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Erio
2007-10-26, 20:54
Why not? Its a viable story. Having every OC in the military is boring no? See how much fun Aurion and Kay enjoys. :D *plants spy cam in RF6 female baths*

I'm already liking this "viable detective story"... :eek: and Wes is already very well versed in the art of planting spy cams in female baths! :uhoh: I think his technique is called "Heaven"... :uhoh::uhoh:

Jokes aside, who are going to be the detectives again? :heh:

If you don't mind watching 20+ episodes of harem stuff with almost zero plot and just mindless comedy, do watch it. Otherwise just stick with SnH or HnG, those are way better.

Hmm, maybe I'll pass, then. I still havent finished SnH or HnG. :heh:

Its built into windows XP. Just go start->control panel->regional and language settings->languages->details->settings.

At settings click add and select "Japanese" for your input language. In the "Advanced" tab, check the first box to make sure it works for programs like word/notepad/etc. Drop me a PM if you can't get it to work.

There's a small problem here... I'm running Windows Vista. :heh: I'll have to find out how to install Japanese. :heh:

I'll have to ask PF that. :heh: Speaking of pic Tear Grant from Tales of the Abyss would make a great Mid-type mage!

Nope, she's not. I've got Natalia, though, just in case. ;) Maybe they can meet sometime. :D

Why?? Why do you think of me so? :upset: I'm not like Chaos! :upset::upset::upset:

To be honest her personality just brings a smile to my face, and her seiyuu makes her so cute. I just want to bring that kind of character in to our merry little band of OCs here (wait... it sounded Robin Hood-like for a moment there :uhoh:).

To add, there's this scene where they were suppose to practice. The mages will attack the fighters, who will have to carry a bulleyes on their head (if I didn't read the text wrongly). Fel was trying to blast it off but Hyaweh kept dodging. She got so frustrated she yelled "MUUUUUKIIIII!! Stop moving!!" I LOL'ed went I saw that scene. :heh:

Then it reminded me of Princess Ce' Nedra from David Eddings' books, the Belgariad series to be precise. She starts stomping her foot and yelling at people when they annoy her. Wanna mix that personality into my elf OC.

Booo boo I seem to be going out of topic again? :eyespin:

And so... above all that, you want to do THIS and THAT to the poor Fel. I see, I see. :nod::nod::nod:

Jokes aside, though, she does sound very cute... I liked the "MUUUUKIIIII" part. :D

I was busy wiping off the blood! :heh: Anyway I would say the game as a whole is very satisfying, the story is IMO excellent. Every arc is good in its own way, conveying different stories and each giving the character great development.

My favourite will have to be Gwendolyn's arc. Maybe its partially because her seiyuu is none other than Kawasumi Ayako! Being serious here, I find myself being able to relate to her desire to find acceptance in someone. Acceptance in others is what many want, some more than others.

Oswald's arc was good too, but playing it was a pain, due to the framerate of the game slowing down to a crawl all the time. Its especially annoying when I use shadow form. :frustrated:

Mercedes, what can I say? Its Mamiko Noto! That alone scores a big win! Well jokes aside, her arc is my 2nd favourite after Gwen's. Her character development throughout the arc was the best IMO.

Velvet, still in chapter 5 I think. The prophecies for Armageddon and other things are slowly revealed, this arc has a lot of "meat" so to say. Speaking of which I really wish Velvet has more meat. I swear she goes down faster than USB can write his chapters! :rolleyes:

:nod: Kawasumi Ayako rocks indeed. My Gwen was inspired by Odin Sphere's Gwendolyn, though as I was creating her, her personality turned out to be completely different. :heh: I dont think Kawasumi Ayako's voice fits her new personality now, either...hmm...

Oswald's bosses were so hard sometimes. I think I beat a couple of them by pure luck. :heh:

Mamiko Noto rules too! :D Agreed about the character development. Her arc was a pleasant surprise. I could even go as far as to say that her story was the best. ;)

And Velvet does show a lot of "meat"...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: *ahem* I love her weapon, too. I'm going to use it for an OC I have planned for the future. :D

And this thread will explode in a sea of blood again. *bleeds nose and dies*

:heh:

Actually he did mean novel. ZnT was originally spawned from a series of light novel, just like FMP and many others.

Ah, souka.

Speaking of novel -> anime conversions, anyone know if more Crest/Banner of the Stars will be animated? Or does the story end at Banner of the Stars III? (Sure hope not. :()

Well don't feel bad just yet. I haven't decide who I like best yet. :heh:

Actually I'm destined to feel bad, since she is not a main character. :heh: That is, unless she gets as much screentime as Sayuri, who also was one of my favorites, along with Mai and Shiori. :D In Sayuri's case, though, she was an important part of Mai's story; Ryou, on the other hand, doesnt seem to be part of an important arc... (I may be wrong, though, of course, since I have not watched more than 3 episodes. :heh:)

Sounds interesting. I think I should read GetBackers manga if I intend to take my idea all the way. :)

I only watched the anime... I saw that the manga has a lot more of fanservice, though. :heh:

I'll take neither. Tabitha go go go! :D Btw are there translations for the novels around? Can someone direct me to it? By PM of course, just in case this is not allowed.

Tabitha, huh? :D I would also like this information. :D

Doubt it. The game's not even out yet. But if I'm not wrong its a Visual Data book and not just an artbook. Oh and one of the main female leads is voiced by Koshimizu Ami! Reminds me that I have yet to finish Ar Tonelico 1. Damn my games are piling up. :upset:

Same here. I'm still busy with Persona 3. :D

Just in case, has anyone laid claim on this character?
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3227/tearnz5.jpg

As said above, nope. ;)

Now for some Prism Ark goodness, from the game that is. U-zprAf8qug
Hyaweh: Hmm? WHAT THE?? WHY IS THIS BGM PLAYING??!

Pwnzors. If you guys don't get the BGM joke, I'll explain later when I wake up. Its more interesting to leave people curious. ^_^

That was... random. :heh: Too bad not all the text is voiced.

And thus Yuri pairings invaded the OC-thread.

The Legion must be laughing their heads of right now.

Haha, I'd like if yuri was not related with the Legion only. :heh: Thanks to them I cant even see Nanoha and Fate together still... :heh::heh: Maybe time will fix me up but...oh well.

In any case, Gwen and Mai actually have a background behind their relationship and why they like each other--I just need to get that writing inspiration to show it--, but obviously their relationship wont go all the way. :heh:

Yup, Ryou is the short haired one. I prefer Kyou though, dunno why. I seem to have a thing for tsunderes lately. :heh:

I'll have to see more of Kyou before giving a final verdict. :D

I tried the first episode, but it failed to keep me. Art is very important for me, and Kimikiss just, well, did nothing for me.

Ah, at least you gave it a try. That's good. ;)

I'm sure Mai has alot of self-control. :nod:

Not too sure after drinking all that potion though. :heh::eyespin:

I forgot about that potion... :uhoh:

Erio's pulling out all the stops. :eek:

I'm running out of images to show! :heh:

W..w...Wesson dude. :p

lol

That's a small peek? :eek: It's a whole new world out there then. :eek:

If I had to describe their world with simple words, it would be hot, steamy, wet, sticky-- ehrm... I better leave it at that. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

*runs*

Judging from Nighty's posted translations, there's plenty of that. :naughty:

Although the novels simply put the anime to shame. Everything is more in-depth and even the fan-service serves a strong point in the story. :rolleyes:

Why dont the producers just stick to the novels?! :( Many animes have been ruined like this, and producers still make the same mistakes! :upset:

Or bloody. :uhoh:

:uhoh: B-Bloody how...?

...

...

...

OK, I better stop these crack replies. :heh:

Ahhh! Erio I swear you've been switched to Chaos' side. All that nudging about Fate is making me go :eyespin:

Maybe I should try my hand at a :naughty: scene soon. :naughty:

*runs*

:heh: BTW, I've yet to read your latest piece. I gotta go soon, so I'll check it out as soon as I get back. :)

FA's going down in history for bringing the onionhead craze to Outer-Canaan. :heh:

He will always be remembered. *prays*

Erio has fallen to the dark side. :uhoh:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: I blame the awesome pictures I've been finding lately. :heh:

A little Yuri isn't bad, just as long as you get some pork in you're diet too. :p

Haha, dont worry, I'm running out of images. :heh:

*plugs nostrils*

Gwen & Mai doing THIS and THAT in PRIVATE? :love: :love: :love:

:uhoh:

A-Actually, that's not in private... as you can see, they are out in middle of the track field with their gym uniforms...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Hopefully they're not in middle of class...

BTW, "Kokoni wa dame" is supposed to mean "Not here", in case somebody did not know. :heh:

USB500
2007-10-26, 21:01
A-Actually, that's not in private... as you can see, they are out in middle of the track field with their gym uniforms...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Hopefully they're not in middle of class...

BTW, "Kokoni wa dame" is supposed to mean "Not here", in case somebody did not know. :heh:
Private or not, that's one "intimate" interaction, yo. :naughty: :naughty: :uhoh:

*plugs nostrils again*

Ah, so that's what it meant. I was wondering of it. :D :D :D :uhoh:

haiz123321
2007-10-26, 21:36
Spam Post = Fail.
:rolleyes:

I just claimed it first and then i replied the things i quoted so in what way did i spam?

Ok finished up the background of Haruhi and her device, any comments?


Background: Device and Character
Haruhi was from a family of mortals with no magical powers whatsoever at first (like Nanoha) but she always had the habit of fantasizing about supernatural things (fairys, mages, pixies etc.) One day while she was sleeping, she saw in her dream a mysterious figure asking her to bring her most treasured item to the forest near her home. She brought out her trumpet and ran into the woods while still in her pajamas. The mysterious figure was waiting there and it telephatically took hold of the trumpet and changed it into a magical staff which was Haruhi named Soprano.

After which Haruhi was brought into Mid-Childa, she attended a school for mages under the recomendation of the mysterious guy who was actually Xeith, he was searching for children who have magical potential to join the force he was going to make in the future.


Hey, when I delete a post, how come when someone's quoted it the quote doesn't go away?

I have removed my so-called "impurity." Happy now?

I think I'll be taking a break from here for a while. No hard feelings or anything. I might be back later if anyone cares enough.

Just loosen up a bit, guys, okay?

Don't worry, some of the people here just thinks that they're superior to us/personally attacking some people
(I am not targeting anybody, unless I hit a raw nerve) :D, don't let them get to you, afterall the forums here are for people to relax :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-26, 21:59
SUPA KAOS TIMU!!!!



~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~<~~<~<~<~<~<~<~




Wow... I didn't know you liked that song so much.:heh:



Was I wrong about it :p ?



Aoi Kajitsu.:D That song ranks higher than Eiyuu in my books.:D

It makes a good insert song during an ass-whooping scene :p



Chrono better look out...:uhoh: (:D)

You mean look FOR... ;) (:p)




Considering the characters involved, nothing of the sort should happen!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated::eyes pin:


"Yeah anything is possible... :D !"


IRmiBVj1-qk


C'mon, don't be a tease.

Here's what Sushi-Y-dono wrote on it. Hail her godly translation powah. :bow:

I thought I would never read that again :p




Tame as in control her or tame in able to match her? I was thinking that few OCs here could match her in that area. :D

Ehem.


Tame as in to control her.





How do you spoon feed someone a doujin? -____-

Show me that if you please. :rolleyes:

How you you get spoon-fed by someone who wants to be spoon-fed?







"The opposite side of this coin is.."



That's not an answer :heh:



Dang. This is all in the novels right? :rolleyes:

I think SII shown it, but not as developed.





You probably took a liking to her after Keroko Week. :D

No, no it can't be it... I-I couldn't... It's not possible...




This too? :rolleyes:

Tabitha and Kirche were the Zafira duo of ZnT S2. :heh:

Ah well... But at least Kirche would be out of the running soon...

And if I'm not wrong, Tabitha would be the imouto-character... :eyespin:



Wonder if Louise approved. :eyebrow:

I don't care about Lousie to begin with.


Um, which one was Jeno? :heh: I can leave it up to you to determine who the antagonist will be ;). I can PM you the general idea that I was considering for the eventual situation if you want (so as not to spoil it for others :uhoh:).


Jeno is my main OC character,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/Jeno.jpg


Don't be fooled by the image though, he's hardly ever emo.


He is generally polite (even when teasing and insulting people), he's relatively playful, has a very small moral compass when dealing with other people, prefers trickery but is more than capable of dishing out some stylish whoop-assing of his own.

He is honest with his faults, likes to win, enjoys a good laugh, has no problems with lying, and can be very hypocritical.


Yes.. That's probably ALL of it... NOTHING in PARTICULAR to ADD...




As for the blue girl, no wonder why her voice felt so familiar. :D

LOL, yeah...





:confused: I dont know what other things you might be thinking of, though... :uhoh:

:D :D :D :D :D




:D Nice. :D

I wonder if Mai will be able to contain her hidden desires after seeing Smith like that...though she's pretty busy with Gwen and Iris right now...:uhoh:

*ahem*


Loki: "Well she better not contain it... If not I'll be wasting my time here."




By novel you mean the manga right?

By novel I mean the story book :p




He's gonna go around beating girls up to make them his slaves meidos?! :uhoh:

Something tells me Darry is going to win this battle. :D :heh:


Misunderstandings at it's best here... :heh:

This is just a parody, though LoweGear seems to like it...




Am I the only Ryou supporter here?! :(:(:(

If it helps, I like the teary eyes and Handkerchief :heh: ?




Hey hey, that song wasnt so bad. :D

Nanaka and Yume FTW. :love:

I just don't know the title :heh:




He could have done better if he hadnt trapped Fate in that cage...but instead tied her up in :naughty: ways with his threads...

*ahem*

Fate is too used to being tied up, if you know what I mean...




:eek::eek::eek: OK, I've never been interested in this type of game, but this... :eek: THIS IS WIN!! :heh:

Where can we get screencaps of this?! :p

Go find the official site :p

Though there's not much at the moment...




I'll take them both. :3

:uhoh:

Ditto.




WHERE CAN I SEE THIS WIN SCENARIO?! :frustrated:

A few page down :heh:




Need moar. :eyespin:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

There isn't any :heh:




But that SaitoXSiesta pic = :love:

OOOOOOOHHHHHHH YYYYYYEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH~



Why?? Why do you think of me so? :upset: I'm not like Chaos! :upset::upset::upset:

OI! I'M STILL HERE!


Now for some Prism Ark goodness, from the game that is. U-zprAf8qug
Hyaweh: Hmm? WHAT THE?? WHY IS THIS BGM PLAYING??!

Pwnzors. If you guys don't get the BGM joke, I'll explain later when I wake up. Its more interesting to leave people curious. ^_^


Heh... Hyaweh's "OH SHI-!" face is priceless :D



Ahhh! Erio I swear you've been switched to Chaos' side. All that nudging about Fate is making me go :eyespin:


Oh sure, pin it on the bad guy...



Just in case, has anyone laid claim on this character?
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3227/tearnz5.jpg




Oh ho... What do we have here... :D :D :D ?


P.S - Courtesy of LoweGear...

ONE OF Loki's device's mode...




http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/DeviceOne2.jpg

Tk3997
2007-10-26, 22:05
I just claimed it first and then i replied the things i quoted so in what way did i spam? People that go out of their way to claim certain post numbers just annoy me as it's so very childish.


Don't worry, some of the people here just thinks that they're superior to us/personally attacking some people
(I am not targeting anybody, unless I hit a raw nerve) :D, don't let them get to you, afterall the forums here are for people to relax :D Yes that's it, it has nothing to do with the character being blatantly IMBA no, no clearly it’s a case of us big mean elitist writers being out to get you guys. :rolleyes:

Hey, when I delete a post, how come when someone's quoted it the quote doesn't go away?

I have removed my so-called "impurity." Happy now?

I think I'll be taking a break from here for a while. I don't think my work really has a place here. Feel free to use my "non-Hax" characters; kill them off, make examples of them, what you will.

Just loosen up a bit, guys, okay?I never said delete it. :rolleyes:

The character as written is broken, that's that, but it could be fixed mostly likely as very few things are beyond salvageable. You said you tried to keep her within bounds, well you failed according to pretty much the entire thread, but that just means it needed to be reworked further not deleted in a hissy fit. Unless you're going to go and insist that she needed to be god like for some reason in which case yeah we'll have a problem. Your first two chars were fine, and no one seriously said anything bad about them that alone should tell you something. When you kept it reasonable your work was accepted, but this one stepped way over the line and you got called on it and apparently you're intolerant to even the most limited of criticisms of your work.

The power level is broken as are the skills in most peoples views, and the concept is a tad hokey for me (but I've never like ancient immortal being and crap when that's not a core tenant of a universe, but that's just me), but not beyond hope or hax in itself. What needed tweaking was the skills and power, that's not even a huge deal.

LimitedEternal
2007-10-26, 22:16
I just claimed it first and then i replied the things i quoted so in what way did i spam?

Ok finished up the background of Haruhi and her device, any comments?


Background: Device and Character
Haruhi was from a family of mortals with no magical powers whatsoever at first (like Nanoha) but she always had the habit of fantasizing about supernatural things (fairys, mages, pixies etc.) One day while she was sleeping, she saw in her dream a mysterious figure asking her to bring her most treasured item to the forest near her home. She brought out her trumpet and ran into the woods while still in her pajamas. The mysterious figure was waiting there and it telephatically took hold of the trumpet and changed it into a magical staff which was Haruhi named Soprano.

After which Haruhi was brought into Mid-Childa, she attended a school for mages under the recomendation of the mysterious guy who was actually Xeith, he was searching for children who have magical potential to join the force he was going to make in the future.




Don't worry, some of the people here just thinks that they're superior to us/personally attacking some people
(I am not targeting anybody, unless I hit a raw nerve) :D, don't let them get to you, afterall the forums here are for people to relax :D

I already changed my mind, I needed a quick shower to cool my head. I had a real shitty day today, and I get REALLY on edge.

I'll rework her and submit a better version. I really want to use my characters, but I really don't have the organized writing skills to make my own stories, not in a way I feel comfortable presenting to anyone. And, it's nothing personal, but I tend to take everything personally when I'm angry.

*takes deep breath*

So, how about that truce, then?

Tk3997
2007-10-26, 22:27
I already changed my mind, I needed a quick shower to cool my head. I had a real shitty day today, and I get REALLY on edge.

I'll rework her and submit a better version. I really want to use my characters, but I really don't have the organized writing skills to make my own stories, not in a way I feel comfortable presenting to anyone. And, it's nothing personal, but I tend to take everything personally when I'm angry.

*takes deep breath*

So, how about that truce, then?It's fine, I can take stuff a tad personally as well at times, as I said above the concept isn't really the problem (though the immortality thing needs to be handled very carefully) it's the skill and power level that are the issue. If toned down a bit and given at least a few weakness she'd seem much more acceptable.

That said taking stuff like this personally isn't a good idea people are going to comment on parts of a work and the comments might no always be "wow this is awesome." like how I got questions about certain aspects of my latest creation I didn't whine or get anrgy though I presented logical reason I felt it worked or why I did it and clarified certain points. As I've said it's vital to separate people talking about your ideas and creations and talking about you.

Tormenk
2007-10-26, 22:47
Haha, I'd like if yuri was not related with the Legion only. :heh: Thanks to them I cant even see Nanoha and Fate together still... :heh::heh: Maybe time will fix me up but...oh well.

In any case, Gwen and Mai actually have a background behind their relationship and why they like each other--I just need to get that writing inspiration to show it--, but obviously their relationship wont go all the way. :heh:

The Legion left a different effect on me. I'm still fine with yuri but anything I see or read with NF now makes me go :rolleyes: and stop at every point to criticize. I'll go "Bah NF again so what's new? :rolleyes:" and that clouds my judgment and basically prevents me from enjoying a good read when I find one. :(



If I had to describe their world with simple words, it would be hot, steamy, wet, sticky-- ehrm... I better leave it at that. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

*runs*

:eek:

Which pair(s) of hands crafted this world? :eyebrow:



Why dont the producers just stick to the novels?! :( Many animes have been ruined like this, and producers still make the same mistakes! :upset:

Beats me. Length and time is one understandable part.


:uhoh: B-Bloody how...?

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...

...

OK, I better stop these crack replies. :heh:

Bloody in that he curves crosses into his victims.


:heh: BTW, I've yet to read your latest piece. I gotta go soon, so I'll check it out as soon as I get back. :)

No rush. The thread won't run away. :heh: Do tell what you think of it though. :)



A-Actually, that's not in private... as you can see, they are out in middle of the track field with their gym uniforms...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Hopefully they're not in middle of class...

BTW, "Kokoni wa dame" is supposed to mean "Not here", in case somebody did not know. :heh:

So elsewhere is perfectly fine? :uhoh:



"Yeah anything is possible... :D !"


IRmiBVj1-qk


This looks strangely familiar. :hmm:



Tame as in to control her.

Do point me in the direction where I can find them. :D



How you you get spoon-fed by someone who wants to be spoon-fed?

Alright. I could share it with you if you want.



That's not an answer :heh:

I'm stumped. :heh:



I think SII shown it, but not as developed.

Fan-service part only. :rolleyes:



No, no it can't be it... I-I couldn't... It's not possible...

Could it be..? The embodiment of Chaos has taken to a mortal woman mage? :eek:

Somebody get both Kerokos here now! :D


Ah well... But at least Kirche would be out of the running soon...

And if I'm not wrong, Tabitha would be the imouto-character... :eyespin:

Imouto? There's such a order in harems as well? :eyespin:



Jeno is my main OC character,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/Jeno.jpg


Don't be fooled by the image though, he's hardly ever emo.


He is generally polite (even when teasing and insulting people), he's relatively playful, has a very small moral compass when dealing with other people, prefers trickery but is more than capable of dishing out some stylish whoop-assing of his own.

He is honest with his faults, likes to win, enjoys a good laugh, has no problems with lying, and can be very hypocritical.


Yes.. That's probably ALL of it... NOTHING in PARTICULAR to ADD...

Are you sure? Lowegear probably will have something to add.. :D:D:D



Fate is too used to being tied up, if you know what I mean...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:



OI! I'M STILL HERE!

You can be assured you shall be never forgotten. :D



Oh sure, pin it on the bad guy...

Maybe. :D Weren't you just misunderstood?

But I realized I have been throwing more than my fair share of :rolleyes: at you. :heh:


Oh ho... What do we have here... :D :D :D ?

New prey. :D For you to corrupt and for me to twist. :D:D:D



P.S - Courtesy of LoweGear...

ONE OF Loki's device's mode...




http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/DeviceOne2.jpg



Well-chosen but what does the original looks like?

Maybe I should find a decent C.C image soon..

I already changed my mind, I needed a quick shower to cool my head. I had a real shitty day today, and I get REALLY on edge.

I'll rework her and submit a better version. I really want to use my characters, but I really don't have the organized writing skills to make my own stories, not in a way I feel comfortable presenting to anyone. And, it's nothing personal, but I tend to take everything personally when I'm angry.

*takes deep breath*

So, how about that truce, then?

Well tough times get to us all.

Do come back soon when you're ready. :)

Kha
2007-10-26, 22:49
Wesson is never Tsun though...

*watches Wesson try to swoon Darry*

Glock: Asides from being generally unhinged, does he look changed to you?
Smith: Not really.
Mai: ... *sighs*

Gimmy: WESSON YOU MAGGOT!!!!!!!! DARRY IS MINE!!!!!

:uhoh:Amuro: Interesting... So the potion doesn't have an effect on people who are already perverts...
Hiro: ...
Mm.
Foy: I wonder how it would work on Gimmy?
Gimmy: My sister is getting conned by a lowlife from underground and this is all the compassion I get?! :twitch:

So... Smith will become this then?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/Gurren20Lagann20-200120-20Large2001.jpg

But if Cap'n Smith's gonna have a ship, it'll have to be this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/Arcadia.jpg

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:



AND, no hero should be without an OP:

TqOcKUHUI8A

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:Esmerlda! :D

WHEE!:D:D:D Finished the exam! Lotsa delicious backlog to fill up my appetite as well!:D But before I start devouring... Let me post the link for the song, Eiyuu, first.:)

Here's the link (http://www.mediafire.com/?0tbya3wmbez).

Jaa~...

ITADAKIMASU!!!:D:D:DTY!

*plays*

As promised earlier a piece about Fate.



Disheartened by the sight of a despondent Fate, Caro and Erio could do no more than watch on as Jail continued his mockeries.

Am I really like my mother? Does that bastard Jail speak the truth? Am I really..like him?

"Give it up Fate Testarossa. Search it within you and you know that to be the truth. You're exactly everything I have said and more," ending that off with a cackle.


"...."

"What's wrong now, my dear Enforcer Fate? Have you finally accepted what hid dormant within your 12 years of artificial life? Hmm?"

Gripping Riot Zamber tighter, Fate's expression was unreadable.

"Bardiche."

"Sir?"

"Overdrive. True Sonic Form."

"Yes sir."

"Commence Limit Break, Sonic Drive."


Golden light surrounded Fate while Tre and Sette activated their Inherent Skills and assumed combat stances. Jail simply looked on with lazy interest.

From within the column of light, Fate emerged with a change of barrier jacket and wielding dual zambers now.


Hope was renewed in the two Lightning Forwards at Fate's new stance. Hope which would be shattered shortly there after.


Jail narrowed his eyes and whispered "Show me. Show me the power which I have desired to obtain..Fate."


I'm not my mother..


"Shut up.."

Red aether strings burst forth from the ground of the lab under a twitch from Jail's glove. The resulting explosion covered where Fate was standing in smoke. Moments after, she flew out from within.

Sette was ready for her though. Swinging her left arm towards Fate's head and preparing a second strike with her right should that fail.

Fate simply ducked low under her swing, the force of the missed strike radiating through the air. The second swing was intercepted by her zamber, shattering the weapon in the resulting collision.

Sette could only gap in shock at the inhuman speed which her attacks had been rendered useless. Her eyes grew wider at the sound of a dull "shirek". She turned slowly to face Fate, who by now was right in front of her.

Empty burgundy eyes, devoid of light was all Sette saw before she crumbled on top of Fate.

Fate proceeded to withdrew the zamber impaled through the dead Number, pushing Sette off her. The unmistakable red of blood was covering the length of her right zamber now, quickly gathering in a small pool on the dusty floor beneath the tip of Bardiche.


I'm nothing like what he says I am..


Tre could only afford a gap of surprise at the realization Sette had been killed before Fate came at her. Activating Ride Impulse to counter Fate's Sonic Move, the two speed demons engaged in a dog fight which Jail could only follow as a deadly dance of death marked by the yellow and purple streams of light clashing and moving apart repeatedly within the space of seconds.

Rounding about to strike, Fate brought her zambers straight at Tre. The hasty block with the fin blades on Tre's wrists held initially, the burst of energy from her opponent was the last thing she registered, moments before the blades pierced through.


He is wrong..



Fate stared down, her eyes in a cold fixation at the man below, before she threw off the weight currently on her arms into the walls of the lab.

Jail was silent. Glancing at the gaping holes on Tre's arms and neck, blood pouring forth from the wounds, he offered no words for his fallen creations before turning his attention back towards the silent woman now before him.


This is not who I am..


"It seems I'm wrong after all. You have exceeded beyond my expectations and I'll say Precia was a foolish woman to the end, rejecting such splendid power for her mad dreams. Yet the irony, I see her alive in this beauty before me now. And that much I have to thank her for, if not for the scars she left, you would not have reached this current stage."

Jail's face was the epitome of twisted, eyes wide and a smile spread impossibly far.

"I offer you my hand now, Fate Testarossa. Come to my side now and I shall extend your magnificence with everything I have at my disposal, if only to let your splendid beauty grow."

Covered in cuts and breathing heavily now, Fate was down on one knee, leaning heavily on Bardiche as support, the twin blades bathed in blood. The ghost of a whisper escaped her lips as she struggled to stand up.

"What was that just now? Did you just say yes?"

Again the soundless whisper.

"Come now, I'm sure you can do better, my container of beauty, Fate Testarossa.."

Another two heavy pants before an answer was heard, loud and clear.


"SHUT UP!"


Fate charged, holding Bardiche in Riot Zamber form now, closing the gap quickly between her and Jail. Jail's response was to throw back his head in a laugh and spread his arms wide open, mocking her even now.

A raging cry mixed in with hysterical laughing was all that was heard before Fate swung the flat of her blade into the side of Jail, flinging him to impact against the opposite wall.


Fate walked over to the silent Jail lied. Picking him up by the head with her left hand, Fate's features was one wrapped in pure dementedness.

A small chuckle was heard before Jail laughed weakly.

"Fate..such magnificence..such splendid beauty..no one else can even dream of becoming like you..hahaha.."

Fate grimaced, the downwards curl of her lips revealing white and her eyes hardened. Jail's laughing voice coupled with the sight of his crazed face covered in blood was the last straw for her.


"Shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..."

Golden light gathered up and electricity flowed over Fate's left hand, the hand which had Jail firmly in her grip.

"Show..show me more..of your magnificence..Fate Testarossa..HAHAHAHA!"

"..."

"Eternal silence to this fool before me let not his words defile my peace ever again."

Bardiche chimed once before answering.


"Hand of Fate."


Blinding light flowed from her hand, drowning everything in its grip, Jail's laughter seemingly consumed by the light as well.


It was hard to see what had happen but Caro and Erio waited for the blinding light to extinguish, before searching the display for the results of the aftermath.

From the clearing display, two figures were discernible.

A black clad figure standing before the corpse, left hand crackling with residual energy, right holding a bloody zamber and her back to the screen.

A white-coated figure fell to the ground sideways, revealing Jail Scaglietti to the display..

..and his now headless body.


The softest of a laugh was heard.




Shoddy.:heh:Whoo... Turned that canon incident on its head, and Precia-ism appears. :eyespin:

Highly unlikely with the slightest of controls, how many people do you see running around US or European or Japaneses streets with rocket launchers for instance? :rolleyes: It's rare to even find hand grenades for Christ sake!

A policy that's already flawed and impossible as we see rouge mages all the time.

You're right it udnermines it, and that comes up and is quickly dismissed as old thinking that has no place in the situation the TSAB finds itself in. When these go into mass use the TSAB will be fucked up thousands of mages dead, entire worlds effectively blockaded and lost to the enemy, no way to replace losses at the rates being taken without resorting to "mass based" systems, the entire TSAB army will change in this story it with morph from glorified light infantry police force into a true military with mages a component, but not the be all end all.

Arguable, my version of the TSAB is somewhat more like tight nit European Union, individual planets still retain significant power and infighting is actually rather common, though not in the warfare sense, but the political sense. Further we see the TSAB fielding some tanks and such in StrikerS so the conventional weapons being "Illegal" probably only applies to anyone without state sanction.

Or not, since the entire point of this story is to whomp the TSAB into realizing that it’s a big universe and restricting huge portions of the playbook and trying to control everything won’t work. If all goes as planned the TSAB is going to get an, IMO, much needed shock to the system regarding it’s backward polices.

This enemy won’t play by the TSAB rules; they’ll play by their rules. The TSAB will need to adapt or facing crippling losses and possible disaster. I’m tired of this “tiny handful of heroes saves the day!” Bullshit, my story will focus on large scale interplanetary warfare; this isn’t going to be some little gang the TSAB just needs to hunt down and then overwhelm with numbers, this is going to be a full fledged opposing nation state, oh don’t get me wrong the TSAB is going to try and go the old route at first, and they’re going to get slaughtered.

The old ways get discarded fast when mountains of casualties reports start coming home, the TSAB is going to begin a crash re-militarization very quickly directed by the few units and worlds that still retain some martial traditions and conventional warfare experience. Perhaps this maybe their own downfall and perhaps it will open a Pandora's box, but short term needs will outweigh longterm problems, besides attempting to restrict technological progress is a futile struggle, as long as will and desire exist it's going to happen. Another minor theme I want to touch on that.

The increasing mechanization and depersonalization of war as the TSAB revs up into a war footing will be another factor I want to explore, how the age of the lone heroic mage or small band saving the planet from some random alien artifact is dying and being replaced by an age where divisions of soldiers and tanks fight battles that ravage nations and ships burn dozen of miles of ground from orbit regularity. The TSAB "dream" is going to wither under the weight of the reality that the presence of other multi-world states will demand a large and well equipped army and all the problems that brings.

Internal differences and factionalism inside the state will flare over the burden of the affair and even non-administered worlds will be drawn into the conflict as the TSAB is strained nearly to the breaking point.

More backlog later, this just stuck out at me.This looks interesting... :heh:

Btw, on rewatching with higher quality subs, those tank like things apparently also resemble downed choppers, so we might be wrong completely... :uhoh:

But I always thought the TSAB had heavy machinery, but are large vehicles mounting Linker engines. I'd prolly dreamt it up, but its my way of adding info to canon such that its claims make some sense.

haiz123321
2007-10-26, 23:26
Jeno is my main OC character,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/Jeno.jpg


Don't be fooled by the image though, he's hardly ever emo.


He is generally polite (even when teasing and insulting people), he's relatively playful, has a very small moral compass when dealing with other people, prefers trickery but is more than capable of dishing out some stylish whoop-assing of his own.

He is honest with his faults, likes to win, enjoys a good laugh, has no problems with lying, and can be very hypocritical.


Yes.. That's probably ALL of it... NOTHING in PARTICULAR to ADD...

U forgot to add, He's a SPICA lover :D

People that go out of their way to claim certain post numbers just annoy me as it's so very childish.

Ahaha, I was just bored since holidays are here and I rarely go out
(somehow I have a complex of going out) :rolleyes:

Yes that's it, it has nothing to do with the character being blatantly IMBA no, no clearly it’s a case of us big mean elitist writers being out to get you guys. :rolleyes:

U had me worried for a moment there, I thought u thought I was attacking u *whew* Just to let u know, I actually have deep respect for you :D

I already changed my mind, I needed a quick shower to cool my head. I had a real shitty day today, and I get REALLY on edge.

I'll rework her and submit a better version. I really want to use my characters, but I really don't have the organized writing skills to make my own stories, not in a way I feel comfortable presenting to anyone. And, it's nothing personal, but I tend to take everything personally when I'm angry.

*takes deep breath*

So, how about that truce, then?

Don't worry, I was on edge last time and I had a mini quarrel with Aaron and Tk but everything's cool now :D and I'm quite similar to u, only that u need to have good ways to handle it, and I take almost EVERYTHING personally :heh: Whenever i feel pissed or something, I just read around the backlogs of this thread since some posts people make can really make you laugh especially
Chaos :p or i just play games.

Though I'm sure everyone will feel at least 1% offended if someone kept attacking your OC even though around 99% of the thread says it's ok

Off-Topic: Just watched Prism Ark, and HELL?!?! First episode there is romance + 15+ scenes :twitch: They do not waste time

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 00:05
NEW MATERIAL!!!!

Lowe-aniki, did you want that Galaxy Angel PM?

Didn't have to be so loud :heh:

I'd want to :)

As promised earlier a piece about Fate.



Disheartened by the sight of a despondent Fate, Caro and Erio could do no more than watch on as Jail continued his mockeries.

Am I really like my mother? Does that bastard Jail speak the truth? Am I really..like him?

"Give it up Fate Testarossa. Search it within you and you know that to be the truth. You're exactly everything I have said and more," ending that off with a cackle.


"...."

"What's wrong now, my dear Enforcer Fate? Have you finally accepted what hid dormant within your 12 years of artificial life? Hmm?"

Gripping Riot Zamber tighter, Fate's expression was unreadable.

"Bardiche."

"Sir?"

"Overdrive. True Sonic Form."

"Yes sir."

"Commence Limit Break, Sonic Drive."


Golden light surrounded Fate while Tre and Sette activated their Inherent Skills and assumed combat stances. Jail simply looked on with lazy interest.

From within the column of light, Fate emerged with a change of barrier jacket and wielding dual zambers now.


Hope was renewed in the two Lightning Forwards at Fate's new stance. Hope which would be shattered shortly there after.


Jail narrowed his eyes and whispered "Show me. Show me the power which I have desired to obtain..Fate."


I'm not my mother..


"Shut up.."

Red aether strings burst forth from the ground of the lab under a twitch from Jail's glove. The resulting explosion covered where Fate was standing in smoke. Moments after, she flew out from within.

Sette was ready for her though. Swinging her left arm towards Fate's head and preparing a second strike with her right should that fail.

Fate simply ducked low under her swing, the force of the missed strike radiating through the air. The second swing was intercepted by her zamber, shattering the weapon in the resulting collision.

Sette could only gap in shock at the inhuman speed which her attacks had been rendered useless. Her eyes grew wider at the sound of a dull "shirek". She turned slowly to face Fate, who by now was right in front of her.

Empty burgundy eyes, devoid of light was all Sette saw before she crumbled on top of Fate.

Fate proceeded to withdrew the zamber impaled through the dead Number, pushing Sette off her. The unmistakable red of blood was covering the length of her right zamber now, quickly gathering in a small pool on the dusty floor beneath the tip of Bardiche.


I'm nothing like what he says I am..


Tre could only afford a gap of surprise at the realization Sette had been killed before Fate came at her. Activating Ride Impulse to counter Fate's Sonic Move, the two speed demons engaged in a dog fight which Jail could only follow as a deadly dance of death marked by the yellow and purple streams of light clashing and moving apart repeatedly within the space of seconds.

Rounding about to strike, Fate brought her zambers straight at Tre. The hasty block with the fin blades on Tre's wrists held initially, the burst of energy from her opponent was the last thing she registered, moments before the blades pierced through.


He is wrong..



Fate stared down, her eyes in a cold fixation at the man below, before she threw off the weight currently on her arms into the walls of the lab.

Jail was silent. Glancing at the gaping holes on Tre's arms and neck, blood pouring forth from the wounds, he offered no words for his fallen creations before turning his attention back towards the silent woman now before him.


This is not who I am..


"It seems I'm wrong after all. You have exceeded beyond my expectations and I'll say Precia was a foolish woman to the end, rejecting such splendid power for her mad dreams. Yet the irony, I see her alive in this beauty before me now. And that much I have to thank her for, if not for the scars she left, you would not have reached this current stage."

Jail's face was the epitome of twisted, eyes wide and a smile spread impossibly far.

"I offer you my hand now, Fate Testarossa. Come to my side now and I shall extend your magnificence with everything I have at my disposal, if only to let your splendid beauty grow."

Covered in cuts and breathing heavily now, Fate was down on one knee, leaning heavily on Bardiche as support, the twin blades bathed in blood. The ghost of a whisper escaped her lips as she struggled to stand up.

