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Yay! ^^. I'm dying to see those double meanings already :D. I think you even surpass Chaos on those XD!
double meaning
surpass Chaos
I can surpass Chaos on "double meanings" anytime ^_~
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-06, 18:38
double meaning
surpass Chaos
I can surpass Chaos on "double meanings" anytime ^_~
He he he he he :D I wish he were here. The look on his face as he's plucked down from a very high position is priceless :D:D:D :Hayateclassevilgrin:
EDIT: Forgot to add: "Just as planned!" :D
FlareKnight
2007-07-06, 18:41
Haha yeah I can see it. Maybe Hayate going into a rant and they only hear select words from it. "You did what to Hayate!?" Good times. Double meanings are great really, should be good whenever you do it.
Hayate's rant:
"Yuuno and I are just friends nothing more! It's not like we have sex or anything! Besides, we've known each other as long as Fate and Nanoha!"
Knights hear:
"Yuuno and I have sex as long as Fate and Nanoha!"
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-06, 18:56
He he he he he he :D Just the one I wanted to see appeared on the scene :D Welcome back Chaos :D
EDIT: @Satashi-san: Does that mean Yuuno'll be running for his life when the Knights go after him? :D
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 18:56
On another note: @Chaos2Frozen: By checking the first page of this lively place, I noticed you've done two out of three fics you said you'd do. Do you plan on doing the Kyoya x Shinobu you mentioned?
If you want to I COULD... But the plan I had in mind was just one subtle dirty scene after another... :D
In the bedroom... In the bathroom... In the kitchen.... Little sister and her friends about to come home.
Sigh... You did A Chrono/Amy fic huh... How should I mess with you today Satashi....:D
EDIT:
OH, hello to you too Fuyu
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-06, 18:59
If you want to I COULD... But the plan I had in mind was just one subtle dirty scene after another... :D
In the bedroom... In the bathroom... In the kitchen.... Little sister and her friends about to come home.
Sigh... You did A Chrono/Amy fic huh... How should I mess with you today Satashi....:D
Your-mind-is-dis-tur-bing.
Don't mess with Satashi-san. I think you've already done enough damage XD!
EDIT: Sure, hi
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 19:03
Your-mind-is-dis-tur-bing.
I only do that when I don't have a plot in mind, and having two attractive characters talking about their family alone isn't very entertaining... :heh:
Don't mess with Satashi-san. I think you've already done enough damage XD!
A worse felonry than lime/lemon writing is writing about Chrono/Amy! Must not... Let this...go!
EDIT: Sure, hi
Is it a good thing or a bad thing to wake up to a thunderstorm?
Decided to fix something, here's a hint.
“Yes, we were so worried! You were found on the street nearby with your weapon. We tried to get your information but it was completely drained of energy and we thought you weren't going to make it at first! Can you answer a few questions for me?”
“I...I think so?” She rubbed her red eyes, trying to gather the facts.
“Okay, just try and relax. We'll start out with something easy okay? What is your name?”
“My... name?” She felt her head hurt at the simple question and she quickly yelped out, gripping it with both hands. “My name... I...I don't know...” Turning, she looked at the nurse, full of fear. “Why... Why don't I know my name?”
“Oh my...” She looked worried. “Can you tell me anything? What happened to you?”
“I... I don't know...” The blond held her head tighter. “I can't... nothing... I don't... it's blank...Where am I? Who am I? What am I doing here?”
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 20:12
Decided to fix something, here's a hint.
“Yes, we were so worried! You were found on the street nearby with your weapon. We tried to get your information but it was completely drained of energy and we thought you weren't going to make it at first! Can you answer a few questions for me?”
“I...I think so?” She rubbed her red eyes, trying to gather the facts.
“Okay, just try and relax. We'll start out with something easy okay? What is your name?”
“My... name?” She felt her head hurt at the simple question and she quickly yelped out, gripping it with both hands. “My name... I...I don't know...” Turning, she looked at the nurse, full of fear. “Why... Why don't I know my name?”
“Oh my...” She looked worried. “Can you tell me anything? What happened to you?”
“I... I don't know...” The blond held her head tighter. “I can't... nothing... I don't... it's blank...Where am I? Who am I? What am I doing here?”
IS it suppose to be exactly what it looks like, or do you have a catch somewhere? :heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-06, 20:42
Decided to fix something, here's a hint.
“Yes, we were so worried! You were found on the street nearby with your weapon. We tried to get your information but it was completely drained of energy and we thought you weren't going to make it at first! Can you answer a few questions for me?”
“I...I think so?” She rubbed her red eyes, trying to gather the facts.
“Okay, just try and relax. We'll start out with something easy okay? What is your name?”
“My... name?” She felt her head hurt at the simple question and she quickly yelped out, gripping it with both hands. “My name... I...I don't know...” Turning, she looked at the nurse, full of fear. “Why... Why don't I know my name?”
“Oh my...” She looked worried. “Can you tell me anything? What happened to you?”
“I... I don't know...” The blond held her head tighter. “I can't... nothing... I don't... it's blank...Where am I? Who am I? What am I doing here?”
What are you plotting this time Satashi-san? :eyebrow: This sounds quite worrysome in many aspects..............
What are you plotting this time Satashi-san? :eyebrow: This sounds quite worrysome in many aspects..............
Ah. You'll see soon. A day or so.
And yes, it's just what it looks like.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 20:47
Oh yeah, it's actually for Nightengale's interest, but for anyone else who wants to know, I've completed Clyde's Devices and spells...
Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)
Spells
====
Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.
Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.
Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.
Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.
I realized that some of my description might not seem clear, but luckily it's a Saturday morning and I have PLENTY of time to explain :p
And of course, comments are a must! Yes, a MUST!!!
Aaron008R
2007-07-06, 21:00
Oh yeah, it's actually for Nightengale's interest, but for anyone else who wants to know, I've completed Clyde's Devices and spells...
Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)
Spells
====
Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.
Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.
Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.
Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.
I realized that some of my description might not seem clear, but luckily it's a Saturday morning and I have PLENTY of time to explain :p
And of course, comments are a must! Yes, a MUST!!!
I just knew you were going to use Beowulf.:D
Anyway, to the comments. The spells are GREAT!:D Surge Impulse looks particularly useful.:D Just hope that Kha doesn't see this or he'll have a field day of trying to drag Clyde into the OC thread.:heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 21:09
I just knew you were going to use Beowulf.:D
You have no idea how hard I tried to resist :heh:!
But the temptation was too great to ignore :heh: ...
Anyway, to the comments. The spells are GREAT!:D Surge Impulse looks particularly useful.:D Just hope that Kha doesn't see this or he'll have a field day of trying to drag Clyde into the OC thread.:heh:
It's okay, I have my name written on his- Erm, lets just say Lindy would find it eventually... :uhoh:
But if he does really want to, he would have be deal with a loli-Lindy with even MORE interesting spells... I'm in the process of naming them now :heh:
P.S - Kidding Kha, Kidding... Drag him away if you want :p
The Gemini Sisters, Part I (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/07/gemini-sisters-part-1.html)
The Gemini Sisters, Part II (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/07/gemini-sisters-part-2.html)
Whoever here needs more twins action? :D :naughty:
Nightengale
2007-07-06, 22:16
AAA+ for Clyde eh... I was kinda thinking he's a little lower at AAA or AA+, but whatever. It's not like it'll really make too much difference.
Awaiting Lindy's now. I've already gotten a raw draft outline on Garh...I mean Graham's mock battle with the little kids. Thankfully your Clyde's got some cutting power so that makes things better too.
I've got to start writing too though, seeing the Supreme Powers on a row (( Kha/OC, Satashi/Fanfic )) Damn fever + headache bedriding me last night.
And besides, you should fear me, not Kha. MSCG is my brainchild after all. (( More like no one else wants to bother with Graham's past, and by extension, Lindy, Clyde and Leti's. )) I plan to throw in jealous shota Regius too.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 22:30
AAA+ for Clyde eh... I was kinda thinking he's a little lower at AAA or AA+, but whatever. It's not like it'll really make too much difference.
Hmmm, you're right, I myself was debating whether a not to add the '+' :heh:
Awaiting Lindy's now. I've already gotten a raw draft outline on Garh...I mean Graham's mock battle with the little kids. Thankfully your Clyde's got some cutting power so that makes things better too.
I think you're going ot be very interested in Lindy's spells :D
And besides, you should fear me, not Kha. MSCG is my brainchild after all. (( More like no one else wants to bother with Graham's past, and by extension, Lindy, Clyde and Leti's. )) I plan to throw in jealous shota Regius too.
Hmmm, if you do bring them in OC, I finally have a Permanent base in which I could join your crazy world :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 22:38
Ladies and Gentlemen, I've spent one whole night racking my head to come up with Lindy's ability, which unlike Clyde, I have nothing to copy off from :heh:
(So you better like it!!!!)
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
So basically, Lindy takes the phrase, "The best Offence, is a good Defense" to the max :D
EDIT:
As always, comments are a MUST! I know a few of you skip out the last time! Don't think I didn't see you leave! :eyespin: :eyespin:
What? I'm not crazy... Just because I didn't sleep doesn't mean-
Ladies and Gentlemen, I've spent one whole night racking my head to come up with Lindy's ability, which unlike Clyde, I have nothing to copy off from :heh:
(So you better like it!!!!)
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
So basically, Lindy takes the phrase, "The best Offence, is a good Defense" to the max :D
EDIT:
As always, comments are a MUST! I know a few of you skip out the last time! Don't think I didn't see you leave! :eyespin: :eyespin:
What? I'm not crazy... Just because I didn't sleep doesn't mean-
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Implode may be a little better, as explode sends things outwards ( as in Lindy could explode her own shield and use it as a weapon) so I think encasing an enemy would be better fitted with imploding. Just my thoughts ^^
Aaron008R
2007-07-06, 23:31
Ladies and Gentlemen, I've spent one whole night racking my head to come up with Lindy's ability, which unlike Clyde, I have nothing to copy off from :heh:
(So you better like it!!!!)
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
So basically, Lindy takes the phrase, "The best Offence, is a good Defense" to the max :D
EDIT:
As always, comments are a MUST! I know a few of you skip out the last time! Don't think I didn't see you leave! :eyespin: :eyespin:
What? I'm not crazy... Just because I didn't sleep doesn't mean-
AWESOME!:D:D:D
The shields as weapons tactic is quite rare indeed.:D The only other character i can name with similar abilities is Inoue Orihime from Bleach. This is certainly quite unexpected. Good job!:D
Ladies and Gentlemen, I've spent one whole night racking my head to come up with Lindy's ability, which unlike Clyde, I have nothing to copy off from :heh:
(So you better like it!!!!)
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
So basically, Lindy takes the phrase, "The best Offence, is a good Defense" to the max :D
EDIT:
As always, comments are a MUST! I know a few of you skip out the last time! Don't think I didn't see you leave! :eyespin: :eyespin:
What? I'm not crazy... Just because I didn't sleep doesn't mean-
WIN!
Now if only Lindy learns Unlimited Spartan Works....... :uhoh::heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-06, 23:47
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Implode may be a little better, as explode sends things outwards ( as in Lindy could explode her own shield and use it as a weapon) so I think encasing an enemy would be better fitted with imploding. Just my thoughts ^^
Well basically there's going to be a big "boom!" :heh: The barrier just stops them from running. :)
AWESOME!:D:D:D
The shields as weapons tactic is quite rare indeed.:D The only other character i can name with similar abilities is Inoue Orihime from Bleach. This is certainly quite unexpected. Good job!:D
She contributed for part of the idea :heh: But I wanted to make Lindy more kickass :p
WIN!
Now if only Lindy learns Unlimited Spartan Works....... :uhoh::heh:
I... Don't get it :heh:
I... Don't get it :heh:
well, since she uses shield in her fighting style, I guess one of her abilities is summoning a formation 300 Spartans to aid her cause. :heh:
Maybe. :uhoh:
I am the bone of my phalanx.
Shield is my body, and spear is my blood.
I have called forth a legion of 300 loyal men.
Unknown to blasphemy. Nor known to madness.
I have fought a thousand enemies and endured rains of arrows,
Just to fight in the shade.
I have no regret. This is my destiny.
As I walk this path, "THIS IS SPARTA!"
Nightengale
2007-07-06, 23:50
Lindy's techniques remind me of Kekkaishi. Nice. To be honest, I was extremely afraid you're going to make her a Cannon Girl. :D
Good. I'll get some rough idea working soon. I've already gotten down Lotte's ranged skills and Graham's ice techniques... only Aria's close-combat skills left. Or was it the other way round for the both of them? Whatever.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 00:02
well, since she uses shield in her fighting style, I guess one of her abilities is summoning a formation 300 Spartans to aid her cause. :heh:
Maybe. :uhoh:
I am the bone of my phalanx.
Shield is my body, and spear is my blood.
I have called forth a legion of 300 loyal men.
Unknown to blasphemy. Nor known to madness.
I have fought a thousand enemies and endured rains of arrows,
Just to fight in the shade.
I have no regret. This is my destiny.
As I walk this path, "THIS IS SPARTA!"
Ahhhhh~ :heh:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lindy's techniques remind me of Kekkaishi. Nice. To be honest, I was extremely afraid you're going to make her a Cannon Girl. :D
Thanks, I was going for the unexpected as well as the unique :D
But I still want her to have that hyper-feeling, so I need her to do big damage as well.
Needless to say it took me awhile to work it all out...
Good. I'll get some rough idea working soon. I've already gotten down Lotte's ranged skills and Graham's ice techniques... only Aria's close-combat skills left. Or was it the other way round for the both of them? Whatever.
It's the other way :heh:
EDIT:
Oh yeah, for anybody who's interested...
Joyeuse
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joyeuse
And Durandal
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Durendal
Found them last night :heh:
@ Lindy Profile:
I had an idea to Lindy as well... though it was on a path akin to Caro - well i was thinking that she was a booster of the team she was on... a sort of Proto-Caro idea...
And that her device is related to a dark past and secret, and a hidden ability acquired since birth - she would have died from a unique sickness if her device was not created
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 02:10
@ Lindy Profile:
I had an idea to Lindy as well... though it was on a path akin to Caro - well i was thinking that she was a booster of the team she was on... a sort of Proto-Caro idea...
And that her device is related to a dark past and secret, and a hidden ability acquired since birth - she would have died from a unique sickness if her device was not created
To be honest, I haven't really thought that far about her background :heh: But at this moment, I'm open to some suggestions :)
(If it's depressing, I'll just dump it on Nightengale to write it :D)
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 11:26
(If it's depressing, I'll just dump it on Nightengale to write it :D)
So now you just dump your ideas on other people so they can do the dirty work for you? Very nice going there Chaos, I'm going to have a field day if this discussion continues (I'm already laughing) :D
So now you just dump your ideas on other people so they can do the dirty work for you? Very nice going there Chaos, I'm going to have a field day if this discussion continues (I'm already laughing) :D
Yare yare..
Why does all the discussion in here have to take place while I'm asleep...:heh:
it's crazy coming back in the normal to find another hundred or so posts to read through....
I think some of you missed the last bit of my fic so I'll post the link to it again
Part 3 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1029303&postcount=1699)
Horray for shameless self promotion...:heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 11:32
So now you just dump your ideas on other people so they can do the dirty work for you? Very nice going there Chaos, I'm going to have a field day if this discussion continues (I'm already laughing) :D
Ahhh~ As expected of Fuyu, you misunderstood me completely :)
The idea comes from others. And I mean, if the idea is good but depressing, why not let someone else who's better at that kind of things work on it? :)
Hmmm, maybe I should write up a battle scenario to better show how Clyde and Lindy uses their spells? :)
EDIT:
Horray for shameless self promotion...:heh:
Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)
Spells
====
Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.
Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.
Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.
Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
Hurray indeed :D
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 13:07
Ahhh~ As expected of Fuyu, you misunderstood me completely :)
The idea comes from others. And I mean, if the idea is good but depressing, why not let someone else who's better at that kind of things work on it? :)
Hmmm, maybe I should write up a battle scenario to better show how Clyde and Lindy uses their spells? :)
I don't have the slightest idea why but as soon as I read that I burst out laughing XD!
Touché :)
Now that's what I call a good idea :D
EDIT:
Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)
Spells
====
Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.
Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.
Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.
Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.
Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin :D)
Spells
====
Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.
Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.
(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)
Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).
Hurray indeed :D
Shameless self-promotion? Ha! I don't know why, but that fits your image :D
Shameless self-promotion? Ha! I don't know why, but that fits your image :D
Can I shamelessly promote too?
New sotry is 6.5k words long and may be done tongiht :3
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 13:37
Can I shamelessly promote too?
New sotry is 6.5k words long and may be done tongiht :3
Of course ^^
OO. 6.k words long.......wow :heh: Can't wait to read it :3
FlareKnight
2007-07-07, 16:09
Nothing wrong with a little shameless promotion since people always are interested in hearing things.
Have to say though 6.5k long sounds pretty interesting. Should be a good read once it's finished up.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 19:20
Now that's what I call a good idea :D
It's a good time to see if my description of action is to people's taste...
Shameless self-promotion? Ha! I don't know why, but that fits your image :D
I... Don't see how :heh:
Can I shamelessly promote too?
New sotry is 6.5k words long and may be done tongiht :3
No, you're not allow.
*poke repeatingly with stick*
Bad boy/girl!
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 20:06
It's a good time to see if my description of action is to people's taste...
If it's as good as your humor works, then you have nothing to worry about :)
I... Don't see how :heh:
Who said you were the one who needed to see how? :p
No, you're not allow.
*poke repeatingly with stick*
Bad boy/girl!
Yes she/he is.
*Grabs the stick and breaks it in half*
Don't you dare poke on him/her! :mad:
No, you're not allow.
*poke repeatingly with stick*
Bad boy/girl!
So that's why Fu-chan said you were an abuser and over-controlling guy......No wonder then.
:joke:
And about the Kyoya x Shinobu fic I asked about: Nvm. I don't particularly enjoy reading that sort of thing (What you had in mind)
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 20:28
So that's why Fu-chan said you were an abuser and over-controlling guy......No wonder then.
She said that?
Hmmm.... :)
And about the Kyoya x Shinobu fic I asked about: Nvm. I don't particularly enjoy reading that sort of thing (What you had in mind)
Well if you really want, I could force myself to find a way to watch the Triangle Hearts ovas... :heh: That way I'll get a better feel of their relationship... I hope.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 20:35
She said that?
Hmmm.... :)
I didn't :heh: He said it was a joke! :heh:
Well if you really want, I could force myself to find a way to watch the Triangle Hearts ovas... :heh: That way I'll get a better feel of their relationship... I hope.
At least we'll get a fic about a very unspoken-of pairing *shrugs*
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 20:42
I didn't :heh: He said it was a joke! :heh:
There there now, I understand... I'm sure you didn't.
I'll just pretend I didn't read that... ;)
At least we'll get a fic about a very unspoken-of pairing *shrugs*
It's hard enough to do AxZ already :heh:, I think it's to the point that I make both of them talk too much :heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 20:49
There there now, I understand... I'm sure you didn't.
I'll just pretend I didn't read that... ;)
Somehow, that sounds more dangerous than reassuring :heh:
It's hard enough to do AxZ already :heh:, I think it's to the point that I make both of them talk too much :heh:
Speaking of which, is there any progress in that one? I like the first 4 parts ;)
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 20:51
Somehow, that sounds more dangerous than reassuring :heh:
Ah well... :)
Speaking of which, is there any progress in that one? I like the first 4 parts ;)
Slow slow progress... I'm hoping to finish it by today though...
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:06
Ah well... :)
:heh:
Slow slow progress... I'm hoping to finish it by today though...
Well, at least it's better than "no progress at all" right? ;)
Slow slow progress... I'm hoping to finish it by today though...
By "finish" do you mean finishing a chapter or finishing the fic? (Sort of confused here :heh:)
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:09
By "finish" do you mean finishing a chapter or finishing the fic? (Sort of confused here :heh:)
I'm pretty sure he means finishing a (or some) chapter (s). He said he was working on part 8 (I think :heh:)
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 21:11
By "finish" do you mean finishing a chapter or finishing the fic? (Sort of confused here :heh:)
The whole thing.
About estimated 9000 words or so :p All in one.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:11
The whole thing.
You're fast. I thought you'd be finishing only some chapters. Will you post that on FF.net? :D
Nightengale
2007-07-07, 21:12
Really. both of you... well, I'd be lying if I said I don't enjoy the little playful talks the both of you share. :3
Anyway, on the spirit of fic-writing...let's just say I suddenly got an inspiration on something Hayate/Yuuno related. Once again, it'll be wholely 6th Division style, since I well...don't ship them outside Satashi's realm.
Isn't it ironic how I have little problem writing something I've not even that big of a fan compared to something I'm actually a fan of which I have superb problems to even write coherently? Hell, I think I can actually do Arf/Yuuno and even Fate/Yuuno even if somewhat wtf-ish...but somehow I just can't do Yuunoha. :p
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 21:16
Really. both of you... well, I'd be lying if I said I don't enjoy the little playful talks the both of you share. :3
Take notes in case you want to use it for future fics :p
Isn't it ironic how I have little problem writing something I've not even that big of a fan compared to something I'm actually a fan of which I have superb problems to even write coherently? Hell, I think I can actually do Arf/Yuuno and even Fate/Yuuno even if somewhat wtf-ish...but somehow I just can't do Yuunoha. :p
That's how you work :p
The less popular the better for you :p
As for me, I prefer having alot of details to refer off from, so Clyde's harem, Chrono/Carim, Vice/Rein/Signum/Shamal would be a new Threshold for me :D
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:20
Take notes in case you want to use it for future fics :p
Having our arguments and talks in a fic would be very troublesome or harem-humor type :heh:
As for me, I prefer having alot of details to refer off from, so Clyde's harem, Chrono/Carim, Vice/Rein/Signum/Shamal would be a new Threshold for me :D
That would make Lindy.....what? :heh: If Clyde's harem......
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 21:26
Having our arguments and talks in a fic would be very troublesome or harem-humor type :heh:
The exact words would vary according to scenarios of course. :)
That would make Lindy.....what? :heh: If Clyde's harem......
"Coming soon, this fall..."
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:27
The exact words would vary according to scenarios of course. :)
Sure, sure, but that'd still be troublesome :heh:
"Coming soon, this fall..."
I didn't ask for a movie trailer you know? XD! :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 21:29
Sure, sure, but that'd still be troublesome :heh:
Too late :p
I didn't ask for a movie trailer you know? XD! :heh:
Lindy? Well... How do you want her to feel? :)
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:31
Too late :p
Oh boy :heh::heh:.
Lindy? Well... How do you want her to feel? :)
I'm not sure she'd feel like a movie director in any case :heh: And the way you picture her would give way to many funny but awkward situations :D
Aaron008R
2007-07-07, 21:37
Really. both of you... well, I'd be lying if I said I don't enjoy the little playful talks the both of you share. :3
See? Somebody finally agrees with my point? :3
Anyway, on the spirit of fic-writing...let's just say I suddenly got an inspiration on something Hayate/Yuuno related. Once again, it'll be wholely 6th Division style, since I well...don't ship them outside Satashi's realm.
