Scetchy drawing out of Kanon..

[Shinobu_Maehara]

Well Thanks to much patience, bottorent and Anime suki and a fast ADSL connection, I managed to download the whole Kanon series... I loved every scene,, now I got a little moody today so I drew Ayu... just a scetch.

I know my lineart needs a lot of work, and I know exactly what is wrong, yet I can't make it right somehow.
I'll probably never get rid of old habits...

anyway, if you have any tips on how to get those damn eyes right I'll be happy enough, because no anime learning book I have covers the eye proportion part.. -_-;;

enjoy the scetch..

http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Ayu.jpg

[calavera spain]

the left eye should be smaller or the right bigger, the eyes are ok

use a softer type of pencil, thisone u use is too smudgy try to use 0.5 or b2

[Shinobu_Maehara]

the left eye should be smaller or the right bigger, the eyes are ok

use a softer type of pencil, thisone u use is too smudgy try to use 0.5 or b2

I use a 0.9 mm I'm kinda attached to it and well yeah...

I have 0.5 and 0.3 too, but these are made of light material, and I like heavy ones like the 0.9 with it out of titanium.

However I don't know which type of lead is in my pencil.. I guess a B, I should use H or HB...

[calavera spain]

:twitch: 0.9??? use it for shading because if one day u want to do details, or u use a big paper "a3" or u gonna sppoil the drawing. furthermore, u loose quoility because it is heavy and u dont have the control u could with a 0.5

[Shinobu_Maehara]

You got a point there... I'll just try the plastic 0.5... maybe it's not as bad as I thought...

cheers,

[PSX]

the left eye should be smaller or the right bigger, the eyes are ok

youre taking from youre perspective right? not the characters?

[Neuspeed]

Nice job... I see people making comments about yer drawing.. I have not drawing talent -_-' so i have no right to make any negative comments. Personally, I think your drawing is good.

[Shinobu_Maehara]

Thank for the comment.

As for one these are not negative comment. these are positive but constructive.

negative comments are those like " this drawing sucks ".

We are all here to learn to draw from each other. just show your art and we can all view it and give you tips.

try it ;)

[Neuspeed]

Well I didn't say those people comments were 'negative' i said 'comments' than i said i wouldn't make any negative comments... Sorry 4 the confussion

[calavera spain]

PSX: sorry i didnt answer i didnt notice the post... yep you are right :)

[PSX]

As for one these are not negative comment. these are positive but constructive.

negative comments are those like " this drawing sucks ".

you keep thinking like that...hehe...hehehe...

LOL nah nah jk, no1 wants to see put downs here ^^