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Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 01:13
The bad guys don't use these ;)

Whew...:heh: I guess I kinda mixed up the affiliations.:heh:

Translate this to German... And you get one of Sophia's finishing speeches. Yeah more Sophia = Ryusei jokes, on top of Zine Knuckle.

Now that you've mentioned it...:twitch:

Sure--

*Trident Zamber Breaker >>>> Creator-san*

And that reminds me of Sophia as well.:D Let's see if I can make a scenario that'll blast Kha to goo...:D

Kluize's intervention much? :heh:

He gives benefits sometimes to those who manage to amuse him in his games of mesing around with the Multiverse.:uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 01:16
Yeow. These guys got the TECH. No way is my Church factions stronger than these guys. :D And the Top Gun theme certainly brings back memories. :p


Don't worry, these guys are dimensions away from Midchilda :p


Ah! I realized I've forgotten to mention one more :heh:

"SuperThunder" is one very, very powerful Flashbang :heh:


I'll just keep [d.m.c.] for the Licht von Belka... kamo. :p


I'm using "Devils never cry" for another secret faction :D The reason why I haven't reveal actual original characters is because I need to talk the story of Clyde/Lindy first before it would make more impact :p

USB500
2007-08-23, 01:19
Hikki becomes Shiro?

*runs*

Hikki turns into Kha, then KLUIZE?! :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

Fits... More Archer?:heh:

Well, he does have a Reality Marble in his move list, doesn't he? :uhoh:

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"Crikey! The crystal's HUUUGE! The OC Thread was once the place to see Bluecheesium in its natural habitat, but overharvesting reduced them to near extinction! I'd be a very sad man if that happened. But thanks to conservation efforts, all the Cheese have come back to this lil pond. Ain't it a dream, folks? :D"

- Creator-san, the Bluecheesium Hunter

:3

There will be times when the Licht dims so much that one feels lost in Chaos... *sniff*... Poor Hikki...

!!!

Wait a minute. WHATEVER HAPPENED TO MAI, HIKKI'S WAIFU?! :twitch: Isn't she the one he should be truly loving? :uhoh:

Sorry for spoiling the mood... :heh:

This is THE ALTERNATE UNIVERSE, remember? :eyespin: well, I can't reveal what happens to his WAIFU yet. But let's just play safe to assume that she's currently under the watchful eyes of Big Daddy Yo.:uhoh:

Crap USB seemed to have destroyed my Otaku valves... It's getting harder to control him... :eyespin:

oi, OI. :twitch:

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:sad::sad::sad: Too bad for him.:upset: But why did they leave him?!?!:twitch:

:( That sucks... but no one stayed with him?

That's what the world is. Harsh, cruel, and sometimes downright heartless. Even they can't stay with him even if they want to. :sad:

Keroko
2007-08-23, 01:24
Hmm...I'm thinking of making Scagletti have a clone army or something. You guys mind that?:heh:

Jail is seriously starting to suffer from Orochimaru syndrome here. :heh:

YOu're as lucky as Kha and Erio regarding these matters.:heh:

I have yet to get hit by the Canon too, though in my case it's more skill and caution. :D

I'm judging him by mortal standards.:heh: Too powerful. Period.
<I'm becoming a moderation monster!:eyespin:>

Join me, Aaron.

When will it be finished? :D

Today, I hope. It's pretty time consuming.

Vivio, huh? I have mixed feelings about this. The whole idea of "rescuing Vivio" is pretty meh to me... but maybe she can be of use at least for once in the series... :rolleyes: The only problem is that there is 99.9% chance she will be rescued...this being Nanoha and all... :rolleyes:

Really? This drama freak loves it. :D

Alright. Here it is, the origin of Doppleganger.


It was a mistake. When Hikaru's device was being made, some corrupted parts were used on accident. The result was a smart-alecky gun that could copy other devices. The higher ups are still trying to replicate the effect.

Short, I know, but here are some Doppleganger quotes:

"My only dream is to have a body. Why? So I can sock you in the face, that's why."
"You smell that? Chocolate-chip cookies, like my mother used to make."
"I tried to copy the Tausend Kreuz, but I blacked out. I woke up thinking about blue cheese, for some reason."
"Is this the real life... is this just fantasy... caught in a landslide, no escape from reality..."

Hikari got his hands on some of Artherion's parts? :twitch::twitch::twitch::p

Well, my brother finally got the initiative of making his own character:heh: It's short, real short. Note that this character is NOT in the 216th, so don't assume that.

Name: Hikaru K. Karyu
Nickname(s): Heart, "Egargarious Provicator: A much well respected Mid-Childian scholar and weed grower"
Gender: Male
Age:16
Birthday: June 14
Homeworld: Mid-Childa
Occupation/Rank: 2nd-in-Command of Twilight Squad/ Captain
Unit: 212th Rescue and Strike Unit, Twilight Squad- "Twilight 2"
Mage Rank: AA+
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Gold
Favored Element: Fire
Height: 5"7
Weight: 135 pounds
Hair: Black, spiky
Eye color: Dark Orchid
Build: Above-average
Device: Intelligent Device: Crux
Voiced by: Fukuyama Jun

Background:
He was born in Mid-Childa on MC 0056, with a twin sister, Hikari Karyu. His mother and father, Satoko and Kisuke Karyu, were technicians in the TSAB, working on several Devices, including those that would be eventually given to both of them. From about the age of 6, he knew he wanted to be a mage; both he and his sister learned about it when their parents were talking about their plans for the future. Both of them were sent to the TSAB Academy at the age of 8, and both of them were given their Devices, safely hidden and kept in good conditions, that they would use for a long time.
While there, Hikaru was known to be someone that had great potential, but someone who was "hard to deal with". His sister, on the other hand, had a better personality while having the same potential, so when they both graduated at 13, Hikari was higher up than Hikaru, although Hikari was the younger of the two.
From there, Hikaru went on into the Air Corps, where he trained with Nanoha Takamachi herself. After an accident there involving Nanoha, Hikaru transferred into the 212th Rescue and Strike Unit, and joined Twilight Squad. He then found out that his younger sister, Hikari, was commander of Twilight, and he was second-in-command of Twilight, another bit of irony in his life. He managed to make Captain rank, and he now currently stays there.

Personality:
He's best summed up in three words: hyperactive, knuckleheaded, and an idiot. He likes to have fun most of the time, and likes to make fun of a lot of people, which leads to him being beat up. He also likes to make jokes, although they are inappropriate at times. Still, that's his way of friendship. He cares deeply for all his friends, superiors, and especially his sister, often going in harm's way for them if they need help.

Device:
His Intelligent Device, Crux, was given to him by his mother, who personally worked on it. It has three forms: Sunlight Form, Skimmer Form, Sleight Form. In its Sunlight Form, Crux takes the appearance of a large spear-lance with a red cloth nearby. In its Skimmer Form, it takes the appearance of a knife attached to a thin wire. In its Sleight Form, it takes the appearance curved blade on a gauntlet, mounted on his forearm, which curves toward his elbow. Its AI is male and usually adresses him as "Sir."

Fighting Style:
He fights recklessly, ofthen beating his opponents by poinding them down or with one surprise attack. He doesn't care that much about tactics; he'd rather just go straight through every enemy.

Barrier Jacket:
Not looking as impressive as other people's, just because he didn't give it much thought, his Barrier Jacket looks like a gakuran, with a red shirt underneath, sneakers, and an armband on his left arm. He got this idea mostly with the help of Hayate Yagami.

Spells:

-Others:
Genocide Shift: A spell that inhibits thought and lets instinct run over; Hikaru uses this if he really has to. It causes him to become berserk, and he becomes faster and stronger. This takes a lot out of him, though, sending him into near-unconsciousness. He has to say a little song when casting it, which is:

Total Slaughter,
Total Slaughter.
I won't leave a single man alive.

La de da de dai,
Genocide.
La de da de duh,
An ocean of blood.

Let's begin the killing time.

Magical Clones: He creates clones made up of magical energy, though they can take a few hits and are weak in attacking.

-Movement:
Sonic Move: Same as Fate's own Sonic Move.

Gryphus Flight: Wings appear on his feet, letting him fly. He rarely uses this.

Rocket Boost: Activating Sunlight Form's boosters, He can charge the target at a high speed.

-Offensive:
Burst Shooter: Learned from Nanoha, he fires about 16 high-speed missiles instead of Nanoha's 12.

Line Stabber: He stabs at a target, then turns back and stabs the target again.

Heaven Asunder: In Sunlight Form, he does a single slash upward using Rocket Boost sending the target up. Sunlight Form

Sunspot: He creates a small inferno under a target.

Lighting Wire: In Skimmer Form, He takes hold of a target with the whip and shocks the target.

-Defensive:
Bubble Shield: Hikaru makes a geodesic bubble that surrounds him and is very tough to break.

Spin Guard: He can spin his Device in a circle, guarding from attacks.

Plate Barrier: A barrier covered by magic "plates" surrounds Hikaru and everyone else within a distance of 20 feet. If any magic attacks hit the plates, they fall off, like reactive armor in tanks.

Purge Jacket: The upper part of the Jacket unravels and explodes, destroying binds or anything else. He needs some time to reform it.

Trivia:
-Despite the fact that he is great at flying, he hates it.
-He likes watching anime, but also hates cosplaying. Still, Hayate always manages to make him cosplay.
-Nanoha and Hayate tolerate his presence, but most of the Wolkenritter, with the exception of Shamal, and Fate hate him.
-He is disrespectful at times, calling people by their first names, or adding baka at the end of names. For example, Fate-baka.

A contractor? And Fate of all people hates him? This I gotta see in action. He's not going to be liked by Keroko either.

INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER IV, PART C

Hikki’s condition stabilized, and he was allowed to be transferred to regular ward. The doctors who treated him told Riot Force 6 that he would fully recover in the next two weeks; the news was accepted with lukewarm reception, and while most of them had a sighing of relief, those who knew the truth was reluctant to consider it good news.

It was a long, quiet night. Fate was seated beside the bed, accompanying Hikki as he went through the last days of his uneasy comatose. She was not alone, as Yuuno was there to accompany her, and she would never be alone as Fuuko was also with her, comfortably curling on Fate’s lap.

“Should we tell him?” she asked.

“I don’t know…” the blonde librarian answered. “But if it’s what we must do, then we have to.”

“I’m afraid I’d only break his heart…” she murmured.

He clenched her hand. “Fate,” he spoke, staring into her eyes deeply as he could. “Would he want to see your heart broken instead? He won’t, because he believes in you. I’m sure he will listen to you.”

Hesitantly she held his hand in return. “I wish I could…”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Silence enveloped the lake garden. Winds whispered softly, leaves rustled gently, and waves lightly crashed onto the lake’s edge. The only other voice was Widuri’s giggle, as she continually ran around the lake, chasing after a couple of swallows that flew alongside her. The blue-haired woman was still seated under the magnolia tree, caressing the sleeping boy’s head and humming a folk’s lullaby.

“Uhm…” He woke up, stirred by Bayu’s gentle caress on his face. He looked up at the woman, who was smiling down to him. “I… fell asleep?”

“Yes, dear. You were,” Bayu replied.

He took a deep breath. “I’m sorry. I’m not really used to sharing secrets. I tend to fall asleep after talking of stuffs.”

Bayu giggled. “It doesn’t matter,” she replied and gave his scalp a caring pat. “Mother knows everything you have gone through so far.”

“Where… did I stop?” he asked.

“You fell asleep at the bureau’s part. When you were going to tell me about your friend,” Bayu spoke. “Now tell me. Who do you love the most apart from me?”

He was tongue-shackled. Why would she ask such question of all things? “Mother, why?”

“Mother wants to know whether you love them because they really have a place inside your heart, or is it because you don’t want to break their heart,” the woman spoke.

He reluctantly shook his head. “Mother, I don’t understand.”

“Of course I understand, because you’re my child,” she replied. “Now, would you like to tell Mother?”

“I…”

He gulped. The more he waited, the more the woman was asking him to continue. The more he bought her time, the more he felt helpless. The more he wanted to keep his mouth shut, the more his subconscious was yelling at him.

“Mother?”

She clenched his hand. “Yes?”

“Tell me,” he murmured. “Is it a sin to love someone when you already have a person you can’t forget?” He turned away when she gave him one of her caring gazes, and he started crying again.

The woman giggled. “It depends on your intention on loving that person,” she answered and carefully dried the tears. “But it’s never a sin, because it shows you that you care of that person. It tells you that you care of the person so much, even though you may not know of it.”

“But how can I tell myself it isn’t wrong?” he sobbed. “I… I loved her, but I was never able to let her know…”

Bayu placed a finger upon his mouth. “What makes you think it’s so important to let her know your feeling?”

“She… she was my friend…” he answered. “My… only friend I could trust on… and she was the one I knew it was wrong loving her.”

Bayu placed a hand over his forehead. She closed her eyes, murmuring something in ancient language that he could not apprehend. The boy remained still, not wanting his movement to disturb her concentration.

She opened her eyes afterwards. “I see.” She chuckled and traced an imaginary line across his forehead. “My dear child. I guess it’s never late for you to tell her that you love her.”

He stood up. “Mother?”

“It’s time to go,” the woman spoke. “Tell her everything you feel about her. Let her know that you love her from the bottom of your heart. So even if she doesn’t accept you, you won’t regret the decision you make.”

He was startled. Shaking his head in gripe, he seized Bayu’s hand, not wanting to let go off it. “But… but I want to stay here! I want to stay with you and Widuri and…”

Again she put her finger upon his mouth, silencing his protesting heart. “I know, dear. I know you want to stay with me forever, but you don’t have a place here yet.” Widuri and the man nodded, the former accepting the fact with strange calmness. “After all, this is just a dream, isn’t it?”

“But Mother, I can’t!”

“Hikki-sama, we’re only a piece of your inner desires,” Widuri spoke. “We’re created to fulfil your wish to live as a family. Together.”

“Widuri! No! Please!” he objected.

The girl chuckled. “But I will still always love you. Maybe not as a Servant, because one day I’m going to achieve my dream to be your dearest wife.”

The man approached him and put his hand over his shoulder. “However you want to say, your time hasn’t come yet,” he spoke. “Face it, son. You don’t belong here.”

He shook his head. “How can I possibly leave all of you and return to my place? I…” He was silenced when Bayu pulled him into her arms, soothing him with her warm, maternal embrace. “Mother…” he murmured and cried in her arms, “I don’t want to leave you…”

“Hush now,” she whispered. “I’m not going to leave you ever. I never said I’m going to leave you.”

“But I won’t be able to see you again…” he answered, zealously clinging onto the woman. “Please, Mother, don’t leave me…”

She pushed him slightly away. She took his hand, put a pendant onto it and clenched it around. “However you want to say it, I will never let my child live alone out there.” So saying she bent forward and brushed her soft lips upon his forehead. “Hikki.”

“Yes… Mother?”

She smiled. “When you return to your place, tell the woman you love that Mother wishes her a happy life.”

He nodded. “Yes, Mother. I will.”

Bayu stepped back. She approached Widuri and the man, who were waiting for her. “I guess this is the end of our meeting, right?”

“Yes, it seems so,” he replied. “Mother, Father, Widuri…” He was struggling against his inner doubt before he finally smiled. “Thanks. Even though it only lasts a while, I will cherish this meeting. I won’t ever forget it.”

Bayu chuckled. “Of course you won’t. After all, we’re family, right?”

Widuri lifted her hand. “Until we meet again, Hikki-sama.”

He copied the gesture. “We will, Widuri, and you better learn some manners until that time comes. Okay?”

The girl bashfully laughed. “Haii.”

He later turned to the man. “Father, I… I won’t ever blame you for everything you had done until now. Just… don’t make Mother sad, please.”

The man nodded.

“Remember, Hikki,” Bayu spoke as the family began to fade from vision. “I will always be inside your heart. I will always love you. Zutto…”

-x-x-x-x-x-

The pungent scent of medicines was the first thing that greeted him. It was the sign that his feet was still standing on the real world. He opened his eyes, realizing he was lying on the bed with apparatus tied all over him. He glanced to the windows, noticing that morning had arrived.

He noted several people looking down at him. He looked up at them, and barely had the strength to say one of their names. “Fate… what day is it?”

The woman could barely hold her emotion when she took his hand, lightly clenching it. “Welcome back… Hikki…”

“Fate…” Weakly he rose from his prone position, helped by Fate and Hayate as he got up from the bed. “Where’s… Nanoha? I must… see her…”

Neither of them was telling him. Not even Fate or Hayate; not even the Wolkenritter; not even the Wind Talkers. Yuuno, too, was reluctant to reveal the news, and all they did was simply staring at the patient in uncertainty.

“She’s no longer here.”

He glanced at Armstrong. The veteran Ace’s face was stoic as ever, as he returned the gaze. “Grandpa… what does that supposed to…”

“I’m sorry, Hikki, but the chance of you seeing her is nil,” Armstrong replied. “You can forget everything you want to tell her, because she won’t listen to them anyway.”

The girls protested at first, but then they heard a sombre-sounding chuckle. They looked back at him, noticing how melancholic his drooping gaze was. “So she’s not here anyway…” he murmured. “All efforts have come to nothing… it’s all nothing…”

“Come on, everyone,” Hayate ushered. They nodded, and quietly they walked out, leaving him in solitude. Fate was the last person to leave, saying nothing as she stared at him in sadness.

“I’m sorry, Hikki…”

The door closed. The Wind Talker was now alone, enveloped in unexplained amounts of grief. He shivered, unable to bear his broken heart any longer.

He clutched the pendant.

He cried.

“Mother… I’m sorry… I won’t be able to…”

Nice choice of music. Truly sad.

:sad: :sad: what's worse, he isn't able to fulfill the promise... even after 10 years.... :sad: :sad:

BTW, I just had a vision on how Hikki's going to look like after he receives the heartbreaking news. :uhoh:

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2893/1187032228130aq6.jpg
"You killed her... you took the only life away from me... I shall never forgive you..."

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9132/1187393207163tp0.jpg
"Thank you, Fate... and farewell..."

Without even giving a farewell gift, he charged at the rampaging AMF drone.

Everyone: jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Me: what? :uhoh: :heh: :rolleyes:

Kinda makes me want to do a berserk Keroko shop.

*imagines the work*

.... Maybe later. :heh:

Kha
2007-08-23, 01:34
Now that you've mentioned it...:twitch:Still looking for more... :D

And that reminds me of Sophia as well.:D Let's see if I can make a scenario that'll blast Kha to goo...:DGG @ Kha. :D

He gives benefits sometimes to those who manage to amuse him in his games of messing around with the Multiverse. :uhoh:Isn't that what Gods do?

*runs*

Don't worry, these guys are dimensions away from Midchilda :pI'd rather they hang around Midchilda so the Church doesn't look so h4xx... :heh:


I'm using "Devils never cry" for another secret faction :D The reason why I haven't reveal actual original characters is because I need to talk the story of Clyde/Lindy first before it would make more impact :pThat's a different song from the one I'm using somewhat deshou? d.m.c. is the Anime's.



@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 01:40
Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Hii-chi (he hates this name)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Kaleidoscope
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Area of Expertise: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Green/blue
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger (first form), Doppleganger Geist (second form)
Device Appearance: Gun (both forms)
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change
Ultimate Atttack: Copy Gate


Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura. Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school). He got good grades, and was pretty much an average student. At some point in time he met Miria Hasser, whose stubborn, no-nonsense personality clashed with Hikaru’s own laid-back, carefree attitude. The two did not get along for quite a while. At a later point in time, something occurred that involved both Hikaru and Miria (the details are still unknown), and the two became close friends. The two have shared a steady friendship ever since (unbeknownst to either of them, the entirety of Section Six is placing bets on when they’ll become a legitimate couple. The bookie in charge of the bets is Doppleganger).


Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right). Hikaru is normally seen working with Nanoha Takamichi’s Stars team along with Miria.
Doppleganger is unique in many aspects. One is that he can copy other devices and transform into them. Five devices are currently in storage; Graf Eisen, Levatine, Mach Caliber, Cross Mirage, and Flame Braver. Doppleganger is also sentient, to the point of conversation. But he’s a jerk, so people tend to stay away.

Not much is known about the reasons behind Dopp’s (as he’s called) actions. Nobody knows why Dopp is an excellent singer with a penchant for Queen.


-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).


Miscellaneous facts:
-Hikaru is fluent in Japanese, Hebrew, German, and English.
-Hikaru is an excellent philosophical thinker. If he thinks for too long, he will lose track of his surroundings, however.
-Hikaru does not keep kosher. He loves shellfish far too much.
-Hikaru owns a copy of the Torah. No one has ever seen him actually read it, but he used it to whack Doppleganger once.
-Doppleganger is the first device to: get drunk; start a drunken brawl; attempt to incite other devices to begin a revolution; hit on a human; hit on another device; drive a device to jealousy; win a singing contest; act as a bookie (this list is not yet finished).

Meophist
2007-08-23, 01:44
Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.

Satty
2007-08-23, 01:47
@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

I think it works well...

Kha
2007-08-23, 01:52
Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.You're alive!!! :D

Don't worry it doesn't hurt that much. And we've got timelines and character lists to make things easier; just check Erio's post.

I can't seem to see Karrak's unique point, but Gaest is :D The pre-casting mechanic has been implemented nicely, and best of all, I think the templates can be saved into IDs or Storage Devices with AI which can make Gaest-variant magica easier to learn? But AI can only go this far. :D

Keroko
2007-08-23, 02:02
Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.

So Karrak is focused on manipulation and illusion? Karrak users would make perfect spies, then.

Gaest, on the other hand, seems to be straight forward and to-the-point. Just the way I like it. :D

USB500
2007-08-23, 02:10
Alright. I have to go to bed now. But before that, here's Hikaru's edited profile:

Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Rabbi, Batman (this last nickname I’ll explain later)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Velka (sort of)
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Varies
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger
Device Appearance: Gun
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change

Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura (yes, his dad is a rabbi, making Hikaru Jewish). Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school).

Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right).

Doppleganger is unique in many aspects. One is that he can copy other devices and transform into them. Five devices are currently in storage; Graf Eisen, Levatine, Mach Caliber, Cross Mirage, and Strada. Doppleganger is also sentient, to the point of conversation. But he’s a jerk, so people tend to stay away.

Not much is known about the reasons behind Dopp’s (as he’s called) actions. Nobody knows why he calls his wielder “Batman”. Nobody knows why Dopp is an excellent singer with a penchant for Queen.
More to come

I want to know why is he called Batman, too. :heh::uhoh:

Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.

Welcome back. ;)

I like the magic schools' description. Need more of things like these. :)

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 02:18
I'd rather they hang around Midchilda so the Church doesn't look so h4xx... :heh:



I'll see what can be done, but usually they go where the action is :p


That's a different song from the one I'm using somewhat deshou? d.m.c. is the Anime's.

Yup, THIS is "Devils never cry" :D ! (Personally, I think this is one of the most kick-ass song :p... Literally)

U8RVQdE5AG8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8RVQdE5AG8


@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

The loading is slow :heh:

Meophist
2007-08-23, 02:24
I'm glad you guys like my magic ideas. Karrak actually came from the magic circle idea first, so I'm a little disappointed nobody commented on it yet.

In any case, I'll try to finish a couple of character profiles tomorrow to go along with these magic. For now, though, sleep for me.

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 02:31
:twitch::twitch::twitch:
Maren's imagination sure is...:heh::heh::uhoh::eyespin:
Can't wait to see the other modes.:D
Hehe, look forward to it :D

Maren is SSS at full release. Please tell me how that's not powerful.:eyebrow::heh:
I'll take a long time before she can have a full release :uhoh:

You know that whenever someone says not to use their final trump card, they always end up using it :heh: Still, waiting to see Air's Mode 3 :)
dayo ne~

And Maren's imagination is :eek: Dirty Imagination is freaking DIRTY indeed :D:uhoh:
Like I said...too much time with Yui...I think...:heh:

Eh-EEEEEEEH?! :twitch:

So much for proving my crack theory that the quietest anime girls are the horniest. :eyespin:

The rest of it fit nicely in canon, though I'm pretty sure I didn't see an extra Knight, Seirafuku and Kitsune in the "boardroom". :heh: But I also didn't see Keroko and Tesla so wth. :p
It does, doesn't it? :D
Does Yui's Barrier Jacket look like a seirafuku? :twitch:

Let's see Maren's wish COME TRUE!!! :D
:nod:
Maybe...someday :uhoh:

On an unrelated issue...I wonder what Due's IS is....
While thinking of some attacks, I made a name for her weapon.
Vorpal Claw
:heh::heh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 02:32
@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

Ah, I remember hearing this song several months ago :)

If I were to be a bit picky, I didn't like the starting Verse part - doesn't sound like StrikerS (I mean Nanoha in general :heh:), but as it goes down to the Chorus, it turns absolutely awesome :D

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 02:44
@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

:eek:

Wow... like how they managed to actually assemble it into a psuedo-bona-fide OP (if that makes sense :heh: ):D

Yep, song will fit in just right :D

Alright. I have to go to bed now. But before that, here's Hikaru's edited profile:

Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Rabbi, Batman (this last nickname I’ll explain later)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Velka (sort of)
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Varies
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger
Device Appearance: Gun
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change

Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura (yes, his dad is a rabbi, making Hikaru Jewish). Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school).

Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right).

Doppleganger is unique in many aspects. One is that he can copy other devices and transform into them. Five devices are currently in storage; Graf Eisen, Levatine, Mach Caliber, Cross Mirage, and Strada. Doppleganger is also sentient, to the point of conversation. But he’s a jerk, so people tend to stay away.

Not much is known about the reasons behind Dopp’s (as he’s called) actions. Nobody knows why he calls his wielder “Batman”. Nobody knows why Dopp is an excellent singer with a penchant for Queen.
More to come

Dopp? As in, the Zeon Dopp cannon fodder? Nice name :heh: And..."Batman"? :twitch: Wonder how that came about :heh:

Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.

Haven't seen you here in OC thread in a long while :)

And with nice new magic systems too. Although like Kha, I just can't see what makes Karrak different from standard MC. Might change once we see your Karrak user OC sometime later :)

Gaest on the other hand is an intriguing system... so basically, if I understand it correctly, it's a mix and match system where you combine different spell templates to achieve the desired effect? Reminds me of Kael in some early versions of DoTA :heh:

Yup, THIS is "Devils never cry" :D ! (Personally, I think this is one of the most kick-ass song :p... Literally)


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USB500
2007-08-23, 03:01
did some backlog hunting, so...

@USB: Yup, the Letters make an entrance at last. :D Nice eighth cahpter, by the by.

Thanks. :)

AuronXShamal! :D

*ducks*

And no thanks for the pairing.:heh:

Aw, hell. Then who's going to be paired up with Shamal, then? :( :heh:

Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.

"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'



He's finally here! Quick, Nove! Hide Cinque in the closet!

And don't do anything weird to her while we're at it, okay? :uhoh:

==============

did some teasers, so here we go.
“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was swiftly blocked by Hikki’s twin blades, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like knife cutting butter. “What the hell?”

Hikki tossed the blades upward. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He simply waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience here?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and pounced at Hikki. Yet the white-haired, red-dressed former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“CHESTOOOAH!!!!”

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

Pretty cruel, isn't it? :uhoh:

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 03:08
He's finally here! Quick, Nove! Hide Cinque in the closet!

And don't do anything weird to her while we're at it, okay? :uhoh:


Don't listen to this man Nove! Do whatever you want! :D

*energize*


did some teasers, so here we go.
“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was swiftly blocked by Hikki’s twin blades, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like knife cutting butter. “What the hell?”

Hikki tossed the blades upward. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He simply waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience here?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and pounced at Hikki. Yet the white-haired, red-dressed former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“CHESTOOOAH!!!!”

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

Pretty cruel, isn't it? :uhoh:

:eek::upset: A momentary distraction was all it took... :upset:

USB500
2007-08-23, 03:14
Don't listen to this man Nove! Do whatever you want! :D

*energize*

:eek: Nove! Don't listen to him! He only wants to see some hot--

*radio static*

:eek::upset: A momentary distraction was all it took... :upset:

:upset: I think I just killed one of the most favourable OCs here. :upset:

Progress is as follows:
Story: Into The Dusk
Chapter: 5
Progress: 55 percent
Notes: a bit of time-skip to the present, where we see Fate looking after the sleeping Hikki, pondering of the pain he had to endure along the 10 years. Then she has a flashback, and everything afterward is told from her POV. There's also a flashback on Hikki/Kha duel, FYI.

Expect Limiter Release Fate/Berserk "Shiro" Hikki duel :eek:

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 03:18
:eek: Nove! Don't listen to him! He only wants to see some hot--

*radio static*


That's it Nove! Give in to your inner desires! You know you want to! :D

*pulls cape over self then dissapears*


:upset: I think I just killed one of the most favourable OCs here. :upset:

Progress is as follows:
Story: Into The Dusk
Chapter: 5
Progress: 55 percent
Notes: a bit of time-skip to the present, where we see Fate looking after the sleeping Hikki, pondering of the pain he had to endure along the 10 years. Then she has a flashback, and everything afterward is told from her POV. There's also a flashback on Hikki/Kha duel, FYI.

Expect Limiter Release Fate/Berserk "Shiro" Hikki duel :eek:

RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(

Now to see Berserk Hikki :eek:

USB500
2007-08-23, 03:45
RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(

Now to see Berserk Hikki :eek:

*salutes*

Beware: chapter 5 may contain mild profanity, graphic violence, hatred, and-

*radio static*

Attention! Chapter 4's full version is available. Follow this link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-iv-part-c.html) to read. :)

"That's it! Snow Wolf! Sitting Dragon!"

"Sir!!"

The young boy pointed to the two Gravian robot pilots -- directly at their face. "For failing to comply with order, I shall punish you by giving you easier names! Sitting Dragon!"

"Yes, sir."

"I'll assign you with the name Kyosuke."

"Yes, sir."

"Snow Wolf!"

"Y-yes, sir!"

"You'll be identified with call sign Ryusei."

"Ryusei!??? :eek: But sir, I object!"

"Do as what I say, or I'll give you worse name! Do you understand me?"

"Sir! Yes sir! To be named with Terran name of all things.... :upset: "

Elisa laughed even harder, to the point she fell off her chair and started rolling on the floor. Faye said nothing, although she did take note of her colleagues' new names. Alexandra could only laugh in submission at the young boy's stubbornness.

:D :D :D :D

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 03:48
IDE GAUGE FULL!! IDEON BACKLOGUN...FIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see... There's quite a lot of OC devices that can't be copied well in that sense, like Artherion, Tausend Kreuz, Swertkreuz, Kaleidostick, Jeweled Sword of Zelretch, Apalis and A-something, the Zestro-devices, the Intel Dept's, LineBacker L & R, Sofia...

I quoted, to the best of my ability, all the Rank S devices in the thread. Apologies if I missed anyone's. :heh:

Zerstro’s devices, especially Isdera’s are pretty conventional though. Isdera’s sword is just a slightly upgraded grunt-sword of Ancient Belka times while the rest are only slightly more unique. Aside from Saga who was an engineer building his device from scratch thus personally unique on all fronts, they rest don’t really have unique devices in that sense.

I’m a believer that there is no need for l33t devices, really. Even my young!Graham used a personal generic S2U’s predecessor device, only customized for Ice-Magic conversion.

Yup I can remember commenting on the first. As for the second, read it, but never comented on it. It made me go aaaw. Hayate has a father figure now. :D

Hmm... With Auron being the father and Shamal at times being refered as a mother...

:thinker:

AuronXShamal! :D

*ducks*

Technically, Hayate’s the one who considers the Wolkies her children in a sense… And there was talks of Hayate possibly thirsting for a father figure too…

AurionXHayate! :D

*ducks but still shot by Aaron* :p

You know, I’ve always found it a pity they’ve never really developed much on Hayate’s familial and other friend links like those with the Belkans, Genya and Graham. Even her friendship with Fate and Nanoha seemed brushed over for the pair’s more so than for the trio.

:(

Not to mention his character has single parent qualifications (Kiritsugu). :D

Yan-papa FTW! :D

AurionXShamal FTMWTFWin!!! :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:



Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.



"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'



Eh, tell me what all of you think. As said, it's very, very doubtful this will be in the final product.

finished with lance's profile

done :)

It’s still very powerful. Very powerful at all-around, and seems buffed to respond to any kind of situations, as in powered on all accounts… Not invincible, but you might as well make him.

Too powerful. Try to add more weaknesses to his abilities or mediocre-ism to his all-roundedness. It’s quite okay if he’s more of a specialist, but he seems to have everything and not lack any real front.

lol...:heh: another Miria :eyespin:
At least the one I made is already dead... :(

New chapter :D


Hehe~
Hints on Koji's Mode 3 and Yui's Mode 2 :D
And, as you can see, it runs along episode 20, it'll carry on to episode 21 (still working on those parts :heh:)

Maren is spending too much time with Yui :heh:
Is that just her imagination running wild...or her wishes...Hmmm :uhoh:

Er… doesn’t that retcon what Fate said to Elio and Caro? About her going ALONE, only assisted by Sister Schach and Verossa, no one else? She did reinforce that part really…

Otherwise, purrr-fect. Pun intended. :3


So yes, E would win, unless we get to see some hidden skill of Cinque. :heh:

But! But! Metal Dust Bombs!

Seriously, that is one aspect that should’ve been implemented. Cinque spreading it around, and when people walks on it, or has them stacked to their bodies…BOOM!

Well, note what I said- it'll be close, more than that, rather, and Cinque won't just take defeat from the word go, of course. A fast melee fighter is a major problem for her, but she has ways about it. Bombardment tactics would be a must for her in the case of facing off against her brother, but I might, heck, will have her have something else up her sleeve...that MOAB idea of Kha's was intriguing, now, something else along those lines...hm...:heh:

Seriously, the idea of turning any metal to bomb-able energy is already quite creative to work with… Now all Jail need is either a Number that can supply infinite power or a portable power-source, or an alchemic Number, and we can see Cinque blow buildings and roads sky-high.

Alright. Here's the first draft of the profile for Riot-1, Isaac "Volterra" Scaglietti.

Name: Isaac “Volterra”
Real Name: Isaac Scaglietti
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Birthday: June 27
Homeworld: Same as Jail’s
Relatives: Jail Scaglietti (older brother)
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: White
Favored Element: Light
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and white (originally lavender)
Eye Color: Green
Build: Lean and athletic
Personality: Driven, determined

Device Name: Cadenzo (derived from Cadenza, a musical term)
Device Appearance: Longsword
Barrier Jacket: Yet to be determined

Background: Isaac was the second son of Jacob and Mirina Scaglietti. He lived happily, even after his parents passed away, as he knew he had his beloved elder brother to take care of him. That all came to an end when Jail began to answer his calling. The family finally shattered when a ten-year old Isaac discovered his brother’s lab. Isaac cannot remember what he saw, but the shock turned his hair white. He ran away, and on a whim, adopted the last name of Volterra. Isaac eventually joined the TSAB, hiding his past and keeping track of his wayward brother. Hayate eventually chose him for Section 6, and the rest is history.

Isaac is ashamed of his ties to Jail, and his main goal in life is to bring his brother to justice for his crimes. He managed to keep his past a secret until the events of episode 17 (changed around to fit my purposes), when Jail, in a taunting exchange with Hayate, directly identified Isaac as his little brother.

Hmm… not bad, but it’s very big under the targer scope of Ion Canon.

For all we know, Jail could’ve been a creation himself. If Alhazred really is destroyed since ancient times, either Jail is EXTREMELYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY old, or he is merely a creation from remaining links to Alhazred.

Hmm, do we have a confirmed age at which Jail was adopted by the TSAB high council?

No, but it’s presumably quite early. Besides, Jail isn’t young himself, since he’s already got a criminal record from 25 years ago…

Still...there's an unusual amount of H4XX characters being 'born' here :heh:
This could be an omen...something is coming!!! :uhoh:

When a great number of 'epic souls' gather, something's bound to happen :heh:

H4XX IS BAD. Very bad for the health.

Especially when they’re cheap h4xxes no less. In my opinion, h4xxes should come with a label, “49% death/cripple/insanity probability upon usage.”

I just yanked this from the sound and music thread, take a look at this SS translation:



Saga much? Dang, Nighty, how'd you know?

I’ll say it again. Gut feeling. I mean, it’s only right really. Still, the similarity to the way it was said with mine…is…pleasing to say the least. Tsuzuki and I must have the same wavelengths on this kind of drama.

…I KNOW YOU’RE HERE, TSUZUKI. Make my story canon.

*runs*

:p


Maybe... Or maybe this isn't the only forum they're looking at... :uhoh:

Well, there’s probably some Nanoha RPs out there in Japanese too…

Putting aside the h4xxes, I think quite high of our own though. To think that in less than 20 weeks, it came this far… I used to think NOTHING can come close to highly popular image threads, this had proven me wrong.

Well, I started working on SearcherS, won't be finished soon. Preview though.

"A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked.

And this is what Sion looks like at the time of SearcherS...:heh:

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6832/vampinmgs4copydy6.jpg

Hmm...I'm thinking of making Scagletti have a clone army or something. You guys mind that?:heh:

Clone Army eh?

But I get the feeling he’s a man of individuality… Look at all his Numbers…they’re so…diverse.

Just looking at Ginga, it does look like he can make them mindless robots if he wants to, but he doesn’t.

And so this is one of the reason that Hayate must be kept away from frontlines...

Heh. Fits with some ideas I have in planning… :p

Sometimes, worrying too much is not good for the health too.


LOL! I saw this coming from a mile away!:D:D:D
Since this is the OC thread, and the OC thread's top pimp is also the de facto Amuro Ray-type referenced character, AND he's also a son of AlHazred, it all makes sense!

Unlimited HaremSpell Forge versus Unlimited Desires Works!:D

Technically… Kha also has the Numbers under him as his harem… though a different universe, don’t they say some things connect beyond time-space?

….

A losing battle, Jail?

AAA, huh? Think she is able to beat Cinque too? I may need to intervene after all.

It depends. Normal conditions, Cinque might lose, but Sein is a VERY vital supporter due to her IS h4xx, and proper team-based executions CAN overcome brute power. It’s not like Schach can destroy the ground ALL the time.

Besides, there’s a lot of metallic things in the lab…

Vivio, huh? I have mixed feelings about this. The whole idea of "rescuing Vivio" is pretty meh to me... but maybe she can be of use at least for once in the series... :rolleyes: The only problem is that there is 99.9% chance she will be rescued...this being Nanoha and all... :rolleyes:

Mixed feelings…I can understand.

But if they really respect the rule of drama, the one most important thing is that…it’s always between a rock and a hard place. Right now, saving Vivio seems easily the “right” thing, but will it really? I hope not.

Is this another of those Nightyengale-crack wise teachings? :eek:

No, it’s NightenGil’s, one of my 7 split-egos. The one which spouts out lame teachings or dissects information needlessly deeply like a CSI agent.

Gil…get it? :p

And r-really? :twitch::twitch: Whatever you saw, I somehow didnt. :uhoh: What part of episode 1 foreshadows that?? :twitch: :heh:

…EVERYTHING.

I don’t know how to say it, but just seeing the whole episode made me started preparing candlesticks for Kamina already. Yes, even if I ignore the epilogue, everything about Kamina SCREAMED DEATH FLAGS.

@ Nightengale:[/B] random indeed, and to know that it's SRW of all places :eek: :eek:

Speaking of Saint Church, where the hell are their reinforcements for the Cradle attack? Where are the KNIGHTS!?

Sister Xena is... truly random :heh::heh::heh:

Random? Everything I think Chakram, Xena Warrior Princess comes into mind…

Not to mention I think there was an episode where Xena dressed as a nun too…

"Crikey! The crystal's HUUUGE! The OC Thread was once the place to see Bluecheesium in its natural habitat, but overharvesting reduced them to near extinction! I'd be a very sad man if that happened. But thanks to conservation efforts, all the Cheese have come back to this lil pond. Ain't it a dream, folks? :D"

- Creator-san, the Bluecheesium Hunter

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


V: I am your father.
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!

(Blah! It's too exhausting, you people aren't idiots, you can figure out the rest of what each weapon does from their names! :p If not, I've all day... :D)

TSAB Supreme Air Force (Take 2)


House Atreides has long been able to boast the greatest air power of the 6 great houses, so it's no surprise they were tasked with rebuilding a new age of superior aerial machines.

With the advantage of the free energy 'Magic', several technologies that were thought to be unattainable were now spread throughout their military. Pulse weapons, Plasma energy, particle beams... All made reality, and because these were powered by magic, it's all still legal.

(Another advantage is that magic weapons do not require all of space, hence more could be attached to a machine as long as there's the energy to power them all.)

The Air force has two main division, the 'Aggressors' handle all the heavy air combats, also known as the Skybreakers, and the 'Suppressors' handle all the defensive and support roles, also known as the Skyguards.

Atreides uses 3 basic spellcrafters on their 'birds'.

A generator to create bombs.
A missile crafter.
A Shooter engine.








Oh, one more thing.

Let it not be said that military people don't have fun. The men and women in the Supreme Air Force has even gotten themselves a theme song :p

Ahh~ As expected of Chaos…

Really? This drama freak loves it. :D

You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.

Satty
2007-08-23, 03:55
SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”





Clone Army eh?

But I get the feeling he’s a man of individuality… Look at all his Numbers…they’re so…diverse.

Just looking at Ginga, it does look like he can make them mindless robots if he wants to, but he doesn’t.


I could make them have a limited sense of individuality, but still attached to Scagletti...anyway, it's not truly a whole army...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!



THAT'S..THAT'S...improbable....:heh::uhoh: and I was listening to HOWLING when I saw this....

USB500
2007-08-23, 03:59
IDE GAUGE FULL!! IDEON BACKLOGUN...FIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!


:eek: :eek:

Ideon Backlog Gun >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> all

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!

Poor Cinque. To have V as her father, and an unknown loli as her mother.... :upset: where's Erio to comfort her heart? :D

*dodges Nove's punch*

@ Satty: so someone did die...... I don't know what else to say.... :upset:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 04:04
Good stuff by all...especially you, Wibbles. Welcome to the team, and be sure you have your Bluecheesium machete. :heh: I'm not that old on the team myself, but what the heck.

@USB: Poor Armstrong. :twitch: Hikki goes so far as to decapitate his own allies? Dang, that's one heck of a berserker mode.

@Lowe: V doesn't take kindly to people disrupting what he has to do. And you thought Nove didn't stand a chance, you should see V when he's infuriated. :heh:

@Kha: Now that Star Wars thing you did, that's funny right there. :D Nice work on the aerial section of the forces, by the by...and an interesting first ship, too. Forgive me if I missed anything, I'm tired. :heh:

/random expansion
V: Uno never told you what happened to your father...

C: She told me enough...the Doctor brought me into this world!

V: No...[Vader]I am your father.

C: That's...that's not true. That's impossible!

V: Search your feelings, you know it to be true! And it is also evidenced by our similar fighting styles!

C: [Luke]IYAAAAAA!!![Luke]

V: Listen to me- you can eliminate the Doctor. He knows not of this. It is your, no, our destiny. Join me, and together we will create a new world as father and daughter...come with me. It is the only way!
/end random expansion

*Runs.* :heh:

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 04:05
Er… doesn’t that retcon what Fate said to Elio and Caro? About her going ALONE, only assisted by Sister Schach and Verossa, no one else? She did reinforce that part really…

Otherwise, purrr-fect. Pun intended. :3
Well, tecnically, she does go alone, since Koji and Maren will be dealing with drones to let Acous, Schach and Fate go deeper into Scaglietti's lab :heh:

Next part will have a (Ex-)Treize bit :uhoh: as well as some drone bashing :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 04:27
Well, there’s probably some Nanoha RPs out there in Japanese too…

Putting aside the h4xxes, I think quite high of our own though. To think that in less than 20 weeks, it came this far… I used to think NOTHING can come close to highly popular image threads, this had proven me wrong.

I remember telling myself to avoid Image Thread for some time because it has fallen into enemy hands.

...

I'm so glad I can find something to build on this place... Even if it's not much :heh:



Mixed feelings…I can understand.

But if they really respect the rule of drama, the one most important thing is that…it’s always between a rock and a hard place. Right now, saving Vivio seems easily the “right” thing, but will it really? I hope not.

If they don't do away with her in canon, I'll find a reason to have the TSAB deploy their resources (As in, MY resources :p) to hunt her down.

And if that's not possible (or enough :uhoh:) It just means I'll have to reveal my OCs soon then anticipled...



No, it’s NightenGil’s, one of my 7 split-egos. The one which spouts out lame teachings or dissects information needlessly deeply like a CSI agent.

Gil…get it? :p

I wanna see you pull a Night-Caine-ale :p


Speaking of Saint Church, where the hell are their reinforcements for the Cradle attack? Where are the KNIGHTS!?

Tea time... If you know what I mean :cool: .

Either that or most knights don't fly :heh:



Ahh~ As expected of Chaos…

I know I know, not really characters :heh:




You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Heh... '300' :D :D

If I didn't feel for Reinforce 'death' scene, I won't budge for her.

Wait! Just for fun, get someone else who's willing to pull the trigger! Then conflict! Then more angst!

...I don't know what's gotten into me :heh:


Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.

...SO THAT'S what's gotten into me!

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 04:27
Clone Army eh?

But I get the feeling he’s a man of individuality… Look at all his Numbers…they’re so…diverse.

Just looking at Ginga, it does look like he can make them mindless robots if he wants to, but he doesn’t.


Haven't we told you? He's trying to cater to everyone's fetish! He's spreading happiness for all mankind! :D

:uhoh:

*runs*


No, it’s NightenGil’s, one of my 7 split-egos. The one which spouts out lame teachings or dissects information needlessly deeply like a CSI agent.

Gil…get it? :p

Grissom? :eek::bow::bow:

Random? Everything I think Chakram, Xena Warrior Princess comes into mind…

Not to mention I think there was an episode where Xena dressed as a nun too…

Never really knew what her weapon was called, so didn't make the connection :heh:

Strangely enough, my best recollection of her is in that Simpsons spoof of Lucy Lawless...:uhoh:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!


:eek:

Who's the HAWT Lolier than Loli mama? :twitch:

And this proves it... V's a Roricon :D

*runs*

SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”





So if I'm understanding this right... Betruger is an illusion and a parasitic personality created by the Kristallnacht? :twitch: Vincent finally gets rid of Betruger, but loses his stepfather in the process :upset:

That's one problem solved though... wonder what Scag has in store next :uhoh:

Poor Cinque. To have V as her father, and an unknown loli as her mother.... :upset: where's Erio to comfort her heart? :D

*dodges Nove's punch*


Nove: Nobody comforts Cinque-neesama but me!
Creator: Of course. Comfort her any way you like...

*vanishes into the shadows*


/random expansion
V: Uno never told you what happened to your father...

C: She told me enough...the Doctor mrought be into this world!

V: No...[Vader]I am your father.

C: That's...that's not true. That's impossible!

V: Search your feeling, you know it to be true! And is also evidenced by our similar fighting styles!

C: [Luke]IYAAAAAA!!![Luke]

V: Listen to me- you can eliminate the Doctor. He knows not of this. It is your, no, our destiny. Join me, and together we will create a new world as father and daughter...come with me. It is the only way!
/end random expansion

*Runs.* :heh:

Eeeeeeeehhhhhhhh?!?!?!?!

:eek::eek::twitch:

Kha
2007-08-23, 04:38
IDE GAUGE FULL!! IDEON BACKLOGUN...FIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!Rando m Redshirt #1: Oh no--!
Random Redshirt #2: No way!
Redshirt Captain: Hit the dirt!!!

*IDEON BAKUROGUN >>>>>> Thread*

Zerstro’s devices, especially Isdera’s are pretty conventional though. Isdera’s sword is just a slightly upgraded grunt-sword of Ancient Belka times while the rest are only slightly more unique. Aside from Saga who was an engineer building his device from scratch thus personally unique on all fronts, they rest don’t really have unique devices in that sense.

I’m a believer that there is no need for l33t devices, really. Even my young!Graham used a personal generic S2U’s predecessor device, only customized for Ice-Magic conversion.Oh well I thought ever since they were "Nullified" from the dead, their Devices were upgraded to Servant level. Probably just me cheering the guys on. :heh:

Technically, Hayate’s the one who considers the Wolkies her children in a sense… And there was talks of Hayate possibly thirsting for a father figure too…

AurionXHayate! :D

*ducks but still shot by Aaron* :p

You know, I’ve always found it a pity they’ve never really developed much on Hayate’s familial and other friend links like those with the Belkans, Genya and Graham. Even her friendship with Fate and Nanoha seemed brushed over for the pair’s more so than for the trio.

:(Sad for that... And the shafting was so freaking direct in that short flight I was rather appalled... Didn't help that Darco was laughing his head off. >.> As usual, Liingo was squashed in the middle. :heh:

AurionXHayate's pretty expected, but I remember this scene from Ronin Kenshin:

Hayate: I'm no longer that little girl you raised... I'm a woman, with her own heart! Aurion-sempai, open your eyes! :(

(runs from A************ voidspam)

Er… doesn’t that retcon what Fate said to Elio and Caro? About her going ALONE, only assisted by Sister Schach and Verossa, no one else? She did reinforce that part really…

Otherwise, purrr-fect. Pun intended. :3Funny that she'd reinforce that she's going there alone, when it would only make people worry for her more...

Kha disappears towards the end of Kha's Counterattack at the end of a penultimate battle... Not even the 21ste knows where he is, but they hide it from Riot 6 so as not to worry them...

But... I remember planning Kha mentally contacting Fate telling her that he's snooping in Scag's lab... And so... Does this mean... Fate's trying to cover for Kha in canon?!

:uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh:

But! But! Metal Dust Bombs!

Seriously, that is one aspect that should’ve been implemented. Cinque spreading it around, and when people walks on it, or has them stacked to their bodies…BOOM!

Seriously, the idea of turning any metal to bomb-able energy is already quite creative to work with… Now all Jail need is either a Number that can supply infinite power or a portable power-source, or an alchemic Number, and we can see Cinque blow buildings and roads sky-high.Maybe there's a minimum size of the detonation? :p

I’ll say it again. Gut feeling. I mean, it’s only right really. Still, the similarity to the way it was said with mine…is…pleasing to say the least. Tsuzuki and I must have the same wavelengths on this kind of drama.

…I KNOW YOU’RE HERE, TSUZUKI. Make my story canon.

*runs*

:pHaving showered us with so much, and even vindicating Saga long ago :eyespin: I'm sure you're turn is coming...

Putting aside the h4xxes, I think quite high of our own though. To think that in less than 20 weeks, it came this far… I used to think NOTHING can come close to highly popular image threads, this had proven me wrong.500 more to go. We're gonna own them indeed. :D

Technically… Kha also has the Numbers under him as his harem… though a different universe, don’t they say some things connect beyond time-space?

….

A losing battle, Jail?Well... Saint X has absorbed the idea that the Numbers in NBC are his blood sisters created from his mother Ifurita... Can they still count as harem, or blood relations exclude them? :p

It depends. Normal conditions, Cinque might lose, but Sein is a VERY vital supporter due to her IS h4xx, and proper team-based executions CAN overcome brute power. It’s not like Schach can destroy the ground ALL the time.

Besides, there’s a lot of metallic things in the lab…That's the "Mad Scientist Dies and Lab Collapses" cliche scenario... :uhoh:

No, it’s NightenGil’s, one of my 7 split-egos. The one which spouts out lame teachings or dissects information needlessly deeply like a CSI agent.

Gil…get it? :pI'm thinking of Gilgamesh... So doesn't really compute. :p

Speaking of Saint Church, where the hell are their reinforcements for the Cradle attack? Where are the KNIGHTS!?Church Knights' Circle - All 20 Trinity Standartim have been owned in the suppression attacks on TSAB bases in Belka SAR. Scagletti's Gadget Type-4 Stalker proved their downfall, having never fought invisible enemies before.

21ste Trinity - Destroyed the Stalkers and is now leading whatever's left of the Regional Guard to secret facilities all over Midchilda.

No reinforcements from me. :D

Random? Everything I think Chakram, Xena Warrior Princess comes into mind…

Not to mention I think there was an episode where Xena dressed as a nun too…Is this canon again...? Who's who...? Is Michael the priest who got screwed by Due?

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:DAustralia's growing on me... :heh:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

That pairing again... :D
*salutes*

Beware: chapter 5 may contain mild profanity, graphic violence, hatred, and-

*radio static*

Attention! Chapter 4's full version is available. Follow this link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-iv-part-c.html) to read. :)

"That's it! Snow Wolf! Sitting Dragon!"

"Sir!!"

The young boy pointed to the two Gravian robot pilots -- directly at their face. "For failing to comply with order, I shall punish you by giving you easier names! Sitting Dragon!"

"Yes, sir."

"I'll assign you with the name Kyosuke."

"Yes, sir."

"Snow Wolf!"

"Y-yes, sir!"

"You'll be identified with call sign Ryusei."

"Ryusei!??? :eek: But sir, I object!"

"Do as what I say, or I'll give you worse name! Do you understand me?"

"Sir! Yes sir! To be named with Terran name of all things.... :upset: "

Elisa laughed even harder, to the point she fell off her chair and started rolling on the floor. Faye said nothing, although she did take note of her colleagues' new names. Alexandra could only laugh in submission at the young boy's stubbornness.

:D :D :D :DEr... Someone sounds like Zine Knuckle? :heh:

SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”


Epic! What a way to go out! *Belka Salute*

*Nanoha Fist >>>> Creator-san*

Ow! Okay okay... :heh:

Clones?! And we have Jedi as well... :heh: But knowing you, I can say we've got a big battle to look forward to, ne? :D

Good stuff by all...especially you, Wibbles. Welcome to the team, and be sure you have your Bluecheesium machete. :heh: I'm not that old on the team myself, but what the heck.

@Kha: Now that Star Wars thing you did, that's funny right there. :D Nice work on the aerial section of the forces, by the by...and an interesting first ship, too. Forgive me if I missed anything, I'm tired. :heh:

/random expansion
V: Uno never told you what happened to your father...

C: She told me enough...the Doctor mrought be into this world!

V: No...[Vader]I am your father.

C: That's...that's not true. That's impossible!

V: Search your feeling, you know it to be true! And is also evidenced by our similar fighting styles!

C: [Luke]IYAAAAAA!!![Luke]

V: Listen to me- you can eliminate the Doctor. He knows not of this. It is your, no, our destiny. Join me, and together we will create a new world as father and daughter...come with me. It is the only way!
/end random expansion

*Runs.* :heh:It's never too early to join the Bluecheesium Hunters. Even little Julie's one. :D

*ahem*

And I guess that IYAAAA! was a nice touch. :p

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 04:52
"Brought me", not "mrought...etc." Curse my fast typing. :heh:

And I wonder in what ways Nove will choose to comfort Nove...:uhoh: :heh:

And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by Enzo who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The Letters were, for the most part, elsewhere, defendıng the ship. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.

Keroko
2007-08-23, 04:57
Technically, Hayate’s the one who considers the Wolkies her children in a sense… And there was talks of Hayate possibly thirsting for a father figure too…

AurionXHayate! :D

*ducks but still shot by Aaron* :p

I was looking for an excuse to have a little revenge, and the 4koma's gave it to me. :D

You know, I’ve always found it a pity they’ve never really developed much on Hayate’s familial and other friend links like those with the Belkans, Genya and Graham. Even her friendship with Fate and Nanoha seemed brushed over for the pair’s more so than for the trio.

:(

I did find that a pity, in the manga we got to see some level of trio friendship, but in the anime there's virtually no trace of it. With all the training fillers, it wouldn't have hurt to expand on that a little.

Perhaps they're leaving it for OVA material?

But! But! Metal Dust Bombs!

Seriously, that is one aspect that should’ve been implemented. Cinque spreading it around, and when people walks on it, or has them stacked to their bodies…BOOM!

That would work, and its awesome as well. :D

H4XX IS BAD. Very bad for the health.

Especially when they’re cheap h4xxes no less. In my opinion, h4xxes should come with a label, “49% death/cripple/insanity probability upon usage.”

The truth!

I’ll say it again. Gut feeling. I mean, it’s only right really. Still, the similarity to the way it was said with mine…is…pleasing to say the least. Tsuzuki and I must have the same wavelengths on this kind of drama.

…I KNOW YOU’RE HERE, TSUZUKI. Make my story canon.

*runs*

:p

Oh how I wish that was so.

Well, there’s probably some Nanoha RPs out there in Japanese too…

Putting aside the h4xxes, I think quite high of our own though. To think that in less than 20 weeks, it came this far… I used to think NOTHING can come close to highly popular image threads, this had proven me wrong.

Having played in some popular Forum RPG's before, I already knew this to be possible, but it's pleasing nonetheless. Especially since the mods were initially doubtfull it would work. :D

Clone Army eh?

But I get the feeling he’s a man of individuality… Look at all his Numbers…they’re so…diverse.

I would like to avoid Orochimaru syndrome when Jail is concerned. >_<

Just looking at Ginga, it does look like he can make them mindless robots if he wants to, but he doesn’t.

Of course, mindless robots have proven to be very inefective, and not just in Nanoha. :heh:

You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.

Yes I call it drama. Light drama and it'll probably get bigger as it goes, but so far it's already drama.

As for what type of drama... there's little drama I don't like. The only exception would be the typical Soap love-drama. Mainly because the actors never manage to make it look differentfrom the thousands of identical ones.

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 05:02
Join me, Aaron.

Don't get me wrong. I've always been on the side of the regulators!:D


@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D

Quite good.

Alright. I have to go to bed now. But before that, here's Hikaru's edited profile:

Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Rabbi, Batman (this last nickname I’ll explain later)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Velka (sort of)
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Varies
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger
Device Appearance: Gun
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change

Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura (yes, his dad is a rabbi, making Hikaru Jewish). Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school).

Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right).

Doppleganger is unique in many aspects. One is that he can copy other devices and transform into them. Five devices are currently in storage; Graf Eisen, Levatine, Mach Caliber, Cross Mirage, and Strada. Doppleganger is also sentient, to the point of conversation. But he’s a jerk, so people tend to stay away.

Not much is known about the reasons behind Dopp’s (as he’s called) actions. Nobody knows why he calls his wielder “Batman”. Nobody knows why Dopp is an excellent singer with a penchant for Queen.
More to come

Better.:D And Batman?!:twitch::heh:

Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.

There you are, Meophist! Welcome back!:D
Those two systems of magic are cool. I like the Gaest one.:D

Yup, THIS is "Devils never cry" :D ! (Personally, I think this is one of the most kick-ass song :p... Literally)

U8RVQdE5AG8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8RVQdE5AG8

Ahh... Good ol memories of Devil May Cry 3: Special Edition.:D Makes me wanna play it again.

I'll take a long time before she can have a full release :uhoh:

But still... Powerdul, deshou?:heh:

did some teasers, so here we go.
“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was swiftly blocked by Hikki’s twin blades, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like knife cutting butter. “What the hell?”

Hikki tossed the blades upward. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He simply waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience here?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and pounced at Hikki. Yet the white-haired, red-dressed former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“CHESTOOOAH!!!!”

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

Pretty cruel, isn't it? :uhoh:

Just how berserk can Hikki get?!:twitch: He may be the strongest Ace, but it seems he's also the most emotionally fragile one...

Attention! Chapter 4's full version is available. Follow this link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-iv-part-c.html) to read. :)

"That's it! Snow Wolf! Sitting Dragon!"

"Sir!!"

The young boy pointed to the two Gravian robot pilots -- directly at their face. "For failing to comply with order, I shall punish you by giving you easier names! Sitting Dragon!"

"Yes, sir."

"I'll assign you with the name Kyosuke."

"Yes, sir."

"Snow Wolf!"

"Y-yes, sir!"

"You'll be identified with call sign Ryusei."

"Ryusei!??? :eek: But sir, I object!"

"Do as what I say, or I'll give you worse name! Do you understand me?"

"Sir! Yes sir! To be named with Terran name of all things.... :upset: "

Elisa laughed even harder, to the point she fell off her chair and started rolling on the floor. Faye said nothing, although she did take note of her colleagues' new names. Alexandra could only laugh in submission at the young boy's stubbornness.

:D :D :D :D

So you've even named them as such?!:heh::heh::heh::heh:

Technically, Hayate’s the one who considers the Wolkies her children in a sense… And there was talks of Hayate possibly thirsting for a father figure too…

AurionXHayate! :D

*ducks but still shot by Aaron* :p

Hey...:heh: I'd make a younger OC if I planned a pairing with Hayate.:heh:
Father-complex? No way.:heh::heh::heh:
It's not really like I wouldn't like to, (She's my favorite character:p) but I don't do OCXCC pairings.:heh:

You know, I’ve always found it a pity they’ve never really developed much on Hayate’s familial and other friend links like those with the Belkans, Genya and Graham. Even her friendship with Fate and Nanoha seemed brushed over for the pair’s more so than for the trio.

:(

And she was the least developed in the first place, only to be shafted to NXF fanservice among others...:(:(:(
But wasn't there rumors about a Hayate OVA before StrikerS? I hope that comes true...

H4XX IS BAD. Very bad for the health.

Especially when they’re cheap h4xxes no less. In my opinion, h4xxes should come with a label, “49% death/cripple/insanity probability upon usage.”

My HAXX are of 70%+ user-fatality rate. So I guess I pass.:D

I’ll say it again. Gut feeling. I mean, it’s only right really. Still, the similarity to the way it was said with mine…is…pleasing to say the least. Tsuzuki and I must have the same wavelengths on this kind of drama.

…I KNOW YOU’RE HERE, TSUZUKI. Make my story canon.

*runs*

:p

Seconded.:D

Putting aside the h4xxes, I think quite high of our own though. To think that in less than 20 weeks, it came this far… I used to think NOTHING can come close to highly popular image threads, this had proven me wrong.

I'm rather proud of that fact.:D

You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.

Agreed.

SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”






I could make them have a limited sense of individuality, but still attached to Scagletti...anyway, it's not truly a whole army...


Excelent performance by Vincent and SHOCKING revelations!:twitch:
Vince's step-dad? Nobuyuki as a spy?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch::twitch:
More!:D

AurionXHayate's pretty expected, but I remember this scene from Ronin Kenshin:

Hayate: I'm no longer that little girl you raised... I'm a woman, with her own heart! Aurion-sempai, open your eyes! :(

(runs from A************ voidspam)

Yare, yare... -_-

As amusing as it is, let's not blow this into some sort of mania...:heh:
Sigh... I guess even being a father-figure doesn't make you safe from pairing jokes.:heh: What happened to pure intentions?:heh::heh::heh:

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 05:10
Good stuff by all...especially you, Wibbles. Welcome to the team, and be sure you have your Bluecheesium machete. :heh: I'm not that old on the team myself, but what the heck.

@USB: Poor Armstrong. :twitch: Hikki goes so far as to decapitate his own allies? Dang, that's one heck of a berserker mode.

@Lowe: V doesn't take kindly to people disrupting what he has to do. And you thought Nove didn't stand a chance, you should see V when he's infuriated. :heh:

@Kha: Now that Star Wars thing you did, that's funny right there. :D Nice work on the aerial section of the forces, by the by...and an interesting first ship, too. Forgive me if I missed anything, I'm tired. :heh:

/random expansion
V: Uno never told you what happened to your father...

C: She told me enough...the Doctor brought me into this world!

V: No...[Vader]I am your father.

C: That's...that's not true. That's impossible!

V: Search your feelings, you know it to be true! And it is also evidenced by our similar fighting styles!

C: [Luke]IYAAAAAA!!![Luke]

V: Listen to me- you can eliminate the Doctor. He knows not of this. It is your, no, our destiny. Join me, and together we will create a new world as father and daughter...come with me. It is the only way!
/end random expansion

*Runs.* :heh:

EHEH?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch:
Still quite hilarious though.:D

"Brought me", not "mrought...etc." Curse my fast typing. :heh:

And I wonder in what ways Nove will choose to comfort Nove...:uhoh: :heh:

Subaru-less-straight-than-a-rainbow-style?:heh::uhoh:

And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by the Doctor who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.

Oh man, this guy's resilient!:twitch::twitch::twitch:
Are the letters coming to the rescue?:uhoh:

I was looking for an excuse to have a little revenge, and the 4koma's gave it to me. :D

What revenge?:uhoh:

USB500
2007-08-23, 05:10
Just how berserk can Hikki get?!:twitch: He may be the strongest Ace, but it seems he's also the most emotionally fragile one...

You hit the jackpot. :uhoh:

========================

That pairing again... :D
Er... Someone sounds like Zine Knuckle? :heh:

So you've even named them as such?!:heh::heh::heh::heh:

Had to, really, since their tribal names are kind of... tongue twisting :heh:

==================

It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by the Doctor who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That's...that's impossible!", they screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.

:eek:

V is finally kicking some arse. :uhoh:

Oh, where's Cinque? :confused:

Nove: Nobody comforts Cinque-neesama but me!
Creator: Of course. Comfort her any way you like...

*vanishes into the shadows*

Oh-ho.... then should I spoil the content of Diary of Wind Talker, Chapter 6, Part 3? :D:D:heh:

=========================

@USB: Poor Armstrong. :twitch: Hikki goes so far as to decapitate his own allies? Dang, that's one heck of a berserker mode.

*nods* :uhoh: :upset: *nods*

Kha
2007-08-23, 05:13
Don't get me wrong. I've always been on the side of the regulators!:DWhy did that sound like Aerogators?

