Rozen Maiden Fanfic Thread

[Flo]

Anyway, the post of fanfics from the Traumend savage yard if the Fanfic Thread was made.

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung by Flo
Chapter 0 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=612866&postcount=4331)
Chapter 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=619969&postcount=4541)
Chapter 2 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=622101&postcount=4583)
Chapter 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=644088&postcount=5128)
Chapter 4 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=647085&postcount=5160)
Chapter 5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=652662&postcount=5278)
Chapter 6 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=654888&postcount=5331)
Chapter 7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=666008&postcount=5557)
Chapter 8 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=761487)
Chapter 9 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=973148)

Interlude of the Past 01 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=656932&postcount=5374)
Interlude of Memories (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1091614)

Schwarze Feder des Schicksals by the.Merines
Chapter 1~2 + other of his work (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=630139&postcount=4803)
Chapter 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=636299&postcount=4964)
Chapter 4 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=640839&postcount=5076)
Chapter 5 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=651937&postcount=5250)
Chapter 6 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=654579&postcount=5325)
Chapter 7 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=669294&postcount=5576)

[Catgirls]

Hope you don't mind, but I used your post with all your hard work as the thread anchor. :) Feel free to post & share Rozen Maiden fanfics (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fanfic). Please be sure to make note if the fanfic is of a mature nature. No need to scar young minds. ;)

[Shadow Miko]

What a shame I was not one quicker. Oh well.
Here are some of mine.

Rozen Maiden Backlash
Intro (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/1/)
Koigokoro Buki Arc: Chapter One (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/2/)
Koigokoro Buki Arc: Chapter Two (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/3/)
Koigokoro Buki Arc: Chapter Three (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/4/)
Koigokoro Buki Arc: Chapter Four (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/5/)
Waikyoku Arc: Chapter One (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/6/)
*May be gory/Based on (in the style of) Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni.

The Rozen Maids
Chapter One (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/1/)
Chapter Two (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/2/)
Chapter Three (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/3/)
Chapter Four (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/4/)
Chapter Five (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/5/)
Chapter Six (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3092832/6/)
*On Hiatus

[Cinnabon-chan]

Umm.........I am planning on making a sort of fanfic, about a new set of Rozen Maidens made by Jun.........each with a link to one a specific element. (there are boy Rozen Maidens too, cos I really think it's annoying how all the dolls are girls in the manga.) I'd really love to show you the concept art for each of the dolls (they've formed themselves very quickly, their name, element, costume and powers......)

[Shadow Miko]

I'd read that, si their any mention of the old Maidens?

P.S the reason the dolls are all female is because they are aspiring to become Alice.

I'm adding some more to The Waikyoku Arc tonight. Just a lil heads up.

[the.Merines]

In case anyone cares, my fic is currently on HOLD status. I'm more worried at getting back into university at the moment.

[Cinnabon-chan]

I'd read that, si their any mention of the old Maidens?

P.S the reason the dolls are all female is because they are aspiring to become Alice.

I'm adding some more to The Waikyoku Arc tonight. Just a lil heads up.

I'm tweaking it slightly. Alice can be either a boy or girl, depending on the doll's gender. The basis is the same though, Alice is a child of divine purity.

I am working on where the original dolls are placed......right now I am thinking of making them corrupted by Kira's malice, and Jun creates six new Rozen Maidens to purify them.

[Shadow Miko]

In case anyone cares, my fic is currently on HOLD status. I'm more worried at getting back into university at the moment.
Good Luck~

[Megu-chan]

Here's the link to the first eleven chapters of my Rozen Maiden fanfic! enjoy! I have no clue on how many chapters I'm gonna have, the way things are going, it could go on for ten more, I've got so many ideas xD
http://evil-poptart.deviantart.com/gallery/literature/prose/fiction/fanfiction/

[blitz1/2]

Here's the link to the first eleven chapters of my Rozen Maiden fanfic! enjoy! I have no clue on how many chapters I'm gonna have, the way things are going, it could go on for ten more, I've got so many ideas xD
http://evil-poptart.deviantart.com/gallery/literature/prose/fiction/fanfiction/

You wrote that? It's so good! Keep up the good work!

[Megu-chan]

You wrote that? It's so good! Keep up the good work!

Yup! I've got a good following with my friends online, and a few good friends on Deviant Art! :D When inspiration hits me, I just go with it!

[Nidas]

Slightly mature content I guess, but its not H or anything:

http://penrobokai.livejournal.com/1820.html

[RM-FAN]

Hey Flo, ¿when you continue the story?

[the.Merines]

I believe Flo is deployed at the moment and isn't able to write much. But I'm sure he'll return bubbling with ideas!

[Flo]

RM Wieder Chapter 8: To be posted at a very late time.

[Megu-chan]

RM Wieder Chapter 8: To be posted at a very late time.

Can't wait till you do get it finished! I'm really enjoying your story!

[blitz1/2]

"Seventh doll" chapter 5 will be out soon in FF.net.

[Flo]

Fucking finally it's done. By far the worse grammar use I've used in my entire life.


Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 8
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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In the white space of emptiness Megu stood alone on the yellow brick road. With the vast empty surrounding seems to stretch to infinity and the path was nicely laid for her, it’s the most obvious decision was to follow the yellow brick road.

Time passed and the road seems like it was going on forever, Megu wasn’t sure if she walked for how many hours but she knew she walk for a very long time. Yet she never had any signs of exhaustion, even a short 5 minute walk to the abandon church gave her lots of problems due to her heart condition.

Megu kept walking until there was no road for her to walk; from a distance she saw something, with sliver hair, black wings, and black gothic clothes. Its back was facimg Megu knew very well

Megu: “Suigintou!”

The doll turned her head around with her back still facing Megu, Suigintou gave her a solemn smile. Her eyes revealed sadness as Megu stared at Suigintou’s eyes.

Suigintou: *Turns head away from Megu* “Goodbye…” *Walks away*

The words strike horror in the Medium’s heart, ‘goodbye’? Is Suigintou leaving her? Why?

Megu: “Suigintou wait!” *Runs towards Suigintou*

Megu ran as fast as she can, not knowing that she could run that fast. Ironically the doll’s walking speed was like 5 times fasting that Megu’s running. Megu is beginning to lose her companion.

Megu: *Still running* “Suigintou, don’t go! Don’t leave me!”

Megu quickly picked up her pace, determined to catch up with the doll.

Megu: *Getting closer to Suigintou* “We’ve made a promise! We promised that we will sore to the skies together! Please, don’t go!”

Megu reach out her right arm towards Suigintou, just a little bit more the girl thought. Then something stop her, vines appeared out of nowhere, entangled the helpless girl. Once again Megu is losing the doll again and there’s nothing she could do about it.

Megu: “Suigintou! Don’t go! SUIGINTOU!”
***

Bright morning sunshine forced Megu to open her eyes prematurely; images were blurred and hard to see. The first thing she looked was the window and saw a black shadowy figure standing there.

Megu: “Suigintou?”

Megu rubbed her eyes to focus but by that time the shadow was no more. From the window dropped a black feather towards her sickly girl. Megu took hold of it; it’s shiny, soft and full of warmth. She held the feather tightly and lay silent for a few seconds, Suigintou is still around. She took a deep breath and began her prayer for the dark angel’s return.

“Yume wa kaze (Dreams are the wind)
Hikari michibiku (Guided by light)
Sora to kumo wo koete yuku (Crossing the skies and clouds)
Anata no koe hibike (Your voice is echoing)”

***
Shinku and Suiseiseki arrived at the abandoned shop house; Kanaria would have tag along however time wasn’t on her side.

Micchan: “Kana~~~” (Cheek rubbing Kanaria)

Kanaria: “Eeeekk you’re going to set fire on my face ~kashira!!!”

***
The dolls entered the abandoned shop house and left the door open, they saw broken dolls everywhere. As they move further into a room where Enju used to make dolls, everything was covered with thorny vines with white roses.

“Tee hee hee hee…”

An eerie giggle echoed the whole room. Shinku readied herself cautiously.

Shinku: “Show yourself…do not hide like a coward.”

???: (Mocking tone) “A coward you say? Certainly not.”

Shinku: “So what are you then?”

???: “Who am…I? Turning~…”

Shinku: “Turning?”

???: “Turning~ turning~ turning~ turning…The wheel of fate is turning…”

Suiseiseki: “W-what are you babbling about ~desu?”

???: “You gave my belove one-sama endless grief and agony...”

Shinku/Suiseiseki: “Nani?”

???: “Your fate…is annihilation.”

At the end of the sentence the wall started cracking, there after ground shakes and the walls come crumbling down.

Shinku/Suiseiseki: “!!!!!”

The dolls were not expecting something like that, neither was a big chunk of the ceiling threatening to flatten them like pancakes in split seconds.

Shinku: “No!”

Suiseiseki: “Eeeeeek!!!” *Duck down and cover*

*CRASH!*

Oddly enough they never felt anything when the ceiling fell, when the dolls recover they themselves in a graveyard, noticeably there were two holes with tombstones from a distance.

???: “Welcome to my playground.” (Psychotic giggle)

Kirakishou reveal herself from the tombstone, revealing her usual sick smile. Her unpredictable eyes locked on to Shinku, who was believe to be the ‘bane’ of her beloved sister. Her face tensed up and her smile evaporated as her mind kept running with the same thought again and again, to destroy the 5th doll of the Rozen Maiden.

Kirakishou: *In a serious tone* “And your death bed.” *Point her finger at the feet of Shinku and Suiseiseki*

Shinku and Suiseiseki looked and the position pointed by Kirakishou, to their surprise they found the two graves that they saw early appear in front of them. Upon looking at the tombstones they found the words “Shinku” and “Suiseiseki” engraved on it. Without anytime given to ‘admire’ their grave, Kirakishou rush towards her preys with a vine whip at her hand. A swift swing of the whip knocked both Shinku and Suiseiseki back, who crashed into the other tombstones a dozen feet back.

Shinku: “What strength…”

Suiseiseki: “Ugh, she’s strong ~desu.”

With no time wasted, Kirakishou launch another attack at the dolls. This time she summoned her endless barrage of vines charging at the dolls, which Shinku and Suiseiseki bearly able to dodge them. Kirakishou continued her barrage which mainly targeted at Shinku, this gave Suiseiseki time to ready her watering can at the attacker.

Suiseiseki: “Eat this ~desu!” *Fires water projectile at Kirakishou”

The projectiles made a direct hit, which unfortunately served an annoyance to Kirakishou. The irritated 7th doll shift her attention at Suiseiseki.

Kirakishou: “Don’t interrupt me.” *fires the barrage at Suiseiseki*

Suiseiseki fires another projectile at the vine barrage, which dried up and withered as it made contact with the water. Suiseiseki immediately rush towards Kirakishou, dodging and blocking Kirakishou’s attacks until she was within melee range.

Suiseiseki: “HAA!” *Swinged the watering can at Kirakishou*

Kirakishou: “Useless.” *Stops the watering can with one finger*

Suiseiseki: *Surprise* “Nani-ARGH!!!” *Felt a strong force hitting her chest and sent crashing and rolling far away from Kirakishou* “…” *Outcold*

Kirakishou: “I’ll let you visit your twin soon enough.” *Readied her whip and dash towards Suiseiseki to finish her off, without realizing she forgot something important.*

Shinku: “Suiseiseki!” *Appears in front of Suiseiseki and parried Kirakishou’s whip with her cane*

Kirakishou: “Your timing was impeccable.” *Back step a few feet and began to use her new attack, white rose petals*

Shinku as well used her red rose petals, clashing with Kirakishou’s petals.

Kirakishou: *smirk* “How weak…”

In the end Kirakishou’s petals overpowered Shinku’s, pushing both Shinku and the unconscious Suiseiseki even further back. Shinku, heavily injured from the petal attack, selflessly using her body as a flimsy shield to protect Suiseiseki. Victory seemed certain for Kirakishou.

Kirakishou: “It’s time for you to disappear.” *Prepares another petal attack*

Shinku: “Tch.” *Prepared for the worse*

Kirakishou: “Goodbye.” *Launch the petals.*

Out of nowhere something appeared in front of the injured dolls and stopped the attack, the rose petals being cut to little pieces and the graveyard rained with pieces of the rose petals. Shinku’s and Kirakishou’s eyes widened as they a black winged figure standing in between them.

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama?”

Shinku: “Suigintou?”
***
Chapter 8 Ends


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[Megu-chan]

Here are the next few chapters in my fan fic. its just the links to them.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/43878842/?qo=3&q=by%3Aevil-poptart+in%3Aliterature%2Fprose%2Ffiction%2Ffanfic tion&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44622241/?qo=2&q=by%3Aevil-poptart+in%3Aliterature%2Fprose%2Ffiction%2Ffanfic tion&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44622494/?qo=1&q=by%3Aevil-poptart+in%3Aliterature%2Fprose%2Ffiction%2Ffanfic tion&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45119745/?&q=by%3Aevil-poptart+in%3Aliterature%2Fprose%2Ffiction%2Ffanfic tion&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

[SlurEXE]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45265666/

Yes.

[blitz1/2]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45265666/

Yes.

I like this. "Gin will die the most beautifully of them all"

*eyes glow red/evil*
Come on Kira. Make it painful.

[Megu-chan]

I've got two more chapters done!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45576337/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45576896/

[blitz1/2]

I've got two more chapters done!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45576337/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45576896/

Another wonderful good job on those 2 chapters. It seems Shinku and Suigintou have a crush on Jun.

Please continue. Your work is too good for it to stop.

[Megu-chan]

Another wonderful good job on those 2 chapters. It seems Shinku and Suigintou have a crush on Jun.

Please continue. Your work is too good for it to stop.

Thanks so much!! hehe I've already got 18..and two or three pages of 19 started!! a lot more drama with Gin and Megu in 18 and 19!

[Megu-chan]

Chapter Eighteen
Kirakishou sat within her little shack, on the small bed she made. She was watching the small mirror that hung on her wall across the bed. Within the mirror, she saw Suigintou fast asleep beside Megu. Her eyes narrowed, fists were clenched tightly. Just who in their right mind would want to break those two apart? Kira, that’s who, she couldn’t help being so rotten and evil, for she too was left behind unfinished by her Father.
What pissed her off is Gin was finished completely, and given HER Mystica. Kira was just jealous, that the first Daughter, who had struggled her way to find Rozen, and through it all, she has most likely earned Rozen’s love after all.
Kirakishou on the other hand, has not yet achieved her Father’s love, and probably won’t. Her main goal now, was to have Suigintou at her side...and in her arms instead of Megu’s. Another twisted smile slides across her lips as she stood up, and walked to the mirror. Her hand slowly slides over Megu’s cheek.

“Megu-chan. Dear sweet, Sickly Megu-chan.. I will take Gin off your hands. You won’t have to worry about taking her home with you cutie. Maybe you’ll die of a broken heart at home.....”

She giggled darkly as she watched the two asleep so nicely beside one another. She figured it’d be hard to take control of Gin without Megu noticing, but then, she had control of Shaina for a while before anyone knew what was going on. Hopping up through the mirror she enters Megu’s room and hovers at the foot of the bed.

She moves to sit beside Gin, and closes her eyes as she becomes translucent and phases into Suigintou’s body slowly. Her plan would move ahead one more step.

“I’m inside Onee-sama....she feels so wonderful....” Kira says quietly to her self

Gin stirs and felt a little warmer as she lay curled up beside Megu. Kira may have thought this was an evil idea, but it did more good to Suigintou then harm. Gin’s mystica was absorbing Kira’s spirit slowly already. The first doll began to glow, just like she did when she stole Souseiseki’s mystica during the Alice game. In turn Megu’s ring began to glow softly, transferring some energy to her instead. Kira was not aware of this at all, she was too busy gloating about how good it felt to be inside her sister.

“Mmm....Megu..” Gin opens her eyes and looks to see Megu’s ring glowing.

“What’s this?” She leans over and inspects Megu’s ring, holding her hand lightly. She didn’t think anything of it really, it just caught her attention. Closing her eyes she lays back down, her head on her medium’s shoulder.

“This feeling, it’s so warm. Could this be the love she has for that damned girl?” Kira could indeed feel that love Gin felt for Megu, it was just as strong as for her Father. But Megu’s love was much, much different.

“Onee-sama...”

Kira suddenly felt.....bad for what she has done. That pure love could be felt deep within Kira. She really had no idea how much Suigintou cared for Megu. Kira closed her eyes and she received images of things that have happened to Gin and Megu. These were Gin’s memories! She saw things like, when Megu is happy, her smile seems to brighten everything, or when Megu is sick, she felt that deep concern Suigintou has.

Now Kira was actually starting to have second thoughts about taking Gin away from this girl. She hears a voice in the back of her own mind now as she closes her eyes again.

“Now you know. Will you still torture her? Or will you stay within your dearest Suigintou-sama, to keep her heart company?”

“Who are you?...” Kira said, with a shaky voice.

It wasn’t Father, or was it? It sounded more like Laplace. In fact it was. He appears before her in Suigintou’s dreamscape and tips his hat.

Gin could see him appear, and looked beside her self, seeing Kira standing there.

“Laplace! What are you doing in my dreamscape?” Gin’s wings rose, as if ready to attack.

He had come also to apologize for something.

“I have come, for a number of reasons dearest Suigintou-sama. One: for giving you that terrible nightmare. Two: to ask of you something. Please take care of your Medium, and your youngest sibling.

She narrows her eyes and attempted to leap at him with her sword clenched in her hands tightly.

“HOW DARE YOU!!!....IT WAS YOU THAT MADE ME THINK ME THINK MEGU WAS DEAD!!!!”

Laplace simply side stepped her attack, and nearly had an ear clipped off in the process. Kira stood and watched. As much as she hated Megu, it was her love for Suigintou, and her hate to see her dear eldest sister so upset.

Laplace huffed a bit and managed to calm Suigintou down. “Now my child, I did not mean for it to be so heartbreaking for you. It was merely a glimpse into what might happen!”

“I don’t care....You should never meddle with the hearts and minds of others!” She hissed through clenched teeth.

“Onee-sama....do you really love her that much?” Kira butted in.

“This does not concern you!! And why are you here as well? Go dig a grave and lie in it already!!!”

Her pupils became slits, and cat-like once more as she turned to Kira, her immense anger and hatred growing.

“Suigintou-sama. I’d advise you not to attack her here. She is a part of you now...if she dies....you will also die. You two share a mystica.”

Gin gave him a half lidded evil glare as her wings change shape to twice their size and lunge at him at the same time. Her wings had wrapped around him tightly, but only to find he had evaded her attack and re-appears beside her.

“All she wanted was to be with you. Two Kirakishou’s adore you Suigintou. This one, more so then the sweet one you have come to cherish.”

“Then she can go back to her own body, and leave mine alone” She looked away quickly from the two of them.

“Onee-sama....I want to be close to you. I can get over my hate for that girl...I want to feel what you feel.. See what you see....just be with you. Why can’t you understand that?”


“Because I love Megu, that’s why. There is only room for her love within me. Love for her, and Father. No one else may share my love!!” She tried to hold back her tears, as she felt Kira hold her. It was the same kind of embrace the sweet Kira had. When she tried to pull away, she simply found herself crying on Kira’s shoulder.

“Only Megu and Father......but why can I not pull away from you?” Gin was torn on what to do.

“If she stays within you Suigintou, you are one step closer to becoming Alice, and meeting Father. Laplace added that, and he knew how much Gin wishes to meet Father and make him proud of her.

“...If it is one step closer to Father....then I have no choice of accepting her...but one false move....and I will resort to harsher methods of extracting her.”

Gin says with a more serious tone, gripping Kira’s shoulders tightly. All Kira heard was that her Onee-sama had accepted her. She didn’t mind the tight hold on her shoulders. The white dressed doll held Suigintou in a loving embrace. Before long Suigintou awakens with a startle and looks to the sleeping Megu.

“Oh Megu......”

She gazes at the sleeping girl for quite some time, a hand stroking her cheek softly. Kira could feel just how soft Megu’s skin was as Gin stroked the girl’s cheek. Her disgust for the girl faded slightly at the moment. The thought that Laplace had tinkered with her dreams and made her think that Megu was dead, well that angered her even more then having Kira inside of her body. Her arms slide around her medium’s left arm tightly.

“He made me have that dream....could she really have died? No I don’t want to think about it!..” Gin shook her head and buries her face against Megu’s shoulder.

“Onee-sama...I know I’m the last doll you want to talk to....but it was just a dream...she’s alright now I suppose” Kira says from within the back of Gin’s head. She was trying to console her sister from within.

“You just stay quiet. If I have to share my body with you...I do not want you to speak to me” Gin snapped coldly.

“But Onee-sama....if it’s what Onee-sama wants....I won’t say anything”

Kira sounded like her feelings were hurt. But how can a doll that hates everything Gin loves...have feelings? Easy...she loves her Suigintou so much, she didn’t think Gin would snap at her.

Megu had started to wake up slowly, feeling Suigintou clinging to her in such a manner. Her deep brown eyes look down to Gin and wonder if she was alright.

“Gin? Are you okay? You look as if you’ve been crying” Megu’s gentle fingers wipe away the tears from Gin’s cheeks. Suigintou had cried herself back to sleep. Seemed she was so upset with having to deal with Kira within herself, and her concern for Megu, she just broke down and wept.

“Awww..I wonder what made her cry herself to sleep.” Megu held Gin in her lap, kissing the top of her head once as she held her.

“She does feel cozy, even if she is just a stupid human....she feels like Ari-san” Kira says to herself.





The Kira that had her own body was sitting on the couch with her two step sisters, Bara and Shaina that morning after breakfast. Ari had gone off for another job interview, just a part time thing once or twice a week. The three were still talking about their party last night at Jun-kun’s. Kira was grinning ear to ear about finally getting Suigintou to like her.

“Looks like the Rozen Maidens are finally able to get along together” Bara said as she leans on Kira.

“Yeah, I love my sisters very much, and my step sisters just as much!” Kira giggled and kissed Bara’s forehead softly.

“I’m still learning about you guys, but...I really do like those sisters of your’s, That little Hina Ichigo is a great sweet heart!” Shaina giggled, she seemed to have taken a liking to the sixth doll.

The three were relaxing when there was a knock on the door. Now Ari had always told them, never to answer the door when she wasn’t home. Bara slides down from the couch and hovered in mid air up to see through the peephole just who it was. She narrows her eyes when she didn’t recognize the person that was standing at the door. It was a young man. A little older then Jun. maybe around Nori’s age..perhaps a year older or so then her.

“Hey Ari? Are you home? Are you up yet at all? “ The young man was handsome though, short dark hair, blue eyes, medium build.

Bara peered through the peephole and blushed seeing the young man standing there. He focuses his eyes, and could’ve sworn he saw one icey blue eye staring back at him.

“I guess she left for work already...” He took a piece of paper from his pocket and wrote a note and stuck it to the door. The note read:

“Sorry I missed you; you must’ve left for work. I’ll call you later about my project.”

Catch you later

Rein

He shrugged and walked back down Ari’s walkway and down the street again.

“Who was it Bara?” Kira asked.

“I don’t know...he was cute whoever he was” Bara blushed as she hovers back down to the floor.

“Hmm..didn’t Ari say she was waiting for a friend of her’s to come today?” Shay asked.

“Oh...maybe we should’ve let him in?” Kira bit her lower lip a little.

“Yeah but...Ari-san told us not to let anyone in....remember?” Bara was still blushing about the young man she saw at the door. She may have been a doll..but she was still very much a girl.

That same young man was walking down the street and right to the shop where Souiseiseki’s Granparent’s live with her. Rein opened the door and smiled to the elderly man.

“Grandpa! I didn’t think you were open so early!” The young man walked in and walked to his Grandfather. This was their true Grandchild. Rein had come to stay with them for the time being as he goes to the nearest college.


“Oh yes Rein. Got to get the customers watches fixed on time” The elderly man chuckled a bit to him self, and spotted out of the corner of his eye, Sousei, who Rein hasn’t seen yet. Rein’s been here a few days already. His Grandfather wouldn’t know how Rein would react if he saw Sousei.

“Well Grandpa I’ve got some stuff to do, get a few things done before my class later today...If the phone ring’s It might be for me. Just let me know if it is okay?”

His Grandfather nodded. “Grandma won’t be back from grocery shopping for a little while; can you give her hand when she returns?”

“Yeah sure Grandpa!” Rein turns and heads up to the spare room where he’s been staying and shut the door. He opens his lap top and started it up. As he waited he set it up on the small table and took a seat. Downstairs in the shop, Sousei snuck in and hopped up on the table and sat beside her Grandpa.

“So he’s your Grandson....I want to meet him Grandpa....” She says with a blush, setting her hat down.

“Not yet my dear, I still don’t know how he’d react to seeing you” He’d pat her head lightly. He knew she was disappointed, but tried to keep her from getting so down.

“I know Grandpa. But still..I don’t think he’d be any different from you” She smiled and leans against him gently.

“You may have a point Sou-chan...You may have a point.”

Upstairs Rein was looking up some information on the internet. He was taking up photography in school, plus a strange history class. A doll history class! He was doing research on the Rozen Maidens for a paper he was writing about them.

“Hmm...No one’s seen any of them since the late 1900’s but yet sightings early this year have been recorded...” He read out loud to himself. His findings brought him to a page with artist sketches of what the dolls might have looked like. He found one of Suigintou, that was done during the second world war by a british soilder that claimed to have seen the dark dressed...winged doll.

“Oh man she’s creepy...those wings...she looks like an Angel of death” Rein shuddered a little. “What was that Rozen guy thinking when he made that!!”

He came to a series of images about the twins. He stopped on a few images of Souseiseki. “Hey...she’s kinda cute..so’s that twin of hers...big change from that Angel of death...”

He couldn’t get the image of Gin from his mind. When he read the twin’s names to himself he couldn’t help but smile.

“Suiseiseki...and Souseiseki. Now those are cute names...Suigintou sounds...like she’s evil...”

He studied Souseiseki’s images for quite some time. As he studied and worked on his paper, Sousei had peeked into his room, watching him a moment. A deep blush slides across her cheeks as she watched him work. Sure she liked Jun, but Rein was older, and more mature as well.

“Hmm...says here,The gardener twins are never apart for long periods of time. The third sister is protective of her younger twin, Aww that’s kinda sweet”

He says as he scrolls through the descriptions to himself. He turns in his seat a little and spots what he thought was a little boy standing in the door way. When he really got a good look, who or whatever it was had been gone.



“Whew...that was close. But what if he did see me?”

Sousei said to herself as she leans against the wall. She peeked in again to see what he was doing. She stepped inside the room and tiptoed up to the bed and peeked up and over the side. She watched him for quite some time. At least an hour or so, until she heard the phone ring, and ducked under the bed as Rein got up to answer it.

