists appeared yet?

The siblings stayed inside the dungeon, At the end of vol 1 they won the war against the adjacent city, taking over it, and planting Dopplegangers to impersonate the rulers there, as to fool the Saint Kingdoms. As for antagonists: Bandits, and the ruler of city adjacent to the dungeon (forgot the name)

amatsunagi
2014-03-01, 17:26
Eh, did I said 3 titles by fujimi fantasia? make it 4: Konjiki Word Master is slated to be released on May, illustrated by Sumaki Shungo(?). VIVA YOUJO!

Fujimi Fantasia, I'm worried about them now~ :heh:

BW95
2014-03-01, 17:27
The siblings stayed inside the dungeon, At the end of vol 1 they won the war against the adjacent city, taking over it, and planting Dopplegangers to impersonate the rulers there, as to fool the Saint Kingdoms. As for antagonists: Bandits, and the ruler of city adjacent to the dungeon (forgot the name)

So are the antagonists here like the ruler good guys or dicks?

amatsunagi
2014-03-01, 17:30
So are the antagonists here like the ruler good guys or dicks?

They are corrupt rulers filled wit greed and lust, so bad guys, well mostly.

amatsunagi
2014-03-02, 19:06
Forget four, Fujimi Fantasia added another one title from Narou to their lineup...that makes it five for this year, seriously, what's wrong with you, Fujimi Fantasia :confused:

There are also another title that will going to be published, although the info of publisher still unknown: one thing for sure, no digest so it's not Alphapolis. Another Fujimi Fantasia? :eyebrow:

omegasereon
2014-03-02, 19:42
I read the first 2 chapters of 異世界迷宮で奴隷ハーレムを and it seems interesting. Have you read it before and if you did, can you provide a quick plot summary? All I know is that the guy got sucked into some game world when he wanted to suicide and he was customizing a online character game.

amatsunagi
2014-03-02, 20:35
Yeah, I read that, 10 or so chapters and stopped, reason: Protagonist is dull, or at least that's my initial impression. The story: The protagonist had enough of his life, so he decided to do a suicide. By chance he discover a site which could "Send the player to a world of game". without second thought, he decided to create his own character and "poof!", there he goes to world of game. At first his mind is hazy, he found himself in a barn, then there's bandits attacking town, he then killed 3 or 4 peoples (his mind still think it's game) however after feeling the real sensation and he can't logout, he decided it's not game (also reminded of the notice before he enter the game world "that he cannot return back"). He then decided to live in this world to the fullest.

I've read to the part where he moved to the big city, and found a Slaves shop, he wanted to buy one but doesn't have enough money. Talking about ability, the protagonist receives: "Ability to read status either people or thing" and "Ability to change class or title" and other game system abilities like opening menu, accessing inventory items, learn, equip and unequip skills, allotting experience points, etc. He also receives bonus items from start (special weapon with high stats). Another impression I got is: icha-icha rom-com?

The protagonist is dull, there's no special thing about him that I like (just my subjective opinion tho'). Well, since this title is published by Hero Bunko, I'm planning to read it again, maybe this time I will found the charm of this title? If you're going to read this, and if its good, please do tell me, so that I have more motivation to read this again.

As for now, this title is in my backlog.

omegasereon
2014-03-02, 20:54
Yeah, I read that, 10 or so chapters and stopped, reason: Protagonist is dull, or at least that's my initial impression. The story: The protagonist had enough of his life, so he decided to do a suicide. By chance he discover a site which could "Send the player to a world of game". without second thought, he decided to create his own character and "poof!", there he goes to world of game. At first his mind is hazy, he found himself in a barn, then there's bandits attacking town, he then killed 3 or 4 peoples (his mind still think it's game) however after feeling the real sensation and he can't logout, he decided it's not game (also reminded of the notice before he enter the game world "that he cannot return back"). He then decided to live in this world to the fullest.

I've read to the part where he moved to the big city, and found a Slaves shop, he wanted to buy one but doesn't have enough money. Talking about ability, the protagonist receives: "Ability to read status either people or thing" and "Ability to change class or title" and other game system abilities like opening menu, accessing inventory items, learn, equip and unequip skills, allotting experience points, etc. He also receives bonus items from start (special weapon with high stats). Another impression I got is: icha-icha rom-com?

The protagonist is dull, there's no special thing about him that I like (just my subjective opinion tho'). Well, since this title is published by Hero Bunko, I'm planning to read it again, maybe this time I will found the charm of this title? If you're going to read this, and if its good, please do tell me, so that I have more motivation to read this again.

As for now, this title is in my backlog.

Ok, thanks!

amatsunagi
2014-03-03, 06:25
Original Title: 八男って、それはないでしょう!
Romaji: Hachinan tte, sore ha nai deshou!
Author: Y. A
Illustrator: Fuji Choco (藤ちょこ)
Publisher: MFBooks
Status: Started on 2013/06/01 - ongoing
Link: Here (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8802bq/)

Ichinomiya Shingo, a young worker of firm company (25th years old, single) while thinking of tomorrow busy working day goes to sleep. However the moment he woke up, it's a room unknown to him. He then learn that he is inside a 6-years-old boy and taking over his mind. He then learn a lot from the memories of the said boy: he was born as the youngest child (8th son and 10th children) of poor noble family living in backcountry. Having no administrative skill, he can't do anything to manage the vast land his family have. Fortunately, he is blessed with a very rare talent, talent of magic. Unfortunately, while his talent could bring prosperity to his family, in his situation it will only brought disaster. Yes, this is the story of the boy, Wendelin Von Benno Baumeister, opening his own path in harsh world.


This is the most complicated Narou title that I have read. Complicated as in hard to tell the value of this title, It's interesting, but also uninteresting. In short this title tell the story of a boy blessed with very rare talent, but is born in difficult situation. Wendelin is the youngest son and was never hoped to be useful to his family. Although a noble, his family are very poor, even though the territory of Baumeister are large, they don't have funds nor manpower to cultivate them, moreover, their land are infested with monsters and dangerous animals. The villagers hate his father, due to his failure that led to their falls. The most fortunate thing Wendelin have is the talent of magic, but... this talent could lead to dispute inside and outside of his family. Therefore, his parents just let him do as he likes (more like, ignoring him) and he hid his talent, living the role of lazy and selfish boy, while preparing himself to set his foot outside the cage.

Fantasy world with monsters and magic. This story are not focused on adventuring, but more on the relationship, conspiracy, and politics of nobles in that world. It has some fighting scenes which unfortunately are not that good. The flow of story is like flat road with small bumps here and there, however it strangely draws you in to keep reading. By the way, at first I was surprised to see that earlier chapter are short in text, and then it get longer and longer and later, the amount text for just one chapter is just...... wow.

Again, I just want to say that this title might be interesting, or uninteresting depending on reader taste, as for me, I guess I like this~ :smile:

Ah! yeah, this title is gong to be published by MFBooks, and I really really expect a lot from Fuji Choco (Miss Fable of Armas Gibble), I really love her illustration with wonderful setting~

HasNoLove
2014-03-03, 22:46
^ so its has political issue like madan no ou..??

amatsunagi
2014-03-04, 01:29
Yeah, mostly it's about struggle of rights though (property, inheritance, lands, etc). Up until the latest chapter, the other country still haven't make their appearances yet :|

It seems Fujimi fantasia decided to publish titles monthly starting from this march. They already select 6 titles in their lineup (up until August). Can't wait for Konjiki Word Master~!

And finally I found a title which is not the usual templates that I read (but still template on it's own). It still new, so there's not much chapters yet, a sneak peek of the story:

Final Quest is a famous VRMMORPG with medieval setting, one of it's player, Yamada Shinichi [Shin First] is watching a battle royale between 4 of his party: magician Mana, elven archer Rule, Thief Mel, and Lancer Akira. they fought to decide who is going to marry Shin's. After the battle, Akira comes out as winner, however... Akira is a guy, and a gay as well. Thinking that it marriage with no love, Shin agreed to the proposal. One week later, Mana, Rule and Mel wanted to marry Shin as well, and Shin entered Bigamy relationship with 4 of them. This anger Akira and another dispute breaks which cost the lives of 107 players. To settle the "Carnage of Love", Shin must choose one of them as his legal "wife" and his first step, is to attend their party first offline meeting.

And impression: typical netoge but more focused on shuraba and comedy (off course~). This kind of title tend to appeal the characters, which in my opinion, is quite fresh.

- Mana traits are "domineering ojousama-tsundere-patient of love-M gap-pettanko"
- Rule traits are "calm oneesan-madly in love-half foreigner-bakunyuu-yandere"
- Mel traits are "innocent youjo-energetic-jailbait"
- Akira traits are "Hentai-cool and manly-bold and daring-gay"

Rule yandere-ness and referee play placed her as the second, while Akira cool but daring advance and hentai gap makes 'him' a great nocturn material which placed 'him' as my number one favorite character of this title. Author is quite good with comedy especially nocturn one which cracked me up, his previous title are also the same, having good comedy (that "yaranaika" is just LOL). Also, his yandere characters are always charming~ I'll be looking forward to his next updates

Seitsuki
2014-03-04, 03:00
Holy Christ a non harem title? Could it be just maybe the industry can still be saved!?

No? Was worth a shot.

amatsunagi
2014-03-04, 03:19
Non harem title eh? There's Magicraft Meister, and then... Arc Encounter, Risou Himo, Immortal X Sword (similar to Berserk I guess?), etc etc

bludvein
2014-03-05, 19:17
I've got a rec of my own. Been going down the ranking list to find one that looks interesting, and today I read 異世界で強くなりながらニューゲーム. GT translates this as New Game while becoming strong in another world, which is probably inaccurate, but its the best I've got.

It's not exactly excellent yet, but it is kind of noteworthy for doing something new with a template. The premise is a combination of "summoned to another world" and a "time loop". Obviously neither of the two are new, but I've never seen them combined quite like this. Makoto(the MC) relives the day before his summoning as part of the loop, so he has access to modern books and tools if he can get to them. Despite the possibilities, he doesn't have access to modern weapons, so he is stuck learning the sword and spear for the moment.

There isn't really any happy go lucky harem hijinks if your wondering, at least so far. The time loop just offers the author more cruel ways to kill characters. Its really pretty damn morbid tbh.

EDIT: Oh, here is the link btw. http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5966bz/

EDIT2: My only problem with it so far is that the MC advances way too fast. He still isn't beyond amateur, but he is already physically much stronger than he was starting out and its only been a couple loops so far. There might be an explanation later, but the protagonist doesn't seem to think its suspicious that he is practically twice as strong as he was a week before. I wish exercise was that convenient. Oh, and it seems one of the potential love interests got brought into the time loop somehow when he accidentally killed her. His super bitch summoner teleported him a mile into the air and she tried to catch him, which killed them both instead of just him. I don't mind the idea of another looper, but I wanted more time for Makoto to become stronger first. Then again, its not confirmed whether she will keep her memories every time or not from now on or just the once.

EDIT3: Holy shit, that psychopathic BITCH! Ok, she is fucking evil and Makoto needs to work out a way to kill her in one of these loops. For now though, he needs to either keep him mouth shut or escape at the beginning of loops in the near-future. If he wasn't close to broken already, his mental state probably went down the gutter after being dissected while alive. He needs to just skip the talk and cut her head off in the future, i'm serious.

This chapter was from the POV of the girl he crashed into before, who used her "prophetic dream" to try to save him. Too bad the bitch had already messed him up something bad.

This is getting kind of interesting in a creepy way.

amatsunagi
2014-03-09, 04:37
Finally finished reading several titles until the latest chapter.

First: Isekai de Tsuyoku Narinagara New Game, this title is too serious and gloomy (compared to Re:Zero), well, a "good" torture for reader, since we will ask "when he is going to go musou!?".

While Makoto did become stronger and raised his level: I think he is still pretty weak, considering he has low stats than norms and low experience and I guess that will not really change much for at least 6-8 chapters... The appearance of Marie change things though. With characters that have deep connection keep appearing (Makoto's father, Shidou; Arisa) I'm eager to see how they will meet again, and how the story will develop from that. By the way, I hate orcs.

Second: Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyousoukyoku, the first narou title going to be published by Fujimi Fantasia and released this month. It tells the story of Satou, a staff programmer suddenly entered a world of game... or maybe another world and goes on an adventure there.

Story wise, it's kind of honobono, wandering from city to city, so the pacing of story is kind of slow. Then, is there any plot other than just adventuring? Yes there is, but it revealed slowly. At first I have little bit difficulty reading this, dunno why (maybe it's problem of adjusting to writing style). There are also intermissions and SS that implement the story which is interesting ^_^

Protagonist wise, Satou is a gentlemen, calm and mature. He starts very strong, so there's no complain on his ability. I'm very glad he is a Magic-Knight type~ This guy lacks desire most of time, so it will be hard for girls who locking on him
As far as I know, there are... umm, more than 10 girls that falls in love to him, more than 20 girls that like him and more than 100 girls who is interested to marry him

Character wise, I think what interest me the most are the personality of the girls around him. Almost all of the main characters are cute and interesting: Alisa, loli shotacon; Lulu, ganbaru-ko; Pochi & Tama, duo energetic kemona; Liza, cool nikudere; Meeya, taciturn kuudere; Nana, innocent girl, etc, etc. I get most of laugh from them. These girls also grows to be strong and helpful to Satou (but of course, Satou is the strongest).

Overall, this title is interesting for adventure type, uum, I guess I'll rate this 7 or 8 out of 10.


Next is latest update from other titles:
After almost-death-experience of Takahiro, Lily and Rose patched their relationship with Gerbera. Lily states that even though they are enemies before, they are family now and Gerbera is her cute little sister, so she will believe her. Rose who reject Gerbera the most, also acknowledge Gerbera as her little sister. Then, the next chapter, Takahiro feels that he is a failure as a leader. Lily console and convince him that she will always follow him, for what he is. This helped him to reshape himself and not shouldering everything alone. In the end, Takahiro indeed didn't go back empty handed as another family members showed up: parasitic plant (no.4) and Balloon Fox Child (no.5). As usual, I love the expression of characters and I can really feel their emotion. Can't wait for next chapter at Friday to see the new monsters~!
The end of daily life part and the start of new part, the story continues! Well, not much that is revealed. Sadly, this title changed it's frequency into "every 2 days update" :/
Tsukkomi manzai! I ROFLed at the new stats after the final evolution. That lamb butler is irritating, but then again, I laughed again because of him. Somehow, I get the feeling that this Lamb Butler is actually a girl... Well finally they out of the forest and go into civilization~ also expecting this one
the appearance of "possible-heroine", Victorias are finally taken over by the real enemy. Both Demon and Man-Beast, along with the survivor of Victorias must joined forces to fight against them! As for Hiiro, he acquired new power that will surely help him against his adversary!

Well, at least that's for now~

Alesio33
2014-03-09, 06:32
About "Master of Monster" who are the Antoganists in this one?

amatsunagi
2014-03-09, 08:35
No antagonist yet. there is this three character though who raped Miho and Mana, Takahiro killed them. And then there this guy who is his classmate and sit beside him. This classmate of his, tricked Takahiro and tried to kill him, so that he can have his way with Miho (Lily). Takahiro of course, already expected that, and ordered Lily to kill him.

Avrorrange
2014-03-09, 09:40
Just noticed the following novel getting serialized. Apparently, it has A LOT of views on Syosetsuka.http://www.lightnovel.cn/data/attachment/forum/201402/24/222153hgljrkntbrgzrbls.png Just read the prologue and it sounds a bit like Mushoku Tensei -Isekai Ittara Honki Dasu but way funnier and crazier.When the Goddess confronts him with the option of living in a boring heaven, reincarnation into a new life with no memories or sent to another world as a hero to fight against the Demon King in exchange for any power he wants, he chose the goddess to be that power and forced her to tag along when he got annoyed by how apathetic she is.

amatsunagi
2014-03-09, 10:23
Aa, megami Shukufuku. I read this title way far before I know about Narou (which makes this is the first narou title I read). I won't say this similar to Mushoku Tensei...but I do agree this is very funny. I ROFLed so much at the prologue (poor Kazuma LOL). Hmm, it's a though choice to choose Aqua, Megumin, or Duckness~~ umumumumumu~~ =_=

bludvein
2014-03-09, 12:50
Finally finished reading several titles until the latest chapter.