*sees icicles forming*

Too... cold? :heh:

What happened to pure intentions?:heh::heh::heh:This is the real world. Face it. :p



EDIT: Repost from the 21ste Episode for interest -

Heck, even numbers 15+ got an appearance, even though you actually couldn't see them...OH YES THE TANKS WERE EMPTY!!! :eek:

Holy crap now we even have cannon fodder Numbers?! :twitch:

Awaiting that shot again... They might patch it when the DVD comes out... :rolleyes:

If not... I'm sure the OC thread would love fighting a Numbers army... :D

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 05:23
@Aaron: The Letters, come, yes. Some of them, at least, but know that V is totally fixated on his sole goal, vengeance, at present. He won't take kindly to them stopping him.

@USB: Cinque is among the Numbers, fear not. :)

And I decided to have the guards employed by Enzo...whereas Scag uses drones, Scudera uses soldiers. A contrast, but he has many under his employ.

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 05:28
OH YES THE TANKS WERE EMPTY!!! :eek:

Holy crap now we even have cannon fodder Numbers?! :twitch:

Awaiting that shot again... They might patch it when the DVD comes out... :rolleyes:

If not... I'm sure the OC thread would love fighting a Numbers army... :D

The tanks weren't empty... In fact, they're all floating inside. It actually looked as if he had a dozen more or so. :uhoh:

Then again, with Rider floating inside one of those, it's hard to tell how many are actual Numbers-types and how many are Relic-types... Jail's too much of a lazy-ass to differentiate between tube types. :heh:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 05:37
Man, I just realised how many spelling/grammatıcal errors I made...I type far too fast. :heh:

And hopefully Numbers 15 and above wıll make an appearance. I thınk the highest I saw was 25, 26, 27, or even 28. If not...I might form profiles myself. :D :heh:

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 05:47
Man, I just realised how many spelling/grammatıcal errors I made...I type far too fast. :heh:

And hopefully Numbers 15 and above wıll make an appearance. I thınk the highest I saw was 25, 26, 27, or even 28. If not...I might form profiles myself. :D :heh:

Right....just getting IS' for all those Numbers would give anyone a massive headache :heh:

We're not even sure if they're Numbers, they could be 'requests' from clients :uhoh:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 05:54
I have a storage o' IS names...just gotta construct the skills, headache-inducing or not. :heh:

And 'requests' or not, they're Numbers in my eyes. :D I wonder if we will see 'em, though.

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 05:55
"Brought me", not "mrought...etc." Curse my fast typing. :heh:

And I wonder in what ways Nove will choose to comfort Nove...:uhoh: :heh:

And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by Enzo who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The Letters were, for the most part, elsewhere, defendıng the ship. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.

Straight out of the movie, along with the cool awesome badassness and killer lines :eek::eek::eek:

MOAR PLEASE :D


Oh-ho.... then should I spoil the content of Diary of Wind Talker, Chapter 6, Part 3? :D:D:heh:


Please Doooooooo :D

Why did that sound like Aerogators?

*sees icicles forming*

Too... cold? :heh:


So... Aaron is actually Ingram? :uhoh:


EDIT: Repost from the 21ste Episode for interest -

OH YES THE TANKS WERE EMPTY!!! :eek:

Holy crap now we even have cannon fodder Numbers?! :twitch:

Awaiting that shot again... They might patch it when the DVD comes out... :rolleyes:

If not... I'm sure the OC thread would love fighting a Numbers army... :D

Nope, they were occupied. I think they meant that you didn't see them in action :heh:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 06:00
Well, for you, Lowe...

"Viola! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of fate. This visage, no meer veneer of-"

*Knifed.* :heh:

If I ever did work V's ever so famous monologue into the work, I have no idea when he'll use it...towards the Aces maybe? And confusion ensues, no doubt. :heh:

Now, there's also the 1812 Overture-

*Runs again.*

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 06:43
HASHA!!!!!

Here's another entry in the LineBackerS series, from the POV of a character I introduced a chapter or two ago. This one takes place during the mock training battle with Mai after Part IV (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1039754&postcount=4188).

Here's LineBackerS, Part VIII, featuring:



Up here on the rooftop of an abandoned condo, I observe the raging battle happening in this abandoned city. The clashing of blades, polearm versus katana.

By the overpass, the archaeologist girl continued to clash with the 2nd Lieutenant, blade against blade. Both holding their own, but even from here it was apparent that 2nd Lieutenant Heckler had the overwhelming advantage. Ms. Mathis was using ranged Midchilda spells to attack from stand-off range, only to be countered by the 2nd Lt’s. Sonic Moves, closing the gap between them. And so far I haven’t observed him using other spells. Expected nothing less from my superior.

“Wes, out of ammo!”

“Here, my last two! Darry, how’s Glock?”

That was PFC Wesson speaking through the holodisplay, asking me for the 2nd Lieutenant’s status, with PFC Smith in the background.

“The 2nd Lieutenant is doing well. I’d say he’s giving Ms. Mathis a hard time.”

“Tell us if he needs help. Right now we’re busy with som- SMITH LOOK OUT!!!

HISSATSU!!!!!!!!!!”

*beep*

I don’t know this stupid guy… nope, don’t know him…

*beep*

“- IRACULOUS FINISH!!!!!!!!! ”

*beep*

“COLT, GROW UP!!!!!”

*ehem*, sorry…

That was PFC Wesson, acting like the idiot he is, along with his brother. Even back then when fighting against overwhelming numbers or power, these two can’t seem to lose their love for screaming at the top of their lungs and spouting ridiculous barely understandable babble. These two…

I watch them on the holodisplay, running while blasting through hordes of Mai Enna’s illusion-enhanced doppelganger demons off-screen. Got to give them credit, they’re still alive and kicking, even under immense odds like these, where it’s easy to get overwhelmed due to immense numbers. I may not see them directly from here, but I can tell they’re trying to move south, closer and closer to here, and the 2nd Lieutenant’s position.

*beep*

“HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“

I feel a migraine coming…

“Colt, can you stop that please? It’s getting annoying!”

“Why should I, just when it’s getting fun! Too many enemies to handle!”

“Wesson, to your left! SMITH SPECIAL!!!!! STORM BOLTAAAA-“

“You too Smith!!!”

“Darry, it’s just a mock training session.”

“Don’t get your pink polka-dot panties up in a wad! Relax!”

“I am not getting my panties up in a-“

Wait… rewind… at this very moment, I am wearing my only pink polka-dot panties… that I just bought and wore today only an hour ago…

And Wesson flashes his widest, toothiest, grin at me…

... why you...

“COOOOOOOOOOOLT WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! !!”

That’s it! Nobody catches a peep from me!!

“Wes, they’re everywhere!”

“Smith, take cover!!!”

A small explosion just to my far north blasts up dust… and betrays their position!

“You bastard Colt Wesson…”

How many summoning circles should I call out? One? Two?! No, maybe FOUR?! No, EIGHT!

SCREW THIS, I’M TAKING THEM TO HELL!!!!!!!

“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

A thousand blades appear and rains my wrath down on these two! Stirring up tons of delicious smoke and dust! Yes my crystal babies, RAIN DOWN ON THESE UNHOLY LECHEROUS PERVERTS!!!!!! SMITE THEM DOWN!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!! DEATH, DESTRUCTION, MAYHEM, CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!! BLOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! STRIKE THEM DOWN FOR MY SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





A thick, opaque grey cloud of smoke hangs in the air in front of me…

Justice be done…

“Wow, impressive show there! You brought the block down!”

No way…that male voice. I look behind me. Smith, Colt? How’d they get here so fast?

“Thanks for bailing us out of there! That’s a nice feint Wes!”

“Bailing you out? Feint? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?”

Wesson raised his Linebacker over his shoulder, smirking at me. The smirk that told me I’m going to regret this.

“I thought we were toast, with all the Mai’s we had to fight, and with Wes and I out of ammo we couldn’t use area of effect weapons. And since you were available I felt it necessary to… use your assets.”

“So Wes rigged some Stinger Snipes to create that explosion at the spot we designated, and acted like we were the ones hit. We were long gone by the time your Crystal Rain hit. Cool huh?”

“Unfortunately Darry, Me, the Wild Wild Wes knows how to push your buttons.”

Lord, why me? Smith and Colt’s grinning faces… jeez, these two… I want to just smash their heads in together right now!

But… I can’t move… can barely stand up… I should’ve known better than to waste an S-rank spell on a couple of fools… I fell…

And two arms catch me.

“The Wild Wild Wes likes to express his gratitude for saving our asses...”

Heh… trying to act all suave on me… I’m not done yet with you you know…

“…And I really think you’re cute in those polka dots.”

Colt, why you… cute huh… Oh forget it.

“Private First Class Darry Milfuelle, get some rest. That's an order from me.”

I will Colt, I will.
____________________

Meanwhile…

Xealot: [Impressive power that young girl has. Don’t you think s- Is something bothering you Mistress? You’ve been searching under your feet for moments now.]
Mai: … Iya.

It’s nothing.

Xealot: [… I do not detect the presence of surveillance spells in the immediate vicinity.]
Mai: Sou ka.

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Shoddy :heh:

Liingo
2007-08-23, 07:37
Holy backlog!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry in advance for any misses...

WHO DO YOU THINK I AM KICKU!!!!!!!
BACKLOG BREAKKER!
If it's not obvious.. I'm still high from ep2 of GL....
lol...:heh: another Miria :eyespin:
At least the one I made is already dead... :(

New chapter :D


*snip*

Hehe~
Hints on Koji's Mode 3 and Yui's Mode 2 :D
And, as you can see, it runs along episode 20, it'll carry on to episode 21 (still working on those parts :heh:)

Maren is spending too much time with Yui :heh:
Is that just her imagination running wild...or her wishes...Hmmm :uhoh:
:twitch::twitch: Maren... What the.....
Okay. Here's the first draft of the profile of Miria Hasser (Riot-2).

Name: Miria Hasser
Sex: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: December 12
Homeworld: Midchilda
Relatives: None alive
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-2
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Circle Color: Blue
Favored Element: Water/Ice
Height: Around 5'6
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Long and blue
Eye Color: Purple
Build: Willowy
Personality: Gentle, stubborn (unforgiving and ruthless while playing cards).

Device Name: Aurora Weave
Device Appearance: Scepter
Barrier Jacket: Yet to be determined

Background: Miria is an orphan. All that is known about her past is her birthday, the intelligent device that was left with her, and her name (I’m too lazy to think of a background right now). She joined the TSAB at an early age, and eventually was noticed by Hayate. She joined the Riot force as a healing and support mage.

Overall, Miria is composed and demure. She is well-liked by all, and has never gotten in trouble with her superiors. On a side note, she is infamously RUTHLESS in card games.
No major complaints so far, the ranking looks fine as well. More comments if/when you publish spell lists.

Few OC-related comments about episode 21...

Hmm, I was thinking about having my characters go help the Numbers if needed...but the ones who need help are the good guys... :rolleyes: :heh: I wonder if you guys mind if I kill Schach? :uhoh:

Oy Oy.. No altering canon here please.... (Although I approve of killing off some of the canon cast... the numbers are getting ridiculous..:uhoh:)
Well, my brother finally got the initiative of making his own character:heh: It's short, real short. Note that this character is NOT in the 216th, so don't assume that.

Name: Hikaru K. Karyu
Nickname(s): Heart, "Egargarious Provicator: A much well respected Mid-Childian scholar and weed grower"
Gender: Male
Age:16
Birthday: June 14
Homeworld: Mid-Childa
Occupation/Rank: 2nd-in-Command of Twilight Squad/ Captain
Unit: 212th Rescue and Strike Unit, Twilight Squad- "Twilight 2"
Mage Rank: AA+
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Gold
Favored Element: Fire
Height: 5"7
Weight: 135 pounds
Hair: Black, spiky
Eye color: Dark Orchid
Build: Above-average
Device: Intelligent Device: Crux
Voiced by: Fukuyama Jun

Background:
He was born in Mid-Childa on MC 0056, with a twin sister, Hikari Karyu. His mother and father, Satoko and Kisuke Karyu, were technicians in the TSAB, working on several Devices, including those that would be eventually given to both of them. From about the age of 6, he knew he wanted to be a mage; both he and his sister learned about it when their parents were talking about their plans for the future. Both of them were sent to the TSAB Academy at the age of 8, and both of them were given their Devices, safely hidden and kept in good conditions, that they would use for a long time.
While there, Hikaru was known to be someone that had great potential, but someone who was "hard to deal with". His sister, on the other hand, had a better personality while having the same potential, so when they both graduated at 13, Hikari was higher up than Hikaru, although Hikari was the younger of the two.
From there, Hikaru went on into the Air Corps, where he trained with Nanoha Takamachi herself. After an accident there involving Nanoha, Hikaru transferred into the 212th Rescue and Strike Unit, and joined Twilight Squad. He then found out that his younger sister, Hikari, was commander of Twilight, and he was second-in-command of Twilight, another bit of irony in his life. He managed to make Captain rank, and he now currently stays there.

Personality:
He's best summed up in three words: hyperactive, knuckleheaded, and an idiot. He likes to have fun most of the time, and likes to make fun of a lot of people, which leads to him being beat up. He also likes to make jokes, although they are inappropriate at times. Still, that's his way of friendship. He cares deeply for all his friends, superiors, and especially his sister, often going in harm's way for them if they need help.

Device:
His Intelligent Device, Crux, was given to him by his mother, who personally worked on it. It has three forms: Sunlight Form, Skimmer Form, Sleight Form. In its Sunlight Form, Crux takes the appearance of a large spear-lance with a red cloth nearby. In its Skimmer Form, it takes the appearance of a knife attached to a thin wire. In its Sleight Form, it takes the appearance curved blade on a gauntlet, mounted on his forearm, which curves toward his elbow. Its AI is male and usually adresses him as "Sir."

Fighting Style:
He fights recklessly, ofthen beating his opponents by poinding them down or with one surprise attack. He doesn't care that much about tactics; he'd rather just go straight through every enemy.

Barrier Jacket:
Not looking as impressive as other people's, just because he didn't give it much thought, his Barrier Jacket looks like a gakuran, with a red shirt underneath, sneakers, and an armband on his left arm. He got this idea mostly with the help of Hayate Yagami.

Spells:

-Others:
Genocide Shift: A spell that inhibits thought and lets instinct run over; Hikaru uses this if he really has to. It causes him to become berserk, and he becomes faster and stronger. This takes a lot out of him, though, sending him into near-unconsciousness. He has to say a little song when casting it, which is:

Total Slaughter,
Total Slaughter.
I won't leave a single man alive.

La de da de dai,
Genocide.
La de da de duh,
An ocean of blood.

Let's begin the killing time.

Magical Clones: He creates clones made up of magical energy, though they can take a few hits and are weak in attacking.

-Movement:
Sonic Move: Same as Fate's own Sonic Move.

Gryphus Flight: Wings appear on his feet, letting him fly. He rarely uses this.

Rocket Boost: Activating Sunlight Form's boosters, He can charge the target at a high speed.

-Offensive:
Burst Shooter: Learned from Nanoha, he fires about 16 high-speed missiles instead of Nanoha's 12.

Line Stabber: He stabs at a target, then turns back and stabs the target again.

Heaven Asunder: In Sunlight Form, he does a single slash upward using Rocket Boost sending the target up. Sunlight Form

Sunspot: He creates a small inferno under a target.

Lighting Wire: In Skimmer Form, He takes hold of a target with the whip and shocks the target.

-Defensive:
Bubble Shield: Hikaru makes a geodesic bubble that surrounds him and is very tough to break.

Spin Guard: He can spin his Device in a circle, guarding from attacks.

Plate Barrier: A barrier covered by magic "plates" surrounds Hikaru and everyone else within a distance of 20 feet. If any magic attacks hit the plates, they fall off, like reactive armor in tanks.

Purge Jacket: The upper part of the Jacket unravels and explodes, destroying binds or anything else. He needs some time to reform it.

Trivia:
-Despite the fact that he is great at flying, he hates it.
-He likes watching anime, but also hates cosplaying. Still, Hayate always manages to make him cosplay.
-Nanoha and Hayate tolerate his presence, but most of the Wolkenritter, with the exception of Shamal, and Fate hate him.
-He is disrespectful at times, calling people by their first names, or adding baka at the end of names. For example, Fate-baka.
Looks to be an interesting character :D Although weed grower...:twitch::twitch: What the??
:sad: :sad: what's worse, he isn't able to fulfill the promise... even after 10 years.... :sad: :sad:

BTW, I just had a vision on how Hikki's going to look like after he receives the heartbreaking news. :uhoh:

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2893/1187032228130aq6.jpg
"You killed her... you took the only life away from me... I shall never forgive you..."

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9132/1187393207163tp0.jpg
"Thank you, Fate... and farewell..."

Without even giving a farewell gift, he charged at the rampaging AMF drone.

Whoa.. Berserk Hikki... SCARY!!
Although whats with all the shiroh pictures....:heh:
"Crikey! The crystal's HUUUGE! The OC Thread was once the place to see Bluecheesium in its natural habitat, but overharvesting reduced them to near extinction! I'd be a very sad man if that happened. But thanks to conservation efforts, all the Cheese have come back to this lil pond. Ain't it a dream, folks? :D"

- Creator-san, the Bluecheesium Hunter

:bow::bow::D:D:D:D:D
Alright. I have to go to bed now. But before that, here's Hikaru's edited profile:

Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Rabbi, Batman (this last nickname I’ll explain later)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Velka (sort of)
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Varies
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger
Device Appearance: Gun
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change

Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura (yes, his dad is a rabbi, making Hikaru Jewish). Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school).

Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right).

Doppleganger is unique in many aspects. One is that he can copy other devices and transform into them. Five devices are currently in storage; Graf Eisen, Levatine, Mach Caliber, Cross Mirage, and Strada. Doppleganger is also sentient, to the point of conversation. But he’s a jerk, so people tend to stay away.

Not much is known about the reasons behind Dopp’s (as he’s called) actions. Nobody knows why he calls his wielder “Batman”. Nobody knows why Dopp is an excellent singer with a penchant for Queen.
More to come
Doppelganger seems like an awesome device. Not sure if it was mentioned but are the spells copied as well? SInce that would provide alot of interesting oportunites.

And Batman.....??
Err… sorry about not being here for such a long time. I've been busy and I lost my place. I think I'll try reading this thread again from the beginning, but until then, I got some new ideas. These ideas are related to characters, but I'll post that later. For now, here's some new magic:http://content.imagesocket.com/images/Karrak_Templatee52.png
Sorry about the image croppingFrom the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" was a form of magic that became lost and mostly forgotten in favor of conventional weaponary. Although there were numerous attempts to rediscover this magic in the Karrak world, none got too far due to the constant war enviroment.

Due to the great war potential of the Karrak world, as well as the general tendancy towards conflict, the TSAB has chosen not to attempt contact with the world. However, despite this, a member has managed to established contact with the TSAB and is now a refugee in the TSAB. The member is also the only known Karrak magic user.

Although the current understanding of the magic is minimal, Karrak magic seems to have many similarities with Mid-childran magic with also some distinctive differences. Its application in information manipulation and illusionary skills seems to be much more efficient than their Mid-childran counterparts, however its combative spells seem much more specific and generally a bit less effective than the Mid-childran magic. Due to only having one known Karrak magic user, it is difficult to pinpoint whether these are traits of Karrak magic in general, or of the specific user.

Research into this magic are currently on-going.Of Mid-childran magic, there is a variety of schools each with variations on the magic used. Of these, the Gaest-school is considered among the most difficult to utilise, and its use is rare even among experienced mages.

The Gaest-school of magic was developed by the magic professor Z. A. Gaest by trying to increase the efficiency of magic spells. This is acheived by casting the spell in stages, first by creating one of the many template spells and then manipulating it to get the desired effect. Depending on the spell used, there could be as few as three to as many as thirty different steps for each spell.

The advantages to this school of magic is that it is much more efficient than most other schools of Mid-childran magic. Since the entire spell doesn't have to be prepared before-hand the spell starts faster and the manipulation system can drastically increase the spell variety and varience. However, in order for this school of magic to be effective, a number of template spells must be memorized, and each step must be done quickly, requiring a high amount of concentration.

Although users of this magic are rare, ones who have mastered it are known for their versitility and quick castings.
Welcome back!!
Nothing much to say but some nice ideas there on the magic types..I you want more feedback, ask me once the backlog induced fog has disappered..:heh:

did some teasers, so here we go.
“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was swiftly blocked by Hikki’s twin blades, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like knife cutting butter. “What the hell?”

Hikki tossed the blades upward. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He simply waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience here?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and pounced at Hikki. Yet the white-haired, red-dressed former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“CHESTOOOAH!!!!”

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

Pretty cruel, isn't it? :uhoh:
GAH!!
Oy stop with the evil teasers....


Attention! Chapter 4's full version is available. Follow this link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-iv-part-c.html) to read. :)

"That's it! Snow Wolf! Sitting Dragon!"

"Sir!!"

The young boy pointed to the two Gravian robot pilots -- directly at their face. "For failing to comply with order, I shall punish you by giving you easier names! Sitting Dragon!"

"Yes, sir."

"I'll assign you with the name Kyosuke."

"Yes, sir."

"Snow Wolf!"

"Y-yes, sir!"

"You'll be identified with call sign Ryusei."

"Ryusei!??? :eek: But sir, I object!"

"Do as what I say, or I'll give you worse name! Do you understand me?"

"Sir! Yes sir! To be named with Terran name of all things.... :upset: "

Elisa laughed even harder, to the point she fell off her chair and started rolling on the floor. Faye said nothing, although she did take note of her colleagues' new names. Alexandra could only laugh in submission at the young boy's stubbornness.

:D :D :D :D
ZOMG!
Hikki......:sad: SO SAD!!!!!!!

And all I've got to say on that last bit...:twitch::twitch::eyespin:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1184220846078.jpg

V : I AM YOUR FATHER!
C: IYAAAAAA!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/1186404530220.jpg

??? : And I’m your mother.
C : Lolier than me…USO DA!!!!!!

:twitch::twitch:

You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.
While I would love for that to happen, I doubt the writers will be able to do anything like that..
SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

*snip*


I could make them have a limited sense of individuality, but still attached to Scagletti...anyway, it's not truly a whole army...

THAT'S..THAT'S...improbable....:heh::uhoh: and I was listening to HOWLING when I saw this....
Holy ****!!!!!

:bow: That was excellent!!!!!!!!
And the story is keeping on with those last points!!!
:bow:

Sad for that... And the shafting was so freaking direct in that short flight I was rather appalled... Didn't help that Darco was laughing his head off. >.> As usual, Liingo was squashed in the middle. :heh:


EHHH?? When was this...... If it was on monday... well I was laughing at what I understood... I don't have a preference for the Nanoha shipping so meh..
"Brought me", not "mrought...etc." Curse my fast typing. :heh:

And I wonder in what ways Nove will choose to comfort Nove...:uhoh: :heh:

And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by Enzo who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The Letters were, for the most part, elsewhere, defendıng the ship. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.
Whoa!! This is turning out to be pretty good!!
Keep it up!!

@ LOWE

LOL That's some great stuff there :D
Hopefully my OC's never encounter her on a windy day..

*wind blows skirt up*

Darry:Kyaaaaaa!!
My OC's:.......*bleeding noses* We didn't see anything..... serious.....
Darry:“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

:heh::heh:

Kha
2007-08-23, 07:40
The tanks weren't empty... In fact, they're all floating inside. It actually looked as if he had a dozen more or so. :uhoh:

Then again, with Rider floating inside one of those, it's hard to tell how many are actual Numbers-types and how many are Relic-types... Jail's too much of a lazy-ass to differentiate between tube types. :heh:Eto... Oh... Man what happened to me again... Mindburst came out of nowhere... :heh:

So... Aaron is actually Ingram? :uhoh:Is that why he's limiting us? So that the Aerogators have a chance...? :uhoh:

HASHA!!!!!

Here's another entry in the LineBackerS series, from the POV of a character I introduced a chapter or two ago. This one takes place during the mock training battle with Mai after Part IV (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1039754&postcount=4188).

Here's LineBackerS, Part VIII, featuring:



Up here on the rooftop of an abandoned condo, I observe the raging battle happening in this abandoned city. The clashing of blades, polearm versus katana.

By the overpass, the archaeologist girl continued to clash with the 2nd Lieutenant, blade against blade. Both holding their own, but even from here it was apparent that 2nd Lieutenant Heckler had the overwhelming advantage. Ms. Mathis was using ranged Midchilda spells to attack from stand-off range, only to be countered by the 2nd Lt’s. Sonic Moves, closing the gap between them. And so far I haven’t observed him using other spells. Expected nothing less from my superior.

“Wes, out of ammo!”

“Here, my last two! Darry, how’s Glock?”

That was PFC Wesson speaking through the holodisplay, asking me for the 2nd Lieutenant’s status, with PFC Smith in the background.

“The 2nd Lieutenant is doing well. I’d say he’s giving Ms. Mathis a hard time.”

“Tell us if he needs help. Right now we’re busy with som- SMITH LOOK OUT!!!

HISSATSU!!!!!!!!!!”

*beep*

I don’t know this stupid guy… nope, don’t know him…

*beep*

“- IRACULOUS FINISH!!!!!!!!! ”

*beep*

“COLT, GROW UP!!!!!”

*ehem*, sorry…

That was PFC Wesson, acting like the idiot he is, along with his brother. Even back then when fighting against overwhelming numbers or power, these two can’t seem to lose their love for screaming at the top of their lungs and spouting ridiculous barely understandable babble. These two…

I watch them on the holodisplay, running while blasting through hordes of Mai Enna’s illusion-enhanced doppelganger demons off-screen. Got to give them credit, they’re still alive and kicking, even under immense odds like these, where it’s easy to get overwhelmed due to immense numbers. I may not see them directly from here, but I can tell they’re trying to move south, closer and closer to here, and the 2nd Lieutenant’s position.

*beep*

“HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“

I feel a migraine coming…

“Colt, can you stop that please? It’s getting annoying!”

“Why should I, just when it’s getting fun! Too many enemies to handle!”

“Wesson, to your left! SMITH SPECIAL!!!!! STORM BOLTAAAA-“

“You too Smith!!!”

“Darry, it’s just a mock training session.”

“Don’t get your pink polka-dot panties up in a wad! Relax!”

“I am not getting my panties up in a-“

Wait… rewind… at this very moment, I am wearing my only pink polka-dot panties… that I just bought and wore today only an hour ago…

And Wesson flashes his widest, toothiest, grin at me…

... why you...

“COOOOOOOOOOOLT WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! !!”

That’s it! Nobody catches a peep from me!!

“Wes, they’re everywhere!”

“Smith, take cover!!!”

A small explosion just to my far north blasts up dust… and betrays their position!

“You bastard Colt Wesson…”

How many summoning circles should I call out? One? Two?! No, maybe FOUR?! No, EIGHT!

SCREW THIS, I’M TAKING THEM TO HELL!!!!!!!

“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

A thousand blades appear and rains my wrath down on these two! Stirring up tons of delicious smoke and dust! Yes my crystal babies, RAIN DOWN ON THESE UNHOLY LECHEROUS PERVERTS!!!!!! SMITE THEM DOWN!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!! DEATH, DESTRUCTION, MAYHEM, CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!! BLOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! STRIKE THEM DOWN FOR MY SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





A thick, opaque grey cloud of smoke hangs in the air in front of me…

Justice be done…

“Wow, impressive show there! You brought the block down!”

No way…that male voice. I look behind me. Smith, Colt? How’d they get here so fast?

“Thanks for bailing us out of there! That’s a nice feint Wes!”

“Bailing you out? Feint? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?”

Wesson raised his Linebacker over his shoulder, smirking at me. The smirk that told me I’m going to regret this.

“I thought we were toast, with all the Mai’s we had to fight, and with Wes and I out of ammo we couldn’t use area of effect weapons. And since you were available I felt it necessary to… use your assets.”

“So Wes rigged some Stinger Snipes to create that explosion at the spot we designated, and acted like we were the ones hit. We were long gone by the time your Crystal Rain hit. Cool huh?”

“Unfortunately Darry, Me, the Wild Wild Wes knows how to push your buttons.”

Lord, why me? Smith and Colt’s grinning faces… jeez, these two… I want to just smash their heads in together right now!

But… I can’t move… can barely stand up… I should’ve known better than to waste an S-rank spell on a couple of fools… I fell…

And two arms catch me.

“The Wild Wild Wes likes to express his gratitude for saving our asses...”

Heh… trying to act all suave on me… I’m not done yet with you you know…

“…And I really think you’re cute in those polka dots.”

Colt, why you… cute huh… Oh forget it.

“Private First Class Darry Milfuelle, get some rest. That's an order from me.”

I will Colt, I will.
____________________

Meanwhile…

Xealot: [Impressive power that young girl has. Don’t you think s- Is something bothering you Mistress? You’ve been searching under your feet for moments now.]
Mai: … Iya.

It’s nothing.

Xealot: [… I do not detect the presence of surveillance spells in the immediate vicinity.]
Mai: Sou ka.

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Shoddy :heh:Well it IS a fun episode after all. :D And I didn't know S&W had the brains for something that complex. :p

Crystal Rain Genocide Shift + Angry Female Strike Boost = :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

First Mai, now Darry... They really indulge in Pain for Pleasure. :uhoh:

(runs)

Btw, GL has made me wanna introduce Allison's onee-san, the one who supposedly betrayed the imouto, who also has pink hair, but alas... Darii... I'm too slow... >_<

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 08:00
Is that why he's limiting us? So that the Aerogators have a chance...? :uhoh:


:uhoh::uhoh:


Btw, GL has made me wanna introduce Allison's onee-san, the one who supposedly betrayed the imouto, who also has pink hair, but alas... Darii... I'm too slow... >_<

:heh:

I can help find you a pink-haired girl if you want... although why is it that the only one I can think of for that role is this....



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-11602306830030.jpg

*runs from Kira and Strike Freedom*

:eyespin:



Edit:

Found someone else that may suit onee-chan more:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118769926763873.jpg

In case your wondering, character is Felt Grace, from the upcoming Gundam 00.

Keroko
2007-08-23, 09:09
A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 09:15
Why did that sound like Aerogators?

*sees icicles forming*

Too... cold? :heh:

Nice pun there...:heh:

This is the real world. Face it. :p

Oh the irony...:heh:

So... Aaron is actually Ingram? :uhoh:

Aurion's current BGM is Time Diver.:):uhoh:


HASHA!!!!!

Here's another entry in the LineBackerS series, from the POV of a character I introduced a chapter or two ago. This one takes place during the mock training battle with Mai after Part IV (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1039754&postcount=4188).

Here's LineBackerS, Part VIII, featuring:



Up here on the rooftop of an abandoned condo, I observe the raging battle happening in this abandoned city. The clashing of blades, polearm versus katana.

By the overpass, the archaeologist girl continued to clash with the 2nd Lieutenant, blade against blade. Both holding their own, but even from here it was apparent that 2nd Lieutenant Heckler had the overwhelming advantage. Ms. Mathis was using ranged Midchilda spells to attack from stand-off range, only to be countered by the 2nd Lt’s. Sonic Moves, closing the gap between them. And so far I haven’t observed him using other spells. Expected nothing less from my superior.

“Wes, out of ammo!”

“Here, my last two! Darry, how’s Glock?”

That was PFC Wesson speaking through the holodisplay, asking me for the 2nd Lieutenant’s status, with PFC Smith in the background.

“The 2nd Lieutenant is doing well. I’d say he’s giving Ms. Mathis a hard time.”

“Tell us if he needs help. Right now we’re busy with som- SMITH LOOK OUT!!!

HISSATSU!!!!!!!!!!”

*beep*

I don’t know this stupid guy… nope, don’t know him…

*beep*

“- IRACULOUS FINISH!!!!!!!!! ”

*beep*

“COLT, GROW UP!!!!!”

*ehem*, sorry…

That was PFC Wesson, acting like the idiot he is, along with his brother. Even back then when fighting against overwhelming numbers or power, these two can’t seem to lose their love for screaming at the top of their lungs and spouting ridiculous barely understandable babble. These two…

I watch them on the holodisplay, running while blasting through hordes of Mai Enna’s illusion-enhanced doppelganger demons off-screen. Got to give them credit, they’re still alive and kicking, even under immense odds like these, where it’s easy to get overwhelmed due to immense numbers. I may not see them directly from here, but I can tell they’re trying to move south, closer and closer to here, and the 2nd Lieutenant’s position.

*beep*

“HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“

I feel a migraine coming…

“Colt, can you stop that please? It’s getting annoying!”

“Why should I, just when it’s getting fun! Too many enemies to handle!”

“Wesson, to your left! SMITH SPECIAL!!!!! STORM BOLTAAAA-“

“You too Smith!!!”

“Darry, it’s just a mock training session.”

“Don’t get your pink polka-dot panties up in a wad! Relax!”

“I am not getting my panties up in a-“

Wait… rewind… at this very moment, I am wearing my only pink polka-dot panties… that I just bought and wore today only an hour ago…

And Wesson flashes his widest, toothiest, grin at me…

... why you...

“COOOOOOOOOOOLT WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! !!”

That’s it! Nobody catches a peep from me!!

“Wes, they’re everywhere!”

“Smith, take cover!!!”

A small explosion just to my far north blasts up dust… and betrays their position!

“You bastard Colt Wesson…”

How many summoning circles should I call out? One? Two?! No, maybe FOUR?! No, EIGHT!

SCREW THIS, I’M TAKING THEM TO HELL!!!!!!!

“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

A thousand blades appear and rains my wrath down on these two! Stirring up tons of delicious smoke and dust! Yes my crystal babies, RAIN DOWN ON THESE UNHOLY LECHEROUS PERVERTS!!!!!! SMITE THEM DOWN!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!! DEATH, DESTRUCTION, MAYHEM, CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!! BLOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! STRIKE THEM DOWN FOR MY SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





A thick, opaque grey cloud of smoke hangs in the air in front of me…

Justice be done…

“Wow, impressive show there! You brought the block down!”

No way…that male voice. I look behind me. Smith, Colt? How’d they get here so fast?

“Thanks for bailing us out of there! That’s a nice feint Wes!”

“Bailing you out? Feint? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?”

Wesson raised his Linebacker over his shoulder, smirking at me. The smirk that told me I’m going to regret this.

“I thought we were toast, with all the Mai’s we had to fight, and with Wes and I out of ammo we couldn’t use area of effect weapons. And since you were available I felt it necessary to… use your assets.”

“So Wes rigged some Stinger Snipes to create that explosion at the spot we designated, and acted like we were the ones hit. We were long gone by the time your Crystal Rain hit. Cool huh?”

“Unfortunately Darry, Me, the Wild Wild Wes knows how to push your buttons.”

Lord, why me? Smith and Colt’s grinning faces… jeez, these two… I want to just smash their heads in together right now!

But… I can’t move… can barely stand up… I should’ve known better than to waste an S-rank spell on a couple of fools… I fell…

And two arms catch me.

“The Wild Wild Wes likes to express his gratitude for saving our asses...”

Heh… trying to act all suave on me… I’m not done yet with you you know…

“…And I really think you’re cute in those polka dots.”

Colt, why you… cute huh… Oh forget it.

“Private First Class Darry Milfuelle, get some rest. That's an order from me.”

I will Colt, I will.
____________________

Meanwhile…

Xealot: [Impressive power that young girl has. Don’t you think s- Is something bothering you Mistress? You’ve been searching under your feet for moments now.]
Mai: … Iya.

It’s nothing.

Xealot: [… I do not detect the presence of surveillance spells in the immediate vicinity.]
Mai: Sou ka.

----------------------------------



Shoddy :heh:

BRILLIANT!:D At least S&W didn't take their pervertedness any further after exhausting Darry.:heh:

Is that why he's limiting us? So that the Aerogators have a chance...? :uhoh:

And then what? You expect me to sabotage Formation Saint?:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:




http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-11602306830030.jpg

*runs from Kira and Strike Freedom*

:eyespin:




After seeing angry Shinn-faced Lacus in CANON, this isn't really surprising.

Edit:

Found someone else that may suit onee-chan more:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118769926763873.jpg

In case your wondering, character is Felt Grace, from the upcoming Gundam 00.



She looks nice.:D

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

SUCCESS!:D That's Takamachi-style training for ya!:D:D:D


EDIT: All the hints are there. I STILL can't believe nobody have guessed the full name of A**********.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Liingo
2007-08-23, 09:31
A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

:heh::heh: They obviously discovered that they weren't ready for active duty...... the hard way...

Well it could be worse.... they might have had Vita as their trainer...:uhoh:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 09:42
The hard way ındeed...:uhoh:

I have decided to make profiles for the un-named Numbers, Quattordicİ to Venti (sİnce Treize belongs to SparkZ). I will not be dıstracted from the Letters work, however, which is going smoothly.

And picking up on a comment someone said ın the image thread, I have commenced adding in a snippet about E, Cinque, and their similarities to a certain well known spy...guess who :heh:

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-23, 10:23
I don't believe it... SUCH MASSIVE BACKLOG!!!

<hauls out ANTI-BACKLOG GATTLING GUN>

FIRE!

M-masaka!:eek: Is that Jun?!?!:eek::eek::eek:

Maybe...



And LEEEROOOOOOY REEEEIJIIIIII has a kind of fun ring to it. I love my ingenuity. :p

2 people? Sakura and Jun much? :uhoh:


YOUR genius?! I came up with the original! :joke:

Another Jun thinker?

Jun? :eek: Yep, you better run :heh::uhoh:

Masaka... <begins twitching>

:twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

Kono...

*is stepped on by mecha feet*

Sakura: BAKA INUUUUUUU!!!

*charges attack*

DAI! BAS! TAAAAAA!!!


*Far away, rays of light can be seen bursting from OC Thread, followed by a massive shockwave that blinds all*

... ...

Help... Nanoha... Feito-chan... Their indignant screams... *nosebleeds* Get them out of my head!

[Exprozion!]

GET THEM OUT!!! AHHHH!!!

*dies*



Sakura: Wii~~ :D

OMG this is my worst case of fanboyish eva... Ugh... *plod*

Calm down! Tabun...

Jun on the hunt? MUST SEE! :D:D:D

WHY DOES EVERYONE THINK THAT IT'S JUN-KUN?!


*two flaming silhouettes with Hayate evilgrins look back*

What makes you think so? We're perfectly trustable. :D

Either a) X and I are genious, b) Seven Arcs really has been ripping us off, c) I have a split personality who works at Seven Arcs. :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

And if you believe that, I have a bridge to sell you.

Option C: DOES NOT COMPUTE!

Option B: COMPUTES ONLY SLIGHTLTY.

Option A: DOES NOT COMPUTE! DOES NOT COMPUTE! DOES NOT COMPUTE! DOES NOT- <cut off by ???>

As for my OC's...

Aurion = KIA'd but still thinking how. Kha is the likely candidate. No Perfect Void there.
Brevis = Killed by Kha and the numbers before he wen't rogue
Cressida = Dies in a shuttle crash. No Einst in Twist's Fate world.
Vinson = KIA'd on bodyguard duty.
Liana = Assassinated
Barabus = Also killed in the Forsa family massacre as he takes down the rest of the killers in a Kamikaze move. Plot device. PLOT DEVICE!

So we're going with a completely different Universe which eventually ceases to exist?

In such case:

Serge = died soon after his birth due to the lack of control over his ability
Anatoly = died in the incident with false military intelligence along with the rest of his squad
Ramsus = never showed up, probably deceased with the closure of Shepherd Project
Mirian = died along with the rest of her home world
Sarah = died during the accident together with her parents, S'Zet family ceased to exist and its property was taken apart, partially passing to TSAB, partially to criminal organizations etc.
AO = unknown

Daemons never showed up.

Well, for my guys:

Boomer - Never encountered the TSAB squad on Earth; living comfortably in Ireland as a tavern owner

Sevasti - has yet to find his parent's killers; still an Enforcer

Mel - Never received Esperacchius, b/c it was never found in this universe. But she IS a knight... and DOES have a legendary Device - Enforcer known in the Bureau as "Lady Dragonslayer."

Arcas - Unknown... graduated from TSAB Academy, given Intelligent Device Apalis... and vanished not long after.

I just had a Mindburst!

Continuation of SophiaHayate:

Hayate: :nod: Wagateru, O-nee-chan! (hugs from behind)
Sophia: (blush) H-hey what are you doing? :twitch:
Hayate: Thanking my onee-chan properly desu~ ;)
Sophia: But your hands--! (moan) Ahh~~!
Hayate: Onee-chan is very soft and cuddly desu~~ :D


Tsundere's are always soft and cuddly - once you get past the whole 'beating you to an inch of your life' thing.

<tilts head> Could Arcas and Sophia get cuddly once? PLEASE? (Don't worry about Mel - it'll be strictly platonic) (And NOT cuddly like this)

I see... There's quite a lot of OC devices that can't be copied well in that sense, like Artherion, Tausend Kreuz, Swertkreuz, Kaleidostick, Jeweled Sword of Zelretch, Apalis and A-something, the Zestro-devices, the Intel Dept's, LineBacker L & R, Sofia...

I quoted, to the best of my ability, all the Rank S devices in the thread. Apologies if I missed anyone's. :heh:


A-something = ASCALON da yo! AS-CA-LON te ba!

And he wouldn't be able to copy Esperacchius either.



Hmm... With Auron being the father and Shamal at times being refered as a mother...

:thinker:

AuronXShamal! :D

*ducks*

Not to mention his character has single parent qualifications (Kiritsugu). :D

Yan-papa FTW! :D

AurionXShamal FTMWTFWin!!! :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:

(tapdances around A********* shots)

<snorts @ idea>

<chuckles>

<laughs haltingly>

<breaks down in manic laughter a la Higurashi>

IT'S PERFECT!

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 10:37
Tsundere's are always soft and cuddly - once you get past the whole 'beating you to an inch of your life' thing.

<tilts head> Could Arcas and Sophia get cuddly once? PLEASE? (Don't worry about Mel - it'll be strictly platonic) (And NOT cuddly like this)

Sophia?:heh: Getting cuddly with Arcas?:twitch:

<snorts @ idea>

<chuckles>

<laughs haltingly>

<breaks down in manic laughter a la Higurashi>

IT'S PERFECT!

If you're planning on matchmaking my character with anyone in your scenario's, two words, forget it(permission from maker, denied).:rolleyes: If Aurion is ever to get a mate, it's gonna be an OC from me. I don't pair my Original Characters with Canon Characters. Flirting, maybe. But those are to be done by me and are meant to be as slight comic relief only (Like those snippets with Reinforce 1 and Signum; and that sekuhara-ish scare tactic used on Hayate in one scenario).

Tk3997
2007-08-23, 10:55
You call Vivio drama?

Until Nanoha’s stuck between 300 rocks and another 300 hard places, I wouldn’t call it drama yet.

Thus far, it seems like a simple issue of just saving her… I hope that simplicity gets crushed to the point where it’s either save Vivio and risk billions, or kill Vivio with her own hands to save billions.

Or something THAT cruel. At least. Call me evil, but I love drama which forces one to choose between hell and a different hell.See I feel that drama is okay, but it can also quickly end up overdone and just become silly, soap opera’ish melodrama. Something like this would fall into that category IMO it would just be so ridiculously over the top it would be impossible for me to take seriously, plus “mysterious little girl on which the fate of the world hangs” is cliché beyond words at this point. There are ways to generate drama beyond cheap contrived moral dilemmas, if you even need drama which I don’t feel you really do for certain stories and shows to work.

I never got why allot of people seem to hate happy endings so much, you know large parts of life DON’T end in horrible soul crushing train wrecks, in fact more often then not they tend to turn out pretty okay. Allot of times life really is pretty simple, at least in terms of deciding what to do, execution can be trickier. I mean following this logic really Hayate and all of the knights should probably have been killed to stop the book, but no somehow they found a way to save them and stop the book and the one person that died really didn’t they just changed form, and shrunk a little. So basiclly you seem to want the very tenants of the entire series to somehow shift to suit you… and if they did we’d probably have guys moaning about how everyone was suddenly so damn emo.

Me I don’t mind a series that doesn’t try to inject massive doses of forced drama into my veins. But then I’m also a guy that watched Eva for the robot battles and fast forwarded past the stupid monologues and stuff and won’t apologize for it. “Yes, yes you hate your father can we please get back to stabbing that giant monster in the face with a knife the size of my car please, k’ay thanks.”

But then I’ve had plenty of borderline emo drama in my life already (kicked out of a half dozen or more schools, forced to pop pills for most of my teenage years as I was diagnosed with one disorder after another, never finished high school, had few if any friends for years, etc.) So I don’t need to watch that shit on TV I lived it. It also helped contribute to my hatred of emo and drama though; because I also GOT THE HELL OVER IT, and even at my worst I had standards I adhered too (I don’t even have a parking ticket for instance). People that hit a little bump and then go all crazy or super depressed just make me roll my eyes and say “get the hell over it already before I reach in their and pimp slap you, you whiney bitch.”

I don’t know why anyone would watch a magic girl show for gut wrenching emo drama anyway, it’s like watching reality TV for intellectually stimulating and thought provoking content, it’s just silly the genre isn’t and probably never will be about that.

But whatever that's just my opinion, besides really killing what seems like a 6 or 7 year old would be pretty hardcore for any show never mind one has fluffy as this. I put the chances of this happening somewhere between pigs flying and the Militants in Iraq deciding tomorrow the killing isn't worth it and throwing down their arms.

Erio
2007-08-23, 11:03
No.
:twitch: Y-you dont mind? :eek:

So that's your primary motive...:heh:
:D I did say I gotta save them somehow! :D

But didn't you just hand her over?:confused:
Not exactly. I just proposed my idea to Kha and he liked it. Gwen and Kha are now linked, but dont expect any rabu-rabu... :heh: And from the way it is, it wont Gwen who will try to get to Kha, but the other way around... :uhoh: :heh:

SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”



:eek: :eek: Awesome finish! :bow: Especially the Vincent x Satsuki part. :D

And Sion is making his move now... interesting. :D

And Noboyuki... :eek:

More!:D

:eek:

Who's the HAWT Lolier than Loli mama? :twitch:
That's my soon-to-be Sentou Kijin... :uhoh:

(Yin from Darker Thank Black)

Sad for that... And the shafting was so freaking direct in that short flight I was rather appalled... Didn't help that Darco was laughing his head off. >.> As usual, Liingo was squashed in the middle. :heh:

AurionXHayate's pretty expected, but I remember this scene from Ronin Kenshin:

Hayate: I'm no longer that little girl you raised... I'm a woman, with her own heart! Aurion-sempai, open your eyes! :(

(runs from A************ voidspam)
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*runs from Aaron*

"Brought me", not "mrought...etc." Curse my fast typing. :heh:

And I wonder in what ways Nove will choose to comfort Nove...:uhoh: :heh:

And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by Enzo who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The Letters were, for the most part, elsewhere, defendıng the ship. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.
:eek: When does this happen, though? :heh:

Oy Oy.. No altering canon here please.... (Although I approve of killing off some of the canon cast... the numbers are getting ridiculous..:uhoh:)
What the-- Liingo, did you really think I was serious there? :twitch: :heh:


More comments later, gotta go...

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 11:32
See I feel that drama is okay, but it can also quickly end up overdone and just become silly, soap opera’ish melodrama. Something like this would fall into that category IMO it would just be so ridiculously over the top it would be impossible for me to take seriously, plus “mysterious little girl on which the fate of the world hangs” is cliché beyond words at this point. There are ways to generate drama beyond cheap contrived moral dilemmas, if you even need drama which I don’t feel you really do for certain stories and shows to work.

I never got why allot of people seem to hate happy endings so much, you know large parts of life DON’T end in horrible soul crushing train wrecks, in fact more often then not they tend to turn out pretty okay. Allot of times life really is pretty simple, at least in terms of deciding what to do, execution can be trickier. I mean following this logic really Hayate and all of the knights should probably have been killed to stop the book, but no somehow they found a way to save them and stop the book and the one person that died really didn’t they just changed form, and shrunk a little. So basiclly you seem to want the very tenants of the entire series to somehow shift to suit you… and if they did we’d probably have guys moaning about how everyone was suddenly so damn emo.

Me I don’t mind a series that doesn’t try to inject massive doses of forced drama into my veins. But then I’m also a guy that watched Eva for the robot battles and fast forwarded past the stupid monologues and stuff and won’t apologize for it. “Yes, yes you hate your father can we please get back to stabbing that giant monster in the face with a knife the size of my car please, k’ay thanks.”

But then I’ve had plenty of borderline emo drama in my life already (kicked out of a half dozen or more schools, forced to pop pills for most of my teenage years as I was diagnosed with one disorder after another, never finished high school, had few if any friends for years, etc.) So I don’t need to watch that shit on TV I lived it. It also helped contribute to my hatred of emo and drama though; because I also GOT THE HELL OVER IT, and even at my worst I had standards I adhered too (I don’t even have a parking ticket for instance). People that hit a little bump and then go all crazy or super depressed just make me roll my eyes and say “get the hell over it already before I reach in their and pimp slap you, you whiney bitch.”

I don’t know why anyone would watch a magic girl show for gut wrenching emo drama anyway, it’s like watching reality TV for intellectually stimulating and thought provoking content, it’s just silly the genre isn’t and probably never will be about that.

But whatever that's just my opinion, besides really killing what seems like a 6 or 7 year old would be pretty hardcore for any show never mind one has fluffy as this. I put the chances of this happening somewhere between pigs flying and the Militants in Iraq deciding tomorrow the killing isn't worth it and throwing down their arms.

Looks like I better add smileys next time I'm not 100% serious. Looks like my slight sarcasm got taken too seriously. :rolleyes:

My main point behind what I said was the drama of the whole situation, not just Vivio alone. Like said, this is magical girl, and there is no way Mid-childa is going to get destroyed, so there's the lack of drama there already. Doesn't mean they should slack on other dramatic aspects, which imo, even as far as the final battle goes, isn't really all that exciting. Even if bad or bittersweet ends are not to be expected, I'm talking about accompanying drama, which thus far in StrikerS, despite making its scale larger, seems less touching, since on the personal fronts, it's only developed on a few accounts. Even though Hayate dying in A's was like...close to zero, that didn't demean the drama on the Wolkenritter's side, through their dramatic struggle against time for something that may be fruitless throughout the 8 or so episodes. Same goes to Fate's personal suffering for her mother's sake. On the other hand, this feels more worldly and less personal, but even the worldly aspects seemed tacked on later on with the Cradle. I mean, Jail's character development along with the Numbers and such came quite late into the series, making the other aspect that drives the negative drama seem less... powerful on some fronts.

I seem to give the impression I want a bad end. I do not. I just like very very powerful emotional ups and downs. And a good genre mixes things. SAILOR MOON was very dramatic when it needed that dramatics too. Besides, it's not like A's was pure fluff. If it was, then I rest my case.

I like happy ends. But at the same time, I like to see that happiness being earned... through thick and thin. The thin aspects of StrikerS (( the regular happy days )) were done well, but I personally think the "thick" could be thicker though.

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 11:50
:twitch: Y-you dont mind? :eek:

I just phrased it wrong.:heh: Sorry. My mind was in a bit of a wreck to read properly. I meant, "No. Don't kill her.":heh: Of course I don't want Schach to die yet!:heh:

APPROVED!!! :D

*runs from Aaron*

LOL! No need to run.:p That's really kinda hilariously nice to imagine.:D But I'm definitely not going to use that kind of scenario in my works.:heh: Hayate will remain as the daughter-figure of Aurion, and there's no changing that. C'mon! Hayate with a Father-Complex? USODA!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:



@Tk3997: Welcome to the OC Thread.:)

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 12:13
Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 12:20
Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

I see, I see...
Nice!:D
You've got the balancing just right! Good job, I say!:D

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-23, 12:22
And no thanks for the pairing.:heh:
Aurion stays a bachelor. And if he ever gets paired off. It's with a female OC of mine. I NEVER pair my OC's with CC's, even if I have my OC's flirting with CC's on occation.:heh:

First, Signum(Kha's idea), then Hayate(Erio's idea) now Shamal(Keroko's idea)?:heh: Who's next? Reinforce 1? Tesla?

<grins> SHARIIII!!

Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.



"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'



Eh, tell me what all of you think. As said, it's very, very doubtful this will be in the final product.

Well... V is finally here...

finished with lance's profile


Name: Azuma-Lance
Nick Name: Lance
Sex: Male
Age: 23
Birthday: *unknown*
Homeworld: *Same as Blade*
Occupation/Rank: Former TSAB officer, Dr. Jail's Accomplice *villain*
Unit: N/A
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: *Same as Blade*
Magic Circle Color: *Same as Blade*
Favored Element: Multi Magic spells
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 130-146 pounds
Hair: Long, Silver hair
Eye Color: Red
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Device Name: Chaos
Device Form: Necklace
Device Appearance: Large Twin Saber
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Barrier Jacket Forms:

Burst Form (Black)- Lance's Default Barrier Jacket. The Burst Form gives lance a speed increased to the maximum *Same as Fate's Sonic Form* and enables him to perform a multiple attacks with his Large twin saber.

*Limiter Released* Soul Form (Gray)- The Soul Form allows Lance's large twin sword to act as an sheild to nullify every enemy attacks and also reflects directly back at them but it costs half of lance's offence.

*Limit Break* Astral Form (Shining silver)- Lance's Final Form. The Astral Form gives all of lance's abillities a massive increase in power, as well as raising his speed and defence but risking the users life.
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Attacks Spells:

Soul Ripper: Lance's basic attack, which channels his energy through his saber, and is powerful enough to tear apart anything, making it easy for him to rip his enemies in half.

Bakuryūha: *This only works. if lance uses it's Astral form* Lance combines it's strong magic and it's soul ripper to create 2 enormous twisters that sucks the foes power into the twister and forces it to flow backwards. The wind and the power twist together into a vortex, pushing it backwards and the enemy is attacked in its own magic force and might combined with his soul ripper attack.

Raigeki: Lance slams his fist into the ground unleashing a Massive Ray Storm with a range within 720m Radius around him.

Hell and Heaven: *Same as Blade but lance uses it's large twin sabers to perform*
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Background:
Lance has been considered a genius since a young age, graduating at the top of his TSAB Academy class at age 7, attaining initial activation and mastery of it's Berserker by age 8, and becoming a TSAB Officer at age 10. These accomplishments led the members of the Azuma clan to think of Lance as the clan's strongest member and, in turn, the clan's future. Lance's father, Azuma Fugaku, was the biggest proponent of this idea and focused much of his effort into bettering Lance's career and status within TSAB. Because of his focused attention on Lance, Fugaku paid little attention to his other son, Azuma Blade. As a result of this neglect, Blade attempted to win his father's attention by somehow outdoing Lance. Lance would often offer to help Blade train to accomplish this goal, though he never lived up to his promises. To compensate for this, Lance tried to force their father to spend time with Lance by refusing to carry out his other tasks unless his father complied. While Fugaku did so, much of the time he spent with Blade was still focused around Lance, and Blade continued to desire his father's attention.

At the age of 13, Lance became a squadron leader of the TSAB special force. After joining the TSAB special forces, however, Lance began to ignore his assignments and at the same time became a prime suspect in the death of Shisui Azuma. While Shisui had been a good friend of Lance and had appeared to commit suicide, the clan began to suspect the suicide was faked and that Lance killed Shisui. As this lack of faith began to spread, Lance began to distance himself from the clan, attacking its members when provoked and voicing his opinion that the clan itself was hopeless. As a result, the relationship between it's father and lance became estranged, and Fugaku started spending his time training Blade in an attempt to steer him away from following in Lance's footsteps. Just as Blade began to receive the attention he so yearned for, he returned home one day to find that Lance had killed every member of the clan. When questioned why he murdered their entire family, Lance replied that it was "to test his ability", though he felt that Blade was not worth killing. Before leaving he encouraged Blade to live a life of hate and get strong enough to defeat him and avenge the clan. To help in this regard, Lance told Blade of how to gain the Berserker: one must simply kill his or her closest friend, just as he had done to Shisui.
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Personality:

Lance is a relatively emotionless character, rarely becoming troubled by anything and finding the goings on in the world around him to be of little significance and has a "smart and cold" personality, and knows what he wants and does whatever it takes to achieve his goals.When put into a battle situation he dislikes wasting time or making the fight more complicated than necessary, instead finishing it or accomplishing his business as soon as possible. During the battle itself he finds little interest in his opponent, instead regarding them as a mere inconvenience. When he returns to TSAB for the first time after killing his clan, however, he expresses his wishes to not fight the TSAB, instead hoping to avoid a needless and drawn out battle. Lance's only noticeable interest is in Dr. Jail's goals, putting the Dr. Jail's ambition a success and secrecy before everything else. As such, Lance gets along with, Dr. Jail much better than most other Numbers do with their own partners, in fact, has a deep loyalty to Lance, immediately doing as he instructs and constantly looking out for his well-being. Lance treats all of Dr. Jail's Numbers to this same, more respectful and agreeable personality, though his courtesy is rarely returned by the other members
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done :)

It walks like Itachi, looks like Itachi, talks like Itachi, smells like Itachi, hell, it TASTES like Itachi!

IT'S ITACHI!!!

And unfortunately, you'll never get my approval. I DESPISE BLATANT RIP-OFFS! Especially ones from a MEDIOCRE series! If you're going to copy, at least copy something GOOD!

New chapter :D


At the Arthra's briefing room, Nanoha explained to everyone the plan.
That they would split in three groups, one group would protect the attack on the Ground Central, the other two would attack the Cradle and Scagiletti's lab.

"Any questions?" Nanoha asked.
Caro raised her hand, "ano, what about Maren-san, Koji-san and Yui-san?"
"They're finishing some last minute calibrations on themselves, they are already aware of the plan." Nanoha explained.
"Maren and Koji are going with me to Scaglietti's lab, while Yui will be assisting Nanoha and Hayate." Fate added.
"Anyone have anymore questions?" Nanoha asked again.
No one replied.
"Very well then, let's prepare for departure." Nanoha got up from her chair, followed by everyone else.
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During that briefing, Koji, along with Maren and Yui were in the ship's lab with Mariel.
"This should do it..." Mariel said as she finished up adjusting Koji and Yui's devices and handed them over.
"Thank you, Marie-san." Koji took Air Calibur and Yui took Undine.

"I did the modifications you asked and upgraded them as much as I could in such short notice." Mariel adjusted her glasses.
"Undine, how are you?" Yui asked as she put Undine on her finger.
[All parts are in green condition]
"I see." She smiled.
"Air?" Koji raised his pendant to eye level.
[All systems ready]
Koji smiked, "Good."

"Koji...about Air Calibur" Mariel looked at him. "Are you sure you can handle the modifications on Mode 3?"
"Don't worry, Marie-san, I'm much stronger now, thanks to Maren's training." He looked at Maren, she nodded. "I should be able to handle it."
"I see, but still...that mode is very extreme, only use it if you need to." She asked him.
"Yes." Koji nodded.

"And Undine's Mode 2...well, it shouldn't be much of a problem, but it changes Yui's fighting style."
"No need to worry. To where we are going, I don't think I'll need to fully use it anyway...maybe just the barrier jacket." Yui laughed.
Koji folded his arms, "I know you like flashy clothes, but that barrier jacket is a bit unsual, even for you."
Yui turned to him, "Onii-chan~ Even if it changes my style...it's very useful."
"Well...You were trained by Nanoha-senpai after all, but be careful..." He looked at her.

Yui giggled, "I'm worried about Onii-chan, if anyone sees you fighting in Mode 3, Onii-chan will certainly be called 'Sword Demon' for such a fighting style."
"Y-Yui..." He sweatdropped.
"At least you two are in a good mood." Mariel commented with a smile. "How about Maren-san?"
"I'll be fine...Koji will be with me." She replied.
Koji scratched his cheek, "Y-yeah...we'll be watching eachother's backs..." He looked down, embarrassed.
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While Nanoha gave her Forwards an 'inspirational speech', Maren, Koji and Yui met up with Hayate, Vita and Fate.

"Hayate-senpai! Fate-senpai! Vita-san!" Koji, Maren and Yui walked to them.
"How did it go?" Fate asked.
"No problems, we're ready to go." Koji replied confidently.
Hayate nodded, "Good, you three will be a good help, since we all split up like that."
"You can count on us!" Yui said poudly, resting her arms on her waist.

As they waited for Nanoha, Hayate stepped closer to Koji and whispered, "Did you three sleep together again?" She teased him.
"H-Hayate-senpai...that was..." He stepped back.
Fate, who was discussing something with Maren, turned to them. "Is something wrong?"
"N-Nothing, nothing at all..." He titterd.

"Fate-chan~ Hayate-chan~" Nanoha called them.
"Nanoha-nee~" Yui looked at her as she walked to them.
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The lower hatch opened and they jumped off, Koji, Yui and Maren immedeately changed to their Barrier Jackets.
Nanoha, Fate, Hayate and Vita changed after their Limiter Release.
Afterwards, Nanoha changed to Exceed mode and led the group.

As Nanoha talked to Fate, like they haven't in such a long time, the other's watched.
"*sigh* They're leaving me out of the conversation...again." Hayate sighed.
Koji flew closer to Hayate, "Well...Nanoha-snepai and Fate-senpai have been together the longest...and when they get like this, they forget about who's around..."
"That reminds me...in times like this I'm talking to Yui...where is she?" Hayate looked at him.
"Behind us...talking with Maren...she doesn't let me get closer..." He sighed.

"Maren-chan, I'm not sure how things are going to turn out, but Maren-chan and Onii-chan will eventually be separated from the others..." She paused.
Maren nodded, "Yes...that might happen."
"What ever you do, don't let Onii-chan take you to some isolated room!" She said it like it was a warning.

"Isolated...room?" Maren blinked. Then, her mind wandered off.


"There's nothing here...let's look elsewhere." She said, but then Koji blocked the exit.
"Is something wrong?" She blinked.
"Not really..." He walked to her and put an hand on her waist and grabbed her wrist with the other.
"Eh? Koji-sama?" She started walking backwards and he kept up with her pace, until she was against a wall.
"Maren...now that we're alone..." He slid a leg between her's.
"But, we're on the middle of a misson..." She said, but didn't struggle.
"Everyone'll be fine, let's just use this time to enjoy ourselves..." He smirked as the first hand slid down her leg.
"Mmn....Koji-sama...d-don't..."
"*chuckle* You say no, but your body says yes..."
The two slowly fall on the floor, "Koji-sama~ N-not there..."


"Maren-chan!!" Yui shouted.
"Eh? What?" Maren snapped out of it, her face red like a tomato.
"Were you listening? I said, don't let Onii-chan go to an isolated room, you're going to a laboratory, he tends to get interested in mechanical things." She explained.
"A-Ah...ok, I won't let him out of my sight..." She replied.

"It's almost time." Hayate told Fate and Nanoha.
They nodded, gently hit their fists together and parted ways.
"See you later, Onii-chan~ Maren-chan~" Yui waved at them.
Koji nodded, "Do your best!" and along with Maren, followed Fate.

As they flew behind Fate, Koji looked at Maren, "Maren...why is your face all red?"
"I-it's nothing..." She looked away.
Koji blinked at her reaction, "Okay...if you say so..."
(Why...why did I think of such a thing?) Maren questioned herself, not knowing the answer.
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Hehe~
Hints on Koji's Mode 3 and Yui's Mode 2 :D
And, as you can see, it runs along episode 20, it'll carry on to episode 21 (still working on those parts :heh:)

Maren is spending too much time with Yui :heh:
Is that just her imagination running wild...or her wishes...Hmmm :uhoh:

Oh dear... Maren's in Clock-Ticking Mode...

Alright. Here it is, the origin of Doppleganger.


It was a mistake. When Hikaru's device was being made, some corrupted parts were used on accident. The result was a smart-alecky gun that could copy other devices. The higher ups are still trying to replicate the effect.

Short, I know, but here are some Doppleganger quotes:

"My only dream is to have a body. Why? So I can sock you in the face, that's why."
"You smell that? Chocolate-chip cookies, like my mother used to make."
"I tried to copy the Tausend Kreuz, but I blacked out. I woke up thinking about blue cheese, for some reason."
"Is this the real life... is this just fantasy... caught in a landslide, no escape from reality..."

Here are the Doppleganger quotes:
"My god.... we're fighting a Latin textbook!" -on Scaglietti's Number troops
"Jail? His name is Jail? Who the hell names their kid 'Jail'?"
"This... is... MID-CHILDA!"
"Don't believe in yourself! Believe in me who believes in you!" -moments after saying this, Hikaru and Doppleganger were attack by a droid equipped with a drill

Good quotes!

So much for proving my crack theory that the quietest anime girls are the horniest. :eyespin:

Chris Tucker... And LOL at Kaleidoscope magic connection through Tausend Kreuz AKA breaking the 4th Wall. :D

More Chris Tucker! :heh: And the Sparta!!! shout reminded me of this:

"Midchilda you say? THIS, IS, BELKA!!!" - Kha, to Dios.


Don't worry; there are exceptions to every theory! Don't lose hope!

And which of those quotes were Tucker?




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KONATA ALERT! ENGAGE ANTI-OTAKU DEFENSES!

