Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character

[Fukitsu Naruto]

This is my Alex plus I the one who made him up in the frist place so boom there you go!

-This is plagerism and it goes against the rules of this thread :mad:. Either create your own work or don't post anything at all.

instant kill no jutsu

it intantly kills the opponet with a large amount of chakra

seals: ox ,bird, ram hand hits the ground!

-I said it before and I'll say it again: NO END ALL JUTSUS :frustrated:. Where's the drawback to this? Honestly people, please read what rules were placed on this thread before posting something.

[favojavo]

ok im new but here

Thousand eyes techneiqe
allows the user to see in every direction the radius depends on the amout of chakra used, great for fighting ninja that are sneaky and tricky! the flaw is that its very hard to concentrat on that many directions. Varius jutsus can modify this radius, for instance my next one! and im lazy and don't want to think of other stuff

Ifinent horizens techneck
used with tousand eys justu
makes the radius to were say you though a kuni into one side, it willl appear on the other side!!! can backfie if you miss the opponet, its behind you :'(

Thousand Eye Bounce Justu
makes the Radius of Thousand Eyes justu boucey a kuni would bounce of the wall yet again backfires

Wind Disapearence Justu
allows the user to temperarily turn into wind.
used to dodge of disapear the reappear in front of the opponent then attack
back fire hard to use chackra consuming, forces an over intack of air

Vapor Smash Justu
Hits the opponet with water vapor
can backfire if not used correctly

Frozen Foot Justu
Freezes the opponets feet to the groud


and a charecter is

Jack Naru
He's a boy living on his own, ran away from mist village to live in the Villiage hidden In the Sound after one year of sound training he left for Kohana.
usaly stays quiet and only sent on assasination missions,
Fighting: uses a hooked pole or rod, needles, and The Tousand eyes jutsu, infanit horizens, Thousand Eye Bounce Jutsu, The shadow possesion jutsu, Wind Disapearence Justu, Vapor Smash Justu,Frozen foot Justu,
he has gone to many villages and learned Justus,
his flaw is that he gets over cofident, and likes to play around
Chunnin level
Likes to do the Shika Shake!!!
Shikamarus Cousin Share his high IQ

has been on assasain missions to kill Kabuto, and various Akasutki members none of these worked out. Some that did work were killing various crime lords and some of Orochimarus men.

Currently a team leader leading higher level children

If any one has ideas for me the tell me!!!

[Big_Papi]

Name:
Fuuton Reza-Shippuu Kyouten no jutsu
(Wind Element Razor Hurrican Canon)

Description:
This justsu can only be perform with someone with kage level chakra, comsumes just about 1/8 of total chakra. Ofcourse only those who can manipulate wind element can persom this jutsu and they way it is perform is by doing 3 seals (Dragon, Horse, and Ox). The user then takes a deep breath and holds his hads parallel as if yelling at some one then realeasing the jutsu creating a projectile of a powerfull wind stream of powerul spining cutting hurricane. (not verticle but horizontal projectile "kamehameha like")

Advantages:
Extremely exellent for long range attacks. could act as shield depending on the amount of breath used.

Drawbacks:
Takes the wind out of you. You will need to catch your breath for a short while

Destruction:
Near to that of naruto's 4 tail kyuubi state mouth blast vs Oro...

[chaz017]

Name:
Fuuton Reza-Shippuu Kyouten no jutsu
(Wind Element Razor Hurrican Canon)

Description:
This justsu can only be perform with someone with kage level chakra, comsumes just about 1/8 of total chakra. Ofcourse only those who can manipulate wind element can persom this jutsu and they way it is perform is by doing 3 seals (Dragon, Horse, and Ox). The user then takes a deep breath and holds his hads parallel as if yelling at some one then realeasing the jutsu creating a projectile of a powerfull wind stream of powerul spining cutting hurricane. (not verticle but horizontal projectile "kamehameha like")

Advantages:
Extremely exellent for long range attacks. could act as shield depending on the amount of breath used.

Drawbacks:
Takes the wind out of you. You will need to catch your breath for a short while

Destruction:
Near to that of naruto's 4 tail kyuubi state mouth blast vs Oro...

Not really much of a drawback for something so powerful...

[Big_Papi]

Not really much of a drawback for something so powerful...


Any suggestion of what its draw back should be?

[Hentai Guy]

Any suggestion of what its draw back should be?

For something that powerful? Dying when you use it comes to mind.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

Any suggestion of what its draw back should be?

-Add more to the difficulty of controlling/maintaining the jutsu. By this I mean you could say that if you cannot fully control your oxygen intake and carbon dioxide outake then you could end up dying, or something along those lines.

[Big_Papi]

For something that powerful? Dying when you use it comes to mind.


Dying huh... that what you came out with.... interesting

any other "good" suggestions?

[Dark Alex]

Sorry people

[favojavo]

um mabey knocks you backward, or the possibilty of backfire

here's my friend's


Zane (my friends too lazy to make a last name you bum.)
Parent killed at young age, by sound village
Fighting: uses a Katana, various Ice related justus, sommuns a werewolf like creature, his ice justsu affect his body heat and blood tempature
Chunnin level
from village in da mist (former teamate of Jack Naru)
likes to be alone

(as yu con se i cant spel)

he attacked me for that!!

and our last member of our team

No Name girl
she has no life
Fighting:uses needles, the human boulder justu and sommons a porcipines and evil weasles shes badass and chouji thinks shes hot
shes chunin level
that it
stop reading
now
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Cool<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

does any one think min is colio

[Hentai Guy]

Dying huh... that what you came out with.... interesting

any other "good" suggestions?

Yes, dying...a technique that allows you to have the same destructive power as what you've cited could only be balanced by something as severe as death. Otherwise it's a completely overpowered technique.

4-tailed Naruto's blast is insanely strong, and the only reason Naruto can do it is because he has a near infinite amount of evil chakra to fuel it. That technique at that level of power is beyond Kage level, it's beyond S-rank. "Losing your breath" is like saying the side effect of strapping a bomb to your chest and blowing something up is "a mild headache." Power completely unchecked in the realm of fiction, especially in the realm of fan-fiction, quickly becomes REdiculous; then, just as quickly, it becomes boring. What else would balance that level of power? Look at the most powerful jutsus and abilities out there...Impure World Resurrection, requires a human sacrifice for each body (people die)... Dead Demon Consuming Seal, requires the loss of your soul (and death)...Creation Rebirth, takes years off your life...the Cursed Seals, getting them has a 1/10 chance of killing you, and using them eats at your personality and drives you to madness...Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu, not only do you have to kill your best friend to use them, but using one after the other is enought to wipe-out Itachi (who has enough chakra that he can walk around with his Sharingan active without any trouble)...the Akimichi's pills, if you can't get medical treatment as soon as possible (and some medicine from the Nara family) you die...Kage Bushin, not only does it divide your chakra, but if done incorrectly you lose quite a bit more than you should in the process (as stated in the Oro-Hokage fight)...8 Gates, they overstress your body, tear your muscles, burst your blood vessels, and inevitably kill you...Chidori/Lightning Edge, requires so much chakra that it can leave you in the hospital for days recovering (not to mention it can burn the flesh off your hand), additionally you have to move in a straight line and if you don't have Sharingan, you're defenseless...and few of these even approach the level you put out in your spoiler tab.

So, c'mon...seriously...something THAT strong has got to be a deal-breaker...all or nothing. At the very least it should cause SEVERE damage to the user requiring weeks of recovery.

[inferno_grl]

i'm bored so....

raven richuho, sister of starr richuho and myo richuho.
specialty- earth.

created jutsu. "flight of the bolder jutsu"

basically wat happens is that she flowa all her body's chakra into her feet. when she feels it there. she stomps the gground and boulders rise up all around her. she throws out her arms and the boulders.... fly. duh.

again just bored.

i mainly wanted to create starr just so my friend would shut up. but i got all into it and i ended up making siblings. i don't want to post starr she's kind of a ho.

[fullmetalMonkey]

i have another justu called Shadow Clone fuson

type ninjustu

you make shodow clones then fuse them together to make a gaint being to try and stomp the person

[inferno_grl]

uhh...... kay.

joining body justu.

very complicated. not only are u memerising 53 hand seals. but you have to do it with another your partner. if the other person fucks up in anyway then it doesn't work and you waist time and chakra. it's rarely done perfect. sasha, alex, starr, and zero, are the only ones who can do it perfectly. (i'll explain zero later)

with this justu you can bind with either a person or an object. to join with an object. you do all 53 hand seals by urself and actually pore all ur bodies chakra into the object. and make it flow back into you. if it doesn't flow back into you then u've yet again. did another waist. the only person in my story who can dop this is angel. (explain later, maybe) but sasha is close to doing it perfectly.

binding people: about as much difficult. you can bind as many people as you feel like. as long as everything goes perfect while ur doing the jutsu. it's faster and easier to to just do to people. much safer also.

ok. when doing this you must join hands with the one ur binding with. doing this is like, i don't know how to explain this so... you know how most people have to do to hand seals? well, it's like showing that the other person completes you. or wat ever. after doing all 53 hand seals, in the perfect manner then a glowing circle will appear on the ground and whoever is living and within the circle who actually did it will be joined. one of the people in the combination will be shown. the other inside the other and can take over at anytime. this is why it is safest to do this jutsu with someone you either trust, or likes themself wqay to much to die over you. to releasing this jutsu is simple. clap ur hands once..... that's it. to hard? if it is ur an idiot.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Name: Ninpou: Seisoku Gen'ei (Ninja art: Living Ghost)

-Seals: Inu, saru, ryu, tori, nezumi. (Dog, monkey, dragon, bird, rat).

-Effect: a non-attack jutsu that makes the user transparent and in turn, unable to be damaged directly (as in physical attacks). In this form the user is also capable of passing through solid object which is ideal for spying. However, while physical attacks cannot do any real harm, neither can the user. At the same time, the user is extremely vulnerable to genjutsu, even more so that he or she would be normally.

-Rank: C.

[cheese no koma]

Name: Blood chakra (no rank)

Type: Kekkei Genkai

Allows the user to convert his/her own blood into chakra

Downside: blood shortage

[inferno_grl]

i'm at work bored so here's a quicky.

name: kiringan (yes. key, ring, on)

type: kekkei genkai

hands. one hand can relive pain. the other dstories everything. trait of the chentasi's. it is said that if each hand were to meet. then the world would seice to exist. that's why hey have to where glaves all the time.

[Vizard.King]

name: futon; katon; suiton; raiton; doton; ougi ninpou: rasenshuriken (wind,fire,water,thunder,earth release; ninja secret art: shuriken rasengan)

seals:bird,dragon,ox,tiger,dog

effect: uses all elemental powers and attacks once, as a last resort, destroys everything within 100 meters when power is released, kills the user

users: once every 3 generations a member of the uzumaki clan is able to use this attack as a last resort, this attack cannot be learned, the user calls apon the mighty elemental gods in a desperate time of need( users own potential must be at its best)

[chaz017]

name: futon; katon; suiton; raiton; doton; ougi ninpou: rasenshuriken (wind,fire,water,thunder,earth release; ninja secret art: shuriken rasengan)

seals:bird,dragon,ox,tiger,dog

effect: uses all elemental powers and attacks once, as a last resort, destroys everything within 100 meters when power is released, kills the user

users: once every 3 generations a member of the uzumaki clan is able to use this attack as a last resort, this attack cannot be learned, the user calls apon the mighty elemental gods in a desperate time of need( users own potential must be at its best)

Yes! About time someone who isn't afraid to have "death" as the side effect of using a strong ability comes along. I was getting a little bored with almost every ability having the side effect be backfiring on the user. Good job! :D

[kaibownekaibowne]

dude a character without a sword is lame man! man nobody thought of that!

This is mine!http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b172/Kamiya_Kaoru-chan/my%20creations/nanashi2.jpg

[inferno_grl]

only 2 of my characters have swords. but most of the ones who don't are awesome. take zero for example. he fights with a big ass hammer. and in my stories he hasn't lost one battle yet. i say yet because i don't know how my story will end up. any ways

name: zero (cause when alex first met him he knew *nothing* of past his life.) memorri

signature: smashy! smashy!

special:?

age:?

jutsu: ground destruster

he launches himself into the air while at the same time putting most of his chacra into his arms. he draws his giant hammer (jeera) and pt his chacra into the hammer to increase the damage. he as he falls back down to the earth he swings his jeera as hard as he can to the ground and a wave of the earth goes flying.. (in other words he's crumbling the ground and making it vibrate everywhere in all directions.)

and yes... his name is zero memorri--- if your slow then i have to explain that memorri... is memery.

[~KakashiUchiha~]

Name- HIjutsu, Hashira Raikiri no jutsu (Secret Technique, Lightning Shower)
Type- Ninjutsu
Effect- It is one of the first lighting skills created in naruto history. It sends a shower of lighting strikes on the field, engulfing anything in its way, except for you. The reason you are not hit by it is because it is a technique that is fused with the sharingan, chidori or lighting edge, which allows you to see the attacks and the speed its coming at, or in this case the lighting strikes, and allows you to maneuver in between each one, like kakashi does with his chidori, allowing you a finishing blow at the end. Its a very risky technique and takes alot of concentration and speed, as well as lots of chakra.
Hand seals: Tora, uma, inu, saru, ryu, hebi, tora, inu, uma, tori

[Supaiku_of_Sand]

Name-Hijutsu, Kazan ame no Jutsu(Lava Rain)
Type- S ranked ninjutsu
Handseals- tiger, dragon, rat, dragon, serpent, bird, serpent, rat
Effect- it uses about 60% of your chakra and takes the ground around you and turns it into lava all around you and it shoots up like a gyser and you use your chakra to protect you and with more of your chakra you send bullets of hot lava shooting at your apponent, burning them allive.( Its like the rain of needle from the chuunin exam, so it goes all around your apponent, there is no escape.) user needs to completely control their chakra otherwise they WILL KLL THEMSELVES

[Dan the Man]

dude a character without a sword is lame man! man nobody thought of that!

This is mine!http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b172/Kamiya_Kaoru-chan/my%20creations/nanashi2.jpg

My otaku ninja character had a sword... http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/KazumaYamada.jpg

Great drawing, by the way.

[konkoruRules]

name:izaziki momuton

birth village:village hidden in the flames

current vilage:hidden leaf


age:16


clothing:full black jumpsuit with black mask but has a justu that changes it in to amoru with flames going down it

rank:chunin

speicty:genjustu

kekki genkia:eye of guilt
effect:if he has one hand on you every worng you have ever done flashes befor your eyes and you fell the pain of evey one you have every harmed
downside:you are blined for the rest of the day

other justu:summoning:egal

shadow clone justu


fists of death
type taijstu

flaming string
type:ninjustu
for a 1 minute he moves at the speed of light then ses the last of his chakra to ignight the string

down side: he faints after useing it

name:happy enbrace

type genjustu

effect:the enemy thinks he sees what ever persons he is closest to running at them giving them a enbrace then then second the arms grasp the enemy what was running towrds their closest person turns in to a devil and the arms turnms in to iron bars and they are locked in place

unique wepon sword of flames


here is my friends ninja

Name:he was to lazy to think one up

village: hidden leaf

clothing:black robe

all basic justu tranformaton clone ect ect

personal wepon:little auto paint brushes that draw a tempory curse mark that with a justu he can ue to cause pain or creat elments like water fire ect

justu: flameing leaf rain
type:joint ninjustu
effect he draws on a tree makeing the leafs explode off then my ninja izaziki uses flaming string to tei the elaves the ignight them thne teing thbem arouind the enemy

together we from the fire artists

[Dan the Man]

I've got another jutsu...

Saiya-power Jutsu - By standing in a straddle stance and shouting at the top of your lungs endlessly, the jutsu allows you to power up for 30 minutes, when only about 1 or 2 have actually passed. The only real result of the jutsu, though, is a small boost in abilities, because the enemy can always power up to another form to match/beat it.

[Hunter Nin.]

Earthshaker Bloodline Limit

Special chakra pores in the tips of the ninja's fingers allow the release of chakra that can burn the image of an explosive seal onto practically any surface even if the surface is only touched for a fraction of a second. The size of the seal determines the size of the explosion and the more chakra used the larger the seal. The seal can be detonated remotely or by a timer and this is dependendant on the shape or arrangement of the seal.

This technique belongs to a ninja clan from the Hidden Village of *Censored* where it is commonly used in construction work but when used in combat it can be deadly. A single touch from the user of this jutsu can mean an exploding limb for the victim. This justu requires a great level of focus in order to release the chakra at just the right moment so as to cause the most amount of damage but if time is not of the essence then it is relatively simple to use.

Using this technique a lone ninja with no materials but himself can effectively trap an entire battlefield over night. A lone ninja could also, with enough time and chakra, effectively nuke an entire village by slowly and constantly increasing the size of a seal over a lengthy period of time.

[inferno_grl]

i just created this off the top of my head when i was on naruto arena. it was off the top of my head.

ice ball

put ur hand anywhere near water. use ur charkra to contact the water without touching it. the water in cometo the palm of ur hand and form a ball and freeze itselfs. you can do watever want with it. but onnaruto arena i used it as an ice pack. that's fun. i'll post my card later. i'm doing pretty damn good for someone who started yesturday.

[lankree]

Senkaishouryu - Revolving Palm Dragon
Shosenryu - Rising Dragon Flash
Sousokuryu Twin Binding Dragons

User: Tenten

Descriptions:
Sousokuryu - a trapping ninjutsu, Tenten summons two small scrolls from her larger scroll and unleashes them. The scrolls travel towards the enemy shaped like dragons that swurve around her enemy and trap them with a series of complicated seals.
Escapes: high knowledge of seals or ninjutsu reversals, the seals can be repelled by intense charka blasts like Chidori, Raikiri, Rasengan, Kabuto's medical scalpel and Juuken. Brute force is cannot break the seals.
Risk: Tenten has to hold the end of the two scrolls in one hand to maintain the jutsu. This leaves her with only one hand to defend herself with if she's facing more than one person. The technique also has a medium-high chakra cost.

Shosenryu - genjutsu. Tenten summons an illusionary dragon to the battle field that covers the area in a thick smoke and also perfumes the air heavily with a common nasal irritant and perfume.
Escape: genjutsu reversal techniques
Risk: High chakra cost

Senkaishouryu - Sannin ougi taijutsu. Tenten summons Neji and Lee to her aid and the trio unleash their signature devastating attacks - Rokujon Yonshou, Omote Renge, Soushoryu.
Escape: extremely high speed evasion or possession of an absolute defense
Risk: limited repetitions possible in a single battle, cannot be performed in the absence of her teammates

[madskillz313]

i think i would make a jutsu called Super Release: Abyss Chimera no jutsu.
it would involves every elemental chakra , a arm and six shadow clones to perform. each clone would put in a certain element sept for the six one. he would add a hidden element : darkness. the elemental chakra would fuse into the shape of a mythical chimera and get sent towards them at lightening speed. the down side is that you lose a arm and you'll be completely exhausted for 3 days and nights.

[Akatsuki_King]

Akatsuki King here,

well its been a while since my last post so I thought I would grace you all with another one of my jutsus, lol.

HERE IT IS.... Ketsueki (literally Blood), allows the user to alter the warmth of their blood to keep their their body warm in extreme cold or cool it in extreme heat. Only need to preform the handseals once and then you can control it for life. If the chakra control isn't exact then you blood can boil or freeze, killing the user, which is why this an S-class jutsu.

That's all for now, bye.
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[Kage_Spyke]

whats the point of that jutsu?

[Akatsuki_King]

WEEEEEll, try thinking a bit. If you have to survive artic like tempertures to complete a mission then wouldn't you like to be warm, or would you rather freeze??? The jutsu basically allows you to stay at a bareable temperture while going through extreme cold or heat.
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[Kage_Spyke]

not really if your blood gets too warm or too cold you die, thats plain and simple if your blood temp goes too low you die of hypothermia and if its too high you die of a heat stroke. it just seems pointless to me, your choosing which way to die.

i have an idea for a jutsu


Name: Kurotsuki Ryu no Jutsu(Blackmoon Dragon)
Type kekkei genkai/dojutsu(blood limit trait/eye technique)
ABilities: the user can only use this jutsu when it is nighttime or very dark, the user gathers up his/her chakra and then the user can pick from 3 techniques to use.

1.Beniryu(blood dragon no jutsu)- a blood based techique that infects the opponent's bloodstream with a potent poison.(only works if they have an open wound(ninjutsu)

2.Kurotsuki.(black moon)-(genjutsu) your opponent is trapped in their own mind and surrounded by their worst fears and most painful memories and thoughts that make them want to kill themselves, driving them insane and causing them to either kill themselves or have a mental breakdown.

3. BLack Katana Dragon blast- Weapon ninjutsu- the user uses a long katana and fills it with their chakra and when their opponents chakra is drained completely.


like it?

[Akatsuki_King]

Eh, here are a few new ones.

Nenshou Ryouiki (literally burning field), this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of incredibly hot ash that hangs in the air around the opponent. It will cause burns that will steadily worsen the longer a person is trapped in it. The size of the ash cloud depends on the amount of chakra used. B-rank.

Akogi (literally greed), allows the user to turn all eight of their chakra gates into chakra sucking black holes. They will pull all the chakra out of the surround people, plants, and animals in the area and locks it behind the user’s eight chakra gates. Without their chakra all the living things that were in the techniques radius die. The user himself/herself dies from their chakra coils rupturing, even if the jutsu itself fails. S-rank.

Oni Shikyo (literally demonic death), is a jutsu that kills both the user and the opponent by turning their body heat into a flame that burns them from the inside out. S-rank

Tsumetai Shikyo (literally cold/icy death), is a jutsu that kills both the user and the opponent by freezing their blood. S-rank.

Kuroarashi (literally black/dark storm), a genjutsu which cause the affected to be caught up in a barren world of a never-ending black storm. They are unable to see, and believe that they are freezing cold. A fear fills their minds, making them to afraid to even move, let alone attempt to escape the jutsu. B-rank.

Kasshoku Warishita no Jutsu (literally brown soup technique), causes the affected to have an extreme case of diarrhea. The smell of the disgusting brown mixture often makes the affected faint, or run away in embarrassment. S-rank.

LOL. What does everyone think? Personally, I think the last one was the most dangerous....

Kage Spyke, your jutsu, Kurotsuki, sounds to much like Itachi's Tsukuyomi to me, but your other jutsus are interesting.
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[Kage_Spyke]

i thought about it sorta like that , i should changed it up a bit

[naruto15]

im new here and i got some own mde naruto charaters but i dont know how to show u

[Akatsuki_King]

:confused: All you got to do is write about em, you know, give a name, background, jutsus, ect, ect.
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[sensaiderp]

ok
name:kuro yama(literally dark mountain)
age:21
family:all (supposedly) dead
hair color blood red
eye color:left is green right is yellow
weapons large sword(looks like the breaver from fable the lost chapters) and a black katana with red runes across the blade
village(s)hidden waterfall village(in fanfic its destroyed) later forms village hidden in twilight
rank:kage
clothing: his old ANBU mask is cracked in half on the right is a black scar from the akatsuki leaders weapon he wears a black robe with the waterfall village symbol on the back
info
ANBU captain of the waterfall village before akakatsuki attack & destroy it thier reason: they believed that a tailed beast had fled there kuro yama fought but was forced to retreat he escaped and the few others who survived joined him to form the village hidden in twilight
personality: for the most part keeps to himself the only people who really know him are his teammates

his sig jutsus:type kekkai genkai : shadows of pain: this painful little jutsu first traps the victim in a black prisim where gravity is about 300 times that of normal gravity while slowly the prisim collapses on the unlucky bastard its usually used for interrogation but its also used for torture/execution
disadvantages: huge chakra consumption and it takes a while to charge said amount of chakra usually passes out afterwards

black blade of hatered type blood/weapon jutsu he infuses his blood with chakra he takes his black katana and cuts his arm he lets the blood cover the blade then he attacks the sword and himself move 100 times faster
disadvantages the friction of speed burns through cloth and skin only use in EXTREME circumstances(such as outnumbered 10000 to 1

and thats all I got

[chutup]

OK Here goes.

Name: Nara Taramaru
He is Shikamaru's second cousin twice removed or something. He is known as the 'common sense' ninja, because he is the only one who knows the shadow imitation jutsu and actually has the common sense to use it. His most common move is to trap a foe with shadow imitation jutsu, then he pulls out a stick from his kunai pouch which he put there earlier. Of course all the enemies trapped in his jutsu pull real kunai out of their pouch. Then he just pretends to cut his own throat with the stick, and they all cut their own throats for real. All the other ninjas in his clan are amazed by this. He has tried many times to teach them common sense like he has but they never get it.:p

[Kage_Spyke]

ok
name:kuro yama(literally dark mountain)
age:21
hair color blood red
eye color:left is green right is yellow
weapons large sword(looks like the breaver from fable the lost chapters) and a black katana with red runes across the blade
village(s)hidden waterfall village(in fanfic its destroyed) later forms village hidden in shadows
rank:kage
clothing: his old ANBU mask is cracked in half on the right is a black scar from the akatsuki leaders weapon he wears a black robe with the waterfall village symbol on the back
info(WARNING THIER ARE SPOILERS IN HIS INFO) :[edit by Hunter : No there aren't :eyebrow: ]
ANBU captain of the waterfall village before akakatsuki attack & destroy it thier reason: they knew that the 8 tailed wolf demon was there little did they know that the wolf possesed kuro yama he escaped and the few others who survived joined him to form the village hidden in shadows

his sig jutsus:type kekkai genkai : shadows of pain: this painful little jutsu first traps the victim in a black prisim where gravity is about 300 times that of normal gravity while slowly the prisim collapses on the unlucky bastard its usually used for interrogation but its also used for torture/execution
disadvantages: huge chakra consumption and it takes a while to charge said amount of chakra usually passes out afterwards

black blade of hatered type blood/weapon jutsu he infuses his blood with chakra he takes his black katana and cuts his arm he lets the blood cover the blade then he attacks the sword and himself move 100 times faster
disadvantages the friction of speed burns through cloth and skin only use in EXTREME circumstances(such as outnumbered 10000 to 1

and thats all I got

i like it but there is one problem

the 8 tailed demon is a snake, orochi no yamata

[aykana-demongirl]

if you created your own naruto character what would he/she be like

I created a girl named aykana and her and sasuke are in loveplus aykana's preg. by sasuke:love: :love: :love:

[ajay29]

if you created your own naruto character what would he/she be like

I created a girl named aykana and her and sasuke are in loveplus aykana's preg. by sasuke:love: :love: :love:

...... right .............:uhoh:

[Akatsuki_King]

I created a girl named aykana and her and sasuke are in loveplus aykana's preg. by sasuke:love: :love: :love:

:twitch: right...that's really sumthin...lol. anyways you should probably add sum more detail or sumthing, ok??

oh and actually, the 8-tailed demon is only thought to be a snake, no one actually knows yet, because it hasn't been said in the manga yet.

[shikamari101]

shikato nara is the son of shikamari, son of shikamaru and temari (making gaara his great uncle:p ). and the son of sanudae uchiha, daughter to sasuke and sakura.(i really should figure out how to make a family tree)

shikato uses shadow possesion and sharigan

he has mengekoy (or however you spell it) and advanced shadow technique

[Q_Falconer]

Name: Sano Kazuki [of the village hidden in the storm]
Technique: Eye of the Storm
----------Type: Kekkai Genkai
----------Rank: None
----------Appearance: One eye/ a five-pointed pinwheel, one point for each of the five elements- Earth, Water, Wind, Fire, and Lightning. When in use, the pinwheel slowly rotates while each element plays over the surface at random intervals.
----------Function: Enables Sano to see the flow of elemental energy, and how it interacts with surrounding nature and people, and also enables him to tap into that flow of energy, harness it, for high level elemental jutsus in rapid succession, as well as combining those jutsus into unbelievably powerful ultimate techniques. It also just looks cool XP
----------Disadvantages: After use, it leaves Sano completely exhausted, and, if used too often, can not only debilitate the body but deteriorate his eyesight as well.

NOTE: This is still a work in progress. I'm still working/expanding on this bloodline trait, and will edit this post as it comes along.

[Hentai Guy]

if you created your own naruto character what would he/she be like

I created a girl named aykana and her and sasuke are in loveplus aykana's preg. by sasuke:love: :love: :love:

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/6/6e/9667982zk.gif

shikato nara is the son of shikamari, son of shikamaru and temari (making gaara his great uncle:p ). and the son of sanudae uchiha, daughter to sasuke and sakura.(i really should figure out how to make a family tree)

shikato uses shadow possesion and sharigan

he has mengekoy (or however you spell it) and advanced shadow technique

Wait...that would be a really weird family reunion...you'd have crotchety ol' man Gaara getting drunk and telling stories about how he totally owned Sasuke back in the day. Sasuke would, of course, be brooding about stuff...like that fact that he's 41 and still hasn't killed Itachi. Shikamaru would be trying to leave (as I'm sure the situation would be far too troublesome for him) but to no avail as I'm sure Temari would be keeping him on a tight leash. Also, Kankuro would be doing some puppet stuff...and nobody would care.

[Akatsuki_King]

Jeeesh, my comp is laggin today. Anyways, here is some stuff.

Cow no Jutsu!!!! It summons your opponets inner cow and makes them fat and lazy..... It was discovered by some guy who was trying to bring out his students inner powers and failed misserably. S-rank because of the permenant damage...lol.
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[akamiba]

jutsu:hyurion no jutsu(ice dragon twister)

recomindations:your blood,complete chakra control

hand seals:tiger,bird,ox,monkey,dragon,pig,dog

effects:a gigantic dragon made of ice appears and spins around apponent causing them to freeze and be cut to death.note(if not carfull it could completly drain your
chakra)or the worst case scenario,the dragon might turn and attack you.

users:kakashi,sasuke,naruto,and jiirya

rank:A

[akamiba]

jutsu:bushin ryu no fushigi(great emerald dragon)

requirements:blood,one sacrifice

effects:a dragon made of emeralds desends from the sky completly infusing with your physical body.automaticly grants the ability of the ultimate chakra.using this jutsu automaticly drains your chakra down to one percent.

users.all how is worthy of the hokage title.

element:thunder,wind,ice

rank:S

[sensaiderp]

i like it but there is one problem

the 8 tailed demon is a snake, orochi no yamata

sry didnt know ok time to go editing in word...again:(

[chaz017]

sry didnt know ok time to go editing in word...again:(

Hah, I feel your pain. I've edited mine in word about a million times. Might I suggest that you just leave the tailed beast out? Your character is perfectly fine without it and even seems more original with the tailed beast left off. Just a thought though :D. Oh, by the way awesome sig. Love it.

I've finished my two characters for the most part and posted them in the following spoiler tags. I'm still working on Hikari's jutsus but I can't seem to come up with anything that hasn't already been done. Hopefully I'll get some feedback this time as they are my first characters. Anyone not willing to do a bit of reading just disregard(or skip to the jutsu I suppose) cus they are somewhat in depth. lol. Enjoy.


Name: Last-Morikawa First-Hikaru
Age: 16
DOB: July 10
Gender: Male
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 127 lbs
Blood Type: O -
Eye Color(s): Originally Green but now a milky white due to blindness
Hair: Dark Brown, short with somewhat spiked bangs.
Rank: Chunin
Fighting Style: Primary-Genjutsu Alternates: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Village: Konohagakure - Hidden Leaf Village

Personality:
Hikaru is a very quiet individual that usually only speaks when spoken to. Known to usually have the answer to any question, just so long as you think to ask him. Is considered to be a little strange, but to the characters he does open up to he is known to be quite pleasant. This is mostly shown through interaction with his sister and a few friends. He is very quick witted and always aware of everything going on around him…even if it doesn’t seem like it. Usually spends most of his free time with his sister or training alone. He has also been seen watching others train and sketching in various locations. His continued studies and interest in becoming ninja remain a mystery as he has long since obtained his original goals.

Background:
Hikaru was born into a disbanded clan which had not practiced jutsu since the time of his grandfather. The clan had previously been known to practice genjutsu but was not exceptionally well known. He has one sister (two years younger) named Hikari whom he is very close with but rarely refers to him as oniichan. She instead typically refers to him in a slightly whiney voice as "Hikaar-uuu". At the age of 5, Hikaru developed a disease permanently blinding him for life. After two years of living with the blindness, Hikaru and his sister discovered several scrolls written by the clan generations before for the purposes of training. With the help of Hikari, he translated the scrolls to brail and began to secretly train with his sister in hopes of learning something that would help him regain his vision.

Eventually, Hikaru’s family found out what he had been doing. While most were opposed and worried about him, a few supported him full-heartedly. Being an incredibly bright child, Hikaru picked up on things very quickly and began to master many simple jutsu. He soon discovered that by molding the light to his chakra it might be possible for him to see. Eventually he developed a ninjutsu that could essentially bend the surrounding visible light. With ever increasing success Hikaru began to see again but never regained the use of his normal vision. Using his new found ninjutsu to see soon became second nature as it was used on a daily basis at almost all times. The ninjutsu that he had created made him quite adept to the use of genjutsu. His ability to affect the other senses was equal to that of an average genjutsu user but his control over sight was highly advanced. Not only could he easily affect people by making them see thing that were not actually there, he could essentially make them see nothing at all and leave them in total darkness.

At the age of 11, Hikaru joined the academy but had trouble progressing at first due to the fact that after strenuous use of his chakra his vision suffered greatly. Lowered amounts of chakra basically meant that he could no longer clearly see and would eventually cause his failure of exams. After then training with a personal instructor in the arts of taijustu, he began to learn how to fight without seeing by using his already slightly enhanced other senses due to blindness. This taijutsu training greatly improved him as a well-rounded ninja and at the age of 13 he finally achieved the rank of Genin. He then quickly went on to gain the rank of Chunin during his first exam, just after turning 15.

Current Jutsu:
Infinite Solitude: Envelopes the user in a genjutsu of complete darkness. Without sight, sound, or touch the victim has no reference to direction, location, or anything else for that matter. Prolonged exposure to this jutsu has been known to cause temporary insanity. Escape from this jutsu has become increasingly difficult as Hikaru has become more skilled and once escaped it is often found that Hikaru still has control of the victim’s vision.

Mirage Clone: Similar to standard clone technique but more difficult to tell the difference between since Hikaru can make it appear as if his clones are actually disrupting their environment. Some people have incorrectly assumed that this jutsu was actually Shadow Clone due to this fact. The more clones there are the more difficult it is for Hikaru to make them appear as if they affect the environment. Normally only a small number of clones (3-4) are used for this very reason. Hikaru also has the ability to make different opponents see different images at the same time. For example, he could make his clones (and himself) appear as all Naruto to Sakura, while making them (and himself) appear as Sakura to Naruto. This additional ability has gotten him out of many difficult situations. The other difference between this jutsu and that of the standard clone technique is that when a clone is hit from a distance it usually doesn’t dissipate. Unless the clone is directly hit by a body part and felt, it is difficult to tell if it was real since Hikaru can make it appear as if kunai and such have actually stuck the clone.

Dance of Deception: Hikaru uses his ability to easily deceive the eyes and quick taijutsu to unleash a combination of unblocked attacks. This move is usually effective in a sense that Hikaru deceives the opponent's eyes into seeing him attacking one area thus forcing them to block that location. In actuality, he is attacking them in a different location but this real attack is not visible to their eyes.

Greater Dance of Deception: An adaptation to the Dance of Deception, Hikaru first makes himself completely invisible to the eyes and attacks the opponent without them ever being given a chance to see where these attacks are coming from. Hikaru has been known to create images of himself while doing this attack in order to further deceive teammates of the opponent while he strikes the victim of his choice.

Endless Vision: Hikaru is able to bend the light in a certain radius allowing him to see greater distances if focused one direction allowing him to things that would not have been visible otherwise. Hikaru is also able to use this ability to see around objects and into enclosed areas at shorter distances. This ability however can only be directed into a small radius or focused into a one direction at this time. Using more chakra would allow him to enhance this greatly but would leave his vision impaired or absent all together afterwards with the loss of the chakra.

Pros:
Increased control over vision in many aspects. This control is easily adapted into other jutsus. Incredible control of his chakra due to the fact that he is constantly using his ability in order to see.

Cons:
Hikaru’s inability to see without chakra makes jutsu requiring larger amounts of chakra considerably less likely. It is also true that as fights go on and Hikaru’s chakra lowers, his vision becomes more and more impaired. Also, even having strong use of genjutsu, Hikaru has yet to gain complete control over the other senses due do the fact that most of his training has focused on sight.