First: Isekai de Tsuyoku Narinagara New Game, this title is too serious and gloomy (compared to Re:Zero), well, a "good" torture for reader, since we will ask "when he is going to go musou!?".

While Makoto did become stronger and raised his level: I think he is still pretty weak, considering he has low stats than norms and low experience and I guess that will not really change much for at least 6-8 chapters... The appearance of Marie change things though. With characters that have deep connection keep appearing (Makoto's father, Shidou; Arisa) I'm eager to see how they will meet again, and how the story will develop from that. By the way, I hate orcs.

The orcs are pretty disgusting, but not even they are as chilling as the witch that summoned him. At least half the reason I am reading at this point is to find out how Makoto will get even for the shit she is putting him through.

I think the MC has potential, but he isn't getting any time to learn. Now he is stuck to Marie, which means there probably won't be much progress on that front this loop. At least on the bright side, he might be able to get Marie to at least not volunteer extra information when the witch asks. Getting her on his side will help a lot later.

amatsunagi
2014-03-09, 22:13
Dissecting while still alive? brrr~ >_< "all of science" is so scary~
the problem of for him is he lack the time needed, just 1 day on current world and a few hourse on another world. He will need to gather information faster (like places to train, or where he can obtain good item like "berserker blood" but of course, that drug potion is a bad item), get as many resources as he can, swiftly. I feel bad for the girl he accidentally killed with (when he falls down from the sky). She have to repeat worst experiences many times (with each times span half years or so) and can't even do suicide.

bludvein
2014-03-09, 22:25
Dissecting while still alive? brrr~ >_< "all of science" is so scary~
the problem of for him is he lack the time needed, just 1 day on current world and a few hourse on another world. He will need to gather information faster (like places to train, or where he can obtain good item like "berserker blood" but of course, that drug potion is a bad item), get as many resources as he can, swiftly. I feel bad for the girl he accidentally killed with (when he falls down from the sky). She have to repeat worst experiences many times (with each times span half years or so) and can't even do suicide.

Well, he actually will have more time in the other world if he lives. The dissecting thing took like a week, right? Its just that he keeps dying.

At least he felt no pain(which kept his sanity intact thankfully), although that's not really an act of compassion on her part. The witch is so indifferent that its pretty horrifying...and now he can't even avoid her manipulations, because Marie will tell her everything.

The girl(I think her name is Arisa, but I'll need to check) got the shortest straw so far, but she hasn't had to repeat it yet. Hopefully she can avoid it this time.

amatsunagi
2014-03-09, 22:32
Well, if he has teacher, he will have to convince them as fast as possible, well~~ he do have eternity, so it's okay... new chapter is out: Emilia... I'm starting to gee~~t really irritated by her now

DoomCalibur
2014-03-10, 04:15
Man...can anyone tell me does this web even have the link to see a full list of series? Seeing how little knowledge do i know about Japanese, using the GT is giving me a full headache........
Man how can you guy be so good at japanese? Mind showing me some tips in learning it?

Avrorrange
2014-03-10, 07:01
Man...can anyone tell me does this web even have the link to see a full list of series? Seeing how little knowledge do i know about Japanese, using the GT is giving me a full headache........
Man how can you guy be so good at japanese? Mind showing me some tips in learning it?

Some of us are reading Chinese scans(me),some people know Japanese while others use online machine translators.

DoomCalibur
2014-03-10, 09:28
Aa, megami Shukufuku. I read this title way far before I know about Narou (which makes this is the first narou title I read). I won't say this similar to Mushoku Tensei...but I do agree this is very funny. I ROFLed so much at the prologue (poor Kazuma LOL). Hmm, it's a though choice to choose Aqua, Megumin, or Duckness~~ umumumumumu~~ =_=

Question: when I tried to search for this title and managed to find the link at last but when I pressed the link, it was shown that it was moved somewhere else. Do you know where it is now ?

Avrorrange
2014-03-10, 09:35
Question: when I tried to search for this title and managed to find the link at last but when I pressed the link, it was shown that it was moved somewhere else. Do you know where it is now ?

I think it got took down because it got serialised.

DoomCalibur
2014-03-10, 09:54
I think it got took down because it got serialised.

Ohh.... So that was the reason.... Thanks for that Moe. Btw have you ever read the title Nee-chan wa Chuunibyou! ? You know the one got published by Hobby Japan with 2 vols recently? If I was right it was an one shot in the web version right?

amatsunagi
2014-03-10, 10:34
I didn't read that one in Narou, so I don't know how far it is, "Nee-chan wa Chuunibyou!?" tells the story of a man suddenly could see words on top of people head. These words tells him the title for that person. On the first day of his high school day, he founds out that his class is full of weird people: Witch, Human Beast, Victims, Ren'ai Protagonist, killer, etc.

also for the reason the title "shukufuku" is not in narou, is as moe connection said.

tiatiu
2014-03-10, 10:46
why icant find
The Tales of Wickedly Vicious Underground Empire volume 1
in ncode anymore how do i read it now?

amatsunagi
2014-03-11, 10:45
http://i.imgur.com/qfxAvXf.jpg
Here is the main page of Syosetsuka ni Narou, the menu inside the blue border from left to right are:

- TOP / Main page of Narou
- サイト案内 / Site Guide (all about this site)
- 公式ブログ / Official Blog
- 質問板 / BBS
- ランキング / Ranking
- 小説を読もう! / Syosetsu wo Yomou! (link to yomou!)
- ユーザ登録 / User Registration
- ログイン / Login
- ヘルプ / Help (FAQ)

On the left side are:

- ユーザ登録 / User Registration (the same as the menu above)
- 小説検索 / Search Title (bar inside red border, for searching titles, will link you to yomou!)
- ユーザを検索する / Search User (for searching user)

On the other side are:

- 初めての方へ / For first-timer (will link you to about page)
- 作者の方へ / For writer (will link you to about - writer page)
- 読者の方へ / For reader (will link you to about - reader page)

And then below it is Ranking bar, which show 10 titles ranked by Total cumulative points
On the upright side of ranking bar is お知らせ / Notification (latest info from its blog) and twitter icon
On the downright side of ranking bar are 3 list of titles:

- 新着の短編小説 / New novels (newest registered titles)
- 完結済みの連載小説 / Finished novels (serialized novels that has finished)
- 更新された連載中小説 / Updated novels (new update chapters of serialized novels)

The lists above are updated every 10 seconds. and sorted from the newest

Continuing below, you will find

- 現在開催中の公式企画 / Present projects on session (which shows competitions or award from various publishers)
- 小説家になろうグループ (Narou Group, which include links to: PDFnovels and yomou!)
- ユーザの新着活動報告 List of update from users blog (every user has their own blog on their Myuserpage to update any information or notification from authors, sorted from the newest update)
- 出版作品紹介 / Introduction of Published titles (will link you to syuppan list)
- お便りコーナー / News Corner (news from authors whose title got published)
- 関連サイト / Affiliated Sites

On the most bottom menu are:

- 小説家になろう / Syosetsuka ni Narou
- 各種マニュアル / Manuals
- ヘルプ / Help
- 運営会社 / Company
- なろうデベロッパー / Developers
- 利用規約 / User agreements
- お問い合わせ / Inquiry
- プライバシーポリシー / Privacy Policy
- ガイドライン / Guideline

Basically that's what you will find on the main page. You can start checking the title lists or use the search function. If you use the search function, just enter any words (in japanese of course) you want to search, or just enter to go to yomou! site

http://i.imgur.com/rBDeoBw.jpg
After using the search function on narou, you should arrive on the page just like on the image above. This is where you will "scoop" for any titles on narou.

On the uppermost you will find a menu, these are:

- TOP / Main page of yomou!
- ランキング / Ranking
- ヘルプ / Help
- 公式ブログ / Official Blog
- 詳細検索 / Detailed Search (more detailed search)
- 分類検索 / Category Search (search by using: Registered Keyword, Genre, and Specific Keyword, use this to find titles associated with keyword / tags)
- 小説検索 / Title Search (normal search page)
- 範囲検索 / Extent Search (use this to search for old / finished titles)
- 小説家になろう / Syosetsu ni Narou (link to Narou)
- ユーザ登録 / User Registration
- ログイン / Login

On the left side, you will find:

- サイト概要 / Sites Outline
- 特殊検索 / Special Search (which contains: 未評価作品一覧 / Unvaluated Titles, 未感想作品一覧 / Uncommented Titles, 平均点順作者一覧 / list of authors by average points, 閲覧履歴 / Browsed Titles)
- ヘルプ / Help

On the right side

- Red border, search Bar.
- green border, option to exclude suspended titles, checklist this to exlude titles which hasn't been updated for long time.
- 並び順 / Sort, Yellow border, option to sort titles, you can sort titles by (in order): default, latest update, most number of unique access, most number of interested users, most reviews, highest cumulative points, most number of users giving ratings, most words (also longest chapter), newest registered Ncode (newest registered title), oldest title.
- ジャンル / Genre, Blue border, option to choose genre (in order): All genre, Literature, Ren'ai, History, Mystery, Fantasy, SF, Horror, Comedy, Adventure, School, War, Fairytale, Poetry, Essay, Others
- 種別 / Assortment, Orange border, option to choose assortment of title (in order): All assortment, Short Story, Finished (short Story included), Ongoing, All (Short Story excluded), Finished (Short Story excluded).
- Detailed Search

If you used detailed search, you will see additional things:

- 長期連載停止中を除外する, checklist this to exclude suspended titles
- 挿絵のある作品を抽出する, checklist this to include only "Titles which has illustration"
- 読了時間 / Read Time, you can choose titles which can be finished with specified times.
- on the search bar, you can checklist: 作品名 / Title name, あらすじ / Synopsis, キーワード / Keyword or tags, 作者名 / Author name, to include them into search. You can also any keyword / tags below to include them in search.


finally, if you click ランキング / ranking, you will be brought to the ranking page with each categories. These categories are:

- 日間ランキング /Daily Ranking
- 週間ランキング / Weekly Ranking
- 月間ランキング / Monthly Ranking
- 四半期ランキング / Quarter Ranking
- 年間ランキング / Yearly Ranking
- 累計ランキング / Cumulative Points Ranking

As you can see, on this page, each pages has 5 best, you can click → (XXX) をもっと詳しく見る (*with xxx as variable of category) to see more of that category. Below the categories are the explanations.

On Title page, you will find:

Top
- ログイン / Login
- 小説情報 / Title Information
- 感想 / Comment or thoughts (from another user or readers)
- レビュー / Review
- 縦書きで読む[PDF] / read in PDF (vertical writing)
- お気に入り登録 / Add to favorites (must login)

Bottom
- 作者マイページ / Author Myuserpage
- トラックバック / Trackback
- TXTダウンロード / TXT Download
- ケータイ表示 / Display on Phone
- 情報提供 / Information Provision

On Author's Myuserpage, which you can access from 作者マイページ or click their 作者: (Author name), you can check their information, check their blog, check what titles they have write, check their favorite reads, check their favorite users, etc


Well, happy "Scooping"~ :heehee:

@tiatiu:
That title is going to be published by Alphapolis, so the first volume is taken down and changed into digest / summary

bludvein
2014-03-15, 15:24
New Game just got a chapter that fixed some of the problems I had with it. Makoto now has time(ironic, considering its a time loop), a plan(the diary), and doesn't have to deal with the psycho. Oh, and Marie was "fixed". Now we can sit back and watch the epic fail of the current loop.

Mars Mode
2014-04-01, 21:49
I was reading gun ota and it was a fun read, I certainly didnt see that twist in vol 2 coming, and its funny how it turned out.

And damn is chris a beast in her own right. It was a fun to read the psicological pressure they were put through when she was humming this is my rifle.

bludvein
2014-04-02, 11:50
I've got a new rec. 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)

It's different than the usual. The cast is pretty warped, but likable at the same time. The MCs initial distinguishing feature is his pain tolerance and perpetual grin that unnerves the crap out of people, which is a coping mechanism caused by a fairly crappy childhood. The story starts with him making his first friend(who is predictably a pretty girl), who is eventually attacked by some of his classmates out of jealousy. He dies of wounds sustained defending her, but wakes up in another world without a scratch on him(not reincarnation). His goal is to get back to his original world to fulfill a promise to go to an amusement park with her.

Sort of an unchosen and unmotivated protagonist(calling him a hero would be a stretch), but he does get stronger later. Sort of reminds me of Arifureta's Hajime actually, despite their differing personalities. Both settings have a "hero" who is not the protagonist, both lose an eye, both have a power traditionally associated with demons/monsters(even though the way they acquire it is different), and both just want to go home.

It's sort of funny how I've grown to like the little status boxes, even when they don't make sense in the setting. It's convenient for keeping track of skills, especially when I'm using machine translations and might miss things.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-03, 00:28
I've got a new rec. 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)

It's different than the usual. The cast is pretty warped, but likable at the same time. The MCs initial distinguishing feature is his pain tolerance and perpetual grin that unnerves the crap out of people, which is a coping mechanism caused by a fairly crappy childhood. The story starts with him making his first friend(who is predictably a pretty girl), who is eventually attacked by some of his classmates out of jealousy. He dies of wounds sustained defending her, but wakes up in another world without a scratch on him(not reincarnation). His goal is to get back to his original world to fulfill a promise to go to an amusement park with her.

Sort of an unchosen and unmotivated protagonist(calling him a hero would be a stretch), but he does get stronger later. Sort of reminds me of Arifureta's Hajime actually, despite their differing personalities. Both settings have a "hero" who is not the protagonist, both lose an eye, both have a power traditionally associated with demons/monsters(even though the way they acquire it is different), and both just want to go home.

It's sort of funny how I've grown to like the little status boxes, even when they don't make sense in the setting. It's convenient for keeping track of skills, especially when I'm using machine translations and might miss things.

Ehh?? Can you make a list of characters? Like I want to know the personalities of other chars especially the "hero" guy.

omegasereon
2014-04-03, 00:43
I've got a new rec. 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)

It's different than the usual. The cast is pretty warped, but likable at the same time. The MCs initial distinguishing feature is his pain tolerance and perpetual grin that unnerves the crap out of people, which is a coping mechanism caused by a fairly crappy childhood. The story starts with him making his first friend(who is predictably a pretty girl), who is eventually attacked by some of his classmates out of jealousy. He dies of wounds sustained defending her, but wakes up in another world without a scratch on him(not reincarnation). His goal is to get back to his original world to fulfill a promise to go to an amusement park with her.

Sort of an unchosen and unmotivated protagonist(calling him a hero would be a stretch), but he does get stronger later. Sort of reminds me of Arifureta's Hajime actually, despite their differing personalities. Both settings have a "hero" who is not the protagonist, both lose an eye, both have a power traditionally associated with demons/monsters(even though the way they acquire it is different), and both just want to go home.

It's sort of funny how I've grown to like the little status boxes, even when they don't make sense in the setting. It's convenient for keeping track of skills, especially when I'm using machine translations and might miss things.

Well........time to start reading this one haha. So is Shinozaki the girl and Ijimerko the guy?
Edit: Also another question while reading the prologue, does his other classmates jumps into another world as well? And is this going towards a harem?

bludvein
2014-04-03, 02:39
Ehh?? Can you make a list of characters? Like I want to know the personalities of other chars especially the "hero" guy.

The Hero(who is named Nagi) is a pretty decent guy, but his self-righteousness causes a mistake with Fox that sets them at ends. Unlike Fox he was summoned purposefully, and has a background in martial arts and free hero skills. The aforementioned mistake causes him to beat the crap out of Fox, but Fox mentally dominated him throughout their fight, causing him(and his priestess/obligatory princess-type character) to be utterly terrified of him. Fox is in the process of getting stronger to pay back the favor. Before that incident he didn't really care that he was weak.

If you want some other character profiles there is a character introduction chapter at the end of the fifth segment. I can't link it just this minute because GT is going haywire. I will say that he picks up a yandere S-ranked demon, a female knight, a fairy, and a beast-girl. Despite that, its not really a harem because of how warped the cast is.

Well........time to start reading this one haha. So is Shinozaki the girl and Ijimerko the guy?
Edit: Also another question while reading the prologue, does his other classmates jumps into another world as well? And is this going towards a harem?