SearcherS part 6 is done, and it involves the death of someone...:uhoh:
Here it is:

Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:49 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:38 P.M. SHT]

“For them…it’s for their sakes I’m fighting…” Vincent thought as he blocked two horizontal slashes from Betrüger, counter-attacking with two quick swipes of his own. The attack managed to make him stagger, but Betrüger recovered and pushed Vincent out of his way, towards the raging sea below. “Leitungform!” Vincent yelled, and the part fired out, grabbing an edge. Kicking Betrüger in the head as a bonus, he got back up, and prepared to fight again. “Damn it, boy…” Betrüger muttered to himself, ticked off at Vincent, who had improved so much. “It’s good you’re improving…let’s see if you can put what you learned effectively.”

“You’ll see what I can do…” Vincent replied in his usual cocky tone.

“Hmph.” Betrüger said, smirking. “You dog, you’ll die, like those friends of yours.”

“And this is why I fight.” he thought before charging straight at him.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:06 P.M.

As Aurion walked out of the Med Bay, Nobuyuki was leaning on a wall nearby, arms crossed.

“So, what’s his status?” he asked him indifferently, like it was normal conversation.

“His flashbacks may be meaning that he’s coming back, although he still doesn’t know it.” Aurion replied, and Nobuyuki looked at the left in thought.

“Alright then. Guess I’ll see you later,” and with that, Aurion left, going back to the Tech Department. “So…it’s true.”

Meanwhile, Anne was hiding from Nobuyuki, trying to figure out what was happening. “I don’t know of anybody that they would talk about…”

“Hey, Anne, I know you’re there.” Nobuyuki said with a small smile, and surprised her. “How did you-“ she said out loud, surprised. “Don’t hide around shadows next time.” That was Nobuyuki’s answer, which irritated her. “Don’t hide around shadows….who does he think he is?” she thought to herself before Nobuyuki headed straight to the Major’s office. “Well, we’re being called. Let’s go.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:52 P.M
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10: 41 P.M.]

Being smacked down to the ground was no fun. Being smacked down to the ground repeatedly, with barely any air to be able to breathe was no fun either. “Maschinegewehr Faust!” Vincent said out loud, and he fired straight at Betrüger, who dodged it, but dropped him to the ground. Catching his breath while rubbing his throat, he got up quickly. “Shell Bullet, let’s see if he gonna fall for this.”

“[Jawohl! Blattform!]” the Device said out loud, and he ran towards him. “Still charging towards me, boy?” Betrüger thought to himself, grinning that Vincent was predictable enough. “I’ll finish you off.” As he closed in, Vincent did something Betrüger never expected him to do; he jumped into the air, ready to strike him from above. “[Slash Diver!]” Shell Bullet quickly replied, ejecting three cartridges. Diving down, he would have hit Betrüger, had it not been for the fact that he barely moved out of the way, getting part of his Barrier Jacket cut off. Vincent got the blade stuck again, and Betrüger took that chance, but Vincent knew better. He side-swiped Betrüger with two kicks before landing a quick stab on him. Betrüger backed out, blood flowing from his wound.

“Shit, I never expected this.” he said to Vincent, coughing out a little bit of blood. “But it’s not over.” he added, going back into a combat stance.

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.” Vincent replied, a smile still on his face.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:09 P.M.

“Well….let’s get started, shall we?” Satoshi said to everyone, telling them about what he found about Betrüger. “For one thing, Betrüger’s Device’s a failed project.”

“A failed project?” Sydney said, confused.

“His Device is called a Kristallnacht Device; specifically, the special thing about it was its function. It had the ability to improve a person’s fighting abilities by hard-wiring the AI to the user’s brain.”

“That’s strange….” Anne replied. “Hmm…” the Major added, looking at Satoshi somehow skeptically. “If it was a beneficial thing, then why was it a failed project?” Sydney asked again.

“The AI was known to basically take over a person completely, and any attempts to remove it would kill the person itself, since the AI and the person itself was used to the effects.”

“A parasitic Device, nice…” Nobuyuki replied in sarcasm.

“Hey, at least we got a weak point.”

“So, how does this fit with Betrüger?”

“He was the last test subject, and his Device probably made him berserk. Watch.” Satoshi showed them the small clip that he saw on the store Saika and Rushuna had. “He had the Device, and the Device corrupted him.” the Major concluded. “That’s what I think, but there’s a problem.” Satoshi replied. “A problem? Better be something important.” Nobuyuki said to him, still thinking about what was happening. “There were some pictures taken recently of him, and the problem is that Betrüger doesn’t look the same in the video and in the pictures. I asked my contact to scan the current picture for any TSAB members, and there was a match.”

“Let’s see it then.” the Major replied, starting to take a drink. Satoshi agreed and opened up the profile he saw. As soon as he saw that, the Major almost choked on his drink, managing to swallow it.

“N-Naze?” he said out loud after that, shocked. “George Darnay; former TSAB mage, presumed to be dead, step-father to Vincent Fiorano, and our current Betrüger.”

“But how is that possible?” the Major asked.

“I’m not su-“

“Simple.” Nobuyuki interrupted. “If the Device is like a parasite after it was corrupted, it would latch on anybody else when its original user dies.”

“Then that means-“

At that point, Satsuki and Margaret rushed in, knowing that the briefing was happening, but they had something to tell everyone. “Gomen, gomen, but Vince is gone…”

“Gone? What do you mean gone?”

“Margaret and I checked his room, to see if he was okay, and it was unlocked. When we went in, he was gone.” she explained quickly, still trying to catch her breath. “Crap…” Satoshi thought to himself, thinking that Vincent left for something else other than to clear his mind. “Let’s check his room then; something must be there.” he said to both of them. “I’m sorry, Major, but I have to cut the briefing.”

“No problem. I need some time myself to think about all of this.” Major Bulgakov replied to him. “Find Vincent.”

“Right.”

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:56 P.M.
[Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
10:45 P.M.]

“Just keep on him…just keep on him.” Vincent was slashing his way forward, with Betrüger slowly, but steadily losing ground. “Bohrgerät Blatt!” Vincent yelled, and aimed straight at him, ready to drill a hole into his body. Betrüger responded by trying to push the arm out, but Vincent resisted the push, his arm continuing straight through, and piercing a small hole before Betrüger retreated back even more. By this time, he was kneeling down, recovering slowly from his wounds, while Vincent was in front of him, panting, but still ready. “Damn…the boy got better…I’ll have to break his spirit then.” Betrüger thought to himself as he slowly got up. “Boy, you impress me, but its time to end this," and with a stare of Betrüger, Vincent suddenly felt like he was falling down into the ocean, and everyone was on ledges. He fell down near them, but they just looked at him as they fell. He just looked back at them in horror, thinking this was the end for him.

“Why…why won’t you help me?” he thought, but he couldn’t speak the words to them; he was too scared.

“Now, you will die.” Betrüger’s voice rang out, telling Vincent his fate. Then he remembered something; Aurion’s illusion. He finally knew what Aurion was trying to do all along, under the guise of something else. “Well, Aurion, I guess I have to owe you one…” he thought to himself, smiling a bit, as he closed his eyes.

Earlier:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
6:12 P.M.

“Nothing here…” Sydney remarked as she looked inside drawers to try to find out what happened to Vincent. “Nothing here either.” Margaret replied, looking at the closet. “Seems to be nothing here…” Satsuki said to Satoshi, worry in her voice. “There should be...” he replied. “Nobuyuki, anything on your end?” he said to him telepathically. “Nothing.”

“Damn…he could be anywhere at this time.” Satoshi thought to himself as he approached the desk again. “He could be in another world for all I-“ he thought before being interrupted by himself when he looked into a seemingly empty drawer. The drawer looked normal to someone who was just breezing through, but upon closer inspection, there was a thin handle upon it, cleverly disguised to match the floorboard’s color. “Wonder what’s this doing here?”

When he pulled the handle, the whole floorboard pulled out, and there revealed one bullet and a note, made by Vincent himself. “I found something.” he said to everyone, sounding like he regretted something when he spoke. He then put the drawer slowly on the desk, and read the note.

“Gone to Death Point. If I don’t come back, I’m sorry.
-Vince”

“Death Point? Where’s that?” Sydney asked Satoshi, while Satsuki stayed silent.
“Nobuyuki, you think he went-“

“Yeah, I think he went back to Hieronymo.” Nobuyuki replied back. “Alright then, we’ll go there; you guys don’t mind if you stay here just in case we both are wrong?”

“Yeah, I don’t mind. Let’s hope we’re wrong.”

“Alright then.” Satoshi then turned to everyone, smiling a bit. “We’re going to Hieronymo; Vince is probably there.”

Everyone else just nodded silently, for the reason that they could find Vincent alive or his body on the ground somewhere.

“Vince…don’t worry….I know you’re not dead. Survive. For our sakes.” Satsuki thought to herself, hoping the best.

Present:
Tuesday, June 2, MC 0075
8:57 P.M.
[Thursday, June 2, MC 0075
10:46 P.M.]

“This isn’t real….I know it. No one would forget me now.”

Vincent then opened his eyes quickly, and the illusion broke, where he saw an unaware Betrüger making a slash at him, aiming for his head. “This is where you die, boy, standing helplessly!” Betrüger yelled out as he made the slash. To his shock and surprise, Vincent blocked it with Shell Bullet, the Device easily able to handle the pressure now. “I won’t die here….” he told Betrüger softly, his head looking down on the ground. “I know now that the people I care won’t abandon me. In fact, they want me to survive, as they’ll survive for my sake. So, the only think I have to say to you is…” and with a grin, he raised his head and pushed the blade out of the way, “Tough luck!” and managed to get a couple of good hits on Betrüger, moving him back a little. Betrüger tried to recover, but Vincent acted quickly. “Shell Bullet, Blattform!”

“[Ja. Jetzt durchführen.]” Shell Bullet replied, and Vincent moved quickly. “[Sprinten sie Schnell!]”
Betrüger never had a chance; he was stabbed quickly by Vincent, who aimed at his chest. He fell backwards, and the hood fell off, revealing who he truly was. “Masaka? D-Darnay-sama?” Vincent thought in horror as the person who he had stabbed was his own stepfather. Darnay fell off the point, and Vincent chased after him, intending to save him. A moment later, he was hanging on the edge, with Shell Bullet holding both of them, while he grabbed the right sleeve of Betrüger’s Barrier Jacket with his left hand.

“It’s you, Vince…you’ve grown.” Darnay said to a scared and shocked Vince. “Darnay-sama! Hold on; I’ll get both of us up!” Vincent said to him frantically.

“It’s useless; this thing on my left hand will take you over, like it did with me.” Darnay explained to him, looking down on the sea below, ready to take his own life. “No…don’t think that! I-“

“No…it’s better if I and this cursed Device go. The only thing I wanted was to see you with my own eyes, not the eyes that were cursed, before I die.”

“I want to save you.” Vincent replied back, tears forming, but hidden from the rain.

“You already have.” His Barrier Jacket was starting to give; he knew that he had to kill himself for it, he would have died anyway. “Your father would be proud of you.” Darnay said to Vince, trying to calm him down. “Take care of who you care about. You belong with them, especially with that girl.”

“Darnay-sama…”

“Glad to see you got your arm back.”

The Barrier Jacket sleeve dissolved, and with a smile, George Darnay, former TSAB officer and Vincent’s stepfather, fell to his death, taking the last Kristallnacht Device with him to the bottom of the sea. “DARNAY-SAMA!” Vincent yelled out, crying for him. He cried, still hanging on to the edge.

“…He…he did it…for my sake.” he thought to himself, considering what his stepfather just done. Vincent then tried to get another piece of the edge with his left hand, but the piece of rock he grabbed on was loose, and he was hanging on again. He heard a crack nearby, and saw that the piece of the edge was falling. He grinned to himself and closed his eyes. “So…I die today. I wish I could say I’m sorry to everyone. Well, hello, heaven or hell.” The piece finally gave way, and he started falling down. After a while, he knew something was wrong, and opened his eyes. Vincent found out that he was not in heaven or hell; someone got ahold of Shell Bullet just moments after the edge broke off. He looked up, and saw Satsuki, her left arm holding on to let him live.

“Margaret, help.” she said, and Margaret approached to where Satsuki was. She grabbed on and both of them pulled him up just enough for him to get up on his own. “Vince…” she said to him softly, glad to see that she had made it in time. “They came…” he thought, and approached Satsuki.

“You little…” he said to her, looking like he was about to do something to her. She backed away slowly, but Vincent closed the gap. To her surprise, he didn’t grab her neck again; he just hugged her. “Satsuki…I’m glad to see you again. Thanks.” She stood there, motionless and speechless, surprised at Vincent. Finally, she spoke.

“I’m glad you’re safe….” Her voice was soft, but yet relieved and happy. She then hugged him too, blushing. Vincent just chuckled a bit, then looked at Margaret, and gave her a smile. She smiled at him too.

From the safety of the surrounding land, Satoshi and Sydney were looking at both of them, and Satoshi himself was humming a tune, with Sydney hearing it. “What’s that song you're humming?” she asked.

“Tsuki Akari.” Satoshi explained. “Fits well.”

Sydney just let him hum, and she noticed something; the rain had stopped. Up above was a sky filled with stars.

“The rain stopped.”

“Yeah…maybe this is an omen…” Satoshi replied. Then he looked up at the skies. “Or maybe this might be a coincidence.”

Sydney then looked up, smiling. “It might be…”

Cipher and Apex then spoke in. “[Well, this turned out to be a good day. No casualties AND Betrüger’s gone.]” Cipher said.

“[We still got more to go.]” Apex replied back to Cipher.

“[True…]” Cipher replied back.

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
5: 45 P.M.

Vincent made his way over to George Darnay’s grave, along with the Major, Satoshi, Satsuki, and Margaret. After a while of searching, they finally found it. Vincent put a group of flowers, found on Hieronymo, near his grave. “Thanks….for everything, Darnay-sama.” he thought as he rose up. “He was a good man…” the Major replied, putting his left hand on Vincent’s right shoulder. “Died with his sense of honor.”

“No…” Vincent said, correcting him. “He died protecting the people and country he believed in.”

“Hmm…you might be right.” Bulgakov mused, taking his hand off and reaching for a drink.

“It’s disrespectful to drink in front of the dead.” Satoshi said.

“Lay off, it’s for Darnay.” With a toast to him, the Major drank from his hip flask, finishing it. “Well, let’s go.”

“Right.”

All of them left the tombstone, and headed back to base. “Vince…” Satsuki said to him, a smile on her face. “I’m glad you’re back.”

“Yeah…me too.” he replied with a grin, and both of them held hands, with Margaret following both of them. Satoshi looked at both of them for a while, but didn’t say any words. “I guess they both cared about each other.” he thought, chuckling for a bit.

“Well…keep that link, both of you.”

Wednesday, June 3, MC 0075
7:04 P.M.

“It’s confirmed; Betrüger’s dead.” Nobuyuki said to a seemingly black background inside a room.

“I see…and Nil?” a voice asked him.

“He’s starting to go back piece by piece, although he hasn’t remembered his true identity.”

“Good, he’s coming back. You’ve been useful; keep on updating me, alright, Papillion?” the voice said back to him. “You’re dismissed.”

“Right.” Nobuyuki left the room and was back in the 216th HQ. “Hmm…I wonder what he’s up to…”

“So, Nil’s remembering piece by piece.” another voice said.

Scagletti then appeared out of the darkness. “Sion.” he said with a smile. “He is.”

“Great.” Sion replied to Scagletti as he came out of the darkness himself. “I want to ask you something.”

“What is it?”

“I want to take the Replicas for a test run of sorts. They’re not useful if they aren’t working.”

“Where are you going?”

“Somewhere.” Sion said to him coldly.

“I trust that this is instrumental for getting Nil back, am I right?” Scagletti asked, wanting to know.

“It might.”

“Alright then, one squad.” Scagletti then smiled as Sion was walking out of the room. “Good luck.” He then leaned back a bit, thinking about what had happened. “Betrüger…you were a useful decoy. I promised you life, and you took it. Problem is, I never even bothered.”

Suddenly, another figure came out of the darkness. This time, it was someone that had a blue mechanical eye, ready to serve. Scagletti grinned as he asked on what to do.

“What shall I do now?”







Surprise, surprise, surprise...

AurionXHayate's pretty expected, but I remember this scene from Ronin Kenshin:

Hayate: I'm no longer that little girl you raised... I'm a woman, with her own heart! Aurion-sempai, open your eyes! :(

(runs from A************ voidspam)



<jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~>


And here's an example of what V's like just before he gets cheesed:




It was only him, the group of Numbers and whatever guards that were employed by Enzo who were present in the ruined passageway of the Cradle. The Letters were, for the most part, elsewhere, defendıng the ship. The black-clad, masked character stood in front of the cluster before him, still, waiting.

One of the Numbers, Tre, stepped forward in an agressive motion. "Sorry to spoil your fun...but your crusade ends here."

"Oh?" V tilted his head sideways in bemused confusion, and retorted, cooly: "I'm afraid that won't be possible, my dear."

Riled by his comment, Tre glanced at a pair of footsoldiers on either side of the robed man. At once, they dashed forward, hoping to neutralise him in a single blow. With a surge of almost inhuman speed, V unsheathed a pair of knives beneath his cloak, spun round, and sliced open the first man's throat, the guard dropping to the floor with an eternal look of surprise on his face.

Turning to the second after spinning back, he gripped the soldier's neck, hefted him into the air, and impaled him into the air, kicking him off of his blade with force afterwards into a wall, the man falling to the floor in a bloody heap.

As quickly as it had begun, it finished, and V calmly sheathed both of his knives. Some of the Numbers took a few steps back, warily. Tre, still indignant, spoke onced more to the masked killer.

"Defiant to the end, are you? Well, you're not like the rest of them, are you? You have something different about you..."

"That I might", was his reply. "But there is only one ultimate outcome of what is to occur- and that is I will defeat you, or you will do so to me. Either way...it makes little difference."

Nove had to attempt to hold back a bray of laughter. "Win?" She paused, then said, almost decidedly: "Futile. What methods do you have? We have this place under our control. You have nothing, nothing but your hope and your fancy knife tricks- we outnumber you, surround you, and have superior force!"

"I'm afraid that's incorrect". V's reply made Nove curse under her breath/ :What you have is resilience, and you can only hold out for so long. And you also have hope- hope that when you feel you've spent enough firepower that I'm no longer on this mortal plane, because, if I am...you'll all be down in the proverbial blink of an eye. So to speak."

Nove's tone was one of pure disbelief. "That;s...that's impossible!", the screamed, aiming her gauntlet at the man before her, a set of yellow spheres forming out it. She then barked to the others:

"Kill him!"

At once, V was hit by a hail of magic round, his body jerked to and fro like that of a ragdoll. Those in the Bureau who were watching the scene looked on in horro as he stood against the seemingly endless mealstrom of fire. He was eventually brought to his knees as the firing finally stopped.

But he was still breathing.

His breath coming to him in short, ragged gasps, he found the strength to stand, shocking the Numbers completely. He raised his head to look at them, and he spoke just two words to the group:

My turn.

Oh boy... wonder if this'll turn out like the movie...

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 12:26
@Thread: Do you guys think this song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLoI_Ae20ws) is good as a RevivalS OP? :D
Justice to Believe - Wild Arms: The Vth Vanguard OP :D

It's a good song :D

Oh dear... Maren's in Clock-Ticking Mode...

Say what? :twitch:

Satashi
2007-08-23, 12:40
Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

Tk3997
2007-08-23, 13:02
Looks like I better add smileys next time I'm not 100% serious. Looks like my slight sarcasm got taken too seriously. :rolleyes:
I do tend to take everything seriously unless otherwise indicated, mostly because I’ve been on the net long enough to realize no matter how stupid or outrageous a position or theory there is someone out their that truly and fervently believes in it. (As a nerdy example I’ve seen someone seriously argue that the death star DIDN’T blow up Alderaan.) Sorry if I got a bit out of hand, but it seems to have generated a bit of interesting chit-chat (to me anyway) so it's not so bad.


My main point behind what I said was the drama of the whole situation, not just Vivio alone. Like said, this is magical girl, and there is no way Mid-childa is going to get destroyed, so there's the lack of drama there already. Doesn't mean they should slack on other dramatic aspects, which imo, even as far as the final battle goes, isn't really all that exciting. Even if bad or bittersweet ends are not to be expected, I'm talking about accompanying drama, which thus far in StrikerS, despite making its scale larger, seems less touching, since on the personal fronts, it's only developed on a few accounts. Even though Hayate dying in A's was like...close to zero, that didn't demean the drama on the Wolkenritter's side, through their dramatic struggle against time for something that may be fruitless throughout the 8 or so episodes. Same goes to Fate's personal suffering for her mother's sake. On the other hand, this feels more worldly and less personal, but even the worldly aspects seemed tacked on later on with the Cradle. I mean, Jail's character development along with the Numbers and such came quite late into the series, making the other aspect that drives the negative drama seem less... powerful on some fronts.

I seem to give the impression I want a bad end. I do not. I just like very very powerful emotional ups and downs. And a good genre mixes things. SAILOR MOON was very dramatic when it needed that dramatics too. Besides, it's not like A's was pure fluff. If it was, then I rest my case.

I like happy ends. But at the same time, I like to see that happiness being earned... through thick and thin. The thin aspects of StrikerS (( the regular happy days )) were done well, but I personally think the "thick" could be thicker though.I can see your points better now, and apparently I’m just not as demanding as you or indeed most people but I’ve always known that about myself. I tend to have two categories for stuff “it sucks” and “it’s good” either I like something or I don’t I really don’t have much of a sliding scale for how much I like or dislike something. Once you reach a certain level of non-suckiness™ I just stop really caring enough to nit-pick I basiclly go “eh it’s good enough so why waste time whining about stuff that might slightly improve it in some minor way, but that will never happen?”

That’s just how I work in most of life though “good enough” is well, good enough for me. I’ve never felt the need to murder myself to try and do something super well, and I don’t really expect other too either if they don’t want too. I guess I’m just a big softy like that.

As an aside I’d also note that I happen to rather like some the worldliness and poltics and such (which most people don't seem to from what I can tell). Military type shows are a personal favorite of mine so the politics and the general atmosphere present somewhat appeal to me more the original two’s settings. That’s hardly surprising though given I’m currently studying law enforcement with the intention of attempting to become a Military Police Officer. (an officer officer as in second lieutenant.)

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 13:05
Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

Hmm...sounds interesting :D

This (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1088185&postcount=6130) is a list on who taught what for Koji and Yui, the only OCs that were trained by Nanoha :uhoh:

For profiles on their personalities...go Here (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1088646&postcount=6148) it's TEH LINK to practically everything I did so far :heh:

As for the others, not so sure about their OCs :heh::heh:

Kha
2007-08-23, 14:18
A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.:eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:

I suppose these ladies are a heck lot worst than my boot camp instructors... :heh:

Nice pun there...:heh:

Aurion's current BGM is Time Diver.:):uhoh:

And then what? You expect me to sabotage Formation Saint?:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:What else? :uhoh: :uhoh:

EDIT: All the hints are there. I STILL can't believe nobody have guessed the full name of A**********.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: I've a feeling it's from SRW, thus I won't be able to get it. :p

Tsundere's are always soft and cuddly - once you get past the whole 'beating you to an inch of your life' thing.

<tilts head> Could Arcas and Sophia get cuddly once? PLEASE? (Don't worry about Mel - it'll be strictly platonic) (And NOT cuddly like this)I'd hardly imagine Sophia hugging anybody. Even as I quickly run over Kha and Sophia's history, I find no opening for Kha... :heh:

But have you? As long as it's not OOC I don't mind. :p

A-something = ASCALON da yo! AS-CA-LON te ba!Hai, hai...

<snorts @ idea>

<chuckles>

<laughs haltingly>

<breaks down in manic laughter a la Higurashi>

IT'S PERFECT!:twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

Not exactly. I just proposed my idea to Kha and he liked it. Gwen and Kha are now linked, but dont expect any rabu-rabu... :heh: And from the way it is, it wont Gwen who will try to get to Kha, but the other way around... :uhoh: :heh:Before this starts to sound wrong, I was thinking Amuro-Quess interactions. Which I don't think is anything wrong... Since Kha's the older Amuro anyway, until Amuro takes over...

:heh:
Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3Not mine either...

But if you want the ones from the future, there's Moriyama Nanoka (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1029186&postcount=3762), who uses a shield and mace and counts as a lowbie pally. Also, there's Nanoka's best friend, the hunter type Teresa Testarossa (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1029193&postcount=3764).

Jimmy C
2007-08-23, 14:18
Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

You're treading a very fine line here, Wibbles. Your characters are in a squad that's supposed to be backup for Stars and Lightning, right? Try not to make them much better than the current Forwards. Otherwise, people will be wondering, "why aren't these guys in the regular squads instead?" Unlike most other OCs here, the overpowered line for these guys are the Forwards, not the Aces.

And I do believe this is the first time Satashi has posted on this discussion!

Keroko
2007-08-23, 14:22
Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

*sweatdrops* I have many students and former students. But they are or were all students of Keroko, who in turn is Nanoha's adoptive sister....

Though maybe Mamet would count, as Nanoha has taught her a trick or two. Haven't written her profile yet, though.

Kha
2007-08-23, 14:27
And I do believe this is the first time Satashi has posted on this discussion!Nope Satashi posted here before to say hi, and we've been trying to get Skeith into the thread ever since. :3

An Hero in Disguise
2007-08-23, 14:29
OMG why a day I'm absent from the forums always brings the most backlog? Sorry, still no time to comment, and I'm moving back to Mother Russia this weekend so I'll probably not appear here until Sunday :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Only one thing: :rolleyes:

All the hints are there. I STILL can't believe nobody have guessed the full name of A**********.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Actually people keep messing with the number of "*"s in it :rolleyes: Don't you dare tell it's Astranagant :D

Erio
2007-08-23, 14:31
HASHA!!!!!

Here's another entry in the LineBackerS series, from the POV of a character I introduced a chapter or two ago. This one takes place during the mock training battle with Mai after Part IV (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1039754&postcount=4188).

Here's LineBackerS, Part VIII, featuring:



Up here on the rooftop of an abandoned condo, I observe the raging battle happening in this abandoned city. The clashing of blades, polearm versus katana.

By the overpass, the archaeologist girl continued to clash with the 2nd Lieutenant, blade against blade. Both holding their own, but even from here it was apparent that 2nd Lieutenant Heckler had the overwhelming advantage. Ms. Mathis was using ranged Midchilda spells to attack from stand-off range, only to be countered by the 2nd Lt’s. Sonic Moves, closing the gap between them. And so far I haven’t observed him using other spells. Expected nothing less from my superior.

“Wes, out of ammo!”

“Here, my last two! Darry, how’s Glock?”

That was PFC Wesson speaking through the holodisplay, asking me for the 2nd Lieutenant’s status, with PFC Smith in the background.

“The 2nd Lieutenant is doing well. I’d say he’s giving Ms. Mathis a hard time.”

“Tell us if he needs help. Right now we’re busy with som- SMITH LOOK OUT!!!

HISSATSU!!!!!!!!!!”

*beep*

I don’t know this stupid guy… nope, don’t know him…

*beep*

“- IRACULOUS FINISH!!!!!!!!! ”

*beep*

“COLT, GROW UP!!!!!”

*ehem*, sorry…

That was PFC Wesson, acting like the idiot he is, along with his brother. Even back then when fighting against overwhelming numbers or power, these two can’t seem to lose their love for screaming at the top of their lungs and spouting ridiculous barely understandable babble. These two…

I watch them on the holodisplay, running while blasting through hordes of Mai Enna’s illusion-enhanced doppelganger demons off-screen. Got to give them credit, they’re still alive and kicking, even under immense odds like these, where it’s easy to get overwhelmed due to immense numbers. I may not see them directly from here, but I can tell they’re trying to move south, closer and closer to here, and the 2nd Lieutenant’s position.

*beep*

“HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“

I feel a migraine coming…

“Colt, can you stop that please? It’s getting annoying!”

“Why should I, just when it’s getting fun! Too many enemies to handle!”

“Wesson, to your left! SMITH SPECIAL!!!!! STORM BOLTAAAA-“

“You too Smith!!!”

“Darry, it’s just a mock training session.”

“Don’t get your pink polka-dot panties up in a wad! Relax!”

“I am not getting my panties up in a-“

Wait… rewind… at this very moment, I am wearing my only pink polka-dot panties… that I just bought and wore today only an hour ago…

And Wesson flashes his widest, toothiest, grin at me…

... why you...

“COOOOOOOOOOOLT WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! !!”

That’s it! Nobody catches a peep from me!!

“Wes, they’re everywhere!”

“Smith, take cover!!!”

A small explosion just to my far north blasts up dust… and betrays their position!

“You bastard Colt Wesson…”

How many summoning circles should I call out? One? Two?! No, maybe FOUR?! No, EIGHT!

SCREW THIS, I’M TAKING THEM TO HELL!!!!!!!

“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

A thousand blades appear and rains my wrath down on these two! Stirring up tons of delicious smoke and dust! Yes my crystal babies, RAIN DOWN ON THESE UNHOLY LECHEROUS PERVERTS!!!!!! SMITE THEM DOWN!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!! DEATH, DESTRUCTION, MAYHEM, CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!! BLOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! STRIKE THEM DOWN FOR MY SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





A thick, opaque grey cloud of smoke hangs in the air in front of me…

Justice be done…

“Wow, impressive show there! You brought the block down!”

No way…that male voice. I look behind me. Smith, Colt? How’d they get here so fast?

“Thanks for bailing us out of there! That’s a nice feint Wes!”

“Bailing you out? Feint? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?”

Wesson raised his Linebacker over his shoulder, smirking at me. The smirk that told me I’m going to regret this.

“I thought we were toast, with all the Mai’s we had to fight, and with Wes and I out of ammo we couldn’t use area of effect weapons. And since you were available I felt it necessary to… use your assets.”

“So Wes rigged some Stinger Snipes to create that explosion at the spot we designated, and acted like we were the ones hit. We were long gone by the time your Crystal Rain hit. Cool huh?”

“Unfortunately Darry, Me, the Wild Wild Wes knows how to push your buttons.”

Lord, why me? Smith and Colt’s grinning faces… jeez, these two… I want to just smash their heads in together right now!

But… I can’t move… can barely stand up… I should’ve known better than to waste an S-rank spell on a couple of fools… I fell…

And two arms catch me.

“The Wild Wild Wes likes to express his gratitude for saving our asses...”

Heh… trying to act all suave on me… I’m not done yet with you you know…

“…And I really think you’re cute in those polka dots.”

Colt, why you… cute huh… Oh forget it.

“Private First Class Darry Milfuelle, get some rest. That's an order from me.”

I will Colt, I will.
____________________

Meanwhile…

Xealot: [Impressive power that young girl has. Don’t you think s- Is something bothering you Mistress? You’ve been searching under your feet for moments now.]
Mai: … Iya.

It’s nothing.

Xealot: [… I do not detect the presence of surveillance spells in the immediate vicinity.]
Mai: Sou ka.

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Shoddy :heh:
LOL all over!! :D:D:D

Pink polka-dot panties, huh? *imagines* :eek:

*CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT >>>>>>>> me*

I wonder if Wild Wild Wes will reveal to us what is Mai wearing later--

*chainsaw revs* :eek:

*runs*

I'm starting to feel...unsafe...about the idea of my OCs meeting Mai, S&W. :uhoh: Oh yeah, will Darry be with them too? :D

And one last thing... I gotta try this...

*looks at Kha*

Erio: “HISSATSU!!!! .... HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“ :cool:

:D Ah~ Justice be done… Feels much better now. :D

Edit:

Found someone else that may suit onee-chan more:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118769926763873.jpg

In case your wondering, character is Felt Grace, from the upcoming Gundam 00.


:eek: :eek: :love: I officially cant wait for 00... :D

... :uhoh: *notices everyone staring* :uhoh:

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.
lol, nice little short. I could so imagine Nanoha's face when the guy said "HELL NO!" :D:D

I was going to do some usual ecchi-jokes (:uhoh:) but just to be sure... how old were the two here? :heh:

BRILLIANT!:D At least S&W didn't take their pervertedness any further after exhausting Darry.:heh:
Yeah... unlike Aurion with Hayat----

*Regression Impulse Breaker >>>>>>> poor me*

EDIT: All the hints are there. I STILL can't believe nobody have guessed the full name of A**********.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
If its anything related to SRW, then I will never get it. :heh:

I just phrased it wrong.:heh: Sorry. My mind was in a bit of a wreck to read properly. I meant, "No. Don't kill her.":heh: Of course I don't want Schach to die yet!:heh:
Hehe yeah, I knew you meant that. Couldnt help but joke about it thought. :D

LOL! No need to run.:p That's really kinda hilariously nice to imagine.:D But I'm definitely not going to use that kind of scenario in my works.:heh: Hayate will remain as the daughter-figure of Aurion, and there's no changing that. C'mon! Hayate with a Father-Complex? USODA!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
lol You could use it for another Hayate PWNS Aurion revenge scenario part 2. :D


*me wonders where An Hero is* EDIT: Ah, there he is. :D

Satty
2007-08-23, 14:36
Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

Hmm...I don't have anyone....except this guy:Hikaru Karyu (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1109277&postcount=7227). Trained with Nanoha in the past, stopped training with her after an "accident":heh:.

An Hero in Disguise
2007-08-23, 14:37
*me wonders where An Hero is* EDIT: Ah, there he is. :D

It's funny how when I'm the entire day here only a couple of people post, and now I'm going to be absent for 2-3 days and it seems like a real flood :eyespin:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 14:42
To answer your questıon, Erio, it is another conceptual scenario. Andö now that I look back on it, one that mıght conflict with future canon events.

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:

Keroko
2007-08-23, 14:49
lol, nice little short. I could so imagine Nanoha's face when the guy said "HELL NO!" :D:D

I was going to do some usual ecchi-jokes (:uhoh:) but just to be sure... how old were the two here? :heh:

They already have their reputations, so I was aiming at around seventeen years old.

Kha
2007-08-23, 15:07
Felt Grace looks like a good template. I'll take it! :D

OMG why a day I'm absent from the forums always brings the most backlog? Sorry, still no time to comment, and I'm moving back to Mother Russia this weekend so I'll probably not appear here until Sunday :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Only one thing: :rolleyes:Crikey! :uhoh:

Don't worry, we won't be hitting 8k anytime soon... :p

Actually people keep messing with the number of "*"s in it :rolleyes: Don't you dare tell it's Astranagant :DI'm guilty of that, and if its that A... :uhoh:

:eek: :eek: :love: I officially cant wait for 00... :D

... :uhoh: *notices everyone staring* :uhoh:So... YOU'RE AFTER ALLISON'S ONEE-SAN TOO?! :twitch: :eyespin: :twitch: :eyespin:


I'm starting to feel...unsafe...about the idea of my OCs meeting Mai, S&W. :uhoh: Oh yeah, will Darry be with them too? :D

And one last thing... I gotta try this...

*looks at Kha*

Erio: “HISSATSU!!!! .... HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“ :cool:

:D Ah~ Justice be done… Feels much better now. :DThe rhythm is off a little, my good Page! Let's see if we can't improve it with this video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ZkwySYbil8):

~~~~~~

Erio: Let's go! Activate Nendo Musou Ken!
Alaeith: Youkai! Sword parts launched!

Cindy: D-Link... Twin Contact!
Sei: Nendo field... Power to max!
Cindy: Strada Zol Orohalcon Sword, combine!

*Giant Strada flies in and docks with massive green blades*

Alaeith: Tronium Engine, OVERDRIVE! *Stahlpreios jets off* Issei, Erio!

*S.Z.O. Sword stabs into the ground.*

Erio: Ho!

*yanks sword out of ground and jets away*

Erio:
CHOU HISSATSU!

*stabs into enemy*

HARLEM, HAREM!

*S.Z.O. splits open, cleaving enemy*

NENDO MUSOU KEN...!

*swings for death blow*

MUTEKIGIRI!!!

Enemy: U-USO DAAA!!!

*time catches up with the target, and with a mindrending eruption, explodes into technicolor*

999999!!!

*twirls S.Z.O Sword and stabs hilt into ground with style*


Erio: Justice... BE DONE! :mad:

~~~~~~


Now that's impact. :D

azuma-blade
2007-08-23, 15:13
my last character

Name: Azuma-Blade
Nick Name: Blade
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 9
Homeworld: Earth
Occupation: TSAB Officer *After Defeating Dr.Jail*
Rank: Sergent, Pilot
Unit: Riot Force 6 *After Defeating Dr. Jail
Call Sigh: Raven-1
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: Gold
Favored Element: "Multi*
Height: Around 5'5
Weight: About 125-136 pounds
Hair: Short, Black hair
Eye Color: Blue
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Personality: Kind, Silent
Device: Galeon
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Background:
After the cradle incident blade joins TSAB again to pilot TSAB's new weapon named Astral Soul to replace his severly damaged barrier armor. After returning to TSAB blade joins the Riot Force 6 to escort them in their missions and locate Azuma-Lance who escaped and went to Al-Hazard.
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http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p17/ravenflau009/DSC02475.jpg
Model#: TSAB-AC01
Name: Astral Soul
Unit Type: TSAB's First Generation Mecha Unit
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Astral Soul's Stats
Magic Offence: SS
Magic Defence: A
Mobility: S+
Size: 20 ft
Armor Material: Anti-Magic Coating
Special Abilities: OP-I Drive
Pilot: Azuma-Blade
Weapons:
1 Energy Rifle *R-Arm*
1 Energy Blade *L-Arm*
6 Energy Cannons *Wings*
1 Barrier *Core*
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Offensive Spells:

Soul Buster: *Rifle Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astral Souls rifle to fire a mid range buster attack capable of destroying a battle ship.

Cresent Moon Slash: *Sword Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astrals Souls' sword creating a long sword capable of slicing an Large AM equiped Drone.

Soul Breaker: *Ultimate Attack* Blade Channels his half of magic energy to Astral Soul's wing cannons to fire a wide spread buster attack capable of destroying enemies in a cone.

Defensive Spells:

Iron Shell: *Shield* Blade channels his small amount of it's magic enery creating a large protecting barrier that shields any attacks within 360 meter radius.

Erio
2007-08-23, 15:16
Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).
Very well balanced, I must say. Good job. :D Every point I was going to comment about was addressed here.

Nice way of using Leavantine there, I must say. ;)

It's funny how when I'm the entire day here only a couple of people post, and now I'm going to be absent for 2-3 days and it seems like a real flood :eyespin:
Remember to pack that Backlog Zamber with you... :uhoh:

BTW, read my PM yet? :D Or maybe no time to read... :(

To answer your questıon, Erio, it is another conceptual scenario. Andö now that I look back on it, one that mıght conflict with future canon events.

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:
lol Just how I would imagine Cinque... :love:

They already have their reputations, so I was aiming at around seventeen years old.
Hm, makes sense. :D

So... YOU'RE AFTER ALLISON'S ONEE-SAN TOO?! :twitch: :eyespin: :twitch: :eyespin:
Hmm... You're right... Allison is more my age...

... :uhoh:

*RUNS*

The rhythm is off a little, my good Page! Let's see if we can't improve it with this video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ZkwySYbil8):

~~~~~~

Erio: Let's go! Activate Nendo Musou Ken!
Alaeith: Youkai! Sword parts launched!

Cindy: D-Link... Twin Contact!
Sei: Nendo field... Power to max!
Cindy: Strada Zol Orohalcon Sword, combine!

*Giant Strada flies in and docks with massive green blades*

Alaeith: Tronium Engine, OVERDRIVE! *Stahlpreios jets off* Issei, Erio!

*S.Z.O. Sword stabs into the ground.*

Erio: Ho!

*yanks sword out of ground and jets away*

Erio:
CHOU HISSATSU!

*stabs into enemy*

HARLEM, HAREM!

*S.Z.O. splits open, cleaving enemy*

NENDO MUSOU KEN...!

*swings for death blow*

MUTEKIGIRI!!!

Enemy: U-USO DAAA!!!

*time catches up with the target, and with a mindrending eruption, explodes into technicolor*

999999!!!

*twirls S.Z.O Sword and stabs hilt into ground with style*


Erio: Justice... BE DONE! :mad:

~~~~~~


Now that's impact. :D
:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

M-MEISTER-SAMA!!!! :bow::bow::bow::bow:

*takes notes* I will do my best next time, Meister!!!

...but...

...Isnt that "Enemy-san"... YOU?!

:D:D:D

Kha
2007-08-23, 15:23
:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

M-MEISTER-SAMA!!!! :bow::bow::bow::bow:

*takes notes* I will do my best next time, Meister!!!

...but...

...Isnt that "Enemy-san"... YOU?!

:D:D:DAs long as Erio masters the Harlem Harem Musou Bushido, it's worth it. :D

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-23, 15:28
<continues to fire ANTI-BACKLOG GATTLING GUN>


As amusing as it is, let's not blow this into some sort of mania...:heh:
Sigh... I guess even being a father-figure doesn't make you safe from pairing jokes.:heh: What happened to pure intentions?:heh::heh::heh:

They went out with the horseless carriage!

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

Trade Secrets KINSHII!


EDIT: All the hints are there. I STILL can't believe nobody have guessed the full name of A**********.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Well, maybe we all ARE JUST THAT STUPID!!

Sophia?:heh: Getting cuddly with Arcas?:twitch:


If you're planning on matchmaking my character with anyone in your scenario's, two words, forget it(permission from maker, denied).:rolleyes: If Aurion is ever to get a mate, it's gonna be an OC from me. I don't pair my Original Characters with Canon Characters. Flirting, maybe. But those are to be done by me and are meant to be as slight comic relief only (Like those snippets with Reinforce 1 and Signum; and that sekuhara-ish scare tactic used on Hayate in one scenario).

Uguu~ ijiwaru!

And re: Sophia, well, you'll see...

Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

A well balanced Device! Much more than some of the ones I first came up with - and even more than one I have now!


Say what? :twitch:

Maren's a girl, right?

And you know what they say when a girl hears her biological clock ticking...

Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

Arcasaviel Emira, my main OC, was trained by Nanoha in "Seven Days," AND served with Nanoha as a Tactical Instructor @ the beginning of his career.

Feel free to use him... PLEASE!!


I'd hardly imagine Sophia hugging anybody. Even as I quickly run over Kha and Sophia's history, I find no opening for Kha... :heh:

But have you? As long as it's not OOC I don't mind. :p

Hai, hai...

:twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:


Re: Sophia - Well, give me a few minutes and I'll come up with a snippet of how it MIGHT happen...

They're all freaking out... JUST AS PLANNED!!!


<ceases firing; puts GATTLING GUN away>

Alllllllrighty then!

NEW MATERIAL!!!

Two short clips due up in next 45 minutes: one with ArcasSophia interaction, and another of the "ARC-TAAAN!" continuation!

Please wait for it!

Kha
2007-08-23, 15:32
Re: Sophia - Well, give me a few minutes and I'll come up with a snippet of how it MIGHT happen...

They're all freaking out... JUST AS PLANNED!!!Be very careful. Tsunderes aren't known to be the hardest species to manage for nothing. :heh:

And I was freaking out at your laughter at AurionXShamal. :eyespin:

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-23, 15:34
Be very careful. Tsunderes aren't known to be the hardest species to manage for nothing. :heh:

And I was freaking out at your laughter at AurionXShamal. :eyespin:

Re: Laughter - I KNOW...


Re: Tsunderes - Don't worry 'bout that... <laughs maniacallly>

Kha
2007-08-23, 15:47
Re: Laughter - I KNOW...

Re: Tsunderes - Don't worry 'bout that... <laughs maniacallly>Alright then.

*hides Buster Khannon*

:D


@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-23, 15:48
Heh, indeed. Just how we imagine Cinque, Erio. :D

And, my final segment for now. I'm churning these out too fast. :heh:



He was gravely injured, but he could still stand.

He was close to the brink of death, but he was driven by sheer willpower towards his destination. Despite what Nove and that "brother" of hers had done ('I, was it...?' V wondered, wearily), he had managed to trudge on.

He had let a few of his opponents go out of mercy, yes. But there would be no scrap of said mercy for the deranged lunatic that he was about to face down.

He limped towards the light before him, determined to fulfill his goals. After a while, he stepped out into the very place that he had longed to travel to= Scaglietti's lab. And, as luck would have it, the owner of the facility, the madman himself, was standing before him with his back turned.

V spoke, his voice direct and colder than ice. "Hello...Doctor."

Scaglietti turned around, a grin carved onto his features. "Well, well", he uttered. "Who do we have here? Another Bureau dog to bear witness to-"

Before he could hope to continue, he found himself being lifted feet above the floor by the masked unknown who was, only mere seconds ago, some feet away from him. He felt the man's grip tighten fiercely around his throat, constricting his breathing.

When V exchanged words with the suffocating scientist held in the air before him, his tone was vengeful, hard, calculating. "I know it has been some time since we last spoke, Jail. Give or take, hm...quite a few years? Quite, yes. A few years since you toyed with me, treated me like some thing, made me your..." He paused, and resumed, his voice now brimming with venomous anger. "...Pet.But now, virulent hellspawn, the shoe is on the other foot, so to speak."

His grip tightened even further, and he looked up at the face of the Doctor, which was wracked with both pain and surprise. "Do you know now who I am, Scaglietti?", he said futher. "Do you recognise this voice, the words of this vengeful soul who stands here before your unbelieving eyes? Do you know what became of Project No. 5?!"

Jail's features contorted from a look of pain to one of utter disbelief. A dawning realization came upon him like lightning, and almost at once he knew who the figure choking him to within a mere inch of his life was.

"M...Masaka...!"

V was about to speak again, but new voices echoed down the hallway= those of the remaining Numbers and Letters.

"What? How many have retreated?"

"4, from what I've gathered...some are injured, heavily from what I heard."

"Worry about them later. We can't let this intruder go further!"

"Bit too late to be saying that now, isn't it? Where's G?"

"...He'll be arriving shortly, just get to the objective, now!"


"Ah," V mused. "More of your companions..." He turned his head to Jail's assistant, Uno, who was paralyzed with shock. "Sad to say, Uno...I fear that some of your brothers and sisters might not be making any further visitations." He watched, wordlessly, as the color drained from her face. "Let the shock sink in...we all go through these moments once in a while..."

He went back to the Doctor. "Don't we, Doctor? After all, you killed my father, and made my mother a nervous wreck because of it. I trained for years on end just to hunt you down like the mutt you are, and it had boiled down to this."

He glanced again at the entrance. The footsteps were louder now. "You know," the added, "I don't think they would like seeing you held at blade-point..."

Without any command, a Device appeared in his hand- Fawkes, his jet=black, seldom-used spear. "But I'll give them one last glimpse of you." He aimed Fawkes at the Doctor's neck.

"And assure you that your creations will be the last things that you set your eyes upon in this mortal plane."



The ironic part is I haven't even even gotten around to writing this part in full. This is basically a blueprint snippet. Once I get around to the actual thing, it will, no doubt, change. But let me know what you all think of it.

FlameSparkZ
2007-08-23, 15:58
Maren's a girl, right?

And you know what they say when a girl hears her biological clock ticking...
Oh...well, Maren isn't exactly like other girls...:uhoh:
Still thinking if I should add that to Maren's character...though, it's a bit dangerous... (if not a lot...) :twitch:

@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D
Yeah, it's nice...but Burning Arisa looks better :D

Erio
2007-08-23, 16:00
As long as Erio masters the Harlem Harem Musou Bushido, it's worth it. :D
That's my Meister. :D

... wait... Kha just took 999,999 damage and still lives?! :twitch::twitch::twitch:

*awaits the Wrath of Aaron*

@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D
And I went :love: at Suzuka. :D

BTW, I noticed how you added "as well as Fate's" AFTER your initial post. :p Gotcha!! :D


@Dream_Traveller Will check that a bit later, gotta go now...

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-23, 16:10
Alright then.

*hides Buster Khannon*

:D


@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

Ehh... It's okay, not what I'd choose, but it IS up to you.

And here is the first promised snippet! The other's gonna have to wait <sighs> - I need to go grab dinner before I study.



Sophia sighed, and then continued.

“And if putting up with all of Artei’s antics weren’t enough, I’ve got to take care of Allison, keep Sakura in line, make sure Kha isn’t being too soft... and that’s just the business with the 21st!”

The weapons summoner turned around, put her hands on the window, and sighed again.

“Then there’s the whole business with our own individual lives. Kha has the Licht, Artei the Saint Guard, Allison and Kaempfer their Church assignments… and then there’s mine with rebuilding the Convent.” She paused for a moment. “Did you know that they want to make me Matriarch?”

“They do, huh?” Arcas responded. The Dunamist shrugged. “Can’t say I’m surprised. You’d make a good leader; you’re a disciplined person.”

“I know, but that worries me.”

“Why should it? Aside from Kha-sama, I can think of no better leader for the Church than you.”

“Do you not understand? I may be disciplined, but I’m harsh, and raising younglings takes as much loving care as it does discipline; I worry that I have too much the latter and not enough the former…” she trailed off, sighing yet again. She bent her head forward and closed her eyes, shutting out the world.

She was startled, and quickly reopened her eyes when she felt Arcas hug her from behind. Sophia froze, not used to being held, not even by Kha. A few moments later, the Dunamist released her, and stepped back; the weapons summoner spun around, looking at him.

“W-What was that for?!”

He shrugged. “You just seemed like you needed it.” The Dragonslayer turned to leave, and as he reached the door, he turned back.

“Sophia, you don’t have to be in this alone… we all should help each other. That’s why we can do what we do; the others in the Bureau just don’t seem to get that. If you ever need an ear, just ask. I’m always here.”

As he closed the door behind him, Sophia was left alone with her thoughts.

Arcas… is this what all those girls see in you?

Keroko
2007-08-23, 16:22
@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

Arrisa's device is... I dunno, I guess I'm too used to Burning Arissa to picture her with anything else then a katana. :heh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 16:39
Arrisa's device is... I dunno, I guess I'm too used to Burning Arissa to picture her with anything else then a katana. :heh:

I... Don't really favor Morning Stars myself :heh:

Keroko
2007-08-23, 16:50
Blagh, I woke up this morning with a hunch that I wouldn't get much farther with my current project. I hate it when I'm right. Only two frames are in showable condition, so sneak peak time:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/th_sneakpeak2.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/sneakpeak2.png)

Erio
2007-08-23, 17:08
Blagh, I woke up this morning with a hunch that I wouldn't get much farther with my current project. I hate it when I'm right. Only two frames are in showable condition, so sneak peak time:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/th_sneakpeak2.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/sneakpeak2.png)
First Panel:
Teana: K-Keroko-san!! *nervous*

Keroko: What's up, Teana?

Teana: Umm... I was wondering... DO YOU HAVE SOMEONE YOU LIKE?! :o


Second Panel:
Keroko: Sorry... but I do...

Teana: N-No way... :upset:

BUT...!!!


Third Panel and up = Censored


KEROKO X TEANA IS SHAPING UP!! YES!!!! :love: :D


:uhoh:

*runs*

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 18:25
Quotes from the Riot Squad. I have two quotes from each of the four members. The first is their “Set-up” speech, and the second one is what they say when using their ultimate attack. A cookie to whoever guesses the origin of Riot-4’s ultimate attack.


“Guess diplomacy won’t work here, huh? Then again, we’re lousy diplomats! Time to do what we do best! Ikuso, Doppleganger! Set… UP!” – Hikaru von Lieben (Riot-1)

“Kore de… OWARI DA!!” - Hikaru von Lieben (Riot-1)

“I believe that you’ve done enough damage for today. I apologize, but we will not let you go any further. Stop them with a serenade of frost! Aurora Weave, set up!” – Miria Hasser (Riot-2)

“Oh colors that dance upon our forms… unite and grant us thy blessing! PRISMIC SERENADE!!” – Miria Hasser (Riot-2)

“I don’t like to hurt other people, but your actions have forced me to fight you. Sorry, but these claws shall tear you to shreds! Prepare yourself! Bloody Howling… Roar!” – Katsuhito Kuroshi (Riot-3)

“Gomen. This might hurt quite a bit. FATAL FRENZY!!” -Katsuhito Kuroshi (Riot-3)

“There’s no point in talking! You’re going… to burn! Flamberge, set up! Turn everything to ash!”- Ignatius Volterra (Riot-4)

“I go seriously! Be consumed by hellfire! BRIMSTONE TEMPEST!!” - Ignatius Volterra (Riot-4)

USB500
2007-08-23, 20:28
@USB: Cinque is among the Numbers, fear not. :)

Ah, okay then. :)

]===========================

Please Doooooooo :D

IT SHALL BE DONE! :D :D :D

Amidst the chaotic argument between Riot Force 6 and the Numbers, Quattro approached Hikki and knelt next to him. “What’s your name?” she asked. (The quarrel stopped, and the two groups, surprised by Quattro’s advance move).

Hikki stopped crying. Nervously he looked up at the eyeglasses woman. “………”

“Come on,” Quattro said. “Don’t be afraid. I won’t yell at you.”

“Really?” he asked.

“Yes, really,” Quattro answered.

Hikki wiped off his tears. Although still sobbing, he braved on and looked up at Quattro. “Yu… Yutaro…” he mumbled.

Quattro giggled and softly patted Hikki’s head. “Yosh, yosh. Don’t be afraid, Yutaro. We aren’t scary people.” Hikki nervously glanced back and forth between the Numbers and Riot Force, before he looked back at Quattro. “See?”

“I… I want my mommy…” he mumbled and cried again (again, the two groups resumed their argument and blamed each other for making the boy weep). “I want to find my mommy…”

Cinque approached the boy. The only thing she did to comfort him was to offer him a candy stick. “Here.” This time, Hikki stopped crying and stared at the eye-patched lady. “If you stop crying, we’ll look for your mother,” she said and patted his head.

(Nove was burning in jealousy. “That boy… how dare he flirts with Cinque-neesama…”)

“Yutaro, we promise we’ll help you,” Quattro added. “So stop crying. Yutaro is a strong kid, isn’t it?”

“Are… you sure?”

Cinque and Quattro nodded. “Yes, we are,” Quattro answered.

Is Hikki just playing Bond here? :uhoh:

*runs for cover*

Here's LineBackerS, Part VIII, featuring:



Up here on the rooftop of an abandoned condo, I observe the raging battle happening in this abandoned city. The clashing of blades, polearm versus katana.

By the overpass, the archaeologist girl continued to clash with the 2nd Lieutenant, blade against blade. Both holding their own, but even from here it was apparent that 2nd Lieutenant Heckler had the overwhelming advantage. Ms. Mathis was using ranged Midchilda spells to attack from stand-off range, only to be countered by the 2nd Lt’s. Sonic Moves, closing the gap between them. And so far I haven’t observed him using other spells. Expected nothing less from my superior.

“Wes, out of ammo!”

“Here, my last two! Darry, how’s Glock?”

That was PFC Wesson speaking through the holodisplay, asking me for the 2nd Lieutenant’s status, with PFC Smith in the background.

“The 2nd Lieutenant is doing well. I’d say he’s giving Ms. Mathis a hard time.”

“Tell us if he needs help. Right now we’re busy with som- SMITH LOOK OUT!!!

HISSATSU!!!!!!!!!!”

*beep*

I don’t know this stupid guy… nope, don’t know him…

*beep*

“- IRACULOUS FINISH!!!!!!!!! ”

*beep*

“COLT, GROW UP!!!!!”

*ehem*, sorry…

That was PFC Wesson, acting like the idiot he is, along with his brother. Even back then when fighting against overwhelming numbers or power, these two can’t seem to lose their love for screaming at the top of their lungs and spouting ridiculous barely understandable babble. These two…

I watch them on the holodisplay, running while blasting through hordes of Mai Enna’s illusion-enhanced doppelganger demons off-screen. Got to give them credit, they’re still alive and kicking, even under immense odds like these, where it’s easy to get overwhelmed due to immense numbers. I may not see them directly from here, but I can tell they’re trying to move south, closer and closer to here, and the 2nd Lieutenant’s position.

*beep*

“HARLEM HAREM BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!“

I feel a migraine coming…

“Colt, can you stop that please? It’s getting annoying!”

“Why should I, just when it’s getting fun! Too many enemies to handle!”

“Wesson, to your left! SMITH SPECIAL!!!!! STORM BOLTAAAA-“

“You too Smith!!!”

“Darry, it’s just a mock training session.”

“Don’t get your pink polka-dot panties up in a wad! Relax!”

“I am not getting my panties up in a-“

Wait… rewind… at this very moment, I am wearing my only pink polka-dot panties… that I just bought and wore today only an hour ago…

And Wesson flashes his widest, toothiest, grin at me…

... why you...

“COOOOOOOOOOOLT WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! !!”

That’s it! Nobody catches a peep from me!!

“Wes, they’re everywhere!”

“Smith, take cover!!!”

A small explosion just to my far north blasts up dust… and betrays their position!

“You bastard Colt Wesson…”

How many summoning circles should I call out? One? Two?! No, maybe FOUR?! No, EIGHT!

SCREW THIS, I’M TAKING THEM TO HELL!!!!!!!

“DIVINE PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! CRYSTAL RAIN GENOCIDE SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!”

A thousand blades appear and rains my wrath down on these two! Stirring up tons of delicious smoke and dust! Yes my crystal babies, RAIN DOWN ON THESE UNHOLY LECHEROUS PERVERTS!!!!!! SMITE THEM DOWN!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!!! DEATH, DESTRUCTION, MAYHEM, CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!! BLOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! STRIKE THEM DOWN FOR MY SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





A thick, opaque grey cloud of smoke hangs in the air in front of me…

Justice be done…

“Wow, impressive show there! You brought the block down!”

No way…that male voice. I look behind me. Smith, Colt? How’d they get here so fast?

“Thanks for bailing us out of there! That’s a nice feint Wes!”

“Bailing you out? Feint? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?”

Wesson raised his Linebacker over his shoulder, smirking at me. The smirk that told me I’m going to regret this.

“I thought we were toast, with all the Mai’s we had to fight, and with Wes and I out of ammo we couldn’t use area of effect weapons. And since you were available I felt it necessary to… use your assets.”

“So Wes rigged some Stinger Snipes to create that explosion at the spot we designated, and acted like we were the ones hit. We were long gone by the time your Crystal Rain hit. Cool huh?”

“Unfortunately Darry, Me, the Wild Wild Wes knows how to push your buttons.”

Lord, why me? Smith and Colt’s grinning faces… jeez, these two… I want to just smash their heads in together right now!

But… I can’t move… can barely stand up… I should’ve known better than to waste an S-rank spell on a couple of fools… I fell…

And two arms catch me.

“The Wild Wild Wes likes to express his gratitude for saving our asses...”

Heh… trying to act all suave on me… I’m not done yet with you you know…

“…And I really think you’re cute in those polka dots.”

Colt, why you… cute huh… Oh forget it.

“Private First Class Darry Milfuelle, get some rest. That's an order from me.”

I will Colt, I will.
____________________

Meanwhile…

Xealot: [Impressive power that young girl has. Don’t you think s- Is something bothering you Mistress? You’ve been searching under your feet for moments now.]
Mai: … Iya.

It’s nothing.

Xealot: [… I do not detect the presence of surveillance spells in the immediate vicinity.]
Mai: Sou ka.

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Shoddy :heh:

I enjoy this, because of Smith & Wesson's antics :heh::heh: when will they ever learn to behave? :uhoh:

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Whoa.. Berserk Hikki... SCARY!!
Although whats with all the shiroh pictures....:heh:

GAH!!
Oy stop with the evil teasers....

ZOMG!
Hikki......:sad: SO SAD!!!!!!!

And all I've got to say on that last bit...:twitch::twitch::eyespin:

1: You have yet to see more of berserk Hikki's handworks.... :uhoh:

2: yes, I'm evil, as so do my evil teasers :p

3: just you wait until Diary of a Wind Talker is up :D

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Found someone else that may suit onee-chan more:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118769926763873.jpg

In case your wondering, character is Felt Grace, from the upcoming Gundam 00.

Now I'm burnt to watch Gundam 00 :D

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@Tk3997: Welcome to the OC Thread.:)

:nod: :nod:

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Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

So, Doppelganger is all about tracing copying, eh? Quite good. :)



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

Does E inherit the hotblooded spirit of manly courage? :eek: :eek: :eek:

And Cinque's reaction is pure win :love: :love:

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@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

I like Suzuka's & Arisa's design, although frankly speaking I'd rather have Burning Arisa & Crimson Suzuka anytime :D

Saint X
2007-08-23, 20:48
I remember telling myself to avoid Image Thread for some time because it has fallen into enemy hands.
...

I'm so glad I can find something to build on this place... Even if it's not much :heh:

As long as you honor the code of H4XX and carry a bit of Bluecheesium in your pocket... you are welcome here and free to settle...

I GOT A FLEET OF ABOUT 5 GDI SINGUARDIA-CLASS PROTOSS MOTHERSHIPS STATIONED AT THE EDGE OF THE OC THREAD, READY TO FIRE ON ANY BUNNY THAT COMES CLOSE...

"FOR THE PLACE OF THE TEXTS OF REALITY AND THE PLACE OF THE MAPS OF RELATIONS HAVE BEEN TAKEN OVER BY *RADIO STATIC* FORCES!!! THIS IS THE LAST BASTION OF MORALITY! THE PLACE WHERE THE PURE OF HEART AND THE ONES FILLED WITH HOTBLOOD AND COURAGE ROAM FREE! THIS IS THE PLACE WHERE MAN AND WOMAN LIVE HAPPILY TOGETHER IN HARMONY AND EQUALITY AND NO MAN, WOMAN, FAMILIAR OR MACHINE WILL BE SHAFTED!!!"

This is for our future, this is for tomorrow's smile! DEFEND THAT SMILE, FELLOW GUARDIANS!!!

Antimatter Bomb or Black Hole, That i don't know...

Kha disappears towards the end of Kha's Counterattack at the end of a penultimate battle... Not even the 21ste knows where he is, but they hide it from Riot 6 so as not to worry them...

But... I remember planning Kha mentally contacting Fate telling her that he's snooping in Scag's lab... And so... Does this mean... Fate's trying to cover for Kha in canon?!

:uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh:

Well... Saint X has absorbed the idea that the Numbers in NBC are his blood sisters created from his mother Ifurita... Can they still count as harem, or blood relations exclude them? :p

Church Knights' Circle - All 20 Trinity Standartim have been owned in the suppression attacks on TSAB bases in Belka SAR. Scagletti's Gadget Type-4 Stalker proved their downfall, having never fought invisible enemies before.

21ste Trinity - Destroyed the Stalkers and is now leading whatever's left of the Regional Guard to secret facilities all over Midchilda.

No reinforcements from me. :D

Clones?! And we have Jedi as well... :heh: But knowing you, I can say we've got a big battle to look forward to, ne? :D

AX busy with escorting the GDI expedition... unable to return because of standing orders- Reverie and "Athena" still observing.

The AX command bloc that was left back at base is coordinating rescue efforts... if the entire bureau is busy, who is left to save the people who are caught in the middle?

Kia being the Numbers 'Founder' = accepted... need a base concept.

Kyla: Kha, your additional forces got beat by unseen enemies? They must need to learn! Oh well, at least your trinity managed...

Some GDI are like Jedi... *nods*

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

*After seeing that footage*
Kyla: Yup... they did learn from me...

"I don't care if you just had an ecchi moment! Get here now!"

"You're on standby mode! Release your Device now!!!"

"Your Assessment scores just came in... and it is not good!!!"

"You're on overbreak! get back here now!!"

"Guys, meet your new Combat Analyst, James... he's strict in regards to the AX stratagem..."

"Fill your stratagem trackers after each session!!! no end of period, end of session!"

"There are three things i hate... low CA scores, low FCR (First Combat Resolution) and abscences!"

Kyla: what is important is not how they begin with, it's how they end up is what matters- if you need to reform them from the start, do it! we need results, not promises and primadonnas that need spoiling before acting...

Can I get a list of active OC characters that have either been trained by Nanoha in the past or is currently training under her? Need student names for a fic I'm doing :3

Saint X has no agents on Avail... Even Batch 0 of the Terran Magical Club (AlternateS I) are taking in jobs...

Where is Skeith?

*Glances over Saati-kun's shoulder*

"you're not being followed by any bunnies are you?"

*PROTOSS MOTHERSHIP LOOMS OVERHEAD*

"Sorry, just a precaution... you have been tagged here you know... by who that i don't know..."

:eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:

I suppose these ladies are a heck lot worst than my boot camp instructors... :heh:

*points to above post*

Nope Satashi posted here before to say hi, and we've been trying to get Skeith into the thread ever since. :3

SKEITH REWARD HAS BEEN H4XXINGLY MULTIPLIED...

@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

- ARISA PERFECT!!! for mode 2 that is...

Key devices have a cloth form and an armor form... that will suit for Armor Form of 'Burning Arisa' cloth form is still the most common in BA arts...

though replace that mace with either full form Gladius or the sleeker 'Feather Form' of it... which is a Katana... and remove the shield...

As for Suzuka though- that might appeal to Nanoka though

Suzuka never had armor mode on the KD she has now...

and yes... keep that for me first... i'll get a copy later...

---

and as for pink haired girl...

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/89/Portrait_priscilla.jpg
with matching mech included

- too bad she's already slated...

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 20:53
OMG why a day I'm absent from the forums always brings the most backlog? Sorry, still no time to comment, and I'm moving back to Mother Russia this weekend so I'll probably not appear here until Sunday :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Good luck on the flight home.