Name: Last-Morikawa First-Hikari
Age: 14
DOB: June 8
Gender: Female
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 83 lbs
Blood Type: A+
Eye Color: Emerald Green
Hair: Red, Two short pony tails with long bangs
Rank: Genin
Fighting Style: Primary-Genjutsu Alternates: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Village: Konohagakure - Hidden Leaf Village

Personality:
Hikari’s personality can be briefly summarized as bright, cheerful, and clingy. Sine she is constantly looking for attention and approval from her older brother Hikaru, most times they are considered to be inseparable. At the same time however, they are also viewed quite often as polar opposites. She is deemed by many to be quite silly and/or daring at times as she has very little regard for political correctness. Hikari’s bright personality and outgoing nature make it quite simple for her to gain friends and fit into almost any group with ease. Her small stature commonly makes people underestimate her and comments regarding her size easily anger her.

Background:
Hikari’s interest in being a ninja mostly seems to focus around being more useful to her brother even knowing that he is now fully capable of taking care of himself. She has been vital to her brother and his learning to cope with his disability for as long as she can remember. At the age of 5, upon discovering the family’s scrolls, Hikari began to study with her brother in an effort to help him regain his sight and assist him any way possible. The majority of her efforts focused on the senses other than sight in an effort to better be able to communicate with Hikaru.

At the age of 10, Hikari entered the academy with the consent of her family and considerably more support than her brother received. Having learned most of her abilities from the family’s scrolls while secretly training with her brother, most of her jutsu have focused around the use of genjutsu. Unlike her brother however, she has not focused on sight alone has become a more well rounded genjutsu user, albeit at a lower level. Even though her use of genjutsu over all is viewed at a lower lever than Hikaru’s, she is capable of individually influencing the senses other than sight better than he is.

Hikari gained the rank of genin quite easily soon after turning 12 years old. While not regarded as a genius she still had the advantage of her knowledge and training prior to entering the school. She was recently recommended and tested for Chunin but failed during the second part of the exams. Her training more recently has focused around ninjutsu and taijutsu in an attempt to become a more well-rounded ninja. This training was also a result of her strong desire to find something that she excels in, as well as something that defines her.

Current Jutsu:
Dance of Deception: Having gone through much of the same training as Hikaru, Hikari is able to use this jutsu as well. She is only able to use it at a much lower level than Hikaru due to her lower level of genjutsu use. However, physically she is more efficient than Hikaru and is quick enough to make up the difference and still accomplish the technique. Using her ability to deceive the eyes combined with quick taijutsu Hikari unleashes a combination of unblocked attacks. This move is usually effective in a sense that Hikari deceives the opponent's eyes into seeing her attacking one area thus forcing them to block that location. In actuality, she is attacking them in a different location but this real attack is not visible to their eyes.

Greater Dance of Deception: An adaptation to the Dance of Deception, Hikari first makes herself completely invisible to the eyes and attacks the opponent without them ever being given a chance to see where these attacks are coming from. Much like Hikaru, Hikari has been known to create images of herself while doing this attack in order to further deceive her teammate’s opponents while she strike the victim of her choosing.

Pros:
Not having the limitation of losing her vision with the use of chakra like her brother, Hikari seems capable of learning higher level or more chakra taxing jutsu. Hikari doesn’t seem to be bound to any one form of fighting and can quite easily pick up and mix different styles of fighting

Cons:
Hikari doesn’t have much separating her from everyone else and this causes her to be easily predictable in battle. Not seeming to have great control over the senses yet, her low levels of genjutsu use seem to be less effective and quite often are seen as a mere nuisance to higher level ninja. These genjutsu seem incapable of holding anyone at a higher level than her for very long. If placed in a situation against a stronger opponent, they are often dispelled with not much effort and tend to waste her chakra.

[sensaiderp]

[QUOTE=chaz017;854725]Hah, I feel your pain. I've edited mine in word about a million times. Might I suggest that you just leave the tailed beast out? Your character is perfectly fine without it and even seems more original with the tailed beast left off. Just a thought though :D. Oh, by the way awesome sig. Love it.

thnx i'll think about editing the tailed beast out good suggestion the problem is his original village is burned down by akatsuki and y else would they attack if not for the tailed beast...nyway thnx about my sig haha

[aburame_rocks23]

in this jutsu ninja surrounds himself with a whirlwind of shuriken and kunai. The ninja then uses body flicker to move out of the whirlwind, using his chakra to kep the whirlwind moving. Upon inspection of the whirlwind by the opposing ninja, the ninja performing the jutsu releases his chakra, impaling his enemy with a rain of kunai and shuriken. I don't have a name yet so please post suggestions.

[sensaiderp]

Name--|||Nara Shikmaro|||

Justu--|||Ninpo, Shadow Eclipse justu|||


Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow

Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow and you die.

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.

sry if I sound like a jerk but by chance did you read the rules? if not check them this seems a BIT to powerful add a few disadvantages like huge chakra consumption, you might die,ect,ect,ect just a thought

in this jutsu ninja surrounds himself with a whirlwind of shuriken and kunai. The ninja then uses body flicker to move out of the whirlwind, using his chakra to kep the whirlwind moving. Upon inspection of the whirlwind by the opposing ninja, the ninja performing the jutsu releases his chakra, impaling his enemy with a rain of kunai and shuriken. I don't have a name yet so please post suggestions.

nice heres a problem though this sounds a bit like tentens whirlwind technique

[sensaiderp]

Name: sanji erinda(not his actual last name)

Age: 19
family: adopted sister:akimoto erinda adopted mother ayane erinda(deceased)
Eye color: blue

Hair color black with 2 red stripes through it

Weapon: a silver katana with blue runes that mach kuro yama’s black katana’s runes (the reason is explained in his bio)

Village(s) hidden waterfall village goes with kuro yama to the twilight village

Rank: ANBU black ops

Clothing a grey cloak his headband wrapped around his arm

bio: almost 18 years ago in the waterfall village a long battle took place almost destroying the waterfall village in the end the survivors found the child sanji in a bombed out building near the silver katana in a weapons rack they found that the second katana that was in the rack had disappeared (see second sword is kuro yamas the black katana that is) and the waterfall village could not find the parents so they allowed the erinda clan who had found him to take care of him since the sword was found with him he was given it when he turned 12 when he started training in the academy at 10 he and kuro yama were set up as teammates along with (I need help GIVE ME IDEAS FOR A 3rd NAME preferably a girls name)

Jutsus: type ninjutsu name dark waters in this jutsu the user creates a large wave appear behind him covering the area in its shadow going forward twoards the target sanji using his chakra to make the wave follow the target
Disadvantages large chakra consumption needs to be near a large body of water

and thats all I got so far

[Dan the Man]

(I need help GIVE ME IDEAS FOR A 3rd NAME preferably a girls name)



Well, how about Chiaki Hasegawa?

If you need Japanese names, try a name generator. I have a link for one here.

http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/namegen/969/

[chaz017]

thnx i'll think about editing the tailed beast out good suggestion the problem is his original village is burned down by akatsuki and y else would they attack if not for the tailed beast...nyway thnx about my sig haha

Ahh, I suppose it makes sense with your story. It just seems like every other person in this thread has a tailed beast. And your character seems fine without it. Not many people in this thread give honest feedback either, so I thought I would. If the problem is with them atttacking the village for the tailed beast couldn't it have been either rumored to be there or contained in someone else? That would solve the problem of why they attacked :D.

Well, how about Chiaki Hasegawa?

If you need Japanese names, try a name generator. I have a link for one here.

http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/namegen/969/

I like the name Chiaki. Plus it would be Chia-chan. Cute indeed.

[rakuwodahs]

I created a character named ukar wodahs (revers for raku shadow).he has shadow abilities.he has a demon that was born inside him.the demons name is raku shadow.he got this name because he looks like a shadow.ukar can transform into raku when ever he wants.he can disaper and run fast.he has a jutsu called Chisengan.its like chidori fussed with resengan but its dark.this jutsu can destroy halve a house.you can only use this jutsu once.

[sensaiderp]

Ahh, I suppose it makes sense with your story. It just seems like every other person in this thread has a tailed beast. And your character seems fine without it. Not many people in this thread give honest feedback either, so I thought I would. If the problem is with them atttacking the village for the tailed beast couldn't it have been either rumored to be there or contained in someone else? That would solve the problem of why they attacked :D.



I like the name Chiaki. Plus it would be Chia-chan. Cute indeed.

aha THANK YOU now lets see.... oh and that name chia-chan.....lmfao I won't use it cuz my friend victoria gave me the name akimoto and for sum reason it stuck
hmmmmm mabye the rumor thing would work cuz I cant think of any thing else tht can remove the tailed beast from the storyline nyway i'l post my 3rd character now*ahem*

name:akimoto erinda

age:20

eye color: purple

hair color: white

weapon: a halberd

villages waterfall village/twilight village

rank:ANBU black ops

clothing: a white robe no headband and she wears spiked gloves(and she is VERY good at taijutsu...ouch)

bio: another survivor of the attack 18 years ago she and her mother ayane looked for survivors near the outskirts of the village they found sanji and the katana thier clan was ordered by the villages kage to look after the boy akimoto considers sanji a brother and when they started at the academy they were assigned with kuro thier team was the only team that year to get past the chunin exams and 3 years later became jounins 12 years later ANBU black ops she normally avoids conflict but when faced with a mission she can and will kill if necesarry
jutsus: type kekkai genkai (ok I have no name for this I know I suck) well this jutsu can do 1 of 2 things1 it can deafen the opponent for a short amount of time while this might seem as an advantage it can effect allies nearby you see the way it works is she energizes her vocal chords wit chakra and screams main reason its not used a whole lot in missions(big duh there) but its good for singe 1 on 1 fighting the second is she can improve her own hearing to astronomical proportions by of course energizing her ears wit chakra again sounds advantaegous in missions but it harms her ears horridly if someone in a hypothetical sense were to say put a metallica CD on and turn it up as loud as they could(and thts painful normally I should know I tried*rubs ears*) but its great for spying on enemies

[mrprime70]

Name--|||Nara Shikmaro|||
Justu--|||Ninpo, Shadow Eclipse justu|||

Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow
Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow, you cannot get out of this justu and you will not be able to breath, therefore…

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.

iunno if you think it's good or not but oh well:D
Tell me if it's ok.

[Dan the Man]

Okay, I have another character

Musashi

Rank: Chuunin
Age: 20

Picture:
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Musashi.jpg

Bio: An orphan from another country, Musashi was taken in by the third Hokage after his parents were murdered by unidentified ninja. Around the age of 10, he enrolled late into the Ninja Academy. Being among children younger than him struggling with normally easy jutsu and chakra techniques made him isolated and alienated from children his own age, who would often be close to becoming Genin. Two years after his enrollment, he tried to cheat in a match against another, much stronger student by eating 10 soldier pills at once. The huge amount of chakra nearly killed him, and revealed a previously unknown kekkei-genkai in his left eye. After this incident, he was tutored by a taijutsu specialist, and learned of the great swordsman, Musashi, who he named himself after. He developed a strict sense of honor from his mentor, and has since become good friends with the student he tried to cheat against, Kazuma Yamada. Now 20 years old, he is a reknown taijutsu user, and is especially skilled with swords, and is rumored to be the best swordsman in Konoha, though many contest this claim, including Kazuma.

Musashi's sword, Konohaken, was made by Musahi himself, under the instruction of his mentor. The blade was infused with Musashi's chakra throughout every stage of it's creation, making it nothing short of an extension of his body when used in combat. This has also made the blade seem extremely light to Musashi, as if it were only 2 or 3 pounds, when it is in fact, more than 70. It's edge is sharp enough to cut a falling leaf with no movement at all, and can cleave through a tree as if it were made of water.

Musahi's kekkei-Genkai, Kengan, acts in a similar manner as a Sharingan in that it observes muscle movements and can easily predict in what way an opponent will move or attack next. Kengan also allows for increible accuracy with throwing objects, as well as allowing a faint view of internal organs, as well as the chakra networks.

Special Jutsu:

Whirlwind tempest - A unique taijutsu move in which Musashi hits the opponent with the blunt end of his sword, and with the enemy still on the blade, jumps upward, spinning in circles, spiraling like a whirlwind. Once Musashi stops, he slams the enemy to the ground from midair (blunt edge again) and falls straight down, impaling the enemy.

Spider Limbs - A mixture of high speed taijutsu and genjutsu, Spider Limbs gives the illusion of Musashi having eight arms, each with it's own Konohaken. The arms are obviously hard to coordinate, but each one strikes with the full force of a real arm/sword, and if used properly, can be absolutely devastating.

Stone Shard Assault - Upon finding a large rock or boulder, Musashi slashes at it repeatedly, dividing the stone into dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of pieces, given on how much time he takes. Afterwards, Musashi punches the stone as hard as he can, as well as with a good amount of chakra. The stone then shatters into the cut pieces, which then fly towards the enemy at an incredible speed. Musashi also has a large amount of control on the firing angles of the shards, and can make it a narrow, one person range, or can fan it out to make a huge fan of flying rocks and stone.

[chaz017]

Okay, I have another character

Musashi

Rank: Chuunin
Age: 20

Picture:
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Musashi.jpg

Bio: An orphan from another country, Musashi was taken in by the third Hokage after his parents were murdered by unidentified ninja. Around the age of 10, he enrolled late into the Ninja Academy. Being among children younger than him struggling with normally easy jutsu and chakra techniques made him isolated and alienated from children his own age, who would often be close to becoming Genin. Two years after his enrollment, he tried to cheat in a match against another, much stronger student by eating 10 soldier pills at once. The huge amount of chakra nearly killed him, and revealed a previously unknown kekkei-genkai in his left eye. After this incident, he was tutored by a taijutsu specialist, and learned of the great swordsman, Musashi, who he named himself after. He developed a strict sense of honor from his mentor, and has since become good friends with the student he tried to cheat against, Kazuma Yamada. Now 20 years old, he is a reknown taijutsu user, and is especially skilled with swords, and is rumored to be the best swordsman in Konoha, though many contest this claim, including Kazuma.

Musashi's sword, Konohaken, was made by Musahi himself, under the instruction of his mentor. The blade was infused with Musashi's chakra throughout every stage of it's creation, making it nothing short of an extension of his body when used in combat. This has also made the blade seem extremely light to Musashi, as if it were only 2 or 3 pounds, when it is in fact, more than 70. It's edge is sharp enough to cut a falling leaf with no movement at all, and can cleave through a tree as if it were made of water.

Musahi's kekkei-Genkai, Kengan, acts in a similar manner as a Sharingan in that it observes muscle movements and can easily predict in what way an opponent will move or attack next. Kengan also allows for increible accuracy with throwing objects, as well as allowing a faint view of internal organs, as well as the chakra networks.

Special Jutsu:

Whirlwind tempest - A unique taijutsu move in which Musashi hits the opponent with the blunt end of his sword, and with the enemy still on the blade, jumps upward, spinning in circles, spiraling like a whirlwind. Once Musashi stops, he slams the enemy to the ground from midair (blunt edge again) and falls straight down, impaling the enemy.

Spider Limbs - A mixture of high speed taijutsu and genjutsu, Spider Limbs gives the illusion of Musashi having eight arms, each with it's own Konohaken. The arms are obviously hard to coordinate, but each one strikes with the full force of a real arm/sword, and if used properly, can be absolutely devastating.

Stone Shard Assault - Upon finding a large rock or boulder, Musashi slashes at it repeatedly, dividing the stone into dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of pieces, given on how much time he takes. Afterwards, Musashi punches the stone as hard as he can, as well as with a good amount of chakra. The stone then shatters into the cut pieces, which then fly towards the enemy at an incredible speed. Musashi also has a large amount of control on the firing angles of the shards, and can make it a narrow, one person range, or can fan it out to make a huge fan of flying rocks and stone.

Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason. Besides the Kengan that doesn't seem to fit I love the character. Well thought out with quite innovative sword techniques (And it's hard to get me to like a sword bearing character outside of Kenshin). I most definitely like how the sword is much lighter to him and him alone. That would most definitely fit into a Naruto character. I can easily see the shocked faces after he cuts through a few trees and boulders. I can just as easily see someone else straining themselves to pick up his sword and use it.

[Hentai Guy]

Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason.

By the way, the count is now up to 11 rasengan thingys, 8 chidori thingys, and 9 people with either tailed-beasts or demons of some sort stuck in them

[MobiuS]

I wish someone could summon sharks with frickin' laser beams attached to their frickin' head!

[sensaiderp]

Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow
Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow, you cannot get out of this justu and you will not be able to breath, therefore…

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.


oi read the rules its over powered add a few drawbacks

oh and is it me or did this guy post twice? I could have sworn it was deleted by hunter the last time...

p.s. so this dosn't seem off topic I came up with ideas for a jutsu*ahem*
this is a genjutsu I call "ewwwww" once you charge a large amount of chakra you launch the chakra someone and they begin to see............................................... .................................................. .................................................. monkeys yes monkeys wich begin to throw fecal matter at the ninja they freak.......great party trick

[gibits]

By the way, the count is now up to 11 rasengan thingys, 8 chidori thingys, and 9 people with either tailed-beasts or demons of some sort stuck in them
People are so creative.... If you're going to create your own characters then just do it, don't just modify existing ones. You can import abilities from x-men or Heroes, their are more sources of super powers than Naruto.

Here's one of the top of head (try to guess my sources!):

Endoh Tsubasa
Chuunin, Hidden Rock village
element: earth (gravity based)
BLL: graviton manipulation
eye color: brown
hair: long and black
ht: 147 cm
Family: Product of breeding program, unknown

Bio/history:
Deemed an abomination by the Bene Gesserit sect's breeding program, Endoh was treated as a failure by the sect. As a failure she was not trained in the use of "the Voice" which was every member's birthright.
Endoh, always with a sense of entitlement that all Bene Gesserit have, refused to believe this and trained her butt off. It was during her 10th year that manifested the unique bloodline that the sect had hoped for: gravitron manipulation, the very essence of earth element.

They soon treated her like a star and started her training on use of "the Voice". Dispite her age (most Bene Gessirit are trained from birth) she excelled in this as well. However, Endoh never got over her mistreatment at the hands of the sect and was often openly insubordinate and sarcastic to the sect leaders. While her most higher ups excuse this lack of manners due to her talents but it is clear that their patience was running thin.

She was also enrolled late to the Hidden Rock due to her early "abomination" status. Most of her peers assumed she was a washout from last year. Her attitude didn't make her any friends either. As it came time graduate it was clear that she was anything but a washout and dazzled her peers and instructors with her unique BLL. Her promotion to Chuunin and Jounin were all just a matter of time, or so she thought. Dispite the Bene Gessrit's vast contributions to the ranks of Rock ninjas most were treated with distrust, or sometimes even out right contempt. Achieving Chuunin was simple for her, but the stigma of the sect combined with her rude treatment of her superiors, made the rank of Jounin elusive.

With ninja war waging, Endoh was determined to distinguish herself to both her village and her sect. She lead her team many early victories, and was able to survive 3 encounters with the legendary "Yellow Flash" (although all 3 times lead to her defeat). She made it her goal to defeat Leaf's shining star, but in the end was recalled by the Bene Gessrit. The exact reasons for this recall are unknown (as are alot of the Bene Gessirit's motives) but it was widely assumed that she was to participate in the infamous breeding program. Endoh resisted the call but had no choice once the sect sent its most powerful elders to take her. Using the all powerful Voice, they were successful in removing her from battle.

By the time she returned to the village over a year later the war was over, and worse still the "Yellow Flash" had perished in a fight with Kyuubi. So she was never able redeem her defeats. Her apparent dessertion on the battlefield made prospects of promotion even more distant. Worse of all she has been completely cut off from the Bene Gessirit since coming back. Most assumed that it was her resistance to being recalled that made her fall out of favor with them.

The truth was Endoh was part of breeding program, and when she did give birth to her child she instantly attached to it, and wished to take care of it herself. But this was not the Bene Gessirit way, "above blood ties" was their motto, and all mothers, even Endou's, were separated and hidden from the instant they were born and raised by the sect. Unlike Endoh, her child manifested an even more powerful BLL right from birth. They deemed Endoh not only as extraneous, but also dangerous to their cause, and expelled her.

Endoh has since tried even harder to become Jounin, but now for the sole purpose of gaining access to secret files that could give her clue to her heritage as well as lead her to her child (she doesn't even know what sex it is). At the same time she has been raising her resistant to the Voice to give her a fighting chance of being reunited with her child.

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The Bene Gessirit (you should all know were I pulled this reference out of by now):

A mysterious sect made of predominantly women, and have been part of the Earth country's background for as long as anyone can remember. Their goals are completely unknown to all but the elders and those hags never reveal their secrets. The sect has an agreement with the Hidden Rock, in which the BG provided outstanding troops and the village provided them with ample "breeding substrates" and the option of recalling their members at anytime. The village also provides training for the young sect members which the sect deems as beneath them.

The main reason for the village ninja's distrust of the sect is mainly because of Voice (which in essence allowed to deceive everyone) and the fact that BG nins seem to be recalled right when the fight is starting to get intense (like in Endoh's case).

The real reason is that during wars with other countries, the sect has much more opportunities to capture bloodline user from other countries. Even the Tsuchikage correctly guessed (half-jokingly) that even without the Voice, coercing prisoners into mating with attractive sect members wouldn't be too hard.

Children born into the sect are separated from their mother (who knows what happens to the father), where they start their training in the Voice. Since most breeding takes place at the same time, and the fact that only elders are allowed contact with the new members, the mothers rarely have a means of finding out who their child is. The BG do this because they believe that blood ties lead to irrational behavior, and hence weakness in thought.

Despite all secrecy it is said that a master-list of lineages must exist for the breeding program to be so successful. Endoh is determined to find this list at all costs.




Jutsu: Endoh's jutsu make her a fearsome opponent but they often lack subtly that is required of ninjas. While the Voice is a great ninja tool, Endoh often squanders it. As such many of the village Jounin think she is a fight first character, although many have come to reconsider since her valor in the ninja war.

the Voice:
This auditory genjutsu is the trademark jutsu of all BG. Some say that it is the BG BLL, other think it can be learned. Whatever it is so far only the BG have mastered it. It allows the user immense powers of persuasion over its victim. It has it limits like it will not work as well if the victim never wanted to do such an action to begin with. However, it is well documented that elders have made enemies kill themselves with just a sentence. Thankfully the elders rarely ever engage in combat and even fewer have such extensive control over it.
Endoh is considered an adept in using the Voice, and uses it to convince her enemies to attack her by convincing them she is a "weak little girl", or to attack a well guarded area. Many BG feel she doesn't use the Voice to its full potential and instead relies on her BLL more. In truth Endoh hates to use it because it reminds her that she is a BG. She has been using it more frequently now to try to find out its limits and a way to counter it.

Disruption:
This jutsu is the main reason why she could survive the 4th Hokage's attacks. By distorting the already unstable summoning field with her gravitron control she can effectively counter any summoning jutsu, including the 4th's Hirashin jutsu. Unfortunately the 4th Hokage had other tricks that Endoh had no counter for.

Singularity:
Creates a dense orb of gravity that sucks up all matter. Endoh herself is immune to its effects and uses it draw in fleeing enemies. The draw in effect is quite violent often tearing and breaking bones due to the gravitational differences. The mini black hole is unstable and collapses on itself in in .2 sec, which is good news for the universe. The effective radius for this jutsu is 100 m, but even out of this range shearing damage is still dealt. Endoh tries not to use this when her team is around since she has hurt them in the past with this very same jutsu.

Gravitron beam (this should be dead givaway):
Endoh's goto move. Basically a thin black beam that super compresses everything in its path. It immense power is the reason why Endoh is so feared. It is pretty telegraphed and has a long wind up, but with her control of gravity she usually can slow down her oppenent (though doing both at the same time puts some strain on her, she would never admit it).

Elemental vortex:
This is Endoh "ultimate defense". By modifying the gravitrons she can suck in any elemental attack directed at her and bounce it back in concentrated form to its attacker. The amount absorbed is not 100% and for big area of effect spells she still take on substantial damage.

[Dan the Man]

Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason. Besides the Kengan that doesn't seem to fit I love the character.


In all honesty, I drew the character long before I posted him here, and didn't feel like erasing his eye, so went with it. If you're going to make a sharingan/byakkugan ripoff, you might as well go all the way. If I post another, I'll leave out the super powered eyes and evil inner demons.

[chaz017]

In all honesty, I drew the character long before I posted him here, and didn't feel like erasing his eye, so went with it. If you're going to make a sharingan/byakkugan ripoff, you might as well go all the way. If I post another, I'll leave out the super powered eyes and evil inner demons.

I wasn't meaning to single you out by any means. Your character at least has the rest to fall back on as originality and barely even seems to use the special eye you gave him. It was just that your character seemed very original and great outside of that extra ability. I was just complaining to the world in general, so you can give him sharakugan or byaringan if you want. I'll just keep telling myself he doesn't have it and I'll be happy since I like the rest of the character :D.

[AznShinobiX]

Jutsu-Genki Aura-Energy Aura
Type-Ninjutsu
Effect-This jutsu absorbs energy, whether from any jutsu or "real" energy. It has an appearance of a sphere of lightning around the user.
Advantages/Disadvantages-However, since pure energy is considered traces of fire, lightning/thunder, earth, wind, and water, this jutsu only absorbs energy from katon, suiton, fuuton, etc. jutsu. Absorb in this case means that the user absorbs chakra from the energy in the jutsu used. This jutsu only has a limited amount of time and the user's chakra decreases with the time used. However, the user can cancel the jutsu at any time and the jutsu is well worth the cost.
Hand Seals-Tiger Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Ox Seal (must perform seals in this order)

Jutsu:Raiki Baisuu Rakurai:Thunder Element-Multi-Thunderbolt Jutsu
Type-Ninjutsu
Effect-This jutsu creates several clouds around the user. These clouds shoot out lightning bolts that are homing (meaning that they always hit the mark).
Advantages/Disadvantages-This is a VERY good jutsu to use against multiple opponents (example:shadow clones). Also, they can help destroy other jutsu (example: phoenix fireball). However, all great things come at a price. The attack goes away after one use. IT IS NOT CONSTANT.
Hand Seals-Horse Seal, then Ram Seal, then Boar Seal (must perform seals in this order)

Jutsu:Raiki Ikazuchi Ryu no Jutsu: Thunder Element-Thunder Dragon Jutsu
Type-Ninjutsu
Effect-This jutsu has an appearance of a dragon and is made of pure lightning energy. It is porjected from the hands (like a kamehameha wave from Dragon Ball Z lol)
Advantages/Disadvantages-Unlike the Multi-Thunderbolt Jutsu, this jutsu is mainly directed at one target. Therefore, it is more focused and does WAY more damage. However, it can be used to help block jutsu like the Giant Fireball Jutsu. There are two hand seal combos for this. It comes at a higher chakra rate than the thunderbolt if you perform the one with three seals. It comes at a lower chakra rate than the thunderbolt and is more focused with the four-seal combo. The attack goes away after one use. IT IS NOT CONSTANT.
Hand Seals-Dragon Seal, then Tiger Seal, then Boar Seal (optional to perform the seals at this order)
Dragon Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Tiger Seal, then Boar Seal (recommended to perform the seals at this order)

Jutsu:Shinsei-Ken: Pure Blade
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect-This jutsu is similar to Chidori, but not exactly the same.
Advantages/Disadvantages-Genkiru is more powerful than Chidori depending on the amount of energy that is near it. Any type of energy (even chakra) is sucked in to make it more powerful. Sometimes it can make a boulder completely disintegrate. The attack goes away after one use. IT IS NOT CONSTANT. Precise chakra control is needed or else just one use of this jutsu will deplete every single last bit of chakra. However, if precise chakra control is maintained, then you can use this several times and still have enough chakra for several more. However, it is also hard to physically handle the jutsu because it sometimes absorbs too much energy and then explodes before it even impacts on anything.
Hand Seals-Tiger Seal, then Horse Seal, then Dragon Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Ram Seal, then Boar Seal (must perform the seals in this order)

Jutsu: Raijin-Hoshi Azarashi: God of Thunder-Star Seal
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect-This is a highly devastating jutsu. This is considered a forbidden jutsu.
Advantages/Disadvantages-This is truly one of the most devastating energy jutsu. This creates a star in a seal. This seal automatically surrounds the target. Then, a holy plasma beam shoots up, causing the target to be attacked by it. Then, the seal acts as a "target", attracting ultraviolet plasma bolts, once again causing the target to be attacked. This jutsu is ONLY used in dire emergencies. This is because such a jutsu can empty one's chakra. Also, this jutsu can only be used by select few. Those who cannot are devastated by the jutsu; having their chakra sucked in.
Hand Seals:Ram Seal, the Serpent Seal, then Dragon Seal, then Bird Seal, then Horse Seal, then Tiger Seal, then Rat Seal (must perform the seals in this order)

Jutsu:Kuchiyose no Jutsu-Ryu:Summoning Jutsu-Dragon
Effect: Summons a dragon
Advantages/Disadvantages:N/A
Hand Seals:Boar Seal, then Tiger Seal, then Dragon Seal (summons dragons in this hand seal order)
Boar Seal, then Tiger Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Dragon Seal (Summons bigger dragons in this hand seal order)

Genzougan:Illusion Eye
Type: Bloodline Trait/Genjutsu (of the Sakkaku clan)
Description: Similar to the Sharingan and Byakugan, the Genzougan is a bloodline trait that has three stages and inflicts status-ailments by using genjutsu. The eye turns into a yellow version of the Sharingan.
1st Stage:
The first eye places both the user and the victim into a genjutsu trance. The user's genjutsu trance makes everything around him/her SEEM slower. Meanwhile, the victim's genjutsu trance makes him see nothing but darkness.
2nd Stage:
The second stage also puts both the user and the victim into a genjutsu trance. The user's genjutsu trance is more focused and makes everything SEEM much slower than in stage 1. The victim's genjutsu trance causes him/her not only to see darkness, but now it causes the victim to become confused by projecting what his/her mind is thinking.
3rd Stage:
The third stage is only a ninjutsu used on the victim. This causes the victim to become a state known as "Blind Anger". This doubles his/her physical strength but halves everything else (speed, control, chakra, jutsu effects, etc). If the victim originally had bad control he/she would become completely paralyzed and frozen, prevented from moving, physical attacks, any type of jutsu, etc.
Advantages/Disadvantages: The first stage genjutsu can be "released". The second and third cannot. The Genzougan uses very little chakra because it is a bloodline trait. Also, it cannot be copied by the Sharingan. However, chakra cost varies on the stage (stage one would cost less then stage two and three; stage two would cost less than stage three). Also, chakra cost is based mainly on the mastery of this trait. Not only can it slow enemies, but it can also slow jutsus, etc. Therefore, it slows time in the eyes of the user.

Ryu Oniba (Dragon Fang)
Type: Weapon
Description: A legendary jewel that can change into: a knight's sword, a katana, or a saber; depending on the type of chakra you put in (Chart shown below). Also, it can merge with any summon.
Sword type
Saber (Normal)
Katana (Little but quick)
Knight's Sword (Heavy but Strong)
(Parenthesis=type of chakra needed)

Character
Name:Shinsei-hi (Pure Energy) Sakkaku (Illusion)
Male
Country: Lightning
Age: 12 Height: 5'3" Weight: 90LBS
Birthday: October 9th
Bloodtype: B
Hair Color:Gray with yellow and red
Bijuu/Jinchuuriki: Hachibi (Eight-Tailed Serpent)
Seal Location: Forehead
Active Seal Shape: 6 Point star
Unactive Seal Shape: 2 point diamond
Additional traits: Set of wings
Fangs
Genzougan Eye (Beast Version)
Usages: This beast decreases chakra costs, increases chakra supply, heals open wounds (basically, it improves all of the skills)

Story:
Jugenki holds within himself the eight tailed Serpent. This beast is also known for its two tails. Like Naruto and Gaara, he was forced to hold the beast when he was just born. However, he had never known of this. Also, nobody knew of his family. He was found as a toddler. Along his side was a sword, the legendary Dragon Fang (Ryu Oniba)! The Kage of the Lightning Village took him in. The village elders found out his birth information (birth, blood type, etc). While growing up, he learned several lightning techniques (Energy Aura and the Multi-Thunderbolt) and how to use his sword. By the time he was twelve, he was put into a squad. However, seeing the boy's potential, the Kage gave the squad a B ranked mission. The mission was simple enough: find the assassin swordsman ninja in the village and subdue him. However, when they arrived, the assassin had three accomplices. The jounin leader of the squad faced the assassin but it turned out that he was also an accomplice! Feeling betrayed, Sakkaku gets angry and the seal is broken! Suddenly, the beast of the Serpent is unleashed! Sakkaku automatically goes to full-beast form. He grew wings on his back and an aura surrounded him. He grew a star on his head. However, suddenly realizing a stronger presence, the Ryu spirit leaves Sakkaku's body and travels toward the assassin's. Since the assassin did not have a seal, he changed into the Serpent's form. A flash appears, the assassin's accomplices are killed, and the two are transported into a lit canyon. The showdown begins!
Sakkaku, still in Serpent-beast form, attacks the Serpent with all of his jutsu, but the Serpent just counters with stronger attacks. Then, Sakkaku receives a memory of someone performing a jutsu (This was the Thunder Dragon Jutsu). When he returns back to the canyon, he tries performing the jutsu with the same exact hand seals that he saw. The jutsu performed perfectly, but the Serpent managed to reflect back the shot.
"If only I had a jutsu that the Serpent couldn't counter and finish him off", thought Sakkaku. Then, another vision with another jutsu came (This one was the Star Seal). He tried the new jutsu, and it worked fine. However, he also learned the Genzougan, or the Illusion eye. This allowed him to see everything slowly than it really was. "This could come in handy when trying to predict movements", Sakkaku thought. A seal appeared below the Ryu. A holy plasma beam shot up. Then, plasma bolts came down on the Serpent. The Serpent turned back into a spirit and traveled back into Sakkaku.
Over the course of the next few months, Sakkaku learned Shinsei-ken and the Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Ryu. He had learned to tame the dragon and merge with it. He could transform the dragon into armor. He also perfected his other jutsu. Then, one day, he left the village with the village Kage to pursue his past and his memories.

A few Years Later:
Sakkaku returns to his village, this time with new techniques.

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Jutsu-Genki Aura-Energy Aura
Type-Ninjutsu
Effect-This jutsu absorbs energy, whether from any jutsu or "real" energy.
Advantages/Disadvantages-However, since pure energy is considered traces of fire, lightning/thunder, earth, wind, and water, this jutsu only absorbs energy from katon, suiton, fuuton, etc. jutsu. Absorb in this case means that the user absorbs chakra from the energy in the jutsu used. This jutsu only has a limited amount of time and the user's chakra decreases with the time used. However, the user can cancel the jutsu at any time and the jutsu is well worth the cost.
Hand Seals-Tiger Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Ox Seal (must perform seals in this order)
Could you please come up with your own ideas? Cease and dissect, I have copyrights to that jutsu


Elemental vortex:
This is Endoh "ultimate defense". By modifying the gravitrons she can suck in any elemental attack directed at her and bounce it back in concentrated form to its attacker. The amount absorbed is not 100% and for big area of effect spells she still take on substantial damage.

[AznShinobiX]

Could you please come up with your own ideas? Cease and dissect, I have copyrights to that jutsu


I'm sorry, I didn't know that anyone else made this jutsu already. After all, I don't have enough time in the world to read all of these jutsu and check. Sorry. I will try to make some other lightning element jutsus. However, your jutsu is a bit different from mine. I SWEAR that I did not copy your idea.

[gibits]

I'm sorry, I didn't know that anyone else made this jutsu already. After all, I don't have enough time in the world to read all of these jutsu and check. Sorry. I will try to make some other lightning element jutsus

lol no problem i don't think anyone bothered to read my post since no one bothered to guess where my references came from.

[AznShinobiX]

lol no problem i don't think anyone bothered to read my post since no one bothered to guess where my references came from.

can you send me what page your post is on so i can be aware?