None of his class were sent to the other world. The hero is a Japanese as well, but he was from a different area and was summoned later.

omegasereon
2014-04-03, 04:21
The Hero(who is named Nagi) is a pretty decent guy, but his self-righteousness causes a mistake with Fox that sets them at ends. Unlike Fox he was summoned purposefully, and has a background in martial arts and free hero skills. The aforementioned mistake causes him to beat the crap out of Fox, but Fox mentally dominated him throughout their fight, causing him(and his priestess/obligatory princess-type character) to be utterly terrified of him. Fox is in the process of getting stronger to pay back the favor. Before that incident he didn't really care that he was weak.

If you want some other character profiles there is a character introduction chapter at the end of the fifth segment. I can't link it just this minute because GT is going haywire. I will say that he picks up a yandere S-ranked demon, a female knight, a fairy, and a beast-girl. Despite that, its not really a harem because of how warped the cast is.



None of his class were sent to the other world. The hero is a Japanese as well, but he was from a different area and was summoned later.

Has it been stated why he was summoned? And what method is he trying to look for to go back to his world? Finished prologue and will try to marathon through the chapters tomorrow.
Edit:Read the character bios.....wtf? He loses Finia and Lulu? So Fox is still in the process of becoming stronger right? His stats are pretty bad compared to the hero's side. Guess that makes the story a little more interesting.

bludvein
2014-04-03, 04:46
Has it been stated why he was summoned? And what method is he trying to look for to go back to his world? Finished prologue and will try to marathon through the chapters tomorrow.
Edit:Read the character bios.....wtf? He loses Finia and Lulu? So Fox is still in the process of becoming stronger right? His stats are pretty bad compared to the hero's side. Guess that makes the story a little more interesting.

His original plan was to search out the hero and see if he knew anything, but that didn't turn out so well. He doesn't have a solid plan to get back yet. Fox wasn't summoned, but was transported either through some sort of divine intervention from the looks of it. He just woke up there with no explanation and made his own way.

...and yeah, Fox is fairly weak for now, but he has some interesting abilities that let him fight way out of his weight class. His stats also get better fast once he starts trying. Miasma operation is really OP. He also has a skill that lets him accumulate stats very fast. He is going to a monster by the end.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-03, 05:53
His original plan was to search out the hero and see if he knew anything, but that didn't turn out so well. He doesn't have a solid plan to get back yet. Fox wasn't summoned, but was transported either through some sort of divine intervention from the looks of it. He just woke up there with no explanation and made his own way.

...and yeah, Fox is fairly weak for now, but he has some interesting abilities that let him fight way out of his weight class. His stats also get better fast once he starts trying. Miasma operation is really OP. He also has a skill that lets him accumulate stats very fast. He is going to a monster by the end.

Ehh?? So the Fox guy (The main protagonist) became friend with the Hero guy in the end? Also are they going to party together from now ? (Like travelling together or defeating monster together)
And most of all his reason to return to his world was to fulfil his promise with the transfer student?!? Now that is the most stupid reason I have ever heard man....... I hope in the future the MC starts to want a familiar to assist him, he will accidentally summon that Shinozuka girl because of his feeling toward their promise......

BW95
2014-04-03, 06:30
I don't understand why the Hero guys beat Fox up to begin with? How did it happen? Also, if our guy's got such a twisted expression on him, then how did he rope in a pretty girl?

bludvein
2014-04-03, 06:32
Ehh?? So the Fox guy (The main protagonist) became friend with the Hero guy in the end? Also are they going to party together from now ? (Like travelling together or defeating monster together)
And most of all his reason to return to his world was to fulfil his promise with the transfer student?!? Now that is the most stupid reason I have ever heard man....... I hope in the future the MC starts to want a familiar to assist him, he will accidentally summon that Shinozuka girl because of his feeling toward their promise......

Where did you get that? I just said they had problems when they met. Nagi's party is off to fight the demon king or whatever, while Fox and his party is off getting stronger to get Finia and Lulu back.

...and it does seem like a weak reason to want to go back, unless you understand how Fox thinks. Remember what I said about warped? She was the first person willing to be friends with him in his life. He has been emotionally beat down, and his fake smile scares everyone else away. Of course he values a promise with her more than he should.

I don't understand why the Hero guys beat Fox up to begin with? How did it happen? Also, if our guy's got such a twisted expression on him, then how did he rope in a pretty girl?

Because Lulu(the beast-girl) was a slave. Fox sort of picked her up and treated her like a little sister, but when Nagi saw the collar he didn't give any chances for explanations. He can be a bit of a self-righteous bastard. Misunderstandings ensue, and Nagi duels him for Lulu's "release." He won and took her with him, but she hates his guts:D. It motivates Fox by taking away his crutch and resolving to get strong enough nobody can take his friends away.

Not sure why the transfer student liked him. She only appears in the prologue. Maybe she had her own problems or was just nice enough to go beyond appearance?

tiatiu
2014-04-03, 07:10
bludvein isnt finia is the fairy that love fox how did she taken away?

BW95
2014-04-03, 07:11
Where did you get that? I just said they had problems when they met. Nagi's party is off to fight the demon king or whatever, while Fox and his party is off getting stronger to get Finia and Lulu back.

...and it does seem like weak reason to want to go back, unless you understand how Fox thinks. Remember what I said about warped? She was the first person willing to be friends with him in his life. He has been emotionally beat down, and his fake smile scares everyone else away. Of course he values a promise with her more than he should.



Because Lulu(the beast-girl) was a slave. Fox sort of picked her up and treated her like a little sister, but when Nagi saw the collar he didn't give any chances for explanations. He can be a bit of a self-righteous bastard. Misunderstandings ensue, and Nagi duels him for Lulu's "release." He won and took her with him, but she hates his guts:D. It motivates Fox by taking away his crutch and resolving to get strong enough nobody can take his friends away.

Not sure why the transfer student liked him. She only appears in the prologue. Maybe she had her own problems or was just nice enough to go beyond appearance?

Seriously? And Lulu didn't explain the situation to him afterwards?

bludvein
2014-04-03, 07:15
Seriously? And Lulu didn't explain the situation to him afterwards?

Oh, he got the picture afterwards, but by then it was too late.

Anyway, if you want details you'll just have to give it a try. I honestly don't remember why Finia got taken as well off the top of my head.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-03, 09:19
Oh, he got the picture afterwards, but by then it was too late.

Anyway, if you want details you'll just have to give it a try. I honestly don't remember why Finia got taken as well off the top of my head.

Huh? If he got the picture of it then why not apology to him and give her back to Fox?
Are Finia and Lulu both beast girls ? Also does the MC got some kind of personality frightening change like Hajime when that damn Nagi took his precious persons away?
Finally Have our Protagonist actually paid back Nagi the humiliation he suffered by kicking his ass yet ?

omegasereon
2014-04-03, 15:52
So some random black haired woman send him to another world?
Edit: Just wondering are there chapters about Shiori's side or Nagi's side like Arifureta's side stories?

tiatiu
2014-04-03, 17:25
i read it in marathon yeseterday from what i see that hero dont fell sorry and think what he is doing is right and he take both finia and lulu
and mc change he got broken power now

BW95
2014-04-03, 17:35
i read it in marathon yeseterday from what i see that hero dont fell sorry and think what he is doing is right and he take both finia and lulu
and mc change he got broken power now

Even after Finia told him she wasn't a slave? Friggin' d*ck. What was this hero guy's girlfriend saying?

tiatiu
2014-04-03, 17:48
if im not wrong she said if finia help mc by casting spell lulu will dies

BW95
2014-04-03, 17:52
if im not wrong she said if finia help mc by casting spell lulu will dies

WTF? So while the hero was beating down the MC to supposedly free Finia and Lulu, she was threatening them? In any case, I meant afterwards when they heard the whole story.

bludvein
2014-04-03, 18:41
Huh? If he got the picture of it then why not apology to him and give her back to Fox?
Are Finia and Lulu both beast girls ? Also does the MC got some kind of personality frightening change like Hajime when that damn Nagi took his precious persons away?
Finally Have our Protagonist actually paid back Nagi the humiliation he suffered by kicking his ass yet ?

Because by then they were scared of Fox and had already been made enemies. They aren't brave enough to go back and be all "I'm an idiot, sorry." That was not a shining moment, that's for sure.

Finia is a fairy born from a fox mask that he was carrying. She was Fox's self-proclaimed(justified, since she is pretty strong) protector. She looks like a mini version of the girl in the prologue.

No massive personality change, but he was pretty ruthless from the start. It just convinced him that he needed to be strong himself.

Nope, he can't yet. He is on a bit of a training journey atm. Maybe he could beat Nagi up with his special skills, but stat-wise Fox is much weaker atm. He isn't gonna go after Nagi until he is confident.

@omega

Yes, there are side story chapters showing the heroes' side.

tiatiu
2014-04-03, 19:44
bludvein i think the mc got some nasty personality chance when he kill duke oruba with miasma knife

blankerer
2014-04-06, 02:53
well enjoying the weekly updates for 八男って、それはないでしょう!
also like the cover illustration lol

time for some actual war soon?

bludvein
2014-04-06, 03:48
My latest read is 治癒魔法の間違った使い方~戦場を駆ける回復要員~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2468ca/).

It follows a mold that we have all seen in other series, but it deviates quickly. The MC and 2 friends get a different world summon, but it turns out the MC is not a "hero" like the other 2 and was summoned by accident. Unusual for the premise in that it doesn't automatically make everyone else an asshole. He gets treated fairly nicely, and he does turn out to have an aptitude for magic....healing magic to be exact. In further defiance to stereotyping, this isn't looked down upon and is greatly valued. Unfortunately(or fortunately depending on your POV), he is drafted into a battlefield healer unit and gets some training from hell. After all, if you can heal yourself you can do some downright crazy training without the side effects. This is so he can go into any situation and carry out wounded.

It's mostly a comedy and doesn't take itself too seriously. I liked it.

Avrorrange
2014-04-06, 04:08
Has anyone read this series? It's also apparently from Syosetsuka. Apparently 80% of the plot got changed when it got published. It's getting it's own Drama CD soon.

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blankerer
2014-04-06, 04:54
what the hell is the point if 80% of the plot got changed.

Avrorrange
2014-04-06, 04:56
what the hell is the point if 80% of the plot got changed.

The author considers the plot of the web version to be the TRUE ENDING while the published version is the GOOD ENDING.

BW95
2014-04-06, 09:31
Is this the same Overlord that just had its prologue released on imoutolicious?

blankerer
2014-04-06, 18:41
well that one at imouto is the LN version I would guess since both prologues are completely different after all.

so would the good end continue into part 2 or does it just screw with everything in part 1? or is part 2 just some time skip or completely new cast.....
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oh wow so there was 2 updates this week yay.

bludvein
2014-04-09, 07:32
Damn, the latest chapter of 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処?.....

Nagi is getting thoroughly owned by the apostle, and now we have an idea of how far they really have to go. The demon king is thousands of times stronger than they are. Nagi would be lucky if they could beat a B rank demon as a team, forget the demon king.

Fox is even weaker, although at least he has a chance to overturn the odds eventually. He really needs to fly under the radar for now though. The growth inflation is gonna get insane. I'm looking forward to it.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-09, 07:50
Damn, the latest chapter of 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処?.....

Nagi is getting thoroughly owned by the apostle, and now we have an idea of how far they really have to go. The demon king is thousands of times stronger than they are. Nagi would be lucky if they could beat a B rank demon as a team, forget the demon king.

Fox is even weaker, although at least he has a chance to overturn the odds eventually. He really needs to fly under the radar for now though. The growth inflation is gonna get insane. I'm looking forward to it.

Huh? if I am right about the latest chapter then somehow the other twin of the white haired onee san who happened to encounter Fox called Stella somehow beat the hell out of Nagi the hero and then the last line of the chapter she said: "...... It is strange....you are too weak to be a hero....." right? Does this means she will somehow wind up searching for Fox next?

bludvein
2014-04-09, 08:07
Huh? if I am right about the latest chapter then somehow the other twin of the white haired onee san who happened to encounter Fox called Stella somehow beat the hell out of Nagi the hero and then the last line of the chapter she said: "...... It is strange....you are too weak to be a hero....." right? Does this means she will somehow wind up searching for Fox next?

Stella(the apostle) isn't related to the girl Fox's party picked up as far as we know. She already fought Fox earlier while she was searching for Nagi, and kicked his ass too. He did manage to impress her and fight for a while alone though, with her eventually determining he didn't need to be "purified." That's better than Nagi has managed. Fox seems to have been summoned naturally through either divine intervention or by the world itself, so it didn't interfere with its stability. The only reason they fought was that Fox was protecting Leila(a devil), and Stella is basically an angel. She figured since she was there she might as well get rid of her. She reconsiders when Leila doesn't act all evil, and restores his eye as an apology. This worked out awesome, because he awakens a specific skill during the fight, and since his new eye was made from Liela's flesh and and based on a human's eye that possessed foresight he also got a foreseeing eye and miasma operation. This basically gave him the opportunity to become awesome later. Oh, and it also looks cool.

Nagi on the other hand, was summoned by humans and his presence interferes with some sort of dimensional stability crap. So her mission is to remove him. Nagi is in deep shit. He needs to awaken a specific skill strong enough to fight her off, or persuade her he doesn't need to be killed.

Wow, the "heroes" are basically weak to the point Stella feels embarrassed to even fight them. The priestess faints with a single light hit, while Finia and Lulu sit back and enjoy the show. Now that they got the fox mask back, they can pretty much just leave. Nagi gets owned mentally again, but it looks like he feels genuine remorse for his stupidity now. He isn't such a bad character. If Stella doesn't kill him here he might actually be likable in the future.

Damn, Fox is too OP. He still has a long way to go to be any sort of fight to the demon king, but he is already more than a match for Nagi's party. You get the feeling he can plausibly become ridiculously strong with his abilities. Since his stat growth is based on the assumption of defeating enemies at level 1, his stats are gonna inflate much faster than everybody else's. There has got to be some sort of limit on that...

Plus his miasma operation. It's basically the swiss army knife of powers. It can become a magic attack, a shield against magic, weapons, armor, a detection skill, and a stealth skill. He controls much less miasma than Leila for now, but he seems more imaginative with it. He basically has a touch of death no matter where he hits you. At least he doesn't seem able to use that body eating thing at range yet. Coupled with a high level eye of foresight, he is gonna be so awesome when he gets things down.

amatsunagi
2014-04-15, 06:32
I resurfaced back after a long adventure deep inside the mines of narou... (actually load of works out there in real life, children are such pain...). I want to share new titles that I had scooped in my adventure...but first, here are some updates and news from Narou:

1. Death March 2nd volume is slated to be released june 2014. I can't wait for Arisa and Lulu to appear, especially Arisa, she is my favorite heroine of Death March~
2. New label named GCnovels -Got A Chance Novels-, their debut titles are: [Tensei Shittara Slime datta Ken] and [Madousho wo Tsukuru Hito] both from Narou. I have read [Tensei Shittara Slime datta Ken] and it's quite awesome.
3. [Tate Yuusha no Nariagari] still continue with current arc focused on Spear Hero.
4. [Izakaya Bottakuri], [World talk RPG] receive light-novel adaptation by Alphapolis.
5. [Re:Zero kara Hajimaru Isekai Seikatsu] popularity secure manga adaptation.
6. Author of [Mamono-Musumetachi no Goshujin-sama!] decided to resume his work on Narou and suspend the web version. The story gets several alteration, most are in regards to fit the rating for 15+.
7. Author of [Maou ga Chijou deha Kyuuseishu ni Natteiru Riyuu] and [Saikyou Yuusha no Deshi Ikusei Keikaku], get her account banned for violating narou rule's. It's kind of too bad since I'm really really looking out for the latter (despite it's a obvious pakuri of Wizard Climber)
8 Other titles that get light-novel adaptation are: [Change!], [Guild no Cheat na Uketsukejou]. [Kamitachi ni Hirowareta Otoko (tentative)] is reported to receive offer for light-novel adaptation, it's unknown if the author accept it or not.
9. [Saikyou na Boku to Grimoire] won the second prize (Silver) of HJBunko 8th Novel Awards.