Actually people keep messing with the number of "*"s in it :rolleyes: Don't you dare tell it's Astranagant :D

BINGO! WE HAVE A WINNER!:D:D:D
Now before the people who knows about it flip and kill me, it's just a name, okay?!:heh::uhoh::D:D:D

LoweGear is so gonna flip when he finds out!:D:uhoh:

Yeah... unlike Aurion with Hayat----

*Regression Impulse Breaker >>>>>>> poor me*

No need to run.:p That was intentional and necessary for emotional defense-breaking.:D

lol You could use it for another Hayate PWNS Aurion revenge scenario part 2. :D

Not likely.:heh:

To answer your questıon, Erio, it is another conceptual scenario. Andö now that I look back on it, one that mıght conflict with future canon events.

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:

WIN!:D
I like how they interact!:D

@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

I like Burning Arisa more.:heh: But Suzuka's outfit fits.:D

And, my final segment for now. I'm churning these out too fast. :heh:



He was gravely injured, but he could still stand.

He was close to the brink of death, but he was driven by sheer willpower towards his destination. Despite what Nove and that "brother" of hers had done ('I, was it...?' V wondered, wearily), he had managed to trudge on.

He had let a few of his opponents go out of mercy, yes. But there would be no scrap of said mercy for the deranged lunatic that he was about to face down.

He limped towards the light before him, determined to fulfill his goals. After a while, he stepped out into the very place that he had longed to travel to= Scaglietti's lab. And, as luck would have it, the owner of the facility, the madman himself, was standing before him with his back turned.

V spoke, his voice direct and colder than ice. "Hello...Doctor."

Scaglietti turned around, a grin carved onto his features. "Well, well", he uttered. "Who do we have here? Another Bureau dog to bear witness to-"

Before he could hope to continue, he found himself being lifted feet above the floor by the masked unknown who was, only mere seconds ago, some feet away from him. He felt the man's grip tighten fiercely around his throat, constricting his breathing.

When V exchanged words with the suffocating scientist held in the air before him, his tone was vengeful, hard, calculating. "I know it has been some time since we last spoke, Jail. Give or take, hm...quite a few years? Quite, yes. A few years since you toyed with me, treated me like some thing, made me your..." He paused, and resumed, his voice now brimming with venomous anger. "...Pet.But now, virulent hellspawn, the shoe is on the other foot, so to speak."

His grip tightened even further, and he looked up at the face of the Doctor, which was wracked with both pain and surprise. "Do you know now who I am, Scaglietti?", he said futher. "Do you recognise this voice, the words of this vengeful soul who stands here before your unbelieving eyes? Do you know what became of Project No. 5?!"

Jail's features contorted from a look of pain to one of utter disbelief. A dawning realization came upon him like lightning, and almost at once he knew who the figure choking him to within a mere inch of his life was.

"M...Masaka...!"

V was about to speak again, but new voices echoed down the hallway= those of the remaining Numbers and Letters.

"What? How many have retreated?"

"4, from what I've gathered...some are injured, heavily from what I heard."

"Worry about them later. We can't let this intruder go further!"

"Bit too late to be saying that now, isn't it? Where's G?"

"...He'll be arriving shortly, just get to the objective, now!"


"Ah," V mused. "More of your companions..." He turned his head to Jail's assistant, Uno, who was paralyzed with shock. "Sad to say, Uno...I fear that some of your brothers and sisters might not be making any further visitations." He watched, wordlessly, as the color drained from her face. "Let the shock sink in...we all go through these moments once in a while..."

He went back to the Doctor. "Don't we, Doctor? After all, you killed my father, and made my mother a nervous wreck because of it. I trained for years on end just to hunt you down like the mutt you are, and it had boiled down to this."

He glanced again at the entrance. The footsteps were louder now. "You know," the added, "I don't think they would like seeing you held at blade-point..."

Without any command, a Device appeared in his hand- Fawkes, his jet=black, seldom-used spear. "But I'll give them one last glimpse of you." He aimed Fawkes at the Doctor's neck.

"And assure you that your creations will be the last things that you set your eyes upon in this mortal plane."



The ironic part is I haven't even even gotten around to writing this part in full. This is basically a blueprint snippet. Once I get around to the actual thing, it will, no doubt, change. But let me know what you all think of it.

Iyow.:twitch: No mad tricks from the mad doctor?

Ehh... It's okay, not what I'd choose, but it IS up to you.

And here is the first promised snippet! The other's gonna have to wait <sighs> - I need to go grab dinner before I study.



Sophia sighed, and then continued.

“And if putting up with all of Artei’s antics weren’t enough, I’ve got to take care of Allison, keep Sakura in line, make sure Kha isn’t being too soft... and that’s just the business with the 21st!”

The weapons summoner turned around, put her hands on the window, and sighed again.

“Then there’s the whole business with our own individual lives. Kha has the Licht, Artei the Saint Guard, Allison and Kaempfer their Church assignments… and then there’s mine with rebuilding the Convent.” She paused for a moment. “Did you know that they want to make me Matriarch?”

“They do, huh?” Arcas responded. The Dunamist shrugged. “Can’t say I’m surprised. You’d make a good leader; you’re a disciplined person.”

“I know, but that worries me.”

“Why should it? Aside from Kha-sama, I can think of no better leader for the Church than you.”

“Do you not understand? I may be disciplined, but I’m harsh, and raising younglings takes as much loving care as it does discipline; I worry that I have too much the latter and not enough the former…” she trailed off, sighing yet again. She bent her head forward and closed her eyes, shutting out the world.

She was startled, and quickly reopened her eyes when she felt Arcas hug her from behind. Sophia froze, not used to being held, not even by Kha. A few moments later, the Dunamist released her, and stepped back; the weapons summoner spun around, looking at him.

“W-What was that for?!”

He shrugged. “You just seemed like you needed it.” The Dragonslayer turned to leave, and as he reached the door, he turned back.

“Sophia, you don’t have to be in this alone… we all should help each other. That’s why we can do what we do; the others in the Bureau just don’t seem to get that. If you ever need an ear, just ask. I’m always here.”

As he closed the door behind him, Sophia was left alone with her thoughts.

Arcas… is this what all those girls see in you?



Hmm... Not too OOC. The only thing that surprized me was the absence of a Harisen Breaker.:heh:

Quotes from the Riot Squad. I have two quotes from each of the four members. The first is their “Set-up” speech, and the second one is what they say when using their ultimate attack. A cookie to whoever guesses the origin of Riot-4’s ultimate attack.


“Guess diplomacy won’t work here, huh? Then again, we’re lousy diplomats! Time to do what we do best! Ikuso, Doppleganger! Set… UP!” – Hikaru von Lieben (Riot-1)

“Kore de… OWARI DA!!” - Hikaru von Lieben (Riot-1)

“I believe that you’ve done enough damage for today. I apologize, but we will not let you go any further. Stop them with a serenade of frost! Aurora Weave, set up!” – Miria Hasser (Riot-2)

“Oh colors that dance upon our forms… unite and grant us thy blessing! PRISMIC SERENADE!!” – Miria Hasser (Riot-2)

“I don’t like to hurt other people, but your actions have forced me to fight you. Sorry, but these claws shall tear you to shreds! Prepare yourself! Bloody Howling… Roar!” – Katsuhito Kuroshi (Riot-3)

“Gomen. This might hurt quite a bit. FATAL FRENZY!!” -Katsuhito Kuroshi (Riot-3)

“There’s no point in talking! You’re going… to burn! Flamberge, set up! Turn everything to ash!”- Ignatius Volterra (Riot-4)

“I go seriously! Be consumed by hellfire! BRIMSTONE TEMPEST!!” - Ignatius Volterra (Riot-4)

Those quotes, melikes.:D

IT SHALL BE DONE! :D :D :D

Amidst the chaotic argument between Riot Force 6 and the Numbers, Quattro approached Hikki and knelt next to him. “What’s your name?” she asked. (The quarrel stopped, and the two groups, surprised by Quattro’s advance move).

Hikki stopped crying. Nervously he looked up at the eyeglasses woman. “………”

“Come on,” Quattro said. “Don’t be afraid. I won’t yell at you.”

“Really?” he asked.

“Yes, really,” Quattro answered.

Hikki wiped off his tears. Although still sobbing, he braved on and looked up at Quattro. “Yu… Yutaro…” he mumbled.

Quattro giggled and softly patted Hikki’s head. “Yosh, yosh. Don’t be afraid, Yutaro. We aren’t scary people.” Hikki nervously glanced back and forth between the Numbers and Riot Force, before he looked back at Quattro. “See?”

“I… I want my mommy…” he mumbled and cried again (again, the two groups resumed their argument and blamed each other for making the boy weep). “I want to find my mommy…”

Cinque approached the boy. The only thing she did to comfort him was to offer him a candy stick. “Here.” This time, Hikki stopped crying and stared at the eye-patched lady. “If you stop crying, we’ll look for your mother,” she said and patted his head.

(Nove was burning in jealousy. “That boy… how dare he flirts with Cinque-neesama…”)

“Yutaro, we promise we’ll help you,” Quattro added. “So stop crying. Yutaro is a strong kid, isn’t it?”

“Are… you sure?”

Cinque and Quattro nodded. “Yes, we are,” Quattro answered.

Is Hikki just playing Bond here? :uhoh:

*runs for cover*


The hell? Quattro being nice?!:twitch:
At least Cinque was acting as-WAIT! Where did she get the candy?!:twitch:
Does Cinque secretly has a sweet-tooth?


Blagh, I woke up this morning with a hunch that I wouldn't get much farther with my current project. I hate it when I'm right. Only two frames are in showable condition, so sneak peak time:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/th_sneakpeak2.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/sneakpeak2.png)

KEROKO-CHAN!!!:D When can we see the finished product?:D

USB500
2007-08-23, 20:57
And as for pink haired girl...

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/89/Portrait_priscilla.jpg
with matching mech included

- too bad she's already slated...

*cue music of GUNxSWORD*

The hell? Quattro being nice?!:twitch:
At least Cinque was acting as-WAIT! Where did she get the candy?!:twitch:
Does Cinque secretly has a sweet-tooth

USB500 muffles his mouth, laughing at Aaron's reaction to the snippet.

Not as planned, though. :uhoh:

Maybe Cinque learns magic trick or something. :heh:

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 21:09
Pink hair? Hmm...

http://otakuism.animeblogger.net/wp-content/uploads/2006/12/poster_renais_swimsuit_big.jpg

:p

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 21:35
Here's some preliminary data on Riot-3, Katsuhito Kuroshi: (the fact that some stats have two inputs will be explained later)

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: April 4
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'7
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Can you guess why he has two names?

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 21:38
Here's some preliminary data on Riot-3, Katsuhito Kuroshi: (the fact that some stats have two inputs will be explained later)

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: April 4
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'7
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Can you guess why he has two names?

Like that two-identity guy from GetBackers?:confused::confused::confused:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 21:39
As long as you honor the code of H4XX and carry a bit of Bluecheesium in your pocket... you are welcome here and free to settle...

You've seen my forces, I know balance like that back of my hand ;)

It's Bluecheesium that I don't alway pack :heh:



I GOT A FLEET OF ABOUT 5 GDI SINGUARDIA-CLASS PROTOSS MOTHERSHIPS STATIONED AT THE EDGE OF THE OC THREAD, READY TO FIRE ON ANY BUNNY THAT COMES CLOSE...


The 16th inter-dimenisonal Naval fleet is within striking distances of their Orbitial Space Defenses. Sensors detected multiple hostile movements in the vicinity, indicating that they are aware of our intentions. We have to assume the base has been taken to DefCon 1.


Navy SEAL Strikers, have slipped into FF and are prepared to move when given the go ahead. Air Force Aggressors will move in when the defense barriers have been brought down by the SEALs.




"FOR THE PLACE OF THE TEXTS OF REALITY AND THE PLACE OF THE MAPS OF RELATIONS HAVE BEEN TAKEN OVER BY *RADIO STATIC* FORCES!!! THIS IS THE LAST BASTION OF MORALITY! THE PLACE WHERE THE PURE OF HEART AND THE ONES FILLED WITH HOTBLOOD AND COURAGE ROAM FREE! THIS IS THE PLACE WHERE MAN AND WOMAN LIVE HAPPILY TOGETHER IN HARMONY AND EQUALITY AND NO MAN, WOMAN, FAMILIAR OR MACHINE WILL BE SHAFTED!!!"

This is for our future, this is for tomorrow's smile! DEFEND THAT SMILE, FELLOW GUARDIANS!!!





"Bless me with the
Leaf off of the tree
On it I see
The freedom reign..."

"We are falling
The light is calling
Tears inside me
Calm me down..."

"Midnight calling
Mist of resolving
Crown me, with the
Pure green leaf..."

"Praise to my father
Blessed by the water
Black night, dark sky
The devils cry..."

" The Darkness has return... " Jeno smirked.





(a.k.a - I'll revealing REAL OCs soon...)

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 21:40
Like that two-identity guy from GetBackers?:confused::confused::confused:
Damn, that was quick. But yeah. Katsu has two personalities.

Kha
2007-08-23, 21:55
And here is the first promised snippet! The other's gonna have to wait <sighs> - I need to go grab dinner before I study.



Sophia sighed, and then continued.

“And if putting up with all of Artei’s antics weren’t enough, I’ve got to take care of Allison, keep Sakura in line, make sure Kha isn’t being too soft... and that’s just the business with the 21st!”

The weapons summoner turned around, put her hands on the window, and sighed again.

“Then there’s the whole business with our own individual lives. Kha has the Licht, Artei the Saint Guard, Allison and Kaempfer their Church assignments… and then there’s mine with rebuilding the Convent.” She paused for a moment. “Did you know that they want to make me Matriarch?”

“They do, huh?” Arcas responded. The Dunamist shrugged. “Can’t say I’m surprised. You’d make a good leader; you’re a disciplined person.”

“I know, but that worries me.”

“Why should it? Aside from Kha-sama, I can think of no better leader for the Church than you.”

“Do you not understand? I may be disciplined, but I’m harsh, and raising younglings takes as much loving care as it does discipline; I worry that I have too much the latter and not enough the former…” she trailed off, sighing yet again. She bent her head forward and closed her eyes, shutting out the world.

She was startled, and quickly reopened her eyes when she felt Arcas hug her from behind. Sophia froze, not used to being held, not even by Kha. A few moments later, the Dunamist released her, and stepped back; the weapons summoner spun around, looking at him.

“W-What was that for?!”

He shrugged. “You just seemed like you needed it.” The Dragonslayer turned to leave, and as he reached the door, he turned back.

“Sophia, you don’t have to be in this alone… we all should help each other. That’s why we can do what we do; the others in the Bureau just don’t seem to get that. If you ever need an ear, just ask. I’m always here.”

As he closed the door behind him, Sophia was left alone with her thoughts.

Arcas… is this what all those girls see in you?

Sophia's being a little more vulnerable with Arcas than I expected. Now if it were Kha, I wouldn't be surprised; In fact, thanks to my Haruhi-class timeskips in my writing, there's supposed to be a scene like that in Strike Lightning, the first NBC arc of StrikerS, when she was first nominated unanimously by the Order leaders. It was one of those paperwork days where'd Artei completely disappeared to skive off, leaving Sophia and Kha alone in the office. However, Kha knowing Sophia had used a different approach (I won't spoil) but I LOL'd at how Arcas and Kha said the same thing at the end! :D :D :D :D

Therefore there's only one thing I'd like to change: "Arcas... Sometimes, you're just like Kha..."

Outside, the sun was setting, coloring the Knight-sister's skin to match her blush.

"A big baka."
What does this mean?! :eek:
Pink hair? Hmm...

http://otakuism.animeblogger.net/wp-content/uploads/2006/12/poster_renais_swimsuit_big.jpg

:p:heh: Possible too... Since we're dealing with a Super Mahou force. :D

Here's some preliminary data on Riot-3, Katsuhito Kuroshi: (the fact that some stats have two inputs will be explained later)

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: April 4
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'7
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Can you guess why he has two names?Like that two-identity guy from GetBackers?:confused::confused::confused:Beat me to it. :D



@Chaos: Want you h4xx OCs NAO! :D :D :D :D

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 22:00
Yon... San... Ni... Ichi...

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

*~cue Driver's High~*

GREAT TEACHER TAKAMACHI :D

If you need DISCIPLINE instilled into some lowlifes FAST, none are better than Deathwing and the White Devil :D

And the entire scenario reminded me of GTO :D

Aurion's current BGM is Time Diver.:):uhoh:


Now you're confusing Aurion for yourself :heh::p

BRILLIANT!:D At least S&W didn't take their pervertedness any further after exhausting Darry.:heh:

For some reason, that sounds... wrong... :uhoh::uhoh:

Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

Nice insights into the mechanics of the copy system, and on Hikaru's unorthodox way of using them (Hikaru is a Sunken Colony? :heh: ). Although like Jimmy C pointed out, even without being haxxed he still overshadows the people he's meant to be backing up :heh:

Doppleganger truly is an advanced AI to be able to differentiate and create male versions of female outfits... I wonder how he adapts corsets and such into male form :heh:

It's funny how when I'm the entire day here only a couple of people post, and now I'm going to be absent for 2-3 days and it seems like a real flood :eyespin:

Murphy's Law :uhoh: Don't worry, you'll get over the shock once you get back :heh:

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:

:D:D:D I'm liking E already, so he's an avid gamer huh? :D And Cinque's indifference is WIN :D

The rhythm is off a little, my good Page! Let's see if we can't improve it with this video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ZkwySYbil8):

~~~~~~

Erio: Let's go! Activate Nendo Musou Ken!
Alaeith: Youkai! Sword parts launched!

Cindy: D-Link... Twin Contact!
Sei: Nendo field... Power to max!
Cindy: Strada Zol Orohalcon Sword, combine!

*Giant Strada flies in and docks with massive green blades*

Alaeith: Tronium Engine, OVERDRIVE! *Stahlpreios jets off* Issei, Erio!

*S.Z.O. Sword stabs into the ground.*

Erio: Ho!

*yanks sword out of ground and jets away*

Erio:
CHOU HISSATSU!

*stabs into enemy*

HARLEM, HAREM!

*S.Z.O. splits open, cleaving enemy*

NENDO MUSOU KEN...!

*swings for death blow*

MUTEKIGIRI!!!

Enemy: U-USO DAAA!!!

*time catches up with the target, and with a mindrending eruption, explodes into technicolor*

999999!!!

*twirls S.Z.O Sword and stabs hilt into ground with style*


Erio: Justice... BE DONE! :mad:

~~~~~~


Now that's impact. :D

IMPACTO!!! :D

Though damn, was reserving that attack for Kay's XZO Sword :heh:

Be very careful. Tsunderes aren't known to be the hardest species to manage for nothing. :heh:


This is Reiji... "No Tsundere Too Severe"? :heh:

@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

Gundam Arisa wielding a gun-powered FLAIL?!?!?! :twitch: I prefer Burning Arisa, but damn that's wicked :D Suzuka's BJ is quite simple yet elegant, melike :)

And, my final segment for now. I'm churning these out too fast. :heh:



He was gravely injured, but he could still stand.

He was close to the brink of death, but he was driven by sheer willpower towards his destination. Despite what Nove and that "brother" of hers had done ('I, was it...?' V wondered, wearily), he had managed to trudge on.

He had let a few of his opponents go out of mercy, yes. But there would be no scrap of said mercy for the deranged lunatic that he was about to face down.

He limped towards the light before him, determined to fulfill his goals. After a while, he stepped out into the very place that he had longed to travel to= Scaglietti's lab. And, as luck would have it, the owner of the facility, the madman himself, was standing before him with his back turned.

V spoke, his voice direct and colder than ice. "Hello...Doctor."

Scaglietti turned around, a grin carved onto his features. "Well, well", he uttered. "Who do we have here? Another Bureau dog to bear witness to-"

Before he could hope to continue, he found himself being lifted feet above the floor by the masked unknown who was, only mere seconds ago, some feet away from him. He felt the man's grip tighten fiercely around his throat, constricting his breathing.

When V exchanged words with the suffocating scientist held in the air before him, his tone was vengeful, hard, calculating. "I know it has been some time since we last spoke, Jail. Give or take, hm...quite a few years? Quite, yes. A few years since you toyed with me, treated me like some thing, made me your..." He paused, and resumed, his voice now brimming with venomous anger. "...Pet.But now, virulent hellspawn, the shoe is on the other foot, so to speak."

His grip tightened even further, and he looked up at the face of the Doctor, which was wracked with both pain and surprise. "Do you know now who I am, Scaglietti?", he said futher. "Do you recognise this voice, the words of this vengeful soul who stands here before your unbelieving eyes? Do you know what became of Project No. 5?!"

Jail's features contorted from a look of pain to one of utter disbelief. A dawning realization came upon him like lightning, and almost at once he knew who the figure choking him to within a mere inch of his life was.

"M...Masaka...!"

V was about to speak again, but new voices echoed down the hallway= those of the remaining Numbers and Letters.

"What? How many have retreated?"

"4, from what I've gathered...some are injured, heavily from what I heard."

"Worry about them later. We can't let this intruder go further!"

"Bit too late to be saying that now, isn't it? Where's G?"

"...He'll be arriving shortly, just get to the objective, now!"


"Ah," V mused. "More of your companions..." He turned his head to Jail's assistant, Uno, who was paralyzed with shock. "Sad to say, Uno...I fear that some of your brothers and sisters might not be making any further visitations." He watched, wordlessly, as the color drained from her face. "Let the shock sink in...we all go through these moments once in a while..."

He went back to the Doctor. "Don't we, Doctor? After all, you killed my father, and made my mother a nervous wreck because of it. I trained for years on end just to hunt you down like the mutt you are, and it had boiled down to this."

He glanced again at the entrance. The footsteps were louder now. "You know," the added, "I don't think they would like seeing you held at blade-point..."

Without any command, a Device appeared in his hand- Fawkes, his jet=black, seldom-used spear. "But I'll give them one last glimpse of you." He aimed Fawkes at the Doctor's neck.

"And assure you that your creations will be the last things that you set your eyes upon in this mortal plane."



The ironic part is I haven't even even gotten around to writing this part in full. This is basically a blueprint snippet. Once I get around to the actual thing, it will, no doubt, change. But let me know what you all think of it.

V's finally caught up... Now to dispense VENGEANCE :D

And here is the first promised snippet! The other's gonna have to wait <sighs> - I need to go grab dinner before I study.



Sophia sighed, and then continued.

“And if putting up with all of Artei’s antics weren’t enough, I’ve got to take care of Allison, keep Sakura in line, make sure Kha isn’t being too soft... and that’s just the business with the 21st!”

The weapons summoner turned around, put her hands on the window, and sighed again.

“Then there’s the whole business with our own individual lives. Kha has the Licht, Artei the Saint Guard, Allison and Kaempfer their Church assignments… and then there’s mine with rebuilding the Convent.” She paused for a moment. “Did you know that they want to make me Matriarch?”

“They do, huh?” Arcas responded. The Dunamist shrugged. “Can’t say I’m surprised. You’d make a good leader; you’re a disciplined person.”

“I know, but that worries me.”

“Why should it? Aside from Kha-sama, I can think of no better leader for the Church than you.”

“Do you not understand? I may be disciplined, but I’m harsh, and raising younglings takes as much loving care as it does discipline; I worry that I have too much the latter and not enough the former…” she trailed off, sighing yet again. She bent her head forward and closed her eyes, shutting out the world.

She was startled, and quickly reopened her eyes when she felt Arcas hug her from behind. Sophia froze, not used to being held, not even by Kha. A few moments later, the Dunamist released her, and stepped back; the weapons summoner spun around, looking at him.

“W-What was that for?!”

He shrugged. “You just seemed like you needed it.” The Dragonslayer turned to leave, and as he reached the door, he turned back.

“Sophia, you don’t have to be in this alone… we all should help each other. That’s why we can do what we do; the others in the Bureau just don’t seem to get that. If you ever need an ear, just ask. I’m always here.”

As he closed the door behind him, Sophia was left alone with her thoughts.

Arcas… is this what all those girls see in you?



Good thing Mel didn't see that, or else :uhoh: Arcas is probably a little too good for his own good when it comes to ladies :heh:

Blagh, I woke up this morning with a hunch that I wouldn't get much farther with my current project. I hate it when I'm right. Only two frames are in showable condition, so sneak peak time:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/th_sneakpeak2.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/sneakpeak2.png)

Are we seeing the first comic in OC history? :eek: NICE, waiting for the final results :)

and as for pink haired girl...

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/89/Portrait_priscilla.jpg
with matching mech included

- too bad she's already slated...

S***... unlike Van, I did forget about Priscilla :heh:

BINGO! WE HAVE A WINNER!:D:D:D
Now before the people who knows about it flip and kill me, it's just a name, okay?!:heh::uhoh::D:D:D

LoweGear is so gonna flip when he finds out!:D:uhoh:


I'm alright with it, don't worry, I won't flip...

*fiddles restlessly with Ion Cannon Firing Switch*

Yes, I'm calm, don't worry :)

USB500 muffles his mouth, laughing at Aaron's reaction to the snippet.

Not as planned, though. :uhoh:

Maybe Cinque learns magic trick or something. :heh:

If Acous can conjure cakes and Aurion can conjure water... what's to stop Cinque from conjuring candy? :heh:

Pink hair? Hmm...

http://otakuism.animeblogger.net/wp-content/uploads/2006/12/poster_renais_swimsuit_big.jpg

:p

:eek:

Strange that of all the people, Renais is the one who'll fit in VERY well in the Nanohaverse, since she's Sentoukjin afterall... :uhoh:

Suddenly, I see BioNET similarities with Jail... or is it just me? :eyespin::eyespin:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 22:08
@Chaos: Want you h4xx OCs NAO! :D :D :D :D

Jeno is SOOOOOO h4xx that it actually shouldn't be allowed :p

But he will be allowed, cause nobody knows loopholes better than yours truely :D


(Disclaimer: If his ability is used before here, it's pure coincidence... :uhoh:)

An Hero in Disguise
2007-08-23, 22:10
Jeno is SOOOOOO h4xx that it actually shouldn't be allowed :p

But he will be allowed, cause nobody knows loopholes better than yours truely :D


(Disclaimer: If his ability is used before here, it's pure coincidence... :uhoh:)

I'm not really reading through everything being busy with my departure but this got me interested :D

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 22:19
You've seen my forces, I know balance like that back of my hand ;)

It's Bluecheesium that I don't alway pack :heh:

No problems with that.:heh:



"Bless me with the
Leaf off of the tree
On it I see
The freedom reign..."

"We are falling
The light is calling
Tears inside me
Calm me down..."

"Midnight calling
Mist of resolving
Crown me, with the
Pure green leaf..."

"Praise to my father
Blessed by the water
Black night, dark sky
The devils cry..."

" The Darkness has return... " Jeno smirked.



Dante?!?!:eek: Virgil?!?!:eek:

(a.k.a - I'll revealing REAL OCs soon...)

I'm interested.:D Let's see them soon!:D

Damn, that was quick. But yeah. Katsu has two personalities.

By the way, maybe you'd like to assign Riot-Squad in a more detached manner to RF6. The Stars and Lightings are clearly quite overmatched by the Riots.:heh:

Now you're confusing Aurion for yourself :heh::p

No, I'm not. Ingram's name just suddenly prompted me to cite he's BGM as Aurion's current one. Plus hinting that Aurion's final Device's name is Astranagant.:D If anyone's an Ingram here, it's Aurion. But he's not going to do a turnaround and fight the protagonists so don't worry.:heh:

For some reason, that sounds... wrong... :uhoh::uhoh:

Ask Smith and Wesson.:uhoh:

I'm alright with it, don't worry, I won't flip...

*fiddles restlessly with Ion Cannon Firing Switch*

Yes, I'm calm, don't worry :)

Should I start running now?:upset::upset::upset:

If Acous can conjure cakes and Aurion can conjure water... what's to stop Cinque from conjuring candy? :heh:

Non-magic user?:heh:


Jeno is SOOOOOO h4xx that it actually shouldn't be allowed :p

But he will be allowed, cause nobody knows loopholes better than yours truely :D


(Disclaimer: If his ability is used before here, it's pure coincidence... :uhoh:)

Devil mode with Quicksilver and Doppelganger?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 22:27
No, I'm not. Ingram's name just suddenly prompted me to cite he's BGM as Aurion's current one. Plus hinting that Aurion's final Device's name is Astranagant.:D If anyone's an Ingram here, it's Aurion. But he's not going to do a turnaround and fight the protagonists so don't worry.:heh:


Ah *understanding*

For someone saying that Astranagant is H4XX, strange that you're the one bringing it in... well, at least in name only :heh:


Non-magic user?:heh:


:heh:

Hmmm.... maybe Cinque just has an inner compartment for these things (she's a cyborg afterall)... as to where this inner compartment might be... :uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 22:33
Dante?!?!:eek: Virgil?!?!:eek:

;)


I'm interested.:D Let's see them soon!:D

I had hope I could resist revealing them early :heh:

But what the heck? :p

(There will be spoilers for my Clyde/Lindy/Harem story though :heh:)


Devil mode with Quicksilver and Doppelganger?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

No :heh:

Something slightly original :D (At least I hope nobody thought it up yet :uhoh:) In a sense, it's a non-combat ability.

But boy is it h4xx alright :D (Give me some time to compose it... I still have ground forces to update... :heh: )

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 22:36
Ah *understanding*

For someone saying that Astranagant is H4XX, strange that you're the one bringing it in... well, at least in name only :heh:

It fitted so perfectly!

Time Diver BGM, Infinity Cylinder-class attack showed seventeen years ago, some more attacks to be shown later, and lastly, it's quite a cool name for a device.:D

And yes, name only.:heh: There's no way I'm bringing in real-Astranagant level HAXX here. Oh dear God no.:heh: The story here is that Aurion found the name Astranagant while reading about random stuff on Earth. In the fanon I'm using, the SRW series of games and media exists on Earth, with Aurion and the Phantom Squad's similarities with some factors shown there as insane coincidences.:D

:heh:

Hmmm.... maybe Cinque just has an inner compartment for these things (she's a cyborg afterall)... as to where this inner compartment might be... :uhoh:

Or maybe teleportation...:heh:


;)

Some similarities then.:D I smell insane badassery incoming.:D:D:D

I had hope I could resist revealing them early :heh:

But what the heck? :p

(There will be spoilers for my Clyde/Lindy/Harem story though :heh:)

Not to worry, we even do timeskips here ala-Haruhi.:heh:

No :heh:

Something slightly original :D (At least I hope nobody thought it up yet :uhoh:) In a sense, it's a non-combat ability.

But boy is it h4xx alright :D (Give me some time to compose it... I still have ground forces to update... :heh: )

Sounds kinda potent.:uhoh:
Let's see if you really need to use your loopholing skills for this one.:heh:

Tk3997
2007-08-23, 22:43
Damn, that was quick. But yeah. Katsu has two personalities. That is just so cliché … :p



Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-

USB500
2007-08-23, 22:49
If Acous can conjure cakes and Aurion can conjure water... what's to stop Cinque from conjuring candy? :heh:

Non-magic user?:heh:

Hmmm.... maybe Cinque just has an inner compartment for these things (she's a cyborg afterall)... as to where this inner compartment might be... :uhoh:

Or maybe teleportation...:heh:

Simply put: if Cinque needs something, she can simply trace it! :D :D :D

*dodges Nove's Rider Kick*

Me: will you please stop attacking me for teasing your precious oneesama? :eyebrow:
Nove: Oneesama belongs to me! :frustrated:
Cinque: *blushes*

==========

INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

// MC 0085, Avalon Cemetery //

Silence enveloped the cemetery again. Hikki was sleeping, tired after speaking out everything inside his memory. His head was rested comfortably upon Fate’s lap, completely unaware of snows that were brushed off his face by Fate’s hand. Vivio was still not aware of the two people, completely smitten by the thick snow she was wading through and Fuuko she was chasing after.

Fate closed his eyes. What happened after the unfaithful day, as she remembered, would forever be carved inside of her as the most disheartening event of all. She was the only person to have witnessed his demonic power, and she was the only person to have knocked him back to sanity.

She was the only person whom the berserk Gale Whistler ever had faith on her.

Tears dropped onto his scarred cheek. “Hikki…” she murmured in silence. “…why would you have to go this far…?”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Jail Scaglietti’s hideout, which Riot Force 6 had been previously assigned to raid, was completely obliterated. Bodies were scattered in pieces, heady stench of flesh was abound, and electronic equipments were shattered into smithereens. The team could not believe what they were seeing, and the first thing their mind was asking was: “who could have done this?”

“We’re supposed to arrest Scaglietti, but not something like this…” Hayate murmured.

“What really happened?” Shamal asked.

“I know not,” Armstrong replied, “but I do know someone has come here before us.”

“So, the Riot Force is finally here…”

The unit turned around. What they saw was not the kind of sight their rationale wanted to accept: walking out of the hideout’s entrance door was Hikki, soaked in blood and enveloped in murderous aura like nothing before. In his hands were two Chinese falchions, also coated in fresh blood, identical to the colour of his eyes.

“Hikki… did you do this?” Fate murmured.

He continued walking. His trip ended only after he arrived at a grass patch outside the hideout. Without saying anything, he glanced to Riot Force 6, and clutched the falchions’ hilt.

“This is the only way…”

“What way?! Killing all the scientists and murdering Scaglietti yourself? Hikki, have you gone insane?!” Keroko yelled out.

Hikki’s response was to toss a Reppuken at Riot Force 6. Alexandra deftly blocked the projectile with Avalon, giving Armstrong the opportunity to fire a Sacred Edge. It hit, but did not make him bulge.

“My life is already empty. There is nothing you can do about it.”

He charged at Riot Force 6. Signum swiftly jumped forward, parrying his swordplay with Levantine. “What the hell you think you’re doing?” the Wolkenritter demanded and kicked him away from the group.

“Nothing.” He charged at Riot Force 6, and Signum again blocked his attacks. “Stand back. You know you won’t stand a chance.”

“Do you think I’ll consider your suggestion?” Signum chided.

He delivered a punch onto Signum’s midsection. The Wolkenritter was knocked out cold, and fell onto the ground. “Why, yes you should,” he replied.

“Signum!” Vita was caught in fury and fired Schwalbe Fliegen at Hikki. The Gale Whistler effortlessly dodged the projectiles, like they were made of nothing. “Teme!” Now burning in wrath, Vita chased after him and charged with Raketen Hammer. “EAT THIS!”

“Useless.”

He dodged the rocket-powered hammer. He spun on his feet, delivered a roundhouse kick and sent Vita crashing onto Hayate and Shamal.

“Hikki! Stop attacking your team-mates!”

He paid no attention to the plea, choosing instead to fire dozens of Reppuken at Riot Force 6. The attack continued, and it went on as he jumped into the air and barraged the team with aerial Reppukens.

“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was stopped by Hikki’s falchions, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like hot knife cutting through butter. “What the hell?”

“Old man, you are just asking for your death warrant.”

He landed on the grass patch, leaving the falchions hovering over his head. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and hovered over Hikki. Yet the former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment or anything else.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

“OJIICHAAAAAAAN!!!!”

Their screams pierced through the sky. They were horrified, totally caught by surprised by the sudden turn of event.

“Hikki… you…” Armstrong murmured, yelping in agony as Hikki twisted his hand.

“Old man, you never want to let youngsters shine, do you?”

He pulled his hand out. The veteran’s ace was left suspended in the air for a short while, before he dropped dead onto the ground. Hikki landed next to Armstrong, now a corpse, and glanced at Riot Force 6. “…no one will understand the pain I had to endure…” he murmured and left the dead body behind. “No one…”

“You killed Ojiichan!” Annabelle screamed. “YOU KILLED OJIICHAN! PAPA NO BAAKA!!!!” The meteor summoner called forth multiple megaliths and stalagmites, aiming all of them at him. He remained motionless, waited in patience as the attacks cornered him from all directions.

“Trace on.”

A zanbatou was traced out of thin air. Hikki grabbed its hilt, channelled his dark Chronograph power into its blade and turned the weapon into a light sword. With great effort (due to the weapon’s weight) he opened a stance and waited for the meteor to come closer.

“Hoshinagi no tachi.”

He swung the zanbatou. In one move, the megaliths and stalagmites were cleaved into half, and disintegrated into many pieces as he hacked and slashed the halves in succession.

“Forgive me, Anna.”

He teleported to Annabelle, caught her off guard and delivered a karate chop onto her nape. The meteor summoner was knocked out cold, snatched by Caro before she fell onto the ground. He jumped away from Riot Force 6, dodging Alexandra’s attack and landed on a boulder.

“You killed Ojiichan…” Fate gasped as she held the lifeless Armstrong in her arms. “You killed Ojiichan! Hikki, how could you kill him!!?”

He caught the falling falchions, and tossed them into the ground. He spoke no answer. He lifted his hand, and what looked like an empty move was in fact a summoning stance. Murmuring in ancient Narulian language, he created a magenta-coloured orb encased by dark blue energy rings. It was small at first, yet the longer the chant the bigger it became and the denser its content was. The surreal world itself became disoriented, all its elements being absorbed into the orb and became one with the entity.

He brought his hand down. The orb was now hovering in front of him. He stared deep into it. He took one of the blades. He nodded.

“Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker.”

He sliced the orb.

-x-x-

A hallway of burning flames. Mountains of machines, demolished, destroyed into crumbling pieces as sparks expel themselves.

One step, as an arm was being gushed out, mechanical parts bleeding a blood of red, from within the flesh, as the lifeless eyes of a young girl, reflected in her death, dropping to the ground as the man simply took another step forward, further and further, as he saw the purpose of his slaughter…

The man who was behind the death of the one he loved… the one he loved more than anything, but because of his own weakness, his own fears, his own rationale… he abandoned it all… until it was too late.

His eyes, bloodshot, enraged only looked down as the other man, sat there fearless on his seat, his deranged gold eyes looked coldly… not at him, but at the corpses that stood behind him.

“Tre, Quattro, Cinque, Sette, Nove, Wendi… did killing them please you? Did their screams, pain and suffering ease your broken heart,” and here the person grinned. “Hikki?”

He stared at the unconscious Ginga. He discarded her off, wiped blood off his fist and glared at the person. “No.”

“No? That’s so expected of you, my dear Wind Talker,” the person mocked. “Do you want more? Do you… want more bodies to be shredded into pieces?”

“You killed her… you took the only life away from me… I will never forgive you…”

“So by killing me you will avenge her death?”

“Silence! I need no words of advice from the likes of you!”

“Very well.” The person left the chair, walked a bit forward and spread his arms. “Come on and take me.”

The video terminated. What was left was simply static and radio disturbance. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them afterwards, as everyone was staring into the empty liquid-crystal display. Even the Riot Force 5 had no idea of what to talk about.

“Ma’am, we detected the coordinates of the video’s original source,” the operator reported. Fate was speechless. “Ma’am?”

“Give me the coordinates…” was her only response.

“Yes, ma’am. Right away.”

-x-x-

The attack ended. Alexandra’s and Reinforce Zwei’s quick decision on deploying protective barrier was only just; and even so they barely escaped the “mass destruction” breaker move. The destructive force of Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker was unheard of; as everything became clear, the whole island became a barren desert, devoid of life forms. (the hideout survived, though, partly because it was built underground).

They stared at Hikki. The usually cheerful and laid back Gale Whistler was now completely changed. He was deranged. He was a berserker. He had gone as far as committing indiscriminate massacre and destroying the people he was supposed to protect. (He even breached the limit by murdering a TSAB officer -- one of the Aces, on top of that.)

And Fate could not accept the cruel destiny that was unfolding before her.

“Yurusanai…”

Fate unlocked Bardiche’s Zamber form.

“YURUSANAI!!!!!”

She pounced at Hikki and swung Bardiche at the Gale Whistler, missing her target as he swiftly jumped away; yet from his reaction she knew he was surprised by her impromptu action.

“Admiral Haraoun- iie, Oniichan. Requesting Limiter Release.”

“[Fate, are you sure you must do this?]”

“I have no other choice.” Clenching her hand on Bardiche’s handle, she glowered at Hikki, revealing tears that were flowing down her cheeks. “I must do it.”

“[…understood. But please be careful.]”

It took only seconds before the Ace was fully enveloped with unrestricted power surge. The power overload knocked Hikki off guard, overwhelming him with such pressure he was also forced to perform Limiter Release of his own.

“My friend…”

“You’re no longer my friend,” she spoke and opened stance reminiscence to Armstrong’s. “And I’m no longer your friend.” Tears now dampening her Barrier Jacket, she channelled each and every piece of her power into Bardiche, feeding the Zamber blade with more energy.

“So… you’ve treated me as an enemy.” Slowly and steadily he opened battle stance. “Very well. I accept your challenge. En garde!”

// to be continued //

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 23:00
That is just so cliché … :p



Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-
Of course it's cliche. I needed a cliche. My other characters are lacking in blatant cliches, so this is my solution.

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 23:03
No problems with that.:heh:



Dante?!?!:eek: Virgil?!?!:eek:



I'm interested.:D Let's see them soon!:D



By the way, maybe you'd like to assign Riot-Squad in a more detached manner to RF6. The Stars and Lightings are clearly quite overmatched by the Riots.:heh:



No, I'm not. Ingram's name just suddenly prompted me to cite he's BGM as Aurion's current one. Plus hinting that Aurion's final Device's name is Astranagant.:D If anyone's an Ingram here, it's Aurion. But he's not going to do a turnaround and fight the protagonists so don't worry.:heh:



Ask Smith and Wesson.:uhoh:



Should I start running now?:upset::upset::upset:



Non-magic user?:heh:




Devil mode with Quicksilver and Doppelganger?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
God freaking dammit! You blew up my house with the Ion Cannon! Where will I sleep?!:frustrated:

azuma-blade
2007-08-23, 23:08
ok i've done with my last character

Name: Azuma-Blade
Nick Name: Blade
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 9
Homeworld: Earth
Occupation: TSAB Officer *After Defeating Dr.Jail*
Rank: Sergent, Pilot
Unit: Riot Force 6 *After Defeating Dr. Jail
Call Sigh: Raven-1
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: Gold
Favored Element: "Multi*
Height: Around 5'5
Weight: About 125-136 pounds
Hair: Short, Black hair
Eye Color: Blue
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Personality: Kind, Silent
Device: Galeon
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Background:
After the cradle incident blade joins TSAB again to pilot TSAB's new weapon named Astral Soul to replace his severly damaged barrier armor. After returning to TSAB blade joins the Riot Force 6 to escort them in their missions and locate Azuma-Lance who escaped and went to Al-Hazard.
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http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p17/ravenflau009/DSC02475.jpg
Model#: TSAB-AC01
Name: Astral Soul
Unit Type: TSAB's First Generation Mecha Unit
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Astral Soul's Stats
Magic Offence: SS
Magic Defence: A
Mobility: S+
Size: 20 ft
Armor Material: Anti-Magic Coating
Special Abilities: OP-I Drive
Pilot: Azuma-Blade
Weapons:
1 Energy Rifle *R-Arm*
1 Energy Blade *L-Arm*
6 Energy Cannons *Wings*
1 Barrier *Core*
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Offensive Spells:

Soul Buster: *Rifle Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astral Souls rifle to fire a mid range buster attack capable of destroying a battle ship.

Cresent Moon Slash: *Sword Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astrals Souls' sword creating a long sword capable of slicing an Large AM equiped Drone.

Soul Breaker: *Ultimate Attack* Blade Channels his half of magic energy to Astral Soul's wing cannons to fire a wide spread buster attack capable of destroying enemies in a cone.

Defensive Spells:

Iron Shell: *Shield* Blade channels his small amount of it's magic enery creating a large protecting barrier that shields any attacks within 360 meter radius.

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 23:10
It fitted so perfectly!

Time Diver BGM, Infinity Cylinder-class attack showed seventeen years ago, some more attacks to be shown later, and lastly, it's quite a cool name for a device.:D

And yes, name only.:heh: There's no way I'm bringing in real-Astranagant level HAXX here. Oh dear God no.:heh: The story here is that Aurion found the name Astranagant while reading about random stuff on Earth. In the fanon I'm using, the SRW series of games and media exists on Earth, with Aurion and the Phantom Squad's similarities with some factors shown there as insane coincidences.:D


Metafiction? Reminds me of dkellis' warning about genre blindness here in OC... we already have SRW both in metafiction, and as an in universe setting (KBTKaiser does have Guilliam running around :uhoh: ).

That is just so cliché … :p



Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-

*jots down for future reference* :D

Simply put: if Cinque needs something, she can simply trace it! :D :D :D

*dodges Nove's Rider Kick*

Me: will you please stop attacking me for teasing your precious oneesama? :eyebrow:
Nove: Oneesama belongs to me! :frustrated:
Cinque: *blushes*


Even Cinque has tracing? :heh:

And yes Nove, Cinque is all yours, and nobody elses. :rolleyes::D

*dissapears in smoke laughing devilishly*


INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

// MC 0085, Avalon Cemetery //

Silence enveloped the cemetery again. Hikki was sleeping, tired after speaking out everything inside his memory. His head was rested comfortably upon Fate’s lap, completely unaware of snows that were brushed off his face by Fate’s hand. Vivio was still not aware of the two people, completely smitten by the thick snow she was wading through and Fuuko she was chasing after.

Fate closed his eyes. What happened after the unfaithful day, as she remembered, would forever be carved inside of her as the most disheartening event of all. She was the only person to have witnessed his demonic power, and she was the only person to have knocked him back to sanity.

She was the only person whom the berserk Gale Whistler ever had faith on her.

Tears dropped onto his scarred cheek. “Hikki…” she murmured in silence. “…why would you have to go this far…?”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Jail Scaglietti’s hideout, which Riot Force 6 had been previously assigned to raid, was completely obliterated. Bodies were scattered in pieces, heady stench of flesh was abound, and electronic equipments were shattered into smithereens. The team could not believe what they were seeing, and the first thing their mind was asking was: “who could have done this?”

“We’re supposed to arrest Scaglietti, but not something like this…” Hayate murmured.

“What really happened?” Shamal asked.

“I know not,” Armstrong replied, “but I do know someone has come here before us.”

“So, the Riot Force is finally here…”

The unit turned around. What they saw was not the kind of sight their rationale wanted to accept: walking out of the hideout’s entrance door was Hikki, soaked in blood and enveloped in murderous aura like nothing before. In his hands were two Chinese falchions, also coated in fresh blood, identical to the colour of his eyes.

“Hikki… did you do this?” Fate murmured.

He continued walking. His trip ended only after he arrived at a grass patch outside the hideout. Without saying anything, he glanced to Riot Force 6, and clutched the falchions’ hilt.

“This is the only way…”

“What way?! Killing all the scientists and murdering Scaglietti yourself? Hikki, have you gone insane?!” Keroko yelled out.

Hikki’s response was to toss a Reppuken at Riot Force 6. Alexandra deftly blocked the projectile with Avalon, giving Armstrong the opportunity to fire a Sacred Edge. It hit, but did not make him bulge.

“My life is already empty. There is nothing you can do about it.”

He charged at Riot Force 6. Signum swiftly jumped forward, parrying his swordplay with Levantine. “What the hell you think you’re doing?” the Wolkenritter demanded and kicked him away from the group.

“Nothing.” He charged at Riot Force 6, and Signum again blocked his attacks. “Stand back. You know you won’t stand a chance.”

“Do you think I’ll consider your suggestion?” Signum chided.

He delivered a punch onto Signum’s midsection. The Wolkenritter was knocked out cold, and fell onto the ground. “Why, yes you should,” he replied.

“Signum!” Vita was caught in fury and fired Schwalbe Fliegen at Hikki. The Gale Whistler effortlessly dodged the projectiles, like they were made of nothing. “Teme!” Now burning in wrath, Vita chased after him and charged with Raketen Hammer. “EAT THIS!”

“Useless.”

He dodged the rocket-powered hammer. He spun on his feet, delivered a roundhouse kick and sent Vita crashing onto Hayate and Shamal.

“Hikki! Stop attacking your team-mates!”

He paid no attention to the plea, choosing instead to fire dozens of Reppuken at Riot Force 6. The attack continued, and it went on as he jumped into the air and barraged the team with aerial Reppukens.

“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was stopped by Hikki’s falchions, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like hot knife cutting through butter. “What the hell?”

“Old man, you are just asking for your death warrant.”

He landed on the grass patch, leaving the falchions hovering over his head. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and hovered over Hikki. Yet the former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment or anything else.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

“OJIICHAAAAAAAN!!!!”

Their screams pierced through the sky. They were horrified, totally caught by surprised by the sudden turn of event.

“Hikki… you…” Armstrong murmured, yelping in agony as Hikki twisted his hand.

“Old man, you never want to let youngsters shine, do you?”

He pulled his hand out. The veteran’s ace was left suspended in the air for a short while, before he dropped dead onto the ground. Hikki landed next to Armstrong, now a corpse, and glanced at Riot Force 6. “…no one will understand the pain I had to endure…” he murmured and left the dead body behind. “No one…”

“You killed Ojiichan!” Annabelle screamed. “YOU KILLED OJIICHAN! PAPA NO BAAKA!!!!” The meteor summoner called forth multiple megaliths and stalagmites, aiming all of them at him. He remained motionless, waited in patience as the attacks cornered him from all directions.

“Trace on.”

A zanbatou was traced out of thin air. Hikki grabbed its hilt, channelled his dark Chronograph power into its blade and turned the weapon into a light sword. With great effort (due to the weapon’s weight) he opened a stance and waited for the meteor to come closer.

“Hoshinagi no tachi.”

He swung the zanbatou. In one move, the megaliths and stalagmites were cleaved into half, and disintegrated into many pieces as he hacked and slashed the halves in succession.

“Forgive me, Anna.”

He teleported to Annabelle, caught her off guard and delivered a karate chop onto her nape. The meteor summoner was knocked out cold, snatched by Caro before she fell onto the ground. He jumped away from Riot Force 6, dodging Alexandra’s attack and landed on a boulder.

“You killed Ojiichan…” Fate gasped as she held the lifeless Armstrong in her arms. “You killed Ojiichan! Hikki, how could you kill him!!?”

He caught the falling falchions, and tossed them into the ground. He spoke no answer. He lifted his hand, and what looked like an empty move was in fact a summoning stance. Murmuring in ancient Narulian language, he created a magenta-coloured orb encased by dark blue energy rings. It was small at first, yet the longer the chant the bigger it became and the denser its content was. The surreal world itself became disoriented, all its elements being absorbed into the orb and became one with the entity.

He brought his hand down. The orb was now hovering in front of him. He stared deep into it. He took one of the blades. He nodded.

“Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker.”

He sliced the orb.

-x-x-

A hallway of burning flames. Mountains of machines, demolished, destroyed into crumbling pieces as sparks expel themselves.

One step, as an arm was being gushed out, mechanical parts bleeding a blood of red, from within the flesh, as the lifeless eyes of a young girl, reflected in her death, dropping to the ground as the man simply took another step forward, further and further, as he saw the purpose of his slaughter…

The man who was behind the death of the one he loved… the one he loved more than anything, but because of his own weakness, his own fears, his own rationale… he abandoned it all… until it was too late.

His eyes, bloodshot, enraged only looked down as the other man, sat there fearless on his seat, his deranged gold eyes looked coldly… not at him, but at the corpses that stood behind him.

“Tre, Quattro, Cinque, Sette, Nove, Wendi… did killing them please you? Did their screams, pain and suffering ease your broken heart,” and here the person grinned. “Hikki?”

He stared at the unconscious Ginga. He discarded her off, wiped blood off his fist and glared at the person. “No.”

“No? That’s so expected of you, my dear Wind Talker,” the person mocked. “Do you want more? Do you… want more bodies to be shredded into pieces?”

“You killed her… you took the only life away from me… I will never forgive you…”

“So by killing me you will avenge her death?”

“Silence! I need no words of advice from the likes of you!”

“Very well.” The person left the chair, walked a bit forward and spread his arms. “Come on and take me.”

The video terminated. What was left was simply static and radio disturbance. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them afterwards, as everyone was staring into the empty liquid-crystal display. Even the Riot Force 5 had no idea of what to talk about.

“Ma’am, we detected the coordinates of the video’s original source,” the operator reported. Fate was speechless. “Ma’am?”

“Give me the coordinates…” was her only response.

“Yes, ma’am. Right away.”

-x-x-

The attack ended. Alexandra’s and Reinforce Zwei’s quick decision on deploying protective barrier was only just; and even so they barely escaped the “mass destruction” breaker move. The destructive force of Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker was unheard of; as everything became clear, the whole island became a barren desert, devoid of life forms. (the hideout survived, though, partly because it was built underground).

They stared at Hikki. The usually cheerful and laid back Gale Whistler was now completely changed. He was deranged. He was a berserker. He had gone as far as committing indiscriminate massacre and destroying the people he was supposed to protect. (He even breached the limit by murdering a TSAB officer -- one of the Aces, on top of that.)

And Fate could not accept the cruel destiny that was unfolding before her.

“Yurusanai…”

Fate unlocked Bardiche’s Zamber form.

“YURUSANAI!!!!!”

She pounced at Hikki and swung Bardiche at the Gale Whistler, missing her target as he swiftly jumped away; yet from his reaction she knew he was surprised by her impromptu action.

“Admiral Haraoun- iie, Oniichan. Requesting Limiter Release.”

“[Fate, are you sure you must do this?]”

“I have no other choice.” Clenching her hand on Bardiche’s handle, she glowered at Hikki, revealing tears that were flowing down her cheeks. “I must do it.”

“[…understood. But please be careful.]”

It took only seconds before the Ace was fully enveloped with unrestricted power surge. The power overload knocked Hikki off guard, overwhelming him with such pressure he was also forced to perform Limiter Release of his own.

“My friend…”

“You’re no longer my friend,” she spoke and opened stance reminiscence to Armstrong’s. “And I’m no longer your friend.” Tears now dampening her Barrier Jacket, she channelled each and every piece of her power into Bardiche, feeding the Zamber blade with more energy.

“So… you’ve treated me as an enemy.” Slowly and steadily he opened battle stance. “Very well. I accept your challenge. En garde!”

// to be continued //

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(

Cr**...

The result of someone getting so lost in their anger and hate that they throw away even the ones he's supposed to protect (Even Anna got owned :upset: ). And now, even Fate has turned against him (metaphorically... and physically :upset: ).

And RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(

Of course it's cliche. I needed a cliche. My other characters are lacking in blatant cliches, so this is my solution.

EX FREAKING DEE :D:D:D

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 23:12
I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.

USB500
2007-08-23, 23:19
Even Cinque has tracing? :heh:

And yes Nove, Cinque is all yours, and nobody elses. :rolleyes::D

*dissapears in smoke laughing devilishly*

At least Cinque can trace candies ;)

Ah, this brings me an idea of shota Hikki/Nove argument. Should be a good scenario. :naughty:

Cr**...

The result of someone getting so lost in their anger and hate that they throw away even the ones he's supposed to protect (Even Anna got owned :upset: ). And now, even Fate has turned against him (metaphorically... and physically :upset: ).

And RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(

*nods solemnly* :sad:

===============

I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.

:eek: He's here! The Plot Armour-protected Child! :heh:

That reminds me; I'm supposed to attend my exam papers tomorrow and Sunday. After that, I'm not sure of this, but I'm going for a holiday break at my village. This may prevent me from surfing the Internet and visiting this thread, but it might also give me some times to relax and think of new works. :)

In other words, if I'm not around for more than two days straight, that means I'm away from the Internet.

Hopefully the backlog won't kill me once I return. :uhoh:

haiz123321
2007-08-23, 23:21
Simply put: if Cinque needs something, she can simply trace it! :D :D :D

Trace? Fate Stay Night? XD

azuma-blade
2007-08-23, 23:22
Trace? Fate Stay Night? XD

lulz shiro :heh:

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
*meanwhile*

Blade: This is Raven-1 scouting complete returning to asura huh.... wait im detecting a massive energy reaction in the southwest in my location im gonna look into it blade out

*end transmission*
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LoweGear
2007-08-23, 23:27
I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.

14 enemies (?) destroyed so quickly, as expected of one named from Kille- erh Kira :heh: And nice how they synchronized with Stinger Cannon :)

Will we be seeing Dranac's fights next?

Hopefully the backlog won't kill me once I return. :uhoh:

Don't worry, I'm sure backlog won't be that bad :)

*scrys the future mountain of backlog*

Yup, not too bad, tis' but a small pile :)

USB500
2007-08-23, 23:29
Trace? Fate Stay Night? XD

lulz shiro :heh:

:heh:

Yeah, haizz, you'll find a lot of FSN reference in this thread. One of my OCs, for example, has a Reality Marble based on UBW :uhoh:

Don't worry, I'm sure backlog won't be that bad :)

*scrys the future mountain of backlog*

Yup, not too bad, tis' but a small pile :)

You aren't even helping in that department. :uhoh:

Fate cried again. “After that… we never saw you again… we thought you’d decided to seal yourself away from the world…” Tears now flowed freely down her cheeks, dropping onto his face and froze in contact with the cold air. “You killed Ojiichan… you orphaned Anna-chan… you even hurt everybody’s feeling by leaving us…” She continued crying, now unable to prevent her tears from dampening Hikki’s face. “How could you do this to us… how could you?”

Her cheek was cupped. She was distressed. She looked down at the man, realizing he had already woken up. “Hikki?”

“I’m sorry, Fate…” weakly he murmured. “I knew it was wrong, but I was left with no other choice. I’m truly sorry…”

She flung her head onto Hikki’s chest, crying bitterly as she did. “Don’t ever do this again… mou, onegai…”

He smiled. “Now, now, don’t ever cry in front of me like this, okay?” he asked and gave her a soft pat on the back.

“How am I?” she sobbed. “After seeing everything you had gone through, how am I not supposed to cry?”

He chuckled. “Oh, for the greater good… cry as much as you want to. I won’t even give a damn about it.”

This should be enough from me for now. After this I have to attend Friday prayers. ;)

haiz123321
2007-08-23, 23:34
UBW = ? and Hikki is too powerful O_O but... i like it! especially the drama XD

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 23:36
:heh:

Yeah, haizz, you'll find a lot of FSN reference in this thread. One of my OCs, for example, has a Reality Marble based on UBW :uhoh:


And we're not even factoring Kha in yet, and the Unlimited UBW Works in this thread :heh:

You aren't even helping in that department. :uhoh:

:nod::nod:


Fate cried again. “After that… we never saw you again… we thought you’d decided to seal yourself away from the world…” Tears now flowed freely down her cheeks, dropping onto his face and froze in contact with the cold air. “You killed Ojiichan… you orphaned Anna-chan… you even hurt everybody’s feeling by leaving us…” She continued crying, now unable to prevent her tears from dampening Hikki’s face. “How could you do this to us… how could you?”

Her cheek was cupped. She was distressed. She looked down at the man, realizing he had already woken up. “Hikki?”

“I’m sorry, Fate…” weakly he murmured. “I knew it was wrong, but I was left with no other choice. I’m truly sorry…”

She flung her head onto Hikki’s chest, crying bitterly as she did. “Don’t ever do this again… mou, onegai…”

He smiled. “Now, now, don’t ever cry in front of me like this, okay?” he asked and gave her a soft pat on the back.

“How am I?” she sobbed. “After seeing everything you had gone through, how am I not supposed to cry?”

He chuckled. “Oh, for the greater good… cry as much as you want to. I won’t even give a damn about it.”

This should be enough from me for now. After this I have to attend Friday prayers. ;)

Man, this is heartbreaking... although there's something to be said when Fate holds no grudges against Hikki even after all he's done. Guess we'll see the complete version sometime soon. :)

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 23:42
Some similarities then.:D I smell insane badassery incoming.:D:D:D

I've always love the main characters from the Sayuki series ;)

In my opinion, very few characters can get to their level of badass :p


Not to worry, we even do timeskips here ala-Haruhi.:heh:

Ah well, I guess it should be fine here....



Sounds kinda potent.:uhoh:
Let's see if you really need to use your loopholing skills for this one.:heh:

Out of curiosity, how many OCs are there currently? Does someone have a folder of them all or something :heh:

LoweGear
2007-08-23, 23:46
I've always love the main characters from the Sayuki series ;)

In my opinion, very few characters can get to their level of badass :p


Seconded :D


Out of curiosity, how many OCs are there currently? Does someone have a folder of them all or something :heh:

The Erio OC Skilift, aka the Complete OC List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938502&postcount=5)

:)

haiz123321
2007-08-23, 23:48
X_X Erio-san my OC name changed =p

Nightengale
2007-08-23, 23:48
I've always love the main characters from the Sayuki series ;)

In my opinion, very few characters can get to their level of badass :p

And you were complaining when I gave you Sun Wo Kong's image to go with your image of "Chaos." :rolleyes:

Yeah, I know it's the TVB Drama version, but Dicky Chueng version >>>>>>>> Saiyuki version, even the berserk one. :p

Erio
2007-08-23, 23:51
Ah, I wanted to post the next part of my fic even yesterday, but I guess I'll have to leave it for this weekend... Like Nighty, I'm having some trouble writing the ideas I have... :heh:

Even Cinque has tracing? :heh:

And yes Nove, Cinque is all yours, and nobody elses. :rolleyes::D

*dissapears in smoke laughing devilishly*
T-That's not true!!! *points at new Title and Avatar* :D :naughty: :love:

:uhoh:

Cr**...

The result of someone getting so lost in their anger and hate that they throw away even the ones he's supposed to protect (Even Anna got owned :upset: ). And now, even Fate has turned against him (metaphorically... and physically :upset: ).

And RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(
:nod: :nod: :nod:

This is what I call berserk... :rolleyes:

I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.
Showing us how Kira--I mean Akira fights, huh? Interesting. :D How big is Yamato compared to him, BTW?

That reminds me; I'm supposed to attend my exam papers tomorrow and Sunday. After that, I'm not sure of this, but I'm going for a holiday break at my village. This may prevent me from surfing the Internet and visiting this thread, but it might also give me some times to relax and think of new works. :)

In other words, if I'm not around for more than two days straight, that means I'm away from the Internet.

Hopefully the backlog won't kill me once I return. :uhoh:
Have a nice trip! :D

X_X Erio-san my OC name changed =p
Hehe, when did it? Is it the same link, though?

Wibbles
2007-08-23, 23:51
Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 14
Birthday: Unknown, registered as April 4, the day he was found
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private/subordinate of Scaglietti
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'1
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Pale red/blood red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/bloodthirsty, sadistic


Device Name: Claw King (first form), Claw King Mortem (second form)
Device Appearance: Claws (first form), giant claws with energy blades (second form)
IS: Recoil Boost
Barrier Jacket: Black straightjacket with freed arms
Ultimate Attack: Majin Rengokusatsu (Demon God Connect Hell Slaughter)

Background: Not much is known about Katsuhito’s past. What is known, though, is sobering- Katsu’s earliest memory is of him as a little boy with blood-soaked hands. Katsu wandered for a long and lonely time, leaving a trail of unexplainable blood behind him. Finally, on a dreary April fourth, an emissary from the Church of Velka found him and took the child to the main orphanage. Katsu never really fit in, making friends with only one other child- an older boy named Ignatius who had failed the paladin training (and was the prime suspect in a series of small fires). The two eventually joined the TSAB together, and worked together extensively. They were eventually recruited into the Riot squad as Riots Three and Four.

The only real obstacle Katsu encountered was a bad Shinji Complex (also called a lack of self-confidence). This came about due to his fear of his own temper (which he seemed to lose on occasion) and the fact that whenever a combat situation took too long, he would grow increasingly brutal. This is also why he latched onto Ignatius- the older boy took these moments in stride and supported him.

Everything went wrong one day. Jail Scaglietti organized a raid on a transport, and caught Section Six off guard. In the end, Katsuhito overloaded Claw King with the full power of his linker core in order to blow up the train and stop Scaglietti from acquiring the item on board. The item, a Lost Logia, was unaffected by the blast, but Katsuhito suffered massive damage to his body and linker core. Katsu’s body, in an attempt to survive, accessed a second linker core that had lain dormant and undetected for Katsu’s life. However, the new linker core contained the personality and memories of an entirely different person- a dark and evil person, now in control of a damaged body. When Jail’s Numbers got to the train, they found a barely alive body near their target. Per the Doctor’s orders, both were brought back, and the boy was later modified into a cyborg after agreeing to work for Scaglietti- under the condition that Satsuhito (as he called himself) be allowed to stage a raid on the Church of Velka.

Satsuhito as a fighter is incredibly brutal. He intentionally drags fights out in order to inflict as many wounds as he can without actually killing his opponent. To do this, he uses Katsuhito’s device- the second form of which he has unlocked- in conjunction with his IS ‘Recoil Boost’, which produces a short burst of kinetic energy. Satsuhito uses this burst to often disarm an opponent, and to increase the size and severity of already inflicted wounds. Satsu is also skilled at psychological combat, and can easily figure out what his opponent holds dear and act on that, taunting mercilessly. Satsuhito also uses his magic to great effect, often trapping an opponent in a sphere of darkness and injecting bursts of power inside.

The only people who really know what Satsu’s goals are Scaglietti and Satsuhito himself. All that is really known is that Satsuhito holds an intense hatred for the Church of Velka. He also seems to know about the “Vessel of the Saints” (Vivio), and has made offhand comments that suggest that he in fact met his ‘demise’ at the hands the original Vessel long ago. He has also implied that he clashed with and lost to Ignatius’s ancestor before the Vessel dealt him the final blow.