I'll be looking forward to that.:D The way you write those two's interaction is distinctly defined and a little more innocent.:D
Isn't it ironic how I have little problem writing something I've not even that big of a fan compared to something I'm actually a fan of which I have superb problems to even write coherently? Hell, I think I can actually do Arf/Yuuno and even Fate/Yuuno even if somewhat wtf-ish...but somehow I just can't do Yuunoha. :p
Come to think about it, the only Nanoha fic that you actually did a pairing which you were definitely a big fan of is the SagaXTiara one.:confused:
I guess wtf-ish scenarios are your specialties.:heh: *coughSignumcoughEriocough*
Sure, sure, but that'd still be troublesome :heh:
It WAS troublesome to you two, remember? *points at self*
I had a lot of fun by those times.:heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:42
See? Somebody finally agrees with my point? :3
Is it really amusing? :heh:
It WAS troublesome to you two, remember? *points at self*
I had a lot of fun by those times.:heh:
Yeah, pretty much >< I was only saved thanks to Ryu-kun getting his butt over here :heh:
I still don't get what's so fun :heh: But I do know that I get a kick out of our arguments XD!
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-07, 21:48
I'm not sure she'd feel like a movie director in any case :heh: And the way you picture her would give way to many funny but awkward situations :D
Hmmm, I'm not too sure which anime character I should base her off from first...
I probably should discuss with Nightengale first :heh: At first I only told him a triangle, but the idea of 'harem' just came to me :D
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 21:50
Hmmm, I'm not too sure which anime character I should base her off from first...
I probably should discuss with Nightengale first :heh: At first I only told him a triangle, but the idea of 'harem' just came to me :D
Well, she already knocked out many people to try and defend her......unique tastes, so think about someone who'd do the same :)
Why does that sound so dangerous? :heh:
Really. both of you... well, I'd be lying if I said I don't enjoy the little playful talks the both of you share. :3
Anyway, on the spirit of fic-writing...let's just say I suddenly got an inspiration on something Hayate/Yuuno related. Once again, it'll be wholely 6th Division style, since I well...don't ship them outside Satashi's realm.
Isn't it ironic how I have little problem writing something I've not even that big of a fan compared to something I'm actually a fan of which I have superb problems to even write coherently? Hell, I think I can actually do Arf/Yuuno and even Fate/Yuuno even if somewhat wtf-ish...but somehow I just can't do Yuunoha. :p
Sounds like fun :3 I look forward to it.
I've been quiet all day today, huh? Why? 'cause I was writing some :P
I re-wrote chapter 7 of Reminisce because alot of people deemed it.....lacking. So yeah. Anyway, the new chapter is 13, 394 words long. I'll be posting it in an hour or two on FF.N. It's about 80% differnt, so roughly 9,000 words of new content was written.
And Sora-chan, check your email.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 22:13
Sounds like fun :3 I look forward to it.
I've been quiet all day today, huh? Why? 'cause I was writing some :P
I re-wrote chapter 7 of Reminisce because alot of people deemed it.....lacking. So yeah. Anyway, the new chapter is 13, 394 words long. I'll be posting it in an hour or two on FF.N. It's about 80% differnt, so roughly 9,000 words of new content was written.
And Sora-chan, check your email.
OK, thought you had vanished :heh:
Sure thing ^^
EDIT: I'll vanish for a while. I found something extremely interesting waiting for me in ^^
EDIT: I'll vanish for a while. I found something extremely interesting waiting for me in ^^
speaking of interesting things in, I got 4 Nanoha doujinshi in the mail today *happy squee*
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-07, 23:12
speaking of interesting things in, I got 4 Nanoha doujinshi in the mail today *happy squee*
Ha ha. You really like doujins huh Satashi-san? :heh:
Ha ha. You really like doujins huh Satashi-san? :heh:
I love it :D
I have 1 pure Hentai (it's Studio-Han, I'ma sucker for his artwork ^^;) and 3 PLUM ones that have H parts in them but for the most part they're hilarious ( I love Hayate whipping out her credit card :D :D)
oh!and here it is! Chapter 7 re-vamped!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3585048/7/
If anyone here talks about these outside of this forum can you let people know? FF.N doesn't give any notifacations on changed chapters.
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 00:12
Hmmmmm I'm still thinking of doing a Nanoha fic sometime... I've only written like ooooh... 3 fanfics though. I wonder if I should do one sometime, although I would need something to do for a plot...
On a semi-related note, would Satashi-sama mind if I write a non-Nanoha fanfic somewhat based upon Onyx Days? I like the whole little 'sick' thing you did in that.
Hmmmmm I'm still thinking of doing a Nanoha fic sometime... I've only written like ooooh... 3 fanfics though. I wonder if I should do one sometime, although I would need something to do for a plot...
On a semi-related note, would Satashi-sama mind if I write a non-Nanoha fanfic somewhat based upon Onyx Days? I like the whole little 'sick' thing you did in that.
I don't mind at all ^^ Best of luck to you.
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 00:17
Whoot, whoot ;P
I think once I finish my current fanfiction, I'll try my hand at a Nanoha one... Perhaps a nice idea will strike me during this time I hope xD
Would be nice to get myself known beyond my circle of friends... Argh. I forgot. *Gets a sticky note*
I gotta read all them new chapters you still did. I knew I forgot something today!
Whoot, whoot ;P
I think once I finish my current fanfiction, I'll try my hand at a Nanoha one... Perhaps a nice idea will strike me during this time I hope xD
Would be nice to get myself known beyond my circle of friends... Argh. I forgot. *Gets a sticky note*
I gotta read all them new chapters you still did. I knew I forgot something today!
Haha :P If you doa Nanoha one be sure to share it with everyone here^^
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 00:25
Hahahahaha of course I shall ^^
I might be a little bit of a 'review whore' but I do love getting feedback... Helps me feel confident in my skills and let's me know what I have to improve. ;P
I think my biggest weak points is I might not 'nail' a character's personality down just right... Hoping to solve that first since I have such massive love for the Nanoha series. I mean, if I have dreams about it... I must have massive love right!?
ooh. I like the changes :D
Horray for the angst.....
Personally I would have preffered for Fate to not regain her memories so fast though.
@thread wow one of the first times in while that the thread hasn't exploded overnight..
Part 4 is in progress. Should be up sometime this week.
Hahahahaha of course I shall ^^
I might be a little bit of a 'review whore' but I do love getting feedback... Helps me feel confident in my skills and let's me know what I have to improve. ;P
I think my biggest weak points is I might not 'nail' a character's personality down just right... Hoping to solve that first since I have such massive love for the Nanoha series. I mean, if I have dreams about it... I must have massive love right!?
Hehe, we're all review whores I think, deep down. I know I am.
As for getting a character's personality down..... ahhhhhhh I can't really help you there. To be honest, I don't think my characters stay in character most of the time.
But then again, it's all up to the author. the point of fanfiction is to have fiction from the fan, and you can shape anyone into anything anytime. So try your best and write how you like. If it's a little OOC, so be it, if it was completly 100% in character, it wouldn't really be a fiction now would it? ^_~
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 00:31
Well, she already knocked out many people to try and defend her......unique tastes, so think about someone who'd do the same :)
That's a non-Tsundere? I'm open to suggestions...
Edit: I'm thinking of ripping her from Milfeulle (GA), since she also have a Tsundere friend... Another option is to go through Lindy's VA... Which is also hopeless :heh:
The only other Mahou Shojo I know she played was "Ami Mizuno/Sailor Mercury", which I don't know which colour that one is, nor do I know how she's like :heh:
Why does that sound so dangerous? :heh:
Spell no. 1 & 3, Angelus + Rebellion :p
She also Flatten a number of them with Spell no. 4 Celestial Oppress
EDIT:
@thread wow one of the first times in while that the thread hasn't exploded overnight..
Weekends :p
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 00:37
Excellent new chapter Satashi-san ^^
The modifications were very good and gave a new light on how things happened. Also, it gave a more interesting look on the relationships the characters share.
All in all, 500/10 :D (For greatness =p)
Excellent new chapter Satashi-san ^^
The modifications were very good and gave a new light on how things happened. Also, it gave a more interesting look on the relationships the characters share.
All in all, 500/10 :D (For greatness =p)
Thanks ^^ I just hope it gets around that I updated it. I posted a new SNL with it mentioned (the costume fun one- don't worry Sora-chan, I took your name out :P) so maybe people will find out.
Ottocycle
2007-07-08, 00:57
That's a non-Tsundere? I'm open to suggestions...
Edit: I'm thinking of ripping her from Milfeulle (GA), since she also have a Tsundere friend... Another option is to go through Lindy's VA... Which is also hopeless :heh:
The only other Mahou Shojo I know she played was "Ami Mizuno/Sailor Mercury", which I don't know which colour that one is, nor do I know how she's like :heh:
I think you've missed one of her most prominent roles there...as AMG's Skuld, though she is technically not a Mahou Shoujo...slapping words on people doesn't count as much...
On Satashi's new chapter...why today?! T_T I just got off so much fanboyism from watching DtB and GL, so I guess I'll have to hold up reading it till tomorrow to avoid a skewed view due to excessive fanboyism.
That aside, big thanks for the release! :D
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 01:00
Thanks ^^ I just hope it gets around that I updated it. I posted a new SNL with it mentioned (the costume fun one- don't worry Sora-chan, I took your name out :P) so maybe people will find out.
Thank you :heh: I was starting to worry about it when I read the update in the SNL's :heh::heh::heh:
Thank you :heh: I was starting to worry about it when I read the update in the SNL's :heh::heh::heh:
:P it was a joke for forums here, I'd never do anything to embarass you purposly <3
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 01:07
I think you've missed one of her most prominent roles there...as AMG's Skuld, though she is technically not a Mahou Shoujo...slapping words on people doesn't count as much...
Yeah, I spotted that... Except I never watched it before :heh:
About prominent role, there's Haruko Kamio (Air), but from what I've heard about how the show ended, I don't want to go down that path :heh:
(Damn, I've never seen any one of her more popular roles :heh:)
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 01:11
:P it was a joke for forums here, I'd never do anything to embarass you purposly <3
Thank you ^^
(Damn, I've never seen any one of her more popular roles :heh:)
How about Skuld from "Ah! My Goddess"? She's the kid in the series and very childish sometimes (even violent). :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 01:14
How about Skuld from "Ah! My Goddess"? She's the kid in the series and very childish sometimes (even violent). :heh:
Sounds perfect, except I've never watched it either :heh:
Aaron008R
2007-07-08, 01:15
oh!and here it is! Chapter 7 re-vamped!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3585048/7/
If anyone here talks about these outside of this forum can you let people know? FF.N doesn't give any notifacations on changed chapters.
Much better.:)
Virtually every flaw I noticed in the previous version have been addressed in an excellent manner.:D And the length. I just love the length!:D Definitely an exponential increase in points!:D Good job, Satashi.:)
By the way, maybe you should edit this part. Changing the 'my' into a 'me.'
“Scan the area!” Chrono yelled out his orders to the people looking at him. “I want every inch of space combed! Bring my Scaglietti's body and Fate!”
The 'my' part makes it sound so wrong.:heh:
Ottocycle
2007-07-08, 01:17
Yeah, I spotted that... Except I never watched it before :heh:
About prominent role, there's Haruko Kamio (Air), but from what I've heard about how the show ended, I don't want to go down that path :heh:
(Damn, I've never seen any one of her more popular roles :heh:)
Thank you ^^
How about Skuld from "Ah! My Goddess"? She's the kid in the series and very childish sometimes (even violent). :heh:
Yep Chaos its not just me now.
And if I'm asked to name a tsundere role played by her, that'll be it, no questions asked.
Much better.:)
Virtually every flaw I noticed in the previous version have been addressed in an excellent manner.:D And the length. I just love the length!:D Definitely an exponential increase in points!:D Good job, Satashi.:)
By the way, maybe you should edit this part. Changing the 'my' into a 'me.'
The 'my' part makes it sound so wrong.:heh:
omg lol! :P can't beleive I missed that :P
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 01:21
The typo god strikes! And argh I'm so lost. I haven't read that in sooooo long. So much catching up to do... ;;
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 01:27
omg lol! :P can't beleive I missed that :P
Nobody's perfect Satashi-san. This proved you're human =p
@Chaos: Why am I not surprised? :heh: But really, a Skuld-like Lindy would fit in the way you portrayed her (I don't plan to do a summary right now on her personality and so on. It's late and I'm going to sleep. Maybe later. Night all)
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 01:30
There has to be other characters that share her traits... Right? :heh:
Nobody's perfect Satashi-san. This proved you're human =p
@Chaos: Why am I not surprised? :heh: But really, a Skuld-like Lindy would fit in the way you portrayed her (I don't plan to do a summary right now on her personality and so on. It's late and I'm going to sleep. Maybe later. Night all)
nighty
@Chaos: You've never seen Air before? It's great. I reccomend just watching the movie since it sums up the entire series.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 01:36
@Chaos: You've never seen Air before? It's great. I reccomend just watching the movie since it sums up the entire series.
But it's a tear jerker! :upset:
I myself wouldn't have gone through Kanon 06 had it not been for the new Yuuichi :heh:
EDIT:
I just love doing stuff like this,
“I can’t believe I actually agreed…” Moaned Arf.
“Do you want this or not?”
“Fine fine,” Arf sighed, “Just let’s get it over and done with then.”
“Get ready, I’m going to speed up…”
“Hey! Not that fast!” Arf complained, “This is my first time you know…”
“I thought you wanted to ‘get it over and done with’?”
“B-But not like this!”
“Alright alright, I’ll slow down,” Zafira replied.
“And move over a bit!” Arf tried to squeeze out, “I still need to breathe!”
“I don’t think that’s an option,”
“Damnit…! Ouch!”
“Sorry.”
I don't know how these things come to me all of a sudden when I didn't intend for it to happen, a gift I guess :p
Someone just mentioned Air, one of my favorite series, and simply I can’t resist replying it.
About the series, in my opinion is a masterpiece, without a doubt one of the best dramas ever created, and yes, it’s sad, surely most people cried in the last 3 episodes, but that’s nothing bad, I have seen Air about 5 times and for sure I’m not masochist (I was thinking in make a joke about Fuyu and her whip now but for my own security it would be better to don’t make it). The series is very enjoyable and is full of quality, the plot is very compressed and full of details so you must watch it carefully. I recommend it to everyone.
About the movie, is not the original history, they just took the characters from the game and mixed them into a romantic plot without neither magic nor ancestral curses, is just the love history about a sick girl instead of a history of magic about the family. Personally I think the anime is several times better.
Back to Nanoha:
I’m going to read Sa-nyan’s new chapter 7 now ^_^
And I’m looking forward to your fic krisslanza (b^ ^)b
But it's a tear jerker! :upset:
I myself wouldn't have gone through Kanon 06 had it not been for the new Yuuichi :heh:
EDIT:
I just love doing stuff like this,
“I can’t believe I actually agreed…” Moaned Arf.
“Do you want this or not?”
“Fine fine,” Arf sighed, “Just let’s get it over and done with then.”
“Get ready, I’m going to speed up…”
“Hey! Not that fast!” Arf complained, “This is my first time you know…”
“I thought you wanted to ‘get it over and done with’?”
“B-But not like this!”
“Alright alright, I’ll slow down,” Zafira replied.
“And move over a bit!” Arf tried to squeeze out, “I still need to breathe!”
“I don’t think that’s an option,”
“Damnit…! Ouch!”
“Sorry.”
I don't know how these things come to me all of a sudden when I didn't intend for it to happen, a gift I guess :p
World needs more A x Z
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 02:08
Thanks Haru-sama ^_^
I'll do my best to write something good! Once I find out a nice plot to do... Come to think of it, any NxF fics when they are young floating around in FF.net?
I think most do them when they are grown up... Perhaps I could do that...
[random spam]
*Deploys anchors to prevent from being swept away*
as always... oh well... AlternateS I will be updated as soon as Keroko replies to my proposal.
*gets mowed over and swept away*
Thanks Haru-sama ^_^
I'll do my best to write something good! Once I find out a nice plot to do... Come to think of it, any NxF fics when they are young floating around in FF.net?
I think most do them when they are grown up... Perhaps I could do that...
I think this is the only one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3365593/1/
I would like to read more about them in their school days, I hope you will write something involving it.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 03:43
World needs more A x Z
That's good, cause they belong to me :D
Until proven otherwise, I have full monopoly over that couple.
I've done it for Eve/Leon, and I can do it for Nanoha characters :D
Wow. Nothing much to say, but Satashi, I read your revised "6th Div: Rem" Chap 7, and I can't help grinning...
Why? Well, in here, Fate-chan = Sakura-chan, one of my favorite CLAMP characters of all time, and the cameo of the TRC insert "Tsubasa" didn't help that image. :D
"Far in the light, I can see you, in every scene of the night, a tiny feather of love..."
Now if only that simple yet elegant song could kickstart Sakura-chan's memory, but nah...
Btw, has TRC resumed its run? Or is it still delayed? Or even cancelled? :upset:
Anyway, that was fun. :D
Nightengale
2007-07-08, 04:31
Yup, the new chapter 7 was beautiful. Like Aaron, I do think that Fate's memory-regaining could be much longer with extra boost of other plot elements, but one of 6th D's appeal is it's fast pace, so it's not really a complaint, more so a writer with a different style's opinion.
In other words...I thought Nanoha needed to suffer MORE before Fate regains her memories. Yup, I'm that evil of a writer. I love putting my characters through hell, hell, hell before giving their deserved happy ending.
Not to mention the extra non-NF additions too were nice. The great thing about Chapter 7 was even though it was strongly NF-ish, it felt very much a friendship-reaffirming even with Nanoha's monologues (( because even in canon, they are very very very great friends, not just normal good friends )), if you remove away the....hints, and feels very much alive as something canon and 6th Division together for a double win.
Glad you guys liked it ^^ I tried really hard to get it right this time around and so far, no bad thoughts have come my way just yet. At least now I don't feel as if I need to fix anything in Reminisce.
I decided to pick up Redemption as well. I'm going to start on it shortly, so We should have a chapter coming up in a day or so. One thing that's bad about having 6-10k words per chapter O.< It's a beetch to write sometimes.
Glad you guys liked it ^^ I tried really hard to get it right this time around and so far, no bad thoughts have come my way just yet. At least now I don't feel as if I need to fix anything in Reminisce.
I decided to pick up Redemption as well. I'm going to start on it shortly, so We should have a chapter coming up in a day or so. One thing that's bad about having 6-10k words per chapter O.< It's a beetch to write sometimes.Just take your time. I'll try to get the OP and ED as well. (~_^);
*Listens to Love Letter*
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 11:03
I think this is the only one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3365593/1/
I would like to read more about them in their school days, I hope you will write something involving it.
Well then, I shall try my best to write something good! ^_^
It'll be a nice chance of pace for me, I've only been writing fanfiction of the Yggdra Union-verse, so I haven't really done a fanfiction in modern times... It'll be good practice! ;P
*Starts to brainstorm* :thinker:
Julius Firefocht
2007-07-08, 13:12
Just checking, am I allowed to post stories in this thread? Or am I supposed to host my articles on sites like fanfiction.net?
Thanks in advance!
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 13:13
Just checking, am I allowed to post stories in this thread? Or am I supposed to host my articles on sites like fanfiction.net?
Thanks in advance!
Either.
Or at least, I've seen people do both :heh:
There's a 1,000 word limit.
If it gets too long, put it in a spoilor tag it'll save space.
Hmm, that can't be right since all of the parts of my fics have been above 1k words.
The limit that I've come across is 50k characters (not sure how many words it will translate to on average.)
Part 4 is coming along. Here's a preview of whats to come.
“VITA BEHIND YOU” the voice yelled. Vita turned just as the first bolt arrived, smashing directly into her, punching through the auto shield that her device created at the last second.
Better hide now from the angry mob baying for my blood...:heh:
/feigndeath
Hmm, that can't be right since all of the parts of my fics have been above 1k words.
The limit that I've come across is 50k characters (not sure how many words it will translate to on average.)
Part 4 is coming along. Here's a preview of whats to come.
“VITA BEHIND YOU” the voice yelled. Vita turned just as the first bolt arrived, smashing directly into her, punching through the auto shield that her device created at the last second.
Better hide now from the angry mob baying for my blood...:heh:
/feigndeath
Whena hunter dies their pet goes away, when they feign, there pet stays there. *right clicks* dun hurt my Vita-chan!
oops, knew I forgot something..... *scattershot, freezing trap*
Don't worry, Vita won't be hurt..... much....:uhoh:
oops, knew I forgot something..... *scattershot, freezing trap*
Don't worry, Vita won't be hurt..... much....:uhoh:
*pvp trinket, blind, first aid, stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, prep, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, blind, re-stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, EVISCERATE*
don't mess with a rogue :P
T_T Vita-chaaaaaaan /mourn
*pvp trinket, blind, first aid, stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, prep, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, blind, re-stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, EVISCERATE*
don't mess with a rogue :P
T_T Vita-chaaaaaaan /mourn
:dots: You know that information(class) would have helped a few posts back.....
Although my hunter probably would have been dead half way through that attack sequence....(only 66) BM too so I don't even have scatter....:heh:
I would say that Vita will get her revenge but even I don't know how the next bit will go until later....:heh:
EDIT Well time for me to sleep... 3 in the morning here. I'll be back in a few hours. Cya
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 13:49
Wow, now that's a combo if I've ever seen one there Satashi-sama... :uhoh:
I'm a grand marshal so I learned how to fsk people up and keep them occupied lol :P
Tia sank to her knees and panted heavly. "Is... Is it over?"
"Yep," Nanoha looked at the information on a floating screen in front of her. "Great job today everyone.
"Oh thank goodness," Subaru fell on her back and looked at the sky. "I don't think I could go on. Can I get sum water plz?"
"Sure one sec," Nanoha brought her hands infront of her and concentrated a few moments before five bottles of water appeared.
"Thx." Subaru chugged some and wiped her mouth. "forgot to buy consumables before we trained."
"Don't forget in the future," Tia warned her. "You warriors are always forgetting."
"Hey!" Subaru coutnered. "You don't have the repair bills that we do! Specially you, Elio!"
"What!? Hey, I have to buy expensive mats to make my poisons and powders!"
"Yeah those twenty five copper flash powders really add up don't they!?"
"HEY!" Nanoha stepped between them. "Quiet, send it in PMs, but I don't want to hear it. "Anyway, Tia, why didn't you have your pet out for most of it?"
The gunslinger blushed. "I ran out of food..."
Nanoha sighed and put her face in her hand. "Okay. fine. Lutecia, good job on the soulstones."
"Thank you," She smiled.
Elio looked over at everyone. "Hay, any1 have dmg charts?"
Lutecia rolled her eyes. "You're on top as always, why do you always ask?"