Next are cover images for several new titles
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Enterbrain/Usuber [Kono Sekai ga Game da to Ore dake ga Shitteiru 4]
Enterbrain/Kazahane Hiromi [Hai to Oukoku 2 ~Ryuu to Ryuukou~]
MFBooks/Y.A [Hachinan tte, Soreha Nai deshou! 1]
MFBooks/Yusagi Aneko [Tate Yuusha no Nariagari 5]
MFBooks/Wai [Dragoon ~Ryuu Kishi he no Michi~ 2]
Overlap Bunko/Hitsuji Gamei [Isekai Mahou ha Okureteru! 1]
Overlap Bunko/Souda You [Fleime Oukoku Koubou Ki 1]
Fujimi Fantasia Bunko/Zachou Aroha [Only Sense Online 1]

Speaking of Hachinan, I wonder how will it turn out between Wendelin and Teresse?
as for Overlord... hmm, haven't touched that title yet~ (^. ^)
Gun-Ota became 1 per 2 days... (ToT) Except for Meiya and Riss, the rest of the girls are awesome! my favorite is when Chris reciting the "Rifleman's Creed".

HasNoLove
2014-04-15, 15:03
dude, imoutolicious un-officially translate the prologue of Overlord at 4th april, Hopely someone will continued it..

BW95
2014-04-15, 19:16
What is this Overlord about? The prologue on imoutolicious tells me nothing.

blankerer
2014-04-15, 19:25
thought we had some post or was it on imouto chatango about it.

BW95
2014-04-15, 19:29
thought we had some post or was it on imouto chatango about it.

Yeah, but those were just illustrations and some minor details concerning how the story was drastically changed when it got adapted into an LN.

blankerer
2014-04-15, 19:35
well the vrmmo server is shutting down and during the forced log out some accident happened and he's now his character and of course the world is different from when he just played the game.

the 2 prologue chapters of what he was doing online and then it happened lol

BW95
2014-04-15, 19:39
well the vrmmo server is shutting down and during the forced log out some accident happened and he's now his character and of course the world is different from when he just played the game.

the 2 prologue chapters of what he was doing online and then it happened lol

I have no idea what you're talking about. There were no details pertaining to the plot in the previous post so I have no idea of the premise aside from what you just told me now. So our guy was unlucky (or lucky) to become the victim of some crazy technical difficulty while he was playing a VRMMORPG and become his character in a real fantasy world? Where did the girl come from?

blankerer
2014-04-15, 20:26
just doing a really quick and fast skim searching around so that LN prologue with the girl or whatever it's supposed to be.

would be ch5 like 3/4 through the first part of the war ch.

BW95
2014-04-15, 20:33
Wow. That really is screwed up.

SineMora
2014-04-16, 07:40
I wonder what happened now at Master of Monster and Gun-Ota...

Avrorrange
2014-04-16, 08:52
I have no idea what you're talking about. There were no details pertaining to the plot in the previous post so I have no idea of the premise aside from what you just told me now. So our guy was unlucky (or lucky) to become the victim of some crazy technical difficulty while he was playing a VRMMORPG and become his character in a real fantasy world? Where did the girl come from?

The female lead was originally the AI manager of the guild building.All the AI followers in the guild, the guards, the maids etc all became real people with minds of their own. All of them recognized the MC as their lord as he's the guild leader and the only member of the guild to have remained. Other readers who have read ahead said the MC's goal in the new world is to conquer it with his followers.

amatsunagi
2014-04-16, 09:57
I wonder what happened now at Master of Monster and Gun-Ota...

considering that master of monster is weekly, the pacing is very slow, currently:
- Takahiro gets 2 new member: the 4th sister, Asalina and the 5th sister, Ayame
- Asalina is a parasitic vine plant monster. She born and grows on Takahiro right backhand. Takahiro can use Asalina like Scorpion from Mortal Kombat. She stays with Takahiro 24 hours.
- Ayame is a baby Balloon Fox. She can bloat like balloon and spew fire. Being a child and the youngest, her mentality is the same as 3-5 years old child.
- Roze and Mana became best friend. Roze help Takahiro overcame a bit of his paranoia around Katou Mana. Now Takahiro can ease his mind and thought Mana as friend of the same school.
- Roze slowly is able to talk and cooperate with Gerbera.
- Going to the north, the group met with surviving students protected by knights. Takahiro, Lily (in Miho form) and Ayame joined with the students and knights to interact with them and gather more information. Roze, Gerbera goes on separate way for a while, because they are monsters, Ayame volunteered herself to be bodyguard for Takahiro (hiding inside Lily body), to calm Gerbera who insist on coming along (she even suggest Takahiro to cut her body and bring her upper body). Mana didn't come along because she is scared of other people (she also suffer from PTSD) and so she joins with Gerbera and Roze.
- The Knights said that the students are their "guest". Takahiro feels something wrong with that phrasing.

As for Gun-Ota:
- After saving the Elves Kingdom, Lute is granted a honor court title and his name become Lute Gunsmith.
- He takes Riss (the second princess of Elven Kingdom) as his third wife.
- Lute then finally be able to organize his own Legion, naming it as [Peacemaker] with Lute, Snow, Chris, Meiya, Shea, Riss, Luna as it's member.
- Peacemaker first job is to help Legion, [Knights of Pure Maiden] solve the case of Mage Killer that terrorize Kokori town.
- During the showdown between [Peacemaker] and [Knights of Pure Maiden] Vs [Army of Magic Armors], Lute and the other purposely fall into their trap to lower the enemies guard. The enemies falls into chaos and annihilated by [T. MI. 35] landmines.
- Meiya and Shea leads the [Knights of Pure Maiden] sweeping most of Magic Armors.
- Snow, Chris, Riss form a team and chase over the enemy leader who runs away, Noura. Chris with SVD sniper rifle, easily scares and confuses Noura.
- Noura who panicked is blasted with T. MI. 35 set by Snow and Riss (she is protected by Magic Armor, so she still alive). Noura resort to do a suicide but Chris shoot the knife away, Noura is knocked unconscious with the second blast from T. MI. 35
- Guess next chapter is Lute vs Lucca (leader of Knights of Pure Maiden who stressed over the decline of the legion she admired and decided to massacre it's members along with Peacemaker, in order to create a new one with Magic Armors supplied by Noura)

SineMora
2014-04-16, 20:23
considering that master of monster is weekly, the pacing is very slow, currently:
- Takahiro gets 2 new member: the 4th sister, Asalina and the 5th sister, Ayame
- Asalina is a parasitic vine plant monster. She born and grows on Takahiro right backhand. Takahiro can use Asalina like Scorpion from Mortal Kombat. She stays with Takahiro 24 hours.
- Ayame is a baby Balloon Fox. She can bloat like balloon and spew fire. Being a child and the youngest, her mentality is the same as 3-5 years old child.
- Roze and Mana became best friend. Roze help Takahiro overcame a bit of his paranoia around Katou Mana. Now Takahiro can ease his mind and thought Mana as friend of the same school.
- Roze slowly is able to talk and cooperate with Gerbera.
- Going to the north, the group met with surviving students protected by knights. Takahiro, Lily (in Miho form) and Ayame joined with the students and knights to interact with them and gather more information. Roze, Gerbera goes on separate way for a while, because they are monsters, Ayame volunteered herself to be bodyguard for Takahiro (hiding inside Lily body), to calm Gerbera who insist on coming along (she even suggest Takahiro to cut her body and bring her upper body). Mana didn't come along because she is scared of other people (she also suffer from PTSD) and so she joins with Gerbera and Roze.
- The Knights said that the students are their "guest". Takahiro feels something wrong with that phrasing.

As for Gun-Ota:
- After saving the Elves Kingdom, Lute is granted a honor court title and his name become Lute Gunsmith.
- He takes Riss (the second princess of Elven Kingdom) as his third wife.
- Lute then finally be able to organize his own Legion, naming it as [Peacemaker] with Lute, Snow, Chris, Meiya, Shea, Riss, Luna as it's member.
- Peacemaker first job is to help Legion, [Knights of Pure Maiden] solve the case of Mage Killer that terrorize Kokori town.
- During the showdown between [Peacemaker] and [Knights of Pure Maiden] Vs [Army of Magic Armors], Lute and the other purposely fall into their trap to lower the enemies guard. The enemies falls into chaos and annihilated by [T. MI. 35] landmines.
- Meiya and Shea leads the [Knights of Pure Maiden] sweeping most of Magic Armors.
- Snow, Chris, Riss form a team and chase over the enemy leader who runs away, Noura. Chris with SVD sniper rifle, easily scares and confuses Noura.
- Noura who panicked is blasted with T. MI. 35 set by Snow and Riss (she is protected by Magic Armor, so she still alive). Noura resort to do a suicide but Chris shoot the knife away, Noura is knocked unconscious with the second blast from T. MI. 35
- Guess next chapter is Lute vs Lucca (leader of Knights of Pure Maiden who stressed over the decline of the legion she admired and decided to massacre it's members along with Peacemaker, in order to create a new one with Magic Armors supplied by Noura)


I wonder when will Rose.... uh... "Upgrade" herself....

amatsunagi
2014-04-19, 08:18
I wonder when will Rose.... uh... "Upgrade" herself....

when? My guess: now, since Takahiro split into 2 group. Rose is tasked with blacksmith jobs due to her innate artisan skills, but with the group splitting, her usual jobs are reduced and she can put more effort in "upgrading" herself. The question is: considering the time she have (dunno if it's a couple of days or just 1-2 days), to what degree will she upgrade herself? If there's no time, then she can't upgrade herself, but the moment is just perfect for some surprises, Like Rose, already beautiful, gallantly appeared in a maid dress, comes in to save the day. By the way, how come Maid dress? Mana will supervise it with Gerbera help (Gerbera is tasked with creating clothes, thanks to her spider thread) I guess~ ^^'

TitanCurse
2014-04-22, 11:15
Ok, Since I haven't seen my favorite series being talked here

Let me just come and advertise this

クロの戦記 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5214bb)
Romanji : Kuro no senki
Alternative title : Kuro's Military Record
Author: Saitou (サイトウ)
Status: Started on 2012/02/10 - ongoing

Crono Croford, Noble of Kefeius empire has a secret. He came from the present day Japan. Without any cheat ability, he will use his knowledge from his past as a weapon and be a harem king!.... Let's start with crushing a ten-thousands men army with a his one-thousand subordinate!

I know the synopsis didn't seem that appealing and all but I think It has its own charm and is distinctive from other mainstream(at least in Narou site) LN out there

and the whole theme of this series, which the author didn't bother to included it in the synopsis, is non-human races (Elf,Half-elf,Dwarf,Minotaur,Lizardman) are considered a lesser beings and the protagonist is trying to do something about it in a larger scale

also, the protagonist, being a noble, have his own land and his own town to manage for fuck sakes

I would rate this as a 16+ for explicit and erotic...? scene but some what light-hearted content


1.The story didn't started off at the point of summoning, but rather a whole 3 years after the protagonist got summoned. Therefore he is pretty aware of things around there.

2.The protagonist is basically useless in fight.... but again he is the commander with an army, so why bother?

3.A lot of chapter is dedicated to heroines (or some other characters) to explain things in their point of view, and some will make you go HNGGGGGGGGGGGGG

4.The protagonist try to applied his present day knowledge to increase the quality of life of his people (It's a bit like maoyuu here)

5.The protagonist's not a anti-social nor a donkan protagonist but also not a badass hero, he's pretty likeable as a main lead

6.Futanari yandere makes me ROFL

amatsunagi
2014-04-22, 13:08
@TitanCurse:
thanks for the rec, I remember reading one chapter of that and still haven't progressed, now I'm interested to continue (since you remind me of this title).

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モンスター娘ハーレムを作ろう! (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2754bv/) (Monster Harem wo Tsukurou!) tells the story of Tsuchio Mikado who one day, falls into a hole and landed on the back of a wyvern. He is in another world and while learning he has talent as monster tamer, the soul of otaku in tsuchio heart burns and he decided to be a monster tamer and create his own of monsters harem. I always like "Evolution" gimmick where someone or something change form and grow stronger (like -mon series). Protagonist is not useless and weak as he also fight alongside his team which is a good thing. A little bit "honobono" but if you like Monster-Girl, then check this out.


ぼくは異世界で付与魔法と召喚魔法を天秤にかける (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n7505bx/) (Boku ha Isekai de Fuyo mahou to Shoukan mahou wo Tenbinnikakeru) This title is one of the fuel for my hatred of orcs and also the first title which tainted my happy-go-lucky mood. The story about Kaya Kazuhisa who is trying to take revenge by digging a trap hole on the mountain behind his school but instead killed an orc. He is then transported to a white room, where he learn that he , the school and it's students are teleported to another place. Kazuhisa will face many options which is going to decide the fate of not only his life but also the other students as well. Protagonist along with his party is often put in harsh situation which makes me think that author is a sadist. The main point of this story is alone > rescues other > lead a group > try to survive. The group fights are good and the mood really sets in as you can feel the suspense, well, at least for me.


遅咲き冒険者(エクスプローラー) (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5077bw/) (Osozaki Explorer) story about a veteran explorer, Ignis who feels he had reached his limit and decided to retire. One day, he meets with one slave who ask him to buy her in exchange for "power". Honobono and pretty much old-school adventuring. Quite a good side-read though.


神器を統べる若神様 ~戦神の異世界ハーレム奮闘記~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n6069bx/) (Jingi wo Suberu Waka Kamisama ~Ikusa Kami no Isekai Harem Funtouki~) is a story of Renya Easle who was once a ordinary man, kidnapped by a certain god, and receive trial to escape the fate of reincarnating as dog in his next life. After killing the God, he then proceed to take over the god position. Renya then adventure into a fantasy world to test his newly attained god power. accompanied by Goddess of Love and Passion, Floria, he will raise and break a series of flags (Events) which will weave into a legend of God of War. somehow chuuni, funny dialogues, and good pace.


グレイプニル~異世界学園無双録~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n0711cb/) (Gleipnir ~Isekai Gakuen Musouroku~) is a new title about Majima Suzaku who lives together with his mother while his father suddenly went missing. Few years later his father is back and Suzaku is surprised that his father can use magic. Apparently his father, Genbu was summoned to another world as hero and managed to save the world. After Genbu went back to his own world, several years went by. Suzaku, now a high-school student is told by Genbu that Genbu had promised he would come back again to that world. He then asked (more like, forced) Suzaku to go there as his replacement. Hmm~ actually good idea, good execution, but the fight scene feels lacking for me. Well, Alto alone is enough to make me keep reading so I guess it's fine ^^


さようなら竜生 こんにちは人生 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n6375bm/) (Sayonara Ryuusei Konnichiwa Jinsei) is about a dragon who feels he already lived long enough. He is then slayed by heroes but found himself reborn as human boy, Dran. Chuckled at how fate works, he accept his new life and excited to see and experience human's life. Really like this story, thanks to awesome Dran. Good story and good fighting scene. The length of each chapter is about the chapter of Hachinan, however, some may find this a little bit tedious or dragged on with some explanations (As for me, it took time to get used to it).


異世界盗賊譚 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2350ba/) (Isekai Touzokutan) Another gloomy story. Tells the story of Kujou Tsukumo, a young man in the black world who works as a thief. Upon sneaking to the residence of Sengoku Rouga, he found nothing valuable there other than a ring and a letter which tells him that the ring is a magic item that will send the wearer to another world. Although he doubted the credibility, he tried it since he already sick of his life. His decision will start the story of neither a hero or saint, but a thief starting a new life. Dark, serious, gloomy. and protagonist action is often heartless. But overall it's cool with thick plot.


異世界の歩き方 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1686ca/) (Isekai no Arukikata) is the story of Kaga Tatsuya who is suddenly summoned to another world. Not knowing how to go back to his own world, he then decided to go sightseeing around the world. Unknown to other though... he actually has been to another world before, when he is still a child. And this is what I need~ a light story. Despite the usual teleported to another world, the story doesn't follow the usual: hero, demon king, demon army and blah blah blah. Lots of older girl characters, definitely for oneesan faction! anyway, I enjoy reading this as a cure for my gloom~


精霊幻想記 ~こんな世界で出会えた君に~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1094bz/) (Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~) is a story of Amakawa Haruto who is caught in a traffic accident and lost his consciousness. The next thing he know, he is already inside a body of a 7 years-old boy named Rio living in a slum. He then come across a kidnap attempt of princessess and managed to save them. However, his action is doubted and he is branded as spy, what will happen to Rio now, as he still have things he have to do. This is the story of fate, miracle, and destiny. The main power of this story is the flow and its concise content. The story doesn't add unnecesary contents which result in speedy but good pace. Although different in theme, this title is quite similar in vibe as "Master of Monster". One thing to note is about the "Harem" tag, well, sure there's harem possibility here, but it doesn't feels like harem at all due to Rio closing himself. Nevertheless, I still love the story.