“Hahaha! This unrestrained strength… that wild and reckless fighting style… these flames that threaten to reduce me to mere ash… I see! You are of that man’s blood… that man who beat me so long ago… Ha! This will be interesting! Come, “Spirale der Flamme”- I shall tear your body to shreds!” –Satsuhito, episode 17



Miscellaneous facts:
-Katsuhito is scared of blood. This stems from his childhood, and the intense urge to cause more blood to appear.
-Katsuhito is also scared of candles. This stems from a prank Ignatius failed to execute properly (Katsu was not the intended target, but was caught in the crossfire).
-Satsuhito speaks with a great deal of eloquence and sophistication. This is lost on most people, since most people tend to die after meeting him.

Kha
2007-08-23, 23:52
Jeno is SOOOOOO h4xx that it actually shouldn't be allowed :p

But he will be allowed, cause nobody knows loopholes better than yours truely :D

(Disclaimer: If his ability is used before here, it's pure coincidence... :uhoh:)Which Dante are we talking about here...? I turned Zest into Dante from DMC... :uhoh:

It fitted so perfectly!

Time Diver BGM, Infinity Cylinder-class attack showed seventeen years ago, some more attacks to be shown later, and lastly, it's quite a cool name for a device.:D

And yes, name only.:heh: There's no way I'm bringing in real-Astranagant level HAXX here. Oh dear God no.:heh: The story here is that Aurion found the name Astranagant while reading about random stuff on Earth. In the fanon I'm using, the SRW series of games and media exists on Earth, with Aurion and the Phantom Squad's similarities with some factors shown there as insane coincidences.:DErrr... We ARE gonna have a little problem... :heh:

But at least our characters weren't directed ported from SRW, they just... look like SRW characters... I mean... Even my wild guess could be spot on, so in the giant Multiverse, there should be someone/something out there who looks like you, is just whether you ever meet him/her/it.

INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

// MC 0085, Avalon Cemetery //

Silence enveloped the cemetery again. Hikki was sleeping, tired after speaking out everything inside his memory. His head was rested comfortably upon Fate’s lap, completely unaware of snows that were brushed off his face by Fate’s hand. Vivio was still not aware of the two people, completely smitten by the thick snow she was wading through and Fuuko she was chasing after.

Fate closed his eyes. What happened after the unfaithful day, as she remembered, would forever be carved inside of her as the most disheartening event of all. She was the only person to have witnessed his demonic power, and she was the only person to have knocked him back to sanity.

She was the only person whom the berserk Gale Whistler ever had faith on her.

Tears dropped onto his scarred cheek. “Hikki…” she murmured in silence. “…why would you have to go this far…?”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Jail Scaglietti’s hideout, which Riot Force 6 had been previously assigned to raid, was completely obliterated. Bodies were scattered in pieces, heady stench of flesh was abound, and electronic equipments were shattered into smithereens. The team could not believe what they were seeing, and the first thing their mind was asking was: “who could have done this?”

“We’re supposed to arrest Scaglietti, but not something like this…” Hayate murmured.

“What really happened?” Shamal asked.

“I know not,” Armstrong replied, “but I do know someone has come here before us.”

“So, the Riot Force is finally here…”

The unit turned around. What they saw was not the kind of sight their rationale wanted to accept: walking out of the hideout’s entrance door was Hikki, soaked in blood and enveloped in murderous aura like nothing before. In his hands were two Chinese falchions, also coated in fresh blood, identical to the colour of his eyes.

“Hikki… did you do this?” Fate murmured.

He continued walking. His trip ended only after he arrived at a grass patch outside the hideout. Without saying anything, he glanced to Riot Force 6, and clutched the falchions’ hilt.

“This is the only way…”

“What way?! Killing all the scientists and murdering Scaglietti yourself? Hikki, have you gone insane?!” Keroko yelled out.

Hikki’s response was to toss a Reppuken at Riot Force 6. Alexandra deftly blocked the projectile with Avalon, giving Armstrong the opportunity to fire a Sacred Edge. It hit, but did not make him bulge.

“My life is already empty. There is nothing you can do about it.”

He charged at Riot Force 6. Signum swiftly jumped forward, parrying his swordplay with Levantine. “What the hell you think you’re doing?” the Wolkenritter demanded and kicked him away from the group.

“Nothing.” He charged at Riot Force 6, and Signum again blocked his attacks. “Stand back. You know you won’t stand a chance.”

“Do you think I’ll consider your suggestion?” Signum chided.

He delivered a punch onto Signum’s midsection. The Wolkenritter was knocked out cold, and fell onto the ground. “Why, yes you should,” he replied.

“Signum!” Vita was caught in fury and fired Schwalbe Fliegen at Hikki. The Gale Whistler effortlessly dodged the projectiles, like they were made of nothing. “Teme!” Now burning in wrath, Vita chased after him and charged with Raketen Hammer. “EAT THIS!”

“Useless.”

He dodged the rocket-powered hammer. He spun on his feet, delivered a roundhouse kick and sent Vita crashing onto Hayate and Shamal.

“Hikki! Stop attacking your team-mates!”

He paid no attention to the plea, choosing instead to fire dozens of Reppuken at Riot Force 6. The attack continued, and it went on as he jumped into the air and barraged the team with aerial Reppukens.

“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was stopped by Hikki’s falchions, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like hot knife cutting through butter. “What the hell?”

“Old man, you are just asking for your death warrant.”

He landed on the grass patch, leaving the falchions hovering over his head. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and hovered over Hikki. Yet the former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment or anything else.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

“OJIICHAAAAAAAN!!!!”

Their screams pierced through the sky. They were horrified, totally caught by surprised by the sudden turn of event.

“Hikki… you…” Armstrong murmured, yelping in agony as Hikki twisted his hand.

“Old man, you never want to let youngsters shine, do you?”

He pulled his hand out. The veteran’s ace was left suspended in the air for a short while, before he dropped dead onto the ground. Hikki landed next to Armstrong, now a corpse, and glanced at Riot Force 6. “…no one will understand the pain I had to endure…” he murmured and left the dead body behind. “No one…”

“You killed Ojiichan!” Annabelle screamed. “YOU KILLED OJIICHAN! PAPA NO BAAKA!!!!” The meteor summoner called forth multiple megaliths and stalagmites, aiming all of them at him. He remained motionless, waited in patience as the attacks cornered him from all directions.

“Trace on.”

A zanbatou was traced out of thin air. Hikki grabbed its hilt, channelled his dark Chronograph power into its blade and turned the weapon into a light sword. With great effort (due to the weapon’s weight) he opened a stance and waited for the meteor to come closer.

“Hoshinagi no tachi.”

He swung the zanbatou. In one move, the megaliths and stalagmites were cleaved into half, and disintegrated into many pieces as he hacked and slashed the halves in succession.

“Forgive me, Anna.”

He teleported to Annabelle, caught her off guard and delivered a karate chop onto her nape. The meteor summoner was knocked out cold, snatched by Caro before she fell onto the ground. He jumped away from Riot Force 6, dodging Alexandra’s attack and landed on a boulder.

“You killed Ojiichan…” Fate gasped as she held the lifeless Armstrong in her arms. “You killed Ojiichan! Hikki, how could you kill him!!?”

He caught the falling falchions, and tossed them into the ground. He spoke no answer. He lifted his hand, and what looked like an empty move was in fact a summoning stance. Murmuring in ancient Narulian language, he created a magenta-coloured orb encased by dark blue energy rings. It was small at first, yet the longer the chant the bigger it became and the denser its content was. The surreal world itself became disoriented, all its elements being absorbed into the orb and became one with the entity.

He brought his hand down. The orb was now hovering in front of him. He stared deep into it. He took one of the blades. He nodded.

“Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker.”

He sliced the orb.

-x-x-

A hallway of burning flames. Mountains of machines, demolished, destroyed into crumbling pieces as sparks expel themselves.

One step, as an arm was being gushed out, mechanical parts bleeding a blood of red, from within the flesh, as the lifeless eyes of a young girl, reflected in her death, dropping to the ground as the man simply took another step forward, further and further, as he saw the purpose of his slaughter…

The man who was behind the death of the one he loved… the one he loved more than anything, but because of his own weakness, his own fears, his own rationale… he abandoned it all… until it was too late.

His eyes, bloodshot, enraged only looked down as the other man, sat there fearless on his seat, his deranged gold eyes looked coldly… not at him, but at the corpses that stood behind him.

“Tre, Quattro, Cinque, Sette, Nove, Wendi… did killing them please you? Did their screams, pain and suffering ease your broken heart,” and here the person grinned. “Hikki?”

He stared at the unconscious Ginga. He discarded her off, wiped blood off his fist and glared at the person. “No.”

“No? That’s so expected of you, my dear Wind Talker,” the person mocked. “Do you want more? Do you… want more bodies to be shredded into pieces?”

“You killed her… you took the only life away from me… I will never forgive you…”

“So by killing me you will avenge her death?”

“Silence! I need no words of advice from the likes of you!”

“Very well.” The person left the chair, walked a bit forward and spread his arms. “Come on and take me.”

The video terminated. What was left was simply static and radio disturbance. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them afterwards, as everyone was staring into the empty liquid-crystal display. Even the Riot Force 5 had no idea of what to talk about.

“Ma’am, we detected the coordinates of the video’s original source,” the operator reported. Fate was speechless. “Ma’am?”

“Give me the coordinates…” was her only response.

“Yes, ma’am. Right away.”

-x-x-

The attack ended. Alexandra’s and Reinforce Zwei’s quick decision on deploying protective barrier was only just; and even so they barely escaped the “mass destruction” breaker move. The destructive force of Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker was unheard of; as everything became clear, the whole island became a barren desert, devoid of life forms. (the hideout survived, though, partly because it was built underground).

They stared at Hikki. The usually cheerful and laid back Gale Whistler was now completely changed. He was deranged. He was a berserker. He had gone as far as committing indiscriminate massacre and destroying the people he was supposed to protect. (He even breached the limit by murdering a TSAB officer -- one of the Aces, on top of that.)

And Fate could not accept the cruel destiny that was unfolding before her.

“Yurusanai…”

Fate unlocked Bardiche’s Zamber form.

“YURUSANAI!!!!!”

She pounced at Hikki and swung Bardiche at the Gale Whistler, missing her target as he swiftly jumped away; yet from his reaction she knew he was surprised by her impromptu action.

“Admiral Haraoun- iie, Oniichan. Requesting Limiter Release.”

“[Fate, are you sure you must do this?]”

“I have no other choice.” Clenching her hand on Bardiche’s handle, she glowered at Hikki, revealing tears that were flowing down her cheeks. “I must do it.”

“[…understood. But please be careful.]”

It took only seconds before the Ace was fully enveloped with unrestricted power surge. The power overload knocked Hikki off guard, overwhelming him with such pressure he was also forced to perform Limiter Release of his own.

“My friend…”

“You’re no longer my friend,” she spoke and opened stance reminiscence to Armstrong’s. “And I’m no longer your friend.” Tears now dampening her Barrier Jacket, she channelled each and every piece of her power into Bardiche, feeding the Zamber blade with more energy.

“So… you’ve treated me as an enemy.” Slowly and steadily he opened battle stance. “Very well. I accept your challenge. En garde!”

// to be continued //

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(Knowing that Scag survived, I'm sure he rigged the whole show such that Hikki would eliminate his opposition the Riot 6 for him, since Kha is lost from his cause. Am I correct? :uhoh:

ok i've done with my last character

Name: Azuma-Blade
Nick Name: Blade
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 9
Homeworld: Earth
Occupation: TSAB Officer *After Defeating Dr.Jail*
Rank: Sergent, Pilot
Unit: Riot Force 6 *After Defeating Dr. Jail
Call Sigh: Raven-1
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: Gold
Favored Element: "Multi*
Height: Around 5'5
Weight: About 125-136 pounds
Hair: Short, Black hair
Eye Color: Blue
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Personality: Kind, Silent
Device: Galeon
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Background:
After the cradle incident blade joins TSAB again to pilot TSAB's new weapon named Astral Soul to replace his severly damaged barrier armor. After returning to TSAB blade joins the Riot Force 6 to escort them in their missions and locate Azuma-Lance who escaped and went to Al-Hazard.
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http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p17/ravenflau009/DSC02475.jpg
Model#: TSAB-AC01
Name: Astral Soul
Unit Type: TSAB's First Generation Mecha Unit
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Astral Soul's Stats
Magic Offence: SS
Magic Defence: A
Mobility: S+
Size: 20 ft
Armor Material: Anti-Magic Coating
Special Abilities: OP-I Drive
Pilot: Azuma-Blade
Weapons:
1 Energy Rifle *R-Arm*
1 Energy Blade *L-Arm*
6 Energy Cannons *Wings*
1 Barrier *Core*
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Offensive Spells:

Soul Buster: *Rifle Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astral Souls rifle to fire a mid range buster attack capable of destroying a battle ship.

Cresent Moon Slash: *Sword Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astrals Souls' sword creating a long sword capable of slicing an Large AM equiped Drone.

Soul Breaker: *Ultimate Attack* Blade Channels his half of magic energy to Astral Soul's wing cannons to fire a wide spread buster attack capable of destroying enemies in a cone.

Defensive Spells:

Iron Shell: *Shield* Blade channels his small amount of it's magic enery creating a large protecting barrier that shields any attacks within 360 meter radius.
ANTI-MAGIC COATING?! WTF is that?! You DO know that counters EVERYTHING the TSAB can throw at that machine? Only DaiStahlMut, Stahlpreios and the Slaughters have a chance to defeat this machine, but they aren't canon! H4XX!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

:heh:

That rant aside, I love that mecha (except his Plot Armor :heh:). Armored Core yes? :)

I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.It's alright. :3

Why when Kila spoke, I heard Lacus' voice...? :uhoh:

Trace? Fate Stay Night? XD
lulz shiro :heh:*points to Kha*


The 21ste Dreifaeltigkeiten Optimum

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Kha-ID-2.jpg (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938474&postcount=2)
Click on the Card if you want to know more.

And his team mate:

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Sofie-ID-2.gif (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=957339&postcount=289)
Click on the Card if you want to know more.
- Skill Summary (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=960677&postcount=379)
- Belka Noble Illusions (4/7) (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=992216&postcount=1733)


*runs*

haiz123321
2007-08-23, 23:53
@Erio: Yeah still the same link, just the name change.

EDIT: has anyone used Kunisaki Yukito as the pic for their OC? if no one used it, then i'm taking it.

http://www.nautiljon.com/images/perso/miniatures/AIR_TV/kunisaki_yukito.jpg

Meophist
2007-08-23, 23:55
I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-23, 23:56
And you were complaining when I gave you Sun Wo Kong's image to go with your image of "Chaos." :rolleyes:

Yeah, I know it's the TVB Drama version, but Dicky Chueng version >>>>>>>> Saiyuki version, even the berserk one. :p

No way :p Unless what we see as 'badass' is completely worlds apart? ;)

But to be more exact, I don't really like a particular character, but I love their interaction together :)

Aaron008R
2007-08-23, 23:56
That is just so cliché … :p



Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-

These are brilliant!:D
And theoretically, Wibbly's OC should be two persons in only one vessel. So when the switch commences, even the entire appearance(face, stature, etc.) would be changed. At least, that's what it was based on.:heh:

INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

// MC 0085, Avalon Cemetery //

Silence enveloped the cemetery again. Hikki was sleeping, tired after speaking out everything inside his memory. His head was rested comfortably upon Fate’s lap, completely unaware of snows that were brushed off his face by Fate’s hand. Vivio was still not aware of the two people, completely smitten by the thick snow she was wading through and Fuuko she was chasing after.

Fate closed his eyes. What happened after the unfaithful day, as she remembered, would forever be carved inside of her as the most disheartening event of all. She was the only person to have witnessed his demonic power, and she was the only person to have knocked him back to sanity.

She was the only person whom the berserk Gale Whistler ever had faith on her.

Tears dropped onto his scarred cheek. “Hikki…” she murmured in silence. “…why would you have to go this far…?”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Jail Scaglietti’s hideout, which Riot Force 6 had been previously assigned to raid, was completely obliterated. Bodies were scattered in pieces, heady stench of flesh was abound, and electronic equipments were shattered into smithereens. The team could not believe what they were seeing, and the first thing their mind was asking was: “who could have done this?”

“We’re supposed to arrest Scaglietti, but not something like this…” Hayate murmured.

“What really happened?” Shamal asked.

“I know not,” Armstrong replied, “but I do know someone has come here before us.”

“So, the Riot Force is finally here…”

The unit turned around. What they saw was not the kind of sight their rationale wanted to accept: walking out of the hideout’s entrance door was Hikki, soaked in blood and enveloped in murderous aura like nothing before. In his hands were two Chinese falchions, also coated in fresh blood, identical to the colour of his eyes.

“Hikki… did you do this?” Fate murmured.

He continued walking. His trip ended only after he arrived at a grass patch outside the hideout. Without saying anything, he glanced to Riot Force 6, and clutched the falchions’ hilt.

“This is the only way…”

“What way?! Killing all the scientists and murdering Scaglietti yourself? Hikki, have you gone insane?!” Keroko yelled out.

Hikki’s response was to toss a Reppuken at Riot Force 6. Alexandra deftly blocked the projectile with Avalon, giving Armstrong the opportunity to fire a Sacred Edge. It hit, but did not make him bulge.

“My life is already empty. There is nothing you can do about it.”

He charged at Riot Force 6. Signum swiftly jumped forward, parrying his swordplay with Levantine. “What the hell you think you’re doing?” the Wolkenritter demanded and kicked him away from the group.

“Nothing.” He charged at Riot Force 6, and Signum again blocked his attacks. “Stand back. You know you won’t stand a chance.”

“Do you think I’ll consider your suggestion?” Signum chided.

He delivered a punch onto Signum’s midsection. The Wolkenritter was knocked out cold, and fell onto the ground. “Why, yes you should,” he replied.

“Signum!” Vita was caught in fury and fired Schwalbe Fliegen at Hikki. The Gale Whistler effortlessly dodged the projectiles, like they were made of nothing. “Teme!” Now burning in wrath, Vita chased after him and charged with Raketen Hammer. “EAT THIS!”

“Useless.”

He dodged the rocket-powered hammer. He spun on his feet, delivered a roundhouse kick and sent Vita crashing onto Hayate and Shamal.

“Hikki! Stop attacking your team-mates!”

He paid no attention to the plea, choosing instead to fire dozens of Reppuken at Riot Force 6. The attack continued, and it went on as he jumped into the air and barraged the team with aerial Reppukens.

“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was stopped by Hikki’s falchions, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like hot knife cutting through butter. “What the hell?”

“Old man, you are just asking for your death warrant.”

He landed on the grass patch, leaving the falchions hovering over his head. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and hovered over Hikki. Yet the former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment or anything else.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

“OJIICHAAAAAAAN!!!!”

Their screams pierced through the sky. They were horrified, totally caught by surprised by the sudden turn of event.

“Hikki… you…” Armstrong murmured, yelping in agony as Hikki twisted his hand.

“Old man, you never want to let youngsters shine, do you?”

He pulled his hand out. The veteran’s ace was left suspended in the air for a short while, before he dropped dead onto the ground. Hikki landed next to Armstrong, now a corpse, and glanced at Riot Force 6. “…no one will understand the pain I had to endure…” he murmured and left the dead body behind. “No one…”

“You killed Ojiichan!” Annabelle screamed. “YOU KILLED OJIICHAN! PAPA NO BAAKA!!!!” The meteor summoner called forth multiple megaliths and stalagmites, aiming all of them at him. He remained motionless, waited in patience as the attacks cornered him from all directions.

“Trace on.”

A zanbatou was traced out of thin air. Hikki grabbed its hilt, channelled his dark Chronograph power into its blade and turned the weapon into a light sword. With great effort (due to the weapon’s weight) he opened a stance and waited for the meteor to come closer.

“Hoshinagi no tachi.”

He swung the zanbatou. In one move, the megaliths and stalagmites were cleaved into half, and disintegrated into many pieces as he hacked and slashed the halves in succession.

“Forgive me, Anna.”

He teleported to Annabelle, caught her off guard and delivered a karate chop onto her nape. The meteor summoner was knocked out cold, snatched by Caro before she fell onto the ground. He jumped away from Riot Force 6, dodging Alexandra’s attack and landed on a boulder.

“You killed Ojiichan…” Fate gasped as she held the lifeless Armstrong in her arms. “You killed Ojiichan! Hikki, how could you kill him!!?”

He caught the falling falchions, and tossed them into the ground. He spoke no answer. He lifted his hand, and what looked like an empty move was in fact a summoning stance. Murmuring in ancient Narulian language, he created a magenta-coloured orb encased by dark blue energy rings. It was small at first, yet the longer the chant the bigger it became and the denser its content was. The surreal world itself became disoriented, all its elements being absorbed into the orb and became one with the entity.

He brought his hand down. The orb was now hovering in front of him. He stared deep into it. He took one of the blades. He nodded.

“Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker.”

He sliced the orb.

-x-x-

A hallway of burning flames. Mountains of machines, demolished, destroyed into crumbling pieces as sparks expel themselves.

One step, as an arm was being gushed out, mechanical parts bleeding a blood of red, from within the flesh, as the lifeless eyes of a young girl, reflected in her death, dropping to the ground as the man simply took another step forward, further and further, as he saw the purpose of his slaughter…

The man who was behind the death of the one he loved… the one he loved more than anything, but because of his own weakness, his own fears, his own rationale… he abandoned it all… until it was too late.

His eyes, bloodshot, enraged only looked down as the other man, sat there fearless on his seat, his deranged gold eyes looked coldly… not at him, but at the corpses that stood behind him.

“Tre, Quattro, Cinque, Sette, Nove, Wendi… did killing them please you? Did their screams, pain and suffering ease your broken heart,” and here the person grinned. “Hikki?”

He stared at the unconscious Ginga. He discarded her off, wiped blood off his fist and glared at the person. “No.”

“No? That’s so expected of you, my dear Wind Talker,” the person mocked. “Do you want more? Do you… want more bodies to be shredded into pieces?”

“You killed her… you took the only life away from me… I will never forgive you…”

“So by killing me you will avenge her death?”

“Silence! I need no words of advice from the likes of you!”

“Very well.” The person left the chair, walked a bit forward and spread his arms. “Come on and take me.”

The video terminated. What was left was simply static and radio disturbance. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them afterwards, as everyone was staring into the empty liquid-crystal display. Even the Riot Force 5 had no idea of what to talk about.

“Ma’am, we detected the coordinates of the video’s original source,” the operator reported. Fate was speechless. “Ma’am?”

“Give me the coordinates…” was her only response.

“Yes, ma’am. Right away.”

-x-x-

The attack ended. Alexandra’s and Reinforce Zwei’s quick decision on deploying protective barrier was only just; and even so they barely escaped the “mass destruction” breaker move. The destructive force of Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker was unheard of; as everything became clear, the whole island became a barren desert, devoid of life forms. (the hideout survived, though, partly because it was built underground).

They stared at Hikki. The usually cheerful and laid back Gale Whistler was now completely changed. He was deranged. He was a berserker. He had gone as far as committing indiscriminate massacre and destroying the people he was supposed to protect. (He even breached the limit by murdering a TSAB officer -- one of the Aces, on top of that.)

And Fate could not accept the cruel destiny that was unfolding before her.

“Yurusanai…”

Fate unlocked Bardiche’s Zamber form.

“YURUSANAI!!!!!”

She pounced at Hikki and swung Bardiche at the Gale Whistler, missing her target as he swiftly jumped away; yet from his reaction she knew he was surprised by her impromptu action.

“Admiral Haraoun- iie, Oniichan. Requesting Limiter Release.”

“[Fate, are you sure you must do this?]”

“I have no other choice.” Clenching her hand on Bardiche’s handle, she glowered at Hikki, revealing tears that were flowing down her cheeks. “I must do it.”

“[…understood. But please be careful.]”

It took only seconds before the Ace was fully enveloped with unrestricted power surge. The power overload knocked Hikki off guard, overwhelming him with such pressure he was also forced to perform Limiter Release of his own.

“My friend…”

“You’re no longer my friend,” she spoke and opened stance reminiscence to Armstrong’s. “And I’m no longer your friend.” Tears now dampening her Barrier Jacket, she channelled each and every piece of her power into Bardiche, feeding the Zamber blade with more energy.

“So… you’ve treated me as an enemy.” Slowly and steadily he opened battle stance. “Very well. I accept your challenge. En garde!”

// to be continued //

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(

God freaking dammit! You blew up my house with the Ion Cannon! Where will I sleep?!:frustrated:

Oopsie.:heh:
Sorry about that. How about a specialized backup force that is essentially seperate but under command Riot Force Six?

Metafiction? Reminds me of dkellis' warning about genre blindness here in OC... we already have SRW both in metafiction, and as an in universe setting (KBTKaiser does have Guilliam running around :uhoh: ).



*jots down for future reference* :D



Even Cinque has tracing? :heh:

And yes Nove, Cinque is all yours, and nobody elses. :rolleyes::D

*dissapears in smoke laughing devilishly*



Cr**...

The result of someone getting so lost in their anger and hate that they throw away even the ones he's supposed to protect (Even Anna got owned :upset: ). And now, even Fate has turned against him (metaphorically... and physically :upset: ).

And RIP, Aku O Tatsu Tsurugi :(



EX FREAKING DEE :D:D:D

Wait... Hikki kills Armstrong and turns the island into a wasteland and he's still limited?:twitch::twitch::twitch: But then, Fate's limiter release is enough to knock him back? DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: And then he releases his limiter, SSSS??? So...... Powerful...... USODAAAAAAA!!!!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.

Good luck on the recovery.
Still quite a nice scenario.:) Akira showcases amazing skill in defeating the drones in record time!:D By the way, is Kila voiced by Rie Tanaka?

Fate cried again. “After that… we never saw you again… we thought you’d decided to seal yourself away from the world…” Tears now flowed freely down her cheeks, dropping onto his face and froze in contact with the cold air. “You killed Ojiichan… you orphaned Anna-chan… you even hurt everybody’s feeling by leaving us…” She continued crying, now unable to prevent her tears from dampening Hikki’s face. “How could you do this to us… how could you?”

Her cheek was cupped. She was distressed. She looked down at the man, realizing he had already woken up. “Hikki?”

“I’m sorry, Fate…” weakly he murmured. “I knew it was wrong, but I was left with no other choice. I’m truly sorry…”

She flung her head onto Hikki’s chest, crying bitterly as she did. “Don’t ever do this again… mou, onegai…”

He smiled. “Now, now, don’t ever cry in front of me like this, okay?” he asked and gave her a soft pat on the back.

“How am I?” she sobbed. “After seeing everything you had gone through, how am I not supposed to cry?”

He chuckled. “Oh, for the greater good… cry as much as you want to. I won’t even give a damn about it.”

This should be enough from me for now. After this I have to attend Friday prayers. ;)

Imagine what grief can do to a person...:(

I've always love the main characters from the Sayuki series ;)

In my opinion, very few characters can get to their level of badass :p

I don't disagree with you there. And the best part is, no matter how many times they repeat it in the Saiyuki series, the badassery never gets old!:D

Out of curiosity, how many OCs are there currently? Does someone have a folder of them all or something :heh:

Here's Erio's Master List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938502&postcount=5). There's already very well over a hundred.:heh:

haiz123321
2007-08-24, 00:01
God freaking dammit! You blew up my house with the Ion Cannon! Where will I sleep?!:frustrated:

You worry more about where u gonna sleep instead of worrying for your life? :P

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 00:03
Which Dante are we talking about here...? I turned Zest into Dante from DMC... :uhoh:


I'm not really using Dante :heh: (Completely different color schemes as well :heh:)

But if I were to say... The third one it is :D



I don't disagree with you there. And the best part is, no matter how many times they repeat it in the Saiyuki series, the badassery never gets old!:D

True, all too true :)

I actually used one of Sanzo's line in my recent fic ;) The original is...


"A life isn't something you write off the way you do with bullets..."



Here's Erio's Master List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938502&postcount=5). There's already very well over a hundred.:heh:

Wow, and I was just kidding :heh:

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:03
You worry more about where u gonna sleep instead of worrying for your life? :P

Fine. I'll sleep at your place, then. That way, if the Ion Cannon ends my life, I can at least take you with me.

Erio
2007-08-24, 00:04
Here's Katsu's updated profile.

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: Unknown, registered as April 4, the day he was found
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private/subordinate of Scaglietti
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'1
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Background: Not much is known about Katsuhito’s past. What is known, though, is sobering- Katsu’s earliest memory is of him as a little boy with blood-soaked hands. Katsu wandered for a long and lonely time, leaving a trail of unexplainable blood behind him. Finally, on a dreary April fourth, an emissary from the Church of Velka found him and took the child to the main orphanage. Katsu never really fit in, making friends with only one other child- an older boy named Ignatius who had failed the paladin training (and was the prime suspect in a series of small fires). The two eventually joined the TSAB together, and worked together extensively. They were eventually recruited into the Riot squad as Riots Three and Four.

The only real obstacle Katsu encountered was a bad Shinji Complex (also called a lack of self-confidence). This came about due to his fear of his own temper, which he seemed to lose on occasion. This is also why he latched onto Ignatius- the older boy took these moments in stride.
Just a little background added, I see. :)

BTW, are you going to keep reposting the entire thing everytime you add a little bit more? If you do, I'll have you make a post where you handle all your OC information, or I would have to update your links every couple days. :heh:

@Erio: Yeah still the same link, just the name change.

EDIT: has anyone used Kunisaki Yukito as the pic for their OC? if no one used it, then i'm taking it.

http://www.nautiljon.com/images/perso/miniatures/AIR_TV/kunisaki_yukito.jpg
Just Koumyou now, am I right?

And no, not that I know of.

haiz123321
2007-08-24, 00:05
Fine. I'll sleep at your place, then. That way, if the Ion Cannon ends my life, I can at least take you with me.

HEY WTF NO FAIR!!! T_T stupid ion cannon, i hate u

oh and has anyone used Yukitos pic yet? if not ima take it

and yeah just kouymyou only =)

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:07
Just a little background added, I see. :)

BTW, are you going to keep reposting the entire thing everytime you add a little bit more? If you do, I'll have you make a post where you handle all your OC information, as I would have to update your links every couple days. :heh:


Just Koumyou now, am I right?

And no, not that I know of.
Sorry. I have no idea how things work here. That said, I'd be in your debt if you did the data handling for me. You don't have to, but I don't know how.

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 00:08
Here's Katsu's updated profile.

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: Unknown, registered as April 4, the day he was found
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private/subordinate of Scaglietti
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'1
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Background: Not much is known about Katsuhito’s past. What is known, though, is sobering- Katsu’s earliest memory is of him as a little boy with blood-soaked hands. Katsu wandered for a long and lonely time, leaving a trail of unexplainable blood behind him. Finally, on a dreary April fourth, an emissary from the Church of Velka found him and took the child to the main orphanage. Katsu never really fit in, making friends with only one other child- an older boy named Ignatius who had failed the paladin training (and was the prime suspect in a series of small fires). The two eventually joined the TSAB together, and worked together extensively. They were eventually recruited into the Riot squad as Riots Three and Four.

The only real obstacle Katsu encountered was a bad Shinji Complex (also called a lack of self-confidence). This came about due to his fear of his own temper, which he seemed to lose on occasion. This is also why he latched onto Ignatius- the older boy took these moments in stride.

Interesting... Trail of blood? Stigmata?!?:twitch::twitch::twitch:

Errr... We ARE gonna have a little problem... :heh:

But at least our characters weren't directed ported from SRW, they just... look like SRW characters... I mean... Even my wild guess could be spot on, so in the giant Multiverse, there should be someone/something out there who looks like you, is just whether you ever meet him/her/it.

Maybe I should change it.:heh: Anyway, I have Plan B. So no need to worry about that now.:heh:

ANTI-MAGIC COATING?! WTF is that?! You DO know that counters EVERYTHING the TSAB can throw at that machine? Only DaiStahlMut, Stahlpreios and the Slaughters have a chance to defeat this machine, but they aren't canon! H4XX!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

:heh:

I was wondering when you'd react like this.:D


I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.

Interesting.:D By the way, can Ennis at least use telepathy?

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:10
Interesting... Trail of blood? Ectoplasm?:twitch::twitch::twitch:
No, just blood. You know, that red stuff in most of our bodies that allows us to live.

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:12
Interesting... Trail of blood? Stigmata?!?:twitch::twitch::twitch:
No, just blood. You know, that red stuff in most of our bodies that allows us to live.

... Wait, didn't I just reply to this?:twitch::confused:

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 00:13
No, just blood. You know, that red stuff in most of our bodies that allows us to live.

I was wrong with the ectoplasm bit. It should have been Stigmata.:heh:
Memory failing me...


EDIT: Time Paradox due to editing my post?:heh:

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:15
I was wrong with the ectoplasm bit. It should have been Stigmata.:heh:
Memory failing me...


EDIT: Time Paradox due to editing my post?:heh:
I see... O. JI. SAAAAN:D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 00:17
EDIT: Time Paradox due to editing my post?:heh:

Due to the insane number of posts, the dimension around this thread is beginning to Collapse itself. Rifts and distortions are appearing everywhere...

Yuki or Itsuki would probably be better at telling this story :heh:

Wibbles
2007-08-24, 00:19
Due to the insane number of posts, the dimension around this thread is beginning to Collapse itself. Rifts and distortions are appearing everywhere...

Yuki or Itsuki would probably be better at telling this story :heh:
It should be Mikuru, technically, but it's classified information.

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 00:20
Ah, I wanted to post the next part of my fic even yesterday, but I guess I'll have to leave it for this weekend... Like Nighty, I'm having some trouble writing the ideas I have... :heh:


LOL there's lots of time to post don't worry :) Waiting for the next installments :)

In my case, it's not trouble writing... it's trouble deciding which ideas to write. :heh: And with National Geographic of all places giving me LOTS of ideas :uhoh:

T-That's not true!!! *points at new Title and Avatar* :D :naughty: :love:

:uhoh:

:uhoh::D

Here's Katsu's updated profile.

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: Unknown, registered as April 4, the day he was found
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private/subordinate of Scaglietti
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'1
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Background: Not much is known about Katsuhito’s past. What is known, though, is sobering- Katsu’s earliest memory is of him as a little boy with blood-soaked hands. Katsu wandered for a long and lonely time, leaving a trail of unexplainable blood behind him. Finally, on a dreary April fourth, an emissary from the Church of Velka found him and took the child to the main orphanage. Katsu never really fit in, making friends with only one other child- an older boy named Ignatius who had failed the paladin training (and was the prime suspect in a series of small fires). The two eventually joined the TSAB together, and worked together extensively. They were eventually recruited into the Riot squad as Riots Three and Four.

The only real obstacle Katsu encountered was a bad Shinji Complex (also called a lack of self-confidence). This came about due to his fear of his own temper, which he seemed to lose on occasion. This is also why he latched onto Ignatius- the older boy took these moments in stride.

Nice to see the meatier profile. So Katsu is the gentle personality, now waiting to see the other, more evil side :heh::uhoh:

EDIT: has anyone used Kunisaki Yukito as the pic for their OC? if no one used it, then i'm taking it.

http://www.nautiljon.com/images/perso/miniatures/AIR_TV/kunisaki_yukito.jpg

Not that we know of, you can use it :)

*Is reminded of his stupidity when he accidentally deleted his still-downloading Air folder :( *

I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.

Armored Frames? :twitch: Whoa?

I'm still lost on what this means though:

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day.

:heh:

Just waiting to see the teamwork between Ennis and Rea. :)

Interesting.:D By the way, can Ennis at least use telepathy?

I think that was hinted at the profile... just that he doesn't use it often :heh:

Liingo
2007-08-24, 00:27
What the-- Liingo, did you really think I was serious there? :twitch: :heh:

Hmm, no.. it was obvious that you were joking...
(although I was seroius in wanting some of the canon cast to be killed off.. the numbers are getting ridiculous.. That and it would help to add to the emotional sledgehammer that hasn't been used very much)
Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).
Looks fairly balanced to me. Not too bad overall, but I'll add my weight to the other calls to make them attached to RF6,(ie, they can be nabbed by Hayate when they're needed, but are under the command of other people) but not under the direct command of them, since Hikaru seems to be better than the forwards at the moment.
To answer your questıon, Erio, it is another conceptual scenario. Andö now that I look back on it, one that mıght conflict with future canon events.

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:
:D :D :D That's awesome!! Go Cinque for the indifference.. :D

Arcasaviel Emira, my main OC, was trained by Nanoha in "Seven Days," AND served with Nanoha as a Tactical Instructor @ the beginning of his career.

Feel free to use him... PLEASE!!

It's obvious that you don't want your characters to be used by other writers...:rolleyes:
Heh, indeed. Just how we imagine Cinque, Erio. :D

And, my final segment for now. I'm churning these out too fast. :heh:



He was gravely injured, but he could still stand.

He was close to the brink of death, but he was driven by sheer willpower towards his destination. Despite what Nove and that "brother" of hers had done ('I, was it...?' V wondered, wearily), he had managed to trudge on.

He had let a few of his opponents go out of mercy, yes. But there would be no scrap of said mercy for the deranged lunatic that he was about to face down.

He limped towards the light before him, determined to fulfill his goals. After a while, he stepped out into the very place that he had longed to travel to= Scaglietti's lab. And, as luck would have it, the owner of the facility, the madman himself, was standing before him with his back turned.

V spoke, his voice direct and colder than ice. "Hello...Doctor."

Scaglietti turned around, a grin carved onto his features. "Well, well", he uttered. "Who do we have here? Another Bureau dog to bear witness to-"

Before he could hope to continue, he found himself being lifted feet above the floor by the masked unknown who was, only mere seconds ago, some feet away from him. He felt the man's grip tighten fiercely around his throat, constricting his breathing.

When V exchanged words with the suffocating scientist held in the air before him, his tone was vengeful, hard, calculating. "I know it has been some time since we last spoke, Jail. Give or take, hm...quite a few years? Quite, yes. A few years since you toyed with me, treated me like some thing, made me your..." He paused, and resumed, his voice now brimming with venomous anger. "...Pet.But now, virulent hellspawn, the shoe is on the other foot, so to speak."

His grip tightened even further, and he looked up at the face of the Doctor, which was wracked with both pain and surprise. "Do you know now who I am, Scaglietti?", he said futher. "Do you recognise this voice, the words of this vengeful soul who stands here before your unbelieving eyes? Do you know what became of Project No. 5?!"

Jail's features contorted from a look of pain to one of utter disbelief. A dawning realization came upon him like lightning, and almost at once he knew who the figure choking him to within a mere inch of his life was.

"M...Masaka...!"

V was about to speak again, but new voices echoed down the hallway= those of the remaining Numbers and Letters.

"What? How many have retreated?"

"4, from what I've gathered...some are injured, heavily from what I heard."

"Worry about them later. We can't let this intruder go further!"

"Bit too late to be saying that now, isn't it? Where's G?"

"...He'll be arriving shortly, just get to the objective, now!"


"Ah," V mused. "More of your companions..." He turned his head to Jail's assistant, Uno, who was paralyzed with shock. "Sad to say, Uno...I fear that some of your brothers and sisters might not be making any further visitations." He watched, wordlessly, as the color drained from her face. "Let the shock sink in...we all go through these moments once in a while..."

He went back to the Doctor. "Don't we, Doctor? After all, you killed my father, and made my mother a nervous wreck because of it. I trained for years on end just to hunt you down like the mutt you are, and it had boiled down to this."

He glanced again at the entrance. The footsteps were louder now. "You know," the added, "I don't think they would like seeing you held at blade-point..."

Without any command, a Device appeared in his hand- Fawkes, his jet=black, seldom-used spear. "But I'll give them one last glimpse of you." He aimed Fawkes at the Doctor's neck.

"And assure you that your creations will be the last things that you set your eyes upon in this mortal plane."



The ironic part is I haven't even even gotten around to writing this part in full. This is basically a blueprint snippet. Once I get around to the actual thing, it will, no doubt, change. But let me know what you all think of it.
:bow: Woah That's awesome :D
Ehh... It's okay, not what I'd choose, but it IS up to you.

And here is the first promised snippet! The other's gonna have to wait <sighs> - I need to go grab dinner before I study.



Sophia sighed, and then continued.

“And if putting up with all of Artei’s antics weren’t enough, I’ve got to take care of Allison, keep Sakura in line, make sure Kha isn’t being too soft... and that’s just the business with the 21st!”

The weapons summoner turned around, put her hands on the window, and sighed again.

“Then there’s the whole business with our own individual lives. Kha has the Licht, Artei the Saint Guard, Allison and Kaempfer their Church assignments… and then there’s mine with rebuilding the Convent.” She paused for a moment. “Did you know that they want to make me Matriarch?”

“They do, huh?” Arcas responded. The Dunamist shrugged. “Can’t say I’m surprised. You’d make a good leader; you’re a disciplined person.”

“I know, but that worries me.”

“Why should it? Aside from Kha-sama, I can think of no better leader for the Church than you.”

“Do you not understand? I may be disciplined, but I’m harsh, and raising younglings takes as much loving care as it does discipline; I worry that I have too much the latter and not enough the former…” she trailed off, sighing yet again. She bent her head forward and closed her eyes, shutting out the world.

She was startled, and quickly reopened her eyes when she felt Arcas hug her from behind. Sophia froze, not used to being held, not even by Kha. A few moments later, the Dunamist released her, and stepped back; the weapons summoner spun around, looking at him.

“W-What was that for?!”

He shrugged. “You just seemed like you needed it.” The Dragonslayer turned to leave, and as he reached the door, he turned back.

“Sophia, you don’t have to be in this alone… we all should help each other. That’s why we can do what we do; the others in the Bureau just don’t seem to get that. If you ever need an ear, just ask. I’m always here.”

As he closed the door behind him, Sophia was left alone with her thoughts.

Arcas… is this what all those girls see in you?


Not too bad... Pretty good although so short that I don't really get what's going on.
God freaking dammit! You blew up my house with the Ion Cannon! Where will I sleep?!:frustrated:
Rolf.. You'll be able to find somewhere... :heh:
I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.
Hmm I didn't see anything too bad with that... Seems farily decently.

You aren't even helping in that department. :uhoh:

Fate cried again. “After that… we never saw you again… we thought you’d decided to seal yourself away from the world…” Tears now flowed freely down her cheeks, dropping onto his face and froze in contact with the cold air. “You killed Ojiichan… you orphaned Anna-chan… you even hurt everybody’s feeling by leaving us…” She continued crying, now unable to prevent her tears from dampening Hikki’s face. “How could you do this to us… how could you?”

Her cheek was cupped. She was distressed. She looked down at the man, realizing he had already woken up. “Hikki?”

“I’m sorry, Fate…” weakly he murmured. “I knew it was wrong, but I was left with no other choice. I’m truly sorry…”

She flung her head onto Hikki’s chest, crying bitterly as she did. “Don’t ever do this again… mou, onegai…”

He smiled. “Now, now, don’t ever cry in front of me like this, okay?” he asked and gave her a soft pat on the back.

“How am I?” she sobbed. “After seeing everything you had gone through, how am I not supposed to cry?”

He chuckled. “Oh, for the greater good… cry as much as you want to. I won’t even give a damn about it.”

This should be enough from me for now. After this I have to attend Friday prayers. ;)

Replying to the first part as well...
:twitch::twitch::eek: HOLY.......
ARMSTRONG!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Whoa.... man USB.... stop with the evil teasers!!!:frustrated::frustrated:
:sad: for Hikki..

Kha
2007-08-24, 00:27
@Erio: Yeah still the same link, just the name change.

EDIT: has anyone used Kunisaki Yukito as the pic for their OC? if no one used it, then i'm taking it.

http://www.nautiljon.com/images/perso/miniatures/AIR_TV/kunisaki_yukito.jpgI don't think so, it's possible.

I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.Rea seems to be scryer... I see that's what makes Karrak unique... :D

Completely colorblind must suck, being unable to tell green polka dots from red polka dots... Why polka dots?! :uhoh:

Ennis is the polar opposite. Something tells me these guys are meant to work together. :D And I guess dissecting a spell to pieces does make it very hard to read.

Now for the ultimate question: These magic schools look Traceable. Are they? :D

(runs)

Due to the insane number of posts, the dimension around this thread is beginning to Collapse itself. Rifts and distortions are appearing everywhere...

Yuki or Itsuki would probably be better at telling this story :heh:You guys do know that Kluize is responsible for this Chrono-Spatial Chaos... No? :uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 00:29
It should be Mikuru, technically, but it's classified information.

But who would you rather trust? :p

Meophist
2007-08-24, 00:33
Now for the ultimate question: These magic schools look Traceable. Are they? :DTraceable? Meaning…?

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 00:38
You guys do know that Kluize is responsible for this Chrono-Spatial Chaos... No? :uhoh:

Erm... huh? :heh:

Erio
2007-08-24, 00:43
Sorry. I have no idea how things work here. That said, I'd be in your debt if you did the data handling for me. You don't have to, but I don't know how.
Yeah, I can. Handling your own stuff is not hard, though... You just use a single post and update it with your character's newest information. Here are a few examples:

Aaron's List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1089560&postcount=6178)
Kha's List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1093443&postcount=6378)
LoweGear's List (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1089274&postcount=6169)

Still, you dont have almost anything compared to these guys, so you shouldnt worry about it for now. :heh:

LOL there's lots of time to post don't worry :) Waiting for the next installments :)

In my case, it's not trouble writing... it's trouble deciding which ideas to write. :heh: And with National Geographic of all places giving me LOTS of ideas :uhoh:
:D Thank you, Captain Lowe, :bow:

But my problem right now is actually just as I said... Dunno how to put stuff into paper well... I keep rewriting and rephrasing... :heh: At least for this part of the story, I already have the script completed. ;)

The next stuff, though, I can tell you right now, is a MESS... I dont even know where to start! And with the new Gwen X Kha unexpected developments... :eyespin:

:uhoh::D
:cool:

Now for the ultimate question: These magic schools look Traceable. Are they? :D

(runs)
NO THEY ARE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

:D

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 00:43
I see... O. JI. SAAAAN:D

Damn...:heh: Second time to be called that in a week.:heh:
First Mai, now you...:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Due to the insane number of posts, the dimension around this thread is beginning to Collapse itself. Rifts and distortions are appearing everywhere...

Yuki or Itsuki would probably be better at telling this story :heh:

Won't Chrono and Acous do?:D

It should be Mikuru, technically, but it's classified information.

That's too bad.:heh:

You guys do know that Kluize is responsible for this Chrono-Spatial Chaos... No? :uhoh:

HAXX much?:heh:

But who would you rather trust? :p

Yuki.

Traceable? Meaning…?

He's planning on having the OC Kha copying your spells.:uhoh:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 01:06
:D Thank you, Captain Lowe, :bow:

But my problem right now is actually just as I said... Dunno how to put stuff into paper well... I keep rewriting and rephrasing... :heh: At least for this part of the story, I already have the script completed. ;)

The next stuff, though, I can tell you right now, is a MESS... I dont even know where to start! And with the new Gwen X Kha unexpected developments... :eyespin:


:heh: It's a problem for all of us more or less, even I've been afflicted recently, although for the most part my problem is with which idea to write :heh:

I'm sure the words will come to you in time :)

Makes me wonder what Kha (OC) would think of Gwen and Mai teaming up with this development :heh:

Won't Chrono and Acous do?:D


Chrono and Acous? Don't you mean Kyon and Itsuki right? :p

Yuki.

Quoted for Truth :D

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Bored, so...

Teaser line from one of my planned arcs exploring Kay's past:


"I'm sorry Sheikh, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."

:heh:

Satty
2007-08-24, 01:11
Backlog...good times, good times...

A little glimpse in the hard parts of the life of an instructor:

“They’re late.” Keroko grumbled.

“Headquarters told us they were a loud and unruly bunch, but I never expected them not to show up for routine training.” Nanoha sighed.

“Outright insubordinate sounds like a more accurate description for this batch. You think they send us here because of that?”

“I guess… we do have a reputation as the most talented instructors in years.”

Keroko sighed. “Sometimes I hate this entire glorifying system of the Bureau.”

“If they don’t arrive soon, I’m going out to find them.”

Keroko observed Nanoha, noticing that she had begun fidgeting. “…Right.” Opening a channel she began talking in a strict voice. “Instructor Takamachi Keroko to training group 4B. Your new instructors are on-site and wish to see you immediately at your designated training area. Immediately means ninety seconds from the end of my transmission. No one will be punished for arriving in dirty robes, formal gowns, underwear generally not meant for the gender, or bubbles and bathwater, but no one –I repeat, NO-one- wants to arrive late. That is all. Out."

In all fairness, they did manage to arrive within ninety seconds. All of them. True, some were dressed in casual clothing, or sleep clothing, but they were all on time.

“Good, now that we’re all here, let’s begin with the routine training.”

“You called us here for that?!” A voice from the row cried. Nanoha blinked and turned to the voice.

“Your name?”

“Private Rohan Ekhesh, and I don’t take orders from kids! When we heard your transmission we’d thought Headquarters had finally come to get us out of this dump, and instead they sent us kids for more training? Hell no!” Murmurs and cheers of agreement were heard throughout the group.

Nanoha and Keroko shared a glance, and sighed. “You know, if you think you’re ready for the real job, you’re mistaken. So let’s start with the training, allright?”

“Didn’t you hear me? We won’t do any more of this routine training.”

“Then we will change the routine.” Nanoha said with a smile. “Would that work? We could start with a mock battle.”

The group blinked as their instructors took out their devices. Wait, their instructors took out their devices?

[Stand by, Ready!]

[Combat Mode, Active!]

*later that hour*
“Ano… is this the 4B training area?”

“Ah! You must be 4B’s former training officer.”

“Yes, but I hardly recognise them.”

“They’re just a bit dirty, nothing that a good shower won’t clean.”

The former instructor let her eyes roam over the non-moving bodies of what she remembered as the loudest, most insubordinate team she ever saw. “A-Are you still busy?”

“No, we were actually about finished. Minna?”

With a loud rumble and a cloud of dust, 4B Stood in a straight formation at attention.

“Today’s training is over. Come back here tomorrow and we’ll pick up where we left of when this day started.” Nanoha told them with a smile. “Dismissed.”

Snapping to attention, the group saluted with a loud “ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA!” and turned around, leaving the training area with nervous speed.

The former training officer gaped in amazement. “H-how! Just yesterday they were refusing to even stand in formation, much less show respect! How did you do this much in one day!”

Nanoha and Keroko blinked and looked at each other for a moment before they turned to the former training officer and smiled.

“Trade Secret.”

For some reason the former training officer lost the urge to press for details.

:twitch: I don't want to know what happened....Major Payne

Alright. Here’s an overview of the abilities of both Hikaru and Doppleganger.

-Dopp has five slots near the cartridge entrance. Each slot has a chip in it, for a total of five chips. When a device is copied, the data is imprinted onto a chip.
-Dopp can make more chips (one every other day). Ever since he started to crack pregnancy jokes, no one has tried to figure out how he does it.
-Hikaru usually has at least one blank chip inserted into Dopp, meaning that Dopp has enough room to copy one new form a battle.
-When Hikaru wants to change the devices, he has to revert to standard mode.
-Doppleganger copies the weapon and barrier jacket. For example, if Hikaru uses Graf Eisen, his jacket will change into a ‘male’ version of Vita’s outfit. If the user of the copied device is already male, then the copied jacket will look the same.
-Dopp can copy devices with the power outputs of Bardiche and Raising Heart, but he cannot store them. If Dopp has five other forms already downloaded (in other words, no blank chips), he cannot copy them.
-Devices on the scale of Reinforce cannot be copied.
-The Copy Shot takes one cartridge to activate.
-When transformed, Hikaru and Dopp gain the abilites of the copied device, but none of the skill or power of the real user. For instance, if Dopp copies Raising Heart, Hikaru CAN use Starlight Breaker, but it will be NOWHERE near as awesome or powerful as the real thing. In fact, it’s rather pathetic (Dopp himself said so).
-To make up for that, Hikaru undergoes weapon training for each corresponding weapon copied. After he copied Levantine, Signum made him undergo swordsmanship training.
-Also, Hikaru tends to improvise in battle, using the powers of the devices that he’s copied in unorthodox ways. Known attacks involve slamming Graf Eisen’s Missile form into the ground to cause an earthquake, riding Strada like a broomstick, and sticking Levantine into the ground and switching to Snake form (like Ivy from Soul Calibur).

Interesting info about Doppelganger...

To answer your questıon, Erio, it is another conceptual scenario. Andö now that I look back on it, one that mıght conflict with future canon events.

/random stuff is random



E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:

LOL, Snake.:heh:



@Saint X: Suzuka and Arisa Barrier Jacket ideas?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/Nanoha_Power5.jpg

I guess you guys don't find it surprising that I went :love: at Arisa's BJ as well as Fate's. :D And considering that I planned Nanoka, Suzuka's future daughter, to have a kimono-based BJ, this pic justifies my choice very well. :D

Suzuka's works well, but Arisa's?:twitch:

Yeah...used to "Burning Arisa" here too...:heh:

Blagh, I woke up this morning with a hunch that I wouldn't get much farther with my current project. I hate it when I'm right. Only two frames are in showable condition, so sneak peak time:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/th_sneakpeak2.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/sneakpeak2.png)

I wonder how that's gonna come out...




"Bless me with the
Leaf off of the tree
On it I see
The freedom reign..."

"We are falling
The light is calling
Tears inside me
Calm me down..."

"Midnight calling
Mist of resolving
Crown me, with the
Pure green leaf..."

"Praise to my father
Blessed by the water
Black night, dark sky
The devils cry..."

" The Darkness has return... " Jeno smirked.





(a.k.a - I'll revealing REAL OCs soon...)

I'm just listening to that song now...

That is just so cliché … :p



Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-

*jots down*



INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

*snip*

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(

RIP, indeed. :sad:

ok i've done with my last character

Name: Azuma-Blade
Nick Name: Blade
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 9
Homeworld: Earth
Occupation: TSAB Officer *After Defeating Dr.Jail*
Rank: Sergent, Pilot
Unit: Riot Force 6 *After Defeating Dr. Jail
Call Sigh: Raven-1
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: Gold
Favored Element: "Multi*
Height: Around 5'5
Weight: About 125-136 pounds
Hair: Short, Black hair
Eye Color: Blue
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Personality: Kind, Silent
Device: Galeon
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Background:
After the cradle incident blade joins TSAB again to pilot TSAB's new weapon named Astral Soul to replace his severly damaged barrier armor. After returning to TSAB blade joins the Riot Force 6 to escort them in their missions and locate Azuma-Lance who escaped and went to Al-Hazard.
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http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p17/ravenflau009/DSC02475.jpg
Model#: TSAB-AC01
Name: Astral Soul
Unit Type: TSAB's First Generation Mecha Unit
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Astral Soul's Stats
Magic Offence: SS
Magic Defence: A
Mobility: S+
Size: 20 ft
Armor Material: Anti-Magic Coating
Special Abilities: OP-I Drive
Pilot: Azuma-Blade
Weapons:
1 Energy Rifle *R-Arm*
1 Energy Blade *L-Arm*
6 Energy Cannons *Wings*
1 Barrier *Core*
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Offensive Spells:

Soul Buster: *Rifle Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astral Souls rifle to fire a mid range buster attack capable of destroying a battle ship.

Cresent Moon Slash: *Sword Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astrals Souls' sword creating a long sword capable of slicing an Large AM equiped Drone.

Soul Breaker: *Ultimate Attack* Blade Channels his half of magic energy to Astral Soul's wing cannons to fire a wide spread buster attack capable of destroying enemies in a cone.

Defensive Spells:

Iron Shell: *Shield* Blade channels his small amount of it's magic enery creating a large protecting barrier that shields any attacks within 360 meter radius.


AM Armor:twitch:...well, time to bring out the conventional weapons.

I think I'm in a little bit of a slump recently. For some reason, my ideas just don't seem to come out the way I want them. I'm rewriting Isdera/Miyuki/Kyoya for the 4th freaking time now! :frustrated:

And I haven't even gotten to the harder Shiro part! :upset:

For that reason, other than general profile updates, maybe there won't be anything much from me in this week or so. Can't seem to get that 'flair' out... :(

Anyway, just a short from me. One of my worst ever, so I'll most likely rewrite once I get my groove back on again. :(

A thunderous sounds of beam shooting endlessly, as a young boy, with a Barrier Jacket that is lightly grey with shades of white and blue in the surrounding colored regins… looking to be in his late teens, sidesteps avoiding a barrage of beams shooting furiously from multiple directions, as his brother, playing with the practice room’s control panels, watches his younger brother tap-dancing running around the circular regions of the terrain, simulated against the enemies…

As he found himself pushed back to the edges of the field, two enemies, leaping as they charged from the sky, towards him…

“Striker Drive!”

[Acknowledged.]

In a split instant, his Barrier Jacket turned into the lighter form, as it donned itself with colors of a brighter blue and red around its sides, just as the Intelligent Device, previously just a large rod in his palms turns to a giant cross, as he stood on it like a surfboard, lifted the air above as he flew directly towards one of the enemies, as he spun around, turning his device akin to a top, spinning at a high speed, as the device sounded..

[Cross Slash!]

In that instant, Akira leaped and flew away from his device, which spawned blades from 4 ends of its cross, and like a flying blade, cut the simulated enemy in half as flying above, the sounds of explosion and smokescreens covering him as he grabbed hold the other enemy, holding his palm out as he chanted..

“Divine Shooting!”

In an instant, a blast of 3 penetrated the enemy, as he leaped away and jumped back onto his device’s board, as flying away back to another enemy’s ground, he stopped as he leaped again, this time holding the device at it’s mid-section that connects the cross, as he shouted again…

“Sword Drive!”

This time, without any activation acknowledgement, the longer end of the cross seemed to lengthen its length as its end opened up its partings to reveal an energy nozzle, as a pink beam blade busted from the inside of that nozzle, as the blade penetrated, piercing through the shielding of the enemy, as the sword lingers inside for a moment, before the timing said.

[Anti Saber.]

As if a motion of acknowledgement, he removed the blade from the enemy, slashing upwards, cutting it in half, as the victorious explosion only lasted a split moment, as another barrage of beams shots played as he leaped backwards, with Protection protecting him from the weaker attacks, seeing a small group of 10 shielded drones like the ones he just destroyed, starts to surround him from the sideways, as he held his device upwards…

“Launcher Drive.”

There was no visible change, but as Akira changed his position to hold Yamato through his side-belly, his legs positioned for impact, he only eyed the surrounding line, as his voice and Yamato’s synchronized.

[Stinger Cannon]

“Stinger Cannon!”

Rather than a blaze of flames, a jet-stream of energy shot out and as he moved Yamato sideways, the drones were destroyed and consumed by that explosive reaction, effective clearing the enemies, as a sound then noted him of his course completion.

[AA-rank difficulty Air Course complete.]

“Good job. Thank you, Kila.”

Ignoring that computed sound, Akira only thanked his device, Yamato, which he named Kila, apparently taken from the Mid-childan romanization of his device’s name of origin from which he had owned even when he was a child, even when he was unaware it was a magical intelligent device.

[No, thank you, Akira-dono.]

A soft feminine voice, even if slightly mechanical responded as it always does, adding the prefix of -dono to her master and close associates, while adding –sama to everyone else.

Nice, 14 guys down in a matter of seconds.

Here's Katsu's updated profile.

Name: Katsuhito Kuroshi/Satsuhito Kuroshi
Sex: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: Unknown, registered as April 4, the day he was found
Homeworld: ????
Relatives: ????
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private/subordinate of Scaglietti
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-3
Mage Rank: B/AA
Magic Type: Unknown, but with Velkan characteristics
Magic Circle Color: Black
Favored Element: Darkness
Height: Around 5'1
Weight: About 110lbs
Hair: Neat and white/messy and white
Eye Color: Blue/red
Build: Lithe, athletic
Personality: Calm, quiet/sadistic, psychotic


Device Name: Bloody Howling
Device Appearance: Giant claws
Barrier Jacket: Looks like a black straight-jacket with free arms

Background: Not much is known about Katsuhito’s past. What is known, though, is sobering- Katsu’s earliest memory is of him as a little boy with blood-soaked hands. Katsu wandered for a long and lonely time, leaving a trail of unexplainable blood behind him. Finally, on a dreary April fourth, an emissary from the Church of Velka found him and took the child to the main orphanage. Katsu never really fit in, making friends with only one other child- an older boy named Ignatius who had failed the paladin training (and was the prime suspect in a series of small fires). The two eventually joined the TSAB together, and worked together extensively. They were eventually recruited into the Riot squad as Riots Three and Four.

The only real obstacle Katsu encountered was a bad Shinji Complex (also called a lack of self-confidence). This came about due to his fear of his own temper, which he seemed to lose on occasion. This is also why he latched onto Ignatius- the older boy took these moments in stride.

I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.

Interesting character...

Erio
2007-08-24, 01:20
:heh: It's a problem for all of us more or less, even I've been afflicted recently, although for the most part my problem is with which idea to write :heh:

I'm sure the words will come to you in time :)

Makes me wonder what Kha (OC) would think of Gwen and Mai teaming up with this development :heh:
I'll try tomorrow again. :D

Hmm, that's interesting, now that you mention it. What does Kha think of Mai, I wonder?

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Bored, so...

Teaser line from one of my planned arcs exploring Kay's past:


"I'm sorry Sheik, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."

:heh:
:eek: Poor Mr. Stiff Guy was not her first... :(

But a Prince?! :eek: :D

USB500
2007-08-24, 01:23
UBW = ? and Hikki is too powerful O_O but... i like it! especially the drama XD

UBW = Unlimited Blade Works ;)

Too powerful, as is too emotionally instable :upset:

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Man, this is heartbreaking... although there's something to be said when Fate holds no grudges against Hikki even after all he's done. Guess we'll see the complete version sometime soon. :)

Yes, it will be. :nod:

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T-That's not true!!! *points at new Title and Avatar* :D :naughty: :love:

:uhoh:

This is what I call berserk... :rolleyes:

Have a nice trip! :D

1: Erio-kun, I think I can already imagine a scenario with you Erio and Cinque. :naughty:

*casts vote for Erio/Cinque before he eats Nove's punch*

2: it is. :uhoh:

3: thanks. I see if I can flood thread with lots of new ideas, stories and teasers once I come back. ;)

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Knowing that Scag survived, I'm sure he rigged the whole show such that Hikki would eliminate his opposition the Riot 6 for him, since Kha is lost from his cause. Am I correct? :uhoh:

You, sir, are absolutely correct. :upset:

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Wait... Hikki kills Armstrong and turns the island into a wasteland and he's still limited?:twitch::twitch::twitch: But then, Fate's limiter release is enough to knock him back? DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: And then he releases his limiter, SSSS??? So...... Powerful...... USODAAAAAAA!!!!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Imagine what grief can do to a man...:(

1: For records, by killing one of their officers and misusing the limiter release, Hikki officially betrayed TSAB. And Fate did the right thing by fighting against him. Hence.

Mah, just wait until Big Daddy Yo intervenes. :uhoh:

2: *cue music of "Yesterday"*

======================
Replying to the first part as well...
:twitch::twitch::eek: HOLY.......
ARMSTRONG!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Whoa.... man USB.... stop with the evil teasers!!!:frustrated::frustrated:
:sad: for Hikki..

1: oops. Somebody didn't want Ojiichan to die. :upset:

2: *hides self from thread's wrath for his evil teasers*

@ thread: did somebody just vote for Yuki? Therefore I, too, vote for Yuki! :love: :love:

@ LoweGear: who was Kay's love interest, I wonder. :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 01:36
Won't Chrono and Acous do?:D


Chrono and Acous? Don't you mean Kyon and Itsuki right? :p

... Reminds me of the hopeful days I had for them... Oh well, at this this happened...

(Taken from Nanoha.wiki, translated by Thisguy)


Currently, as a ship commander he is a kind of job bachelor, leaving his mother Lindy, his wife Amy and his two children behind in Uminari City.

I know it's obvious, but it still sounds better to hear it from canon sources :p

p.s - And As it turns out, I'm not crazy to think that he's the Aces' big brother, even all the way back when I wrote 'paranoid' :p




Yuki.


Quoted for Truth :D

Thought so :p



I'm just listening to that song now...



Coincidences? (:uhoh:)

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 01:42
LOL, for some reason, I was able to write this. Short, but at least I feel nicer with this piece.

Akira/Dranac profile Part II. Double flashbacks, and foreshadowing of their h4xxes, along with how they came to meet and their origin ;)



A dream…

Surrounding me were liquid and bubbles, as a glass wall was the chains that chained me to that place…

All I remembered from that place was the pain of needles, inserted into every inch of my body, and the pain that ran through me…

And that promise…

The promise that I would be complete, and be given a life…

For that reason, I endured everything.

For the sake of living…

But then, I discovered something inside me… as I felt something, an aura surrounding me, as I felt my body became lighter amidst the pool of water, as my ears start to hear clearly…

The words of deception.

“In the end, it was unsuccessful after all… With this little genetic information, reconstruction of the original Berserker of ancient times is improbable after all…”

Who…were they…talking about?

“What are we going to do with subject 01, Pars then?”

Subject 01…that is…what I’m called, codenamed Pars…

“Dispose of him.”

With those words… something inside of me changed.

And the next thing I remember, I was standing amidst a burning laboratory, as my hand was bloodied, holding the corpses of the people I considered my parents…

I was 8 years old then… without knowing anything, never stepping out of my glass prison, only taught and injected memories though computers…

I stepped myself out into the world, as I tried to live a lie.

Until that day 3 years later…

When that darkness awakened inside me again…

The day I met him.

My brother.

What I was going to be disposed for.