"What was that just now? Did you just say yes?"

Again the soundless whisper.

"Come now, I'm sure you can do better, my container of beauty, Fate Testarossa.."

Another two heavy pants before an answer was heard, loud and clear.


"SHUT UP!"


Fate charged, holding Bardiche in Riot Zamber form now, closing the gap quickly between her and Jail. Jail's response was to throw back his head in a laugh and spread his arms wide open, mocking her even now.

A raging cry mixed in with hysterical laughing was all that was heard before Fate swung the flat of her blade into the side of Jail, flinging him to impact against the opposite wall.


Fate walked over to the silent Jail lied. Picking him up by the head with her left hand, Fate's features was one wrapped in pure dementedness.

A small chuckle was heard before Jail laughed weakly.

"Fate..such magnificence..such splendid beauty..no one else can even dream of becoming like you..hahaha.."

Fate grimaced, the downwards curl of her lips revealing white and her eyes hardened. Jail's laughing voice coupled with the sight of his crazed face covered in blood was the last straw for her.


"Shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..."

Golden light gathered up and electricity flowed over Fate's left hand, the hand which had Jail firmly in her grip.

"Show..show me more..of your magnificence..Fate Testarossa..HAHAHAHA!"

"..."

"Eternal silence to this fool before me let not his words defile my peace ever again."

Bardiche chimed once before answering.


"Hand of Fate."


Blinding light flowed from her hand, drowning everything in its grip, Jail's laughter seemingly consumed by the light as well.


It was hard to see what had happen but Caro and Erio waited for the blinding light to extinguish, before searching the display for the results of the aftermath.

From the clearing display, two figures were discernible.

A black clad figure standing before the corpse, left hand crackling with residual energy, right holding a bloody zamber and her back to the screen.

A white-coated figure fell to the ground sideways, revealing Jail Scaglietti to the display..

..and his now headless body.


The softest of a laugh was heard.




Shoddy.:heh:

...

:twitch::twitch::twitch:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Fate snapped, holy SHI-

*steps back*

Why do you think FlameSparkZ has so much power?


:uhoh:


What is the opposite of fear?


(This question is open to everybody)

I'd be inclined to say

COURAGE!!!!!!!!!!!

Even though that's technically incorrect :heh:

I won't be able to enjoy as much if there wasn't anything supernatural :p

Human beings are always attracted to the unknown.

Yup, nothing like a little supernatural to spice up some stories, especially romances :heh::D

Doesn't matter, he would hound her day and night for a VERY LONG TIME... HE would be HOPELESSLY devoted to her...



DJpyG3PXoKw



Geezus... there was a time I got that song spoon-fed to us everyday >_> :heh: (Parents are hopelessly stuck in a timewarp).

Fits though :D


Rather than that, I don't mind seeing another...

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9821/1178251115211vu7nn1.png

APPROVAL!!!!!!

Correction.:p
My standards are...

HAWT Fanservice = You can't make my nose bleed. YOU. JUST. CAN'T!:p
MOE = I like MOE.:nod: And I really don't set any standards for it.:heh:
MOE fanservice = You can get some :love: reactions by those pics.:heh:
About Hayat-EEP!:upset: Let's not go there.:heh::uhoh:


So, what would happen if we gave you HAWT MOE Hayate Fanservice?

:uhoh:


I've recently watched episode 1. And what can I say... Mei is really quite a charmer!:D:D:D

She's a good meld of beautiful and cute. With a very fitting voice.:D:love::D

You mean you've only seen episode one now? :eek:

And if you liked her voice in this ep, wait till you hear her in the next :heh:


Will use in my scenario as well.:) But this time, Aurion's going to be knocking some confidence back into her head!:D

Here's some parts...

"I don't know what idiotic idea came to your head about not being supposed to cry. You're not that kind of person. It's fine. Cry your heart out. What would matter is whether or not you can smile again at the end."

~~~~~~~

"You know the risk. We know it. Case closed. That's why it's called a RISK, right? To hell with it if you indeed lose it at one time. We'll just have to take a bigger risk and try to stop you. Do you think yo're unstoppable just when it comes to that? I beg to differ."

~~~~~~~

"Instructor Abrams is going to kill me once he finds out I've been turning some of his finest students back into softies...:heh:"




:heh:

Last snip WINS :D:D:D Although IIRC, Austin doesn't actually care about such things once he's through with his students :heh:

C'mon, don't be a tease.

Here's what Sushi-Y-dono wrote on it. Hail her godly translation powah. :bow:

*snip for OMGWTFBBQ*

:bow:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/jawdrop.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/jawdrop.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/jawdrop.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/jawdrop.gifhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/jawdrop.gif

:bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:

The True POWER of BLUECHEESIUM UNLEASHED!!!!! :eek:


Here's the complete image for those interested:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9031/0e7f87bc1a91c761b4c33c9hq9.th.jpg (http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0e7f87bc1a91c761b4c33c9hq9.jpg)


RELEVANT TO MY INTERESTS

:love:

:D Nice. :D

I wonder if Mai will be able to contain her hidden desires after seeing Smith like that...though she's pretty busy with Gwen and Iris right now...:uhoh:

*ahem*

Mai: ...

Sughe...

Hontou no Otoko da...

*blushes*


So we could use pics like this...


Mai: Onee-sama~ <3

Gwen: M-Mai... Kokoni wa dame~ Ah~ (:love:)


http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9830/gwendolynmai02v2kk6.jpg
:love::love::love:

They're gonna end up kinda sweaty after that...:uhoh:

You find the most... suggestive images do you? :uhoh:

Moar please?

*runs*

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Hopefully S&W didnt see that...:uhoh:

Smith: See...
Wesson: What?

S&W: *whistles* :rolleyes:

He's gonna go around beating girls up to make them his slaves meidos?! :uhoh:

Something tells me Darry is going to win this battle. :D :heh:

Whoever loses...

We WIN :D

He could have done better if he hadnt trapped Fate in that cage...but instead tied her up in :naughty: ways with his threads...

*ahem*

:eek::twitch:

NO U!!!!!!! :frustrated:

Why not? Its a viable story. Having every OC in the military is boring no? See how much fun Aurion and Kay enjoys. :D *plants spy cam in RF6 female baths*


Truth :nod:


Just in case, has anyone laid claim on this character?
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3227/tearnz5.jpg


:eek: WHOA... HAWTNESS :eek:


And thus Yuri pairings invaded the OC-thread.

The Legion must be laughing their heads of right now.


:heh:

Yuri is fine with us and all... it's rabid pigheadedness and outright antagonism that's the problem :heh:


I'm sure Mai has alot of self-control. :nod:

Not too sure after drinking all that potion though. :heh::eyespin:


Self-control in stopping herself from swooning over Smith yes.

Won't stop her from having a few... fantasies here and there :uhoh:

With the potion on the other hand...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


Well, Mai's welcomed to Frieda's secret world anytime.

What? :uhoh:

*runs*


Offer accepted :D

*runs*


MORE TO COME!!!!

Smith & Wesson as WHO THEY ARE??!!!
more Gemini fan service :naughty:
Armstrong/Arcas (friendly) encounter
the arrival of "Mamono wo Utsu Mono" and her anteater plush doll.



MOAR #2 YEZ PLEAZE!!!!!!!! :D

I'm already liking this "viable detective story"... :eek: and Wes is already very well versed in the art of planting spy cams in female baths! :uhoh: I think his technique is called "Heaven"... :uhoh::uhoh:

Jokes aside, who are going to be the detectives again? :heh:


It's not called "Heaven"...

More like "Paradise" :uhoh:

Haha, I'd like if yuri was not related with the Legion only. :heh: Thanks to them I cant even see Nanoha and Fate together still... :heh::heh: Maybe time will fix me up but...oh well.

In any case, Gwen and Mai actually have a background behind their relationship and why they like each other--I just need to get that writing inspiration to show it--, but obviously their relationship wont go all the way. :heh:

Yups, true there :nod:

If I had to describe their world with simple words, it would be hot, steamy, wet, sticky-- ehrm... I better leave it at that. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

*runs*

...Like a sauna you see? :nod:

*whistles*


Don't be fooled by the image though, he's hardly ever emo.


He is generally polite (even when teasing and insulting people), he's relatively playful, has a very small moral compass when dealing with other people, prefers trickery but is more than capable of dishing out some stylish whoop-assing of his own.

He is honest with his faults, likes to win, enjoys a good laugh, has no problems with lying, and can be very hypocritical.


Yes.. That's probably ALL of it... NOTHING in PARTICULAR to ADD...


That's all? Nothing else? :)

Are you sure? Lowegear probably will have something to add.. :D:D:D

What? I ain't sayin' anything.

Honest, I know nothing about Jeno's-dere-dere-to-anything-Spica-related side...

Ooops, did I just say too much? :nod:

*runs*

Loki: "Well she better not contain it... If not I'll be wasting my time here."

Mai is unusually skilled at hiding her emotions... doesn't mean you won't be able to catch hints though...

Mai: ...

*wipes drool off mouth*

Nanda?

Misunderstandings at it's best here... :heh:

This is just a parody, though LoweGear seems to like it...

:naughty:

Fate is too used to being tied up, if you know what I mean...

...hidden bondage fetish?

*runs*


:eek:

Which pair(s) of hands crafted this world? :eyebrow:


*points to Erio*

IT WAS HIM!!!! HE DID!!!! :uhoh::p

Amuro: Interesting... So the potion doesn't have an effect on people who are already perverts...
Hiro: ...
Mm.
Foy: I wonder how it would work on Gimmy?
Gimmy: My sister is getting conned by a lowlife from underground and this is all the compassion I get?! :twitch:


Wesson: Who'd have any compassion for a siscon? :rolleyes:
Gimmy: URUSAI!!!!!!

haiz123321
2007-10-27, 00:24
About 80% finished now, just need to touch up on Tatsuya's background and his skill list and I'm done, here's their profiles (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1216054&postcount=13701)

USB500
2007-10-27, 00:46
Mai: ...

Sughe...

Hontou no Otoko da...

*blushes*
*mental images*

:love:

*dies*

You find the most... suggestive images do you? :uhoh:

Moar please?

*runs*
Seconded. :uhoh: *runs*


:heh:

Yuri is fine with us and all... it's rabid pigheadedness and outright antagonism that's the problem :heh:
True. :uhoh:

Self-control in stopping herself from swooning over Smith yes.

Won't stop her from having a few... fantasies here and there :uhoh:

With the potion on the other hand...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
:uhoh:

Can we stop talking about the potion right now? :uhoh:

Offer accepted :D

*runs*
:uhoh:

MOAR #2 YEZ PLEAZE!!!!!!!! :D
Your wish is my command. :nod:

It's not called "Heaven"...

More like "Paradise" :uhoh:
I agree wholeheartedly.

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 01:04
...

:twitch::twitch::twitch:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Fate snapped, holy SHI-

*steps back*



:uhoh:

:nod:



I'd be inclined to say

COURAGE!!!!!!!!!!!

Even though that's technically incorrect :heh:

I had been thinking that too. :heh:

:hmm:



So, what would happen if we gave you HAWT MOE Hayate Fanservice?

:uhoh:

Watch Aaron turn into a puddle of goo? :uhoh:



Self-control in stopping herself from swooning over Smith yes.

Won't stop her from having a few... fantasies here and there :uhoh:

With the potion on the other hand...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Said fantasies are enacted? :uhoh::D



...Like a sauna you see? :nod:

*whistles*

Yup so hot and steamy I can't see anything at all. :(:D



That's all? Nothing else? :)


What? I ain't sayin' anything.

Honest, I know nothing about Jeno's-dere-dere-to-anything-Spica-related side...

Ooops, did I just say too much? :nod:

*runs*

I would add some more but.. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

How about cute and adorable?

And I wasn't the first one to say it =p



Mai is unusually skilled at hiding her emotions... doesn't mean you won't be able to catch hints though...

Mai: ...

*wipes drool off mouth*

Nanda?

Wonder what emotions she must be going through to drool like that. Mai must be really hungry. :D


...hidden bondage fetish?

*runs*

@_@ :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:


*points to Erio*

IT WAS HIM!!!! HE DID!!!! :uhoh::p

Was it really only him? I recount the images came from elsewhere. :uhoh:



Whoo... Turned that canon incident on its head, and Precia-ism appears. :eyespin:


This is beyond what Precia would do but who knows? :uhoh:



This looks interesting... :heh:

Btw, on rewatching with higher quality subs, those tank like things apparently also resemble downed choppers, so we might be wrong completely... :uhoh:

But I always thought the TSAB had heavy machinery, but are large vehicles mounting Linker engines. I'd prolly dreamt it up, but its my way of adding info to canon such that its claims make some sense.

The implications if that was true.. Linker Core powered vehicles. And all the experimentation on the two remaining successful cases. :hmm:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 01:19
*mental images*

:love:

*dies*


*Ai Enma carries USB's body to hell*

Mai: ...

Ai-senpai...

:uhoh:

Can we stop talking about the potion right now? :uhoh:

Why not? :heh:

I had been thinking that too. :heh:

:hmm:


"Courage is not the absence of fear, but the strength to go on despite your fear."

Watch Aaron turn into a puddle of goo? :uhoh:

:uhoh: a steaming pile of goo :uhoh:


Said fantasies are enacted? :uhoh::D



Smith: GIGA DRILL SPIN ON!!!!!



:eyespin:

Yup so hot and steamy I can't see anything at all. :(:D

Where'd all this steam come from? :uhoh:


I would add some more but.. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

How about cute and adorable?

And I wasn't the first one to say it =p

:nod:

Jeno kawaii da ne?

*runs*

Wonder what emotions she must be going through to drool like that. Mai must be really hungry. :D

Yeees.... VERY HUNGRY...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Was it really only him? I recount the images came from elsewhere. :uhoh:

:uhoh: I'm innocent! :uhoh:

Saint X
2007-10-27, 01:31
The implications if that was true.. Linker Core powered vehicles. And all the experimentation on the two remaining successful cases. :hmm:

- Those words made me remember how Jin in Zoids Genesis, after taking over Digald, produced his mechanical bio-zoid pilots- which are literally ghosts in shells- human souls placed in a machine and manipulated, forcing some of the remaining human Digald forces to join the rebel suppression army.

And on a side note... ZOMFG! that Bio-Tyranno is one HAXX zoid- it's a frakking mini black hole cannon!!!

Enemy Boss Zoids comparison, shall we?

---

And on a side note, TK idea of the Bureau having that kind of tendency is sound, but on my opinion, it is rather of ignorance, complacency and corruption- not outright 'subjugation' or 'control' or 'restriction' or anything along that line- in my opinion, the ignorant get a much bigger hurt than the hard-headed.

And to bring such a tendency to light, it should be a really long process of attrition- not just one fell swoop and change is acted upon.

And yes, just a minor suggestion to the cartridges. why can't there be two types? one 'canon cartidge' for use in devices- the one that boosts greatly but causes strain, yet hard to produce and expensive, and then the low-cost, less powerful and less straining kind of cartidges, the kind that can be used like machinegun ammo in other types of devices.

or, why not the 'energy packs/cartidge' that CM uses in normal operation?

- just my thoughts anyway.

===

and yes, if anyone has a copy of LIBERA ME...

...

...

...

I...

...

...

...

WANT A COPY NAO!!

FieryAeon
2007-10-27, 01:35
Or bloody. :uhoh:
Why bloody? :eek:


Ahhh! Erio I swear you've been switched to Chaos' side. All that nudging about Fate is making me go :eyespin:

Maybe I should try my hand at a :naughty: scene soon. :naughty:

*runs*
Is everyone becoming corrupted now? :uhoh:


FA's going down in history for bringing the onionhead craze to Outer-Canaan. :heh:
I don't want to be famous for that. :upset:


The irony of it. :heh:
We'll we don't go bonkers over here and insist its the only way like they do. :uhoh:


Nano4koma Vice just called. He wants his voyeur self back. :p
And he's getting it back in my story. :heh: Poor shafted Vice shall once more crawl out of the shaft of obscurity and claim greatness! *plants spy cam in Hayate's room for Aaron*


Well not too much. Characterization at the very least. :heh:
It seems to be easier to write when I have a base to work on. Itsuki, Jean, and Sylvia were entirely original. Only their devices were based on certain games.


Weak. :p
B-but the picture was too "strong"! :upset:


You've struck gold with this. I like what I see. :nod: Don't think she's taken.
Yay! I need a bigger picture of that. *goes to hunt in gamespot*


You and your puns. The last one I laughed at was the fighter planes joke. XD

Leave your comments at the door before you go. :p
Which one was that? :heh:


I'm already liking this "viable detective story"... :eek: and Wes is already very well versed in the art of planting spy cams in female baths! :uhoh: I think his technique is called "Heaven"... :uhoh::uhoh:

Jokes aside, who are going to be the detectives again? :heh:
Then Vice's technique shall be called vice! (lame pun intended) :heh:


There's a small problem here... I'm running Windows Vista. :heh: I'll have to find out how to install Japanese. :heh:
There should be similar settings in Vista's control panel.

Here's a site that can help. http://www.declan-software.com/japanese_ime/


Nope, she's not. I've got Natalia, though, just in case. ;) Maybe they can meet sometime. :D
Natalia eh? So that's who she was based on. :D Well I've just started the game so I haven't even got to the point where I meet Natalia yet. Having them meet is a good idea though.


And so... above all that, you want to do THIS and THAT to the poor Fel. I see, I see. :nod::nod::nod:

Jokes aside, though, she does sound very cute... I liked the "MUUUUKIIIII" part. :D
Yeah too bad I can't find that scene in youtube. In any case I just watched episode 1 of the anime and first thing I'll say is, the animation was terrible! :rolleyes:


:nod: Kawasumi Ayako rocks indeed. My Gwen was inspired by Odin Sphere's Gwendolyn, though as I was creating her, her personality turned out to be completely different. :heh: I dont think Kawasumi Ayako's voice fits her new personality now, either...hmm...

Oswald's bosses were so hard sometimes. I think I beat a couple of them by pure luck. :heh:

Mamiko Noto rules too! :D Agreed about the character development. Her arc was a pleasant surprise. I could even go as far as to say that her story was the best. ;)

And Velvet does show a lot of "meat"...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: *ahem* I love her weapon, too. I'm going to use it for an OC I have planned for the future. :D
Actually Sylvia's chains are inspired by Velvet's chains. :heh: I guess I should have included a picture in her profile. :p Only different I did was that Sylvia doesn't so much as use it to attack than to restrain opponents.

Physical bind+magical bind=bondage much! *runs like the wind*


Ah, souka.

Speaking of novel -> anime conversions, anyone know if more Crest/Banner of the Stars will be animated? Or does the story end at Banner of the Stars III? (Sure hope not. :()
Not sure about this one, but I haven't heard anything on it.


Actually I'm destined to feel bad, since she is not a main character. :heh: That is, unless she gets as much screentime as Sayuri, who also was one of my favorites, along with Mai and Shiori. :D In Sayuri's case, though, she was an important part of Mai's story; Ryou, on the other hand, doesnt seem to be part of an important arc... (I may be wrong, though, of course, since I have not watched more than 3 episodes. :heh:)
After episode 4, I'm leaning more towards Fuko. Her "you there! Weird person!" antics just crack me up. :heh:


I only watched the anime... I saw that the manga has a lot more of fanservice, though. :heh:
Its just like Air Gear manga being more violent and ecchi than the anime will ever be. :D


Tabitha, huh? :D I would also like this information. :D
If I'm not wrong one of the later volumes mentioned that Tabitha is also in love with Saito. Or was that fan-made rumours? :uhoh:


As said above, nope. ;)
Good....good! Another one to do this and that to. I kid. In any case now I'm wondering whether to incorporate the Fon hymns concept. Maybe I'll search through the backlogs for that Lyrical magic system thing someone wrote on (I believe it was Saint X).


That was... random. :heh: Too bad not all the text is voiced.
Only the dialogs of the girls are voiced. :rolleyes:


OI! I'M STILL HERE!
:heh: Just kidding.


Heh... Hyaweh's "OH SHI-!" face is priceless :D
Yeah that was pure gold. He knew he was in trouble the moment he didn't hear the BGM he thought he would hear. :heh:


Oh ho... What do we have here... :D :D :D
Erm...that's Tear Grants from Tales of the Abyss.


So, what would happen if we gave you HAWT MOE Hayate Fanservice?

:uhoh:
He'll join the sea of blood. :D


Truth :nod:
The idea getting approval is setting things up for me nicely. :D


:eek: WHOA... HAWTNESS :eek:
Bask in the hawtness that is Tear! :love: :love:


It's not called "Heaven"...

More like "Paradise" :uhoh:
Vice's version will be...Paradise of vice!

@Tormenk: Just read your piece. Damn Fate snapped! That's scary. :upset:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 01:37
- Those words made me remember how Jin in Zoids Genesis, after taking over Digald, produced his mechanical bio-zoid pilots- which are literally ghosts in shells- human souls placed in a machine and manipulated, forcing some of the remaining human Digald forces to join the rebel suppression army.

And on a side note... ZOMFG! that Bio-Tyranno is one HAXX zoid- it's a frakking mini black hole cannon!!!

Enemy Boss Zoids comparison, shall we?



Those machine soldiers existed even before Jin became head, which means he's been doing it for a very long time at least, and that most of the Digald army didn't even know it until now.

And yes, my first reaction to God's Lightning was :eek: "OMFG GRANZON" :eek::uhoh:

Compared to the Gravity Cannon or the Deathsaurer's CPC, it's quite weak though :heh:

Is everyone becoming corrupted now? :uhoh:


No one is immune :uhoh:


Vice's version will be...Paradise of vice!


More like... GTA Vice City!!! :D:D:D

*tumbleweed blows*

... cold...

Saint X
2007-10-27, 01:50
Those machine soldiers existed even before Jin became head, which means he's been doing it for a very long time at least, and that most of the Digald army didn't even know it until now.

And yes, my first reaction to God's Lightning was :eek: "OMFG GRANZON" :eek::uhoh:

Compared to the Gravity Cannon or the Deathsaurer's CPC, it's quite weak though :heh:

No one is immune :uhoh:

More like... GTA Vice City!!! :D:D:D

*tumbleweed blows*

... cold...

- Yes... but i thought they were just soldiers in suits that fail as a pilot suit.

- Just pit it against the Death Stinger or Berserk Fury and let's see how much damage...

- *points to self* I'm still immune...

- In the words of my boss: Sometimes Lowe, the wind could be sooo cold...

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 01:50
The Legion left a different effect on me. I'm still fine with yuri but anything I see or read with NF now makes me go :rolleyes: and stop at every point to criticize. I'll go "Bah NF again so what's new? :rolleyes:" and that clouds my judgment and basically prevents me from enjoying a good read when I find one. :(


I never liked yuri, shoujo-ai, or whatever terms there is in the first place... Encountering the retard-fish monkeys just further solidify my belief and fueled my weapons against them.

"DIE YURI! DIE!!!"

*Push all the red buttons to launch the nukes.*



This looks strangely familiar. :hmm:

You didn't watch it before :p ?



Do point me in the direction where I can find them. :D

Think along the lines of Yoh, Allen, and Hyaweh...

Those kinds...



Alright. I could share it with you if you want.

:nod:



I'm stumped. :heh:

Hehhh~ :D



Could it be..? The embodiment of Chaos has taken to a mortal woman mage? :eek:

Somebody get both Kerokos here now! :D

*Dump a potato sack over Tormenk's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*


Imouto? There's such a order in harems as well? :eyespin:

She's not related by blood as well :p



Are you sure? Lowegear probably will have something to add.. :D:D:D


*Dump Tormenk into a box, and sink him into the bay*



New prey. :D :D:D:D


EXACTLY... :D

This I can't wait :D



Well-chosen but what does the original looks like?



http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3259/minitokyoanimewallpaperfb3.jpg



Hint: It's not the pig:heh:



Maybe I should find a decent C.C image soon..

Good choice, now I really don't mind lending you Jeno...


U forgot to add, He's a SPICA lover :D

*Dump a potato sack over haiz's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*



Whenever i feel pissed or something, I just read around the backlogs of this thread since some posts people make can really make you laugh especially
Chaos :p or i just play games.


Is that a complement :heh: ?



Off-Topic: Just watched Prism Ark, and HELL?!?! First episode there is romance + 15+ scenes :twitch: They do not waste time

They skipped into the future :heh: That scene is very far into the story :heh:



I'd be inclined to say

COURAGE!!!!!!!!!!!

Even though that's technically incorrect :heh:

I've gotten this from a comedy series :heh:


"The opposite of fear is not courage, it's faith."

Think about it :p



Yup, nothing like a little supernatural to spice up some stories, especially romances :heh::D

Exactly.



Geezus... there was a time I got that song spoon-fed to us everyday >_> :heh: (Parents are hopelessly stuck in a timewarp).

Fits though :D

To be honest, I've only heard my mom singing it once :heh:



APPROVAL!!!!!!

Who in their right mind wouldn't?

Now to trade Louise for her good friend...




Mai: ...

Sughe...

Hontou no Otoko da...

*blushes*

Hehh... So Mai likes those types...


Whoever loses...

We WIN :D

Except Gimmy, but Jeno was suppose to have killed him by now...



:eek: WHOA... HAWTNESS :eek:

Indeed... Now to take advantage of it...



:heh:

Yuri is fine with us and all... it's rabid pigheadedness and outright antagonism that's the problem :heh:


"ALL DIE!!!"

*Push the red button to cast Ion storms*



Self-control in stopping herself from swooning over Smith yes.

Won't stop her from having a few... fantasies here and there :uhoh:

With the potion on the other hand...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Jeno: "I know... I can SEE THEM :D"


*pat Smith on the shoulder*


Jeno: "I can only hope you're... 'UP' to it :D You shouldn't disappoint a girl :p"



That's all? Nothing else? :)


Nothing he needs to know >.> .



What? I ain't sayin' anything.

Honest, I know nothing about Jeno's-dere-dere-to-anything-Spica-related side...

Ooops, did I just say too much? :nod:

*runs*


AAAARRRRHHHHHH!!!!

*Dump a potato sack over LoweGear's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*



Mai is unusually skilled at hiding her emotions... doesn't mean you won't be able to catch hints though...

Mai: ...

*wipes drool off mouth*

Nanda?

*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*


Jeno: "Yeahhh~ It's nothing, nothing at all, continue what you're doing..."


*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*



:naughty:

Corrections, he REALLY likes it :heh:



...hidden bondage fetish?

*runs*


"AH! Onii-chan! Matta... It's too tight!"




Wesson: Who'd have any compassion for a siscon? :rolleyes:
Gimmy: URUSAI!!!!!!


Jeno: "Is that all you want to say?"

<Executioner Online>

*Dark blue lightning bolts circle around him*

Jeno: "Nothing personal kiddo..."

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 02:04
- Yes... but i thought they were just soldiers in suits that fail as a pilot suit.


True there :heh:

- Just pit it against the Death Stinger or Berserk Fury and let's see how much damage...

Have to admit though, the Bio-Tyranno has the coolest looking WMD :uhoh:


I've gotten this from a comedy series :heh:


"The opposite of fear is not courage, it's faith."

Think about it :p


Because to fear is to be afraid of the possibilities ahead, while to have faith is to embrace those possibilities.

Hehh... So Mai likes those types...

*whistles*

Except Gimmy, but Jeno was suppose to have killed him by now...

Rest in Peace Gimmy :uhoh:

*prays*

"ALL DIE!!!"

*Push the red button to cast Ion storms*

-==-


Jeno: "I know... I can [I]SEE THEM :D"


*pat smith on the shoulder*


Jeno: "I can only hope you're... 'UP' to it :D You shouldn't disappoint a girl :p"

Smith: Uhm.. kay'. :heh:

What was that about... :confused:

AAAARRRRHHHHHH!!!!

*Dump a potato sack over LoweGear's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

Did I also mention Jeno's undying love and devotion for her?

:nod:

*jumps back into hole*


*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*


Jeno: "Yeahhh~ It's nothing, nothing at all, continue what you're doing..."


*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*

So Jeno can use his powers in THAT manner huh... :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

"AH! Onii-chan! Matta...!"

Chrono's Dream?

*runs*


Jeno: "Is that all you want to say?"

<Executioner Online>

*Dark blue lightning bolts circle around him*

Jeno: "Nothing personal kiddo..."

*Gimmy's Candle appears*

Rest Well Kiddo, we'll never forget you

:nod:

asaqe
2007-10-27, 02:06
MORE EPIC NESS!!! ALBERT AND HIS FUTURE SON WHO WILL KICK INDISCRIMINATE AMOUNTS OF ASS!

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b214/gyrobot/Warrior.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b214/gyrobot/knight2.jpg

Epic swordfight in da future!

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 02:16
And on a side note, TK idea of the Bureau having that kind of tendency is sound, but on my opinion, it is rather of ignorance, complacency and corruption- not outright 'subjugation' or 'control' or 'restriction' or anything along that line- in my opinion, the ignorant get a much bigger hurt than the hard-headed. Some level of control is required to keep a state together; force legitimizes a state and nothing else. If a state can’t and doesn’t exert control over its components then it will disintegrates rapidly. The TSAB is IMO clearly actively controlling certain aspects of science and engineering out of some misguided and futile moral mission, much like today idiots in the US are opposing stem cells and genetic engineering on moronic religious and scare mongering arguments, but they can’t stop it and neither can the TSAB. They’d be better off regulating it and using it for their benefit then trying to stop it completely. Incompetence and corruption are also factors and I agree wholeheartedly both exist and may contribute nearly as much stupid policy, but they aren’t the sole cause.


And to bring such a tendency to light, it should be a really long process of attrition- not just one fell swoop and change is acted upon. Normally it would be, actually normally change might not happen at all, but war is a rather harsh and fast teacher. When entire units start being annihilated to little effect and set backs are occurring all over the stark reality of the ineffectual nature of TSAB tactics, doctrine, and policy will become obvious quickly. Change will be quick too as those in power are drummed out due to their ineffectiveness and still more are killed in combat, the smart will survive and raise to lead while the incompetent will be killed or disgraced. The process won’t be instant, but it’ll be pretty quick.


And yes, just a minor suggestion to the cartridges. why can't there be two types? one 'canon cartidge' for use in devices- the one that boosts greatly but causes strain, yet hard to produce and expensive, and then the low-cost, less powerful and less straining kind of cartidges, the kind that can be used like machinegun ammo in other types of devices.

or, why not the 'energy packs/cartidge' that CM uses in normal operation?

- just my thoughts anyway.
Just seems like a needless distinction plus the change isn't really in the ammo per say but rather it's in how it's being used. My intention was always for them to be less powerful individually anyway, but I may consider making them a slight variant of normal rounds, at least once mass production begins.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 02:27
Erm...that's Tear Grants from Tales of the Abyss.




So you say... But all I see is my next victim :D



:nod:

Jeno kawaii da ne?

*runs*




LOWEGEAAAARRRRRR!!!!




*whistles*



The little girl's all grown up :p




Rest in Peace Gimmy :uhoh:

*prays*


Who says anything about peace :D



Smith: Uhm.. kay'. :heh:

What was that about... :confused:

Jeno can see her dark desires :p



Did I also mention Jeno's undying love and devotion for her?

:nod:

*jumps back into hole*



COME BACK HERE!!!!!



So Jeno can use his powers in THAT manner huh... :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

What? Lust isn't a dark thought :p ?



Chrono's Dream?

*runs*

The truth is stranger than fiction...This is Fate's dream...>.>



*Gimmy's Candle appears*

Rest Well Kiddo, we'll never forget you

:nod:

Gimmy: "I'M NOT DEAD YET!!!"

*Run while dodging lightning*

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 02:27
"Courage is not the absence of fear, but the strength to go on despite your fear."


*nods in agreement*




Smith: GIGA DRILL SPIN ON!!!!!



:eyespin:

Would that be from Mai's POV? :uhoh:


Where'd all this steam come from? :uhoh:

All the hot stuff here the last few days. :heh:



:nod:

Jeno kawaii da ne?

*runs*

Dang uncovered.

*runs for it*

- Those words made me remember how Jin in Zoids Genesis, after taking over Digald, produced his mechanical bio-zoid pilots- which are literally ghosts in shells- human souls placed in a machine and manipulated, forcing some of the remaining human Digald forces to join the rebel suppression army.

And on a side note... ZOMFG! that Bio-Tyranno is one HAXX zoid- it's a frakking mini black hole cannon!!!

Enemy Boss Zoids comparison, shall we?

---

Actually I was thinking of Rein and Agito. Since they're the only remaining Unison Devices, and Unison Devices are the closet to having a artificial Linker Core, research about creation of Linker Cores would come from them first. Agito might have been experimented on along similar lines.


And on a side note, TK idea of the Bureau having that kind of tendency is sound, but on my opinion, it is rather of ignorance, complacency and corruption- not outright 'subjugation' or 'control' or 'restriction' or anything along that line- in my opinion, the ignorant get a much bigger hurt than the hard-headed.

And to bring such a tendency to light, it should be a really long process of attrition- not just one fell swoop and change is acted upon.

And yes, just a minor suggestion to the cartridges. why can't there be two types? one 'canon cartidge' for use in devices- the one that boosts greatly but causes strain, yet hard to produce and expensive, and then the low-cost, less powerful and less straining kind of cartidges, the kind that can be used like machinegun ammo in other types of devices.

or, why not the 'energy packs/cartidge' that CM uses in normal operation?

- just my thoughts anyway.


The idea of two kind of cartridges works IMO.


Why bloody? :eek:

This (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dr._Jackal) is the reason why. :uhoh:



And he's getting it back in my story. :heh: Poor shafted Vice shall once more crawl out of the shaft of obscurity and claim greatness! *plants spy cam in Hayate's room for Aaron*

Now you've done it. The Wolkies are going to be out for your blood now. :upset:

And here comes your favorite demented firebrand. :uhoh:

"Eat hammer bastard!"



It seems to be easier to write when I have a base to work on. Itsuki, Jean, and Sylvia were entirely original. Only their devices were based on certain games.

Or when you're writing a part of yourself. Which reminds me to haul my butt to write Katrina's profile instead of writing more crack of bloody pieces. :heh::D


Which one was that? :heh:

Too long ago to recall. :heh:


Then Vice's technique shall be called vice! (lame pun intended) :heh:

:dots:


Actually Sylvia's chains are inspired by Velvet's chains. :heh: I guess I should have included a picture in her profile. :p Only different I did was that Sylvia doesn't so much as use it to attack than to restrain opponents.

Physical bind+magical bind=bondage much! *runs like the wind*

FA's getting some weird ideas. :uhoh:


Good....good! Another one to do this and that to. I kid. In any case now I'm wondering whether to incorporate the Fon hymns concept. Maybe I'll search through the backlogs for that Lyrical magic system thing someone wrote on (I believe it was Saint X).

Nope that was LoweGear's work. I'm considering that part too.


Vice's version will be...Paradise of vice!

Now this I like. :naughty:


@Tormenk: Just read your piece. Damn Fate snapped! That's scary. :upset:

Should I set up more? :hmm:

Those machine soldiers existed even before Jin became head, which means he's been doing it for a very long time at least, and that most of the Digald army didn't even know it until now.

And yes, my first reaction to God's Lightning was :eek: "OMFG GRANZON" :eek::uhoh:

Compared to the Gravity Cannon or the Deathsaurer's CPC, it's quite weak though :heh:

Is there a season of Zoids currently on air now? :confused:



More like... GTA Vice City!!! :D:D:D

*tumbleweed blows*

... cold...

"Don't mind him cowboy, that one over there's a little weird." :D

I never liked yuri, shoujo-ai, or whatever terms there is in the first place... Encountering the retard-fish monkeys just further solidify my belief and fueled my weapons against them.

"DIE YURI! DIE!!!"

*Push all the red buttons to launch the nukes.*

"Now that's goin' to be some big-ass fireworks!" :D



You didn't watch it before :p ?

My mind has no spare space after stocking up on all the twisted stuff I've been gathering lately so it's probably wiped out from memory. :D



Think along the lines of Yoh, Allen, and Hyaweh...

Those kinds...

Katrina would spare no interest to the likes of Yoh and Allen. She'll probably do something just to elicit a 'fun' reaction from them. Think Road and Hao kind of actions.

Other than that, those two are pretty impregnable. :nod:

I have no idea for Hyaweh though. :heh:


:nod:

Pm it to ya later, if that's possible.


Hehhh~ :D

Not for long. :D


*Dump a potato sack over Tormenk's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

*cuts open the sack*

Search within you and you know it to be the truth.

:D:D:D


EXACTLY... :D

This I can't wait :D

Likewise. :D:D:D



http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3259/minitokyoanimewallpaperfb3.jpg



Hint: It's not the pig:heh:

It's the staff I see. I was actually asking about the original shop though. :heh:



Good choice, now I really don't mind lending you Jeno...

Lenalee's no good? :(

Nowthat the perfect avatar has been chosen, which guy wouldn't kill to have Katrina snuggle up next to him and whisper into his ear? Jeno no less? :D


I've gotten this from a comedy series :heh:


"The opposite of fear is not courage, it's faith."

Think about it :p

I'm getting close..



"ALL DIE!!!"

*Push the red button to cast Ion storms*

"And that's some pretty lightnin' too!" :D:D:D


Jeno: "I know... I can SEE THEM :D"


*pat Smith on the shoulder*


Jeno: "I can only hope you're... 'UP' to it :D You shouldn't disappoint a girl :p"


*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*


Jeno: "Yeahhh~ It's nothing, nothing at all, continue what you're doing..."


*Jeno Stares.... And stares... And stares...*

In her mind? :uhoh:

Now that's a scary way to use his ability. :eyespin:



Jeno: "Is that all you want to say?"

<Executioner Online>

*Dark blue lightning bolts circle around him*

Jeno: "Nothing personal kiddo..."

It's only business :cool:

Jimmy C
2007-10-27, 02:31
You know, with all the cartridge users in this discussion, I'm surprised that no one thought of making a full-up auxilary magical energy generator. I mean, if every one of your spells uses cartridges, you might as well have something that supplies that level of magical energy all the time.

Actually I was thinking of Rein and Agito. Since they're the only remaining Unison Devices, and Unison Devices are the closet to having a artificial Linker Core, research about creation of Linker Cores would come from them first.

Not too certain about that. According to Sound Stage 3, Rein's Linker Core comes from Hayate. Agito's could have come from her original lord.

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 02:37
As promised earlier a piece about Fate.



Disheartened by the sight of a despondent Fate, Caro and Erio could do no more than watch on as Jail continued his mockeries.