受難の魔王 -転生しても忌子だった件- (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4220br/) (Junan no Maou -Tensei Shite mo Imiko datta Ken-) is the story about a middle schooler who is bullied and killed and reincarnated as a boy in another world, as a cursed boy. To be frank, that one sentence is enough to tell how the story will goes, the story of unlucky boy who is destined to be hated and bullied. In that harsh life he still find happiness however, how long will that happiness last? My complain about this story is the pace which is slow. the addition of intermission which shows story that will happened later (feels like trailer) just gives me the itch to say, "hurry up!". Not to the point of amazing, but the story is good.


魔人転生記 -九転臨死に一生を- (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2571z/) (Mabito Tenseiki -Kyu Ten Rinshi ni Isshou wo-) is the story of a soul who already reincarnated 8 times, each times he only glimpsed being killed by human. On the 9th times, he regained full consciousness from the start, as a demon, Saleh Sanctus. Raised by demon clans, Saleh live 15 years of happy life. That happy life ended on the day he went travelling outside the village. Atem Kingdom with it's intention of purging non-humans, eradicates Saleh village and rob him of his relatives. After that, he meet with a group of vagrant consisted of non-humans from another clan who survived from the purge. Saleh then join this group and journey to find a place for them. Good story, good cast of character, nice balance of serious and humour. The story is easy to read and not as dark as what I expect to be.


迷宮アンデッド ~ゾンビから始める異世界成り上がり~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2808cb/) (Meikyuu Undead ~Zombie kara Hajimeru Isekai Nariagari) is the story of a zombie who holds the memories of his past life. He named himself Lost and along his companion, she-zombie and skull soldier, they rise from the weakest monsters to the strongest monsters. Very good description of fighting scene also with "evolution" gimmick that I like. Still relatively new but interesting with satisfactory length of text for each chapter.

Well,, that's umm... 12 titles that I recommended from many titles I had scooped, happy reading~

bludvein
2014-04-22, 17:16
My newest read is 創炎のヒストリア ~転生執事の日常~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4339cb/).

Basic premise is a high school boy who likes housework dies saving a girl from falling off a roof. For other characters there is an obligatory pretty childhood friend and a class bishounen who is good at everything, which is relevant later.

Anyway the protagonist is reincarnated as the son of a maid in an early-European style world with magic, and of course sets out to be a butler who would do Hayate proud. 17 years later(for the protagonist at least), and guess who are summoned as heroes? They arrive at the lair of the demon king just as the protagonist is mopping up.

Only 8 chapters out for now, but its already the top of the daily rankings on Narou since its first release.

omegasereon
2014-04-22, 17:57
My newest read is 創炎のヒストリア ~転生執事の日常~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4339cb/).

Basic premise is a high school boy who likes housework dies saving a girl from falling off a roof. For other characters there is an obligatory pretty childhood friend and a class bishounen who is good at everything, which is relevant later.

Anyway the protagonist is reincarnated as the son of a maid in an early-European style world with magic, and of course sets out to be a butler who would do Hayate proud. 17 years later(for the protagonist at least), and guess who are summoned as heroes? They arrive at the lair of the demon king just as the protagonist is mopping up.

Only 8 chapters out for now, but its already the top of the daily rankings on Narou since its first release.

This one sounds interesting. Will check it out later.

BW95
2014-04-22, 18:01
My newest read is 創炎のヒストリア ~転生執事の日常~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4339cb/).

Basic premise is a high school boy who likes housework dies saving a girl from falling off a roof. For other characters there is an obligatory pretty childhood friend and a class bishounen who is good at everything, which is relevant later.

Anyway the protagonist is reincarnated as the son of a maid in an early-European style world with magic, and of course sets out to be a butler who would do Hayate proud. 17 years later(for the protagonist at least), and guess who are summoned as heroes? They arrive at the lair of the demon king just as the protagonist is mopping up.

Only 8 chapters out for now, but its already the top of the daily rankings on Narou since its first release.

Wait. So he defeated the demon king as part of his butler duties?

Seitsuki
2014-04-22, 18:18
From the description I would guess the 'mopping up' here is...pretty literal :heh:

krab
2014-04-22, 18:21
so... if i guess right he's working for the demon lord? and kicks out heros? :D

bludvein
2014-04-22, 18:23
From the description I would guess the 'mopping up' here is...pretty literal :heh:

Nope, I meant that he killed them all, and the heroes walked in as he was finishing off the leader.

Basically he takes orders seriously no matter how ridiculous. He was told to go finish off the leader of the devils by the ojou-sama character, and he complied. He was a little irritated that it screwed up his uniform though.:D He is a butler, a bodyguard, and a secret agent all in one. Hayate would be impressed.

BW95
2014-04-22, 18:31
Nope, I meant that he killed them all, and the heroes walked in as he was finishing off the leader.

Basically he takes orders seriously no matter how ridiculous. He was told to go finish off the leader of the devils by the ojou-sama character, and he complied. He was a little irritated that it screwed up his uniform though.:D He has been trained to be all-round superman.

BADASS. I knew it from the start. A true butler that might shame even Sebastian. I'm gonna call this one. This is gonna be a goldmine. So does our butler's ojou-sama get possessive over him?

Richocet
2014-04-22, 18:46
Nope, I meant that he killed them all, and the heroes walked in as he was finishing off the leader.

Basically he takes orders seriously no matter how ridiculous. He was told to go finish off the leader of the devils by the ojou-sama character, and he complied. He was a little irritated that it screwed up his uniform though.:D He is a butler, a bodyguard, and a secret agent all in one. Hayate would be impressed.

i can see why this is pretty popular seems funny

amatsunagi
2014-04-22, 19:58
My newest read is 創炎のヒストリア ~転生執事の日常~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4339cb/).

Basic premise is a high school boy who likes housework dies saving a girl from falling off a roof. For other characters there is an obligatory pretty childhood friend and a class bishounen who is good at everything, which is relevant later.

Anyway the protagonist is reincarnated as the son of a maid in an early-European style world with magic, and of course sets out to be a butler who would do Hayate proud. 17 years later(for the protagonist at least), and guess who are summoned as heroes? They arrive at the lair of the demon king just as the protagonist is mopping up.

Only 8 chapters out for now, but its already the top of the daily rankings on Narou since its first release.

just realized it's Jupponsui~ my only complain is about Souji's "Cheat" skill... kind of similar to Hiiro's "Cheat" skill. Oh well, at least few more chapters to see if I can say "I'm really liking this".

bludvein
2014-04-22, 20:25
just realized it's Jupponsui~ my only complain is about Souji's "Cheat" skill... kind of similar to Hiiro's "Cheat" skill. Oh well, at least few more chapters to see if I can say "I'm really liking this".

Yup, it needs a few more chapters before I can really say its amazing. I like the premise, but things are just starting. On the other hand though, its popular enough that its daily points are more than double #2 and it only started a couple days ago. So seems like other people have high hopes for it too. It seems like it will get a new chapter daily for now, so that's a plus.

amatsunagi
2014-04-22, 20:33
Since His other work: "Isekai Game" is over, he have more time to spend on "Souen no Historia". Speaking of which, that "Ikemen" Kazuto... is sure to be another "retard", >.>

I have to correct that god indeed is fair, be it handsome, smart, athletic and so and so, ...in the end he is "retard". Oh, and by the way, since it's Jupponsui, "Souen no Historia" is updated every 00:00 (Japan time) along with Konjiki Word Master

Avrorrange
2014-04-22, 22:12
Name:白の皇国物語 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n3273i/)/ Shiro no Koukoku Monogatari
Literal English translation:Tale of the White Kingdom.
Overview:Basically, it's the Chronicles of Narnia with a harem,guns and a more elaborate political structure.The politics of this series is quite interesting but I despise the author's style of narration. He chose to narrate the story at times as though it's some sort of history book by providing insights of events situated in the series by future generations. It's also way too idealistic.It's basically a high fantasy series where few nobles are evil and corrupt.
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Basically, this random dude from our world 'died' and when he came to his senses, he found himself in a different world and his appearance changed entirely. His hair, for example, became entirely white. The monarchy isn't hereditary and only those who has the ability to control the 'Royal Sword', a weapon of mass destruction has the right to become King. These individuals,categorized as 'White', are typically characterized with white hair, something normal people don't have. During his/her lifetime, each King would find and appoint an individual who can control the 'Royal Sword' as Crown Prince/Princess and groom him/her as his/her successor. Problem arose however, when the previous King died without ever finding another 'White'. This caused the previous King's son to takeover as temporary King of the realm. As a result of the current King's lack of legitimacy as well as general incompetency, the Kingdom was plunged into a civil war, with other countries taking advantage of the situation and invading it. The situation took a worst turn when the current King himself died suddenly....

amatsunagi
2014-04-22, 22:46
Name:白の皇国物語 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n3273i/)
Literal English translation:Tale of the White Kingdom.
Overview:Basically, it's the Chronicles of Narnia with a harem,guns and a more elaborate political structure.The politics of this series is quite interesting but I despise the author's style of narration. He chose to narrate the story at times as though it's some sort of history book by providing insights of events situated in the series by future generations. It's also way too idealistic.It's basically a high fantasy series where few nobles are evil and corrupt.
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f157/alphonsechristophe/134905hs4jqkjjktqsosj5.jpghttp://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f157/alphonsechristophe/135554ilzwm3m11kkwmd1z.jpghttp://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f157/alphonsechristophe/135201wtcffd54c9x7dpd3.jpghttp://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f157/alphonsechristophe/135402fqgoaaoo5a6c8cmm.jpg

Basically, this random dude from our world 'died' and when he came to his senses, he found himself in a different world and his appearance changed entirely. His hair, for example, became entirely white. The monarchy isn't hereditary and only those who has the ability to control the 'Royal Sword', a weapon of mass destruction has the right to become King. These individuals,categorized as 'White', are typically characterized with white hair, something normal people don't have. During his lifetime, each King would find and appoint an individual who can control the 'Royal Sword' as Crown Prince/Princess and groom him/her as his/her successor. Problem arose however, when the previous King died without ever finding another 'White'. This caused the previous King's son to takeover as temporary King of the realm. As a result of the current King's lack of legitimacy as well as general incompetency, the Kingdom was plunged into a civil war, with other countries taking advantage of the situation and invading it. The situation took a worst turn when the current King himself died suddenly....

Alphapolis orz
I'm also interested to read this, but digest kind of killed the mood~

Avrorrange
2014-04-22, 22:49
Alphapolis orz
I'm also interested to read this, but digest kind of killed the mood~

Yeah, the first volume basically loads you with the setting of the series. I blame it on the narration of the author.

blankerer
2014-04-22, 22:53
even the manga adaption didn't manage to pull me in.

SineMora
2014-04-22, 22:58
My newest read is 創炎のヒストリア ~転生執事の日常~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4339cb/).

Basic premise is a high school boy who likes housework dies saving a girl from falling off a roof. For other characters there is an obligatory pretty childhood friend and a class bishounen who is good at everything, which is relevant later.

Anyway the protagonist is reincarnated as the son of a maid in an early-European style world with magic, and of course sets out to be a butler who would do Hayate proud. 17 years later(for the protagonist at least), and guess who are summoned as heroes? They arrive at the lair of the demon king just as the protagonist is mopping up.

Only 8 chapters out for now, but its already the top of the daily rankings on Narou since its first release.

ABOUT TIME I SEE SOMETHING RELATED TO!
Rather than being summoned with random job class, he gets one that is MORE THAN PERFECTLY TAILORED TO HIM.

Avrorrange
2014-04-22, 23:10
even the manga adaption didn't manage to pull me in.

Just checked the manga version. Did they completely change the character designs?

SineMora
2014-04-23, 07:27
Just checked the manga version. Did they completely change the character designs?

manga of what?

Avrorrange
2014-04-23, 07:47
manga of what?

Tale of the White Kingdom.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-23, 07:57
Has there any scanlation of this manga been out yet?

Avrorrange
2014-04-23, 08:04
Has there any scanlation of this manga been out yet?

Not that I can find.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-23, 08:29
Not that I can find.

Does that mean it hasn't released yet?

Avrorrange
2014-04-23, 09:42
Does that mean it hasn't released yet?

The manga's out, no English scanlation though.

sasuke706
2014-04-23, 21:08
異世界盗賊譚 (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2350ba/) (Isekai Touzokutan) Another gloomy story. Tells the story of Kujou Tsukumo, a young man in the black world who works as a thief. Upon sneaking to the residence of Sengoku Rouga, he found nothing valuable there other than a ring and a letter which tells him that the ring is a magic item that will send the wearer to another world. Although he doubted the credibility, he tried it since he already sick of his life. His decision will start the story of neither a hero or saint, but a thief starting a new life. Dark, serious, gloomy. and protagonist action is often heartless. But overall it's cool with thick plot.
Just began reading this and I'm not quite sure if I misunderstood something or not, but
Did he just make the princess his slave, rape her over the span of two days, and her reaction to it is essentially childish pouting in that she just wants to do the opposite of what he says?

BW95
2014-04-23, 21:12
Just began reading this and I'm not quite sure if I misunderstood something or not, but
Did he just make the princess his slave, rape her over the span of two days, and her reaction to it is essentially childish pouting in that she just wants to do the opposite of what he says?

The opposite? Which is what?

amatsunagi
2014-04-23, 22:34
Just began reading this and I'm not quite sure if I misunderstood something or not, but
Did he just make the princess his slave, rape her over the span of two days, and her reaction to it is essentially childish pouting in that she just wants to do the opposite of what he says?

Yes, Tsukumo lusted over her upon seeing her exquisite beauty and promptly make Diana his slave, after that, rape her 2 days straight (his stamina is enhanced thanks to Crust Bear meat that he eat). Diana refused to eat and drink what Tsukumo offered because she really hate him but Tsukumo forced her with 'order'. She wants to resist and if possible kill Tsukumo, but constantly taken by surprise from things she never seen before.

sasuke706
2014-04-23, 22:44
Yes, Tsukumo lusted over her upon seeing her exquisite beauty and promptly make Diana his slave, after that, rape her 2 days straight (his stamina is enhanced thanks to Crust Bear meat that he eat). Diana refused to eat and drink what Tsukumo offered because she really hate him but Tsukumo forced her with 'order'. She wants to resist and if possible kill Tsukumo, but constantly taken by surprise from things she never seen before.
I was kind of expecting a mental breakdown over losing her virginity in essentially what was an extreme test of endurance, or at least be a little sad over it. She's angry with him and wants to kill him, yes, but she seems to get over the whole rape thing fairly quickly. And her refusing to eat or drink when she obviously needed it really just came off as a childish way of dealing with situation, aka pouting.

It is amusing how Tsukumo's plan for her is basically have her succumb to Stockholm syndrome, even if so far (chapter 9) he seems more afflicted with Lima syndrome than she is by her intended syndrome.
Hasn't been much thievery yet for being a thief.

amatsunagi
2014-04-23, 23:36
I guess she already give up the moment she is kidnapped or midway the rape and then Tsukumo intention and slight bit of kindness confused her. it's also possibly her strength that made her get over it quickly. Tsukumo is actually kind, but he is "broken" psychologically which makes him confused

DoomCalibur
2014-04-24, 01:09
I guess she already give up the moment she is kidnapped or midway the rape and then Tsukumo intention and slight bit of kindness confused her. it's also possibly her strength that made her get over it quickly. Tsukumo is actually kind, but he is "broken" psychologically which makes him confused

So one quick question: is this a natural and sweet harem theme or rather a twisted and forceful harem theme?

amatsunagi
2014-04-24, 01:58
So one quick question: is this a natural and sweet harem theme or rather a twisted and forceful harem theme?
Forceful at first. Up until chapter 66, there are 3 girls that join his adventure, 2 of them are reluctant and hate him (because they are forced into slavery) but gradualy falls in love to Tsukumo. While the other one is still confused to follow or not (possibly she will).