The closest being to the origin…

A man who was said to stand in the pinnacle of power in ancient times.

~~~

MC 068 August 5th
Officer Field Course : Final
East Mid-childa

“Nii-san, wake up.”

Suddenly, light shoned…as I felt light, instead of the darkness…

“It’s going to start soon.”

A light, boyish voice called out to me, as my eyes returned me to reality… as I see my younger brother... Akira leaning towards me... I only lied there casually, as if the most natural thing.

“What is?”

“The final practical course-run for the Officer course. At the same time, it’ll also be judged into for our Mage Rank Examination, judging from our performance… since we aren’t officially ranked yet, being cadets.”

“Oh…right.”

“It’s not like you to be this dreamy. You’re clumsy at times, but not normally for something like this… What’s wrong?”

“I dreamt…of the past.”

Akira was silent, slightly taken aback… but his eyes were fortified, as he said what we both knew…

“We cannot do anything about that anymore… The only thing we can do is to move forward and to never repeat our mistakes… We promised to stick together through thick and thin right?

“…Yeah.”

That was the only thing I could say. There was nothing else… because there was nothing that could restore what I did…

~~~

Back then, the memory of the Blood of Valentine…

MC 066 February 14th
The Silvester Sea
5th Management World


The tears that ran through the eyes of both of them… One of which carries the responsibility of being the one, while the other cries out of pain and agony, for carrying something he never wished inside of him.

The one who is considered to be the one… and the one who failed to be the one.

They’re so similar, and yet so far apart…

One has no choice but to fight to save him, one has no choice to fight because that is what makes him a failure…

The conflicts of the mental chaos…

“Kila… Limit Break.”

[Limiter Released. Awaiting Command.]

“INFINITE FREEDOM DRIVE!”

As he said those words, his device that was his wings further shattered until nothing more was in sight, as he just flew there alone… his eyes closed…

As they slowly opened, revealing colors of purple, like dyed in nothingness…

[Laplace Computer Limiter #1 Released : Úlfhéðnar ]

Against those eyes that chose to disregard emotions, the angered beast, shrouded in an armor of flaming orange, red of anger, as the layers of shielding protecting him resonates and vibrates, crackling the seas he was floating atop…

His powers, the infinite protection that was the shield that shatters all weapons…

His conscious was not his, but his emotions were driven beyond anything else.

The emotions when he first awakened, his hate, anger and jealousy… that was the only thing that he could feel.

As much as he hated that…he had no control over his own body, nor his own voice…

“SHELL BULLET ULTIMA!”

As he covered his whole body with a literal shell, his voice then resonated…

“Armure Hyperion… Active.”

That was…their beginning to the end.

~~~

Back then, Dranac never thought he could’ve lived till this long, with his sanity intact no less…nor did Akira thought he could’ve lived, when he used his Limit Break’s ultimate technique to save his brother…

Destiny sure plays a twist on life…

As the sounds of the ticking clock slightly beeps, it was the indicator...

Yes, right now... this is the life they were living. They were no longer enemies, but brothers... that had chosen to live their lives the way they promised.

“It is time.”

Akira said, as he readied his Barrier Jacket and Yamato in Striker Mode, as he surfed upwards first towards the sky...

“Yeah, let’s get this damn course over with and celebrate with a full-course!”

With that, Dranac jumped down as he skid the surrounding areas, flying around...

This was their first step to their new world.

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 01:43
I'll try tomorrow again. :D

Hmm, that's interesting, now that you mention it. What does Kha think of Mai, I wonder?


Wondering the same as well :heh: Although I can say that Mai is somewhat unnerved by Kha's presence due to his alignment with Divine magic. Not saying that she hates him... but as one cursed with Dark Magic, it's not a good idea to get to near someone of the Light :heh: Personality-wise, Mai has no problem with Kha at all. :)


:eek: Poor Mr. Stiff Guy was not her first... :(

But a Prince?! :eek: :D

Not the first guy who wanted her heart anyway, and not the first one she refused. Glock though didn't ask for it :heh:

And yes, a Prince. I already hinted at what type of Prince in her line. :)

1: Erio-kun, I think I can already imagine a scenario with you Erio and Cinque. :naughty:

*casts vote for Erio/Cinque before he eats Nove's punch*


This I must see! :D

Nove: Whose side are you really on Creator?!
Creator: On the side that can make the best scene with Cin-

*avoids Break Liner*

3: thanks. I see if I can flood thread with lots of new ideas, stories and teasers once I come back. ;)

Sweet :D

@ thread: did somebody just vote for Yuki? Therefore I, too, vote for Yuki! :love: :love:

YES! YUKI NAGATO FOR PRESIDENT!

*Raises Yukiism Flag*


@ LoweGear: who was Kay's love interest, I wonder. :D

All I can tell you is... someone worth $14,000,000,000 :uhoh:

LOL, for some reason, I was able to write this. Short, but at least I feel nicer with this piece.

Akira/Dranac profile Part II. Double flashbacks, and foreshadowing of their h4xxes, along with how they came to meet and their origin ;)



A dream…

Surrounding me were liquid and bubbles, as a glass wall was the chains that chained me to that place…

All I remembered from that place was the pain of needles, inserted into every inch of my body, and the pain that ran through me…

And that promise…

The promise that I would be complete, and be given a life…

For that reason, I endured everything.

For the sake of living…

But then, I discovered something inside me… as I felt something, an aura surrounding me, as I felt my body became lighter amidst the pool of water, as my ears start to hear clearly…

The words of deception.

“In the end, it was unsuccessful after all… With this little genetic information, reconstruction of the original Berserker of ancient times is improbable after all…”

Who…were they…talking about?

“What are we going to do with subject 01, Pars then?”

Subject 01…that is…what I’m called, codenamed Pars…

“Dispose of him.”

With those words… something inside of me changed.

And the next thing I remember, I was standing amidst a burning laboratory, as my hand was bloodied, holding the corpses of the people I considered my parents…

I was 8 years old then… without knowing anything, never stepping out of my glass prison, only taught and injected memories though computers…

I stepped myself out into the world, as I tried to live a lie.

Until that day 3 years later…

When that darkness awakened inside me again…

The day I met him.

My brother.

What I was going to be disposed for.

The closest being to the origin…

A man who was said to stand in the pinnacle of power in ancient times.

~~~

MC 068 August 5th
Officer Field Course : Final
East Mid-childa

“Nii-san, wake up.”

Suddenly, light shoned…as I felt light, instead of the darkness…

“It’s going to start soon.”

A light, boyish voice called out to me, as my eyes returned me to reality… as I see my Akira leaning towards me... I only lied there casually, as if the most natural thing.

“What is?”

“The final practical course-run for the Officer course. At the same time, it’ll also be judged into for our Mage Rank Examination, judging from our performance… since we aren’t officially ranked yet, being cadets.”

“Oh…right.”

“It’s not like you to be this dreamy. You’re clumsy at times, but not normally for something like this… What’s wrong?”

“I dreamt…of the past.”

Akira was silent, slightly taken aback… but his eyes were fortified, as he said what we both knew…

“We cannot do anything about that anymore… The only thing we can do is to move forward and to never repeat our mistakes… We promised to stick together through thick and thin right?

“…Yeah.”

That was the only thing I could say. There was nothing else… because there was nothing that could restore what I did…

~~~

Back then, the memory of the Blood of Valentine…

MC 066 February 14th
The Silvester Sea
5th Management World


The tears that ran through the eyes of both of them… One of which carries the responsibility of being the one, while the other cries out of pain and agony, for carrying something he never wished inside of him.

The one who is considered to be the one… and the one who failed to be the one.

They’re so similar, and yet so far apart…

One has no choice but to fight to save him, one has no choice to fight because that is what makes him a failure…

The conflicts of the mental chaos…

“Kila… Limit Break.”

[Limiter Released. Awaiting Command.]

“INFINITE FREEDOM DRIVE!”

As he said those words, his device that was his wings further shattered until nothing more was in sight, as he just flew there alone… his eyes closed…

As they slowly opened, revealing colors of purple, like dyed in nothingness…

[Laplace Computer Limiter #1 Released : Úlfhéðnar ]

Against those eyes that chose to disregard emotions, the angered beast, shrouded in an armor of flaming orange, red of anger, as the layers of shielding protecting him resonates and vibrates, crackling the seas he was floating atop…

His powers, the infinite protection that was the shield that shatters all weapons…

His conscious was not his, but his emotions were driven beyond anything else.

The emotions when he first awakened, his hate, anger and jealousy… that was the only thing that he could feel.

As much as he hated that…he had no control over his own body, nor his own voice…

“SHELL BULLET ULTIMA!”

As he covered his whole body with a literal shell, his voice then resonated…

“Armure Hyperion… Active.”

That was…their beginning to the end.

~~~

Back then, Dranac never thought he could’ve lived till this long, with his sanity intact no less…nor did Akira thought he could’ve lived, when he used his Limit Break’s ultimate technique to save his brother…

Destiny sure plays a twist on life…

As the sounds of the ticking clock slightly beeps, it was the indicator...

Yes, right now... this is the life they were living. They were no longer enemies, but brothers... that had chosen to live their lives the way they promised.

“It is time.”

Akira said, as he readied his Barrier Jacket and Yamato in Striker Mode, as he surfed upwards first towards the sky...

“Yeah, let’s get this damn course over with and celebrate with a full-course!”

With that, Dranac jumped down as he skid the surrounding areas, flying around...

This was their first step to their new world.

And he even has a history similar to Canard! :eek: No Prayer though, only Akira :heh: I was rather surprised at what Dranac called Akira though...

"My Akira?" :uhoh:

Also... Laplace Computer? Does it have the ability to see into the future? :eek:

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 01:54
"My Akira?" :uhoh:

Also... Laplace Computer? Does it have the ability to see into the future? :eek:

:eek:

Typo! But whatever. Edited. :heh:

As for Laplace...well, not really. :p

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 01:55
Chrono and Acous? Don't you mean Kyon and Itsuki right? :p

Quite.:D

Quoted for Truth :D

Who else could you trust?:D

Bored, so...

Teaser line from one of my planned arcs exploring Kay's past:


"I'm sorry Sheikh, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."

:heh:

What she meant by the past is her job dealing with the past, right?:D

(Taken from Nanoha.wiki, translated by Thisguy)



I know it's obvious, but it still sounds better to hear it from canon sources :p

p.s - And As it turns out, I'm not crazy to think that he's the Aces' big brother, even all the way back when I wrote 'paranoid' :p

Then what is he to them, then?:D


LOL, for some reason, I was able to write this. Short, but at least I feel nicer with this piece.

Akira/Dranac profile Part II. Double flashbacks, and foreshadowing of their h4xxes, along with how they came to meet and their origin ;)



A dream…

Surrounding me were liquid and bubbles, as a glass wall was the chains that chained me to that place…

All I remembered from that place was the pain of needles, inserted into every inch of my body, and the pain that ran through me…

And that promise…

The promise that I would be complete, and be given a life…

For that reason, I endured everything.

For the sake of living…

But then, I discovered something inside me… as I felt something, an aura surrounding me, as I felt my body became lighter amidst the pool of water, as my ears start to hear clearly…

The words of deception.

“In the end, it was unsuccessful after all… With this little genetic information, reconstruction of the original Berserker of ancient times is improbable after all…”

Who…were they…talking about?

“What are we going to do with subject 01, Pars then?”

Subject 01…that is…what I’m called, codenamed Pars…

“Dispose of him.”

With those words… something inside of me changed.

And the next thing I remember, I was standing amidst a burning laboratory, as my hand was bloodied, holding the corpses of the people I considered my parents…

I was 8 years old then… without knowing anything, never stepping out of my glass prison, only taught and injected memories though computers…

I stepped myself out into the world, as I tried to live a lie.

Until that day 3 years later…

When that darkness awakened inside me again…

The day I met him.

My brother.

What I was going to be disposed for.

The closest being to the origin…

A man who was said to stand in the pinnacle of power in ancient times.

~~~

MC 068 August 5th
Officer Field Course : Final
East Mid-childa

“Nii-san, wake up.”

Suddenly, light shoned…as I felt light, instead of the darkness…

“It’s going to start soon.”

A light, boyish voice called out to me, as my eyes returned me to reality… as I see my Akira leaning towards me... I only lied there casually, as if the most natural thing.

“What is?”

“The final practical course-run for the Officer course. At the same time, it’ll also be judged into for our Mage Rank Examination, judging from our performance… since we aren’t officially ranked yet, being cadets.”

“Oh…right.”

“It’s not like you to be this dreamy. You’re clumsy at times, but not normally for something like this… What’s wrong?”

“I dreamt…of the past.”

Akira was silent, slightly taken aback… but his eyes were fortified, as he said what we both knew…

“We cannot do anything about that anymore… The only thing we can do is to move forward and to never repeat our mistakes… We promised to stick together through thick and thin right?

“…Yeah.”

That was the only thing I could say. There was nothing else… because there was nothing that could restore what I did…

~~~

Back then, the memory of the Blood of Valentine…

MC 066 February 14th
The Silvester Sea
5th Management World


The tears that ran through the eyes of both of them… One of which carries the responsibility of being the one, while the other cries out of pain and agony, for carrying something he never wished inside of him.

The one who is considered to be the one… and the one who failed to be the one.

They’re so similar, and yet so far apart…

One has no choice but to fight to save him, one has no choice to fight because that is what makes him a failure…

The conflicts of the mental chaos…

“Kila… Limit Break.”

[Limiter Released. Awaiting Command.]

“INFINITE FREEDOM DRIVE!”

As he said those words, his device that was his wings further shattered until nothing more was in sight, as he just flew there alone… his eyes closed…

As they slowly opened, revealing colors of purple, like dyed in nothingness…

[Laplace Computer Limiter #1 Released : Úlfhéðnar ]

Against those eyes that chose to disregard emotions, the angered beast, shrouded in an armor of flaming orange, red of anger, as the layers of shielding protecting him resonates and vibrates, crackling the seas he was floating atop…

His powers, the infinite protection that was the shield that shatters all weapons…

His conscious was not his, but his emotions were driven beyond anything else.

The emotions when he first awakened, his hate, anger and jealousy… that was the only thing that he could feel.

As much as he hated that…he had no control over his own body, nor his own voice…

“SHELL BULLET ULTIMA!”

As he covered his whole body with a literal shell, his voice then resonated…

“Armure Hyperion… Active.”

That was…their beginning to the end.

~~~

Back then, Dranac never thought he could’ve lived till this long, with his sanity intact no less…nor did Akira thought he could’ve lived, when he used his Limit Break’s ultimate technique to save his brother…

Destiny sure plays a twist on life…

As the sounds of the ticking clock slightly beeps, it was the indicator...

Yes, right now... this is the life they were living. They were no longer enemies, but brothers... that had chosen to live their lives the way they promised.

“It is time.”

Akira said, as he readied his Barrier Jacket and Yamato in Striker Mode, as he surfed upwards first towards the sky...

“Yeah, let’s get this damn course over with and celebrate with a full-course!”

With that, Dranac jumped down as he skid the surrounding areas, flying around...

This was their first step to their new world.

Much better!:D
Oh man, those flashbacks screamed HAXX!:heh:

And the Laplace Computer?!?!?:twitch::twitch::twitch:
USODA!!! That's indeed HAXX!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
It can calculate the future!!!

USB500
2007-08-24, 01:58
This I must see! :D

Nove: Whose side are you really on Creator?!
Creator: On the side that can make the best scene with Cin-

*avoids Break Liner*

well, who doesn't? :naughty:

*runs from angry Nove*

All I can tell you is... someone worth $14,000,000,000 :uhoh:

Uh-oh. That sounds bad, isn't it? :uhoh:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 02:00
:eek:

Typo! But whatever. Edited. :heh:

As for Laplace...well, not really. :p

:heh: Oohkay... for a moment I sensed some strange vibes there :uhoh:

And Laplace in name only, H4XX solved :heh:

Who else could you trust?:D


In between a Psuedo-Goddess, an esper, a time traveller, a slider, and an alien, I'd take the cute stoic alien :D

What she meant by the past is her job dealing with the past, right?:D

Yep :) Basically, Archaeology is her first love :)

well, who doesn't? :naughty:

*runs from angry Nove*


:nod::nod:


Uh-oh. That sounds bad, isn't it? :uhoh:

:heh:

That's not a bounty... that's his assets :uhoh:

Tk3997
2007-08-24, 02:02
Righting that Nonsense about Clichés above seems to have triggered my urge to create a random half serious half comic character… so here the first bit of him, more may or may not follow as the mood strikes me.

Name: Felix Munro
Other names/alias: none.
Age: 36
Birthday: November 21
Height: 6 foot.
Weight: 170 Pounds
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Brown
Origin: Administered World 167
Mage Rank: S, no limiters.
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Green
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: Independent, but currently under contract with the TSAB.

Device:
Device name: Murru
Device type: Intelligent Device fitted with a cartridge system.
Appearances and overviews:
Storage: A spiffy sand colored beret, very stylish and color coordinated with his current uniform.
(Others as I think of them, its about the char right now, not his wicked cool moves)

Device Personality: A stereotypic (more like racist) Australian male, watching all those croc hunter reruns the night before activating the thing might not have been such a great idea… Also extremely found of the word “crikey”, and using Beauty as a noun while constantly referring to Felix as “Bruce.” The first year with the thing was pure hell, the next 20 or so were more like purgatory, actively unpleasant, but not quite torture.

Personality/History:
Excerpt from Interview Conducted by Magic News.Net Website Author Atuwe Bilford.
Felix Munro by his own account really dose hate his life, his mother wanted him to be an accountant, butbeing the rebel youth he was he decided he’d show her! He was going to be a big shot mage rich, powerful, and with women galore! 20 years on with a string of minor crimes and several months in prison, too many attempts on his life to count, constantly scrapping to make ends meet, wandering from planet to planet living in one slum after another, and still single he says that accounting job is starting to like kind of appealing…

“Yeah but it won’t work, I can see it now…”

The scene is a small, normal looking office with Felix behind a desk looking at some papers thoughtfully.

“Well your taxes seem to be in order Ms. Smith, but I wanted to talk with about—“

KABOOM!!! An entire side of the room collapses inward as an 8 foot tall axe wielding manic emerges from the rubble and dust.

“I spent 15 years on a hellish prison world because of you asshole, its payback time!”

“Can’t you guys at least use the door?! It’s not even locked or anything and I can’t afford to keep replacing all these damn walls!”

RAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!

Sounds of explosions and panicked screams as the scene fades out.

“Being a Mage is allot like joining the Mob, once you get in you can never get out, alive anyway. People think being a freelance mage must be so awesome and glamorous, but the holo-dramas never show the part were no one needs a mage, you’ve got no money from paying all the damage claims against you so you can barely eat for a couple weeks, and then you get kicked out the rat hole your land lord is passing off as an apartment for missing your rent and end up living in a car and working at a Burger Queen for 3 months to keep from staving, ‘Would you like fries or onion rings with that?’ .“

“He used me to clean toilets…” Murru grumbled in a thick accent.

“And those where the cleanest toilets this side of Proxima; at least you were good for something; because you sure as hell weren’t keeping me feed.” Felix shot back.

“A poor craftsmen blames his tools, Bruce.” The mage attempted to glare up at the beret atop his head, looking more stupid then anything for the attempt.

“But seriously parents don’t let you kids grow up to be mages, beat them, abuse them, tie them up if you have to, but for their own good just keep their dumbasses in school!” Felix continued now patently ignoring his unruly headdress.

You could just join the TSAB, probably got right into the officer ranks…

“The TSAB? Pfft no thanks! I nearly get killed enough dealing with small time rouges and mostly normal thugs, last thing I need is to go rumble with a bunch of cyborgs and “ancient relics of great power” or other such nonsense. My life my suck, but I still like living thanks.”

One might point out the same people that would be giving him orders under the above arrangement are already doing so now, thanks to a horribly blunder contract negotiation.

“I would have done better if that damn chick hadn’t been distracting me with her gorgeous---“

ANYWAY, bottom line is he’s pretty much the TSAB’s bitch already and got shafted big time.

“But only because I was preoccupied thinking about giving someone else a different sort of shaft…”

Moving on.

Still given your situation why not just join up you’d be paid better and possibly be able to attain real rank and power?

“Because I’m acutally kind of powerful, but as a merc I’m viewed as sort of unreliable so I get assigned the small stuff, things where I can’t do any real damage IE stuff that’s pretty safe, but the minute I go pro my ass would be off to the front lines. So really barring some absurdly unlikely disaster I basiclly just do what I used to do expect now even when I’m not actively working I still get a small stipend. Things are pretty good right now acutally no one has tried to kill me in months, I’m acutally living in a apartment that isn’t suffering from any of the biblical plagues, and I got laid the other day, life is good.

Update: This interview was recorded just before the recent series of devastating terrorist attacks…

Erio
2007-08-24, 02:06
1: Erio-kun, I think I can already imagine a scenario with you Erio and Cinque. :naughty:
:eek: I hope they are even better than those Hikki/Widuri scenes. :D

:uhoh:

*runs*

Wondering the same as well :heh: Although I can say that Mai is somewhat unnerved by Kha's presence due to his alignment with Divine magic. Not saying that she hates him... but as one cursed with Dark Magic, it's not a good idea to get to near someone of the Light :heh: Personality-wise, Mai has no problem with Kha at all. :)
Ah, so he hasnt said anything yet... lets see what he says when he comes back. :D

But hey, its true that it is not a good idea to get near someone with Light, but isnt it the same the other way around? At least from what Kha always says, the power of Light seems to PWN Dark no matter what... :heh:

Not the first guy who wanted her heart anyway, and not the first one she refused. Glock though didn't ask for it :heh:

And yes, a Prince. I already hinted at what type of Prince in her line. :)
Ah, I meant to say, "her first love", my bad. :heh: And :eek: Kay is popular! :D

I still have no clue who that is... :heh:

YES! YUKI NAGATO FOR PRESIDENT!

*Raises Yukiism Flag*
I see, so you like that type, huh? :naughty: I think you're gonna love Darker Than Black then... :D ;)


Gotta read that later, Nighty... Eyes are closing... :heh:

USB500
2007-08-24, 02:11
:eek: I hope they are even better than those Hikki/Widuri scenes. :D

:uhoh:

*runs*

I can't guarantee that to happen, but don't worry. :p If it's just young boy/young girl rabu-rabu, then I don't have any problem with that.

*dodges Nove's punch again*

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 02:14
I can't guarantee that to happen, but don't worry. :p If it's just young boy/young girl rabu-rabu, then I don't have any problem with that.

*dodges Nove's punch again*

O RLY? :uhoh:

Since she's the 4th oldest... and had been working since more than a decade ago...

:uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 02:18
1: Erio-kun, I think I can already imagine a scenario with you Erio and Cinque. :naughty:


:eek: I hope they are even better than those Hikki/Widuri scenes. :D

:uhoh:

*runs*



I can't guarantee that to happen, but don't worry. :p If it's just young boy/young girl rabu-rabu, then I don't have any problem with that.

*dodges Nove's punch again*

What?! Whoa, slow down.

Pause. Rewind. Play.

What's the back story :heh:?

USB500
2007-08-24, 02:18
O RLY? :uhoh:

Since she's the 4th oldest... and had been working since more than a decade ago...

:uhoh:

So you imply the fact that I should do a young boy/older girl comedic romance, huh? :uhoh:

*imagines blushing Cinque and clueless Erio going out for a walk, while jealous Nove stalks them from somewhere -- Solid Snake style*

That does not compute.:eyespin:

What?! Whoa, slow down.

Pause. Rewind. Play.

What's the back story :heh:?

Ah, nothing much. It's just that Erio's avatar & new title inspired the suggestion :heh:

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 02:24
What?! Whoa, slow down.

Pause. Reverse. Play.

What's the back story :heh:?

Backstory for E&C? Whaizzat? :eyespin:

Anything crack applicable...get it? ;)

Or if we want to be semi-serious, Jail wouldn't mind getting his hands on Erio, right?

And he had used Due to seduce for something he wanted, right?

Erio is a young BOY, right?

Cinque is the youngest-LOOKING of the Numbers, right?

Do your maths. :p

"Cinque, you have 2 mission objectives."

So you imply the fact that I should do a young boy/older girl comedic romance, huh? :uhoh:

*imagines blushing Cinque and clueless Erio going out for a walk, while Nove jealously stalks them from somewhere -- Solid Snake style*

That does not compute.:eyespin:

Well, Cinque should be kinda clueless on these kind of things...

Hmm...clueless Cinque getting advises from onee-samas (( Uno, Due, and Tre )) all of which misinterpreted and makes things worse...

Uno: What is important is to understand someone completely, to know everything about that person you care about...like my feelings for Doctor...

Due: Listen, use your hands. And when you've got that little sucker addicted and coiled up, you jump on him!

Tre: Do not falter, Cinque! No matter what the situation, you must not be weak, and do your best!

Cinque : Hmm... so to know him completely, I need to be strong, use my hands and jump on him... something feels out of place somehow...

:eyespin:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 02:24
Righting that Nonsense about Clichés above seems to have triggered my urge to create a random half serious half comic character… so here the first bit of him, more may or may not follow as the mood strikes me.

Name: Felix Munro
Other names/alias: none.
Age: 36
Birthday: November 21
Height: 6 foot.
Weight: 170 Pounds
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Brown
Origin: Administered World 167
Mage Rank: S, no limiters.
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Green
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: Independent, but currently under contract with the TSAB.

Device:
Device name: Murru
Device type: Intelligent Device fitted with a cartridge system.
Appearances and overviews:
Storage: A spiffy sand colored beret, very stylish and color coordinated with his current uniform.
(Others as I think of them, its about the char right now, not his wicked cool moves)

Device Personality: A stereotypic (more like racist) Australian male, watching all those croc hunter reruns the night before activating the thing might not have been such a great idea… Also extremely found of the word “crikey”, and using Beauty as a noun while constantly referring to Felix as “Bruce.” The first year with the thing was pure hell, the next 20 or so were more like purgatory, actively unpleasant, but not quite torture.

Personality/History:
Excerpt from Interview Conducted by Magic News.Net Website Author Atuwe Bilford.
Felix Munro by his own account really dose hate his life, his mother wanted him to be an accountant, butbeing the rebel youth he was he decided he’d show her! He was going to be a big shot mage rich, powerful, and with women galore! 20 years on with a string of minor crimes and several months in prison, too many attempts on his life to count, constantly scrapping to make ends meet, wandering from planet to planet living in one slum after another, and still single he says that accounting job is starting to like kind of appealing…

“Yeah but it won’t work, I can see it now…”

The scene is a small, normal looking office with Felix behind a desk looking at some papers thoughtfully.

“Well your taxes seem to be in order Ms. Smith, but I wanted to talk with about—“

KABOOM!!! An entire side of the room collapses inward as an 8 foot tall axe wielding manic emerges from the rubble and dust.

“I spent 15 years on a hellish prison world because of you asshole, its payback time!”

“Can’t you guys at least use the door?! It’s not even locked or anything and I can’t afford to keep replacing all these damn walls!”

RAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!

Sounds of explosions and panicked screams as the scene fades out.

“Being a Mage is allot like joining the Mob, once you get in you can never get out, alive anyway. People think being a freelance mage must be so awesome and glamorous, but the holo-dramas never show the part were no one needs a mage, you’ve got no money from paying all the damage claims against you so you can barely eat for a couple weeks, and then you get kicked out the rat hole your land lord is passing off as an apartment for missing your rent and end up living in a car and working at a Burger Queen for 3 months to keep from staving, ‘Would you like fries or onion rings with that?’ .“

“He used me to clean toilets…” Murru grumbled in a thick accent.

“And those where the cleanest toilets this side of Proxima; at least you were good for something; because you sure as hell weren’t keeping me feed.” Felix shot back.

“A poor craftsmen blames his tools, Bruce.” The mage attempted to glare up at the beret atop his head, looking more stupid then anything for the attempt.

“But seriously parents don’t let you kids grow up to be mages, beat them, abuse them, tie them up if you have to, but for their own good just keep their dumbasses in school!” Felix continued now patently ignoring his unruly headdress.

You could just join the TSAB, probably got right into the officer ranks…

“The TSAB? Pfft no thanks! I nearly get killed enough dealing with small time rouges and mostly normal thugs, last thing I need is to go rumble with a bunch of cyborgs and “ancient relics of great power” or other such nonsense. My life my suck, but I still like living thanks.”

One might point out the same people that would be giving him orders under the above arrangement are already doing so now, thanks to a horribly blunder contract negotiation.

“I would have done better if that damn chick hadn’t been distracting me with her gorgeous---“

ANYWAY, bottom line is he’s pretty much the TSAB’s bitch already and got shafted big time.

“But only because I was preoccupied thinking about giving someone else a different sort of shaft…”

Moving on.

Still given your situation why not just join up you’d be paid better and possibly be able to attain real rank and power?

“Because I’m acutally kind of powerful, but as a merc I’m viewed as sort of unreliable so I get assigned the small stuff, things where I can’t do any real damage IE stuff that’s pretty safe, but the minute I go pro my ass would be off to the front lines. So really barring some absurdly unlikely disaster I basiclly just do what I used to do expect now even when I’m not actively working I still get a small stipend. Things are pretty good right now acutally no one has tried to kill me in months, I’m acutally living in a apartment that isn’t suffering from any of the biblical plagues, and I got laid the other day, life is good.

Update: This interview was recorded just before the recent series of devastating terrorist attacks…

:D

Man, Felix is pure GOLD :D The cranky lowlife living on the rocks, garnering dirt, non-living and living alike, on the way :heh::heh: Now wondering why he didn't just trade Crocodile Hunter Murru for another device... or maybe he can't afford to do so :heh:

Also, wonder who the woman he wanted to "shaft" was :rolleyes::D

*runs*

:eek: I hope they are even better than those Hikki/Widuri scenes. :D

:uhoh:

*runs*


YES PLEASE :D


Ah, so he hasnt said anything yet... lets see what he says when he comes back. :D

But hey, its true that it is not a good idea to get near someone with Light, but isnt it the same the other way around? At least from what Kha always says, the power of Light seems to PWN Dark no matter what... :heh:

Which is why I think Kha won't have a problem getting near Mai, but Mai would keep her distance from Kha :heh:

Ah, I meant to say, "her first love", my bad. :heh: And :eek: Kay is popular! :D

I still have no clue who that is... :heh:

Point is though... in terms of men, Glock was her first :heh:

And on her popularity, that's referenced here (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=957400&postcount=295) :)

I see, so you like that type, huh? :naughty: I think you're gonna love Darker Than Black then... :D ;)

Roger :D

I can't guarantee that to happen, but don't worry. :p If it's just young boy/young girl rabu-rabu, then I don't have any problem with that.

*dodges Nove's punch again*

Wouldn't have any problem with what? Rated-R scenes? :D

*Nove Punch >>>> Lowe*

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 02:30
Righting that Nonsense about Clichés above seems to have triggered my urge to create a random half serious half comic character… so here the first bit of him, more may or may not follow as the mood strikes me.

Name: Felix Munro
Other names/alias: none.
Age: 36
Birthday: November 21
Height: 6 foot.
Weight: 170 Pounds
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Brown
Origin: Administered World 167
Mage Rank: S, no limiters.
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Green
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: Independent, but currently under contract with the TSAB.

Device:
Device name: Murru
Device type: Intelligent Device fitted with a cartridge system.
Appearances and overviews:
Storage: A spiffy sand colored beret, very stylish and color coordinated with his current uniform.
(Others as I think of them, its about the char right now, not his wicked cool moves)

Device Personality: A stereotypic (more like racist) Australian male, watching all those croc hunter reruns the night before activating the thing might not have been such a great idea… Also extremely found of the word “crikey”, and using Beauty as a noun while constantly referring to Felix as “Bruce.” The first year with the thing was pure hell, the next 20 or so were more like purgatory, actively unpleasant, but not quite torture.

Personality/History:
Excerpt from Interview Conducted by Magic News.Net Website Author Atuwe Bilford.
Felix Munro by his own account really dose hate his life, his mother wanted him to be an accountant, butbeing the rebel youth he was he decided he’d show her! He was going to be a big shot mage rich, powerful, and with women galore! 20 years on with a string of minor crimes and several months in prison, too many attempts on his life to count, constantly scrapping to make ends meet, wandering from planet to planet living in one slum after another, and still single he says that accounting job is starting to like kind of appealing…

“Yeah but it won’t work, I can see it now…”

The scene is a small, normal looking office with Felix behind a desk looking at some papers thoughtfully.

“Well your taxes seem to be in order Ms. Smith, but I wanted to talk with about—“

KABOOM!!! An entire side of the room collapses inward as an 8 foot tall axe wielding manic emerges from the rubble and dust.

“I spent 15 years on a hellish prison world because of you asshole, its payback time!”

“Can’t you guys at least use the door?! It’s not even locked or anything and I can’t afford to keep replacing all these damn walls!”

RAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!

Sounds of explosions and panicked screams as the scene fades out.

“Being a Mage is allot like joining the Mob, once you get in you can never get out, alive anyway. People think being a freelance mage must be so awesome and glamorous, but the holo-dramas never show the part were no one needs a mage, you’ve got no money from paying all the damage claims against you so you can barely eat for a couple weeks, and then you get kicked out the rat hole your land lord is passing off as an apartment for missing your rent and end up living in a car and working at a Burger Queen for 3 months to keep from staving, ‘Would you like fries or onion rings with that?’ .“

“He used me to clean toilets…” Murru grumbled in a thick accent.

“And those where the cleanest toilets this side of Proxima; at least you were good for something; because you sure as hell weren’t keeping me feed.” Felix shot back.

“A poor craftsmen blames his tools, Bruce.” The mage attempted to glare up at the beret atop his head, looking more stupid then anything for the attempt.

“But seriously parents don’t let you kids grow up to be mages, beat them, abuse them, tie them up if you have to, but for their own good just keep their dumbasses in school!” Felix continued now patently ignoring his unruly headdress.

You could just join the TSAB, probably got right into the officer ranks…

“The TSAB? Pfft no thanks! I nearly get killed enough dealing with small time rouges and mostly normal thugs, last thing I need is to go rumble with a bunch of cyborgs and “ancient relics of great power” or other such nonsense. My life my suck, but I still like living thanks.”

One might point out the same people that would be giving him orders under the above arrangement are already doing so now, thanks to a horribly blunder contract negotiation.

“I would have done better if that damn chick hadn’t been distracting me with her gorgeous---“

ANYWAY, bottom line is he’s pretty much the TSAB’s bitch already and got shafted big time.

“But only because I was preoccupied thinking about giving someone else a different sort of shaft…”

Moving on.

Still given your situation why not just join up you’d be paid better and possibly be able to attain real rank and power?

“Because I’m acutally kind of powerful, but as a merc I’m viewed as sort of unreliable so I get assigned the small stuff, things where I can’t do any real damage IE stuff that’s pretty safe, but the minute I go pro my ass would be off to the front lines. So really barring some absurdly unlikely disaster I basiclly just do what I used to do expect now even when I’m not actively working I still get a small stipend. Things are pretty good right now acutally no one has tried to kill me in months, I’m acutally living in a apartment that isn’t suffering from any of the biblical plagues, and I got laid the other day, life is good.

Update: This interview was recorded just before the recent series of devastating terrorist attacks…

Interesting character. He really gives of a, "Life is good when it's good and sucks when it sucks." attitude.:D By the way, what does Murru look like in combat mode?

What?! Whoa, slow down.

Pause. Rewind. Play.

What's the back story :heh:?

USB500 crack. Cinque is not really a loli. But she looks like a loli. So they made her think act a loli. And since Erio is a magnet of loli, Cinque gets drawn in for being a fictional loli.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

So you imply the fact that I should do a young boy/older girl comedic romance, huh? :uhoh:

*imagines blushing Cinque and clueless Erio going out for a walk, while jealous Nove stalks them from somewhere -- Solid Snake style*

That does not compute.:eyespin:

Computes for me.:D

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 02:31
O RLY? :uhoh:

Since she's the 4th oldest... and had been working since more than a decade ago...

:uhoh:

Didn't stop 200+ year old Maren from thinking of getting it on with Koji :uhoh:

*runs*

So you imply the fact that I should do a young boy/older girl comedic romance, huh? :uhoh:

*imagines blushing Cinque and clueless Erio going out for a walk, while jealous Nove stalks them from somewhere -- Solid Snake style*

That does not compute.:eyespin:

:D I like where this is going :D

Backstory for E&C? Whaizzat? :eyespin:

Anything crack applicable...get it? ;)

Or if we want to be semi-serious, Jail wouldn't mind getting his hands on Erio, right?

And he had used Due to seduce for something he wanted, right?

Erio is a young BOY, right?

Cinque is the youngest-LOOKING of the Numbers, right?

Do your maths. :p

"Cinque, you have 2 mission objectives."



Well, Cinque should be kinda clueless on these kind of things...

Hmm...clueless Cinque getting advises from onee-samas (( Uno, Due, and Tre )) all of which misinterpreted and makes things worse...

:eyespin:

I REALLY LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING :D

Taking advice from Uno, Due and Tre... I'm not sure their advice would be worth anything other than some misunderstandings and loads of embarrasing situations...

At least, Uno probably has experience with Jail... lots of experience, going by your stories :uhoh:

Uno: What is important is to understand someone completely, to know everything about that person you care about...like my feelings for Doctor...

Due: Listen, use your hands. And when you've got that little sucker addicted and coiled up, you jump on him!

Tre: Do not falter, Cinque! No matter what the situation, you must not be weak, and do your best!

Cinque : Hmm... so to know him completely, I need to be strong, use my hands and jump on him... something feels out of place somehow...

:eyespin:

WINNER!!!

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 02:36
O RLY? :uhoh:

Since she's the 4th oldest... and had been working since more than a decade ago...

:uhoh:

It's not the inside that counts, it's the outside that matters :)




Ah, nothing much. It's just that Erio's avatar & new title inspired the suggestion :heh:

Heh? And I thought I was ambitious with LUTECARIO threesome back then :p

USB500
2007-08-24, 02:36
Well, Cinque should be kinda clueless on these kind of things...

Hmm...clueless Cinque getting advises from onee-samas (( Uno, Due, and Tre )) all of which misinterpreted and makes things worse...

Uno: What is important is to understand someone completely, to know everything about that person you care about...like my feelings for Doctor...

Due: Listen, use your hands. And when you've got that little sucker addicted and coiled up, you jump on him!

Tre: Do not falter, Cinque! No matter what the situation, you must not be weak, and do your best!

Cinque : Hmm... so to know him completely, I need to be strong, use my hands and jump on him... something feels out of place somehow...

:eyespin:

*palms face in amusement*

Back at headquarters, Jail is heard shouting "JUST AS PLANNED!!!!" as he watches the sisters' advice scene.

Wouldn't have any problem with what? Rated-R scenes? :D

*Nove Punch >>>> Lowe*

Aw, hell no. We've had enough with Hikki/Widuri, so........

Everyone: jiiiiiiii~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Me: what?????? :uhoh:

USB500 crack. Cinque is not really a loli. But she looks like a loli. So they made her think act a loli. And since Erio is a magnet of loli, Cinque gets drawn in for being a fictional loli.:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

yes, I'm on crack. :eyespin:

Didn't stop 200+ year old Maren from thinking of getting it on with Koji :uhoh:

*runs*

Yeah, it surely is. :uhoh:

:D I like where this is going :D

I REALLY LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING :D

Taking advice from Uno, Due and Tre... I'm not sure their advice would be worth anything other than some misunderstandings and loads of embarrassing situations...

At least, Uno probably has experience with Jail... lots of experience, going by your stories :uhoh:

Well, for record, apart from Uno, do the rest of the girls have experience at all? :uhoh:

Now my head's on fire by all these crazy ideas. D:

Heh? And I thought I was ambitious with LUTECARIO threesome back then :p

with Cinque thrown in, wouldn't that make a foursome????? :eek: :eek: :eek:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 02:39
Backstory for E&C? Whaizzat? :eyespin:

Anything crack applicable...get it? ;)

Or if we want to be semi-serious, Jail wouldn't mind getting his hands on Erio, right?

And he had used Due to seduce for something he wanted, right?

Erio is a young BOY, right?

Cinque is the youngest-LOOKING of the Numbers, right?

Do your maths. :p

"Cinque, you have 2 mission objectives."



Well, Cinque should be kinda clueless on these kind of things...

Hmm...clueless Cinque getting advises from onee-samas (( Uno, Due, and Tre )) all of which misinterpreted and makes things worse...

Uno: What is important is to understand someone completely, to know everything about that person you care about...like my feelings for Doctor...

Due: Listen, use your hands. And when you've got that little sucker addicted and coiled up, you jump on him!

Tre: Do not falter, Cinque! No matter what the situation, you must not be weak, and do your best!

Cinque : Hmm... so to know him completely, I need to be strong, use my hands and jump on him... something feels out of place somehow...

:eyespin:


Ah great, I'm grinning like an idiot in my computer lab now... And my partner is giving my looks...

Happy :p ?

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 02:48
It's not the inside that counts, it's the outside that matters :)


The Prime Loli Law? :D


Heh? And I thought I was ambitious with LUTECARIO threesome back then :p

Way back when, we have tons of OC's and CC's vying for a place in Erio's harem :uhoh:

Aw, hell no. We've had enough with Hikki/Widuri, so........

Everyone: jiiiiiiii~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Me: what?????? :uhoh:


:uhoh: But we liked the Hikki/Widuri scenes... :D

Well, for record, apart from Uno, do the rest of the girls have experience at all? :uhoh:

Even if Jail gave them all the freedom they want, somehow the Numbers don't strike me as having ANY experience with outside relationships :heh:


with Cinque thrown in, wouldn't that make a foursome????? :eek: :eek: :eek:

WANT

*runs*

Ah great, I'm grinning like an idiot in my computer lab now... And my partner is giving my looks...

Happy :p ?

:nod::nod:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 02:51
I REALLY LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING :D

Taking advice from Uno, Due and Tre... I'm not sure their advice would be worth anything other than some misunderstandings and loads of embarrasing situations...

At least, Uno probably has experience with Jail... lots of experience, going by your stories :uhoh:



You never know... Maybe Due practices on...


with Cinque thrown in, wouldn't that make a foursome????? :eek: :eek: :eek:

Nothing turns me on better than harem comedy with a good lead :D

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 02:54
You never know... Maybe Due practices on...


*Imagines a Jail/Uno/Due threesome*

:eek::eek::eyespin::uhoh::uhoh:

*wipes blood*


Nothing turns me on better than harem comedy with a good lead :D

Don't we all :D

USB500
2007-08-24, 02:59
Ah great, I'm grinning like an idiot in my computer lab now... And my partner is giving my looks...

Happy :p ?

Ironically, the same happened to me, too. :eek:

====================

:uhoh: But we liked the Hikki/Widuri scenes... :D

Ara.... sou ne.... :heh:

The problem with the scenes was that they already understood each other, while Erio & Cinque don't. :uhoh:

Even if Jail gave them all the freedom they want, somehow the Numbers don't strike me as having ANY experience with outside relationships :heh:

Poor girls. :upset:

===================

You never know... Maybe Due practices on...

on WHO???? :D

*runs*

Nothing turns me on better than harem comedy with a good lead :D

:nod: :nod:

Ah, reminds me of the soon-to-be my shota-Hikki-Nove-argument-over-Cinque scenario in Diary of a Wind Talker.

Nove: you! Green-eyed shortie! Don't you dare flirting with oneesama! :mad:
Shota-Hikki: what the hell is that supposed to mean? I didn't even do anything to her! :eek:
Nove: then can you explain what is that camera for? :eyebrow:
Shota-Hikki: that... that has nothing to do with you!
Nove: so you refuse to admit.... :frustrated: YOU PERVERTED IDIOT BRAT! NOBODY BUT ME CAN DO WHATEVER SHE LIKES TO ONEESAMA!!!
Cinque: *blushes* Nove....
Shota-Hikki: do whatever to oneesama..... *mental images* shimatta!! *nosebleeds*


:D :D :D

*Imagines a Jail/Uno/Due threesome*

:eek::eek::eyespin::uhoh::uhoh:

*wipes blood*

OSHI-

*dies off nosebleed*

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:00
The Prime Loli Law? :D

It only counts if the male is of similar physical stature :p


Way back when, we have tons of OC's and CC's vying for a place in Erio's harem :uhoh:

Don't tell me you involved Vita, Full-size Rein, Full-size Agito, Loli-Nanny Arf ... :heh:

(For the record other than Full-size Agito, cause we all know Zest's going to die, I don't support the others :p)

Saint X
2007-08-24, 03:07
The 16th inter-dimenisonal Naval fleet is within striking distances of their Orbitial Space Defenses. Sensors detected multiple hostile movements in the vicinity, indicating that they are aware of our intentions. We have to assume the base has been taken to DefCon 1.


Navy SEAL Strikers, have slipped into FF and are prepared to move when given the go ahead. Air Force Aggressors will move in when the defense barriers have been brought down by the SEALs.



"Bless me with the
Leaf off of the tree
On it I see
The freedom reign..."

"We are falling
The light is calling
Tears inside me
Calm me down..."

"Midnight calling
Mist of resolving
Crown me, with the
Pure green leaf..."

"Praise to my father
Blessed by the water
Black night, dark sky
The devils cry..."

" The Darkness has return... " Jeno smirked.



(a.k.a - I'll revealing REAL OCs soon...)

- Noted

*Reinforcements have arrived...*

but should it be 'Chaos'?

I'm really afraid to unlock my H4XX limiter...

*~cue Driver's High~*

GREAT TEACHER TAKAMACHI :D

If you need DISCIPLINE instilled into some lowlifes FAST, none are better than Deathwing and the White Devil :D

And the entire scenario reminded me of GTO :D

S***... unlike Van, I did forget about Priscilla :heh:


*Kyla cowers in a corner*

"I'm a better, but more ruthless instructor"

- You did not fight her... hehheheh...

ok i've done with my last character

Name: Azuma-Blade
Nick Name: Blade
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 9
Homeworld: Earth
Occupation: TSAB Officer *After Defeating Dr.Jail*
Rank: Sergent, Pilot
Unit: Riot Force 6 *After Defeating Dr. Jail
Call Sigh: Raven-1
Mage Rank: SS *multi attacker*
Magic Type: Velka
Magic Circle Color: Gold
Favored Element: "Multi*
Height: Around 5'5
Weight: About 125-136 pounds
Hair: Short, Black hair
Eye Color: Blue
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Personality: Kind, Silent
Device: Galeon
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Background:
After the cradle incident blade joins TSAB again to pilot TSAB's new weapon named Astral Soul to replace his severly damaged barrier armor. After returning to TSAB blade joins the Riot Force 6 to escort them in their missions and locate Azuma-Lance who escaped and went to Al-Hazard.
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http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p17/ravenflau009/DSC02475.jpg
Model#: TSAB-AC01
Name: Astral Soul
Unit Type: TSAB's First Generation Mecha Unit
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Astral Soul's Stats
Magic Offence: SS
Magic Defence: A
Mobility: S+
Size: 20 ft
Armor Material: Anti-Magic Coating
Special Abilities: OP-I Drive
Pilot: Azuma-Blade
Weapons:
1 Energy Rifle *R-Arm*
1 Energy Blade *L-Arm*
6 Energy Cannons *Wings*
1 Barrier *Core*
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Offensive Spells:

Soul Buster: *Rifle Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astral Souls rifle to fire a mid range buster attack capable of destroying a battle ship.

Cresent Moon Slash: *Sword Attack* Blade channels his small amount of magic energy to Astrals Souls' sword creating a long sword capable of slicing an Large AM equiped Drone.

Soul Breaker: *Ultimate Attack* Blade Channels his half of magic energy to Astral Soul's wing cannons to fire a wide spread buster attack capable of destroying enemies in a cone.

Defensive Spells:

Iron Shell: *Shield* Blade channels his small amount of it's magic enery creating a large protecting barrier that shields any attacks within 360 meter radius.


H4XX

Still counterable...

Inter-Dimensional Slash >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ****** ****

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:09
*Imagines a Jail/Uno/Due threesome*

:eek::eek::eyespin::uhoh::uhoh:

*wipes blood*

I myself have a mental scene of Due telling Uno off for being too... 'Passive' :D



Don't we all :D

"Kokoro Tomoyo ...!"

[/Konata]

(I think that's how it's spelled :heh:)

Ironically, the same happened to me, too. :eek:

:uhoh:


The problem with the scenes was that they already understood each other, while Erio & Cinque don't. :uhoh:

Lone Island! It works wonders for relationships!

I don't care if it's overused!




:nod: :nod:

Ah, reminds me of the soon-to-be my shota-Hikki-Nove-argument-over-Cinque scenario in Diary of a Wind Talker.

"Ehhh~... Siscon :p"

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 03:09
Ironically, the same happened to me, too. :eek:


:nod:

Ara.... sou ne.... :heh:

The problem with the scenes was that they already understood each other, while Erio & Cinque don't. :uhoh:

Even better for the LULZ factor :uhoh::D

Poor girls. :upset:

We can easily remedy that... *eyes Numbers*

:rolleyes::D

*Cradle Arc Laser >>>> Lowe*

Ah, reminds me of the soon-to-be my shota-Hikki-Nove-argument-over-Cinque scenario in Diary of a Wind Talker.

Nove: you! Green-eyed shortie! Don't you dare flirting with oneesama! :mad:
Shota-Hikki: what the hell is that supposed to mean? I didn't even do anything to her! :eek:
Nove: then can you explain what is that camera for? :eyebrow:
Shota-Hikki: that... that has nothing to do with you!
Nove: so you refuse to admit.... :frustrated: YOU PERVERTED IDIOT BRAT! NOBODY BUT ME CAN DO WHATEVER SHE LIKES TO ONEESAMA!!!
Cinque: *blushes* Nove....
Shota-Hikki: do whatever to oneesama..... *mental images* shimatta!! *nosebleeds*


What kind of WINNING post is this?!?!?!?! :eek::eek::D:D

At least, Hikki should get some good images of Nove/Cinque act-

*Break Liner >>> Lowe*

It only counts if the male is of similar physical stature :p


UNDENIABLE TRUTH :D


Don't tell me you involved Vita, Full-size Rein, Full-size Agito, Loli-Nanny Arf ... :heh:

(For the record other than Full-size Agito, cause we all know Zest's going to die, I don't support the others :p)

:eek:

Wish we could've included them in the list back then :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Saint X
2007-08-24, 03:13
@Chaos

Lost in another dimension will do fine...

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:19
UNDENIABLE TRUTH :D

QTF.



:eek:

Wish we could've included them in the list back then :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Well...

1. Caro
2. Lutecia
3. Cinque
4. Agito

...
...
... Missed anything :p ?

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 03:20
*Kyla cowers in a corner*

"I'm a better, but more ruthless instructor"

- You did not fight her... hehheheh...


:heh::heh::heh:


I myself have a mental scene of Due telling Uno off for being too... 'Passive' :D


But...but... there must be BALANCE!!!!! :D:D

Lone Island! It works wonders for relationships!

I don't care if it's overused!

The solution to all romantic problems? :uhoh::D

@Chaos

Lost in another dimension will do fine...

Or a sturmturmoil-style time-space isolation :heh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:24
But...but... there must be BALANCE!!!!! :D:D

But the fun comes when someone disrupt the balance :p



The solution to all romantic problems? :uhoh::D

That, and the mad dash to the airport :p

(But that's the western way...)


@Chaos

Lost in another dimension will do fine...

But in the island scenario, you'll get wet clothes...

Kha
2007-08-24, 03:27
ZA WARUDO!!!

But who would you rather trust? :pYou kidding?! Seiou-sama shall lead us to dimensional domination paradise! :D :D :D :D

Traceable? Meaning…?My OC has an ability to copy other schools of magic and their spells and cast it using divine magic... :heh:

Erm... huh? :heh:Kluize is the h4xxest OC ever created, and is the future version of Kha, even though he's from the past. Archer/Shirou with time convulsion set to the max. :heh:

Makes me wonder what Kha (OC) would think of Gwen and Mai teaming up with this development :heh:First he's disturbed by Gwen's siding with the daemons, but knowing Mai is also there would make him wonder if there's any hope of redeeming her... :uhoh:

Wondering the same as well :heh: Although I can say that Mai is somewhat unnerved by Kha's presence due to his alignment with Divine magic. Not saying that she hates him... but as one cursed with Dark Magic, it's not a good idea to get to near someone of the Light :heh: Personality-wise, Mai has no problem with Kha at all. :)Since Mai has been stable thus far, I think Kha'd be looking out for Mai so that she doesn't suddenly get possessed or relapse into madness.

Teaser line from one of my planned arcs exploring Kay's past:


"I'm sorry Sheikh, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."

:heh:All I can tell you is... someone worth $14,000,000,000 :uhoh::heh:

That's not a bounty... that's his assets :uhoh:
That $14,000,000,000 quote looks like a big hint, but at the same time, nothing's turning up. :heh:

You, sir, are absolutely correct. :upset:It is working very well! :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

LOL, for some reason, I was able to write this. Short, but at least I feel nicer with this piece.

Akira/Dranac profile Part II. Double flashbacks, and foreshadowing of their h4xxes, along with how they came to meet and their origin ;)



A dream…

Surrounding me were liquid and bubbles, as a glass wall was the chains that chained me to that place…

All I remembered from that place was the pain of needles, inserted into every inch of my body, and the pain that ran through me…

And that promise…

The promise that I would be complete, and be given a life…

For that reason, I endured everything.

For the sake of living…

But then, I discovered something inside me… as I felt something, an aura surrounding me, as I felt my body became lighter amidst the pool of water, as my ears start to hear clearly…

The words of deception.

“In the end, it was unsuccessful after all… With this little genetic information, reconstruction of the original Berserker of ancient times is improbable after all…”

Who…were they…talking about?

“What are we going to do with subject 01, Pars then?”

Subject 01…that is…what I’m called, codenamed Pars…

“Dispose of him.”

With those words… something inside of me changed.

And the next thing I remember, I was standing amidst a burning laboratory, as my hand was bloodied, holding the corpses of the people I considered my parents…

I was 8 years old then… without knowing anything, never stepping out of my glass prison, only taught and injected memories though computers…

I stepped myself out into the world, as I tried to live a lie.

Until that day 3 years later…

When that darkness awakened inside me again…

The day I met him.

My brother.

What I was going to be disposed for.

The closest being to the origin…

A man who was said to stand in the pinnacle of power in ancient times.

~~~

MC 068 August 5th
Officer Field Course : Final
East Mid-childa

“Nii-san, wake up.”

Suddenly, light shoned…as I felt light, instead of the darkness…

“It’s going to start soon.”

A light, boyish voice called out to me, as my eyes returned me to reality… as I see my younger brother... Akira leaning towards me... I only lied there casually, as if the most natural thing.

“What is?”

“The final practical course-run for the Officer course. At the same time, it’ll also be judged into for our Mage Rank Examination, judging from our performance… since we aren’t officially ranked yet, being cadets.”

“Oh…right.”

“It’s not like you to be this dreamy. You’re clumsy at times, but not normally for something like this… What’s wrong?”

“I dreamt…of the past.”

Akira was silent, slightly taken aback… but his eyes were fortified, as he said what we both knew…

“We cannot do anything about that anymore… The only thing we can do is to move forward and to never repeat our mistakes… We promised to stick together through thick and thin right?

“…Yeah.”

That was the only thing I could say. There was nothing else… because there was nothing that could restore what I did…

~~~

Back then, the memory of the Blood of Valentine…

MC 066 February 14th
The Silvester Sea
5th Management World


The tears that ran through the eyes of both of them… One of which carries the responsibility of being the one, while the other cries out of pain and agony, for carrying something he never wished inside of him.

The one who is considered to be the one… and the one who failed to be the one.

They’re so similar, and yet so far apart…

One has no choice but to fight to save him, one has no choice to fight because that is what makes him a failure…

The conflicts of the mental chaos…

“Kila… Limit Break.”

[Limiter Released. Awaiting Command.]

“INFINITE FREEDOM DRIVE!”

As he said those words, his device that was his wings further shattered until nothing more was in sight, as he just flew there alone… his eyes closed…

As they slowly opened, revealing colors of purple, like dyed in nothingness…

[Laplace Computer Limiter #1 Released : Úlfhéðnar ]

Against those eyes that chose to disregard emotions, the angered beast, shrouded in an armor of flaming orange, red of anger, as the layers of shielding protecting him resonates and vibrates, crackling the seas he was floating atop…

His powers, the infinite protection that was the shield that shatters all weapons…

His conscious was not his, but his emotions were driven beyond anything else.

The emotions when he first awakened, his hate, anger and jealousy… that was the only thing that he could feel.

As much as he hated that…he had no control over his own body, nor his own voice…

“SHELL BULLET ULTIMA!”

As he covered his whole body with a literal shell, his voice then resonated…

“Armure Hyperion… Active.”

That was…their beginning to the end.

~~~

Back then, Dranac never thought he could’ve lived till this long, with his sanity intact no less…nor did Akira thought he could’ve lived, when he used his Limit Break’s ultimate technique to save his brother…

Destiny sure plays a twist on life…

As the sounds of the ticking clock slightly beeps, it was the indicator...

Yes, right now... this is the life they were living. They were no longer enemies, but brothers... that had chosen to live their lives the way they promised.

“It is time.”

Akira said, as he readied his Barrier Jacket and Yamato in Striker Mode, as he surfed upwards first towards the sky...

“Yeah, let’s get this damn course over with and celebrate with a full-course!”

With that, Dranac jumped down as he skid the surrounding areas, flying around...

This was their first step to their new world.That battle is so loaded with EPICNESS I wish it was animated! :cool: And enemies turned friends... Kila is one h4xxbefriender, ne? :heh:

And he even has a history similar to Canard! :eek: No Prayer though, only Akira :heh: I was rather surprised at what Dranac called Akira though...

"My Akira?" :uhoh:YAOI reference? :uhoh:

Righting that Nonsense about Clichés above seems to have triggered my urge to create a random half serious half comic character… so here the first bit of him, more may or may not follow as the mood strikes me.

Name: Felix Munro
Other names/alias: none.
Age: 36
Birthday: November 21
Height: 6 foot.
Weight: 170 Pounds
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Brown
Origin: Administered World 167
Mage Rank: S, no limiters.
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Green
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: Independent, but currently under contract with the TSAB.

Device:
Device name: Murru
Device type: Intelligent Device fitted with a cartridge system.
Appearances and overviews:
Storage: A spiffy sand colored beret, very stylish and color coordinated with his current uniform.
(Others as I think of them, its about the char right now, not his wicked cool moves)

Device Personality: A stereotypic (more like racist) Australian male, watching all those croc hunter reruns the night before activating the thing might not have been such a great idea… Also extremely found of the word “crikey”, and using Beauty as a noun while constantly referring to Felix as “Bruce.” The first year with the thing was pure hell, the next 20 or so were more like purgatory, actively unpleasant, but not quite torture.

Personality/History:
Excerpt from Interview Conducted by Magic News.Net Website Author Atuwe Bilford.
Felix Munro by his own account really dose hate his life, his mother wanted him to be an accountant, butbeing the rebel youth he was he decided he’d show her! He was going to be a big shot mage rich, powerful, and with women galore! 20 years on with a string of minor crimes and several months in prison, too many attempts on his life to count, constantly scrapping to make ends meet, wandering from planet to planet living in one slum after another, and still single he says that accounting job is starting to like kind of appealing…

“Yeah but it won’t work, I can see it now…”

The scene is a small, normal looking office with Felix behind a desk looking at some papers thoughtfully.

“Well your taxes seem to be in order Ms. Smith, but I wanted to talk with about—“

KABOOM!!! An entire side of the room collapses inward as an 8 foot tall axe wielding manic emerges from the rubble and dust.

“I spent 15 years on a hellish prison world because of you asshole, its payback time!”

“Can’t you guys at least use the door?! It’s not even locked or anything and I can’t afford to keep replacing all these damn walls!”

RAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!

Sounds of explosions and panicked screams as the scene fades out.

“Being a Mage is allot like joining the Mob, once you get in you can never get out, alive anyway. People think being a freelance mage must be so awesome and glamorous, but the holo-dramas never show the part were no one needs a mage, you’ve got no money from paying all the damage claims against you so you can barely eat for a couple weeks, and then you get kicked out the rat hole your land lord is passing off as an apartment for missing your rent and end up living in a car and working at a Burger Queen for 3 months to keep from staving, ‘Would you like fries or onion rings with that?’ .“

“He used me to clean toilets…” Murru grumbled in a thick accent.

“And those where the cleanest toilets this side of Proxima; at least you were good for something; because you sure as hell weren’t keeping me feed.” Felix shot back.

“A poor craftsmen blames his tools, Bruce.” The mage attempted to glare up at the beret atop his head, looking more stupid then anything for the attempt.

“But seriously parents don’t let you kids grow up to be mages, beat them, abuse them, tie them up if you have to, but for their own good just keep their dumbasses in school!” Felix continued now patently ignoring his unruly headdress.

You could just join the TSAB, probably got right into the officer ranks…

“The TSAB? Pfft no thanks! I nearly get killed enough dealing with small time rouges and mostly normal thugs, last thing I need is to go rumble with a bunch of cyborgs and “ancient relics of great power” or other such nonsense. My life my suck, but I still like living thanks.”

One might point out the same people that would be giving him orders under the above arrangement are already doing so now, thanks to a horribly blunder contract negotiation.

“I would have done better if that damn chick hadn’t been distracting me with her gorgeous---“

ANYWAY, bottom line is he’s pretty much the TSAB’s bitch already and got shafted big time.

“But only because I was preoccupied thinking about giving someone else a different sort of shaft…”

Moving on.

Still given your situation why not just join up you’d be paid better and possibly be able to attain real rank and power?

“Because I’m acutally kind of powerful, but as a merc I’m viewed as sort of unreliable so I get assigned the small stuff, things where I can’t do any real damage IE stuff that’s pretty safe, but the minute I go pro my ass would be off to the front lines. So really barring some absurdly unlikely disaster I basiclly just do what I used to do expect now even when I’m not actively working I still get a small stipend. Things are pretty good right now acutally no one has tried to kill me in months, I’m acutally living in a apartment that isn’t suffering from any of the biblical plagues, and I got laid the other day, life is good.

Update: This interview was recorded just before the recent series of devastating terrorist attacks…I like this guy's cowboy style! Explains why he's doing merc work. :D Looking forward to seeing his interactions with the others. :)

And before I forget, welcome here! :D

USB500
2007-08-24, 03:28
Lone Island! It works wonders for relationships!

I don't care if it's overused!

"Ehhh~... Siscon :p"

1: :D :D

2: Nove: SISCON JANAI YO!!! :frustrated: :o

==================

Even better for the LULZ factor :uhoh::D

I can only hope you won't make me think of wrong ideas again. :upset:

What kind of WINNING post is this?!?!?!?! :eek::eek::D:D

At least, Hikki should get some good images of Nove/Cinque act-

*Break Liner >>> Lowe*


I win. So where's my cookies? :p :D

Regarding shota-Hikki issue....
“Mattaku. Is this how they are supposed to treat their chief-in-command?” Fuming in anger, Hikki jumped off the table and headed to the door, murmuring in Narulian languages and leaving the Wind Talkers with their antics.

“Matte.”

He turned around, and was startled when Faye gave him a comforting pat on the head. “Faye?” The bookworm girl continued patting him in sisterly manner, ignoring her colleagues that were now caught in their own activity. “What are you doing, Faye?”

“Yosh, yosh.”

“W… what does that supposed to mean?” he retorted and brushed Faye’s hand off his head. “Stop treating me like a kid, okay?”

Faye softly giggled and continued her affectionate pat. “Hikki is a good boy, so Hikki must act like one. Okay?”

Hikki suddenly blushed at the suggestion. “Mou… stop acting like I have sisters, okay?” he mumbled.

Faye simply giggled. “Hikki is a good boy, desho?”

Hikki sighed. “Wa… wakatta.”

When you have a Yuki-lookalike patting young Train Heartnett's head, what is the result? :D:D

@ LoweGear: where's our Space Sheriff Gaban to correct the situation? :p

========================

EDIT:"
oh wow, I forgot this.

Righting that Nonsense about Clichés above seems to have triggered my urge to create a random half serious half comic character… so here the first bit of him, more may or may not follow as the mood strikes me.

Name: Felix Munro
Other names/alias: none.
Age: 36
Birthday: November 21
Height: 6 foot.
Weight: 170 Pounds
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Brown
Origin: Administered World 167
Mage Rank: S, no limiters.
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Green
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: Independent, but currently under contract with the TSAB.

Device:
Device name: Murru
Device type: Intelligent Device fitted with a cartridge system.
Appearances and overviews:
Storage: A spiffy sand colored beret, very stylish and color coordinated with his current uniform.
(Others as I think of them, its about the char right now, not his wicked cool moves)

Device Personality: A stereotypic (more like racist) Australian male, watching all those croc hunter reruns the night before activating the thing might not have been such a great idea… Also extremely found of the word “crikey”, and using Beauty as a noun while constantly referring to Felix as “Bruce.” The first year with the thing was pure hell, the next 20 or so were more like purgatory, actively unpleasant, but not quite torture.

Personality/History:
Excerpt from Interview Conducted by Magic News.Net Website Author Atuwe Bilford.
Felix Munro by his own account really dose hate his life, his mother wanted him to be an accountant, butbeing the rebel youth he was he decided he’d show her! He was going to be a big shot mage rich, powerful, and with women galore! 20 years on with a string of minor crimes and several months in prison, too many attempts on his life to count, constantly scrapping to make ends meet, wandering from planet to planet living in one slum after another, and still single he says that accounting job is starting to like kind of appealing…

“Yeah but it won’t work, I can see it now…”

The scene is a small, normal looking office with Felix behind a desk looking at some papers thoughtfully.