Am I really like my mother? Does that bastard Jail speak the truth? Am I really..like him?

"Give it up Fate Testarossa. Search it within you and you know that to be the truth. You're exactly everything I have said and more," ending that off with a cackle.


"...."

"What's wrong now, my dear Enforcer Fate? Have you finally accepted what hid dormant within your 12 years of artificial life? Hmm?"

Gripping Riot Zamber tighter, Fate's expression was unreadable.

"Bardiche."

"Sir?"

"Overdrive. True Sonic Form."

"Yes sir."

"Commence Limit Break, Sonic Drive."


Golden light surrounded Fate while Tre and Sette activated their Inherent Skills and assumed combat stances. Jail simply looked on with lazy interest.

From within the column of light, Fate emerged with a change of barrier jacket and wielding dual zambers now.


Hope was renewed in the two Lightning Forwards at Fate's new stance. Hope which would be shattered shortly there after.


Jail narrowed his eyes and whispered "Show me. Show me the power which I have desired to obtain..Fate."


I'm not my mother..


"Shut up.."

Red aether strings burst forth from the ground of the lab under a twitch from Jail's glove. The resulting explosion covered where Fate was standing in smoke. Moments after, she flew out from within.

Sette was ready for her though. Swinging her left arm towards Fate's head and preparing a second strike with her right should that fail.

Fate simply ducked low under her swing, the force of the missed strike radiating through the air. The second swing was intercepted by her zamber, shattering the weapon in the resulting collision.

Sette could only gap in shock at the inhuman speed which her attacks had been rendered useless. Her eyes grew wider at the sound of a dull "shirek". She turned slowly to face Fate, who by now was right in front of her.

Empty burgundy eyes, devoid of light was all Sette saw before she crumbled on top of Fate.

Fate proceeded to withdrew the zamber impaled through the dead Number, pushing Sette off her. The unmistakable red of blood was covering the length of her right zamber now, quickly gathering in a small pool on the dusty floor beneath the tip of Bardiche.


I'm nothing like what he says I am..


Tre could only afford a gap of surprise at the realization Sette had been killed before Fate came at her. Activating Ride Impulse to counter Fate's Sonic Move, the two speed demons engaged in a dog fight which Jail could only follow as a deadly dance of death marked by the yellow and purple streams of light clashing and moving apart repeatedly within the space of seconds.

Rounding about to strike, Fate brought her zambers straight at Tre. The hasty block with the fin blades on Tre's wrists held initially, the burst of energy from her opponent was the last thing she registered, moments before the blades pierced through.


He is wrong..



Fate stared down, her eyes in a cold fixation at the man below, before she threw off the weight currently on her arms into the walls of the lab.

Jail was silent. Glancing at the gaping holes on Tre's arms and neck, blood pouring forth from the wounds, he offered no words for his fallen creations before turning his attention back towards the silent woman now before him.


This is not who I am..


"It seems I'm wrong after all. You have exceeded beyond my expectations and I'll say Precia was a foolish woman to the end, rejecting such splendid power for her mad dreams. Yet the irony, I see her alive in this beauty before me now. And that much I have to thank her for, if not for the scars she left, you would not have reached this current stage."

Jail's face was the epitome of twisted, eyes wide and a smile spread impossibly far.

"I offer you my hand now, Fate Testarossa. Come to my side now and I shall extend your magnificence with everything I have at my disposal, if only to let your splendid beauty grow."

Covered in cuts and breathing heavily now, Fate was down on one knee, leaning heavily on Bardiche as support, the twin blades bathed in blood. The ghost of a whisper escaped her lips as she struggled to stand up.

"What was that just now? Did you just say yes?"

Again the soundless whisper.

"Come now, I'm sure you can do better, my container of beauty, Fate Testarossa.."

Another two heavy pants before an answer was heard, loud and clear.


"SHUT UP!"


Fate charged, holding Bardiche in Riot Zamber form now, closing the gap quickly between her and Jail. Jail's response was to throw back his head in a laugh and spread his arms wide open, mocking her even now.

A raging cry mixed in with hysterical laughing was all that was heard before Fate swung the flat of her blade into the side of Jail, flinging him to impact against the opposite wall.


Fate walked over to the silent Jail lied. Picking him up by the head with her left hand, Fate's features was one wrapped in pure dementedness.

A small chuckle was heard before Jail laughed weakly.

"Fate..such magnificence..such splendid beauty..no one else can even dream of becoming like you..hahaha.."

Fate grimaced, the downwards curl of her lips revealing white and her eyes hardened. Jail's laughing voice coupled with the sight of his crazed face covered in blood was the last straw for her.


"Shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..."

Golden light gathered up and electricity flowed over Fate's left hand, the hand which had Jail firmly in her grip.

"Show..show me more..of your magnificence..Fate Testarossa..HAHAHAHA!"

"..."

"Eternal silence to this fool before me let not his words defile my peace ever again."

Bardiche chimed once before answering.


"Hand of Fate."


Blinding light flowed from her hand, drowning everything in its grip, Jail's laughter seemingly consumed by the light as well.


It was hard to see what had happen but Caro and Erio waited for the blinding light to extinguish, before searching the display for the results of the aftermath.

From the clearing display, two figures were discernible.

A black clad figure standing before the corpse, left hand crackling with residual energy, right holding a bloody zamber and her back to the screen.

A white-coated figure fell to the ground sideways, revealing Jail Scaglietti to the display..

..and his now headless body.


The softest of a laugh was heard.




Shoddy.:heh:

:eek:
Fate snapped...:eek:

C'mon, don't be a tease.

Here's what Sushi-Y-dono wrote on it. Hail her godly translation powah. :bow:

*snip*

:bow:

:bow::bow::bow:

Not at all...more like they have an understanding...Fate was an artificial being who's becoming more and more human...David was a human who's becoming more and more artifical...their experiences meet in the middle.

besides, I had to beat Aurion to the joke about the backdated Child support payments...

Noted.:heh:

Here's the complete image for those interested:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9031/0e7f87bc1a91c761b4c33c9hq9.th.jpg (http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0e7f87bc1a91c761b4c33c9hq9.jpg)

MOE!!!:D:D:D:nod:


Mai: Onee-sama~ <3

Gwen: M-Mai... Kokoni wa dame~ Ah~ (:love:)


http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9830/gwendolynmai02v2kk6.jpg
:love::love::love:

They're gonna end up kinda sweaty after that...:uhoh:

You keep on pushing it, huh?:uhoh:

Though I must admit. That pic is :love: worthy!:D

Am I the only Ryou supporter here?! :(:(:(

She scores higher than Nagisa in my books.:nod:

Phoenix, dont listen to this man. GIVE US THOSE HAWT *radio static* SCENES NAO--

*is shot*

<blows barrel of gun>:cool:

I see, so Tyrfing is RevivalS only. :)

Yup.:nod:
And no Astranagant, either.:)

She's called Yume, and the pink-haired is Nanaka, in case you wanted to know. But yup, Yume = :love:

I guess I'll be watching the show soon.:D I'm downloading Kimikis 1, 2 and 3 right now.:D

Just in case, has anyone laid claim on this character?
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3227/tearnz5.jpg

Not yet.:)
She looks good.:D

Fan service dose nothing for me either, that's why I haven't really commented on the Halloween thing, no real interest. I'll actually fast froward past pointless fan service for instance and most just role my eyes and ask them to get on with plot, or character interaction, or hell anything besides pointless pandering. I don't write fan service either because of this obviously so anyone that wants that is in for a disappointment with my works.

Myself, I prefer stories with lots of relevant content as well. But some fanservicy chapters are fine too.:D

Pillage at will. :p

It will be done.:D Thanks!:D

Was I wrong about it :p ?

I didn't say anything about that.:heh:

It makes a good insert song during an ass-whooping scene :p

:nod::nod::nod:

You mean look FOR... ;) (:p)

:heh::heh::heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/DeviceOne2.jpg



Reminds me of one sword from Rave.:D

So, what would happen if we gave you HAWT MOE Hayate Fanservice?

:uhoh:

:eek::eek::eek:

You'll get lots of :love::love::love: and http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gif reactions.:uhoh::heh:

You mean you've only seen episode one now? :eek:

And if you liked her voice in this ep, wait till you hear her in the next :heh:

And I did like it!:D

:heh:

Last snip WINS :D:D:D Although IIRC, Austin doesn't actually care about such things once he's through with his students :heh:

Noted.:heh:

About 80% finished now, just need to touch up on Tatsuya's background and his skill list and I'm done, here's their profiles (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1216054&postcount=13701)

Dragon Unison?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch:

and yes, if anyone has a copy of LIBERA ME...

...

...

...

I...

...

...

...

WANT A COPY NAO!!

I'll upload it in a bit.:)

And he's getting it back in my story.:heh: Poor shafted Vice shall once more crawl out of the shaft of obscurity and claim greatness! *plants spy cam in Hayate's room for Aaron*

KISAMA!!!:frustrated: DON'T YOU DARE EVEN THINK OF INVADING UPON HAYATE'S PRIVACY!!!!:frustrated:

I don't want to get my fanservice like that!:frustrated::heh:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 02:38
You know, with all the cartridge users in this discussion, I'm surprised that no one thought of making a full-up auxilary magical energy generator. I mean, if every one of your spells uses cartridges, you might as well have something that supplies that level of magical energy all the time.

An auxiliary system for devices is a good idea but we know next to nothing on how artificial magic energy is produced and the limitations on it. Ships and cartridge production plants should have something like a magic generator though.


Not too certain about that. According to Sound Stage 3, Rein's Linker Core comes from Hayate. Agito's could have come from her original lord.

They're the closet example of Linker Cores inside machinery/technological creations. I'm aware it is possible that a graft of sorts could have been performed in Rein's case.

Jimmy C
2007-10-27, 02:55
We know that the TSAB has the technology to generate and use magic without mages to some degree. Case in point: the training autospheres seen in eps 1 and 6 of StrikerS. They have to use magic to float and shoot like they do. It seems to me that, whether they have an onboard powerplant or batteries, they can't be drawing power from a mage. They probably also do not require a mage to cast the spells that let them float and shoot.
That the technology is used for something as lower-level as standard training drones means it's pretty mundane to the TSAB. My guess is their generator design is rather inefficient. They can't make it any smaller than a shipboard generator.
Not that I think about it, the implications of the autospheres are pretty devastating for the TSAB's style of mage combat. They have all the components of a self-contained magical combat system! They carry the power to move and shoot on their own. Scaled up, they would allow non-mages controlling them to fight mages.

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 03:02
We know that the TSAB has the technology to generate and use magic without mages to some degree. Case in point: the training autospheres seen in eps 1 and 6 of StrikerS. They have to use magic to float and shoot like they do. It seems to me that, whether they have an onboard powerplant or batteries, they can't be drawing power from a mage. They probably also do not require a mage to cast the spells that let them float and shoot.
That the technology is used for something as lower-level as standard training drones means it's pretty mundane to the TSAB. My guess is their generator design is rather inefficient. They can't make it any smaller than a shipboard generator.
Not that I think about it, the implications of the autospheres are pretty devastating for the TSAB's style of mage combat. They have all the components of a self-contained magical combat system! They carry the power to move and shoot on their own. Scaled up, they would allow non-mages controlling them to fight mages.Indeed that was one of the things I consider when pondering a "magic gun", as in a real gun that one can simply pick up and shot, and would have been used to defend some of the further developments in techno-magical weapons I planned as well (mainly hover units and shielding on most vehicles to allow them to better fight mages)

stormturmoil
2007-10-27, 03:03
We know that the TSAB has the technology to generate and use magic without mages to some degree. Case in point: the training autospheres seen in eps 1 and 6 of StrikerS. They have to use magic to float and shoot like they do. It seems to me that, whether they have an onboard powerplant or batteries, they can't be drawing power from a mage. They probably also do not require a mage to cast the spells that let them float and shoot.
That the technology is used for something as lower-level as standard training drones means it's pretty mundane to the TSAB. My guess is their generator design is rather inefficient. They can't make it any smaller than a shipboard generator.
Not that I think about it, the implications of the autospheres are pretty devastating for the TSAB's style of mage combat. They have all the components of a self-contained magical combat system! They carry the power to move and shoot on their own. Scaled up, they would allow non-mages controlling them to fight mages.


Not necessarily true - the autospheres may use beamed power from a remote source, which may be essentially a dismounted starship generator (eg, stonkin huge reactor)

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 03:03
Dang uncovered.

*runs for it*


Why is he cute :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:?!



Katrina would spare no interest to the likes of Yoh and Allen. She'll probably do something just to elicit a 'fun' reaction from them. Think Road and Hao kind of actions.



No no, it's EXACTLY because they're not her type.

The best way to counter her 'tainted-ness' is to get a strong pure-minded person.



Pm it to ya later, if that's possible.

Why do I keep reading it as 'pimp'?




*cuts open the sack*

Search within you and you know it to be the truth.

:D:D:D


[What if...]

"Come get me if you feel like crying... I mean, because I have free time... it's not like I have feeling for you or anything... Stupid..."

[/What if...]



Lenalee's no good? :(

Lenalee just doesn't fit :heh:



Nowthat the perfect avatar has been chosen, which guy wouldn't kill to have Katrina snuggle up next to him and whisper into his ear? Jeno no less? :D



Well (I won't say 'kill' :heh:) him, and I'm thinking Chrono as well...

Only because he needs to find more new girls to spend time with next season :nod:



In her mind? :uhoh:

Now that's a scary way to use his ability. :eyespin:

The ability is scary to begin with :p

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 03:07
Not necessarily true - the autospheres may use beamed power from a remote source, which may be essentially a dismounted starship generator (eg, stonkin huge reactor)Inside buildings? :eyebrow: Plus how can do purpose to beam probably megawatts of energy through open air? Any sort of radiation in that range is going to be very dangerous to unprotected humans and animals. Plus this dose nothing to counter Gadgets which also float easily and I didn't see any giant fixed generators around them,this theory fails.

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 03:15
Sorry for the off-topic post.:heh:

But as per Saint X's request...

'Libera me' from hell (http://www.mediafire.com/?4t9mxcnzz2v).:)


Time to get to making new profiles.:D

RAW RAW FIGHT THE POWER!!!:D

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 03:18
LOWEGEAAAARRRRRR!!!!


:nod:

The little girl's all grown up :p

Yes she is :nod:

Along with all the accompanying...developments...

:nod:

What? Lust isn't a dark thought :p ?

Sou Ka :nod::nod::nod:

The truth is stranger than fiction...This is Fate's dream...>.>

:eek::eek::eek:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Yes, truth is stranger than fiction's indeed...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:


Gimmy: "I'M NOT DEAD YET!!!"

*Run while dodging lightning*

But you will be :uhoh:

:eek::eek::eek:

You'll get lots of :love::love::love: and http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gif reactions.:uhoh::heh:


Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Hmmmm I wonder... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118875789398151.jpg)


KISAMA!!!:frustrated: DON'T YOU DARE EVEN THINK OF INVADING UPON HAYATE'S PRIVACY!!!!:frustrated:

I don't want to get my fanservice like that!:frustrated:

Even with consent? :uhoh:

*whistles*



[What if...]

"Come get me if you feel like crying... I mean, because I have free time... it's not like I have feeling for you or anything... Stupid..."

[/What if...]



:nod:

Isn't it refreshing to watch?

:nod:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 03:30
We know that the TSAB has the technology to generate and use magic without mages to some degree. Case in point: the training autospheres seen in eps 1 and 6 of StrikerS. They have to use magic to float and shoot like they do. It seems to me that, whether they have an onboard powerplant or batteries, they can't be drawing power from a mage. They probably also do not require a mage to cast the spells that let them float and shoot.
That the technology is used for something as lower-level as standard training drones means it's pretty mundane to the TSAB. My guess is their generator design is rather inefficient. They can't make it any smaller than a shipboard generator.
Not that I think about it, the implications of the autospheres are pretty devastating for the TSAB's style of mage combat. They have all the components of a self-contained magical combat system! They carry the power to move and shoot on their own. Scaled up, they would allow non-mages controlling them to fight mages.

Yes that is true. To implement a system suitable for device usage though it'll have to be portable and generate a minimum energy output to be useful. Usage differs from each mage but suffice to say it's probably not enough to make it viable.

The autospheres are just like the weaker version of the Gadget Drones to me. Although it is useful to merge the two together and you'll get a substitute to the manpower problem when facing minor threats or allow them to be used together with the regular mages or draw the free manpower towards elsewhere.


Why is he cute :eyespin: :eyespin: :eyespin:?!


That he treasures Spica in his own unique way? And that Spica is his source of strength as well. :nod:



No no, it's EXACTLY because they're not her type.

The best way to counter her 'tainted-ness' is to get a strong pure-minded person.


Partially true. Her 'tainted-ness' is her carefree part. :eyespin: The other side would be the the pseudo-sadistic side she encompasses. Just like what Road did when she blew up an Akuma to see Allen's reaction, Katrina does that to bring out the darker side of her targets.

I can't remember a suitable example from Hao though. :heh:



Why do I keep reading it as 'pimp'?

"Pimp it to ya later." :D

That made me laugh but I remember that RETAKE is rather big too. I'll pm it to you later when I'm done.


[What if...]

"Come get me if you feel like crying... I mean, because I have free time... it's not like I have feeling for you or anything... Stupid..."

[/What if...]

What if..what? And where did this come from? :confused::eyebrow:



Lenalee just doesn't fit :heh:

Too innocent. :love:


Well (I won't say 'kill' :heh:) him, and I'm thinking Chrono as well...

Only because he needs to find more new girls to spend time with next season :nod:

When next season comes along.

Ya know, Vivio does fit as a female of the Belka region too.. :D


The ability is scary to begin with :p

More so when you can detect the lust of people. Wonder if he can stand a whole room of people like that. :D

Which reminds me about one thing. Taking into account that, Katrina probably will surprise Jeno at the amount of 'energy' bursting forth from her. :naughty:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 03:33
I agree to a point actually the conflict of ideas and values will come up, I just find the idea that every planet in the TSAB just rolls over and accepts their arbitrary often stupid rules unlikely they might be been following them somewhat, but I bet many of them chafe under them and secretly engage in various technically "illegal" pursuits. Jail supports this in a way, at least some of the people in the TSAB clearly aren't enamored of it's current policy and that will come up as well as we start to see that despite what the TSAB might perch in it's propaganda the TSAB isn't one big happy family where we all get along and agree on things for our benefits.

Concidering the very leaders of the TSAB planned things to alter that, that's pretty much established canon. They just do it behind the screens as to keep up apearances and fool the idealists.

A little Yuri isn't bad, just as long as you get some pork in you're diet too. :p

Oh, I don't mind Yuri myself, I just found the situation amusingly ironic.

Debatable, even then the main purpose was shown to be fueling the book, and given that said book could dematerialize people and such assuming it was drawing that information from the linker core is circumstantial at best, it could be tearing from the device or the persons mind as well.

If you're draining a water tank, you're not draining a gas tank. Yami no Sho was draining the Linker Core, it was said multiple times that the only thing affected was the Linker Core.

Plus you suggest it has something more to do with it? Then what is that something exactly? It's easy to say it ought to do something, but if you can't say what then it's not exactly a better theory then my own of a Linker Core simply being an organ that can generate and replenish mana, nothing more, no spiritual non-sense or anything with it.

Could be anything, really, the refining of the energy, or genetic encoders that store all the magical experiences of the caster (A's suported)

Also, the Wolkenritter basically exist out of a Linker Core. It's the Linker Core holding them together, and without it they would vanish. We know it's not just because of the energy (they get tired or out of energy too) so the Linker Core seems to provide a program structurallity too.

Fate is also an overly idealistic ninny in someways IMO, more so given that later we see the TSAB deploying fucking tanks, never mind helicopters, and of course warships that can vaporise cites with the push of a button. It seems Fate didn't just drink the cool-aid she chugged it.

Tanks can be argued, we've had mage-powered tanks in this thread since the beginning. Arc en Ciel however... is the biggest punch to my argument.

I consider the TSAB to be a dysfunctional mess that needs a good smacking to straighten out, the smack is about to land, hard, and the TSAB won't be the same afterwards. This is basically a closely fanon AU as should be pretty clear now. I like realism and the way the TSAB acts isn't real at all, I'm going to fix that.

As long as we've established that this is definetely AU material, its all fine with me.

My biggest gripe was is not with the unit, let's be clear on that, its with the cartridges. The very emphasis on Belka has always been that the cartridge system was 'dangerous' and 'strenous' to throw that out of the window is to throw away one of the things that make the Belka style tick.

Speaking of novel -> anime conversions, anyone know if more Crest/Banner of the Stars will be animated? Or does the story end at Banner of the Stars III? (Sure hope not. :()

Crest of the Stars is already animated, but... I'm having trouble watching it. Manga Lafiel >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Anime Lafiel.

Ah, at least you gave it a try. That's good. ;)

I always give them at least a try. :3

Ok finished up the background of Haruhi and her device, any comments?


Background: Device and Character
Haruhi was from a family of mortals with no magical powers whatsoever at first (like Nanoha) but she always had the habit of fantasizing about supernatural things (fairys, mages, pixies etc.) One day while she was sleeping, she saw in her dream a mysterious figure asking her to bring her most treasured item to the forest near her home. She brought out her trumpet and ran into the woods while still in her pajamas. The mysterious figure was waiting there and it telephatically took hold of the trumpet and changed it into a magical staff which was Haruhi named Soprano.

After which Haruhi was brought into Mid-Childa, she attended a school for mages under the recomendation of the mysterious guy who was actually Xeith, he was searching for children who have magical potential to join the force he was going to make in the future.


*blink* Another Haruhi? But we already have a Haruhi here....

Don't worry, some of the people here just thinks that they're superior to us/personally attacking some people
(I am not targeting anybody, unless I hit a raw nerve) :D, don't let them get to you, afterall the forums here are for people to relax :D

:eyebrow: Give me even one example, just one will do.

And yes, just a minor suggestion to the cartridges. why can't there be two types? one 'canon cartidge' for use in devices- the one that boosts greatly but causes strain, yet hard to produce and expensive, and then the low-cost, less powerful and less straining kind of cartidges, the kind that can be used like machinegun ammo in other types of devices.

or, why not the 'energy packs/cartidge' that CM uses in normal operation?

- just my thoughts anyway.

You know what's funny? The entire larger/smaller cartridge idea is already canon.

Take a closer look at Nanoha's or Fate's device. The cartridges they're using are huge.

Now compare them to Subaru's Revolver Knuckles, well, a picture says it all:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/NanohaStrikerS-StartingStars03-19.png

These cartridges are far smaller, all six of them easilly taking up the space of what one or two of the Aces' cartridges would.

*Dump a potato sack over Tormenk's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

*Dump Tormenk into a box, and sink him into the bay*

*Dump a potato sack over haiz's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

AAAARRRRHHHHHH!!!!

*Dump a potato sack over LoweGear's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

Well now, welcome to our side of the fence Chaos. :D You've had your fun, now its our turn. :D:D:D:D:D

Could it be..? The embodiment of Chaos has taken to a mortal woman mage? :eek:

Somebody get both Kerokos here now! :D

Keroko-kun: Well now this is... interesting...

Keroko-chan: I don't know wether to sigh in relief or to start running.

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 03:34
Yes
That he treasures Spica in his own unique way? And that Spica is his source of strength as well. :nod:


And because he tries to appear so reluctant about it like most tsunderes? :nod:


More so when you can detect the lust of people. Wonder if he can stand a whole room of people like that. :D

Which reminds me about one thing. Taking into account that, Katrina probably will surprise Jeno at the amount of 'energy' bursting forth from her. :naughty:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 03:36
:nod:


Why do I get the feeling you're enjoying this more than you should :heh:



Yes she is :nod:

Along with all the accompanying...developments...

:nod:


Loki: "Now you're just asking for her to be groped :p"



Sou Ka :nod::nod::nod:

Loki: "Though seriously, hell must have quite the porn collection if she could come up with those stuff..."



:eek::eek::eek:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Yes, truth is stranger than fiction's indeed...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Have you seen the recent Chrono X Fate hentai doujin :p ?



But you will be :uhoh:

Gimmy: "DO SOMETHING!!!!"



Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Brilliant :D All we need know is Acous or Chrono...



Even with consent? :uhoh:

*whistles*

Doesn't matter!

When we want in, we get in!



:nod:

Isn't it refreshing to watch?

:nod:

Refreshing is the time when Jeno drank the potion...

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 03:41
You know what's funny? The entire larger/smaller cartridge idea is already canon.

Take a closer look at Nanoha's or Fate's device. The cartridges they're using are huge.

Now compare them to Subaru's Revolver Knuckles, well, a picture says it all:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/NanohaStrikerS-StartingStars03-19.png

These cartridges are far smaller, all six of them easilly taking up the space of what one or two of the Aces' cartridges would.

Mid-spells generally lose to Belka-spells in terms of power. And probably why the reason why Fate and Nanoha are killing themselves so fast. :rolleyes:



Well now, welcome to our side of the fence Chaos. :D You've had your fun, now its our turn. :D:D:D:D:D

Any ideas to start it off? :D



Keroko-kun: Well now this is... interesting...

Keroko-chan: I don't know wether to sigh in relief or to start running.

It certainly is, especially when he's acting like a certain Destroyer too.. :D:D:D

Start running. NOW. :uhoh:

And because he tries to appear so reluctant about it like most tsunderes? :nod:

How could I forget the most important part? :p


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 03:43
Why do I get the feeling you're enjoying this more than you should :heh:


Mm? :nod: :)

*whistles*

Loki: "Now you're just asking for her to be groped :p"

Mai: ...

If you value your hands, keep them in their place.

Loki: "Though seriously, hell must have quite the porn collection if she could come up with those stuff..."

More like Mai's been chasing S&W (and a few others) for their perversions for so long that she's picked up some of their... thoughts :uhoh: Learn from your enemies ;)

Mai: ...

...

...

Chigau...

Have you seen the recent Chrono X Fate hentai doujin :p ?

I'm not into doujins much :heh:

Gimmy: "DO SOMETHING!!!!"

I am. I'm trying to LIVE :uhoh:

Brilliant :D All we need know is Acous or Chrono...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


Doesn't matter!

When we want in, we get in!

:nod:


Refreshing is the time when Jeno drank the potion...

The potion that makes him 100% dere?

*runs*

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 04:09
Concidering the very leaders of the TSAB planned things to alter that, that's pretty much established canon. They just do it behind the screens as to keep up apearances and fool the idealists.well there you go.

If you're draining a water tank, you're not draining a gas tank. Yami no Sho was draining the Linker Core, it was said multiple times that the only thing affected was the Linker Core. Well whatever, if that was the idea the concept hasn't been backed very well by further canon.


Could be anything, really, the refining of the energy, or genetic encoders that store all the magical experiences of the caster (A's suported)
Or it could be nothing so basiclly it’s another one of those, “we don’t know so do what you want” things. Acutally assuming it doesn’t do anything is most logical if we can’t prove it dose do something.


Also, the Wolkenritter basically exist out of a Linker Core. It's the Linker Core holding them together, and without it they would vanish. We know it's not just because of the energy (they get tired or out of energy too) so the Linker Core seems to provide a program structurallity too.
Them being tried and “out of energy” is no argument as it’s entirely possible they have safe guards simply keep them from expending too much energy so when they are tired it’s not that they’re drained totally, but that they’ve reach a level where drawing more power would be unsafe. Or it’s possible that as I argued earlier they really are more biological then anything. The core is definitely required for continued life, but only as a energy source to power their “program” aspect IMO.


As long as we've established that this is definetely AU material, its all fine with me.

My biggest gripe was is not with the unit, let's be clear on that, its with the cartridges. The very emphasis on Belka has always been that the cartridge system was 'dangerous' and 'strenous' to throw that out of the window is to throw away one of the things that make the Belka style tick. Cept these aren’t Belkan mages and they aren’t using the system the same way, they’ve hijacked a basic concept, but for a completely different application. I don't even really consider this aspect to make it AU so much as the fact that the events I have planned would be really hard to square with later canon as they're going to be pretty damn wide reaching, so this will be a very similar, but slightly divergent timeline I suppose.

Of course IMO all of the fanon is AU already, but let's not get into that again. :p


Keroko-kun: Well now this is... interesting...

Keroko-chan: I don't know wether to sigh in relief or to start running.I think running is probably the safest bet...

Yes that is true. To implement a system suitable for device usage though it'll have to be portable and generate a minimum energy output to be useful. Usage differs from each mage but suffice to say it's probably not enough to make it viable.Yeah I can't see a generator that small, which is why the gun used "bullets" they can store power at that scale, but not make it, that keeps mages and their linker cores useful too.


The autospheres are just like the weaker version of the Gadget Drones to me. Although it is useful to merge the two together and you'll get a substitute to the manpower problem when facing minor threats or allow them to be used together with the regular mages or draw the free manpower towards elsewhere.Or just scale them up a bit into a real decently designed vehicle... hover tanks for the win. :p


When next season comes along.

Ya know, Vivio does fit as a female of the Belka region too.. :D
Oh I can hear the lovely screams of despair where it to come to pass...


Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Hmmmm I wonder... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118875789398151.jpg)
*quietly saved to HD*


Even with consent? :uhoh:

*whistles*
Gaining that would likely require some sort of mind control thus still making it perverted. :p

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 04:21
That he treasures Spica in his own unique way? And that Spica is his source of strength as well. :nod:


'Unique' :heh: ?


Jeno: "How should I know that memory couldn't be eaten completely!! It's not intended!!!"



Partially true. Her 'tainted-ness' is her carefree part. :eyespin: The other side would be the the pseudo-sadistic side she encompasses. Just like what Road did when she blew up an Akuma to see Allen's reaction, Katrina does that to bring out the darker side of her targets.

I can't remember a suitable example from Hao though. :heh:

Hao doesn't need to bring out people's dark-side, he already knows them :p



What if..what? And where did this come from? :confused::eyebrow:

Clannad episode 2 :heh: ?



When next season comes along.

Ya know, Vivio does fit as a female of the Belka region too.. :D

It doesn't work that way :heh:

... But that's an idea :D Or maybe I could feed her to Erio nii-sama...



More so when you can detect the lust of people. Wonder if he can stand a whole room of people like that. :D

Lucky, he can choose to look or not :p

Most people don't look at ugly-people porn.


Which reminds me about one thing. Taking into account that, Katrina probably will surprise Jeno at the amount of 'energy' bursting forth from her. :naughty:

Who knows? He might even be turned on...



Well now, welcome to our side of the fence Chaos. :D You've had your fun, now its our turn. :D:D:D:D:D

But you wouldn't :eek: ! You're too nice!




Keroko-kun: Well now this is... interesting...

Keroko-chan: I don't know wether to sigh in relief or to start running.

Wait Keroko-chan! It's not what it looks like! I don't like you! I mean, I like you alot but not that way- No wait, I mean I just like-!

*Grabs her by her shoulder and looks at her seriously*

Don't misunderstand!


And because he tries to appear so reluctant about it like most tsunderes? :nod:


Jeno: "I AM reluctant! I'm not trying!"



Mai: ...

If you value your hands, keep them in their place.

Loki: "Don't look down on me :p"

*Loki grabs Smith, and toss him onto her.*

The result is both Mai and Smith ending up to what looks like some advanced sexual position.



More like Mai's been chasing S&W (and a few others) for their perversions for so long that she's picked up some of their... thoughts :uhoh: Learn from your enemies ;)

Mai: ...

...

...

Chigau...

Loki: "Imagine this Mai, you and him, in..."



The potion that makes him 100% dere?

*runs*

120%

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 04:33
Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Hmmmm I wonder... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118875789398151.jpg)

:eek::eek::eek:

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gif
for the first one.:heh:

The second one is far too risqué for my tastes.:eyespin: Too much.:eyespin:
I go for more MOE, remember?
Fine. I'm not comfortable at all with that much shown. Go ahead and laugh at the little kid... <.<

Even with consent? :uhoh:

*whistles*

No.

Brilliant :D All we need know is Acous or Chrono...

I smell something incoming.:uhoh::D

:dots:

Do they even drink in the first place?:heh:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 04:36
Gaining that would likely require some sort of mind control thus still making it perverted. :p

oh shi-

We've been discovered!!!

*runs*

Jeno: "How should I know that memory couldn't be eaten completely!! It's not intended!!!"


:nod:

Wait Keroko-chan! It's not what it looks like! I don't like you! I mean, I like you alot but not that way- No wait, I mean I just like-!

*Grabs her by her shoulder and looks at her seriously*

Don't misunderstand!

Now where have I seen this before? :uhoh:

Jeno: "I AM reluctant! I'm not trying!"

See? :nod:

Loki: "Don't look down on me :p"

*Loki grabs Smith, and toss him onto her.*

The result is both Mai and Smith ending up to what looks like some advanced sexual position.

One where his legs intertwine with her, his and her hands together on her bosom, and his face by her neck?

Mai: ...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/icon_redface.gif

...

a...

...

...

ano...

Loki: "Imagine this Mai, you and him, in..."

...

...

...

*one brutal ass kicking later*

Mai: ...

b...

baka.

Smith: *bloody mess* :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Squishy...


120%

Now this I have to see...

:nod:

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 04:36
:eek::eek::eek:

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gif
for the first one.:heh:

The second one is far too risqué for my tastes.:eyespin: Too much.:eyespin:
I go for more MOE, remember?
Fine. I'm not comfortable at all with that much shown. Go ahead and laugh at the little kid... <.< Ha Ha!

Guess I also shouldn't mention what I did with that second picture, wouldn't want to damage you anymore.

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 04:39
:eek::eek::eek:

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gifhttp://img361.imageshack.us/img361/5854/hayate4xn6vq6.gif
for the first one.:heh:

The second one is far too risqué for my tastes.:eyespin: Too much.:eyespin:
I go for more MOE, remember?
Fine. I'm not comfortable at all with that much shown. Go ahead and laugh at the little kid... <.<


Aaaaah sou ka :nod::nod::nod:

No.

Not even when she's begging you to? :uhoh:

*runs*

Ha Ha!

Guess I also shouldn't mention what I did with that second picture, wouldn't want to damage you.

...

...

...

WTF?

:eek::eek::eek:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 05:00
Yeah I can't see a generator that small, which is why the gun used "bullets" they can store power at that scale, but not make it, that keeps mages and their linker cores useful too.

Although I do think on the strains of cartridge usage. For a mage to channel a sudden burst of mana from exterior source is bound to have a strain on them. not that I'm disagreeing with the ideas of bullets since they should be small enough not to pack as much power as a single regular cartridge.


Or just scale them up a bit into a real decently designed vehicle... hover tanks for the win. :p

Aerial drones? Tanks with wires and tentacles? :p


Oh I can hear the lovely screams of despair where it to come to pass...

He'll make sure everyone hears it no matter where they are on this planet. :heh:



*quietly saved to HD*

Gaining that would likely require some sort of mind control thus still making it perverted. :p

What do I see here? :D

'Unique' :heh: ?


Jeno: "How should I know that memory couldn't be eaten completely!! It's not intended!!!"


That much yes. :nod:


Hao doesn't need to bring out people's dark-side, he already knows them :p


Oh yeah. Ah that was it. When Hao send Hanagumi to attack Yoh and company to shake him up. Yoh did react somewhat negatively to threats on his friends.


Clannad episode 2 :heh: ?

WAFF.

Watch And Forget Feeling. :p

BUT that's a very very nice "what if" to work on. :D



It doesn't work that way :heh:

... But that's an idea :D Or maybe I could feed her to Erio nii-sama...

Do that. Another for his harem? :D



Lucky, he can choose to look or not :p

Most people don't look at ugly-people porn.

Holy sh-

That burned my mind @_@



Who knows? He might even be turned on...

Wonder what will I have him do by then... Any ideas on a reponse? :D



But you wouldn't :eek: ! You're too nice!

Is he? :naughty:


Wait Keroko-chan! It's not what it looks like! I don't like you! I mean, I like you alot but not that way- No wait, I mean I just like-!

*Grabs her by her shoulder and looks at her seriously*

Don't misunderstand!

Would that be you or Jeno? :p


Jeno: "I AM reluctant! I'm not trying!"

How people views it is the only important matter. :p



Loki: "Don't look down on me :p"

*Loki grabs Smith, and toss him onto her.*

The result is both Mai and Smith ending up to what looks like some advanced sexual position.

The last line was the finisher for me. :D:D:D


120%

That's something to witness. 120% dere Jeno. :eyespin:

Ha Ha!

Guess I also shouldn't mention what I did with that second picture, wouldn't want to damage you anymore.

WTF seconded! :eek:

@Chaos 262mb for the file upload is far too slow @_@ Progress is going at 0.1%. :eyespin: I'll split it up into 4 files before I send it over.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 05:24
oh shi-

We've been discovered!!!

*runs*


*blink blink*

Wait... You mean it's WRONG :eeK: ?!

Uhoh... :uhoh:



:nod:

Jeno: "Are you even listening?!"



Now where have I seen this before? :uhoh:

I'm serious!



See? :nod:

No really :heh:



One where his legs intertwine with her, his and her hands together on her bosom, and his face by her neck?

And him being behind her, with her skirt being lifted up some how by his... You know, 'awaking giant' ?



Mai: ...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/icon_redface.gif

...

a...

...

...

ano...



...

...

...

*one brutal ass kicking later*

Mai: ...

b...

baka.

Smith: *bloody mess* :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Squishy...


Loki: "That was so worth it :D"

Jeno (Thought speech) : "Smith! Quick! What's her sizes? How does it feel?"


Now this I have to see...

:nod:

First tell me your expectations

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 05:45
*blink blink*

Wait... You mean it's WRONG :eek: ?!

Uhoh... :uhoh:


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Jeno: "Are you even listening?!"

What's that? I can't hear you!

And him being behind her, with her skirt being lifted up some how by his... You know, 'awaking giant' ?

And then a stray electrical nerve impulse sends a signal racing to his fingers which causes them to...squeeze?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Loki: "That was so worth it :D"

Jeno (Thought speech) : "Smith! Quick! What's her sizes? How does it feel?"

Smith: :eyespin: Ceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........


First tell me your expectations

Just a totally unhinged and uninhibited Jeno? :uhoh: And MOAR Spica pleaze :nod:

FieryAeon
2007-10-27, 05:46
No one is immune :uhoh:
Yup. :uhoh:


More like... GTA Vice City!!! :D:D:D

*tumbleweed blows*

... cold...
:heh: So he now he has the whole city rigged with voyeur cams? :D


Now you've done it. The Wolkies are going to be out for your blood now. :upset:

And here comes your favorite demented firebrand. :uhoh:

"Eat hammer bastard!"