[kiba122]

name:shikon inazuka

family:father:alive name:kiba mother:dead name:unkown

girlfriend name:buruhana

clothing:formal death reaper robe (sorry i just love the way those look) calsue:t shirt plain black and jeans and back pack to Cary seiryoku and the same face paint as kiba

dog's name:seiryoku fur :black
elemts earth fire
rank :chunin

justu: all normal justu: replacement etc etc

man beast mimicry

shadow clone just inazuka style
effect the user users shadow clone then transformers them into dogs

man beast fusion the dog fuses it's body to the user

dog riding taijustu

first the user enlarges the dog if not at riding hight then Mount's it the dog charges locks his claws into the enemys back the the raider jumps off dog opens it's mouth then rider jumps off kicking the opposer's had in to the dog's mouth then the dog crushes then enemy's head only down side is it takes alot of chara to keep the dog big

full power attack
type:ninjustu
effect:the user justu blastes fire out of every opeing in his body then jumps on the enemy then blasts all his engery out makeing him explode downside he dies
(bio to come)

[Dan the Man]

Okay, I have a villain this time around.

Name: Tsunami
Age: 31
Rank: Special Jonin (Rogue Ninja)

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Tsunami.jpg

Bio: Named after the unstoppable tidal wave, Tsunami is a rogue ninja originally from the Hidden Waterfall Village, and was a ninja who was always on the lunatic fringe. On numerous missions throughout his career, his comrades reported him killing innocent people as well as people he considered bothersome. Numerous attempts to rehabilite Tsunami's behavior have met with failure, and ANBU assassination attempts have also been unsuccessful. Tsunami eventually stole a legendary suit of armor, and began roaming the countryside. Many ninja villages, including the Sand and Leaf villages have Tsunami listed in their Bingo Books. Tsunami overall is a ninja who is insane in nearly every aspect of the word. Armed to the teeth with blades, kunai, shuriken, ans many others, he enjoys making new methods of killing people in as creative ways as possible. Though he is a ruthless murdrer, he doesn't act out unless someone gets in his way to contradicts him, which is why there are so many reports oof his murderous actions.

Tsunami's armor is a nameless armor made centuries ago by the founders of the Waterfall Village. It was made to be resistent to chakra based attacks, can resist most genjutsu, and deflects all but the sharpest blades. It is not invincible, though, as many have injured Tsunami, and have also broken various small pieces off. The various weapons attached to it include claw blades in the gauntlets, chained sickles on the back, as well as numerous pockets to hold dozens of shuriken and kunai. The axe Tsunami uses is also chained to the suit, and can stay on the back by the use of a large magnet.

Special Jutsu:

Bloodbath: As observed by an ANBU member, when Tsunami is surrounded by enemies, he throws both of his chained sickles outward, and spins at high speeds. While spinning, He throws numerous kunai and shuriken, and finishes by slicing the remaining enemies apart with his claws.

While Tsunami is very strong, and an amazing fighter, his former instructors have noted that his chakra control is actually extremely poor, and have mentioned that without his armor, Tsunami would probably be a target easy enough for a Chuunin to handle. Though since nobody has completely removed it or come close yet, he is still at large.

[kiba122]

Okay, I have a villain this time around.

Name: Tsunami
Age: 31
Rank: Special Jonin (Rogue Ninja)

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Tsunami.jpg

Bio: Named after the unstoppable tidal wave, Tsunami is a rogue ninja originally from the Hidden Waterfall Village, and was a ninja who was always on the lunatic fringe. On numerous missions throughout his career, his comrades reported him killing innocent people as well as people he considered bothersome. Numerous attempts to rehabilite Tsunami's behavior have met with failure, and ANBU assassination attempts have also been unsuccessful. Tsunami eventually stole a legendary suit of armor, and began roaming the countryside. Many ninja villages, including the Sand and Leaf villages have Tsunami listed in their Bingo Books. Tsunami overall is a ninja who is insane in nearly every aspect of the word. Armed to the teeth with blades, kunai, shuriken, ans many others, he enjoys making new methods of killing people in as creative ways as possible. Though he is a ruthless murdrer, he doesn't act out unless someone gets in his way to contradicts him, which is why there are so many reports oof his murderous actions.

Tsunami's armor is a nameless armor made centuries ago by the founders of the Waterfall Village. It was made to be resistent to chakra based attacks, can resist most genjutsu, and deflects all but the sharpest blades. It is not invincible, though, as many have injured Tsunami, and have also broken various small pieces off. The various weapons attached to it include claw blades in the gauntlets, chained sickles on the back, as well as numerous pockets to hold dozens of shuriken and kunai. The axe Tsunami uses is also chained to the suit, and can stay on the back by the use of a large magnet.

Special Jutsu:

Bloodbath: As observed by an ANBU member, when Tsunami is surrounded by enemies, he throws both of his chained sickles outward, and spins at high speeds. While spinning, He throws numerous kunai and shuriken, and finishes by slicing the remaining enemies apart with his claws.

While Tsunami is very strong, and an amazing fighter, his former instructors have noted that his chakra control is actually extremely poor, and have mentioned that without his armor, Tsunami would probably be a target easy enough for a Chuunin to handle. Though since nobody has completely removed it or come close yet, he is still at large.

he looks like a gundum

[Dan the Man]

....Well, I was actually going for a Ronin Warriors kind of thing, but he does look kinda Gundam-ish. Oh well.

[chaz017]

While Tsunami is very strong, and an amazing fighter, his former instructors have noted that his chakra control is actually extremely poor, and have mentioned that without his armor, Tsunami would probably be a target easy enough for a Chuunin to handle. Though since nobody has completely removed it or come close yet, he is still at large.

Easy enough to deal with...that what kunoichi are for. They'll have his armor off in no time at all :p.

lol no problem i don't think anyone bothered to read my post since no one bothered to guess where my references came from.

Hey now, I read it. I just didn't know who it was since I've been outta the super hero/villian loop for about 10 years now.

[gibits]

Hey now, I read it. I just didn't know who it was since I've been outta the super hero/villian loop for about 10 years now.
Bah I must be really old or something..... you'll need to be 40 years out of the sci-fi loop to not know where I got the Bene Gessirit from. Not that I'm that old but its from a classic sci-fi novel. I almost took it word for word.

The whole gravity thing is from manga, it is pretty well know too. Sci-fi punk with alot of brutal combat type manga.

Well those are some hints but i'll post an answer tomorrow if no one get it (or if no is interested).

I was just trying to incorporate sci-fi with ninja style combat, but since it wasn't so well recieved I guess I didn't do too great of a job :(


IMHO the most original character so far is those blind kids by chaz. Sure it has some resembalence to Tousen from Bleach but at least they don't have a tailed beast, eye-jutsu, or something else that has been played out like crazy.


his sig jutsus:type kekkai genkai : shadows of pain: this painful little jutsu first traps the victim in a black prisim where gravity is about 300 times that of normal gravity while slowly the prisim collapses on the unlucky bastard its usually used for interrogation but its also used for torture/execution
disadvantages: huge chakra consumption and it takes a while to charge said amount of chakra usually passes out afterwards
Here's a jutsu I would've given my character but it was already invented. Gotta give credit to where it is due if you ask me.

[kiba122]

[QUOTE=gibits;863578]Bah I must be really old or something..... you'll need to be 40 years out of the sci-fi loop to not know where I got the Bene Gessirit from. Not that I'm that old but its from a classic sci-fi novel. I almost took it word for word.

i am only 20 all hail dune :bow: :bow: :bow:

[Hentai Guy]

lol no problem i don't think anyone bothered to read my post since no one bothered to guess where my references came from.

I haven't bothered to read anyone's post for the last few days...been out of the forums mostly...in fact, the only reason I came back is that chaz mentioned that someone said something about the Bene Gessirit, which he disturbingly referred to as being from a movie (I don't think I'll ever truely be able to forgive David Lynch).

Oh, and the count jumped a little to 9 Chidori thingys and 10 tailed beasties

Bah I must be really old or something..... you'll need to be 40 years out of the sci-fi loop to not know where I got the Bene Gessirit from. Not that I'm that old but its from a classic sci-fi novel. I almost took it word for word.

You probably are old...but then again youngin's these days don't have any taste. Ahh...Dune...I remember when I got sent to Istanbul, and due to some poor planning on my part I only brough on book (Dune Messiah) with me. When I'd finish the last page I'd immediately flip to the front and start again...I must have read it at least 12 times that week.

I was just trying to incorporate sci-fi with ninja style combat, but since it wasn't so well recieved I guess I didn't do too great of a job :(

I don't know, Prana Bindu is fairly ninja...

IMHO the most original character so far is those blind kids by chaz. Sure it has some resembalence to Tousen from Bleach but at least they don't have a tailed beast, eye-jutsu, or something else that has been played out like crazy.

Well, chaz, looks like someone noticed your character...too bad mine sucks...guess I better learn to spin my chakra better... *sigh*

[chaz017]

Bah I must be really old or something..... you'll need to be 40 years out of the sci-fi loop to not know where I got the Bene Gessirit from. Not that I'm that old but its from a classic sci-fi novel. I almost took it word for word.

The whole gravity thing is from manga, it is pretty well know too. Sci-fi punk with alot of brutal combat type manga.

Well those are some hints but i'll post an answer tomorrow if no one get it (or if no is interested).

I was just trying to incorporate sci-fi with ninja style combat, but since it wasn't so well recieved I guess I didn't do too great of a job :(


IMHO the most original character so far is those blind kids by chaz. Sure it has some resembalence to Tousen from Bleach but at least they don't have a tailed beast, eye-jutsu, or something else that has been played out like crazy.


Here's a jutsu I would've given my character but it was already invented. Gotta give credit to where it is due if you ask me.

Hmm, yea I guess that would explain it since I've never read/seen that book/movie. No wonder I didn't peg the character. I've never been in the sci-fi loop to begin with I guess.

Dang it, I never realised the similarity to Tousen since I haven't watched Bleach in about a year but I suppose yer right. The biggest similarity is his "Infinite Solitude" jutsu, I had forgotten that Tousen was even blind to tell ya the truth. Oh well, it's not like a blind character hasn't been done before anyways (Ninja Scroll comes to mind). I just put my own twist on the pair to give them their own personality, so I'm glad you like em and the feedback is welcome :D. I'm glad my character has several things seperating him from Tousen but as far as original characters go, I can't ignore a ninja with no legs. That's about as original as it gets...(See Below) it's just too bad he didn't give more on him. I can't speak for everyone but I know I woulda been interested.
hellooo


im a new forum member and this thread was the rease for signing in i think^^

my english is bad cause im from germany so dont be angry



my caracters name: i dont know japanese names so you can choose one for me

age: 17

story : he had a hard childhood because he has no legs. he lost them during the fiasko of the nine tailed fox...

so i think you can guess the end of his story^^

he wants to be very strong and a hokage even without legs


my first idea was to let him summon legs but that wouldnt fit to his image :D


for more imagination look at the picture in the link

http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=owncharacterlb7.jpg

im 15 years old and im tryin to draw manga since 2 months , til then , i only watched anime and read mangas

so , dont laugh about the body or the hands of my character , im still learnin;)


Well, chaz, looks like someone noticed your character...too bad mine sucks...guess I better learn to spin my chakra better... *sigh*

Hah, I doubt it's because my characters are any better than yours. There are prolly two reasons mine got noticed over yours. The first reason being that I posted it twice since I updated it once. The second (and more likely) reason is that my character has a cute lil sister that follows him around. Everyone knows that if your character has a kawaii lil sister, he gets like 10 bonus points easy. It's basic anime character design :D.

[Naruto139]

....Well, I was actually going for a Ronin Warriors kind of thing, but he does look kinda Gundam-ish. Oh well.

ish? dat is a gundam!lol:D :D :D i think i'll post sumptin later:cool: :cool: :cool:

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Whew, been a while since I posted something like this. Heh, a thread's creator that doesn't post on it often, how ironic. Anyway I got a new jutsu for our little future Rokudaime Hokage Naruto.

Fuuton: Ryusosenkuuha (Wind element: Dragon Tempest).
Rank: Unknown (Rokudaime has kept several of his jutsus a secret).
Effect: This is a jutsu that was spawned form the Rasengan. Naruto combines his elemental nature into the Rasengan and thrusts it at the opponent. However this is where things get fun. Instead of pushing the opponent into the direction of the thrust it encloses around the opponent and renders them incapable of moving. The wind element starts slicing up the enemy just enough to draw out some blood (these cuts aren't deep you know). Naruto then tosses an explosive compound into the mix and sets the opponent on fire. This jutsu is good but a Kawarimi no justu gets you to safety from it easily. At the same time, Naruto cannot hold the Ryusosenkuuha in his hand for long for it will shred his own hand away if he does. Also if the jutsu is unable to hold the enemy down then it's literally useless.

[gibits]

I haven't bothered to read anyone's post for the last few days...been out of the forums mostly...in fact, the only reason I came back is that chaz mentioned that someone said something about the Bene Gessirit, which he disturbingly referred to as being from a movie (I don't think I'll ever truely be able to forgive David Lynch).

You probably are old...but then again youngin's these days don't have any taste. Ahh...Dune...I remember when I got sent to Istanbul, and due to some poor planning on my part I only brough on book (Dune Messiah) with me. When I'd finish the last page I'd immediately flip to the front and start again...I must have read it at least 12 times that week.



I don't know, Prana Bindu is fairly ninja...


Finally! Fellow Dune fans in the house! Well met! Sci-fi really is in the gutter nowadays and I had to fall back on a classic, I would have given my character all blue eyes like the book but felt it was too in line with Kishi's love for strange eyes.

You know the weilding way and prana bindu are great taijutsu...... man I should give that to Endoh but she seems so overpowered as it is.........

Honestly I liked the movies too, even if didn't go by the book. The remake on Sci-fi channel was very underwhelming compared to Lynch. Anyway I think the conclusion for Dune: Chapterhouse came out. I doubt that the son can outwrite the father, so haven't picked up a copy in fear it would ruin the experience for me. You know if is any good?


Well the whole gravity thing was from BLAME!, Killy's main weapon was the Gravitron Beam Emitter, which was where I got Endoh's jutsus from. In my opinion, BLAME! is hands down one of the best sci-fi action mangas around (Battle Angel Alita being the other). If you youngsters haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it (as well as Biomega by the same author).

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Fuuton: Kishou Hitofuki (Wind element: Rising Gust).
User: Rokudaime Hokage Nauto.
Effect: A simple close combat jutsu. Naruto gathers the elemental chakra into his right hand and performs a devestating uppercut at the enemy that sends them flying. The obvious weakness to this is literally the same as any uppercut. Best used in conjuction with Tajuu Kage Bunshin no jutsu.

-Katon: Ryuuhofuku (Fire element: Sneaking Dragon)
User: Sasuke.
Effect: Sasuke slams his hand down on the ground and sends a line of fire to track and insinerate the enemy. Problem is, he has to keep his hand on the ground at all times until the jutsu connects.

[Dan the Man]

ish? dat is a gundam!lol:D :D :D

If you've ever seen Ronin Warriors (Samurai Troopers, whatever the hell you want to call it) I was going for a mix between Sekmet and Dais. The legs ended up kind of Gundam like, though.

[sensaiderp]

Okay, I have a villain this time around.

Name: Tsunami
Age: 31
Rank: Special Jonin (Rogue Ninja)

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Tsunami.jpg

Bio: Named after the unstoppable tidal wave, Tsunami is a rogue ninja originally from the Hidden Waterfall Village, and was a ninja who was always on the lunatic fringe. On numerous missions throughout his career, his comrades reported him killing innocent people as well as people he considered bothersome. Numerous attempts to rehabilite Tsunami's behavior have met with failure, and ANBU assassination attempts have also been unsuccessful. Tsunami eventually stole a legendary suit of armor, and began roaming the countryside. Many ninja villages, including the Sand and Leaf villages have Tsunami listed in their Bingo Books. Tsunami overall is a ninja who is insane in nearly every aspect of the word. Armed to the teeth with blades, kunai, shuriken, ans many others, he enjoys making new methods of killing people in as creative ways as possible. Though he is a ruthless murdrer, he doesn't act out unless someone gets in his way to contradicts him, which is why there are so many reports oof his murderous actions.

Tsunami's armor is a nameless armor made centuries ago by the founders of the Waterfall Village. It was made to be resistent to chakra based attacks, can resist most genjutsu, and deflects all but the sharpest blades. It is not invincible, though, as many have injured Tsunami, and have also broken various small pieces off. The various weapons attached to it include claw blades in the gauntlets, chained sickles on the back, as well as numerous pockets to hold dozens of shuriken and kunai. The axe Tsunami uses is also chained to the suit, and can stay on the back by the use of a large magnet.

Special Jutsu:

Bloodbath: As observed by an ANBU member, when Tsunami is surrounded by enemies, he throws both of his chained sickles outward, and spins at high speeds. While spinning, He throws numerous kunai and shuriken, and finishes by slicing the remaining enemies apart with his claws.

While Tsunami is very strong, and an amazing fighter, his former instructors have noted that his chakra control is actually extremely poor, and have mentioned that without his armor, Tsunami would probably be a target easy enough for a Chuunin to handle. Though since nobody has completely removed it or come close yet, he is still at large.


damn dude nice character you can create awesome villans (the good guys you create are awesome 2 but I'm bad at villans):uhoh:



ok reason I am posting today is cuz the swords I mentioned that sanji and kuro yama have I came up with names for them as well as powers and a bio


kuroyamas sword is called:katana of oblivion

powers: chakra absorbtion

info: an antient sword that has been passed down from the yama clan from father to son the blades were forged by the original kage of the waterfall village to protect the village from harm it is a rather light blade however the power of the blade has faded with time and now is a mere shell of its original the blade now instead of being able to absorb chakra from a distance now must be stabbed into the foe and it has become more and more corrupt with time


now sanji's
name: katana of redemption

power: ability to re energize the users chakra(later on in story)

info: the sister sword to the katana of oblivion the blade was not corrupted as the oblivion had been mostly because the sword was in less use than the oblivion in battle the redemption however had been damaged in battle and no longer holds its full power so now it can't re energize the users chakra however it can still cut through plate armor like paper

[Dan the Man]

damn dude nice character you can create awesome villans (the good guys you create are awesome 2 but I'm bad at villans):uhoh:

Thanks. I rarely make villains myself.

[Kuroshiro]

Heres a technique I thought of for a future character that Im making:

Name: Water prison no Jutsu.
A source of water is needed to activate this technique. It has to be an open source, like a pond, river, bath or the like. Basically its an advanced Water Jet Technique - strong water jets attacking the target. The water prison is like a mesh that is made up of these water jets, and is able to shrink on the target like the desert coffin (Sabaku kyuu, if im not mistaken) to harm the target.
The cons of this technique is that it can be easily avoided by a fully aware target, thus it has to be used on someone who has been injured, caught off guard or just a weak target to guarantee its success.
On higher levels the user of the jutsu is able to manipulate the temperature of the water jets, either boiling them or freezing them, thus creating ice in its various variations: ice shards, ice swords, ice prison bars etc etc.

What do you guys think?

[gibits]

Heres a technique I thought of for a future character that Im making:

Name: Water prison no Jutsu.
A source of water is needed to activate this technique. It has to be an open source, like a pond, river, bath or the like. Basically its an advanced Water Jet Technique - strong water jets attacking the target. The water prison is like a mesh that is made up of these water jets, and is able to shrink on the target like the desert coffin (Sabaku kyuu, if im not mistaken) to harm the target.
The cons of this technique is that it can be easily avoided by a fully aware target, thus it has to be used on someone who has been injured, caught off guard or just a weak target to guarantee its success.
On higher levels the user of the jutsu is able to manipulate the temperature of the water jets, either boiling them or freezing them, thus creating ice in its various variations: ice shards, ice swords, ice prison bars etc etc.

What do you guys think?Doesn't Kisame already use that?

[Kuroshiro]

Doesn't Kisame already use that?
He does? If so, then Im sorry

[Dan the Man]

Alright, I have a new jutsu for each of my characters.

Kazuma:

1,000 Needles - Kazuma once read a document written by the 4th Hokage about the Rasengaan, and tried to perform it. Having failed, he used the basic methods to create his own jutsu. After concentrating chakra in his hands, he forms it into a ball, and punches it toward the enemy. Once hit, the ball splits into 10, and those each split into 10 more, and split again, continuously, until the chakra is too weak to continue onward, which has been recorded at one mile. The technique, since it uses flawed Rasengaan techniques, consumes an amazing amount of chakra, and compressing it all takes a long amount of time to form. The jutsu has only been used 3 times in combat, and other previous attempts have failed from interruptions and lack of chakra.

Musashi:

Tenshiken - This jutsu is formed by Musashi charging his sword with Chakra. Once the sword is charged enough, Musashi swings the sword, and launches a shockwave of energy towards his enemy. The shockwave is very powerful, and while it has been dodged many times, all attempts to block or deflect it have met with failure. The attack can produce numerous shockwaves, depending on how much chakra Musashi puts into the sword, so chakra cost varies.

Tsunami:

Venom Blade - A technique produced by Tsunami's armor. The armor coats every weapon in a poison which can effect the enemy simply from dripping from the blade onto the skin. The poison itself isn't fatal to most people, especially ninja, but it acts as a potent neurotoxin which numbs the victims body, and blurs their vision. The venom is used heavily in taking down harder opponents. Though if someone of stronger constitution, such as a Jonin is hit by the venom, it usually doesn't have much effect.


There you go, enjoy.

[Hentai Guy]

Finally! Fellow Dune fans in the house! Well met! Sci-fi really is in the gutter nowadays and I had to fall back on a classic, I would have given my character all blue eyes like the book but felt it was too in line with Kishi's love for strange eyes.

You know the weilding way and prana bindu are great taijutsu...... man I should give that to Endoh but she seems so overpowered as it is.........

Honestly I liked the movies too, even if didn't go by the book. The remake on Sci-fi channel was very underwhelming compared to Lynch. Anyway I think the conclusion for Dune: Chapterhouse came out. I doubt that the son can outwrite the father, so haven't picked up a copy in fear it would ruin the experience for me. You know if is any good?

Eh...I stopped after Children of Dune, it brought enough closure for me and I'd didn't want to give the author the opportunity to spoil it for me a'la Anne Rice's Vampire series (which, IMHO, should have ended with Queen of the Damned). So I haven't read God Emperor or Heretics...guess I'm too worried.

Well the whole gravity thing was from BLAME!, Killy's main weapon was the Gravitron Beam Emitter, which was where I got Endoh's jutsus from. In my opinion, BLAME! is hands down one of the best sci-fi action mangas around (Battle Angel Alita being the other). If you youngsters haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it (as well as Biomega by the same author).

Dude, GUNNM is awesome! I have yet to get my hands on Last Order, though. Panzer Kunst is by far my favorite fictional martial art (followed closely by Sinanju). Though, with the exception of Jashugan, I don't really get why she falls for who she falls for (i.e. Hugo and Figure)...oh well.

[chaz017]

Alright, I have a new jutsu for each of my characters.

Kazuma:

1,000 Needles - Kazuma once read a document written by the 4th Hokage about the Rasengaan, and tried to perform it. Having failed, he used the basic methods to create his own jutsu. After concentrating chakra in his hands, he forms it into a ball, and punches it toward the enemy. Once hit, the ball splits into 10, and those each split into 10 more, and split again, continuously, until the chakra is too weak to continue onward, which has been recorded at one mile. The technique, since it uses flawed Rasengaan techniques, consumes an amazing amount of chakra, and compressing it all takes a long amount of time to form. The jutsu has only been used 3 times in combat, and other previous attempts have failed from interruptions and lack of chakra.

Musashi:

Tenshiken - This jutsu is formed by Musashi charging his sword with Chakra. Once the sword is charged enough, Musashi swings the sword, and launches a shockwave of energy towards his enemy. The shockwave is very powerful, and while it has been dodged many times, all attempts to block or deflect it have met with failure. The attack can produce numerous shockwaves, depending on how much chakra Musashi puts into the sword, so chakra cost varies.

Tsunami:

Venom Blade - A technique produced by Tsunami's armor. The armor coats every weapon in a poison which can effect the enemy simply from dripping from the blade onto the skin. The poison itself isn't fatal to most people, especially ninja, but it acts as a potent neurotoxin which numbs the victims body, and blurs their vision. The venom is used heavily in taking down harder opponents. Though if someone of stronger constitution, such as a Jonin is hit by the venom, it usually doesn't have much effect.


There you go, enjoy.

I like the Venom Blade technique. Maybe I like it because poison is a very common weapon for ninja and you don't see it used very effectively in the Naruto series.

I can't seem to place the Tenshiken ability but I'm almost positive I've seen it in various video games. Oh, wait I also just got a vision of several Bleach characters. Not neccesarily a bad thing though, it's a technique that every anime sword bearer needs right? It's only right for yours to have it as well.

As for 1,000 Needles...I refuse to comment on it. Not because it's a bad idea by any means but simply because I saw the word Rasengan in the first line. Sorry :p

[Goshin]

the jutsu that kills you

[_Eh_]

Name: Henshoku Meian {fading shade}
Gender: Male
Family: Father (deceased), mother (deceased), sister (alive)
Village: Konoha


Abilities/ Jutsus/ Kekkei Genkai: Able to easily create nin and gen jutsu. Also has high chakra control, and has high amounts of chakra.
Jutsu:
(All Academy Level Jutsu)
-Pressure Arrow (Vertical): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It makes the opponent 3 times heavier, slowing them down.
-Pressure Arrow (Horizontal): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It pushes people hard back, and crushes them against the wall.
-Pressure Bullet (Either): A stronger version of Pressure arrow.
-Floating Air: Gravity lessens on one’s body, and makes them float, and faster.
-Dark Pressure Bullet, The black palm: Blasts opponent with huge amounts of gravitational force, which passes through them and into the bone. Then, he says “crush” and it breaks every bone (in the body, or the place attacked) into a thousand tiny fragments.
-5-finger, Pressure on the Joints: Blasts of gravity energy out of the finger tips are put out, and he attacks the opponent’s joints, weakening them, and straining the victim.
-Seventy points, total destruction: Attacks the joints all around the body and disloacates all the joints attacked.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hira-Burakku {Black Palm}
-Body is filled with gravity chakra, and everyone with this bloodline trait has the high ability of this cosmic chakra.

Personality: Silent, Very mysterious. His history is filled with darkness and woe. His whole family was brutally murdered by the assassin’s of the mist village. He only lived because he and his sister both helped each other fight off the ninja. His sister lost her arm, and he was cut badly on the chest. He doesn’t talk to anyone but his sister, and only trusts his sister. He believes it was his fault his sister lost her arm.
Sensei: Sister, Henshoku Neko.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Age: 15
Likes: Strawberries, Ice, Snow, Rain, The water. He Loves to sit and watch the sun rise and set. Also the same with the moon.
Dislikes: Mist village ninja. Most people who are ignorant. He hates the way people laugh sometimes.

This is my ninja, and his abilities. ^^ I hope you enjoyed it.

[chaz017]

Name: Henshoku Meian {fading shade}
Gender: Male
Family: Father (deceased), mother (deceased), sister (alive)
Village: Konoha


Abilities/ Jutsus/ Kekkei Genkai: Able to easily create nin and gen jutsu. Also has high chakra control, and has high amounts of chakra.
Jutsu:
(All Academy Level Jutsu)
-Pressure Arrow (Vertical): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It makes the opponent 3 times heavier, slowing them down.
-Pressure Arrow (Horizontal): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It pushes people hard back, and crushes them against the wall.
-Pressure Bullet (Either): A stronger version of Pressure arrow.
-Floating Air: Gravity lessens on one’s body, and makes them float, and faster.
-Dark Pressure Bullet, The black palm: Blasts opponent with huge amounts of gravitational force, which passes through them and into the bone. Then, he says “crush” and it breaks every bone (in the body, or the place attacked) into a thousand tiny fragments.
-5-finger, Pressure on the Joints: Blasts of gravity energy out of the finger tips are put out, and he attacks the opponent’s joints, weakening them, and straining the victim.
-Seventy points, total destruction: Attacks the joints all around the body and disloacates all the joints attacked.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hira-Burakku {Black Palm}
-Body is filled with gravity chakra, and everyone with this bloodline trait has the high ability of this cosmic chakra.

Personality: Silent, Very mysterious. His history is filled with darkness and woe. His whole family was brutally murdered by the assassin’s of the mist village. He only lived because he and his sister both helped each other fight off the ninja. His sister lost her arm, and he was cut badly on the chest. He doesn’t talk to anyone but his sister, and only trusts his sister. He believes it was his fault his sister lost her arm.
Sensei: Sister, Henshoku Neko.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Age: 15
Likes: Strawberries, Ice, Snow, Rain, The water. He Loves to sit and watch the sun rise and set. Also the same with the moon.
Dislikes: Mist village ninja. Most people who are ignorant. He hates the way people laugh sometimes.

This is my ninja, and his abilities. ^^ I hope you enjoyed it.

A very nice character indeed. Especially like how specifically hates how people laugh sometimes. It's a great minor detail and makes it easier to connect with the character. Have you thought of what a possible weakness of his might be because every character needs one to be well rounded (and to kinda go by the thread rules). I could somewhat let a character with no weakness go if he is a "bad guy" because that's just how it works in the anime world(villains are generally quite powerful but lose anyway). Your doesn't seem to be but he could easily be put in that category considering his history. Don't worry, your by far not the only person to post a character with few to no weakness.


Fukitsu Naruto this is your thread get to responding to some people and giving some feedback dang it. :p

[Fukitsu Naruto]

Name: Henshoku Meian {fading shade}
Gender: Male
Family: Father (deceased), mother (deceased), sister (alive)
Village: Konoha


Abilities/ Jutsus/ Kekkei Genkai: Able to easily create nin and gen jutsu. Also has high chakra control, and has high amounts of chakra.
Jutsu:
(All Academy Level Jutsu)
-Pressure Arrow (Vertical): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It makes the opponent 3 times heavier, slowing them down.
-Pressure Arrow (Horizontal): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It pushes people hard back, and crushes them against the wall.
-Pressure Bullet (Either): A stronger version of Pressure arrow.
-Floating Air: Gravity lessens on one’s body, and makes them float, and faster.
-Dark Pressure Bullet, The black palm: Blasts opponent with huge amounts of gravitational force, which passes through them and into the bone. Then, he says “crush” and it breaks every bone (in the body, or the place attacked) into a thousand tiny fragments.
-5-finger, Pressure on the Joints: Blasts of gravity energy out of the finger tips are put out, and he attacks the opponent’s joints, weakening them, and straining the victim.
-Seventy points, total destruction: Attacks the joints all around the body and disloacates all the joints attacked.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hira-Burakku {Black Palm}
-Body is filled with gravity chakra, and everyone with this bloodline trait has the high ability of this cosmic chakra.

Personality: Silent, Very mysterious. His history is filled with darkness and woe. His whole family was brutally murdered by the assassin’s of the mist village. He only lived because he and his sister both helped each other fight off the ninja. His sister lost her arm, and he was cut badly on the chest. He doesn’t talk to anyone but his sister, and only trusts his sister. He believes it was his fault his sister lost her arm.
Sensei: Sister, Henshoku Neko.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Age: 15
Likes: Strawberries, Ice, Snow, Rain, The water. He Loves to sit and watch the sun rise and set. Also the same with the moon.
Dislikes: Mist village ninja. Most people who are ignorant. He hates the way people laugh sometimes.

This is my ninja, and his abilities. ^^ I hope you enjoyed it.

-Indeed an original character but I would like to make the suggestion of giving him actual weaknesses rather than just quirky personality traits. However, I suppose given his history I could let it pass since, well look at how overpowered (and overrated) Sasuke-gaki is and he lived through the same thing :heh:. However that's as far as I am willing to go on this. The jutsu you created for him are, for the lack of a better term, broken. There is absolutely no downside to them. Nothing. No high chakra cost, no limits per day, no risk. I am sorry but those jutsu need a bit of compensation and tweaking. This thread was created to make feasable characters and abilities, not to start a bunch of random posts such as "Total Destruction no jutsu". Please edit them because those jutsus are a good idea but they just need ti be toned down.


Fukitsu Naruto this is your thread get to responding to some people and giving some feedback dang it. :p

-Yeah I know I've been slacking in terms of my own thread. I'm just not as active in the forums as I used to be :(. Curse my oh so addictive Tales of the Abyss and Xenosaga 3.

[_Eh_]

Okay, ill fix it up to make it believeable. i understant ^^

[_Eh_]

Name: Henshoku Meian {fading shade}
Gender: Male
Family: Father (deceased), mother (deceased), sister (alive)
Village: Konoha


Abilities/ Jutsus/ Kekkei Genkai: Able to easily create nin and gen jutsu. Also has high chakra control, and has high amounts of chakra.
Jutsu:
(All Academy Level Jutsu)
-Pressure Arrow (Vertical): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It makes the opponent 3 times heavier, slowing them down.
-Pressure Arrow (Horizontal): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It pushes people hard back, and crushes them against the wall.
-Pressure Bullet (Either): A stronger version of Pressure arrow. Costs more chakra.
-Floating Air: Gravity lessens on one’s body, and makes them float, and faster. Lower chakra cost, but if put too hard, my make the user’s hits very weak.
-Dark Pressure Bullet, The black palm: Blasts opponent with huge amounts of gravitational force, which passes through them and into the bone. Then, he says “crush” and it breaks every bone (in the body, or the place attacked) into a thousand tiny fragments. Downside—Very hard to control. If done incorrectly, it may backfire, and break the user’s arm’s bones into fragments.
-5-finger, Pressure on the Joints: Blasts of gravity energy out of the finger tips are put out, and he attacks the opponent’s joints, weakening them, and straining the victim. Downside- Must be within 8 inches of spot to hit target.
-Seventy points, total destruction: Attacks the joints all around the body and disloacates all the joints attacked. Downside—Takes a lot of chakra, and must be 8 inches from the spots hit.

Self made Jutsu-
- The ultimate defense, Palm of white: Creates a gravity field around himself, and reverses any projectile attack. Also many earth, water, and fire are highly affected by this. Air, not so much. This shield holds out any aereial and ground attack. Disadvantage- Maintaining enough chakra for this defense is very hard. Also the control is hard too. This may only be used 1 per 7 days. If any more, it shall completely deplete the chakra reserves in the body, and it will drain the life energy from the user, thus killing them.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hira-Burakku {Black Palm}
-Body is filled with gravity chakra, and everyone with this bloodline trait has the high ability of this cosmic chakra.

Personality: Silent, Very mysterious. His history is filled with darkness and woe. His whole family was brutally murdered by the assassin’s of the mist village. He only lived because he and his sister both helped each other fight off the ninja. His sister lost her arm, and he was cut badly on the chest. He doesn’t talk to anyone but his sister, and only trusts his sister. He believes it was his fault his sister lost her arm.
Sensei: Sister, Henshoku Neko.
Weakness: Suffers from Oneirophobia (fear of dreams), and from night terrors. He usually tries not to sleep. Do to this fear, he is often exhausted. And most of his jutsu cost a lot of chakra, and are hard to control. Is a bit pessimistic at times.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Age: 15
Likes: Strawberries, Ice, Snow, Rain, The water. He Loves to sit and watch the sun rise and set. Also the same with the moon.
Dislikes: Mist village ninja. Most people who are ignorant. He hates the way people laugh sometimes.
Apperance: Purple eyes, Black hair. Teal highlights. Pale skin. Mask covers half of face, and the mask is demonic. Seems to be a demonic cat. Fish nets cover top half of body, and black vest covers that. Tigh fit pants on legs, for flexibility and grace. All black. The ninja bandana is the belt of this ninja. Has a blue armband, that holds senbon.
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 152 lbs.
Advantages: Good at both range and close attack.
Weapons: None.

[_Eh_]

Better?? (I hope =])

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http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u210/_hear_meh_/PHOT0278.jpg

I made a quick sketch, i hope it isnt too blurry =/...

[Kyu410]

Better?? (I hope =])

Yep I think its better.

Character: Suichi
Weight: 160 lbs
Height: 5'11
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Parents: None
Rank: S-Class runaway nin
Morality: good side
Personality: Quiet, Shy, and a joker
Fav. Food: Ramen, Rice balls, and Tomatoes
Kekkai Genkai: In the form of MS except blue and white- He can sense chakra, excels in chakra manipulation, excels at ninjutsu
Weapon: Kusanagi blades
Headband: wears it across eyes or neck
Own Jutsus: Shadow infusion- Holds shadow with any weapon and tears it apart causing constant cell disruption.
Shadow mist- Mist that is thicker and is fused with poison.
Heart binding- sets healing based on opponents chakra level
Wind Style: 150 wind blade cut- Causes blades of wind to cut 150 times using Kusanagi blades
Mind Hack- Manipulates memories to the users benefit
Heaven Feather- makes a genjutsu world and causes you to relive any event the user wants.