“Well your taxes seem to be in order Ms. Smith, but I wanted to talk with about—“

KABOOM!!! An entire side of the room collapses inward as an 8 foot tall axe wielding manic emerges from the rubble and dust.

“I spent 15 years on a hellish prison world because of you asshole, its payback time!”

“Can’t you guys at least use the door?! It’s not even locked or anything and I can’t afford to keep replacing all these damn walls!”

RAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!

Sounds of explosions and panicked screams as the scene fades out.

“Being a Mage is allot like joining the Mob, once you get in you can never get out, alive anyway. People think being a freelance mage must be so awesome and glamorous, but the holo-dramas never show the part were no one needs a mage, you’ve got no money from paying all the damage claims against you so you can barely eat for a couple weeks, and then you get kicked out the rat hole your land lord is passing off as an apartment for missing your rent and end up living in a car and working at a Burger Queen for 3 months to keep from staving, ‘Would you like fries or onion rings with that?’ .“

“He used me to clean toilets…” Murru grumbled in a thick accent.

“And those where the cleanest toilets this side of Proxima; at least you were good for something; because you sure as hell weren’t keeping me feed.” Felix shot back.

“A poor craftsmen blames his tools, Bruce.” The mage attempted to glare up at the beret atop his head, looking more stupid then anything for the attempt.

“But seriously parents don’t let you kids grow up to be mages, beat them, abuse them, tie them up if you have to, but for their own good just keep their dumbasses in school!” Felix continued now patently ignoring his unruly headdress.

You could just join the TSAB, probably got right into the officer ranks…

“The TSAB? Pfft no thanks! I nearly get killed enough dealing with small time rouges and mostly normal thugs, last thing I need is to go rumble with a bunch of cyborgs and “ancient relics of great power” or other such nonsense. My life my suck, but I still like living thanks.”

One might point out the same people that would be giving him orders under the above arrangement are already doing so now, thanks to a horribly blunder contract negotiation.

“I would have done better if that damn chick hadn’t been distracting me with her gorgeous---“

ANYWAY, bottom line is he’s pretty much the TSAB’s bitch already and got shafted big time.

“But only because I was preoccupied thinking about giving someone else a different sort of shaft…”

Moving on.

Still given your situation why not just join up you’d be paid better and possibly be able to attain real rank and power?

“Because I’m acutally kind of powerful, but as a merc I’m viewed as sort of unreliable so I get assigned the small stuff, things where I can’t do any real damage IE stuff that’s pretty safe, but the minute I go pro my ass would be off to the front lines. So really barring some absurdly unlikely disaster I basiclly just do what I used to do expect now even when I’m not actively working I still get a small stipend. Things are pretty good right now acutally no one has tried to kill me in months, I’m acutally living in a apartment that isn’t suffering from any of the biblical plagues, and I got laid the other day, life is good.

Update: This interview was recorded just before the recent series of devastating terrorist attacks…

I think I'm beginning to like Murru's attitude persona already. Nothing beats an Aussie-speaking Device that always begins its speeches with "crikey" :3

BTW, welcome to the thread. :)

Kha
2007-08-24, 03:38
Nothing turns me on better than harem comedy with a good lead :DYou must love Kha the OC then. :D :D :D :D

(runs)

*Imagines a Jail/Uno/Due threesome*

:eek::eek::eyespin::uhoh::uhoh:

*wipes blood*No love for Tre? ;)

Don't tell me you involved Vita, Full-size Rein, Full-size Agito, Loli-Nanny Arf ... :heh:

(For the record other than Full-size Agito, cause we all know Zest's going to die, I don't support the others :p)Agitrio? VitaErio?! Redhead Alliance?! :eyespin:

Full-size Rein is for Saga to go "father-complex" over. :D

Loli Arf... It's like CinquErio, doesn't look older, but she IS older... :uhoh:

:eek:

Wish we could've included them in the list back then :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:Well...

1. Caro
2. Lutecia
3. Cinque
4. Agito

...
...
... Missed anything :p ?USB's Annabelle. Allison's out of the equation because she's with another person. :D

And Erio's gonna have to be fighting his Meister for Lutecia's attention. FSN joke. :D

Roricon: AND ME!!! WHAT ABOUT ME?!

*Ian. A. Roricon is shot into the sun*

USB500
2007-08-24, 03:42
You must love Kha the OC then. :D :D :D :D

(runs)

Indeed :p

No love for Tre? ;)

We're forgetting someone, aren't we? ;)

USB's Annabelle. Allison's out of the equation because she's with another person. :D

Ah, yes. My ever-amusing "meteor loli" :D :D :uhoh:

The problem with Annabelle is she tends to summon meteor just to make things go her way. :uhoh:

*is currently watching Otogi Jushi Akazukin :D*

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 03:50
But the fun comes when someone disrupt the balance :p


Should've expected such from a Dark God :uhoh:

That, and the mad dash to the airport :p

(But that's the western way...)

:nod:


But in the island scenario, you'll get wet clothes...

See-through wet clothes and... sticku situations... :eyespin:

*wipes blood*

First he's disturbed by Gwen's siding with the daemons, but knowing Mai is also there would make him wonder if there's any hope of redeeming her... :uhoh:

Since Mai has been stable thus far, I think Kha'd be looking out for Mai so that she doesn't suddenly get possessed or relapse into madness.


Gwen's slated to turn sometime in the future methinks, wonder what the opinion will become then.

Well, possesion is out of the question actually, since immunity to possession is one of Mai's strong points (yes, that's her H4XX :uhoh: ).

Madness on the other hand, is a constant threat... though S&W have ways to curb that :heh:


That [B]$14,000,000,000 quote looks like a big hint, but at the same time, nothing's turning up. :heh:

Because it's not supposed to be :heh: Just wanted to show that he's very VERY rich.

Although I didn't pull the figure out of the air. Here's the person (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mohammed_bin_Rashid_Al_Maktoum) I want to base the Crown Prince on... and the source of the figure...

*whistles*


No love for Tre? ;)


So... a Jail/Uno/Due/Tre foursome then? :eek:

Why don't we add Quattro in, since she's also an elder...

Heck, why not add ALL OF THEM, so we can have a full-fledged org-

*headshot'd*

haiz123321
2007-08-24, 03:51
*Imagines a Jail/Uno/Due threesome*

*Dies from blood loss*

btw, if my char is in the StrikerS timeline which alot of people is in, will it affect other OC alot? It's just the present and not the background where people knew nanoha/fate/hayate and other chars from childhood.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:51
You must love Kha the OC then. :D :D :D :D

(runs)

:p


No love for Tre? ;)

No love at all :p


Full-size Rein is for Saga to go "father-complex" over. :D

Hehhh~ Did you see that 3koma where Vice tries to 'get it on' with full-size Rein? :D



Loli Arf... It's like CinquErio, doesn't look older, but she IS older... :uhoh:

BUT!

She didn't take care of him :D



Roricon: AND ME!!! WHAT ABOUT ME?!

*Ian. A. Roricon is shot into the sun*

You know what I'm going to do to Ivan? :D

I'm going to make him the Nanohverse version of Kane.

He would somehow live through every attempt on his life.

Including age.

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 03:55
Oops, missed this:

1: :D :D

2: Nove: SISCON JANAI YO!!! :frustrated: :o


Search your feelings! You know it to be true!

Admit it Nove... your true desires for Cinque!!! :D

*energize*

I can only hope you won't make me think of wrong ideas again. :upset:

Why would I want to do that? :) :rolleyes: *whistles*


Regarding shota-Hikki issue....
“Mattaku. Is this how they are supposed to treat their chief-in-command?” Fuming in anger, Hikki jumped off the table and headed to the door, murmuring in Narulian languages and leaving the Wind Talkers with their antics.

“Matte.”

He turned around, and was startled when Faye gave him a comforting pat on the head. “Faye?” The bookworm girl continued patting him in sisterly manner, ignoring her colleagues that were now caught in their own activity. “What are you doing, Faye?”

“Yosh, yosh.”

“W… what does that supposed to mean?” he retorted and brushed Faye’s hand off his head. “Stop treating me like a kid, okay?”

Faye softly giggled and continued her affectionate pat. “Hikki is a good boy, so Hikki must act like one. Okay?”

Hikki suddenly blushed at the suggestion. “Mou… stop acting like I have sisters, okay?” he mumbled.

Faye simply giggled. “Hikki is a good boy, desho?”

Hikki sighed. “Wa… wakatta.”

When you have a Yuki-lookalike patting young Train Heartnett's head, what is the result? :D:D


What... the... :twitch::twitch::twitch: There've been many times I wished I was in Hikki's place :uhoh::D

*runs*

USB500
2007-08-24, 03:59
See-through wet clothes and... sticku situations... :eyespin:

*wipes blood*

We're going Nagasarete Airantou, aren't we? :D :D :D

Because it's not supposed to be :heh: Just wanted to show that he's very VERY rich.

Although I didn't pull the figure out of the air. Here's the person (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mohammed_bin_Rashid_Al_Maktoum) I want to base the Crown Prince on... and the source of the figure...

*whistles*

Ah..... that man, huh? :)

So... a Jail/Uno/Due/Tre foursome then? :eek:

Why don't we add Quattro in, since she's also an elder...

Heck, why not add ALL OF THEM, so we can have a full-fledged org-

*headshot'd*

:eek: :eek: :eek:

Jail, you really is a lucky--

*radio static*

Search your feelings! You know it to be true!

Admit it Nove... your true desires for Cinque!!! :D

*energize*

:nod: :nod: :D

Why would I want to do that? :) :rolleyes: *whistles*

Because you want to? :uhoh:

*dodges punch*

What... the... :twitch::twitch::twitch: There've been many times I wished I was in Hikki's place :uhoh::D

*runs*

Mah, don't worry. Yuki Faye is completely immune to Hikki's aura. She's just doing what she feels the best. :)

Faye: sou.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 03:59
Should've expected such from a Dark God :uhoh:

This Dark god is here to stay... :D

But I'll let my Avatar take care of proceedings :)




See-through wet clothes and... sticku situations... :eyespin:

*wipes blood*

The most important things is that they will be in a situation where they're naked beside each other, waiting for the clothes to dry...

Kha
2007-08-24, 04:00
Hehhh~ Did you see that 3koma where Vice tries to 'get it on' with full-size Rein? :DI have. I'm talking about OC thread. :)

BUT!

She didn't take care of him :DEven better! Forbidden Rabu Crack! :D

You know what I'm going to do to Ivan? :D

I'm going to make him the Nanohverse version of Kane.

He would somehow live through every attempt on his life.

Including age.Dynamic Kill animation again and again?! :D :D :D :D

Wii~~

P.S. Could someone point me to a good example of MoeGARness? I'm struggling with Sakura lately... :heh:

Gwen's slated to turn sometime in the future methinks, wonder what the opinion will become then.

Well, possesion is out of the question actually, since immunity to possession is one of Mai's strong points (yes, that's her H4XX :uhoh: ).

Madness on the other hand, is a constant threat... though S&W have ways to curb that :heh:And that's what keep Kha concerned for Mai, though such gestures are usually mistaken... :uhoh:

Because it's not supposed to be :heh: Just wanted to show that he's very VERY rich.

Although I didn't pull the figure out of the air. Here's the person (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mohammed_bin_Rashid_Al_Maktoum) I want to base the Crown Prince on... and the source of the figure...

*whistles*Well I was deciding between UAE and Brunei at one point... So what's this Prince's claim to cash? :heh:

So... a Jail/Uno/Due/Tre foursome then? :eek:

Why don't we add Quattro in, since she's also an elder...

Heck, why not add ALL OF THEM, so we can have a full-fledged org-

*headshot'd*Read my mind. :D :D :D :D

*Erio HAREM MUKI ICHIGEKI HISSATSU HOU >>>>>> Creator-san*

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 04:06
WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Then again, it feels like we're encompassing 3 to 4 thread in one at the same time...

This Dark god is here to stay... :D

:bow:

But personally, I like the airport dash too. After all, it's cliche because it's ain't broke. ;)

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 04:09
:eek: :eek: :eek:

Jail, you really is a lucky--

*radio static*


... and now we understand why the Numbers are so diverse...

Afterall, why settle for one fetish when you can have them all? :D

*radio static*

Because you want to? :uhoh:

*dodges punch*

This ain't no ordinary punch boy, no ordinary punch!

FFtw7qW7Vcw


Mah, don't worry. Yuki Faye is completely immune to Hikki's aura. She's just doing what she feels the best. :)

Faye: sou.

But still... but still.. :(

This Dark god is here to stay... :D

But I'll let my Avatar take care of proceedings :)


As The Dark God Khorne Wishes! :bow::bow::bow:


The most important things is that they will be in a situation where they're naked beside each other, waiting for the clothes to dry...

... and let the innuendos and pheromones fly! :D

...Only to have their rescuers arrive in the nick of time :heh:

Well I was deciding between UAE and Brunei at one point... So what's this Prince's claim to cash? :heh:


Interdimensional Tourism :nod: Think Dubai, but ten times grander and more decadent. Playground for the filthy rich and powerful of Ordered Space :uhoh::eyespin:


Read my mind. :D :D :D :D

*Erio HAREM MUKI ICHIGEKI HISSATSU HOU >>>>>> Creator-san*

You're not the only one who can read minds nowadays Der Kleriker :nod: :p

azuma-blade
2007-08-24, 04:15
- Noted

*Reinforcements have arrived...*

but should it be 'Chaos'?

I'm really afraid to unlock my H4XX limiter...



*Kyla cowers in a corner*

"I'm a better, but more ruthless instructor"

- You did not fight her... hehheheh...



H4XX

Still counterable...

Inter-Dimensional Slash >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ****** ****

*Blocks Saint X's Inter-Dimensional Slash with The Cresent moon Slash* :p

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 04:19
Even better! Forbidden Rabu Crack! :D

It was forbidden ever since the start :p


Dynamic Kill animation again and again?! :D :D :D :D

Wii~~

He has a high level magic weapon... Someone, or something named...


Bedopear :uhoh:




WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Then again, it feels like we're encompassing 3 to 4 thread in one at the same time...

Behold, my power !



:bow:

But personally, I like the airport dash too. After all, it's cliche because it's ain't broke. ;)

Works best with married couples :p


As The Dark God Khorne Wishes! :bow::bow::bow:



... and let the innuendos and pheromones fly! :D

...Only to have their rescuers arrive in the nick of time :heh:


"Okay, I know what you're thinking... But this isn't what it looks like... :heh: (:uhoh:)"

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 04:27
He has a high level magic weapon... Someone, or something named...


Bedopear :uhoh:



:eek::eek:

CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!

Behold, my power !

:bow::bow::bow:


"Okay, I know what you're thinking... But this isn't what it looks like... :heh: (:uhoh:)"

Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:D

Kha
2007-08-24, 04:47
WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Then again, it feels like we're encompassing 3 to 4 thread in one at the same time...It's called the "Thrill of the Hunt" as we close in on Image Thread, the stronghold of Warlock Haru!

Yuunoidas: TONIGHT! WE DINE, IN HELL!!!

RAWR!!! :frustrated:

:bow:

But personally, I like the airport dash too. After all, it's cliche because it's ain't broke. ;)So did I. :3

... and now we understand why the Numbers are so diverse...

Afterall, why settle for one fetish when you can have them all? :D

*radio static*I remember that day, when I spoke of Spagetti's True Intentions... :uhoh:

This ain't no ordinary punch boy, no ordinary punch!

FFtw7qW7VcwUSAKENDAAAA!!! :eek: :eek: :eek:

Interdimensional Tourism :nod: Think Dubai, but ten times grander and more decadent. Playground for the filthy rich and powerful of Ordered Space :uhoh::eyespin:No kidding... My geography textbook actualized to perfection! :eek:

Now... Let's say the Testarossa family intends to go on a holiday and invite most of the OCs, including Kay, along... I smell Glockealousy. IDEA! :D

You're not the only one who can read minds nowadays Der Kleriker :nod: :pNewtypes work both ways. :D

*Blocks Saint X's Inter-Dimensional Slash with The Cresent moon Slash* :pUSO! He did WHAT?! :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

Break it up before this turns into a poster to poster fight. :heh:
It was forbidden ever since the start :pThat's what makes it Cr4ck. :3

He has a high level magic weapon... Someone, or something named...


Bedopear :uhoh:
Oh shyt--:eek::eek:

CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!NIGERO! Hide the lolis! Shinso den!

Erio: Bedopear... ka? :eyebrow: Teme wa jyuunen hayain dayo!

*Harlem Harem Ichigeki Hissatsu Hou charges*
Behold, my power!Ie, Tomoyo. Kimi no chikara, to Ore wa Harem mo, arimono da!!! :D

"Okay, I know what you're thinking... But this isn't what it looks like... :heh: (:uhoh:)"Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:DCreator-san: Tsuyoi no Harlem Harem Bushido... :eek: :heh: :bow: :bow:

azuma-blade
2007-08-24, 04:48
:eek::eek:

CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!



:bow::bow::bow:



Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:D


*blade shoots at the Bedopear using astral soul's energy rifle*

Blade: Target Terminated

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-24, 04:58
@USB: Just goes to show how enraged Hikki can get...looking forward to part II. Let's just hope that Fate can do -something- to quell his silent rage.

@Aaron, I think you said that the Doctor didn't pull any tricks when V had a blade poised at his throat. Well, doctors are crafty...:heh:

@Lowe:
Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:D



More, good sir. :D :heh:

Yes, E is a know-all about the Snake. And Cinque, alas, is oblivious to what he says. :heh:

Now, another random segment.



"Ah-ha!"

Nanoha was jolted instantaneously out of her deep slumber by the cry that echoed from downstairs. To accompany it, there was a sound that chilled her to the core- the clash of steel on steel. She recognised the voice below as that of V's.

An intruder?!

That thought quickly registered itself in her mind. Leaping out of bed and waking Fate in the process, she dressed herself in a flash, asking Fate to follow suit, the blonde-haired girl clearly concerned by the tone of worry present in her words.

After Fate, she proceeded to wake the Forwards. Despite their complaints, they soon caught word of the commotion going on in the lower hall, and joined them in a hurry, worried just as much as the pair of Aces were. Hayate, who also heard of the occurences, soon appeared beside them.

It took them a while to rush to their destination. Each one of them had their devices at the ready, and tensed themselves as they arrived in a room based in the lower area. bathed in light.

Peering round the door, Nanoha saw V. Seeing no hostiles, a sense of relief washed over her, but when she stepped in further, she was dumbstruck.

V was sparring with the oddest of things- a suit of armor. Where he had managed to find one, Nanoha knew not. Wielding a smallsword, V performed a series of quick strikes at several points on the immobile suit, and spoke to it as if it were faltering:

"Not good enough, my fat metal friend!"

The female mage also noticed the fuzzy sound of an old, antiquated television set playing in the background. Her eyes shifted back to V when he, by misfortune, jammed his blade in the neck of the armor. He struggled to loosen it, and eventually dug it out, falling backwards onto the floor in the process. He rose back up with a kick, and prepared himself again.

This time, he prepared for the coupe de grace and he spun round on his feet and delivered a strike to the suit, lopping the helmet off and sending it rolling along the floor to stop at Nanoha's feet.

Pausing to catch his breath, it was then that V noticed that Nanoha and the others were present. "Oh!", he exclaimed, startled, and found himself at a loss for words. "I, uh...I hope I didn't wake you."

"We just thought that that the base was..." The remainder of Nanoha's reply was cut off by a now amused V.

"Under attack? Heavens, no!"

"Eh, V..." The question posed to him was from Subaru, who looked at him in the same confounded manner as the others. "Just what exactly are you doing?", she inquired.

"Why, practicing!", V answered, merrily, and motioned to the ageing TV set. "Learning from none other than my favorite motion picture- The Count of Monte Cristo. Really a good flick. Infact, pardon my knowledge that it is, indeed, late, but..."

He took a step backwards, and indicated some seats behind him.

"Would you like to view it with me?"



Yet another part movie-to-Nanoha adaptation...yes, call me a thief, but this scene in the film is rather humorous. :heh:

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 04:59
Ah, reminds me of the soon-to-be my shota-Hikki-Nove-argument-over-Cinque scenario in Diary of a Wind Talker.

Nove: you! Green-eyed shortie! Don't you dare flirting with oneesama! :mad:
Shota-Hikki: what the hell is that supposed to mean? I didn't even do anything to her! :eek:
Nove: then can you explain what is that camera for? :eyebrow:
Shota-Hikki: that... that has nothing to do with you!
Nove: so you refuse to admit.... :frustrated: YOU PERVERTED IDIOT BRAT! NOBODY BUT ME CAN DO WHATEVER SHE LIKES TO ONEESAMA!!!
Cinque: *blushes* Nove....
Shota-Hikki: do whatever to oneesama..... *mental images* shimatta!! *nosebleeds*


:D :D :D

The camera is for Nanoha, right?:D



Regarding shota-Hikki issue....
“Mattaku. Is this how they are supposed to treat their chief-in-command?” Fuming in anger, Hikki jumped off the table and headed to the door, murmuring in Narulian languages and leaving the Wind Talkers with their antics.

“Matte.”

He turned around, and was startled when Faye gave him a comforting pat on the head. “Faye?” The bookworm girl continued patting him in sisterly manner, ignoring her colleagues that were now caught in their own activity. “What are you doing, Faye?”

“Yosh, yosh.”

“W… what does that supposed to mean?” he retorted and brushed Faye’s hand off his head. “Stop treating me like a kid, okay?”

Faye softly giggled and continued her affectionate pat. “Hikki is a good boy, so Hikki must act like one. Okay?”

Hikki suddenly blushed at the suggestion. “Mou… stop acting like I have sisters, okay?” he mumbled.

Faye simply giggled. “Hikki is a good boy, desho?”

Hikki sighed. “Wa… wakatta.”

When you have a Yuki-lookalike patting young Train Heartnett's head, what is the result? :D:D

Imagining Yuki doing that is kinda weird. But it's good!:D


This Dark god is here to stay... :D

But I'll let my Avatar take care of proceedings :)

Finally!:D

WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Sums up the situation nicely.:D



He has a high level magic weapon... Someone, or something named...


Bedopear :uhoh:


:twitch::twitch::twitch:

Behold, my power !

:bow:

:eek::eek:

CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!

Seconded!:twitch:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 05:01
It's called the "Thrill of the Hunt" as we close in on Image Thread, the stronghold of Warlock Haru!

Yuunoidas: TONIGHT! WE DINE, IN HELL!!!

RAWR!!! :frustrated:


Only 449 left!!!!!

LOOK!!!! THE EAST IS BURNING RED!!!

FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!!!!!!

SIEG ZEON!!!!!!!

I remember that day, when I spoke of Spagetti's True Intentions... :uhoh:

And now they BELIEVE!!!! :D

No kidding... My geography textbook actualized to perfection! :eek:

Now... Let's say the Testarossa family intends to go on a holiday and invite most of the OCs, including Kay, along... I smell Glockealousy. IDEA! :D

Hmmm... so the Testarossa's only plan on a short leisure trip... but due to Kay's connections, end up staying in the only 10-STAR Hotel in Ordered Space :uhoh::D

And Glock is gonna find out he has a lot more to add in Kay's profile :heh:


Creator-san: Tsuyoi no Harlem Harem Bushido... :eek: :heh: :bow: :bow:

Erio: There is nothing I cannot seduce!!! :D

USB500
2007-08-24, 05:09
WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Then again, it feels like we're encompassing 3 to 4 thread in one at the same time...

That, dear sir, is because of the endless possibility of crack that is Erio/Cinque comedic romance :3

=======================

:bow:

But personally, I like the airport dash too. After all, it's cliche because it's ain't broke. ;)

It surely is. :D

========================

... and now we understand why the Numbers are so diverse...

Afterall, why settle for one fetish when you can have them all? :D

*radio static*

Woops.

========================

This ain't no ordinary punch boy, no ordinary punch!

FFtw7qW7Vcw

USO DA!!!!!11111one :eek: :eek: :eek:

===================

But still... but still.. :(

To quote one of my non-Nanoha Universe character: "feeling a bit jealous? Envious? That's just your feeling playing around." :uhoh:

==============================

Interdimensional Tourism :nod: Think Dubai, but ten times grander and more decadent. Playground for the filthy rich and powerful of Ordered Space :uhoh::eyespin:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

==========================

He has a high level magic weapon... Someone, or something named...


Bedopear :uhoh:


Holy freaking crap! Not that furry creature!!!!:twitch::twitch::twitch::twitch:

==========================

Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:D

Erio: There is nothing I cannot seduce!!! :D

Erio fans toss their hands into the air, crying hotblooded tears of manly approval as they urge Erio to take his first step.

=============================

The camera is for Nanoha, right?:D

:naughty: yes, yes :naughty:

*dodges misunderstanding Nove's Breaker Liner*


Imagining Yuki doing that is kinda weird. But it's good!:D

Well, I was kinda hoping I could finish the scenario by this weekend, but I'm unsure if I can divide my time between this thread and my exam. :upset:

======================

Only 449 left!!!!!

LOOK!!!! THE EAST IS BURNING RED!!!

FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!!!!!!

SIEG ZEON!!!!!!!

*points to the sky* AND WE MUST PIERCE THE HEAVENS ABOVE WITH OUR DRILLS POWERED BY PURE COURAGE!!!!!!!!!!

rawr. :3

And while we're at it, did somebody ask for alternate form of Fuuko-chan? :D :D :D

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9955/1185823332321lb9.png

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 05:16
To quote one of my non-Nanoha Universe character: "feeling a bit jealous? Envious? That's just your feeling playing around." :uhoh:

*sulks in corner, darkness hanging overhead*:(

Erio fans toss their hands into the air, crying hotblooded tears of manly approval as they urge Erio to take his first step.

GO ERIO GO!!!! :D


Well, I was kinda hoping I could finish the scenario by this weekend, but I'm unsure if I can divide my time between this thread and my exam. :upset:


Exams? What's that? Is it Tasty? :uhoh:

*points to the sky* AND WE MUST PIERCE THE HEAVENS ABOVE WITH OUR DRILLS POWERED BY PURE COURAGE!!!!!!!!!!

rawr. :3

YES!!! BE THE DRILL THAT PIERCES HER HEAVEN!!!!!!

:uhoh::uhoh:

*runs*


And while we're at it, did somebody ask for alternate form of Fuuko-chan? :D :D :D

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9955/1185823332321lb9.png

APPROVED!!!!!!! http://forums.animesuki.com/images/as.global/icons/icon14.gif

:D

Kha
2007-08-24, 05:21
*blade shoots at the Bedopear using astral soul's energy rifle*

Blade: Target TerminatedFirst he blocks IDS, now he kills Pae******?! :twitch: :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

"I'll be back..."

:uhoh: Scratch that last part. :p
@USB: Just goes to show how enraged Hikki can get...looking forward to part II. Let's just hope that Fate can do -something- to quell his silent rage.

@Aaron, I think you said that the Doctor didn't pull any tricks when V had a blade poised at his throat. Well, doctors are crafty...:heh:

@Lowe:


More, good sir. :D :heh:

Yes, E is a know-all about the Snake. And Cinque, alas, is oblivious to what he says. :heh:

Now, another random segment.



"Ah-ha!"

Nanoha was jolted instantaneously out of her deep slumber by the cry that echoed from downstairs. To accompany it, there was a sound that chilled her to the core- the clash of steel on steel. She recognised the voice below as that of V's.

An intruder?!

That thought quickly registered itself in her mind. Leaping out of bed and waking Fate in the process, she dressed herself in a flash, asking Fate to follow suit, the blonde-haired girl clearly concerned by the tone of worry present in her words.

After Fate, she proceeded to wake the Forwards. Despite their complaints, they soon caught word of the commotion going on in the lower hall, and joined them in a hurry, worried just as much as the pair of Aces were. Hayate, who also heard of the occurences, soon appeared beside them.

It took them a while to rush to their destination. Each one of them had their devices at the ready, and tensed themselves as they arrived in a room based in the lower area. bathed in light.

Peering round the door, Nanoha saw V. Seeing no hostiles, a sense of relief washed over her, but when she stepped in further, she was dumbstruck.

V was sparring with the oddest of things- a suit of armor. Where he had managed to find one, Nanoha knew not. Wielding a smallsword, V performed a series of quick strikes at several points on the immobile suit, and spoke to it as if it were faltering:

"Not good enough, my fat metal friend!"

The female mage also noticed the fuzzy sound of an old, antiquated television set playing in the background. Her eyes shifted back to V when he, by misfortune, jammed his blade in the neck of the armor. He struggled to loosen it, and eventually dug it out, falling backwards onto the floor in the process. He rose back up with a kick, and prepared himself again.

This time, he prepared for the coupe de grace and he spun round on his feet and delivered a strike to the suit, lopping the helmet off and sending it rolling along the floor to stop at Nanoha's feet.

Pausing to catch his breath, it was then that V noticed that Nanoha and the others were present. "Oh!", he exclaimed, startled, and found himself at a loss for words. "I, uh...I hope I didn't wake you."

"We just thought that that the base was..." The remainder of Nanoha's reply was cut off by a now amused V.

"Under attack? Heavens, no!"

"Eh, V..." The question posed to him was from Subaru, who looked at him in the same confounded manner as the others. "Just what exactly are you doing?", she inquired.

"Why, practicing!", V answered, merrily, and motioned to the ageing TV set. "Learning from none other than my favorite motion picture- The Count of Monte Cristo. Really a good flick. Infact, pardon my knowledge that it is, indeed, late, but..."

He took a step backwards, and indicated some seats behind him.

"Would you like to view it with me?"



Yet another part movie-to-Nanoha adaptation...yes, call me a thief, but this scene in the film is rather humorous. :heh:For a second there I was wondering why V was fighting Nagato Mach Zwei. Then you said it had a head. Nagato's a suit of armor without a helmet... :heh:

It IS hilarious, though how did the Riot 6 know Hei V? :uhoh:Only 449 left!!!!!

LOOK!!!! THE EAST IS BURNING RED!!!

FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!!!!!!

SIEG ZEON!!!!!!!FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!

SIEG--!

Sieg Zeon? :eyebrow: ALPHA NUMBERS, HASSHIN!!! :D :D :D :D

And now they BELIEVE!!!! :D:nod:

Hmmm... so the Testarossa's only plan on a short leisure trip... but due to Kay's connections, end up staying in the only 10-STAR Hotel in Ordered Space :uhoh::D

And Glock is gonna find out he has a lot more to add in Kay's profile :heh:StrikerS Epilogue Special Omake Episode, CONFIRMED! :D I'll bring the Earthlings along on this one as well! :D :D :D

Erio: There is nothing I cannot seduce!!! :DErio: WE MUST PEIRCE THROUGH THEIR HEAVENS WITH OUR KILL3R 5M1L3!!! :D :D :D :D


*Sophia Unlimited Harisen Works >>>>> Lowe, USB, Erio and Kha*

Saint X
2007-08-24, 05:22
*Blocks Saint X's Inter-Dimensional Slash with The Cresent moon Slash* :p

*Andrei NS (Total Ignorance) is on... ALWAYS ON*

"What Cresent Moon Slash?"

Andrei Damages Target for 999999999999999999999 points!

That is why Andrei is second or third or fourth to Kluzie to H4XX... logic is just a word to him- considering he died once, killed Fangwang- 50 or so times over with one single slash and cursed with the ****h Card and the 'Curse of the Defender' -as long evil is there, he never dies...

It's called the "Thrill of the Hunt" as we close in on Image Thread, the stronghold of Warlock Haru!

Yuunoidas: TONIGHT! WE DINE, IN HELL!!!

RAWR!!! :frustrated:

So did I. :3

USO! He did WHAT?! :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:

Break it up before this turns into a poster to poster fight. :heh:


Kha, you also have control of the PROTOSS MOTHERSHIPS - use them well

FULL SPEED AHEAD! NO WORRIES, NO HINDRANCES!

*points to above post*

"What Crescent Moon Slash?"

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-24, 05:26
@Kha: To find out how the TSAB knew V, you can look at his profile. Simply put, he heard about the Bureau from his father before he was killed by the senior Numbers and Scag when he and his team searched for Relics at Stonehenge/ Not seeing anything hostile about them, V goes there after escaping from Scag's lab via the good ol' "unknown means", and decides to do quiet breaking and entering, knowing that they won't let him past easily. He does have to face Hayate to make her listen to his plight, though.

And it would be pretty odd if V ever faced Nagato Mach Zwei. The old "aim for the head" tactic would be useless against the Headless Trooper. :heh:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 05:27
Nearly forgot this:

Now, another random segment.



"Ah-ha!"

Nanoha was jolted instantaneously out of her deep slumber by the cry that echoed from downstairs. To accompany it, there was a sound that chilled her to the core- the clash of steel on steel. She recognised the voice below as that of V's.

An intruder?!

That thought quickly registered itself in her mind. Leaping out of bed and waking Fate in the process, she dressed herself in a flash, asking Fate to follow suit, the blonde-haired girl clearly concerned by the tone of worry present in her words.

After Fate, she proceeded to wake the Forwards. Despite their complaints, they soon caught word of the commotion going on in the lower hall, and joined them in a hurry, worried just as much as the pair of Aces were. Hayate, who also heard of the occurences, soon appeared beside them.

It took them a while to rush to their destination. Each one of them had their devices at the ready, and tensed themselves as they arrived in a room based in the lower area. bathed in light.

Peering round the door, Nanoha saw V. Seeing no hostiles, a sense of relief washed over her, but when she stepped in further, she was dumbstruck.

V was sparring with the oddest of things- a suit of armor. Where he had managed to find one, Nanoha knew not. Wielding a smallsword, V performed a series of quick strikes at several points on the immobile suit, and spoke to it as if it were faltering:

"Not good enough, my fat metal friend!"

The female mage also noticed the fuzzy sound of an old, antiquated television set playing in the background. Her eyes shifted back to V when he, by misfortune, jammed his blade in the neck of the armor. He struggled to loosen it, and eventually dug it out, falling backwards onto the floor in the process. He rose back up with a kick, and prepared himself again.

This time, he prepared for the coupe de grace and he spun round on his feet and delivered a strike to the suit, lopping the helmet off and sending it rolling along the floor to stop at Nanoha's feet.

Pausing to catch his breath, it was then that V noticed that Nanoha and the others were present. "Oh!", he exclaimed, startled, and found himself at a loss for words. "I, uh...I hope I didn't wake you."

"We just thought that that the base was..." The remainder of Nanoha's reply was cut off by a now amused V.

"Under attack? Heavens, no!"

"Eh, V..." The question posed to him was from Subaru, who looked at him in the same confounded manner as the others. "Just what exactly are you doing?", she inquired.

"Why, practicing!", V answered, merrily, and motioned to the ageing TV set. "Learning from none other than my favorite motion picture- The Count of Monte Cristo. Really a good flick. Infact, pardon my knowledge that it is, indeed, late, but..."

He took a step backwards, and indicated some seats behind him.

"Would you like to view it with me?"



Yet another part movie-to-Nanoha adaptation...yes, call me a thief, but this scene in the film is rather humorous. :heh:

Wait a sec... in this version, the entire RF6 is with V? :twitch:

Although using the Armor sparring scene, plus super classic Count of Monte Cristo = PURE GOLD :D:D

FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!

SIEG--!

Sieg Zeon? :eyebrow: ALPHA NUMBERS, HASSHIN!!! :D :D :D :D


Hey, Zeon is awesome :D

StrikerS Epilogue Special Omake Episode, CONFIRMED! :D I'll bring the Earthlings along on this one as well! :D :D :D

Suzuka and Arisa? OMFG EPIXNESS INCOMING!!!! :D:D

And to think they're underpresented here in the OC :heh:


Erio: WE MUST PEIRCE THROUGH THEIR HEAVENS WITH OUR KILL3R 5M1L3!!! :D :D :D :D

AS LONG AS WE BREAK THROUGH, WE SHALL BE VICTORIOUS!!!!

GIGA!!!!!! OR****!!!!! BREAKER!!!!!!!!

*runs from snipers, only to get hit by homing harisen* :eyespin:

Dream_Traveller
2007-08-24, 05:30
@Lowe: Well, it's a concept. I don't see much wrong with dragging the whole of RF6 to witness what V's doing, but...subject to change. :heh:

I also wondered whether or not to use his monologue when he greets the Aces for the first time.

:uhoh:

*Runs.*

USB500
2007-08-24, 05:32
@USB: Just goes to show how enraged Hikki can get...looking forward to part II. Let's just hope that Fate can do -something- to quell his silent rage.

Will do. :)



"Ah-ha!"

Nanoha was jolted instantaneously out of her deep slumber by the cry that echoed from downstairs. To accompany it, there was a sound that chilled her to the core- the clash of steel on steel. She recognised the voice below as that of V's.

An intruder?!

That thought quickly registered itself in her mind. Leaping out of bed and waking Fate in the process, she dressed herself in a flash, asking Fate to follow suit, the blonde-haired girl clearly concerned by the tone of worry present in her words.

After Fate, she proceeded to wake the Forwards. Despite their complaints, they soon caught word of the commotion going on in the lower hall, and joined them in a hurry, worried just as much as the pair of Aces were. Hayate, who also heard of the occurences, soon appeared beside them.

It took them a while to rush to their destination. Each one of them had their devices at the ready, and tensed themselves as they arrived in a room based in the lower area. bathed in light.

Peering round the door, Nanoha saw V. Seeing no hostiles, a sense of relief washed over her, but when she stepped in further, she was dumbstruck.

V was sparring with the oddest of things- a suit of armor. Where he had managed to find one, Nanoha knew not. Wielding a smallsword, V performed a series of quick strikes at several points on the immobile suit, and spoke to it as if it were faltering:

"Not good enough, my fat metal friend!"

The female mage also noticed the fuzzy sound of an old, antiquated television set playing in the background. Her eyes shifted back to V when he, by misfortune, jammed his blade in the neck of the armor. He struggled to loosen it, and eventually dug it out, falling backwards onto the floor in the process. He rose back up with a kick, and prepared himself again.

This time, he prepared for the coupe de grace and he spun round on his feet and delivered a strike to the suit, lopping the helmet off and sending it rolling along the floor to stop at Nanoha's feet.

Pausing to catch his breath, it was then that V noticed that Nanoha and the others were present. "Oh!", he exclaimed, startled, and found himself at a loss for words. "I, uh...I hope I didn't wake you."

"We just thought that that the base was..." The remainder of Nanoha's reply was cut off by a now amused V.

"Under attack? Heavens, no!"

"Eh, V..." The question posed to him was from Subaru, who looked at him in the same confounded manner as the others. "Just what exactly are you doing?", she inquired.

"Why, practicing!", V answered, merrily, and motioned to the ageing TV set. "Learning from none other than my favorite motion picture- The Count of Monte Cristo. Really a good flick. Infact, pardon my knowledge that it is, indeed, late, but..."

He took a step backwards, and indicated some seats behind him.

"Would you like to view it with me?"

Yet another part movie-to-Nanoha adaptation...yes, call me a thief, but this scene in the film is rather humorous. :heh:

Uh, oh. I can only hope V doesn't mean the other way by..,.. watching movie. :uhoh:

====================

*sulks in corner, darkness hanging overhead*:(

*pats shoulder* I understand your feeling. I understand. :sad:

YES!!! BE THE DRILL THAT PIERCES HER HEAVEN!!!!!!

:uhoh::uhoh:

*runs*

...her heavens? :eyebrow:

APPROVED!!!!!!! http://forums.animesuki.com/images/as.global/icons/icon14.gif

:D

Looks like her new design will be used in future DOAWT installments :D

======================

*Sophia Unlimited Harisen Works >>>>> Lowe, USB, Erio and Kha*

*re-emerges* Alas, Sophia the Magnificient! I HAS ZA PAWAH OF ZA WARUDO!!! :eek:

*flashes of future Erio/Cinque events appear in the air, as USB500 laughs maniacally -- also shown is crazy visions of Erio & Cinque as a wedding couple*

Oops. Discard that vision. :uhoh:

*runs from Takeru's L33t sniping technique*

EDIT:
@Lowe: Well, it's a concept. I don't see much wrong with dragging the whole of RF6 to witness what V's doing, but...subject to change. :heh:

I also wondered whether or not to use his monologue when he greets the Aces for the first time.

:uhoh:

*Runs.*

Oh, yes please do :D :D :uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 06:04
:eek::eek:

CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!


I'll write that story after StrikerS ends :D



Erio: Think about it... always, the boy and the girl never had that kind of intentions, and always end up in these embarrasing positions by accident don't they?
Nanoha: If you think about it...
Fate: You're right...
Hayate: How can I let myself be fooled by a simple trope?

*Aces leave*

Erio: *to Cinque* Ehem... now that's taken care of...

Where were we? :D:D:D

OOOoooooohhhh.... NICE one :D

It's called the "Thrill of the Hunt" as we close in on Image Thread, the stronghold of Warlock Haru!

Damn straight! I'm going to name him as one of Ivan. A Roricorn's accomplices! Right below Bedopear!

(That's right... B-E-L-O-W)

Hell, I'll even have Jeno frame him for it if I have to... Oh yeah, I've introduce him soon, he's catching the first plane here... Red eye flight.



Yuunoidas: TONIGHT! WE DINE, IN HELL!!!

RAWR!!! :frustrated:



I was hoping we'll be more successful than that :heh:


So did I. :3

Eh? It's more popular than I thought :heh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 06:11
:eek::eek:
CARO, LULU, CINQUE!!!! RUN!!!! SAVE YOURSELVES!!!!!!!!



Oh shyt--NIGERO! Hide the lolis! Shinso den!



:twitch::twitch::twitch:



Holy freaking crap! Not that furry creature!!!!:twitch::twitch::twitch::twitch:


Btw, did I just sent this entire thread into DEFCON 2 with that declaration ? :heh:

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 06:16
FFtw7qW7Vcw


:twitch::twitch::twitch:

Only 449 left!!!!!

LOOK!!!! THE EAST IS BURNING RED!!!

FOR KING YUUNODAS!!!!!!!!

SIEG ZEON!!!!!!!

Man, it makes me want to go WRATH OF AARON mode and roar as well.:heh:

MIERU!!!
TOUHOU WA,
AKAKU MOETEIRU!!!
:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

Hmmm... so the Testarossa's only plan on a short leisure trip... but due to Kay's connections, end up staying in the only 10-STAR Hotel in Ordered Space :uhoh::D

And Glock is gonna find out he has a lot more to add in Kay's profile :heh:

When can we see it?:D

Well, I was kinda hoping I could finish the scenario by this weekend, but I'm unsure if I can divide my time between this thread and my exam. :upset:

I have my exams next week too.:upset: Good luck to the both of us, I guess...

And while we're at it, did somebody ask for alternate form of Fuuko-chan? :D :D :D

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9955/1185823332321lb9.png

Approved!:D

*Andrei NS (Total Ignorance) is on... ALWAYS ON*

"What Cresent Moon Slash?"

Andrei Damages Target for 999999999999999999999 points!

:D:D:D

That is why Andrei is second or third or fourth to Kluzie to H4XX... logic is just a word to him- considering he died once, killed Fangwang- 50 or so times over with one single slash and cursed with the ****h Card and the 'Curse of the Defender' -as long evil is there, he never dies...

Wait! Then aside from Fangwang, who's third?!:eek:

BTW, how're the other scenarios?

@Kha: To find out how the TSAB knew V, you can look at his profile. Simply put, he heard about the Bureau from his father before he was killed by the senior Numbers and Scag when he and his team searched for Relics at Stonehenge/ Not seeing anything hostile about them, V goes there after escaping from Scag's lab via the good ol' "unknown means", and decides to do quiet breaking and entering, knowing that they won't let him past easily. He does have to face Hayate to make her listen to his plight, though.

But I think we've hit a bit of a snag there.:heh: Seeing how good V is up-close, Hayate couldn't hold him off by herself because she's lacking in the close-quarter combat department.:uhoh:

In any case, that was one hilarious scenario!:D I see that V gets along very well with the rest of RF6.:D


Damn straight! I'm going to name him as one of Ivan. A Roricorn's accomplices! Right below Bedopear!

(That's right... B-E-L-O-W)

Hell, I'll even have Jeno frame him for it if I have to... Oh yeah, I've introduce him soon, he's catching the first plane here... Red eye flight.


Speaking of which, he defiled another Yuunoha artwork.:eyebrow:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 06:27
Speaking of which, he defiled another Yuunoha artwork.:eyebrow:

I've sent my Firebirds to rain "Brimstone" Plasma missiles on his party...

His pm to me shows that he didn't like it at all :D

After all, I found his 'heel'... :D

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 06:31
*re-emerges* Alas, Sophia the Magnificient! I HAS ZA PAWAH OF ZA WARUDO!!! :eek:

*flashes of future Erio/Cinque events appear in the air, as USB500 laughs maniacally -- also shown is crazy visions of Erio & Cinque as a wedding couple*

Oops. Discard that vision. :uhoh:

*runs from Takeru's L33t sniping technique*


NOOOOO!!! SAVE THE VISION!!!!! WE MUST SEE IT!!!!! :eek:

I'll write that story after StrikerS ends :D


Righteousness! :)

Damn straight! I'm going to name him as one of Ivan. A Roricorn's accomplices! Right below Bedopear!

(That's right... B-E-L-O-W)

Hell, I'll even have Jeno frame him for it if I have to... Oh yeah, I've introduce him soon, he's catching the first plane here... Red eye flight.

Is this... a declaration of war? :twitch:

The Dark God has spoken!!!! :bow:

Btw, did I just sent this entire thread into DEFCON 2 with that declaration ? :heh:

SCRAMBLE DA!!!!!

:Man, it makes me want to go WRATH OF AARON mode and roar as well.:heh:

MIERU!!!
TOUHOU WA,
AKAKU MOETEIRU!!!
:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:


Nani, Naaaaaaniiiiiii?!?!?!?! :twitch: What is going on here? :heh:


When can we see it?:D


Not sure on the actual Scenario itself, since that's Kha's call :heh:

But... here's a preview of the story arc:



-77th Administrated World, “Zubaida”
World Capital City “Ziya”-

Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya, Zubaida’s City of Light and Splendor, and the central hub for interdimensional tourism and trade in Ordered Space.

A city lined with a seemingly endless row of silver skyscrapers, their lavishly decorated organic forms standing tall and proud, awash in bright, colorful neon lights that drowns the night sky into insignificance, supplanted by ever-shifting, always dancing colors of the rainbow.

An elegant amalgam of steel, concrete, marble and glass that overlook the spotless shiny chrome sidewalks, lined with exquisite shops and humble stalls filled with a neverending mass of clean, sharp and smartly clad populace that provides the perplexing organized cacophony of the atmosphere permeated with the bustling symphony of bells, whistles, the stampede of masses of shuffling feet and of individual conversation that merge and combine into a unbearably loud yet indispensable din. The cat calls, sirens, the laughter, the impeccable Orchestra of music that swamps your thoughts to a halt, and invites you to take it all in and lose yourself and your soul in the ceaseless wondrous activities.

The roads, filled with the elegant beautiful aerodynamic curves of the latest automobiles, brandishing their polished finishes, their golden rims, shamelessly flaunting their much sought after trademarks.

The center of unlimited opulence and shameless unrivalled decadence, and the only venue of choice for the richest, most famous and most influentially powerful personalities alive to spend their nigh-infinite riches. An overly extravagant whirlpool of wealth and luxury, with the seductively alluring promise of unlimited worldly pleasures and decadence.

But such a simple description could not even begin do justice to this breathtaking place.



:heh:

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 06:36
I've sent my Firebirds to rain "Brimstone" Plasma missiles on his party...

His pm to me shows that he didn't like it at all :D

After all, I found his 'heel'... :D

Hehe. *THUMBS UP*:D:D:D

:topicoff:
About time.:D It's not really polite for him to classify non-NXF supporters as a bunch of plainly discriminative people.:rolleyes: Tolerance my butt.



Nani, Naaaaaaniiiiiii?!?!?!?! :twitch: What is going on here? :heh:

"Look, the East is Burning Red!":heh:
Just did the untranslated version from Master Asia.:D

Not sure on the actual Scenario itself, since that's Kha's call :heh:

But... here's a preview of the story arc:



-77th Administrated World, “Zubaida”
World Capital City “Ziya”-

Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya, Zubaida’s City of Light and Splendor, and the central hub for interdimensional tourism and trade in Ordered Space.

A city lined with a seemingly endless row of silver skyscrapers, their lavishly decorated organic forms standing tall and proud, awash in bright, colorful neon lights that drowns the night sky into insignificance, supplanted by ever-shifting, always dancing colors of the rainbow.

An elegant amalgam of steel, concrete, marble and glass that overlook the spotless shiny chrome sidewalks, lined with exquisite shops and humble stalls filled with a neverending mass of clean, sharp and smartly clad populace that provides the perplexing organized cacophony of the atmosphere permeated with the bustling symphony of bells, whistles, the stampede of masses of shuffling feet and of individual conversation that merge and combine into a unbearably loud yet indispensable din. The cat calls, sirens, the laughter, the impeccable Orchestra of music that swamps your thoughts to a halt, and invites you to take it all in and lose yourself and your soul in the ceaseless wondrous activities.

The roads, filled with the elegant beautiful aerodynamic curves of the latest automobiles, brandishing their polished finishes, their golden rims, shamelessly flaunting their much sought after trademarks.

The center of unlimited opulence and shameless unrivalled decadence, and the only venue of choice for the richest, most famous and most influentially powerful personalities alive to spend their nigh-infinite riches. An overly extravagant whirlpool of wealth and luxury, with the seductively alluring promise of unlimited worldly pleasures and decadence.

But such a simple description could not even begin do justice to this breathtaking place.



:heh:

:eek::bow:
I wish I had your skill of description...

Kha
2007-08-24, 06:55
@Kha: To find out how the TSAB knew V, you can look at his profile. Simply put, he heard about the Bureau from his father before he was killed by the senior Numbers and Scag when he and his team searched for Relics at Stonehenge/ Not seeing anything hostile about them, V goes there after escaping from Scag's lab via the good ol' "unknown means", and decides to do quiet breaking and entering, knowing that they won't let him past easily. He does have to face Hayate to make her listen to his plight, though.

And it would be pretty odd if V ever faced Nagato Mach Zwei. The old "aim for the head" tactic would be useless against the Headless Trooper. :heh:Yes indeed.

I just realized that I never really released Nagato's blueprints. Hmm...

Remember that Nagato's body had no head, and yet she could "blank stare" people...

She was "significantly different" from the Zakum armors, as she was a prototype...

Having said that, with new knowledge gained this afternoon, this came to mind:http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/38/Gurren_Lagann_-_Gurren.jpgI was watching GL over Liingo's shoulder in the clubroom today... :uhoh:
Hey, Zeon is awesome :DYeah, but I prefer the idea of the Alpha Numbers (even though I never played SRW :heh:)? :heh:

Suzuka and Arisa? OMFG EPIXNESS INCOMING!!!! :D:D

And to think they're underpresented here in the OC :heh:Then we should have MOAR!

MAHOU SHOUJO DYNAMIC DUO!

BURNING ARISA, SHINING SUZUKA, SHOUNIN!!!

:D

AS LONG AS WE BREAK THROUGH, WE SHALL BE VICTORIOUS!!!!

GIGA!!!!!! OR****!!!!! BREAKER!!!!!!!!

*runs from snipers, only to get hit by homing harisen* :eyespin:I SEE IT! I SEE IT NOW!!! ANIKIIII!!! :D :D :D :D

Damn straight! I'm going to name him as one of Ivan. A Roricorn's accomplices! Right below Bedopear!

(That's right... B-E-L-O-W)

Hell, I'll even have Jeno frame him for it if I have to... Oh yeah, I've introduce him soon, he's catching the first plane here... Red eye flight.YES! DOWN WITH--

Let's not do character assassination, otherwise we'll be just like him. :heh:

But a reference doesn't count as character assasssination IMO. :D

Red eye flight? :confused:
Btw, did I just sent this entire thread into DEFCON 2 with that declaration ? :heh:*looks around as Tokyo-3 sinks into the ground*

Yeah I think you have... :heh:

Man, it makes me want to go WRATH OF AARON mode and roar as well.:heh:

MIERU!!!
TOUHOU WA,
AKAKU MOETEIRU!!!
:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:Attaboy... Let it all out... Feels good to go crazy and h4xx once in a while ne? :uhoh:

When can we see it? :DNot so fast? I've got tests. :heh:



I have my exams next week too.:upset: Good luck to the both of us, I guess...Yeah it's that time again... WE MUST DOWN IMAGE THREAD SOON OTHERWISE WE'LL NOT HAVE ANOTHER CHANCE TO MUCH LATER!!! XD

Speaking of which, he defiled another Yuunoha artwork.:eyebrow:Yeah, especially when we don't deface NxF. He's insisting on making it a direct war! :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:




~~~New scenario timeline extended~~~

Just a fast [Mindburst!]

"Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya..." screamed a speakerphone.

"Yay!!!" Screamed Allison as she tugged Caro down the gangway. Erio ran after them, and even the usually stoic Hiro was wearing a faint smile.

"Say, Fate?" Kha said to the lady with her arm hooked around his.

"Hmm?"

"I... er... never been on a tour before... :heh:"

"Then I shall explain to you the mission objectives. :)"

"Yes Ma'am! :D"That mission objectives joke was inspired by Kha's, and subsequently Erio's "First Date" scenarios planned by Hayate. :D

Thanks for giving me a wonderful vision, Lowe! *swoon*

KBTKaiser
2007-08-24, 07:01
*crawls out of the double mountain pile of Schoolwork and Bluecheesium*

Action scene take 6...go!

It was yet another standoff as the Aces, Forwards and Ginga watched on. Subaru may have been brimming with excitement, but Teana was starting to pale. Ginga noticed this slightly as she decided to sit down next to Teana.

Ginga: Something bothering you, Teana?

Teana: Oh, Ginga-san. It's nothing, but...

Ginga: You're thinking about the possible scenarios if they go all out?

Teana: Yes...

Ginga: I'm sure Retsu-kun will try to keep it under control. They've been together through thick and thin for so long, after all.

Teana: I guess...

Back on the battlefield...

Retsugou: Ikuze!

Goukon: Koi!

S: BUSTER KICK!

M: TORNADO SMASHER!

Energy Arc met explosive kick as the Sonic Buster Kick was cancelled out by the Magnum Tornado Smasher, but the action did not end as the two brothers were already clashing before the explosion shockwave even expanded as Sonic and Magnum struck each other from countering roundhouses, trading sweeps and spin kicks, and finally clashing straight on at the wheels as both the impact and the shockwave blew the two away from each other, leaving scorching skidmarks in the ground.

Retsugou: Look's like we're tied again...

Goukon: What are you talking about, Aniki? I'm one up.

Retsugou: Then how about we take it from the top?

Goukon: Fine with me.

Retsugou: SONIC!

Goukon: MAGNUM!

R/G: Ichishiki, hatsudou!

A flare of energy erupted as the command was yelled. Ginga and Subaru both looked on in surprise as Teana seemed to pale even more.

Ginga: Ichishiki!

Subaru: Kore, chotto yabai kamo... (This kinda seems bad...)

Teana: Iie, kanari mazui desu. (No, it's really bad.)

Fate: Care to fill us in?

Ginga: The Seimonji family arts are not limited to any one aspect. Their extensive family has created a vast variety of unique styles over the years. Retsugou and Goukon are, for lack of other words, geniuses. Two of them together represent all the blood and sweat of generations of battle style development. What you had saw was their favored style. Now you will see the others they attained true mastery over.

Subaru: After Ichishiki fights, they always take so long to heal...

Nanoha: Do we stop them?

Teana: Unless taichou-tachi get their limiter released and forcibly restrain them, the only other way is what they're doing, which is burning the adrenaline off...

Back on the battlefield, the energy ruptured died down as the transformation finished...

Sonic/Magnum: Mode one transition complete...

Two waves cleared the dust as the brothers were seen off their roller blades and wielding Nodachis...

Retsugou: ...Seimonjiryuu Shissokuken...

Goukon: ...Seimonjiryuu Bakusokuken...

R/G: MAIRU!!!

S/M: SONIC/MAGNUM SABER!

Uh, yeah, I was agonizing over how crazy these two would get in terms of versatility, but given the levels of bluecheesium being thrown around, I guess restraint is thrown out the window. :frustrated::heh::eyespin:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-08-24, 07:04
I'll need to run off first :heh: (brb 3-4 hours)

Jeno will be here within 4 hours time :heh: Problem with Air traffic control... :heh:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 07:12
:topicoff:
About time.:D It's not really polite for him to classify non-NXF supporters as a bunch of plainly discriminative people.:rolleyes: Tolerance my butt.


Not really that riled when it comes to Haru's antics... but seeing defile that Nanoha image with blood was just... wrong :upset:



"Look, the East is Burning Red!":heh:
Just did the untranslated version from Master Asia.:D

HOLY YES!!!!!

Thanks for the romanji :D


:eek::bow:
I wish I had your skill of description...

:heh:

Truth be told, the only place I've actually been in that loosely resembles this description is Roxas Boulevard :heh: Even overseas, the cities (Sydney, St. Petersburg) I've been to have never felt... alive for some reason :heh:

Yes indeed.

I just realized that I never really released Nagato's blueprints. Hmm...

Remember that Nagato's body had no head, and yet she could "blank stare" people...

She was "significantly different" from the Zakum armors, as she was a prototype...

Having said that, with new knowledge gained this afternoon, this came to mind:http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/38/Gurren_Lagann_-_Gurren.jpgI was watching GL over Liingo's shoulder in the clubroom today... :uhoh:


GURREN!!!!!!!!!!

*cries manly tears*

All Nagato Mach Zwei needs now is a "Lagann" to give her a head :heh:

And... I welcome you brother with open arms into the Great Gurren Squad!!! :D:D:D

Yeah, but I prefer the idea of the Alpha Numbers (even though I never played SRW :heh:)? :heh:

Yep, it would be preferred if your group consisted of the most powerful Super and Real Mecha known to man piloted by the best and most 1337 pilots ever :D:D:D


Then we should have MOAR!

MAHOU SHOUJO DYNAMIC DUO!

BURNING ARISA, SHINING SUZUKA, SHOUNIN!!!

:D

THE TIME HAS COME TO SHOW WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF!!!!!

ARISA!!!! SUZUKA!!!! HONTOU NO CHIKARA O MISETE YARUZE!!!!!


~~~New scenario timeline extended~~~

Just a fast [Mindburst!]

"Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya..." screamed a speakerphone.

"Yay!!!" Screamed Allison as she tugged Caro down the gangway. Erio ran after them, and even the usually stoic Hiro was wearing a faint smile.

"Say, Fate?" Kha said to the lady with her arm hooked around his.

"Hmm?"

"I... er... never been on a tour before... :heh:"

"Then I shall explain to you the mission objectives. :)"

"Yes Ma'am! :D"That mission objectives joke was inspired by Kha's, and subsequently Erio's "First Date" scenarios planned by Hayate. :D

Thanks for giving me a wonderful vision, Lowe! *swoon*

MISSION START!!!!! :D Sir! Permission to be briefed on Mission Objectives! :D

And your welcome :D

--------------------

Here's a snippet for the planned upcoming Arc, which further shows more of Kay's unusual connections:



“Have you no respect you commoner! This is his Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-“

He stretched out his arm, shutting up his bodyguard.

“She already knows my person. And you would serve me well by paying her your utmost respect, for she is an honored guest of mine!”

His voice, meek yet carrying the power of a king, silenced all who heard it. And in a display that shocked all onlookers nearby, he kneeled down at me, took my right hand, and kissed it.

“And one to whom my life and my current position is greatly indebted.

After all these years, It is an honor, and my pleasure to see you again after all this time…Kaylin.”

Still flattering me with his smooth words and gentlemanly demeanor. He means well though, and he’s also dropped the formality around me. Not like I respected formality in the first place, but at least he respects the fact that I don’t.

“No need for that, it’s also my pleasure… Karim.”

Kha
2007-08-24, 07:31
GURREN!!!!!!!!!!

*cries manly tears*

All Nagato Mach Zwei needs now is a "Lagann" to give her a head :heh:

And... I welcome you brother with open arms into the Great Gurren Squad!!! :D:D:DANIKIIIII!!! :D

Man what's gotten into me all of a sudden? :heh:

Btw, I wasn't really serious about Gurren as Nagato's physical form, but when I remember that Nagato transforms into the cockpit of DaiStahlMut, I felt, with this form, she' better off forming the head...

Which means the face of DaiStahlMut is... :uhoh:

Hope you guys don't mind me doing this, for defiling the Great Kamina by associating him with my humble Super Robo wannabe...

Which reminds me! LineBackers Full Drive is...?! :eek: OMFG!!! It's! IT'S!!!

*dies of hot blood pressure*

Yep, it would be preferred if your group consisted of the most powerful Super and Real Mecha known to man piloted by the best and most 1337 pilots ever :D:D:D:heh:

And that Kha's Daddy Amuro.

(runs)

SUMIMASE!!! I'VE DEFILED ANOTHER GREAT MAN!!! :(

THE TIME HAS COME TO SHOW WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF!!!!!

ARISA!!!! SUZUKA!!!! HONTOU NO CHIKARA O MISETE YARUZE!!!!!If only I knew where those girls are in timeline, I'd bring them in. In fact, I've got a StrikerS side story for them and the other shafted characters:

Ferret May Scry :p

(keeps on running)
MISSION START!!!!! :D Sir! Permission to be briefed on Mission Objectives! :D

And your welcome :DIf you got the time and ideas, or even if you just want to, how about you do it? Cos I've got none of time and little of the other. :heh:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 07:38
ANIKIIIII!!! :D

Man what's gotten into me all of a sudden? :heh:

Btw, I wasn't really serious about Gurren as Nagato's physical form, but when I remember that Nagato transforms into the cockpit of DaiStahlMut, I felt, with this form, she' better off forming the head...

Which means the face of DaiStahlMut is... :uhoh:

Hope you guys don't mind me doing this, for defiling the Great Kamina by associating him with my humble Super Robo wannabe...

Which reminds me! LineBackers Full Drive is...?! :eek: OMFG!!! It's! IT'S!!!

*dies of hot blood pressure*


No, you are most fit to be the messenger of his Great Lord Kamina, and you do him service by using his most manly carriage!!!!! :D

And yep, Linebacker Full Drive is based off...

*unable to continue overwhelmed by hotblooded manly pressure*


:heh:

And that Kha's Daddy Amuro.

(runs)

SUMIMASE!!! I'VE DEFILED ANOTHER GREAT MAN!!! :(

Wait a minute, what happened to Kiritsugu? :heh:

If only I knew where those girls are in timeline, I'd bring them in. In fact, I've got a StrikerS side story for them and the other shafted characters:

Ferret May Scry :p

(keeps on running)

:eek: The title alone has set my blood pumping with Cool and Awesome :D:D:D


If you got the time and ideas, or even if you just want to, how about you do it? Cos I've got none of time and little of the other. :heh:

:heh::heh: I'm not sure, but you seem to have more of a grasp on the scenario than I do :heh:

Edited my post above with a snippet though :heh:

Kha
2007-08-24, 07:54
Here's a snippet for the planned upcoming Arc, which further shows more of Kay's unusual connections:



“Have you no respect you commoner! This is his Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-“

He stretched out his arm, shutting up his bodyguard.

“She already knows my person. And you would serve me well by paying her your utmost respect, for she is an honored guest of mine!”

His voice, meek yet carrying the power of a king, silenced all who heard it. And in a display that shocked all onlookers nearby, he kneeled down at me, took my right hand, and kissed it.

“And one to whom my life and my current position is greatly indebted.

After all these years, It is an honor, and my pleasure to see you again after all this time…Kaylin.”

Still flattering me with his smooth words and gentlemanly demeanor. He means well though, and he’s also dropped the formality around me. Not like I respected formality in the first place, but at least he respects the fact that I don’t.

“No need for that, it’s also my pleasure… Karim.”Ooooh, we SEE indeed. :D I wonder where is this gonna fit? :)

No, you are most fit to be the messenger of his Great Lord Kamina, and you do him service by using his most manly carriage!!!!! :D

And yep, Linebacker Full Drive is based off...

*unable to continue overwhelmed by hotblooded manly pressure*I WILL DO MY BEST FOR THE GREAT GURREN SQUAD!!! :D

Boy its really hot in here. :heh:

Wait a minute, what happened to Kiritsugu? :heh:I meant that Kha is Daddy Amuro, as there is also Junior Amuro. :uhoh: In fact, Kha will come to adopt most of his first batch of junior apprentices. Yoshi Krueger is the only one who has a family of his own.

:eek: The title alone has set my blood pumping with Cool and Awesome :D:D:DDante = Yuuno, even has a Big Freaking Sword and, like Sophia, hands for guns. :uhoh:
Morrison = Chrono, always bringing Yuuno work.
Patty = Loli-Arf!

Lady = Arisa, GDI secret contract mage. So secret, no one outside of the Aces' circle knows.
Trish = Suzuka, the other SCM on GDI payroll.

Shall Yuuno be friends, almost twins, with Jeno? :uhoh:

Now to figure out why Yuuno would answer the phone with "Hello, Ferret May Scry..."