Vita is probably still having a hangover. :D


Or when you're writing a part of yourself. Which reminds me to haul my butt to write Katrina's profile instead of writing more crack of bloody pieces. :heh::D
That too. Yeah start working on Katrina! *kicks Tormenk into a hole and tosses a laptop inside*


Too long ago to recall. :heh:
I think it had to do with pilot yelling mayday and saying its Mai-day. :heh:


FA's getting some weird ideas. :uhoh:
I blame A's Nano. :uhoh: Hint: The nano scene where Chrono caught the Lieze twins.


Nope that was LoweGear's work. I'm considering that part too.
They say spells that require a long aria (activation phrase) tend to be more powerful. An idea to go along is to have lyrical spells work with greater power and effect, but taking longer time to prepare.


Now this I like. :naughty:
:heh:


Should I set up more? :hmm:
Depends on who the victim is. :)


KISAMA!!!:frustrated: DON'T YOU DARE EVEN THINK OF INVADING UPON HAYATE'S PRIVACY!!!!:frustrated:

I don't want to get my fanservice like that!:frustrated::heh:
Really? Awww too bad. *goes remove the spy cam*

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-27, 05:47
DIARY OF A WINDTALKER
HALLOWEEN SPECIAL, PART VII ACT II

// second round //

Zafira had to force himself to smile.

Whether the cosplay was intentional or not, he could not tell because it was all a part of Hayate’s brilliant plan. Moreover, he had to be sure he was donning the dress correctly although at first glance the attire looked nothing more than a modified butler uniform.

Well, he pondered, at least he got the Afro right.

He walked out of the changing room and met up with an equally mortified Vita. “Oi, Vita, at least you don’t have to wear Gothic dresses,” he commented, as Vita complained of the weird head visor and the kimono she had to wear for the party.

“Ano ne, Zafira.”

“Nanda?”

Vita sighed. “I can’t complain anymore, can I?” she said and holstered the shell machinegun over her shoulder. She grumbled in protest when Zafira gave her a playful pat on the head. “Stop ruffling my hair, Zafira. Hey!”

“Zafira!”

Along came Vivio, Annabelle and Lutecia. The two Wolkenritter turned to see them dressed up in their own extravagant costumes. “What are you guys cosplaying as?” Vita asked.

“Lulu-chan dresses up as Rider,” Annabelle said. “Vivio-chan cosplays as the sunflower fairy godmother, and I cosplay as Grandpa’s eternal friend.”

While Vita gave Annabelle a very deep look of ‘huh’ at the answer, Zafira took his time examining the two other young girls. He could see Lutecia’s cosplay perfectly matched her image as the purple-haired Servant, but the sheer cuteness of Vivio with that giant sunflower stuck on her back was inconceivable.

“Zafira, what is that?” Vivio asked and pointed to the Afro.

“Heh, it’s nothing,” Zafira said and put on his Ray Ban sunglasses. “How do I look?” Lutecia gave the wolf-man two thumbs up. Annabelle blushed in admiration at the macho look. Vivio cooed at the simple transformation of one of her friends. “Well, I guess I can go and win the top prize, can’t I?”

They returned to the hall. The moment they entered the building, the cosplay battle temporarily stopped. The crowd became smitten when they turned to Afro Zafira, and were more enticed when they saw him surrounded with sparkles and bubbles.

“Ah, Zafira-san…<3”

(Insert cheesy music here)

Zafira blinked. “I haven’t had my turn yet.”

The women sighed. “Yada… Zafira-san’s voice is so manly…” the murmured and cupped their blushing cheeks.

“That Afro… that Ray Ban…” the men muttered in equal admiration.

“Everyone’s gay for Masa-san,” dryly Lutecia commented.

One fan boy noticed the purple-haired girl. “Holy crap! It’s Rider!”

“RORI RAIDA? USO DA!” his friend shouted.

Onstage, the two Goth cosplayers watched in amusement at the commotion down there. “I never expected Zafira-san and Lulu-chan can capture so many eyes,” Widuri commented and turned to the smitten Smith and Wesson. “Although… why are they looking at us in that way?”

“Shinigami Mai…” Smith murmured.

“And Suigintou Widuri…” Wesson added.

“Both of them are hot Goth…” Smith said.

“…and their gorgeousness…” Wesson continued.

“ARE MADE OF PURE LOVE AND WIN!!!” they roared.

Widuri could only laugh in silly manners at the Linebackers, but then Mai was not saying anything about them. She had been looking for someone, and was disappointed because they did not appear as they had promised. Widuri noticed Mai’s distraught look and asked, “is there something wrong, Enna-sama?”

“Iie. It’s just-”

“Guess who?”

Widuri gasped. So did Smith and Wesson, because Mai’s eyes were covered by someone, and that someone was none other than…

“Gwen-oneesama?” Mai turned around to see another woman standing next to Sarah Alicia Lushien, a.k.a. Gwendolyn. “Iris-oneesama?”

The woman chuckled. “We did surprise you, didn’t we Mai-chan?” Gwen asked.

“And you seem to be enjoying your Shinigami outfit a lot,” Iris said in a teasing tone.

Mai blushed. “Wha… what are you talking of, Oneesama?” she mumbled.

Gwen giggled and took Mai’s arms as she and Iris brought the Daemon Princess to backstage. “We’d like to borrow Mai-chan for a while,” Gwen said to Widuri with a wink.

“Haii. Dozo.”

The Unison Device was unsure of what the women were going to do with Mai, and decided not to pay attention to them as she turned to the protesting Linebackers and fan boys. “I believe we should spend our waiting time with something useful, right?”

(“Well said, Widuri-chan,” Hayate nodded. “Well said.”)

Widuri approached the mike stand. She coughed in low voice, corrected her posture and smiled to the audience.

“Mizu no naka ni, yoru ga yureteru…”

The audience was awed. It was the first time Widuri (or any Unison Device so to speak) sang this beautifully. More surprising was that Frieda was accompanying Widuri with piano scores of the song (and Widuri did not know of this yet).

“Kanashii hodo, shizuka no tatazumu…”

The Zafira-san/Loli Rider uproar ended abruptly. Immediately all eyes and ears were fixated on the performing due, their heart touched by the serenity of Widuri’s heavenly voice.

“Midorinasu kishibe, utsukushii yoake wo…”

The Linebackers waved their lighters overhead, and everybody soon followed suit.

“Tada matte iraretara, kirei na kokoro de…”

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Nanoha was watching the life performance from inside the medical room. Hikki was still sleeping, and was not showing any sign of awaking. The Tactical Instructor was upset at first for not able to join her friends, but she was also glad to finally have the space of privacy she had been seeking for. Looking down at Hikki’s childish face, she could not help wondering of how it would be if he didn’t have to cross-dress and sleep with her accompanying him.

“Silly me,” she uttered with a chuckle.
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“Itsumo, itsuka, kitto… anata no te wo tori…”

The performance ended. Frieda left the piano and approached Widuri to bow to the audience together. Everybody gave the two women a very loud standing ovation, whistling and throwing roses to them as they did. They thanked the audience for the support and returned backstage to meet up with Shamal, Ginga and Keroko.

“That was wonderful,” Shamal praised. “We never thought Widuri-chan can actually sing so that beautifully.”

“Considering her nature as a close-combat Unison Device, it would be surprise to see her soft side once in a while,” Keroko said. “Even the outfit suits her perfectly.”

Widuri had to laugh. “What are you talking of, Keroko-sama? You look beautiful in those frills, too.”

Keroko blushed. “It… it’s because Hayate threatened me with blackmails,” she murmured and shyly fiddled with her fingers. “Though I’ve always wanted to wear these…”

(Hayate deviously cackled. “Just as planned!”)

“But to see Ms. Johansen here is quite a surprise,” Ginga said. “Your presence is very much welcomed.”

The eyeglasses mother-would-be giggled. “Takeru has to follow Aura here. I simply fulfil my role as his guardian,” she said and was latter batting an eyebrow when she saw Ginga’s plain dress. “And I see that Miss Ginga needs something a bit… more proper.”

“What is that supposed to- IYAH!” Ginga was yelping in distress as Frieda dragged her towards the dressing room. “Miss Johansen! What are you trying to do? Ah! You’re stripping me!”

“Why, I’m just helping you dress up,” Frieda replied. “Now where did I put that dress I had brought earlier…”

“Miss Johansen! No! Ah! Subaru, help…”

“I didn’t know Paladin Frieda is a cosplay demoness,” Signum said in horror.

Hayate’s response was an equal terror as she patted Signum’s shoulder. “She’s Carim’s close friend, after all.”

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// 20 minutes later //

“See? I’ve told you it would suit you,” Frieda said as she did the finishing touch on the ribbon. “Look for yourself. Aren’t you beautiful?”

Ginga had to gulp bitterly. Like it or not, she had to accept the fact she was wearing the most suggestive cosplay dress she had ever worn. Not only that, she was asked to wear fake eyeglasses to add in the novelty of the cosplay. “Miss Johansen, I don’t feel comfortable in this suit…”

“What are you talking of, Ginga?” Frieda replied and rested her hands upon Ginga’s bare shoulders. “On Earth, witch and succubus are just a part of our Halloween celebration. I used to cosplay as a succubus in my college, so there’s nothing wrong if you cosplay as one.”

“But Miss Johansen-” Ginga was startled when the gunslinger knight embraced her, comfortably holding her body in her maternal arms. Frieda was giggling in soft voice as she brought Ginga close to her. “Miss Johansen…”

“Call me Frieda,” the eyeglasses-totting woman murmured. “Just relax. Everything will be fine if you believe in yourself. Right?”

“O… okay…”

The two women finally left the dressing room. They walked past the mortified Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Keroko and headed to the stage, where they were immediately greeted with approval roar like nothing before. Fan boys were infatuated by the sight of Witch Frieda and Succubus Ginga in eyeglasses and, Ginga loyalists, especially, drooled over Ginga’s voluptuous body.

“Mou, stop staring at me,” Ginga moaned when she noticed them eyeing her ‘delicious’ figure. “Hentai. Baaka. Ecchi. Sukebe.”

“GINGA-NEECHAMA HAS GONE TSUN-TSUN!!!!!!!!” fan boys wailed in agreement and melted.

Well, someone had to make sure it made sense.

“Hayate Yagami!” an audience shouted. “What kind of winning cosplay is this?! Ginga as a Megane Succubus? I must approve!”

“But it wasn’t a part of my plan!” Hayate objected.

“So she wants the cosplay party to follow her idealism,” the rest of the audience murmured.

“Chigau!” Hayate replied.

(Sophia had to laugh. “Did Oneechan just get caught red-handed? It’s so unlike her,” she exclaimed.

Kaempfer turned to several captivated audience and noticed someone asking his name. “Kaempfer,” he pronounced his name, and wind mysteriously blew his cape to reveal his muscular figure.)

“Everyone, please,” Ginga said as she was trying to ease the tension. “Hayate wasn’t at fault. It was-” She stepped on a banana peel that mysteriously materialized under her foot and slipped off the floor - only to be caught in Frieda’s arms. “F-Frieda?”

“Are you alright, Ginga?” Frieda asked with a warm smile.

“Err… yes, I’m alright,” Ginga replied. “Thank you.”

Fan boys were captivated by the sight of the gunslinger knight holding Ginga, and were even overwhelmed when sparkles and bubbles surrounded the two dazzling women.

“I don’t know what’s going on here,” Smith said.

“But Witch Frieda holding Succubus Ginga,” Wesson added.

“Is the best damn thing,” Smith continued.

“The world has ever seen!” Wesson ended.

Then they shouted in unison: “THIS IS FRIEDA JOHANSEN AND GINGA NAKAJIMA! THEY ARE MADE OF MILF, HOTNESS, ABSOLUTE LOVE AND WIN!!!”

“Banzai! Banzai!” fan boys agreed and roared together with the Linebackers. “Frieda-sama banzai! Ginga-neechama banzai!” Their excitement, however, did not last long when they heard a very heavy machine start-up noise coming from the right flank. “Uh-oh.”

“Do you hear what I just hear?” Smith said.

“I can hear it very loud and clear, brother,” Wesson replied.

Slowly, the Linebackers and the fan boys turned to the noise. There, standing at the end of the front raw seat was two angry young people with weapons deployed in Overdrive Mode.

“I shall shove these fists into your sorry mouth!” Subaru declared and loaded the Double Revolving Knuckles.

“Would you like to try dying once?” Takeru questioned and inserted a 20mm Belkan cartridge into the Panzer Faust Silberkugel.

“Please spare us…” the Linebackers pleaded.

Their answer was a definitive “No.”

“Oh shi-”

“Where did Zafira get that Afro, by the way?” Eruru Shamal asked when she saw Afro Zafira standing at the end of the hall and squealed when a cat mysteriously grabbed her tail. “Iyah! Stop touching my tail!”

“HOLY CRAP! IT’S SHAMISEN!!!!”

“AND IT’S GRABBING SHAMAL’S TAIL, TOO!!!!”

“GO FOR THE TAIL, SHAMISEN!!!!

“Let go off me! Hanaste! Iyah! Dareka! Dame! AH~~~~~~”

Fan boys and male audience bled their noses. “SHAMISEN ROCKS! HELL YEAH!!!!”

Subaru Nakajima killed fan boys with Double Revolving Bunker: Claymore Avalanche Mode. Holy shit! Subaru is in killing spree!!

Takeru killed male audience with Silberkugel: Panzer Faust Mode. Holy shit! Takeru is in killing spree!!

“Otoko no baaka,” Lutecia and Mai commented.

// to be continued //


:heh: :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh:

:eek::eek::eek:

WINRAR!

Zafira in afro, Lutecia as RORI RAIDA, and Vivio as sunflower fairy godmother combo is awesome! :bow:

Frieda stripping Ginga is even more AWESOME! :bow::bow: *blood sprays from nostrils*

Tail grabbing wins the OC Award of Best Scene. :bow::bow::bow:

And really, Smith and Wesson should be spared from their blood-soaked fate; they were just telling the truth. :heh:

*Grabs a shovel and continue to bury him*

*activates Tunnel Mole mode*

PF: Ah, it's sunshine again!

Light-weight :p

No matter, that's what I'm for...

That's quite expected, coming from you. :p

I can tell you... But you're not going to like it :D

Never mind, on second thought, I'll just not hear it. :rolleyes:

She's a young attractive girl... You do the math :D

For matters of the eyes, equations have no place. ;)

LOL! You are SOOOOOOO protected :p

Or my parents just aren't those "traditional" ones, because they understand a little bit of science to know that the hugeness of a person's backside has nothing to do with reproductive fertility. :D

I'm sorry, all I'm hearing is "Young" and "attractive" :p Nothing else matters.

Somehow, this does not bode well ... :eyebrow:

I won't be around for THAT long. :rolleyes:

It's one million years of pain compressed into a second. Good luck! :D

*sigh* I think I know how USB feels now with Mai chasing him around with a chainsaw. Gimme a break will ya Vestrell? :upset:

Vestrell: Kotowaru.

That's what makes it so interesting. :D

I guess another tsundere in the house wouldn't matter.

Muahahaha! Its only worth playing for the story though. The battles become repetitive after awhile.

All RPGs do repeat their battles, it's virtually typical. The storyline's what makes it interesting.

Guess I'll look around for the manga.

And pass it to me when you're done, thanks. :D

Guess your mom ain't one of those old fashioned Chinese lady then. I have relatives who tell me that.

:nod:

You just decided on the spot to make that her taboo word didn't you?!!! :frustrated::frustrated::frustrated: Cheater! *runs from Hounds of Artemis*

That, I do not deny. :p

And that's not Hounds of Artemis, by the way.

Cool, I'll see if I can get them to arrange an outing that doesn't involve watching movies. :uhoh:

Inform me when you have.

It started out as a simple thing… Since I’m going to have a war I’m obviously going to need more then like 10 guys to fight it! So I figured I’d invent some troops for the OC to lead! Well that got a little out of hand and now here I am 3,000 words later having managed to OC-ify a real life Special Forces unit into a magical commando brigade… :uhoh:




75th Ranger Regiment:
Date of Formation: MC 45
Base of Operations: 82nd Administered World
Type: Special Operations Forces
Strength: 1800~ Combat troopers, + numerous military and civilian support personnel.
Unit Motto: Rangers lead the way!
Branch: 82nd AW PDF, TSAB Air Force Special Operations Branch.
Background:
The 75th Ranger Regiment is an Elite PDF (Planetary Defense Force) unit drawn from recruits on the 82nd administered world and increasingly off world volunteers. The force numbers about 1800 soldiers in totally composing three 600 man battalions. Each battalion is a unit onto itself and can be deployed independently, as can even individual companies of around 200 troopers each. The unit tends deploys at the battalion level, but normally this is a theater level deployment and it’s rare for more then a reinforced company to fight in any single operation. An entire battalion, never mind the regiment massing for an operation is basiclly unheard of as pitched conventional warfare is not the formations primary mission.

The Rangers were born shortly after the 82nd integration into the TSAB and leverage off that world’s existing Special Forces heritage. Training is not done under normal TSAB standards, it’s considerably harsher in nearly all aspects and many things besides simply magic are heavily emphasized. Such as training with various non-magic weapons, as well as explosives, infiltration, wilderness survival, air assault operations on a large scale, hostile planetary landings, and urban combat. Some allege the training verges on brutalization of the recruits and injuries are common place with even deaths not unheard of. This is viewed by many TSAB officials as another sign of the 82nd world’s borderline barbarism and blatant disrespect for proper social norms, charges often leveled at other elite units such as some of the more Spartan Air Force units as well.

Also unlike the TSAB army at large discrimination is an open and accepted policy among the Rangers, a certain power level is required to join and if it’s not meet the person is disqualified instantly. Further anyone that refuses to meet standards or shows slow development is also expelled. The slightest sign of incompetence can also result in expulsion; the pass rate for the training is tiny less then 10% and ejection even after acceptance not all that rare. The only thing allowing the unit to keep up to strength is that it’s reputation now draws applicants from all over TSAB space, but rather then water down the process this has merely resulted in even higher standards as the pool of recruits as grown. Anyone looking to join must be a Citizen and Resident of the 82nd though and so those that come already have an unusually high motivation.

The intense training produces a breed of soldier fundamentally different then most in the TSAB though. Many soldiers in the TSAB forces view themselves as much as police officers and or protectors as anything else, but the Rangers consider themselves soldiers first, and only. Rangers rarely take part in normal day to day patrols or investigations and are used almost exclusively in high intensity combat situations. Life on the often rough fringe of the TSAB provides plenty of work though and quickly helps weed out the weak and useless and likewise quickly hardened those that remain. Rangers are often viewed by many TSAB units as slightly crazy and barely under control and far too prone to use force and taking far too much pride and joy in the more martial aspects of the TSAB function. This is of coruse something of a stereotype, but like most such things a grain of truth permeates it.

Combat Tactics and Organization:
As a Special Operations assault force the rangers train in little besides combat tactics, and strategies, due to their position on the fringe they often encounter the unknown and “illegal” and so have experience with and tactics for a wide variety threats which they drill in nearly consonantly. When not actively deployed a Ranger work day consist of little besides hard drilling and briefings on the latest possible threats.

Having grown out of the planets older Special Forces troops Ranger show some mark biases and preferences toward those old groups in their style, ranged weapons are vastly preferred virtually to the exclusion of melee combat which is drilled in, in a strictly defensive role. Mobility, surprise, and shock effect are emphasized slug fests and dueling greatly frowned upon. Tactics revolve totally around the team and individualism is viewed as having no place in a combat unit and is in fact punished. Loyalty and dedication to the team and unit are what matters; individual prowess means nothing without these.

Squads are the building blocks of the entire formation and each one numbers around 12 men, these squads tend to be fairly stable, but may grow or shrink or alter as specialists are added and removed or the exact mix changed to suit a mission. These squads form Platoons of around 50 men, and finally these Platoons form companies and then the battalion at each level an increasing number of staff positions are added, as are specialized support assets. Ranger units boost a very lopsided structure in terms of rank as due to the skills and experience most operators have very few are below the rank of sergeant and even units as small as squads can be lead by Lieutenants. Virtually all these officers are promoted from inside the Rangers though and to be assigned from outside is very rare.

Ranger are also officially a PDF unit for the 82nd and so are technically under that planets control; however there reputation and skills mean that at least some part of the force is effectively always nationalized and deployed on TSAB business somewhere. The Air Force SOPCC in particular is known for using nationalized Ranger teams as a major part of its striking arm during major operations with the private contractor taking care of the more low profile work.

Since first and foremost Rangers are assault troops meant to be deployed in situations were heavy combat is expected. They trained in nearly all methods of insertion into an area foot infiltration, teleportation, dropships, etc. Ranger are shock troops though and while they have great combat power they lack staying power being effectively light infantry they suffer if locked into protracted combat as they carry minimal supplies in many cases and their tactics tend to rely on surprise and shock to achieve quick low cost victories. Proper application and planning is thus vital to maximize their advantage and mitigate weak points.

Magic System:
Most Ranger’s use a magic system that though heavily based on Mid has been mutating nearly since their inception with the pace accelerating recently. As briefly mentioned it massively favors ranged combat nearly all Rangers are user of variants on magic guns, but it also greatly favors stealth and surprise and so illusion magic is greatly prized as well, again playing into the their goal of keeping the enemy off balance and confused to maximize the effect of the applied force.

Another aspect is a massive use of cartridges, but in a somewhat unique way most mages use cartridges for massive boosts of power to a spell they themselves are channeling, but the Rangers use them instead them to provide a steady but lower powered supply of mana without needing to supply any themselves for a short time. This allows the user to focus on other things like shielding or illusions while still attacking, it also allows for a very rapid stream of attacks to employed, though at the expense of potential power. This allows them to put out rather staggering amounts of fire as long as ammo holds outs and they don’t push it too hard. In effect the cartridges are used as true “magic bullets” instead of batteries.

This aspect also drives the design of Ranger devices; said devices are standardized but come in a fairly wide range none the less. These devices are almost universally of the storage variety and feature little intelligences and most don’t even speak being regarded as simply weapons by most operators. This is another aspect of the system in that Ranger are often known to swap devices if they fell another will be more useful in a particular mission, and they all train on a variety of them though they still often specialize in one type.

The weapons all have large magazines for cartridges and though nearly all are ranged they’re also specialized for certain tasks. Devices weren’t really meant to take this much power without the user to help manage it though and so these devices have a habit of overheating and breaking at an accelerated rate despite construction tolerances that border on armed devices, this is also why the user is required to cast any kind of high level spell. On the plus side that rugged build allows them to be used as melee weapons to a point as they’re quite sturdy. Many also have some allowance for a bayonet if things get really desperate.

This system has found some purchase among the larger magic community as well and ex-ranger now teach it outside the force and it has slowly begun to grow as a style in its own right.

Another aspect of the force is that once more going back to their SF route Rangers also forgo the normal classification of positions in a team used by the TSAB in favor of their own system derived from the old squad structure:
Riflemen:
The base of a team balanced in most aspects but with a preference for single target shooting though often with some limited forms of AOE. His defenses are good, but not outstand and his speed is fairly good but again not extreme, well balanced they form the base of most squads.
Grenadier:
Specialized for area damage, but with a lower capacity for heavy damage on a point target, very good for dealing with enemies using masses of weaker troops or to soften up tougher enemies, but less suited to dealing with heavily defended individual targets, a bombardment mage in most ways. His speed and defenses will tend to be similar to a Riflemen.
Heavy Weapons:
Specialized to supporting and covering other members of the team the Heavy Weapons mancan put down a hail of suppressing and harassing fire and deal with massed enemies nearly as well as a Grenadierin the right circumstances and is the go too man for very hard targets. He will also normally specialize in defensive spell as well at the cost of movement and other specialties spells. His job is form a base of fire for the team keeping the enemy suppressed and soaking damage while other elements maneuver to kill them and to deal with any particularly stubborn obstacles.
Marksmen:
Made to deal with single high value targets at long range they emphasize precision and striking power at the cost of any sort of area of effect spells. Normally tasked with pinning or killing certain potentially dangerous enemy combats, but doing this will often demand good stealth skills as well so a high proficiency in illusion magic is preferred in this role. Due to this they often also serve as forward scouts for the team, but they tend to be a bit breakable and so need to be careful to stay out of sight they also aren’t that much faster then anyone else, just harder to see.
Pointman: The name derived for the somewhat rare users of melee magic among the Rangers, though still required to wield a ranged weapon these men will also often carry a secondary device for close combat. Said secondary device is often a personal weapon inspected and approved for carry as the only close combat device the Ranger will provide is a well built, but fairly mundane broadsword. How the Pointman is used depends on his exact abilities, but generally he’ll be used as a riflemen with the order to engage any melee fighters that get close. Since he tends to be fast as well he’ll also sometimes be used as a scout or literal Pointman into an unknown area, but due to his divided focus his shooting tends to be weak.
Medical Sergeant: Fairly self explanatory, but all medics just like the rest of the team ARE trained combatants and though their specialization reduces their combat potential somewhat they’re not sitting ducks by any means.
Technical Sergeant: Charged with various technical support functions such as scanning, teleportation, communications etc. These troops unlike medics will often even further specialize into one area; a team may have several of these in various disciplines.

Devices:
All ranger devices are fairly standardized, but though two deceives might look similar externally it’s possible they have internal differences to account for power levels and such. Still overall many Ranger devices share competent and looks helping to reduce costs and promote a homogenous and unified look.
Assault Rifle Class:
AR class Devices are the best balanced of the various types with good sized magazines, power, range, and versatility several models are stocked with slight biases toward some aspect of the class, but all are fairly close. This is the primary weapon used by riflemen and grenadiers, and noncombatant specialist so is the most common type.
Grenadiers Rifle:
Effectively and assault rifle with a secondary mode that allows for higher throughput to aid bombardment and area spells.
Marksmen Rifles:
With smaller magazine and larger size then ARs, but a higher power output and range marksmen rifles tend to be slow to fire and charge but pack a wallop normally hitting with the most force of any weapon in the team, if only hitting one thing at a time sadly. These weapons have quite a range though with some being little more then slightly boosted ARs and others being veritable hand cannons that are nearly impossible to fire on the move.
Heavy Weapons:
These are the most diverse weapons ranging from machine guns that can lay down writhing barrages, to small hand carried auto-cannons, up onto things that are damn near shoulder mounted howitzers a weapon for ever problem more or less.

*Details pending*

Barrier Jacket:
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The line troops of the Rangers, like most TSAB clerks and troops, use their own standard Barrier Jacket the main changes are a much more subdued default coloration, better all around protection, and a face covering helmet. The Jackets also feature a limited form of active camo in that they have several stored patterns that can be adopted based on the circumstances normally it’s some version of woodland, desert, urban, and night, but it can be altered depending on the terrain expected.

The Jacket isn’t special otherwise it’s somewhat more bulky (but no less maneuverable) then those worn by most clerks and provides marginally higher protection, but not outstandingly so, some minor variant exist including some uprated versions for the more potent members of the force.

Spells:
In addition to standardized weapons and Jackets most Rangers also work off a versatile but standardized spell list as well. These spells will vary in power as the user grows and not all people use them all but most Ranger will be able use most of them at some level.

Attack Spells:
Cartridge based:
These spells can be executed solely with the cartridges in the weapon requiring no input from the user, well beyond a mental command for the weapon to change modes and a pull of the trigger.

Shooting (low, medium, high power/rate): This spell simply fires their weapon the rate and power level can be varied in proportion to each other IE lots of low power shots, fewer high powered ones. The total output depends mainly on the weapon being used though higher power uses more rounds per bolt the rate being 3-1 for low, 1-1 for medium, and 1-2 for high power shots. The higher power bolts from an assault rifle tend to be roughly even to an Accel shooter round. The user can also use their own mana to keep from draining cartridge in which case the power and fire rate becomes user dependent, even in this mode cartridges can still be loaded though to allow for higher power.
Homing Rounds: Same as above expect the bolts home in after firing, twice the cartridge use per shot of the same power if solely using them.
Burst Rounds: Used by grenadiers effectively the same as above only with bigger cartridges and the bolts explode on impact with considerable force again the exact yield can be varied by using more or fewer of the heavy cartridges loaded into the weapon per blast. They can also be set to burst at specific distances or home, again at a higher cartridge use or requiring mana from the user.
Buster Shot: A fairly standard busterspell it loads a large number of cartridges(10 minimum, normally around 20 are used in an assault rifle) and then discharges a fairly intense energy beam at the target, this is the largest spell that can be fired solely usingcartridges in the weapon and it strains most of them badly usually only one of these can be fire ever 30 or so seconds and the weapon will need to cool down directly after firing as well, loading all the cartridges also takes several seconds as well potentially allowing someone to interrupt it.

User Based Attacks:
Buster Shot: Basiclly the same as above but by having the user aid the device in forming the spell it can be done without cartridges and repeatedly in a shorter time period. This is the standard medium-high power attack used against barriers and such. Grenadiers will tend to specialize more heavily in this and Burst Rounds and their devices are tuned for them at the expense of other areas.

Defensive:
Round Shield: The bog standard shield used by magic users all over TSAB space it needs no introduction or explanation, aside from to noted that the strength will obviously be based on the user.
Protection Powered: Again a very common spell used by hordes of mages.
Movement:

Illusion/Concealment:
Silhouette Disruption: A low level spell that breaks up a user outline combined with good camo the broken smudged form is very hard to spot, particularly at night.

Device Dependent:
Snipe Shot: Used mostly by marksmen effectively a very high power bolt designed to penetrate shields and cover with lethal force, also kept small to make it harder to spot and track slow to fire though.

*In progress*


An impressive amount of detailed information about the Rangers! :eek:

It seems that they are more the Army-type compared to TSAB members who are more the Police-type.

Heh. Just as Jeno is the avatar of Chaos, Katrina is my avatar of the Twisted. :D

Suddenly, I have the distinct impression of Chaos and Twisted sharing brotherly love ...

*runs*


Your love was hypocrisy the moment you turned your back on them.

That was a tough one, nearly went 2:0. :heh:

Jack's a tough opponent..

:dots:

I don't know how to reply that, but I'll give it a shot anyway.

There is no right and wrong in love, only whether we believe in it, and how we hold on to that faith.

Oh well, it's 1:1, then. :D

Old age. :heh::eyespin:

Excuses! ;)

You're keeping score? Nuuu. :heh:

Urgash sounds badass but he's the primordial Dragon of Chaos..

While I know Asha would fit Tk as the Dragon of Order. :D

I wouldn't mind that, but would TK mind becoming a female suddenly. :D

And by the way, Asha IS also the Dragon of Chaos, if I remember correctly.

Pleasure-deriving would go to Katrina hands down. :D

At least, Leona is saved from the predicament.

Chaos must be fuming with all the mythos stuff we been throwing at him.. XD

Is he? Why?

Is she..what? :confused:

I suddenly thought that Katrina might be saved by the Princess in GuardianS. :heh:

Nice Trigger-word. And I can't even begin to describe the text. :eyespin:

Because it's not English. :D

That move will show again, much later, in the story.

Dark eh? Should be tasty enough for me to twist. :heh::D

Tasty doesn't even begin to describe it. :)

YO! SAP MAN TIAN HENG, SAI MAT KENG NGA! :p

SEI MAH LAU. :mad:

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If that's Cantonese, I only know how to read the second and third sentences. :p

What could you be talking about? We're perfectly mature enough for anything. :p

Looks like I have no choice. Aaron, forgive me. :uhoh:

Get yourself a PS3 then.

No can do. Budget runs low during university years.

As promised earlier a piece about Fate.



Disheartened by the sight of a despondent Fate, Caro and Erio could do no more than watch on as Jail continued his mockeries.

Am I really like my mother? Does that bastard Jail speak the truth? Am I really..like him?

"Give it up Fate Testarossa. Search it within you and you know that to be the truth. You're exactly everything I have said and more," ending that off with a cackle.


"...."

"What's wrong now, my dear Enforcer Fate? Have you finally accepted what hid dormant within your 12 years of artificial life? Hmm?"

Gripping Riot Zamber tighter, Fate's expression was unreadable.

"Bardiche."

"Sir?"

"Overdrive. True Sonic Form."

"Yes sir."

"Commence Limit Break, Sonic Drive."


Golden light surrounded Fate while Tre and Sette activated their Inherent Skills and assumed combat stances. Jail simply looked on with lazy interest.

From within the column of light, Fate emerged with a change of barrier jacket and wielding dual zambers now.


Hope was renewed in the two Lightning Forwards at Fate's new stance. Hope which would be shattered shortly there after.


Jail narrowed his eyes and whispered "Show me. Show me the power which I have desired to obtain..Fate."


I'm not my mother..


"Shut up.."

Red aether strings burst forth from the ground of the lab under a twitch from Jail's glove. The resulting explosion covered where Fate was standing in smoke. Moments after, she flew out from within.

Sette was ready for her though. Swinging her left arm towards Fate's head and preparing a second strike with her right should that fail.

Fate simply ducked low under her swing, the force of the missed strike radiating through the air. The second swing was intercepted by her zamber, shattering the weapon in the resulting collision.

Sette could only gap in shock at the inhuman speed which her attacks had been rendered useless. Her eyes grew wider at the sound of a dull "shirek". She turned slowly to face Fate, who by now was right in front of her.

Empty burgundy eyes, devoid of light was all Sette saw before she crumbled on top of Fate.

Fate proceeded to withdrew the zamber impaled through the dead Number, pushing Sette off her. The unmistakable red of blood was covering the length of her right zamber now, quickly gathering in a small pool on the dusty floor beneath the tip of Bardiche.


I'm nothing like what he says I am..


Tre could only afford a gap of surprise at the realization Sette had been killed before Fate came at her. Activating Ride Impulse to counter Fate's Sonic Move, the two speed demons engaged in a dog fight which Jail could only follow as a deadly dance of death marked by the yellow and purple streams of light clashing and moving apart repeatedly within the space of seconds.

Rounding about to strike, Fate brought her zambers straight at Tre. The hasty block with the fin blades on Tre's wrists held initially, the burst of energy from her opponent was the last thing she registered, moments before the blades pierced through.


He is wrong..



Fate stared down, her eyes in a cold fixation at the man below, before she threw off the weight currently on her arms into the walls of the lab.

Jail was silent. Glancing at the gaping holes on Tre's arms and neck, blood pouring forth from the wounds, he offered no words for his fallen creations before turning his attention back towards the silent woman now before him.


This is not who I am..


"It seems I'm wrong after all. You have exceeded beyond my expectations and I'll say Precia was a foolish woman to the end, rejecting such splendid power for her mad dreams. Yet the irony, I see her alive in this beauty before me now. And that much I have to thank her for, if not for the scars she left, you would not have reached this current stage."

Jail's face was the epitome of twisted, eyes wide and a smile spread impossibly far.

"I offer you my hand now, Fate Testarossa. Come to my side now and I shall extend your magnificence with everything I have at my disposal, if only to let your splendid beauty grow."

Covered in cuts and breathing heavily now, Fate was down on one knee, leaning heavily on Bardiche as support, the twin blades bathed in blood. The ghost of a whisper escaped her lips as she struggled to stand up.

"What was that just now? Did you just say yes?"

Again the soundless whisper.

"Come now, I'm sure you can do better, my container of beauty, Fate Testarossa.."

Another two heavy pants before an answer was heard, loud and clear.


"SHUT UP!"


Fate charged, holding Bardiche in Riot Zamber form now, closing the gap quickly between her and Jail. Jail's response was to throw back his head in a laugh and spread his arms wide open, mocking her even now.

A raging cry mixed in with hysterical laughing was all that was heard before Fate swung the flat of her blade into the side of Jail, flinging him to impact against the opposite wall.


Fate walked over to the silent Jail lied. Picking him up by the head with her left hand, Fate's features was one wrapped in pure dementedness.

A small chuckle was heard before Jail laughed weakly.

"Fate..such magnificence..such splendid beauty..no one else can even dream of becoming like you..hahaha.."

Fate grimaced, the downwards curl of her lips revealing white and her eyes hardened. Jail's laughing voice coupled with the sight of his crazed face covered in blood was the last straw for her.


"Shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..shut up..."

Golden light gathered up and electricity flowed over Fate's left hand, the hand which had Jail firmly in her grip.

"Show..show me more..of your magnificence..Fate Testarossa..HAHAHAHA!"

"..."

"Eternal silence to this fool before me let not his words defile my peace ever again."

Bardiche chimed once before answering.


"Hand of Fate."


Blinding light flowed from her hand, drowning everything in its grip, Jail's laughter seemingly consumed by the light as well.


It was hard to see what had happen but Caro and Erio waited for the blinding light to extinguish, before searching the display for the results of the aftermath.

From the clearing display, two figures were discernible.

A black clad figure standing before the corpse, left hand crackling with residual energy, right holding a bloody zamber and her back to the screen.

A white-coated figure fell to the ground sideways, revealing Jail Scaglietti to the display..

..and his now headless body.


The softest of a laugh was heard.




Shoddy.:heh:

That was ... an alternate ending for Scaglietti? :twitch: Fate is scary!

And what exactly did Hand of Fate do, anyway?

:nod:
Besides, including Tyrfing might very well just be asking for an IMBA in potency-level of the protagonists over the antagonists.:p The Baptism of Fire scenario shows Aurion trying to fight Knight-style (without much of his illusions) to get a better feel on Tyrfing's handling. As such, he wasn't really doing spectacularly, as he is mostly a ranged-fighter/Mage. And Almaria was excluded from there too. As a later plan on RevivalS, Aurion uses all three devices at once (With a bit of tweaking and my new revelations that allows him to do so. Simply using three devices at once is of course not a walk in the park.) with his preferred fighting style (slightly indirect mid-range tactical) against either Serge or Saga. Needless to say, he's more dangerous than an Exceed Mode Nanoha or a Zamber Mote Fate (not Limit Break) hands down at that point. Not because of the power level, but for the disturbing amount of versatility and tricks he possesses.:heh::uhoh:

Like I said, that's for the Timeline RevivalS is in only.:p In other timelines, he would never really get to use Tyrfing.:heh:

Sure, sure.

And if Aurion's that dangerous with all three devices operational, you should look forward to Fate's Sanguine Form and Nanoha's Final Excellion and Starlight Modes (I think I made them too powerful for their levels >_>).

Or Leona's Full Drive.

*runs from HAXXbusters*

lol Is there a pic of Vestrell?

I don't have time to be searching for images yet, but if I do, I'll post them later.