"Can I get healing chart too?" Caro pondered.
tshouryuu
2007-07-08, 14:07
*pvp trinket, blind, first aid, stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, prep, vanish, cheap shot, sinister strike, kidney shot, sinister strike, sinister strike, blind, re-stealth, cheap shot, sinister strike, EVISCERATE*
don't mess with a rogue :P
T_T Vita-chaaaaaaan /mourn
Ouch... nasty, nasty rogue... Even nastier combo. I really really dislike rogues... Its near impossible to defeat one as a warlock... especially with that irritating cloak of shadows.:help:
Hmm... we're getting really of topic... So what(fic) are you currently working on now Satashi-sama?
edit: LOL!!! Satashi-sama, I would have thought you would put Nanoha as a Druid since she got phase shift from skeith(sp?) :)
Look at my new siggy and you'll see :P (Thanks Jena-su!)
tshouryuu
2007-07-08, 14:15
Look at my new siggy and you'll see :P (Thanks Jena-su!)
I see. Would you mind if I say I happen to like your shorter fluff fics like diamond dust better than your 6th division series?:heh:
I see. Would you mind if I say I happen to like your shorter fluff fics like diamond dust better than your 6th division series?:heh:
I do too really, but I've done so many things already, there's really nothing left to do.
........I suppose I could do Jade Sunlight...
I smiled happily when the sunlight woke me up from my dreams this morning. Normally I wouldn’t be really thrilled about waking up but today was going to be special, as it was the day both Fate and I had off from our duties. Crawling out of bed, I gave Raising Heart a good morning kiss in both a greeting and to let her know that I was awake and didn’t need my alarm. A glance over to my sleeping partner revealed her in her normal position, curled up against a pillow with her back to the wall. With a smile I blew her a kiss even though she wasn’t awake to receive it and made my way downstairs to start my morning ritual. The kitchen light came on automatically when I stepped into the room, along with a small radio built in above the oven. My favorite station greeted me with a cheerful song despite being only five in the morning. My voice hummed along with it while I poured some coffee beans into a grinder and pressed down on the lid, watching them be turned to small pebbles. Taking the grinds, I poured them into a filter and placed it over a strainer. With water being added, I let them steep while getting out a frying pan and tossing it over the stove to get warm. Four eggs and other random ingredients were taken out of the refrigerator, which I chose to close with a bump of my hip. Minutes passed and soon I was rewarded with loaded scrambled eggs, toast, and coffee. Now armed and ready to face my girlfriend I put everything on a tray and went back upstairs to the bedroom. The smell off coffee woke her up just as it always did and I found her sitting up in bed sleepily rubbing her eyes. She gave me a small confused look when I sat the tray on the middle of the bed and sat down in front of it. “Breakfast in bed,” I told her happily while motioning her to come closer so we could share it. Fate gave me an amused smile but still came to my call and made herself comfortable, taking my offered bite without hesitation.
Jade Sunlight
By:
Satashi
tshouryuu
2007-07-08, 14:22
I do too really, but I've done so many things already, there's really nothing left to do.
........I suppose I could do Jade Sunlight...
I smiled happily when the sunlight woke me up from my dreams this morning. Normally I wouldn’t be really thrilled about waking up but today was going to be special, as it was the day both Fate and I had off from our duties. Crawling out of bed, I gave Raising Heart a good morning kiss in both a greeting and to let her know that I was awake and didn’t need my alarm. A glance over to my sleeping partner revealed her in her normal position, curled up against a pillow with her back to the wall. With a smile I blew her a kiss even though she wasn’t awake to receive it and made my way downstairs to start my morning ritual. The kitchen light came on automatically when I stepped into the room, along with a small radio built in above the oven. My favorite station greeted me with a cheerful song despite being only five in the morning. My voice hummed along with it while I poured some coffee beans into a grinder and pressed down on the lid, watching them be turned to small pebbles. Taking the grinds, I poured them into a filter and placed it over a strainer. With water being added, I let them steep while getting out a frying pan and tossing it over the stove to get warm. Four eggs and other random ingredients were taken out of the refrigerator, which I chose to close with a bump of my hip. Minutes passed and soon I was rewarded with loaded scrambled eggs, toast, and coffee. Now armed and ready to face my girlfriend I put everything on a tray and went back upstairs to the bedroom. The smell off coffee woke her up just as it always did and I found her sitting up in bed sleepily rubbing her eyes. She gave me a small confused look when I sat the tray on the middle of the bed and sat down in front of it. “Breakfast in bed,” I told her happily while motioning her to come closer so we could share it. Fate gave me an amused smile but still came to my call and made herself comfortable, taking my offered bite without hesitation.
Jade Sunlight
By:
Satashi
Interesting, I really love these warm and fuzzy feeling inducing fics. I'm a closet romantic at heart :heh: And I'm a Warlock in WoW... really destroys the image doesn't it... :heh:
Interesting, I really love these warm and fuzzy feeling inducing fics. I'm a closet romantic at heart :heh: And I'm a Warlock in WoW... really destroys the image doesn't it... :heh:
I'll see about doing it. It'd be a pointless romantic fic that's nothing but an "awwww" enducing cavity fanfic.
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 14:41
Interesting, I really love these warm and fuzzy feeling inducing fics. I'm a closet romantic at heart :heh: And I'm a Warlock in WoW... really destroys the image doesn't it... :heh:
Nonsense!
You people have succubus, and if you swing that way... Felhounds.
*points at succubus*
Noob: "Is that your mount?"
Warlock: "Only when we're alone."
:topicoff:
Interesting, I really love these warm and fuzzy feeling inducing fics. I'm a closet romantic at heart :heh: And I'm a Warlock in WoW... really destroys the image doesn't it... :heh:
*peeks out of lurking* I dunno, I think being a pink haired, pigtailed gnome named "Sugarbelle" ruins the Warlock image a bit more then being a closet romantic. XP *shot*
*points at succubus*
Noob: "Is that your mount?"
Warlock: "Only when we're alone."
*snerk* Here, you deserve this. *gives cookie* :heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 14:53
:topicoff:
*peeks out of lurking* I dunno, I think being a pink haired, pigtailed gnome named "Sugarbelle" ruins the Warlock image a bit more then being a closet romantic. XP *shot*
*snerk* Here, you deserve this. *gives cookie* :heh:
Hi Jena-san ^^ Nice to see you again ^^
@Chaos: That's exaggerating a little :heh:
Chaos2Frozen
2007-07-08, 14:56
*snerk* Here, you deserve this. *gives cookie* :heh:
I humbly accept. :)
@Chaos: That's exaggerating a little :heh:
I'm not that warlock :p
tshouryuu
2007-07-08, 14:59
I'll see about doing it. It'd be a pointless romantic fic that's nothing but an "awwww" enducing cavity fanfic.
I really, really like this types of fics. I used to dig through the ff.net CCS section for these types of fics.
Nonsense!
You people have succubus, and if you swing that way... Felhounds.
My succy isn't just a mount. Us locks are the only class to get an "epic" mount at level 20 :D
:topicoff:
*peeks out of lurking* I dunno, I think being a pink haired, pigtailed gnome named "Sugarbelle" ruins the Warlock image a bit more then being a closet romantic. XP *shot*
*snerk* Here, you deserve this. *gives cookie* :heh:
I'm an orc lock... being a closet romantic ruins my image more than the gnome... If anything, "Sugarbelle" just proves how scary little pink haired girls are. For Gnomeregan!!
Caro: *in full succubus gear* Hey Elio-saaammaaaaaa! *wiggles her butt and slaps it* Ahn~!
Elio: *falls back, grabs nose* What the hell!?
Caro: Eh? Is this not right?
Elio:Wh..wh...why are you dressed like that?
Caro: Fate-san gave me a book to read to learn how to get your attention....
~**~
Nanoha: Faaaate? *looking through drawer* Where are my magazines?
Fate: Bottom drawer like always, hun
Nanoha: I looked, they're not there! All I see are my adult fantasy ones with random covers on them. Remember, we put them on there incase Elio or Caro saw them
Fate: *goes very still* Uh oh.....
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 15:44
Caro: *in full succubus gear* Hey Elio-saaammaaaaaa! *wiggles her butt and slaps it* Ahn~!
Elio: *falls back, grabs nose* What the hell!?
Caro: Eh? Is this not right?
Elio:Wh..wh...why are you dressed like that?
Caro: Fate-san gave me a book to read to learn how to get your attention....
~**~
Nanoha: Faaaate? *looking through drawer* Where are my magazines?
Fate: Bottom drawer like always, hun
Nanoha: I looked, they're not there! All I see are my adult fantasy ones with random covers on them. Remember, we put them on there incase Elio or Caro saw them
Fate: *goes very still* Uh oh.....
LOL! WIN!! :D May we see what happens afterwards? :D (I'm sure Nanoha's going to kill Fate when she learns what her little girl did :D)
"Uhm, Nanoha, I'm going out for just a bit."
"Hm? Where to? I kind of want to get out of the house."
"Eh, just down to Caro's room a moment..."
"Oh, I want to talk to her about her last training!" Nanoha closed their private drawer and hopped over to her. "Let's go together?"
"Oh, well, um, I kinda of needed to talk to her privately"
"What for?" She tilted her head to the side. "Did my baby do something bad? Do I need to scold her?"
~**~
Elio walked backwards slowly. "Um... Caro... We're good friends and all but..."
Caro kept walking with him, one finger on his chest and the other on his stomach. "I'll be gentle, don't worry." She licked her lips slowly.
"C-Caro!"
Lutecia blinked as she walked into the room. "Am I interrupting?"
Caro smiled at her happily. "You're just in time! Read the little bit bookmarked in my magazine over there!"
Lutecia gave her a curious look but picked up the magazine as she was asked to. "How to get the one you like to notice you," She read the title aloud before flipping to the bookmark.
~**~
Nanoha put her hand on Fate's forehead. "You're acting strangely, Fate. Are you feeling okay? You're shivering."
"Eh, well, yes, I'm fine..." She laughed nervously. "What magazine was you looking for again? I'll help you?"
"Oh don't mind, I'm not in the mood anymore."
"J-just out of curiosity...?"
Nanoha blushed lightly. "Mou, you pervert. Why do you want to know what I was going to look at, hmmm?" She trailed off with a cat like smile.
"I-I-I...Just... um..." She thought quickly. "Just wanted to know... what my bunny was in the mood for?"
Nanoha laughed happily, hugging her. "You're so cute sometimes! It was the new magazine I got, the one about two girls seducing one of their boyfriends. I was going to trick you into thinking I wanted a three-way with Yuuno but the book was so funny I ended up showing you anyway so we could laugh at it."
"o-Oh!" Fate's blood went cold. "Yeah, hahaha! Who would ever... take that seriously..." She darted her eyes.
"Really! Lines like-"
~**~
"We'll both take care of you, Elio." Lutecia cooed at him, pushing him onto the bed. "Caro and I practice on each other all the time..."
"We're skilled with our tongues," Caro added in, both of them crawling up his body
~**~
"So!" Fate nervously pulled away from Nanoha. "Keep looking, let's try it sometime! Tell you what, you call Yuuno right now and I'll be right back! Stay here!" She jumped off the bedroom balcony and flew towards the door. "Don't follow me!"
Nanoha stood still a moment. "Did she just... offer a three-some with me?"
~**~
Fate burst into Caro's room, panting hard from running so fast. "Girls!"
"FATE-SAN HELP ME!"
~**~
Nanoha walked down the hallway slowly, wondering just where Fate ran off to. "I swear sometimes that girl is such a handful." Noticing Caro's door was open, she knocked on it as she looked in. "Caro-chan, Lutecia-chan, Have you seen......Fate...?" Her eyes went to Caro, who was dressed in something not even she would wear and then over at Lutecia, who was only in her underclothes. "What's... going on here...?"
Elio scrambled off the bed and ran behind Fate, eyes wide. "Wha, what are they doing!?"
"Did we mess up, Fate-san?" Caro picked up the magazine and flipped through it. "We said the lines right, but he seemed more scared instead of...hard? Hard how? Hard headed? Is he supposed to be hard headed about this?"
"Caro-chan, let mommy see that magazine...?"
"no!" Fate attempted to grab it but only snatched the cover, revealing a raunchy image on the front cover. "Um... this isn't..."
"Fate... " Nanoha reached down and picked it up. "Did you give them this...?"
"No! Maybe!Sorta! Kinda!... oh crap."
~**~
Yuuno looked out the window as a sudden pink blast of energy flew across the landscape. "Are Nanoha and Fate sparring again?"
"I don't think so?" Hayate leaned over to peek out the window. "Why?"
"Because I could have sworn I saw Fate flying through the air at the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker..."
FlareKnight
2007-07-08, 16:07
Oh damn that was good Satashi. Well I'd say it worked at getting Erio's attention alright :). Great stuff that time.
Should be interesting how Nanoha would react after finding out A what she gave to Caro and B what the end result was. :)
Edit: Well that answered my questions.
The continuation was even better, completely hilarious. Poor Erio sort of....
Well have to give some props to Caro and Lutecia for following instructions pretty well :heh:. All the funnier since Caro couldn't figure out what the magazine meant.
Fate was really trying hard to avoid more trouble. It's like the march of doom knowing what she'd find and trying to keep Nanoha from getting upset. Apparently with the starlight breaker.....didn't work :).
Great job though.
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 16:22
My sides hurt Satashi-sama. That was funny... XD
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 16:26
"Uhm, Nanoha, I'm going out for just a bit."
"Hm? Where to? I kind of want to get out of the house."
"Eh, just down to Caro's room a moment..."
"Oh, I want to talk to her about her last training!" Nanoha closed their private drawer and hopped over to her. "Let's go together?"
"Oh, well, um, I kinda of needed to talk to her privately"
"What for?" She tilted her head to the side. "Did my baby do something bad? Do I need to scold her?"
~**~
Elio walked backwards slowly. "Um... Caro... We're good friends and all but..."
Caro kept walking with him, one finger on his chest and the other on his stomach. "I'll be gentle, don't worry." She licked her lips slowly.
"C-Caro!"
Lutecia blinked as she walked into the room. "Am I interrupting?"
Caro smiled at her happily. "You're just in time! Read the little bit bookmarked in my magazine over there!"
Lutecia gave her a curious look but picked up the magazine as she was asked to. "How to get the one you like to notice you," She read the title aloud before flipping to the bookmark.
~**~
Nanoha put her hand on Fate's forehead. "You're acting strangely, Fate. Are you feeling okay? You're shivering."
"Eh, well, yes, I'm fine..." She laughed nervously. "What magazine was you looking for again? I'll help you?"
"Oh don't mind, I'm not in the mood anymore."
"J-just out of curiosity...?"
Nanoha blushed lightly. "Mou, you pervert. Why do you want to know what I was going to look at, hmmm?" She trailed off with a cat like smile.
"I-I-I...Just... um..." She thought quickly. "Just wanted to know... what my bunny was in the mood for?"
Nanoha laughed happily, hugging her. "You're so cute sometimes! It was the new magazine I got, the one about two girls seducing one of their boyfriends. I was going to trick you into thinking I wanted a three-way with Yuuno but the book was so funny I ended up showing you anyway so we could laugh at it."
"o-Oh!" Fate's blood went cold. "Yeah, hahaha! Who would ever... take that seriously..." She darted her eyes.
"Really! Lines like-"
~**~
"We'll both take care of you, Elio." Lutecia cooed at him, pushing him onto the bed. "Caro and I practice on each other all the time..."
"We're skilled with our tongues," Caro added in, both of them crawling up his body
~**~
"So!" Fate nervously pulled away from Nanoha. "Keep looking, let's try it sometime! Tell you what, you call Yuuno right now and I'll be right back! Stay here!" She jumped off the bedroom balcony and flew towards the door. "Don't follow me!"
Nanoha stood still a moment. "Did she just... offer a three-some with me?"
~**~
Fate burst into Caro's room, panting hard from running so fast. "Girls!"
"FATE-SAN HELP ME!"
~**~
Nanoha walked down the hallway slowly, wondering just where Fate ran off to. "I swear sometimes that girl is such a handful." Noticing Caro's door was open, she knocked on it as she looked in. "Caro-chan, Lutecia-chan, Have you seen......Fate...?" Her eyes went to Caro, who was dressed in something not even she would wear and then over at Lutecia, who was only in her underclothes. "What's... going on here...?"
Elio scrambled off the bed and ran behind Fate, eyes wide. "Wha, what are they doing!?"
"Did we mess up, Fate-san?" Caro picked up the magazine and flipped through it. "We said the lines right, but he seemed more scared instead of...hard? Hard how? Hard headed? Is he supposed to be hard headed about this?"
"Caro-chan, let mommy see that magazine...?"
"no!" Fate attempted to grab it but only snatched the cover, revealing a raunchy image on the front cover. "Um... this isn't..."
"Fate... " Nanoha reached down and picked it up. "Did you give them this...?"
"No! Maybe!Sorta! Kinda!... oh crap."
~**~
Yuuno looked out the window as a sudden pink blast of energy flew across the landscape. "Are Nanoha and Fate sparring again?"
"I don't think so?" Hayate leaned over to peek out the window. "Why?"
"Because I could have sworn I saw Fate flying through the air at the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker..."
LOL!!!! I KNEW it!!! Fate's gonna be killed!! :D. Great short!!! Maybe you should post it as an SNL? XD!
LOL!!!! I KNEW it!!! Fate's gonna be killed!! :D. Great short!!! Maybe you should post it as an SNL? XD!
lol maybe :P
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 16:29
Fate had to explain much faster. Much, much, much faster. =p
I feel kinda bad for her sometimes. I'm so mean to poor Fate T_T
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 16:32
Yeah I guess so :uhoh:
Still... It does make nice comic relief I suppose... Right? So it's not all bad! It's not like you're picking on her 'cause it's a flaw of her's... Or... Something. Yeah. :heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 16:38
I feel kinda bad for her sometimes. I'm so mean to poor Fate T_T
Well, in "Happy Birthday Nanoha" she (Nanoha) got roasted quite a bit. In "Taste Sweet" too, so......:D
Well, in "Happy Birthday Nanoha" she (Nanoha) got roasted quite a bit. In "Taste Sweet" too, so......:D
Lol, I felt so bad for Nanoha. You know they would never let her live that one down.
Actually, a story kinda like that one, "Happy Birthday, Fate" was originally going to be made, where Fate does her pole dance and a game of truth or dare took place.
Signum grinned at the Nanoha "Truth or Dare?"
Having seen her fiance be the topic of eye candy for the entire bar a few moments back, Nanoha wisely chose the option she felt would be safest. "Truth."
"List off your kinks. All of them."
Or so she thought. "Um..." Nanoha blushed darkly when everyone leaned forward. "Well..." She coughed and spoke through it. "Fate's strapon" Several cheers rang out momentarily but Signum calmed them all down so she could continue. "Um....co...costumes..." Again the table roared out, making Nanoha bury her face in her hands. "and...anal..."
"Wait, anal?" Vita asked, waving her hands. "as in butt secks?"
"Butt secks!" A drunk Subaru cheered out.
"Hey, Haseo!" Tia added in, eyes hazy. "We need more booz and butt secks over here!"
"Let's not forget to fill up on gas and butts secks on the way home," signum grinned.
"I heard the prices of gas has gone up alone with the amount of butt secks lately." Yuuno grinned, nudging Nanoha who seemed to already be dead.
Haseo put glasses of beer on the table. "Here you are guys, fresh beer and butt secks for everyone!"
"Woohoo!" Hayate toasted the table. "Here's to Nanoha's butt secks!"
"CHEERS!"
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FlareKnight
2007-07-08, 17:01
Can't help but read it anyways. Well guess Nanoha has learned a valuable lesson. There is no safe plan in truth or dare. :)
Can't help but read it anyways. Well guess Nanoha has learned a valuable lesson. There is no safe plan in truth or dare. :)
So who is more embarassed, Nanoha with everyone knowing she likes that....... or fate, who obviously does that? @_@
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 17:09
Hmmmm... That does bring up a good point indeed... @_@;
Hmmmm... That does bring up a good point indeed... @_@;
I guess it shows how comfortable with each other they are?
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 17:18
Yes... Yes I guess it does. >>
And now Nanoha learned, picking 'Truth' isn't always the safe way out! =o
Fate laid across her bed, idly moving her legs up and down as she did nothing. Subaru yawned loudly, looking over at Nanoha who was about to fall asleep sitting up. "I'm bored," She spoke finally.
"Me, too," Tia agreed, spinning slowly in the computer chair.
Subaru looked up lazily. "I wonder what would happen if you inhaled the compressed air in a can of cool-whip?
"..."
"..."
"..."
~**~
"Bwahahaha!" Fate leaned back, laughing heavily as she sat on the kitchen floor and snorted after pulling the nozzle from her mouth.
"I think our questions should be labeled 'do not take this literally'," Nanoha mused while looking at Subaru suck on the nozzle and spray the stuff in her mouth before breaking out in laughter as well.
"I wonder how many brain cells they have left?" Tia pondered as Fate took the can back inhaled, coughed, and started laughing when she got cream all over herself.
FlareKnight
2007-07-08, 17:35
Well I'd probably say doing would be more embarrassing than telling about the stuff. Guess it would depend on the person and if Nanoha had a very long list to tell the others about.
Well that was pretty random Satashi. Utterly funny though, couldn't stop laughing. The image of Fate and Subaru inhaling the air from the cool whip can. Completely weird but funny :).
My creative juices are dry today lol
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 18:08
I daresay that you're quite wrong there Satashi-san. That was really good. Random but good =D
I daresay that you're quite wrong there Satashi-san. That was really good. Random but good =D
Every now and then random is okay? :P
Nanoha ran quickly down the shopping isle and snatched up Vivio before the could pull the bottom box of cookies from a stacked display. "Vivio! You can't run off like that, you could get hurt."
"Hurt?" She pondered, pointing at the boxes. "Cookies!"
"No sweetheart," Nanoha balanced the child on her hip and held her with one hand. "No cookies, mommy has a budget to keep since she blew it all on Fate-mama's car."
"Cookies!" She reached out with one hand and waved it to the display. "Please!"
"No means no honey." Nanoha bounced her lightly to try and distract the girl.
"Cookie! Cookie!" Vivio's eyes started to brim with tears as her voice got louder. "COOKIE!"
"Honey, shhhh!" The mother looked around nervously as people started eying her. "Shush now Vivio-dear, no cookies this time okay?"
"Cookieeeee!" Words changed into loud bawling as she flailed out one hand at the boxes.
"Vivio! sweet heart don't cry! Come on ,please? Oh honey... Don't be like this..." She bounced her a little more to try and settle her but everyone was still looking at her and snickering. "Mou okay okay we'll get cookies!"
"Yay!" hugging onto her mother, Vivio smiled happily when the treat was placed into the buggy.
"Yes, yes..." She sighed out heavily. "But this is the only snack we'll get okay?"
"Yeeeeeeees!" Vivio hummed happily as she was carried around the store, stopping only when Nanoha went down the frozen food section. "Mommy, ice cream!"
