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Ice Man
2003-12-22, 02:55
was up forums? this is my first time inking... couldve did 10xs better if i didnt have a crappy mouse... well i aint going to cry over it... i usually dont ask for help but uh... can someone be kind enough to cg this plz?

here is the normal drawing
http://www.angelfire.com/pro2/icemaniac/kakashi_drawing.JPG


and here is the inking
http://jonku.com/bsg/kakashi_cg_ready.jpg

Shinobu_Maehara
2003-12-22, 03:06
That's a really smooth inkingpen you got :)
I see no problems, only one thing you need to close gaps between lines if you ever want to color it. This will save out a lot of cursing and yelling at your computer. ;)

noZ
2003-12-22, 03:08
not too bad man....actually pretty good for your first time...if you hate your mouse so much then you should get a Wacom tablet...if you can afford it, cause they are pretty costly....
it isnt a neccesity, but it helps alot with fine details....and god going keep up the hard work with the ouse and all will come out the same as with a tablet...

Ice Man
2003-12-22, 03:12
thnx. im still trying to think up of a character of my own to draw. :)

Love Witch
2003-12-22, 11:01
I can't se the normal drawing, but the inking looks great! Hard to say it's your first time. If you use different widths (?) or your lines the picture will come out stronger.

Chibi Dude
2003-12-22, 21:06
its good but work on the konoha leaf

get_a_life
2003-12-23, 05:33
im sorry but i have to LOL about the konoha leaf. LOL. okay okay i'll be serious now. i think there should be some lines that wrinkle on his mask. i mean his nose does stick out right? and his lips should sort of stick out too.

but yeah the leaf sign is really fudged up. i mean how can you forget what it looks like?!

start in the middle and spiral counter clockwise twice, stop between 1 and 2 o'clock, from there make the stem. then make the leaf's tip at the opposite end, between 6 and 9 o'clock.

there you go, the perfect konoha leaf symbol.

lol.

i hope you dont get flamed by any hardcore naruto fans.

good job though! but i cant help to think that you traced over a screen shot. oh well good job

Ice Man
2003-12-23, 05:38
no i dont trace. although i did use some episodes for reference... heres the original drawing

http://www.hlebound.com/hosting/darkone/ICEMAN/kakashi_drawing.JPG

and again... the leaf is messed up

veilsidez
2003-12-23, 20:57
If you call that a drawing, I think I'll percieve the sky is green and grass is purple.

Quit while you still can. You'll thank me later. :O)

Yours truly,
VeilSideZ

Ice Man
2003-12-23, 22:41
If you call that a drawing, I think I'll percieve the sky is green and grass is purple.

Quit while you still can. You'll thank me later. :O)

Yours truly,
VeilSideZ

fuck u... i simply said it was a simple drawing.. i didnt even put much effort in it faggot :mad:

Raxial
2003-12-23, 23:02
dude, that's not cool. That's a pretty good drawing.

Post something of your own, and as I see you're a new member, you should learn that people try to HELP each other with criticizm here

And dont say you were just kidding

Ice Man
2003-12-23, 23:23
dude, that's not cool. That's a pretty good drawing.

Post something of your own, and as I see you're a new member, you should learn that people try to HELP each other with criticizm here

And dont say you were just kidding

no i wasnt kidding.. and i dont take back what i said... if he want to crit then he sould read the post at first as well :mad:

ok ill draw something now

Raxial
2003-12-23, 23:25
NO NO NO! I was talking about the guy that made fun of your drawing! Not you! No, you're fine. I was saying that he cant talk without actually posting a picture of his own.

Ice Man
2003-12-23, 23:31
NO NO NO! I was talking about the guy that made fun of your drawing! Not you! No, you're fine. I was saying that he cant talk without actually posting a picture of his own.

oh im sorry then :(

to that guy: yeah what he said. and im going to draw something as well :frustrated:

Raxial
2003-12-23, 23:35
If i could draw anything anime related (not that I've tried) then I'd post it. It'd be a little off topic if I posted a couple of my "scenery" things. I mostly do places (largely building related things)

get_a_life
2003-12-24, 00:17
If you call that a drawing, I think I'll percieve the sky is green and grass is purple.

Quit while you still can. You'll thank me later. :O)

Yours truly,
VeilSideZ

lol. thats mean as hell. stfu. but really, give some positive encouragement please.

Egan1
2003-12-25, 16:06
I like it :)

Very smooth as it were.

OFFSPRiNGCo16
2003-12-25, 17:56
whoa, very nice, I like it a lot, keep up the good work dude. :)

Stofzuiger
2003-12-25, 18:44
whoa, it's great :)

btw. what kind of inking tool do u use... it's like really clean... (or does it just look clean :hmm: ). If you cleaned it with your CG program, nice :) (can u teach me the cleaning? :heh: )