DoomCalibur
2014-04-24, 04:32
Forceful at first. Up until chapter 66, there are 3 girls that join his adventure, 2 of them are reluctant and hate him (because they are forced into slavery) but gradualy falls in love to Tsukumo. While the other one is still confused to follow or not (possibly she will).

Did he managed to get some development or change in his character during the journey? Also since he is that lustful have he NTR any girls yet?

Okashira
2014-04-24, 05:11
Did he managed to get some development or change in his character during the journey? Also since he is that lustful have he NTR any girls yet?

He isn't like that. What happened is that the meat that he ate before give him energy in every sense :heh: After he calmed down (2 days) he realized that his behaviour was not natural (he is not hero, but not quite like that).

BTW, didn''t he gave Diana the left over meat later? What happened afterwads? :heh:

DoomCalibur
2014-04-24, 05:58
He isn't like that. What happened is that the meat that he ate before give him energy in every sense :heh: After he calmed down (2 days) he realized that his behaviour was not natural (he is not hero, but not quite like that).

BTW, didn''t he gave Diana the left over meat later? What happened afterwads? :heh:

Sooo........ He is not a hero..... then who is? Can you give me a clear description of this hero and his personality as well ? Thank you very much~~~~

sasuke706
2014-04-24, 12:14
BTW, didn''t he gave Diana the left over meat later? What happened afterwads?
Nothing. Tsukumo starts having doubts that it's the meat causing it and consults the ring on it, because he'd heard the ring's previous owner had multiple lovers and around 50 kids. The ring amends its previous statement about the meat possibly being the cause, saying that while he and the people of the current world are both humans, they're fundamentally different. It claims his body instinctually realizes this and strives to continue passing on its genes. Tsukumo silently seems to think it's the ring's fault regardless, and the ring shows a rare moment of being flustered, so he's more than likely right.

Talking with the dragon mercenary does make him realize that they've been going at it like rabbits in mating season, and that just the knight and princess probably won't be able to keep it up too much longer, even with the healing potions he has. Probably doesn't help the two appear to be enjoying it at this point? They honestly didn't seem that against to begin with, if you ask me, but it's probably best to not think about it too much.

Avrorrange
2014-04-24, 12:33
From my understanding, did Tsukumo kill all of the princess' guards and then had her enslaved?

Also, who are in his 'harem'? This is one f@#ked up story....

EDIT:Okay, did this guy trick the female knight into becoming his slave under the impression that he would release the princess? Wow...this guy is scum.

amatsunagi
2014-04-24, 13:13
Sooo........ He is not a hero..... then who is? Can you give me a clear description of this hero and his personality as well ? Thank you very much~~~~

In his world before, Tsukumo is an orphan and there is an older girl who is close to him, her name is Yachiyo. Tsukumo at least are normal at first, but everything changes when Yachiyo run with her lover and left him alone, along with lots of debt. Tsukumo then started to do anything he can to survive in that harsh world, like rat. And then he heard the news that Yachiyo is dead or went missing. Tsukumo search for her whereabouts and arrived at the mansion of Sengoku Rouga, the guy last seen with Yachiyo.

After teleported to another world, he is scared sh*t and panicked when a Crust Bear attacked him. With the help of the ring, he is able to kill the Crust Bear. After that he learns lots of information about this world, and the important thing that he learn: "Do not hesitate to kill". He is sly and cunning, often use tactic to outwit enemies.

His root is kind (yeah, a little bit), as he treasured those close to him and not hesitate to kill anyone who are trying to do harm to him or his property (that include his slaves). Tsukumo is actually frail and coward but experience screw him up to put up a strong front and stain his own hand to the very end. There this event where Tsukumo and co. are staying in a town, acting like a kind traveler guy. Then they sneak to the landlord castle and rob his treasures. After that, when they escape, He destroyed that one town along with its citizen, to erase any witnesses and their trace as it is necessary. (This action however, gave birth to a hero that will surely stand in his way for revenge)

@Sasuke706:
Diana thinks Tsukumo is her best chance to return to her kingdom, since she's slave she can't do anything to resist but she gradually falls under stockholm syndrome. As for Justia, she only following Tsukumo orders and wait for a chance to backstab him, but she gradually is attracted to Tsukumo violence, which reveal her twisted dark side. Both are gradually drowned in please? But, yeah, it's best not to think too much about it :heh:

@Moe_connection:
Tsukumo killed all the bandits and then forced Diana into his slave. Then on the way of their journey, they found Yustia who is hurt. Yustia is one of a knight platoon with mission to protect Diana, however they are ambushed and Yustia is the only one to survive. Enemies pursuit them and after getting a way a bit from there, Tsukumo used [Hecathonceires] and massacre all of them (with his face smiled creepily). Yustia is angry at Tsukumo and when she wants to attack Tsukumo, he threatened her that if he die, he will order Diana to follow suit. Yustia then offered herself as replacement for Diana, however, Tsukumo refused it as he can see through Yustia lies. Yustia then is forced to accept that she will become his slave and Tsukumo will not lay his hand on Diana.

Avrorrange
2014-04-24, 21:13
In his world before, Tsukumo is an orphan and there is an older girl who is close to him, her name is Yachiyo. Tsukumo at least are normal at first, but everything changes when Yachiyo run with her lover and left him alone, along with lots of debt. Tsukumo then started to do anything he can to survive in that harsh world, like rat. And then he heard the news that Yachiyo is dead or went missing. Tsukumo search for her whereabouts and arrived at the mansion of Sengoku Rouga, the guy last seen with Yachiyo.

After teleported to another world, he is scared sh*t and panicked when a Crust Bear attacked him. With the help of the ring, he is able to kill the Crust Bear. After that he learns lots of information about this world, and the important thing that he learn: "Do not hesitate to kill". He is sly and cunning, often use tactic to outwit enemies.

His root is kind (yeah, a little bit), as he treasured those close to him and not hesitate to kill anyone who are trying to do harm to him or his property (that include his slaves). Tsukumo is actually frail and coward but experience screw him up to put up a strong front and stain his own hand to the very end. There this event where Tsukumo and co. are staying in a town, acting like a kind traveler guy. Then they sneak to the landlord castle and rob his treasures. After that, when they escape, He destroyed that one town along with its citizen, to erase any witnesses and their trace as it is necessary. (This action however, gave birth to a hero that will surely stand in his way for revenge)

@Sasuke706:
Diana thinks Tsukumo is her best chance to return to her kingdom, since she's slave she can't do anything to resist but she gradually falls under stockholm syndrome. As for Justia, she only following Tsukumo orders and wait for a chance to backstab him, but she gradually is attracted to Tsukumo violence, which reveal her twisted dark side. Both are gradually drowned in please? But, yeah, it's best not to think too much about it :heh:

@Moe_connection:
Tsukumo killed all the bandits and then forced Diana into his slave. Then on the way of their journey, they found Yustia who is hurt. Yustia is one of a knight platoon with mission to protect Diana, however they are ambushed and Yustia is the only one to survive. Enemies pursuit them and after getting a way a bit from there, Tsukumo used [Hecathonceires] and massacre all of them (with his face smiled creepily). Yustia is angry at Tsukumo and when she wants to attack Tsukumo, he threatened her that if he die, he will order Diana to follow suit. Yustia then offered herself as replacement for Diana, however, Tsukumo refused it as he can see through Yustia lies. Yustia then is forced to accept that she will become his slave and Tsukumo will not lay his hand on Diana.
This is one f@#ked up story....:twitch:

bludvein
2014-04-24, 21:19
That just doesn't sound like my type of story. I like some darker fiction, but there are some lines I just don't want the protagonist crossing if I'm going to enjoy it. Rape is one of them. I don't care that he feels bad about it afterwards. Reminds me of the time I read the Thomas Covenant books.

Kioras
2014-04-24, 21:29
In his world before, Tsukumo is an orphan and there is an older girl who is close to him, her name is Yachiyo. Tsukumo at least are normal at first, but everything changes when Yachiyo run with her lover and left him alone, along with lots of debt. Tsukumo then started to do anything he can to survive in that harsh world, like rat. And then he heard the news that Yachiyo is dead or went missing. Tsukumo search for her whereabouts and arrived at the mansion of Sengoku Rouga, the guy last seen with Yachiyo.

After teleported to another world, he is scared sh*t and panicked when a Crust Bear attacked him. With the help of the ring, he is able to kill the Crust Bear. After that he learns lots of information about this world, and the important thing that he learn: "Do not hesitate to kill". He is sly and cunning, often use tactic to outwit enemies.

His root is kind (yeah, a little bit), as he treasured those close to him and not hesitate to kill anyone who are trying to do harm to him or his property (that include his slaves). Tsukumo is actually frail and coward but experience screw him up to put up a strong front and stain his own hand to the very end. There this event where Tsukumo and co. are staying in a town, acting like a kind traveler guy. Then they sneak to the landlord castle and rob his treasures. After that, when they escape, He destroyed that one town along with its citizen, to erase any witnesses and their trace as it is necessary. (This action however, gave birth to a hero that will surely stand in his way for revenge)

@Sasuke706:
Diana thinks Tsukumo is her best chance to return to her kingdom, since she's slave she can't do anything to resist but she gradually falls under stockholm syndrome. As for Justia, she only following Tsukumo orders and wait for a chance to backstab him, but she gradually is attracted to Tsukumo violence, which reveal her twisted dark side. Both are gradually drowned in please? But, yeah, it's best not to think too much about it :heh:

@Moe_connection:
Tsukumo killed all the bandits and then forced Diana into his slave. Then on the way of their journey, they found Yustia who is hurt. Yustia is one of a knight platoon with mission to protect Diana, however they are ambushed and Yustia is the only one to survive. Enemies pursuit them and after getting a way a bit from there, Tsukumo used [Hecathonceires] and massacre all of them (with his face smiled creepily). Yustia is angry at Tsukumo and when she wants to attack Tsukumo, he threatened her that if he die, he will order Diana to follow suit. Yustia then offered herself as replacement for Diana, however, Tsukumo refused it as he can see through Yustia lies. Yustia then is forced to accept that she will become his slave and Tsukumo will not lay his hand on Diana.

Not really my type of viewpoint character, let alone the protagonist.

Feels kinda bad about it, but since here merely raised a small village and killed everyone there, less of a slow decent into evil, or simply fucking up in a fucked up world, more jumping down the slippery slope.

Redemption won't come, or won't come cheap for this guy.

Avrorrange
2014-04-25, 01:31
BTW, did the princess and the knight participate in the massacre of the townsfolk?

Okashira
2014-04-25, 02:05
BTW, did the princess and the knight participate in the massacre of the townsfolk?

They weren't aware of it. While the town was burning they were fighting off some offenders, in fact they didn't even suspect that Tsukumo was related until everything was ashes (they thought the other guys did it).

Diana came to love the atmosphere of the town and totally hated that Tsukumo did something like that, she felt a huge sense of betrayal because at that time she had started to believe on him. She actually condemns and confronts him about it... But by his body language, she realizes that he felt guilt and regret over it. Then she realizes that he only did what he did, because she was was there; even though she was disguised, info about strangers sniffing around could have easily leaked (considered they attacked the lord's castle that same day); and that town was in a delicate state and both armies had access to it (the town was being sold off to an enemy nation, so both the empire and the enemies had ties to it). She felt even further conflicted by that "for my sake feeling", as Tsukumo choosed to do that for her sake, and he bear everything on himself without telling them, thus he is protecting her from the guilt, the responsibility and other stuff related to that.



-- Not literal, to keep things mild.

Yustia came to be, what she could see next to her was the image of Diana.

Yustia : "What's the meaning of this!? This isn't what we promised!".

Tsukumo : "Well, I'm being kinda specific with our promise".

(note, it was something like "As long as I am (Yustia) here; I'll be the replacement and the Princess won't get involved" ).

Tsukumo : "Yes, and let's say.... If you so happen to lose consciousness for a long while, you are not really in shape of upholding the promise, right? I'm not to request things from someone unconscious"

Yustia : ...... OK, I get, I get. But now I'm here, so it's ok, right?

-- Suddenly, a couple of arms surrounded Tsukumo's neck.

Diana : I'm not.... done yet. .

Diana : Onee-sama is tired.... right? you should.... rest for a while..... Let me handle things..... for a little longer.

---------

Then Yustia realized. What was burning inside her right now was not a sense of betrayal for a promise unkept. What was lit within her was a small fire of female jealousy due to the princess's actions.


Me : :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh:

BW95
2014-04-25, 06:56
They weren't aware of it. While the town was burning they were fighting off some offenders, in fact they didn't even suspect that Tsukumo was related until everything was ashes (they thought the other guys did it).

Diana came to love the atmosphere of the town and totally hated that Tsukumo did something like that, she felt a huge sense of betrayal because at that time she had started to believe on him. She actually condemns and confronts him about it... But by his body language, she realizes that he felt guilt and regret over it. Then she realizes that he only did what he did, because she was was there; even though she was disguised, info about strangers sniffing around could have easily leaked (considered they attacked the lord's castle that same day); and that town was in a delicate state and both armies had access to it (the town was being sold off to an enemy nation, so both the empire and the enemies had ties to it). She felt even further conflicted by that "for my sake feeling", as Tsukumo choosed to do that for her sake, and he bear everything on himself without telling them, thus he is protecting her from the guilt, the responsibility and other stuff related to that.



-- Not literal, to keep things mild.

Yustia came to be, what she could see next to her was the image of Diana.

Yustia : "What's the meaning of this!? This isn't what we promised!".

Tsukumo : "Well, I'm being kinda specific with our promise".

(note, it was something like "As long as I am (Yustia) here; I'll be the replacement and the Princess won't get involved" ).

Tsukumo : "Yes, and let's say.... If you so happen to lose consciousness for a long while, you are not really in shape of upholding the promise, right? I'm not to request things from someone unconscious"

Yustia : ...... OK, I get, I get. But now I'm here, so it's ok, right?

-- Suddenly, a couple of arms surrounded Tsukumo's neck.

Diana : I'm not.... done yet. .

Diana : Onee-sama is tired.... right? you should.... rest for a while..... Let me handle things..... for a little longer.

---------

Then Yustia realized. What was burning inside her right now was not a sense of betrayal for a promise unkept. What was lit within her was a small fire of female jealousy due to the princess's actions.


Me : :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh:

I don't get it. He's capable of making girls his slaves and razing an entire village because of some ring? What is this Lord of the Rings?

Avrorrange
2014-04-25, 07:03
I don't get it. Hes capable of making girls his slave and razing an entire village because of some ring? What is this Lord of the Rings?

So LOL worthy.:D

Okashira
2014-04-25, 12:48
The slavery hardly comes to play, he is more like an office boss to them :heh: he is pretty good at carrot and stick methods; so he more or less offers job rewards by the stuff that he does. He also realized on his home world that if he acts gentle to his nakama when they do a great job, and harsh to the other bands 100% of the time, people will feel really special then and will try to do things to see his good side.

What he has stated he "wants" for Diana to thoroughly give herself to him in both and mind by her own will, that's why he usually doesn't use the slave spell to force them to do anything. He has also "planned" a certian behaviour to make that easier, but rather what he "thinks it works" having an effect, is the girls catching glimses of the personality underlaying beneath the mask is what is making them closer to him.

He also has to do chores and other stuff because the high class ladies aren't good with those :heh: Also, I'm not sure if I have read this right (glossing over text, as usual :heh: ), but supposedly for the slave spell to truly work, both parties need to agree on the "owner / owned" side of the deal. That would mean that when Tsukumo did the ritual to Diana, she might have unconsciously already thought that she is his :heh: (that would explain why she comes to believe in him that quickly). For Yustia, he had to close her betrayal routes before her accepting to work under him (this bastard gets called goshujin-sama by an onee-san character :heh: ).

sasuke706
2014-04-25, 13:04
supposedly for the slave spell to truly work, both parties need to agree on the "owner / owned" side of the deal. That would mean that when Tsukumo did the ritual to Diana, she might have unconsciously already though that she is his
She submitted herself to slavery under the conditions that her soldiers would be spared, but she never got a master registered as she was being sold to the whatever empire. Tsukumo just jumped in at an opportune time and took advantage of it before she knew what was going on. Knightgirl was fully aware of what was going on when she agreed to it, but apparently has some special privilege where she can break the contract under the right conditions and is banking on that, from what I understand. Basically, neither of them intended to be his slave, at least for long.