"No, you wanted cookies remember?"
"Ice cream!"
"We agreed honey, only one snack. Do you want ice cream or cookies?" Vivio gave her a sad look and started to pout, eyes watering. "Nooo, no no. Only one. Fate will yell at me if I spend money needlessly..."
"Ice cream..." He little one sniffed heavily, tears spilling down her cheeks.
"No honey! Please don't cry again! Please, please, ohhhh, come on sweet heart!" The water works didn't stop despite her protest. Biting her bottom lip, Nanoha looked back and forth between Vivio and the frozen treats on the other side of the glass.
~**~
Fate paused to look at the box of cookies Nanoha had bought. "Darling, when did you start liking boxed cookies?"
"Vivio threw a temper tantrum."
"You can't give in like that or she'll get worse, you have to talk to her."
"I did, I said firmly: No!" Nanoha put a hand on her hip and moved her finger in front of her as if she was scolding someone. "Only one treat from the grocery store. And Vivio said she wanted the cookies so I got the cookies."
Fate held up a box of ice cream sandwiches. "And these?"
"Thooooooooose," She trailed off, thinking. "Are mine. I wanted those."
"You hate vanilla ice cream."
"Yeaaahhhhh, welllllll," She put her hands together as she thought. "I thought that youuuuuuu liked them and I wanted to get you something so I...." She looked at Fate while she tapped her foot with her arms crossed. "Fine, guilty. I caved in." She hung her head. "She had this... this pout and her eyes were all watery and..."
"You're hopeless." Fate continued putting the things up, stopping then she came across fruit snacks. "Nanoha!?"
"Those ARE mine!" She snatched the box from her. "Eat them and I'll bite your hand!"
Fate face-palmed. "Sometimes I wonder who the child really is..." Looking over, she saw Nanoha opening the box. "Hey! No snacks before dinner!"
"But Fate!"
"No buts! You'll spoil your appetite!"
"Mou..." She pouted up at her. "Please?"
"No means no."
"Please please?" sliding an arm around Fate's waist she started drawing a small circle on her stomach with a finger. "I'll share them...?"
"Nanoha, you're being a bad influence on Vivio and..." She looked into Nanoha's misting eyes and pouting face. "And...Mou fine! Just one pack!"
"Yay!" She hugged Fate tightly. "Thank you!"
I'm a grand marshal so I learned how to fsk people up and keep them occupied lol :P
Tia sank to her knees and panted heavly. "Is... Is it over?"
"Yep," Nanoha looked at the information on a floating screen in front of her. "Great job today everyone.
"Oh thank goodness," Subaru fell on her back and looked at the sky. "I don't think I could go on. Can I get sum water plz?"
"Sure one sec," Nanoha brought her hands infront of her and concentrated a few moments before five bottles of water appeared.
"Thx." Subaru chugged some and wiped her mouth. "forgot to buy consumables before we trained."
"Don't forget in the future," Tia warned her. "You warriors are always forgetting."
"Hey!" Subaru coutnered. "You don't have the repair bills that we do! Specially you, Elio!"
"What!? Hey, I have to buy expensive mats to make my poisons and powders!"
"Yeah those twenty five copper flash powders really add up don't they!?"
"HEY!" Nanoha stepped between them. "Quiet, send it in PMs, but I don't want to hear it. "Anyway, Tia, why didn't you have your pet out for most of it?"
The gunslinger blushed. "I ran out of food..."
Nanoha sighed and put her face in her hand. "Okay. fine. Lutecia, good job on the soulstones."
"Thank you," She smiled.
Elio looked over at everyone. "Hay, any1 have dmg charts?"
Lutecia rolled her eyes. "You're on top as always, why do you always ask?"
"Can I get healing chart too?" Caro pondered.
Nanoha=mage, Subaru=warrior, Erio=rogue, Tia=hunter, Caro=priest?
All I can say is that Tia is a huntard.... which self-respecting hunter runs out of food... and even with out food, the pet would have given a good dps increase....*shakes fist at the idiots in the class* Especially if you take into account her willingness to go and melee...
Lol at the charts. Happened all the time when I was still playing :D
Caro: *in full succubus gear* Hey Elio-saaammaaaaaa! *wiggles her butt and slaps it* Ahn~!
Elio: *falls back, grabs nose* What the hell!?
Caro: Eh? Is this not right?
Elio:Wh..wh...why are you dressed like that?
Caro: Fate-san gave me a book to read to learn how to get your attention....
~**~
Nanoha: Faaaate? *looking through drawer* Where are my magazines?
Fate: Bottom drawer like always, hun
Nanoha: I looked, they're not there! All I see are my adult fantasy ones with random covers on them. Remember, we put them on there incase Elio or Caro saw them
Fate: *goes very still* Uh oh.....
This is great :D Where's the whip though....:heh:
"Uhm, Nanoha, I'm going out for just a bit."
"Hm? Where to? I kind of want to get out of the house."
"Eh, just down to Caro's room a moment..."
"Oh, I want to talk to her about her last training!" Nanoha closed their private drawer and hopped over to her. "Let's go together?"
"Oh, well, um, I kinda of needed to talk to her privately"
"What for?" She tilted her head to the side. "Did my baby do something bad? Do I need to scold her?"
~**~
Elio walked backwards slowly. "Um... Caro... We're good friends and all but..."
Caro kept walking with him, one finger on his chest and the other on his stomach. "I'll be gentle, don't worry." She licked her lips slowly.
"C-Caro!"
Lutecia blinked as she walked into the room. "Am I interrupting?"
Caro smiled at her happily. "You're just in time! Read the little bit bookmarked in my magazine over there!"
Lutecia gave her a curious look but picked up the magazine as she was asked to. "How to get the one you like to notice you," She read the title aloud before flipping to the bookmark.
~**~
Nanoha put her hand on Fate's forehead. "You're acting strangely, Fate. Are you feeling okay? You're shivering."
"Eh, well, yes, I'm fine..." She laughed nervously. "What magazine was you looking for again? I'll help you?"
"Oh don't mind, I'm not in the mood anymore."
"J-just out of curiosity...?"
Nanoha blushed lightly. "Mou, you pervert. Why do you want to know what I was going to look at, hmmm?" She trailed off with a cat like smile.
"I-I-I...Just... um..." She thought quickly. "Just wanted to know... what my bunny was in the mood for?"
Nanoha laughed happily, hugging her. "You're so cute sometimes! It was the new magazine I got, the one about two girls seducing one of their boyfriends. I was going to trick you into thinking I wanted a three-way with Yuuno but the book was so funny I ended up showing you anyway so we could laugh at it."
"o-Oh!" Fate's blood went cold. "Yeah, hahaha! Who would ever... take that seriously..." She darted her eyes.
"Really! Lines like-"
~**~
"We'll both take care of you, Elio." Lutecia cooed at him, pushing him onto the bed. "Caro and I practice on each other all the time..."
"We're skilled with our tongues," Caro added in, both of them crawling up his body
~**~
"So!" Fate nervously pulled away from Nanoha. "Keep looking, let's try it sometime! Tell you what, you call Yuuno right now and I'll be right back! Stay here!" She jumped off the bedroom balcony and flew towards the door. "Don't follow me!"
Nanoha stood still a moment. "Did she just... offer a three-some with me?"
~**~
Fate burst into Caro's room, panting hard from running so fast. "Girls!"
"FATE-SAN HELP ME!"
~**~
Nanoha walked down the hallway slowly, wondering just where Fate ran off to. "I swear sometimes that girl is such a handful." Noticing Caro's door was open, she knocked on it as she looked in. "Caro-chan, Lutecia-chan, Have you seen......Fate...?" Her eyes went to Caro, who was dressed in something not even she would wear and then over at Lutecia, who was only in her underclothes. "What's... going on here...?"
Elio scrambled off the bed and ran behind Fate, eyes wide. "Wha, what are they doing!?"
"Did we mess up, Fate-san?" Caro picked up the magazine and flipped through it. "We said the lines right, but he seemed more scared instead of...hard? Hard how? Hard headed? Is he supposed to be hard headed about this?"
"Caro-chan, let mommy see that magazine...?"
"no!" Fate attempted to grab it but only snatched the cover, revealing a raunchy image on the front cover. "Um... this isn't..."
"Fate... " Nanoha reached down and picked it up. "Did you give them this...?"
"No! Maybe!Sorta! Kinda!... oh crap."
~**~
Yuuno looked out the window as a sudden pink blast of energy flew across the landscape. "Are Nanoha and Fate sparring again?"
"I don't think so?" Hayate leaned over to peek out the window. "Why?"
"Because I could have sworn I saw Fate flying through the air at the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker..."
Pure GOLD!!! Poor fate.
Fate laid across her bed, idly moving her legs up and down as she did nothing. Subaru yawned loudly, looking over at Nanoha who was about to fall asleep sitting up. "I'm bored," She spoke finally.
"Me, too," Tia agreed, spinning slowly in the computer chair.
Subaru looked up lazily. "I wonder what would happen if you inhaled the compressed air in a can of cool-whip?
"..."
"..."
"..."
~**~
"Bwahahaha!" Fate leaned back, laughing heavily as she sat on the kitchen floor and snorted after pulling the nozzle from her mouth.
"I think our questions should be labeled 'do not take this literally'," Nanoha mused while looking at Subaru suck on the nozzle and spray the stuff in her mouth before breaking out in laughter as well.
"I wonder how many brain cells they have left?" Tia pondered as Fate took the can back inhaled, coughed, and started laughing when she got cream all over herself.
Every now and then random is okay? :P
Yep random is ok :D
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 20:29
Hahahaha it seems Vivio's pouting and crying works for Nanoha to make Fate cave in... :heh:
Just can't resist the power of a loli crying can ya?
Hahahaha it seems Vivio's pouting and crying works for Nanoha to make Fate cave in... :heh:
Just can't resist the power of a loli crying can ya?
Hehe, I love the thougth of Vivio giving Nanoha a hard time. Everything she does to Fate came back and bit her on the butt.
@ Saati-kun
Hey... since you loved using Skeith so much... why don't you introduce her/him to the OC thread?
It will be fun having her/him be tested, him/her test each OC in the thread...
Plus we, who normally don't read MD6: Remi/Redm can check her/him out... and maybe win some contracts in fanfiction works.
- Don't even think of saying 'I need to tone her/him down before i can...'. the more powerful the better.
Please... the guys at the OC thread miss you.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 22:03
@ Saati-kun
Hey... since you loved using Skeith so much... why don't you introduce her/him to the OC thread?
It will be fun having her/him be tested, him/her test each OC in the thread...
Plus we, who normally don't read MD6: Remi/Redm can check her/him out... and maybe win some contracts in fanfiction works.
- Don't even think of saying 'I need to tone her/him down before i can...'. the more powerful the better.
Please... the guys at the OC thread miss you.
Saint you're kidding right? Skeith is SSS ranked. I'm not sure there's anyone who can take her on :heh: (Cassandra in her most powerful mode is around SS+ but it's yet unconfirmed XD! And I'm not crazy enough as to let her battle Skeith to test it out ><)
FlareKnight
2007-07-08, 22:04
Oh the eternal battle at the grocery store. The people designing those places are brutal, put all the essential stuff past the treats and things kids just 'have' to get. It was a nice read that's for sure.
Oh the eternal battle at the grocery store. The people designing those places are brutal, put all the essential stuff past the treats and things kids just 'have' to get. It was a nice read that's for sure.
Thanks ^^ I rather liked that little short for some reason. I'm gonna make it an SNL
@OC Thread
I would have to tone her down. SSS+ and able to completly drain someone with one spell AND steal the powers? nooooo way :3 That's why she only appeares 3 times in the series (once at end of Rebirth, once at end of Reminisce, and chapter 1 of Redemption)
The OC thread takes too much out of me lol :P
Saint you're kidding right? Skeith is SSS ranked. I'm not sure there's anyone who can take her on :heh: (Cassandra in her most powerful mode is around SS+ but it's yet unconfirmed XD! And I'm not crazy enough as to let her battle Skeith to test it out ><)
NO... NOT JOKING
Lemme see...
We got...
AETHER ORIGIN
AETHER TERMINUS
FANGWANG
KLUZIE
KHA ALEXEI TESTAROSSA
KEY DEVICES - Kyla particularly *she has a secret*
- too many people and things to mention - not to mention the Subaru and Ashton combo I've been planning for AlternateS II - which is ranked X+ in finality mode.
- Yes, bring it on! he/she'll be welcomed greatly. And since It's Satashi, it will be welcomed with open limiters...
@ thread: gomen for DP.
Thanks ^^ I rather liked that little short for some reason. I'm gonna make it an SNL
@OC Thread
I would have to tone her down. SSS+ and able to completly drain someone with one spell AND steal the powers? nooooo way :3 That's why she only appeares 3 times in the series (once at end of Rebirth, once at end of Reminisce, and chapter 1 of Redemption)
The OC thread takes too much out of me lol :P
OH NO NO WAY!!!
WE GOT X-CLASS MAGES IN THE SHADOWS...
What does an SSS+ mage do in the face of other threats...
come on... it would be fun... might pick up some ideas as well...
or would you like it this way:
Ultima Stellar Flare Breaker *Punch* (one of the many A/S SuperShots) >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Skeith
:heh: :heh: :heh:
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 22:23
You know the OC page always wants me to work on an OC... But everytime I start, I always wonder if I could ever start up a forum-based Nanoha RP... :heh:
NO... NOT JOKING
Lemme see...
We got...
AETHER ORIGIN
AETHER TERMINUS
FANGWANG
KLUZIE
KHA ALEXEI TESTAROSSA
KEY DEVICES - Kyla particularly *she has a secret*
- too many people and things to mention - not to mention the Subaru and Ashton combo I've been planning for AlternateS II - which is ranked X+ in finality mode.
- Yes, bring it on! he/she'll be welcomed greatly. And since It's Satashi, it will be welcomed with open limiters...
Oh yeah... + plus with that scenario that Kha's cooking up with the other haxxs...:uhoh: see the dukes/barons and someother thing for haxx...
Skeith may be OP but some of the OC's in the thread are even more OP....:heh:
@Satashi: How did I miss that short with the shopping... the roles of Nanoha/Fate are reversed in comparison to the cannon...interesting
@Satashi[/B]: How did I miss that short with the shopping... the roles of Nanoha/Fate are reversed in comparison to the cannon...interesting
I think a few people missed it lol :P Even Sora-chan didn't comment T_T
I reallllllly want to see Vivio cry for some cookies or something in the anime and Nanoha freaking out about it not knowing what to do.
"Save me Fate!"
krisslanza
2007-07-08, 22:48
Seems everytime I mention 'RP' I become invisible or something... Oh well :uhoh:
@Satashi:
That'd be so unbelievably cute, I think I would just pass out from the adorable-ness. D:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-08, 23:07
I think a few people missed it lol :P Even Sora-chan didn't comment T_T
I reallllllly want to see Vivio cry for some cookies or something in the anime and Nanoha freaking out about it not knowing what to do.
"Save me Fate!"
Please forgive me, but I'm working with only 25% of my capacities right now >< 75% is concentrating on re-doing a whole new version of an OC project (Part 2 of "Alex's secret project" for those from the OC Thread) and trying to come up with more ideas for it >< The original version had 700 words and the revised one should have about 1500+, so I'm really not 'here' per se :heh: Sorry ><
That'd be insaely cute ^^
Please forgive me, but I'm working with only 25% of my capacities right now >< 75% is concentrating on re-doing a whole new version of an OC project (Part 2 of "Alex's secret project" for those from the OC Thread) and trying to come up with more ideas for it >< The original version had 700 words and the revised one should have about 1500+, so I'm really not 'here' per se :heh: Sorry ><
That'd be insaely cute ^^
SNL Chapter 8: Shopping with Vivio
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/8/ (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/6/)
:topicoff: I saw my first episode of Lucky Star today @_@
SNL Chapter 8: Shopping with Vivio
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/8/ (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3596285/6/)
:topicoff: I saw my first episode of Lucky Star today @_@
Konata's comments about 'Shopping with Vivio':
Good Job! http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/LS-emoticon-Good-Job.jpg
Haru's comments: I love Vivio! She and her mamas are so cute T_T
I prefer Fate’s and Nanoha’s roles like in StrikerS, but in your universe according to your characterization inverted roles fits well, I like how you use the characters to handle this kind of situations, is always fun and cute.
PD: keep watching Lucky Start, the series turns better
Ah, I just saw eppy 15 of StrikerS and the roles really are inversed ^^; ah well, I'll more likely than not do more Vivio shorts so I'll get it right next time :P
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-09, 16:10
Ah, I just saw eppy 15 of StrikerS and the roles really are inversed ^^; ah well, I'll more likely than not do more Vivio shorts so I'll get it right next time :P
LOL! I just finished watching it as well and now I finally understand what you meant about inversed roles :heh: To tell you the truth I didn't get it at all before :heh:
And Nanoha will suffer again with Vivio's pouts?:D Aww, that's such a cute mental pic :heh:
LOL! I just finished watching it as well and now I finally understand what you meant about inversed roles :heh: To tell you the truth I didn't get it at all before :heh:
And Nanoha will suffer again with Vivio's pouts?:D Aww, that's such a cute mental pic :heh:
Fate needs a turn to suffer from the cute chibi of doom. :3
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-09, 16:39
Fate needs a turn to suffer from the cute chibi of doom. :3
LOL! Oh, my. Satashi-san's plotting something again :heh: (I can see the evil grin on your face *Points finger accusingly*) :heh:
LOL! Oh, my. Satashi-san's plotting something again :heh: (I can see the evil grin on your face *Points finger accusingly*) :heh:
oh noes, I've been found out! *runs*
krisslanza
2007-07-09, 16:53
Satashi-sama has something planned indeed... :heh:
I wonder what ;P
Nanoha grinned as she walked out of the bathroom with a towel around her. "Faaaate?" Her word was silky-smooth, almost sang out as she walekd to the bed.
"Hm?" Fate kept typing on the floating keyboard.
"I've been a baaaaad girl~" She song this time made Fate blink and turn to look at her. Moving her towel, Nanoha revealed a latex outfit that screamed 'S&M'. "I need to be punished!"
"Ohhhhhhhh!" Fate smirked at her, closing down the monitor and grabbed her fiancee to toss on hte bed. "A spanking?"
"Oh please mistress Faaaaate!" Nanoha cried out girlishly.
"Bad girl!" Fate smacked her on the butt once, grinning widely.
"Momma, what'cha doin'?" Vivio's voice came up, making both girls scream at the top of theit lungs and hide under the covers.
"Vi-Vi-Vivio!" Nanoha stuttered, pointing with a shaking hard. "You're supposed to be with Caro-chan!"
"Vivio!?" Caro ran up the stairs. "Don't run away form me like that!" She put her hands on the small girl's shoulders and sighed out. "I'm really sorry, I turned my back for a second and she ran off!"
"N-no problem, eh...hehe...eheh..." Fate laughed nervously, trying to keep Nanoha covered with the blankets.
"Why is Nanoha-mama a bad girl?" Vivio pondered, making the brown haired girl yelp out.
"Ah, well," Fate waved her hands. "No need to worry about that."
"But," Vivio pointed. "She was being spanked."
"Spanked?" Caro asked, confused.
"No,no!" Nanoha thought quickly. "No spanked... tanked! yeah, she thought I was tanked!"
"Tanked?" Vivio tilted her head to the side.
"Um, um," Fate glared at Nanoha. "you can't tell her I thought your were drunk!" She scolded mentally.
"Ah!" Caro realzied. "You were playing dress-up agian!"
"AGAIN!?" Fate screamed. "How did you know about this!?"
Caro giggled. "Hayate-san and Yuuno-san were talking about uniforms and Hayate-san said she made Fate-san and Mommy outfits to play dress up in! She said Nanoha was really shy about people knowing so I figured that's what it was when she dived under the covers."
"Ye...Yeah..." Nanoha blushed darkly. "Caro-chan... please don't tell anyone about this..."
"It's okay," Caro smiled happily and started leading Vivio away. "Lutecia-chan and I play dress up all the time! She even asked Hayate-san if she would make her an enforcer outfit like Fate-sans!"
"Yes, that's EXACTLY like this!" Fate nodded quickly. "We're just pretending to be differnt ranks!"
Caro laughed happily and lead Vivio downstairs. "I'll watch her properly this time."
"P-please do." Nanoha waved lightly.
"......."
"......."
"You embarased three years off my life....." Fate scolded her.
"S-sorry!"
"Mou, now you'll really be punished!"
"kyaaaaaa! Mistress Fate!"
"Girls, have you seen Vivio around.....here......?" Subaru's eyes went wide at the image of the two on the bed. "Um....sorry...your door....was open... and....."
"GET OUT!" Nanoha cried desperatly, sending Subaru running. " And don't tell a SOUL!"
~**~
"Today," Nanoha grinned evilly as she tapped Raising Heart's staff against her other hand while walking in front of the forwards. "We're going to test how long you can resist memery altering magics...I hope there aer no complaints, Subaru?"
"Ma'am! I saw nothing, ma'am!"
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-09, 18:21
Nanoha grinned as she walked out of the bathroom with a towel around her. "Faaaate?" Her word was silky-smooth, almost sang out as she walekd to the bed.
"Hm?" Fate kept typing on the floating keyboard.
"I've been a baaaaad girl~" She song this time made Fate blink and turn to look at her. Moving her towel, Nanoha revealed a latex outfit that screamed 'S&M'. "I need to be punished!"
"Ohhhhhhhh!" Fate smirked at her, closing down the monitor and grabbed her fiancee to toss on hte bed. "A spanking?"
"Oh please mistress Faaaaate!" Nanoha cried out girlishly.
"Bad girl!" Fate smacked her on the butt once, grinning widely.
"Momma, what'cha doin'?" Vivio's voice came up, making both girls scream at the top of theit lungs and hide under the covers.
"Vi-Vi-Vivio!" Nanoha stuttered, pointing with a shaking hard. "You're supposed to be with Caro-chan!"
"Vivio!?" Caro ran up the stairs. "Don't run away form me like that!" She put her hands on the small girl's shoulders and sighed out. "I'm really sorry, I turned my back for a second and she ran off!"
"N-no problem, eh...hehe...eheh..." Fate laughed nervously, trying to keep Nanoha covered with the blankets.
"Why is Nanoha-mama a bad girl?" Vivio pondered, making the brown haired girl yelp out.
"Ah, well," Fate waved her hands. "No need to worry about that."
"But," Vivio pointed. "She was being spanked."
"Spanked?" Caro asked, confused.
"No,no!" Nanoha thought quickly. "No spanked... tanked! yeah, she thought I was tanked!"
"Tanked?" Vivio tilted her head to the side.
"Um, um," Fate glared at Nanoha. "you can't tell her I thought your were drunk!" She scolded mentally.
"Ah!" Caro realzied. "You were playing dress-up agian!"
"AGAIN!?" Fate screamed. "How did you know about this!?"