:eyespin:
:heh::heh: I'm not sure, but you seem to have more of a grasp on the scenario than I do :heh:

Edited my post above with a snippet though :heh:No problem, I can always match everyone else. And I'm afraid of screwing up the Omake... :heh:

Keroko
2007-08-24, 08:02
"We're moving through the line-field, it seems to be... riddled with Backlog mines. Hold on to your controlls and whatch where you're flying. This might get a little rough." The boy grinned. "But any easier, and it just wouldn't be any fun."

Amidst the chaotic argument between Riot Force 6 and the Numbers, Quattro approached Hikki and knelt next to him. “What’s your name?” she asked. (The quarrel stopped, and the two groups, surprised by Quattro’s advance move).

Hikki stopped crying. Nervously he looked up at the eyeglasses woman. “………”

“Come on,” Quattro said. “Don’t be afraid. I won’t yell at you.”

“Really?” he asked.

“Yes, really,” Quattro answered.

Hikki wiped off his tears. Although still sobbing, he braved on and looked up at Quattro. “Yu… Yutaro…” he mumbled.

Quattro giggled and softly patted Hikki’s head. “Yosh, yosh. Don’t be afraid, Yutaro. We aren’t scary people.” Hikki nervously glanced back and forth between the Numbers and Riot Force, before he looked back at Quattro. “See?”

“I… I want my mommy…” he mumbled and cried again (again, the two groups resumed their argument and blamed each other for making the boy weep). “I want to find my mommy…”

Cinque approached the boy. The only thing she did to comfort him was to offer him a candy stick. “Here.” This time, Hikki stopped crying and stared at the eye-patched lady. “If you stop crying, we’ll look for your mother,” she said and patted his head.

(Nove was burning in jealousy. “That boy… how dare he flirts with Cinque-neesama…”)

“Yutaro, we promise we’ll help you,” Quattro added. “So stop crying. Yutaro is a strong kid, isn’t it?”

“Are… you sure?”

Cinque and Quattro nodded. “Yes, we are,” Quattro answered.

Is Hikki just playing Bond here? :uhoh:

*runs for cover*

Shouta-Hikki gets away with it, I see. Lucky bastard.

*After seeing that footage*
Kyla: Yup... they did learn from me...

"I don't care if you just had an ecchi moment! Get here now!"

"You're on standby mode! Release your Device now!!!"

"Your Assessment scores just came in... and it is not good!!!"

"You're on overbreak! get back here now!!"

"Guys, meet your new Combat Analyst, James... he's strict in regards to the AX stratagem..."

"Fill your stratagem trackers after each session!!! no end of period, end of session!"

"There are three things i hate... low CA scores, low FCR (First Combat Resolution) and abscences!"

Kyla: what is important is not how they begin with, it's how they end up is what matters- if you need to reform them from the start, do it! we need results, not promises and primadonnas that need spoiling before acting...

More training from hell? :heh: Nanoha and Keroko tend to be strict only when enforcing discipline, though. The scary part is that they won't do the shouting millitary commander routine, they will keep being polite and smile.

Unless you reach the end of either's considerable patience limit, hence the 90 seconds. :D

KEROKO-CHAN!!!:D When can we see the finished product?:D

I would love to say today, but I know myself, so I'll say somewhere tommorow. :heh:

*~cue Driver's High~*

GREAT TEACHER TAKAMACHI :D

If you need DISCIPLINE instilled into some lowlifes FAST, none are better than Deathwing and the White Devil :D

And the entire scenario reminded me of GTO :D

Fear can be a powerfull tool, if employed effectively. :D

INTO THE DUSK
CHAPTER V, PART I

// MC 0085, Avalon Cemetery //

Silence enveloped the cemetery again. Hikki was sleeping, tired after speaking out everything inside his memory. His head was rested comfortably upon Fate’s lap, completely unaware of snows that were brushed off his face by Fate’s hand. Vivio was still not aware of the two people, completely smitten by the thick snow she was wading through and Fuuko she was chasing after.

Fate closed his eyes. What happened after the unfaithful day, as she remembered, would forever be carved inside of her as the most disheartening event of all. She was the only person to have witnessed his demonic power, and she was the only person to have knocked him back to sanity.

She was the only person whom the berserk Gale Whistler ever had faith on her.

Tears dropped onto his scarred cheek. “Hikki…” she murmured in silence. “…why would you have to go this far…?”

-x-x-x-x-x-

Jail Scaglietti’s hideout, which Riot Force 6 had been previously assigned to raid, was completely obliterated. Bodies were scattered in pieces, heady stench of flesh was abound, and electronic equipments were shattered into smithereens. The team could not believe what they were seeing, and the first thing their mind was asking was: “who could have done this?”

“We’re supposed to arrest Scaglietti, but not something like this…” Hayate murmured.

“What really happened?” Shamal asked.

“I know not,” Armstrong replied, “but I do know someone has come here before us.”

“So, the Riot Force is finally here…”

The unit turned around. What they saw was not the kind of sight their rationale wanted to accept: walking out of the hideout’s entrance door was Hikki, soaked in blood and enveloped in murderous aura like nothing before. In his hands were two Chinese falchions, also coated in fresh blood, identical to the colour of his eyes.

“Hikki… did you do this?” Fate murmured.

He continued walking. His trip ended only after he arrived at a grass patch outside the hideout. Without saying anything, he glanced to Riot Force 6, and clutched the falchions’ hilt.

“This is the only way…”

“What way?! Killing all the scientists and murdering Scaglietti yourself? Hikki, have you gone insane?!” Keroko yelled out.

Hikki’s response was to toss a Reppuken at Riot Force 6. Alexandra deftly blocked the projectile with Avalon, giving Armstrong the opportunity to fire a Sacred Edge. It hit, but did not make him bulge.

“My life is already empty. There is nothing you can do about it.”

He charged at Riot Force 6. Signum swiftly jumped forward, parrying his swordplay with Levantine. “What the hell you think you’re doing?” the Wolkenritter demanded and kicked him away from the group.

“Nothing.” He charged at Riot Force 6, and Signum again blocked his attacks. “Stand back. You know you won’t stand a chance.”

“Do you think I’ll consider your suggestion?” Signum chided.

He delivered a punch onto Signum’s midsection. The Wolkenritter was knocked out cold, and fell onto the ground. “Why, yes you should,” he replied.

“Signum!” Vita was caught in fury and fired Schwalbe Fliegen at Hikki. The Gale Whistler effortlessly dodged the projectiles, like they were made of nothing. “Teme!” Now burning in wrath, Vita chased after him and charged with Raketen Hammer. “EAT THIS!”

“Useless.”

He dodged the rocket-powered hammer. He spun on his feet, delivered a roundhouse kick and sent Vita crashing onto Hayate and Shamal.

“Hikki! Stop attacking your team-mates!”

He paid no attention to the plea, choosing instead to fire dozens of Reppuken at Riot Force 6. The attack continued, and it went on as he jumped into the air and barraged the team with aerial Reppukens.

“We can’t do anything about him! He’s now a monster!” Armstrong objected and fired another Sacred Edge. The projectile was stopped by Hikki’s falchions, disintegrated as the blades sliced through the lightning arrow like hot knife cutting through butter. “What the hell?”

“Old man, you are just asking for your death warrant.”

He landed on the grass patch, leaving the falchions hovering over his head. He made no efforts of dodging torrents of Sacred Edges fired by Armstrong, nor did he intend to counterattack them. Eyes closed, his stance loosened, he lowered his arms.

He waited.

“Curse… is he playing the game of patience?” Armstrong chided. “Forneus! Overdrive Mode!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus transformed into a lightning zanbatou. He screamed a bellowing battle cry, jumped high into the air and hovered over Hikki. Yet the former Gale Whistler merely remained static, completely oblivious of the Sacred Edge bombardment or anything else.

“Forgive me, Hikki… but I have to do this! Forneus, Divine Voltage!”

--“Yes, Master.”--

Forneus grew enormous, dwarfing Armstrong by seven times. The Ace pounced at Hikki, Forneus in cleaving position, and he was ready to unleash its most powerful attack.

“Ojiichan!”

Fate’s yell distracted the veteran Ace. Armstrong turned around, a mistake he should have not done.

“Watch out!”

Armstrong looked forward.

“Checkmate.”

And that’s when a hand pierced through his chest.

“OJIICHAAAAAAAN!!!!”

Their screams pierced through the sky. They were horrified, totally caught by surprised by the sudden turn of event.

“Hikki… you…” Armstrong murmured, yelping in agony as Hikki twisted his hand.

“Old man, you never want to let youngsters shine, do you?”

He pulled his hand out. The veteran’s ace was left suspended in the air for a short while, before he dropped dead onto the ground. Hikki landed next to Armstrong, now a corpse, and glanced at Riot Force 6. “…no one will understand the pain I had to endure…” he murmured and left the dead body behind. “No one…”

“You killed Ojiichan!” Annabelle screamed. “YOU KILLED OJIICHAN! PAPA NO BAAKA!!!!” The meteor summoner called forth multiple megaliths and stalagmites, aiming all of them at him. He remained motionless, waited in patience as the attacks cornered him from all directions.

“Trace on.”

A zanbatou was traced out of thin air. Hikki grabbed its hilt, channelled his dark Chronograph power into its blade and turned the weapon into a light sword. With great effort (due to the weapon’s weight) he opened a stance and waited for the meteor to come closer.

“Hoshinagi no tachi.”

He swung the zanbatou. In one move, the megaliths and stalagmites were cleaved into half, and disintegrated into many pieces as he hacked and slashed the halves in succession.

“Forgive me, Anna.”

He teleported to Annabelle, caught her off guard and delivered a karate chop onto her nape. The meteor summoner was knocked out cold, snatched by Caro before she fell onto the ground. He jumped away from Riot Force 6, dodging Alexandra’s attack and landed on a boulder.

“You killed Ojiichan…” Fate gasped as she held the lifeless Armstrong in her arms. “You killed Ojiichan! Hikki, how could you kill him!!?”

He caught the falling falchions, and tossed them into the ground. He spoke no answer. He lifted his hand, and what looked like an empty move was in fact a summoning stance. Murmuring in ancient Narulian language, he created a magenta-coloured orb encased by dark blue energy rings. It was small at first, yet the longer the chant the bigger it became and the denser its content was. The surreal world itself became disoriented, all its elements being absorbed into the orb and became one with the entity.

He brought his hand down. The orb was now hovering in front of him. He stared deep into it. He took one of the blades. He nodded.

“Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker.”

He sliced the orb.

-x-x-

A hallway of burning flames. Mountains of machines, demolished, destroyed into crumbling pieces as sparks expel themselves.

One step, as an arm was being gushed out, mechanical parts bleeding a blood of red, from within the flesh, as the lifeless eyes of a young girl, reflected in her death, dropping to the ground as the man simply took another step forward, further and further, as he saw the purpose of his slaughter…

The man who was behind the death of the one he loved… the one he loved more than anything, but because of his own weakness, his own fears, his own rationale… he abandoned it all… until it was too late.

His eyes, bloodshot, enraged only looked down as the other man, sat there fearless on his seat, his deranged gold eyes looked coldly… not at him, but at the corpses that stood behind him.

“Tre, Quattro, Cinque, Sette, Nove, Wendi… did killing them please you? Did their screams, pain and suffering ease your broken heart,” and here the person grinned. “Hikki?”

He stared at the unconscious Ginga. He discarded her off, wiped blood off his fist and glared at the person. “No.”

“No? That’s so expected of you, my dear Wind Talker,” the person mocked. “Do you want more? Do you… want more bodies to be shredded into pieces?”

“You killed her… you took the only life away from me… I will never forgive you…”

“So by killing me you will avenge her death?”

“Silence! I need no words of advice from the likes of you!”

“Very well.” The person left the chair, walked a bit forward and spread his arms. “Come on and take me.”

The video terminated. What was left was simply static and radio disturbance. Nobody knew for sure what happened to them afterwards, as everyone was staring into the empty liquid-crystal display. Even the Riot Force 5 had no idea of what to talk about.

“Ma’am, we detected the coordinates of the video’s original source,” the operator reported. Fate was speechless. “Ma’am?”

“Give me the coordinates…” was her only response.

“Yes, ma’am. Right away.”

-x-x-

The attack ended. Alexandra’s and Reinforce Zwei’s quick decision on deploying protective barrier was only just; and even so they barely escaped the “mass destruction” breaker move. The destructive force of Whistling Starlight Gale Breaker was unheard of; as everything became clear, the whole island became a barren desert, devoid of life forms. (the hideout survived, though, partly because it was built underground).

They stared at Hikki. The usually cheerful and laid back Gale Whistler was now completely changed. He was deranged. He was a berserker. He had gone as far as committing indiscriminate massacre and destroying the people he was supposed to protect. (He even breached the limit by murdering a TSAB officer -- one of the Aces, on top of that.)

And Fate could not accept the cruel destiny that was unfolding before her.

“Yurusanai…”

Fate unlocked Bardiche’s Zamber form.

“YURUSANAI!!!!!”

She pounced at Hikki and swung Bardiche at the Gale Whistler, missing her target as he swiftly jumped away; yet from his reaction she knew he was surprised by her impromptu action.

“Admiral Haraoun- iie, Oniichan. Requesting Limiter Release.”

“[Fate, are you sure you must do this?]”

“I have no other choice.” Clenching her hand on Bardiche’s handle, she glowered at Hikki, revealing tears that were flowing down her cheeks. “I must do it.”

“[…understood. But please be careful.]”

It took only seconds before the Ace was fully enveloped with unrestricted power surge. The power overload knocked Hikki off guard, overwhelming him with such pressure he was also forced to perform Limiter Release of his own.

“My friend…”

“You’re no longer my friend,” she spoke and opened stance reminiscence to Armstrong’s. “And I’m no longer your friend.” Tears now dampening her Barrier Jacket, she channelled each and every piece of her power into Bardiche, feeding the Zamber blade with more energy.

“So… you’ve treated me as an enemy.” Slowly and steadily he opened battle stance. “Very well. I accept your challenge. En garde!”

// to be continued //

Blog link (http://usb500stories.blogspot.com/2007/08/into-dusk-chapter-5-part-1.html)

That ends the first part of Limiter Release Fate/Berserk Hikki duel.

RIP, Aku o Tatsu Tsurugi. :(

Wow... Hikki has completely fallen to Dark Side, to use Star Wars terms. Hmm, maybe I could whip up a little Hikki/Keroko match, concidering the two went through similar pains, except that Keroko was snapped out of it.

Well, Cinque should be kinda clueless on these kind of things...

Hmm...clueless Cinque getting advises from onee-samas (( Uno, Due, and Tre )) all of which misinterpreted and makes things worse...

Uno: What is important is to understand someone completely, to know everything about that person you care about...like my feelings for Doctor...

Due: Listen, use your hands. And when you've got that little sucker addicted and coiled up, you jump on him!

Tre: Do not falter, Cinque! No matter what the situation, you must not be weak, and do your best!

Cinque : Hmm... so to know him completely, I need to be strong, use my hands and jump on him... something feels out of place somehow...

:eyespin:

Clueless Cinque is WIN!

You know what I'm going to do to Ivan? :D

I'm going to make him the Nanohverse version of Kane.

He would somehow live through every attempt on his life.

Including age.

Didn't we already have Skane as an OC?

This ain't no ordinary punch boy, no ordinary punch!

FFtw7qW7Vcw

My thoughts during this clip were "Hey, this is not that H4XX.... *last five seconds* ...nevermind."



"Ah-ha!"

Nanoha was jolted instantaneously out of her deep slumber by the cry that echoed from downstairs. To accompany it, there was a sound that chilled her to the core- the clash of steel on steel. She recognised the voice below as that of V's.

An intruder?!

That thought quickly registered itself in her mind. Leaping out of bed and waking Fate in the process, she dressed herself in a flash, asking Fate to follow suit, the blonde-haired girl clearly concerned by the tone of worry present in her words.

After Fate, she proceeded to wake the Forwards. Despite their complaints, they soon caught word of the commotion going on in the lower hall, and joined them in a hurry, worried just as much as the pair of Aces were. Hayate, who also heard of the occurences, soon appeared beside them.

It took them a while to rush to their destination. Each one of them had their devices at the ready, and tensed themselves as they arrived in a room based in the lower area. bathed in light.

Peering round the door, Nanoha saw V. Seeing no hostiles, a sense of relief washed over her, but when she stepped in further, she was dumbstruck.

V was sparring with the oddest of things- a suit of armor. Where he had managed to find one, Nanoha knew not. Wielding a smallsword, V performed a series of quick strikes at several points on the immobile suit, and spoke to it as if it were faltering:

"Not good enough, my fat metal friend!"

The female mage also noticed the fuzzy sound of an old, antiquated television set playing in the background. Her eyes shifted back to V when he, by misfortune, jammed his blade in the neck of the armor. He struggled to loosen it, and eventually dug it out, falling backwards onto the floor in the process. He rose back up with a kick, and prepared himself again.

This time, he prepared for the coupe de grace and he spun round on his feet and delivered a strike to the suit, lopping the helmet off and sending it rolling along the floor to stop at Nanoha's feet.

Pausing to catch his breath, it was then that V noticed that Nanoha and the others were present. "Oh!", he exclaimed, startled, and found himself at a loss for words. "I, uh...I hope I didn't wake you."

"We just thought that that the base was..." The remainder of Nanoha's reply was cut off by a now amused V.

"Under attack? Heavens, no!"

"Eh, V..." The question posed to him was from Subaru, who looked at him in the same confounded manner as the others. "Just what exactly are you doing?", she inquired.

"Why, practicing!", V answered, merrily, and motioned to the ageing TV set. "Learning from none other than my favorite motion picture- The Count of Monte Cristo. Really a good flick. Infact, pardon my knowledge that it is, indeed, late, but..."

He took a step backwards, and indicated some seats behind him.

"Would you like to view it with me?"



Yet another part movie-to-Nanoha adaptation...yes, call me a thief, but this scene in the film is rather humorous. :heh:

As long as you don't touch Nanoha's hair, it's cool with me. :D But that's one part of the movie that will face the Ion Canon anyway.

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 08:08
Ooooh, we SEE indeed. :D I wonder where is this gonna fit? :)


Not sure on the nature of the question :heh: This'll be only minutes after they arrive on the city. As for timeline placement, this'll be Post-StrikerS :)


I WILL DO MY BEST FOR THE GREAT GURREN SQUAD!!! :D

Boy its really hot in here. :heh:


FOR LORD KAMINA!!!!! FOR LORD SIMON!!!

I meant that Kha is Daddy Amuro, as there is also Junior Amuro. :uhoh: In fact, Kha will come to adopt most of his first batch of junior apprentices. Yoshi Krueger is the only one who has a family of his own.

Ah *understanding* :nod:

Dante = Yuuno, even has a Big Freaking Sword and, like Sophia, hands for guns. :uhoh:
Morrison = Chrono, always bringing Yuuno work.
Patty = Loli-Arf!

Lady = Arisa, GDI secret contract mage. So secret, no one outside of the Aces' circle knows.
Trish = Suzuka, the other SCM on GDI payroll.

Shall Yuuno be friends, almost twins, with Jeno? :uhoh:

Now to figure out why Yuuno would answer the phone with "Hello, Ferret May Scry..."

*sniffs* Smells like winning formula! :D

*imagines Yuuno wielding Ebony and Ivory* :D


No problem, I can always match everyone else. And I'm afraid of screwing up the Omake... :heh:

:heh: Sou ka :heh:

Although, I'm not even sure what you had planned for the omake :heh:

Oops, see I missed one:

*crawls out of the double mountain pile of Schoolwork and Bluecheesium*

Action scene take 6...go!

It was yet another standoff as the Aces, Forwards and Ginga watched on. Subaru may have been brimming with excitement, but Teana was starting to pale. Ginga noticed this slightly as she decided to sit down next to Teana.

Ginga: Something bothering you, Teana?

Teana: Oh, Ginga-san. It's nothing, but...

Ginga: You're thinking about the possible scenarios if they go all out?

Teana: Yes...

Ginga: I'm sure Retsu-kun will try to keep it under control. They've been together through thick and thin for so long, after all.

Teana: I guess...

Back on the battlefield...

Retsugou: Ikuze!

Goukon: Koi!

S: BUSTER KICK!

M: TORNADO SMASHER!

Energy Arc met explosive kick as the Sonic Buster Kick was cancelled out by the Magnum Tornado Smasher, but the action did not end as the two brothers were already clashing before the explosion shockwave even expanded as Sonic and Magnum struck each other from countering roundhouses, trading sweeps and spin kicks, and finally clashing straight on at the wheels as both the impact and the shockwave blew the two away from each other, leaving scorching skidmarks in the ground.

Retsugou: Look's like we're tied again...

Goukon: What are you talking about, Aniki? I'm one up.

Retsugou: Then how about we take it from the top?

Goukon: Fine with me.

Retsugou: SONIC!

Goukon: MAGNUM!

R/G: Ichishiki, hatsudou!

A flare of energy erupted as the command was yelled. Ginga and Subaru both looked on in surprise as Teana seemed to pale even more.

Ginga: Ichishiki!

Subaru: Kore, chotto yabai kamo... (This kinda seems bad...)

Teana: Iie, kanari mazui desu. (No, it's really bad.)

Fate: Care to fill us in?

Ginga: The Seimonji family arts are not limited to any one aspect. Their extensive family has created a vast variety of unique styles over the years. Retsugou and Goukon are, for lack of other words, geniuses. Two of them together represent all the blood and sweat of generations of battle style development. What you had saw was their favored style. Now you will see the others they attained true mastery over.

Subaru: After Ichishiki fights, they always take so long to heal...

Nanoha: Do we stop them?

Teana: Unless taichou-tachi get their limiter released and forcibly restrain them, the only other way is what they're doing, which is burning the adrenaline off...

Back on the battlefield, the energy ruptured died down as the transformation finished...

Sonic/Magnum: Mode one transition complete...

Two waves cleared the dust as the brothers were seen off their roller blades and wielding Nodachis...

Retsugou: ...Seimonjiryuu Shissokuken...

Goukon: ...Seimonjiryuu Bakusokuken...

R/G: MAIRU!!!

S/M: SONIC/MAGNUM SABER!

Uh, yeah, I was agonizing over how crazy these two would get in terms of versatility, but given the levels of bluecheesium being thrown around, I guess restraint is thrown out the window. :frustrated::heh::eyespin:

Teana's reaction to these two ripping the place a new one = WIN :D:D:D Now let's see what these two can really do! :D

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 08:13
Having said that, with new knowledge gained this afternoon, this came to mind:http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/38/Gurren_Lagann_-_Gurren.jpgI was watching GL over Liingo's shoulder in the clubroom today... :uhoh:

This isU NaisU. :cool:

Though honestly, as far as non-general/badguy Ganmen goes, I think King Kittan is the coolest of the bunch...

MAHOU SHOUJO DYNAMIC DUO!

BURNING ARISA, SHINING SUZUKA, SHOUNIN!!!

:eyebrow:

Isn't it Suzuka Vermillion? :p

Oh, wait, she isn't fla-

*burned to a crisp*

Yeah, especially when we don't deface NxF. He's insisting on making it a direct war! :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:

You know what struck me funnier? The fact that he considers us discriminators. He must be blind to our acceptance and tolerance of NxF. Just because we favor something else, we discriminate against another lol.

Then again, he was foolish enough to be a fool against Satashi, which had repeatedly 0wned him, when he incessantly complained about 'fan' stuff. God.


ANIKIIIII!!! :D

Man what's gotten into me all of a sudden? :heh:

Btw, I wasn't really serious about Gurren as Nagato's physical form, but when I remember that Nagato transforms into the cockpit of DaiStahlMut, I felt, with this form, she' better off forming the head...

You want Galactus-Lagann then? ;)

*runs*

If only I knew where those girls are in timeline, I'd bring them in. In fact, I've got a StrikerS side story for them and the other shafted characters:

Ferret May Scry :p

(keeps on running)
If you got the time and ideas, or even if you just want to, how about you do it? Cos I've got none of time and little of the other. :heh:

They're in Uminari. The only ones away from Japan are Kyoya and Suzuka's sister, in Germany.

USB500
2007-08-24, 08:35
NOOOOO!!! SAVE THE VISION!!!!! WE MUST SEE IT!!!!! :eek:

Er..... huh?????????? :eyespin::eyespin:

*clears his throat, then he screams through the microphone*

Alas, Sophia the Magnificient! I HAS ZA PAWAH OF ZA WARUDO!!! :eek:

*flashes of future Erio/Cinque events appear in the air, as USB500 laughs maniacally -- also shown is crazy visions of Erio & Cinque as a wedding couple, and while the Numbers congratulate them, Nove is seen burning in absolute jealousy and is preparing Soviet's nuclear missiles*

Initiating launch in 5 minutes.

:uhoh: I guess I overdid it. :upset:

=======================



-77th Administrated World, “Zubaida”
World Capital City “Ziya”-

Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya, Zubaida’s City of Light and Splendor, and the central hub for interdimensional tourism and trade in Ordered Space.

A city lined with a seemingly endless row of silver skyscrapers, their lavishly decorated organic forms standing tall and proud, awash in bright, colorful neon lights that drowns the night sky into insignificance, supplanted by ever-shifting, always dancing colors of the rainbow.

An elegant amalgam of steel, concrete, marble and glass that overlook the spotless shiny chrome sidewalks, lined with exquisite shops and humble stalls filled with a neverending mass of clean, sharp and smartly clad populace that provides the perplexing organized cacophony of the atmosphere permeated with the bustling symphony of bells, whistles, the stampede of masses of shuffling feet and of individual conversation that merge and combine into a unbearably loud yet indispensable din. The cat calls, sirens, the laughter, the impeccable Orchestra of music that swamps your thoughts to a halt, and invites you to take it all in and lose yourself and your soul in the ceaseless wondrous activities.

The roads, filled with the elegant beautiful aerodynamic curves of the latest automobiles, brandishing their polished finishes, their golden rims, shamelessly flaunting their much sought after trademarks.

The center of unlimited opulence and shameless unrivalled decadence, and the only venue of choice for the richest, most famous and most influentially powerful personalities alive to spend their nigh-infinite riches. An overly extravagant whirlpool of wealth and luxury, with the seductively alluring promise of unlimited worldly pleasures and decadence.

But such a simple description could not even begin do justice to this breathtaking place.

:heh:

"Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya..." screamed a speakerphone.

"Yay!!!" Screamed Allison as she tugged Caro down the gangway. Erio ran after them, and even the usually stoic Hiro was wearing a faint smile.

"Say, Fate?" Kha said to the lady with her arm hooked around his.

"Hmm?"

"I... er... never been on a tour before... :heh:"

"Then I shall explain to you the mission objectives. :)"

"Yes Ma'am! :D"That mission objectives joke was inspired by Kha's, and subsequently Erio's "First Date" scenarios planned by Hayate. :D

Thanks for giving me a wonderful vision, Lowe! *swoon*

Makes me want to do works on one of the Lyrical of Time's cities some times. :)

:thinker:

Not revealing it until tomorrow (when I get to steal time during the exam ;) )

============================

Having said that, with new knowledge gained this afternoon, this came to mind:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/38/Gurren_Lagann_-_Gurren.jpgI was watching GL over Liingo's shoulder in the clubroom today... :uhoh:
Yeah, but I prefer the idea of the Alpha Numbers (even though I never played SRW :heh:)? :heh:

FINALLY! SOMEONE HAS ENTERED THE LEAGUE OF HOTBLOODED COURAGE!!!

=====================



“Have you no respect you commoner! This is his Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-“

He stretched out his arm, shutting up his bodyguard.

“She already knows my person. And you would serve me well by paying her your utmost respect, for she is an honored guest of mine!”

His voice, meek yet carrying the power of a king, silenced all who heard it. And in a display that shocked all onlookers nearby, he kneeled down at me, took my right hand, and kissed it.

“And one to whom my life and my current position is greatly indebted.

After all these years, It is an honor, and my pleasure to see you again after all this time…Kaylin.”

Still flattering me with his smooth words and gentlemanly demeanor. He means well though, and he’s also dropped the formality around me. Not like I respected formality in the first place, but at least he respects the fact that I don’t.

“No need for that, it’s also my pleasure… Karim.”

Got more? :D

==========================

Shouta-Hikki gets away with it, I see. Lucky bastard.

Uh-huh. :uhoh:

Wow... Hikki has completely fallen to Dark Side, to use Star Wars terms. Hmm, maybe I could whip up a little Hikki/Keroko match, concidering the two went through similar pains, except that Keroko was snapped out of it.

Would like to see it coming. :nod:

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 08:56
Er..... huh?????????? :eyespin::eyespin:

*clears his throat, then he screams through the microphone*

Alas, Sophia the Magnificient! I HAS ZA PAWAH OF ZA WARUDO!!! :eek:

*flashes of future Erio/Cinque events appear in the air, as USB500 laughs maniacally -- also shown is crazy visions of Erio & Cinque as a wedding couple, and while the Numbers congratulate them, Nove is seen burning in absolute jealousy and is preparing Soviet's nuclear missiles*

Initiating launch in 5 minutes.

:uhoh: I guess I overdid it. :upset:


Vision saved! :D

*leaves for the next Administrated World*

USB, your sacrifice will not be in vain!!!!

*watches nuclear armageddon*

:p:p:p:p:p:p

Makes me want to do works on one of the Lyrical of Time's cities some times. :)

:thinker:

Not revealing it until tomorrow (when I get to steal time during the exam ;) )

Nice, more cities to visit :D


Got more? :D


:D

Here's another snippet, immediately following the last one :)



He looked up at me then. For some reason, he hasn’t looked a bit older since I saw him four years ago. He stood up, still holding my hand. It was then that he noticed something with overtly expressed curiosity...

“An Administration Bureau clerk?” he asked, like how a child would ask when he was confused with something.

Guess it’s time to introduce these two then.

“Glock, this is the Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-Hanif, Vice Prime Minister of Zubaida, and sovereign ruler of Ziya. As the guard would have told you earlier.”

Both Glock and Karim gave me amused smug smiles at the latter observation.

“And Karim, this is 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler, Administration Bureau 79th Ground Battalion…”

“And by the way you look at him, he is your… type?

What the… Since when did the Crown Prince become so receptive? Before I could respond, he bawled out his loudest, heartiest laughter. I think either I was silent a bit too long when he asked that, or he’s simply lost it. Either way, he laughed his lungs out.

After shocking the people and showing them a sight surely to be included in the front page of tomorrow’s available tabloids, he reached out a hand to Glock - much to the latter's confusion - patted him on the shoulder a few times, and then said these words to him:

“You are most blessed Glock Heckler, you truly are, for you have succeeded where I have failed. Truly, you are a good man.”

“Um… thanks?”

He was laughing as he then turned to me, whilst motioning a hand to his bodyguards, sending them scrambling to their stationed vehicles.

“I invite you two to join me in tonight’s supper. Shall you kindly accept?”

Kha
2007-08-24, 08:56
This isU NaisU. :cool:

Though honestly, as far as non-general/badguy Ganmen goes, I think King Kittan is the coolest of the bunch...I haven't seen Kittan yet... But from wiki, I can't imagine King Kittan on DSM... :heh:

:eyebrow:

Isn't it Suzuka Vermillion? :p

Oh, wait, she isn't fla-

*burned to a crisp*Etou... What just happened? :heh:

You know what struck me funnier? The fact that he considers us discriminators. He must be blind to our acceptance and tolerance of NxF. Just because we favor something else, we discriminate against another lol.

Then again, he was foolish enough to be a fool against Satashi, which had repeatedly 0wned him, when he incessantly complained about 'fan' stuff. God. Ah those legendary comebacks... For that, Satashi-sama gained even more respect from both sides of the war. I never believed that was possible, but it's Dark God Satashi we're talking about. :)

You want Galactus-Lagann then? ;)

*runs*I don't see that on Wiki... :heh:

They're in Uminari. The only ones away from Japan are Kyoya and Suzuka's sister, in Germany.OK got it. Good thing Ferret May Scry focuses purely on Yuuno and Chrono. :)

Not sure on the nature of the question :heh: This'll be only minutes after they arrive on the city. As for timeline placement, this'll be Post-StrikerS :)Yes this is exactly what I was looking for.

FOR LORD KAMINA!!!!! FOR LORD SIMON!!!And I finally understand the prank played on Sophia's SRX by S&W. It's not going to change the fact that she's gonna get mad about it. :D

*sniffs* Smells like winning formula! :D

*imagines Yuuno wielding Ebony and Ivory* :DUnfortunately... No conventional weapons. But I'm sure Yuuno's got more relics in that closet of his, especially for him to give RH away so freely. :D

:heh: Sou ka :heh:

Although, I'm not even sure what you had planned for the omake :heh:Exactly. Haven't planned anything. Just thought an adventure like that would be fun, and push KayGlock further. I'd like to see Stoneface ruffled for once. :D :heh:

Didn't we already have Skane as an OC?Yeah, but I didn't want to correct the Dark God. After all, a useless recurring OC is good for Team Rocket comic relief. :D

Er..... huh?????????? :eyespin::eyespin:

*clears his throat, then he screams through the microphone*

Alas, Sophia the Magnificient! I HAS ZA PAWAH OF ZA WARUDO!!! :eek:

*flashes of future Erio/Cinque events appear in the air, as USB500 laughs maniacally -- also shown is crazy visions of Erio & Cinque as a wedding couple, and while the Numbers congratulate them, Nove is seen burning in absolute jealousy and is preparing Soviet's nuclear missiles*

Initiating launch in 5 minutes.

:uhoh: I guess I overdid it. :upset::twitch: :uhoh: :eyespin: :heh:

FINALLY! SOMEONE HAS ENTERED THE LEAGUE OF HOTBLOODED COURAGE!!!Yoroshiku! :D

@Prince of Subaigar: He's really mature, much more than I thought he would! And free dinner at the plushiest place in Ordered Space?!

*Yoshi and Domon drool, while Amuro :heh: in the background*

USB500
2007-08-24, 09:01
Vision saved! :D

*leaves for the next Administrated World*

USB, your sacrifice will not be in vain!!!!

*watches nuclear armageddon*

:p:p:p:p:p:p

*rolls inside grave in vain*

Nice, more cities to visit :D

:nod: :nod:

:D

Here's another snippet, immediately following the last one :)

He looked up at me then. For some reason, he hasn’t looked a bit older since I saw him four years ago. He stood up, still holding my hand. It was then that he noticed something with overtly expressed curiosity...

“An Administration Bureau clerk?” he asked, like how a child would ask when he was confused with something.

Guess it’s time to introduce these two then.

“Glock, this is the Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-Hanif, Vice Prime Minister of Zubaida, and sovereign ruler of Ziya. As the guard would have told you earlier.”

Both Glock and Karim gave me amused smug smiles at the latter observation.

“And Karim, this is 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler, Administration Bureau 79th Ground Battalion…”

“And by the way you look at him, he is your… type?

What the… Since when did the Crown Prince become so receptive? Before I could respond, he bawled out his loudest, heartiest laughter. I think either I was silent a bit too long when he asked that, or he’s simply lost it. Either way, he laughed his lungs out.

After shocking the people and showing them a sight surely to be included in the front page of tomorrow’s available tabloids, he reached out a hand to Glock - much to the latter's confusion - patted him on the shoulder a few times, and then said these words to him:

“You are most blessed Glock Heckler, you truly are, for you have succeeded where I have failed. Truly, you are a good man.”

“Um… thanks?”

He was laughing as he then turned to me, whilst motioning a hand to his bodyguards, sending them scrambling to their stationed vehicles.

“I invite you two to join me in tonight’s supper. Shall you kindly accept?”



I immediately admired Karim's attitude. :D As expected from the Sheikh :cool:

==================

Yeah, but I didn't want to correct the Dark God. After all, a useless recurring OC is good for Team Rocket comic relief. :D

????: prepare for trouble!
????: and make it double!

*is too lazy to continue* :eyespin:

Yoroshiku! :D

You are very welcomed. :D :D

@Prince of Subaigar: He's really mature, much more than I thought he would! And free dinner at the plushiest place in Ordered Space?!

*Yoshi and Domon drool, while Amuro :heh: in the background*

Mmmm.... food........ *drools*

Some quick shots on Lyrical of Time's city #1 (Narulia)
* a royal city
* main economic source: astronomy- and educational-based industry
* a "green town"
* situated near an extinct volcano, where a national astronomy observatory is built
* mascot: Narulian lunar cat :D
* has the vibe of a city one can find during a Malacca Sultanate, except for its timeline period ;)

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 09:11
Etou... What just happened? :heh:

Aside from Burning Arisa, there was also another less known Suzuka mage-spin off based off another flame user from Tsukihime, Akiha, which has her hair turned crimson and called Vermillion Akiha.

So Vermillion Suzuka. :heh:

I don't see that on Wiki... :heh:

Want to be spoiled? :p

Actually, it's not really a spoiler even, but an OP teaser. You should had expected this from episode 1 to begin with. :heh:

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3339/bscap0031vl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dunno, but that just screams GALACTUS. :3

Erio
2007-08-24, 09:14
Here's another snippet, immediately following the last one :)



He looked up at me then. For some reason, he hasn’t looked a bit older since I saw him four years ago. He stood up, still holding my hand. It was then that he noticed something with overtly expressed curiosity...

“An Administration Bureau clerk?” he asked, like how a child would ask when he was confused with something.

Guess it’s time to introduce these two then.

“Glock, this is the Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-Hanif, Vice Prime Minister of Zubaida, and sovereign ruler of Ziya. As the guard would have told you earlier.”

Both Glock and Karim gave me amused smug smiles at the latter observation.

“And Karim, this is 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler, Administration Bureau 79th Ground Battalion…”

“And by the way you look at him, he is your… type?

What the… Since when did the Crown Prince become so receptive? Before I could respond, he bawled out his loudest, heartiest laughter. I think either I was silent a bit too long when he asked that, or he’s simply lost it. Either way, he laughed his lungs out.

After shocking the people and showing them a sight surely to be included in the front page of tomorrow’s available tabloids, he reached out a hand to Glock - much to the latter's confusion - patted him on the shoulder a few times, and then said these words to him:

“You are most blessed Glock Heckler, you truly are, for you have succeeded where I have failed. Truly, you are a good man.”

“Um… thanks?”

He was laughing as he then turned to me, whilst motioning a hand to his bodyguards, sending them scrambling to their stationed vehicles.

“I invite you two to join me in tonight’s supper. Shall you kindly accept?”


Did I just see... "Dubai" there...? :twitch:

When you talked about a Crown Price yesterday, I immediatelly thought of the Prince of Dubai... but I didnt think you were thinking the same... :twitch::twitch: Were you? :heh:

Keroko
2007-08-24, 09:22
Here's another snippet, immediately following the last one :)



He looked up at me then. For some reason, he hasn’t looked a bit older since I saw him four years ago. He stood up, still holding my hand. It was then that he noticed something with overtly expressed curiosity...

“An Administration Bureau clerk?” he asked, like how a child would ask when he was confused with something.

Guess it’s time to introduce these two then.

“Glock, this is the Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-Hanif, Vice Prime Minister of Zubaida, and sovereign ruler of Ziya. As the guard would have told you earlier.”

Both Glock and Karim gave me amused smug smiles at the latter observation.

“And Karim, this is 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler, Administration Bureau 79th Ground Battalion…”

“And by the way you look at him, he is your… type?

What the… Since when did the Crown Prince become so receptive? Before I could respond, he bawled out his loudest, heartiest laughter. I think either I was silent a bit too long when he asked that, or he’s simply lost it. Either way, he laughed his lungs out.

After shocking the people and showing them a sight surely to be included in the front page of tomorrow’s available tabloids, he reached out a hand to Glock - much to the latter's confusion - patted him on the shoulder a few times, and then said these words to him:

“You are most blessed Glock Heckler, you truly are, for you have succeeded where I have failed. Truly, you are a good man.”

“Um… thanks?”

He was laughing as he then turned to me, whilst motioning a hand to his bodyguards, sending them scrambling to their stationed vehicles.

“I invite you two to join me in tonight’s supper. Shall you kindly accept?”



So Kay had royalty chasing after her. Do we get to find out how the prince failed?

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 09:24
Ah those legendary comebacks... For that, Satashi-sama gained even more respect from both sides of the war. I never believed that was possible, but it's Dark God Satashi we're talking about. :)


Hail Slaanesh!!!! :D:bow:

And I finally understand the prank played on Sophia's SRX by S&W. It's not going to change the fact that she's gonna get mad about it. :D

:D

Smith: At least, it now looks ten times more manly!
Wesson: And with ten times more Courage and Hotblood!!!!

*runs from Harisen wielding Sophia*

Unfortunately... No conventional weapons. But I'm sure Yuuno's got more relics in that closet of his, especially for him to give RH away so freely. :D

Who said Ebony and Ivory have to be conventional weapons? :D

Cross Mirage:

Exactly. Haven't planned anything. Just thought an adventure like that would be fun, and push KayGlock further. I'd like to see Stoneface ruffled for once. :D :heh:

Ah :heh: Mind if I run the show on my side of the fence first? :heh:


[B]@Prince of Subaigar: He's really mature, much more than I thought he would! And free dinner at the plushiest place in Ordered Space?!

*Yoshi and Domon drool, while Amuro :heh: in the background*

FEEL THE PAIN OF POVERTY!!!! :p

Well, Karim means "Generous", and I chose that for a reason :)

I immediately admired Karim's attitude. :D As expected from the Sheikh :cool:


:D


Some quick shots on Lyrical of Time's city #1 (Narulia)
* a royal city
* main economic source: astronomy- and educational-based industry
* a "green town"
* situated near an extinct volcano, where a national astronomy observatory is built
* mascot: Narulian lunar cat :D
* has the vibe of a city one can find during a Malacca Sultanate, except for its timeline period ;)

Hmmm something similar to Honolulu? :heh: And astronomically based? That's something rare for a city :) Like to see its descriptions sometime :)

Did I just see... "Dubai" there...? :twitch:

When you talked about a Crown Price yesterday, I immediatelly thought of the Prince of Dubai... but I didnt think you were thinking the same... :twitch::twitch: Were you? :heh:

Yup... this arc sprang with Dubai in mind :D

So Kay had royalty chasing after her. Do we get to find out how the prince failed?

That won't be revealed until much later *points down* :)

Edit:

Ooops... seems I misunderstood the question.

Well, here's the recap a few pages back, and it's quite simple really:

"I'm sorry Sheikh, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."


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And for the final preview for the Zubaida Arc:



“Of course, we’d be glad to. I’m hungry anyways.”

“If so…” Karim motioned to the open door of his waiting white stretched limousine, nearly 10 meters long, and decked out with the works, trimmed with an obscene amount of gold, the insides decorated with the most expensive leather upholstery.

Me and Glock went in and sat together, to the flashing lights of cameras eager to get a scoop on the Sheikh’s latest guests. Karim went in last, after making sure of his public media image by giving them his killer smiles and waving to the crowds. Once inside, Glock, still awed from all that just transpired, asked me the question that I was expecting since Karim’s publicity antics.

“Wow… I’m wondering how you, of all people, can be so intimate with… of all people, a Crown Prince?”

I shrugged. “It’s a long story.”

Far to the seat in front of us, separated by a rather exquisite Persian carpet, Karim leaned forward, resting his chin on his hands.

“Yes, my friend. A very long story. And we have lots of time to hear it.”

USB500
2007-08-24, 09:35
Hmmm something similar to Honolulu? :heh: And astronomically based? That's something rare for a city :) Like to see its descriptions sometime :)

That, and I was inspired by this (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Planetarian:_Chiisana_Hoshi_no_Yume).

Yes, our astronomical city has a sad yet inspiring history to begin with. :)

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/9720/planetarianscreenshotyj0.jpg
"Welcome to Northern Light Planetarian. Today we are going to take part in our annual meteor gazing. Please do not be hesitant to approach our crews should you need any assistance. As the representative of the Stargazing Council, I welcome you to take part this activity. Have fun, and may the reverie of this little planet shine inside our heart."


Yup. I've read the kinetic novel. Sad, depressing yet at the same time enjoyable. Not many things in the world will make me cry from the bottom of my heart (hotblooded cries of manly courage don't count :p )

And for the final preview for the Zubaida Arc:

“Of course, we’d be glad to. I’m hungry anyways.”

“If so…” Karim motioned to the open door of his waiting white stretched limousine, nearly 10 meters long, and decked out with the works, trimmed with an obscene amount of gold, the insides decorated with the most expensive leather upholstery.

Me and Glock went in and sat together, to the flashing lights of cameras eager to get a scoop on the Sheikh’s latest guests. Karim went in last, after making sure of his public media image by giving them his killer smiles and waving to the crowds. Once inside, Glock, still awed from all that just transpired, asked me the question that I was expecting since Karim’s publicity antics.

“Wow… I’m wondering how you, of all people, can be so intimate with… of all people, a Crown Prince?”

I shrugged. “It’s a long story.”

Far to the seat in front of us, separated by a rather exquisite Persian carpet, Karim leaned forward, resting his chin on his hands.

“Yes, my friend. A very long story. And we have lots of time to hear it.”



The waiting is.... KILLING MEH! D: :heh: MOAR!! :D

*is now embarking home; 22:30 hours; almost passes over the limit. Oyasumi, minna.*

LoweGear
2007-08-24, 09:41
That, and I was inspired by this (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Planetarian:_Chiisana_Hoshi_no_Yume).

Yes, our astronomical city has a sad yet inspiring history to begin with. :)

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/9720/planetarianscreenshotyj0.jpg
"Welcome to Northern Light Planetarian. Today we are going to take part in our annual meteor gazing. Please do not be hesitant to approach our crews should you need any assistance. As the representative of the Stargazing Council, I welcome you to take part this activity. Have fun, and may the reverie of this little planet shine inside our heart."


Yup. I've read the kinetic novel. Sad, depressing yet at the same time enjoyable. Not many things in the world will make me cry from the bottom of my heart (hotblooded cries of manly courage don't count :p )


Now you've got me interested in the novel as well :) Now, as to where to find it... any leads? :heh:


The waiting is.... KILLING MEH! D: :heh: MOAR!! :D


I'm afraid it really will have to wait :heh:

Keroko
2007-08-24, 09:47
That won't be revealed until much later *points down* :)

Edit:

Ooops... seems I misunderstood the question.

Well, here's the recap a few pages back, and it's quite simple really:

"I'm sorry Sheikh, but I can't accept your proposal. The past has always been, and always will be my first love.

Besides, you're not my type, even if you are the Crown Prince."

That is... very simple. :heh:



“Of course, we’d be glad to. I’m hungry anyways.”

“If so…” Karim motioned to the open door of his waiting white stretched limousine, nearly 10 meters long, and decked out with the works, trimmed with an obscene amount of gold, the insides decorated with the most expensive leather upholstery.

Me and Glock went in and sat together, to the flashing lights of cameras eager to get a scoop on the Sheikh’s latest guests. Karim went in last, after making sure of his public media image by giving them his killer smiles and waving to the crowds. Once inside, Glock, still awed from all that just transpired, asked me the question that I was expecting since Karim’s publicity antics.

“Wow… I’m wondering how you, of all people, can be so intimate with… of all people, a Crown Prince?”

I shrugged. “It’s a long story.”

Far to the seat in front of us, separated by a rather exquisite Persian carpet, Karim leaned forward, resting his chin on his hands.

“Yes, my friend. A very long story. And we have lots of time to hear it.”



Gah! Less preview, more finished product!

Nightengale
2007-08-24, 09:47
Now you've got me interested in the novel as well :) Now, as to where to find it... any leads? :heh:

http://planetarian.insani.org/

You can download it online for a relatively low price of 1050 yen. And insani had released the patch for quite a while now.

If you want it any other way...well, you'll just have to scavenge around.

And yes, it's a tear-jerker. :(

Aaron008R
2007-08-24, 09:56
Here's a snippet for the planned upcoming Arc, which further shows more of Kay's unusual connections:



“Have you no respect you commoner! This is his Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-“

He stretched out his arm, shutting up his bodyguard.

“She already knows my person. And you would serve me well by paying her your utmost respect, for she is an honored guest of mine!”

His voice, meek yet carrying the power of a king, silenced all who heard it. And in a display that shocked all onlookers nearby, he kneeled down at me, took my right hand, and kissed it.

“And one to whom my life and my current position is greatly indebted.

After all these years, It is an honor, and my pleasure to see you again after all this time…Kaylin.”

Still flattering me with his smooth words and gentlemanly demeanor. He means well though, and he’s also dropped the formality around me. Not like I respected formality in the first place, but at least he respects the fact that I don’t.

“No need for that, it’s also my pleasure… Karim.”

Royalty!!!:twitch:

Ferret May Scry :p

Approved.:D


Dante = Yuuno, even has a Big Freaking Sword and, like Sophia, hands for guns. :uhoh:
Morrison = Chrono, always bringing Yuuno work.
Patty = Loli-Arf!

Lady = Arisa, GDI secret contract mage. So secret, no one outside of the Aces' circle knows.
Trish = Suzuka, the other SCM on GDI payroll.


APPROVED!:D



He looked up at me then. For some reason, he hasn’t looked a bit older since I saw him four years ago. He stood up, still holding my hand. It was then that he noticed something with overtly expressed curiosity...

“An Administration Bureau clerk?” he asked, like how a child would ask when he was confused with something.

Guess it’s time to introduce these two then.

“Glock, this is the Crown Prince Sheikh Abdul Karim Hadiyyah Al-Hanif, Vice Prime Minister of Zubaida, and sovereign ruler of Ziya. As the guard would have told you earlier.”

Both Glock and Karim gave me amused smug smiles at the latter observation.

“And Karim, this is 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler, Administration Bureau 79th Ground Battalion…”

“And by the way you look at him, he is your… type?

What the… Since when did the Crown Prince become so receptive? Before I could respond, he bawled out his loudest, heartiest laughter. I think either I was silent a bit too long when he asked that, or he’s simply lost it. Either way, he laughed his lungs out.

After shocking the people and showing them a sight surely to be included in the front page of tomorrow’s available tabloids, he reached out a hand to Glock - much to the latter's confusion - patted him on the shoulder a few times, and then said these words to him:

“You are most blessed Glock Heckler, you truly are, for you have succeeded where I have failed. Truly, you are a good man.”

“Um… thanks?”

He was laughing as he then turned to me, whilst motioning a hand to his bodyguards, sending them scrambling to their stationed vehicles.

“I invite you two to join me in tonight’s supper. Shall you kindly accept?”



Yes, lucky Glock.:D Lucky lucky Glock!:D:D:D

And for the final preview for the Zubaida Arc:



“Of course, we’d be glad to. I’m hungry anyways.”

“If so…” Karim motioned to the open door of his waiting white stretched limousine, nearly 10 meters long, and decked out with the works, trimmed with an obscene amount of gold, the insides decorated with the most expensive leather upholstery.

Me and Glock went in and sat together, to the flashing lights of cameras eager to get a scoop on the Sheikh’s latest guests. Karim went in last, after making sure of his public media image by giving them his killer smiles and waving to the crowds. Once inside, Glock, still awed from all that just transpired, asked me the question that I was expecting since Karim’s publicity antics.

“Wow… I’m wondering how you, of all people, can be so intimate with… of all people, a Crown Prince?”

I shrugged. “It’s a long story.”

Far to the seat in front of us, separated by a rather exquisite Persian carpet, Karim leaned forward, resting his chin on his hands.

“Yes, my friend. A very long story. And we have lots of time to hear it.”



Where's the real chapter?!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

haiz123321
2007-08-24, 10:08
Where's the real chapter?!:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

:):):):):)

Reiji Tabibito
2007-08-24, 10:22
<jaw drops> USO DA!!!!!

BAKANA!!!!!!!!!!!




E took the opportunity to pose a question to his sister.

'Hey, Cinque-nee?'

The eyepatched gırl turned to her 'brother' upon hearıng hım.

'What is it?', she replied.

'I have come upon the most remarkable dıscovery', E said, much to the confusion of Cinque. He continued nonetheless. 'Namely who we both resemble in many ways...'

The beffudlement of the girl was clearly audible ın her tone. 'And who might that be?'

'Who?', E replied, his voice containing well-bred surprise. 'Why, only the most prestigious spy ın history who is not James Bond of course! None other than...'

He paused for dramatic effect, then suddenly exclaimed loudly:

'SOLID SNAKE!'

Almost immediately after his outburst, a deathly silence fell over the pair, broken only when the look of total taciturnity that Cinque bore answered E for him.

'Oh, come on!' His tone was one of moderate shock now. 'The similarities are astounding!' He suddenly unsheathed his machete and kukri seemingly out of thin air. 'We both wield knıves, just as he does.' He then adopted a close-combat stance. 'We know up-close combat, once again, as he does.'

He pointed to his eye patch, then at the one Cinque was wearıng. 'We both wear eye patches as he does...' He paused. 'Well, at least in three installments,' he murmured.

'And!' He proceeded to make his final pointö not noticing that Cinque was lookıng at him in an odd manner. 'We each share dıfferent sides of his attitude!' He motioned to himself. 'I myself have hıs seldom-seen relaxed, and on occasion humorous side...' He then looked back at hıs 'sister'. 'Whereas you have the bulk of his persona- his typical stoic, badass, get-it-done demeanour!'

'Do you not see, sis?', he cried. 'We are the Snake incarnate! The duo creating the form of the greatest spy known to all!'

Cinque just stared at him, then turned and walked away with a bemused look on her face, muttering to herself.

'Yare yare...'

E stood stıll, defeated, and slumped to his knees in loss, shaking his head.

'She just never gets ıt', he saıd to himself.

This was derived from a comment someone made on the image thread that said Cinque was like Solid Snake, so...yeah. :heh:

"Greatest spy in history, other than Bond"? AS IF!

#1 Spy, EVAR: Sydney Reilly, the Ace of Spies

Hmm... Not too OOC. The only thing that surprized me was the absence of a Harisen Breaker.:heh:


Sophia's being a little more vulnerable with Arcas than I expected. Now if it were Kha, I wouldn't be surprised; In fact, thanks to my Haruhi-class timeskips in my writing, there's supposed to be a scene like that in Strike Lightning, the first NBC arc of StrikerS, when she was first nominated unanimously by the Order leaders. It was one of those paperwork days where'd Artei completely disappeared to skive off, leaving Sophia and Kha alone in the office. However, Kha knowing Sophia had used a different approach (I won't spoil) but I LOL'd at how Arcas and Kha said the same thing at the end! :D :D :D :D

Therefore there's only one thing I'd like to change: "Arcas... Sometimes, you're just like Kha..."

Outside, the sun was setting, coloring the Knight-sister's skin to match her blush.

"A big baka."
What does this mean?! :eek:


Ahh... well, thanks for your pointers.

And possible Sophia crush on Arcas... APPROVED!!!!

This is Reiji... "No Tsundere Too Severe"? :heh:

Good thing Mel didn't see that, or else :uhoh: Arcas is probably a little too good for his own good when it comes to ladies :heh:



Re: Tsundere - Mochiron! I am quite capable @ handling those that we call Tsundere!

Re: Mel - she knows that he and Sophia are just friends

Re: Arcas - see my next NEW MATERIAL post!


Then again given the truly astounding number of fan fic characters possessing:
Amnesia:
-Who am?! All I can seem to recall is that I suffered some terrible accident… but what was it?!
-You slipped in the tub and nearly cracked your skull open, it was hilarious.
A ‘mysterious past’:
-My past is so mysterious that only this ONE guy living on top of a mountain in the middle of a barren wilderness knows its secrets!
-Weren’t you born in a city, on another planet, how the hell would this hermit know about you?
-He’s an old dude up on a mountain he knows everything!
*eyes some large leafy plants and stacks of paper on a nearby table*
-These planets look kind of… familiar.
-I’m sure they’re just secret medicinal herbs!
-Well they might technically have medicinal uses according to some people…
A ‘dark hidden power’:
-Only. One. Chance. Must. Use. IT. And. Stop. These. Ridiculous. Pauses. *starts grunting and screaming dramatically as a black aura forms*
-How come it’s always black, why isn’t the ancient cursed power ever a neon pink or something?
-Helllooo I’m trying to dramatically power up here and you’re killing the mood!
A spilt personalities/something else living in their head:
-Hi, I’m a new voice in this head!
-Great another one… it’s getting kind of crowded in here, but I guess you can stay over by the repressed memories of a fateful encounter during this guy’s childhood.
Being subject to an ancient prophecy/mission:
*Reads mysterious ancient exposition plot devic—sorry mysterious ancient databank.
–I’m the chosen one!?”
-This prophecy is kind of vague… in fact you cold really twist it to make almost ANYONE seem like the ‘chosen one’. I mean what are the odds it would be you, some no name guy in a world of billions, that randomly stumbled across this it seems awfully improbable.
-You’re totally ruining the moment, again.
Possessed of a bizarrely improbable relationship with an important canon character:
-So you see I’m a clone produced from DNA recovered from the vomit of your long lost brother after a night of binge drinking on another continent 23 years ago!
-Can you eve get viable DNA from vomit?
-Dude, just go with it! it’s in the script."

Really anyone that’s basiclly normal is almost some sort of anomalous freak.

So maybe the split personality acutally paradoxically makes him more "normal"? :confused: Now I've gone and confused myself. -_-

Welcome to the thread! And great post... I couldn't stop laughing at the subversions...

I don't have much down right now for Réa Kas. The Ennis Jesca profile is mostly just a repeat, with a few changes to reflect his magic. I think I'll update all of my characters sometime with their magic school.Profile — Réa Kas
Name: Réa Kas (レア・カス)
D.O.B.: 18/01/0060
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Black

TSAB Mage Rank: Unknown
Magic Type: Karrak

History:
Réa Kas is born on the 133rd non-administered world "Karrak" and is the son of a major "Armoured Frame" war weapons designer. Due to this, Réa has spent much of his life on Karrak learning about Armoured Frame design and maintenence.

Réa manged to find magic remaining on Karrak one day. Using it, he found and contacted a TSAB ship that was nearby. Réa has since became a part of the TSAB. He entered training together with Ennis Jesca and soon joined the navel forces where he became a part of an experimental force.

About:
Réa is very logical and is quite adept at combat and war strategy and tactics. He is extremely honest but is known to be rather blunt at times. He is a peace-lover and joined the TSAB in hopes that he can help maintain its peace.

His magical capabilities are unique among the TSAB, using a form of magic unseen elsewhere. His Karrak magic makes him incredibly effective at finding and manipulating information, as well as manipulating other factors around him to create illusions. As his magic type is entirely new, it is difficult to properly gauge his magic level or potential.

Réa is completely colour-blind, unable to recognize differences in colour. However, Réa has reportively been able to extract "colour data" from objects to identify its colour.Profile — Ennis Jesca
Name: Ennis Jesca (エニス・ジェスカ)
D.O.B.: 11/09/0060
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Green

TSAB Mage Rank: A+ (Mixed)
Magic Type: Midchildran (Gaest-school)

History:
Ennis grew up quietly with his parents in Altseima. Due to his special conditions, he received his education from a tutor in his younger years, but began attending school later on. His decision to enter the TSAB was sudden and unexpected.

During training, he was paired with Réa Kas and vastly exceeded expectations with his skill and knowledge of magic. However, he had conflicts with his instructors due to his uncommunicative nature, but soon passed his training with high grades.

After that, he joined the then just-forming 34th Lost Logia Search Forces. At that time, however, Ennis requested a magic limiter and had his magic rank lowered to an effective C.

Despite the restriction, Ennis continued to be an effective member of the team with his scanning and searching magic. After a particular incident however, Ennis left the team and had his limiter lifted from him. He has since attempted the Enforcer exam but has failed it.

About:
Ennis is seemingly without the ability to speak, having never done so since his birth. In addition to sign language, he is also able to communicate using magic, however he rarely does either. Ennis seems to be rather observant and according to his tests, appears to be rather intelligent. Given his rather uncommunicative nature, these aspects of him rarely show.

Ennis appears to prefer being alone to group, although he doesn't seem to mind being with others when needed. When given a task, he will complete it, however, he rarely gives much feedback about the task unless specifically asked for.

Ennis uses a standard-issue staff-type storage device for combat. He seems to always purposefully underperform in combat, only acting on his best when absolutely necessary. Due to this, it is difficult to gauge his full magic potential.

He seems to prefer attacking from a range and has a tendancy of using more difficult and complicated spells over their more simple counterparts. Because of this, sparring opponents in his skill range often have difficulty fighting him due to not recognising his spells.

Not bad... keep up the work!

It's obvious that you don't want your characters to be used by other writers...:rolleyes:


Not too bad... Pretty good although so short that I don't really get what's going on.


<glares>

And it's just a snippet showing how Arcas could get cuddly with Sophia...

WHAT IS THIS EPIC CONCENTRATION OF WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED!?!? :eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Then again, it feels like we're encompassing 3 to 4 thread in one at the same time...


Good question! WHY INDEED!

It's called the "Thrill of the Hunt" as we close in on Image Thread, the stronghold of Warlock Haru!

Yuunoidas: TONIGHT! WE DINE, IN HELL!!!

RAWR!!! :frustrated:

Now... Let's say the Testarossa family intends to go on a holiday and invite most of the OCs, including Kay, along... I smell Glockealousy. IDEA! :D




RAWR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OOH! YAY! 82nd on holiday!

Erio: There is nothing I cannot seduce!!! :D

Sevasti: Very well. I will allow you to prove your hypothesis by attempting such an action with myself. Be warned, should you... displease me, I will not respond gently.

Boomer: Good luck, kid... the Major's got the romantic sense of a rock.

And while we're at it, did somebody ask for alternate form of Fuuko-chan? :D :D :D

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9955/1185823332321lb9.png

JIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~

<drools>

~~~New scenario timeline extended~~~

Just a fast [Mindburst!]

"Ladies and Gentlemen, Welcome to Ziya..." screamed a speakerphone.

"Yay!!!" Screamed Allison as she tugged Caro down the gangway. Erio ran after them, and even the usually stoic Hiro was wearing a faint smile.

"Say, Fate?" Kha said to the lady with her arm hooked around his.

"Hmm?"

"I... er... never been on a tour before... :heh:"

"Then I shall explain to you the mission objectives. :)"

"Yes Ma'am! :D"That mission objectives joke was inspired by Kha's, and subsequently Erio's "First Date" scenarios planned by Hayate. :D

Thanks for giving me a wonderful vision, Lowe! *swoon*

Yare, yare...

ANIKIIIII!!! :D

If only I knew where those girls are in timeline, I'd bring them in. In fact, I've got a StrikerS side story for them and the other shafted characters:

Ferret May Scry :p

(keeps on running)
If you got the time and ideas, or even if you just want to, how about you do it? Cos I've got none of time and little of the other. :heh:

SUPER IDEA!!!

Ooooh, we SEE indeed. :D I wonder where is this gonna fit? :)

I WILL DO MY BEST FOR THE GREAT GURREN SQUAD!!! :D

Boy its really hot in here. :heh:

I meant that Kha is Daddy Amuro, as there is also Junior Amuro. :uhoh: In fact, Kha will come to adopt most of his first batch of junior apprentices. Yoshi Krueger is the only one who has a family of his own.

Dante = Yuuno, even has a Big Freaking Sword and, like Sophia, hands for guns. :uhoh:
Morrison = Chrono, always bringing Yuuno work.
Patty = Loli-Arf!

Lady = Arisa, GDI secret contract mage. So secret, no one outside of the Aces' circle knows.
Trish = Suzuka, the other SCM on GDI payroll.

Shall Yuuno be friends, almost twins, with Jeno? :uhoh:

Now to figure out why Yuuno would answer the phone with "Hello, Ferret May Scry..."


Give me some time... and I'll get you an explanation..

NEW MATERIA-

Crap! I'm late for class!

<dashes off a la Yuuichi>

Liingo
2007-08-24, 10:55
Yare, yare... more backlog...

Now, wheres my drill to get out of here... Ahh here it is..

Kissatsu GIGA DRILL BREAKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1: oops. Somebody didn't want Ojiichan to die. :upset:

2: *hides self from thread's wrath for his evil teasers*

... I was just surprised by how he died..:sad:
LOL, for some reason, I was able to write this. Short, but at least I feel nicer with this piece.

Akira/Dranac profile Part II. Double flashbacks, and foreshadowing of their h4xxes, along with how they came to meet and their origin ;)



A dream…

Surrounding me were liquid and bubbles, as a glass wall was the chains that chained me to that place…

All I remembered from that place was the pain of needles, inserted into every inch of my body, and the pain that ran through me…

And that promise…

The promise that I would be complete, and be given a life…

For that reason, I endured everything.

For the sake of living…

But then, I discovered something inside me… as I felt something, an aura surrounding me, as I felt my body became lighter amidst the pool of water, as my ears start to hear clearly…

The words of deception.

“In the end, it was unsuccessful after all… With this little genetic information, reconstruction of the original Berserker of ancient times is improbable after all…”

Who…were they…talking about?

“What are we going to do with subject 01, Pars then?”

Subject 01…that is…what I’m called, codenamed Pars…

“Dispose of him.”

With those words… something inside of me changed.

And the next thing I remember, I was standing amidst a burning laboratory, as my hand was bloodied, holding the corpses of the people I considered my parents…

I was 8 years old then… without knowing anything, never stepping out of my glass prison, only taught and injected memories though computers…

I stepped myself out into the world, as I tried to live a lie.

Until that day 3 years later…

When that darkness awakened inside me again…

The day I met him.

My brother.

What I was going to be disposed for.

The closest