“Hello? Oh hey Ari-san. Yeah I came by earlier...oh you were on another job interview?” He talked with Ari for at least ten minutes before he hung up. “Yeah okay I’ll be over in oh..twenty minutes? Is that okay?” After he hung up, he started packing his things up and getting ready to head out.

“He know’s Ari-san? Then he must be alright then” Sousei says with a blush as she peeked out from under the bed.

Rein looked around and felt like he was being watched. Shaking his head he fixed his hair, and headed down stairs and into the kitchen where he helped his Grandmother before kissing her cheek and heading off to Arianna’s.


Sousei had found his lap top, and peeked at what he was writing about. Now she wasn’t much for the internet like her twin, but knew how to work a laptop. As she read to herself, she found this young man’s knowledge of her and her sisters to be amazing.

“He knows so much about us...I really want to meet with him now...” Sousei blushed. She hadn’t felt like this before, She enjoyed it!



Rein was heading to see Arianna. He had wanted to meet with her on account that she had some important information about the Rozen Maidens that she wanted to share with him. Before he arrived, Ari was briefing her girls about him coming.

“Alright girls..I want you to stay down in the den until I tell you guys you can come back up, okay? It’s not that I don’t want you to meet him...it’s more of what might happen if he meets you. He knows about the Rozen Maidens and all but, there’s no telling what might happen if he actually sees a living doll.”

Ari shooed the girls down into the den, there was a tv, comfy furniture and a fridge with snacks and drinks down there for them. All the girls went down willingly and quietly.

“But what if he’s cute Ari?...I want to meet a cute boy” Shaina says with a grin.

“You little flirt” Ari patted her head and sent her down with the others quickly just as the door bell rang.

Running to answer it, she opens the door and smiles to see the young Rein standing there with his books on magical dolls. Leading him in, they head to the living room and sit down. One thing Ari forgot though, the girls left a few of their things lying around. “Oh Shit....” she says to herself as she stuffed the doll sized items under the couch.

“I’m glad you could give me a hand with this paper Ari. I know a few things about magical dolls...but I didn’t know you did too!” Rein said as he sat down.

“Well with making a doll or two of my own, I had always wondered how those living dolls were created”

She forgot to mention to him that she had completely re-built Barasuishou, and made Shaina from scratch.


“Wow you never told me you made two of your own! Can I see’em?” He set his things down and looked to her.

“Well..alright, let me go get them, The den downstairs is a holy mess...” She got up and headed downstairs to the den where her girls were watching a movie.

“Ari? Is he gone already? Sheesh, that was quick.” Shaina said with a light chuckle.

“No...but he wants to see you...I had told him I made two dolls...Kira you stay here for a little while. When I take you two up there just uh,,...pretend you’re one of those dolls that blink their eyes with they’re laid down!”

“Well okay” Bara said, practicing as she leans her head back.

“Good enough” Ari gathered Bara and Shaina and carried them upstairs. Once she got back into the living room, she carries a girl on each arm and says to Rein as she sat down.

“Well here they are. My girls I made.” She set them down on the couch.

“Hey they’re cute; this little one with the blue eyes is adorable. What are their names? Or didn’t you give them names?”

The little blue eyed cutie is Barasuishou, and this one is Shaina.” Ari says as she stroked their hair.

Rein picked up Bara and held her in his lap. He was surprised at how soft she felt. His hands were holding her around her little waist. His thumbs were sliding up and down the fabric of her lavender dress and just under her breasts. As he does this she blushed a little, he didn’t noticed that.

“Wow she feels so real, what body type did you use for her? Those newer ones that have a soft feel to them? Cause they’re expensive!”

Ari held Shay in her lap and fluffed her hair. “They weren’t that pricey. I’m pretty close with the doll shop owner and she gets me discounts ‘cause I’m always in there” She laughs a bit, hands rubbing Shay’s sides lightly.

When Rein and squeezed Bara’s middle gently however, he heard a little giggle sound and felt her move. Bara was very ticklish in her mid section. Hearing that, he set her down and looked to Ari with wide eyes before he says with a shakey voice.

“Uh.....Did she just giggle?” He blinked a little and looked back up to Bara who had such a cute blush on her cheeks.

“Now before you...flip out.....” She tried to keep him calm.

“She’s one of those Rozen dolls isn’t she?” He got excited and picked Bara up, poking her in her side and lifting her arms and legs as he does that she yelped a little!

“Hey come on now! I’m not poking you!” She hopped out of his arms and over by Ari, hiding behind her beloved master.

“Well no...she’s not....I might as well tell you..” Ari said leaning back and kissing Bara’s forehead.

“What about her...Shaina.” He held Shay’s cute little hand a moment before she drew her hand back.



“Shaina is my own creation. I modeled her after a childhood friend of mine that had died recently. As for Barasuishou, she was created by someone else, but she was nearly destroyed. So I rebuilt her. I love these two very much, and the third one that lives here”

Ari said as she spotted Kira peeking around the corner. She nodded and waved Kirakishou over. “And this is the seventh Rozen Maiden doll. Kirakishou”

Kira curtsied cutely and looked up, before she spoke. “It’s very nice to meet you....” Her cheeks were blushing deeply.

Rein took this all in as best he could. Picking Kira up gently he set her down on the couch between him self and Ari. He studied her intently, looking at every detail, from the little roses that were clipped in her hair, to the soft fabric of her white dress.

“Oh man..my professor is gonna flip when she sees these guys!” He kept a hand atop Kira’s head gently.

“You can’t tell anyone Rein, you have to promise me. If you do, the world will want to know how these little ladies were made...and that might mean...take them apart” Ari held Shay and Bara close.

“I can’t loose them; these girls are like my own daughters....I hope you understand Rein.” She said, looking back to him.

“I promise Arianna. Besides, I really don’t think anyone would believe us if we told them anyway! Where are the others? Are they all in one place? The first doll Suigintou...I think her name is...what about that one?”

“Gin-chan lives with her medium at the hospital” Bara chimed in cheerfully.

“Gin-chan? Oh man, so the Angel of death is real! I hate to be the poor slob that found her...no wonder they’re in the hospital”

Ari became grim and looked away a moment before she said a little coldly. “Megu...is not some poor slob. She cares about Suigintou.”

“Wait Megu?...as Megu Kakazaki? I know her...I used to live next door to her when I was growing up...I thought she died a few years ago..’cause of her heart problem...”

“You grew up next door to her?” Ari didn’t know Megu had friends when she was little.

“Yeah...I was the only friend she had. When her parents put her in the hospital when she was six, I thought I’d never see her again...Now I know she’s alright I can visit her...i hope she remembers me”

Ari put a hand on his shoulder and smiled. “A girl never forgets her first friend. Just be careful of Suigintou though, she’s very sweet, but VERY protective of Megu”

Ari’s girls nod and giggle. They had a feeling he’d get a butt whooping for coming to see Megu.

His visit with Ari was coming to an end and by the time he left, he got the story behind the Alice Game, and what had happened to Bara. Before he left he shook each of the doll’s hands and still couldn’t believe that living dolls were real.

“It was a pleasure meeting you wonderful little ladies” He said as he received a hug from each.





All the girls were too shy still so they said a quick goodbye before he headed off to the hospital to see Megu. Once he got there and found where Megu was, he peeks inside her room, hearing her soft song. Megu was sitting up and relaxing a bit, didn’t look like Suigintou was there at the moment. When he walks in she turns to look to see who it was.

“Oh hi” She says shyly.

“It’s been a long time Megu-chan. I didn’t think I’d see you again”

He came to the edge of her bed and sat down. Once he got a closer look, he couldn’t take his eyes off of this beauty that lay before him. He saw those deep brown eyes and smiled. Hoping she’d remember him, he set down a small basket of flowers and a little teddy bear for her.

“Do...i know you?’ She bit her lower lip, trying to remember this handsome young man. It was his eyes however. “Rein? Is that you? Oh my...it’s been like forever!”

She threw her arms around him tightly, as she hugged him; he returns the hug and held it tight.

“Yeah it’s me. I got word that you’ve been doing alright lately, and I wanted to come and see for myself. I’m really sorry for not keeping in touch”

“It’s alright, not many people would remember me anyway, and wow you’ve changed a lot! You’re so tall nowand handsome too.” She giggles and blushed a bit.

“And you really changed too Megu, God you’re gorgeous now” He said with a slight flush of his cheeks, holding her right cheek gently.

Megu blushed even deeper and rested her head against his hand. Something pounded away in her chest; this was a different feeling then what she gets when Gin’s around. She was still very much a boy crazy young lady. Looking to him she smiled brightly.

“It’s been too long Rein. We were what six? When we saw each other last? “

She chuckles a bit as she looks back up to him; oh she had such a crush on him when she was little. Seeing him all grown up wasn’t helping. He was two years older then she was. When she last saw him he was eight and she was six. Now that she’s seventeen and he’s probably eighteen, her teenaged mind was racing.

“Yeah you were such a cute little six year old that really grew up into a beautiful woman...I mean it Megu...Damn I missed you...”

He held her hand and kissed it softly, and noticed that rose ring. Remembering what Ari said about contracts and mediums. He set Megu’s hand down on her lap and looked nervous.

“Something wrong Rein-kun? You look like you’ve seen a ghost! I may be sick but I’m not dead yet” She chuckles again. “All thanks to my Angel”

“Your Angel?” He leans his head a little to the side.

“Yes, she’s helped me get better the last few months” Held her hand over her heart and smiles. “I love her very much”

“Well that’s good, you’ve gotten better lately anyway” He felt a kiss to his cheek then.


He smiles and slid his arms around Megu firmly. He hadn’t been this close to her since the last time he saw her. Kissing her forehead before closing his eyes and sighed a little. Just seeing her again, and seeing her so grown up, he felt something in his heart for her. Could it be the start of love? He looked down to her and held her by her shoulders a moment.

“Megu, I promise I’ll make sure you get better. I’d do anything for you. Never forget that.”

He’d stroke her hair and look back into her eyes again. He didn’t notice the small winged doll at the window, watching them as he held Megu close.

“Oh Rein. Do you mean it? That really means a lot to me”

She tears up and leans up to kiss him softly. Her hands holding either side of his face as she kisses him. Her emotions had gotten the better of her, mostly from missing him so much, and the fact that he was so handsome now. The kiss got a little deeper between the two of them. Suigintou saw this and narrowed her eyes as tears formed and fell. The only thing the two heard was a small flapping sound and feathers falling to the floor, turning black once more. The kiss was held for another moment before Rein pulled back and brushed Megu’s hair from her eyes.

“Damn...well that felt good...” He chuckles and stood.

“Well I better get going. I’ve got some stuff to finish before my class later this after noon” He wrote on a nearby note pad his cell phone and home phone number.

“Here, call me if you need anything okay” Megu nodded and smiled. “I will Rein...and thank you again for coming...I missed you...”

After he left, Megu leans back and smiles brightly, her heart pounding so hard in her chest, it was that good pounding she felt when ever Gin’s around.

“Oh no...Gin...” Megu bit her lower lip and looked to the floor, seeing those black feathers laying there.


Suigintou was sitting up on the roof of the hospital looking out over the city. The flowers she had gotten from Jun to give to Megu were destroyed at her feet. Tears of both sadness and anger fell from her eyes. Her cries soon grew louder, she felt as if her mystica was burning a hole through her chest. From the back of her mind she heard:

“Aww aint that a shame Onee-sama? That girl doesn’t love you after all...I guess she was lying to you when she said she did” Kira giggled with wicked delight, loving this.

“SHUT THE HELL UP!! Megu loves me....I know Megu still loves me....”

“Sure didn’t look like it to me...looked like she was giving that handsome boy a little treatment of her own”

Suigintou’s screams could be heard from within Megu’s room. To which Megu shuddered a bit, feeling lower then dirt right now for what she’s done. Gin flew off the rooftop and flew over head, following Rein. She had this look of pure hatred in her eyes for him. He looks up and saw what he thought was just a crow flying over head. He felt a sharp pain in his arm as he looks to see small fingernails digging into his skin through his t-shirt!

“What the hell? Let me go!!” He tried to shake her off of him as best he could.





“TAKING MEGU AWAY FROM ME? I’LL MAKE SURE SHE NEVER HAS YOU!” She was gripping his arm so tightly, she was drawing blood. It wasn’t just her jealousy causing her to snap.....it was Kira within her as well....

Kira laughed with evil delight again as Gin flipped out on this poor young man. She actually picked him up a bit and dropped him on his injured arm, and hovered over him with her sword drawn. Next thing she knew she was knocked out of the sky by none other then Souseiseki!

“Leave him alone Suigintou!! I knew we couldn’t trust you!!” Sousei wielded her shears, hovering just above Rein to protect him.

“Stand aside Souseiseki...this doesn’t concern you!!! He’s going to take Megu away from me!!” She says through her tears.

“Attacking someone in a jealous fit isn’t going to help matters Suigintou....” Sousei lands beside Rein and stabbed her shears into the ground as she inspected his arm.

“Come on..lets get you home...”

Rein stood and held his arm and glared up to Suigintou. “You are the Angel of death! I knew it! Megu doesn’t need a psycho in her life...” He stumbles into the house with Sousei, as she pointed her shears at her sister.

“You’ve lost my trust Suigintou....this just proves you’re insane”

Gin picked up her sword and glanced back to the home and shook her head. She lowered her head and fell to her knees, cursing out loud as she cries out her mediums name into the sky.

“It’s not him you should be mad at Onee-sama...it’s that cheating bitch of a medium...” Kira was putting ideas into Gin’s mind once again.

Suigintou wouldn’t believe her crazed sister. As she flew back to Megu’s window, she saw the girl sitting up taking a sip of juice. Her eyes narrowed as she lands on the sill, with sword drawn.

“Yes! That’s it Onee-sama! Kill her!! I’d never cheat on you...Only I have the purest love for you...not that worthless human.”

Kira egged Suigintou’s anger even further now. She took control and made Gin fly to the bed and land at Megu’s feet.

“Suigintou...I’m sorry...Rein’s my first childhood friend...only friend I ever had before my parents put me here...I was just so happy to see him again. Gin...Gin your eyes are scaring me.....”

“You lied to me Megu.....You said it would always be just us....YOU LIED TO ME YOU BITCH! And.....then you go and kiss him......YOU KISSED HIM... I HATE YOU MEGU!!!

Gin was too far gone into her anger now, plus with Kira taking over, there was no telling what might happen! Her blade of her sword was pointed at Megu’s heart, with one move it would be all over. Megu’s eyes were filled with tears before she closed them and looked away from Suigintou.

“I see....then end my life...you’d only be doing me a favor...Since my heart is broken....not because I’m sick.......but because of what you’ve said to me. Just one thing though....I do love you Suigintou, no one could ever replace you....my Angel.”

Suigintou tossed the sword to the side and flew out the window in a hurry, not looking back to what might have happened in there. She cursed under her breath for what she said. Holding her hand over her mystica she stops in mid air and looked around. She didn’t know what to do now that it might really be over between herself and Megu. Poor Megu though, she burst into tears, crying into her pillow after Gin left. It was Gin’s hateful words that really hurt her.

“Suigintou.......why?.....”

You guys get to read chapter 18 before anyone else!! I'm 6 pages into 19 at the moment!

[edgewalker00]

this is the link to my fan fiction. this is my first attempt in making a rozen maiden fic. hope you guys like it. ^_^

please drop by and rate my reviews (even insults/harsh criticisms are appreciated) >_<

Rozen Maiden: Eternal Play

Act 1: Well Laid Plans (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/1/)
Act 2: Medium's Heart (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/2/)
Act 3: Harbinger of Alice (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/3/)
Act 4: Deep Wounds (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/4/)
Act 5: Isolation//Solitude (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/5/)
Act 6: Convalescence (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/6/)
Act 7: Deception (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/7/)
Act 8: Infernal (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/8/)
Act 9: Rebirth and Baptism (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/9/)
Act 10: Crossroads (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/10/)
Act 11: Defiance and Damnation (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/11/)
Act 12: Innocence (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/12/)
Act 13: Snow Mirror (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/13/)
Act 14: Remember (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/14/)
Act 15: Corinne (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/15/)

[EnigmaticThief]

I've read through the first six chapters of your fanfic, Megu-Chan (aka Evil-Poptart) and let me give you my review so far:

I think that the fake-out you did in the first chapter was a very clever idea, as I said to myself, "This doesn't seem right..." However, after the first chapter I didn't find there to be very much of a shift in tone to make that first fake-out as poignant. Suiseiseki's anger towards Suigintou was well-done, and the scenes of her doting over Souseiseki and Hina Ichigo were heartfelt. I think you could have done a better job of writing for character (the characters tend to blend together in terms of personality, speech, and physical mannerisms.) I will keep reading, though.

[Megu-chan]

I've read through the first six chapters of your fanfic, Megu-Chan (aka Evil-Poptart) and let me give you my review so far:

I think that the fake-out you did in the first chapter was a very clever idea, as I said to myself, "This doesn't seem right..." However, after the first chapter I didn't find there to be very much of a shift in tone to make that first fake-out as poignant. Suiseiseki's anger towards Suigintou was well-done, and the scenes of her doting over Souseiseki and Hina Ichigo were heartfelt. I think you could have done a better job of writing for character (the characters tend to blend together in terms of personality, speech, and physical mannerisms.) I will keep reading, though.

Thanks for the crit on my fan fic! you're the second person that has given a decent reply to my work. I really appriciate the crit honestly! :D Things to get better as the story goes on, I start to work more with thier mannerisms quite a bit more, I think I'm getting better with how Suiseiseki and Shinku are xD Sousei is too serious for me...so i make her a little sweeter in later chaps. anyway keep reading!! i just finished 19 :heh:

[Megu-chan]

Here's chap 19! just got it finished a little while ago!! the GinXMegu paring folks will like this one :naughty:


Chapter Nineteen



“Why Suigintou? What could’ve made you snap?”

Megu says to herself as she lies down in bed, crying her heart out. She’s cried too much lately, and can’t take the stress. The poor girl started to have a major attack in her stressful moment. As she has her attack, Suigintou had come back and watches Megu struggle to stay alive. She didn’t know what to do, if she should leave...or sit with Megu.

“Just let me die Suigintou.....” Megu says as she gasps for her breaths.

Gin just stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. She was frozen with fear that Megu might die, and she can’t help her. Swooping over to Megu’s side Gin lies down beside her struggling medium. Holding her arm close to her little body, Gin clutched Megu as tight as she could.

“Just go away! You’ve done enough damage Suigintou!!” Megu tried to pry Gin off of her. When Gin fell to the floor she had this sad look like a lost puppy and gripped Megu’s hand, nuzzling her cheek against it.

“Megu.......please don’t....I’m sorry...I was just....”

She felt Megu’s hand become limp in hers. Looking up she didn’t seem to be moving, or breathing. She climbs back up on the bed and sat at Megu’s chest, gripping her shoulders.

“Megu?...oh God no...MEGU!! You...you can’t....oh Megu no please don’t.....don’t leave me!!!”

She shook the girl a bit. Megu had actually been holding her breath, wanting to see what Suigintou does, if she really does care, she’d wake up. She felt Gin shaking her to wake her up, and felt Gin’s tears on her cheeks. When Gin was giving her CPR, that’s what got her thinking, it was mostly Gin’s lips on her own that did it. Gin had watched one of the nurses do this once or twice before, she’s a faster learner.

“Please Megu!!....Don’t leave me!! I’m sorry!! I don’t hate you.....I don’t hate you....I love you Megu!!........I love you so much.....”

Gin had rested her head just above Megu’s breasts and cried hard. Gin soon felt Megu’s chest rising and falling, and her heart beat pounding again and arms around her tightly. “Oh Megu....you’re okay...”

The girl caught her breath and sat up. She was still sore at what Gin said before, but now that she knew Gin just saved her life again...she held onto that doll so tightly. Suigintou looked up as she held either side of Megu’s face firmly.

“Don’t....do that ever again”

Megu looked away a little and let go of Suigintou a moment. “Gin...we’ve been through this before, now I’m not sure if I want to keep this contract....if you keep flipping out. Why do you keep flipping out anyway?”

Gin looked way as well, and sighed. “Kirakishou is within me....she’s making me do these things....you know I’d never say anything or do anything to harm you Megu.”

“How can I really trust you though? I know you love me but, if you keep going crazy, I’m going to have to ask you to cancel the contract for good.”


Gin’s eyes went wide as she heard Megu say that. She held Megu’s hand and looked up into her eyes. Gin’s eyes had gone back to the warm caring look once more. Her small hand held her mediums hand tightly, and kisses her palms. Inside of Gin, Kira felt a twinge and realized finally and sighed to herself. She knew what she had to do. It was Kira’s decision to leave Gins body.

They saw a light pink light escape Gin’s body and it took the shape of Kira, and then vanished. Megu looked to Gin and held her tightly after that. Pulling back, she looked down to Suigintou, her thumb comes up and wipes away Gin’s tears, and just holds her so close against her chest once more.

“She was inside of you then...Oh god Gin...I...I didn’t believe you...”

“I’ll always love you though Onee-sama. .I’ll go back to my own body...you’ve shown me that...love is stronger then anything else...”

Kira returned to her N-field and sat down in her shack and cried. For the first time she just cried...mostly since she has failed..and figured out how much Megu meant to Gin.




Souseiseki had helped Rein up the steps and into his room. He sat down on the bed as Sousei gathered the first aide kit from the bathroom. When she came back in he was wincing a bit and watching the small tomboy doll walk towards him, then sits beside him on the bed to tend to his arm.

“She’s been crazy lately...but then again Suigintou has always been a little...different.” Sousei says a she wrapped his arm.

“I....want to thank you for saving me out there....damn she’s scary” He winced as Sousei applies a little rubbing alcohol to clean his wound.

“So what’s your name?” He asks, wondering if this was one of those Rozen dolls.

“Souseiseki, the fourth Rozen Maiden” She says proudly.

“I’m Rein and thanks again Souseiseki.....that’s a nice name.” He said looking to her small fingers as they gently worked on him.

“Thank you” She had blushed a bit. Her Green and Red eyes look up to him a moment, well her blush was even deeper then.

“So you’re the second Gardener twin...just as cute as your older twin. I was reading about you and your sisters earlier...but..how’d you know this is where I lived?” He was a little confused.

“Grandma and Grandpa take care of me until I can find a true medium” She says softly.

“Iv’e been here two weeks..how is it I haven’t seen you?” He was even more confused now.

“I’ve been hiding out in Grandma’s room where I sleep in my case”

“Oh that’s right..Rozen Maidens have cases they sleep in...So that’s what that thing was”

He chuckles a little. He was starting to like little Souseiseki, even though she wasn’t as tall as Megu..or have long dark hair..he still thought the tomboy doll was a cutie. The two were chatting like old friends in



no time though. Rein was sitting at his small desk, showing Sousei all sorts of different internet sites just about the Rozen Maidens. He noticed how interested Sousei was and that made him smile.

“So what are your other sisters like? Besides the nutty Suigintou that flies into jealous fits..” He rubbed his arm.

“They are all so kind. The fifth sister, Shinku, she’s like the princess of the group, she can be very bossy, and stuck up at times, but when she is with her medium, she has this smile that I haven’t seen in a very long time. The sixth sister, Hina Ichigo, well she’s just a little kid at heart, my twin Suiseiseki is always picking on her. My second sister Kanaria thinks she’s a genius or something though her medium is just..weird...And the Seventh sister..well..” She paused a moment.

“I met the seventh sister at my friend’s home earlier today. Kirakishou right?” He says as he picked Sousei up and set her on the bed.

“Yes that’s her. All of us didn’t even know if she was real until after we met her. So you know Ari-san? Isn’t she awesome?” Sousei smirked, she looked up to Ari.

“Yeah she’s pretty cool, and those other two dolls of hers..Barasomething... and Shaina. Interesting dolls”

Sousei giggled a bit. “Yeah Barasuishou, we just call her Bara-chan and Shay-chan too! They are really nice once you get to know them.

After they had been talking for hours, it was evening time and Grandpa came up to check on them. Once he saw Sousei sitting on Rein’s lap as he was reading to her, the old man smiled before he announced that dinner was almost ready.

Night time had come quickly once dinner was over. Rein was just coming back from his class, when he spotted Suigintou sitting up on a lamp post..looked like she was waiting for him.

“So you’ve come back to take the rest of my arm?” He grumbled

“No...I haven’t....”

She floats down and stood before him. Her wings were white again, having calmed down. The street lamp highlighted her silvery hair very nicely, and almost seemed to make her eyes glow a warm color. She curtsies to him and looked up again. Megu told her all about how Rein was going to help her get better, it was Megu’s idea to find him and apologize for earlier.

“I uhm...I’ve come to apologize for my actions before....I was not myself...that and....Megu was quite cross with me for how I behaved...my bottom almost wore her hand mark.”

He had to chuckle seeing this doll that almost killed him before, begging for forgiveness.

“Well it’s alright, I sort of deserved to be attacked....Trust me..Megu’s always been like a little sister to me..I guess we both got carried away earlier”

He knelt down in front of her and looks into those soft magenta eyes a moment. “You’re kinda cute....just like Megu”

She’d blush and smile, thankful that he was not mad at her either.





“Thank you; I can see why she fancies you as well. If you get a chance to speak with my younger sister Souseiseki....please tell her I am very sorry as well...I suppose she knocked some sense in to me...I should be going, I promised Megu I’d return before it grew too dark...”



She bows to him and glanced back up as he patted the top of her head gently.

“You’re not so bad after all, I’ll talk to Sousei, she seems to like me, heck I sort of like her now...she was saying something about making a contract...I’d like to see what its like to be a medium to a doll...well I’ll let you get back to Megu...give her a kiss for me!”

Gin grins and winks as she took off, thinking that went well, she smiles to her self as she flew home to Megu.

“Aww she isn’t so bad...maybe a little nutty...but it makes her cute” Rein chuckles as he headed back home as well.


A few moments later Suigintou arrived back at Megu’s window and hopped down.

“So how’d it go? He wasn’t mad was he?” Megu asked as Gin climbs up the bed and sits beside her.

“No he was fine. He and Souseiseki seem to be getting along. I think she might find a decent medium in that boy. I can see why you like him Megu, he is handsome indeed”

Megu blushed and tickled Gin playfully. “Oh well yeah he is cute...last time I saw him, I was just a little taller then you” She giggles.

Gin looked up to her medium and sighed, they had another close call, she couldn’t afford to loose Megu again. As Megu held her hands around Gin’s waist, Gin’s small hands were resting over Megu’s as well.