Phoenix, dont listen to this man. GIVE US THOSE HAWT *radio static* SCENES NAO--

[Alter-ego]Your wish is my command.[/Alter-ego]

Must ... suppress ... instinct ... :eyespin::eyespin:

That's something to witness. 120% dere Jeno. :eyespin:

I'm waiting for that eagerly as well. :p

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 06:00
:heh: So he now he has the whole city rigged with voyeur cams? :D


No place is safe from Vice's eyes.

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

They say spells that require a long aria (activation phrase) tend to be more powerful. An idea to go along is to have lyrical spells work with greater power and effect, but taking longer time to prepare.

I was actually thinking of something like that for the Lyrical System, explaining its potency (and its relative impracticality in frontline combat).

However, there is also Lyrical Magic that acts on the sound or voice itself. As opposed to the above concept, where the song is just an aria for the spell, the song in this case IS the spell, so it has an effect from the first few notes (think Mermaid Songs for you SnH watchers which would make Sun and Lunar Lyrical magic users... ).

It's important to remember though that adapting Lyrical Magic for such situations requires special Instrument devices and such. Lyrical Magic in its original usage was more about using spells to enhance music, rather than using music to cast spells. :heh:


And really, Smith and Wesson should be spared from their blood-soaked fate; they were just telling the truth. :heh:


Like they say... the truth hurts :heh:

There is no right and wrong in love, only whether we believe in it, and how we hold on to that faith.


Truth :D

[Alter-ego]Your wish is my command.[/Alter-ego]

Must ... suppress ... instinct ... :eyespin::eyespin:

*activates Geass*

Do not suppress your instinct! Do as you must!!!!!

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 06:17
And then a stray electrical nerve impulse sends a signal racing to his fingers which causes them to...squeeze?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

It's never stray when this kind of thing happens. Simply a base reflex. :)


Just a totally unhinged and uninhibited Jeno? :uhoh: And MOAR Spica pleaze :nod:

More Spica is always good. :)



:heh: So he now he has the whole city rigged with voyeur cams? :D

Omae na.. :eyebrow:


Vita is probably still having a hangover. :D

Wonder if she's still stuck in the car boot. :D



That too. Yeah start working on Katrina! *kicks Tormenk into a hole and tosses a laptop inside*

History and background is a mess. Abilities looks h4xxed. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:



I think it had to do with pilot yelling mayday and saying its Mai-day. :heh:

:heh: It was something else. :heh:


I blame A's Nano. :uhoh: Hint: The nano scene where Chrono caught the Lieze twins.

Come to think of it, Acous's bind on Uno looks similar.. :uhoh:



They say spells that require a long aria (activation phrase) tend to be more powerful. An idea to go along is to have lyrical spells work with greater power and effect, but taking longer time to prepare.

Yup. Partially why I think Ancient Belka spells are so powerful and that the normal spells are slightly weaker than if the entire incantation was recited.


Depends on who the victim is. :)

Let's see..

You? :joke:

Nah I prefer mindrape Q and A sessions over that. It'll be a while before I try something like that again.



It's one million years of pain compressed into a second. Good luck! :D

:hmm:

"Sufficiently advanced pain can be indistinguishable from pleasure"

Who knows what kind of sensation will he pass out from? :D



That, I do not deny. :p

And that's not Hounds of Artemis, by the way.

It looks like True Pain: Depravity of Artemis to me now. :heh:


Suddenly, I have the distinct impression of Chaos and Twisted sharing brotherly love ...

*runs*

I wonder. :hmm: What do you think Chaos? :D


:dots:

I don't know how to reply that, but I'll give it a shot anyway.

There is no right and wrong in love, only whether we believe in it, and how we hold on to that faith.

Oh well, it's 1:1, then. :D

I'm glad that it ended with that. I'm too lazy to come up with a response. :p



I wouldn't mind that, but would TK mind becoming a female suddenly. :D

And by the way, Asha IS also the Dragon of Chaos, if I remember correctly.

Asha's female? :D Two Dragon of Chaos and no Dragon of Order? :confused:



Is he? Why?

His question is basically taken in the wrong direction. :heh:


I suddenly thought that Katrina might be saved by the Princess in GuardianS. :heh:

:hmm:

That's an interesting idea but I was referring to Princess Tiara. ;)



Tasty doesn't even begin to describe it. :)

Show me the extend of this tastiness. :D


That was ... an alternate ending for Scaglietti? :twitch: Fate is scary!

And what exactly did Hand of Fate do, anyway?

Scary Fate is the general opinion. :heh:

I'm glad you asked. Hand of Fate gathers electrical energy to deliver a shock to the target , effectively knocking out the person. In this case with lethal settings and a crazed Fate, Jail's head went pop like a balloon. :D



Sure, sure.

And if Aurion's that dangerous with all three devices operational, you should look forward to Fate's Sanguine Form and Nanoha's Final Excellion and Starlight Modes (I think I made them too powerful for their levels >_>).

Or Leona's Full Drive.

*runs from HAXXbusters*

New device forms are always welcomed. :nod:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 06:25
Cept these aren’t Belkan mages and they aren’t using the system the same way, they’ve hijacked a basic concept, but for a completely different application. I don't even really consider this aspect to make it AU so much as the fact that the events I have planned would be really hard to square with later canon as they're going to be pretty damn wide reaching, so this will be a very similar, but slightly divergent timeline I suppose.

You're basically turning a series about magic into a sci-fi series, treating magic as 'simply another form of energy (while it obviously is more then that)' and yet you don't concider it going AU? :eyebrow:

Of course IMO all of the fanon is AU already, but let's not get into that again. :p

Ah, but to quote yourself: AU is no reason to ignore canon. ;)

Wait Keroko-chan! It's not what it looks like! I don't like you! I mean, I like you alot but not that way- No wait, I mean I just like-!

*Grabs her by her shoulder and looks at her seriously*

Don't misunderstand!

Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 06:31
You're basically turning a series about magic into a sci-fi series, treating magic as 'simply another form of energy (while it obviously is more then that)' and yet you don't concider it going AU? :eyebrow: No I don't. It’s particularly stated as such in the series and it's treated like it constantly, magic is rather subjective anyway what exactly is "magic"? Too someone from the 1500s your electricity would be magic, never mind radio, nuclear bombs, and lasers. If you replace the term mana with say "Zero point energy" is it still magic now? Etc. Not to flog a dead hose but...

"Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic."

That line applies more to Nanoha then nearly any other series I've seen. Let face it the fact is the series has spaceships, robots, clones, and cyborgs it’s already WAY into sci-fi it's merely a matter of realizing that fact and expanding on it. To me the people trying to jerk it back toward a more “normal” fantasy style magic are the ones twisting the verse. To me Nanoha magic is about a scientific approach based around technology and reason and the people with ancient prophecies, opposing deities, and such are the ones going really AU. As far as I'm concerned I'm still pretty damn close to canon, way more so then most.

Ah, but to quote yourself: AU is no reason to ignore canon. ;)Which I'm not, I'm merely focusing on aspects most people ignore in their rush to invent 50 million new types of magic. ;)

Edit:
Sorry for all the edits, getting what I wanted to say to sound right is hard when I'm this tired... :uhoh:

haiz123321
2007-10-27, 06:34
- Those words made me remember how Jin in Zoids Genesis, after taking over Digald, produced his mechanical bio-zoid pilots- which are literally ghosts in shells- human souls placed in a machine and manipulated, forcing some of the remaining human Digald forces to join the rebel suppression army.

And on a side note... ZOMFG! that Bio-Tyranno is one HAXX zoid- it's a frakking mini black hole cannon!!!

:rolleyes: Hukebeins have a black hole engine, isn't that more haxxed? :heh:



Compared to the Gravity Cannon or the Deathsaurer's CPC, it's quite weak though :heh:

The Deathsaur CPC charges faster than the genobreakers right? Cause Genobreakers uses the tail to gather particles while Deathsaur uses the fan thing and the tail to make a continuous lashing fire :eyespin:


Hint: It's not the pig:heh:

:eyespin:

*Dump a potato sack over haiz's head, tie it up, kick it around, toss it into a hole*

HEY!!!

Is that a complement :heh: ?

Of course, what did YOU think it was :rolleyes:

They skipped into the future :heh: That scene is very far into the story :heh:

Similar to GL then ^^
But still, kisses and confessions on the first ep... they don't waste time at all

MORE EPIC NESS!!! ALBERT AND HIS FUTURE SON WHO WILL KICK INDISCRIMINATE AMOUNTS OF ASS!

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b214/gyrobot/Warrior.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b214/gyrobot/knight2.jpg

Epic swordfight in da future!

Woah :twitch: we're bringing in maple characters now?

:eek:
Fate snapped...:eek:

Not a good thing nor sight :uhoh: I'd watch out if I were you Kha :D

Dragon Unison?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch:

It's not any dragon you find on the street though, I'll draft out a profile for him once i get a pic


*blink* Another Haruhi? But we already have a Haruhi here....

U didn't tell me this when I first posted up her profile or did you miss it or u thought I made another OC after Hime Haruhi (she is not a princess, it's just the name) :confused:

:eyebrow: Give me even one example, just one will do.

One example of? :confused:

Well now, welcome to our side of the fence Chaos. :D You've had your fun, now its our turn. :D:D:D:D:D

[Q]uoted [F]or [T]ruth


But you wouldn't :eek: ! You're too nice!

After how you used Keroko-chan? I don't think so :D


Scary Fate is the general opinion. :heh:

I'm glad you asked. Hand of Fate gathers electrical energy to deliver a shock to the target , effectively knocking out the person. In this case with lethal settings and a crazed Fate, Jail's head went pop like a balloon. :D

o_O You can pump electrical energy into people's head till it explodes? That's new

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 06:55
What's that? I can't hear you!


Jeno: “I DON’T HAVE STRONG FEELINGS !!!”




And then a stray electrical nerve impulse sends a signal racing to his fingers which causes them to...squeeze?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

To squeeze and to squirm and to breathe heavily on her neck.





Smith: :eyespin: Ceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........

Jeno (Thought speech): “What else can you tell me?”





Just a totally unhinged and uninhibited Jeno? :uhoh: And MOAR Spica pleaze :nod:

No no, I mean what do you think he’ll be like :heh:




Oh yeah. Ah that was it. When Hao send Hanagumi to attack Yoh and company to shake him up. Yoh did react somewhat negatively to threats on his friends.

The anime got it wrong :heh:

For one thing, Yoh NEVER loses his cool, even when his friends die… Something which Hao’s people pointed out to him.




Do that. Another for his harem? :D

Maybe maybe… Gives an excuse for Fate-mama…





Wonder what will I have him do by then... Any ideas on a reponse? :D

His heart rate would shoot through the roof for one :heh:

And if she gets real close to him, he would not hesitant to take advantage of the situation… Little by little.




Is he? :naughty:

Faith :heh:




Would that be you or Jeno? :p

What do you think :p ?




The last line was the finisher for me. :D:D:D

Why am I not surprised :p




History and background is a mess. Abilities looks h4xxed. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Never mind that, you got me too hyped up for her scene with Jeno :p

And it would be interesting to see her dissecting him…





Come to think of it, Acous's bind on Uno looks similar.. :uhoh:

As if there’s another bind to use on attractive females :p





I wonder. :hmm: What do you think Chaos? :D

Don’t ask me… I don’t know… >.>



Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-27, 06:58
Flame missing is not that noticeable since he's always missing :heh:
Eh? :twitch:
sonna~

Chapter 20 = the busy days u were talking about?
Yeah, but it'll be called "Knight's Ordeal"...a hint to what's going to happen to Koji :uhoh:

Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Hmmmm I wonder... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118875789398151.jpg)

...http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/jawdrop.gif
I can already imagine Hayate saying...

Hayate: Ah! Ohayo~ A-na-ta~
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Ok...teaser for a scene at the end of chapter 20~

Maren: *blushes* D-dou desu ka...Koji-sama?
Koji: M-maji? *pinches own cheek*

:uhoh:*runs*

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 07:03
It's never stray when this kind of thing happens. Simply a base reflex. :)


:nod:

So is the moan that comes afterwards?

:nod:


More Spica is always good. :)

Agreed :)

Come to think of it, Acous's bind on Uno looks similar.. :uhoh:

Yes, porno Struggle Bind :heh:

Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

:heh::heh::heh: So it's like...

Keroko-chan: How can I face him in the morning?!?!

No I don't. It’s particularly stated as such in the series and it's treated like it constantly, magic is rather subjective anyway what exactly is "magic"? Too someone from the 1500 your computer would be probably be magic. If you replace the term mana with say "Zero point energy" is it still magic now? Etc. I don't care care what it's called I care how it's used and acts and magic in Nanoha is repeatedly shown as little more then clever applications of a very versatile energy source, but still just that an energy source. Notice how you never hear anything about souls, gods, etc none of the usual fantasy tropes really, that ought to be a hint.

The fact is the series has spaceships, robots, clones, and cyborgs it’s already WAY into sci-fi it's merely a matter of realizing that fact and expanding on it. To me the people trying to jerk it back toward a more “normal” fantasy style magic are the ones twisting the verse IMO. To me Nanoha magic is about a scientific approach based around technology and reason and the people with ancient prophecies, opposing deities, and such are the ones going really AU. As far as I'm concerned I'm still pretty damn close to canon, way more so then most.


For the most part, I agree with your assessment there. In the immortal words of Arthur C. Clarke (and my favorite quote of all time):

"Sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic"

And as it's treated in Nanoha, it isn't a stretch to think of magic as just another type of energy much like electricity.

Although we can't ignore that the first two seasons of Nanoha do give basis for the portrayal of magic in a more fantasy setting (the jewel seeds and Ancient Belka). Maybe not the concepts like Gods and stuff, but certainly enough to allow for such portrayals of the setting to be plausible (which is the founding edict of the OC :heh: ).

:rolleyes: Hukebeins have a black hole engine, isn't that more haxxed? :heh:


The Mk. 1 yes, but only as a power source. Without the Black Hole Cannon, the Huckie was no more than a high-end PT. :heh:

The Deathsaur CPC charges faster than the genobreakers right? Cause Genobreakers uses the tail to gather particles while Deathsaur uses the fan thing and the tail to make a continuous lashing fire :eyespin:

Wasn't the Genobreaker's tail for the steam exhaust on the cannon's cooling system?

IIRC the Deathsaurers' CPC does charge faster than the Genobreaker's :heh:


Jeno: “I DON’T HAVE STRONG FEELINGS !!!”


What? You have strong feelings? :uhoh:

To squeeze and to squirm and to breathe heavily on her neck.

And to make her moan softly...

Jeno (Thought speech): “What else can you tell me?”

Wesson: [C'mon bro! You need to tell us the wonders of THE TREASURE!!!]
Smith: :eyespin: Squishy..... :eyespin:


No no, I mean what do you think he’ll be like :heh:

A more romantic and open Jeno perhaps? Complete with smooth words and dashing moves?

:eyespin:

Although it'll also be interesting to see how Spica reacts... :uhoh:


*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!

Oh Boy :heh:

Ok...teaser for a scene at the end of chapter 20~

Maren: *blushes* D-dou desu ka...Koji-sama?
Koji: M-maji? *pinches own cheek*

:uhoh:*runs*



HOLY SHIT



:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 07:18
Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

*silver feather drops onto Keroko-chan's head*



o_O You can pump electrical energy into people's head till it explodes? That's new

Off the top of my head. :heh: So many other ways to make things explode too. ;)



Jeno (Thought speech): “What else can you tell me?”

It's too hawt for words? :D


The anime got it wrong :heh:

For one thing, Yoh NEVER loses his cool, even when his friends die… Something which Hao’s people pointed out to him.

Manga knowledge in bits and pieces now..

How would Ryu do as an OC? :D


Maybe maybe… Gives an excuse for Fate-mama…

To..?


His heart rate would shoot through the roof for one :heh:

And if she gets real close to him, he would not hesitant to take advantage of the situation… Little by little.

That has been accounted for. Would he think of Spica halfway through though?

Expect a short teaser later. :D



What do you think :p ?

The two of you are just about the same to me. :p


Why am I not surprised :p

I was more amused than anything. :)


Never mind that, you got me too hyped up for her scene with Jeno :p

And it would be interesting to see her dissecting him…

So who should I do first? Jeno? Keroko? Maren?

Now you're asking me to take him apart. :p Keroko was slightly difficult but Jeno's look tougher without a detailed history. Maren, on the other hand, is going to be my masterpiece. :)



Don’t ask me… I don’t know… >.>

Come on don't deny it buddy. :D



*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!

*another silver feather drifts down*

:nod:

So is the moan that comes afterwards?

:nod:

Of course. :)


:heh::heh::heh: So it's like...

Keroko-chan: How can I face him in the morning?!?!

You don't. You'll have someone else to face. ;)



What? You have strong feelings? :uhoh:

Which male doesn't? In addition to hotbloodness and courage! :D



A more romantic and open Jeno perhaps? Complete with smooth words and dashing moves?

:eyespin:

Although it'll also be interesting to see how Spica reacts... :uhoh:



Chaos is going to get a big headache soon. :heh:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 07:23
No I don't. It’s particularly stated as such in the series

It does? Where?

And exactly where can you find a type of energy that can destroy things, render people unconsious, heal, become stable enough to walk upon, materialize outfits and weapons, allow one to fly, enhance physical abillities and protect all at once?

Magic is far more then yet another type of energy.

magic is rather subjective anyway what exactly is "magic"? Too someone from the 1500s your electricity would be magic, never mind radio, nuclear bombs, and lasers. If you replace the term mana with say "Zero point energy" is it still magic now? Etc. Not to flog a dead hose but...

"Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic."

That line applies more to Nanoha then nearly any other series I've seen I mean for god sake the series has spaceships, robots, clones, and cyborgs the magic is incidental it’s already WAY into sci-fi it's merely a matter of realizing that fact and expanding on it.To me the people trying to jerk it back toward a more “normal” fantasy style magic are the ones twisting the verse IMO. To me Nanoha magic is about a scientific approach based around technology and reason and the people with ancient prophecies, opposing deities, and such are the ones going really AU. As far as I'm concerned I'm still pretty damn close to canon, way more so then most.

I agree that Nanoha has a more technical aproach to magic, but I don't agree that we can simply disregard the most crucial element of magic: The mage. Your technollogy is usable by just about anyone, rendering mages pretty much obsolete bar the effort of recharging the cartridges. I'm not buying the "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." line, because it has been shown in the show on multiple ocasions that technology is not needed to cast magic. Yuuno supports this, Vivio supports this, Tiana supports this, hell Nanoha supports this!

Nanoha is a show about magic, it has magic in the freaking title! Everyone in the shows calls it magic! To call it 'incidental' is to call the entire base of the show null and void. Don't get me wrong, I like the idea of your unit, but I can already see this turning into a huge war with people wielding guns on both sides, fields of rolling tanks and fighters roaming the sky. All fine and dandy, but that is not Nanoha.

Nanoha is a show that contains a scientific aproach to magic, it doesn't center around it. Take the Relics, for example. They're crystals that can be seemingly inserted into people and boost their abillities. Scientific? Hell no. There has yet to be any sort of explanation of how and why Relics boost the energies of certain individuals, much less how they apparantly have the abillity to raise the dead. There has been no scientific explanation for them, they use the more fantasy style of magic as the base of their existence. Fantasy style magic is just as much a part of Nanoha as technollogy.

U didn't tell me this when I first posted up her profile or did you miss it or u thought I made another OC after Hime Haruhi (she is not a princess, it's just the name) :confused:

Oh, wait, you mean Kamisaka Haruhi. Sorry, my fault. :heh:

One example of? :confused:

Nevermind. :rolleyes:

*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!

Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 07:28
It's too hawt for words? :D


His head is too mushy right now to form anything coherent :uhoh:

That has been accounted for. Would he think of Spica halfway through though?

Expect a short teaser later. :D

Ooooooooooh :nod:

Which male doesn't? In addition to hotbloodness and courage! :D

SONOTORI DA!!!!!! :D:D


Chaos is going to get a big headache soon. :heh:

I'll order the Tylenol :)


Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

Weak :heh:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 07:31
Weak :heh:

Yup. :nod:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 07:33
It does? Where?

And exactly where can you find a type of energy that can destroy things, render people unconsious, heal, become stable enough to walk upon, materialize outfits and weapons, allow one to fly, enhance physical abillities and protect all at once?

Magic is far more then yet another type of energy.

Keroko does have a point here.




Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

I have to wonder in such situations would Keroko's face be redder than her hair? :heh:

Keroko-kun seems to be enjoying it though. :p

His head is too mushy right now to form anything coherent :uhoh:

Cooked mushrooms. :uhoh:


Ooooooooooh :nod:

I write on a whim from inspiration and I don't have the stamina to do really long pieces. :heh:


@Chaos:

Does it work fine? Pm me if there's any problems.

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-27, 07:35
No place is safe from Vice's eyes.

Or anybody else's whose interest is similar, for that matter. :p

Like they say... the truth hurts :heh:

:nod:

Smith and Wesson embody the saying perfectly. :heh:

*activates Geass*

Do not suppress your instinct! Do as you must!!!!!

Must ... resist ... Geass ...!

*imminent brain malfunction due to resistance*

:eyespin::eyespin:

:hmm:

"Sufficiently advanced pain can be indistinguishable from pleasure"

Who knows what kind of sensation will he pass out from? :D

Pleasure that's painful and pain that's pleasurable!

Okay, that doesn't make too much sense.

It looks like True Pain: Depravity of Artemis to me now. :heh:

Something along that line. :heh:

I'm glad that it ended with that. I'm too lazy to come up with a response. :p

It's not over yet, Grinder! :rolleyes:

Asha's female? :D Two Dragon of Chaos and no Dragon of Order? :confused:

According to the producers, Asha has two faces of a coin. I can't remember exactly how, I'll need to refer again.

:hmm:

That's an interesting idea but I was referring to Princess Tiara. ;)

Princess Tiara? Who's that?

Show me the extend of this tastiness. :D

As usual, in due time. ;)

Scary Fate is the general opinion. :heh:

I'm glad you asked. Hand of Fate gathers electrical energy to deliver a shock to the target , effectively knocking out the person. In this case with lethal settings and a crazed Fate, Jail's head went pop like a balloon. :D

:eek:

Lethal indeed. And poor Jail suffered badly for his ramblings. :p

New device forms are always welcomed. :nod:

And the HAXX rifles are ever ready, just in case, no? :D

o_O You can pump electrical energy into people's head till it explodes? That's new

Principally, it can be done. Electricity is a form of energy, collecting too much of it in the body can heat up the organs. In Jail's case, it went over the boiling temperature. :p

As if there’s another bind to use on attractive females :p

Leather binds? :p

Don’t ask me… I don’t know… >.>

Aww, brother Chaos is too shy to admit.

*runs*

=====

Edit: On a sidenote, TK and Jimmy, I rewatched Episode 18 of Nanoha StrikerS, and it was shown that Auris is indeed a Major. That is, considering the translation is any accurate.

In any case, do the objections against her still stand? If yes, I'll put another one in the position (though I don't have any clearer idea who's suitable). Any suggestions?

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 07:45
I have to wonder in such situations would Keroko's face be redder than her hair? :heh:

Keroko-kun seems to be enjoying it though. :p


It would be... her face would drain all the color out of her hair :heh:

Cooked mushrooms. :uhoh:

:uhoh:

Brain puree anyone?

Or anybody else's whose interest is similar, for that matter. :p


Like you?

*runs*


:nod:

Smith and Wesson embody the saying perfectly. :heh:

S&W: THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREE!!!!!!

*stomped*

Mai: ...

Urusai.


Must ... resist ... Geass ...!

*imminent brain malfunction due to resistance*

:eyespin::eyespin:

Resistance is futile

Princess Tiara? Who's that?

Nightengale's OC heroine for Saga of Saga, the Princess that would eventually become the one known as Reinforce. :(

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 07:49
:heh::heh::heh: So it's like...

Keroko-chan: How can I face him in the morning?!?!


What did I do :heh: ?



What? You have strong feelings? :uhoh:

Jeno: "DON'T HAVE!!!"



And to make her moan softly...

Loki: "Mai likes Smith! Mai likes Smith!"



Wesson: [C'mon bro! You need to tell us the wonders of THE TREASURE!!!]
Smith: :eyespin: Squishy..... :eyespin:

Jeno: "GO ON! YOU CAN DO IT!"



A more romantic and open Jeno perhaps? Complete with smooth words and dashing moves?

:eyespin:

Although it'll also be interesting to see how Spica reacts... :uhoh:


Jeno? ALOT more straight forward :heh:

Spica?... :heh: Imagine Ryou from Clannad episode 4 in THAT scene...


EEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!




Oh Boy :heh:



Could somebody explain to me?!





Manga knowledge in bits and pieces now..

How would Ryu do as an OC? :D

HE would forever walk around with a bullseye on his back in my eyes :D



To..?

Exist.



That has been accounted for. Would he think of Spica halfway through though?

Expect a short teaser later. :D

Not unless you have Katrina all ready to 'ride' him :heh: Not any kind of playing, but outright -=[censored]=- and -=[censored]=- , then have them -=[censored]=- ,

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...Erm, yeah. Petting is fine. Oh, and he doesn't grin like an idiot in those situation as well :heh:

but Jeno's look tougher without a detailed history.

Just asked away... Has he killed any babies? No. Children? Only if they fight back, as in REALLY fight back. Has anything kept him up at night? Only HER...




Come on don't deny it buddy. :D

Peer pressure... :eyespin:



*another silver feather drifts down*

I don't get it :heh:





Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

Was it something I've said :confused: ? Alittle help here?

But in case, I have an unconcious Keroko on my hands.


@Chaos:

Does it work fine? Pm me if there's any problems.

Later when I get home :heh:

Jimmy C
2007-10-27, 07:53
On a sidenote, TK and Jimmy, I rewatched Episode 18 of Nanoha StrikerS, and it was shown that Auris is indeed a Major.
In any case, do the objections against her still stand?

Yes, they do. Like we said, if it's unacceptable for Major Genya Nakajima to reach Lt. General in 4 years, it's also unacceptable for Major Auris Gaiz to rise as much in the same time. The position is pretty much responsible for all GF operations on Midchilda. Anyone in that position must show the ability to manage people and resources on a large scale above and beyond waging a war.
Whoever you put in the position should best be a Major General beforehand, a Brigadier General could be acceptable if the person has widespread respect and support from the troops. No one of lesser rank should be considered unless they've shown exceptional ability. Like winning a planetary war against superior forces.

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-27, 07:56
Yes, they do. Like we said, if it's unacceptable for Major Genya Nakajima to reach Lt. General in 4 years, it's also unacceptable for Major Auris Gaiz to rise as much in the same time. The position is pretty much responsible for all GF operations on Midchilda. Anyone in that position must show the ability to manage people and resources on a large scale above and beyond waging a war.
Whoever you put in the position should best be a Major General beforehand, a Brigadier General could be acceptable if the person has widespread respect and support from the troops. No one of lesser rank should be considered unless they've shown exceptional ability. Like winning a planetary war against superior forces.

Anybody in particular in your mind? Or I'm just going to "fabricate" one out of thin air?

haiz123321
2007-10-27, 07:56
Eh? :twitch:
sonna~

:p It's true, though u make up for it with pwnage artworks and stories

Yeah, but it'll be called "Knight's Ordeal"...a hint to what's going to happen to Koji :uhoh:

The title is ok but the world Ordeal bugs me...

I can already imagine Hayate saying...

Hayate: Ah! Ohayo~ A-na-ta~
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

I wish it could be me :upset:

Ok...teaser for a scene at the end of chapter 20~

Maren: *blushes* D-dou desu ka...Koji-sama?
Koji: M-maji? *pinches own cheek*

:uhoh:*runs*

What was Maren saying? If I'm correct, Koji is saying something like for real?!


Yes, porno Struggle Bind :heh:

He's lucky Carim/Sister/Hayate wasn't there :heh:

The Mk. 1 yes, but only as a power source. Without the Black Hole Cannon, the Huckie was no more than a high-end PT. :heh:

I was talking about Mk II, Original Huckebein and the One Ryoto uses

Wasn't the Genobreaker's tail for the steam exhaust on the cannon's cooling system?

Really? I didn't notice much actually

IIRC the Deathsaurers' CPC does charge faster than the Genobreaker's :heh:

CPC FTW :D

Wesson: [C'mon bro! You need to tell us the wonders of THE TREASURE!!!]
Smith: :eyespin: Squishy..... :eyespin:

:bow: GO S&W!!!


Chaos is going to get a big headache soon. :heh:

How come? :confused:


Oh, wait, you mean Kamisaka Haruhi. Sorry, my fault. :heh:
Nevermind. :rolleyes:

:uhoh::nod:


Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

But seeing her blushing like that is kinda cute :D


I have to wonder in such situations would Keroko's face be redder than her hair? :heh:

It would :D

Keroko-kun seems to be enjoying it though. :p

Who wouldn't? :D


Principally, it can be done. Electricity is a form of energy, collecting too much of it in the body can heat up the organs. In Jail's case, it went over the boiling temperature. :p

Since he was a cyborg himself :heh: Though revealing that Jail himself was a cyborg made me think of Dr. Gero from DBZ He himself was an andriod and he made 2 androids whom blew the crap outta him which in returned got owned by cell easily :heh:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 08:00
What did I do :heh: ?


:heh:


Jeno: "DON'T HAVE!!!"

Like the denial you're so obviously displaying right now?

Loki: "Mai likes Smith! Mai likes Smith!"

Jeno: "GO ON! YOU CAN DO IT!"

Mai: ...

...

Ippen...

Shin de miru?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Jeno? ALOT more straight forward :heh:

Spica?... :heh: Imagine Ryou from Clannad episode 4 in THAT scene...


EEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!


:D:nod::D Looking forward to this :D

Not unless you have Katrina all ready to 'ride' him :heh: Not any kind of playing, but outright -=[censored]=- and -=[censored]=- , then have them -=[censored]=- ,

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...Erm, yeah. Petting is fine.

:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

*Imagination Overdrive*

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Has anything kept him up at night? Only HER...

So... they have done the deed afterall? :uhoh:

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-27, 08:05
:p It's true, though u make up for it with pwnage artworks and stories
Good to know :D

The title is ok but the word Ordeal bugs me...
Ordeal, Trial, Test...it's all the same :rolleyes:

I wish it could be me :upset:
:heh:

What was Maren saying? If I'm correct, Koji is saying something like for real?!
The intended meaning is "How does it look...Koji-sama?" :heh:
*runs*

Kyral
2007-10-27, 08:12
*is swept away be the masses of new postings*

Nooooooooooo~!!!

Oh my gawd! I really have to master the skill of fast text processing :heh:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 08:14
Pleasure that's painful and pain that's pleasurable!

Okay, that doesn't make too much sense.

I have some examples but its not forum friendly. :heh:



It's not over yet, Grinder! :rolleyes:

Spare me Jack! :bow:

Although that was pretty fun. :)


According to the producers, Asha has two faces of a coin. I can't remember exactly how, I'll need to refer again.

No worries. I know how busy you are. :)



Principally, it can be done. Electricity is a form of energy, collecting too much of it in the body can heat up the organs. In Jail's case, it went over the boiling temperature. :p

Lucky that was a localized shock. Otherwise there will be burnt Jail. :uhoh:







S&W: THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREE!!!!!!

*stomped*

Mai: ...

Urusai.

Or usually more often than not, cause you lots of pain and agony. :heh:


Nightengale's OC heroine for Saga of Saga, the Princess that would eventually become the one known as Reinforce. :(

Sadly so. And that means you haven't read it right?

*kicks PF into hole, tossing Saga der Saga after him*

What did I do :heh: ?

Reignite the flames of Keroko Week. :uhoh:


HE would forever walk around with a bullseye on his back in my eyes :D

[Adr 00] Why would he be like that in your eyes?[/Adr 00]

He's perfect for comedy though. :D


Exist.

Lol. :rolleyes:



Not unless you have Katrina all ready to 'ride' him :heh: Not any kind of playing, but outright -=[censored]=- and -=[censored]=- , then have them -=[censored]=- ,

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...Erm, yeah. Petting is fine. Oh, and he doesn't grin like an idiot in those situation as well :heh:


And you've thought it that far?

Fulfillment is far easier achieved than continued desire. ;) It's always better to leave it dangling though. :)

I'll try the intense atmosphere later.



Just asked away... Has he killed any babies? No. Children? Only if they fight back, as in REALLY fight back. Has anything kept him up at night? Only HER...

Only that the effect is lessened that way. It's better when it's well hidden and no one goes to think of it.



I don't get it :heh:

Katrina's watching. ;)


You didn't read my Kerokolysis. :(


Was it something I've said :confused: ? Alittle help here?

But in case, I have an unconcious Keroko on my hands.


Keroko unconscious in Chaos/Jeno's hands? :uhoh:



Since he was a cyborg himself :heh: Though revealing that Jail himself was a cyborg made me think of Dr. Gero from DBZ He himself was an andriod and he made 2 androids whom blew the crap outta him which in returned got owned by cell easily :heh:

When was Jail revealed to be a Cyborg? :confused:

Jimmy C
2007-10-27, 08:15
Anybody in particular in your mind? Or I'm just going to "fabricate" one out of thin air?

Since the anime never showed anyone with the qualifications, go ahead and fabricate him. Just remember the rank and ability qualifications I mentioned.

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 08:19
It does? Where?Fine, fine it's something of my theory based on it's observed effects.


And exactly where can you find a type of energy that can destroy things, Well that’s easy enough of any kind of energy can destroy anything, various sorts of EM radiation tend to be good at this tough and you can do it in so many ways with them burning, cutting, blasting, melting, etc.

render people unconsious,
Also not exactly hard simple electricity can do this, or a bop on the head.

heal, Trickier, but the body itself has the ability to heal many injuries stimulating this effect might be possible as even certain types of mundane radiation have acutally been shown to promote healing in clinical trials. That said this area clearly has serious limits they didn’t just poof Nanoha back to normal and we see Erio walking around in a sling for instance. Working with that one could argue that you could use fine manipulation of EM fields and such to move cells around and fix the damage, too a point, you couldn’t poof up MORE cells which handily explains the limits, you can boost the bodies healing, but you can’t acutally create more matter to work with.

Oh that’s good… I’m using that.

become stable enough to walk upon, Fine enough control over Electro magnetism could do this as the only thing that keeps you from falling through other “solid matter” is Electro magnetic repulsion, if you could create such a field at will you could “walk” on thin air.


materialize outfits and weapons,
Transporters (canon tech) might well breaking down a subject in data or energy for transport, using the process in reserve off of a stored pattern the weapon and outfit can be “beamed” out onto the user. Thus it’s a factor of the device not magic. This make the most sense acutally otherwise the person ought to be able to alter the device nearly on demand if they are truly just materializing it from scratch.

allow one to fly,
EM manipulation again covers this easily you could repulse off the magnetic field of a planet, this is common as fucking dirt in sci-fi. Shit we can make a frog (http://www.hfml.ru.nl/froglev.html) fly now, we need a giant super magnet the size of a small room, but if one had accesses to a handy dandy high energy power source and fine control of EM fields…

enhance physical abillities and
EM again could do allot of this you could quite possibly reinforce your arm to make it as hard as rock or move super fast without shattering every bone in your body.

protect all at once? The same EM manipulation as above could create force fields possibly as strong as walls miles thick and such.

Oh and as I bonus I’ll throw in a bonus:
Telepathy: transmission and perception of electromagnetic signals between users.

Magic is far more then yet another type of energy.
Apparently not.


I agree that Nanoha has a more technical aproach to magic, but I don't agree that we can simply disregard the most crucial element of magic: The mage. I do to me the mage is nothing but a fuel source and sub-par magic processor. Luckily they're a mighty good fuel source one tech still can't match totally so they still have a place.

Your technollogy is usable by just about anyone, rendering mages pretty much obsolete bar the effort of recharging the cartridges. I'm not buying the "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." line, because it has been shown in the show on multiple ocasions that technology is not needed to cast magic. Yuuno supports this, Vivio supports this, Tiana supports this, hell Nanoha supports this!Your right, but that's because the brain is a effectively a kind of computer too albeit a feeble one compared to a device. So yes a mage can use magic without tech, but not very well which is why they use devices to begin with.

Nanoha is a show about magic, it has magic in the freaking title! Everyone in the shows calls it magic! What the show calls it doesn't concern me, how it's used and shown to behave dose. I'll still call it magic, but I'm merely pointing out that such a definition is inherently pliable and subjective, one mans magic is another's high technology.


To call it 'incidental' is to call the entire base of the show null and void.
I'm not throwing it I'm merely highlight other elements introduced and making logical deduction about how things would go.


Don't get me wrong, I like the idea of your unit, but I can already see this turning into a huge war with people wielding guns on both sides, fields of rolling tanks and fighters roaming the sky. All fine and dandy, but that is not Nanoha. 5 guys can't hold a planet or guard everything no matter how buff they are. Mages are limited in number and in a large scale conflict regular troops with conventional weapons will be required to hold ground and perform security among other things, logically it would only be sensible to outfit these troops as well as possible.

Also you watched the last 5 Ep of Strikers Right? You know the ones with the armies of robot jets and mechs running all over the place? This shit is already in Nanoha at this point.

Nanoha is a show that contains a scientific aproach to magic, it doesn't center around it Take the Relics, for example. They're crystals that can be seemingly inserted into people and boost their abillities.
Scientific? Hell no. There has yet to be any sort of explanation of how and why Relics boost the energies of certain individuals, Actually I consider that fairly scientific and if you go with my "magic = energy" thing then a relic is at least partly merely a combination generator/regulator. Plus they basically seem to have been BUILT so they're actually and example of technology. I think of them sort of like ZPM in Stargate plug them into pretty much anything and it works better.

much less how they apparantly have the abillity to raise the dead.Even that might be possible, short term, if they can maintain electrical activity in the brain or restore it based on patterns and if it was made to implant in humans repairing damage to the body might well be a design function. I'd wager relic have limits too I doubt you could raise a corpse that was little beside some flaps of skin on a skeleton for instance. I tend to thing the body needs to be "Fresh".


There has been no scientific explanation for them, they use the more fantasy style of magic as the base of their existence. Fantasy style magic is just as much a part of Nanoha as technollogy.More like no one's made an attempt to do so, also not understanding something dosen't make it magic. The guys that built relics and other Lost Logia clearly had made psychics their total bitch and when you get the smallest levels of things their VERY little you can't explain with absurdly fine, but perhaps possible, control of the fundamental forces of the universe.