Caro giggled. "Hayate-san and Yuuno-san were talking about uniforms and Hayate-san said she made Fate-san and Mommy outfits to play dress up in! She said Nanoha was really shy about people knowing so I figured that's what it was when she dived under the covers."
"Ye...Yeah..." Nanoha blushed darkly. "Caro-chan... please don't tell anyone about this..."
"It's okay," Caro smiled happily and started leading Vivio away. "Lutecia-chan and I play dress up all the time! She even asked Hayate-san if she would make her an enforcer outfit like Fate-sans!"
"Yes, that's EXACTLY like this!" Fate nodded quickly. "We're just pretending to be differnt ranks!"
Caro laughed happily and lead Vivio downstairs. "I'll watch her properly this time."
"P-please do." Nanoha waved lightly.
"......."
"......."
"You embarased three years off my life....." Fate scolded her.
"S-sorry!"
"Mou, now you'll really be punished!"
"kyaaaaaa! Mistress Fate!"
"Girls, have you seen Vivio around.....here......?" Subaru's eyes went wide at the image of the two on the bed. "Um....sorry...your door....was open... and....."
"GET OUT!" Nanoha cried desperatly, sending Subaru running. " And don't tell a SOUL!"
~**~
"Today," Nanoha grinned evilly as she tapped Raising Heart's staff against her other hand while walking in front of the forwards. "We're going to test how long you can resist memery altering magics...I hope there aer no complaints, Subaru?"
"Ma'am! I saw nothing, ma'am!"
LOL!!
That was SO funny! I can't stop laughing XD! My sides hurt now. If I need to go to the hospital, I'm billing you Satashi-san :D
PLease include this to your SNL collection. More people need to have a good laugh as well XD
LOL!!
That was SO funny! I can't stop laughing XD! My sides hurt now. If I need to go to the hospital, I'm billing you Satashi-san :D
PLease include this to your SNL collection. More people need to have a good laugh as well XD
:3 hai, hai. I'll upload it later ^^
was it that funny? :3
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-09, 18:26
:3 hai, hai. I'll upload it later ^^
was it that funny? :3
It was. XD! I can't stop laughing and someone's complaining about it right now :heh:
Honestly, if I didn't knew you don't like it, I'd bow at you :D
It was. XD! I can't stop laughing and someone's complaining about it right now :heh:
Honestly, if I didn't knew you don't like it, I'd bow at you :D
tell that someone to stop complaining and bring you a sammich, or you'll.....yeah ,nevermind :P
I jotted that down randomly for fun ( I didn't even spell check it ^^;;;) it seems people like these shorts more than actual stories
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-09, 18:31
tell that someone to stop complaining and bring you a sammich, or you'll.....yeah ,nevermind :P
I jotted that down randomly for fun ( I didn't even spell check it ^^;;;) it seems people like these shorts more than actual stories
If I tell him that, God knows what'll happen to me :heh: (Probably tickle me to death :heh:)
Not true XP. I enjoy little shorts and stories the same, so keep writing whatever comes to your mind ^^
If I tell him that, God knows what'll happen to me :heh: (Probably tickle me to death :heh:)
Not true XP. I enjoy little shorts and stories the same, so keep writing whatever comes to your mind ^^
That or something worse :evil grin:
Count me in that list too :cool: Although now I see why you were laughing as if someone hit you with a tickling curse (can't remember the name right now ><)
Hey Satashi! Does that mean Hayate forced Fate and Nanoha to cosplay before? I remember reading something like that in chapter 7 Reminisce
"You know, we could have just told Hayate-chan and saved us the money."
"And let her pick out outfits? Remember the last time we made that mistake?"
"You won the pageant you was in didn't you?"
"Fate, it was a cosplay pageant. I was a bunny-girl." Nanoha sighed at the memory.
"Well the playboy staff did request you to pose for them."
"I was fourteen! I'm lucky I wasn't scarred for life!"
That was hilarious XD! Maybe you could develop this as a side story? :D
Te-heehee :P
Maybe :3
tho it would be fun to see Nanoha get scouted for a playboy magazine lol
That or something worse :evil grin:
"I've been a baaaad girl~" Fuyu no Sora sang out
Nanoha grinned as she walked out of the bathroom with a towel around her. "Faaaate?" Her word was silky-smooth, almost sang out as she walekd to the bed.
"Hm?" Fate kept typing on the floating keyboard.
"I've been a baaaaad girl~" She song this time made Fate blink and turn to look at her. Moving her towel, Nanoha revealed a latex outfit that screamed 'S&M'. "I need to be punished!"
"Ohhhhhhhh!" Fate smirked at her, closing down the monitor and grabbed her fiancee to toss on hte bed. "A spanking?"
"Oh please mistress Faaaaate!" Nanoha cried out girlishly.
"Bad girl!" Fate smacked her on the butt once, grinning widely.
"Momma, what'cha doin'?" Vivio's voice came up, making both girls scream at the top of theit lungs and hide under the covers.
"Vi-Vi-Vivio!" Nanoha stuttered, pointing with a shaking hard. "You're supposed to be with Caro-chan!"
"Vivio!?" Caro ran up the stairs. "Don't run away form me like that!" She put her hands on the small girl's shoulders and sighed out. "I'm really sorry, I turned my back for a second and she ran off!"
"N-no problem, eh...hehe...eheh..." Fate laughed nervously, trying to keep Nanoha covered with the blankets.
"Why is Nanoha-mama a bad girl?" Vivio pondered, making the brown haired girl yelp out.
"Ah, well," Fate waved her hands. "No need to worry about that."
"But," Vivio pointed. "She was being spanked."
"Spanked?" Caro asked, confused.
"No,no!" Nanoha thought quickly. "No spanked... tanked! yeah, she thought I was tanked!"
"Tanked?" Vivio tilted her head to the side.
"Um, um," Fate glared at Nanoha. "you can't tell her I thought your were drunk!" She scolded mentally.
"Ah!" Caro realzied. "You were playing dress-up agian!"
"AGAIN!?" Fate screamed. "How did you know about this!?"
Caro giggled. "Hayate-san and Yuuno-san were talking about uniforms and Hayate-san said she made Fate-san and Mommy outfits to play dress up in! She said Nanoha was really shy about people knowing so I figured that's what it was when she dived under the covers."
"Ye...Yeah..." Nanoha blushed darkly. "Caro-chan... please don't tell anyone about this..."
"It's okay," Caro smiled happily and started leading Vivio away. "Lutecia-chan and I play dress up all the time! She even asked Hayate-san if she would make her an enforcer outfit like Fate-sans!"
"Yes, that's EXACTLY like this!" Fate nodded quickly. "We're just pretending to be differnt ranks!"
Caro laughed happily and lead Vivio downstairs. "I'll watch her properly this time."
"P-please do." Nanoha waved lightly.
"......."
"......."
"You embarased three years off my life....." Fate scolded her.
"S-sorry!"
"Mou, now you'll really be punished!"
"kyaaaaaa! Mistress Fate!"
"Girls, have you seen Vivio around.....here......?" Subaru's eyes went wide at the image of the two on the bed. "Um....sorry...your door....was open... and....."
"GET OUT!" Nanoha cried desperatly, sending Subaru running. " And don't tell a SOUL!"
~**~
"Today," Nanoha grinned evilly as she tapped Raising Heart's staff against her other hand while walking in front of the forwards. "We're going to test how long you can resist memery altering magics...I hope there aer no complaints, Subaru?"
"Ma'am! I saw nothing, ma'am!"
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krisslanza
2007-07-09, 20:17
I think Haru just summed it up nicely... XD
Te-heehee :P
Maybe :3
tho it would be fun to see Nanoha get scouted for a playboy magazine lol
Please do! I'd love to see that :D Especially since she said she was "Lucky I didn't get scarred for life" XD!
"I've been a baaaad girl~" Fuyu no Sora sang out
In my dreams >< She doesn't do that kind of stuff T_T (Unfortunately :heh:) *Runs before Fu-chan gets back online*
"Please Nanoha-mama?" Vivio held up a small kitten.
"Honey, no pets." Nanoha crossed her arms. "You're too young to take care of it, I'm sorry."
"But he's lonely." Vivio tried agian, following her mother as she walked across the house. "Please?"
"I'm sorry, we can't have a kitten here." She sighed out. "Mou, Fate say something?"
"I don't mind," Fate bent over to look at the small gray and black kitten and smiled when it meowed at her. "It's cute."
"Fate!" Nanoha pulled her up and away from a very happy looking Vivio. "You know we can't keep a pet here!"
"We keep Arf in her puppy for a week a month," Fate retorted. "Look how happy she is, come on."
"It's just because Arf can take care of herself and feed herself, you've never taken care of a real pet before."
Fate sighed. "Nanoha, don't be so harsh, have you never wanted a pet before?"
She thought about it.
~**~
"A ferret?" Nanoha's father asked, confused.
"It's a type of mouse," Momoko told him as she sat salad on the table.
"Oh you know what a ferret is?"
Miyuki leaned forward. "They're really popular as pets."
"Is it big?"
Nanoha held up her small hands. "It's about this big. I'll take really good care of it, so please?"
~**~
"Th-that was differnt!" Nanoha blushed. "I was nine, Vivio can't even speak properly just yet, she can't handle a pet!"
"Of course she can't, that's why we'll take care of it together." Fate made Nanoha look at Vivio while she played with the small kitten. "Come on, can you tell that Face no?"
"I can, it will just make me feel horrible." Nanoha crossed her arms. "Fate we can't."
"Come onnnnn," Fate wrapped an arm around her shoulders and poked her cheek. "Who's my little bunny, hmmmm?"
Nanoha flushed. "Fa-fate, not now..."
"Who is? Hmmm?" Cuddling up against her, she rubbed their cheeks together. "Who's my loving sweetheart bunny girl?"
"I... I am..."
"And she wouldn't hurt a little girl's feelings would she?" Fate continued to coo at her.
"....No..."
"So we can keep it?" Fate acted exceedingly happy. "Is it okay with my fluffy lovey happy bunny girl?" She gave her best puppy dog eyes and even picked up vivio so she could help her.
"Yes, we can keep it."
"Hooray!" Vivio threw her arms around Nanoha and crawled from Fate's arms over into hers. "Thank you, Nanoha-mama!"
"Yes, yes." Nanoha smiled at the attention she was getting from her happy daughter. "Let's take good care of it okay?"
"Uhn!"
lol That Nanoha spanking one was brilliant. The Nanoha-Fate engagement thing still does not register for me, but the Vivio, Caro, and Subaru parts were hilarious! :D
Good stuff.
"Please Nanoha-mama?" Vivio held up a small kitten.
"Honey, no pets." Nanoha crossed her arms. "You're too young to take care of it, I'm sorry."
"But he's lonely." Vivio tried agian, following her mother as she walked across the house. "Please?"
"I'm sorry, we can't have a kitten here." She sighed out. "Mou, Fate say something?"
"I don't mind," Fate bent over to look at the small gray and black kitten and smiled when it meowed at her. "It's cute."
"Fate!" Nanoha pulled her up and away from a very happy looking Vivio. "You know we can't keep a pet here!"
"We keep Arf in her puppy for a week a month," Fate retorted. "Look how happy she is, come on."
"It's just because Arf can take care of herself and feed herself, you've never taken care of a real pet before."
Fate sighed. "Nanoha, don't be so harsh, have you never wanted a pet before?"
She thought about it.
~**~
"A ferret?" Nanoha's father asked, confused.
"It's a type of mouse," Momoko told him as she sat salad on the table.
"Oh you know what a ferret is?"
Miyuki leaned forward. "They're really popular as pets."
"Is it big?"
Nanoha held up her small hands. "It's about this big. I'll take really good care of it, so please?"
~**~
"Th-that was differnt!" Nanoha blushed. "I was nine, Vivio can't even speak properly just yet, she can't handle a pet!"
"Of course she can't, that's why we'll take care of it together." Fate made Nanoha look at Vivio while she played with the small kitten. "Come on, can you tell that Face no?"
"I can, it will just make me feel horrible." Nanoha crossed her arms. "Fate we can't."
"Come onnnnn," Fate wrapped an arm around her shoulders and poked her cheek. "Who's my little bunny, hmmmm?"
Nanoha flushed. "Fa-fate, not now..."
"Who is? Hmmm?" Cuddling up against her, she rubbed their cheeks together. "Who's my loving sweetheart bunny girl?"
"I... I am..."
"And she wouldn't hurt a little girl's feelings would she?" Fate continued to coo at her.
"....No..."
"So we can keep it?" Fate acted exceedingly happy. "Is it okay with my fluffy lovey happy bunny girl?" She gave her best puppy dog eyes and even picked up vivio so she could help her.
"Yes, we can keep it."
"Hooray!" Vivio threw her arms around Nanoha and crawled from Fate's arms over into hers. "Thank you, Nanoha-mama!"
"Yes, yes." Nanoha smiled at the attention she was getting from her happy daughter. "Let's take good care of it okay?"
"Uhn!"
"Insanely cute" to quote someone I know (Look a few posts back in the last page or so XD!) Fate is good at convincing Nanoha to let her get away with stuff huh? (The same can be said of Nanoha though :heh:) That was really nice Satashi! Keep up the good work :D
LoweGear
2007-07-09, 20:54
Nanoha grinned as she walked out of the bathroom with a towel around her. "Faaaate?" Her word was silky-smooth, almost sang out as she walekd to the bed.
"Hm?" Fate kept typing on the floating keyboard.
"I've been a baaaaad girl~" She song this time made Fate blink and turn to look at her. Moving her towel, Nanoha revealed a latex outfit that screamed 'S&M'. "I need to be punished!"
"Ohhhhhhhh!" Fate smirked at her, closing down the monitor and grabbed her fiancee to toss on hte bed. "A spanking?"
"Oh please mistress Faaaaate!" Nanoha cried out girlishly.
"Bad girl!" Fate smacked her on the butt once, grinning widely.
"Momma, what'cha doin'?" Vivio's voice came up, making both girls scream at the top of theit lungs and hide under the covers.
"Vi-Vi-Vivio!" Nanoha stuttered, pointing with a shaking hard. "You're supposed to be with Caro-chan!"
"Vivio!?" Caro ran up the stairs. "Don't run away form me like that!" She put her hands on the small girl's shoulders and sighed out. "I'm really sorry, I turned my back for a second and she ran off!"
"N-no problem, eh...hehe...eheh..." Fate laughed nervously, trying to keep Nanoha covered with the blankets.
"Why is Nanoha-mama a bad girl?" Vivio pondered, making the brown haired girl yelp out.
"Ah, well," Fate waved her hands. "No need to worry about that."
"But," Vivio pointed. "She was being spanked."
"Spanked?" Caro asked, confused.
"No,no!" Nanoha thought quickly. "No spanked... tanked! yeah, she thought I was tanked!"
"Tanked?" Vivio tilted her head to the side.
"Um, um," Fate glared at Nanoha. "you can't tell her I thought your were drunk!" She scolded mentally.
"Ah!" Caro realzied. "You were playing dress-up agian!"
"AGAIN!?" Fate screamed. "How did you know about this!?"
Caro giggled. "Hayate-san and Yuuno-san were talking about uniforms and Hayate-san said she made Fate-san and Mommy outfits to play dress up in! She said Nanoha was really shy about people knowing so I figured that's what it was when she dived under the covers."
"Ye...Yeah..." Nanoha blushed darkly. "Caro-chan... please don't tell anyone about this..."
"It's okay," Caro smiled happily and started leading Vivio away. "Lutecia-chan and I play dress up all the time! She even asked Hayate-san if she would make her an enforcer outfit like Fate-sans!"
"Yes, that's EXACTLY like this!" Fate nodded quickly. "We're just pretending to be differnt ranks!"
Caro laughed happily and lead Vivio downstairs. "I'll watch her properly this time."
"P-please do." Nanoha waved lightly.
"......."
"......."
"You embarased three years off my life....." Fate scolded her.
"S-sorry!"
"Mou, now you'll really be punished!"
"kyaaaaaa! Mistress Fate!"
"Girls, have you seen Vivio around.....here......?" Subaru's eyes went wide at the image of the two on the bed. "Um....sorry...your door....was open... and....."
"GET OUT!" Nanoha cried desperatly, sending Subaru running. " And don't tell a SOUL!"
~**~
"Today," Nanoha grinned evilly as she tapped Raising Heart's staff against her other hand while walking in front of the forwards. "We're going to test how long you can resist memery altering magics...I hope there aer no complaints, Subaru?"
"Ma'am! I saw nothing, ma'am!"
While I absolutely LOVED the other shorts (sorry couldn't comment on those :heh: ) ...
THIS IS MADE OUT OF 100 PERCENT ABSOLUTE PURE WIN AND AWESOME :D:D:D:D
Lesson learned Nanoha and Fate: Lock the Door :heh::heh:
FlareKnight
2007-07-09, 20:56
More great stuff coming from Satashi. The short stories are great, though I'd say write what you feel like writing since it's all good.
Man Nanoha and Fate need to learn the important lesson of locking a door, seems like that's cost them a few times. (Though really it's hilarious so...let's keep the doors open :)) Took a while to stop laughing, it was good to read. Poor Subaru she actually had an understanding of what was going on there.
The cat bit was really nice. The challenge of taking care of a pet that isn't intelligent and self-aware will be an interesting bit for those two. Fate did a great job of breaking Nanoha down.
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Did I just see some hot spanking action? :eyespin::eyespin:
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The Gemini Sisters, Part III (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/07/gemini-sisters-part-iii.html)
A's Combat: The Belkan War
Progress: Chapter 1
Status: 80%
Magical Girl Lyrical Cinderella
Progress: Chapter 5
Status: 35%
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Satashi, all your stories are awesome but if there's something I have to say: try Blogging your works for everyone's convenience. :)
*thumbs up*
Seems like people like it best when I put them in awkward situations? *thinks* hai, hai, I'll do a short of when Nanoha cosplayed :3
"Please Nanoha-mama?" Vivio held up a small kitten.
"Honey, no pets." Nanoha crossed her arms. "You're too young to take care of it, I'm sorry."
"But he's lonely." Vivio tried agian, following her mother as she walked across the house. "Please?"
"I'm sorry, we can't have a kitten here." She sighed out. "Mou, Fate say something?"
"I don't mind," Fate bent over to look at the small gray and black kitten and smiled when it meowed at her. "It's cute."
"Fate!" Nanoha pulled her up and away from a very happy looking Vivio. "You know we can't keep a pet here!"
"We keep Arf in her puppy for a week a month," Fate retorted. "Look how happy she is, come on."
"It's just because Arf can take care of herself and feed herself, you've never taken care of a real pet before."
Fate sighed. "Nanoha, don't be so harsh, have you never wanted a pet before?"
She thought about it.
~**~
"A ferret?" Nanoha's father asked, confused.
"It's a type of mouse," Momoko told him as she sat salad on the table.
"Oh you know what a ferret is?"
Miyuki leaned forward. "They're really popular as pets."
"Is it big?"
Nanoha held up her small hands. "It's about this big. I'll take really good care of it, so please?"
~**~
"Th-that was differnt!" Nanoha blushed. "I was nine, Vivio can't even speak properly just yet, she can't handle a pet!"
"Of course she can't, that's why we'll take care of it together." Fate made Nanoha look at Vivio while she played with the small kitten. "Come on, can you tell that Face no?"
"I can, it will just make me feel horrible." Nanoha crossed her arms. "Fate we can't."
"Come onnnnn," Fate wrapped an arm around her shoulders and poked her cheek. "Who's my little bunny, hmmmm?"
Nanoha flushed. "Fa-fate, not now..."
"Who is? Hmmm?" Cuddling up against her, she rubbed their cheeks together. "Who's my loving sweetheart bunny girl?"
"I... I am..."
"And she wouldn't hurt a little girl's feelings would she?" Fate continued to coo at her.
"....No..."
"So we can keep it?" Fate acted exceedingly happy. "Is it okay with my fluffy lovey happy bunny girl?" She gave her best puppy dog eyes and even picked up vivio so she could help her.
"Yes, we can keep it."
"Hooray!" Vivio threw her arms around Nanoha and crawled from Fate's arms over into hers. "Thank you, Nanoha-mama!"
"Yes, yes." Nanoha smiled at the attention she was getting from her happy daughter. "Let's take good care of it okay?"
"Uhn!"
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/kawaii.jpg
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Seems like people like it best when I put them in awkward situations? *thinks* hai, hai, I'll do a short of when Nanoha cosplayed :3
It's working good, but don't forget the Vivio factor, she's made of PURE WIN in your fics (and in the series) http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/LS-emoticon-Good-Job.jpg
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/kawaii.jpg
EDIT:
It's working good, but don't forget the Vivio factor, she's made of PURE WIN in your fics (and in the series) http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/LS-emoticon-Good-Job.jpg
She'll be there don't worry
Satashi, all your stories are awesome but if there's something I have to say: try Blogging your works for everyone's convenience.
*thumbs up*
I post them all under "SNL: A digital short" on Fanfiction.net
krisslanza
2007-07-09, 22:05
Satashi sure is a busy worker bee with all these fics/shorts going on... XD
Satashi sure is a busy worker bee with all these fics/shorts going on... XD
all the shorts are normally written randomly when posting here slows down. :P That's why the spelling and stuff is sometimes off, they're not planned or spellchecked ^^
Sit down, start typing, hit submit lol
krisslanza
2007-07-09, 22:59
Hmmm almost sounds like how I do my fanfics sometimes... (Since I only use WordPad so I don't have a spellcheck :uhoh: Although I do run it through Firefox for that usually...)
But hey, random is good right? :heh:
A's Combat: The Belkan War
Progress: Chapter 1
Status: 100%
Link: here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3528351/2/As_Combat_The_Belkan_War).
Phew. Finally I can get this story ongoing. And I apology for any inaccuracies this chapter has. :heh:
Nanoha grinned as she walked out of the bathroom with a towel around her. "Faaaate?" Her word was silky-smooth, almost sang out as she walekd to the bed.
"Hm?" Fate kept typing on the floating keyboard.
"I've been a baaaaad girl~" She song this time made Fate blink and turn to look at her. Moving her towel, Nanoha revealed a latex outfit that screamed 'S&M'. "I need to be punished!"
"Ohhhhhhhh!" Fate smirked at her, closing down the monitor and grabbed her fiancee to toss on hte bed. "A spanking?"
"Oh please mistress Faaaaate!" Nanoha cried out girlishly.
"Bad girl!" Fate smacked her on the butt once, grinning widely.
"Momma, what'cha doin'?" Vivio's voice came up, making both girls scream at the top of theit lungs and hide under the covers.
"Vi-Vi-Vivio!" Nanoha stuttered, pointing with a shaking hard. "You're supposed to be with Caro-chan!"
"Vivio!?" Caro ran up the stairs. "Don't run away form me like that!" She put her hands on the small girl's shoulders and sighed out. "I'm really sorry, I turned my back for a second and she ran off!"
"N-no problem, eh...hehe...eheh..." Fate laughed nervously, trying to keep Nanoha covered with the blankets.