“Hey....Megu....about what I said before....”

“Forget it Gin, it’s alright...if that naughty Kira really was controlling you...then I trust that it wasn’t you before...besides.....after you said it....I knew you didn’t mean it. I saw the tears in your eyes, and I felt it in my heart”

Megu rested her chin atop Gin’s head a moment. “Mmm....why don’t you get comfy and put those PJ’s on that you got from Mic-chan, you’ll feel better.” Megu says as she stroked her doll’s hair.

“Hmm..alright”

Suigintou slides out of bed and onto the floor where she keeps her case. Opening it she finds the one very pretty night gown Mic-chan gave her, instead of the PJ’s. The doll sized nighty was light blue with dark blue rose designs, with black lace trim on the straps and at the hem. As Gin got undressed, Megu watched and giggled to herself. Those cute doll joints were irresistible to Megu. Once Gin was finished she climbs back on the bed and sits beside Megu with her legs crossed. She left that head band on her head though.

“Oh Suigintou, you look so pretty in that!” Megu blushed and picked her up, holding Gin close.

Gin slid her arms around Megu’s neck in a warm embrace that she didn’t want to let go of, then she remembers what Rein said to her before she left. With a grin she pulls back a little and looks to Megu a moment, before leaning in and kissing her tenderly, then put her head on Megu’s shoulder.

“Suigintou....what was that for? “


“Rein said to give you a kiss for him...well that one was from him.....this one is from me..”

Suigintou moves to kiss her again, a little deeper then the last one, a hand comes up and holds Megu’s right cheek as she kisses her so deeply, putting everything she could into showing Megu how much she cared about her. That kiss seemed to last forever too, and getting deeper the longer they held it. Megu’s hands were holding Gin’s sides firmly and returning those wonderful kisses fully.

“Mmm...Gin....I love you” She whispers against her Angel’s lips.

“I love you too my Megu-chan”

Gin says as she kissed down to Megu’s neck and finally rests against her, arms still around her neck firmly. The two had snuggled for quite some time that night. When they woke up the next morning, Megu found that her PJ top was un buttoned halfway, her PJ bottoms were off completely and Suigintou’s nighty was rolled up to her chest. Well they had a good night didn’t they? Megu blushed and remembered what had happened last night. She quickly got dressed and slides Gin’s nighty down to cover her once more.

“Did we.....do that...”

Megu asks herself as she rolls over, holding Gin tightly. Kissing the top of Gin’s head a moment, she think again, then it hit her. Yes...they had crossed that line between a doll and her medium together. Glancing down to Suigintou she noticed something strange about her. She was still in doll size but, Megu couldn’t find any doll joints! Suigintou’s skin was smooth and very free of doll joints. She noticed Gin had more defined features as well now. Her Angel really looked like an Angel!

“Gin....you gotta wake up and see this...” She nudged her gently.

“Mmmm...Megu-chan...” Gin rolled over and looked up, before she sat up a little more.

“Morning Megu” She grins and holds her medium’s hand.

“Morning Gin...Uhm...take a look...” Megu held Gin’s right arm up and ran a finger up and down her elbow.

“What is this? My joints...what happened to them?”

She’d hop out of bed and stand up, looking down to her knees and feeling all over her body for a doll joint. Then looked down the front of her nighty, She had a more defined chest now as well. Her hands were placed over her proportioned breasts and looked up to Megu.

“I’m...starting to become Alice....I think..is it because of what we did last night?” Gin’s eyes started to tear a little; this thought of becoming Alice was wonderful to her.

“I think so Gin, you’re on your way to becoming a full human girl...you’re even more beautiful now. You’ve changed a bit all over. Your hair is wavy, and your eyes are brighter, and body is cuter! You look like a little angel for real!”

Megu was so happy for her, and crawls out of bed, kneels down and held Suigintou in her arms. Those wings seemed a part of her as wel,l and wondered if Gin could control them easier. Kissing Gin’s cheeks they sit back up on the bed, with Megu inspecting Gin pretty much all over, just to make sure this wasn’t a trick. As she does this, Kira watches from her N-field and sighed.

“My Onee-sama is becoming Alice....I”m so happy...and I helped her...”



Before Kira had left last night, she had left behind what little power she had, just for Gin, and that love she carried with her for her sister as well. This left Kira with pretty much nothing inside, all she had now to do was return to her own body. In doing so, she’d give that Kira a chance in becoming Alice as well. When she leaves to find her body, she found her snuggled up in bed along side Ari, with Bara and Shay as well. She takes a deep breath and phases back into her body, feeling the hug from Ari and smiles.

This was where she belonged, and finally, after all this time, she realized this. She didn’t want revenge on Father, she didn’t want to destroy Gin’s happiness, all she really wanted, was to be loved by a family. She wakes up a little and kissed Ari’s cheek, then glanced to Bara and Shay on the other side of their master and crawls over to them, getting in between the two she fell back to sleep.

“I love you guys” Kira whispers softly.





Rein was just waking up that morning, he had a class in a few hours, he figured he’d get up and get ready. As he rolls over, the first thing he sees is Souseiseki, waiting for him with some nice hot tea and a small breakfast of a bagel and an orange.

“Morning Rein-kun, I just came up to see if you were awake. I made some tea for you” She says with a cute blush.

“Hey thanks Sousei, you didn’t have to, that was really sweet” He says as he sat up and patted the top of her head gently.

She sets the small tray on his desk and hopped on the bed as she waited for him to finish getting ready in the bathroom. When he came out she admired his good looks once again as he combed his hair and sat down for his quick breakfast.

“So you’re off to your morning classes Rein-kun?” She asks brushing her bangs from her eyes.

“Huh? Oh yeah got my history class and a few others today, I should be home before five tonight, then I’m off a few days. I’d love to get a few more stories out of you; it’ll help my history class” He chuckles before sipping some tea.

“I’d like that too!” She smiled and watched him eat his breakfast. After he left, she watched him leave and head down the street from her spot in his room, looking out the window.

“He’s a great boy isn’t he?” Grandma says so proudly.

“Yes he is Grandma! I....I really like him” Sousei says with a blush.

“Oh? I think someone has a crush!” Her Grandma teased her.

“Huh? No way!...well..” Sousei looked away a moment.

“It’s alright dear, dolls can have feelings too, you are every much a young lady too, you’re entitled to have a look around to see what’s out there. Grandma sat beside Sousei on the bed and held her close.

“You’re the closest thing I have to a granddaughter, well your sister is sweet, but you’re sweeter”

“Thank you Grandma, I love being here with you and Grandpa and maybe...Rein will be my medium”

“Maybe he will, he does seem to like you dear” Grandma kissed Sousei’s forehead before she left to work on some chores down in the shop.

“I think...he’d make a great medium, almost as great as Jun-kun” Sousei blushed at the thought, her true sweet nature coming out even more since meeting Rein last night.

There seemed to be a lot of love wandering through the Rozen Maidens lately, Shinku and Jun confessed, Suigintou and Megu shared an interesting night together already. And now, Souseiseki and her new friend Rein. Well Sousei wants a medium, and to be his friend. Even Kirakishou has finally found where she belongs. She adored Arianna and her dolls, and seemed to fit right in. Kira didn’t tell them about her evil side coming back to her body; she didn’t want to scare them.

Somewhere however, in the deep recesses of another N-field, where Enju was banished to, He was working on a new creation, against Rozen’s orders to never create another doll. This doll was in the early stages, she didn’t even have a dress or a paint job yet, but Enju, who wanted nothing more then to have a creation of his surpass Rozen’s smirked as he pieces his newest creation together carefully.

“This time....I will not fail. You will be stronger then Barasuishou, faster then Suigintou....my lovely one. A name though...you need a name...something those Rozen creations will fear more then Kirakishou...”

Enju picked at his brain for hours, writing down several different names, even mixing names of Rozen’s dolls together.....Some were, Barasuginku...and Suiseikishou.....No they were terrible names he thought. He wanted this doll to have the perfect name, until he was browsing though some books and saw something that caught his attention.

“Hmm...Your name will be...”*Jigomako*...Yes my little demon girl of Hell...” *which does mean Demon girl of Hell by the way*

Enju laughed a bit to himself as he finished piecing his new creation together. Her body type was that of Suigintou’s with the longer arms and legs, giving her a more grown up body, but he gave her a sweeter face style, much like Hina Ichigo’s. He worked endlessly on creating this doll. Once her eyes were set into place, he gave her a set of eerie silver eyes, that seemed to have a prismatic tint to them when the light hit them a certain way.

Her hair was strawberry blonde, but styled almost in a mix of Bara’s and Shinku’s. Her dress was a cross of Suiseiseki’s sleeves, Hina’s slippers, Suigntou’s torso and shoulders and Kira’s Rose shaped skirt. For a special effect, he placed a silver rose eye patch over the eye where Kira had her rose. Once this doll was finished, he stepped back and admired his darkly dressed little masterpiece.

“Beautiful...” He mutters as he adjusted Jigomako’s dress just a little more. Her dress was colored a deep blood red with black ribbons on the sleeves and black lace trim on the edges of the dress.

“It’s not yet time to awaken you my lovely...very soon...Very soon indeed.” He picked the doll up in his arms and carried her from the workshop and places her in a special black leather case.



Shinku had dozed off on Jun’s bed that after noon, and awakens with a startle. She had foreseen something strange and wicked. Did she just see Jigomako completed? In any case she was quite afraid. Taking a deep breath she sighs a little and looked to Hina.

“Go get Jun, tell him to start some tea please”




“Okay Shinku!!” Hina skittered out of the room and downstairs. As she slides down the railing, she bumped smack into Jun, and almost knocked the boy over!

“Hey careful! You can get hurt that way Hina-chan!” He catches her Just in time and puts her on his shoulders.

“Shinku says to make her some tea Na no!...she looked like she saw a ghost though!”

“Ghosts aren’t real Chibi Ichigo, they’re just stories made up to scare stupid little kids desu!”

Jun snuck up behind Suisei and grabbed her sides as he shouted: “BOO!”

Suiseiseki jumped ten feet into the air screaming something about a ghost wanting her soul and took off under the couch. Hina and Jun both got a good laugh from that one.

“Suisei is afraid of Ghosts Na no!!” Hina laughed sweetly as Jun carries her into the kitchen to make Shinku’s tea.

“Hmph...You just ...c..caught me of guard that’s all desu...I’ll let you have that one Chibi ningen desu....but next time you wont be so lucky desu!!” Suisei tried to be brave, even though she clattered all over from being so scared.

Once Jun finished prepareing Shinku’s tea, he set her special little cup on a tray with some cookies and took them upstairs to her.

“Hey your tea’s done, I brought some cookies too” He smiles and peeked in to see Shinku sitting up with her knees up to her chest.

“Shinku? Are you alright?” He set the tray down on the desk and sat on the edge of the bed with an arm around her.

“I saw something, very terrible Jun. She was....like one of us. But with silver eyes...” She muttered.

“Well I’m sure it was just a bad dream...maybe something that happened in the past? Don’t worry about it though, I’m here, and your sisters are too”

Shinku closed her eyes and leans against him, holding his hand in hers. She had been leaving her bonnet off, only because he said she looked prettier without it, which she did, she looked more grown up. She sighed a moment and looked up to him,

“I suppose you are right Jun, it might have been just a passing moment in history coming back...thank you”

She hugged him tight and asked him to get her tea and cookies. Sitting with her for a while, Jun heard Sousei and Suisei down stairs and smiled.

“So you think you might have a medium desu?” Suisei asked her.

“Yes I think so, he’s very kind, and has a lot of knowledge about us, He even knows Ari-san, and Megu-chan too.”

She was telling Suisei about how Gin attacked Rein last night, which didn’t surprise either one really. Suisei just shook her head, but stuck up for Gin, now that was a surprise.




“I don’t blame her desu....sure she was wrong for kicking his ass desu..but...She was only looking out for Megu chan after all desu”

“Suisei....I..I guess your’e right..I was harsh with Gin-sama last night, besides, Rein’s arm is okay. If I see her...I hope I can clear things up with her...”

Sousei held her sister’s hand and smiled a bit.

“She won’t be mad at you desu, Gin’s actually kinda cool now desu” Suisei giggled a bit.

Jun comes down the steps with Shinku and her tea and wonders what the twins were chattering about down here. After some information he was up to speed, and wondering himself how Gin is able to calm herself after each of her anger episodes. Sousei was telling them all about Rein, and the more she talked about this guy, the more they figured she had a crush on him.

Sousei glanced over to Shinku a moment, she could tell there was something up, but wasn’t too sure if she should press matters any further. Shinku’s glance wandered to Sousei, she noticed her concern and closed her eyes as she set her tea cup down.

“Perhaps I should say something about my dream...who..or whatever it was, it seems to be another doll, it might have been just old memories gone hazy over the years.”

“Wow another one?...you don’t suppose Father is making an eight sister desu” Suisei got a little excited.

No..this one...from what I saw, she didn’t seem like anything Father would make. She had a...Barasuishou quality to her, all I remember, were her silver eyes” Shinku shuddered a little.

“Silver eyes hmm?” Sousei thought and shrugged it off. It might have just been a weird dream Shinku, I wouldn’t worry too much”

Jun patted Shinku’s shoulder a little; he could sense her uneasy-ness. They sat on the couch for some time, Jun kept his eye on Shinku, just to make sure she was going to be alright. Sometime mid afternoon they heard Suigintou’s voice, and wondered what brought her here today. Everyone gathered in the dining room where Suigintou was sitting in a chair, cross legged.

“I have come to share some news with you.” She says as she hopped down from the chair and rolled up her sleeves on her dress.

“What is it Suigintou? Did something happen?” Shinku asked, a bit concerned when Gin didn’t say what it was right away.

“Oh nothing bad happened at all...in fact this is very good news...Notice...anything different about me?”

She stood with her arms folded, but her arms were uncovered, she wondered how long it would take before anyone says something. Suisei walked up and took a short walk around Suigintou, the first thing she noticed, was her eyes, they were still magenta, but had a hint of brown in them now. Upon closer inspection by Shinku, her eyes widened when she noticed Gin’s joints were gone.

“Suigintou....what happened?” She had her hand on Gin’s elbow, feeling how smooth it was.

The first doll smirked, and blushed deeply as she placed her hands over her mystica before she looks to them.




“Something amazing happened last night. Megu and I wake up this morning..and I find that my body has changed. I have a chest now Shinku!..look!”

She was so excited as she leans on Shinku, her defined and firmer breasts press against Shinku gently.

“Oh my God..Suigintou’s got a nice rack now desu” Suisei got a jab in her side from Sousei after that one.

“Wow..Gin how’d it happen?” Jun knelt down and held her hands, he was so happy for her.

Shinku blushed quite deeply feeling Gin’s chest against hers like that and hugged her close. She wondered herself just how it could have happened, and was itching to know the full story. Gin smiles brightly and had no shame in telling her sisters and Jun what she and Megu did last night, after they had a small fight. Say what you want, but Suigintou does love Megu. Once the others heard what Gin and her medium did, they all blushed deeply. Hina however had no clue of what went on, she was just happy that Gin was so happy.

“So..wow...you and Megu huh?...” Jun was speechless, and trying not to picture it either.

“That’s wonderful Suigintou; I suppose this is one of the steps to becoming Alice”

Shinku had blushed deeply again, she couldn’t get over how beautiful Gin had become; well she was before, but now even more so. They were all sitting on the couch together; Gin was showing off her knees and giggling about how good she feels. Suisei got a little jealous since the first sister was the very first to have grown up so much, but then she was happy for her, and admired her new looks.

“You’ve got brown in your eyes like Megu-chan desu, I think you might start to look like her after a while desu!” Suisei giggled.

Suigintou blushed and tried not to blush so deeply, but she couldn’t help herself now, she was truly becoming more and more like a young lady. Even as she sat there with Jun and her sisters, she just had this grown up look about her.

Jun couldn’t help but look to Gin, his eyes had wandered to her cleavage a moment, hey the boy can look cant he? Suigintou grins and leans against him, her chest pressing against his arm as she hugged herself close to him. When Gin was getting ready to leave, she still had a stop over at Arianna’s to make before she headed back to Megu, she hugged her sisters tight and kissed their cheeks, even Jun’s cheek too.

“We’re all so happy for you Suigintou. I know I am” Shinku says as she hugged her tight in return.

The twins had hugged her back and let Gin make her leave, only before hugging Hina so tight.

“I want to be as pretty as Gin-san Na no! I’ll work real hard!!” Hina giggled.

“I know you can do it Hina” Gin pats her head gently before she headed out to find Arianna and her girls to tell them the good news.

As Gin flies to Ari’s home that evening, she hums Megu’s song to herself, getting a warm feeling in her chest, She had spotted below her, Rein coming back from the hospital. She had wondered if everything was alright, and decided to end her visits for the night, and return to Megu, just in case. Landing on the window sill, she found the window was closed again. No big deal she thought, she’d wait patiently. Peeking in she saw the nurses doing their usual tending to Megu, everything seemed alright. Satisfied that Megu was perfectly fine, she continues on her way to Ari’s home. Once there she hopped in the window in the living room.




“So sorry to intrude, but I have wonderful news everyone” She goes about the same way as she did over Jun’s home, getting pretty much the same reaction here as she got over there. Kira ran up and gave Gin a tight hug, and pulled back, admiring Gin’s new look.

“Onee-sama is gorgeous” Kira rested her head against her gently.

“Damn right, look at you Gin-chan, this is great!” Shaina was very excited for her as well as Bara, who shyly blushed as she stood beside Shaina.

“Yes.....she’s truly and Angel” Bara said softly.

Suigintou held her two friends and youngest sister tightly. When she saw Ari she smirked and looked up to her, and winked.

“Well what’s going on here ladies? Oh Suigintou, what’s up Hun?” Ari knelt down to her, and noticed right away the change.

“Goodness, someone’s been drinking their milk...Gin you look great! So this must be the first stop on the road to becoming Alice, I’m impressed! And I think your Father would be too” Ari held Gin close and picked her up a moment.

“I hope so; I want him to see how I’ve grown!” Gin rested against Ari a moment.

“Oh I think he has a good idea, he’s proud of you Suigintou, and so am I....you’ve had some rocky spots but, I think you’ll turn out all right”

Ari ruffled Gin’s soft hair playfully, before Gin whispers to Ari just how she was able to achieve this shape. Much to Ari’s surprise, after hearing what she and Megu did, the young woman did a double take and set her down, patting her backside.

“Little imp, you run along, and go back to Megu before she gets lonely” Ari winked to her as Gin left.

“What’d she say?” Bara asked as she tugged on Ari’s pant leg.

“I....Uhh..I’ll tell you girls when you’ll understand it a little more...its complicated” She needed a drink now after that one.

Gin zipped quickly back up to Megu’s window, found it to still be closed. She peeked in again and noticed Megu wasn’t there. Gin figured the nurses took Megu down to the cafeteria for some real food for a change. Suigintou gripped the window and slides it open herself. After that feat, she was a little worn out, that window was heavy to slide. Sitting on the bed she crossed her legs and turns on the TV. She could hear the shower running in the bathroom, and hearing Megu’s soft song.

Knowing where her medium was, Gin felt better and not so paranoid. With a small grin she got up and peeked inside to see what Megu was doing. Just taking a bath, the water had stopped and Megu was leaning back in the tub as she sang her song to herself.

Gin smiled and watched her for a moment, before shutting the door again and waiting on the bed. Megu had spotted out of the corner of her eye, Suigintou peek in and leave, she pouted a little when Gin didn’t ask to join her. Gin was curious however, and made her way back to the bathroom door and peeked in once more. Now she had done this one other time, but that was before she grew closer to Megu.

“I didn’t think you’d sneak in on me, Gin you’re naughty sometimes” Megu chuckles



“You have no idea just how naughty I can be Megu-chan”

Gin’s eyes held that naughty glint which was shown last night. She walked up to the tub and sat on the edge, looking down to Megu in her bubble bath, her body covered in strategic places by suds, that made Gin pout a little.

“So did you tell your sisters about what happened? I bet they were jealous” Megu said as she leans back again.

“Oh they were at first, but everyone was so happy for me and for the both of us as well. I still can’t believe....what we did. It felt like a dream...” Gin’s cheeks tinted a deep pink as she reached over and held Megu’s cheek.

“I know I had a dream a while back that was very similar, only you were in full human size...and very breathtakingly beautiful. My imagination ran away with me that night” She’d giggle and flick some suds on to Gin’s nose.

Gin scrunched her nose and blew off the suds and smiles to Megu again, being careful as to not fall into the tub with her dress on. She sighs happily and both lean in closer, Megu kissing Gin very softly before Gin left to wait for her.

“She’s so cute....and wonderful...and perfect....” Megu says to herself as she relaxes once more.

[EnigmaticThief]

Having just caught up with the story, Megu-Chan, let me give you another critique:

Things done well:

-- You've done a better job of recreating the general atmosphere found in the actual series. Chapter 17 is the best example of that. Including the vast majority of canon characters also added to that familiarity.

Things to work on:

-- Narration. Right now the voice of narration you use in the story is a bit too familiar, as if you yourself were telling the story. When this happens and your personal biases and excitement slip into phrases of the narration it makes it seem very young and unprofessional.

-- Your chapters are a bit... episodic. I mean that problems tend to introduce themselves and get resolved in very short order. You should think about weaving plotlines together rather than building them up and breaking them down one-at-a-time.

[Megu-chan]

Having just caught up with the story, Megu-Chan, let me give you another critique:

Things done well:

-- You've done a better job of recreating the general atmosphere found in the actual series. Chapter 17 is the best example of that. Including the vast majority of canon characters also added to that familiarity.

Things to work on:

-- Narration. Right now the voice of narration you use in the story is a bit too familiar, as if you yourself were telling the story. When this happens and your personal biases and excitement slip into phrases of the narration it makes it seem very young and unprofessional.

-- Your chapters are a bit... episodic. I mean that problems tend to introduce themselves and get resolved in very short order. You should think about weaving plotlines together rather than building them up and breaking them down one-at-a-time.

Hmm..ya know I think you may be right with things getting resolved too quick..I wrote half of 18 and 19 in themiddle of the night and was probably half assed asleep. I'll try harder to not make things sound..un professional in the later chapters, xD I guess I did get a little excited about a few things. With the newest problem that going to pester the dolls I'm definately not going to solve it in one or two chapters this time. Your crit has really helped me alot!!! thanks so much!!

[edgewalker00]

i'll be looking forward for the next chapters hope you can apply your old style of making my mind race since the next chapter would include mind boggling and butt kicking action because of the 10th doll

8th = bara
9th = shaina
10th = jigukumo (uh is this ryt? ~_~ )

thanks so much for the review. i'll do better next time ^_^

till then, have a pleasant year ahead guys ^_^

[Shadow Miko]

Oh...err....while I doubt anybody cares, I've updated Backlash alot.

Waikyoku Arc: Chapter Two (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/7/)
Waikyoku Arc: Chapter Three (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/8/)
Waikyoku Arc: Chapter Four (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/9/)
Waikyoko Arc: Chapter Five (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/10/)
Otomegokoro Arc: Chapter One (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/11/)
Otomegokoro Arc: Chapter Two (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/12/)
Otomegokoro Arc: Chapter Three (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/13/)
Otomegokoro Arc: Chapter Four (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/14/)

That's all since the previous post I made here.

The last two arcs focus on Suigintou and Kirakishou, so enjoy that if you will.

:heh:

[blitz1/2]

Here's chap 19! just got it finished a little while ago!! the GinXMegu paring folks will like this one :naughty:


Chapter Nineteen



“Why Suigintou? What could’ve made you snap?”

Megu says to herself as she lies down in bed, crying her heart out. She’s cried too much lately, and can’t take the stress. The poor girl started to have a major attack in her stressful moment. As she has her attack, Suigintou had come back and watches Megu struggle to stay alive. She didn’t know what to do, if she should leave...or sit with Megu.

“Just let me die Suigintou.....” Megu says as she gasps for her breaths.

Gin just stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. She was frozen with fear that Megu might die, and she can’t help her. Swooping over to Megu’s side Gin lies down beside her struggling medium. Holding her arm close to her little body, Gin clutched Megu as tight as she could.

“Just go away! You’ve done enough damage Suigintou!!” Megu tried to pry Gin off of her. When Gin fell to the floor she had this sad look like a lost puppy and gripped Megu’s hand, nuzzling her cheek against it.

“Megu.......please don’t....I’m sorry...I was just....”

She felt Megu’s hand become limp in hers. Looking up she didn’t seem to be moving, or breathing. She climbs back up on the bed and sat at Megu’s chest, gripping her shoulders.

“Megu?...oh God no...MEGU!! You...you can’t....oh Megu no please don’t.....don’t leave me!!!”

She shook the girl a bit. Megu had actually been holding her breath, wanting to see what Suigintou does, if she really does care, she’d wake up. She felt Gin shaking her to wake her up, and felt Gin’s tears on her cheeks. When Gin was giving her CPR, that’s what got her thinking, it was mostly Gin’s lips on her own that did it. Gin had watched one of the nurses do this once or twice before, she’s a faster learner.

“Please Megu!!....Don’t leave me!! I’m sorry!! I don’t hate you.....I don’t hate you....I love you Megu!!........I love you so much.....”

Gin had rested her head just above Megu’s breasts and cried hard. Gin soon felt Megu’s chest rising and falling, and her heart beat pounding again and arms around her tightly. “Oh Megu....you’re okay...”

The girl caught her breath and sat up. She was still sore at what Gin said before, but now that she knew Gin just saved her life again...she held onto that doll so tightly. Suigintou looked up as she held either side of Megu’s face firmly.

“Don’t....do that ever again”

Megu looked away a little and let go of Suigintou a moment. “Gin...we’ve been through this before, now I’m not sure if I want to keep this contract....if you keep flipping out. Why do you keep flipping out anyway?”

Gin looked way as well, and sighed. “Kirakishou is within me....she’s making me do these things....you know I’d never say anything or do anything to harm you Megu.”

“How can I really trust you though? I know you love me but, if you keep going crazy, I’m going to have to ask you to cancel the contract for good.”


Gin’s eyes went wide as she heard Megu say that. She held Megu’s hand and looked up into her eyes. Gin’s eyes had gone back to the warm caring look once more. Her small hand held her mediums hand tightly, and kisses her palms. Inside of Gin, Kira felt a twinge and realized finally and sighed to herself. She knew what she had to do. It was Kira’s decision to leave Gins body.

They saw a light pink light escape Gin’s body and it took the shape of Kira, and then vanished. Megu looked to Gin and held her tightly after that. Pulling back, she looked down to Suigintou, her thumb comes up and wipes away Gin’s tears, and just holds her so close against her chest once more.