Anyway Mages will still be all over the place I mean all my OCs are mages so it’s not like I’m going to totally ignore them to right a straight up war story, but they won’t totally illogically be the only game in town anymore and it will be about the practical use of and development of magic on a large scale for major military operations rather then epic mage duels and wreid magic artifacts or ancient factions.

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 08:27
Ha Ha!

Guess I also shouldn't mention what I did with that second picture, wouldn't want to damage you anymore.

T-thank you for your consideration of my deteriorating condition.:heh:

Not even when she's begging you to? :uhoh:

*runs*

Yes. Even if.:p
Besides, it's not like she'll beg to be peeked upon in the first place.:heh:

Looks like I have no choice. Aaron, forgive me. :uhoh:

NOOOOOOO~!!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

Sure, sure.

:nod:

And if Aurion's that dangerous with all three devices operational, you should look forward to Fate's Sanguine Form and Nanoha's Final Excellion and Starlight Modes (I think I made them too powerful for their levels >_>).

Oh, pumping up the Aces is fine.:nod:
(just be sure not to shaft Hayate on that again...>.>)

Or Leona's Full Drive.

She's the main heroine of the story.:) As long as you don't go too far, I guess it's still fine.

Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!


Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.

Weak :heh:

Yup. :nod:

Aurion: What's this?:heh: And I thought Fate had the most sensitive blush-meter...:heh::heh::heh:



Manga knowledge in bits and pieces now..

How would Ryu do as an OC? :D

Ryu and Tokagero?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch:

But in case, I have an unconcious Keroko on my hands.

UHOH!!!:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


I was talking about Mk II, Original Huckebein and the One Ryoto uses

Huckebein 008R/008L aka Huckebein Mk I = Black Hole Engine

Huckebein Mk II = Standard issue high-performance engine

Huckebein Mk III = Tronium Engine (NOT a Black Hole engine)



Just watched Clannad 4 and Kimikiss 1 & 2.

What can I say, more LOL for CLANNAD, especially that confession scene:D:D:D. (Ichinose Kotomi is so MOE~!:love:) And Kimikiss is indeed much more natural!:D:D:D MAJOR score right at the end of the first ep!:eek::D


:topicoff:
BTW, does anybody have the Daybreak's Bell MP3? (Gundam 00 OP) If so, can I ask you to upload it?:heh: Thanks in advance.

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-27, 08:31
It would be... her face would drain all the color out of her hair :heh:

Is that even possible? :heh:

:uhoh:

Brain puree anyone?

Give it to Vestrell, she's making brain pasta out of FieryAeon's pickled one.

Like you?

*runs*

:eyebrow:

It is true for everyone here.

S&W: THE TRUTH SHALL SET YOU FREE!!!!!!

*stomped*

Mai: ...

Urusai.

Truth sits below Mai's foot. :D

Resistance is futile

Still ... must ... resist ...

Nightengale's OC heroine for Saga of Saga, the Princess that would eventually become the one known as Reinforce. :(

Oh, I've read until Part Zero - Visions only, and after that, it was a flurry of backlog and character-building and typing. I must admit I haven't finished reading it. The "Princess" part missed me. Must find time to continue. :(

Jeno: "DON'T HAVE!!!"

Lies.

*runs*

Not unless you have Katrina all ready to 'ride' him :heh: Not any kind of playing, but outright -=[censored]=- and -=[censored]=- , then have them -=[censored]=- ,

-=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=-
-=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=-

The word "censored" produces more pleasurable imagination than real story. :rolleyes:

I have some examples but its not forum friendly. :heh:

Then make it over through other means.

Spare me Jack! :bow:

Although that was pretty fun. :)

Yep, it was. :)

No worries. I know how busy you are. :)

Q.F.T. :D

Sadly so. And that means you haven't read it right?

*kicks PF into hole, tossing Saga der Saga after him*

Until Part Zero - Visions only, unfortunately. :(

Since the anime never showed anyone with the qualifications, go ahead and fabricate him. Just remember the rank and ability qualifications I mentioned.

Sure, thanks for the go-ahead. :D

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 08:43
*is swept away be the masses of new postings*

Nooooooooooo~!!!

Oh my gawd! I really have to master the skill of fast text processing :heh:

You have much to learn young padawan of the ways of T3H F0RC3

:nod:

Yes. Even if.:p
Besides, it's not like she'll beg to be peeked upon in the first place.:heh:


There's always "the potion" ....

*whistles*

Aurion: What's this?:heh: And I thought Fate had the most sensitive blush-meter...:heh::heh::heh:

Fate knows how to blush... Keroko does not :heh:


:topicoff:
BTW, does anybody have the Daybreak's Bell MP3? (Gundam 00 OP) If so, can I ask you to upload it?:heh: Thanks in advance.

Ask, and you shall recieve (http://www.mediafire.com/?9xfzgsdm3ot)

:)

Is that even possible? :heh:


Nothing's impossible in OC :uhoh:


Give it to Vestrell, she's making brain pasta out of FieryAeon's pickled one.

Sounds delicious :) Add some of these Crack as well :D

Still ... must ... resist ...

REPETITION IMPULSE BREAKER!!!!!

Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile

Oh, I've read until Part Zero - Visions only, and after that, it was a flurry of backlog and character-building and typing. I must admit I haven't finished reading it. The "Princess" part missed me. Must find time to continue. :(

By Royal Decree, we command you to READ NAO!!!!

*kicks PF into deeper hole*

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 09:05
Like the denial you're so obviously displaying right now?

"YES! I mean, NO!"



Mai: ...

...

Ippen...

Shin de miru?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Jeno: "Technically, I've already died once :p"

Loki: "Technically, I can't die yet... It's a long story :heh:"



:eek::eek::eek::eek::eek::eek:

*Imagination Overdrive*

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

I didn't mean to... :heh:


So... they have done the deed afterall? :uhoh:

As in thinking of her :heh: !

And for your question... That was the effect of the potion :p


Reignite the flames of Keroko Week. :uhoh:

EH?! I thought I'm still on Mai's week?!


And you've thought it that far?

Just in case :p


Fulfillment is far easier achieved than continued desire. ;) It's always better to leave it dangling though. :)

What :heh:? Huh :confused:? Come again :eyespin:?


I'll try the intense atmosphere later.

How intense could it be ;) ?


Only that the effect is lessened that way. It's better when it's well hidden and no one goes to think of it.

Huh :heh: ?



Katrina's watching. ;)


You didn't read my Kerokolysis. :(

I did... Catch the creepy parts...briefly :heh:

...Gomen >.>



Keroko unconscious in Chaos/Jeno's hands? :uhoh:

Mine, unless you want me to pass her to Jeno?

Keroko
2007-10-27, 09:08
Was it something I've said :confused: ? Alittle help here?

But in case, I have an unconcious Keroko on my hands.

You basically confessed right in front of her. While holding her. Now hand her over while you do the math.

Trickier, but the body itself has the ability to heal many injuries stimulating this effect might be possible as even certain types of mundane radiation have acutally been shown to promote healing in clinical trials. That said this area clearly has serious limits they didn’t just poof Nanoha back to normal and we see Erio walking around in a sling for instance. Working with that one could argue that you could use fine manipulation of EM fields and such to move cells around and fix the damage, too a point, you couldn’t poof up MORE cells which handily explains the limits, you can boost the bodies healing, but you can’t acutally create more matter to work with.

EM can do that? Wow. At any rate, while magical healing is limited, Erio was still fit to fight rather rapidly, even with his arm in a sling. If we asume that his arm was in a sling because it was broken, then he would have been out of comision for about six weeks. I really don't see how shuffling around a few bone cells (which, I might add, are for more solidly attached, and therefore not shuffled so easilly) can make him fit to fight that easilly.

Fine enough control over Electro magnetism could do this as the only thing that keeps you from falling through other “solid matter” is Electro magnetic repulsion, if you could create such a field at will you could “walk” on thin air.

So EM repulsion is what keeps me from falling through a concrete floor?

Transporters (canon tech) might well breaking down a subject in data or energy for transport, using the process in reserve off of a stored pattern the weapon and outfit can be “beamed” out onto the user. Thus it’s a factor of the device not magic. This make the most sense acutally otherwise the person ought to be able to alter the device nearly on demand if they are truly just materializing it from scratch.

Funny thing is, Nanoha did just that in Season 1. Both device and Barrier Jacket.

The only counter I have to the other EM applications (good ones, by the way) is this: You still need a secondary device to be able to use them. Magic does not.

I do to me the mage is nothing but a fuel source and sub-par magic processor. Luckily they're a mighty good fuel source one tech still can't match totally so they still have a place.

So they're basically cartridge rechargers then. Kinda ruins the atraction of being a mage.

Your right, but that's because the brain is a effectively a kind of computer too albeit a feeble one compared to a device. So yes a mage can use magic without tech, but not very well which is why they use devices to begin with.

Yuuno held his own against Vita while casting other spells to boot.

I'm not throwing it I'm merely highlight other elements introduced and making logical deduction about how things would go.

My mistake, calling magic 'just another energy' made me think you would.

5 guys can't hold a planet or guard everything no matter how buff they are. Mages are limited in number and in a large scale conflict regular troops with conventional weapons will be required to hold ground and perform security among other things, logically it would only be sensible to outfit these troops as well as possible.

You mentioned a war that would change the TSAB and force them to adapt, this was caused that fear. I simply can't see the TSAB as a rifle-wielding army.

Also you watched the last 5 Ep of Strikers Right? You know the ones with the armies of robot jets and mechs running all over the place? This shit is already in Nanoha at this point.

And how many of them were used by the defending TSAB?

That's my point, really. I don't care what the enemy throws at them, but seeing the TSAB use those kind of weapons openly simply rolls over everything canon.

Actually I consider that fairly scientific and if you go with my "magic = energy" thing then a relic is at least partly merely a combination generator/regulator. Plus they basically seem to have been BUILT so they're actually and example of technology. I think of them sort of like ZPM in Stargate plug them into pretty much anything and it works better.

Even that might be possible, short term, if they can maintain electrical activity in the brain or restore it based on patterns and if it was made to implant in humans repairing damage to the body might well be a design function. I'd wager relic have limits too I doubt you could raise a corpse that was little beside some flaps of skin on a skeleton for instance. I tend to thing the body needs to be "Fresh".

They revived the Seiou, in both body and memory, who was nothing more then a few stains of 300 year old dried-up blood on a parchment, so those limits are already gone.

More like no one's made an attempt to do so,

You've forgotten the Relic discussion already?

also not understanding something dosen't make it magic. The guys that built relics and other Lost Logia clearly had made psychics their total bitch and when you get the smallest levels of things their VERY little you can't explain with absurdly fine, but perhaps possible, control of the fundamental forces of the universe.

Going by that theory magic doesn't even exist. Kinda makes this show a moot point, doesn't it?

My point was that the way Relics are used is far more similar to the fantasy style of magic then the technollogy style of magic, which goes to show that both technollogy style and fantasy style are very much present in Nanoha.

Aurion: What's this?:heh: And I thought Fate had the most sensitive blush-meter...:heh::heh::heh:

Come on, she just had someone grabbing hold of her and confessing to her face. Give a girl a break. :heh:

Nightengale
2007-10-27, 09:10
Heh, I haven't been posting much recently since I'm marathoning Capeta, an anime on go-kart racing. Damn, I've never though I see an anime where they actually talk about the hardship of an expensive hobby. :eek:

Not to mention playing Clannad... it definitely feels more natural in-game, but damn, it's lo~~~ng... Unless they're going to cover it up later, some things inside are already mildly shuffled around.

You know, at first I thought her story arc was not going to be interesting (I wanted to get to Oswald and Velvet)...but after a couple chapters...damn, her story rocks. :D

:nod:

To be honest, Oswald, Velvet and Cornelius's story were the weakest in my opinion. Gwen's not too special, but it genuinely felt romantic in a play-kind of a way, and Mercedes = awesome.

Yeah, same here. :) Though instead of Kyou, I prefer Ryou (if I get the names right, Ryou should be the short-haired one :heh:). :D

I demand to see THIS quote from Ryou in the anime! :mad:

While you were sleeping, I secretly...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Arabian, huh? That's a bit unexpected...

Marina Ismail.



OK, now I finally know why its going to be 24 episodes. :twitch: Doesnt seem like it will be as deep as Kimi ga Nozomu Eien. :heh: I wonder why the animation is not as good as Kanon's, though...its not even wide-screen... or is it because current raws suck? :heh:

Actually, the animation (( bar the RIDICULOUSLY smoothly animated dream girl )), is about equal. It's probably the lightings. Things tend to look prettier when they're flocked with decent snow white effects. After all, in the end, Kyoto Animation, despite having good background team, is not J.C Staff at their best (( watercolor effects ftw )), Makoto Shinkai, Ghibli or even Mamoru Hosoda.

As expected from Nighty, you know the source. :D

BTW, has the Ar Tonelico 2 artbook been released yet? :D

I don't think so. The game and OST though, is.



:eek::eek::eek: WANT!!

Need more AstraXShamal. :D:D:D

:nod::nod:


I'll have to ask PF that. :heh: Speaking of pic Tear Grant from Tales of the Abyss would make a great Mid-type mage!

A songstress magician is something new though if OC thread decides to bring her in.

I'll take neither. Tabitha go go go! :D Btw are there translations for the novels around? Can someone direct me to it? By PM of course, just in case this is not allowed.

Baka-Tsuki has translated up to 1 and a half volumes... 10 more to go. :(

Chinese tls already reached all the way to the latest (( Chinese and Koreans are godly )), but sadly, I lost the link. :(


Just in case, has anyone laid claim on this character?
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/3227/tearnz5.jpg

Nope.

Tear, eh? Her romance with Luke was definitely one of my favourite subplots in Abyss. It's rare to see an onee-sama-ish relationship that isn't completely onee-sama, but at the same time, isn't too fluffy.

Since Luke is technically... only still a kid. >_<

I tried the first episode, but it failed to keep me. Art is very important for me, and Kimikiss just, well, did nothing for me.

If art was important to me, I wouldn't be watching more than 2/3rd of all anime in existence. :p

Judging from Nighty's posted translations, there's plenty of that. :naughty:

Although the novels simply put the anime to shame. Everything is more in-depth and even the fan-service serves a strong point in the story. :rolleyes:

The problem wasn't even the destruction of the fanservice.

Since the volumes that SII covered were apparently the very dramatic, emotional war ones, it was supposed to be emotionally powerful and evoking... ZnT II had none of that. They pretty much killed the very core of its presentation. :mad: :frustrated:

Ah well... But at least Kirche would be out of the running soon...

And if I'm not wrong, Tabitha would be the imouto-character... :eyespin:

Kirche is now into... balds. :eyespin:

And Tabitha is the silent aggressor. :rolleyes:

An imouto type wouldn't just suddenly pull a french. :p

P.S - Courtesy of LoweGear...

ONE OF Loki's device's mode...




http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/DeviceOne2.jpg



Whose was this again?

The musician's? Or the Earl's?


So you say... But all I see is my next victim :D

You're gonna get FONON-ED. :p

Even atmosphere will get disintegrated, much less Destroyers. :p


Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.

*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!

*drops a blue feather*

Keroko: If I recall, Tesla played that game where the blue feather means... :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyes pin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:: eyespin::eyespin: NO IT'S TOO...TOO SUDDEN!

*faints*

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 09:11
Ryu and Tokagero?!?!:twitch::twitch::twitch:

Yup. I nearly forgot the other half of the comedy duo. :D




The word "censored" produces more pleasurable imagination than real story. :rolleyes:

I guess that was his intended effect. :rolleyes:



Then make it over through other means.

Later. Something is keeping me busy now. :heh:



Yep, it was. :)

Round 2 some other day then. :D



Until Part Zero - Visions only, unfortunately. :(

Do read it when you've spare time. :)


Darn. I lost all the juice for JenoxKatrina after a bath. And it's shaping up to be much tougher than expected. :heh:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 09:14
"YES! I mean, NO!"


:) I rest my case your honor.


Jeno: "Technically, I've already died once :p"

Loki: "Technically, I can't die yet... It's a long story :heh:"

Mai: ...

Sou ka.

Dewa

Shine.

As in thinking of her :heh: !

And for your question... That was the effect of the potion :p

Eeeeeh hontou ni? :nod:

So EM repulsion is what keeps me from falling through a concrete floor?


Basically yes, all made possible due to the apparent weakness of the gravitational force relative to all the other fundamental forces. (In the atomic scale, the EM force is several million times more powerful than gravity, whereas the latter is almost non-existent).

haiz123321
2007-10-27, 09:24
Good to know :D

It is? :p:joke:

Ordeal, Trial, Test...it's all the same :rolleyes:

I thought an Ordeal is supposed to be a painful test
Trial was more of a mind game test
and test is just a test? :heh:

:heh:

I mean it, seriously :p

The intended meaning is "How does it look...Koji-sama?" :heh:
*runs*

For a moment I was thinking something dirty

*is swept away be the masses of new postings*

Nooooooooooo~!!!

Oh my gawd! I really have to master the skill of fast text processing :heh:

Nice Hanyuu avy :twitch:


When was Jail revealed to be a Cyborg? :confused:

He wasn't? When I saw the claw glove with the red tentacle thingy, I thought he was a cyborg since no magic circles were displayed


Aurion: What's this?:heh: And I thought Fate had the most sensitive blush-meter...:heh::heh::heh:

haiz:That means you must not have seen Keroko blush before Aurion-san though did Almaria even come close? ;)
Aurion::eyebrow: What's that? I only got the first part :eyebrow:
haiz:Uhh... nevermind :heh:

Huckebein 008R/008L aka Huckebein Mk I = Black Hole Engine

Huckebein Mk II = Standard issue high-performance engine

Huckebein Mk III = Tronium Engine (NOT a Black Hole engine)

Ohh so they switched to tronium (After the incident with Rai's hand, I don't see a reason why not to though)


Give it to Vestrell, she's making brain pasta out of FieryAeon's pickled one.

Speaking of which, was there a pic for her? I've grown quite intrested in her cause of Hounds Of Artemis if that's what you call it

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 09:33
There's always "the potion" ....

*whistles*

Let's not even go there.:heh:

Fate knows how to blush... Keroko does not :heh:

But I've been having them blush so much in my scenarios already!:heh:

Ask, and you shall recieve (http://www.mediafire.com/?9xfzgsdm3ot)

:)

MARAMING SALAMAT!!!:bow::bow::bow:

:D:D:D

Come on, she just had someone grabbing hold of her and confessing to her face. Give a girl a break. :heh:

Noted...:heh: But considering that she might faint to just about any male that confesses to her is rather dangerous...:uhoh::heh:

Not to mention playing Clannad... it definitely feels more natural in-game, but damn, it's lo~~~ng... Unless they're going to cover it up later, some things inside are already mildly shuffled around.

There's already a translated version of CLANNAD in the net?
<hopeful>

I demand to see THIS quote from Ryou in the anime! :mad:

While you were sleeping, I secretly...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

:twitch::twitch::twitch:

THAT part?!:eek: <~(read a bit of spoilers)

*drops a blue feather*

Keroko: If I recall, Tesla played that game where the blue feather means... :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyes pin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:: eyespin::eyespin: NO IT'S TOO...TOO SUDDEN!

*faints*

Harvest Moon?:heh:

Basically yes, all made possible due to the apparent weakness of the gravitational force relative to all the other fundamental forces. (In the atomic scale, the EM force is several million times more powerful than gravity, whereas the latter is almost non-existent).

And here I was caught up with all the Black-Hole hype in several media.:heh: I received quite a bit of surprise in finding out that Electromagnetic force actually aces out gravitational force.:heh: Though I think I can understand why Quantum Chromodynamics would rank as the highest.:heh:


haiz:That means you must not have seen Keroko blush before Aurion-san though did Almaria even come close? ;)
Aurion::eyebrow: What's that? I only got the first part :eyebrow:
haiz:Uhh... nevermind :heh:

That wasn't really the case.:p It's just because Keroko-chan, like the other female Aces, get a lot of blushing time in my scenarios.:heh:

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 09:42
But I've been having them blush so much in my scenarios already!:heh:


What I mean is... Fate can handle it... Keroko cannot :uhoh:


And here I was caught up with all the Black-Hole hype in several media.:heh: I received quite a bit of surprise in finding out that Electromagnetic force actually Aces out gravitational force.:heh: Though I think I can understand why Quantum Chromodynamics would rank as the highest.:heh:

Oh don't worry, Black Holes are still incredibly destructive. :heh:

However, this discrepancy in apparent strengths occurs in the transition from the macroscopic to the subatomic. At the macroscopic scale, gravity is the all powerful force, and even then its power comes more from its magnitude and scale. At the atomic level, the gravitational force is barely felt, and the electromagnetic force reigns supreme.

Even in the macroscopic level, you can overcome the force of gravity through the use of electromagnetism (like how they can float objects, like frogs, in EM levitation chambers). And as aforementioned, you don't "fall through" objects in a gravity field like Earth's due to the electromagnetic attraction, and other forces that keeps atoms bonded together.

The only reason Gravity feels like an all powerful force in our perception is because at the macroscopic scale, the power of EM forces for the most part only occurs in brief, intense moments, while gravity can exert its influence over massive objects several trillions of miles away.

That's enough of the Layman's science lesson outta me :heh:

Kha
2007-10-27, 09:46
Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D

Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's... :uhoh:

While me and Creator-san have nothing to add to the magic debate, a few points have come up that are revelent and appropiately been uh Traced. :heh:

BUT THAT'S THE HEADLINES FOR TODAY!

Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."And not forgetting:"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

Trisha: (sees Kai muttering into space) Who in the world are you talking to? :eyebrow:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 09:48
Actually, the animation (( bar the RIDICULOUSLY smoothly animated dream girl )), is about equal. It's probably the lightings. Things tend to look prettier when they're flocked with decent snow white effects. After all, in the end, Kyoto Animation, despite having good background team, is not J.C Staff at their best (( watercolor effects ftw )), Makoto Shinkai, Ghibli or even Mamoru Hosoda.

I don't know if this counts for the others, but for me what strikes me as a charming feature in terms of art is the way their eyes are drawn.

A songstress magician is something new though if OC thread decides to bring her in.

Didn't Lowegear introduce Lyrical Magic way back when though?

Might be different, though. I haven't played many Tales games due to their general lack of availabillity here in Europe.

*drops a blue feather*

Keroko: If I recall, Tesla played that game where the blue feather means... :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyes pin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:: eyespin::eyespin: NO IT'S TOO...TOO SUDDEN!

*faints*

Blue feathers? What's that?

Basically yes, all made possible due to the apparent weakness of the gravitational force relative to all the other fundamental forces. (In the atomic scale, the EM force is several million times more powerful than gravity, whereas the latter is almost non-existent).

*scribble scribble* Hehe, and they say you can't learn things by mindlessly spending time on forums. *scribble scribble*

Noted...:heh: But considering that she might faint to just about any male that confesses to her is rather dangerous...:uhoh::heh:

It's not so much the confession itself (Keroko has somewhat of a fanclub, like all of the Aces, so the general 'Suki-da!'s are known) but rather the way he did it.

Grabbing hold of her, staring deeply into her blue eyes as he tried to convey his feelings propperly...

Well, you get the point. :heh: Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a confusing mess to clear up.

There's already a translated version of CLANNAD in the net?
<hopeful>

Not yet, but there is one in the works. If I recall the translation is at 74% at the moment.

That wasn't really the case.:p It's just because Keroko-chan, like the other female Aces, get a lot of blushing time in my scenarios.:heh:

No protests over here.

Keroko-chan: Hey!

Ah, she's awake.

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-27, 09:49
I thought an Ordeal is supposed to be a painful test
Trial was more of a mind game test
and test is just a test? :heh:
Then 'Ordeal' is the perfect word for it :rolleyes:

For a moment I was thinking something dirty
Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 09:50
What I mean is... Fate can handle it... Keroko cannot :uhoh:

Oh...:heh:

Oh don't worry, Black Holes are still incredibly destructive. :heh:

Yes, of course.:heh:

However, this discrepancy in apparent strengths occurs in the transition from the macroscopic to the subatomic. At the macroscopic scale, gravity is the all powerful force, and even then its power comes more from its magnitude and scale. At the atomic level, the gravitational force is barely felt, and the electromagnetic force reigns supreme.

Even in the macroscopic level, you can overcome the force of gravity through the use of electromagnetism (like how they can float objects, even frogs, in EM levitation chambers). And as aforementioned, you don't "fall through" objects in a gravity field like Earth's due to the electromagnetic attraction, and other forces that keeps atoms bonded together.

The only reason Gravity feels like an all powerful force in our perception is because at the macroscopic scale, the power of EM forces for the most part only occurs in brief, intense moments, while gravity can exert its influence over massive objects several trillions of miles away.

That's enough of the Layman's science lesson outta me :heh:

Ah... Now I get it!:D
True... Gravity seems to be relatively harmless to such small quantities of sub-atomic particles, while an electromagnetic field has no 'holes', so to speak. And can evidently push around even sub-atomic materials to the largest things...... If one is to observe it, I should have been able to get that assumption from just the commercial Physics books I've been reading... But I never knew about the discrepancy of gravity on molecular-level mass... I always thought gravity had just as much of a encopassing force to EM fields...

I learned something new.:D Thanks!:D

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 09:50
Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D


:heh::heh::heh:


Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

This is a story of his latest struggle...

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."And not forgetting:"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

MOAR BLUECHEESIUM EPIXNESS INCOMING!!!! :eek:

Yup, the GL and Gundam combine to create the most awesome previews EVER!!! :D:D:D

Although... Great Cannon Boy Gatling Kai? :twitch:

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 09:54
What I mean is... Fate can handle it... Keroko cannot :uhoh:



Oh don't worry, Black Holes are still incredibly destructive. :heh:

However, this discrepancy in apparent strengths occurs in the transition from the macroscopic to the subatomic. At the macroscopic scale, gravity is the all powerful force, and even then its power comes more from its magnitude and scale. At the atomic level, the gravitational force is barely felt, and the electromagnetic force reigns supreme.

Even in the macroscopic level, you can overcome the force of gravity through the use of electromagnetism (like how they can float objects, even frogs, in EM levitation chambers). And as aforementioned, you don't "fall through" objects in a gravity field like Earth's due to the electromagnetic attraction, and other forces that keeps atoms bonded together.

The only reason Gravity feels like an all powerful force in our perception is because at the macroscopic scale, the power of EM forces for the most part only occurs in brief, intense moments, while gravity can exert its influence over massive objects several trillions of miles away.

That's enough of the Layman's science lesson outta me :heh: Not really, even at the macro scale EM trumps it easily, a fall toward the ground accelerate you at 1G, but on hitting the ground the EM interactions decelerates you at thousands of Gs almost instantly. Every time you pick up and hurl a baseball you’re defying the gravity of an entire planet with EM forces, every building ever built uses EM to defy gravity, every rocket fired into space is defying it by using the chemical energy (a product of EM interactions) to fly, and on and on. Gravity is EXTREMELY weak; in fact this very weakness is paradoxically probably why we think it strong we can SEE gravity at work because it’s so weak we can break free of it easily.

We can’t see EM forces working, because they’re so massively strong, so pervasive that they’re simply taken for granted, we don't think about why the ground is solid, but the answer is EM forces, they're always on and they always exert billions of times the force of gravity. They drive everything and make life possible the only reason we’re solid, that we can stand and walk, that we see, and that we have oxygen to breath is because of EM interactions. Gravity is the subordinate force if anything EM interactions drive many things at the macro and most things at the mircoscale.

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 09:55
Blue feathers? What's that?

In the game, Harvest Moon... When the character buys a blue feather, that means you're set to marry your chosen mate in the game.:heh:

*scribble scribble* Hehe, and they say you can't learn things by mindlessly spending time on forums. *scribble scribble*

:D:D:D

It's not so much the confession itself (Keroko has somewhat of a fanclub, like all of the Aces, so the general 'Suki-da!'s are known) but rather the way he did it.

Grabbing hold of her, staring deeply into her blue eyes as he tried to convey his feelings propperly...

Well, you get the point. :heh: Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a confusing mess to clear up.

Oh...:heh:

Ideas...:D

Damn... Chaos was THAT good to charm Keroko like that...:uhoh::heh:

Not yet, but there is one in the works. If I recall the translation is at 74% at the moment.

Noted.:D

Gotta downlod that game when I get the chance.:D

Especially with this...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg

:uhoh:*runs*

Just from the expression... It can ellicit a :love: reaction quite well already!:D


@Kha: GL + GUNDAM 00 + MGLN?!?!?!:eek:
Sounds EPIC!!!:D

Keroko
2007-10-27, 09:58
In the game, Harvest Moon... When the character buys a blue feather, that means you're set to marry your chosen mate in the game.:heh:

Ah.... Te-OI!

Oh...:heh:

Ideas...:D

Damn... Chaos was THAT good to charm Keroko like that...:uhoh::heh:

No, he was just mindlessly babbling and Keroko misunderstood. She's not very experienced in the ways of men and love, so she tends to misunderstand things in these situations.

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 09:59
It's not so much the confession itself (Keroko has somewhat of a fanclub, like all of the Aces, so the general 'Suki-da!'s are known) but rather the way he did it.

Grabbing hold of her, staring deeply into her blue eyes as he tried to convey his feelings propperly...

Well, you get the point. :heh: Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a confusing mess to clear up.


Sou ka :heh:


Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*

:eek::eek::eek:

Maren-chan kawaii na!!! :eek:


Ah... Now I get it!:D
True... Gravity seems to be relatively harmless to such small quantities of sub-atomic particles, while an electromagnetic field has no 'holes', so to speak. And can evidently push around even sub-atomic materials to the largest things...... If one is to observe it, I should have been able to get that assumption from just the commercial Physics books I've been reading... But I never knew about the discrepancy of gravity on molecular-level mass... I always thought gravity had just as much of a encopassing force to EM fields...

I learned something new.:D Thanks!:D

Yup :)

Not really, even at the macro scale EM trumps it easily, a fall toward the ground accelerate you at 1G, but on hitting the ground the EM interactions decelerates you at thousands of Gs almost instantly. Every time you pick up and hurl a baseball you’re defying the gravity of an entire planet with EM forces, every building ever built uses EM to defy gravity, and on and on. Gravity is EXTREMELY weak; in fact this very weakness is paradoxically why we think it strong we can SEE gravity at work because it’s so weak we can break free of it easily.

We can’t see EM forces working, because they’re so massively strong, so pervasive that they’re simply taken for granted, but they drive everything and make life possible the only reason we’re solid, that we can stand and walk, that we see, and that we have oxygen to breath is because of EM interactions. Gravity is the subordinate force if anything EM interactions drive many things at the macro and most things at the mircoscale.

Exactly the point in my post, although you did a much better exposition than I could :heh::heh:

Kyral
2007-10-27, 09:59
Nice Hanyuu avy :twitch:


Thx! But its a pretty simple one... really O.ov



Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."And not forgetting:"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

Trisha: (sees Kai muttering into space) Who in the world are you talking to? :eyebrow:

:D:D:D:D:D:D



Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*

Unlimited Sketch Works indeed... nice one! :D

Nightengale
2007-10-27, 10:15
There's already a translated version of CLANNAD in the net?
<hopeful>

No, but Baka-Tsuki had it up to 74%, not yet completely translated, and no patches yet.

I'm playing the Japanese raw via, 1. listening to the voice, 2. reading Tomoya's script off a piece my friend compiled (( since I don't like to go through B-T's day-by-day transcript. )) and 3. walkthroughs.

I hate translating Japanese, but if it needs to be, I can do a degree of it. (( Still learning to type though. ))

I don't know if this counts for the others, but for mwhat strikes me as a charming feature in terms of art is the way their eyes are drawn.

I prefer animation that demonstrates a kind of subtlety and style to it, be it ones that has a solid camera works and smooth action, to crazy-animation adrenaline, to those that can tell a story just through simple subtlety of animations...

Things like these, I suppose.

4C84FLwm3DA

Directed by Mamoru Hosoda who also helmed TokiKake, the movie of the year.


Blue feathers? What's that?

In Harvest Moon (( a game about farming )), it means to propose for marriage. :eyespin:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 10:38
Can't calm down enough to write so I figure I'll response to blow off some steam.:heh:


"YES! I mean, NO!"

You're falling for this on purpose eh?


Jeno: "Technically, I've already died once :p"

Loki: "Technically, I can't die yet... It's a long story :heh:"

Master and servant share so many technicalities. :heh:


I didn't mean to... :heh:

:eyebrow:



EH?! I thought I'm still on Mai's week?!

It's Mai Day till you can get more people to jump in and start writing about her. :p



Just in case :p

I'm sure..


What :heh:? Huh :confused:? Come again :eyespin:?

In other words, temptation is far more harder to do than saying it outright. Try the carrot in front of donkey example. :heh:

Take it from me. It's true.


How intense could it be ;) ?

I had it going..

..until my shower cooled me off. >.>



Huh :heh: ?

It's hard to explain. Partly why it works is because people don't notice the flaws in between. :heh:



I did... Catch the creepy parts...briefly :heh:

...Gomen >.>

Nah it's alright. I'm glad you read. :)



Mine, unless you want me to pass her to Jeno?

Will do. Eh wait no. He's suppose to be busy with Katrina now. :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 10:43
EDIT:
You basically confessed right in front of her. While holding her. Now hand her over while you do the math.

I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*



Come on, she just had someone grabbing hold of her and confessing to her face. Give a girl a break. :heh:

Dakara... :heh:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



Kirche is now into... balds. :eyespin:

And Tabitha is the silent aggressor. :rolleyes:

An imouto type wouldn't just suddenly pull a french. :p

SHE DID WHAT :twitch: :twitch: :twitch:?!?!?!?!?!?!




Whose was this again?

The musician's? Or the Earl's?

Earl's.



You're gonna get FONON-ED. :p

Even atmosphere will get disintegrated, much less Destroyers. :p

There are always other characters I could use :p

And what's "FONON" ?



*drops a blue feather*

Keroko: If I recall, Tesla played that game where the blue feather means... :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyes pin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:: eyespin::eyespin: NO IT'S TOO...TOO SUDDEN!

*faints*

Somehow, this is going to be quite the halloween.... :heh:


Mai: ...

Sou ka.

Dewa

Shine.

*Jeno quickly grabs a fallen Smith and toss him at Mai...

... Who ends up knocking her over and kissing her.*

Loki (bowed) : "To be continued my dear... ;)"

*Both Loki and Jeno bolted out of this dimension in the confusion.



Eeeeeh hontou ni? :nod:

Yeah, it was during that time ...




No protests over here.

Keroko-chan: Hey!

Ah, she's awake.

Where was I again? Oh yes...

*runs with Keroko...*


Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*

I'll get to that :heh: But for now, I'm in the middle of an unintended kidnapping :heh:

Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D

Don't underestimate us :p

We have brought mighty girls to there knees :p

... In a non-sexual way of course... :uhoh:

But the point is, we got Mai's data :)


Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's... :uhoh:


It used to be Chrono's job... Sigh...


It's not so much the confession itself (Keroko has somewhat of a fanclub, like all of the Aces, so the general 'Suki-da!'s are known) but rather the way he did it.

Grabbing hold of her, staring deeply into her blue eyes as he tried to convey his feelings propperly...

Well, you get the point. :heh: Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a confusing mess to clear up.


Oi oi :heh: You're making it sound so right :heh:



Oh...:heh:

Ideas...:D

Damn... Chaos was THAT good to charm Keroko like that...:uhoh::heh:



DA KA RA!

*Still running*



Darn. I lost all the juice for JenoxKatrina after a bath. And it's shaping up to be much tougher than expected. :heh:

YOU DID WHAT?!?!?! I'LL KILL YOU :frustrated: !!!

(And I don't mean the shower)

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 10:51
*Jeno quickly grabs a fallen Smith and toss him at Mai...

... Who ends up knocking her over and kissing her.*

Loki (bowed) : "To be continued my dear... ;)"

*Both Loki and Jeno bolted out of this dimension in the confusion.


*24 Hours Later*

Wesson: Looks like you got beat good this time... :twitch:
Smith: *mummified in bandages* yeah...

very, very goooooooood :D:love:

Wesson: There's something you're not telling me are you? :eyebrow:

Mai: ...

Remi no baka...

Where was I again? Oh yes...

*runs with Keroko...*

I'll get to that :heh: But for now, I'm in the middle of an unintended kidnapping :heh:

DA KA RA!

*Still running*

Keroko-jacking? :twitch:

Don't underestimate us :p

We have brought mighty girls to there knees :p

... In a non-sexual way of course... :uhoh:

But the point is, we got Mai's data :)

:heh:

Sounds like you wanted to clone her or something...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 10:54
*24 Hours Later*

Wesson: Looks like you got beat good this time... :twitch:
Smith: *mummified in bandages* yeah...

very, very goooooooood :D:love:

Wesson: There's something you're not telling me are you? :eyebrow:

Mai: ...

Remi no baka...


Don't worry, I'll compensate them :p

Just tell me, how good are they with music?



Keroko-jacking? :twitch:


LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 10:56
Don't worry, I'll compensate them :p

Just tell me, how good are they with music?


:heh:

Whatever do you mean by music? :confused:


LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!

This is gonna get ugly :uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 10:59
YOU DID WHAT?!?!?! I'LL KILL YOU :frustrated: !!!

(And I don't mean the shower)


Don't worry. I might just beat you to that. :p

Unless I get my hands on some 'food', I'm running near flat compared to all the energy from the discussion just now. :(

Re-reading my own writing might help some though..


Who knew showers were such a inspiration killer? :rolleyes:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 11:05
I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*

I believe I heard something completely different.

Dakara... :heh:

Talk's over, now hand her over before you make things worse.

Where was I again? Oh yes...

*runs with Keroko...*

... Nevermind, you just made it worse.

I'll get to that :heh: But for now, I'm in the middle of an unintended kidnapping :heh:

Keroko-chan: I'm being what now!?

Oi oi :heh: You're making it sound so right :heh:

That's how Keroko-chan understood it.

LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!

Tesla, did you call the Rogues? Good. Sol, you get over here too.

*kracks knuckles* Let's get this over with before heartbreak comences.

Kha
2007-10-27, 11:16
Kai notices an epic scene of GAR of all the Rogues, looking like the Rebel Alliance like they always do, piled on one side with a flag declaring "KEROKO!" facing an equally piled Destroyer side with a flag declaring "JENO!", but somehow the Destroyers are all wearing Stormtrooper helmets.

Kai: Gee... Where have I seen this before? :rolleyes:

Old Master Saru: The winds of war blow once again... And there is only one solution...