"Why is Nanoha-mama a bad girl?" Vivio pondered, making the brown haired girl yelp out.
"Ah, well," Fate waved her hands. "No need to worry about that."
"But," Vivio pointed. "She was being spanked."
"Spanked?" Caro asked, confused.
"No,no!" Nanoha thought quickly. "No spanked... tanked! yeah, she thought I was tanked!"
"Tanked?" Vivio tilted her head to the side.
"Um, um," Fate glared at Nanoha. "you can't tell her I thought your were drunk!" She scolded mentally.
"Ah!" Caro realzied. "You were playing dress-up agian!"
"AGAIN!?" Fate screamed. "How did you know about this!?"
Caro giggled. "Hayate-san and Yuuno-san were talking about uniforms and Hayate-san said she made Fate-san and Mommy outfits to play dress up in! She said Nanoha was really shy about people knowing so I figured that's what it was when she dived under the covers."
"Ye...Yeah..." Nanoha blushed darkly. "Caro-chan... please don't tell anyone about this..."
"It's okay," Caro smiled happily and started leading Vivio away. "Lutecia-chan and I play dress up all the time! She even asked Hayate-san if she would make her an enforcer outfit like Fate-sans!"
"Yes, that's EXACTLY like this!" Fate nodded quickly. "We're just pretending to be differnt ranks!"
Caro laughed happily and lead Vivio downstairs. "I'll watch her properly this time."
"P-please do." Nanoha waved lightly.
"......."
"......."
"You embarased three years off my life....." Fate scolded her.
"S-sorry!"
"Mou, now you'll really be punished!"
"kyaaaaaa! Mistress Fate!"
"Girls, have you seen Vivio around.....here......?" Subaru's eyes went wide at the image of the two on the bed. "Um....sorry...your door....was open... and....."
"GET OUT!" Nanoha cried desperatly, sending Subaru running. " And don't tell a SOUL!"
~**~
"Today," Nanoha grinned evilly as she tapped Raising Heart's staff against her other hand while walking in front of the forwards. "We're going to test how long you can resist memery altering magics...I hope there aer no complaints, Subaru?"
"Ma'am! I saw nothing, ma'am!"
LOL
Bad Satashi! Making me laugh out loud at work again! :D
I jotted that down randomly for fun ( I didn't even spell check it ^^;;;) it seems people like these shorts more than actual storiesWell for pure humor these shorts are unbeatale for sure. But for other emotional responses the longer stories are still win. ;)
Nanoha blushed darkly as she looked down at the outfit her friend had offered her to wear. "Hayate-chan...I can't wear this..."
"Why not? It's top quality!" The short girl looked offended. "I was going to wear it tomorrow but your needs are greater than mine."
Nanoha pouted, eyes going down to the white shirt she was wearing that had cola spilled all over it. "But... It's so revealing..."
"You'll strut around in a two piece bikini but won't wear a bunny girl outfit?" Hayate put a hand on her hip and held up the costume once more. The uniform resembled a one piece bathing suit minus the straps at the top and only covering the breasts a little over half way. "These even have shiny pantyhose, so it actually covers more."
"But... My boobs..."
"Nanoha, no one will be staring at your breasts." She eyes her friend's chest. "Although you are rather gifted in that area for a fourteen year old."
"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha covered herself. "I don't want to hear that!"
"You want to wear this or not? It's an anime convention, no one will look twice at you."
"...Promise?"
"Promise."
"Okay, I'll wear it."
~**~
Fate almost dropped her hot dog when Nanoha and Hayate came out of the ladies' restroom in the convention center. "Wow," She took a few moments to observe her friend. Nanoha was in a skin tight red playboy bunny outfit, complete with a fluffy white tail and floppy ears. "Nanoha, you're... really cute." Her eyes instantly drifted downwards when she got closer.
"Kya!" The girl covered her breasts. "Even Fate-chan's eyes immediately went to them!"
"Ah, sorry!" Fate waved her hands helplessly. "I didn't mean to, honest!"
"Mou!" Nanoha looked like she was about to cry. "I can't believe I spilt my drink all over myself..."
"You look fine, really." Hayate soothed her as she looped an arm through hers and her other through Fate's. "Come on, let's not waste any more time."
~**~
The flash of Hayate's camera blinked rapidly as she took picture after picture of the people on stage. "Kyaaa! It's Konata from Lucky Star!" She started taking more snapshots.
"I don't know half these people..." Fate sighed out.
Nanoha laughed nervously. "But it's Hayate's birthday and she's having a blast so it's okay, huh?"
"Mm, that's why we came."
When the last person walked off the runway of the cosplay pageant the host came back out with a microphone. "And now the moment you've been waiting for! All of you amature cosplayers and tailors can show your stuff for the next half hour! Just come up to the stairs here and you can state the name of your costume and the tailor to show off your skills!"
"Kyaaaa!" Hayate turned to Nanoha. "Go up there!"
"Wait, what!?" Nanoha lost her smile all at once. "Ohhhhhh I'm not going to model. no way, no how."
"Please!?"
Nanoha crossed her arms, shaking her head. "No."
Fate leaned over to her friend and whispered in her ear. "Don't be like that, it's her birthday! She's about to cry!"
Looking back over at Hayate the bunny girl let out a soft sigh. "Fine, I understand. I'll do it."
"Yay!" Hayate hugged her tightly. "Thank you thank you thank you!"
"Yes, yes." Swallowing what was left of her pride she made her way over to the stage and waved at the host lightly before getting pulled up.
"You're name?" He asked as several people cheered at her.
"Ta-Takamachi Nanoha," She spoke into his mic nervously.
"And your outfit?" He moved the mic back to her.
"Bunny girl, made by Yagami Hayate!" Several more people screamed out, as if Hayate's name was well known around the cosplaying community for some reason. She got a small pat on her back so she started walking down the runway, smiling nervously at the people taking pictures of her. When she got to the end she waved at her friends before turning and walking the rest of the way back, slightly shaking her hips as she did so.
"She really did it!" Fate gasped out as her friend came back over to her. "Hayate, please tell me you got pictures?"
"About fifteen," She confirmed, hopping in place happily. "Nanoha, thank you!" She hugged her tightly once again. "This is the best birthday I've ever had!"
"Glad you liked it," She hugged her back and gave Fate an embarrassed grin.
"Excuse me, miss," A new voice came up, making all three turn to look at a group of men in suits. "I'm here representing the top selling gentleman's magazine and was wondering if you'd like to model for the next issue?"
"Model?" Nanoha pointed to herself. "Me?"
"Why yes ma'am," He confirmed.
Fate crossed her arms. "Wait, wait... 'gentleman's magazine'? Is that another name for soft core porno?"
Nanoha's face drained of all color. "Wait... You want to photo me naked?"
"Nude, but no soft core porn as your friend implied." He gave Nanoha a business card. "If you or your friends decide to do so, please call me."
"I'm fourteen!" Nanoha flailed out, making the man go white.
"Oh! Please forgive me!" he bowed to them and quickly made his way away from them.
Hayate looked at the card. "Wow, Nanoha, they're the top selling girly magazine on Midchildra!"
"No way, really?" Fate snatched the card and looked at it. "But Nanoha's not going to do it, right?"
"No! You're not either are you?!"
"Of course not!... Hayate?"
"Me!? No,no,no!"
All three laughed nervously.
~*six some years later*~
Tia blushed darkly as she tried to keep from looking at the random items on the walls and shelves around her. "Subaru..." She gripped her girlfriend's hand tighter. "I...I changed my mind, I don't think I'm ready for this just yet..."
"Oh come on, we're already here!" She grabbed an item from the shelf and showed it to her. "Oh, look at this! We can both use it at the same time!"
"Subaru!" With her free hand she covered her face. "Okay, okay, anything you want, let's just get out of here, I'm dieing!"
The blue haired girl giggled to herself. "Shy-butt. You still want to get a porno to watch together?"
"E-eh!? I don't... I mean, I wouldn't..." She looked at her friend's smiling face and blushed darkly. "...Maybe a magazine or something..."
"How about this?" Subaru lead her to another section.
"Why do you know your way around here!?" The gunslinger demanded, shocked.
"No reason," She started looking at the racks upon racks of naughty magazines. "Hey look, Playboy!"
"Is that a good brand name or something...?"
"Uhn," Subaru nodded and started flipping through it. "They only do poses and stuff, nothing really nasty like the other ones. I like it because of that."
"I see..." Tia looked at it with her. Moments passes as they carelessly flipped through, only stopping when a certain girl caught their attention. "Is that...!?"
"No, no way!" Subaru shook her head. "She wouldn't!"
"She couldn't." The two looked at the profile.
Name: Takamachi Nanoha
Age: 20
Status: Engaged, Fate Harlaown (see page 32)
Sexuality: Bi.
Comment: Nya haha!
Subaru blushed darkly. "We are so buying this..."
A's Combat: The Belkan War
Progress: Chapter 1
Status: 100%
Link: here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3528351/2/As_Combat_The_Belkan_War).
Always a blast when it's from you, USB-chan :D
Nanoha blushed darkly as she looked down at the outfit her friend had offered her to wear. "Hayate-chan...I can't wear this..."
"Why not? It's top quality!" The short girl looked offended. "I was going to wear it tomorrow but your needs are greater than mine."
Nanoha pouted, eyes going down to the white shirt she was wearing that had cola spilled all over it. "But... It's so revealing..."
"You'll strut around in a two piece bikini but won't wear a bunny girl outfit?" Hayate put a hand on her hip and held up the costume once more. The uniform resembled a one piece bathing suit minus the straps at the top and only covering the breasts a little over half way. "These even have shiny pantyhose, so it actually covers more."
"But... My boobs..."
"Nanoha, no one will be staring at your breasts." She eyes her friend's chest. "Although you are rather gifted in that area for a fourteen year old."
"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha covered herself. "I don't want to hear that!"
"You want to wear this or not? It's an anime convention, no one will look twice at you."
"...Promise?"
"Promise."
"Okay, I'll wear it."
~**~
Fate almost dropped her hot dog when Nanoha and Hayate came out of the ladies' restroom in the convention center. "Wow," She took a few moments to observe her friend. Nanoha was in a skin tight red playboy bunny outfit, complete with a fluffy white tail and floppy ears. "Nanoha, you're... really cute." Her eyes instantly drifted downwards when she got closer.
"Kya!" The girl covered her breasts. "Even Fate-chan's eyes immediately went to them!"
"Ah, sorry!" Fate waved her hands helplessly. "I didn't mean to, honest!"
"Mou!" Nanoha looked like she was about to cry. "I can't believe I spilt my drink all over myself..."
"You look fine, really." Hayate soothed her as she looped an arm through hers and her other through Fate's. "Come on, let's not waste any more time."
~**~
The flash of Hayate's camera blinked rapidly as she took picture after picture of the people on stage. "Kyaaa! It's Konata from Lucky Star!" She started taking more snapshots.
"I don't know half these people..." Fate sighed out.
Nanoha laughed nervously. "But it's Hayate's birthday and she's having a blast so it's okay, huh?"
"Mm, that's why we came."
When the last person walked off the runway of the cosplay pageant the host came back out with a microphone. "And now the moment you've been waiting for! All of you amature cosplayers and tailors can show your stuff for the next half hour! Just come up to the stairs here and you can state the name of your costume and the tailor to show off your skills!"
"Kyaaaa!" Hayate turned to Nanoha. "Go up there!"
"Wait, what!?" Nanoha lost her smile all at once. "Ohhhhhh I'm not going to model. no way, no how."
"Please!?"
Nanoha crossed her arms, shaking her head. "No."
Fate leaned over to her friend and whispered in her ear. "Don't be like that, it's her birthday! She's about to cry!"
Looking back over at Hayate the bunny girl let out a soft sigh. "Fine, I understand. I'll do it."
"Yay!" Hayate hugged her tightly. "Thank you thank you thank you!"
"Yes, yes." Swallowing what was left of her pride she made her way over to the stage and waved at the host lightly before getting pulled up.
"You're name?" He asked as several people cheered at her.
"Ta-Takamachi Nanoha," She spoke into his mic nervously.
"And your outfit?" He moved the mic back to her.
"Bunny girl, made by Yagami Hayate!" Several more people screamed out, as if Hayate's name was well known around the cosplaying community for some reason. She got a small pat on her back so she started walking down the runway, smiling nervously at the people taking pictures of her. When she got to the end she waved at her friends before turning and walking the rest of the way back, slightly shaking her hips as she did so.
"She really did it!" Fate gasped out as her friend came back over to her. "Hayate, please tell me you got pictures?"
"About fifteen," She confirmed, hopping in place happily. "Nanoha, thank you!" She hugged her tightly once again. "This is the best birthday I've ever had!"
"Glad you liked it," She hugged her back and gave Fate an embarrassed grin.
"Excuse me, miss," A new voice came up, making all three turn to look at a group of men in suits. "I'm here representing the top selling gentleman's magazine and was wondering if you'd like to model for the next issue?"
"Model?" Nanoha pointed to herself. "Me?"
"Why yes ma'am," He confirmed.
Fate crossed her arms. "Wait, wait... 'gentleman's magazine'? Is that another name for soft core porno?"
Nanoha's face drained of all color. "Wait... You want to photo me naked?"
"Nude, but no soft core porn as your friend implied." He gave Nanoha a business card. "If you or your friends decide to do so, please call me."
"I'm fourteen!" Nanoha flailed out, making the man go white.
"Oh! Please forgive me!" he bowed to them and quickly made his way away from them.
Hayate looked at the card. "Wow, Nanoha, they're the top selling girly magazine on Midchildra!"
"No way, really?" Fate snatched the card and looked at it. "But Nanoha's not going to do it, right?"
"No! You're not either are you?!"
"Of course not!... Hayate?"
"Me!? No,no,no!"
All three laughed nervously.
~*six some years later*~
Tia blushed darkly as she tried to keep from looking at the random items on the walls and shelves around her. "Subaru..." She gripped her girlfriend's hand tighter. "I...I changed my mind, I don't think I'm ready for this just yet..."
"Oh come on, we're already here!" She grabbed an item from the shelf and showed it to her. "Oh, look at this! We can both use it at the same time!"
"Subaru!" With her free hand she covered her face. "Okay, okay, anything you want, let's just get out of here, I'm dieing!"
The blue haired girl giggled to herself. "Shy-butt. You still want to get a porno to watch together?"
"E-eh!? I don't... I mean, I wouldn't..." She looked at her friend's smiling face and blushed darkly. "...Maybe a magazine or something..."
"How about this?" Subaru lead her to another section.
"Why do you know your way around here!?" The gunslinger demanded, shocked.
"No reason," She started looking at the racks upon racks of naughty magazines. "Hey look, Playboy!"
"Is that a good brand name or something...?"
"Uhn," Subaru nodded and started flipping through it. "They only do poses and stuff, nothing really nasty like the other ones. I like it because of that."
"I see..." Tia looked at it with her. Moments passes as they carelessly flipped through, only stopping when a certain girl caught their attention. "Is that...!?"
"No, no way!" Subaru shook her head. "She wouldn't!"
"She couldn't." The two looked at the profile.
Name: Takamachi Nanoha
Age: 20
Status: Engaged, Fate Harlaown (see page 32)
Sexuality: Bi.
Comment: Nya haha!
Subaru blushed darkly. "We are so buying this..."
:eek: :dots:
Soo... where can I get a copy of this magazine....*notices everyone staring* Oy oy, you can't say that you don't want one..
Great work as always :D
If Fate's there as well how about Hayate:uhoh:
FlareKnight
2007-07-10, 06:41
No kidding I think now suddenly people are going to be looking for that magazine :).
Nice work again Satashi. Hard to stop smiling at seeing that. Plus seeing the faces of Teana and Subaru when they found that thing. Just hope Nanoha and Fate don't catch them checking that one out. Could be awkward.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 06:44
Nanoha blushed darkly as she looked down at the outfit her friend had offered her to wear. "Hayate-chan...I can't wear this..."
"Why not? It's top quality!" The short girl looked offended. "I was going to wear it tomorrow but your needs are greater than mine."
Nanoha pouted, eyes going down to the white shirt she was wearing that had cola spilled all over it. "But... It's so revealing..."
"You'll strut around in a two piece bikini but won't wear a bunny girl outfit?" Hayate put a hand on her hip and held up the costume once more. The uniform resembled a one piece bathing suit minus the straps at the top and only covering the breasts a little over half way. "These even have shiny pantyhose, so it actually covers more."
"But... My boobs..."
"Nanoha, no one will be staring at your breasts." She eyes her friend's chest. "Although you are rather gifted in that area for a fourteen year old."
"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha covered herself. "I don't want to hear that!"
"You want to wear this or not? It's an anime convention, no one will look twice at you."
"...Promise?"
"Promise."
"Okay, I'll wear it."
~**~
Fate almost dropped her hot dog when Nanoha and Hayate came out of the ladies' restroom in the convention center. "Wow," She took a few moments to observe her friend. Nanoha was in a skin tight red playboy bunny outfit, complete with a fluffy white tail and floppy ears. "Nanoha, you're... really cute." Her eyes instantly drifted downwards when she got closer.
"Kya!" The girl covered her breasts. "Even Fate-chan's eyes immediately went to them!"
"Ah, sorry!" Fate waved her hands helplessly. "I didn't mean to, honest!"
"Mou!" Nanoha looked like she was about to cry. "I can't believe I spilt my drink all over myself..."
"You look fine, really." Hayate soothed her as she looped an arm through hers and her other through Fate's. "Come on, let's not waste any more time."
~**~
The flash of Hayate's camera blinked rapidly as she took picture after picture of the people on stage. "Kyaaa! It's Konata from Lucky Star!" She started taking more snapshots.
"I don't know half these people..." Fate sighed out.
Nanoha laughed nervously. "But it's Hayate's birthday and she's having a blast so it's okay, huh?"
"Mm, that's why we came."
When the last person walked off the runway of the cosplay pageant the host came back out with a microphone. "And now the moment you've been waiting for! All of you amature cosplayers and tailors can show your stuff for the next half hour! Just come up to the stairs here and you can state the name of your costume and the tailor to show off your skills!"
"Kyaaaa!" Hayate turned to Nanoha. "Go up there!"
"Wait, what!?" Nanoha lost her smile all at once. "Ohhhhhh I'm not going to model. no way, no how."
"Please!?"
Nanoha crossed her arms, shaking her head. "No."
Fate leaned over to her friend and whispered in her ear. "Don't be like that, it's her birthday! She's about to cry!"
Looking back over at Hayate the bunny girl let out a soft sigh. "Fine, I understand. I'll do it."
"Yay!" Hayate hugged her tightly. "Thank you thank you thank you!"
"Yes, yes." Swallowing what was left of her pride she made her way over to the stage and waved at the host lightly before getting pulled up.
"You're name?" He asked as several people cheered at her.
"Ta-Takamachi Nanoha," She spoke into his mic nervously.
"And your outfit?" He moved the mic back to her.
"Bunny girl, made by Yagami Hayate!" Several more people screamed out, as if Hayate's name was well known around the cosplaying community for some reason. She got a small pat on her back so she started walking down the runway, smiling nervously at the people taking pictures of her. When she got to the end she waved at her friends before turning and walking the rest of the way back, slightly shaking her hips as she did so.
"She really did it!" Fate gasped out as her friend came back over to her. "Hayate, please tell me you got pictures?"
"About fifteen," She confirmed, hopping in place happily. "Nanoha, thank you!" She hugged her tightly once again. "This is the best birthday I've ever had!"
"Glad you liked it," She hugged her back and gave Fate an embarrassed grin.
"Excuse me, miss," A new voice came up, making all three turn to look at a group of men in suits. "I'm here representing the top selling gentleman's magazine and was wondering if you'd like to model for the next issue?"
"Model?" Nanoha pointed to herself. "Me?"
"Why yes ma'am," He confirmed.
Fate crossed her arms. "Wait, wait... 'gentleman's magazine'? Is that another name for soft core porno?"
Nanoha's face drained of all color. "Wait... You want to photo me naked?"
"Nude, but no soft core porn as your friend implied." He gave Nanoha a business card. "If you or your friends decide to do so, please call me."
"I'm fourteen!" Nanoha flailed out, making the man go white.
"Oh! Please forgive me!" he bowed to them and quickly made his way away from them.
Hayate looked at the card. "Wow, Nanoha, they're the top selling girly magazine on Midchildra!"
"No way, really?" Fate snatched the card and looked at it. "But Nanoha's not going to do it, right?"
"No! You're not either are you?!"
"Of course not!... Hayate?"
"Me!? No,no,no!"
All three laughed nervously.
~*six some years later*~
Tia blushed darkly as she tried to keep from looking at the random items on the walls and shelves around her. "Subaru..." She gripped her girlfriend's hand tighter. "I...I changed my mind, I don't think I'm ready for this just yet..."
"Oh come on, we're already here!" She grabbed an item from the shelf and showed it to her. "Oh, look at this! We can both use it at the same time!"
"Subaru!" With her free hand she covered her face. "Okay, okay, anything you want, let's just get out of here, I'm dieing!"
The blue haired girl giggled to herself. "Shy-butt. You still want to get a porno to watch together?"
"E-eh!? I don't... I mean, I wouldn't..." She looked at her friend's smiling face and blushed darkly. "...Maybe a magazine or something..."
"How about this?" Subaru lead her to another section.
"Why do you know your way around here!?" The gunslinger demanded, shocked.
"No reason," She started looking at the racks upon racks of naughty magazines. "Hey look, Playboy!"
"Is that a good brand name or something...?"
"Uhn," Subaru nodded and started flipping through it. "They only do poses and stuff, nothing really nasty like the other ones. I like it because of that."
"I see..." Tia looked at it with her. Moments passes as they carelessly flipped through, only stopping when a certain girl caught their attention. "Is that...!?"
"No, no way!" Subaru shook her head. "She wouldn't!"
"She couldn't." The two looked at the profile.
Name: Takamachi Nanoha
Age: 20
Status: Engaged, Fate Harlaown (see page 32)
Sexuality: Bi.
Comment: Nya haha!
Subaru blushed darkly. "We are so buying this..."
Always a blast when it's from you, USB-chan :D
OK, forgive me for this Satashi-san, but YOU'RE A GENIUS!!!! I'd love to see what happens afterwards :D
Enlighten me about something though: This is a joke and you don't plan to include it in the "6th Division" storyline right? :heh: (And why the heck did Nanoha accept to do that anyway? :heh:)
Nightengale
2007-07-10, 06:56
OK, forgive me for this Satashi-san, but YOU'RE A GENIUS!!!! I'd love to see what happens afterwards :D
Enlighten me about something though: This is a joke and you don't plan to include it in the "6th Division" storyline right? :heh: (And why the heck did Nanoha accept to do that anyway? :heh:)
I don't think 6th D's Nanoha had chest at 14 that makes people go..."wow."
Probably non-canon crack stuff...unless Nanoha was scarred by the incident SO BAD her breast size reduces itself. :eyespin:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 07:16
I don't think 6th D's Nanoha had chest at 14 that makes people go..."wow."