“She was inside of you then...Oh god Gin...I...I didn’t believe you...”

“I’ll always love you though Onee-sama. .I’ll go back to my own body...you’ve shown me that...love is stronger then anything else...”

Kira returned to her N-field and sat down in her shack and cried. For the first time she just cried...mostly since she has failed..and figured out how much Megu meant to Gin.




Souseiseki had helped Rein up the steps and into his room. He sat down on the bed as Sousei gathered the first aide kit from the bathroom. When she came back in he was wincing a bit and watching the small tomboy doll walk towards him, then sits beside him on the bed to tend to his arm.

“She’s been crazy lately...but then again Suigintou has always been a little...different.” Sousei says a she wrapped his arm.

“I....want to thank you for saving me out there....damn she’s scary” He winced as Sousei applies a little rubbing alcohol to clean his wound.

“So what’s your name?” He asks, wondering if this was one of those Rozen dolls.

“Souseiseki, the fourth Rozen Maiden” She says proudly.

“I’m Rein and thanks again Souseiseki.....that’s a nice name.” He said looking to her small fingers as they gently worked on him.

“Thank you” She had blushed a bit. Her Green and Red eyes look up to him a moment, well her blush was even deeper then.

“So you’re the second Gardener twin...just as cute as your older twin. I was reading about you and your sisters earlier...but..how’d you know this is where I lived?” He was a little confused.

“Grandma and Grandpa take care of me until I can find a true medium” She says softly.

“Iv’e been here two weeks..how is it I haven’t seen you?” He was even more confused now.

“I’ve been hiding out in Grandma’s room where I sleep in my case”

“Oh that’s right..Rozen Maidens have cases they sleep in...So that’s what that thing was”

He chuckles a little. He was starting to like little Souseiseki, even though she wasn’t as tall as Megu..or have long dark hair..he still thought the tomboy doll was a cutie. The two were chatting like old friends in



no time though. Rein was sitting at his small desk, showing Sousei all sorts of different internet sites just about the Rozen Maidens. He noticed how interested Sousei was and that made him smile.

“So what are your other sisters like? Besides the nutty Suigintou that flies into jealous fits..” He rubbed his arm.

“They are all so kind. The fifth sister, Shinku, she’s like the princess of the group, she can be very bossy, and stuck up at times, but when she is with her medium, she has this smile that I haven’t seen in a very long time. The sixth sister, Hina Ichigo, well she’s just a little kid at heart, my twin Suiseiseki is always picking on her. My second sister Kanaria thinks she’s a genius or something though her medium is just..weird...And the Seventh sister..well..” She paused a moment.

“I met the seventh sister at my friend’s home earlier today. Kirakishou right?” He says as he picked Sousei up and set her on the bed.

“Yes that’s her. All of us didn’t even know if she was real until after we met her. So you know Ari-san? Isn’t she awesome?” Sousei smirked, she looked up to Ari.

“Yeah she’s pretty cool, and those other two dolls of hers..Barasomething... and Shaina. Interesting dolls”

Sousei giggled a bit. “Yeah Barasuishou, we just call her Bara-chan and Shay-chan too! They are really nice once you get to know them.

After they had been talking for hours, it was evening time and Grandpa came up to check on them. Once he saw Sousei sitting on Rein’s lap as he was reading to her, the old man smiled before he announced that dinner was almost ready.

Night time had come quickly once dinner was over. Rein was just coming back from his class, when he spotted Suigintou sitting up on a lamp post..looked like she was waiting for him.

“So you’ve come back to take the rest of my arm?” He grumbled

“No...I haven’t....”

She floats down and stood before him. Her wings were white again, having calmed down. The street lamp highlighted her silvery hair very nicely, and almost seemed to make her eyes glow a warm color. She curtsies to him and looked up again. Megu told her all about how Rein was going to help her get better, it was Megu’s idea to find him and apologize for earlier.

“I uhm...I’ve come to apologize for my actions before....I was not myself...that and....Megu was quite cross with me for how I behaved...my bottom almost wore her hand mark.”

He had to chuckle seeing this doll that almost killed him before, begging for forgiveness.

“Well it’s alright, I sort of deserved to be attacked....Trust me..Megu’s always been like a little sister to me..I guess we both got carried away earlier”

He knelt down in front of her and looks into those soft magenta eyes a moment. “You’re kinda cute....just like Megu”

She’d blush and smile, thankful that he was not mad at her either.





“Thank you; I can see why she fancies you as well. If you get a chance to speak with my younger sister Souseiseki....please tell her I am very sorry as well...I suppose she knocked some sense in to me...I should be going, I promised Megu I’d return before it grew too dark...”



She bows to him and glanced back up as he patted the top of her head gently.

“You’re not so bad after all, I’ll talk to Sousei, she seems to like me, heck I sort of like her now...she was saying something about making a contract...I’d like to see what its like to be a medium to a doll...well I’ll let you get back to Megu...give her a kiss for me!”

Gin grins and winks as she took off, thinking that went well, she smiles to her self as she flew home to Megu.

“Aww she isn’t so bad...maybe a little nutty...but it makes her cute” Rein chuckles as he headed back home as well.


A few moments later Suigintou arrived back at Megu’s window and hopped down.

“So how’d it go? He wasn’t mad was he?” Megu asked as Gin climbs up the bed and sits beside her.

“No he was fine. He and Souseiseki seem to be getting along. I think she might find a decent medium in that boy. I can see why you like him Megu, he is handsome indeed”

Megu blushed and tickled Gin playfully. “Oh well yeah he is cute...last time I saw him, I was just a little taller then you” She giggles.

Gin looked up to her medium and sighed, they had another close call, she couldn’t afford to loose Megu again. As Megu held her hands around Gin’s waist, Gin’s small hands were resting over Megu’s as well.

“Hey....Megu....about what I said before....”

“Forget it Gin, it’s alright...if that naughty Kira really was controlling you...then I trust that it wasn’t you before...besides.....after you said it....I knew you didn’t mean it. I saw the tears in your eyes, and I felt it in my heart”

Megu rested her chin atop Gin’s head a moment. “Mmm....why don’t you get comfy and put those PJ’s on that you got from Mic-chan, you’ll feel better.” Megu says as she stroked her doll’s hair.

“Hmm..alright”

Suigintou slides out of bed and onto the floor where she keeps her case. Opening it she finds the one very pretty night gown Mic-chan gave her, instead of the PJ’s. The doll sized nighty was light blue with dark blue rose designs, with black lace trim on the straps and at the hem. As Gin got undressed, Megu watched and giggled to herself. Those cute doll joints were irresistible to Megu. Once Gin was finished she climbs back on the bed and sits beside Megu with her legs crossed. She left that head band on her head though.

“Oh Suigintou, you look so pretty in that!” Megu blushed and picked her up, holding Gin close.

Gin slid her arms around Megu’s neck in a warm embrace that she didn’t want to let go of, then she remembers what Rein said to her before she left. With a grin she pulls back a little and looks to Megu a moment, before leaning in and kissing her tenderly, then put her head on Megu’s shoulder.

“Suigintou....what was that for? “


“Rein said to give you a kiss for him...well that one was from him.....this one is from me..”

Suigintou moves to kiss her again, a little deeper then the last one, a hand comes up and holds Megu’s right cheek as she kisses her so deeply, putting everything she could into showing Megu how much she cared about her. That kiss seemed to last forever too, and getting deeper the longer they held it. Megu’s hands were holding Gin’s sides firmly and returning those wonderful kisses fully.

“Mmm...Gin....I love you” She whispers against her Angel’s lips.

“I love you too my Megu-chan”

Gin says as she kissed down to Megu’s neck and finally rests against her, arms still around her neck firmly. The two had snuggled for quite some time that night. When they woke up the next morning, Megu found that her PJ top was un buttoned halfway, her PJ bottoms were off completely and Suigintou’s nighty was rolled up to her chest. Well they had a good night didn’t they? Megu blushed and remembered what had happened last night. She quickly got dressed and slides Gin’s nighty down to cover her once more.

“Did we.....do that...”

Megu asks herself as she rolls over, holding Gin tightly. Kissing the top of Gin’s head a moment, she think again, then it hit her. Yes...they had crossed that line between a doll and her medium together. Glancing down to Suigintou she noticed something strange about her. She was still in doll size but, Megu couldn’t find any doll joints! Suigintou’s skin was smooth and very free of doll joints. She noticed Gin had more defined features as well now. Her Angel really looked like an Angel!

“Gin....you gotta wake up and see this...” She nudged her gently.

“Mmmm...Megu-chan...” Gin rolled over and looked up, before she sat up a little more.

“Morning Megu” She grins and holds her medium’s hand.

“Morning Gin...Uhm...take a look...” Megu held Gin’s right arm up and ran a finger up and down her elbow.

“What is this? My joints...what happened to them?”

She’d hop out of bed and stand up, looking down to her knees and feeling all over her body for a doll joint. Then looked down the front of her nighty, She had a more defined chest now as well. Her hands were placed over her proportioned breasts and looked up to Megu.

“I’m...starting to become Alice....I think..is it because of what we did last night?” Gin’s eyes started to tear a little; this thought of becoming Alice was wonderful to her.

“I think so Gin, you’re on your way to becoming a full human girl...you’re even more beautiful now. You’ve changed a bit all over. Your hair is wavy, and your eyes are brighter, and body is cuter! You look like a little angel for real!”

Megu was so happy for her, and crawls out of bed, kneels down and held Suigintou in her arms. Those wings seemed a part of her as wel,l and wondered if Gin could control them easier. Kissing Gin’s cheeks they sit back up on the bed, with Megu inspecting Gin pretty much all over, just to make sure this wasn’t a trick. As she does this, Kira watches from her N-field and sighed.

“My Onee-sama is becoming Alice....I”m so happy...and I helped her...”



Before Kira had left last night, she had left behind what little power she had, just for Gin, and that love she carried with her for her sister as well. This left Kira with pretty much nothing inside, all she had now to do was return to her own body. In doing so, she’d give that Kira a chance in becoming Alice as well. When she leaves to find her body, she found her snuggled up in bed along side Ari, with Bara and Shay as well. She takes a deep breath and phases back into her body, feeling the hug from Ari and smiles.

This was where she belonged, and finally, after all this time, she realized this. She didn’t want revenge on Father, she didn’t want to destroy Gin’s happiness, all she really wanted, was to be loved by a family. She wakes up a little and kissed Ari’s cheek, then glanced to Bara and Shay on the other side of their master and crawls over to them, getting in between the two she fell back to sleep.

“I love you guys” Kira whispers softly.





Rein was just waking up that morning, he had a class in a few hours, he figured he’d get up and get ready. As he rolls over, the first thing he sees is Souseiseki, waiting for him with some nice hot tea and a small breakfast of a bagel and an orange.

“Morning Rein-kun, I just came up to see if you were awake. I made some tea for you” She says with a cute blush.

“Hey thanks Sousei, you didn’t have to, that was really sweet” He says as he sat up and patted the top of her head gently.

She sets the small tray on his desk and hopped on the bed as she waited for him to finish getting ready in the bathroom. When he came out she admired his good looks once again as he combed his hair and sat down for his quick breakfast.

“So you’re off to your morning classes Rein-kun?” She asks brushing her bangs from her eyes.

“Huh? Oh yeah got my history class and a few others today, I should be home before five tonight, then I’m off a few days. I’d love to get a few more stories out of you; it’ll help my history class” He chuckles before sipping some tea.

“I’d like that too!” She smiled and watched him eat his breakfast. After he left, she watched him leave and head down the street from her spot in his room, looking out the window.

“He’s a great boy isn’t he?” Grandma says so proudly.

“Yes he is Grandma! I....I really like him” Sousei says with a blush.

“Oh? I think someone has a crush!” Her Grandma teased her.

“Huh? No way!...well..” Sousei looked away a moment.

“It’s alright dear, dolls can have feelings too, you are every much a young lady too, you’re entitled to have a look around to see what’s out there. Grandma sat beside Sousei on the bed and held her close.

“You’re the closest thing I have to a granddaughter, well your sister is sweet, but you’re sweeter”

“Thank you Grandma, I love being here with you and Grandpa and maybe...Rein will be my medium”

“Maybe he will, he does seem to like you dear” Grandma kissed Sousei’s forehead before she left to work on some chores down in the shop.

“I think...he’d make a great medium, almost as great as Jun-kun” Sousei blushed at the thought, her true sweet nature coming out even more since meeting Rein last night.

There seemed to be a lot of love wandering through the Rozen Maidens lately, Shinku and Jun confessed, Suigintou and Megu shared an interesting night together already. And now, Souseiseki and her new friend Rein. Well Sousei wants a medium, and to be his friend. Even Kirakishou has finally found where she belongs. She adored Arianna and her dolls, and seemed to fit right in. Kira didn’t tell them about her evil side coming back to her body; she didn’t want to scare them.

Somewhere however, in the deep recesses of another N-field, where Enju was banished to, He was working on a new creation, against Rozen’s orders to never create another doll. This doll was in the early stages, she didn’t even have a dress or a paint job yet, but Enju, who wanted nothing more then to have a creation of his surpass Rozen’s smirked as he pieces his newest creation together carefully.

“This time....I will not fail. You will be stronger then Barasuishou, faster then Suigintou....my lovely one. A name though...you need a name...something those Rozen creations will fear more then Kirakishou...”

Enju picked at his brain for hours, writing down several different names, even mixing names of Rozen’s dolls together.....Some were, Barasuginku...and Suiseikishou.....No they were terrible names he thought. He wanted this doll to have the perfect name, until he was browsing though some books and saw something that caught his attention.

“Hmm...Your name will be...”*Jigomako*...Yes my little demon girl of Hell...” *which does mean Demon girl of Hell by the way*

Enju laughed a bit to himself as he finished piecing his new creation together. Her body type was that of Suigintou’s with the longer arms and legs, giving her a more grown up body, but he gave her a sweeter face style, much like Hina Ichigo’s. He worked endlessly on creating this doll. Once her eyes were set into place, he gave her a set of eerie silver eyes, that seemed to have a prismatic tint to them when the light hit them a certain way.

Her hair was strawberry blonde, but styled almost in a mix of Bara’s and Shinku’s. Her dress was a cross of Suiseiseki’s sleeves, Hina’s slippers, Suigntou’s torso and shoulders and Kira’s Rose shaped skirt. For a special effect, he placed a silver rose eye patch over the eye where Kira had her rose. Once this doll was finished, he stepped back and admired his darkly dressed little masterpiece.

“Beautiful...” He mutters as he adjusted Jigomako’s dress just a little more. Her dress was colored a deep blood red with black ribbons on the sleeves and black lace trim on the edges of the dress.

“It’s not yet time to awaken you my lovely...very soon...Very soon indeed.” He picked the doll up in his arms and carried her from the workshop and places her in a special black leather case.



Shinku had dozed off on Jun’s bed that after noon, and awakens with a startle. She had foreseen something strange and wicked. Did she just see Jigomako completed? In any case she was quite afraid. Taking a deep breath she sighs a little and looked to Hina.

“Go get Jun, tell him to start some tea please”




“Okay Shinku!!” Hina skittered out of the room and downstairs. As she slides down the railing, she bumped smack into Jun, and almost knocked the boy over!

“Hey careful! You can get hurt that way Hina-chan!” He catches her Just in time and puts her on his shoulders.

“Shinku says to make her some tea Na no!...she looked like she saw a ghost though!”

“Ghosts aren’t real Chibi Ichigo, they’re just stories made up to scare stupid little kids desu!”

Jun snuck up behind Suisei and grabbed her sides as he shouted: “BOO!”

Suiseiseki jumped ten feet into the air screaming something about a ghost wanting her soul and took off under the couch. Hina and Jun both got a good laugh from that one.

“Suisei is afraid of Ghosts Na no!!” Hina laughed sweetly as Jun carries her into the kitchen to make Shinku’s tea.

“Hmph...You just ...c..caught me of guard that’s all desu...I’ll let you have that one Chibi ningen desu....but next time you wont be so lucky desu!!” Suisei tried to be brave, even though she clattered all over from being so scared.

Once Jun finished prepareing Shinku’s tea, he set her special little cup on a tray with some cookies and took them upstairs to her.

“Hey your tea’s done, I brought some cookies too” He smiles and peeked in to see Shinku sitting up with her knees up to her chest.

“Shinku? Are you alright?” He set the tray down on the desk and sat on the edge of the bed with an arm around her.

“I saw something, very terrible Jun. She was....like one of us. But with silver eyes...” She muttered.

“Well I’m sure it was just a bad dream...maybe something that happened in the past? Don’t worry about it though, I’m here, and your sisters are too”

Shinku closed her eyes and leans against him, holding his hand in hers. She had been leaving her bonnet off, only because he said she looked prettier without it, which she did, she looked more grown up. She sighed a moment and looked up to him,

“I suppose you are right Jun, it might have been just a passing moment in history coming back...thank you”

She hugged him tight and asked him to get her tea and cookies. Sitting with her for a while, Jun heard Sousei and Suisei down stairs and smiled.

“So you think you might have a medium desu?” Suisei asked her.

“Yes I think so, he’s very kind, and has a lot of knowledge about us, He even knows Ari-san, and Megu-chan too.”

She was telling Suisei about how Gin attacked Rein last night, which didn’t surprise either one really. Suisei just shook her head, but stuck up for Gin, now that was a surprise.




“I don’t blame her desu....sure she was wrong for kicking his ass desu..but...She was only looking out for Megu chan after all desu”

“Suisei....I..I guess your’e right..I was harsh with Gin-sama last night, besides, Rein’s arm is okay. If I see her...I hope I can clear things up with her...”

Sousei held her sister’s hand and smiled a bit.

“She won’t be mad at you desu, Gin’s actually kinda cool now desu” Suisei giggled a bit.

Jun comes down the steps with Shinku and her tea and wonders what the twins were chattering about down here. After some information he was up to speed, and wondering himself how Gin is able to calm herself after each of her anger episodes. Sousei was telling them all about Rein, and the more she talked about this guy, the more they figured she had a crush on him.

Sousei glanced over to Shinku a moment, she could tell there was something up, but wasn’t too sure if she should press matters any further. Shinku’s glance wandered to Sousei, she noticed her concern and closed her eyes as she set her tea cup down.

“Perhaps I should say something about my dream...who..or whatever it was, it seems to be another doll, it might have been just old memories gone hazy over the years.”

“Wow another one?...you don’t suppose Father is making an eight sister desu” Suisei got a little excited.

No..this one...from what I saw, she didn’t seem like anything Father would make. She had a...Barasuishou quality to her, all I remember, were her silver eyes” Shinku shuddered a little.

“Silver eyes hmm?” Sousei thought and shrugged it off. It might have just been a weird dream Shinku, I wouldn’t worry too much”

Jun patted Shinku’s shoulder a little; he could sense her uneasy-ness. They sat on the couch for some time, Jun kept his eye on Shinku, just to make sure she was going to be alright. Sometime mid afternoon they heard Suigintou’s voice, and wondered what brought her here today. Everyone gathered in the dining room where Suigintou was sitting in a chair, cross legged.

“I have come to share some news with you.” She says as she hopped down from the chair and rolled up her sleeves on her dress.

“What is it Suigintou? Did something happen?” Shinku asked, a bit concerned when Gin didn’t say what it was right away.

“Oh nothing bad happened at all...in fact this is very good news...Notice...anything different about me?”

She stood with her arms folded, but her arms were uncovered, she wondered how long it would take before anyone says something. Suisei walked up and took a short walk around Suigintou, the first thing she noticed, was her eyes, they were still magenta, but had a hint of brown in them now. Upon closer inspection by Shinku, her eyes widened when she noticed Gin’s joints were gone.

“Suigintou....what happened?” She had her hand on Gin’s elbow, feeling how smooth it was.

The first doll smirked, and blushed deeply as she placed her hands over her mystica before she looks to them.




“Something amazing happened last night. Megu and I wake up this morning..and I find that my body has changed. I have a chest now Shinku!..look!”

She was so excited as she leans on Shinku, her defined and firmer breasts press against Shinku gently.

“Oh my God..Suigintou’s got a nice rack now desu” Suisei got a jab in her side from Sousei after that one.

“Wow..Gin how’d it happen?” Jun knelt down and held her hands, he was so happy for her.

Shinku blushed quite deeply feeling Gin’s chest against hers like that and hugged her close. She wondered herself just how it could have happened, and was itching to know the full story. Gin smiles brightly and had no shame in telling her sisters and Jun what she and Megu did last night, after they had a small fight. Say what you want, but Suigintou does love Megu. Once the others heard what Gin and her medium did, they all blushed deeply. Hina however had no clue of what went on, she was just happy that Gin was so happy.

“So..wow...you and Megu huh?...” Jun was speechless, and trying not to picture it either.

“That’s wonderful Suigintou; I suppose this is one of the steps to becoming Alice”

Shinku had blushed deeply again, she couldn’t get over how beautiful Gin had become; well she was before, but now even more so. They were all sitting on the couch together; Gin was showing off her knees and giggling about how good she feels. Suisei got a little jealous since the first sister was the very first to have grown up so much, but then she was happy for her, and admired her new looks.

“You’ve got brown in your eyes like Megu-chan desu, I think you might start to look like her after a while desu!” Suisei giggled.

Suigintou blushed and tried not to blush so deeply, but she couldn’t help herself now, she was truly becoming more and more like a young lady. Even as she sat there with Jun and her sisters, she just had this grown up look about her.

Jun couldn’t help but look to Gin, his eyes had wandered to her cleavage a moment, hey the boy can look cant he? Suigintou grins and leans against him, her chest pressing against his arm as she hugged herself close to him. When Gin was getting ready to leave, she still had a stop over at Arianna’s to make before she headed back to Megu, she hugged her sisters tight and kissed their cheeks, even Jun’s cheek too.

“We’re all so happy for you Suigintou. I know I am” Shinku says as she hugged her tight in return.

The twins had hugged her back and let Gin make her leave, only before hugging Hina so tight.

“I want to be as pretty as Gin-san Na no! I’ll work real hard!!” Hina giggled.

“I know you can do it Hina” Gin pats her head gently before she headed out to find Arianna and her girls to tell them the good news.

As Gin flies to Ari’s home that evening, she hums Megu’s song to herself, getting a warm feeling in her chest, She had spotted below her, Rein coming back from the hospital. She had wondered if everything was alright, and decided to end her visits for the night, and return to Megu, just in case. Landing on the window sill, she found the window was closed again. No big deal she thought, she’d wait patiently. Peeking in she saw the nurses doing their usual tending to Megu, everything seemed alright. Satisfied that Megu was perfectly fine, she continues on her way to Ari’s home. Once there she hopped in the window in the living room.




“So sorry to intrude, but I have wonderful news everyone” She goes about the same way as she did over Jun’s home, getting pretty much the same reaction here as she got over there. Kira ran up and gave Gin a tight hug, and pulled back, admiring Gin’s new look.

“Onee-sama is gorgeous” Kira rested her head against her gently.

“Damn right, look at you Gin-chan, this is great!” Shaina was very excited for her as well as Bara, who shyly blushed as she stood beside Shaina.

“Yes.....she’s truly and Angel” Bara said softly.

Suigintou held her two friends and youngest sister tightly. When she saw Ari she smirked and looked up to her, and winked.

“Well what’s going on here ladies? Oh Suigintou, what’s up Hun?” Ari knelt down to her, and noticed right away the change.

“Goodness, someone’s been drinking their milk...Gin you look great! So this must be the first stop on the road to becoming Alice, I’m impressed! And I think your Father would be too” Ari held Gin close and picked her up a moment.

“I hope so; I want him to see how I’ve grown!” Gin rested against Ari a moment.

“Oh I think he has a good idea, he’s proud of you Suigintou, and so am I....you’ve had some rocky spots but, I think you’ll turn out all right”

Ari ruffled Gin’s soft hair playfully, before Gin whispers to Ari just how she was able to achieve this shape. Much to Ari’s surprise, after hearing what she and Megu did, the young woman did a double take and set her down, patting her backside.

“Little imp, you run along, and go back to Megu before she gets lonely” Ari winked to her as Gin left.

“What’d she say?” Bara asked as she tugged on Ari’s pant leg.

“I....Uhh..I’ll tell you girls when you’ll understand it a little more...its complicated” She needed a drink now after that one.

Gin zipped quickly back up to Megu’s window, found it to still be closed. She peeked in again and noticed Megu wasn’t there. Gin figured the nurses took Megu down to the cafeteria for some real food for a change. Suigintou gripped the window and slides it open herself. After that feat, she was a little worn out, that window was heavy to slide. Sitting on the bed she crossed her legs and turns on the TV. She could hear the shower running in the bathroom, and hearing Megu’s soft song.

Knowing where her medium was, Gin felt better and not so paranoid. With a small grin she got up and peeked inside to see what Megu was doing. Just taking a bath, the water had stopped and Megu was leaning back in the tub as she sang her song to herself.

Gin smiled and watched her for a moment, before shutting the door again and waiting on the bed. Megu had spotted out of the corner of her eye, Suigintou peek in and leave, she pouted a little when Gin didn’t ask to join her. Gin was curious however, and made her way back to the bathroom door and peeked in once more. Now she had done this one other time, but that was before she grew closer to Megu.

“I didn’t think you’d sneak in on me, Gin you’re naughty sometimes” Megu chuckles



“You have no idea just how naughty I can be Megu-chan”

Gin’s eyes held that naughty glint which was shown last night. She walked up to the tub and sat on the edge, looking down to Megu in her bubble bath, her body covered in strategic places by suds, that made Gin pout a little.

“So did you tell your sisters about what happened? I bet they were jealous” Megu said as she leans back again.

“Oh they were at first, but everyone was so happy for me and for the both of us as well. I still can’t believe....what we did. It felt like a dream...” Gin’s cheeks tinted a deep pink as she reached over and held Megu’s cheek.

“I know I had a dream a while back that was very similar, only you were in full human size...and very breathtakingly beautiful. My imagination ran away with me that night” She’d giggle and flick some suds on to Gin’s nose.

Gin scrunched her nose and blew off the suds and smiles to Megu again, being careful as to not fall into the tub with her dress on. She sighs happily and both lean in closer, Megu kissing Gin very softly before Gin left to wait for her.

“She’s so cute....and wonderful...and perfect....” Megu says to herself as she relaxes once more.


I finished reading your latest chapters. Exciting battle. Very good story so far.

No! Bara-chan! Why?! Why must you die?! NO!!!!!

At least Kirakishou is still alive.

[Megu-chan]

I finished reading your latest chapters. Exciting battle. Very good story so far.

No! Bara-chan! Why?! Why must you die?! NO!!!!!