Disadvantage: 1/8 of the time some jutsus backfire.(depends on level)

[Kyu410]

Pretty nice picture Eh.

Well since its already here.

Suichi's appearance
Hair: Black and Long(like Orochimaru)
Eyes: Black
Skin: Tanned like Iruka; Pale when the moon is showing
Clothing: Blue, Black and White. Has on white shorts with a black shirt has blue shoes and blue Kusanagi blade cases with dragons embedded and sealed within.

Good at: Close range
Taijutsu and Ninjutsu

Hates: Cocky people and people who think they know everything
Loves: Long haired girls
Interests: Practicing to make new jutsus, pervert(yes like Jiraiya), looking at the sea and stars
Summons: Dragons
Main Element: Wind and Water
Favorite phrase: This your end

Kekkai Genkai jutsu: Maelstrom style one thousand frights- Creates a huge maelstrom from pure chakra.
Disadvantage to jutsu: completely takes the remains of chakra and leaves him helpless for 4 weeks.

[_Eh_]

I have a jutsu. =]

Name: White Destruction {haku toukai}
- Creates a snow aura around hand, and within is a marble sized ball of ice. When thrown, and it hits a solid, it explodes in a cryo-based fury. It freezes everything in the diameter of 13 feet. All frozen people die emmidiately from EXTREME hypothermia. All body functions stop, and blood turn solid.

Disadvantages- Backfires easily if chakra control is low. Also may not fully effect the opponent it chakra level is not suffecient. Also, if it explodes too close, it may freeze you, and kill the user. After shock is the hand used to shoot it is extremely pained by temporary frostbite. But if done successfully, it can be a very strong jutsu.

[Kyu410]

I have a jutsu. =]

Name: White Destruction {haku toukai}
- Creates a snow aura around hand, and within is a marble sized ball of ice. When thrown, and it hits a solid, it explodes in a cryo-based fury. It freezes everything in the diameter of 13 feet. All frozen people die emmidiately from EXTREME hypothermia. All body functions stop, and blood turn solid.

Disadvantages- Backfires easily if chakra control is low. Also may not fully effect the opponent it chakra level is not suffecient. Also, if it explodes too close, it may freeze you, and kill the user. After shock is the hand used to shoot it is extremely pained by temporary frostbite. But if done successfully, it can be a very strong jutsu.

Dude you should work alongside Kishi. It would make villains much more entertaining than they are now.

[_Eh_]

Seriously? Thank you! Now im Embarrassed.... lol.

[Kyu410]

What do you think of my character?

Also think about creating your anime series it might be just as good Naruto.

[_Eh_]

COLOR="Green"]Nuther Jutsu.... *smiles*

Jutsu: Spikes of Grass {Kasui no Kusa}
-Grass is grown aroung the user, and can be controlled by the user to grow, harden and wrap at will. These grass strands can spike people with needle like spikes. These spikes are easily cut, but are abundant. They can wrap and immobolize the opponent as well.

Disadvantages: The ground must be fertile enough to hold a little plant life. THe soil doesn't have to be RICH, but enought to grow a cactus. Have to have good chakra control, to control these grass "spikes."[/COLOR][/COLOR]

[_Eh_]

What do you think of my character?

Also think about creating your anime series it might be just as good Naruto.

I think it was a tiny bit underdeveloped. It has a great starting point, but i believe that you could go ferther into the personality and description of the character.
I believe his jutsu sound really cool, and overall, he's a fantastic start.

[_Eh_]

What do you think of my character?

Also think about creating your anime series it might be just as good Naruto.

I think it was a tiny bit underdeveloped. It has a great starting point, but i believe that you could go ferther into the personality and description of the character. Also, you have to put more into the jutsus. They seem to be a bit to unbelievable. Don't get me wrong, they sound great, but just having them backfire 1/8 of the time is a bit small don't you think. Tell how much chakra it takes to do each one. Any chakra control requirements? thats all i can tell you about that, i hope i don't sound like an ass.
I believe his jutsus sound really cool, and overall, he's a fantastic start. But thats it, a start, so finish it, he sounds like a great character.

"This fake smile is for you my darling"

[Kyu410]

COLOR="Green"]Nuther Jutsu.... *smiles*

Jutsu: Spikes of Grass {Kasui no Kusa}
-Grass is grown aroung the user, and can be controlled by the user to grow, harden and wrap at will. These grass strands can spike people with needle like spikes. These spikes are easily cut, but are abundant. They can wrap and immobolize the opponent as well.

Disadvantages: The ground must be fertile enough to hold a little plant life. THe soil doesn't have to be RICH, but enought to grow a cactus. Have to have good chakra control, to control these grass "spikes."[/COLOR][/COLOR]

Can this move work in the desert if your character were to ever fight Gaara?

I think it was a tiny bit underdeveloped. It has a great starting point, but i believe that you could go ferther into the personality and description of the character.
I believe his jutsu sound really cool, and overall, he's a fantastic start.

Thanks I will edit to make him better.

[_Eh_]

No, Gaara would kick the person's butt, if they tried to use this in the desert. It makes it a limited skill, i know, but a unique one at that. =]

[Kyu410]

Also, you have to put more into the jutsus. They seem to be a bit to unbelievable. Don't get me wrong, they sound great, but just having them backfire 1/8 of the time is a bit small don't you think. Tell how much chakra it takes to do each one. Any chakra control requirements? thats all i can tell you about that, i hope i don't sound like an ass.
I believe his jutsus sound really cool, and overall, he's a fantastic start. But thats it, a start, so finish it, he sounds like a great character.
Shadow Infusion-10% chakra
Shadow Mist- 5% chakra
Wind Style:150 wind blade cut- 25% chakra
Mind Hack- 30% chakra
Heaven Feather- 1% chakra!
Maelstrom style one thousand frights- All of the chakra h
Chakra control requirements:none(he excels in chakra manipulation and all his moves have to do with it.)

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NOTHER JUTSU & NINJA WEAPON! IM ON A ROLL! LOL.... gahahaha.

Weapon: Yokobue no Joukai {Flute of the Heavens}
-Any musical peice played from this benevolent flute, raises the moral of nija, warriors, and people. The enchantment of the notes played on this fife are actually a type of genjutsu. To play this, you do not blow air into it, but focus your chakra through your lungs, and play it with chakra.

Jutsu: Dangan no Kyousoukyoku {Bullet of Rhapsody}
Users: Sound-Nin
- User must have the Yokobue no Joukai. It eminates the most angelic tone from the flute, making all allied ninja that can hear it, replenish their chakra, and get healed. It also can also put people to sleep, if played slower.
Disadvantages- Takes alot of chakra control to play the instrument. Like the amout of air, it also has to have the right amout of chakra. If played wrong, the tune can weaken your allies.

[Kyu410]

As for personality:
He loves to play pranks but has a good heart. When someone needs help he rushes to help them. At certain times morning or noon he might even be caught off guard and peeks at girls for fun. He doesn't really talk to anyone(especially girls) because he is too nervous to do so. He gets the girls attention by having good looks and impressive jutsu. He consantly trains his chakra so that one day he could be as good as the rest of his clan. His clan is named the "Din" do to their excellency in chakra manipulation and specialize in wind and fire jutsus.

[chaz017]

Wow, you two have been busy. I like the improvements to your character _Eh_ it makes him a lot more well rounded. Great improvements indeed (except maybe the tight pants :p). Since you seem willing to give input I'd love to hear you and Kyu410's thoughts of my characters on page like 16. Feedback is few and far between and I'm curious where my characters are lacking. Especially interested in Hikari since I'm stuck on her jutsu. I'd also be interested in a story on how your character's clan received such a unique bloodline. I'm sure that would be an quite an interesting story.

-Yeah I know I've been slacking in terms of my own thread. I'm just not as active in the forums as I used to be :(. Curse my oh so addictive Tales of the Abys and Xenosaga 3.
Hmm, my free time has been divided between Elfen Lied, FF XII, and a few PS3 games so trust me when I say I feel your pain :D.

[Kyu410]

Chaz017 your characters are good. They remind me of Hinata and Neji.

What I think they lack:
1.They need to have a motivation of why they. Sry if they did.
2. Give them jutsus that the other simply can't learn.
3. Give them people they admire or like. Heck you can add my character to the like list if you want.

As for Hikaru I would say I have a jutsu that she could use.(if you want to use it)
Dance of 1000 blossoms: This jutsu activates a genjutsu satisfying the opponents dream but while their dream comes true(not actually) Hikaru can use her opponent as a chakra source and save up her own chakra.
Time limit: Lasts 3 hours
Disadv. If she does this move without knowing if the person has human or demon chakra she dies.

A move for male Hikaru
Earth style:Blind Shadow Strike- A jutsu that causes the opponent to feel the same pain he does while on ground.(ONLY)
Time limit: 1 hour
Disadv. If he does this jutsu in the air not only will it take all his chakra but the move won't happen.

[Kyu410]

Addition to my character:

Origin of Kekkai Genkai:
The demon once known as Haiga once fell in love with a women of the Byakugan tribe. They had a son but then quickly died off due to Suichi killing them with genjutsu. The genjutsu he did wasn't his own so it wiped his memory and he thought he was an orphan eversince. A Konoha kunoichi took him in when he was 7. Those two were at the same age and were living together for 9 years and even grew close. Soon after when a blue full moon shined more brightly than even the stars Suichi developed a headache. He fainted and woke up in Ceril's(girl he lives with) bed and looked at a mirror. He discovered that his eyes could maintain anything with chakra and stabilize it too. Suichi then dedicated himself to training until he could uncover the mysteries of his eyes.

[_Eh_]

Name: Henshoku Meian {fading shade}
Gender: Male
Family: Father (deceased, unknown), mother (deceased, Nami), sister (alive)
Village: Konoha


Abilities/ Jutsus/ Kekkei Genkai: Able to easily create nin and gen jutsu. Also has high chakra control, and has high amounts of chakra.
Jutsu:
(All Academy Level Jutsu)
-Pressure Arrow (Vertical): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It makes the opponent 3 times heavier, slowing them down.
-Pressure Arrow (Horizontal): A strong amount of gravitational pressure is shot from the hand. It pushes people hard back, and crushes them against the wall.
-Pressure Bullet (Either): A stronger version of Pressure arrow. Costs more chakra.
-Floating Air: Gravity lessens on one’s body, and makes them float, and faster. Lower chakra cost, but if put too hard, my make the user’s hits very weak.
-Dark Pressure Bullet, The black palm: Blasts opponent with huge amounts of gravitational force, which passes through them and into the bone. Then, he says “crush” and it breaks every bone (in the body, or the place attacked) into a thousand tiny fragments. Downside—Very hard to control. If done incorrectly, it may backfire, and break the user’s arm’s bones into fragments.
-5-finger, Pressure on the Joints: Blasts of gravity energy out of the finger tips are put out, and he attacks the opponent’s joints, weakening them, and straining the victim. Downside- Must be within 8 inches of spot to hit target.
-Seventy points, total destruction: Attacks the joints all around the body and disloacates all the joints attacked. Downside—Takes a lot of chakra.

Self made Jutsu-
- The ultimate defense, Palm of white: Creates a gravity field around himself, and reverses any projectile attack. Also many earth, water, and fire are highly affected by this. Air, not so much. This shield holds out any aereial and ground attack. Disadvantage- Maintaining enough chakra for this defense is very hard. Also the control is hard too. This may only be used 1 per 7 days. If any more, it shall completely deplete the chakra reserves in the body, and it will drain the life energy from the user, thus killing them.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hira-Burakku {Black Palm}
-Body is filled with gravity chakra, and everyone with this bloodline trait has the high ability of this cosmic chakra.
The origin:
- Once upon a time, a thought to be “deity” Haku Henshoku {White Shade} was born. Her hair was white when born. They called her “tsuki”, or girl of the tides, and moon. She was born in wave country. The locals, feared her abilities. She could cause tidal waves to crush island nations. She was so very quiet. So quiet. Until, a man named Oshi, or “pressure”, met her. He made her speak, and laugh. Every waking moment spend together they bonded, and fell in love. They married, and the man kept the woman’s maiden name, as a ku to their love. Then one day, they had a child. Her name was Nami, or “wave.” She had black hair like her father, but green eyes, like her mother. She grew up to be a powerful nin, and fell in love, and had twins, the family named them “Neko, and Miaen,” or “Cat, and Fading.” Later, the wave nation felt the bloodline was getting Too strong, and sent assassin. All of their family was murdered, other than the twins, who lived.


Personality: Silent, Very mysterious. His history is filled with darkness and woe. His whole family was brutally murdered by the assassin’s of the mist village. He only lived because he and his sister both helped each other fight off the ninja. His twin sister lost her arm, and he was cut badly on the chest. He doesn’t talk to anyone but his sister, and only trusts his sister. He believes it was his fault his sister lost her arm.
Sensei: Sister, Henshoku Neko.
Weakness: Suffers from Oneirophobia, and from night terrors. He usually tries not to sleep. Do to this fear, he is often exhausted. And most of his jutsu cost a lot of chakra, and are hard to control. Is a bit pessimistic at times.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Age: 15
Likes: Strawberries, Ice, Snow, Rain, The water. He Loves to sit and watch the sun rise and set. Also the same with the moon.
Dislikes: Mist village ninja. Most people who are ignorant. He hates the way people laugh sometimes.
Apperance: Purple eyes, Black hair. Teal highlights. Mask covers half of face, and the mask is demonic. Seems to be a demonic cat. Fish nets cover top half of body, and black vest covers that. Tigh fit pants on legs, for flexibility and grace. All black. The ninja bandana is the belt of this ninja. Has a blue armband, that holds senbon.
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 152 lbs.
Advantages: Good at both range and close attack.
Weapons: None.



___And yes, I agree with Kyu410. Also, to make another comment, put another "lesser" jutsu. The characters have to be well rounded, and also they need weaker jutsu to help them not use their chakra too much on weaker ninja.___

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I redrew it in spare time. I believe this one is better, even tho still blurry.


http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u210/_hear_meh_/PHOT0280.jpg

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Pulsation- Sight of a Thousand Eyes:
The user of this jutsu must not be able to see, whether blind, or blindfolded. This jutsu creates vibrations of the user's body. This eminated a none hearable sound by the opponents, and makes the user to get a "radar" eyesight. They can see heart beat ratio, pulsation of the blood, sounds of voices from 3 miles away, can hear any grounded footsteps, and wings flapping. Can see "images" in mind 360 degrees.

disadvantages: if opponent is floating, not due to air current, the user of this jutsu cannot see them. This skill takes a good chakra level, and excellent chakra control. If used inproperly, can make a blindfolded person actually blind, and the ear drums of a blind person to pop, and bleed, due to the sesitivity of the ear and eyes to vibration.

(This is a jutsu for Hikaru. I made it for chaz017)

[Kyu410]

Eh you've been thinking a lot on a new character. Your character looks cool and the jutsus are pretty good to. I honestly thought Henshoku was a girl at first. Sorry if you find that insulting.

[Ryukage]

Name: Soshi Yuukai Youshiki: Fenikkusu Shippuu no Jutsu ( Element Fusion Style: Phoenix Hurricane Jutsu)
Effect: Using the Kage Bunshin technique the use creates one Clone. Then the original will use one affinity whilst the Clone does an other affinity. In this technique Katon and Fuuton styles are used. The Katon user breathes out fire, the Fuuton user breathes out wind, the two styles combine to perform a blasting wave of fire spinning at the speed of a hurricane.

[Kyu410]

Name: Soshi Yuukai Youshiki: Fenikkusu Shippuu no Jutsu ( Element Fusion Style: Phoenix Hurricane Jutsu)
Effect: Using the Kage Bunshin technique the use creates one Clone. Then the original will use one affinity whilst the Clone does an other affinity. In this technique Katon and Fuuton styles are used. The Katon user breathes out fire, the Fuuton user breathes out wind, the two styles combine to perform a blasting wave of fire spinning at the speed of a hurricane.

Cool jutsu:. :)

[_Eh_]

Eh you've been thinking a lot on a new character. Your character looks cool and the jutsus are pretty good to. I honestly thought Henshoku was a girl at first. Sorry if you find that insulting.

I FIND THAT VERY INSULTING YOU B**** lol Just kidding. I know, thats what i thought at first when i drew it too. I help it to become more masculine tho, but they masculinity is blurred off by the blurryness sadly. oh well, i could always change it to a girl isntantly, with a change of a few words lol

[_Eh_]

Dokudokushii Seppun {Venomous Kiss}: This jutsu allows the user to breathe poison from their mouth. The title is misleading, as it can not only be in kiss for for konoichi assassinnation attempts, but also can be used to poison a person through inhalation. If you blow it on their soup, they die, and if you blow it in their mouth, they die. It takes 10 seconds to 1 minute for full effect, as it quickly eats away the victim's chakra and then after the chakra goes the life force. THe user is not effected by the poison, unless if backfires.

Disadvantages: This skill can only be ussed by konoichis. This is a strictly feminant skill. All me n who try to use it, it backfires, and they baisically kill themselves for trying to be a woman. Also, if the woman that uses this skill does not have enough chakra, the poison will be unaffective. Also if the chakra control isn't acceptable, they accidently kill themselves.

[_Eh_]

General:
Name: Omote Hina {Hina=Doll Omote=Face}
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5’ 3”
Weight: 103 lbs
Quote: “Those who stare and hang on to their past, shall never be ready for the future.”
Village: Hidden Sound, currently- Konoha.
Likes: Being alone, silence, reading, writing, learning ninja jutsu, and loves the moon and sun.
Dislikes: Ones who believe she is worthless, hates being in huge crowds, and hates being in front of an audience.
Weakness: She has a fear of big crowds, and has stage fright. She also has a inferiority complex to those who ridicule her. She becomes distant and moody easily, and can act upon emotion.

History:
She was born, and then ran to the streets as an orphan at the age of 5. Her crystalline blue eyes radiated with innocence. Her hair, fine, was black as raven’s feathers. She always seemed distant to those she spoke to, and those she listened to, always got a intelligible answer. She does not blame her parents for leaving her. She was born into a family called the “Ongaku”{music}. They were some of the richest ninja in the leaf village. They first had a child, a cruel child, named “Oui” {pale}. He was cold hearted, and grew up to be a ruthless ninja, one with no mercy for those who went against him, neither in the chuunin tournament, or on jounin missions. Then the man had a bastard child. He raped a woman of the name Ouchi {pit}. He left the bastard child to Ouchi and thus came Hina.
Ouichi always was cruel to Hina, due to her being the child of her rapist. She beat her, and put her down and called her “his” child. The demon child. What she didn’t know, was what was inside this brilliant child. Love, logic, and caring. She was always caring for others, even though she was hurting herself. She had the privilege of becoming a ninja, even though it would cost her angry mother money, she would be there on tuition. She soon became the most renown in her class. She past every exam in flying colors. Then one day, her father came back. He yelled at the mother. He said “I told you to kill this child, this piece of nothing. Now that you have disobeyed me, I think I shall take something from you” Hina knew who. Herself, and probably her mother too. So Hina ran, and hid. She escaped to the Leaf Village, and trained herself.
It has been 9 years since then. Hina has learned over 200 jutsu since then. She has become a Chunnin level nin, though she has never proven it, as she left before she could participate for the exams. She does not care about her father or mother, and does not wish to seek “revenge.” She just loves things the way it is, to be alone with her, and her jutsu. After all, a girl that is 14 and has create over 4 jutsu by herself, can handle anything right?

Jutsu, demons, seals, and Kekkei Genkai:
Kekkei Genkai- No.
Demons: None
Seals: Yes, done by her grandfather at the age of 2 months. This seal gives her the ability to use an amazing amount of chakra. Her chakra levels are close to that of Naruto’s, depending on her mood. She also has the perfect chakra control.
Jutsu-
Dokudokushii Seppun {Venomous Kiss}: This jutsu allows the user to breathe poison from their mouth. The title is misleading, as it can not only be in kiss for for konoichi assassination attempts, but also can be used to poison a person through inhalation. If you blow it on their soup, they die, and if you blow it in their mouth, they die. It takes 10 seconds to 1 minute for full effect, as it quickly eats away the victim's chakra and then after the chakra goes the life force. The user is not effected by the poison, unless if backfires.

Disadvantages: This skill can only be used by konoichis. This is a strictly feminine skill. All me n who try to use it, it backfires, and they basically kill themselves for trying to be a woman. Also, if the woman that uses this skill does not have enough chakra, the poison will be ineffective. Also if the chakra control isn't acceptable, they accidentally kill themselves
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Jutsu: Spikes of Grass {Kasui no Kusa}
-Grass is grown around the user, and can be controlled by the user to grow, harden and wrap at will. These grass strands can spike people with needle like spikes. These spikes are easily cut, but are abundant. They can wrap and immobilize the opponent as well.

Disadvantages: The ground must be fertile enough to hold a little plant life. The soil doesn't have to be RICH, but enough to grow a cactus. Have to have good chakra control, to control these grass spikes.

Jutsu: Summoning- Button Eyed Doll of the Sun
This jutsu, summons the creature, the button eyed doll to appear. This doll has incredible speed, and has razor sharp nails, that are unbreakable or bendable. It has dark hair, white paper colored skin, and stands at the height of 7’. It is thin, and is filled with shadows. It’s skin is not flammable,but if set to flames it becomes more vicious, as it has a fire around its body now, and cannot be blocked. This can be unassembled to split apart into different pieces. Its weakness is if it get soaked totally, it slows down majorly, and will fail to work.
Jutsu: Summon- The Scare Crow of the Moon.
This jutsu summons a scarecrow that can throw senbon like straw at the opponent, and can split apart, like it’s opposite the Button Eyed Doll. It has every ability the doll has except the nails. This one’s weakness is fire. But if it gets to water, it will grow clones, and become more vicious.

[Kyu410]

Eh you've always got a cool character up your sleeve huh:). Here's my newest character.

Name: Megumi
Gender:Female
Element: Fire, Lightning
Age: 15
Rank:Jonin
Family: Feudal Lord
Kekkai Genkai: None
jutsu: Kage Bunshin no jutsu

Own jutsus:
Fire Style: Demon blaze- This jutsu pummels the opponent in tons of flames. It then boils down through the skin and disrupts chakra usage.
Disadv. The jutsu takes lots of chakra and can kill the user if their determination is low.

Lightning Kiss- This jutsu allows the user to paralyse the victim and feeds off their chakra at the same time.
Disadv. If the user does this more than 4 times a day their chakra and the opponents chakra becomes one.

Bio.- Megumi is a girl like any other yet she has been hunted many times for her bounty. After trying to kill her father for killing her mother she currently works as a mercenary due to the fact she holds a gift for the man she may one day marry and pass jutsu knowledge to their child.

[_Eh_]

Yes, wait till my next one, im working on that person now. =]

[JeyaniOchuuga]

First Character I Made Hope You Enjoy!


Name:Jeyani Ochuuga
Age: 16 Years Old
Gender:Male
BirthDate: July 22

Personality: Filled with Hate and Sadness but doesn't show it. Caring for people just like him and helps them control it. Spoils street villagers and treats them to dinner. So he is very Kind.

Family: Ochuuga Clan
Family Symbol: A Blue and White Sphere cut in half from top to bottom. split Mist Symbol On Both Sides. representing The Loneliness In The Clan.( Not very known Clan)

Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 135lbs

Favorite Reply:"Awesome" or "Ya Right...You Poorly Trained Piece of Orange"
Quote: "You Know...Being A Ninja Is Hard...But You Gotta Be Strong To Withstand The Hard Parts About It"

Element:Ice, Water

Rank: Jounin
Village: Hidden Mist Village, Currently In Konoha. Hidden In The Leaves

Likes: Training to become stronger, eating shrimp dumplings(is a sucker for them), any seafood really, Eating with his new friends in Konoha at the All You Can Eat Buffet, and watching the stars at night(helps him calm down)

Dislikes: His Clans killer, coconut, people who critisize him, seeing new things, and getting C or D rank missions.

Appearance: He wears his headband hanging around his neck(TYPICAL). a Black Hoodie short sleeved. With the Ochuuga Symbol on the arm sleeves and Back. White Long Sleeve. White Shorts. black Ninja Training shoes. Black Fingerless Gloves. Uses Both Hands but Puch is on Right. His belt is Black and White and has drapes coming from the front and back of the belt. Dark brown hair(looks black). Pitch black eyes. Hair Is swayed to the Left. Has long bangs(about 8 inches. LOL),half the size of his bangs(4 inches) is the size of his hair in the back of his head. Wears 650lbs weights on his legs and 640lbs weights on his arms. He Has a very average type body for a 16 year old boy. Just very stronger.

Fighting Style: He has his own fighting style he made up called Juni Eishu Style(joo-nee_aye-shoo:its not japanese i just named it that. lol) A fighting style where he hits his opponents with his palms and hits pressure points and Chakra Points. He Original does fly and flip kicks, but in STYLE.
Please Note: Jeyani Knows the Human Body very well and its chakra and pressure points.

Signature Move: Tornado Breaker: A series of 5 kicks in 4 secs (mostly hits)1st 2 kicks in the face from R-L 1 kick in the stomache making the opponent to crouch, lands 1 knee to the face making the opponent come back up and a fast spin(similar to Lees Leaf Hurricane) kick to the stomache making them Fly away from him.

Signature Jutsu: Ice Sphere Jutsu(info)needs perfect precision mostly used with tornado breaker. A Sphere Of Ice that freezes wherever it has hit the opponent. which Jeyani Uses his Senbon to Finish Them Off

Story:
Jeyani grew up in a wealthy and secure clan called The Ochuuga Clan. Though the Clan wasnt well known they were still endangered. Jeyani was the heir to the throne. He had started his Ninja training at the Age of 5. In his sleep his whole Family and Clan were asassinated by a Shinobi named Itachi himself. He didnt know this. While sitting alone on the Hurani Bridge he had encountered Zabuza. Zabuza could see that Jeyani was filled with Hate and Revenge. So he took him in Along with Haku. Haku and Jeyani were like brothers, but they sworn themselves to Zabuza first. Haku and Jeyani trained themselves In Ice type Jutsus. Zabuza has also taught Jeyani very good Taijutsu similar to the Hyuuga Clan Style. 10 years has passed..Jeyani and Haku were already S class Criminals for killing 4 rich families and Robbery. They were Wanted In every Village. In the battle in the Land Of Waves, Zabuza and Haku have gotten into a fight with Squad 7 and Kakashi. Zabuza had told him to flee and he was out of his hands. A year passed and Jeyani was not named a S class criminal anymore. He traveled to the Village hidden in the Leaves hoping that he would find his Clans killer and finally get his revenge.Though he did not show it, Jeyani was still filled with Sadness and Hatred. He controlled that hate into doing missions. So, Jeyani became a Jounin, but he still represents his Village by wearing his Mist Village Headband. He is very good friends with Hinata Hyuuga ever since he came into the Leaf Village. After a while Hinata and Jeyani go out on missions, travel together, and they are starting to date(Sorry i got the idea). Once Jeyani had told Hinata the whole story about his life style she couldnt help herself to cry because her life was kind of the same way before. She told him he could change and he did for the one he loved. Hinata knew he was a S class criminal before but this is the present and that was the past. Jeyani is Jounin and has responsibilities. (nothing else right now i will update if you guys can give me some ideas. HeHeHe)

Note: Im Sorry this story is kind of mixing into the REAL naruto story, but i had to make something up and hes so similar to Haku and his hatred and sadness matched up with how Zabuza met Haku...i think.Well ya...I Hope You UnderStand.

Im Listing 6 of Each. Ive Got Plenty More

Advanced Taijutsu Moves Mastered:

1. Kick of A Thousand Stings(a combo of 17 kicks throwing Senbon Durin Each Kick)
Advantages: Jeyani specifically kicks them in places that they cannot move and throws senbon in pressure oints so that they feel it while paralyzed for each kick.
Disadvantages: After this attack Jeyani cannot moves his arms or legs, for about 3 minutes. He usually only does this attack on a last resort.

2. Lonesome crush(a kick from above smashing them into the ground)
Advantages: Kicks Them in the head to be specific. anything that happens when you get hit HARD on the head.
Disadvantages: Cannot perform if he has no Chakra or Movement(obviously).

3. Senbon Slasher(senbon in the middle of all fingers slashing them with the senbon like Claws)
Advantages: Cuts his opponent deeply. throws senbon afterwards.
Disadvantages: Usually cuts himself during this attack, causing him not to be able to use him palm fighting the rest of the fight.

4. KoKoKo K0 Combo(a continuous combo of 40 punches and 40 kick in less than 20 seconds)
Advantages: In this attack the opponent is EXTREMELY injured.
Disadvantages: Becomes EXTREMELY weak after this attack. With his fast movements in the attack, he loses his sight for a short period of time.

5. Ochuuga Barrage(similar to sasuke.naruto and lee's moves. Shadow Clone Jutsu or Kage Bunshin No Jutsu creating 3 clones. 1stclone hits enemy backwards. 2nd clone does 4 kicks getting the enemy into the air. Original grabs enemies LorR arm..throws them into the ground. wihle coming down the 1st and 2nd clone front flip and smash their kicks into his stomach while original used RorL kick in the middle of 1st and 2nd clones leg.)
Advantages:May cause the opponent to become unconcious. Opponent loses breath.
Disadvantages: Loses a massive amount of chakra. though he has sprain his ankle before on this attack, this also may happen again.


Advanced Mist Village Jutsus:

1. Ice Mirror Jutsu(same as Hakus Jutsu)
Advantages: Jeyani does not let the enemy inside outside of the Ice Barrier. A barrier that starts out the battle...and also ends it.
Disadvantages: Melts Instantly At the Contact of Fire.

2. Water Prism Jutsu(similar to Zabuzas Jutsu)
Advantages: This jutsu works really well in a hostage situation. =D
Disadvantages: Doesnt drown the opponent in that situation. =(

3. Ice Style:Tornado Blitz Jutsu(a frozen Twist of snow with senbon running through it)Caution: a Killing Jutsu
Advantages: Kills The opponent instantly at contact. is a tracking jutsu so the opponent cannot dodge. Unless they do a Defenseive Type Jutsu or Substitution.
Disadvantages: Takes out Massive Amounts of Chakra.

4. Shadow Clone Jutsu or Kage Bunshin No Jutsu
Advantages: Can trick the opponent of the original Shinobi. Can be used for Combo attacks.
Disadvantages: The clones Poof Away after hard contact from the enemy or opponent.

5. Hidden Mist Jutsu(makes a Very Thick mist making the opponent blind for the time being)
Advantages: Can strike the opponent at any moment without him/her noticing it. Good asassination Attempt
Disadvantages: 1.3% of chakra drained each minute until the Jutsu is released.

6. Water Style: Drowning Tidal Wave Jutsu(like the name...drowns the oppenent in a giant tidal wave)
Advantages: Used as a open killing Jutsu. the opponent MAY escape depending on his shape and being outnumbered.
Disadvantages: Is easy for the opponent to escape this jutsu.

Note: Has mastered all Gennin and Chounin and Jounin Lvl Ice and Water Type Jutsus, Mastered His Own Ice type Jutsus, cant do other elemental Jutsus other then Water and Ice. He knows all original Jutsus at Gennin, Chounin, and Jounin lvls Such as Substitution. Cloning. Chakra Draining. Teleporting. All Other Stuff.

Thank you i hope you enjoyed Jeyani(my) story. i will update a Picture Of him as soon as i can. i will also be updating his History. This one was kind of STUPID. but lik i said before i havent revised it. reply on this thread to tell me how i should improve it.
~Thanks

[Kyu410]

JeyaniOchuuga I like the way your character is built. But there has to be some downfalls to his moves. Something like his muscles get soar after doing that or his chakra becomes extremely low.

[JeyaniOchuuga]

Oh Ok. Ill update it.

Updated read it again if you'd like i came up with some ideas.

[Dan the Man]

Here's yet another character from me. Then again... that's kind of obvious.

Name: Yumano, Shiten
Age: 39

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Shiten.jpg

Bio:
Shiten is a wandering monk who acts as a messenger for the various ninja villages. He was born in a village without ninja, and when he was 10, saw a fight between two opposing ninja clans, and was fascinated by the wide range of techniques the many people used. He trained his mind, body, and chakra for years, and when he reaced the age of 18, he left to see all of the ninja villages in the world. Throughout his travels, he would learn various techniques from ninja instructors and other people, gaining a large amount of various jutsu. Now, at age 40, he rarely learns any new techniques, but wanders from country to country, learning about fugitive ninja, and gathering information which later becomes printed in the thousands of Bingo Books throughout every ninja village. He is a respected figure to all who know him. His current work, under request from the Hokage of Konoha, is to gather information on Akatsuki.


Shiten has no special jutsu, but has a special attack used from firing concentrated needles of chakra from his fingertips. The needles puncture the skin, and trigger numbing and muscle spasm impulses in the nerves, causing the area hit to twitch, and develop a feeling said to feel like a severely strong case of pins and needles. He is also skilled in numerous elemental jutsu.

His fighting style is similar to aikido, focusing in throws, and pressure points while using minimal force. While Shiten is a formidible fighter, his skills are sub par compared to a fully trained ninja, and favors running when facing a really strong opponent.

There we go, hope all of you like him.

[zwolf]

you rock at drawing i wish i could draw any way i have a new character

name:sunto lee

family:father rock lee mother n/a

clothing:shopgen shino's exept all black with a anbu mask

quote:your mind my be playing tricks on you

sommoing:staff of kasai

chakra elament's:fire ice

justu

kekki genkai:lee's unrivaled speed

flame of the rising dragon
hit's the enmey in the chin focues his ice chakra out to creat a little pillar of ice then jumps up foucuses his fire to his feet kicks the enmey down hitting him into the pillar then landing on his chest and the pillars ice melts into boiling water

infrno of hell
type:genjustu
creats a ball of ice then blasts his fire out of his body then jumps on the already stuned use a genjust simalry to MS but can't mantain it for long due to his low chakra levels

[shonen2007]

Here's my made up character.

Name:Riky

Age:14

Main justu:Tetkanmu or light jab

Primary justu:Shodo or shadow ball, fira or fire blast,ica or ice blade, windar or wind defense, eartherth or earth spike earth, chidori

secret abililty: Ten tailed goldenlion change aperance is his hair grows gold,lines on face for mane,eyes lose pupils and turns gold,stronger tekanmu

[_Eh_]

I like your person dan ^.^... here is my third character i made.

Name: Happou Taki {Happou= Foaming, Taki=Waterfall}
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Height: 5’ 4”
Weight: 108 lbs.
Quote: “Forever jaded, I shall seek my revenge in the night.”
Village: born, Village Hidden in the Waterfall, now, in Konoha.
Likes: The metallic taste of blood. The smell of mist. Dancing flames,
And Lo Mien noodles.
Dislikes: The smell of oranges, the smell of tea. She absolutely hates raspberries, and smiling at stupid jokes. But most of all, everyone in her way.
Weakness: She toys too much with her opponents, like a duel to the death is a game. She often acts rashly, and uses too much chakra on lesser nin, whom she kills.

History-
Born into the village hidden in the waterfall, she was trained to be the strongest ninja in her village. She hated it. Everyone expected so much of her. She ran away. Away into the forest, and trained by herself. She blackened her make-up and slashed her headband. She is no longer a puppet of the Village in the Waterfall. She is a rogue. Her level is equal to that of an ANBU black op ninja. She plans to seek the powers of all the Kages. And lusts for the blood of them. In her past, she was imperfect. Now, she can say she will kill you, and back it up.