Kai: (handpound eureka moment) I see! We need a MERMAID!

Kha: Wha...?! :eyespin:

~~~~~~

And Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai is Kai's name for his own series. He breaks 4th Walls pretty often see... :uhoh:

The official title is a bit more tame. Kai is a type of GARmedy character (Like Nagasumi) I'm experimenting with, and so he came up with some crazy name for his everyday life. :p

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 11:18
I believe I heard something completely different.



Talk's over, now hand her over before you make things worse.



... Nevermind, you just made it worse.



Keroko-chan: I'm being what now!?



That's how Keroko-chan understood it.



Tesla, did you call the Rogues? Good. Sol, you get over here too.

*kracks knuckles* Let's get this over with before heartbreak comences.


Jeno: "I'm the closest... Lance and Cero are on there way..."

*Communication screen appears*

Raiden: "I'm a little busy now, so I'll just leave my team with you..."

*Communication screen closes*

Jeno: "So tell me again, why are we on top of mount Fuji?"

Only if you could tell me why there are only 7 Destroyers coming when I said all :rolleyes:


~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~, ~,~,~

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)


*Hands in the same position*

LoweGear
2007-10-27, 11:20
I believe I heard something completely different.



Talk's over, now hand her over before you make things worse.



... Nevermind, you just made it worse.



Keroko-chan: I'm being what now!?



That's how Keroko-chan understood it.



Tesla, did you call the Rogues? Good. Sol, you get over here too.

*kracks knuckles* Let's get this over with before heartbreak comences.

Keroko-chan Week II: ChaoS StrikeS BacK!!!!

:eek::eek::eek::eek:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Kai notices an epic scene of GAR of all the Rogues, looking like the Rebel Alliance like they always do, piled on one side with a flag declaring "KEROKO!" facing an equally piled Destroyer side with a flag declaring "JENO!", but somehow the Destroyers are all wearing Stormtrooper helmets.

Kai: Gee... Where have I seen this before? :rolleyes:

Old Master Saru: The winds of war blow once again...

Kha: Wha...?! :eyespin:

~~~~~~

And Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai is Kai's name for his own series. He breaks 4th Walls pretty often see... :uhoh:

The official title is a bit more tame. Kai is a type of GARmedy character (Like Nagasumi) I'm experimenting with, and so he came up with some crazy name for his everyday life. :p

Want me to send Seto San Hachi in? :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

And NaGARsumi type? SHOWMEYOMOVES!!!!!! :D:D:D

Liingo
2007-10-27, 11:25
I've probably missed some things in my backlog dive....
Give me a yell if you want me to read over anything that I might have missed :heh:

Oh and Grats on reaching 14k guys :D

Holy Sh***! This thread really is fast growing! :twitch:

:heh: I don't think I've said it yet but Welcome to teh OC :D The most active thread on the Asuki forums :D


*snip*
Looks like you've put some thought into this. Nice work :D I can't say I really appove of yet another Lost Logia user.... but at least his life was screwed over by it before he's been able to use him properly, according to his own will, unlike some in this thread..

Nice pictures you've created of him :D Overall he doesn't look too bad, but I'll reserve my judgement until you publish his spell list.


DIARY OF A WINDTALKER
HALLOWEEN SPECIAL, PART VII ACT II

// second round //
*snip*


:heh: :heh: :heh: :heh: :heh:
Hmmm, nothing much to see here..:heh: I didn't recognise most of the cosplay... which is probably why I wasn't very interested..:heh:

Still waiting for Mai's entrance :D :D

IMAGE TIME!

... Though Lowe should have been the one to post this... He photoshopped it!!

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

This one's to show Gwen and Mai's "WORLD" as described by USB...and what they do every night :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


Gwen: Ah~ Matte~ Mai...

Mai: Dame~ Sutsuku yo~ <3

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5404/gwendolynmai01v2st5.jpg
:love::love::love::love::love::love::love:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

*RUNS AWAY REALLY FAST*
HOOLY!!!! :eek:

:bow: :love: :bow: :love:
As promised earlier a piece about Fate.


*snip*

Shoddy.:heh:
:eek:
Well... the ending was unexpected...... Sorry doesn't compute...:heh:
Fate snapping I can see, but snapping that bad... Impossible from my view..

Yes, there are quite a bit from Earth huh? Although I also plead guilty...:uhoh:
Just in my opinion, I can think of two possible explanations:
-Since everyone here is from Earth (...right?), it's like a comfort zone. Some people don't like to stray from a familiar environment or maybe they prefer someone they can relate with.
-Depending when they came into the picture, it could be explained that after the Precia and Book of Darkness Incident the TSAB decided to pay a little more attention to this little planet after find not one, but 3 high-rank mages. If the planet had 3 mages on it so far, what's not to say there are more down there somewhere?
Just my 2-sense and random thoughts that popped into my head as I was reading :heh:.
1) Well I also plead guilty to having a mage from earth, but's he just one out of my 10 or so OC's that I've introduced here..
2) It is a comfort zone, but there's no reason why you can't copy the culture and customs of areas of Earth to a entirely different planet which is similar to Earth
3) Perhaps... but I can't see it being an ongoing surveillance. Also, 3 mages from earth isn't indicative of the true scope of things... with years between Graham and Nanoha/Hayate. 2 out of a populations of millions(just Nanoha's home town) aren't exactly the best odds...


I agree to a point actually the conflict of ideas and values will come up, I just find the idea that every planet in the TSAB just rolls over and accepts their arbitrary often stupid rules unlikely they might be been following them somewhat, but I bet many of them chafe under them and secretly engage in various technically "illegal" pursuits. Jail supports this in a way, at least some of the people in the TSAB clearly aren't enamored of it's current policy and that will come up as well as we start to see that despite what the TSAB might perch in it's propaganda the TSAB isn't one big happy family where we all get along and agree on things for our benefits.
Agreed. While they may officially come under TSAB administration, it's likely that the power would still remain with those individuals/nations that held it before the TSAB arrived, as implementing the entire beauracracy would require alot of people... which they may or may not have. Currently we have no idea of what an administrated world implies so we can't even draw conclusions from the anime.

Indeed, though I'm sort of guilty in that I invented an alternate earth... :heh: At least I altered the history though and made it an official administered planet so it make sense mages would come from it.

*shrug* I have no problems really if it's an alternate Earth, the issue that I have is the large masses of mages within the thread that have come from Earth directly, even though it's not an administered world, meaning that the bereau would seldom check on the place... unless of course some massive magical disaster occured in the region.

Yeah as mentioned Ranger are highly trained shock troops they only go in when heavy combat is expected and specialize in high risk assaults often from the air (orbit), just like real rangers and anything less then a Platoon of them would be unusual. You're talking more like Delta Force or indeed the SAS, a sometimes overt, but also often covert true Special Forces unit. If you want some ideas I'd look into reading up on SAS operations in Northern Ireland, BlackHawk down is also a nice thing to get a feel for the difference between elite infantry like Rangers and true "Special Forces" like Delta's and their is a difference.

As I said the Ranger are the striking arm of my OC force, when a target is confirmed and too heavily defended for an A-team to deal with they get the call to deal with it. The other competent is the mentioned A-teams these are what my OC propers are they're small teams that often work under covering doing recon, investigations, etc and sometimes small scale assaults and often working in conjunction with the ranger on bigger missions. Different, but complimentary missions just like Green Berets or Delta force and Rangers in the modern army. If Special Forces are a scalpel, Rangers are a combat knife, and the regular army is longsword.

Yeah well someones gotta hold down the "Militant" end of the spectrum here, and I seem to like it so... :p
:nod:
Yeah, I'll have to read up more on it once I get the time to do so. But as you've said there are differences in the roles that each of them play.

:D

There's a small problem here... I'm running Windows Vista. :heh: I'll have to find out how to install Japanese. :heh:

Other's have already pointed it out, but there should be no problems in you being able to get the Japanese IME since XP has it. It would be rather stupid if they dropped that capability in their new OS. Google is your friend :D


Ok...teaser for a scene at the end of chapter 20~

Maren: *blushes* D-dou desu ka...Koji-sama?
Koji: M-maji? *pinches own cheek*

:uhoh:*runs*
Well this should be good :D *must prepare for the Moe-bomb that's going to be dropped* :heh:
*is swept away be the masses of new postings*

Nooooooooooo~!!!

Oh my gawd! I really have to master the skill of fast text processing :heh:
:D It's an essential skill in here :D
Then 'Ordeal' is the perfect word for it :rolleyes:


Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*
:eek:
:bow: :bow:
Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D

Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's... :uhoh:

While me and Creator-san have nothing to add to the magic debate, a few points have come up that are revelent and appropiately been uh Traced. :heh:

BUT THAT'S THE HEADLINES FOR TODAY!

Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."And not forgetting:"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

Trisha: (sees Kai muttering into space) Who in the world are you talking to? :eyebrow:

Gundam? :eyebrow: Oh boy, I can just see all the crack that this is going to produce.... Looks like I'll have to prepare for random stuff in here again...:rolleyes:

No new stuff from me yet... Going through my ficlets and editing atm.. :D

Saint X
2007-10-27, 11:27
@ Thread:

keeping up with Kha's introductions, i decided to put the AtS projects into the secret 'plot room' to further accumulate more infomation, as well as slow processing, and will be publicly whipping up this one- well just following the trend...

My name is Arisa Bannings, just your average girl- or so i thought. A few years ago i underwent events that really changed my life, and now, i'm on a transport to the land that started it all- Midchilda.

"Attention all Passengers, Flight 282 from Civil Station 25 will be arriving at West Airport in a few minutes. All passengers are advised to buckle..."

'Buckle up'... those were the first words that I remember upon arriving in this land- for this will be one strange ride.

*sound of bumping*

"Auu~ looks like i've tripped... and... white?"

"IYAAAA~" *cue in beating up sounds*

"Arisa-Sama? Oh my! Seiji... what happened to you, 'lil bro?"

- Yes bored



*Looks at the two forces*

*takes out construction equipment*

*builds a fully protected grandstand area*

"Get a prime seat for only 15 CP (cash points)!!! Watch the Epic battle between two... what are they again?"

Kyla: Mutually understanding people...

"Ah yes... between two mutually understanding people!!!"

*sees the eyes*

"Oh Shi-"

*Censored*

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 11:28
Jeno: "I'm the closest... Lance and Cero are on there way..."

*Communication screen appears*

Raiden: "I'm a little busy now, so I'll just leave my team with you..."

*Communication screen closes*

Jeno: "So tell me again, why are we on top of mount Fuji?"

Only if you could tell me why there are only 7 Destroyers coming when I said all :rolleyes:


~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~, ~,~,~


Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)


*Hands in the same position*
Atuwe: *scrambling about* Camera, camera! *scrambling about* :upset:
Felix: No way in HELL this is ending well.
Cipher: Has anyone seen the General? :eyebrow:
Pixy: I think he's carrying the Keroko flag...

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-27, 11:30
Just from the expression... It can ellicit a :love: reaction quite well already!:D
Really? :heh:


"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."
:eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*

:eek::eek::eek:

Maren-chan kawaii na!!! :eek:
Heh, just wait for the rest :naughty:

Unlimited Sketch Works indeed... nice one! :D
:D

Well this should be good :D *must prepare for the Moe-bomb that's going to be dropped* :heh:
"muda da!"
*runs*


:eek:
:bow: :bow:
:D

Keroko
2007-10-27, 11:32
Kai notices an epic scene of GAR of all the Rogues, looking like the Rebel Alliance like they always do, piled on one side with a flag declaring "KEROKO!" facing an equally piled Destroyer side with a flag declaring "JENO!", but somehow the Destroyers are all wearing Stormtrooper helmets.

Kai: Gee... Where have I seen this before? :rolleyes:

Old Master Saru: The winds of war blow once again... And there is only one solution...

Kai: (handpound eureka moment) I see! We need a MERMAID!

Kha: Wha...?! :eyespin:

~~~~~~

And Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai is Kai's name for his own series. He breaks 4th Walls pretty often see... :uhoh:

The official title is a bit more tame. Kai is a type of GARmedy character (Like Nagasumi) I'm experimenting with, and so he came up with some crazy name for his everyday life. :p

Keroko-kun: Mermaid? *remembers Howling Voice* Do we have a mermaid?

Tycho: Not unless you can arange one on short notice.

Keroko-kun: I can do that. Should be easy, there's a maiden's heart at stake here, it would not be chivalrous to leave a fellow girl behind.

Jeno: "I'm the closest... Lance and Cero are on there way..."

*Communication screen appears*

Raiden: "I'm a little busy now, so I'll just leave my team with you..."

*Communication screen closes*

Jeno: "So tell me again, why are we on top of mount Fuji?"

Only if you could tell me why there are only 7 Destroyers coming when I said all :rolleyes:


~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~, ~,~,~

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)


*Hands in the same position*

Keroko-chan: What is going on here!?

Keroko-chan Week II: ChaoS StrikeS BacK!!!!

:eek::eek::eek::eek:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

This time he's not going to get away with it either...

Kha
2007-10-27, 11:39
Gundam? :eyebrow: Oh boy, I can just see all the crack that this is going to produce.... Looks like I'll have to prepare for random stuff in here again...:rolleyes:

No new stuff from me yet... Going through my ficlets and editing atm.. :DRemember that old long-named device walker system that appeared in the first TV release of New Belka Chronicles? (Yeah right. :heh:)

Now that I'm releasing the "DVDs" (Ah yeah right.) and remastering some problem areas (fixing some plot issues etc etc), the Genesis Uninhibited Nendo Drive Assault-use Magical devices have been given the go ahead to star in the 100% fanboy-butcherized side-story of the New Belka Chronicles timeline in order to cater to both the pure Nanoha fans (people who want pure canoness) and the rest of us dark gods (and myself. :p)

But rest assured, that will be the ONLY time the word "GUNDAM" is mentioned regarding Belka 00. That's because--

*silenced*

Studying has driven me nuts apparently...

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 11:43
Remember that old long-named device walker system that appeared in the first TV release of New Belka Chronicles? (Yeah right. :heh:)

Now that I'm releasing the "DVDs" (Ah yeah right.) and remastering some problem areas (fixing some plot issues etc etc), the Genesis Uninhibited Nendo Drive Assault-use Magical devices have been given the go ahead to star in the 100% fanboy-butcherized side-story of the New Belka Chronicles timeline in order to cater to both the pure Nanoha fans (like Tk and people who don't get or don't like heavy referencing) and the rest of us dark gods (and myself. :p)

But rest assured, that will be the ONLY time the word "GUNDAM" is mentioned regarding Belka 00. That's because--

*silenced*

Studying has driven me nuts apparently...I don't mind referencing that much as long as it isn't like ripped right out with no adaptation I mean shit I've got like 5 OC that are referances so I can't talk much. :p I do find it kind of funny though that I'm catching a bit of shit over the idea of using guys with guns in an ARMY while you're cavorting around in mecha. :heh:

I would have replied to that early post about my science and shit, but the power has been a taddy flaky the last hour and a brownout wiped everything I'd written and I was too tired to do it again, sorry. Basically what it all boiled down to was what is "magic" exactly? My definition involves effects with as heavy a dose of psychics EM fields, matter manipulation etc, it's basically just the same thing only cloaked in jargon I happen to favor magic will be the same as always pretty much, but explained in a way I happen to favor. Less "Mysterious msytical power" crap and more "understood science". Science also isn't opposed to magic per say science is largely a state of mind, a philosophy that seeks to describe things as they are with theory, magic and science need not be antognistic. In fact if magic is rational scientific method can be used to explore and explain it.

Mages will still be the focus, but the story instead of gimping everything around them and making them the ONLY thing that matters will instead feature them as part of a team, a vital link, but not unstoppable supermen that render all other units and weapons useless. At least that's the plan, really the war was going to be a background thing in allot cases, mentioned and shown at times, but mostly fluff to allow for my Mage chars to do some neat stuff and explore some themes.

Nightengale
2007-10-27, 11:48
Tesla, did you call the Rogues? Good. Sol, you get over here too.

*kracks knuckles* Let's get this over with before heartbreak comences.

...

Nanoha: You've got a lot of guts... to mess and play around with my sister's... heart... of all things... (( enters Devil mode ))

Fate: Oh...Nanoha, I understand how you're feeling, but those hovering Blaster Bits... :uhoh:

Nanoha: Mm. You're right, it's not enough. Sortie the Air Force, RED ALERT!

Fate: :twitch: :eyespin::eyespin:

Chrono: THE PAPERS! :upset:

Hayate: That Nanoha is really... reckless at times. Well, not like it's a bad thing.

Vita: If you can't beat them, join them.

Signum: The "beat them" part doesn't sound all that convincing, with that smirk on your face.

Joseth: Mission control. Order Airstrike, Mail Strike and Super Sheep to strike when ready. Ready a Holy Hand Grenade and Ming Vase for all aggressors as well.

Vice: I'm fine with just Magic Bullet, thank you.

Joseth: You're no aggressor, so a prod is good enough for you. Or I could teach you a trick called Kamikaze...

Vice: You're surprisingly proactive.

Joseth: Shut up.

Jeno: "I'm the closest... Lance and Cero are on there way..."

*Communication screen appears*

Raiden: "I'm a little busy now, so I'll just leave my team with you..."

*Communication screen closes*

Jeno: "So tell me again, why are we on top of mount Fuji?"

Only if you could tell me why there are only 7 Destroyers coming when I said all :rolleyes:


~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~,~, ~,~,~

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)


*Hands in the same position*

Keroko: Ano... I don't mind talking, but could you please let me go first... it's... uncomfortable...

Cue...

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Keroko
2007-10-27, 11:51
I do find it kind of funny though that I'm catching a bit of shit over the idea of using guys with guns in an ARMY while you're cavorting around in mecha. :heh:

I find it more amusing that we dragged it so far off-topic. :heh: To think that this started with my only gripe with the unit; the fact that they can use cartridges without downsides. :heh::heh::heh:

I suppose I got carried away again. :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 11:54
Keroko-kun: Mermaid? *remembers Howling Voice* Do we have a mermaid?

Tycho: Not unless you can arange one on short notice.

Keroko-kun: I can do that. Should be easy, there's a maiden's heart at stake here, it would not be chivalrous to leave a fellow girl behind.



C2F: "You two can summon right?"

Cero: "Way to go express your love and concern for us :rolleyes:"

Lance: "Yes yes... Me dragon, Cero demons..."



Keroko-chan: What is going on here!?

Jeno: "Don't mind them, my boss just loves you too much that he doesn't know how to express himself :nod: I'm Jeno btw, it's a pleasure to finally meet the cutest of the Aces :) LOVE what you've done with your hair :nod:"



This time he's not going to get away with it either...

DA KA RA :eyespin: !!!


C2F : "Where's Solakar?!"

Lance : "Out trying to woo that flame haze meido..."

Cero: "AGAIN?! What the hell is Sol thinking?!"

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 11:56
I find it more amusing that we dragged it so far off-topic. :heh: To think that this started with my only gripe with the unit; the fact that they can use cartridges without downsides. :heh::heh::heh:

I suppose I got carried away again. :D I've said it before I enjoy this kind of thing, I had fun and being forced to defend you're way of thinking can only improve it, plus I was being a bit of a nit picky ass at times and I can’t well expect to be allowed to dish it out if I can’t take it myself. Anyway I'll try to keep in mind that yes magic and mages are part of universe, but I never forgot that I was more aiming for it not to be the ONLY focus for once.

Kha
2007-10-27, 11:57
I don't mind referencing that much as long as it isn't like ripped right out with no adaptation I mean shit I've got like 5 OC that are referances so I can't talk much. :p I do find it kind of funny though that I'm catching a bit of shit over the idea of using guys with guns in an ARMY while you're cavorting around in mecha. :heh:Oops I made a wrong point. Fixed it as I meant to refer to a slice of the thread population like you and Liingo do what a more believable version as opposed to the :eyespin: crack I've been spouting unrestrained. Hope that is better... :heh:

Something like NBC is the main dish, with more elements in line with canon data, while Belka 00 is serves more blatant rips, cameos and general otaku-fanservice if you will.

But I hope this "2x standard" is not something to do with my brief emo episode back then... It'd be really bad if that's the case. :( But I guess its because I'm making the mecha fit into the canon while you are giving an impression that you are bending canon to fit into your work.

Myself, I find nothing really wrong with your approach; especially since its an alternative progression of current affairs. My alternative progression makes things more :eyespin:ing that's all. :heh:

~~~~~~

Remember Artei's GUNDAM:

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a347/khathecleric/ESZeroGundamTrueAssasin.jpg

Now take a very close look at it... Doesn't it resemble Exia? Now think of when it was discovered by Lowe... :uhoh:

Keroko
2007-10-27, 12:06
I've said it before I enjoy this kind of thing, I had fun and being forced to defend you're way of thinking can only improve it, plus I was being a bit of a nit picky ass at times. Anyway I'll try to keep in mind that yes magic and mages are part of universe, but I never forgot that I was more aiming for it not to be the ONLY focus for once.

I enjoy this kind if thing too, so no worries there.

And I'll be shifting focus to the technological aspect soon myself when I introduce Sol.

...

Nanoha: You've got a lot of guts... to mess and play around with my sister's... heart... of all things...

Fate: Oh...Nanoha, I understand how you're feeling, but those hovering Blaster Bits... :uhoh:

Nanoha: Mm. You're right, it's not enough. Sortie the Air Force, RED ALERT!

Fate: :twitch: :eyespin::eyespin:

Chrono: THE PAPERS! :upset:

Joseth: Mission control. Order Airstrike, Mail Strike and Super Sheep to strike when ready. Ready a Holy Hand Grenade and Ming Vase for all aggressors as well.

Vice: I'm fine with just Magic Bullet, thank you.

Joseth: You're no aggressor, so a prod is good enough for you. Or I could teach you a trick called Kamikaze...

Vice: You're surprisingly proactive.

Joseth: Shut up.

Keroko-kun: Ahh, reinforcements. And even Worms? *readies Artherion* Now I can't stay behind, can I?

Keroko: Ano... I don't mind talking, but could you please let me go first... it's... uncomfortable...

Cue...

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Ooh, dramatic setting.

*fumes at the fact that ToA is not available in Europe*

C2F: "You two can summon right?"

Cero: "Way to go express your love and concern for us :rolleyes:"

Lance: "Yes yes... Me dragon, Cero demons..."

Keroko-kun: Do we have summoners?

Wes: Well, I used to be able to summon before you decided to scrap the idea.

Keroko-kun: Right, but since you're an aspect mage now, you can negociate with the dragons, right?

Wes: If it's not blacks he's going to summon...

Keroko-kun: I really wish I kept that summoning thing, a Blue Eyes would be handy right now.

Jeno: "Don't mind them, my boss just loves you too much that he doesn't know how to express himself :nod: I'm Jeno btw, it's a pleasure to finally meet the cutest of the Aces :) LOVE what you've done with your hair :nod:"

Keroko-chan: Eh? Eh? EEEEEH!? NANANDA KOREWAAAA!?

DA KA RA :eyespin: !!!

Keroko-kun: You hand her over nice and easy and we might let you go.

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 12:14
Keroko-kun: You hand her over nice and easy and we might let you go.
Jack: But really chances we’ll probably still brutally kill you anyway, but if you don't we'll definitely do it if you don't so...
Daniel: Are you trying to start a battle?!
Jack: Well it would be pretty damn boring and a waste of all this set up if he just gives her up!
*Just behind them*
Felix: *whispered* Why are we encouraging him by standing out her with him again?
Pixy: Double pay.

FieryAeon
2007-10-27, 12:18
...

Nanoha: You've got a lot of guts... to mess and play around with my sister's... heart... of all things... (( enters Devil mode ))

Fate: Oh...Nanoha, I understand how you're feeling, but those hovering Blaster Bits... :uhoh:

Nanoha: Mm. You're right, it's not enough. Sortie the Air Force, RED ALERT!

Fate: :twitch: :eyespin::eyespin:

Chrono: THE PAPERS! :upset:

Hayate: That Nanoha is really... reckless at times. Well, not like it's a bad thing.

Vita: If you can't beat them, join them.

Signum: The "beat them" part doesn't sound all that convincing, with that smirk on your face.

Joseth: Mission control. Order Airstrike, Mail Strike and Super Sheep to strike when ready. Ready a Holy Hand Grenade and Ming Vase for all aggressors as well.

Vice: I'm fine with just Magic Bullet, thank you.

Joseth: You're no aggressor, so a prod is good enough for you. Or I could teach you a trick called Kamikaze...

Vice: You're surprisingly proactive.

Joseth: Shut up.
Worms now? :twitch:

You reminded me that I have to read the profiles of your OCs that are related to Vice. :eyespin:



Keroko: Ano... I don't mind talking, but could you please let me go first... it's... uncomfortable...

Cue...

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I just watched that scene today. :eyespin: The prophecy is starting to make sense now.

@Keroko: How about dl-ing the game? There are software available that allows you to burn them into DVDs and be playable. :eyespin:

Edit: This year's Saimoe seriously sucks. >_> All the characters I'm rooting for are gone. Bah~~ >_>

Keroko
2007-10-27, 12:22
@Keroko: How about dl-ing the game? There are software available that allows you to burn them into DVDs and be playable. :eyespin:

If only that was the issue. :heh: No, the problem is that I have an R2 PS2 (Europe uses Region 2), otherwise I would have simply bought the import version. But since every download file would be R1 anyway, that would not help much. :heh:

Saint X
2007-10-27, 12:26
@ Thread:

Well let's see how this will shape up after a few hours

Okay, that was off topic.

@ Thread:

before you guys tear each other into shreds over Keroko-chan, i'll just drop this question for any free person to answer- any live one for that matter.

===

Do any of you guys have any ideas for a Nanohaverse-based MMORPG?

- Background/story/plot
- Lands/Locations
- Monsters/Mobs/Creeps
- Bosses
- Quests/Missions
- Items (consumables, equipments, etc)
- NPCs
- Player Sprites
- Player UI and Gameplay
- Leveling System/s
- Skill Tree ideas
- anything else

===

*Places Armored and Shielded Drop Box in the middle of the field*

FieryAeon
2007-10-27, 12:28
I see....so that means there is no R2 version of that game? That game is already released in English (NA version) for over a year. You'd thought a Europe version would be out already. =|

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 12:38
Keroko-chan: Eh? Eh? EEEEEH!? NANANDA KOREWAAAA!?

Jeno (Cheerful smile with a rosy cheek) : "Hai :nod: !"

(Grabs both her hands)

Jeno: "The MOST prettiest :blush: ! You must have alot of suitors, ;) huh?"


("Jeno! What the hell are you doing?!")


Keroko-kun: You hand her over nice and easy and we might let you go.

AHH!!! HOW COME THE ENEMY NUMBERS ARE SO HUGE!!!

Keroko-chan, I'll make this quick. All you need to be is yourself! Don't ever change! That's the Keroko-chan that I love to-


*BOOM!!!!*


Lance: "What the-?"

Cero: "Lol, C2F got knocked out :heh:"

???: "Seriously, how much longer is he going to blabber?"

Lance: "You are... :eek:"

Cero: "... :uhoh:"

*4 other Destroyers stepped in*

Solakar: "Sorry about this Chaos, but Sipher has other plans for this situation :D... Suiyoku?"

*Ice freezes over Keroko's room, soon after a heavy-duty AMF field is place around it.*

Suiyoku: "Order me around again and you'll find yourself wondering how deep is the sea REALLY..."

Lance: "Erm... What's going on here?"

Suiyoku: "New orders from Sipher, we are to stand and fight till lunch..."

...

Lance + Cero: "EHHHHHHHHH????!!!!!!!!!"

(In the mean while...)


Jeno: "Looks like we're stuck here Keroko-chan :heh: "


C2F: @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@

LimitedEternal
2007-10-27, 12:43
I see....so that means there is no R2 version of that game? That game is already released in English (NA version) for over a year. You'd thought a Europe version would be out already. =|

Ah man, that sucks. Abyss is an excellent game in my humble opinion. I'd say it's worth importing if you like JRPGs or "Tales" games in general.

Now you're gonna make me want to play it again...

And on OC based on Tear? I approve! The whole fonon system would work well in this 'verse, IMO. Did I mention it's easy to make Tear blush???:D

And...Howcanyoumakesomuchbackloginlessthantwelveho urs...
PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNCCCCCCCCCCH!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 13:12
And...Howcanyoumakesomuchbackloginlessthantwelveho urs...
PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNCCCCCCCCCCH!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!


Loki: "Lets just say things got out of hand :heh:"





Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:



The blue version of this sword...

http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/WoWScrnShot_061605_192236%202.JPG

Like what this guy is using...

http://www.wowhead.com/images/screenshots/resized/30582.jpg




Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.






Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/ashbringer.jpg


Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.






Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/Manslayeraq.JPG


Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.





Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:


http://i.thottbot.com/ss/s/361.jpg


Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.





P.S - I hope the image would show :heh:

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-27, 13:13
@ Thread:

before you guys tear each other into shreds over Keroko-chan, i'll just drop this question for any free person to answer- any live one for that matter.

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Do any of you guys have any ideas for a Nanohaverse-based MMORPG?

- Background/story/plot
- Lands/Locations
- Monsters/Mobs/Creeps
- Bosses
- Quests/Missions
- Items (consumables, equipments, etc)
- NPCs
- Player Sprites
- Player UI and Gameplay
- Leveling System/s
- Skill Tree ideas
- anything else

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*Places Armored and Shielded Drop Box in the middle of the field*
Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Belka (Old-Knight Style)
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Shield Knight'.
But is also nicknamed 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'.

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

Keroko
2007-10-27, 13:46
I see....so that means there is no R2 version of that game? That game is already released in English (NA version) for over a year. You'd thought a Europe version would be out already. =|

Europe is a crappy place in terms of RPG's, any Tales that made it over here were done by either Nintendo (Tales of Phantasia, Tales of Symphonia) and Ubisoft (Tales of Eternia). And that's all the Tales we ever got, Namco doesn't care about us. Did you know Persona 3 is the first Persona to even make it to Europe?

I need an R1 PS2. :upset:

Jeno (Cheerful smile with a rosy cheek) : "Hai :nod: !"

(Grabs both her hands)

Jeno: "The MOST prettiest :blush: ! You must have alot of suitors, ;) huh?"

Keroko-chan: Ah? Uhm, etto, sonno....

("Jeno! What the hell are you doing?!")

Making things worse, clearly.

AHH!!! HOW COME THE ENEMY NUMBERS ARE SO HUGE!!!

Keroko-chan, I'll make this quick. All you need to be is yourself! Don't ever change! That's the Keroko-chan that I love to-


*BOOM!!!!*


Lance: "What the-?"

Cero: "Lol, C2F got knocked out :heh:"

???: "Seriously, how much longer is he going to blabber?"

Lance: "You are... :eek:"

Cero: "... :uhoh:"

*4 other Destroyers stepped in*

Solakar: "Sorry about this Chaos, but Sipher has other plans for this situation :D... Suiyoku?"

*Ice freezes over Keroko's room, soon after a heavy-duty AMF field is place around it.*

Suiyoku: "Order me around again and you'll find yourself wondering how deep is the sea REALLY..."

Lance: "Erm... What's going on here?"

Suiyoku: "New orders from Sipher, we are to stand and fight till lunch..."

...

Lance + Cero: "EHHHHHHHHH????!!!!!!!!!"

(In the mean while...)

Tycho: Okay, this is bad.

Wes: That AMF has to go, someone up for smashing it?

WHAM!

Wes: Thank you... er... Keroko...chan? :twitch:

Keroko-kun: Alistina, so good you could make it.

Alistina: *removes her large sword from what used to be the AMF generator* :blush: I brought the others too.

???: This place seems rather busy.

???: Wow, I knew you said they look alike, but damn.

???: Indeed, their similarities are rather interesting.

Keroko-kun: Even you got here?

Jeno: "Looks like we're stuck here Keroko-chan :heh: "


C2F: @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@

Keroko-chan: *dumbstruck with confusion*

Loki: "Lets just say things got out of hand :heh:"





Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:



The blue version of this sword...

http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/WoWScrnShot_061605_192236%202.JPG

Like what this guy is using...

http://www.wowhead.com/images/screenshots/resized/30582.jpg




Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.






Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/ashbringer.jpg


Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.






Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/Manslayeraq.JPG


Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.





Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:


http://i.thottbot.com/ss/s/361.jpg


Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.





P.S - I hope the image would show :heh:

WoW weapons OC-fied. :heh:

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

Another Unision Device? These things seem to grow on trees from time to time, ne? :heh: Though the way he found her seems realistic.

KBTKaiser
2007-10-27, 14:43
well, here's goes nothing for my two new characters...
Name: Kazekawa Kaori
Nickname: Sun Shadow
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birthday: Unknown
Occupation/s: Fugitive Mage turned Researcher, Squad Leader
Rankings: Unranked, TSAB estimation: AA rank
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 140 lbs
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown hair in a single braid down the back.
Magic style: Refined Neo-Belka (Modified Pentagon Formation)
Magic Color: Chrome Black
Usual wear: Red bodysuit(feet, hands and everything up to the neck), White sneaker-ish hiking boots
Specialization: Melee to Mid-range Attacker
Devices: Armed Device Eclipse Cross

Profile: A peerless warrior who escaped into obscurity while avoiding her former organization, Kaori hid herself away in research labs of Aurion Dauer, finding a way to prevent her organization's machinations from taking form: a battle armor Intelligent Device that would absorb almost everything on mere touch, no matter the composition.

Personality: Not a talker, Kaori gets straight to the point and touches on all the details on the way. Some could say that she's cold, but she does have soft side for those who actually enter her inner circle. Her former Armed Device, Solar Cross, willingly transfered to her pupil, Tatsutama Takeshi, after he succeeded in repairing it, which was not an easy task, earning Takeshi her respect as well as her hidden past.

Barrier Jacket: As if a compliment to her boots, white gauntlets, leg guards, and chest plate are formed up on her body. However, the barrier jacket is then supplemented by the boosted capabilities of the device.

Device: Eclipse Cross, like its elder brother device Solar Cross, is a full body kirin-themed armor, completely black with gold trim and a red visor. On the right horn of the helmet peice, a tattered peice of cloth is tied around as if a vow. In addition to this, Kaori integrated her old weapon, a high tech triple lance, into the system, maintaining the capability of being used even if the barrier jacket alone is activated while Eclipse Cross maintained standby. Another capability is Eclipse Cross' ability to purge the armor in the form of an energy shockwave, reverting to its standby form of a Pendant with a crystal shard that emits a dark light.

Fighting Style: Kaori's fighting style, compared to Takeshi, is fast, precise and technical, being able to use a variety of fighting styles in addition to her triple lance to fend off multiple targets in a manner like a three-sectioned nunchuck.

Special Moves>

Ethereal Mirage: Moving so quickly that even human eye cannot track, Kaori's speed generates afterimages that easily confuse the enemy. This can be done with or without Eclipse Cross active.

Spinning Thunderbolt: The retracting cable used in the triple lance makes it ideal for long range strikes. Setting the internal chargers to overdrive, Kaori can sling one section of the triple lance at high speeds for a clubbing attack from the side or even a straight forward gut bruiser. Used in conjuntion with Ethereal Mirage, Kaori has proven to be a formidable warrior.

Name: Tatsutama Takeshi
Nickname: Sun Flare
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birthday: Unknown
Occupation/s: Civilian turned TSAB solo enforcer
Rankings: Unscalable, TSAB unofficial estimation: S rank
Height: 5'11'
Weight: 145 lbs.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Tousled Black
Magic style: Refined Neo-Belka Hybrid (Pentagon Formation)
Magic Color: Pale Yellowish White
Usual wear: Black T-Shirt, Blue denim vest, Blue Jeans. Gloves adorn both hands. Red Bandana across forehead.
Specialization: Melee to Mid-range Attacker
Devices: Armed Device Solar Cross

Profile: A civilian collaborator who served as a gofer for Aurion Dauer, he found Kaori heavily wounded and bleeding at the lab's front door during one arrival of parts shipments, getting her inside to the infirmary before coming back out to finish unloading packages, only to run afoul of Kaori's Search and Kill party, his defiance against the leader earning him a life threatening wound in the chest. As the search party left, Takeshi mustered the strength to page Aurion, who found him almost bleeding to death and immediately transferred him into the infirmary.

Personality: A little brash but very caring, Takeshi was handpicked by Aurion for his honesty and ability to get things done, even if they were unorthodox methods, especially in TSAB views. Under Aurion's half work, half tutelage, Takeshi picked up some of Aurion's engineering knowledge. which he put to use when Kaori appeared in his life. Under Kaori's guidance, his technical knowledge would grow in addition to learning Kaori's fighting style.

Barrier Jacket: Similar to Kaori's barrier jacket, but instead a black bodysuit under all the white armor guards as well as a ear piece used for a direct link to Kaori's comm.

Device: Solar Cross, A pure white Kirin-themed Armor with similar capabilities as Eclipse Cross, despite being the elder of the two devices. Formerly Kaori's device, Takeshi took it upon himself to repair it after the assault from Kaori's pursuers had left it damaged and inactive. After finishing repairs and upgrades, Solar Cross requested transfer of ownership from Kaori to Takeshi. Appearance-wise, it is slightly more touched up on details. However, the upgrades made to it allowed for heavier protection at a very slight loss of speed, fitting Takeshi's fighting style. Similar to Eclipse Cross, Solar Cross was retrofitted with the armor purge ability after the initial repair, reverting to a pendant with a crystal shard glowing a iridescent rainbow. In addition, Kaori fashioned a gauntlet aptly named Messiah Fist for Takeshi, allowing him the ability to function as a solo enforcer if the time came. Unknown to Takeshi, Solar Cross internally devised a full drive mode, which turns the armor golden.

Fighting Style: Takeshi's fighting style, while taught by Kaori, is still very much rough around the edges. However, instead of Kaori's speed, Takeshi's preference is power, which is heavily reflected in his battling.

Special Moves:

Messiah Fist: The gauntlet itself contains 4 grappling hooks located in the knuckle portion, which can be used for restraining or latching. The composition itself is that of a specialized bio-alloy of sorts, which Kaori is one of the few who know how to actually work with the material, if not the only one. The resulting item had durability on par with Kaori's Triple Lance, if not better, capable of easily punching through at least 5 inches of steel.

Shining Knuckle: Concentrating all his magic and energy into the Messiah Fist, Takeshi can unleash a barrage of energy punches from the gauntlet, the punches taking the form of the gauntlet's slightly demonic motif.