At least Kirakishou is still alive.

She'll be back in a later chapter, I can't keep Bara-chan gone for long, Kira will see to it that she'll be back!

[Shadow Miko]

Here's a little more. Haven't been working on this much (or Rozen Maids for that matter) because of *points to sig link* my other fic.

Speaking of Rozen Maids, Suiseiseki is the first to confession to Jun, in case anybody cares.

Myouyaku Arc: Chapter One (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157547/15/)

The new arc, The Myouyaku Arc (The Wonder Drug Arc), features on some of the left out characters, Shinku, Yuna, Tomoe, Suiseiseki and Jun. Kira, Megu and Gin won't be in the spotlight for awhile because the last two arcs were about them.
I feel this one hits a little close to Higurashi, with the needle in the food and the scratching your neck to death, something that was vaguely show in the first arc when Hina and Sui fought.

:heh:

[edgewalker00]

for anyone interested...

Act 6: Convalescence (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/6/)

of Rozen Maiden: Eternal Play is up

enjoy ^_^

[Megu-chan]

Here's chapters 21 and 22 finished!!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47117326/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47117761/

[SlurEXE]

Because I got banned from DevART for "participating in a coordinated attack against a user" who is banned now. :|

Partially based on Chapter 21 and 22 of Megu-chan's story, because I'm a uncreative tard ;D

Jigomaku took a few steps backward, gasping a little. Suigintou loomed over her, intending to make the killing blow.

"Hmph...interesting. You claim I'm cruel...yet it is ironic that you are the one who says that." Jigomaku said, her left eye glaring at the black figure floating over her.

"You destroyed Barasuishou...harmed Megu...that's why I would never forgive you."

"We are dolls, destined to play in the Alice Game. Nothing more, nothing less. What's wrong with sabotaging one's medium to gain an advantage?... What do the humans say? Ahh.."All's fair in love and war."

"We do not have to fight to become Alice." With that, Suigintou made a wide slash with her sword, but Jigo dodged it.

"Funny it's you who says that..who was the one scheming to get rid of the other Maidens? What a hypocrite..." Jigo danced dantily, irritating Suigintou furthur.

She then suddenly stopped and said "I have no time to play with you, Suigintou. Let's get this over with." She summoned both her crystal swords.

"Very well. I'll oblige!" And with that, she lunged at the other as they resumed their dance.

The elegant dance of the maidens.

[_duangelique]

Here is the link to my fic. It's on spanish but I know that there must be some latin people in this thread community:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47192931/

[Megu-chan]

Well here are the last two chapters of my fanfic. It's been fun writing it. I might do smaller side stories, thanks to everyone that have read it and given me some helpful crits!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47516134/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47516842/

[Shadow Miko]

Well here are the last two chapters of my fanfic. It's been fun writing it. I might do smaller side stories, thanks to everyone that have read it and given me some helpful crits!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47516134/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47516842/

Awww....it's over? :( *reads*


The Bitter End (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3375288/1/)

My new fic ('m awful, aren't I?) is based on the series. Really. Not kidding. What would happen AFTer the series if I had my way. :heh: Which would pwn.

[edgewalker00]

its been awhile but chapter 7 is up... enjoy ^_^

Act 7: Deception (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/7/)

[edgewalker00]

just finished chapter 8... enjoy ^_^


Act 8: Infernal (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/8/)

[edgewalker00]

chapter 9 is up...

Act 9: Rebirth and Baptism (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/9/)

thanks for the comments ^_^

p.s., for some reason, fanfiction.net prevents me from posting links so i'll repeat again

I got the idea for Souseiseki’s blade style from this image :p

http://alice-game.com/uploader/files/2/Souseiseki/rozenmaiden79qa9.jpg


again, I don’t own this image, I just got the IDEA… ok? Hope you loved this chap ^_^

[edgewalker00]

chapter 10 is up everyone ^_^

enjoy

Act 10: Crossroads (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/10/)

[Flo]

After weeks of ignorance and lots of nightmare of Junk haunting me for not continuing, Chapter 9 (part 1) of Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung is finally here!

EDIT: The complete chapter was posted

[Lost]

Hehe I too would creep-out if my daughter were carrying a lifeless silver-haired doll and stroking her hair.

[edgewalker00]

Act 11: Defiance and Damnation (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/11/)

finally up >.<

[Shinku Hime]

After weeks of ignorance and lots of nightmare of Junk haunting me for not continuing, Chapter 9 (part 1) of Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung is finally here!

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 9
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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2 weeks had passed…

Nurse: “Isn’t it wonderful Megu! You can finally start a new life other than live a ‘boring hospital life’.” *Said jokingly*

Megu: *Carrying Suigintou, who was not moving* “Y-yeah, it’s…great…” *Said unenthusiastically, forcing a smile*

Nurse: “Aw c’mon, you’re cured! You should be overjoyed!”

Doctors and Nurses were shocked when they last gave Megu a medical check. Her heart problem that terrorized the girl simply vanished and was operating normally. Doctors and Nurses ran through test after test on Megu to find out what caused her recovery, but could find none. In the end doctors had no choice but to conclude that it was a miracle that Megu was cured, however they can’t write that in the report because it’s unscientific. Instead they written it off as natural recover. Megu herself was also surprise by this miracle, but unlike the adults she knew for sure Suigintou was the one responsible.

Mr. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “Thank you for taking care of our daughter after all this time.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “It must be troublesome taking care of her.”

Nurse: *Giggles* “Oh ho ho, aw c’mon there’s nothing to it, as long it’s all nurses’ duty.” *Looks at the clock on the reception counter* “Oh just look at the time, I shouldn’t be keeping you all.”

Mr. Kakizaki: “Yes, we shouldn’t.” *Bows* “Thank you once again”

With that, the Kakizakis made their way to the exit.

Nurse: “Megu, remember to visit us all once in a while.” *Waves*

Megu: *Carrying a non-moving Suigintou, Megu turns back* “Y-yes, I will.” (Waves back)

Megu and her family exited the hospital and into the family car, the parents at the front with Megu at the back seat. The father started the engine and started driving. Driving further and further away from the hospital and closer to Megu’s new home, ‘Home’.

As Mr. Kakizaki drives he couldn’t help but to look at his rear-view mirror watching Megu holding the winged doll.

Mr. Kakizaki: “Megu, are you sure it’s a good idea to bring this doll home?”

Megu: “But papa, she’s my guardian angel who helped me recovered. Is there something wrong?”

Mr. Kakizaki: “Well it’s not that, but I just can’t help it to think…well no offence. I think that the doll is…evil.”

Suigintou, who never moved ever since Megu’s parents came to fetch her home, wanted to jump on her father and break his neck to two.

Suigintou: (Insolent fool, I’ll show you what true evil is like!)

Megu: *Sweat* (N-now now Suigintou, you know papa never really mean it.)

Suigintou: (Hmph!) *Resumes her static role*

Megu: *Phew*

Mrs. Kakizaki: “But it truly is great isn’t it, you can now live just like any other children out there. We promise you that we will give you a life that you never had.”

Megu: “Yes.” (Answered plainly, while stroking Suigintou’s sliver hair) “I look forward to that.”


Isn't Gin dead or something? Didn't she leave?

[Flo]

Isn't Gin dead or something? Didn't she leave?

Will try to cover that in the later parts of the chapter, This will eat up lots of my brain so please wait until i get it done.

[Flo]

Time for something different. I present to you...

Rozen Maiden: アリスのために! ローゼン戦隊: アリセンジャー! (Alice no Tameni! Rozen Sentai: Alicenger!/For Alice! Rozen Sentai: Alicenger!)
Authored by: Flo
第1话: 変身! 我が薔薇娘たち!
Henshin! Waga bara musume-tachi!
Transform! My Rose Daughters!
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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Once upon a time in the modern era there live 6 daugthers; Suigintou, Kanaria, Suiseiseki, Souseiseki, Stinku Shinku and Hina Ichigo. Together they live their lifes in peace and harmony with their father Rozen. Until one day after school, when the girl came back from school.

Hina Ichigo: *Singing* “Unyu~nano! Unyu~nano! Soft White Unyu~nano! Saikou, Daisuki, Oishi, Unyu~nano!”

Souseiseki: “Hina seems to be in a good mood today.”

Suiseiseki: “Of course chibi Ichigo is happy ~desu! Father is making Unyu for dinner ~desu.”

Souseiseki: “Ah ha ha, sou ne”

Suigintou: *sigh* “Hina Ichigo baka desu ne, to be happy over something like that.”

Hina Ichigo: “Buuuuuu. Unyu is not baka ~nano!!!”

Suigintou: *sigh* “Yes yes, whatever.” *murmurs* “Baka.”

*KABOOM~~~~~!*

Suiseiseki: *Surprised by the Explosion* “Eh WTF ~desu?”

Shinku: “Sound like something got blown up.”

Kanaria: “Oh ho ho ho~ Sound like something to investigate ~kashira!”

Souseiseki: “This is bad, it’s coming from our neighborhood, let’s go.”

The daughters rush to the source of the explosion, only to find that their home and it’s surrounding neighborhood reduced to rubble and ruins.

Suigintou: “What the hell?”

Souseiseki: “Our neighbourhood! Our house! Oh no!”

Shinku: “Otou-sama!”

Hina Ichigo: “Nooooo~! My unyu ~nano!!!” *;_;*

Suigintou: “Geez! Our father is in danger and all you can think is your unyu????”

Kanaria: “Don’t fight! Don’t fight ~kashira! We must find our house and investigate what happen ~kashira!”

Souseiseki: “Kanaria is right, no time to waste! I hope father is alright!”

The girl quickly clear the rubbles at the place once called there home.

“Father!”

“Otou-sama!”

“Father!”

???: *Cough cough ack!*

Suiseiseki: “Over there ~desu!”

The girls rush to the sound of the source and cleared the wreckage and found Rozen, mortally wound and dying.

Rozen Maidens: “FATHER!” *;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_;*

Rozen: *Ack Cough Gasp* “My…daughters…You all are alright…”

Rozen Maidens: “FATHER!” *;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_;*

Rozen: *Ack Cough Gasp* “As I’ve feared…the Enju Empire had finally made its move.”

Suigintou: “Enju Empire?”

Rozen: “Yes…” *cough* “And evil empire organization bent on taking over the world. I was once part of it…believing that they can bring good to the world” *Gasp!* “Until I found out there evil schemes and escaped…along with you all…” *cough cough cough*

Shinku: “Wait, along with us? What do you mean!”

Rozen: “The truth is… you are part of the Enju Empire’s evil creation. A super weapon of mass destruction…” *cough* “When I first saw you all, you’re still infants, so young, so innocent. I couldn’t bear to let the empire use you all for evil, so I took you all with me when escape…I thought…after this we could live in peace” *ack* “But I never expect them to find me so fast…”

Kanaria: “We’re not…your daughters ~kashira?”

Suiseiseki: “And we are part of a weapon of mass destruction ~desu?”

Shinku: “We’re monsters?”

Hina Ichijou: “My unyu ~nano…” *;_;*

Rozen: “I’m sorry that I’ve kept this secret for so…long…until it’s too late…” *cough cough* “But know this that I’ve always treated you all as if you’re my real daugthers!”

Rozen Maidens: “FATHER!” *;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_; ;_;*

Rozen: *Ack Cough Gasp* (Oh shit my world is getting darker I must make this quick.) “My daughters, I have one last wish before…” *Ack Cough Gasp* “I go…”

The Rozen Maidens nods

Rozen: “Stop…the Enju Empire!” *Ack Cough Gasp* “Remember the rings I gave you last Christmas?”

Suigintou: “How could we forget…it was the best gift you ever gave us…” *;_;*

Rozen: “These…rings…are the source of your powers…” *Ack Cough Gasp* “It activates your inner power…the ‘Rozen Mysticals’! With this you can stop the Enju Empire! All…” *Ack Cough Gasp* “You need to do is…to shout ‘Henshin!’”

Shinku: “Otou-sama” *;_;*

Rozen: “Now go! Stop the Enju Empire! Find...Sakurada Jun and...and...Save…the…world…~ Blaaaagggggghhh!” *Dies X_X*

Rozen Maidens: “NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! FATHEEEEEEEEEEER~~~!” *T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T*

???: “Fu fu fu, so someone’s still alive.”

Shinku: “Who was that! Show yourself!”

Two monster appears, one look like Winnie the pooh while the other look like a clown.

Suigintou: *pissed “Are you the one who did this!?”

Winnie Youkai (Winnie Monster): “Ke ke ke, that this correct! I am Winnie Youkai!”

Clown Youkai: “Fu fu fu. And I am Clown Youkai! This is punishment to those who betrays the Enju Empire!”

(If you can recall, Winnie the Pooh was the possess doll when Shinku and Jun first meet in vol 1 while the Clown doll was in episode 1)

Souseiseki: “You bastards! I won’t forgive you!”

Hina Ichigo: “You’ll pay for the unyu you destroyed ~nano!” *>=O*

The Rozen Maidens raise their right hand to the sky.

Rozen Maidens: “Henshin!”

Insert colorful background, henshin sequence, clothes stripping and costume wearing and lots and lots of roses. When the henshin sequence ended, the Rozen Maidens wear the gothic clothes like you all always see in the anime and manga.

Rozen Maidens: “ROZEN SENTAI SANJOU!” (Rozen Sentais have arrived!) *Strike some awesome pose*

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/3633/1159543589747uj0.jpg

Winnie Youkai: “Ke ke ke, so you are the stolen experiments of the Enju Empire, Impressive.”

Hina Ichigo: “Nano Maiden!”

Shinku: “Da wa Maiden!”

Souseiseki: “Boku wa Boku Maiden!” (I am Boku Maiden!)

Suiseiseki: “Desu Maiden ~desu!"

Kanaria: “The most intelligent of the sisters ~kashinra! Kashira Maiden is here ~kashira!”

Suigintou: “And I am…” *pause* “I am…”

Shinku: “What’s wrong?”

Suigintou: “I have no idea what Maiden I am.”

Suiseiseki: “HAR!?”

Hina Ichigo: “I know what to call you ~nano!”

Suigintou: “Really? I’m all ears”

Hina Ichigo: “Junk Maiden ~nano!”

Suigintou: *Stoned* “Nani?????? J-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-junk…Maiden?” *Sulk while twirling her finger.* *Murmurs* “Just because I have no catch phrase doesn’t mean I have to stick with Junk…” *sulks even more*

Souseiseki: “Urg, now you’ve done it. You know Suigintou is sensitive to that ‘word’”

Hina Ichigo: “Oops ~nano.”
***
OH NO! Without Suigintou having a Maiden name the Rozen Sentai is not complete! What will the girls do? Will Suigintou ever out grow her ‘Junk Complex’? Find out on the next episode!

第2话: ファイト! ジャンクメイデン
Faito! Junk Maiden!
Fight! Junk Maiden!

Suigintou: *super pissed* “JANKU JAI NAI!” (I’M NOT A JUNK!) *Stabs the narrator with her sword*

OMFG IT HURT! ARRRGH I’M BLEEDING HEAVILY! BLAAAAAAGGGHHH! *dies X_X*


Comments? :)

[edgewalker00]

HAHA!! really comical... i love it... could you grace us with more? please? pretty please?

[SlurEXE]

THE APPEARANCE OF THE REAL 7TH MAIDEN OR WHEN JUN SNAPS

NOW IN BIG BLOCK LETTERS!

One happy day, as all stories start, the maidens were at their everyday routine. Not exactly anymore anyway, as Chibi and Boku went to the great n-field in the sky with Lucy and her diamonds.

Yes, not quite exactly the same.

Desu, losing the person she tormented the most, tormented Jun even more. Add Shinku the Shin-Kicker and Face Slapper and Kanaria who is bound to fail for the umpteen time, you'll imagine how pissed he was.

Here's a little sample of one day.

"Jun, I want tea."

"Then make it yoursel-STOP THAT, YOU DEMON DOLL! YOU'RE TEARING UP THE WHOLE PLAC- GACK!"

"You're my servant. Really, you still don't know your place? Make my tea."

"But chibi-ichigo is no longer here~desu. I've nothing to do other than eat, sleep and watch Kun-Kun~desu." Desu- I mean SUISEISEKI replied.

"Then throw yourself off a cliff! It'll relieve you and me of trouble! I WILL NOT MAKE YOUR TEA, YOU DUMB BITCH!"

"How dare you-!" the two dolls shouted. Yet secretly, somewhere in their subconcious, they were glad.

Jun-thumping was their favourite hobby.

NOW FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT

The doll, clad in white, laid still. She had not awoken yet.

She was meant to take part in the Alice Game, right? Laplace thought. So he embarked on the suicidal quest of waking Kirakishou up.

"Kirakishou."

Nothing.

"Kirakishou. It's time."

Nothing.

"Kirakishou!"

Nothing.

"KIRAKISHOU!"

Nothing. Really, you should be expecting thi.

"KIRAKISHOU! KIRAAAA! THIS IS YOUR NINE-O' CLOCK BROADCAST TO INFORM YOU THAT THE ALICE GAME HAS BEGUN!"

Nothing!

Irritated but not ready to surrender, he thought of the sure fire way to wake her up.

"SUIGINTOU IS HERE TOO!"

The results were amazing. In a blink of an eye, Kira was up and ready.

"WHERE'S ONEE-SAMA!?!?!?" she queried, slavering like a slavering dog.

Laplace blinked.

Amazing.

~~

"Why did they keep me alive? I want to die. Kill me k, Angel?"

Suigintou rolled her eyes. Why did she take this emo angsting suicidal girl as her medium anyway? She may angst, but then when you've been abandoned by your own dad while he attends to your sisters, you were bound to turn out like Suigintou... It wasn't like she was a hueg tank of power, too.

Megu liked to throw things around, but Gin liked to throw things at Shinku. She briefly paused to ponder the futility of postponing the Alice Game, but then again, that postpone was what made her more of Alice's likeness...

"Angel?"

"Hmm?"

"Why didn't you take all my power?"

"Oh Rozen...."Gin groaned. She asked this question at least 20 times per day. It's all true, she counted. And that was one of her good days!

"Look, Megu." she struggled to keep her temper. "I may have pussyfooted around, but that doesn't mean you can ask me so many times per day! if you want to die that badly, then do it yourself!"

"That's a nice suggestion! Why didn't I think of it before?!"

Oh, bother.

~~

"I am Kanaria, smartest of the Rozen Maid- that's quite a mess~kashira..." Kanaria quivered at the scene.

A bloody pulp. Woah.

"If you're wise like you say you are, you'll scramble, Kanaria." Shinku said quietly.

Whimpering, Kanaria ran away.

~~

"Me and my big mouth!" Suigintou thought angrily. Because of what she said in the heat of the moment, Megu was really going to kill herself!

"Angel? Why are you here?"

"To see if you're alright!"

"You know, you shouldn't waste your time on me, Angel. I'm nothing but junk. Worthless junk who doesn't appreciate what she has."

Hearing this, Suigintou could not help but shout "Junk is junk, but it still can be repaired!"

"You can't repair what is already worthless to begin with."

And she jumped.

O SHI- CLIFFHANGER?!?!!?!


I'll continue when I feel like it.

[Shadow Miko]

THE APPEARANCE OF THE REAL 7TH MAIDEN OR WHEN JUN SNAPS

NOW IN BIG BLOCK LETTERS!

One happy day, as all stories start, the maidens were at their everyday routine. Not exactly anymore anyway, as Chibi and Boku went to the great n-field in the sky with Lucy and her diamonds.

Yes, not quite exactly the same.

Desu, losing the person she tormented the most, tormented Jun even more. Add Shinku the Shin-Kicker and Face Slapper and Kanaria who is bound to fail for the umpteen time, you'll imagine how pissed he was.

Here's a little sample of one day.

"Jun, I want tea."

"Then make it yoursel-STOP THAT, YOU DEMON DOLL! YOU'RE TEARING UP THE WHOLE PLAC- GACK!"

"You're my servant. Really, you still don't know your place? Make my tea."

"But chibi-ichigo is no longer here~desu. I've nothing to do other than eat, sleep and watch Kun-Kun~desu." Desu- I mean SUISEISEKI replied.

"Then throw yourself off a cliff! It'll relieve you and me of trouble! I WILL NOT MAKE YOUR TEA, YOU DUMB BITCH!"

"How dare you-!" the two dolls shouted. Yet secretly, somewhere in their subconcious, they were glad.

Jun-thumping was their favourite hobby.

NOW FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT

The doll, clad in white, laid still. She had not awoken yet.

She was meant to take part in the Alice Game, right? Laplace thought. So he embarked on the suicidal quest of waking Kirakishou up.

"Kirakishou."

Nothing.

"Kirakishou. It's time."

Nothing.

"Kirakishou!"

Nothing.

"KIRAKISHOU!"

Nothing. Really, you should be expecting thi.

"KIRAKISHOU! KIRAAAA! THIS IS YOUR NINE-O' CLOCK BROADCAST TO INFORM YOU THAT THE ALICE GAME HAS BEGUN!"

Nothing!

Irritated but not ready to surrender, he thought of the sure fire way to wake her up.

"SUIGINTOU IS HERE TOO!"

The results were amazing. In a blink of an eye, Kira was up and ready.

"WHERE'S ONEE-SAMA!?!?!?" she queried, slavering like a slavering dog.

Laplace blinked.

Amazing.

~~

"Why did they keep me alive? I want to die. Kill me k, Angel?"

Suigintou rolled her eyes. Why did she take this emo angsting suicidal girl as her medium anyway? She may angst, but then when you've been abandoned by your own dad while he attends to your sisters, you were bound to turn out like Suigintou... It wasn't like she was a hueg tank of power, too.

Megu liked to throw things around, but Gin liked to throw things at Shinku. She briefly paused to ponder the futility of postponing the Alice Game, but then again, that postpone was what made her more of Alice's likeness...

"Angel?"

"Hmm?"

"Why didn't you take all my power?"

"Oh Rozen...."Gin groaned. She asked this question at least 20 times per day. It's all true, she counted. And that was one of her good days!

"Look, Megu." she struggled to keep her temper. "I may have pussyfooted around, but that doesn't mean you can ask me so many times per day! if you want to die that badly, then do it yourself!"

"That's a nice suggestion! Why didn't I think of it before?!"

Oh, bother.

~~

"I am Kanaria, smartest of the Rozen Maid- that's quite a mess~kashira..." Kanaria quivered at the scene.

A bloody pulp. Woah.

"If you're wise like you say you are, you'll scramble, Kanaria." Shinku said quietly.

Whimpering, Kanaria ran away.

~~

"Me and my big mouth!" Suigintou thought angrily. Because of what she said in the heat of the moment, Megu was really going to kill herself!

"Angel? Why are you here?"

"To see if you're alright!"

"You know, you shouldn't waste your time on me, Angel. I'm nothing but junk. Worthless junk who doesn't appreciate what she has."

Hearing this, Suigintou could not help but shout "Junk is junk, but it still can be repaired!"

"You can't repair what is already worthless to begin with."

And she jumped.

O SHI- CLIFFHANGER?!?!!?!


I'll continue when I feel like it.

Do you feel like it yet? Do you? DO YOU?

[SlurEXE]

Do you feel like it yet? Do you? DO YOU?

Ja.



I CAN'T THINK OF A TITLE

And she fell.

Then she came up and down.

"Ha ha ha, why do you look so worried, Angel?" Megu said cheerfully while bouncing up and down on a giant balloon. "Tis fun! Try it!"

Suigintou was speechless.

"But what about that talk about junk?" That word, even spoken by her, caused anger to flow into her non-existent veins.

"Plot device." Megu continued bouncing. "Since the author has to go in a moment to collect her hong baos, we have to make stuff up."

Ah. The plot device.

MUCH LATER AND MEANWHILE

"Laplace, where is Onee-sama? You said she would be here."

"She's currently in the real world, Kira..."

"But you said she would be here."

Gah, Laplace thought. This is more difficult than I thought!...

"It looks like she disappeared. If you want to see her, you need a real body." Laplace lied and explained.

"Where do you think I can get one, huh?" Kira said angrily. "Do you take me for a fool? I can only exist in the n-fields!"

Just then, a doll conveniently dropped in. She was Barasuishou.

"Ow..."she rubbed some part of her body, without noticing Kira or Laplace.

Violence occured as Kira grabbed Bara's body.

"HAHAHA, THANK YOU, PLOT DEVICE!" Kira happily cried out while materialising to the real world.

Bara stood up, and glared angrily at Laplace.

Out of the frying pan and into the fire! Laplace opened up a temporal rip and teleported himself away. That rip caused changes in the timeline which would adversely affect EVERYTHING.

~~

Jun had been reduced to a bloody pulp. Shinku sighed. "Well, I'm done thumping slave boy, not that he can be thumped without killing him."

"But I'm not done~desu! I've yet to try the iron pipes~desu!" Suiseiseki said, holding a very heavy pipe.

"Wouldn't that be overkill, Suiseiseki?" Shinku sweated. "After all, he IS within an inch of his life!"

"NOTHING IS OVERKILL WITH CHIBI~DESU!" she then began to beat what was left of Jun with the pipe.

I would need to find a new Medium soon!...Shinku thought.

~~

"I'm back, Kanaria!!!"

"nnn.. welcome back, Micchan~kashira." Kanaria said gloomily.

"What's the matter?" Crazy Doll Maniac plopped down beside Kashira.

"Today, I tried sneaking into Jun's house again~kashira. However, I failed again~kashira. I'm so useless!" cried the parasol-toting most-bird unlooking doll.

"You're damn right you're useless!" Mitsu said with her eyes flashing. "Fu fu fu... while she's down, I'll comfort her and have strange doll-human secks!"

"Whaaaaaaaat? How could you say that, Micchan?!"

"I was talking about someone else, Kana! He said he was useless!"

"Oh."

~~

"So we're dead~nano."

"That's right."

"What can we do here~nano? It's so boring~nano!" Hina cried, despite only being a floating piece of magical rock.

"Nothing we CAN do. We're floating pieces of magic rocks that can somehow form the most perfect being in existence." Souseiseki explained the obvious.

"I'm so lonely~nano."

"We have Father, Hina, and I'm content with that. You should be, too."

"I want people to play with, not Father! If the Alice Game makes us all lonely and without fun, then I wouldn't do it~nano!!" Chibi cried out. You could imagine with her kind of personality, how only with 2 people she was so frustrated.

"Well..."

"Well?!"

"We can go back to our bodies..."

"We can?! Then why DIDN'T YOU TELL ME!?!?"

"Only the condition that a maiden takes us and returns us to our bodies."

"So why can't we do that?"

"Because nobody knows where we are."

"Oh."