Probably non-canon crack stuff...unless Nanoha was scarred by the incident SO BAD her breast size reduces itself. :eyespin:
Good point. Hadn't thought about that :heh:
Uh.....that's not likely to happen (I think :heh:)
LoweGear
2007-07-10, 07:17
I don't think 6th D's Nanoha had chest at 14 that makes people go..."wow."
Probably non-canon crack stuff...unless Nanoha was scarred by the incident SO BAD her breast size reduces itself. :eyespin:
The human body can do strange things when subjected to extreme trauma... physical or otherwise :heh::heh::heh::uhoh::uhoh:
Julius Firefocht
2007-07-10, 08:28
http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=1035517#post1035517
I really don't know how to put this across...
Ok, lets just say the above link leads to the prologue of a project that combines the universe of Warhammer 40K and Suzumiya Haruhi. Numerous other anime series are involved, including our beloved Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS.
I must admit, the central figure is still the God-Empress Suzumiya Haruhi, but Nanoha, Fate and Hayate are involved as leaders in her army of galactic domination. Probably only Warhammer 40K fans have the slightest inking of what I am talking about, but I wrote the project in such a way that even readers unfamiliar with Warhammer 40K can at least get a measure of the story.
If all else fails, there is always Wikipedia for all your queries on the mystery of Warhammer 40k, the Primarchs and the Space Marine Legions.
In this story, Hayate is the Primarch of the Dark Angels Legion, Nanoha is the Primarch of the Empress' Children Legion and Fate is the Primarch of the Blood Angels Legion.
Please read and review. Also, feel free to PM me or reply to the thread in the link if you wish to contribute to this huge project. Thanks!
http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?p=1035517#post1035517
I really don't know how to put this across...
Ok, lets just say the above link leads to the prologue of a project that combines the universe of Warhammer 40K and Suzumiya Haruhi. Numerous other anime series are involved, including our beloved Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS.
I must admit, the central figure is still the God-Empress Suzumiya Haruhi, but Nanoha, Fate and Hayate are involved as leaders in her army of galactic domination. Probably only Warhammer 40K fans have the slightest inking of what I am talking about, but I wrote the project in such a way that even readers unfamiliar with Warhammer 40K can at least get a measure of the story.
If all else fails, there is always Wikipedia for all your queries on the mystery of Warhammer 40k, the Primarchs and the Space Marine Legions.
In this story, Hayate is the Primarch of the Dark Angels Legion, Nanoha is the Primarch of the Empress' Children Legion and Fate is the Primarch of the Blood Angels Legion.
Please read and review. Also, feel free to PM me or reply to the thread in the link if you wish to contribute to this huge project. Thanks!Looks impressive, and I like the idea that this could turn into a full table top. :D
In the OC thread, my OC, Kha Alexei Testarossa, is the last of the Holy Velka Imperium's "Light of Velka", which is the equivalent of the Imperium's Ordo Maelleus. I can contribute him to be a famous "Brother-Captain" in Haruhi's Grey Knights, if she has them. :D
And not just him; there are several characters that I've created or incorporated using the Imperial Guard "rojak" model, and those can fit into your storyline lock stock and barrel too! :) What do ya think?
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 10:17
The human body can do strange things when subjected to extreme trauma... physical or otherwise :heh::heh::heh::uhoh::uhoh:
Nanoha had the Asuka Langely effect :heh:
(That is to say, her chest 'deflated' to a much smaller size after we all got our share or something ;P)
EDIT:
And Satashi. I think you just made me laugh so hard, I think I'm dying over here... XD
^^ Glad it amused everyone. It's just a random crack-fic, so no , it's not going to be in 6th D. All my SNL's are just random things to make people laugh :P
(And why the heck did Nanoha accept to do that anyway? )
Fate was in it too so they probably did it to add some "spice" in their love life.
(NSFW just to be safe)Front cover of magazine:D
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/1183231819757.jpg
Just hope Nanoha and Fate don't catch them checking that one out. Could be awkward.
Sounds like a sequal?
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 13:32
I'd so buy a Playboy if that was on the cover :uhoh: /shot
FlareKnight
2007-07-10, 15:58
^^ Glad it amused everyone. It's just a random crack-fic, so no , it's not going to be in 6th D. All my SNL's are just random things to make people laugh :P
Fate was in it too so they probably did it to add some "spice" in their love life.
(NSFW just to be safe)Front cover of magazine:D
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/1183231819757.jpg
Sounds like a sequal?
Well if you decide to take it that way I wouldn't be against it. ;)
Can't help but agree with a cover like that......I'd agree with Teana and Subaru to pick up a copy.
"Good job everyone," Nanoha smiled at her forwards as they laid on the ground with light wisp of smoke coming from their charred clothes. "Let's call it a day here, so rest up for tomorrow all right?"
"Yes ma'am, thank you." All of them chorused together weakly.
"Here, let me help you," The teacher pulled Caro and Lutecia to their feet along with Elio. "Great team work you three, I'm proud."
"Thank you," They seemed pleased with themselves.
"And you two as well," Nanoha smiled at Subaru and Tia but lost it when both of them refused to meet her eye. "Well, go get some food and rest okay?"
"Yes ma'am."
When the group of students left her alone of the field Nanoha sighed out dejectedly. "Contact: Fate" She spoke softly as she walked to the exit of the field to start closing it down. When the monitor appeared in front of her she smiled at the blond, who was hunched over her desk working hard. "Faaaate," she sang out to her and grinned when her lover's lips turned up into a small smile before even looking at her. "Faaaaaaaaaate?"
"I see you Sweety," the blond laughed. "Oneeeee second," Her hands started typing faster on the keyboard while Nanoha waited on her. "There. Saved. How are you?" Her chair turned to the side so she could look at her properly. "Done training?"
"Mm. I have a question for you?"
"Shoot."
"Does it seem like Subaru and Tia are avoiding me?"
Fate thought about it a moment. "Well, Tia has been avoiding looking me in the eye lately when she talks to me about enforcer work."
"Same here!"
"Did we do something? They don't seem mad or anything."
"I'm going to check on Vivio and go pay them a visit, want to come?"
"Sorry Sweety, got to work late tonight."
"Hai, hai. Have fun." Nanoha blew her a kiss playfully.
"Thanks, tell Vivio I said hey and I love her."
"Will do," Nanoha waved one final time before letting the connection fade out.
~**~
"Mama!" Vivio instantly ran over to Nanoha and lifted her arms up in a request to be held.
"Hell, Vivio," She picked her up and balanced the small one against her hip as she checked the mail on her table. "Were you a good girl today?"
"Yes!"
Nanoha sighed at the bills. "I'll do those later. Anyway, did you get your lessons done?"
"Yes!"
"Very nice!" Nanoha walked over to the living room table and reached down with her free hand to pick up Vivio's small book and smiled at the very sloppy attempts to write the alphabet. "You're getting better by the day!" She lied to her happily. "Keep it up and you'll be able to do it without even trying!"
"Thank you," Vivio hugged her neck happily at the praise. "Can we play?"
"In a bit, I need to go visit Subaru and Tia, do you want to come?"
"Yeah!"
"Okay, let's go before they hit the showers."
~**~
Subaru opened her door and almost gasped out when she saw who was visiting. "Nanoha-san!"
"Hi," She waved with one hand before sitting Vivio on the ground. "Am I interrupting?"
"No, no, please come in." She opened the door widely and ushered them into the room.
"Hello," Tia greeted them with a salute. "Welcome."
Nanoha saluted her back even though she didn't have to. "Can I talk with you two a moment?"
"Yes?" Subaru sat down on her bed and offered Nanoha a chair to sit in. "What's on your mind?"
"The past few days it seems like you want to avoid Fate and I, have we done something to upset you?"
"Eh!?" Subaru quickly shook her head. "No, no!"
"Then why have you been avoiding eye contact?"
Tia blushed darkly. "That's because..."
"Mama!" Vivio sudden called out to her.
"In a second Baby,"
"In magazine!" Vivio kept on, running up to her and showing the issue of playboy that had her and Fate on the cover.
Nanoha's face drained of color as she took it. "Vi-Vivio, don't go through other people's things, okay? That's very rude."
"Ah!?" The small girl instantly bowed towards the two girls who were too shocked to move. "I'm very sorry."
"Ah... that is..." Subaru tried to think of what to say.
"The cover was blanked out!" Tia added in quickly.
"Y-yeah!" Subaru nodded. "Please don't be mad!"
"I'm not mad," Nanoha flipped through it. "I have a copy as well, I just didn't expect anyone here to get it."
"We were...." Tia scratched her cheek, trailing off.
Nanoha giggled. "Experimenting?" She smiled at the red faces, pleased to see them embarrassed after she went through the same thing. "It's perfectly healthy for girls your age," She encouraged them, knowing full well it was only making them blush darker. "Everyone at some point in their relationship wants something kinky." She pointed at the magazine. "That's why we did this. I never dreamed you two would be looking at it, though."
"S-sorry... We don't...you know... at it..." Tia stumbled on her words.
"Then why are the pages sticking together?" Nanoha pondered, trying to embarrass them more so she wouldn't feel it as much.
"Ah!" Subaru waved her hands out again. "I didn't do that!"
"I didn't say you did," Nanoha grinned at her, sending Subaru into a small fit. "Well, I guess I can't complain. I'm a little flattered actually. I wonder what Fate would say."
"Please don't tell her!" Tia almost screamed.
Nanoha turned the pages, but stopped when she got to Fate's section. "... Wha...?" Suddenly she looked rather angry. "Why are Fate's pages all wrinkled and matted together!?"
"She did it!" Subaru pointed at Tia instantly.
"SUBARU!"
"Mou! Everyone always looks at her," She crossed her arms. "She got ten pages and I only got six. What am I not good enough?"
"No, no," Subaru tried to comfort her. "I only look at you when I masturbate!"
"You look at me when you do it?" Nanoha raised an eyebrow.
"Oh my god!" Subaru covered her mouth. "I mean... I don't... With Tia... We just..."
Nanoha laughed loudly and closed the magazine, tossing it on the desk. "Okay, I've teased enough to make up for you seeing that." Standing, she ruffled Subaru's hair and smiled at Tia.
"You were just teasing us!?"
The teacher nodded. "For now on, don't avoid us for anything okay?"
"...Yes ma'am..." She looked down. "Sorry to have embarrassed you."
"Don't mind," Nanoha picked up Vivio again. "Those aren't really that embarrassing, you can't even see anything in them. The real pictures no one will see."
"Wait, real pictures?"
Nanoha grinned. "Secret." Winking, she walked to the door. "We'll keep this between us?"
"PLEASE!"
~**~
Nanoha smiled at Fate when she walked up the stairs to their bedroom. "Long day?"
"Very," The blond started stripping immediately. "I can't wait to get out of these stiff clothes...Geeze, the amount of paperwork lately has been just stupid."
"I'm sorry," Nanoha grinned to herself, watching Fate strip.
"...Why are you smiling like that?"
"Because," She giggled.
"Because why?"
"Because Vivio is already asleep in her bed..."
"Annnnd?" She raised an eyebrow at her. Nanoha simply smiled at her evilly, turning the monitor she was watching so Fate could see as well. "Nanoha! Why are you watching that!?"
"I want to," She kept smiling. "Want to... make another recording tonight?" Her voice was playful, inviting.
"Right now!?"
Nanoha laid back on the bed, moving a pillow and revealing several objects. "I bought handcuffs...."
Fate jumped onto her, smirking. "Are you serious!?"
"Uhn! Cuff me baby!"
"Woohoo! Bardiche, start recording!"
"...Yes sir..." The mechanical voice sounded reluctant.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 17:00
"Good job everyone," Nanoha smiled at her forwards as they laid on the ground with light wisp of smoke coming from their charred clothes. "Let's call it a day here, so rest up for tomorrow all right?"
"Yes ma'am, thank you." All of them chorused together weakly.
"Here, let me help you," The teacher pulled Caro and Lutecia to their feet along with Elio. "Great team work you three, I'm proud."
"Thank you," They seemed pleased with themselves.
"And you two as well," Nanoha smiled at Subaru and Tia but lost it when both of them refused to meet her eye. "Well, go get some food and rest okay?"
"Yes ma'am."
When the group of students left her alone of the field Nanoha sighed out dejectedly. "Contact: Fate" She spoke softly as she walked to the exit of the field to start closing it down. When the monitor appeared in front of her she smiled at the blond, who was hunched over her desk working hard. "Faaaate," she sang out to her and grinned when her lover's lips turned up into a small smile before even looking at her. "Faaaaaaaaaate?"
"I see you Sweety," the blond laughed. "Oneeeee second," Her hands started typing faster on the keyboard while Nanoha waited on her. "There. Saved. How are you?" Her chair turned to the side so she could look at her properly. "Done training?"
"Mm. I have a question for you?"
"Shoot."
"Does it seem like Subaru and Tia are avoiding me?"
Fate thought about it a moment. "Well, Tia has been avoiding looking me in the eye lately when she talks to me about enforcer work."
"Same here!"
"Did we do something? They don't seem mad or anything."
"I'm going to check on Vivio and go pay them a visit, want to come?"
"Sorry Sweety, got to work late tonight."
"Hai, hai. Have fun." Nanoha blew her a kiss playfully.
"Thanks, tell Vivio I said hey and I love her."
"Will do," Nanoha waved one final time before letting the connection fade out.
~**~
"Mama!" Vivio instantly ran over to Nanoha and lifted her arms up in a request to be held.
"Hell, Vivio," She picked her up and balanced the small one against her hip as she checked the mail on her table. "Were you a good girl today?"
"Yes!"
Nanoha sighed at the bills. "I'll do those later. Anyway, did you get your lessons done?"
"Yes!"
"Very nice!" Nanoha walked over to the living room table and reached down with her free hand to pick up Vivio's small book and smiled at the very sloppy attempts to write the alphabet. "You're getting better by the day!" She lied to her happily. "Keep it up and you'll be able to do it without even trying!"
"Thank you," Vivio hugged her neck happily at the praise. "Can we play?"
"In a bit, I need to go visit Subaru and Tia, do you want to come?"
"Yeah!"
"Okay, let's go before they hit the showers."
~**~
Subaru opened her door and almost gasped out when she saw who was visiting. "Nanoha-san!"
"Hi," She waved with one hand before sitting Vivio on the ground. "Am I interrupting?"
"No, no, please come in." She opened the door widely and ushered them into the room.
"Hello," Tia greeted them with a salute. "Welcome."
Nanoha saluted her back even though she didn't have to. "Can I talk with you two a moment?"
"Yes?" Subaru sat down on her bed and offered Nanoha a chair to sit in. "What's on your mind?"
"The past few days it seems like you want to avoid Fate and I, have we done something to upset you?"
"Eh!?" Subaru quickly shook her head. "No, no!"
"Then why have you been avoiding eye contact?"
Tia blushed darkly. "That's because..."
"Mama!" Vivio sudden called out to her.
"In a second Baby,"
"In magazine!" Vivio kept on, running up to her and showing the issue of playboy that had her and Fate on the cover.
Nanoha's face drained of color as she took it. "Vi-Vivio, don't go through other people's things, okay? That's very rude."
"Ah!?" The small girl instantly bowed towards the two girls who were too shocked to move. "I'm very sorry."
"Ah... that is..." Subaru tried to think of what to say.
"The cover was blanked out!" Tia added in quickly.
"Y-yeah!" Subaru nodded. "Please don't be mad!"
"I'm not mad," Nanoha flipped through it. "I have a copy as well, I just didn't expect anyone here to get it."
"We were...." Tia scratched her cheek, trailing off.
Nanoha giggled. "Experimenting?" She smiled at the red faces, pleased to see them embarrassed after she went through the same thing. "It's perfectly healthy for girls your age," She encouraged them, knowing full well it was only making them blush darker. "Everyone at some point in their relationship wants something kinky." She pointed at the magazine. "That's why we did this. I never dreamed you two would be looking at it, though."
"S-sorry... We don't...you know... at it..." Tia stumbled on her words.
"Then why are the pages sticking together?" Nanoha pondered, trying to embarrass them more so she wouldn't feel it as much.
"Ah!" Subaru waved her hands out again. "I didn't do that!"
"I didn't say you did," Nanoha grinned at her, sending Subaru into a small fit. "Well, I guess I can't complain. I'm a little flattered actually. I wonder what Fate would say."
"Please don't tell her!" Tia almost screamed.
Nanoha turned the pages, but stopped when she got to Fate's section. "... Wha...?" Suddenly she looked rather angry. "Why are Fate's pages all wrinkled and matted together!?"
"She did it!" Subaru pointed at Tia instantly.
"SUBARU!"
"Mou! Everyone always looks at her," She crossed her arms. "She got ten pages and I only got six. What am I not good enough?"
"No, no," Subaru tried to comfort her. "I only look at you when I masturbate!"
"You look at me when you do it?" Nanoha raised an eyebrow.
"Oh my god!" Subaru covered her mouth. "I mean... I don't... With Tia... We just..."
Nanoha laughed loudly and closed the magazine, tossing it on the desk. "Okay, I've teased enough to make up for you seeing that." Standing, she ruffled Subaru's hair and smiled at Tia.
"You were just teasing us!?"
The teacher nodded. "For now on, don't avoid us for anything okay?"
"...Yes ma'am..." She looked down. "Sorry to have embarrassed you."
"Don't mind," Nanoha picked up Vivio again. "Those aren't really that embarrassing, you can't even see anything in them. The real pictures no one will see."
"Wait, real pictures?"
Nanoha grinned. "Secret." Winking, she walked to the door. "We'll keep this between us?"
"PLEASE!"
~**~
Nanoha smiled at Fate when she walked up the stairs to their bedroom. "Long day?"
"Very," The blond started stripping immediately. "I can't wait to get out of these stiff clothes...Geeze, the amount of paperwork lately has been just stupid."
"I'm sorry," Nanoha grinned to herself, watching Fate strip.
"...Why are you smiling like that?"
"Because," She giggled.
"Because why?"
"Because Vivio is already asleep in her bed..."
"Annnnd?" She raised an eyebrow at her. Nanoha simply smiled at her evilly, turning the monitor she was watching so Fate could see as well. "Nanoha! Why are you watching that!?"
"I want to," She kept smiling. "Want to... make another recording tonight?" Her voice was playful, inviting.
"Right now!?"
Nanoha laid back on the bed, moving a pillow and revealing several objects. "I bought handcuffs...."
Fate jumped onto her, smirking. "Are you serious!?"
"Uhn! Cuff me baby!"
"Woohoo! Bardiche, start recording!"
"...Yes sir..." The mechanical voice sounded reluctant.
OK.......Unexpected :heh: Jeez, I wouldn't have thought Subaru and Tia were into that sort of stuff.....but then again, I'm not sure it's a bad thing *shrug*
The bunny couple strikes again! :D Nanoha always manages to get Fate to do whatever she wants :D So funny XD!
Excellent short Satashi-san :D
EDIT: Forgot to mention: Poor Bardiche :heh: I feel sorry for him (It, whatever) :heh:
OK.......Unexpected :heh: Jeez, I wouldn't have thought Subaru and Tia were into that sort of stuff.....but then again, I'm not sure it's a bad thing *shrug*
The bunny couple strikes again! :D Nanoha always manages to get Fate to do whatever she wants :D So funny XD!
Excellent short Satashi-san :D
EDIT: Forgot to mention: Poor Bardiche :heh: I feel sorry for him (It, whatever) :heh:
I don't really like that short :P almost didn't post it >.<
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 17:08
I don't really like that short :P almost didn't post it >.<
I don't know, I found it very funny ^^ (Although, yes, I admit that there're some parts that were really..................awkward) :heh:
I don't know, I found it very funny ^^ (Although, yes, I admit that there're some parts that were really..................awkward) :heh:
My mind wandered while doing it instead of keeping it short and pointless I added a little depth to it ( Vivio trying to learn to write) which made the normal sensless funny parts just seem.... out of place)
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 17:34
My mind wandered while doing it instead of keeping it short and pointless I added a little depth to it ( Vivio trying to learn to write) which made the normal sensless funny parts just seem.... out of place)
Meh, I'm guessing shorts like this one are good once in a while ^^ Write whatever jumps to your mind, no one will judge you. Nobody as that right anyway.
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 17:42
Well they might judge you as a bit of a pervert maybe... :heh:
But I found it very funny. XD Looks like Subaru still idolizes Nanoha :uhoh:
Well they might judge you as a bit of a pervert maybe... :heh:
But I found it very funny. XD Looks like Subaru still idolizes Nanoha :uhoh:
Eh, I am a little bit, but for the most part, I really only add that in for kicks and laughs. If I'm serious about anything sexual I seperate it into it's own story. I've done 3 lemons before but none of them are graphic at all; I think the most perverted statement ever was in that short when Subaru said what she did looking at Nanoha. If I'm serious about it, I'd prefer only mature people to read it, so I don't get any stupid request for pwp lemon scenes.
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 17:52
3 lemons eh? I only seen one :uhoh: Which was so much better then any PWP or lemon I've seen before.
And everyone is a pervert in some fiber of their being... =o I know I am, no need to lie to myself :heh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 17:59
krisslanza is right. Everybody is a bit of a pervert (I dare anyone to deny it :D) but it's okay. There's nothing wrong with that ^^ For the most part, it works really well (At least with me :heh:. Every time I read those shorts, I end up howling with laughter or rolling on the floor XD!) So I'll say: Keep up the good work ^^
^_^ thankies.
I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.
Violin
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 18:10
A Violin eh? XD
On a off-topic note, what are all the titles for the knights? I only recall Vita (Iron Knight) and Signum (Blade Knight)... Right?
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 18:18
^_^ thankies.
I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.
Violin
Yay! ^^ Thanks Satashi-san ^^ I'm really fond of the small instrument ^^
A Violin eh? XD
On a off-topic note, what are all the titles for the knights? I only recall Vita (Iron Knight) and Signum (Blade Knight)... Right?
Signum: Blazing Flame General.
Vita: Scarlet Iron Knight.
.......Or so I believe :heh: Are there titles for all four Wolkenritter?
krisslanza
2007-07-10, 18:21
They say them all in ep... 12 or 13 when they all attack the out of control Book of Darkness defense program. I just can't remember them. XD
FlareKnight
2007-07-10, 18:21
Well I thought it was a good funny short. Could almost see Subaru and Teana's heads exploding from embarrassment :). Subaru even fingering out Teana was pretty hilarious. I do feel bad for Bardiche for some reason...:heh:
I don't really like that short :P almost didn't post it >.<
I don't like them at all either, but even if I prefer to read other kind of fics, I enjoyed your last 2 SNLs posted here (or it was only 1 divided in 2 parts?),
I don't know, I don't like to see them being so perv.
Your NxF lemon was an exception, it was just cute ^_^
^_^ thankies.
I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.