Jutsu, and other things:
Kekkei Genkai: No
Demon: No
Seals: Yes. The seal of the Waterfall Village. This creates her to have a unique blood lust form, in which her already high chakra amount doubles and her fury is unmatchable, if the seal is opened by her subconscious.
Jutsu-
Double Air Flame Palm, Turn to Ash- The user’s palms turn on fire, yet their skin is unaffected. They use punches and jabs to blast super heated air at the opponent, severely burning them.
Disadvantages: Can harm thyself if chakra control is not well.
Jutsu-
Draco Uppercut- A uppercut, in which you blast a fireball whilst upper cutting the opponent. This usually burns the area severely, where they hit is made contact.
Disadvantages: Pretty easily avoided.
Black Mamba 5- point Nerve Strike (Taijutsu) - A very quick hit of 5 points on the back. This disables motor functions, and the victim is temporarily paralyzed. This attack is a taijutsu.
Disadvantages: Has to be within the limit of 5 seconds, or else it fails.
Draco Lung Breath Combo- A shadow clone trio is used for this. A blast of 7 consecutive fireball jutsu, then the user’s shadow clone runs between the 3rd and 4th fireball, and utilizes a secret attack from the fireballs, then the second clone attacks from behind, and the third one attacks from above.
Disadvantages: This has to be used very quickly or else is ineffective, and the user has to have good taijutsu skills. It is recommended you had a weapon.
Oil Leaves, Fire Rain: The user throws up leaves covered with oil, and lights then with a fireball jutsu.
Disadvantages: Mostly a distraction jutsu.
Blood Ritual, Lust of the Demons: She cuts herself on the wrist, then makes a circle in the air, and hen sucks her own blood, making her curse seal activate, and then she barrages the opponent with vicious attacks.
Weapons: Zanputo. A huge sword, hers has a red handle, and is in the shape of a bastard sword.

[Hentai Guy]

In addition to my other character (which you can find here (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=807589)) I've started working on a more villianous type.

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Name: Kuruma Tenma
Sex: Female
Age: 37
Height: 1.397 m (5'5")
Weight: 54 kg (120 lbs)
Hair: Black with a few streaks of gray,
Eyes: Brown irises, but her left eye is semi-filled with blood, so it appears as a rather unpleasant red around it
Blood Type: O+
Village: None
Rank: S-Rank criminal
Style: Assassination


Family:
Sisters – Mashin, Mitsukai, Ada, Tsuriai, Heki, Ranmyaku, Tentou, and Sennyo

Bio: Tenma is one of the legendary Kyoudai no Kuruma, a group of nine sisters, each one an S-rank ninja of great renown. Each member has their particular politics and behavior, many times clashing with each other in battles that threaten all around them. Tenma is proud of her status as the most depraved member of the group. She is an assassin by trade, but she is much worse than your average cutthroat. A sadistic woman with no regard for anything other than her own pleasure and needs. If it serves her purpose she will kill, torture, betray and perform other acts so heinous that they are almost unspeakable.

Personality: She is a true psychotic with borderline personality disorder and unipolar mania. She is almost always in an apparent good mood, and rarely complains about her troubles. Her demeanor is not always discernable at first, but any who get in her way or attract her interest quickly learn the depths of this woman's evil. She has spent many years forging her insanity into a fine edge. After many years she has become able to bring her madness to bear as needed giving her an alien, but disturbingly accurate insight. She is partially blind in her left eye, but pays it little mind.


Ninjutsu
Name: Fukyuu no Souhou (Touch of Rot)
Type: A-Rank, Offensive, Short Range
With this technique a user can disrupt the cellular bonds of another creature's body with a touch. The result is an extremely painful condition where skin, flesh and bone literally melt away from the point of contact. This process can take hours or days, depending on the subject, and will inevitably lead to death unless untreated. Conventional hospital techniques can stop it, but the damage is usually permanent, while healing jutsu are much more effective

Name: Suiton: Dokudokushii Kanro (Water Release: Poisonous Nectar)
Type: B-Rank, Offensive/Supplemental, Short Range
This technique converts any quantity of liquid into an arsenical poison. The user performs the seals and touches the liquid to be converted, which appears to boil for a few brief moments. It's only limitation is the amount of chakra the user is willing to lose to the technique. Once initiated, the technique will use all chakra the user has available until the entire body is converted which can quickly lead to chakra exhaustion or even death. If a user runs completely out of chakra during the technique, the conversion process immediately stops.

Name: Kokoro Joumae (Heart Lock)
Type: B-Rank/A-Rank, Offensive, Short Range/Long Range
This technique is primarily used for assassination purposes. It impedes the nerve signals between the brain and the heart of the target, most often leading to immediate cardiac arrest. Normally this technique requires touch, but Tenma has developed a version that merely requires the target be in clear view of the user.

Name: Yorokobi (Rapture)
Type: S-Rank, Offensive, Short Range
Tenma's ultimate assassination technique. The user drives their palm into the target, and then extends flows of chakra that bind with the target's circulatory system. The user then pulls their hand away sharply while drawing the charka flows back. If performed correctly, this technique will rip the majority of the target's veins and arteries out of their body, a wound that is almost irrevocably fatal. This technique takes roughly thirty seconds to perform from start to finish, during which both the user and the target are almost completely open to attack. Additionally this is extraordinarily taxing on the user’s body, requiring days of rest to completely recuperate.


Genjutsu

Name: Fukyuu Yuurei (Immortal Ghost)
Type: C-Rank, Supplementary, Short Range
This technique affects a person's senses to the point where they think they are incapable of interacting with the physical world. They see the world in a colorless misty vision where people are faceless shadows, sounds are faint and almost unintelligible. They have no sense of touch, and while they can still manipulate objects, they are unaware that they're having any actual effect. A person of exceptionally high intelligence or strong will may be able to figure out/overcome the psychological portion of the jutsu and determine that they can still affect the physical world, but are still hampered by the impaired senses.

Name: Hateshinai Shikumi (Unending Death Foreseeing)
Type: A-Rank, Subdual, Medium Range
This is similar to the traditional Shikumi no Jutsu, but Tenma has improved on it to lock the victim in an endless cycle of seeing their own horrible death. This technique requires direct eye contact to initiate and will continue unceasingly until forcibly broken, it is said that Tenma uses this technique to bind prisoners without ever putting them under lock and key.

Name: Kichigai no Souhou (Touch of Madness)
Type: B-Rank, Supplementary, Short Range
Tenma imparts a bit of her madness through touch. Targets can suffer from a wide range of ailments including dementia, mania, depression, delirium, and psychotic episodes. For a brief time after imparting her touch of madness, Tenma is extraordinarily lucid.

Name: Kichigai Bakufu (Madness Cateract)
Type: S-Rank, Supplementary, Long Range (up to 2 kilometers from origin point)
This is Tenma's last resort jutsu. She sets the range depending on her chakra amount and need. When performed correctly, this jutsu unleashes a veritable tidal wave of negative mental energy that afflicts all within range with the same psychotic madness of Tenma herself. Most cannot deal with this immediate influx of insanity, and are reduced to violent monsters with little sense of reason who are as likely to turn upon eachother as anything else until they manage to get control of themselves again. Those already suffering from forms of psychosis are not immune to this technique, but they are much better equipped to deal with the effects, and thus are more likely to maintain their normal persona. This technique isn't without it's drawbacks. It forces Temna's own madness upon her in a way that she can't dissemble or compensate for, reducing her to a terrified childlike mental state in which she will run away from anything that threatens her. If unable to run she will fight by lashing out in all directions with any and every jutsu she can manage unthinkingly and without regard for chakra. Tenma only uses this technique to escape from extremely dire situations. The initial effect usually wears off in ten to twenty minutes, though psychological scars may remain, while Tenma is affected for as long as a week or more.

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She's still a little thrown together, and I'm not sure about the drawbacks for Yorokobi (they seem a little general)...but I kinda like her.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Kakushou

-Gender: Originally N/A. Appears as a male after it's desire came true.

-Village: Kouengakure (Village hidden in the flame).

-Age: 14 (since his "birth" but appears to be 18).

-Family: None. He is the physical manifestation of an ancient blaze that became sentient and desired a human form.

-Characteristics: Crimson hair and eyes that seem to burn with the intensity of the sun. Covered almost entirely in what seems to be heat resistant clothing. Most assume that is because he will burn out if he doesn't wear them but the truth is that he doesn't wish to burn the things arund him. Completely immune to any Katon jutsu or explosives (except for his own).

-History: Born from a desire to posses a human form an ancient blaze sought to experience the pleasures of man. But it never could because everything it touched it reduced to ash. Cursing it's fate the flame roared to the Heavens for help. It received it's wish but every wish that comes true has a price to be paid. While the Heavens granted the flame a human form they did not remove his nature as an eternal flame. Now trapped within a human body that could only still just burn everything the flame sought to seal itself away for a long time. But as luck would have it the being was discovered by Kouengakure and was soon made it's protector. This is where the blaze took on it's self-inspired identity, Kakushou.

Jutsu: all are Katon based (what a shocker :rolleyes:).

Katon: Akumaetoku (Fire element: Devil's Grasp). Kakushou will remove one of his gloves and attempt to grab the opponent. If succesful the enemy shall suffer punishing flames that can easily cause 2nd degree burns. Sadly this jutsu can only be maintained for a fixed period of time given Kakushou's predicament.

Katon: Keanbunshin no jutsu (Fire clone). Like most bunshin except these are made of fire. They can explode on command but are confined to a medium (say a tree or a log).

Katon: Tenpu-Kosai-ryu Kai (Flame Dragon of Heaven Release). Kakushou takes on the form of a blazing crimson dragon that will first rise and then descend upon the enemy to completely inscinerate them. Even if they dodge it the forst time they will feel the excess heat form that for. Problem is, Kakushou runs the incredibly high risk of burning out while in this form. It's good for about 5 minutes. Anymore and he will die.

[Hentai Guy]

Katon: Keanbunshin no jutsu (Fire clone). Like most bunshin except these are made of fire. They can explode on command but are confined to a medium (say a tree or a log).

I really like this one, specifically because of the medium required...a nice variant off the normal clone jutsu you see.


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This is a continuation of my Kyoudai no Kuruma thing.

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Name: Kuruma Tsuriai
Sex: Female
Age: 19
Height: 1.27 m (5'0")
Weight: 38.5 kg (85 lbs)
Hair: White
Eyes: Very light pink
Blood Type: O+
Village: None
Rank: S-Rank
Style: None

Family:
Sisters – Mashin, Mitsukai, Ada, Tenma, Heki, Ranmyaku, Tentou, and Sennyo

Bio: Tsuriai is one of the legendary Kyoudai no Kuruma, a group of nine sisters, each one an S-rank ninja of great renown. Each member has their particular politics and behavior, many times clashing with each other in battles that threaten all around them. Tsuriai is an anomaly in the Kuruma, in as far as she is the only one to possess a Kekkei Genkai yet not be a ninja in the classical sense. Kuruma excels at hand-to-hand fighting, but has no jutsu due to her Sa-kuru no Kyuui; a power that arguably makes her the most powerful Kyoudai. She has taken no sides in the struggle between her sisters, although she is on friendly terms with Ranmyaku and Sennyo. She has no known objectives, although she has been known to show up and quell struggles between her sisters that have gotten out of hand.

Personality: Tsuriai is very soft spoken even when angry. In fact, most things about her seem soft. She is very sensitive to her condition (albinism) and easily gets her feelings hurt when people treat her differently because of it. She enjoys calligraphy, gymnastics, and swimming (although her vulnerability to the sun makes her swimming trips either brief or nocturnal). She is the youngest of the Kuruma, yet shows wisdom beyond her years. She is introspective, but not depressed--and she stresses moderation above all else.


Kekkei Genkai
Name: Sa-kuru no Kyuui (Circle of Peace)
Type: Kekkei Genkai, Long Range (range varies)
This technique prevents any creature within range from producing, shaping, molding, manipulating, expelling, or otherwise affecting chakra. All chakra-based jutsus and techniques fizzle when they enter effective range. No Kekkei Genkai that requires chakra to operate (Byakugan, Sharingan, Hyoton, etc.) will function within the field. While taijutsu is still effective fundamentally, any chakra infusion (such as many of Juken and Hoken’s attacks as well as Tsunade and Sakura’s strength) will be dispelled. As a result, Tsuriai cannot use any jutsu requiring chakra and must rely on physical ability alone in combat. The range of this effect begins approximately 500 meters away from Tsuriai, where chakra is impeded but not completely stopped. At a range of about 400 meters all chakra manipulation becomes impossible and all chakra effects are stopped. Tsuriai can control this range, and by focusing herself can increase its total effective range to over a two mile radius around her, although this takes great effort and cannot be sustained for extremely long periods of time. With effort, she can also repress this ability, bringing her range down to about 30 meters, though this takes just as much effort as expanding it. Outside of that, the Sa-kuru no Kyuui is always active.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Ok, the series needs more kick-ass women (actually you can never have enough to begin with). As such I came up with this idea during my Greek and Roman mythology course. Warning: perverts should not read this if they got no self-control.

Name: Mikonichi (Wild one).

Gender: Female.

Age: 15.

Characteristics: Long untamed black hair (she adds a red streak to it after a certain incident), very alluring figure but quite dangerous. Her scent seems to give off a distinct smell of the fresh morning grass.

Group/Village: Banteki Kunoichi (Savage Kunoichi).

History: The Banteki Kunoichi are part of an all-female group that reside within the boundries of the Fire Country's forests. They are scattered all over and their dwellings consist more of approximetly 500-1000 people. Each of these groups has a leader and will follow them to their graves. Every 5 years they infiltrate nearby cities for food and kidnap a certain amount of young men (however they make sure that their targets are unmarried for they value every woman as a "sister" or "relative") there hoping that spending time with them will lead to more kunoichi being born within that society. The Banteki Kunoichi consider men to be inferior and often treat them as slaves upon kidnapping although the kidnapped males are often rescued with little problem. This isn't to say that they would not respect or perhaps even fall in love with a man that proves to be stronger than them.

This way of life was all that Mikonichi ever knew. She lived for her comrades and battle. For her this was as much of a part of her life as was her heart to her body. Naturally she never would have thought that her life would soon change on her very first raid on Konohagakure. It all seemed like a routine job to her: smash through the gates, cause a panic and swipe what you can. Unfortunately fate seemed to have other plans for her that day since the very first opponent she ran into was none other than Konohagakure #1 Unpredictable Ninja himself, Naruto. Not being one to hesitate Mikonchi initiated the battle but was cought off guard when her target vanished in a puff of smoke. She looked up to see her target re-appear with a screeching spiral in his hand ready to strike her down with. Now as I hinted before fate can be quite strange at times and it chose at that precise moment to snap the support on the clothing that concealed Mikonichi's bare breasts. That was just enough for Naruto to lose his concertration and the Fuuton: Rasengan vanished from his hand. However the momentum he had built up was too big and his open hand grasped Mikonichi's bare chest and the 2 literally knocked each other out upon the collision that followed.

Naturally this lead to an even bigger complication than what Konohagakure could have bargained for. You see, while casualties on both sides was prevented Naruto's little encounter could not. By the Banteki Kunoichi custom, if one of their maidens should lose to a man in battle they are to follow him and serve him until they become stronger of the 2 in a later battle. However there was an additional problem. Since Naruto managed to grope the bare chest of a pure maiden his actions were taken as a proposal to Mikonichi. Desiring to prevent further conflict with the Banteki Kunoichi, Tsunade ordered Naruto to follow the customs and hope that the girl eventually beats him. But as a strange twist, instead of hating Naruto Mikonichi ended up falling in love with him. As a sign of her devotion to him, she died a red streak on her hair. Now what is poor Naruto to do?...

(Many think that Mikonichi is just tricking Naruto into lowering his guard down so she can kill him but Mikonichi's feelings for him are in fact genuine. The entire world doesn't matter to her as much as the safety of this little blonde knuckle-head :heh:.)

Fighting style and jutsu: The Banteki Kunoichi style of fighting is considered completely unorthodox by most "city" ninja. They focus every bit of their energy into purely destructive physical force. In other words, fighting one of them is like fighting the very force of nature. Also, being raised in the wild forests of the Fire Counry for so long has granted them the ability to talk to and aquire the aid of the forest's beasts. Each member has at least one beast that they are able to summon up in battle. Mikonichi's favorite is a tiger with crimson fur (Fang) but she also has a poisonous spider (Riku), a garuda (Lupa) and a monkey (Gigi) at her disposal.

Taijutsu

Nakigoetsuki (Crying Moon): This is a rising kick at an opponet's abdomen that serves to disrupt the stomach acids in the opponent and cause them to lose their focus. This is most effective when they are in the air.

Yajuuishuu (Swarm of Bests): A series of wild punches that have little aim but are devastating should they connect (the impact is enough to shatter bone). Blocking them is not an option so evasion is the best choice considering it's short range.

-Phew, man that was a killer.

[Hentai Guy]

This is a continuation of my Kyoudai no Kuruma thing.

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Name: Kuruma Mitsukai
Sex: Female
Age: 28
Height: 1.9 m (6'3")
Weight: 72.5 kg (160 lbs)
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Blood Type: O+
Village: None
Rank: S-Rank
Style: Taijutsu

Family:
Sisters – Mashin, Tenma, Ada, Tsuriai, Heki, Ranmyaku, Tentou, and Sennyo

Bio: Mitsukai is one of the legendary Kyoudai no Kuruma, a group of nine sisters, each one an S-rank ninja of great renown. Each member has their particular politics and behavior, many times clashing with each other in battles that threaten all around them. Mitsukai fancies herself a champion of good, and will go out of her way to help those in need. Her fighting style is fairly straight-forward, but undeniably powerful.

Personality: Mitsukai is a joy to be around. She is reserved yet radiant, quick to smile and slow to anger. She does, however, violently oppose her sisters Tenma, Mashin, and Ada; engaging them in battle whenever they are seen.


Taijutsu
Name: Juusan Tenshi no Sutoraiku (Strike of the Thirteen Angels)
Type: B-Rank, Offensive, Short Range
A powerful chain of attacks delivered with killing force. The user first grabs both their opponent’s arms and pulls them into a double-knee strike to the chest. The second blow comes when the user then flips backwards and lands with both knees on the opponent’s chest. The third is a powerful neck wrench that imparts enough force to flip both the user and the target backwards into a suplex. The forth is a vicious neck twist that spins the user and the target in opposite directions followed by a flipping kick to the face. The fifth involves catching the leg of the opponent and slamming them forcefully into the ground. The user then throws the opponent into the air followed by a double spinning kick for the sixth and seventh blows that juggle them higher into the air. The eighth blow is an uppercut that catches the falling opponent leading directly into the ninth blow which is following through the punch to drive the opponent over the user’s head and into the ground. A low spinning kick constitutes the tenth blow as well as flips the opponent around so the eleventh blow, a nearly vertical sidekick, can fling the opponent into the air again. The user jumps after the opponent and delivers a double axe-handle blow driving the opponent back down again for the twelfth strike. The thirteenth and final strike is achieved when the user falls back down to the opponent and delivers a flying stomp as they land.

Name: Sa-ti Megaton Sumasshu (Thirty Megaton Smash)
Type: C-Rank, Offensive, Short/Long Range
After tripping an opponent, the user grabs both the target’s ankles and begins spinning them around, using them like a human cudgel. Finally, once an extremely high level of speed is reaches, the user releases both a burst of chakra and the opponent sending them flying. This high velocity throw will additionally destroy things in the path of the flying enemy, making it work as both a short and long range attack.

Name: Kyuuten no Dageki (Strike of the Heavens)
Type: A-Rank, Offensive, Short Range
Utilizing a large amount of chakra, the user of this technique moves at extremely high speed, delivering a string of extremely strong blows to various parts of the body in order to unbalance and stun an opponent. This is followed by a powerful thrust to the stomach, prompting the opponent to bend over leading into a pile driver maneuver. The amount of chakra consumed in this attack is exorbitant, as chakra is burned both to keep the body moving at high speed and striking with preternatural strength.


Ninjutsu
Name: Usugurai Mikomi (Faint Hope)
Type: S-Rank, Defensive/Offensive, Short Range
When faced with an opponent she is hard pressed against, Mitsukai switches to the defensive and begins to store chakra. Once enough chakra is built up, she unleashes this technique. The user releases a massive burst of chakra in the form of light and performs several actions while the opponent is blinded. First the user makes a solid-form clone of themselves (such as a Kage Bushin, Mushi Bunshin, or Mizu Bunshin) which maneuvers behind the opponent by use of Shunshi. The clone immediately attacks as a feint (any opponent skilled enough to use this technique should be able to sense and repel the attack). The moment the opponent is distracted the original attacks at extreme speeds but low damage to distract the opponent further. The clone then expends all its chakra in an attack to draw the opponent’s attention away from the original, while the original immediately launches into a powerful maneuver (Mitsukai favors Juusan Tenshi no Sutoraiku).

Name: Touch of Grace
Type: B-Rank, Supplimentary, Short Range
By touching or lightly striking the target on the forehead a user of this technique can user their chakra to alter the electrical pattern of the target’s brain, rendering them temporarily docile. This technique requires much practice and precision, and will not work if performed incorrectly.

[Kage_Spyke]

akaryu(red Dragon)

type-Kekkei Genkai
clan- Kurobeni(black blood)
Village- Hidden Mist

Description - when this kekkei genkai activates the users eyes turn pure black with a red pupil. and their teeth become like fangs(werewolf like) and they start behaving in a very violent and destructive way. they can now use their chakra to increase there strength 10x over and speed increase 20X and they must train it this form to increase in strength and usefulness in this mode of battle. also the user can become cannibalistic and when the user kills an enemy and eats their heart he gains al their jutsu and secrets.

history - THe only clan that can do this technique is the family of the Founder of the MIst village the Shodai kage and his decendents. this is why the Mist Villlage was reffered to as the village hidden in the bloody mist

[nokue]

jutsu:hyokuushin (type fire water wind or earth depends wich you say after)
abillaty: turns users body commpletely into the element they say
chakra used:79%
information: it is a forbiden jutsu that is used by the hokage but once the justu times out the user is forced into a state wear the body is jst a soulless human laying on the ground and the soul is in another deminsion and how long depense on how strong the users chakra is

[chaz017]

Name: Touch of Grace
Type: B-Rank, Supplimentary, Short Range
By touching or lightly striking the target on the forehead a user of this technique can user their chakra to alter the electrical pattern of the target’s brain, rendering them temporarily docile. This technique requires much practice and precision, and will not work if performed incorrectly.
Hentai Guy - This is the perfect jutsu for the way you described your character I could easily see Kuruma Mitsukai using this. Oh, and just to poke some fun at you...I would hope that it wouldn't work if it was performed incorrectly(as you stated) lol. Seems like common sense to me. The other techniques seem rather aggressive to me for her character but that could just be my impression of her. The group of nine sisters is a great idea. Although it's quite a few too many for me and I would run outta ideas easily. I hope to see them all eventually. You've encouraged me to get back to work on my characters. I'll be posting a new one soon.
-Ok, the series needs more kick-ass women (actually you can never have enough to begin with). As such I came up with this idea during my Greek and Roman mythology course. Warning: perverts should not read this if they got no self-control.

Name: Mikonichi (Wild one).

Gender: Female.
Fukitsu Naruto - Excellent character. At first I thought she could use some more jutsu but after giving it some thought I think she's perfect like that. Maybe in the future she could develop a lil but with the story/background you gave I think she's perfect. If I could give you rep I would, for a kick ass female indeed:D. She even had a humorous story. Hmm, now that I look there a a ton of female character in this thread lately...
Here's yet another character from me. Then again... that's kind of obvious.

Name: Yumano, Shiten
Age: 39

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Shiten.jpg

Bio:
Shiten is a wandering monk who acts as a messenger for the various ninja villages. He was born in a village without ninja, and when he was 10, saw a fight between two opposing ninja clans, and was fascinated by the wide range of techniques the many people used. He trained his mind, body, and chakra for years, and when he reaced the age of 18, he left to see all of the ninja villages in the world. Throughout his travels, he would learn various techniques from ninja instructors and other people, gaining a large amount of various jutsu. Now, at age 40, he rarely learns any new techniques, but wanders from country to country, learning about fugitive ninja, and gathering information which later becomes printed in the thousands of Bingo Books throughout every ninja village. He is a respected figure to all who know him. His current work, under request from the Hokage of Konoha, is to gather information on Akatsuki.


Shiten has no special jutsu, but has a special attack used from firing concentrated needles of chakra from his fingertips. The needles puncture the skin, and trigger numbing and muscle spasm impulses in the nerves, causing the area hit to twitch, and develop a feeling said to feel like a severely strong case of pins and needles. He is also skilled in numerous elemental jutsu.

His fighting style is similar to aikido, focusing in throws, and pressure points while using minimal force. While Shiten is a formidible fighter, his skills are sub par compared to a fully trained ninja, and favors running when facing a really strong opponent.

There we go, hope all of you like him.
Dan the Man - Ya know, to be honest I can't say why I like this character. But I do. Maybe it's because he's not over powered in any way, shape, or form. Kudos. I also like the idea of actually metioning who exacty collects the info for these bingo books.

All Three - Wow, looks like I didn't have much in the way of improvements for you three...All pretty solid characters.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

Fukitsu Naruto - Excellent character. At first I thought she could use some more jutsu but after giving it some thought I think she's perfect like that. Maybe in the future she could develop a lil but with the story/background you gave I think she's perfect. If I could give you rep I would, for a kick ass female indeed:D. She even had a humorous story. Hmm, now that I look there a a ton of female character in this thread lately...

All Three - Wow, looks like I didn't have much in the way of improvements for you three...All pretty solid characters.

-I am glad you like her. Truth be told I wanted to make her into a vengeful person when she was "defeated" and "groped" by Naruto. But then I thought the series has enough avengers and I decided on a more lighter route. With thios character I had hoped to create an Amazoness-like (or perhaps even a Spartan one) society within the Naruto verse. I was also planning on making her story even longer but opted against it because it got a little too crazy in my head :heh:.

-Critiscism is appreciated but so is support. Creativity is filled with suggestions, ideas, failings and praise after all.

[Dan the Man]

Dan the Man - Ya know, to be honest I can't say why I like this character. But I do. Maybe it's because he's not over powered in any way, shape, or form. Kudos. I also like the idea of actually metioning who exacty collects the info for these bingo books.

All Three - Wow, looks like I didn't have much in the way of improvements for you three...All pretty solid characters.


Thanks. I thought about what would make a unique character, and I wondered about the people behind the scenes, because there are so many. There are the people who make the bingo books, weapon suppliers, medics, Techers and instructors, and countless more. I think if I make any more characters, I'll try to make some of them.

[Dan the Man]

I thought about what would make a unique character, and I wondered about the people behind the scenes, because there are so many. There are the people who make the bingo books, weapon suppliers, medics, Techers and instructors, and countless more. I think if I make any more characters, I'll try to make some of them.

Well speak of the devil, I happen to have someone like that.

Name: Inoue, Tekkai
Age: 24
Profession: Blacksmith, weapon transporter.

Picture:
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Tenkai.jpg

Bio: Born in a smithing village on the outskirts of the Country of Fire, Tekkai was the apprentice of an unparralelled weapon craftsman, who was a decendent of the legendary Okazaki Masamune. In time, Tekkai's skills at crafting the finest weapons were at their peak, so he decided to challenge himself, and began making weapons from fictional sources. After making them to near perfection, he trained himself to become a master with each and every one. His years of training made him an exceptional fighter, and was chosen by his village leaders to escort the shipments of tools and ninja throwing weapons to the various Hidden Villages. Due to the neutral nature of his village, Tekkai doesn't have any alliances with ninja villages, and has once even been to the Hidden Sound Village.
In combat Tekkai is an unusual fighter. Though he often fights ninja, Tekkai has no control over his chakra, and the only real things that kept him alive are his combat skills, and a slightly hightened sense of awareness. His skills with weaponry are unrivaled, and has often visited dojos to aid students with weapon lessons. When not in combat, Tekkai continues to make weapons, and trains with them constantly.

Tekkai's arsenal is immense, but due to many of them being incredibly heavy, he only carries a select few with him on his travels. He is very fond of the gunblade, but his preferred, and main weapons are the twin Soul Swords of Fervor (not pictured).

As mentioned before, Tekkai has no known control over his chakra, and is completely unable to perform any kind of ninja techniques. Over the years, the danger of fighting powerful enemies and ninja hs given him a kind of sixth sense. It is nothing incredibly powerful, but it is just enough for Tekkai to know when danger is near. His combat skills make up for his lack of chakra, since his years of intense training have made him incredibly skilled. When asked about his skills, Tekkai admitted that he never fought any famous ninja fugitives, but his claim to fame is that he did once fight an ANBU swordsman, and was an even match.

[Hentai Guy]

Hentai Guy - This is the perfect jutsu for the way you described your character I could easily see Kuruma Mitsukai using this. Oh, and just to poke some fun at you...I would hope that it wouldn't work if it was performed incorrectly(as you stated) lol. Seems like common sense to me. The other techniques seem rather aggressive to me for her character but that could just be my impression of her. The group of nine sisters is a great idea. Although it's quite a few too many for me and I would run outta ideas easily. I hope to see them all eventually. You've encouraged me to get back to work on my characters. I'll be posting a new one soon.

Eh...they are overly aggressive for her, but the only time she would probably use those techniques is against Tenma, Mashin, and Ada. Most of the time she probably wouldn't fight at all. She is a highly physical person, though...I suppose I should flesh out her character a little more, I was focusing a bit too much on her techniques (especially since most of them are complex taijutsu moves and take a lot to write out). I'll come back and edit later...

And, for the record, I made a point of saying that it doesn't work simply because that's all that happens...you don't accidentally stimulate his brain giving him the strength of 10 gorillas. I was saying that there was no backfire, it simply fizzles.

...oh, you still have to change your sig pic to the correct one you did.

[Jixan]

Sujimo Renada

Age:26

Jutsu:Demon Wind storm
White demention jutsu
Demon drill
Dark Fury

Rank:Jounin

Village:???

Class:A

File:
Sujimo Renada started his ninja academy in the village hidden in the sand.He was the student any teacher would want.He was very attentive and understood teamwork.He grew up and passed the Chunin exams.After that he was untraceable, until he bacame a Jounin in the Village Hidden in the Leaves.
He has grown up in a clan that hasn't been seen for more than 52 years.His sharingan allows him to perfect the tekniques and jutsu of other ninjas.One of his jutsus he improved was Haku's Crystal Ice Mirrors.He added Demon Wind Shuriken instead of senbon.He is,as of yet untraceable.Some people claim he is still hidden in the sand.Others say he's been spotted in the village of the mist.All we know is he has made a new band of strong ninjas.People and sources have confirmed that Orochimaru has joined this clan.
Sujimo has 5 brothers,all of which are Jounin.He has dreamed of fighting Itachi,for Itachi joined his clan,but betrayed him.The members of this clan are still unknown.Although,we do know that anyone who has gotten cocky against these members has never survived.Even when prepared,people who have gone against the weakast of this clan have never survived.His height (Sujimo) is 6,2
and weighs 164 ponds.

[Uchiha Yoru]

Hm....computer ate my last post so here I go again....

Name: Uchiha Yoru
Age: 21 Hair: Black. Three feathers, each with different tips.
Gender: Male Eyes: Black
Height: 5' 2" Blood Type: AB-
Weight:125lb

Quote: "Everyone has their poison, don't deny me mine and you might live."

Village: none. (Formerly Konohagakure)
Affiliation: Akatsuki - North
Rank: S - class criminal, missing nin

Likes: solitude, cigarettes(specifically his), anything beautiful
Dislikes: stupidity, those oppressed (views them as weak), cold
Unique Items: bone and hematite chakra sealing rosary. black cigarettes,
necklace of a five pointed ring on a silver chain.
Weaknesses: poison withdrawl induced narcalepsy, mangekyou
Clan affiliation: Uchiha, Sabure
Family:
Father: Uchiha Hajime - deceased
Mother: Uchiha Azumi ( Formerly Sabure Azumi )- deceased

*side note, I'm only hoping I have some of the japanese right*

Kekkei Genkai :
Uchiha: Sharingan (knew you saw that coming already)
Mangekyou Sharingan
Amaterasu - Black fire technique
Tsukuyomi - moon reader ( Sealed from use )
*when Yoru was first brought to Akatsuki's HQ by Deidara he made the mistake of provoking Itachi who used Tsukuyomi on him (Leader had ordered him not to be killed) After the attack Yoru sealed his own ability to use Tsukuyomi and swore never to unleash that power unless someone truly deserved it.

*because of the Uchiha lineage he can use Goukakyuu no Jutsu and Housenka no Jutsu - two basic techniques; however, he never had the chance to learn any more family techniques. (Not to say he does'nt have any more fire techniques, just that they are his own creations)

Kekkei Genkai :
Sabure: Housenka ( mystical fire pheonix)
This bloodline limit allows members of the Sabure family to take the
alternate form of a pheonix. While in scale the pheonix is smaller and much less powerfull than a tailed beast it is not something to be taken lightly. The ability is due to the fact that each member of the clan is descended from a small band of mercenaries who took possession of a pheonix's soul and merged it with their own. To help stabalize the combination each member also merged with a small fragment of another beasts essence. The other creatures used were the Kirin, Dragon, and Serpent. When the essences are mixed in correct proportions they form different aspects of the Pheonix. This has also given the clan a specific handicap however. All members of the Sabure clan carry a string of chakra controlling beads. When they sleep they use the hand seal of the Tiger with the beads wrapped around it to keep the essenses from taking over. In general the Dragon and Kirin do not give the user a problem and as the pheonix is part of their own soul it is completely under control, but many times the snake essense will attempt to take control and the seal is to prevent this.

Both Kekkei Genkai can be used at the same time but the combined effect drains the user three times as fast as one used alone.

On his weakness:

In order to cope with the mental trauma of Tsukuyomi he was given a strong poison. This temporarily shut down his body and allowed him to 'die'. This let Yoru come to grips with the torture, as well as the death of his entire family, as something that happened in another life. Since then he himself has become quite adept at using poison and in fact it is his favorite weapon. The side effect of the poison itself was that while he gained immunity to it he also became addicted to it. The black cigarettes he smokes contain the poison that was used originally, and come in different doses depending on the colored bands at the end. While he himself is not affected, a breath of the concentrated smoke will cause almost instant paralysis or death to nearly everyone else with a few exeptions. If he does not maintain a constant level of poison in his system he falls into a torpid state and can take minutes or days to wake up, leaving him open to attack.

*I'll post later on his history...right now I'm exhausted.

[Taiki Fujiwara]

Note:I'm really new to this so bare with me and plzz tell me if theres something wrong with this ( i read the rules.) HA! remade em.

Character.
Name: Taiki Fujiwara.

Gender: Male.

Age: 16 years old.

Blood Type: A.

Weight: 137 Lbs.

Height: 5'9".

Skills: Ninjutsu,Taijutsu.

Hair Color: Maroon.

Eye Color: Maroon.

Favorite Color: Black.

Favorite Food: Any Meat.

Hobbies: Sitting in the dark,Spying,Hunting,Building.

Hates: Itachi,Most Of The Hyuuga Clan,And Senseless Killing.

Scares: One above Right Eye One Going From Left Shoulder To Lower Right Hip.

Unique Items.

Drinks: Sake (Not regular Sake this sake was mixed with the blood of extremely hard foes).

Pet: Wolf.

Cloths.

Head Gear: Small Maroon Wolf Designed Circlet.

Neck Gear: Maroon Cloak With Black Trim.

Chest Gear: Maroon Wire Mesh Shirt With Wolf Emblem On The Mid-Back.

Leg Gear: Maroon Leather Pants With Wire Mesh Under Neath.

Foot Gear: Maroon Boots With Black Tops.

Arm Gear: Nothing But A Tatoo Of A Maroon Dragon.

Hand Gear: Maroon Fingerless Wire Mesh Gloves.

Weapons.

First Weapon: Pitch Black Kunai With Curved Edges Making Them Harder To Pull Out.

Second Weapon: Pitch Black Blades That Fit On Each Arm Just Above The Wrist Which With A Pull Of A Bar That Stretches Out To Each Palm Come Out And Are Able To Be Used Like Swords.

Miscellanious

Jewelry: Silver And Black Necklace With Wolves Carved Into Each Part. A Maroon And Black Ring With A Ruby In The Middle With Wolf Emblem Carved Into It.

Jutsu: Night Fire Serpent Jutsu

Advantage: This Jutsu summons a serpent made of pitch black fire which circles the enemy and slowly burns them or completely covering them in flames.

Disadvantage: The jutsu takes alot of chakra and if chakra control is not mastered use may lead to death or coma.

[Chicharu of the Moon]

HEY YA PARY PPL!:D

Saningan (warrior's eye)

This jutsu brings a whole new meaning to the word "eye technique." Its has the power of the Byakuugan and Sharringan, but it cannot copy Genjutsu or Ninjutsu, only Tijutsu. (Throwing Kunai/Surriken included.) It can see up to 10 km away and see 360* around with no blind spots. It trackes everything from Chackra Points to Pressure Points to the flow of chackra to night vision and everything inbeetween.