I'm about 40 chapters in and at the start I was just expecting dark-themed thief adventures and instead got a kill-em-all protag. It's a little disappointing, to say the least. The twisted morals are nice and all, but I'm not particularly fond on how the author delivers them. So I'm probably just going to stop where I'm at unless I somehow find the motivation to continue.

Avrorrange
2014-04-25, 13:20
So is an elf the third slave? In addition to that, what exactly is the main plot of the story? Right now it seems like all the protagonist is just doing is just random kill,loot and rape.So how old are the princess and the knight?Didn't it say that the princess is just a 'girl'? Sounds like the MC's a pedobear.In addition, can the princess fight?

amatsunagi
2014-04-25, 13:51
So is an elf the third slave? In addition to that, what exactly is the main plot of the story? Right now it seems like all the protagonist is just doing is just random kill,loot and rape.So how old are the princess and the knight?Didn't it say that the princess is just a 'girl'? Sounds like the MC's a pedobear.In addition, can the princess fight?

Tsukumo who wants to start a new life in another world, but his slavery of Diana pulls him into trouble. He have to try to find a safe place and maybe, help Diana. Meanwhile There is war going on in that place and several politics and scheme is playing in. One of the most dangerous character is from the empire and she will surely invite Tsukumo to her game. Also, it is said there are other rings and those who gather all the rings will get their wishes granted.

Diana is around 15-17. She has talent for magic and hid a special talent. She can fight using sword but mostly uses magic.

Okashira
2014-04-25, 15:35
Tsukumo who wants to start a new life in another world, but his slavery of Diana pulls him into trouble. He have to try to find a safe place and maybe, help Diana. Meanwhile There is war going on in that place and several politics and scheme is playing in. One of the most dangerous character is from the empire and she will surely invite Tsukumo to her game. Also, it is said there are other rings and those who gather all the rings will get their wishes granted.


Whoa, btw.

It can't be but that new dangerous woman of the empire, to be Tsukumo's old childhood friend? After all, he discovered the ring when he was searching for wherabouts about her---- And when that woman saw and image from Tsukumo, she understood who he was-- even though at that point, nobody knows anything about him; since by then, he had spent like 5 days~6 days in that world going incognito..... of which 2 was "he entangled in a room with Diana" and other 2 "he entangled in a room with Yustia" :heh: )

bludvein
2014-04-26, 05:21
In other news, for 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)....

There has been massive developments. Fox runs into Satan, decides he isn't strong enough, and promptly spends 10 minutes getting incredibly ridiculous stats comparable to Satan through a hack method. At least there seem to be some limits to Fox's specific skill though, as his physical strength isn't going up much anymore.

The only thing really holding him back at this point is skill. He still needs to learn weapon skill and maybe magic to complete his humiliating revenge on the hero. He could win easily right now just through being untouchable, but Fox isn't satisfied with that.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-26, 06:00
In other news, for 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)....

There has been massive developments. Fox runs into Satan, decides he isn't strong enough, and promptly spends 10 minutes getting incredibly ridiculous stats comparable to Satan through a hack method. At least there seem to be some limits to Fox's specific skill though, as his physical strength isn't going up much anymore.

The only thing really holding him back at this point is skill. He still needs to learn weapon skill and maybe magic to complete his humiliating revenge on the hero. He could win easily right now just through being untouchable, but Fox isn't satisfied with that.

Hey!? Is he going to make a weapon out of the demon general's death body? (You know... The one who led the invasion to the village where Fox met Doran?)
Also is Doran finally free from his hatred toward Leila after Fox's convincing speech about vengeance ?
Finally but not least... Is Satan happened to run into Doran at the end of chap 110?

bludvein
2014-04-26, 06:13
Hey!? Is he going to make a weapon out of the demon general's death body? (You know... The one who led the invasion to the village where Fox met Doran?)
Also is Doran finally free from his hatred toward Leila after Fox's convincing speech about vengeance ?
Finally but not least... Is Satan happened to run into Doran at the end of chap 110?

Baruodo(not sure of sp?) wasn't a demon general. Just a c-rank devil. Fox at least plans to get a weapon made with the body, but the city/village he is in doesn't have a crafter capable of doing it.

Doran is definitely confused after Fox's speech, but while he was working out his issues he ran into Satan. I'm not real hopeful for his survival right now, but we don't know how that ended yet.

omegasereon
2014-04-26, 11:59
Almost done with the butler one. Souji's flame is such a jack of all trades hack.

blankerer
2014-04-26, 16:34
so word master...

all those titles
SP for the little girl title lol
even one for the women
all those dense titles
lucky pervert...... was it only that 1 time and wham a title?

amatsunagi
2014-04-26, 22:14
Whoa, btw.

It can't be but that new dangerous woman of the empire, to be Tsukumo's old childhood friend? After all, he discovered the ring when he was searching for wherabouts about her---- And when that woman saw and image from Tsukumo, she understood who he was-- even though at that point, nobody knows anything about him; since by then, he had spent like 5 days~6 days in that world going incognito..... of which 2 was "he entangled in a room with Diana" and other 2 "he entangled in a room with Yustia" :heh: )


Yeah, Yachiyo changed her name to Yatiyo and is known as the Black witch of the Empire. She also hold one of the ring and has access of the artifacts more than Tsukumo. She is the most twisted person who also became

so word master...

all those titles
SP for the little girl title lol
even one for the women
all those dense titles
lucky pervert...... was it only that 1 time and wham a title?

yeah, I LOLed on his title, [SP Little Girl Killer God], [Woman Killer], [Super "involved" Constitution], [Master of Natural Killing Secret Arts], [Meister of Super Dense], [Man of Perfected Natural Dense], [Prince of Misunderstanding], [Lucky Pervert Bastard]. Along with Satou from "Death March Rhapsody", these two guys are greatest weapon against youjo.

Note: that Natural Killing Secret Arts is basically "a skill of making girls fall in love while still being dense"

Hiiro fulfilled the condition of getting that title, if other guys know about that incident, all of them would say the same thing, "Lucky Pervert Bastard" and that's why Hiiro got that title.

bludvein
2014-04-28, 10:43
For 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)....

Demon king basically mind rapes resident yandere Leila, and gets an early death flag for his efforts. Fox is pissed. These next few chapters are gonna be good.

For reference, he has revenge plans on the hero and Miko, but he doesn't plan for those to be fatal. More like humiliating and degrading. For the demon king he just gets a "could you please die?" I'm wondering if he is going to waken another specific skill or just learn to use the skills he already has better.

DoomCalibur
2014-04-28, 11:39
For 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/)....

Demon king basically mind rapes resident yandere Leila, and gets an early death flag for his efforts. Fox is pissed. These next few chapters are gonna be good.

For reference, he has revenge plans on the hero and Miko, but he doesn't plan for those to be fatal. More like humiliating and degrading. For the demon king he just gets a "could you please die?" I'm wondering if he is going to waken another specific skill or just learn to use the skills he already has better.

Man after reading this chapter, I started to wonder why is that demon king so twisted huh.......... Sure that he stated that he is different from the previous generation of Demon King and he is also much more powerful....
As for his personality, he stated that the reason he wanted to create war with human simply because he wanted to witness something like a miracle that would make him seem like a artist who has long searched for an inspiration huh?
After knowing Leila's past and her current character development lately, I started to think that the author want to ship her and Fux in the end while he gradually forgot about that Shinnozaki girl huh....

omegasereon
2014-05-01, 03:11
Finally started 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何. Just wondering, does Mia like Fox?q

Okashira
2014-05-02, 03:07
So, I started the buttler story.... I'm a little bit dissatisfied with the lack of "focus" on the story, right now there is no obvious objective rather than "guy being a buttler".

I loved the funeral and it was very moving, but eternally delaying the childhood friend reunion kills a little bit of the mood for me (they both long for each other). Right now pretty much every female named char so far has a chance of falling for the guy (even the mom :heh: )


Oh, I also started 進化の実~知らないうちに勝ち組人生~

.......
Did this guy inadvertedly killed his first mob enemy (he lvl 1, the thing lvl 120) using body odor? :heh: I'm rolfing.
Oh, and he didn't had this bishoujo classmate that was kind to him and he didn't care about? (I skimmed though his uninteresting life :heh: ) Did anything came / will came from that?

kidswable
2014-05-03, 04:05
Oh, I also started 進化の実~知らないうちに勝ち組人生~

.......
Did this guy inadvertedly killed his first mob enemy (he lvl 1, the thing lvl 120) using body odor? :heh: I'm rolfing.
Oh, and he didn't had this bishoujo classmate that was kind to him and he didn't care about? (I skimmed though his uninteresting life :heh: ) Did anything came / will came from that?

because your spoiler, last night I try to read it and the result is
yes, he kill the monster with bad body odor.
and did his first friend is a gorilla that could shapeshift to human?
how come he get legend and mythological equipment if his luck is so low(0 before kill the lv 120 monster)

amatsunagi
2014-05-05, 02:30
Still no definite focus yet. In my mind, Souji is still the shadow of Hiiro, he need to do something to distinguished himself. By the way, whenever Jupponsui-sensei write about food, it always makes me hungry :T
Out of all titles I have read last week, the most striking update comes from this one. Rio (Haruto) finally meet with his long lost osananajimi (30+ years of separation) plus the appearance of his imouto as well! Rio haven't meet with Aki since the divorce of their parent, and didn't expected to meet with her again. There are lots of question coming when reading this arc, like "what is Rio role regarding the appearance of 7 heroes from another world?", "who is the High Spirit residing inside Rio? (I thought she was Rio osananajimi!), and so on~ just hoping nothing real bad will happen =_=
Tephra arc is getting too long~ although the twist is kind of good, with the gods splitting into two factions, war between gods are inevitable now!

because your spoiler, last night I try to read it and the result is
yes, he kill the monster with bad body odor.
and did his first friend is a gorilla that could shapeshift to human?
how come he get legend and mythological equipment if his luck is so low(0 before kill the lv 120 monster)

after evolving, his luck increased drastically, plus his skill helps him get almost all drops from the enemy he have defeated


also, rereading this part from [Sayonara Ryuusei, Konnichiwa Jinsei] makes me rolf-ing
「やれやれ意外と甘えんぼ……」

 普段から無邪気に父と慕ってくるレニーアが相手とあり、私はとても微笑ましい気持ちになって腕の中の少女 の頭を撫でてあげようとしたのだが、ある音が聞こえてきて思わず腕の動きを止めざるを得なかっ た。

――くんくん、すーはーすーはー

「うだ、な…………」

 私は思わず口を開いたまま絶句し、セリナ、クリスティーナさん、ヴァジェの顔を順々に見回すと、ヴァジェ に至るまでが目元や口をピクピクと引き攣らせて、どえらい物を見たと言う表情を浮かべる。
 三者三様の美を誇る少女達の顔が、驚愕と困惑に固まるのは中々に見物ではあるのだが、個人的には今すぐに でも何とか助けて欲しい所だった。

――くんくんくんくん、すーはーすーはーすーはー

 ああ、先程から聞こえてくるのは、私の腹に顔を埋めたレニーアが盛大な音を立てながら深呼吸をする音だっ た。
 ああ、レニーア、レニーア。本当か? 本気か? これは現実なのか? 君が私を慕ってくれているのは痛い ほどに知っているつもりだ。

 だが、だが、まさか、こんな、私の匂いを深呼吸してまで嗅ぐほどなのか? 私の匂いで肺の中を満たす事が 君の幸福なのか?
 今なら、人間達が自分の力ではどうしようもない事態に陥った時、救いを求めて神に祈る気持ちが心から理解 できる。

 私がこれまで数多く目撃してきた彼らは、同じと言っては彼らに失礼ではあるが、今の私と似たような気持ち だったに違いない。
 私が思わず現実から全力で逃避しようとする中、レニーアの立てた新たな音が私の鼓膜を揺さぶる。ああ、現 実に戻りたくない。戻りたくないが戻るしかない……ふむぅ。

――くんくんくんくんくん、すーはーすーはーすーはーすーはー、すすすーーーーはああ~~~~~…………ぐ へ、ぐへ、ぐへ、ぐへへへへへ、おとうしゃまのにほい。

 私の腹のあたりを擽るレニーアの笑い声を認識した瞬間、あ、この子、カラヴィスの娘だな、と改めて認識し た。出来れば認識したくなかったが、後の祭りである。ふむん。
 レニーアの行為によって私の精神は大いに衰弱してしまったが、しかしながら私達はまだしなければならない 事がある。

bludvein
2014-05-05, 21:34
異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/) and the butler one have gone a long way towards tiding me over with Arifureta slowing down. Updates every day ftw.
The fight with the Demon King is finally over, but I'm kind of disappointed Fox didn't cut his head off when he had the chance. That's gonna come back to bite them some time down the line. On the other hand, we finally get the full story behind Fox's specific skill, and it's even more overpowered than expected. It has some limitations so its not complete god-mode, but still....He can rewind the state of a being/object to any point that he has personally seen. That means he not only has retarded stats with the level 1 thing, he can create pseudo-time stops and heal like Tatsuya from Mahouka does.

For the butler one, not a real overarching plot but still worth a read. It's more slice of life atm since Soji has such a broken magic. He has already killed the demon king, what else is there to do? I guess we have to wait for the childhood to find him for the sparks to fly.

omegasereon
2014-05-07, 16:42
Finally started reading through this.. on volume 4 and that did just not happen. Eff Nagi/Ceceil taking away Finia and Lulu.

sasuke706
2014-05-07, 19:15
Just caught up on 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? myself. Have to say, the protagonist is fairly refreshing for a ridiculous power level story.

Kitsune is befittingly creepy yet likeable. It's nice he has set morals from the start without questioning them and isn't actually an idiot. The generic protagonist-type hero helps contrast them well.

And with Layla's extensive developments, screen time, and pure romance scenes that she gets, it really makes her look like the main heroine. Particularly where almost no other girl has gotten much development past their introduction. Not bad for a slightly late appearing yandere, cannibalistic, somehow innocent and childish yet still extremely lewd demon. It doesn't help that her and Kitsune are the only ones with (not really all that good) portraits.

I'm looking forward to Kitsune's revenge on Cecile as well. He seems alright with letting the pretend hero off with a thorough asskicking, but how he's planned Cecile's severe, severe punishment from start to finish really makes me want to see it come true. She more than deserves it, too. Hero will probably try to stop him, or persuade him, but I really hope he doesn't give a shit. He hasn't given many shits so far in regards to pleads, at least.

Also, he needs to hurry up and take the troll fairy back. Their back-and-forth is great. It's not like the hero party could do jack shit to him at this point, minus maybe magic. Kitsune's already overpowered as shit without his even far more overpowered skills.

The story also seems to be leading toward a confrontation with God/s eventually as well. They're probably one of the few things by this point that could pose a thread to Kistune, seeing as he can wreck the demon lord alone, even if he wasn't at full power. It's pretty obvious he's going to regret not killing the demon lord when he had the chance, though.

Also, tried reading 異世界迷宮で奴隷ハーレムを up to chapter 38. The characters and execution bored the everliving hell out of me so I gave up on it.

bludvein
2014-05-08, 08:42
Just caught up on 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処? myself. Have to say, the protagonist is fairly refreshing for a ridiculous power level story.

Kitsune is befittingly creepy yet likeable. It's nice he has set morals from the start without questioning them and isn't actually an idiot. The generic protagonist-type hero helps contrast them well.

And with Layla's extensive developments, screen time, and pure romance scenes that she gets, it really makes her look like the main heroine. Particularly where almost no other girl has gotten much development past their introduction. Not bad for a slightly late appearing yandere, cannibalistic, somehow innocent and childish yet still extremely lewd demon. It doesn't help that her and Kitsune are the only ones with (not really all that good) portraits.

I'm looking forward to Kitsune's revenge on Cecile as well. He seems alright with letting the pretend hero off with a thorough asskicking, but how he's planned Cecile's severe, severe punishment from start to finish really makes me want to see it come true. She more than deserves it, too. Hero will probably try to stop him, or persuade him, but I really hope he doesn't give a shit. He hasn't given many shits so far in regards to pleads, at least.

Also, he needs to hurry up and take the troll fairy back. Their back-and-forth is great. It's not like the hero party could do jack shit to him at this point, minus maybe magic. Kitsune's already overpowered as shit without his even far more overpowered skills.