Violin
Wait, and my Chello? =(
Saludos, Haru
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 18:27
Wait, and my Chello? =(
Saludos, Haru
Do you mean the Cello or are you talking about the Violonchelo (<--Spanish)? (same instrument, but in different languages its pronounced and written slightly different)
And you also mean about that cute pic with Nanoha and Fate playing respectively the Violin and the Cello, correct? I love that pic ^^
*opens up episodes and finds it* Here you go,
Shielding Guardian Beast, Zafira
Shamal, the knight of the Lake
Wait, and my Chello? =(
I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 18:41
*opens up episodes and finds it* Here you go,
Shielding Guardian Beast, Zafira
Shamal, the knight of the Lake
So they did have titles :heh: Had forgotten >< :heh:
I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.
So true.... A shame really, but it's natural. Cello seems difficult to play anyway. It goes with the "F clef" instead of the "G clef" that's used for the Violin *shrugs*
I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.
Yes, I knew she actually don't have enough time for nothing, but maybe she knew how to play Cello from before, like from one of Alicia's memory, or she can learned it when she was younger from a random character who knew how to play it for no apparent reason, like Tsuruya or Kyon I mean Amy or Chrono. I think you could have better ideas about hot to make it possible, but I don’t know if you want to include it.
Saludos, Haru
"Yes, I knew" = "Yes, I know"
"don't have enough"= "didn't have enough"
"don't have enough time for nothing" = "didn't have enough time for anything" , double negative.
"or she can learned " = "Or she could have learned" or "Or she learned"
Those are good ideas, and I really wouldn't mind her knowing how to play, but adding too much fictinal stuff at once can lead to making things unbeleiveable. Just one of the Ace of Aces knowing how to play an instrument is highly unlikely, as Nanoha really did nothing but train, eat, and sleep growing up.
In 6th D, Fate loves listening to music, so I think it'd make more sense for her to listen to Nanoha play rather than make her own. (Kind of like myself, I can't stand silence, and I have an mp3 player with me everywhere I go. I sleep with music playing in the background and my playlist on my comptuer is almost 15 days long lol. But I have no desire to create music myself)
[Edit] Since Redemption is starting to be made, thought I'd share something about it as well as a slight teaser of hints of what is going to happen coming up
"I can save them!"
'No! Calm down! Calm down, you're getting out of control!'
"Let me protect your friends! I won't allow anything to hurt you anymore!"
Nanoha fell forward, barly catching herself as black mist started enveloping her body. 'No, please! Not like this! I don't want to kill them!'
"I'm tired of seeing you hurt! I'll burn in hell for my actions if that's what it takes! Let me out! I won't stand by and watch them DIE"
The mage looked at the spazzing girl in front of him with a passive glare. "Are you quite done?" He asked mono toned.
"Move!" Nanoha slung out her arm, looking up with yellow flecked eyes. "Get out of my way," The echoing sound of a tuning fork rang around them. "Or," Her voice dropped, snarling as fangs showed around her lips. "I'll eat you alive!"
'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! ' Three orange strips came out from Skeith's wrist, turning quickly as red and green hexagons appeared between them. 'Stop! Stop! Stop!' Once formed, a black ball of energy manifest at her clawed hand. 'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop!
"Data..."Skeith's voice dripped with Venom. "...Drain"
Aaron008R
2007-07-10, 20:06
[Edit] Since Redemption is starting to be made, thought I'd share something about it as well as a slight teaser of hints of what is going to happen coming up
"I can save them!"
'No! Calm down! Calm down, you're getting out of control!'
"Let me protect your friends! I won't allow anything to hurt you anymore!"
Nanoha fell forward, barly catching herself as black mist started enveloping her body. 'No, please! Not like this! I don't want to kill them!'
"I'm tired of seeing you hurt! I'll burn in hell for my actions if that's what it takes! Let me out! I won't stand by and watch them DIE"
The mage looked at the spazzing girl in front of him with a passive glare. "Are you quite done?" He asked mono toned.
"Move!" Nanoha slung out her arm, looking up with yellow flecked eyes. "Get out of my way," The echoing sound of a tuning fork rang around them. "Or," Her voice dropped, snarling as fangs showed around her lips. "I'll eat you alive!"
'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! ' Three orange strips came out from Skeith's wrist, turning quickly as red and green hexagons appeared between them. 'Stop! Stop! Stop!' Once formed, a black ball of energy manifest at her clawed hand. 'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop!
"Data..."Skeith's voice dripped with Venom. "...Drain"
Ha. Reminds me of the Haseo/Skeith versus Khun/Magus fight.:D Hopefully, this won't be too traumatizing for Nanoha.:uhoh: By the way, are you planning on converting more of the G.U. avatars and implementing them in 6th Division?
Those are good ideas, and I really wouldn't mind her knowing how to play, but adding too much fictinal stuff at once can lead to making things unbeleiveable. Just one of the Ace of Aces knowing how to play an instrument is highly unlikely, as Nanoha really did nothing but train, eat, and sleep growing up.
In 6th D, Fate loves listening to music, so I think it'd make more sense for her to listen to Nanoha play rather than make her own. (Kind of like myself, I can't stand silence, and I have an mp3 player with me everywhere I go. I sleep with music playing in the background and my playlist on my comptuer is almost 15 days long lol. But I have no desire to create music myself)
Well, it's your decision, it only depends on the characterization you want for the Fate on your Universe, I think both playing an instrument would be cuter than only one, but I don’t know what the other people would prefer.
Repost:
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Saludos, Haru
Ha. Reminds me of the Haseo/Skeith versus Khun/Magus fight.:D Hopefully, this won't be too traumatizing for Nanoha.:uhoh: By the way, are you planning on converting more of the G.U. avatars and implementing them in 6th Division?
"How do you plan to fight something that can call on these 'avatars' to increase their power!?"
Yuuno stopped walking and turned around to face Fate. "We'll get our own."
Aaron008R
2007-07-10, 20:13
"How do you plan to fight something that can call on these 'avatars' to increase their power!?"
Yuuno stopped walking and turned around to face Fate. "We'll get our own."
ACK!!!::twitch:
T-that many?!:eek:
Just when you thought nothing could get worse than Scaglietti...:uhoh:
Knowing G.U. has spoiled me more than I expected.:heh: Thanks, Satashi!:D
ACK!!!::twitch:
T-that many?!:eek:
Just when you thought nothing could get worse than Scaglietti...:uhoh:
Knowing G.U. has spoiled me more than I expected.:heh: Thanks, Satashi!:D
Not set in stone yet, this is only one possibility. I may end up not using it as to make Nanoha's Avatar be that much more important.
But since you know GU, yeah, that's what they're fighting :P
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 21:03
Since I don't know G.U. I don't have the slightest idea what you're talking about and I don't want to find out before the time comes :heh: :D
:topicoff:
@Satashi-san: .........That's one heck of a long playlist :heh: I like both listening to music and making it :P That's why I love the Violin, I'm currently practicing "Air (for the G string)" from Bach ^^
Very interesting teasers you got there Satashi :D. That's got me even more interested and impatient to read Redemption :D
@BPHaru: Very nice pic.
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 22:10
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Part 2 PLEASE!!! :D This is too good XD! (Over-protective Nanoha-mama FTW! :D) I'm laughing so much my sides hurt. You're out to kill us aren't you Satashi-san? :heh:
Nice avi btw ^^
Part 2 PLEASE!!! :D This is too good XD! (Over-protective Nanoha-mama FTW! :D) I'm laughing so much my sides hurt. You're out to kill us aren't you Satashi-san? :heh:
Nice avi btw ^^
:P
Vivio: The adventures in High School!
It's just an exscuse to show everyone all grown up. :P
LoweGear
2007-07-10, 22:22
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Fate should've taught that Jock to not mess around with her daughter at Bardiche-point :heh::heh: But still, Hot Chika Fate FTW! :D
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 22:28
Fate should've taught that Jock to not mess around with her daughter at Bardiche-point :heh::heh: But still, Hot Chika Fate FTW! :D
I wish Nanoha had been there as well. I would've loved to see that jerk-off being on the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker, not only for Vivio but mainly because of the way he described Fate :D
I wish Nanoha had been there as well. I would've loved to see that jerk-off being on the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker, not only for Vivio but mainly because of the way he described Fate :D
That's probably the reason Vivio can't get a date :3
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 22:41
That's probably the reason Vivio can't get a date :3
Ah such hardships the child has to endure.........:heh:
But it's funny anyway :P
Yes, I'm evil XD!
Nice one Sa-nyan, happy family fics are always a WIN! http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q314/BPHaru/emoticons/LS-emoticon-Good-Job.jpg
(it seema to be their oficial name =O )
I wish Nanoha had been there as well. I would've loved to see that jerk-off being on the wrong end of a Starlight Breaker, not only for Vivio but mainly because of the way he described Fate :D
LOL
That would be priceless!
If after all it’s only for fun it would be ok.
Requesting remake!!! (joke, but I would pay you to write it xD)
Saludos, Haru
Dark Wing
2007-07-10, 23:03
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Oh man I wanted to a teenage Vivio fic...oh well i guess I switch over to Vivio fic plan B.:cool:
Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"
Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"
"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."
"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.
"I hate when you do that!"
"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"
"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"
"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"
"No."
"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"
"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.
"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.
"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."
A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."
"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"
"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"
"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."
"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.
"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.
Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"
"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."
Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"
Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"
"All day, why?"
"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"
~**~
"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.
"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.
Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"
"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.
"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"
"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.
"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"
"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"
"Yes sir!"
~**~
"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.
Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."
"That's a teenager for you."
"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"
"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."
"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"
"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."
"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"
"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"
"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"
"Oh yeah, I forgot..."
"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"
"You have lots of freedom!"
"You won't let me get a car!"
"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."
"Fate-mama took me!"
"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.
"And you don't let me wear make up!"
Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."
"And you come in my room without knocking!"
"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"
"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"
"You're too young to be thinking about sex."
"How old were you when you had your first time?"
"That's not important."
"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"
Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-10, 23:35
Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"
Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"
"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."
"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.
"I hate when you do that!"
"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"
"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"
"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"
"No."
"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"
"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.
"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.
"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."
A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."
"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"
"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"
"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."
"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.
"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.
Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"
"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."
Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"
Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"
"All day, why?"
"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"
~**~
"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.
"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.
Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"
"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.
"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"
"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.
"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"
"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"
"Yes sir!"
~**~
"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.
Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."
"That's a teenager for you."
"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"
"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."
"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"
"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."
"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"
"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"
"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"
"Oh yeah, I forgot..."
"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"
"You have lots of freedom!"
"You won't let me get a car!"
"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."
"Fate-mama took me!"
"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.
"And you don't let me wear make up!"
Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."
"And you come in my room without knocking!"
"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"
"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"
"You're too young to be thinking about sex."
"How old were you when you had your first time?"
"That's not important."
"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"
Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."
MORE!!! :D
I'm so going to die from laughter XD! I'll start making my will so I'll be ready when part 3 comes out :D :heh: (Nanoha-mama is the best XD!!!!!)
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"
Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"
"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."
"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.
"I hate when you do that!"
"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"
"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"
"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"
"No."
"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"
"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.
"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.
"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."
A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."
"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"
"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"
"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."
"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.
"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.
Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"
"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."
Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"
Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"
"All day, why?"
"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"
~**~
"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.
"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.
Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"
"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.
"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"
"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.
"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"
"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"
"Yes sir!"
~**~
"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.
Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."
"That's a teenager for you."
"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"
"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."
"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"
"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."
"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"
"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"
"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"
"Oh yeah, I forgot..."
"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"
"You have lots of freedom!"
"You won't let me get a car!"
"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."
"Fate-mama took me!"
"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.
"And you don't let me wear make up!"
Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."
"And you come in my room without knocking!"
"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"
"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"
"You're too young to be thinking about sex."
"How old were you when you had your first time?"
"That's not important."
"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"
Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."Vivio action FTW! Funny how both our impressions of her agree to the point! :eek:
I do hope Vivio gets a date. After all, there's always the male half of the Hallaoun twins which must've inherited Chro-suke 1337 skilz from his Pops. :D
LoweGear
2007-07-10, 23:56
Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"
Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"
"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."
"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.
"I hate when you do that!"
"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"
"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"
"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"
"No."
"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"
"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.
"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.
"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."
A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."
"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"
"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"
"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."
"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.
"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.
Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"
"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."
Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"
Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"
"All day, why?"
"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"
~**~
"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.
"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.
Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"
"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.
"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"
"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.
"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"
"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"
"Yes sir!"
~**~
"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.
Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."
"That's a teenager for you."
"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"
"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."
"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"
"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."
"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"
"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"
"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"
"Oh yeah, I forgot..."
"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"
"You have lots of freedom!"
"You won't let me get a car!"
"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."
"Fate-mama took me!"
"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.
"And you don't let me wear make up!"
Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."
"And you come in my room without knocking!"
"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"
"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"
"You're too young to be thinking about sex."
"How old were you when you had your first time?"
"That's not important."
"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"
Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."
Vivio as waitress FTMFW!!! :D And Yuuno is quite the snitch isn't he? Lutecia and Caro though are :twitch::twitch::uhoh:
Ganbatte Vivio!!!! :D
I do hope Vivio gets a date. After all, there's always the male half of the Hallaoun twins which must've inherited Chro-suke 1337 skilz from his Pops. :D
At least it should be just that. If he inherits T3H MASK... :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
Fuyu no Sora
2007-07-11, 00:04
At least it should be just that. If he inherits T3H MASK... :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
If that happens, I'd feel sorry for the poor boy :heh: It already got Pops in enough trouble, so.....yeah :heh:
Aaron008R
2007-07-11, 00:06
"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."
"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"
"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."
"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."
"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.
"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.
"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"
"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"
"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.
"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"
"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"
"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"
"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."
The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."
"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."
"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"
"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"
"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.
"Oh shush, you don't need it."
"I'm going to be dateless!"
"You'll find someone!"
Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"
"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."
"You didn't?"
Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."
"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."
"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."
"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."
"You'll make your mother happy."
"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."
To be continued....
Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"
Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"
"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."
"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.
"I hate when you do that!"
"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"
"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"
"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"
"No."
"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"
"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.
"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.
"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."
A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."
"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"
"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"
"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."
"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.
"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.
Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"
"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."
Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"
Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"
"All day, why?"
"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"
~**~
"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.
"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.
Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"
"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.
"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"
"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.
"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"
"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"
"Yes sir!"
~**~
"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.
Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."
"That's a teenager for you."
"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"
"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."
"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"
"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."
"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"
"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"
"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"
"Oh yeah, I forgot..."
"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"
"You have lots of freedom!"
"You won't let me get a car!"
"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."
"Fate-mama took me!"
"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.
"And you don't let me wear make up!"
Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."
"And you come in my room without knocking!"
"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"
"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"
"You're too young to be thinking about sex."
"How old were you when you had your first time?"
"That's not important."
"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"
Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."
Cool!:D
Vivio is meeting the hardships of adolescence.:heh:
And this goes to prove that Nanoha and Fate aren't really suited for setting examples for young teenagers.:heh: (Nanoha is overprotective!:heh:)
By the way, what in the world is the matter with Caro and Lutecia?:twitch: Their methods are kinda...:uhoh: (Well, those things DID happen when they were kids.:heh:)
Good work.:)
Vivio turned around in the shower, lathering her hair up with shampoo as she sang happily. “I wish that you were my lollipop, sweet things I will never get enough! If you show me to the sugar tree, will you give me a soda pop for free?” Her song died got louder when she started rinsing out the giant mass of hair that she possessed. It was almost seven in the morning now, a good hour and a half past when everyone else on the military base woke up, giving her the showers all to herself. Once done she dried herself off and pulled her hair up into a type of turban after getting some clothes on and heading back to the room she had to herself. Despite not being military she still lived on base, given one of the forward rooms by Hayate as a present for becoming thirteen. Although she spent most of her time in her mother's large apartment she still had a place to call her own.
'Today is going to be a good day,' She thought to herself after getting into her room and drying her hair with a blow dryer. 'Cheerleader practice after school so I can't forget my uniform... What else? Oh yeah, Sarah wanted to get a study group together and...Is that knocking?' Vivio turned to the door and cut off her hair dryer, hearing a steady knock on her door. Trotting over to it, she opened it up to find her mothers. “Good morning.”
“About time,” Nanoha sighed. “We've been knocking for five minutes.”
“Couldn't be, I havn't been here for five minutes!”
“Nanoha, teenagers need a little privacy,” Fate whispered to her.
“Yes, see, I like that.” Vivio pointed to Fate. “Listen to Fate-mama, I need privacy sometimes.”
“You know the rules, no locking your door to us,” Nanoha countered.
“I must have set it on lock all by accident Nanoha-mama, I didn't mean to lock you out. Besides, what if I wanted to be alone?”
“Oh!” Fate blushed. “She was probably masturbating,”
“Fate!” Nanoha scolded her. “Don't say that!”
“I can hear you!” Vivio almost screamed. “ I was not doing that! I'm sixteen, not twelve, if I was you don't need to know about it!”
“Oh, I'm sorry sweetheart,” Fate apologized. “WE don't have to call it that if it makes you uncomfortable. How about... 'Vivio's happy time'?”
Nanoha looked at Fate in shock. “Fate, stop while you're behind.”
Vivio blushed darkly, grabbing her backpack. “Just take me to school, please!”
“I'm sorry Vivio-dear!” Fate ran to catch up with her. “I didn't mean to embarrass you!”
“Just drop it!” She pleaded loudly, still red.
~**~
“God, I can't believe my parents,” Vivio complained sadly when she sat at the lunchroom table. “Whenever Nanoha-mama pesters me, Fate-mama tries to help and ends up embarrassing the life out of me. It never fails!” Groaning she opened her lunch box and couldn't help but smile at the deluxe lunch special that the two of them made for her. “If I didn't love them to pieces, I'd run away, I swear.”
“Whatever,” Sarah, a blond that shared a class with Vivio, rolled her eyes. “You go on and on about how awesome they are all the time, it's really quite funny.”
“I do not go on and on about them!”
“Whatever,” A new person sat down. “Vivio is a mama's girl through and through.”
“Jazz-chan!” Vivio sent her second best friend a death glare when she stole some of her food. The girl nicknamed 'Jazz' had light blue hair and matching eyes. Although popular enough to hang out with anyone at the school thanks to her legendary dancing skills, she chose to spend her time with Vivio and Sarah.
A boy made his way over to the group slowly and waved at them when close enough. “Um, hello girls.”
“Rin-kun,” Vivio greeted the class president. “What can we do for you?”
“Well, Vivio-san,” He began nervously, looking over to the side where three boys all gave him a thumbs up. “I was thinking...That we could go to the dance together if you wanted?”
Vivio almost dropped her chopsticks. “You're asking me to the dance!?”
“If-you-have-someone-else-already-I-understand!” His sentence blurred in on itself in his hurry to speak it.
“No! No, I'm free! I'll go with you!” She almost yelled it out, making the people close around them all turn and stare.
“Great! Well then, I'll, um, pick you up at six Friday then?”
“Yeah! I mean, um, yes. Six sounds good.” Vivio nodded at him.
“Then... I'll see you later!” He turned and waved at her before quickly darting over to his group of people.
“Rin-kun?” Jazz pondered while nibbling on her sandwich. “Well, I guess that's okay. He is rather cute.”
“I hate a date!” Vivio squealed out happily. “Oh my god, I have a date!” Her words sudden sounded horrified. “I don't know how to dance! Jazz-chan, teach me!”
“What, me?” She pointed to herself. “I can't, I have after school activities you know that! By the time your cheer leading is over and my clubs are done you have to get to the base, my house is across town!”
“Oh no! I only have two days! What do I do!?”
Sarah pondered it. “Wait, isn't Subaru-san a great dancer?”
Vivio's eyes went wide. “Subaru-san and Tia-san! They'll know what to do!
~**~
A twenty seven year old Subaru skated circles around the drones on the training field and took them out with a solid blast from her fist. Her short hair blew lightly in the wind as she slowed down and turned to the people watching. “And that is how you take care of a group of drones at the same time,” She instructed. “Break into teams and go over the strategy, be prepared to diminstrate it to me in ten minutes!” She got saluted and turned away to walk over to the other side of the field where Tia was flying around through the imitation city shooting practice targets. “Tiaaaaa!”
“Hm?” The gunslinger twirled her pistols, forming them together into a shotgun type device and blasted a small group of her zig-zagging targets. Once clear she turned her weapon again and turned it into a sniper rifle, shooting a beam across the area and blasting the last target. “What's up, Subaru?”
“I suddenly had a weird feeling, did you?”
“Ah, I did.” Tia landed and felt her waist length hair fall around her, being held at the end with a black ribbon. “Vivio is probably plotting something again...”
Double post for length reasons T_T
Oh man I wanted to a teenage Vivio fic...oh well i guess I switch over to Vivio fic plan B.:cool:
Go ahead and do one! I have no claim to it :3
Vivio action FTW! Funny how both our impressions of her agree to the point! :eek:
I do hope Vivio gets a date. After all, there's always the male half of the Hallaoun twins which must've inherited Chro-suke 1337 skilz from his Pops. :D
WEll, they're too old for her in this ficcy ( It's based on 6th D). HEhe, we both pictured her the same grown up? that's scary!
Vivio as waitress FTMFW!!! :D And Yuuno is quite the snitch isn't he? Lutecia and Caro though are :twitch::twitch::uhoh:
Ganbatte Vivio!!!! :D
At least it should be just that. If he inherits T3H MASK... :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
Lutecia and Caro are both dating Elio lol :P And yes, she's a waitress! ph33r!
......teh mask?
krisslanza
2007-07-11, 00:47
Elio has two girls eh...? :heh:
Nightengale
2007-07-11, 00:52
......teh mask?
A joke I started... :uhoh:
~The Succession of the Mask that Represents Self~
Panel 1
Once upon a time there was a legendary mask that is passed on generations...
Graham: *wears mask* I have awakened to my inner desires... I must create!
Liezes: Papa! Papa!
Graham: Call me Daddy. :3
Panel 2
And as the memories moved on...
Clyde: Ooohhh....I am feeling IT! I am seeing the light! Leti! Wear these glasses!
Leti: Huh... *puts on glasses*
Clyde: MOE~~~~~! Lindy, I cannot wait any longer!
Lindy: Clyde-kun, what do you need so late at nigh-WHOAH! *gets jumped on*
Panel 3
Chrono: Father's inheritance? Wear it when once you've come of age? ....OHHH~!!!!! I have found my calling!
Fate: Onii-chan?
Chrono: That's right! That's the way! *records it and loops it*
Amy: Chrono?
Chrono: Amy! You're like an older sister to me! I- *jumps on her*
Panel 4
Soon...it will come to you...
Chrono: ENJOY IT, ELIO! FOR SOON! YOU TOO SHALL SEE TEH LIGHT!
Elio: Huh...
Chrono: You will be the successor!
Amy/Fate: Successor of what, Dear/Onii-chan?
Chrono: SHIT! *dissapears*
~~~
Fetish Preferences
Graham : - Furry twin daughter-types
Clyde : - Capable business wifey-woman types.
Chrono : - Sister types, one elder-ish, and another non-blood-related-younger-sister-moe
Elio : - COMING SOON...
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