Chicharu and his brother, Ryuu, are twin orphins and the power of the Saningan was split amongst them at birth. Now, Chicharu has the power of the Saningan; Piercing Eye. This gives him the ability to see 360* around him, track pressure points, see long distanses, copy taijutsu, and see things in fast/slow motion. (+/- 20 FPS.)

THIS may seem good, buy Ryuu is known as the "Saningan master"

[driclone]

-Ryoku : an eye that looks like the sharingan but instead of 3 branch , he has 4 , 6 or even 8 branch in is eyes . He can detect the weakness of a jutsu of an ennemi and upgrade the speed of the user . He can also copy 2 technqiues .

Character : Driclone Yazanachi , the forbidden ninja : He posses long red air , like the blood . He always wear dark red suit and a cape assorted whit it . He posses a bijuu that no one knows , named Satan . This bijuu is also known as shadow or lucifer . Those two use all type weapons and have great chakra . Their combined power can beat a kage and they use only forbiden jutsu .

Jutsu forbidden 1 : Fuuton , Kyofu Bachi Rasengan Shuriken : A golden circle appears upper the hand of the user . Golden blades appears , connecter to the circle . A sphere that looks like the rasengan appears at the center of the razing disk . The user send it toward is ennemy and the disk dissapear due to his enormous speed .

Jutsu fobiden 2 : Kuchiyose no Jutsu : Shitennou : The user summon Shitennou , the king of paradise . His power his almost greater then driclone .

Other jutsu , coming in another post .

[Taiki Fujiwara]

the jutsu can't be perfect it has to have a down side 2 it

[zwolf]

well i thought of another character

name:kaki ya

sex:male

appearance: hair:black eyes: black but a birth defect left his pupils pure white clothing:black with a white cross and a chunin jacket and a quiver of arrows

height:5:4

age:13

village:village hidden in the leaves

likes:the dark practicing his archery

hates:swords jokers

rank:chunin

chakra:fire wind

specials weapons:senshu of gogyou uindo effects:every arrow shot out of it becomes fire that becomes a little thing like gaara's sand that kaki can control with his hands.ya of za kadou if hit by it in a room most of the oxygen in the room is sucked out

equipment:

chakra:fire wind

justu:summoning of the senshu of gogyou uindo

the fire vortex
effect either pulls fire from a present source or uses his elemental to create a vortex of fire

sense of the wind
effect:he senses the wind to tell if a enemy is coming and how far away he is

elements barrage
effect:first he blasts out most of his wind charka that cuts up the enemy then blasts out his fire chakra
downside;he basically faints with a faint awareness to the point where he response in a slight way to sudden movements that's it

[Chicharu of the Moon]

Chicharu Is Da Best!!! He'll Kill All Yall!!!!! Muahahahahahaaaa!!!!

Ryuu

Name:Ryuu Shizonii

Blood Type: AB

Likes: A good chalenge, spicey food, ramen, ramen, ramen, getting Chicharu mad...he looks funny when hes mad. :D

Dislikes: Bugs, Shino (duh,) being beat at things, vegies, outhouses (he has bad experience with this!)

Unique Items: Dragon Scale Sheild, Twin-Blade Kunai

Jutsu: Lightning Style: Lightning Strike (Isoroku) Lightning Sheild

Isoroku: Focus Chackra into your hand and use it to sommon energy from your electro-magnetic waves throughout your body to form a unique jesture of shere lightning in your hand

Lightning Sheild: Focus Chackra all throughout your body from your Chackra Points and somon lightning from the electro-magnetic waves throughout your body forming invincible suit of armour.

OH YAH! RYUU'S RANK!!!

Rank: Chunin

OH YAH! RYUU'S VILLAGE!!!

Village: Konoha

[xHyugaxAmarix]

Ok, my character's name is Amari Hyuga. She is the twin sister of Hinata. She looks like a mirror image of Hinata, except the hairstyle. She is 2 and half minutes older then her. She is a lot more confident, and unshy. (don't think thats i word, but you get the point ) She had monsterus strength at the age of 12. She was really pissed off at Neji after he beat up Hinata in the match. She had missed the battle because of a kunai that bounced off the wall and skined the side of her neck (She won her match). When she saw what happened to Hinata, she lost her cool and pretty much chased Neji through out the arena, throwing death punches while Neji barley dodged them. If she wasn't such a hot head, she would have got him.
Amari is an excellent Hyuga style fighter, but if she wasn't then that would be a sucky heir to the clan. She can use Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms, Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin, and Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms.
And she laughed on and off for a week when Neji lost to Naruto. She thought it was a waste that Neji could beat her sister (who she thinks is as strong as her, apparently not) and not Naruto. Later Naruto confrots her and says that she is a snob and isn't even better than Neji. She replies to this with a punch in the nose, leaving Naruto on the ground, moaning. She bent down and whisperd into his ear that the punch was a quarter of her strength, maybe less.
After the time skip, She greets Naruto with a punch in the nose, but doesn't make him go to the ground. He then laughs, and grabs her arm and says she has gotten weaker. She then blushes and replies softly that he had gotten stronger, and she had stayed the same. He blushes and starts to rub the back of his head. They go they're different ways.
A few days later, Naruto visits a training ground and sees many huge holes and blood splatters in on the cement ground. He then sees the approaching figures of Amari and Neji. When Amari sees him, she quickly runs up to him and states this is where Neji and her had been traing for the last few days. When Neji is standing behind Amari, Naruto notices Neji broken nose. Naruto laughs, and takes off. Neji, with a extremly angry look states to Amari that he won't lose to her again. And Amari says while grinning, you don't have a chance in hell.
Took me awhile to think of all of this. I hoped you like it. (i'll have a pic as soon as i can)

o, and her rank in the first part is genin, and then second is jonin

o, and she summons wolfs, and rides a top a huge cerberus, which she calls Sanmaru. (i can't remember where i heard this before, my bad)

[AznShinobiX]

my character, his jutsus, his bloodline, and his weapons are done(pics excluded)! He's on page 17, if you want to check him out!:)

[driclone]

Forbidden jutsu 3 : Taosu Bachi .

Is other name is kill by god punishment . It looks like the mangekyou sharingan but it's worse and it kills the victim .

[Fukitsu Naruto]

Forbidden jutsu 3 : Taosu Bachi .

Is other name is kill by god punishment . It looks like the mangekyou sharingan but it's worse and it kills the victim .

-Mongekyou Sharingan is already broken and uber powerful enough in the actual storyline as it is. Unless your version does something which we couldn't expect I suggest refraining from creating further "Saringans" in the future, alright?

[driclone]

I said it looks like it . It's not it ...

It's a genjutsu combined whit ninjutsu . The victims sounds like in a world of peace but then , everything start to turn over . Everything start to be worse . At the end , he wants to kill himself and he suicide himself . That's why it can kill the victim . It can only be break by a strong mind or by attacking the user .

[AznShinobiX]

Wow. If any/all of these written characters were shown in the Naruto show, how happy/excited/surprised would you be?

[Dan the Man]

Wow. If any/all of these written characters were shown in the Naruto show, how happy/excited/surprised would you be?

I would be very amazed. If some of mine appeared, I'd demand credits, but that's if I can get over the pure amazement.

[driclone]

I'll be surprised cause i don't think i'll see driclone in an anime one day , except if i want to create him ...

[sensaiderp]

Wow. If any/all of these written characters were shown in the Naruto show, how happy/excited/surprised would you be?

I would be TRULEY amazed I wouldnt even care about being given credit I would hope but wow that would be awesome

[Mr.Strategist]

my justsu would be called Shyukugan its like Byukugan And Sharingan combined if thats not justu plz pm me and tell me cuz i'll think of another one and edit this post

[Ryukage]

Name: Dendou Tsuushin Sendo
Type: Bloodline
Effect: Using the minds eye [third eye] a special connection is made with the muscles in the body. Sending extra chakra to these muscles so that they "hulk-out" and become incredibly bigger and stronger.
Advantages: Increases strength vastly.
Disadvantages: Only one limb can be hulked out at a time.

[tkdtiger]

Name:Uijong
Type:Bloodline:Chakra Succubus
Effect: Absorbs chakra of any living thing increasing his own chakra levels while lowering the other person's chakra level. Also gives him a connection into the person's mind allowing him to know techniques that the other person has learned, cannot use BL
Advantages: Can Learn vast amount of techniques and has a nearly unlimited amount of Chakra.
Disadvantage: Can gather too much chakra and have an overload. Can also believe he's someone he's not due to the mind meld of the two people. May go Berserk.
Occupation: Missing Nin
Favorite Food: Bulgolgi and Kimchi
Specialized Jutsu: Genjutsu and Ninjutsu
Likes: Tailed Demons
Dislikes: People with weird eyes

[_Eh_]

Tsini yuki Doragon no Jutsu [Twin Snow Dragon Jutsu]:
Two pillars of pure snow/ice generate from the ground. The pillars can be used as gaurding poles, or even ice-senbon turrets. They shoot from the pillar itself from all sides, thus having a range of 360 degrees. Both pillars are in the shape of dragons flying upward.

Disadvantages: The pillars cannot move. The senbon are easily blocked. This is mainly used as a distraction.

Advantages: Costs no more chakra than 2 shadow clones. The Chakra control is easily done.

Nijuu Hirate-Gekiha Myakuhaku [Double Palm-Crushing Pulse]: The user uses chakra to pulsate sound from the hand. The sound emits a noise that sounds like a bee's wings. Every hit with the users palm sends a bonecrushing pulse into a person's body, obviously breaking bones in the places hit.

Disadvantages: Is hard to control the chakra use. Has to be have physical contact with the skin to work. Also, is touch's one's self skin, you berak your own bone.

Advantages: You do not have to hit hard to have its effects happen. Can be used as a defense against water attacks and earth attacks also. Fire is not effected, nor is air. This does not take a significant amount of chakra to use this. [[does not take alot of chakra to use]]

[ningagurl13]

I'm confuse how do you actually crwate one sorry if this seems really stupid but I'm only 13.

[Dan the Man]

I'm confuse how do you actually crwate one sorry if this seems really stupid but I'm only 13.

Well, there are no real design limitations or requirements for a character. All you do is think of a character you'd like to see in Naruto. You give them a name, where they come from, if they're ninja, their rank, and then you add whatever you want to their description. The character doesn't have to be fully fleshed out, just go as far as you want. Add a background story, and if they have any special talents or techniques, feel free to describe them, too. Now, when designing the character, try to avoid incredibly powerful abililties, and Ultimate Doom Bringing moves. Overall, that's about it. Have fun.

[sweetpea]

i love the program naruto but dont really like the character he is annoying

[tkdtiger]

is there any plans for this i.e. a game or is it just to see what creative characters we can come up with?

[zwolf]

I would be very amazed. If some of mine appeared, I'd demand credits, but that's if I can get over the pure amazement.

i would be like suck it Blake(my cousin who believes i will never amount to anything):D

[tkdtiger]

Are there any intersting Characters that anyone likes on this thread so far?
There should be a top 10 or something : P

[zwolf]

I'm confuse how do you actually create one sorry if this seems really stupid but I'm only 13.

just for the heck of it i will make a sample sheet for character Creation

this is not mandatory just to help people like you

name:

sex:

height

weight

appearance: hair eyes ect

chakra types:



any custom weapons


justu:

[Dan the Man]

Are there any intersting Characters that anyone likes on this thread so far?
There should be a top 10 or something : P

Well, I like the characters I've made so far, does that count?

[Hentai Guy]

my justsu would be called Shyukugan its like Byukugan And Sharingan combined if thats not justu plz pm me and tell me cuz i'll think of another one and edit this post

Dude...everyone knows that it's called "Sharakugan"

[Dan the Man]

Okay, I have a good Kekkei Genkai, as well as a new jutsu.

Char-ingan

A special eye trait which augments not only the user, but any vehicle they happen to use. Any vehicle operated by the user turns various shades of red and pink, and moves 3 times faster than normal. The user is enhanced by shadowing his identity and true motives, which usually involve revenge, or domination, as well as giving the user hightened mental prowess, such as emotion detection, hightened reflexes, and lines to fly across the back of your head in the background, accompanied by an odd, undescribeable noise. The only downsides to the Char-ingan is that the user develops the constant urge to wear a goofy helmet, shades, or just plain get pissed at the Zabis.

PokeHenge! - The technique is not too different from the Rasengaan, in which the user forms a ball of pure chakra (easy stuff, I know). If the technique hits, the enemy is permanently transformed into a Lickitung. 'Nuff said.

[sweetpea]

I'm not Really very good at this things get a bit long winded please rate so i know what you think.(sorry about any spelling errors)

Name:Emi (blessed with beauty)
Surname:Hyuga
Family:Hinata

Jutsu:Byakugan

Story: Long ago Emi's father killed the only family emi knew, being only 5 Emi ran away scared and hid in the streets of the sound village. Emi was to scared to return to the hidden leaf village because she knew nothing about her Jutsu's and couldn't fight.
At the age of 6 Emi meet a young boy from the mist village he trained her as best he could 3 years later the boy was murdered she was lost the only family she had known had been taken from her again she planed to kill her father and the boy's murderer. Emi left the sound village after 2 more years of hard training on her own she returned to the hidden leaf village trained with all the other children of her age and she attended the academy Emi was getting on just fine with no family but she made many new friends and settled down and planed to live her life normaly when she had killed her father.
But Emi didnt know that her father was searching for her to kill her because she had a rare Jutsu and her father was trying to stop the jutsu being passed down in the bloodline. The only choice Emi had was to kill her father before he could kill her.

p.s have i done this right?

[tkdtiger]

Well, I like the characters I've made so far, does that count?

I would think you would be able to pick any of your top 10 characters mentioned so far so I don't see why it wouldn't count lol

Personally I think my character would be too powerful.

[favojavo]

Burning Touch

Kekki Genki
a curse, you can regulate body heat, extremly hard to control, most children who have it body is hot

[Dan the Man]

I'm not Really very good at this things get a bit long winded please rate so i know what you think.(sorry about any spelling errors)

Name:Emi (blessed with beauty)
Surname:Hyuga
Family:Hinata

Jutsu:Byakugan

Story: Long ago Emi's father killed the only family emi knew, being only 5 Emi ran away scared and hid in the streets of the sound village. Emi was to scared to return to the hidden leaf village because she knew nothing about her Jutsu's and couldn't fight.
At the age of 6 Emi meet a young boy from the mist village he trained her as best he could 3 years later the boy was murdered she was lost the only family she had known had been taken from her again she planed to kill her father and the boy's murderer. Emi left the sound village after 2 more years of hard training on her own she returned to the hidden leaf village trained with all the other children of her age and she attended the academy Emi was getting on just fine with no family but she made many new friends and settled down and planed to live her life normaly when she had killed her father.
But Emi didnt know that her father was searching for her to kill her because she had a rare Jutsu and her father was trying to stop the jutsu being passed down in the bloodline. The only choice Emi had was to kill her father before he could kill her.

p.s have i done this right?

Yeah, you did it right. Pretty good, keep up the good work.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

-Whew, been a while since I posted again. Man I am such a bastard for not looking at my own thread all that often. I see a lot of good work so I am happy. Anyway, jutsu time and today's is a combination one.

Name: Agni no Manako (The Eye of *Agni)

Type: Elemental ninjutsu, fire based.

Effect: This jutsu is done in combination with Sasuke's Katon: Goukayu no jutsu and Naruto's Fuuton: Rasengan. Sasuke holds the enemy at bay by constantly breathing fire while Naruto slams the Fuuton: Rasengan at them. The wind elemental Rasengan then takes the surrounding flames and spreads them over a large enough area to eliminate escape.

Advantages: Great power and is cabable of dealing with an army (in theory).

Disadvantages: Conditional start-up and it is slow. Plus think of all the trees that are gone. The environmentalists will have Naruto and Sasuke's heads :heh:.

*note: Agni is the Hindu God of the Sun and fire.

[Dan the Man]

Disadvantages: Conditional start-up and it is slow. Plus think of all the trees that are gone. The environmentalists will have Naruto and Sasuke's heads :heh:.



Well, usually it's not considered a really good Naruto battle unless at least 2 or 3 dozen trees meet their sudden demise. Think of how many trees died during Gaara's rampage during the Chuunin exams. Chances are, if this keeps up, Al Gore will lead a ninja village hidden in environmentalism. And we sure as hell don't want to see that, do we?

[Ryukage]

Here is a little picture of my character if I were to ever star in a movie about Ninja's. Lol. The guy in the picture is me and I tried my best to draw Zabuza's sword on my back. Looks a little small but oh well! I tried.

What do you think?

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a137/CalsD3stiny/kalscottninja.jpg

[sensaiderp]

if this keeps up, Al Gore will lead a ninja village hidden in environmentalism. And we sure as hell don't want to see that, do we?

no i really don't think so but really wouldnt they you know..............suck at killing?all they would do is complain and crap and then a month later some very pissed off ninja burn thier village to the ground

[Dan the Man]

no i really don't think so but really wouldnt they you know..............suck at killing?all they would do is complain and crap and then a month later some very pissed off ninja burn thier village to the ground

True, environmentalists aren't good fighters to my knowlege, but still, even with their village burning to the ground, they'd just turn to the ninja who did it, and go "Do you know how much that S**t adds to global warming?!", hands on their hips, shaking their heads.

[Cruttlord]

Name: Shin Hagane

Village: Hidden Cloud Village

Age: 15

Clan: Hagane

Advanced Bloodline: Doruikinzoku- This Kekkei Genkai allows the user to make metal at rapid speeds through earth and immense heat.

Best Known Jutsus (Because of Shin's Kekkei Genkai, every jutsu only needs one seal, which is the tiger seal):

Hando Kyanonhou- A jutsu like Rasenshuriken and Chidori, except in this jutsu, Shin creates a small rattling ball of chakra in the middle of his palm, which is then engulfed in a metal ball. Then, he extends his arm straight forward to his opponent and shoots the ball like a cannon. When it hits the enemy it will explode, causing extreme damage. Thus, it is called Hando Kyananhou, or Hand Cannon.

Jiware no Shuriken- This jutsu allows Shin to project unlimited amounts of shurikens from the ground in complete silence. This is the jutsu that made him the leader of the anbu at the age of 11.

Mouko Tsurugi- More powerful than the Kusanagi, the Mouko Tsurugi (Fierce Tiger Sword) is made of the hardest steel known to mankind. First, Shin takes out his Anbu sword and sticks the whole blade portion into the ground. Then, he performs the tiger seal and pulls it out. Its appearance has changed in that it is a darker grey and has the japanese symbols " Fierce Tiger Sword" engraved in it.

Bio: Shin and his clan have a unique kekkei genkai that they recieved from their years of worship to the tiger spirit. Unfortunately, Shin's family was nearly wiped out, and before his father died, all of the Hagane's power was instilled into the palm of his hand with a seal. His strength had increased so much that it seemed to him a fair trade for his clan's lives. He soon found that nobody in his village had the ability to match him skill-wise. Now, Shin is searching for the infamous Uchiha Itachi's brother, Sasuke, so that he may feel the excitement of a challenge.

Here's a photo of him....I hope.

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Copy and paste the link yeah it's there =)

[Mr.Strategist]

Name: Hiro Arjan

Village: Hidden stone village

Age: 15

Clan: none he's like Sasuke he had a family but they were all killed

Class: he was youngest Anbu black OPS in that village when he was 10 now he's a Sage better known as the "Dog Demon Sage"


Kekkei Genkai : Shakugan- This Kekkei Genkai is a mix of byakugan and Sharingan. Hiro is the first of his family to have the Shakugan.


Best Known Jutsus: Cursed Seal jutsu, Genjutsu, Sealing jutsu, and summoning.

hiro is best knowen for his a giant three headed dog. heres a pic of the dog
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e22/btr007/cerberuslg.jpg


Bio:no one relly knows who Hiro's family was because they weren't originaly from that village but some people think he's related to the Uchiha clan and the Hyuga clan because of his Kekkei Genkai. but his family was killed by the Akatsuki because they wanted Hiro because of his Kekkei Genkai while they were travling to another village(they=Hiro's Family). Hiro's family made up there last name so no one from there old village could find them.

Heres a pic of hiro but my name is on it
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e22/btr007/AnimeBryan.jpg

[zwolf]

Here is a little picture of my character if I were to ever star in a movie about Ninja's. Lol. The guy in the picture is me and I tried my best to draw Zabuza's sword on my back. Looks a little small but oh well! I tried.

What do you think?

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a137/CalsD3stiny/kalscottninja.jpg

if you can draw Zabuza's sword like that why didn't you just draw the entire thing not just useing photoshop work

[zwolf]

[QUOTE=Syaoran;517126]That's a good thread KatonMakai ^^
Some people have good ideas for inventing new jutsu.

I've been watching this for a few days now, but no one tried to create a new character ^^'
Well, this evening I gave it a try... I present young Konoha Ninja, Jouji Nekofuku :p

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7655/joujinekofuku4yx.jpg
First Name: 譲治
Jouji. The name comes from a character in a Japanese Buddhist tale. See below for more information.
Surname: 猫福
Nekofuku. This means lucky cat. Grammatically this is a correct Japanese surname as it comes with a noun and an adjective, but there's very likely no one with that name in Japan. I choosed it because this character likes cats and other felines.
Jouji has never known his family or clan. While his clan was moving to another village after being chased because of their bloodline limit, baby Jouji was kidnapped by ninja's of an enemy country as they were interested in Nekofuku's bloodline.
Although being well-treated, they abandonned him in the rest, when his temperature body was rising when his bloodline and his affinity for fire started developping. Having no clue what it was, they though Jouji got some uncureable illness, as his forehead felt like someone suffering from a very high fever.
Luckily for Jouji, a member of the Uchiha clan found him and raised the little boy. Sadly enough, his happiness short, because of Itachi Uchiha. Although being upset, filled with anger, he stayed loyal to what his father and sensei taught him and revenge is not the way to live, unlike Sasuke...
Jouji's father and sensei, before being murdered by Itachi, taught him some fire element ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu. Although Jouji knows some technique that were used by Sandaime Hokage Sama as well, they aren't as powerfull yet.
Katon Housenka no Jutsu (Phoenix Fire)
Katon Ryuuka no Jutsu (Dragon Fire)
Katon, Karyuu Endan (Dragon Flame Blast)
Karyuudan (Fire Dragon Missile)
Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball)

Knowing that fire can endanger one's life, his sensei also taught him how to use Fuka Hoin (Fire Sealing).
During one of the covert operations to which Jouji participated, he found a ancient scroll containing jutsus based on Amaterasu (天照). Jouji managed to learn one of the jutsu's from that scroll, before one of the felines he can summon, ブラックパンサー (Burakku Pansaa, Black Panther), took the scroll to his dimension because it is far to dangerous to be used.

The jutsu he learned was 黒い太陽の誕生の術 (Kuroi taiyou no tanjou no Jutsu, Birth of the Black Sun).
To use this Jutsu, Jouji has to perform a sequence of four specific handseals in the right order: 虎 竜神 鳥 蛇, which stand for: Tora (Tiger), Ryuu (Dragon), Tori (Bird) and Hebi (Snake).
These seals, followed by Shikumi no Jutsu (Intent to Kill) starts the process of the Birth of the Black Sun.
Basically, that jutsu ignites the Amaterasu or Black Fire inside of the victims organs, consuming him rapidly from the inside. I don't need to make a sketch to explain what a painful death this is.
The weak point of that jutsu however, is the Intent to Kill. If not powerful enough or if the victim escapes from the killing intent, nothing will happen and Jouji lost a significant amount of Chakra need to perform Kuroi taiyou no tanjou no jutsu correctly.

As for Jouji's Kuchiyose no Jutsu, he can summon all kind of cats and felines. Burakku Pansaa is the most powerful of them. Depending on the amount of chakra used to summon him, his size will be different as well, varying from normal panther size to a demon that can level a mountain.
The cat you see on the picture is かえで, which means Maple Leaf. Kaeda is intelligent, able to talk and helps Jouji often during his mission. He's a little bit like Kakashi's Pakkun. He also likes being taken care of by beautiful girls, that's why he often uses his Kawai no Jutsu ;)

Jouji is a boy having a rare 血継限界 (Kekkei Genkai), called 黒壇眼, Kurodangan (Ebony Eyes). With this bloodlime limit, Jouji can alter the amount of S, L and M cones in his eyes, to gain trichromatic (colour) or dichromatic (black & white) vision. Thanks to this ability, Jouji has an incredibly sharp vision and he can see as if in daylight in pitchblank areas. When in dichromatic mode, Jouji can also see the chakra concentrations in someone's body, and depending on the area, try to evaluate what type of attach his opponent will do. This is particulary handy when the opponent is preparing for Genjutsu.
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On the picture, Kaeda is sitting next to Jouji. He's a rather big sized cat, but still kawai. The scar on Jouji's face is from his mission where he learned Kuroi taiyou no tanjou no Jutsu. Jouji can also fight using a Katana. The Katana in front of him is the one given by his Uchiha father/sensei and only used on very special occasion during combat, when his honour is at stake or when he defends his beloved ones.
The Kanji on his name tag are correct if my research and comprehension were right.
The Kanji on that ability shart probably isn't... the scan used was rather poor, and I've no idea what chart I could draw for him.

Jouji's eyes are similar to Kaeda's. That because he's using the Kurodangan in dichromatic mode.

Cats ? Baaaaaaka neko >.<
Wondering why I took a cat ? Pretty easy ^^
I've two adorable cats at home. I'm not really a dog-kind of person.
Also, I miss cats a little in Naruto. They would be a nice addition :)
_________________

Where does the name Jouji comes from?
The Boy Who Drew Cats
Once there was a boy who loved to draw. His name was Joji.

Joji grew up on a farm with lots of brothers and sisters. The others were a big help to their father and mother. But not Joji!

He did nothing for hours but draw in the dirt with a stick. And what Joji drew was just one thing.

Cats.

Cats, cats, and more cats. Small cats, big cats, thin cats, fat cats. Cats, cats, cats, cats, cats.

“Joji,” his father told him, “you must stop drawing all those cats! How will you ever be a farmer?”

“I’m sorry, Father. I’ll try to stop.”

And he did try. But whenever Joji saw one of the farm cats go by, he forgot about his chores and drew another cat.

“Joji will never make a farmer,” said the farmer sadly to his wife.

“Maybe he could be a priest,” she told him. “Why don’t you take him to the temple?”

So the farmer brought Joji to the priest at the village temple. The priest said, “I will gladly teach him.”

From then on, Joji lived at the temple. The priest gave him lessons in reading and writing. Joji had his own box of writing tools, with a brush and an ink stick and a stone.

Joji loved to make the ink. He poured water in the hollow of the stone. He dipped the ink stick in the water. Then he rubbed the stick on the stone. And there was the ink for his brush!

Now, the other students worked hard at their writing. But not Joji! With his brush and rice paper, he did nothing for hours but draw. And what Joji drew was just one thing.

Cats.

Cats, cats, and more cats. Small cats, big cats, thin cats, fat cats. Cats, cats, cats, cats, cats.

“Joji,” the priest told him, “you must stop drawing all those cats! How will you ever be a priest?”

“I’m sorry, honorable sir. I’ll try to stop.”

And he did try. But whenever Joji saw one of the temple cats go by, he forgot about his writing and drew another cat.

That was bad enough. Then Joji started drawing on the folding screens of the temple. Soon there were cats on all the rice-paper panels. They were everywhere!

“Joji, you’ll never make a priest,” the priest told him sadly. “You’ll just have to go home.”

Joji went to his room and packed his things. But he was afraid to go home. He knew his father would be angry.

Then he remembered another temple in a village nearby. “Maybe I can stay with the priest there.”

Joji started out walking. It was already night when he got to the other village.

He climbed the steps to the temple and knocked. There was no answer. He opened the heavy door. It was all dark inside.

“That’s strange,” said Joji. “Why isn’t anyone here?”

He lit a lamp by the door. Then he saw something that made him clap. All around the big room were folding screens with empty rice-paper panels.

Joji got out his writing box and made some ink. Then he dipped in his brush and started to draw. And what Joji drew was just one thing.

Cats.

Cats, cats, and more cats. Small cats, big cats, thin cats, fat cats. Cats, cats, cats, cats, cats.

The screen he drew on last was almost as long as the room. Joji covered it with one gigantic cat—the biggest and most beautiful cat he had ever drawn.

Now Joji was tired. He started to lie down. But something about the big room bothered him.

“I’ll find someplace smaller.”

He found a cozy closet and settled inside. Then he slid shut the panel door and went to sleep.

Late that night, Joji awoke in fright.

Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

It sounded like a large, fierce animal in the temple! Now he knew why no one was there. He wished he wasn’t there either!

He heard the thing sniff around the big room. It halted right in front of the closet. Then all at once . . .

Yowl!

There was a sound of struggling, and a roar of surprise and pain. Then a huge thud that shook the floor.

Then a soft padding sound. Then silence.

Joji lay trembling in the dark. He stayed there for hours, afraid to look out of the closet.

At last, daylight showed at the edge of the door. Joji carefully slid the door open and peered out.

In the middle of the room lay a monster rat—a rat as big as a cow! It lay dead, as if something had smashed it to the floor.

Joji looked around the room. No one and nothing else was there—just the screens with the cats. Then Joji looked again at the one gigantic cat.

“Didn’t I draw the head to the left and the tail to the right?”

Yes, he was sure of it. But now the cat faced the other way—as if it had come down off the screen and then gone back up.

“The cat!” said Joji. His eyes grew wide. Then he pressed his palms together and bowed to the screen.

“Thank you, honorable cat. You have saved me. For as long as I live, no one will stop me from drawing cats.”

* * *

When the villagers learned that the monster rat was dead, Joji became a hero. The village priest let him live in the temple as long as he liked.

But Joji did not become a priest. And he did not become a farmer.

He became an artist. A great artist. An artist honored through all the country. An artist who drew just one thing.

Cats!
wow rep points are on theor way:)

[Ryukage]

if you can draw Zabuza's sword like that why didn't you just draw the entire thing not just useing photoshop work


Why would I want to draw the entire thing? It was meant to go on my back... Duh?

[winry039]

name- yukari
2nd in command of the anbu black ops
fiancee of kakashi hatake
sakura's mother
one of the strongest ninjas
goes on many assasin missions
cxalled the blood assasin of the leaf

[Mr.Strategist]

i just want to know how did i do on my ninja the pic was a drawing of me that i got made at an anime con called Anime Boston

[Dan the Man]

Alright, I have yet another character I've been messing around with.

Kumo

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/Ultra_Caboose/Gumo.jpg

Age: unknown
Village: none


Kumo was a fighting puppet made by Sasori of the Red Sands. Created and infused with a human soul, Kumo was intended to be a kind of servant, scout, warrior, and bodyguard for Sasori, while being completely independant, since the infused soul eliminated the need for chakra strings. However, shortly after being created, he turned against Sasori, claiming that he won't be commanded by anyone, and attacked. His attempt to kill his master ended with almost immediate failure, but Kumo managed to escape before Sasori could destroy his body. Now, a year later, he as come to hate the fate that was forced upon him, to remain trapped in the body of a puppet for all of eternity. So, in his hatred, he made a vow to roam the countryside, killing anyone who got in his path, hoping to draw the one warrior, the one person who, through a glorious battle, would be able to put his vengeful soul to rest.


Kumo, as his name implies, is vaguely spider-like in appearance. His back limbs hold two three-fingered hands, and razor sharp claws and knives. His forearms are gauntlets, each one holds three large claws, which can extend to over four feet, and act like sword blades. These claws can also detach, and are connected to chains, allowing kumo to fire them out of his arm, and not lose them. Each of his hind arms are independant, as Kumo can control each one in different ways at the same time. Kumo also had dozens of trap spikes hidden within his body, and any aggresive contact causes the ones in the area hit to automatically spring out. Kumo's body, being made of incredibly strong wood and metal, is only vulnerable to fire jutsu, but extremely strong impacts will do considerable damage as well.

Jutsu: Whie Kumo has chakra of his own, in life, he was not a skilled user of it. He has only recently come across scrolls hidden in a cave near the Sound village detailing various genjutsu. These remain the only real jutsu Kumo knows, and he implements them in combat frequently.

Viper Eye - Kumo's face remains shrouded, save for his eyes, because of this jutsu. Using his glowing eyes to his advantage, he uses the Viper Eye jutsu to strike paralyzing fear in his opponent. The jutsu works by giving the victim visions of their death in greusome ways, as well as exploiting their subconscious fears and phobias. Eye contact with Kumo while this technique in effect will instill incredible fear to all but the bravest and most resistant ninja.

Web of Deception - Kumo, masking his own chakra, hides out of sight and reach of his enemies, and by using this jutsu, confuses them into thinking that their partners are Kumo himself. While this technique only works when facing multiple enemies, Kumo has been able to distract his opponents by using the jutsu on nearby animals.

Quarter - Kumo's most gruesome jutsu. After paralyzing an enemy with his Viper Eye, he gives them one minute to regain their senses, if they seem like worthy opponents. If they don't, he grabs their wrists with his hind arms, and their ankles with his hands, and holds them above his head. He then rips his enemy apart, tearing every limb out of it's socket.

Rain of Blood - Another result of the Viper Eye jutsu, Kumo stabs the enemy with every claw, blade, and sharp object on every limb except for his legs, and lifts them into the air, with the victim suspended. Kumo then forces his limbs outward, tearing his vistim to shreds.

[mayuuchiha]

Suiton: Daibakufu Kekkai no Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu + Genjutsu
Benefit:It's can blast a lot enemies in one turnwith Giant vortox but enemy can see blood instead of water
Bad:After you use this you will pass out like Kakashi and Zabuza

[oomori]

OK here is my character he is from a clan I made up it is the oomori clan the a clan that has equal respect of the hidden leaf village as the hyuga clan. There was a great trgedy that happened within the clan there leader wanted to be the only person from that clan to be special because he was so greedy and he killed most of the clan members only 10 are left to roam the forest of the village hidden in the leaves after te attack they all scattered they are the first line of defense for the village hidden in the leaves. My characters name is Gekkou Oomori (moonlight green forest) is the english translation and he has 3 good jutsu's and one that he learned from his friend (naruto) kage bunshin no jutsu and the others I have only made names in american so here they are there is the 10,000 bullet fists and the illusions of death then the white shadow jutsu. The 10,000 bullet fists is he uses alot of his chaka and focuses it to his fists and punshes people.
Then the illusions oif death is he has a special mark on his back that lets him take control of a persons mind and either shut there mind down or make them do anything he desires but he has to immobolize the user so he can use it can only be triggered by him and the opponent being allighned in a straight line so Gekkou can concentrate. the mark on Gekkous back is called the Samo mark (mark of shinobi talents) you only get it by inheriting it from Gekkous clan (you have to be pure blood of the clan). it is kinda like the sharingan but the person with the mark has to touch there opponent. And finally the white shadow jutsu Gekkou has some bandages on his arm and he uses the same ones to fight and make them come off his arm and he expands them to look like bed sheets and then he hides im the bandages like haku and the ice mirriors but he also puts weapons in other sheets to so they come at you and youi think its him and the opponent puts his guard up and gets his arms immobolized then the opponent can't really do much so then my character comes up and uses 10,000 bullet fists and the opponent dies. Gekkou has gaara and naruto like actions, like he is quiet, and loud, also funny, and dumb

[Akatsuki_King]

Information on Shikyo taken from the Bingo Book.

Name: Shikyo

Gender: male

Clan: orphan, unknown heritage

Village: unknown which village he use to belong to, though every village has a high price on his head.

Rank: S-class missing-nin.

Bloodline: Shukketsu Hando, or Bleeding Hand. When activated it causes any part of his opponent’s body he touches to start bleeding profusely. Advantages: can cause opponent to die from blood loss or be seriously weakened, and causes immense pain at the spot were they are bleeding. Disadvantage: takes almost perfect chakra control and a medic-like knowledge of the human body.

Preferred weapon: chakra needles. They are small needles that he can enhance in strength by infusing with chakra, can kill if used properly. He doesn’t use them often, but when he does he uses them with deadly accuracy.

Jutsus:

Umarekawari, or reincarnation. Turns his skin and eyes completely black and makes it so he can not die, no matter what wound he receives, for instance if you cut him in half he could reattach his body without receiving any scars or permanent damage. After the jutsu wears off it leaves him completly drained on all his chakra and stamina. He has only used this jutsu once, in a battle against Itachi (Appenently he ran into Uchiha Itachi just after the teen massacured the Uchiha clan. It is thought that Itachi attacked Shikyo because he suspected that the missing-nin was a Konoha ninja, but there may have been more behind it).