Silence prevailed for a while. Then Hina piped up again.

"I'm bored."

[Shinku Hime]

Flo, when r u gonna post the next chapter?

[Flo]

Flo, when r u gonna post the next chapter?

In a week or two. Maybe sooner if I'm in a good mood. Please hold on a little.:)

[edgewalker00]

Act 12: Innocence (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/12/)

is up... it's been quite some time everyone ^.^ hello y'all

[Flo]

Shit, If edgewalker never bump this topic up I've totally forgotten about Rozen Sentai Alicenger. Will finish second chapter by weekend. X_X

[RM-FAN]

Flo, what happend with your fanfic?

[Flo]

Sorry for delays. Here is Alicenger chapter 2.
Ps. up yours Disney!

Rozen Maiden: アリスのために! ローゼン戦隊: アリセンジャー! (Alice no Tameni! Rozen Sentai: Alicenger!/For Alice! Rozen Sentai: Alicenger!)
Authored by: Flo
第2话: ファイト! ジャンクメイデン
Faito! Junk Maiden!
Fight! Junk Maiden!

Suigintou: I AM NOT A JUNK! *Stabs Flo*
Flo: ZOMG THE PAIN! X_X
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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Winnie-Youka: “WAHAHAHAHAHA! What a joke, you guys are pathetic!”

Suiseiseki: “Nani? How dare you ~desu! We’ll kick your ass right here and now ~desu!”

Stinku: “As long the 5 sisters are united, we can overcome anything!”

Souseiseki: *taps Shinku’s shoulder from behind” “Err Shinku?”

Shinku: “What?”

Souseiseki: “We have a little problem here.”

Souseiseki points to Suigintou, who sulk in a distance mumbling some gibberish to herself.

Suigintou: *In very depressing tone* “Back when everyone used to call me Gin-sama….I’m not a junk…what did I do to deserve this…I’m not a junk…”

Shinku: “Oh no…” *smacks her forehead*

Hina Ichigo: “We’re in deep shit ~nano!”

Clown-Youka: *rofl* “BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can’t stop! This is too funny!”

Winnie-Youka: “HAHAHA, but enough of this stupidity, we will now end your life! Let’s go Aibou (Buddy)!”

Clown-Youka: “Yosh! Kyodai (Bro)!”

Winnie-Youka/Clown-Youka: “ULTIMATE HITSATSU! HYPER DODBY SURROUND SOUND KARAOKE SYSTEM!!”

Huge Dodby Surround Sound Speakers and Systems suddenly appears, height equivalent to a 10 storey building.

Winnie-Youka: “MICROPHONE~~~~ ON!”

Clown-Youka: “VOLUME~~~~MAX!”

Winnie-Youka: “READY AIBOU?!”

Clown-Youka: “Ikusou (Let’s go) Kyodai!”

Winnie-Youka/Clown-Youka: “1! 2! 1 2 3 GO!”

And so the horrible singing starts.

Deep In The 100 acred wood
Where Christopher Robin plays
You'll find the enchanted neighborhood
Of Christophers childhood days

A donkey named Eeyore is his friend
And Kanga and little Roo
Theres Rabbit and Piglet
Then theres Owl
But most of all Winne The Pooh

Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
chubby little cubby all stuffed with fluff
Hes Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
Willy nilly silly old bear

Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
chubby little cubby all stuffed with fluff
Hes Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
Willy nilly silly old bear
Welcome To you & how do ya do
Here comes a tale 'bout winne the pooh

Now set this to repeat forever and see what happens

Kanaria: “OH SHI- THEIR SINGING IS HORRIBLE!”

Souseiseki: *Cover her ears* “OMG MY EARS!”

Shinku: “THE HORROR!”

Suiseiseki: *Runs arounds fanatically* “MAKE IT STOP DESU!”

Hina Ichigo: “We’re getting owned ~nano!” *XO*

Suigintou: *Still sulking* “I’m not a junk… I’m not a junk… I’m not a junk…”

Clown-Youka: “Hey Kyodai, this one seems unaffected.”

Winnie-Youka: “Does it matter? Once we trash those useless girls…”

Suigintou: *heard something sensitive* “Trash…?”

Winnie-Youka: “We will then take care of that junk right there!” *points at Suigintou*

Suigintou: *heard that magical word* “Junk? JUNK!?! JUUUUUUUUNNNNKKKKK?????? RAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWRRRRRRRR!!” *Powers up!* “I AM NOT A JUNK! DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEE!!!!!” *Lungs towards the Youka*

Winnie-Youka/Clown-Youka: *O_o* “WTF?”

Suigintou laid smackdown on the monsters, beating them to a bloody pulp.

Kanaria: “It’s…it’s incredible ~kashira!” *puts on the power meter* “OMG, impossible!”

Souseiseki: “Huh? What does the meter say about her power level?”

Kanaria: *Crush the power meter with her hand* “IT’S OVER 9000 ~KASHIRA!”

Suiseiseki: “9000 ~desu?!”

Meanwhile back to smackdown.

Suigintou: “MAIDEN JUMP!” *Jumps 100ft high* “MAIDEN KICK!” *Delivers the flying kick to the monsters*

Winnie-Youka/Clown-Youka: “BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH!” *fall to the ground* “You think you have won? There are still many Youkas under Emperor Enju’s command, you cannot stop the Enju Empire! ENJU EMPIRE BANZAI!!!!!”

*KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!*

Hina Ichigo: “We win ~nano” *Jumps in joy*

Shinku: “Good job, Junk Maid-"

Suigintou: *Turns to the sisters with a bloodlusting aura and a very ugly face* “What did you say???”

Shinku: *panicked* “Errrr…I mean good job one-sama!”

Everyone else except Suigintou sweats heavily.

Meanwhile at Enju Empire’s secret base…

Emperor Enju: “Rozen Sentai Alicenger, huh? Now this is a problem…General Bara!”

Barasuishou appears

General Bara: *kneels to Enju* “Yes, my emperor.”

Emperor Enju: “You’re in charge of taking care of this little problem.”

General Bara: “Your wish is my command; nothing can stop you from world domination.”

Emperor Enju: “Good, good. Once those so called Alicenger are out of the way I can finally take over the world! BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

***
And so the Alicengers somehow manger to defeat their foe, Winne-Youka and Clown-Youka, but this is just a tip of an ice-berg. What will the Enju Empire have in sort for our Heroines? Gambatte, Alicengers!

第3话: To the Sakurada Residence!

See you next time!

[edgewalker00]

Shit, If edgewalker never bump this topic up I've totally forgotten about Rozen Sentai Alicenger. Will finish second chapter by weekend. X_X

i'll take that as a "thank you duchebag for reminding me to post the fic" :p

please do post more of Alicenger :D the humor is the greatest!!

[edgewalker00]

Act 13: Snow Mirror (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/13/)

IS UP ^_^

[edgewalker00]

sorry for the spam X.X

here's...

Act 14: Remember (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/14/)

[edgewalker00]

just passed by to drop...

Act 15: Corinne (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/15/)

[gin_loverzz]

Flo, I like your story, especially when you write BLARGH and your BWAHAHAHAs. That's what makes it so special...0_0
Alicenger BANZAI!!!
Right, where is Wiederbelebung?
Wiederbelebung BANZAI!!!

[Alba_Neo]

I am currently doing one fanfic as well, but I am still finishing it. Care if I use some of my OCs in it?

[Flo]

The complete Wiederbelebung chapter 9 is up. Phew. =__=

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 9
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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2 weeks had passed…

Nurse: “Isn’t it wonderful Megu! You can finally start a new life other than live a ‘boring hospital life’.” *Said jokingly*

Megu: *Carrying Suigintou, who was not moving* “Y-yeah, it’s…great…” *Said unenthusiastically, forcing a smile*

Nurse: “Aw c’mon, you’re cured! You should be overjoyed!”

Doctors and Nurses were shocked when they last gave Megu a medical check. Her heart problem that terrorized the girl simply vanished and was operating normally. Doctors and Nurses ran through test after test on Megu to find out what caused her recovery, but could find none. In the end doctors had no choice but to conclude that it was a miracle that Megu was cured, however they can’t write that in the report because it’s unscientific. Instead they written it off as natural recover. Megu herself was also surprise by this miracle, but unlike the adults she knew for sure Suigintou was the one responsible.

Mr. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “Thank you for taking care of our daughter after all this time.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “It must be troublesome taking care of her.”

Nurse: *Giggles* “Oh ho ho, aw c’mon there’s nothing to it, as long it’s all nurses’ duty.” *Looks at the clock on the reception counter* “Oh just look at the time, I shouldn’t be keeping you all.”

Mr. Kakizaki: “Yes, we shouldn’t.” *Bows* “Thank you once again”

With that, the Kakizakis made their way to the exit.

Nurse: “Megu, remember to visit us all once in a while.” *Waves*

Megu: *Carrying a non-moving Suigintou, Megu turns back* “Y-yes, I will.” (Waves back)

Megu and her family exited the hospital and into the family car, the parents at the front with Megu at the back seat. The father started the engine and started driving. Driving further and further away from the hospital and closer to Megu’s new home, ‘Home’.

As Mr. Kakizaki drives he couldn’t help but to look at his rear-view mirror watching Megu holding the winged doll.

Mr. Kakizaki: “Megu, are you sure it’s a good idea to bring this doll home?”

Megu: “But papa, she’s my guardian angel who helped me recovered. Is there something wrong?”

Mr. Kakizaki: “Well it’s not that, but I just can’t help it to think…well no offence. I think that the doll is…evil.”

Suigintou, who never moved ever since Megu’s parents came to fetch her home, wanted to jump on her father and break his neck to two.

Suigintou: (Insolent fool, I’ll show you what true evil is like!)

Megu: *Sweat* (N-now now Suigintou, you know papa never really mean it.)

Suigintou: (Hmph!) *Resumes her static role*

Megu: *Phew*

Mrs. Kakizaki: “But it truly is great isn’t it, you can now live just like any other children out there. We promise you that we will give you a life that you never had.”

Megu: “Yes.” (Answered plainly, while stroking Suigintou’s sliver hair) “I look forward to that.”

***
Jun made some final touches to Shinku as he fixed back her arms.

Shinku: “Thank you Jun.”

An uneasy silence, Jun looked at Suiseiseki’s case; she’s yet to be awake from the fight.

Jun: “Shinku, what exactly happened?”

Shinku: “…We’ve met the seventh Rozen Maiden.”

Jun: “What? The 7th?”

Shinku: “…”

***
[2 weeks ago]

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama?”

Shinku: “Suigintou?”

Suigintou stood between Shinku and Kirakishou, for some reason she looks a little different from before. Her clothes, a long black dress with ribbon lace up front and fine lace trim by the side while she still retained her black rose hair band. Her eyes, once violet, now turned ruby red. Shinku could wonder what happened to Suigintou.

Kirakishou on the other hand feel a strong aura emitting from Suigintou, it wasn’t from the bloodlust during the previous battle with her. Her aura wasn’t filled with hatred nor rage but an aura of brilliance and purity.

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama…that power….”

Suigintou: *cut Kirakishou off* “Quiet you, I have unfinished business with you.” *Her wing spread, ready for attack*

Kirakishou: “!!”

Suigintou wings turned into the twin dragons and attacked Kirakishou, which she barely dodged away. Kirakishou tried to counter attack but the dragons make short work of the attempt.

Kirakishou: *helpless dodge Suigintou’s attack* “Onee-sama, what happened to you? This isn’t like you at all.”

Suigintou: “Quiet!” *Continues her attack*

Kirakishou managed to find an opening repelled the dragons’ rampage, which exploded into endless feathers raining all over the place. As Kirakishou looked around, Suigintou disappeared.

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama?”

As the 7th looked around for her sister, she never realized that Suigintou was behind her until it was too late.

Kirakishou: *turned around* “!!”

Suigintou: “This is for Megu!” *Gives a hard punch to Kirakishou’s face*

Kirakishou flew a few clicks from that punch. “Such strength, it’s impossible at this level.” She said to herself. Suigintou’s human master was still alive so power from hatred was out of the question, unless…

Kirakishou: “I see…”

Kirakishou got up, the white rose that was covering the right eye was gone, reveal the empty eye socket.

Suigintou: “What the…”

Kirakishou: *covered her empty eye socket* “*She* gave you this power didn’t she, Onee-sama.”

Suigintou: “…”

Kirakishou: “I see” *Began to smile* “Fufufu…ha ha…HA HA HA HA!”

Suigintou: “What’s so funny?”

Kirakishou: “I’m so happy for you Onee-sama, that you are one step close to Alice.”

Shinku: *Shocked* “What? Alice?”

Kirakishou: “It’s a joyous event for Onee-sama, although it’s totally different from what I’ve planned.”

Suigintou: “I never want to be any part of your plan! I’ll never forgive you for what you did to Megu.”

Kirakishou: *pretends to be hurt by Suigintou’s words, but it’s painful none the less* “So, do you hate me for it, Onee-sama?”

Suigintou gave a long thought, and then she simply replied.

“Just get out of my sight.”

For some reason, Kirakishou was relieved

Kirakishou: “…I understand.” *smiled* “We’ll meet again when it’s convenient”

Kirakishou disappeared, leaving Suigintou, Shinku and an unconscious Suiseiseki alone.

Shinku looked at Suigintou was glad that she saved Shinku and Suiseiseki from Kirakishou.

Shinku: “Suigintou…I…”

Without warning Shinku’s right arm was sliced off by Suigintou’s sword.

Shinku: “!!”

Suigintou: *point the sword at Shinku* “Don’t misunderstand me; I never came here to save you or Suiseiseki. I came because I have unfinished business with her.”

Shinku was shocked by Suigintou, such power and speed, is she really a step closer to become Alice? However was not important at that point of time.

Shinku: “Still, I thank you…”

Suigintou: (Oh please, don’t make me throw up.) *Turns around* “Hmph! Whatever, consider yourself lucky I’m in a forgiving mood. But next time we meet, I’ll make sure your arm isn’t the only thing that you’ll lose. For your sake and mine, I hope we won’t meet again” *Flew off*

Shinku: *watch as Suigintou flew off* “Suigintou…”

***
[Present day]

Jun: *took awhile to digest the story* “…”
Shinku: “…”

Jun: *Ahem* “Well it’s a good thing right? That Suigintou saved you and Suiseiseki; that Suigintou has changed for the better.”

Shinku: “I suppose you’re right…”

Jun: “In any case.” *Got up* “We shouldn’t think about it too much. You should relax a little. I have to get to the library, Tomoe is waiting for me.”

Shinku: “I see, take care then…”

***
Mr. Kakizaki: “We’re here.”

Megu looked out of the car window; she saw a two storey house right in front of her. To Suigintou, this place looks awfully familiar.

Megu: “It’s lovely.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: “Welcome to your new home, sweetie.” *Smiled at Megu*

The family got off the car and was about to enter to their home, when someone who lived next door exit. Suigintou couldn’t believe that her neighbor was going to be.

Suigintou: (Oh hell no, you gotta be kindding…)

Jun: *Looks at the girl holding Suigintou in shock* “What the? S-Suigintou!?”

Megu: “Huh?” (Looks at the boy with curiosity) “You knew Suigintou?”
***
Chapter 9 Ends

[Mexican Marshmallow]

Here's chap 19! just got it finished a little while ago!! the GinXMegu paring folks will like this one :naughty:


Chapter Nineteen



“Why Suigintou? What could’ve made you snap?”

Megu says to herself as she lies down in bed, crying her heart out. She’s cried too much lately, and can’t take the stress. The poor girl started to have a major attack in her stressful moment. As she has her attack, Suigintou had come back and watches Megu struggle to stay alive. She didn’t know what to do, if she should leave...or sit with Megu.

“Just let me die Suigintou.....” Megu says as she gasps for her breaths.

Gin just stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. She was frozen with fear that Megu might die, and she can’t help her. Swooping over to Megu’s side Gin lies down beside her struggling medium. Holding her arm close to her little body, Gin clutched Megu as tight as she could.

“Just go away! You’ve done enough damage Suigintou!!” Megu tried to pry Gin off of her. When Gin fell to the floor she had this sad look like a lost puppy and gripped Megu’s hand, nuzzling her cheek against it.

“Megu.......please don’t....I’m sorry...I was just....”

She felt Megu’s hand become limp in hers. Looking up she didn’t seem to be moving, or breathing. She climbs back up on the bed and sat at Megu’s chest, gripping her shoulders.

“Megu?...oh God no...MEGU!! You...you can’t....oh Megu no please don’t.....don’t leave me!!!”

She shook the girl a bit. Megu had actually been holding her breath, wanting to see what Suigintou does, if she really does care, she’d wake up. She felt Gin shaking her to wake her up, and felt Gin’s tears on her cheeks. When Gin was giving her CPR, that’s what got her thinking, it was mostly Gin’s lips on her own that did it. Gin had watched one of the nurses do this once or twice before, she’s a faster learner.

“Please Megu!!....Don’t leave me!! I’m sorry!! I don’t hate you.....I don’t hate you....I love you Megu!!........I love you so much.....”

Gin had rested her head just above Megu’s breasts and cried hard. Gin soon felt Megu’s chest rising and falling, and her heart beat pounding again and arms around her tightly. “Oh Megu....you’re okay...”

The girl caught her breath and sat up. She was still sore at what Gin said before, but now that she knew Gin just saved her life again...she held onto that doll so tightly. Suigintou looked up as she held either side of Megu’s face firmly.

“Don’t....do that ever again”

Megu looked away a little and let go of Suigintou a moment. “Gin...we’ve been through this before, now I’m not sure if I want to keep this contract....if you keep flipping out. Why do you keep flipping out anyway?”

Gin looked way as well, and sighed. “Kirakishou is within me....she’s making me do these things....you know I’d never say anything or do anything to harm you Megu.”

“How can I really trust you though? I know you love me but, if you keep going crazy, I’m going to have to ask you to cancel the contract for good.”


Gin’s eyes went wide as she heard Megu say that. She held Megu’s hand and looked up into her eyes. Gin’s eyes had gone back to the warm caring look once more. Her small hand held her mediums hand tightly, and kisses her palms. Inside of Gin, Kira felt a twinge and realized finally and sighed to herself. She knew what she had to do. It was Kira’s decision to leave Gins body.

They saw a light pink light escape Gin’s body and it took the shape of Kira, and then vanished. Megu looked to Gin and held her tightly after that. Pulling back, she looked down to Suigintou, her thumb comes up and wipes away Gin’s tears, and just holds her so close against her chest once more.

“She was inside of you then...Oh god Gin...I...I didn’t believe you...”

“I’ll always love you though Onee-sama. .I’ll go back to my own body...you’ve shown me that...love is stronger then anything else...”

Kira returned to her N-field and sat down in her shack and cried. For the first time she just cried...mostly since she has failed..and figured out how much Megu meant to Gin.




Souseiseki had helped Rein up the steps and into his room. He sat down on the bed as Sousei gathered the first aide kit from the bathroom. When she came back in he was wincing a bit and watching the small tomboy doll walk towards him, then sits beside him on the bed to tend to his arm.

“She’s been crazy lately...but then again Suigintou has always been a little...different.” Sousei says a she wrapped his arm.

“I....want to thank you for saving me out there....damn she’s scary” He winced as Sousei applies a little rubbing alcohol to clean his wound.

“So what’s your name?” He asks, wondering if this was one of those Rozen dolls.

“Souseiseki, the fourth Rozen Maiden” She says proudly.

“I’m Rein and thanks again Souseiseki.....that’s a nice name.” He said looking to her small fingers as they gently worked on him.

“Thank you” She had blushed a bit. Her Green and Red eyes look up to him a moment, well her blush was even deeper then.

“So you’re the second Gardener twin...just as cute as your older twin. I was reading about you and your sisters earlier...but..how’d you know this is where I lived?” He was a little confused.

“Grandma and Grandpa take care of me until I can find a true medium” She says softly.

“Iv’e been here two weeks..how is it I haven’t seen you?” He was even more confused now.

“I’ve been hiding out in Grandma’s room where I sleep in my case”

“Oh that’s right..Rozen Maidens have cases they sleep in...So that’s what that thing was”

He chuckles a little. He was starting to like little Souseiseki, even though she wasn’t as tall as Megu..or have long dark hair..he still thought the tomboy doll was a cutie. The two were chatting like old friends in



no time though. Rein was sitting at his small desk, showing Sousei all sorts of different internet sites just about the Rozen Maidens. He noticed how interested Sousei was and that made him smile.

“So what are your other sisters like? Besides the nutty Suigintou that flies into jealous fits..” He rubbed his arm.

“They are all so kind. The fifth sister, Shinku, she’s like the princess of the group, she can be very bossy, and stuck up at times, but when she is with her medium, she has this smile that I haven’t seen in a very long time. The sixth sister, Hina Ichigo, well she’s just a little kid at heart, my twin Suiseiseki is always picking on her. My second sister Kanaria thinks she’s a genius or something though her medium is just..weird...And the Seventh sister..well..” She paused a moment.

“I met the seventh sister at my friend’s home earlier today. Kirakishou right?” He says as he picked Sousei up and set her on the bed.

“Yes that’s her. All of us didn’t even know if she was real until after we met her. So you know Ari-san? Isn’t she awesome?” Sousei smirked, she looked up to Ari.

“Yeah she’s pretty cool, and those other two dolls of hers..Barasomething... and Shaina. Interesting dolls”

Sousei giggled a bit. “Yeah Barasuishou, we just call her Bara-chan and Shay-chan too! They are really nice once you get to know them.

After they had been talking for hours, it was evening time and Grandpa came up to check on them. Once he saw Sousei sitting on Rein’s lap as he was reading to her, the old man smiled before he announced that dinner was almost ready.

Night time had come quickly once dinner was over. Rein was just coming back from his class, when he spotted Suigintou sitting up on a lamp post..looked like she was waiting for him.

“So you’ve come back to take the rest of my arm?” He grumbled

“No...I haven’t....”

She floats down and stood before him. Her wings were white again, having calmed down. The street lamp highlighted her silvery hair very nicely, and almost seemed to make her eyes glow a warm color. She curtsies to him and looked up again. Megu told her all about how Rein was going to help her get better, it was Megu’s idea to find him and apologize for earlier.

“I uhm...I’ve come to apologize for my actions before....I was not myself...that and....Megu was quite cross with me for how I behaved...my bottom almost wore her hand mark.”

He had to chuckle seeing this doll that almost killed him before, begging for forgiveness.

“Well it’s alright, I sort of deserved to be attacked....Trust me..Megu’s always been like a little sister to me..I guess we both got carried away earlier”

He knelt down in front of her and looks into those soft magenta eyes a moment. “You’re kinda cute....just like Megu”

She’d blush and smile, thankful that he was not mad at her either.





“Thank you; I can see why she fancies you as well. If you get a chance to speak with my younger sister Souseiseki....please tell her I am very sorry as well...I suppose she knocked some sense in to me...I should be going, I promised Megu I’d return before it grew too dark...”



She bows to him and glanced back up as he patted the top of her head gently.

“You’re not so bad after all, I’ll talk to Sousei, she seems to like me, heck I sort of like her now...she was saying something about making a contract...I’d like to see what its like to be a medium to a doll...well I’ll let you get back to Megu...give her a kiss for me!”

Gin grins and winks as she took off, thinking that went well, she smiles to her self as she flew home to Megu.

“Aww she isn’t so bad...maybe a little nutty...but it makes her cute” Rein chuckles as he headed back home as well.


A few moments later Suigintou arrived back at Megu’s window and hopped down.

“So how’d it go? He wasn’t mad was he?” Megu asked as Gin climbs up the bed and sits beside her.

“No he was fine. He and Souseiseki seem to be getting along. I think she might find a decent medium in that boy. I can see why you like him Megu, he is handsome indeed”

Megu blushed and tickled Gin playfully. “Oh well yeah he is cute...last time I saw him, I was just a little taller then you” She giggles.

Gin looked up to her medium and sighed, they had another close call, she couldn’t afford to loose Megu again. As Megu held her hands around Gin’s waist, Gin’s small hands were resting over Megu’s as well.

“Hey....Megu....about what I said before....”

“Forget it Gin, it’s alright...if that naughty Kira really was controlling you...then I trust that it wasn’t you before...besides.....after you said it....I knew you didn’t mean it. I saw the tears in your eyes, and I felt it in my heart”

Megu rested her chin atop Gin’s head a moment. “Mmm....why don’t you get comfy and put those PJ’s on that you got from Mic-chan, you’ll feel better.” Megu says as she stroked her doll’s hair.

“Hmm..alright”

Suigintou slides out of bed and onto the floor where she keeps her case. Opening it she finds the one very pretty night gown Mic-chan gave her, instead of the PJ’s. The doll sized nighty was light blue with dark blue rose designs, with black lace trim on the straps and at the hem. As Gin got undressed, Megu watched and giggled to herself. Those cute doll joints were irresistible to Megu. Once Gin was finished she climbs back on the bed and sits beside Megu with her legs crossed. She left that head band on her head though.

“Oh Suigintou, you look so pretty in that!” Megu blushed and picked her up, holding Gin close.

Gin slid her arms around Megu’s neck in a warm embrace that she didn’t want to let go of, then she remembers what Rein said to her before she left. With a grin she pulls back a little and looks to Megu a moment, before leaning in and kissing her tenderly, then put her head on Megu’s shoulder.

“Suigintou....what was that for? “


“Rein said to give you a kiss for him...well that one was from him.....this one is from me..”

Suigintou moves to kiss her again, a little deeper then the last one, a hand comes up and holds Megu’s right cheek as she kisses her so deeply, putting everything she could into showing Megu how much she cared about her. That kiss seemed to last forever too, and getting deeper the longer they held it. Megu’s hands were holding Gin’s sides firmly and returning those wonderful kisses fully.

“Mmm...Gin....I love you” She whispers against her Angel’s lips.

“I love you too my Megu-chan”

Gin says as she kissed down to Megu’s neck and finally rests against her, arms still around her neck firmly. The two had snuggled for quite some time that night. When they woke up the next morning, Megu found that her PJ top was un buttoned halfway, her PJ bottoms were off completely and Suigintou’s nighty was rolled up to her chest. Well they had a good night didn’t they? Megu blushed and remembered what had happened last night. She quickly got dressed and slides Gin’s nighty down to cover her once more.

“Did we.....do that...”

Megu asks herself as she rolls over, holding Gin tightly. Kissing the top of Gin’s head a moment, she think again, then it hit her. Yes...they had crossed that line between a doll and her medium together. Glancing down to Suigintou she noticed something strange about her. She was still in doll size but, Megu couldn’t find any doll joints! Suigintou’s skin was smooth and very free of doll joints. She noticed Gin had more defined features as well now. Her Angel really looked like an Angel!