The story also seems to be leading toward a confrontation with God/s eventually as well. They're probably one of the few things by this point that could pose a thread to Kistune, seeing as he can wreck the demon lord alone, even if he wasn't at full power. It's pretty obvious he's going to regret not killing the demon lord when he had the chance, though.

Also, tried reading 異世界迷宮で奴隷ハーレムを up to chapter 38. The characters and execution bored the everliving hell out of me so I gave up on it.

To be fair, Leila/Layla's "evil" traits were more a product of red night's influence. It made her seem really bipolar. She is still a little warped on her own, but only as bad as Fox.

About the hero and Cecil, I agree. The hero is guilty of being a self-righteous dumbass, but Cecil threatened Finia. Nobody threatens the snarky fairy. The author has promised an epic revenge in the comments, so here's to hoping he pulls through on that.

I'm guessing the next enemy after the demon king will be related to the distortion Stella is looking for, assuming it isn't actually Fox's specific skill all along. Plus, she said she wanted to kill God. So there is some weight to it being the final boss.

sasuke706
2014-05-08, 13:22
To be fair, Leila/Layla's "evil" traits were more a product of red night's influence. It made her seem really bipolar. She is still a little warped on her own, but only as bad as Fox.

About the hero and Cecil, I agree. The hero is guilty of being a self-righteous dumbass, but Cecil threatened Finia. Nobody threatens the snarky fairy. The author has promised an epic revenge in the comments, so here's to hoping he pulls through on that.
Layla's evil traits are great. I'm actually slightly sad her lewd trait is gone. And I wouldn't call it bipolar, her killing and eating things is essentially originally tied to her liking things, since they were tasty. Basically, her liking something just meant she wanted to eat it at some point. Otherwise, she's been pretty consistent until her 'pure maiden mode' shows up and she starts being shy for a while.

I wouldn't call Kitsune warped, either. His only bizarre trait, really, is that he smiles when getting killed or half-killed, but his faint smile is more or less his poker face. Whenever he goes on one of his monologues with a side of fear, he's generally right, even if he tries to rub salt in the wound pretty hard when doing so. I'm personally fine with how he killed the corrupt duke; he lumps monsters, demons, and humans all in the same category, so if he's willing to kill one, he's willing to kill the others. Like with the berserk demon and duke, of course, he'll talk to them if they can talk. Not that it'll change the end result.

I haven't read many of the author's comments, but Kitsune himself sorta promises it in story to I forget who, but Kitsune takes his promises extremely seriously. If I recall right, he plans to make her cry and beg for a while, sell her to a slave shop, buy her as said slave, and make her be his personal chair. Might have forgotten a couple punishments. That said, yes please.

bludvein
2014-05-08, 13:41
Layla's evil traits are great. I'm actually slightly sad her lewd trait is gone. And I wouldn't call it bipolar, her killing and eating things is essentially originally tied to her liking things, since they were tasty. Basically, her liking something just meant she wanted to eat it at some point. Otherwise, she's been pretty consistent until her 'pure maiden mode' shows up and she starts being shy for a while.

I wouldn't call Kitsune warped, either. His only bizarre trait, really, is that he smiles when getting killed or half-killed, but his faint smile is more or less his poker face. Whenever he goes on one of his monologues with a side of fear, he's generally right, even if he tries to rub salt in the wound pretty hard when doing so. I'm personally fine with how he killed the corrupt duke; he lumps monsters, demons, and humans all in the same category, so if he's willing to kill one, he's willing to kill the others. Like with the berserk demon and duke, of course, he'll talk to them if they can talk. Not that it'll change the end result.

I haven't read many of the author's comments, but Kitsune himself sorta promises it in story to I forget who, but Kitsune takes his promises extremely seriously. If I recall right, he plans to make her cry and beg for a while, sell her to a slave shop, buy her as said slave, and make her be his personal chair. Might have forgotten a couple punishments. That said, yes please.

It's not that he is willing to kill people that makes him warped, but that he has no self-awareness that its supposed to be wrong. Or at least doesn't take it very seriously. He has a rather weird morality, even if hes generally a nice guy.

As for his revenge, Fox said he would beat the hero up and make him beg for forgiveness. Cecil isn't going to get off so light though, since he plans to sell her into slavery somewhere. I don't think he plans to buy her himself though, as it would make no sense. What happens afterwards would probably be punishment enough, even for her. Almost enough to make me feel sorry for her, but not quite. She practically threatened and abducted Finia, and unlike the hero doesn't seem to feel sorry for it. The fact that Fox is not going to kill her is better than she deserves.

sasuke706
2014-05-08, 14:41
It's not that he is willing to kill people that makes him warped, but that he has no self-awareness that its supposed to be wrong. Or at least doesn't take it very seriously. He has a rather weird morality, even if hes generally a nice guy.

As for his revenge, Fox said he would beat the hero up and make him beg for forgiveness. Cecil isn't going to get off so light though, since he plans to sell her into slavery somewhere. I don't think he plans to buy her himself though, as it would make no sense. What happens afterwards would probably be punishment enough, even for her. Almost enough to make me feel sorry for her, but not quite. She practically threatened and abducted Finia, and unlike the hero doesn't seem to feel sorry for it. The fact that Fox is not going to kill her is better than she deserves.
I think he's aware that it's 'wrong', he just doesn't care. He views killing one thing the same killing another, which I think is perfectly reasonable. He does act fairly energetic when doing so, but he always acts fairly energetic in everything, including getting the crap beat out of him. Like I said earlier, he just considers that his poker face and whatnot. Not killing the duke would have been a major inconvenience as well.

And I'm not sure what doesn't make sense about the punishment. I'll even cite (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/90/) the chapter.
「勇者気取り君をぶっ殺しに行くんだ! あ、ついでに腹黒巫女も、土下座で泣きながら謝らせた後、奴隷商に売り飛ばして僕が購入して隷属の首輪付け て一生犬の様に僕の椅子役でもやって貰おうかなという勢いでお仕置きしようと思ってるんだ!」
"I'm going to go beat the shit out of Pretend Hero! Oh, and while I'm at it, I'm thinking I'll punish the black-hearted priestess by after making her cry and apologize while prostrated, I'll sell her off to a slave trader and buy a slave collar to put on her, where I'll have her spend her whole life as my chair like a dog!"

She took away Finia and Lulu, subtly threatened to kill them, heavily encouraged the pretend hero's excessive actions through lies which ending up getting Kitsune nearly killed yet again (and broke a guild wall, but who cares), and took the mask (which doubles as Finia) he got from his first and only friend while on Earth. Hell, the only person who actually likes her is the pretend hero; the hero party members aren't fond of her either. Granted the pretend hero and the priestess haven't gotten any screen time since getting knocked out, but at least the hero finally and extremely belatedly realized he did something really bad during the encounter with Stella. Maybe he'll even figure out Cecile is kind of a bitch, but he is kind of extremely stupid, so I wouldn't count on it.

omegasereon
2014-05-08, 14:42
About to finish volume 6 and I have a question about Fox
His level keeps going down while his stats increase. Was it ever explained why this happens? Also can't wait till he gets some revenge on the hero/Cecil.

sasuke706
2014-05-08, 15:13
About to finish volume 6 and I have a question about Fox
His level keeps going down while his stats increase. Was it ever explained why this happens? Also can't wait till he gets some revenge on the hero/Cecil.
It is. Major spoilers, if you're curious. I really can't recommend you read this.

It's his new inherent skill 初心渡り. It reverts his level back to 1 without affecting stats and other things. This causes him to be able to pass his previous set limits (as going back to 1 seems to give him new limits based on his current stats), also seeming to increase his stat growth rate for defense. Eventually his strength growth seems to diminish greatly when he levels, so it does have some sort of hidden limit. It also makes leveling easy as hell.

For even BIGGER spoilers, this same skill can also work on other things as essentially a time rewind skill. He uses it to revert someone's wounds to a few moments prior, someone's mentality and stats back to around the time they first met, he fixes a broken clock tower with it, rewinds time by 10 seconds and even stops time with it for 3. It's pretty broken. Its downsides are it can only be used during the time span he's known the person or thing and is very painful to do with the time bullshit. Level, stats, and body aren't connected, for some reason.

For example, he could make Finia level 1 again with her current stats, increasing her growth rate. Or he could heal her arm if she happened to lose it without any other effects. Reverting stats seems to go with reverting the person's mind as well. However, he wouldn't be able to make the hero level 1 because he never saw him at level 1. There's also apparently a danger or something that leaves him open when using the skill, or at least he thinks so. I should probably go back and clarify that part to myself but I honestly don't really care if it does.

bludvein
2014-05-08, 16:09
I think he's aware that it's 'wrong', he just doesn't care. He views killing one thing the same killing another, which I think is perfectly reasonable. He does act fairly energetic when doing so, but he always acts fairly energetic in everything, including getting the crap beat out of him. Like I said earlier, he just considers that his poker face and whatnot. Not killing the duke would have been a major inconvenience as well.

And I'm not sure what doesn't make sense about the punishment. I'll even cite (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2650bx/90/) the chapter.
「勇者気取り君をぶっ殺しに行くんだ! あ、ついでに腹黒巫女も、土下座で泣きながら謝らせた後、奴隷商に売り飛ばして僕が購入して隷属の首輪付け て一生犬の様に僕の椅子役でもやって貰おうかなという勢いでお仕置きしようと思ってるんだ!」
"I'm going to go beat the shit out of Pretend Hero! Oh, and while I'm at it, I'm thinking I'll punish the black-hearted priestess by after making her cry and apologize while prostrated, I'll sell her off to a slave trader and buy a slave collar to put on her, where I'll have her spend her whole life as my chair like a dog!"

She took away Finia and Lulu, subtly threatened to kill them, heavily encouraged the pretend hero's excessive actions through lies which ending up getting Kitsune nearly killed yet again (and broke a guild wall, but who cares), and took the mask (which doubles as Finia) he got from his first and only friend while on Earth. Hell, the only person who actually likes her is the pretend hero; the hero party members aren't fond of her either. Granted the pretend hero and the priestess haven't gotten any screen time since getting knocked out, but at least the hero finally and extremely belatedly realized he did something really bad during the encounter with Stella. Maybe he'll even figure out Cecile is kind of a bitch, but he is kind of extremely stupid, so I wouldn't count on it.

Hm,, I seem to have forgotten that second bit. The reason I thought it didn't make sense was why would he buy someone he sold? If he was gonna do that he could just skip the slave trader. I guess this ties back into his odd sense of right and wrong. Gotta make her an official slave instead of just a kidnapped person.:heh: Plus, he would eventually let her go if he took it into his own hands. Not because he feels sorry for her, but his party definitely would and he takes into account their opinions.

Yup, no forgiveness for the bitch. The hero is an idiot and hence kind of pitiable....she isn't. I loved when she got knocked out by Stella and even she was kind of incredulous that Cecil fainted by that. Lulu and Finia just sit back and enjoy the show, and take back the fox mask after she is unconscious. They are just waiting for Fox to come pick them up at this point.

Payback is gonna be awesome.

sasuke706
2014-05-08, 16:32
Plus, he would eventually let her go if he took it into his own hands. Not because he feels sorry for her, but his party definitely would and he takes into account their opinions.
I'm not entirely sure his party would feel sorry. As long as he the only thing he does is make her be his chair when needed. Finia's a pyromaniac fairy with Kitsune-level morals to begin with, Lulu's easily impressionable, and I'd be surprised if Layla cared even a little outside of misplaced jealously. Triche might care a little being a former knight-in-training, but being forced to be a chair probably doesn't count too high on the abuse scale, not to mention she watched it all go down. And she watched Kitsune kill the duke and was only slightly unhappy. Dran the new party member might care...? It's kind of hard to tell with him being a serious adventurer but then trying to get back at Layla in childish ways for killing his wife as the Red Night.

But yeah, while I would like it for to be forever for shits and giggles and sprinkles, he would probably at least let up after some point.

All this talking in spoiler tags. Jesus.

omegasereon
2014-05-09, 05:09
Phew finally caught up by reading for 3 days and just on time for the end of volume 7.
Yeah Fox should have just killed the demon king and now he is marked by him. His stats at this point are also ridiculous. At least Rishe will also get an increase of stats thanks to the original contract skill. One thing I want happen already is to make Fox and Leila OTP. Like seriously, she is throwing herself onto you, feel something already! Shiori at this point won't even get a chance if she doesn't get any screentime/character development. Also can't wait for Fox and Nagi meeting since the author confirmed it to happen in volume 9.

Time to continue reading the butler one, stopped at chapter 14 2 weeks ago. Hope something happens between Mayuki/Sarah and Souji.

bludvein
2014-05-09, 12:51
Phew finally caught up by reading for 3 days and just on time for the end of volume 7.
Yeah Fox should have just killed the demon king and now he is marked by him. His stats at this point are also ridiculous. At least Rishe will also get an increase of stats thanks to the original contract skill. One thing I want happen already is to make Fox and Leila OTP. Like seriously, she is throwing herself onto you, feel something already! Shiori at this point won't even get a chance if she doesn't get any screentime/character development. Also can't wait for Fox and Nagi meeting since the author confirmed it to happen in volume 9.

Time to continue reading the butler one, stopped at chapter 14 2 weeks ago. Hope something happens between Mayuki/Sarah and Souji.

Yup, he has absolutely no problem on the stat front. He can raise those whenever he feels like it easily. At this point its all about having the skill to land his blows. He should probably learn magic too. Miasma is good utility, but its slow.

Fox may not hold a grudge, but Leila was the stalker he didn't really care for until recently. Give it time.:heh:

We have to get through vol 8 before we get the revenge. Can't wait:D.

EDIT: What type of weapon do you guys think he will get made? A sword seems kind of generic, so I'm hoping the author goes with something atypical.

SnowMelts
2014-05-10, 02:15
I was looking for a light novel on that website that featured VRMMOs... if you know of any?

I am trying to practice japanese by MTLing a light novel... so please let me know of your favorite VRMMO light novel for me to translate?.... or try translating?

Thanks..

bludvein
2014-05-15, 03:23
Some new reads....

Labyrinth of the abyss ~神々の迷宮~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2772ca)

Starts out rather generic, with the 15 year old protagonist named El heading to the Labyrinth City to make his fortune. The labryinth is pretty much what you expect, with defeated monsters inexplicably leaving loot behind, plus there is an absorption effect that strengthens the people when they kill a monster in the labyrinth. All adventurers choose a patron god who can grant them additional powers after a trial, although El hasn't gotten that far yet. Their church also provides training. El chooses the church of the martial arts god.

Where it differs is that its not a harem. El is not somehow granted a leg up on his peers. He decides to learn bare-handed martial arts and kick the shit out of anything he comes across. Its violent as hell. Expect eye gouging and groin attacks. There is a supernatural power he can access, but its something all adventurers have.

I thought it was rather different, but there is only 18 chapters so far.

Also read スキルアブソープション (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9343bx)...

This one is a true harem like Mushoku. If you like super overpowered protagonists this should be your thing. Shuu(the MC) could probably destroy the world in a few seconds if he was so inclined, so the comedy is better than the suspense. It also has quite a few chapters. Honestly not my favorite, but its decent.

bakato
2014-05-15, 09:53
Some new reads....

Labyrinth of the abyss ~神々の迷宮~ (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2772ca)

Starts out rather generic, with the 15 year old protagonist named El heading to the Labyrinth City to make his fortune. The labryinth is pretty much what you expect, with defeated monsters inexplicably leaving loot behind, plus there is an absorption effect that strengthens the people when they kill a monster in the labyrinth. All adventurers choose a patron god who can grant them additional powers after a trial, although El hasn't gotten that far yet. Their church also provides training. El chooses the church of the martial arts god.

Where it differs is that its not a harem. El is not somehow granted a leg up on his peers. He decides to learn bare-handed martial arts and kick the shit out of anything he comes across. Its violent as hell. Expect eye gouging and groin attacks. There is a supernatural power he can access, but its something all adventurers have.

I thought it was rather different, but there is only 18 chapters so far.

Also read スキルアブソープション (http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9343bx)...

This one is a true harem like Mushoku. If you like super overpowered protagonists this should be your thing. Shuu(the MC) could probably destroy the world in a few seconds if he was so inclined, so the comedy is better than the suspense. It also has quite a few chapters. Honestly not my favorite, but its decent.

That first one sounds like a rip off of Danmachi.