He likes to inflict mental damage even more than he does physical. He favorite jutsu is fuuten, or insanity. It allows him to trap his opponent in a state of mind (depression, anger, jealousy, misery, meekness, ext.). This often leads to the victim killing himself, or his teammates. Takes little chakra, but a lot of chakra control.

Another jutsu he has used is refurred to as Chinou, or brain, simply because it allows him to shut down parts of a persons mind leading to insanity, sleep, memory loss, paralysis, or death.

It is suspected that he knows a number of healing jutsus, and gen-jutsus, But there are no other recorded at this time.

Quotes: Only words that have been reported him using was when he first stated his name.

Biography: unknown. He seemingly appeared from nowhere. First record of him is when he attacked a team of Konoha ANBU. Only one survived and had lost all of his memeroy except one thing, a man whispering in his ear, 'I am Shikyo' (Literally means, ‘I am death’).
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[PANCHO3]

-Come one, come all to the "Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character" thread. Here you can post your creations. There's no real purpose to this thread other than to collect creativity from the fans of the Naruto series. There are however a few small rules:

1) ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, I cannot stress that enough.

2) The justsu or character cannot be proclaimed as "flawless" or "beats everything" once put into picture.

3) Have fun (I know it's cheesy but I needed a 3rd non-consequential rule).

4) *NEW RULE* Aside from characters and jutsu, should a person desire itso, they are allowed to create weapons and other accessories for the character they create. Of course, all the rules that apply to the jutsus and characters also apply to the weapons as well.

-I guess I'll post my own creations first:

Jutsu: Fuuton: Tenkuu Sanpo (Wind Element: Art of Air Walking).
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: By merging one's chakra with the surrounding air currnets the user can walk the air as if he/she were on solid ground.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Great for evading and surprise attacks. However the person must have complete mastery of their chakra flow and the jutsu itself is rather costly and you'll find yourself easily exghausted.
Hand seals required: any single seal will do.

Jutsu: Ougi: Bijuu Bankai (Secret skill: Tailed Beast full release)
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Only applies to a Jinchuuriki and the Bijuu sealed within. By activating this the Jinchuuriki can use the full power of their demon by lifting their seals for a certain amount of time, essentially becoming the demon for the time allowed.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Effects will vary with each Jinchuuriki. Great for killing things quickly. Unfortunatelly once the timer runs out all that power goes away and the user is thrown into withdrawl (As in when you use a drug and then suddenly stop. That damages the body.) This can only be done once a day, anymore and the person shall burn in their own power.
Hand seals: All 12 respective seals done in any order twice.

how do i do this im new

i jus now started this thing an i don no wat 2 do. help me

[furture hok4ge]

new justu is called 50 lost years it is when all of the ninjas attack your enemy 1 time using their favorite justu but the wouldn't really work well because so ninja don't have some justu so if you like it send me a meg if you dont just dont do anything :bash: :hmm: :argue: wait i think i got an idea :thinker: nevermind well 50 lost years is my new justu sorry for the retarded stuff

[Dan the Man]

i jus now started this thing an i don no wat 2 do. help me

Well, it's simple. Just think of a neat character to put into the Naruto universe. Create his appearance (description, drawing, whatever) his personality, where he comes from, age, ninja rank (if he has one), custom jutsu, etc., etc., etc.

Have fun.

[Cerollian]

jutsu:Guardian of 7
type:ninjutsu
this jutsu can only be used by not just forcing chakra but aswell western magic(mp)and alchemy. in doing so you can then summon a guardian by determining ones abillity and strength.but the most intersting part is that you have to be borned the 7th son of the 7th son.

ninja name: Konochi No Mai

oddly named by being British and part of the Leaf Village he is the 13th son of the 13th son.not much is known except he has an odd abbility allowing him to use any geki gen kai and jutsu.

jutsu:Swords of the Sorrow Sages
type:ninjutsu
destructive the jutsu is but it summons a great sage weilding a sword as long as each of the nine-tailed foxes tails put together.but then the guardian strikes 128 blows and fuses with your body in which activates part 2.In part 2 of the jutsu it then begins to tear every bit of hatred in the user and summons a 2nd darker being.once finished your body will evaperate and turn to dust while the last 2 beings multiply to 156 beings and finish the enemy with 1000 sword slashes.

[YamihiRyutenshi]

name: Yamihi Ryutenshi
gender: female
age: 70 (doesnt age)
rank: Yamikage (leader)

Summoning Beast: Ryukaisho

Bloodtype: Dragon blood

Bloodline technique: Ryu no gan (similar to sharingan but it only copies other bloodline techniques) Im not really sure about that name but i think its close to the meaning of dragon eyes?

Families- None (Last suvivor of her kind or clan)

Pictures: (sorry but i drew yondaime hokage in that pic but she is the one on the right)
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/kilala_ceres/My%20Creation/IMG_0836-2.jpg
(another pic i drew of her but i didnt finish her hair so i lefted it white)
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/kilala_ceres/My%20Creation/IMG_0837.jpg

[inferno_grl]

name: Yamihi Ryutenshi
gender: female
age: 70 (doesnt age)
rank: Yamikage (leader)

Summoning Beast: Ryukaisho

Bloodtype: Dragon blood

Bloodline technique: Ryu no gan (similar to sharingan but it only copies other bloodline techniques) Im not really sure about that name but i think its close to the meaning of dragon eyes?

Families- None (Last suvivor of her kind or clan)

Pictures: (sorry but i drew yondaime hokage in that pic but she is the one on the right)
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/kilala_ceres/My%20Creation/IMG_0836-2.jpg
(another pic i drew of her but i didnt finish her hair so i lefted it white)
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/kilala_ceres/My%20Creation/IMG_0837.jpg
i like it.. it's way better than sasha.:( :mad: :)
;)

[Ryuu Kygro]

Jutsu: Ryuuka Intou
Signs: part1. Tora, Ryu, Hebi part2. Ryu, Hebi, Uma, Tori, Inu, Tora
Type:ninjutsu (I think tell me if it isn't)
Disadvantages: 1.it uses up a ton of chakra to use 2.you need a sword or a big knife. 3.you need almost perfect chakra control 4. if you use part 2 if you miss you will die unless you can do the hand signs again in less then 10 seconds.
Advantages: part 1.You can kill the enemy if you can make dead center eye contact because they will start to see mutipule of you. Part 2. this only works if you have a demon sealed in you. as i said before you get only one shot at hitting them. it's almost a killer strike because your speed is enhanced. but it's not used for long range attacks. it only lasts 60 seconds if you don't try to hit them.

i just needed to add my signature to my reply, but i had no idea how to do it any other way.

Jutsu: Deba Itami
Signs: 1,3,5,7,9,11,2,4,6,8,10,12 three times each day at the same time as the last day.
Type:Ninjutsu
Disadvantages: 1.A ton of chakra is used. 2. It takes three days to actavite the jutsu. 3. scerw up on day 1 and you're going to be dead because it's reversed. 4.
scerw up on day 2 and you just used up a ton of chakra for nothing. 5. scerw up on day 3 and you will be sharing the killing pain with the victim. 6. if you don't have almost perfict chakra control your comitting suidside.
Advantage: it's a unstopable killing jutsu once actavited corectly

[YamihiRyutenshi]

i like it.. it's way better than sasha.:( :mad: :)
;)

Aww, how sweet of u to say that ^.^

[shadowyondaime]

name: reflex no jutsu :P
type: ninjutsu
max use: lvl 5 needs wind chakra
advantage: at highest level improves reflexes 20 times
disadvantage: 1 use it too much and you could go crazy 2 when starting the jutsu you cant stop untill it work out itself.

[Akatsuki_King]

YamihiRyutenshi, awesome pics!
check out my story, Yokai Sharingan at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3155550/1/

[Chojifly]

First Name: Yukio, meaning “Gets what he wants”
Last name: Maro, meaning “myself”

Yukio comes from a clan who specifically use psychic based Jutsu. But, as a young boy, he accidentally witnessed his father kill an enemy with his Psychic powers, and vowed never to use them. As he grew older, he realized that it was necessary to use some sort of Jutsu if you were to be a ninja, and began developing his own type of jutsu. The type of Jutsu he uses are specifically for enhancing the power of his kunai and shuriken. He also found that it was necessary to kill enemies, and realized his father had done nothing wrong, which caused him to begin incorporating his psychic abilities into his kunai jutsu. Since his family is a clan of psychic users, they sealed a creature made of pure chakra to him, called the Haruki. He only summons this creature in dire situations, as it drains just about all of his chakra, and most of the time he is left unconscious after the fight. Below is a list of some of his jutsu. (I don’t know the Japanese names, so they’re in English.)

Kunai enhancement: Shocking Jutsu- injects electricity into his kunai, so that if it hits its target, it gives them an electrical shock.

Kunai enhancement: Flame Burst Jutsu- makes it so that whenever the kunai makes contact with something, it will explode.

Kunai enhancement: Whirlwind Jutsu- makes it so that if the kunai misses its mark, a surge of wind that the user is controlling maneuvers the kunai.

Future shot: Kunai Blast Jutsu- Fires a kunai into the future, which pops out randomly at any time during the fight (the user has no control of when it reappears).

Kunai conversion Jutsu- Takes whatever the user happens to be holding and transforms it into a kunai.

Kunai Storm Jutsu- Causes kunai to fall from the sky like rain.

Kunai Minefield Jutsu- To be used after Kunai storm jutsu, this causes all the kunai that just fell to explode.

Mind Reader Jutsu-Lets Yukio read the opponents mind.

Summoning Jutsu- Summons Haruki

*Any of these jutsu can also be used for shurikens or any variant of the two.


Never trying to learn his family’s jutsu has caused Yukio to forget most of the psychic jutsu he knew from birth. The only one he remembers is Mind Reader Jutsu, which proves to be very helpful in some cases. Due to his psychic background, he and his family are loaded with chakra and chakra control. He excels in ninjutsu, is pretty much average with genjutsu, and is a little below average in taijutsu. He is from konoha, and is now a chunin.

As for his appearance, he wears a gray overcoat much like Shino’s, but you can see everything above his neck, and it cuffs out at the wrists. His skin is tanned and his muscles are slightly defined. His biggest features are his chest and shoulders, but they’re not that much more defined than the rest. He has short messy hair. He looks like I would think a blacksmith would look like.

Keep in mind, I’m not finished, and I’m taking suggestions. And I suck at drawing, so there’s no picture for him. Please reply!:D

[Ryuu Kygro]

Jutsu: Thousand year dragon
Signs: Ryu, Tora, Uma, Wolf (read my story to find out about wolf)
Type: Ninjutsu
What it does: Stage 1: you're breathing heat. Stage 2. you're shooting sparks out of your mouth. Stage 3. you're now raining them with fire. Stage 4. if they're not dead befor stage 4, you'll be burning them alive with lava.
Disadvantages: 1. they're four stages 2. a high level of chakra control is needed. 3. to get to stage 4 you need a @#$% ton of chakra. 4. you're @#$@ lucky if your not dead the from lack of air. (Unless you can hold your breath for a while.)
Plus can i use some of your charaters in my storys? if yes tell me THANKS.

[cheese no koma]

Kuchiyose Pikachu- Summons pikachu to deal thunderbolt to nearby enemies. Pikachu may turn on the user depending on its mood.

Bankai no jutsu- Boost the user's taijutsu level to that of a kage. During this period, the user can only use taijutsu.

[Ryuuchi]

Ok i hope u dont mind but i'm kind of nuts when it come to inventing jutsus and characters so i'm gonna post alot if thats ok :P sorry about spelling

Jutsu: Futon: Hageshii Tatsumaki (Furious Tornado)
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a massive Tornado (level 4 or 5) around the user for a period of time.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Massive destructive power but user has to stay still for the duration and if hit the tornado stops. User has to have amazing wind based jutsu control. It also can’t be directed to one spot so it attacks everything. Uses a lot of chakra.
Hand seals required: 24 hand seals.

Jutsu: Raiton: Senkou (Flash)
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creats a flash of light from hand (kind of like a Flash bang grenade) that blinds near aponents.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Awesome for escaping but doesn’t do damage and if opponent closes his eyes there is no effect.
Hand seals required: 5 hand seals.

more to come if u don't mind :P

[Ryuuchi]

Ok I know I already posted yesterday but I couldn’t resist, I made this char up when I started reading Naruto and I love it its my Fav, sorry if this is too big think I over did it but I love making chars up and their stories. Again sorry if its too big (dam I’m annoying :P)

Name: Keiichi Sasaki
Age: 17
Affiliation: None (Previously from a small ninja village called Ryugakure in a small country between Land of Wind and Land of Fire).
Class: Missing-nin.
Mission in life: Kill 3 people, one is now the 5º Hokage, the other is a member of Akatsuki and the last one is the leader of an unknown ninja clan.
Weapon of choice: Two Swords and Chains.
Especially: Best at Ninjitsu, good Taijutsu skills, almost no Genjutsu.
Element: Wind and Lighting
Kekkei Genkai: Ryuuchi (Dragon Blood).
Kekkei Genkai Specifications: Very rare kekkei genkai that only the Sasaki family possesses, only one each 100 years has Ryuuchi.
Kekkei Genkai Ability: Ryuuchi is a strong but rare kekkei genkai that only becomes active after a big traumatic experience. It has 2 stages:
1º Stage: This is always active. Gives a great regeneration (like Naruto) and enhances all 5 senses. Makes one faster, stronger and a bigger chakra reserve then normal humans. Almost Sharingan like learning ability.
2º Stage: When the second stage is activated (only via strong emotions like anger) user gains claws, fangs, a tail, horns and a green scales over much of his body. The user gains unimaginable power and is able to use all 5 elements (fire, water, lighting, wind and earth). Unfortunately user looses consciousness to the beast within, his only target is the one he is fighting before 2º stage but when target is dead or gone user starts an unstoppable rampage, not capable of distinguishing friend from foe, until his chakra runs out.
When 2º Stage is deactivated the user will have no chakra and won’t be able to move for a set number of days (depending on his power).
There is a myth about a 3º stages but none alive knows if it’s true.

Keiichi’s Story: Keiichi was the 2º born of a family of ninjas in a village called Ryugakure, having no ninja ability and chakra at a young age he said to be the only boy of the Sasaki family not able to become a ninja. But 10 years ago a medic-nin by the name of Tsunade claming that she lost all her money at gambling asked to stay at the Sasaki house for the night because it was getting late and she couldn’t reach her home before night fall, which the head of the family didn’t mind because of his good natured personality. The next day, 30 minutes after Tsunade departure they saw that she left behind a necklace which Keiichi, that took a liking to her, offered to chase after her to retrive it. While he was gone a group of unknown ninjas stormed the Sasaki house looking for Tsunade, and when they heard that she was there no longer they started killing everyone until all Sasakis but Keiichi were dead. When Keiichi arrived he saw a group of man exiting his home, after hiding himself he saw 2 men with a sinister look and the biggest murder intent he ever saw, one said whit a psychotic smile “That old man was the toughest one, but not much from the others.” and the other one said to the group “Seems like she went north, find Tsunade, I want the Second’s Necklace!”.
After they were gone Keiichi entered the house and to his horror everyone was dead. Gazing at the bodies of his dead family something inside him started burning and a tattoo on his back started to appear, it was his Kekkei Genkai the rumored Ryuuchi.
After some time passed Keiichi found out that his strength, speed and chakra had grown ALOT. That’s when he started training to become a ninja and kill the 3 people responsible for the murder of his family, Tsunade and the 2 assassins. When he was 15 of age he found out the one of the killers was an Akatsuki member and started preparing for his hunt when the village elder trying to stop him, told him that if he when he will be considered a missing-nin and so hunted by AMBU (the elder feared not for his death but if his knowledge, skills and power fell into the wrong hands), Keiichi said that he didn’t care and left. When he was 16 (turning 17) he found out that the reason for the lost of his family is now the 5º Hokage of Konoha which pissed him off.

OK this is not my drawing becouse i suck at drawing but it looks soo much like what i imagined.
http://www.nikogeyer.com/gallery/besm_ninja.jpg and the tatto http://files.vector-images.com/clipart/tattoo437.gif
I repeat this is NOT my drawing i can only dream of drawing like that :P
If u whant to know the rest of the story (has if u would lol i suck) send me a private messege :P

[Akatsuki_King]

Ryuuchi, I like ur character, and would be interested in knowing which Akatsuki member you were refurring to when you described your charater's killer. :D

[Clashkh]

Ok, im new to the forums, i think mostly registered for this thread :D, but anyway...
I dont have a own character by now, but im already starting to create some jutsus...
As im known as THE guy for any Kind of Ninja Weapons by my "Naruto Friends"^^ im using mostly distance jutsus and weapons and im not really good at taijutsu... But now, off with my Jutsus:

Botto mono no jutsu - Burning Weapons no Jutsu : This will make the Weapons you throw Burn... not quite special but anyway kinda useful...
Advantages: Hitting your enemy with a Kunai which is Burning will after all effect that HE will burn!
Disadvantages: There aren`t really any as throwing a Kunai is fast and easy
Handseals: Tiger, Dragon.
Chakra Usage: 0,2% per Weapon



fukushiki arare to furu mono no jutsu - Multiply Weapons No Jutsu: This will multiply your Kunai and other weapons. Really good after using Botto mono no Jutsu, as your Enemy will be Confronted with a huge amount of Kunai or Shuriken, which are burning!
Advantages:Same as the upper one, but the fact that he will have a variable
amount of Kunai flying towards him will make it quite "troublesome"^^
Disadvantages:Creating too many Weapons will use A Huge amount od Chakra which is really dangerous for a Character who is really bad at Taijutsu
Handeals:Ox, Boar, Dog, Ram, Ox
Chakra usage: also 0,2 % per weapons, as kunai are really small things.



Kontororu Mono no Jutsu - Weapon Control no Jutsu: With this Jutsu you will be able to Control an Amount of threwn Kunai or Shuriken from the Distance, making it quite easy to hit your enemy with them when you mastered this Technique.
Advantages:You can still hit your enemy with Kunai and so on, which are about to miss their Target
Disadvantages:AS you have to totally focus on your Controlled Weapons, you will not be able to notice when somebody gets near you.
Handseals:Monkey, Snake, Rat, Horse
Chakra Usage:0,5% per Second.

All these Techniques should be used as a combo, but number 3 can be left off...

And the Last two, alo usefull for somebody who`s bad at Taijutsu:

Junkan Kunai no Jutsu - Rotating Kunai No Jutsu: This will make your Kunai Rotate, effected by a chakra stream just like the one from Rasengan.
Advantages:Your weapon will be able to drill throug Trees and even more depending on the Round per Second of you Kunai.
Disadvantages:There arent really any.
Handseals:Any single handeseal will be Good for this, but you have to turn your non-holding hand round the Kunai.
Chakra Usage:5%

The last one isn`t my creation, it`s just a copy of the exchange no jutsu, which you use to one of your thrown weapons, which will defintely hit your enemy. you use it around 1 meter away from your Opponent, and then you exchange yourself with the Kunai, so that you will kick your enemy with the Power of Rotation and the Speed of your Kunai.


That`s all hope u like `em :D

Edit: I just made a Little Avatar of Him on Tektek.org:
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6495/tek070510bbac89fp8.png

[Ryuuchi]

Ok i have no idea if u guys liked my char or not but since i have nothing to do i dicided to continue whit the story, prologue is over. Altough this is a story i made, i'm gonna put it has spoiler becouse it maybe an alternate reallity from the real one but contains alot of things that only manga readers would know, but enjoy :P(hope u like it)

Team Hebi on its way to their target (one of Akatsuki) was walking down a path near a river while Jugo muttered something:
Jugo:”Next is a guy… No a girl… No got to be a guy…”
Suigetsu:”Jugo shut the hell up”
Jugo:”Girl… No defenetly a guy that I’m going to kill!!!”
That’s when he spots a GUY laying down near the river shouts:
Jugo:”A GUY, YOU’RE DEAD!!!”
Whit a jump he turns his arm into a battering ram like weapon and give a tremendous punch that lifts a lot of dust covering Jugo and his victim.
Suigetsu:”Ahh crap there he goes again, can’t say I feel sorry for the guy.”
Sasuke(Whit a fast reaction):”Watch Out!!!” and jumps to the side pulling Karin (yea she liked it) and at that moment Jungo comes flying out of the dust cloud like something strong hit him, hitting Suigetsu which liquefied then returned to normal saying:
Suigetsu:”WTF!!!”
At that moment when the dust cloud started to dissipate Team Hebi saw the same guy Jugo hit standing up (You probably guessed it was Keiichi by now I hope :P) who said:
Keiichi:”I was taking a nice nap and u dicks had to ruin it”
Suigetsu:”Who the hell are you?”
Keiichi:”1º you ruin my nap now you want my name? You retarded?”
Well that would piss off anyone especially Suigetsu who attacked Keiichi whit his zanbatō (huge sword).
Keiichi:”Damm, can’t be helped Raiton: Denkou Kekkai (Lightning Release: Lightning Barrier) (gonna post specifics when finished)”
A barrier of lighting appears and when Suigetsu hits it he gets the shock of his life.
Keiichi:”I saw your little liquefying trick, but won’t do much if I just shock you.”
Suigetsu:”You Fcker, I’m gonna kill…”
At that moment Sasuke steps between the two:
Sasuke(Calm has always):”That’s enough!”
Suigetsu:”WHAT???Get out of the way I’m gonna kill the bastard!!!”(Guess his pissed :P)
Sasuke:”Its more likely he kills you so step back, NOW”
Well that would scare anyone shitless so even Suigetsu stepped back.
Sasuke(turning to Keiichi):”Your strong”
Keiichi(a bit pissed):”So???”
Sasuke:”So I whant you on my team, Team Hebi”
ok here it was thats about one chappters worf, the next part i didn't wrigth so when i do i'll post (that is if it isn't a bother :P)

BTW thanks to Clashkh's idea of making a char in Tektek.org i made Keiichi just like i imagined http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9617/tek070510a2b399hq0.png and his dark style thats my fav but too sinister http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1373/tek07051020715ch8.png

Now the jutsu:

Jutsu: Raiton: Denkou Kekkai (Lightning Release: Lightning Barrier)
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a dome like barrier around user that protects him from atacks.
Advantages:Protects user and allys from atacks and if it is a fisical atack it will give him a shock.
Disadvantages: User has to have amazing Lightning based jutsu control. Uses a lot of chakra. He can't Move while its on.
Hand seals required: 8 hand seals. Dog-Boar-Ox-Dog-Dragon-Ram-Tiger-Dragon in this order :P

[Darkanus]

Let me start by saying, Ryuuchi, interresting story, when is the rest comming out?:D

OK heres my Jutsu:

Name: Doton: Yurasu Gosunkugi no Jutsu (Earth Style: Rock Spike no Jutsu)
Effect: Creates a spike made of rock that lanches it's self from the ground has ninjas wishes.
Advantages: Great for short, midium and long raged atacks, spikes lanche at high speed and power.
Disadvantages: Low Accuracy. High chakra is nessesary. Can only fire one at time.
Chakra Expence: 10% for each spike.
Hand Seals: 16 in this order--- Ox Dog Dragon Tiger Ox Snake Ox Dog Ox Dog Dragon Tiger Ox Snake Ox Dog

Hope you guys like it :P Registered specially to post Jutsu :D

[HiroInazuma]

Name: Hirohito(Emperor/Crown Prince) Inazuma(Lightning) Lightning Emperor

Age: 15 (appears in part 2)

Rank: Chuunin

Village: Konoha and Village Hidden in Clouds

Birth: 13th July 1990

Family: Evil twin brother, Raikage(father),Mother(Konoha Jounin), Little brother Yuusuke, Little Sister Midori

Unique Traits: Holder of thunder half Hachibi, Doujutsu Ikazuchigan, Alternate Entity Rage Inazuma, Pure blood of the creator of the Ikazuchigan who was blessed by an angel who gave the child the Ikazuchigan because the childs father died to protect women and children who's husbands were slaughtered. The Ikazuchigan allows him to see electricity in peoples bodies and copy their jutsus by focusing on their nerves electricity and copying it to the jutsu however he remembers it for the rest of his life it also allows his to increase, decrease, turn on or off the electricity however it takes a large amount of chakra enough to tire him out completely if he turns it on or off, it also has different stages similar to the sharingan

Hobbies: Annoying his team mates Ciel and Trei, Embarassing his father Raikage

Weapon of Choice: Twin Ikazuchigan adapted long samurai swords that shapeshift into different weapons using shape manipulation

Chakra type: Wind, Lightning, Fire

Strengths: Speed, Taijutsu, Ninjutsu (50 of which he created)

Weaknesses: Ice, cold climates, genjutsu users

Taijutsu type: Thunder fist

Favourite Ninjutsu: Kaminariken Hakai jutsu (Thunder sphere of Destruction), Ryuusora jutsu(Sky Dragon), Inazuma Tora Jutsu(Lightning tiger) Alive Giant Hiro Imitation Jutsu, Kuuchiyose no jutsu summons twin tigers sometimes 3 (Cyclone, Thunder, Blaze)

Background: Raised as loyalty however Hiro always sneaked out and played pranks to ruin his reputation he was a genius ninja but hated being 1 so he joined the academy at 7 graduated with top marks at 10 went training with his father for 3 1/2 years became a chuunin at 13 he was often teased for being the only one not to become a chuunin however he settled this by hanging them on the rooftop of the academy with their underwear, he activated his doujutsu at the age of 11. Hiro often lived in the shadow of his twin brother Kiromoto Inazuma until he became corrupt at the age of 11 while they were training together so Trei took his place in the team. His mother is their jounin teacher and Hiro occasionally gets the #@%$ beaten out of him by Ciel or Sakura (mostly Ciel) him and Naruto are friends he goes to Konoha to train or to do missions given to him by Tsunade.
He acts as a living peace treaty

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7148/tek0705115d0871kz1.png

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7537/tek07051188e152bh3.png Hiro is now Rage Inazuma and at this state he will fight anyone Hiro hates this is because his mind is dominant but his anger is effected by Hiro's true emotions so if he hates you well whooo! Bye you dead, Hiro can only gain control if he manages to calm down and seal him back inside his mind and heart

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5102/ikazuchiganbx8.th.pngStages of ikazuchigan 1 thunderbot, 2 thunderbolt, 3 thunderbolt, and Hakai Ikazuchigan each stage strengthens the powers of the ikazuchigan and the hakai ikazuchigan has mysterious powers Hiro does not know about

[HiroInazuma]

Like ryuuchi i could not resist posting about his two other team mate and brother Kiro and Ciel first up Cielhttp://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2580/tek070512047115ek8.png

Name: Hyourika (Glacier) 'Ciel' Koorimizu(Ice water) Her name is Ciel/Rika

Age: 15 (appears in part 2)

Rank: Chuunin

Village: Konoha

Element: Ice, Water (No one told you about the 6th, 7th and 8th elements did they I'll tell you Ice, Dark and Light)http://cards.pokecharms.com/create/45afd69b602a0f62816ff59652cc2a52.png

Favourite Jutsu's: Kuuchiyose no jutsu: Summons that shadow creature in the picture he may look cute but he WILL eat you. Inazuma Shadow Rage.(it is only these 2 because by the 1st one an average ninja would die)

Weapon of Choice: Detachable Side-arm Shuriken Blades

Birth: May 15 1990

Family: Kazedai (brother) Makato (Konoha Jounin) Sumitori (mother) Aikonyoko (litttle sister)

Unique Traits: Ability to take water from trees and earth to turn it into a weapon or freeze it she also uses it to give her scythe more power, sensing Hiro's prensence by chanelling her chakra in a crystal necklace and gave it to Hiro

Weapon of choice: Scythe and chain tai with poison at the point of it

Strengths: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Chakra control

Weaknesses: Her emotions

Favourite ninjutsu: Kuuchiyose no jutsu summons a polar wolf, Deadly icicle assault jutsu, Really hurt Hiro jutsu(dont ask)

Hobbies: Beating up Hiro and helping him with pranks

Background: Hiro's best friend from birth even though they lived in two different villages every weekend she would vist the village hidden in clouds however at the age of 10 she moved there while her father was on a mission to destroy a ruin where the scythe of kage was kept it took him 3 1/2 years however Ciel also went training with the Raikage along with Hiro and Kiro the original Raikage 3 until Kiro went evil and Trei took his place. She beats up Hiro either for the fun of it or for him being an idiot she has been doing this as soon as she learnt to walk which was at 10 months. Her only goal in life is too become the greatest kuinochi since Tsunade then retire to settle down into a family at the age of 29, she is suprisingly good at taijutsu for a girl her taijutsu style is called Ice thorned rose style.

Next Kiroshi Inazuma
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4010/tek070512ef4e66sl8.png

Name: Kiroshi 'Kageshi' Inazuma Real name Kiroshi however people call him Kage or Kageshi Inazuma

Age: 15 (appears in part 2)

Village: Currently residing inside a on a mountain top in Konoha

Rank: Missing Nin however he would be a Jounin

Birth: 13th July 1990

Family: Twin Hiro, little brother and sister, Raikage and female kuinochi

Unique Traits: Everything that Hiro has but he has the Hakai Ikazuchigan and his part of the Hachibi is Wind/Earth. Also his Rage Inazuma is stronger inside him he justs embraces it more.

Element: Dark, Wind, Lightning, Earth

Hobbies: Recruiting new people for his ultimate ninja army and trying to take over Ciel and Hiro's mind to make them join.

Wanted by: Akatsuki (either to join or to extract), Konoha, Kumogakure, Hiro and his father Raikage.

Bingo book names: Shadow of lightning, Darkness of Kumogakure, Reincarnation of Rage Inazuma

Bio: Everyone in the Inazuma clan had been worried about him due to the fact that because he was the first born twin 3/4 of Rage had gone into him, one day he had a that they were going to kill him so he never tries to destroy the village but a guy came to save him his name was Rage he told Kage that this was a dream. He told him everything about him being inside him and that they were planning on killing him even though they never even thought of that. Kage then began to embrace it until 1 day while he was training with Team Raikage he disappeared in the forest thinking his father would try to kill him he never noticed until 2 1/2 years later at the age of 13 that Rage had been seeping out of him. He was already a genius ninja stronger than Hiro but now his skills were far greater. Kage does not know at the 5th year of him seeping out he would completely take over so Hiro has 1 year left to save his brother.

this so you will never sleep again http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6550/tek070514448c43wz2.png his eviler form

[Ryuuchi]

Ok donno if anyone is interrested but heres chapter 2. Enjoy :D

Sasuke:”So I want you on my team, Team Hebi”
Suigetsu and Karin:”WHAT???”
Keiichi:”Team Hebi? What the hell is that? Judging by that guy it must be a team of idiots.” (Yep he’s a jerk sometimes)
Suigetsu:”What did you say? Sasuke, let me tar this guy apart.”
Sasuke:”Shut up Suigetsu. What’s your name? (Turning o Keiichi)”
Keiichi:”The names Sasaki Keiichi, you?”
Sasuke:”Uchiha Sasuke and Tea…”
Keiichi:”Ahh that explains the Sharingan, nice.”
Sasuke:”We could use your power.”
Keiichi(Turning away):”Sorry not interested, bye.”
Sasuke:”Too bad, we could use another guy like you against Akatsuki.”
Keiichi(Stopping suddenly):”You said Akatsuki?”
Sasuke:”Yes, Hebi’s target is Itachi Uchiha.”
Keiichi:”What? You want to kill your own family?”
Sasuke:”Brother.”
Keiichi:”Well I’ll think about it, hae some business whit them too.”
Sasuke:”We will beat…”
Keiichi:”Don’t worry, I’ll find u if I want too.”
At hat moment Keiichi disappears in the woods near by.
Suigetsu:”What the hell are you doing Sasuke? We don’t need that chomp I can kill h…”
Sasuke:”Right now I rather have him has comrade then an enemy.”
Suigetsu:”WHY?”
Sasuke:”When I was whit Orochimaru he told me about a Kekkei Genkai that only one in 100 years had, a Kekkei Genkai stronger then any.”
Karin:”I felt something when I got near this area.”
Suigetsu:”I didn’t feel anything.”
Karin:”That’s because you’re an idiot”
Sasuke:”When I looked at him whit Sharingan I saw huge aura that looked like a dragon, that’s Ryuuchi.”
Suigetsu:”Didn’t look that tough to me.”
Karin:”Tell that to Jugo, he’s still knocked out”
Suigetsu:”What ever, I don’t like him.”
Sasuke didn’t seem to care much, has always, but Hebi continued on tier way, after they woke up Jugo who missed everything.
A few days later when Suigetsu was taking one of his usual water breaks when he saw a shadow jumping over him. It was Keiichi (Dahh).
Sasuke:”Made a choice?
Keiichi:”I’m in on two condition.”
Karin:”They are?”
Keiichi:”First, no one gives me orders.”
Suigetsu:”Tche, Second?
Keiichi:”When were done when your brother, you help me find 2 others.”
Suigetsu:”Screw you bastard, were not your freaking puppets.”
Sasuke:”OK, after Itachi is dead.”
Keiichi:”Nice”

OK Chapter 2 over xD hope you like it (belive me maybe boring now but gets bether)

[Ryuu Kygro]

Jutsu: Time trapped
Signs: Wolf, Ryu, Tora, Linx (read my story to find out about Linx)
Type: Ninjutsu
What it does: The enemy mind will be altered so that they think they are stuck in time. It's ALMOST unbeatable execpt for a few things.
Disadvantages: Use it to much and your mind will be temperaly altered. it's very hard to do corectly and you get tired fast very fast.

Jutsu: Melting stars
Signs: Wolf, Linx
Type: Ninjutsu
What it does: it's a star that imoblizes the enemys legs or arms if you have enough chakra control. (Any SMALL star will work)
Disadvantages: a lot of chakra is needed. good aim is also needed. and gloves are needed because it melts when it touchs skin.

[Ryuu Kygro]

I'm REALLY sorry if you think this is longer then it should be. it's the pics fault!!!!

Name: 95
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9530/tek070517531240si2.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender:Male
Age:18
Village: Blood village

Name: 72
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3619/tek070516a9ab29ku3.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender:Male
Age:17
Village: Blood village (Ch 4)

Name:66
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/252/tek070517ab4b44qo4.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age:19
Village: Blood Village

Name: 1
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/4047/tek0705178f9629qk9.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age:15
Village: Blood Village

Name: 71
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9616/tek07051682cc69hr1.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Village: Unknown

Name: 4
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8384/tek070516b3d462xo9.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Village: Unknown

Name: 43
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7746/tek07051532e070ir4.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age:18
Village: Spirt village

Name: 64
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2402/tek070515bf6c17nv9.png
Demon Form:
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3028/tek0705155f9c72fk3.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: male
Age:16
Village: Spirt village

Name: 59
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/4298/tek07051583d520ej8.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Village: Spirt Village

(10 is 59 older sister 59 was the only surviver of her clan death)

Name: 10
Normal:
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/918/tek070515547625ux2.png
Demon Form:
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6772/tek07051513d810ih2.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Village: Spirt Village (find out about it in ch 3 of story)
10 Bio: The demon was sealed inside her heart at the age of 3, and the demon made her a killer. At age 5 she gave into her demon side, killed her clan, got the Kamikandie's Raging Seal Breaker (Seal Breaker for short), (Ch 3) and hasn't become normal since. (Kamikandie is the clan name)

Name: 7 or Demon Hunter
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7807/tek070514e4431fp3.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Village: Unknown

Name: 21
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3006/tek070514c16725so9.png
Rank:missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Village: Unknown

Name: 20 and 20.5
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/3946/tek070513a1a567ub4.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female and Male
Age: 18 and 16
Village:Unknown

Name: 35
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7590/tek070513e02278ju1.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Village: Unknown

(35 and 34 are twins so don't think i used the same pic)
Name: 34
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7007/tek070515ed8037aw7.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Village: Unknown

Name: 57
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/160/tek0705141c1330nl8.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Village: Konoha

Name: 29
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1873/tek070513d27329cc7.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Village: Unknown

Name: 26 and 26.5
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1637/tek07051344b012wt0.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female and Male
Age: 17 and 18
Village: Konoha
26.5 bio: he is not human. he is a demon sealed inside her but can apper in a human form. (he only can stay around her.)