“Gin....you gotta wake up and see this...” She nudged her gently.

“Mmmm...Megu-chan...” Gin rolled over and looked up, before she sat up a little more.

“Morning Megu” She grins and holds her medium’s hand.

“Morning Gin...Uhm...take a look...” Megu held Gin’s right arm up and ran a finger up and down her elbow.

“What is this? My joints...what happened to them?”

She’d hop out of bed and stand up, looking down to her knees and feeling all over her body for a doll joint. Then looked down the front of her nighty, She had a more defined chest now as well. Her hands were placed over her proportioned breasts and looked up to Megu.

“I’m...starting to become Alice....I think..is it because of what we did last night?” Gin’s eyes started to tear a little; this thought of becoming Alice was wonderful to her.

“I think so Gin, you’re on your way to becoming a full human girl...you’re even more beautiful now. You’ve changed a bit all over. Your hair is wavy, and your eyes are brighter, and body is cuter! You look like a little angel for real!”

Megu was so happy for her, and crawls out of bed, kneels down and held Suigintou in her arms. Those wings seemed a part of her as wel,l and wondered if Gin could control them easier. Kissing Gin’s cheeks they sit back up on the bed, with Megu inspecting Gin pretty much all over, just to make sure this wasn’t a trick. As she does this, Kira watches from her N-field and sighed.

“My Onee-sama is becoming Alice....I”m so happy...and I helped her...”



Before Kira had left last night, she had left behind what little power she had, just for Gin, and that love she carried with her for her sister as well. This left Kira with pretty much nothing inside, all she had now to do was return to her own body. In doing so, she’d give that Kira a chance in becoming Alice as well. When she leaves to find her body, she found her snuggled up in bed along side Ari, with Bara and Shay as well. She takes a deep breath and phases back into her body, feeling the hug from Ari and smiles.

This was where she belonged, and finally, after all this time, she realized this. She didn’t want revenge on Father, she didn’t want to destroy Gin’s happiness, all she really wanted, was to be loved by a family. She wakes up a little and kissed Ari’s cheek, then glanced to Bara and Shay on the other side of their master and crawls over to them, getting in between the two she fell back to sleep.

“I love you guys” Kira whispers softly.





Rein was just waking up that morning, he had a class in a few hours, he figured he’d get up and get ready. As he rolls over, the first thing he sees is Souseiseki, waiting for him with some nice hot tea and a small breakfast of a bagel and an orange.

“Morning Rein-kun, I just came up to see if you were awake. I made some tea for you” She says with a cute blush.

“Hey thanks Sousei, you didn’t have to, that was really sweet” He says as he sat up and patted the top of her head gently.

She sets the small tray on his desk and hopped on the bed as she waited for him to finish getting ready in the bathroom. When he came out she admired his good looks once again as he combed his hair and sat down for his quick breakfast.

“So you’re off to your morning classes Rein-kun?” She asks brushing her bangs from her eyes.

“Huh? Oh yeah got my history class and a few others today, I should be home before five tonight, then I’m off a few days. I’d love to get a few more stories out of you; it’ll help my history class” He chuckles before sipping some tea.

“I’d like that too!” She smiled and watched him eat his breakfast. After he left, she watched him leave and head down the street from her spot in his room, looking out the window.

“He’s a great boy isn’t he?” Grandma says so proudly.

“Yes he is Grandma! I....I really like him” Sousei says with a blush.

“Oh? I think someone has a crush!” Her Grandma teased her.

“Huh? No way!...well..” Sousei looked away a moment.

“It’s alright dear, dolls can have feelings too, you are every much a young lady too, you’re entitled to have a look around to see what’s out there. Grandma sat beside Sousei on the bed and held her close.

“You’re the closest thing I have to a granddaughter, well your sister is sweet, but you’re sweeter”

“Thank you Grandma, I love being here with you and Grandpa and maybe...Rein will be my medium”

“Maybe he will, he does seem to like you dear” Grandma kissed Sousei’s forehead before she left to work on some chores down in the shop.

“I think...he’d make a great medium, almost as great as Jun-kun” Sousei blushed at the thought, her true sweet nature coming out even more since meeting Rein last night.

There seemed to be a lot of love wandering through the Rozen Maidens lately, Shinku and Jun confessed, Suigintou and Megu shared an interesting night together already. And now, Souseiseki and her new friend Rein. Well Sousei wants a medium, and to be his friend. Even Kirakishou has finally found where she belongs. She adored Arianna and her dolls, and seemed to fit right in. Kira didn’t tell them about her evil side coming back to her body; she didn’t want to scare them.

Somewhere however, in the deep recesses of another N-field, where Enju was banished to, He was working on a new creation, against Rozen’s orders to never create another doll. This doll was in the early stages, she didn’t even have a dress or a paint job yet, but Enju, who wanted nothing more then to have a creation of his surpass Rozen’s smirked as he pieces his newest creation together carefully.

“This time....I will not fail. You will be stronger then Barasuishou, faster then Suigintou....my lovely one. A name though...you need a name...something those Rozen creations will fear more then Kirakishou...”

Enju picked at his brain for hours, writing down several different names, even mixing names of Rozen’s dolls together.....Some were, Barasuginku...and Suiseikishou.....No they were terrible names he thought. He wanted this doll to have the perfect name, until he was browsing though some books and saw something that caught his attention.

“Hmm...Your name will be...”*Jigomako*...Yes my little demon girl of Hell...” *which does mean Demon girl of Hell by the way*

Enju laughed a bit to himself as he finished piecing his new creation together. Her body type was that of Suigintou’s with the longer arms and legs, giving her a more grown up body, but he gave her a sweeter face style, much like Hina Ichigo’s. He worked endlessly on creating this doll. Once her eyes were set into place, he gave her a set of eerie silver eyes, that seemed to have a prismatic tint to them when the light hit them a certain way.

Her hair was strawberry blonde, but styled almost in a mix of Bara’s and Shinku’s. Her dress was a cross of Suiseiseki’s sleeves, Hina’s slippers, Suigntou’s torso and shoulders and Kira’s Rose shaped skirt. For a special effect, he placed a silver rose eye patch over the eye where Kira had her rose. Once this doll was finished, he stepped back and admired his darkly dressed little masterpiece.

“Beautiful...” He mutters as he adjusted Jigomako’s dress just a little more. Her dress was colored a deep blood red with black ribbons on the sleeves and black lace trim on the edges of the dress.

“It’s not yet time to awaken you my lovely...very soon...Very soon indeed.” He picked the doll up in his arms and carried her from the workshop and places her in a special black leather case.



Shinku had dozed off on Jun’s bed that after noon, and awakens with a startle. She had foreseen something strange and wicked. Did she just see Jigomako completed? In any case she was quite afraid. Taking a deep breath she sighs a little and looked to Hina.

“Go get Jun, tell him to start some tea please”




“Okay Shinku!!” Hina skittered out of the room and downstairs. As she slides down the railing, she bumped smack into Jun, and almost knocked the boy over!

“Hey careful! You can get hurt that way Hina-chan!” He catches her Just in time and puts her on his shoulders.

“Shinku says to make her some tea Na no!...she looked like she saw a ghost though!”

“Ghosts aren’t real Chibi Ichigo, they’re just stories made up to scare stupid little kids desu!”

Jun snuck up behind Suisei and grabbed her sides as he shouted: “BOO!”

Suiseiseki jumped ten feet into the air screaming something about a ghost wanting her soul and took off under the couch. Hina and Jun both got a good laugh from that one.

“Suisei is afraid of Ghosts Na no!!” Hina laughed sweetly as Jun carries her into the kitchen to make Shinku’s tea.

“Hmph...You just ...c..caught me of guard that’s all desu...I’ll let you have that one Chibi ningen desu....but next time you wont be so lucky desu!!” Suisei tried to be brave, even though she clattered all over from being so scared.

Once Jun finished prepareing Shinku’s tea, he set her special little cup on a tray with some cookies and took them upstairs to her.

“Hey your tea’s done, I brought some cookies too” He smiles and peeked in to see Shinku sitting up with her knees up to her chest.

“Shinku? Are you alright?” He set the tray down on the desk and sat on the edge of the bed with an arm around her.

“I saw something, very terrible Jun. She was....like one of us. But with silver eyes...” She muttered.

“Well I’m sure it was just a bad dream...maybe something that happened in the past? Don’t worry about it though, I’m here, and your sisters are too”

Shinku closed her eyes and leans against him, holding his hand in hers. She had been leaving her bonnet off, only because he said she looked prettier without it, which she did, she looked more grown up. She sighed a moment and looked up to him,

“I suppose you are right Jun, it might have been just a passing moment in history coming back...thank you”

She hugged him tight and asked him to get her tea and cookies. Sitting with her for a while, Jun heard Sousei and Suisei down stairs and smiled.

“So you think you might have a medium desu?” Suisei asked her.

“Yes I think so, he’s very kind, and has a lot of knowledge about us, He even knows Ari-san, and Megu-chan too.”

She was telling Suisei about how Gin attacked Rein last night, which didn’t surprise either one really. Suisei just shook her head, but stuck up for Gin, now that was a surprise.




“I don’t blame her desu....sure she was wrong for kicking his ass desu..but...She was only looking out for Megu chan after all desu”

“Suisei....I..I guess your’e right..I was harsh with Gin-sama last night, besides, Rein’s arm is okay. If I see her...I hope I can clear things up with her...”

Sousei held her sister’s hand and smiled a bit.

“She won’t be mad at you desu, Gin’s actually kinda cool now desu” Suisei giggled a bit.

Jun comes down the steps with Shinku and her tea and wonders what the twins were chattering about down here. After some information he was up to speed, and wondering himself how Gin is able to calm herself after each of her anger episodes. Sousei was telling them all about Rein, and the more she talked about this guy, the more they figured she had a crush on him.

Sousei glanced over to Shinku a moment, she could tell there was something up, but wasn’t too sure if she should press matters any further. Shinku’s glance wandered to Sousei, she noticed her concern and closed her eyes as she set her tea cup down.

“Perhaps I should say something about my dream...who..or whatever it was, it seems to be another doll, it might have been just old memories gone hazy over the years.”

“Wow another one?...you don’t suppose Father is making an eight sister desu” Suisei got a little excited.

No..this one...from what I saw, she didn’t seem like anything Father would make. She had a...Barasuishou quality to her, all I remember, were her silver eyes” Shinku shuddered a little.

“Silver eyes hmm?” Sousei thought and shrugged it off. It might have just been a weird dream Shinku, I wouldn’t worry too much”

Jun patted Shinku’s shoulder a little; he could sense her uneasy-ness. They sat on the couch for some time, Jun kept his eye on Shinku, just to make sure she was going to be alright. Sometime mid afternoon they heard Suigintou’s voice, and wondered what brought her here today. Everyone gathered in the dining room where Suigintou was sitting in a chair, cross legged.

“I have come to share some news with you.” She says as she hopped down from the chair and rolled up her sleeves on her dress.

“What is it Suigintou? Did something happen?” Shinku asked, a bit concerned when Gin didn’t say what it was right away.

“Oh nothing bad happened at all...in fact this is very good news...Notice...anything different about me?”

She stood with her arms folded, but her arms were uncovered, she wondered how long it would take before anyone says something. Suisei walked up and took a short walk around Suigintou, the first thing she noticed, was her eyes, they were still magenta, but had a hint of brown in them now. Upon closer inspection by Shinku, her eyes widened when she noticed Gin’s joints were gone.

“Suigintou....what happened?” She had her hand on Gin’s elbow, feeling how smooth it was.

The first doll smirked, and blushed deeply as she placed her hands over her mystica before she looks to them.




“Something amazing happened last night. Megu and I wake up this morning..and I find that my body has changed. I have a chest now Shinku!..look!”

She was so excited as she leans on Shinku, her defined and firmer breasts press against Shinku gently.

“Oh my God..Suigintou’s got a nice rack now desu” Suisei got a jab in her side from Sousei after that one.

“Wow..Gin how’d it happen?” Jun knelt down and held her hands, he was so happy for her.

Shinku blushed quite deeply feeling Gin’s chest against hers like that and hugged her close. She wondered herself just how it could have happened, and was itching to know the full story. Gin smiles brightly and had no shame in telling her sisters and Jun what she and Megu did last night, after they had a small fight. Say what you want, but Suigintou does love Megu. Once the others heard what Gin and her medium did, they all blushed deeply. Hina however had no clue of what went on, she was just happy that Gin was so happy.

“So..wow...you and Megu huh?...” Jun was speechless, and trying not to picture it either.

“That’s wonderful Suigintou; I suppose this is one of the steps to becoming Alice”

Shinku had blushed deeply again, she couldn’t get over how beautiful Gin had become; well she was before, but now even more so. They were all sitting on the couch together; Gin was showing off her knees and giggling about how good she feels. Suisei got a little jealous since the first sister was the very first to have grown up so much, but then she was happy for her, and admired her new looks.

“You’ve got brown in your eyes like Megu-chan desu, I think you might start to look like her after a while desu!” Suisei giggled.

Suigintou blushed and tried not to blush so deeply, but she couldn’t help herself now, she was truly becoming more and more like a young lady. Even as she sat there with Jun and her sisters, she just had this grown up look about her.

Jun couldn’t help but look to Gin, his eyes had wandered to her cleavage a moment, hey the boy can look cant he? Suigintou grins and leans against him, her chest pressing against his arm as she hugged herself close to him. When Gin was getting ready to leave, she still had a stop over at Arianna’s to make before she headed back to Megu, she hugged her sisters tight and kissed their cheeks, even Jun’s cheek too.

“We’re all so happy for you Suigintou. I know I am” Shinku says as she hugged her tight in return.

The twins had hugged her back and let Gin make her leave, only before hugging Hina so tight.

“I want to be as pretty as Gin-san Na no! I’ll work real hard!!” Hina giggled.

“I know you can do it Hina” Gin pats her head gently before she headed out to find Arianna and her girls to tell them the good news.

As Gin flies to Ari’s home that evening, she hums Megu’s song to herself, getting a warm feeling in her chest, She had spotted below her, Rein coming back from the hospital. She had wondered if everything was alright, and decided to end her visits for the night, and return to Megu, just in case. Landing on the window sill, she found the window was closed again. No big deal she thought, she’d wait patiently. Peeking in she saw the nurses doing their usual tending to Megu, everything seemed alright. Satisfied that Megu was perfectly fine, she continues on her way to Ari’s home. Once there she hopped in the window in the living room.




“So sorry to intrude, but I have wonderful news everyone” She goes about the same way as she did over Jun’s home, getting pretty much the same reaction here as she got over there. Kira ran up and gave Gin a tight hug, and pulled back, admiring Gin’s new look.

“Onee-sama is gorgeous” Kira rested her head against her gently.

“Damn right, look at you Gin-chan, this is great!” Shaina was very excited for her as well as Bara, who shyly blushed as she stood beside Shaina.

“Yes.....she’s truly and Angel” Bara said softly.

Suigintou held her two friends and youngest sister tightly. When she saw Ari she smirked and looked up to her, and winked.

“Well what’s going on here ladies? Oh Suigintou, what’s up Hun?” Ari knelt down to her, and noticed right away the change.

“Goodness, someone’s been drinking their milk...Gin you look great! So this must be the first stop on the road to becoming Alice, I’m impressed! And I think your Father would be too” Ari held Gin close and picked her up a moment.

“I hope so; I want him to see how I’ve grown!” Gin rested against Ari a moment.

“Oh I think he has a good idea, he’s proud of you Suigintou, and so am I....you’ve had some rocky spots but, I think you’ll turn out all right”

Ari ruffled Gin’s soft hair playfully, before Gin whispers to Ari just how she was able to achieve this shape. Much to Ari’s surprise, after hearing what she and Megu did, the young woman did a double take and set her down, patting her backside.

“Little imp, you run along, and go back to Megu before she gets lonely” Ari winked to her as Gin left.

“What’d she say?” Bara asked as she tugged on Ari’s pant leg.

“I....Uhh..I’ll tell you girls when you’ll understand it a little more...its complicated” She needed a drink now after that one.

Gin zipped quickly back up to Megu’s window, found it to still be closed. She peeked in again and noticed Megu wasn’t there. Gin figured the nurses took Megu down to the cafeteria for some real food for a change. Suigintou gripped the window and slides it open herself. After that feat, she was a little worn out, that window was heavy to slide. Sitting on the bed she crossed her legs and turns on the TV. She could hear the shower running in the bathroom, and hearing Megu’s soft song.

Knowing where her medium was, Gin felt better and not so paranoid. With a small grin she got up and peeked inside to see what Megu was doing. Just taking a bath, the water had stopped and Megu was leaning back in the tub as she sang her song to herself.

Gin smiled and watched her for a moment, before shutting the door again and waiting on the bed. Megu had spotted out of the corner of her eye, Suigintou peek in and leave, she pouted a little when Gin didn’t ask to join her. Gin was curious however, and made her way back to the bathroom door and peeked in once more. Now she had done this one other time, but that was before she grew closer to Megu.

“I didn’t think you’d sneak in on me, Gin you’re naughty sometimes” Megu chuckles



“You have no idea just how naughty I can be Megu-chan”

Gin’s eyes held that naughty glint which was shown last night. She walked up to the tub and sat on the edge, looking down to Megu in her bubble bath, her body covered in strategic places by suds, that made Gin pout a little.

“So did you tell your sisters about what happened? I bet they were jealous” Megu said as she leans back again.

“Oh they were at first, but everyone was so happy for me and for the both of us as well. I still can’t believe....what we did. It felt like a dream...” Gin’s cheeks tinted a deep pink as she reached over and held Megu’s cheek.

“I know I had a dream a while back that was very similar, only you were in full human size...and very breathtakingly beautiful. My imagination ran away with me that night” She’d giggle and flick some suds on to Gin’s nose.

Gin scrunched her nose and blew off the suds and smiles to Megu again, being careful as to not fall into the tub with her dress on. She sighs happily and both lean in closer, Megu kissing Gin very softly before Gin left to wait for her.

“She’s so cute....and wonderful...and perfect....” Megu says to herself as she relaxes once more.

Ara, Nice Fanfic.... Gotta love the MeguxGin pairing... Even though, if you think a little too much about it, a doll/Human relationship is kinda creepy... but, meh... keep up the good work! and I might also suggest you try to work on:


-- Narration. Right now the voice of narration you use in the story is a bit too familiar, as if you yourself were telling the story. When this happens and your personal biases and excitement slip into phrases of the narration it makes it seem very young and unprofessional.

-- Your chapters are a bit... episodic. I mean that problems tend to introduce themselves and get resolved in very short order. You should think about weaving plotlines together rather than building them up and breaking them down one-at-a-time.

Overall, it *is* a good story... OMG, I just realized there's more chaps!:heehee:

So, in the end, this is a fanfic thread, so I might as well post the link to mine:

( Right Here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3577589/1/) )

First RM fanfic... feedback (reviews) is appreciated (I need to know If I should never again attempt to write RM fanfiction).

:topicoff: I've just recently watched Overture (Haven't watched the other two seasons) and I find myself disliking Megu's voice... But anyway,

*Is off to read the rest of Megu-chan's fanfiction*

[cardslash02]

Hey guys,
I'm looking for some good JunxShinku fanfics, if they exist. Can anyone point me in the direction of some?

[innominate]

Is there a reason for all some of you writing your fanfictions in dialogue format... Not that it has anything to do with the plot or the general direction of your piece, but I do believe it would work out better to 'colour' your fictions. Adding a little description here and there would paint a more thorough picture and it doesn't really do any harm, no?

Ara, just a comment ^^. Heheh...

[edgewalker00]

here's a continuation to my fic... its more of a note than a chapter >_<

eternal play chap 16... or so (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3298015/16/)

[Shinku Hime]

Hey guys,
I'm looking for some good JunxShinku fanfics, if they exist. Can anyone point me in the direction of some?

Me too me too!!!!!
Anyone knows?

[•••Shadow•••]

Flo - OMFG!!!
How could end the story like that?
When I finally thought that Suigintou and Megu are going to live together and have happy life...
You ended up making Jun meeting Megu...
That was the last thing i wanted to see in fan-fic (i knew i should have now read it) .. I will have really. really bad dreams -_________-
I hope for 3rd season.. I won't be able to live with ending like that -_-
ah ok.. its your story not mine... ( i wish my fantasy was a little bit better)

[Flo]

"Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung, Interlude to Memories" is now up.

Hopefully this explains why Suigintou is still alive & kicking. Also my version on how Kirakishou came about. This happens after the first Suigintou VS Kirakishou battle and before Suigintou VS Kirakishou Rematch.

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Interlude to Memories
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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‘Where…am I?’

That was the first thing Suigintou thought as she woke up in a hallway of doors. The next thing she noticed was her torn dress she was wearing. The doll tried to recall what happen before.

“That’s right, I was battling the 7th doll…And then used my rozen mystical to save Megu...Does this mean I became a Junk? If so…the why am I here?”

Suigintou pondered, but finds that just standing around won’t get her anywhere.

“Well, I guess I should explore a little bit.”

***
Doors, doors and more doors, Suigintou had walked for hours and all she saw are nothing but doors. Suigintou is starting to get irritated, until she saw one door was slightly ajar. Curious enough she took a peep, she saw a girl hold needle and thread sewing a black dress. As Suigintou was bout to take a closer look, the door slowly closes in front of her.

“The Young Miss is a little busy at the moment and does not wish to be disturbed until she is finished, I hope you understand.

The voice came from behind, the doll turn around to see an old man in his 60s, wearing a butler outfit.

“Welcome to the Hall of Memories, Mercury Lampe.” Said the old man, greeting her with a smile.

“Hall of Memories?”

“Yes, the place where the memories of the Rozen Maiden are stored. More specifically, yours.”

“Mine?”

The door to Suigintou’s right opened, revealing Suigintou’s battle against Kirakishou

“I believe this is your last memory before you arrived here.” Said the old man as he closed the door.

“Who are you anyway?” Suigintou responded, sighed for his lack of introduction.

“My apologies for my rudeness.” The old man bowed, “My name is Lucifer. I am nothing but a wandering old butler.”

“A wandering old butler who knows something that I don’t.” Suigintou replied.

“You are observant, and I believe that you also have questions for me.”

“Why am I here?”

“Because it’s your desire to be here.” Came a quick responds from Lucifer

That’s not really an answer she wanted to hear. Before she could ask another question, another door opened, revealing Suigintou’s first meeting with Megu at the abandon church.

“I believe this girl is very dear to you, so much so you are willing to forfeit your Rozen Mystical to keep her alive. To forfeit to become Alice, to forfeit Sir Rozen’s ultimate ideal. So tell me, what does Alice mean to you?” Lucifer closed the door.

Suigintou gave a little thought before answering, “Alice…I guess it is to be solely loved by father. For him to love her, his ideal lady and no one else. That is why I joined the Alice Game.” She paused for a while, and then continues “But after meeting Megu, I begin to realize something. After the last Alice Game, I believe that in Father’s eyes, there is an Alice in me, as well as the other doll, as much as I hate to admit it. To Megu…I was her angel…” She gave another pause, “Her Alice.”

Then, another door opened.

***
Suigintou flew back to Rozen’s mansion, well what was left of Rozen’s mansion. The place was left in ruins and half of the place was burned to the ground with bits and pieces of porcelain laying everywhere.

As she explored the place, she saw something stood out from the ruins. A stalk of white rose, among the charred wreckage. It was beautiful, however it was withering and it’s as if it could die at any moment.

Suigintou couldn’t help but to take pity for the rose. She picked up the rose and took it to what was then Rozen’s backyard, which was surprisingly somewhat intact. She planted the rose at the most fertile soil she could find and sprinkle the rose with water.

“I believe this is the best I can do” Suigintou said to the rose, “What ever happens afterwards no longer concerns me.” However deep down she had hoped that in the future the ruins would be beautified by a garden of white roses. With nothing else left for her in this place, Suigintou flew off to find her arch nemesis, Shinku.

***

“I believe the Young Miss is done with her work.” Lucifer closes the door, “Please, come with me.”

Lucifer opened the door where the girl was. This time the girl was nowhere in sight, just a mannequin wearing a black Victorian dress, the same dress that Suigintou once wore.

“That’s…” The doll’s eyes widen at her discovery. The old man clears his throat before giving Suigintou another surprise, “If I were to say that the Young Miss has given you a second chance, will you accept it?”

She was definitely surprised, “What? But I thought I gave my Rozen Mystical to Megu?”

Lucifer expected her to say that, he took something out of the left breast pocket, revealing a sparkling prism crystal shaped of a rose petal.

Suigintou was surprise, yet again. “The Rozen Mystical?” The take a closer look, “No, it’s something different, but…”

“The Young Miss wishes to entrust this, the ‘Alice Mystical’ to you.” Lucifer put the crystal to Suigintou’s hand.

“The …Alice Mystical?” She looks at the crystal. “But why?”

“Let’s just say the Young Miss took a liking of you.” The butler clears his throat, “Now it looks like your sisters are in trouble.”

“Sisters? You mean Shinku?” The doll frowned, “Let them be, why should I help them?” Suigintou opens a door, which revealed the real world.

“However it looks as if you going to aid them.”

“*Sigh* Whatever…Before I go, who is this ‘Young Miss’ you are talking about?”

“Don’t worry, you’ll meet her soon enough.”

“…” Suigintou looks at the butler for a while, “Please give her my thanks.” With that, Suigintou took off.

As the door to the real world was about to close, Alice appeared behind Lucifer, “You are welcome...”

The door closed shut.
***

End of Interlude

[•••Shadow•••]

Well my english is not that good but is this
what happened right before the battle with Kira?.. Well guess not because Suigintou already saw it in one doors... It's kind of confusing for me @_@

[•••Shadow•••]

So she died from it?
Well then what's this?
"***
Mr. Kakizaki: “We’re here.”

Megu looked out of the car window; she saw a two storey house right in front of her. To Suigintou, this place looks awfully familiar.

Megu: “It’s lovely.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: “Welcome to your new home, sweetie.” *Smiled at Megu*

The family got off the car and was about to enter to their home, when someone who lived next door exit. Suigintou couldn’t believe that her neighbor was going to be.

Suigintou: (Oh hell no, you gotta be kindding…)

Jun: *Looks at the girl holding Suigintou in shock* “What the? S-Suigintou!?”

Megu: “Huh?” (Looks at the boy with curiosity) “You knew Suigintou?”
***
Chapter 9 Ends"
Did I really missed something? O_O

[Flo]

So she died from it?
Well then what's this?
"***
Mr. Kakizaki: “We’re here.”