Name: 38
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7537/tek070513b1cb70kw5.png
Rank: missing nin (They all are)
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Village: Unknown

Name: 61
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7447/tek0705138f8763dl9.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age:18
Village: Unknown

Name: 49
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6205/tek07051367dd60cp2.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Village: Unknown

Name: 50
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1041/tek07051356ef79su9.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Village: Unknown

Name: 51
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2208/tek070513d04758my5.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Village: Unknown

Name: 52
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7355/tek070513003992kx5.png
Rank: missing nin
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Village: Konoha

All bio:
Almost nothing is known about: 1, 95, 66, 72, 4, 71, 64, 43, 59, 10, 21, 7, 20, 34, 35, 38, 61, 29, 49, 50, and 51. 52, 26 and 57 however are old team 7 students. no reports came of 52 disaperince untill she was suddenly killing ninjas off the streets. All that was ever herd of her was that she had let one ninja go and he was Naruto. Reports of 26 came when 26.5 attacked 98 females in one day in Konoha killing 50% of them. All of the one who lived had no memory of the attack. 57 had no solo reports after she disapered. So almost nothing is now known about her.

[mixmastermax]

My 1st character more will be made at some point.

Name- Carte Noire {Black Card. Its French}

Age- 2,000 {Not exact}
Rank- None

Appearance- Black eyes, Black hair grown out like Jiraiya's, he has a tattoo covering his entire body every now and then there is a brake with the kanji for eternal.
Height- 5feet 3inchs Weight- 120 pounds
The cloths he wears a Black cape clipped on to a black tank top on it is the picture of the back of the cards he uses, He wears black cameo pants held by his belt.

Weapon- Carte carries two decks of black jacks they are in his shuriken pouch which he uses in his jutsu the other half is carried on the belt. His only other weapon is a demon scorpion which he made a pact with. {Based off of Drakengard} Just think of a giant purple scorpion with orange eyes its 20 feet long. Also he can still be killed just not by age. The Scorpions name is Greve {Strike}

Likes- Gambling, Cards, and card games any other information unknown.

Dislikes- Insults to older people, Fire, cocky bastards as he puts it, Uchiha's, and bad gamblers.

Background- Not much is known except the price he payed for the pact time his body won't age past the date he made the pact it seems that he was between 20 and 30 years old at the time. It is unknown if he ever came from a village because how old the records would be. This little information was found by Sasuke and only he knows it.

Quote- "Feeling up to a game of BLACK JACK!"

Taijutsu
A copy of gentle fist called Card Slash. It is the basics of the Hyuuga style but the chakra cuts into the targets nerves and chakra system disabling the enemy.


Genjutsu
Monde des Cartes {World of Cards}
Description- One of Carte's decks reflect a combination of chakra and light making the illusion the target sees being surrounded by a sea of cards.
Advantage- Can't be broken by the release technique
Disadvantage- Any movement of the head brakes the technique.

Jack en Spriale {Spiral Jack}
Description- It makes it look like one of Carte's cards is now human often used with Carte Humaine to distract the target.
Advantage- Uses almost no chakra
Disadvantage- Only last 22seconds

Ninjustu
Carte Humaine {Human Card}
Description- Using a card Carte makes a clone that can only be destroyed by striking the clones head.
Advantage- Since hits have to be a head blow they can last longer and over power opponents.
Disadvantage- Though they can hit the clone is transparent.

Lame de Carte {Card Blade}
Description- Using five cards Carte can make a sword stronger then steel and a thin as paper.
Advantage- Can cut through most weapons and extremely light weight.
Disadvantage- Eats up a lot of chakra to keep active and burns easily.

Tour De Carte {Card Trick}
Description- Carte's best technique Greve blocks off the opponents exits then Carte summons all his cards making them rain down like thousands of kunai.
Advantage- If struck target is dead
Disadvantage- Uses 30% of his chakra and takes a long time to gather all of his cards and that much chakra.

[Ryuu Kygro]

Finally i can post again...
it's just a Bloodline limit but i think that it's good.

Blood trickel.
Users: Tokona Clan
Clan location: Blood village
Known Clan Members: 66, 72, and 95
What it does: Every member of the clan is given a scar on they're right or left hand at birth. In battle the scar opens up and tons of veins come out. All of them lach onto the oppent(s) and start to drain there chakra. Only downside of this is that for them blood=Chakra so normal chakra is useless.
Outside of battle they can lock the the emeny in an endless nightmare because they're living their fear and reliving their worst memories. the down side of this is that it's a MASSIVE blood loss going through their memories.

[7thFonon]

This jutsu would be the ultimate attack ever....
Mizu Bunshin Makyouhyshou
The user of course has to have the bloodline to use it. Then makes about five or six mizu bunshins. After that, Each one makes his own set of mirrors making it impossible to escape.

[Dan the Man]

I thought up another jutsu for my first charactyer, Kazuma...

Kami no moodo no jutsu - By doing the correct sequence of 15 hand signs within 3 seconds, Kazuma activates God Mode. 'Nuff said.

[Akatsuki_King]

lol, but isnt that overpowered?

[Dan the Man]

lol, but isnt that overpowered?

Damn right it is, but so are about half the other jutsu posted on this thread.

[Fukitsu Naruto]

Damn right it is, but so are about half the other jutsu posted on this thread.

-Not especially. The person did not say that the mirrors are unbreakable, or that they prevent any sort of damage to the user. As long as they can be broken t's fine. On another note, the person only said that they prevent escape not that they actually attack in any way shape or form.

[othafa]

Fuuton: Fan the Flames technique...
This would be a wind technique with long range that doesn't actually have any slicing or damaging properties to it, just a strong gust of air. Because it doesn't slice, I would imagine that the user would be able to create a proportionally large amount of wind with the same amount of chakra. I want Naruto to invent it, then learn ANY katon jutsu. Since Naruto relies so heavily on KB, he can actually use his own support jutsu for himself. He would cast his katon move and his fanning the flames move at the same time to provide a beefed up version. Even better, he could summon bunta and do the same thing except with oil.

[Akatsuki_King]

Damn right it is, but so are about half the other jutsu posted on this thread.
lol. eh, at least ur move wasn't another nock off of a rasengan or chidori, right? :heh:

[Mitsu]

My characters name:Hiro Kento
She can attack most of the time without fail but her attacks are really weak so she loses battles most of the time.
Jitsu: Deaths glare
That is her only real attack that can hurt someone really badly but the oponent can easily dodge that one attack
So you get the idea shes kind of weak!NOT for long though!!

[_Eh_]

Name: Hina Henshoku [[Doll Shadow]]

Gender: Female

Family: Father (Deceased), Mother (Deceased)

Appearance: Light Blue Eyes, Sea Green Hair. Pale skin. Her hair is always cropped, and cut short. But, it is in a messy style. She has a blue birthmark under her eye, which is in a shape of a triangle. She wears a bandana that is tied in her hair. It contains her former village’s crest. She has now become a rouge ninja, and slashed it. She wears a one sleeved shirt, which hangs down one shoulder. It has her family crest of a blue triangle, and a green triangle below it, with a red line passing through both. She wears sea green eye-liner. Also, sea green lips stick. She weights 97 pounds, and is 5’ 3”.
She is very skinny. She also wears very tight jeans. Her arms are covered with white bandages, which reach 50 feet.

History: As a child, she was a prodigy, and she was the most skilled in her whole family ancestry. But Village of Grass saw this “beast” or “abomination” and set out to destroy her. They sent the ANBU black ops to kill her and her family, but her parents fought to protect her, costing them their lives. They succeeded saving her. She grew up alone. She also fled the village, into the mountains.

Likes/Dislikes: The sun set, and the moon. She likes the tides, and holds her necklace, with a piece of amber, very close to her. She is very silent, which makes her very mysterious, and she doesn’t have many friends due to this. She hates people who laugh obnoxiously, and who eat a lot. She hates ignorance.


Jutsu/ Kekkei Genkai:

Kekkei Genkai- Ice Heaven Palm.

Description- Hina, is the last one in her ancestry to contain this special skill. When she activates this skill, her hands glow, the color of light blue. And her eyes turn off white. She Is able now, to activate her full form, which includes spikes protruding from her back, in two rows. Also, her chakra levels exceed There are six. Then, four spikes protrude from her left wrist. They connect by a series of strings that look like silk. It then looks like a spider web. Seven strings, 3 of which pass through her arm, connect, and are now like a bow string. The spikes bend towards her; and she is able to use this as a bow. This shoots visible-pure chakra arrows, which are able to sever the chakra system of the opponent. Her chakra is the color of sea green. If her opponent is hit, they can no longer be able to use their chakra, and their life as a ninja is ended. She has 3 levels of strength to this attack.

-Level 1= Rhapsody Light- Crane Shot- A weakened attack, of level two. Only two spikes come out of the arm, and none from the back. It is used as a piercing attack. It pierces most defenses, although it only weakens the opponents chakra system, taking away 1/20 of their supply.

-Level 2= Heaven’s Light- Serpent Shot- A stronger version of level 1. 4 spikes extend from the arm. It takes away 1/10 of the chakra.

-Level 3= The God’s Light- Dragon Bullet- The final blast, and can wipe away the whole chakra system of an opponent, obliterating it. 6 spikes protrude and rip out of her back, and float in a circle around the tip of her arrow. It powers the final shot. This attack has severe consequences, and can knock Hina unconscious for 5 days.

Disadvantages: The bow only can use chakra from Hina herself, making its ammo small. About 20 shots of level 1, and twenty shots of level 2 are all she has, and she has to hit her target. Also, the consequence of having a weakened body after using this attack.

Advantages: Her bow is VERY accurate. It can stop her opponent from ever trying to hurt her ever again. Very effective attacks. Good to penetrate defenses. Even able to pass through a Hyuuga’s defensive technique.

Jutsu:
All Academy Level Jutsu.

Thousand Ice Needles.

Summoning: Sword of the Blue Blood. This sword uses her unique chakra to make a series of strings attach to her bandages, which then can hold the sword, and are not able to be severed. She then can control the bandages to move with her mind.
Disadvantages: Easily blocked, and is hard to control bandages.
Advantages: Less chances of injury, due to it being a close and long range weapon.

Black Palm, Chakra Fist: Similar to the ability to the Hyuuga’s attacks on the chakra system, but attacks the bone system and the joints. This is a taijutsu skill.
Disadvantage: Must make physical contact.
Advantage: Weakens the opponent easily.

Ice Haze: Creates a light mist, then daggers fly rapidly through the misted area. This is a trap genjutsu.
Disadvantages: Can back fire, if you are in the mist. Also, is not very strong of skill.
Advantage: Good distraction jutsu.


Taijutsu: 20%
Genjutsu: 20%
Ninjutsu: 20%
Kekkei Genkai: 40%

Personality: Very silent. She is generally care-free, and loves to take rests. She is a nice person, but her silence makes people think of her as a mystery. She can differ from happy, to extremely sad at times.

Ninja Rank: Unranked/ Rouge Ninja.

Weakness: Suffers from Oneirophobia, and from night terrors. She usually tries not to sleep. Do to this fear, she is often exhausted. Is a bit pessimistic at times.

Sensei: Self

[Dan the Man]

lol. eh, at least ur move wasn't another nock off of a rasengan or chidori, right? :heh:

Yeah. I had a couple of those, but I've been trying to make Jutsu that were goofy as hell, or something I haven't seen before. I especially like making game and anime based jutsu for Kazuma.

[chaiuchiha]

I have 2 characters one is a girl and another is a guy.
My girl is Itachi and Ixumi(fake character) daughter and She has a half brother from Orochimaru and a brother who is also ITachi's. She has all of the kekkie genkie and has a nine-tailed fox demon and a sand demon sealed within her.Her boyfriend is a kid named Sanji and is Gaara's son. Itachi Jr her full brother killed sasuke Who raised since Itachi is dead ANd sakera her step- mom since Izumi is dead. She has 2 curse marks and three full curse mark forms. her half brother Orochi is constantly trying to kill her along with Itachi jr. she kills her best friend to gain the Mangakyo sharingan and to resurect her mom who ends up getting killed while protecting her from Itachi jr. who then kills sanji the day after her weeding. she has Sanji's kid and goes into depresion which then leads to her letting Itachi Jr to kill her.http://forums.animesuki.com/images/as.global/smilies/frown.gif
my second character is alive 100 years after this and is half demon from his father who was killede by a mob of villigers the day before his birtgh and his mom is an experiment from orochi to see if he could implant the Byakugan and sharigan into a person without them to begin with. She was killed a few years after his birth. Everyone is both afraid of him and hate him. his is genius but is treated as failure.he is often picked on and raely eats a full meal. his only friend is the hokage. And even the hokage treats hima san enemy.

[Ryuu Kygro]

Another Bloodline limit (And a !@#%$%# long time to think of it)
Name: Death Blood
Clan: Decathama
Known Clan Members: 1
What it does: it's a kind of a curse because they look like demons when they're not and they live off of the blood of others. Here's what it REALLY does: it is a way to kill some one by using there justus against them and then the clan member feeds off of their blood and and absorbs the knowledge, memories, and there chakra. ( they don't need the charka they change it into blood) and it's a long prosses

[JeyaniOchuuga]

THIS IS ANOTHER VERSION OF JEYANI OCHUUGA
Name:Jeyani Ochuuga
Age:14
Rank:Chuunin
Weight:125lbs
Height:5'5"
Blood Type:AZ
Home:Land Of Waves, Village Hidden in The Mist.
Kekkai Genkai:None.

Appearance:Jeyani Wears His Mist Village headband hanging from his Neck. His Hair is Black and has Darkblue Streaks through his bangs. His Bangs are Hanging from the left side of his face and its reaches his Chin.His eyes are Black but in the lgiht he has NavyBlue Eyes. he wears a Black short sleeve dress shirt with a DarkBlue Thermal LongSleeve under. He Wears Black Shorts and Is Right Handed. He uses Kunai and Shuriken but he usually prefers Senbon. He wears typical Ninja Training Shoes.

Story:Jeyani lives a normal life as a Chuunin in the Village Hidden in the Mist. His team members are Loki and Jendo. Hes successfully done 41 D Rank Missions 29 C Rank Missions 12 B Rank Missions 2 A Rank missions and No S Rank.
his Squad Leaders name is Huri. A Master in Genjutsu. He has a full family With both parents and a Sister name Kryn(Kuh-Rin). Neither of His family are Ninja except His Father Henka. a Jounin.

Personality:Very Cheerful, Caring, and Quiet most of the time.

Likes: Going to the Dumpling shop for dinner almost eveyr day. Watching the stars on his Roof.(He lives in a 3 story house with a patio where he likes to go eveyr night. Hanging with his frends in front of the Bathing Spa.

Dislikes: People who Label or judge him. Misunderstand what hes saying and stutters when they talk to him. mostly girls. People who do Fire type Jutsus.


He Trains In TaiJutsu and NinJutsu.
He does basically Ice Type Jutsus.
His Idol is Haku. Which Explains Why he does Ice Type Jutsus.

Made Up Jutsus and regular Jutsus:

He knows all of the Academy Level Jutsus.

Ice Style. Frozen Ice Sphere
Description: When he shoots his ice sphere the longer it takes to hit the bigger it gets. its a homing jsutsu so the opponent cant run away from it unless there really smart.
Advantages: Freezes the area the sphere hits. Depending on the area their at.
Disadvantages: The Ice is controlled by the Chakra of the user. When the Chakra Runs out or the user releases the jutsu the opponent becomes unconcious.

Ice Mirror Jutsu
Description: Creates a dome of ice Mirrors that depending on the Shinobi who cast this jutsu eliminates the opponent before he can get out.
Advantages: Senbon can make the job easier In eliminating the opponent. Nothing can penetrate the Ice Mirrors.
Disadvantages: When the opponent gets out its is easier for him/her to attack the user from behind the mirrors.

Ice Style, Ice Chronicles
Description: When Jeyani releases this Jutsu a life or Death decision and torture comes forth to the opponent and jeyani.but the tortue part doesnt effect jeyani. a Giant Ice Dome forms around the opponent and a small ice dome surrounds jeyani on top of the bigger dome. The Ice becomes Dry Ice and Shocks the opponent at contact. there are 3 steps to the torture.
1stStep: Ice Tipped Senbon go through the Dome and if hits the opponent. whatever organ or body form it has hit it will freeze at contact.
2ndStep: Jeyani Gives the offer for the opponent to forfit the match or fight. If not, then Jeyani Creates a Chilling Fog, goes into the Dome and does Hand to Hand combat with the opponent. When Jeyani feels hes done he goes up into the smaller dome.(Jeyani is the only one that can enter that small dome)
3rdStep: Jeyani finally warns the opponent that they will die after the this attack giving the opponent the option to forfit the match or fight. If not, then a Thick Hail with Senbon in it Blizzards and thats the end of the opponent.
Advantages: Can kill the opponent during this Jutsu.
Disadvantages: Fire Type Jutsus can often melt the opponent depending the level of the fire.


Summoning Jutsu. Death Dragon Of Ice.
Jeyani is the only Ninja who can summon this Ice Dragon. Jeyani uses the Dragon to make his Jutsus bigger such as the Frozen Ice Sphere or the Ice Chronicles.
Advantages: This Dragon Is 91feettall and is indesrtuctable unless Jeyani releases the Jutsu
Disadvantages: This dragon is like a human understands situations and can release itself during a stupid situation.

Please Tell me what i need to work on if you have anything for me to upgrade.

[Ryukage]

A Rasengan Based Jutsu

Name: Katon: Rasen Tekidan (Fire Style: Spiral Grenade)

Effect: Using the Rasengan and adding fire affinity, the user manipulates the flames on the firey ball to emit 2 shuriken like wings like in the Rasen Shuriken. This is for flexiblity/speed in it's throw. The user is capable of throwing it by packing a little extra chakra into it to give it a boost, the rest is nature due to fire needing air to burn. It burns through the air sprinning and hits it's target, giving off the affect of an A-Bomb.

Advantages/Disadvantages: Unlike the Rasen Shuriken this doesn't sustain injury to the arm due to it's capability to be thrown. But it requires alot of chakra and focus and if not manipulated right it could blow up like an A-Bomb in the users hand. Resulting in immediate death.

[FireChick]

I made up this Naruto character for some time now. Here she is.

name: Yuurei Aburame (Yuurei=ghost)
gender: female
age: 10 (graduated from Ninja Academy)
birthday: unknown
star sign: unknown
hair: greyish blue
eyes: green
Rank: Genin (will become Chunin at 12-13 years old)
Kekkei genkai: Compound eyes (not real!)
Weapons: pendelum

Jutsu (all are made up):
Death Communication (talk to the dead)
Camoflage (Can disappear in an instant and not be seen by anyone; even Orochimaru or the best Kekkei Genkai (Sharingan, Byakugan, etc.)
Summoning Jutsu: Dragonly Jin (Jin is the dragonfly's name)
Compund Eyes (Eyes can change into dragonfly eyes and can easily see the future, and forsee an enemy's plot or attack)
Death Summoning Jutsu (can summon ghostly beings)

Story (Just made up): Yuurei is a young autistic girl living in the Aburame clan even though she is not related to them. She had been abandoned as an infant by her original mother in the village Tonbogakure and was rescued from death by Shino's father, who visited The Village Hidden In the Dragonfly. She looks up to Shino and has a good relationship with him. Unlike the clan she's living in, she doesn't wear sunglasses and doesn't wear turtleneck shirts. She is sweet, gentle and kind-hearted. She was good friends with Naruto in the past when they were still in Ninja Academy. They're still good friends now. She often travels with Jiraiya and Naruto when they're on their training trips. Yuurei has one goal: to find her true mother. The only clues to who her mother is and where Yuurei originates are the headband of Tonbogakure, and a mysterious white ring (which is actually the white Akatsuki ring which is worn by the unnamed Akatsuki member). Yuurei opposes all evil and hates wrong-doing. Due to being autistic, she was often shy and stayed away from people because she was afraid that the people around her would be mean to her. She had been bullied a few times. Due to a trauma a year ago, she has the habit of crying whenever she hears adults (mainly teachers) yelling or screaming. She became friends with Naruto when he was sitting next to her in the woods. Yuurei was reading a book then. Even though there is no age restriction to the Chunin exam, she claims she's too young to take it and will not take it until she's 12 or 13 years old. Even though she's graduated from the Ninja Academy, she can't tell the difference between Genjutsu and Ninjutsu but she can tell Taijutsu apart. She has a weird way of pronouncing things (she prounounces Genin as Geh-nen, Chunin as chuu-nen (nin), Jonin as joh-nen, etc.) and names (she spells Naruto's last name wrong ALL the time. She ends up calling him Azumaki instead of Uzumaki. She has speech problems). Unlike Naruto, Yuurei does not call Jiraiya 'Pervy Sage'. She loves animals and will not hesitate to try and play with one (she often plays with Kiba's dog, Akamaru). She and the Third Hokage are good friends and they talk to each other alot, even in his death grave (curtosy (is that how you spell it?) of Yuurei's Death Communication Jutsu). What was also left with her at birth was a small, diamond-shaped pendelum which she uses to get information from the dead (her Death Communication Jutsu cannot be in effect when this happens). She has been in school since she was three years old. In fact, she was tested at the age of four and her progress and results were phenomenal. Completely off the scale. The jonin were simply baffled that she can do things that 19 year old ninjas with disablilties couldn't do.

[AznShinobiX]

This new character is from the storyline of Jungenki (located on page 17)

Name:Hyuuga Kongou (Kongou means diamond and you should know what hyuuga is)
Male
Village:Earth (Village Hidden between the Rocks)
Height: 5'2"
Birthday:June 12
Age:12
Bloodtype:B
Hair Color:Black
Jinchuuriki:Juubi (Ten-Tailed Tiger)
Seal Location: Neck
Active Seal Shape: Saber-tooth Fangs
Unactive Seal Shape: Regular fangs
Additional traits: Stone Armour
Tiger Claws
Tiger Fangs
Byakugan Eye (Beast Version)
Usages: This beast decreases chakra costs, increases chakra supply, heals open wounds (basically, it improves all of the skills)

He was abandoned before his fifth birthday because his parents considered him a failure. As a result, he became a rogue ninja, perfecting his jutsu to try and impress them someday. The symbol for black (黑) that he wears on his kendo shirt represents his position as a rogue ninja. On his sixth birthday, he went back to his parents and was immediately attacked. At such an early age, he started to release the spirit of the beast that he possessed. Amidst that, the symbol on his shirt was cut in half. After he had killed about 8 people unknowingly, his father finally revealed that he had been abandoned by the village of the beast he had just revealed. Feeling that he was being lied to, the beast's spirit surfaced again and destroyed the whole village. Luckily, everyone was able to escape and started to build the village elsewhere. Meanwhile, the small child thought that he had killed everyone. Since then, he had become a wandering ninja, blocking his eyes of all vision because he did not want to see what he had done.

Six years later (and half a year after Jungenki had left for his journey), he had crossed paths with Jungenki. During the time that the earth village was destroyed, the villages of earth and thunder had not been allies. Now, he started to have a fight with Jungenki. Amidst that, Kongou had learned how to use the Byakugan and a divine seal jutsu (see below in the jutsu section for details). Finally, Kongou had Jungenki trapped. However, Jungenki fought back. In the final blow, both of them were blown back by the impact. Soon, they were found and healed. After that, Kongou told his story. Jungenki replied that his story did not make sense because the Earth village still thrived. After seeing his home once again, he was satisfied and left on a journey with Jungenki.

Jutsu Section

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Daichiryu (Summoning Jutsu:Earth Dragon)
Effect: Summons a earth dragon (you could call it a dinosaur if you wanted to)
Advantages/Disadvantages:N/A
Hand Seals:Ram Seal, then Horse Seal, then Dragon Seal (summons dragons in this hand seal order)
Ram Seal, then Horse Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Dragon Seal (Summons bigger dragons in this hand seal order)

Chiton: Kongou Shouheki (Earth Style: Diamond barrier)
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a transparent barrier made of solid diamond out of the earth that surrounds the user.
Advantages/Disadvantages: It's a diamond barrier, so it's really hard for anything to get through. Also, because it's a mineral, it can deflect light and sound. Plus, it surrounds the user completely. However, this means that there is only limited space for the user to move in. Also, chakra is used continuously to maintain the shape and the defense of the barrier.
Hand Seals: Ox, then Horse, then Boar, and then Tiger (must be done in this order)

Chiton: Kongou Akkusu (Earth Style: Diamond Axe)
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a strong axe made of solid diamond out of the earth that surrounds the user.
Advantages/Disadvantages: It's a diamond axe, so it's really hard for anything to break it. Also, because it's a mineral, it can deflect light and sound. However, the axe is very heavy, thereby lowering speed. Also, chakra is used continuously to maintain the durability and the weapon attack of the barrier.
Hand Seals: Tiger, then Boar, then Horse, then Ox, then Monkey (must be done in this order)

Chiton: Koushin Kongou Ryu (Earth Style: Rising Earth Dragon)
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect: A dragon made of earth rises out of the ground.
Advantages/Disadvantages:This technique does not use much because it is only used one at a time. Also, the dragon rises where the opponent is standing. Also, the dragon does not disappear until the atmosphere disintegrates it. It can also be modified into a new technique. However, this technique has a narrow field of vision, meaning that it can only hit one place, not a whole area. Also, the user must release chakra through his feet into the ground.
Hand Seals: Dragon, then Tiger, then Bird, then Hare, then Horse (can be done in this order)
Dragon, then Tiger, then Bird, then Hare, then Horse, then Dog (recommended be done in this order)

Chiton: Tenchi Otoshiana (Earth Style: Nature Bind/Trap)
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect: Binds and/or traps the opponents user
Advantages/Disadvantages: Despite the fact that this is a ninjutsu, it can be converted to genjutsu. Also, it can render your opponent helpless. However, this technique requires a constant release of chakra and it must be released into the ground.
Hand Seals: Dog, then Monkey, then Rat, then Hare (must be done in this order)

Chijin: Yuusei Azarashi (Earth God: Planet Seal)
Type:Ninjutsu
Effect: This is a highly devastating jutsu. This is considered a forbidden jutsu.
Advantages/Disadvantages-This is truly one of the most devastating elemental jutsu. This creates a symbol in a seal. This seal automatically surrounds the target. Then, a holy beam shoots up, causing the target to be attacked by it. Then, the seal acts as a "target", attracting spires, boulders, etc, once again causing the target to be attacked. This jutsu is ONLY used in dire emergencies. This is because such a jutsu can empty one's chakra. Also, this jutsu can only be used by select few. Those who cannot are devastated by the jutsu; having their chakra sucked in.
Hand Seals: Boar Seal, the Dragon Seal, then Serpent Seal, then Ram Seal, then Horse Seal, then Rat Seal, then Tiger Seal (must perform the seals in this order)

Abilities

Byakugan (Regular and focused)
hurricane Rotation
Divine God of the 8 Trigrams:
64 Strikes
128 Strikes
256 strikes (focused Byakugan for this)

[cp9]

type: ninjutsu
spell/ word whatever: something in japanese no jutsu
english name: rain of 1000 arrows.10 000-100 000 depends on ur lvl of jutsus.

effect: it rains black sharpy arrows from the sky, hurts to be hit.
covers a large area depending on the casters ability.

[Juruzu]

Kazana Rasengan

sort of like xD Miroku's wind tunnel combined but in Naruto's rasengan form and wind affinity.. sucks everything in a vortex..

requirements: Massive ammount of chakra and Five Bunshins to generate enuff speed for rasengan =D

[Adediran242]

Hi everyone!! This is my 1st time posting and am mainly only posting for this thread from now on seeing that this is the reason I signed up. Decided to create a character that i've been thinking about for a while, and i've been inspired by guys like Dan the Man, Eh and HentaiGuy so thanks guys!!

Lemme get started

Name:Yamada Ichiro
Age:16
Rank:Chuunin (recently promoted to Jounin)
Home:Village hidden in the leaves
Kekkai Genkai:None

Brief History: Ichiro was born from an affair between the Daimyo of the water country's 2nd daughter and one of the 12 guard ninjas of fire. Soon after his birth, he was whisked away to the land of water, and began his training in the hidden village of the mist, his tutors and instructors saw great potential in this young star. His skills were so advanced that he was able to complete his academy training and become a genin before he reached the age of 5. The 1st seeds of dissent were sown when the Daimyo of the Water country wanted his grandson to be a political figure instead of a ninja. Ichiro flatly refused as the ninja arts were his 1st love and he hated being in the limelight as much as he hates politics. His already fragile relationship with his grandfather was shattered when he was aware of the bloody criteria needed to become a Chuunin in the hidden mist village. He begged his grandfather to change the initiation, but his pleas fell upon deaf ears. Full of anger, he decided to leave his home to join the 12 ninja guards of fire, an organization of which Sarutobi Asuma and his father was a part of. He left for the land of fire and joined the organization. Soon after, Ichiro finds his father to have left the organiztion a few years earlier and resides somewhere in the land of fire. Not much is heard of Ichiro during this period, but we know his skills vastly increased. Ichiro decided to return to the world at large after four years after and pledges his alliegiance to the village hidden in the leaves. He becomes good friends with Asuma Sarutobi and his team, and now participates in several different missions for the village. He is a Chuunin ninja at Jonin level, but he has been recently promoted in light of the Kabuto Yakushi mission. He works in a three-man team with the genjutsu user Matsuki Kimi and the "Poison Skin" shinobi Kana Minase. They are currently on a mission to search for Kabuto Yakushi.

Character traits and personality: Ichiro is known for his incredible battle instinct, his lightning quick ability to think on his feet and his incredible powers of observation and his clarity of perception. This has made many around him see him as a genius ninja. This and his excellent chakra control has kept him alive for so long. His training with the ninja guard of fire has sharpened these skills to an unprecedented level. He uses this and his incredible intellect to discover things about his opponent that most would overlook. When he discovers an opponents strengths and weaknesses he stays several steps ahead of his opponent and devises hudreds of strategies to beat them. The only thing sharper than his skills is his wit, and his tendency to goof off at inappropriate times. because of all these factors he has ecome known as Kohona's "Eccentric Prodigy"

Well this is pretty much my charcter. I've tried to make him as original as possible so i have steered away from some of the usual tendencies (tailed beast sealed within you, dojutsu that strangely resemble sharingan and Byakkugan, no parents whatsoever, etc, etc). I'll post his abilities later on and I would really appreciate some feedback from you guys!! Also, if there are any good artists about I would love for you to draw Ichiro!!!

[Spectacular_Insanity]

I finally took the time to sit down and think up my own Naruto character. He's not very deep, but I didn't really mean for him too be. Well, enjoy! :D

[Disclaimer: Some of Kazuya’s techniques are made up, some aren’t --- figure out for yourself which are which.]

Name (Surname, Given Name): Saito Kazuya
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Village: The Waterfall Village (Takigakure)
Height: 5’ 6”
Eye / Hair Color: Green / Brown, with hints of red
Usual attire: Blue chuunin fatigues from the Land of the Waterfall

Abilities/Techniques:
Note: Being from the Waterfall Village, Kazuya is naturally more attuned to water and is more adept at performing water-based jutsus than any other kind. That is not to say he can’t use any others --- it just means that water style jutsus are what he’s best at.

Water Style:
Water Shuriken – Creates a shuriken out of water and hurls it at an enemy. Works best if he is near an open body of water (e.g. a lake or a spring). Otherwise, it takes a lot of chakra for him to conjure it (after all, he’s no 2nd hokage). D-rank, offensive, all ranges.

Multi-Water Shuriken – Sends out more than one water shuriken, but requires exponentially increasing amounts of chakra because he also has to control their flight, making sure they don’t break apart mid-flight. Naturally, this requires a lot of concentration. He’s quite vulnerable to direct attacks while performing this jutsu.

Water Dragon – A long draconic fiend that rises up from a given body of water (best if it’s an unmoving one) and engulfs a single enemy. He is developing a similar technique that is called Great Water Dragon Strike; basically a more powerful version of Water Dragon that can strike multiple foes as well. C-rank, offensive, all ranges.

Mist Barrier – Another Water style technique, only this is both offensive and defensive. It raises a thick fog/mist that obscures everything. Kind of like Zabuza’s “Hiding Mist Technique” (Kirigakure no jutsu), except he can’t use higher-level jutsus like Zabuza’s Silent Killing Jutsu. However, he can be more or less silent while using a combination of his mist barrier and water shuriken. Because the shuriken are made of water, he can make it so the shuriken doesn’t displace the mist, and can practically melt into the very mist itself. Therefore, no enemy can see the path of the shuriken nor hear it, due to the thickness of the mist. D-rank, supplementary.

And no water shinobi is complete without….
Water Clone Jutsu! - Pretty self-explanatory. He can also use a multi-water clone jutsu as well. C-rank, supplementary (one clone). B-rank, supplementary (up to a dozen clones).

Earth Style:
Fissure – Strikes the ground with his fist and an explosion of earth and whatever else is in between him and his enemy/enemies smashes into them. This uses no handsigns, and is probably more of a taijutsu attack than a ninjutsu. It is still considered an Earth style technique, though. B-rank, offensive, short to medium range (0-15 m).

Fire Style:
Note: The polar opposite of Water, Fire style techniques are naturally what Kuzaya is worst at. However, he still has a few up his sleeve, just in case.

Flaming Cherry Blossoms (Hi no Sakura): He conjures flames using a few complicated handsigns to form his chakra into dozens of small, finger-sized to fist-sized balls of fire, which he then launches at an enemy. This is more for distraction then anything --- as they dodge, he can buffer better techniques (usually water jutsus). It’s similar to Sasuke’s Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique, except it would be more like a D-ranked technique, not a C-ranked one. D-rank, offensive, all ranges (Note: the potency of the technique decreases as distance to the target increases.)

Power Techniques:
Great Waterfall - This jutsu is used to fire a massive spiraling blast of water at an opponent. Pretty simple. A-rank, offensive, all ranges (but works best if at least 5 m from target).

Mist Blade – As insubstantial as the mist of which it is formed, that is, until Kazuya moves to cut something. It can also form a larger, flat shield in between him and his enemy/enemies. This provides him a good offense and defense, but maintaining the shield’s strength drains his chakra quickly if he overuses it. A-rank, offensive/defensive, short range (0-2 m).

Lightning Cutter (Raikiri) – While traveling in the Land of Lightning, Kazuya learned this technique that enables him to cut through any lightning-based attack. Using some medium, such as is Mist Blade, he can channel electrical forces around him, keeping him from harm. However, such a technique wears heavily on his chakra reserves, and is only meant as a means of last defense. Additionally, if not enough chakra is devoted to channeling the energy that he is trying to redirect, he will feel the full force of whatever attack is being employed against him. Thus, his challenge is to use the necessary amount of chakra without overdoing it (and leaving himself exhausted and vulnerable to another subsequent attack). A-rank, offensive/defensive, short range (0-2 m)

He also possesses the basic Academy jutsus. As a side note, he’s most adept at running over water or mud, and it takes little effort for him to do so, since he’s lived in or near water for most of his life. Also, he possesses no S-ranked jutsus. Poor Kazuya, he’s still just a chuunin. T_T

Biography:
He was raised in the Waterfall Village, but he left the village and abandoned his training at age 14 shortly after he found out that Shibuki would become the next leader of the Waterfall Village. He was disgusted by his people and their blind faith in Shibuki, who, in Kazuya’s estimation, didn’t deserve the respect that he received, unlike Shibuki’s father, who was, in Kazuya’s estimation, the greatest ninja ever borne to the village.

However, Kazuya did not really become a rogue ninja, per se. He still maintained loose ties to the Waterfall Village, much in the same way that Tsunade and Jiraiya maintained limited connection to Konoha, even though neither of them lived there. Kazuya traveled to various lands close to home; among them were the Lands of Fire, Grass, Rain, Earth, and Lightning. He learned various techniques during his travels, though they are not all listed here. For instance, he learned Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique while traveling through the Land of Fire. From whom he learned this technique is unknown; it is possible he learned it by observing another perform it.

He returned, just in time to witness Shibuki’s heroism when he faced his former master, now a rogue ninja and after the Hero’s Water. You know how that ends. Either way, Kazuya then decided to live in the village once more, and eventually became a chuunin.

He’s currently training intensely in the Waterfall Village for his goal of eventually attaining jounin status, perhaps even becoming the leader of the land one day, once he can prove himself to the village that he is not going to run off one day if he doesn't like how things are going.

[Adediran242]

read about my character if you haven't already, he's posted on page 25, i know it's a long way away but it's worth it!!! i'm going to post his techniques really soon, and working on some new villains.

I was also taking a browse thorugh the thread and I have t say I really like some of the charcters especially the one by Spectacular Insanity. Keep up the good work guys!!!