Megu looked out of the car window; she saw a two storey house right in front of her. To Suigintou, this place looks awfully familiar.

Megu: “It’s lovely.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: “Welcome to your new home, sweetie.” *Smiled at Megu*

The family got off the car and was about to enter to their home, when someone who lived next door exit. Suigintou couldn’t believe that her neighbor was going to be.

Suigintou: (Oh hell no, you gotta be kindding…)

Jun: *Looks at the girl holding Suigintou in shock* “What the? S-Suigintou!?”

Megu: “Huh?” (Looks at the boy with curiosity) “You knew Suigintou?”
***
Chapter 9 Ends"
Did I really missed something? O_O

Ohhhhh...my mistake.

That was after 'Gin vs Kira' (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=666008&postcount=5557) (chap 7) and before 'Gin vs Kira Rematch' (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=973148) (chap 9)

I never touch this for so long I got confused myself lol. :heh:

[•••Shadow•••]

Lol man now you confused me even more dammit XD.
'Gin vs Kira' - was battle where Megu died?
'Gin vs Kira Rematch' - was where Suigintou had awesome power and torned off Shinku's arm?
I'm really stupid. I guess i'm the only one who didn't understand this -.-
So... what was the end after all? ... I thought end was when Megu and Suigintou went living next to Jun's house.... But now you confused me that much, that I think that Suigintou is actually dead, Megu is living next to Jun (omfg nooo ;_;], Alice is acutally Kira?..... T_T.... I'm so stupid

[Flo]

'Gin vs Kira Rematch' - was where Suigintou had awesome power and torned off Shinku's arm?

[cuts]
Alice is acutally Kira?..... T_T.... I'm so stupid


Also the battle where Gin owns Kira

And nope, Kira is not Alice


Kirakishou flew a few clicks from that punch. “Such strength, it’s impossible at this level.” She said to herself. Suigintou’s human master was still alive so power from hatred was out of the question, unless…

Kirakishou: “I see…”

Kirakishou got up, the white rose that was covering the right eye was gone, reveal the empty eye socket.

Suigintou: “What the…”

Kirakishou: *covered her empty eye socket* “*She* gave you this power didn’t she, Onee-sama.”



So... what was the end after all?... I thought end was when Megu and Suigintou went living next to Jun's house....

It's far from over, I just happen to be too lazy to continue. XD Maybe when I find the time to continue.

[•••Shadow•••]

Oh.. Well I kinda got it now. I still don't really understand what is that new story you posted today. I mean where should i put it. But you don't have to bother about it anymore :D. Maybe I'll understand it when ill hardly think about it XD.

It's far from over, I just happen to be too lazy to continue. XD Maybe when I find the time to continue.

Oh, lol XD. Well ok, if you will ever continue with it
please, let the Megu and Suigintou be happy together forever ;_; ...For me, it was really horrible shock when you made Megu know Jun.. That is the last thing I wanted... You know what.... Maybe there might happen something between them and..... NOOO I DONT WANT TO THINK ABOUT IT.. ok well nvm this XD

[Flo]

You are welcomed, I don't mind explaining if needed.

And yes, how evil of me to make Megu meet Jun, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! >=D

[•••Shadow•••]

Do you know that's not even funny?
I belive you know about this pic (it's the pic i hate the most)ä
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2459/plotthickens2oo.gif
I really beg you. Please don't let you fan-fic end like that...

[Flo]

Do you know that's not even funny?
I belive you know about this pic (it's the pic i hate the most)ä
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2459/plotthickens2oo.gif
I really beg you. Please don't let you fan-fic end like that...

Lol I remember I posted this pic ages ago.

Don't worry I won't end it just like this. I still have Souseiseki dying to make her appearance. (Although it won't be a happy one)

[•••Shadow•••]

aaah, thank you ^^
Well Souseiseki is my second fav. doll... I don't really care about her that much like I care about Suigintou and Megu... Well ok doesn't matter now.
I'm looking forward to contiunation (does word like that even exist?) ^^

[Flo]

aaah, thank you ^^
Well Souseiseki is my second fav. doll... I don't really care about her that much like I care about Suigintou and Megu... Well ok doesn't matter now.
I'm looking forward to contiunation (does word like that even exist?) ^^

Thank you for your support.

Also just a little info. Before Wiederbelebung became a fanfiction, it started as a very depressing dream. (Also to note that everytime I start writing the fic, I will recall my dreams and became very depressed.) And the worst thing is...the dream ended very very very bad. I won't spoil it on how it end.

I'll keep everyone updated on Wieder and Alicenger!

[•••Shadow•••]

You mean, you had really dream about it?

I really hate dreams like that -_- ... I hope you won't let fan-fic end up like that (only if Suigintou die in hug with Megu)... I become really depressed when I start to think about how Megu died and Suigintou is very sad... Or when I when i think about....................................... ............... ........ Jun x Megu......... -___- ... Aren't we kinda retarded?.. being depressed from anime (acutally cartoons) (anime/manga is really a bad virus)

I was thinking about it a lot since you posted Wiederbelebung... Wouldn't it be acutally better if Suigintou and Megu die together?.... I mean... That way they can be happy together forever..... If they won't die, then .............. I just can't think of old Megu... Like.... 60-years old Megu and... Suigintou............ i'm getting depressed just about thinking of it :(

[Flo]

Wiederbelebung chapter 10 up. "Enjoy" (Although it doesn't sound right)

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 10
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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[Kirakishou’s N-field: Alchemy Lab]

Enju was almost finished in studying the Rozen Mystical of Souseiseki as he carefully dripped some substances with an eye dropper. He was very please with the progress he make that he felt regrettable to let the 6th fell prey to her predator but it’s all in the past and there’s no point complaining about it. With the last drop of liquid fell from the dropper, Enju’s study was complete.

Enju: “Now it’s time to put this to the test…”

Enju carefully handle the Rozen Mystical as he move to his personalized ‘torture chamber’, where the Souseiseki lay dormant. Like moth to the fire the Rozen Mystical enters Souseiseki, the reawaken doll slowly moves.

Enju: “Time to wake up, my servant.”

Souseiseki’s eyes shot wide open, scanning around to find an unfamiliar territory. She tried to move but found her arms and feet shackled and chained to a wall. Then there was Enju, standing before her.

Enju: “Good evening, I hope you rest well.”

Souseiseki: “Enju…” *Her words hint hostility* “What do you want?”

Enju: “Straight to the point I see.” *Smile* “Very well, I’d like your absolute obedience.”

Souseiseki: “What?”

Enju: “Denounce your love for your false father and swear your absolute loyalty to me.”

Souseiseki: “You…want me to betray my father? I politely refuse.” *Looked away from Enju*

Enju: “Oh? How unfortunate, but I’m afraid you have no choice.”

Souseiseki: *Glared back at Enju* “What the hell do you mean by that?”

Enju: “Although without a doubt among the seven sisters you are the most loyal of them all, what has he given you for your unquestioned loyalty?

Souseiseki: “What?”

Enju: “He gave you nothing. When you were defeated by Suigintou in the Alice, he literally gave up on you and moved on. No matter how loyal you are, once you failed his expectations you were no long a use to him. As I spend my time learning to make dolls from him and knew about his plans, he never gives a damn about you or any of his dolls he made. All he cares in his mind is his false fantasies of creating this so call ‘Alice’. You are just tools to fulfill his sick twisted ‘fetish’.”

Souseiseki: “LIES! I will not let you insult father like that!”

Eyes filled with anger by his words; however Enju was unfazed by the dolls anger.

Enju: *Sigh* “Still clinging on to blind loyalty, just like a dog. Such loyalty will only lead to damnation, however even the most loyal dog bites his master.”

Enju took out a ruby ring from his shirt pocket. He closed his eyes concentrating his thoughts to the ring and just like magic the ring started to glow. As the ring glow Souseiseki suddenly felt uneasy, as if something was forceful pressing on her. From the feel of uneasiness suddenly turned to a painful choke, Souseiseki felt great pain within her body and it’s increasing slowly.

Souseiseki: “Ah…Urgh! Arrrrgh!”

The ring glows brighter and brighter, the doll’s screams of pain became loud. The chains that bind her prevents her from trashing around, increasing her suffering.

Souseiseki: “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”

Enju finally break his concentration, stopping the rings glow. Souseiseki quickly tried to catch her breath as the pain within subsided.

Souseiseki: *cough cough* “What…” *gasp* “Have you done…” *cough cough* “to me?” *cough*

Enju: “You mean you don’t remember?”

Enju was a little surprised; his experimenting with her Rozen Mystical might have made her not remembering what he had done.

Enju: “Very well, let me tell you. As we all know Rozen Mystical is like a life source to the Rozen Maiden, I‘ve taken the liberty to study it during your slumber and I’ve found out something interesting. I’ve found out that like a human, the Mystical acts as a heart, the mind, the spirit, the senses and nerves, all lumps together within a small crystal. Upon discovering that, I couldn’t resist to take advantage of the discovery.”

Souseiseki: *Surprised* “What?”

Enju: “Heh, what a sick man, that Rozen. Creating the essence of life only to see it destroyed.” *Looks at Souseiseki* “I kindly ask you again, swear your loyalty to me, so that I can save you from the mad man.”

Mad man he said, how ironic. Even if what Enju said about Rozen is true, Enju was much worse. If Rozen's a mad man, then Enju must be a monster.

Souseiseki: “I will never betray my father, no matter how many times you ask!”

Enju: *Sigh* “Looks like the dog still needs more training” *Ring glows brightly*

Souseiseki: *In tremendous pain* “ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!”

Souseiseki tried to fight the pain within her, but the ring continued to glow brighter and brighter. Soon, it became unbearable for the doll.

Souseiseki: *About to cry as she wrenched in pain* “AHHHHHHHHHH! MAKE IT STOP! ARRRRRRRGGGH! STOP IT! PLEASE!”

Barasuishou then entered the chamber. Enju stopped upon seeing his precious doll, temporary ended Souseiseki’s torture. The captive doll’s body felt like lead and couldn’t even finish a proper sentence.

Souseiseki: *Cough**Whimper* “Just…” *Cough* “Finish…me…off…” *Gasp cough* “…I…never….join…” *Gasp* “Sicko like….” *cough cough* “you…”

Barasuishou: “This looks interesting. Father, can I play with it?” *Looked at Enju*

Enju: “By all means” *Gives the ring to Barasuishou* “She is very important to my plan, so please try not let her Rozen Mystical escape from her body, if you know what I mean. It’s a pain trying to put it back” *Left the chamber*

With Enju leaving, Barasuishou was alone with Souseiseki. The 4th doll looked at her captor in fear, having a feeling that Barasuishou's treatment would be much worse than Enju. She was right.

Barasuishou: *Cold smile* “Now, let’s break you down psychically and mentally, one…by…one”

The ring glows intensively.

***
Chapter 10 ends

[•••Shadow•••]

WOW O_O.... That was awesomely GREAT!!! O_O...
Poor Souseiseki :( :( :( :( :( ... I can't wait for next :):(

[Death Angel]

I have read all the fanfic in this thread....and it was cool or better.

[Flo]

RM:W 11 up.

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 11
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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Suigintou was in a very foul mood. Since afternoon she had been silently fuming and bitching about her ill luck coming here as she sat on the bed, where Megu was sleeping soundly. Megu’s room was dull and plain, furnished with only a bed, a closet and a mirror. Her parents would be taking her for some shopping to decorate the room the next day.

Megu: “…mmm…” *Sleep talking* “Jun-…san…”

Suigintou suddenly felt a giant headache after hearing that. She couldn’t believe Megu got acquainted to that sad excuse of a human Sakurada Jun, who is also the medium of her arch-nemesis, Shinku. What’s even worse was he’s also Megu’s neighbor meaning the chances of bumping into Shinku is very high, which was the last thing she ever wanted.

Suigintou: “Urg….Megu you idiot…”

Suigintou quietly got off from bed, and stopped to look at the large mirror beside the bed.

Suigintou: “…”

Upon closer look at her reflection on the mirror, she noticed something different about her. She looked taller, her face looked flush and her skin looked healthier. She felt…human. She then rolled up her sleeve revealing her bare arm.

Suigintou: “…”

No signs of doll joint.

Suigintou: *Frowns* “Stupid old man, is there anything else you’re not telling me?”

Suigintou took a closer look at her own reflection; she felt a small smile creeping at the edge of her lips.

Suigintou: “So this is what it’s like being one step closer to become Alice huh…”

***
[Playground, almost midnight]

Alice was playing with the swing by herself; her butler wasn’t by her side because she told him to. While she swings, her eyes did not even move away from the clock near playground, as if she’s expecting something. When the clock struck midnight, the playground becomes distorted into a crooked and twisted version of the place, the swing Alice was on remains intact. Then something appeared behind the girl to break the loneliness.

White rose petals were launched at Alice, but immediately the petals shattered when they got close to the girl and then froze. The attacker smiled at the girl.

???: “As expected from The One, you are strong.”

The girl turned to greet her sister.

Alice: “Schnee Kristall…”

Kirakishou: “Fu fu fu, correct. You’ve helped my beloved Onee-sama to become stronger, for this I thank you. However, I do not approve of the method you helped her.”

Alice: “I only did what was necessary.”

Kirakishou: “I am no fool. I know what that man’s intention was. You and I know this very well.”

There was a short silence

Alice: “So… you will go against father?”

Kirakishou: “Father?” *giggles* “Fu fu fu, I have no father. It is my beloved Onee-sama who created me.”

Alice: “…”

Kirakishou: “For her, I will help Onee-sama to become Alice, by any means necessary. When the time comes I will take your life, only then my Onee-sama can truly be Alice. But since you’ve help her, I’ll leave you alone…for now. Fu fu fu…”

Kirakishou disappeared, leaving Alice alone once again.

Alice: “If fate permits, then perhaps this is for the best. But in the end, no one will be happy.”

Alice got off from the swing. Like Kirakishou, Alice also disappears from the playground, which later reverted back to its normal time and state. The shattered rose petals became snow, descending from the sky.

***
Chapter 11 End

[•••Shadow•••]

Kiraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yaaaaaaaaay.
Well, I'm kinda confused about Alice.
I guess I'll read fan-fic one more time..
Because I have no idea how Alice helped Suigintou.
Well awesome great work flo ;)

[Death Angel]

That was interesting...I know that Suigintou want last thing to doing is live right next to her rival...oh well, I guess I'll wait for the next chapter to see what happens....;)

[Flo]

Kiraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yaaaaaaaaay.
Well, I'm kinda confused about Alice.
I guess I'll read fan-fic one more time..
Because I have no idea how Alice helped Suigintou.
Well awesome great work flo ;)

Alice gave Junk the 'Alice Mystical'. Read the Memories Chapter

[•••Shadow•••]

Oh yeah. Man I really have to re-read it :D.
Thanks. I didn't get enough sleep so I'm even more stupid than i usually am.

OT:
Why do you call Suigintou junk?
I heard some people call her like that, well a lot, but you are even her fan (at least I think)

[Death Angel]

Yea, tell us the reason why you related Suigintou as "Junk".... :l

[Flo]

Oh yeah. Man I really have to re-read it :D.
Thanks. I didn't get enough sleep so I'm even more stupid than i usually am.

OT:
Why do you call Suigintou junk?
I heard some people call her like that, well a lot, but you are even her fan (at least I think)

Yea, tell us the reason why you related Suigintou as "Junk".... :l

Why I call Junk "Junk"?

Why not? :D I am one of the Junk fans who is allowed call her Junk and not get beaten up by other Junk fans because they know I love her.

[•••Shadow•••]

Oh... Well ok XD.
But I would never call her like that. Even if I would hate her :x.
Anyway Flo, I'm looking forward to next chapter ^^

[Death Angel]

Ok, that's a good reason...I guess I'm one of them too X3

[silent_halo]

i have only read two or the manga but i think the only bit stuck CONSTANTLY stuck in my head making me giggle is..

"i demand tea"
"go get me some tea"
" i think it is time for tea don't you think?"
"this tea is terrieble make some more"

tea this tea that ^^ hehe

[Death Angel]

i have only read two or the manga but i think the only bit stuck CONSTANTLY stuck in my head making me giggle is..

"i demand tea"
"go get me some tea"
" i think it is time for tea don't you think?"
"this tea is terrieble make some more"

tea this tea that ^^ hehe

Yea, it's kind of funny to see Shinku say that to Jun or sometimes, Nori

[silent_halo]

Yea, it's kind of funny to see Shinku say that to Jun or sometimes, Nori

But when it was the tea math it was intresting, becuase it makes you think....dose that really happen? :confused:
but i love the affection towards boo bear. and in the first book if you notest that at one point they say poo bear.

[Death Angel]

But when it was the tea math it was intresting, becuase it makes you think....dose that really happen? :confused:
but i love the affection towards boo bear. and in the first book if you notest that at one point they say poo bear.

Really? Hmmm, I guess I'll check that page again...

[•••Shadow•••]

Flo - Hiya Flo. I just wanna ask when there's gonna be next chapter of Wiederbelebung :P

[Death Angel]

Flo - Hiya Flo. I just wanna ask when there's gonna be next chapter of Wiederbelebung :P

Yea, I'm waiting for the next chapter. ;)

[•••Shadow•••]

Yup. Hope to read more about Kira ^^

[Shinku Hime]

flo, where's the next ch?
i reeeally want to know Shinku's reaction when she finds Swiggy living next to her >.<

[•••Shadow•••]

Yeah and I wanna know more about Kira, and what will happed to Souseiseki after "that"

[Death Angel]

Yeah! I want to know what will happens if Shinku found out that her elder sister live next house now...oh boy!

[•••Shadow•••]

Maybe Flo got tired of it..

[Flo]

Please wait until December.

Major Oversea Military Exercise so I'm down and out for at least 2 months.

[•••Shadow•••]

Major Oversea Military Exercise

Don't really know what you mean :heh: but ok I'll wait till december.

[Death Angel]

Don't really know what you mean :heh: but ok I'll wait till december.

I think it means Flo's in army...maybe I'm wrong, so sue me

[•••Shadow•••]

Whoa... Flo in army... That sounds... somehow..... really weird :heh:

[Death Angel]

Flo mention that few times but not so sure

[•••Shadow•••]

Yea I think I've read that somewhere too...
Well but I wonder what will be in next chapter...

[Flo]

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 12
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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“Please….kill me…”

“Impossible! You know I can’t do that ~desu!”

Suiseiseki is standing at a burning hallway that stretched to the infinity, in front of her was her twin sister Souseiseki, who is kneeling down appears to be suffering as her hands clutched her head.

“You have to…you…must…kill me…hurry….do it! Before…I lose…myself…”

“I can’t ~desu! I just can’t!” Suiseiseki cried, unaware of the evil smirk on her sister’s face

“Then die!”

Almost immediately Souseiseki drew her giant scissors, beheading Suiseiseki with a swift slash.
***

“IYAAAAAAAAA!”

Suiseiseki jumped out of her trunk panting. She looked around to find that no one was in the room. At the moment, being alone is the least of her problems, but dream she had just now was a different story.

Suiseiseki: “Souseiseki…”

“My my, you’re certainly loud and obnoxious when you’re awake?”

Suiseiseki: “Huh?”

Suiseiseki face the window nearest to the desk, and saw the least expected person to ever set foot on the Sakurada residence.

Suiseiseki: “Suigintou?”

Suigintou: *sitting on the window, smiling* “Fu fu fu, good afternoon.”

Suiseiseki: *in a unfriendly tone* “Why are you here ~desu?”

Suigintou: *Smirk* “My my, is this how you treat someone who saved your sorry ass?”

Suiseiseki: “What?”

Suiseiseki then recalls her battle with Kirakishou and she didn’t remember Suigintou being in the fight.

Suiseiseki: “I don’t recall you saving me ~desu”

Suigintou: “Of course you don’t, you were knocked out cold before I arrive. That was more than a week ago.”

Suiseiseki: “A week?” *pondered for a while, before staring back at Suigintou* “What do you want ~desu?”

Suigintou: “I felt a little bored, so I came just to say hello.”

Suiseiseki: *stared at Suigintou longer* “……………………I don’t believe you ~desu.”

Suigintou: *Smirk* “Believe what you want…anyway I believe I’ve spent enough time here.” *stands up* “Oh, before I go please help me relay a message to Shinku for me.”

Suiseiseki: “What?”

Suigintou: “…Have you had your Lactic Acid Bacteria lately? *giggles* “Well I guess it applies to you too…good bye.” *Flies off*

Suiseiseki watched Suigintou fly off, staring at her until she was beyond her sight.

Suiseiseki: “What…what’s up with her ~desu…”
***

Suigintou made it back to Megu’s room after making detours from the Sakurada residence. The last thing she needs was having her sister found out that she’s living just next door. Suigintou looked around the dull boring looking room; Megu is no where in sight.

Suigintou: “Oh right, she’s out with her parents to buy stuff for her room.”

Lately Megu had been spending less time with Suigintou, which is understandable. After her recovery, she longed to live a normal life; to be able to live and interact with her parents normally, eating home cooked dinner with her family, go to school, making new friends, able to hang out like any other teenagers, able to enjoy life. She’s no longer the pessimistic sick girl who wished for death Suigintou once knew.

...And loved…

Suigintou couldn’t help but to feel distant from her every passing minute. Sure, Megu still loved her, maybe in a different way than before. But sooner or later would there still be a place left for Suigintou in Megu’s heart? Maybe…maybe not…

Just then she remembered something else…something that would threaten this delicate relationship

Suigintou: “Kirakishou…”

As long as that crazy doll’s around, Megu and her parents would be in danger. If she decided to appear, would Suigintou be able to protect them even with her newly acquired power?

As Suigintou went into deep thoughts, she heard the door of the room opening. Megu burst into the room with shopping bags weighing down on her arms while carrying gift boxes towering her front view.

Megu: “I’m backed Suigi- KYAAA!”

Megu lost her balanced and sent the bags and boxes flying, before crashing and burying both Megu and Suigintou with it.

Mrs. Kakizaki: *from downstairs* “Megu, you ok hun?”

Megu and Suigintou then managed to *dig* their way out of the bags and boxes.

Megu: “I’m fine!” *Looked at Suigintou and stick her tongue out* “He he, clumsy me…”

Suigintou: *Sigh* “Baka…”

It seemed that Suigintou can’t leave Megu alone just yet; she’s still ‘inexperience’ towards the normal life given her time spent in hospital. Until then Suigintou will do everything in her power to protect Megu and family, be it from Kirakishou or even from Shinku.

Suigintou: ‘Looks like Alice can wait…but when everything is settled…’

The black angel looked at Megu solemnly as she tried to clear up the mess.

Suigintou: ‘I’ll have to say goodbye…’

Megu: “Suigintou, hey Suigintou.”

Suigintou: “Yes?”

Megu: *Showed Suigintou a dress* “Look what I’ve bought for you, you like it?”
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Chapter 12 End

[•••Shadow•••]

Just one mistake...
:Suiseiseki: “A week?” *pondered for a while, before staring back at Suigintou* “What do want ~desu?”:

Anyway, very nice... But it took you such a long time...
Well ok doesn't matter. Looking forward to the next one.
And hoping to see read more Kira.

[Flo]

^ Done, Thnx 4 pointing out

[Death Angel]

At last! A new chapter have come out...last month. -.- Baka password.......anyway, it's still good to me. Hahahaha...so sisters still not know that Gin-chan lives next to them...Hahahaha!

[KoiYuki]

Well, I've been planning a story here for awhile now, so here goes my plans...

Set after the end of the original Alice Game.
The original dolls created eight new dolls as their own choice to continue the Alice Game.
The original dolls have all become Alice. They can seperate into their individual selfs or remain as Alice.
The new dolls only know that the originals existed and they inherited their powers and nothing more. They only have the same information that the originals did when THEY were in the Alice Game.


Alright, lemme tell you about the new dolls before I go on...

1. Kohaku, made by Kirakishou, has rose vines and crystals, has Sufi.
2. Noboru, made by Souseiseki, has the gardener's shears, has Lempicka.
3. Hanako, made by Kanaria, has the violin, has Pizzicato.
4. Akemi, made by Suiseiseki, has the gardener's watering can, has Sui Dream.
5. Sakurako, made by Shinku, has the cane and rose petals, has Hollie.
6. Etsuko, made by HinaIchigo, has strawberry vines and self-created exploding bubbles, has Berry Bell.
7. Tomi, made by Suigintou, has the wings, has a new spirit named Pacchiri.
8. Mari, made by Suigintou, has the sword, has MeiMei. Twin of Tomi.

Now, there will be 5 different mediums for all them.
1. Airi, the main character, male, gets Hanako, Akemi, and Etsuko.
2. Tomyo, female, Airi's best friend, gets Noboru.
3. Kasumi, female, gets Kohaku.
4. Moe, female, gets Sakurako.
5. Chouko, female, gets Tomi & Mari.

Back to the plot... Airi is a boy who gets sent to Catholic school because his mom thinks he gets into fights, but he really just got bullied. Well, the people who bullied him went to this school. One day, he gets locked in the bathroom by them, and the mirror starts glowing. Here's where he meets Hanako, who asks him to be her medium in a rush.
Confused about generally everything, Airi tries to get out of the bathroom, but it's still locked. Tomi comes through the mirror and attacks them, and Airi makes the contract with Hanako. As the dolls fight, the twin of Tomi, Mari, comes through and makes her leave. Hanako explains to Airi what happened, and that he's now become tied into the Alice game.

I really suck at summaries.. x_x;; Hopefully it won't be as bad as it sounds...

[Flo]

RM:W is back on business, focusing on the birth of Kirakishou


Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Interlude - The Revival of the White Rose
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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"So cold...so dark...father...where are you..."

A white rose stood out among the the thorn down mansion, but it's withering over the ages. The mansion was once belong to Rozen, whom he mysteriously disappeared. Soon after his disappearance, the mansion fell victim to looting and gang hideout, the the mansion finally met its end in World War 2, when the mansion took a direct hit from a bombing run. All that remains in the mansion ruins was a dying white rose.

"Father...why have you abandoned me..."

The flower was picked up and carried to the backyard, where it was planted in the soil and watered.

"It's...refreshing...I feel alive again...was it father?"

In front of the flower stood a winged girl in a black dress.

"That's not father...but this feeling...is she a Rozen Maiden...just like me..."

“I believe this is the best I can do, What ever happens after wards no longer concerns me.” With those words, the girl flew off.

"Such beauty...those words...so cold yet...kind...she saved me..."

The withering flower suddenly become energized with life and bloomed. From the blooming flower, a girl with a white rose on her right eye appeared floating above it as she looked at the girl who flew off, recognizing her as the first doll of the Rozen Maiden.

"Please wait for me...my beloved sister..."
***