Solar Break: Channeling everything he has into the Messiah Fist, Takeshi pulls out this move as a last resort if all else fails, undergoing a suicide rush to ram his overcharged gauntlet into the enemy for a massive impact detonation with a resulting energy pillar.


...Yep messy characters with dark pasts they are...

FieryAeon
2007-10-27, 17:28
Europe is a crappy place in terms of RPG's, any Tales that made it over here were done by either Nintendo (Tales of Phantasia, Tales of Symphonia) and Ubisoft (Tales of Eternia). And that's all the Tales we ever got, Namco doesn't care about us. Did you know Persona 3 is the first Persona to even make it to Europe?

I need an R1 PS2. :upset:
Hmm...Japanese games are R2 right? My PS2 can play both R1 and R2 perfectly then. Of course I had do something about it to allow that.

And...why is it Keroko week/day all over again? :uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 17:36
Hmm...Japanese games are R2 right? My PS2 can play both R1 and R2 perfectly then. Of course I had do something about it to allow that.

And...why is it Keroko week/day all over again? :uhoh:

More like Keroko World War. :uhoh:

Or Troy if you would. :D

Keroko
2007-10-27, 17:47
Hmm...Japanese games are R2 right? My PS2 can play both R1 and R2 perfectly then. Of course I had do something about it to allow that.

Lucky you. :upset:

And...why is it Keroko week/day all over again? :uhoh:

Chaos is sleeping right now. :heh:

More like Keroko World War. :uhoh:

Or Troy if you would. :D

It's like 300, except this time the Persians are the ones outnumbered. :D

Tk3997
2007-10-27, 19:10
It's like 300, except this time the Persians are the ones outnumbered. :D Actually Troy dose fit allot better what with it being about a kidnapped maiden and a coalition bent on retrieving her that actually DOSE outnumber the defenders. :p

Kha
2007-10-27, 20:15
Tycho: Okay, this is bad.

Wes: That AMF has to go, someone up for smashing it?

WHAM!

Wes: Thank you... er... Keroko...chan? :twitch:

Keroko-kun: Alistina, so good you could make it.

Alistina: *removes her large sword from what used to be the AMF generator* :blush: I brought the others too.

???: This place seems rather busy.

???: Wow, I knew you said they look alike, but damn.

???: Indeed, their similarities are rather interesting.

Keroko-kun: Even you got here? I see dead h4xx people! :heh:

Kluize: Ah a distraction to break the monotony... (hurls a planet at the lockdown by tractor beam) CATCH! :D
WoW weapons OC-fied. :heh:...Yeah. Something I've seen the bearer of Ashbringer before... :twitch:

Reiji Tabibito
2007-10-27, 20:22
Siesta in bed...

:love::love::love::love::love::love:


Aoi Kajitsu.:D That song ranks higher than Eiyuu in my books.:D

I assume you've seen the Chrono video that goes with it?


Well, its not that I dont like it... I'm just comparing it to other current romance series. ;)

As for the blue girl, no wonder why her voice felt so familiar. :D

Her VA is Miyuki Sawashiro, one of the more prolific VA's of the business.

Other Roles include:

Di Gi Charat: Puchiko

Utawarerumono: Aruruu

and my favorite -

Galaxy Angel: Mint Blancmanche



But yup, Yume = :love:


Just 1?!


Well, I try not to have it too long as I still have the battle scene to do. :eyespin:

Yeah, it's a shame. Well, there's always the Christmas Party. :D :D :uhoh:

True.

BTW, Arcas and Mel will be there for the Christmas Party - the Major will be unavailable (AGAIN), and Boomer will be back on Earth.

BTW2, you said that all this takes place 4 years post-StrikerS final fight, yes?


MORE TO COME!!!!

Smith & Wesson as WHO THEY ARE??!!!
more Gemini fan service :naughty:
Armstrong/Arcas (friendly) encounter
the arrival of "Mamono wo Utsu Mono" and her anteater plush doll.


<Looks @ 3> HOORAY!!



It makes a good insert song during an ass-whooping scene :p


That it does. :D

Didn't have to be so loud :heh:

I'd want to :)


Gotcha. Working on it now...


Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)


TRANSLATION PLEASE!!!!!!


I don't want to get my fanservice like that!:frustrated::heh:

Mel: Hey Boomer, what's with the camera and telephoto lenses?

Boomer: Oh, I'm just going to go bird-watching.

Mel: Oh. Have fun!

<Boomer leaves>

Arcas: Hey, where was Boomer going with all the camera equipment?

Mel: He said that he was going bird-watching.

Arcas: <visibly disturbed> And that doesn't seem... WEIRD to you?

Mel: No. Why?

Arcas: Mel, there's no forest around here for dozens of miles...

Mel: <pales> You mean...

Arcas: <sighs> Call Division 6. Let them know to put their anti-surveillance wards up... this is the third time this week - you'd think he'd have learned by now...


WAFF.

Watch And Forget Feeling. :p


WAFF = Warm & Fuzzy Feelings.


Keroko-chan: *grows red* I- I-

Keroko-kun: Yup, she's completely misunderstanding it.


*Pull her closer*


What I'm saying is, I need you! You play a very important part in my life now! It CANNOT be anyone else!


:heh::heh::heh: So it's like...

Keroko-chan: How can I face him in the morning?!?!




Keroko-chan: *grows redder and redder untill steam explodes out of her ears, fainting afterwards*

Keroko-kun: Ah, that was a bit too much I guess.


*drops a blue feather*

Keroko: If I recall, Tesla played that game where the blue feather means... :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyes pin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:: eyespin::eyespin: NO IT'S TOO...TOO SUDDEN!

*faints*

Arcas: Kisama, what are you doing to my Ker- CAPTAIN?!



I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*


Where was I again? Oh yes...

*runs with Keroko...*


Arcas: <engages Apalis> COME BACK HERE WITH MY KER- CAPTAIN, YOU MONSTER!!

APALIS!!!

Apalis: [Fire Shooter. Full auto fire.]


LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!



Keroko-chan: I'm being what now!?

Tesla, did you call the Rogues? Good. Sol, you get over here too.

*kracks knuckles* Let's get this over with before heartbreak comences.

Arcas: Count me in! No one's going my violate my Ker- captain! Captain!

<WHY DO I KEEP ALMOST SAYING KEROKO-CHAN?!>

Kai notices an epic scene of GAR of all the Rogues, looking like the Rebel Alliance like they always do, piled on one side with a flag declaring "KEROKO!" facing an equally piled Destroyer side with a flag declaring "JENO!", but somehow the Destroyers are all wearing Stormtrooper helmets.

Kai: Gee... Where have I seen this before? :rolleyes:

Old Master Saru: The winds of war blow once again... And there is only one solution...

Kai: (handpound eureka moment) I see! We need a MERMAID!

Kha: Wha...?! :eyespin:


Arcas: Aa.

<Now in full, raging SISCON MODE>

SEND THEM ALL TO HELL!!!

My name is Arisa Bannings, just your average girl- or so i thought. A few years ago i underwent events that really changed my life, and now, i'm on a transport to the land that started it all- Midchilda.

"Attention all Passengers, Flight 282 from Civil Station 25 will be arriving at West Airport in a few minutes. All passengers are advised to buckle..."

'Buckle up'... those were the first words that I remember upon arriving in this land- for this will be one strange ride.

*sound of bumping*

"Auu~ looks like i've tripped... and... white?"

"IYAAAA~" *cue in beating up sounds*

"Arisa-Sama? Oh my! Seiji... what happened to you, 'lil bro?"




Sounds interesting... and it'll be a good way to pass time until AlternateS is ready...



"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."
:eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*
Heh, just wait for the rest :naughty:


"Look... only at me"?!

Them's possessive words, if ever I heard them!

Keroko-kun: Mermaid? *remembers Howling Voice* Do we have a mermaid?

Tycho: Not unless you can arange one on short notice.

Keroko-kun: I can do that. Should be easy, there's a maiden's heart at stake here, it would not be chivalrous to leave a fellow girl behind.


Arcas: If you need, Mel and I can arrange for all the RAF Squads on-world to be there... ne, Mel?

Mel: Mm!

...

Nanoha: You've got a lot of guts... to mess and play around with my sister's... heart... of all things... (( enters Devil mode ))

Fate: Oh...Nanoha, I understand how you're feeling, but those hovering Blaster Bits... :uhoh:

Nanoha: Mm. You're right, it's not enough. Sortie the Air Force, RED ALERT!

Fate: :twitch: :eyespin::eyespin:

Chrono: THE PAPERS! :upset:

Hayate: That Nanoha is really... reckless at times. Well, not like it's a bad thing.

Vita: If you can't beat them, join them.

Signum: The "beat them" part doesn't sound all that convincing, with that smirk on your face.

Joseth: Mission control. Order Airstrike, Mail Strike and Super Sheep to strike when ready. Ready a Holy Hand Grenade and Ming Vase for all aggressors as well.

Vice: I'm fine with just Magic Bullet, thank you.

Joseth: You're no aggressor, so a prod is good enough for you. Or I could teach you a trick called Kamikaze...

Vice: You're surprisingly proactive.

Joseth: Shut up.


Arcas: <surrounded by Flaming Aura - currently in Out-of-Control SISCON MODE>

PREPARE YOURSELF - FOR THE NINTH LEVEL OF HELL!!!


Keroko-kun: Ahh, reinforcements. And even Worms? *readies Artherion* Now I can't stay behind, can I?

Keroko-kun: Do we have summoners?

Wes: Well, I used to be able to summon before you decided to scrap the idea.

Keroko-kun: Right, but since you're an aspect mage now, you can negociate with the dragons, right?

Wes: If it's not blacks he's going to summon...

Keroko-kun: I really wish I kept that summoning thing, a Blue Eyes would be handy right now.

Keroko-kun: You hand her over nice and easy and we might let you go.

GARcas: AS IF!!

Jack: But really chances we’ll probably still brutally kill you anyway, but if you don't we'll definitely do it if you don't so...
Daniel: Are you trying to start a battle?!
Jack: Well it would be pretty damn boring and a waste of all this set up if he just gives her up!
*Just behind them*
Felix: *whispered* Why are we encouraging him by standing out her with him again?
Pixy: Double pay.

GARcas: I'm with Jack! Immortal my ass - let blow these bastards to HELL!


(Grabs both her hands)

Jeno: "The MOST prettiest :blush: ! You must have alot of suitors, ;) huh?"

("Jeno! What the hell are you doing?!")

GARcas: Ascalon...

SLAY!

THE!

DRAGON!

<points Devices @ Jeno>

THAT ONE'S MINE!!


AHH!!! HOW COME THE ENEMY NUMBERS ARE SO HUGE!!!

Keroko-chan, I'll make this quick. All you need to be is yourself! Don't ever change! That's the Keroko-chan that I love to-


*BOOM!!!!*


Lance: "What the-?"

Cero: "Lol, C2F got knocked out :heh:"

???: "Seriously, how much longer is he going to blabber?"

Lance: "You are... :eek:"

Cero: "... :uhoh:"

*4 other Destroyers stepped in*

Solakar: "Sorry about this Chaos, but Sipher has other plans for this situation :D... Suiyoku?"

*Ice freezes over Keroko's room, soon after a heavy-duty AMF field is place around it.*

Suiyoku: "Order me around again and you'll find yourself wondering how deep is the sea REALLY..."

Lance: "Erm... What's going on here?"

Suiyoku: "New orders from Sipher, we are to stand and fight till lunch..."

Lance + Cero: "EHHHHHHHHH????!!!!!!!!!"

(In the mean while...)


Jeno: "Looks like we're stuck here Keroko-chan :heh: "


C2F: @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@

GARcas: Would've been a shame if it all ended like that...


Tycho: Okay, this is bad.

Wes: That AMF has to go, someone up for smashing it?

WHAM!

Wes: Thank you... er... Keroko...chan? :twitch:

Keroko-kun: Alistina, so good you could make it.

Alistina: *removes her large sword from what used to be the AMF generator* :blush: I brought the others too.

???: This place seems rather busy.

???: Wow, I knew you said they look alike, but damn.

???: Indeed, their similarities are rather interesting.

Keroko-kun: Even you got here?


GARcas: More allies! Good! Now all we need to do is go in there...



NEW MATERIAL!!!!


Re: CLANNAD - I have a feeling the structure of CLANNAD will be similar to that of KyoAni's Kanon... similar how? In resolution, most likely.

EXPLANATION!!!

Kanon's Girls: Ayu, Nayuki, Shiori, Mai, Makoto

Path of Resolution: Makoto, Mai, Shiori, Nayuki, Ayu

CLANNAD's Girls: Nagisa, Kyou, Tomoyo, Kotomi, Fuko

Path of Resolution: Fuko, Kotomi, Tomoyo, Kyou, Nagisa

Translation: They'll resolve Fuko's story first - from the last 2 eps, it looks like they're headed down that path. Nagisa will be last, and the series will end up being Tomoya/Nagisa - provided they remain solely in the School Life Arc. If they go beyond that, then it's a coin toss. Kyou's probably known Tomoya the longest, so she'll end up being the Unlucky Osananajimi (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnluckyChildhoodFriend)...

This is all just speculation @ this point - but 2 things are clear.

1: Nagisa's story will be resolved last.

2: If the story remains in-school only, it will be Tomoya/Nagisa.

Aaron008R
2007-10-27, 20:51
No, but Baka-Tsuki had it up to 74%, not yet completely translated, and no patches yet.

I'm playing the Japanese raw via, 1. listening to the voice, 2. reading Tomoya's script off a piece my friend compiled (( since I don't like to go through B-T's day-by-day transcript. )) and 3. walkthroughs.

I hate translating Japanese, but if it needs to be, I can do a degree of it. (( Still learning to type though. ))

Ahh... Souka...:(

I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*

Shouldn't Keroko be trying to get away now?:heh:

Where was I again? Oh yes...

*runs with Keroko...*

Keroko-chan? Why aren't you struggling?:heh::uhoh:

I'll get to that :heh: But for now, I'm in the middle of an unintended kidnapping :heh:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

*24 Hours Later*

Wesson: Looks like you got beat good this time... :twitch:
Smith: *mummified in bandages* yeah...

very, very goooooooood :D:love:

Wesson: There's something you're not telling me are you? :eyebrow:

Mai: ...

Remi no baka...

:eek:
He got beat up and then....:eek:

LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!

Talk's over, now hand her over before you make things worse.

... Nevermind, you just made it worse.

And so the chase starts.:heh:

Keroko-chan: I'm being what now!?

Somebody being kidnapped... And not doing anything about it.:heh:
C'mon! You're not restrained, are you?!:heh:

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)

*Hands in the same position*

Atuwe: *scrambling about* Camera, camera! *scrambling about* :upset:
Felix: No way in HELL this is ending well.
Cipher: Has anyone seen the General? :eyebrow:
Pixy: I think he's carrying the Keroko flag...

Keroko-kun: Mermaid? *remembers Howling Voice* Do we have a mermaid?

Tycho: Not unless you can arange one on short notice.

Keroko-kun: I can do that. Should be easy, there's a maiden's heart at stake here, it would not be chivalrous to leave a fellow girl behind.

Now even Jack and Co. joined in...:heh:

Keroko-chan: What is going on here!?

You're getting kidnapped! Get away from them!:frustrated::heh:

...

Nanoha: You've got a lot of guts... to mess and play around with my sister's... heart... of all things... (( enters Devil mode ))

Fate: Oh...Nanoha, I understand how you're feeling, but those hovering Blaster Bits... :uhoh:

Nanoha: Mm. You're right, it's not enough. Sortie the Air Force, RED ALERT!

Fate: :twitch: :eyespin::eyespin:

Chrono: THE PAPERS! :upset:

Hayate: That Nanoha is really... reckless at times. Well, not like it's a bad thing.

Vita: If you can't beat them, join them.

Signum: The "beat them" part doesn't sound all that convincing, with that smirk on your face.

Joseth: Mission control. Order Airstrike, Mail Strike and Super Sheep to strike when ready. Ready a Holy Hand Grenade and Ming Vase for all aggressors as well.

Vice: I'm fine with just Magic Bullet, thank you.

Joseth: You're no aggressor, so a prod is good enough for you. Or I could teach you a trick called Kamikaze...

Vice: You're surprisingly proactive.

Joseth: Shut up.

Now even the other Aces and Worms elements are coming in! @_@

Keroko: Ano... I don't mind talking, but could you please let me go first... it's... uncomfortable...

Cue...

65kcAF0rwLg

Looks epic.:D

Jeno: "Don't mind them, my boss just loves you too much that he doesn't know how to express himself :nod: I'm Jeno btw, it's a pleasure to finally meet the cutest of the Aces :) LOVE what you've done with your hair :nod:"

[QUOTE=Keroko;1223394]Keroko-chan: Eh? Eh? EEEEEH!? NANANDA KOREWAAAA!?

I seriously suggest that you stop being flustered and get away from the arms of the person who's kidnapping you... -_-

Keroko-kun: You hand her over nice and easy and we might let you go.

Jack: But really chances we’ll probably still brutally kill you anyway, but if you don't we'll definitely do it if you don't so...
Daniel: Are you trying to start a battle?!
Jack: Well it would be pretty damn boring and a waste of all this set up if he just gives her up!
*Just behind them*
Felix: *whispered* Why are we encouraging him by standing out her with him again?
Pixy: Double pay.

That's Jack for ya.:D

Jeno (Cheerful smile with a rosy cheek) : "Hai :nod: !"

(Grabs both her hands)

Jeno: "The MOST prettiest :blush: ! You must have alot of suitors, ;) huh?"


("Jeno! What the hell are you doing?!")

Keroko-chan: Ah? Uhm, etto, sonno....

Oh dear...:heh:

Making things worse, clearly.

Tycho: Okay, this is bad.

Wes: That AMF has to go, someone up for smashing it?

WHAM!

Wes: Thank you... er... Keroko...chan? :twitch:

Keroko-kun: Alistina, so good you could make it.

Alistina: *removes her large sword from what used to be the AMF generator* :blush: I brought the others too.

???: This place seems rather busy.

???: Wow, I knew you said they look alike, but damn.

???: Indeed, their similarities are rather interesting.

Keroko-kun: Even you got here?



Keroko-chan: *dumbstruck with confusion*

I SEE DEAD PEOPLE!!!@_@ @_@ @_@

~~~~~~~~~

Aurion: Yare yare...<facepalm>:heh:
Almaria: [Aurion-san. Aren't you going to participate?]
Aurion: I don't think there'll be any need to do so. There seems to be enough forces present, anyway.:heh:

@ Thread:

keeping up with Kha's introductions, i decided to put the AtS projects into the secret 'plot room' to further accumulate more infomation, as well as slow processing, and will be publicly whipping up this one- well just following the trend...

My name is Arisa Bannings, just your average girl- or so i thought. A few years ago i underwent events that really changed my life, and now, i'm on a transport to the land that started it all- Midchilda.

"Attention all Passengers, Flight 282 from Civil Station 25 will be arriving at West Airport in a few minutes. All passengers are advised to buckle..."

'Buckle up'... those were the first words that I remember upon arriving in this land- for this will be one strange ride.

*sound of bumping*

"Auu~ looks like i've tripped... and... white?"

"IYAAAA~" *cue in beating up sounds*

"Arisa-Sama? Oh my! Seiji... what happened to you, 'lil bro?"

- Yes bored



Cue the tsundere beating.:D BTW, did you get the MP3?:confused:

Really? :heh:


"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."
:eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*

@_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@
MAREN HAS BECOME POSSESSIVE!!!:eek:(:D)

Loki: "Lets just say things got out of hand :heh:"





Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:



The blue version of this sword...

http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/WoWScrnShot_061605_192236%202.JPG

Like what this guy is using...

http://www.wowhead.com/images/screenshots/resized/30582.jpg




Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.






Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/ashbringer.jpg


Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.






Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/Manslayeraq.JPG


Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.





Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:


http://i.thottbot.com/ss/s/361.jpg


Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.





P.S - I hope the image would show :heh:

Elemental masters this time...:twitch:
Nice swords.:D

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

Very interesting!:D
Somehow... Mari reminds me of someone from another anime...
When can we see them?:D

well, here's goes nothing for my two new characters...
*snip*

*snip*
[/spoiler]

...Yep messy characters with dark pasts they are...

From what I can se, it's very workable.:nod:
Some adjustments might be needed here and there, but all in all, pretty good.:D
What's with the absorption bit, BTW?:uhoh:


I assume you've seen the Chrono video that goes with it?

ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!

I was the one who posted that video in the forums in the first place!

Some MADs I've found:

1. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k64C3NBWJUU = HayateXChrono MAD

2. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4Np3MhKRjU = a-little-sister-not related-by-blood-moe MAD

3. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDvaV8FJdp8 = Chrono MAD
4. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6MSrEImPUFw = Yuuno MAD

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-27, 21:55
(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see :)"

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people :heh: Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT :rolleyes: I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright :p"

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck :rolleyes: sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon :p"
Cero: "I know :D"
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first :D"


*********************************



Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"



http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/706/megidramongn6.jpghttp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4254/armed10jv7.jpg



Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way :uhoh:"



*********************************



Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"




http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1416/uofyg0.jpghttp://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8b/SkullSatamon.jpg



Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"




(In the meanwhile)


Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like :nod: ?"

CaroRuLushe
2007-10-27, 22:48
Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.
Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT
I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Tormenk
2007-10-27, 23:02
Actually Troy dose fit allot better what with it being about a kidnapped maiden and a coalition bent on retrieving her that actually DOSE outnumber the defenders. :p

So who's gonna be Hector and Achilles? :uhoh:

(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see :)"

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people :heh: Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT :rolleyes: I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright :p"

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck :rolleyes: sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon :p"
Cero: "I know :D"
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first :D"


*********************************



Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"



http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/706/megidramongn6.jpghttp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4254/armed10jv7.jpg



Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way :uhoh:"



*********************************



Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"




http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1416/uofyg0.jpghttp://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8b/SkullSatamon.jpg



Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"




(In the meanwhile)


Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like :nod: ?"


At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..



Archdevil
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8315/homm5infernodevilav8.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernodevilav8.jpg)

Pit Lord
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2945/homm5infernopitlorddd9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernopitlorddd9.jpg)



Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..



Nightmare

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3603/homm5infernonightmareuo5.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernonightmareuo5.jpg)

Succubus

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3884/imagesio3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.



http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3852/bdragonsmbq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Let chaos reign this day.

:D


And of course the obligatory teaser..



“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.

Erio
2007-10-27, 23:47
Go find the official site :p

Though there's not much at the moment...

Ah, the game is not out yet, huh?

The Legion left a different effect on me. I'm still fine with yuri but anything I see or read with NF now makes me go :rolleyes: and stop at every point to criticize. I'll go "Bah NF again so what's new? :rolleyes:" and that clouds my judgment and basically prevents me from enjoying a good read when I find one. :(

Actually I'm the same as you. I'm fine with yuri, except for NxF. :heh:

:eek:

Which pair(s) of hands crafted this world? :eyebrow:

:uhoh: L-Lowe-aniki, o-of course... :uhoh:

Bloody in that he curves crosses into his victims.

Haha, I wonder if someone got the bad joke. :heh: :uhoh:

So elsewhere is perfectly fine? :uhoh:

T-That's... Well, you got me there. :heh:

Mai: ...

Sughe...

Hontou no Otoko da...

*blushes*

:heh:

You find the most... suggestive images do you? :uhoh:

Moar please?

*runs*

lol I knew you'd like that. :D So now we have short haired Mai! :D:D I'll shop an image tomorrow to see how she looks. ;)

:eek::twitch:

NO U!!!!!!! :frustrated:

:twitch: You dont want Fate all tied up and... *ahem* Who are you and what have you done with Lowe-aniki?!? :frustrated:

It's not called "Heaven"...

More like "Paradise" :uhoh:

:nod:

...Like a sauna you see? :nod:

*whistles*

:nod: ...a sauna full of girls...

*whistles*

*points to Erio*

IT WAS HIM!!!! HE DID!!!! :uhoh::p

:nono: Lowe-aniki, how could you blame a little kid?!

Caro: Sou yo! Erio-kun would never do something like that!

Erio: :nod:

There should be similar settings in Vista's control panel.

Here's a site that can help. http://www.declan-software.com/japanese_ime/

Nice link. Thanks! I'll check it out tomorrow. :)

Natalia eh? So that's who she was based on. :D Well I've just started the game so I haven't even got to the point where I meet Natalia yet. Having them meet is a good idea though.

Ah, I see. Yeah, she joins a bit later. ;) If your Tear is part of the TSAB, though, prepare for battle when they meet. :heh: :D

Actually Sylvia's chains are inspired by Velvet's chains. :heh: I guess I should have included a picture in her profile. :p Only different I did was that Sylvia doesn't so much as use it to attack than to restrain opponents.

Physical bind+magical bind=bondage much! *runs like the wind*

:eek: I see, I see. Well, I wasnt going to copy it exactly...and well, I havent even created the character anyway. :heh:

And so that's why you used those chains... And that's also why you want to create Fel...! I see, I see, all the pieces are falling well into place!!

*runs*

After episode 4, I'm leaning more towards Fuko. Her "you there! Weird person!" antics just crack me up. :heh:

Yeah, I'm also liking Fuko. :D

Its just like Air Gear manga being more violent and ecchi than the anime will ever be. :D

Though Air Gear is much more ecchi I think. :heh:

Good....good! Another one to do this and that to. I kid. In any case now I'm wondering whether to incorporate the Fon hymns concept. Maybe I'll search through the backlogs for that Lyrical magic system thing someone wrote on (I believe it was Saint X).

That's an interesting idea, though I wonder how you will implement that. :)

You keep on pushing it, huh?:uhoh:

Though I must admit. That pic is :love: worthy!:D

lol Well, just had to show that pic... :uhoh: :heh:

She scores higher than Nagisa in my books.:nod:

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though. :heh:

Liingo
2007-10-28, 00:10
Keroko-jacking? :twitch:

*shakes head*
Yare Yare...

Well at least it should be interesting. :D

*******Meanwhile********
"Sir, orders from HQ!"

Myristic flicked the screen on, scanning through the transcript. His eye's widened as he neared the end, "Prepare the Hunters for sortie! Begin preparations for HALO insertion!"

'This is going to be long wait....'

LOKI! CODE RED! CALL BACK EVERYONE!!!!
:heh: So this brings how many OC's after you now?
Really? :heh:


"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."
:eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*

:eek:
I'd like to request a front row seat please :D Preferably with extra fireworks :D
Remember that old long-named device walker system that appeared in the first TV release of New Belka Chronicles? (Yeah right. :heh:)

Now that I'm releasing the "DVDs" (Ah yeah right.) and remastering some problem areas (fixing some plot issues etc etc), the Genesis Uninhibited Nendo Drive Assault-use Magical devices have been given the go ahead to star in the 100% fanboy-butcherized side-story of the New Belka Chronicles timeline in order to cater to both the pure Nanoha fans (people who want pure canoness) and the rest of us dark gods (and myself. :p)

But rest assured, that will be the ONLY time the word "GUNDAM" is mentioned regarding Belka 00. That's because--

*silenced*

Studying has driven me nuts apparently...
:dots:
I've got no clue what you're going on about....
Oops I made a wrong point. Fixed it as I meant to refer to a slice of the thread population like you and Liingo do what a more believable version as opposed to the :eyespin: crack I've been spouting unrestrained. Hope that is better... :heh:

Something like NBC is the main dish, with more elements in line with canon data, while Belka 00 is serves more blatant rips, cameos and general otaku-fanservice if you will.

Whee, something I don't have to read..:heh: *notes down*
Loki: "Lets just say things got out of hand :heh:"





Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:



The blue version of this sword...

http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/WoWScrnShot_061605_192236%202.JPG

Like what this guy is using...

http://www.wowhead.com/images/screenshots/resized/30582.jpg




Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.






Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/ashbringer.jpg


Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.






Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/Manslayeraq.JPG


Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.





Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:


http://i.thottbot.com/ss/s/361.jpg


Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.





P.S - I hope the image would show :heh:
:eyebrow:
1) No clue
2) Ashbringer??
3) No clue
4) DoW..

No Asscandy:p Ashkandi?
Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*
*sigh* Another unison device....
At least she's good on the eyes..

*prepares for the onsalught of moe bombs* :p
Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.
Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT
I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Looking good :D Hope it goes well for you :D

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 00:21
So who's gonna be Hector and Achilles? :uhoh:

Throne4Reign: I don't now about Hector but...

*Watches as Jeno continues to flirt cheerfully with a confused and blushing Keroko*

... On second thoughts, Suiyoku is Hector :heh: Except he's evil and he's not going to die :heh:



At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..



Archdevil
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8315/homm5infernodevilav8.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernodevilav8.jpg)

Pit Lord
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2945/homm5infernopitlorddd9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernopitlorddd9.jpg)



Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..



Nightmare

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3603/homm5infernonightmareuo5.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernonightmareuo5.jpg)

Succubus

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3884/imagesio3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.



http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3852/bdragonsmbq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Let chaos reign this day.

:D


Lance = :eek:
Solakar = :twitch:
Tereino = :twitch:
Kai'malas = :heh:
Suiyoku = :eyebrow:

Cero: "Wow... I guess I don't know my own strength :heh:?"

T4R: You didn't do anything :frustrated: !


And of course the obligatory teaser..



“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.



Okay, I've finally , properly read your Kerokolysis or however it's spelled :heh: I feel bad about not being able to come up with any detailed history, the most you could find is in his profile several hundred pages back :heh:

Oh yeah, I forgot... Jeno doesn't reveal his gift. He would off-handedly remark saying that he's good at guessing, but he'll never say it outright that he could see them. Just a heads up of course :heh:





“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.



Jeno: "...I'm not necrophiliac if that's what you're implying :p I like it warm..."

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 00:33
Throne4Reign: I don't now about Hector but...

*Watches as Jeno continues to flirt cheerfully with a confused and blushing Keroko*

... On second thoughts, Suiyoku is Hector :heh: Except he's evil and he's not going to die :heh:


Wonder who's the champion of the other side. :eyebrow::D

And T4R finally shows his face here, this is going to be interesting. :nod:



Lance = :eek:
Solakar = :twitch:
Tereino = :twitch:
Kai'malas = :heh:
Suiyoku = :eyebrow:

Cero: "Wow... I guess I don't know my own strength :heh:?"

T4R: You didn't do anything :frustrated: !

Of course. That was my summoner. :p



Okay, I've finally , properly read your Kerokolysis or however it's spelled :heh: I feel bad about not being able to come up with any detailed history, the most you could find is in his profile several hundred pages back :heh:

Oh yeah, I forgot... Jeno doesn't reveal his gift. He would off-handedly remark saying that he's good at guessing, but he'll never say it outright that he could see them. Just a heads up of course :heh:

Well not to worry. I feel bad for forcing you to read mine too.:heh: I'll pull something together from what I can find here.

Since I'm writing about Jeno, I'll give you a preview of what I have in mind later. Although that just might spoil all the fun for you. :p



Jeno: "...I'm not necrophiliac if that's what you're implying :p I like it warm..."

Katrina : Not at all. I have a purpose to spill my own blood after all. ;)

Erio
2007-10-28, 00:35
Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)


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Goshuushou-sama Ninomiya-kun episode 4 was actually pretty good... I guess this series is not so bad after all... ;)

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. :D (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that :love: appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya. :heh:

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Hey Nighty, have you tried Alice + Die for Me! + Mudo Boost? She's H4XX!! :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: and also kinda cute...*ahem* but also scary :heh: And then I just gave Thanatos Die for Me! for even more ownage. :D

:nod:

To be honest, Oswald, Velvet and Cornelius's story were the weakest in my opinion. Gwen's not too special, but it genuinely felt romantic in a play-kind of a way, and Mercedes = awesome.

Indeed. Mercedes rules. :D

I demand to see THIS quote from Ryou in the anime! :mad:

While you were sleeping, I secretly...

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

:eek: Yes! More Ryou in the anime please!! :D

Marina Ismail.

:love:

Actually, the animation (( bar the RIDICULOUSLY smoothly animated dream girl )), is about equal. It's probably the lightings. Things tend to look prettier when they're flocked with decent snow white effects. After all, in the end, Kyoto Animation, despite having good background team, is not J.C Staff at their best (( watercolor effects ftw )), Makoto Shinkai, Ghibli or even Mamoru Hosoda.

Haha, as expected, you know this stuff very well. :heh:

I don't think so. The game and OST though, is.

OST already GET-O. :D :heh:

Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D

Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's... :uhoh:

While me and Creator-san have nothing to add to the magic debate, a few points have come up that are revelent and appropiately been uh Traced. :heh:

BUT THAT'S THE HEADLINES FOR TODAY!

Creator-san has got several stories lined up for the "Rebuilt of StrikerS" project, so for a small preview:This is a story of a man who has fought and won his place amongst the stars of destiny...

With Kha der Kleriker now in the center of Belka society, the boy strives to make a difference in the lives of the flock that he has been chosen to lead. Three years of peace has passed since the Aces fought for and sealed the Holy Grails which had all but torn the Church apart, and things have begun to regain semblance of normalcy. The Belka peoples experienced a wave of evangelism which continues to ripple unabated, giving the young Cleric more troubles of a different kind, just as he wishes to build a better home for his new-found family.

But each day, he continues to walk tall and bright as the relentless symbol of Light in the new Belka dawn.

For the troubles mean that the world has nothing serious to worry about.

For that he has fought, and for that he will continue to fight.

"Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: Strike Lightning, hajimari-masu."And not forgetting:"We will begin dimension-wide armed intervention of black research with GUNDAM."

02.04.MC 0075And of course, it's MY turn to make an appearance!

Next episode, Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai: "AM I THE ONLY ONE NORMAL HERE?!"

Even laymen have adventures of their own!

Trisha: (sees Kai muttering into space) Who in the world are you talking to? :eyebrow:

:eyespin: And where does this takes place? :heh:

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

Nice. :nod: Another meido. :D

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 00:46
Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)


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And this just came at the right time. New OCs are coming from others here as well.

I'll create a new post or maybe just this one to store the links I have and you can just link the single post to the main page since it is easier for you and makes it easier to add in new stuff at the same time. :)


Edit:

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3619/idctd061320056632112aq6.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idctd061320056632112aq6.jpg)http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9241/idjmb036233032264523lf5.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idjmb036233032264523lf5.jpg)

Erio
2007-10-28, 01:32
And this just came at the right time. New OCs are coming from others here as well.

I'll create a new post or maybe just this one to store the links I have and you can just link the single post to the main page since it is easier for you and makes it easier to add in new stuff at the same time. :)


Edit:

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3619/idctd061320056632112aq6.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idctd061320056632112aq6.jpg)http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9241/idjmb036233032264523lf5.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idjmb036233032264523lf5.jpg)

Yup, it also helps the List itself. Once I managed to get over the character limit and had to make some people organize their own links. :heh: Just letme know which post to link to. :)

Nice images, too. :D

haiz123321
2007-10-28, 01:41
Then 'Ordeal' is the perfect word for it :rolleyes:


Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg



:twitch::love:


@Kha: GL + GUNDAM 00 + MGLN?!?!?!:eek:
Sounds EPIC!!!:D

:bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:

Thx! But its a pretty simple one... really O.ov

Yeah but I got freaked out when I first saw it in the OP, it still does though :uhoh:

EDIT:


I did no such thing!

*Still holding on to her*

hmm :eyebrow:

*Jeno quickly grabs a fallen Smith and toss him at Mai...

... Who ends up knocking her over and kissing her.*

Loki (bowed) : "To be continued my dear... ;)"

*Both Loki and Jeno bolted out of this dimension in the confusion.
*24 Hours Later*

Wesson: Looks like you got beat good this time... :twitch:
Smith: *mummified in bandages* yeah...

very, very goooooooood :D:love:

Wesson: There's something you're not telling me are you? :eyebrow:

Mai: ...

Remi no baka...

But he was UNCONSCIOUS, it wasn't his fault o_O Mai didn't notice he was asleep?

Who knew showers were such a inspiration killer? :rolleyes:

It's the opposite for me :D

Sorry about all this, Keroko-chan :heh: But I was hoping we could have a chance to talk before all hell breaks loose :)


*Hands in the same position*

You just can't let go can you?:D

Really? :heh:


"Koji-sama...watashi dake wo mite..."
:eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*

Stop fooling around and finish your chapter :frustrated::frustrated:


Keroko-kun: I really wish I kept that summoning thing, a Blue Eyes would be handy right now.

Blue Eyes shining dragon would be better? :D

Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D

:D


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

NO F-NG WAY!?!?! HOW CAN A FREAKING UNISON DEVICE BE SO HAWT? :love:



http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/706/megidramongn6.jpghttp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4254/armed10jv7.jpg


I know the one of the left is the acid saliva dragon on digimon tamers but wuts the one on the right?


http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1416/uofyg0.jpghttp://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8b/SkullSatamon.jpg


Lol The YGO card monster and skullsetamon

(In the meanwhile)


Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like :nod: ?"

Spica's gonna get angry...

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.
Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT
I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Awww :(

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 02:04
And T4R finally shows his face here, this is going to be interesting. :nod:

T4R: Only because C2F is still knocked out :p




Well not to worry. I feel bad for forcing you to read mine too.:heh: I'll pull something together from what I can find here.

Your best friend is either the profile or the Questionnaire :heh:

But remember, Spica isn't as general of a knowledge as she is here...



Since I'm writing about Jeno, I'll give you a preview of what I have in mind later. Although that just might spoil all the fun for you. :p

Your call :p



Katrina : Not at all. I have a purpose to spill my own blood after all. ;)


Jeno: "Hehhh~ That might be a little too 'wild' for me... :p"



:eyebrow:
1) No clue
2) Ashbringer??
3) No clue
4) DoW..

No Asscandy:p Ashkandi?




1) Lord Alexi Barov 's sword, doesn't have a name... but i took the image of that epic sword from ZF :p

2) Ashbringer :nod:

3) Manslayer

4) Yup.


P.S - How many people watched the OVA Moonlight Lady (aka "Kao no nai Tsuki ") before?

Saint X
2007-10-28, 02:26
In the meantime, a GDI fleet that was just visiting the area was just in parking near the boundaries of Outer Cadia- watching.

Captain: What shall we do, stop them?

Andrei: No, just watch, even if 10 of our ships get hit- it's their fault for not seeing any stray sho-

*an explosion occurs nearby, with the ship that was supposed to be there hit by stay fire*

Andrei: Nine ships i mean...

===

*Checks mailbox - quite a feat considering that the place it was standing was in the middle of two camps*

"No ideas for the Nanohaverse-based MMORPG back in page 707? that's a bummer..."

*takes out the single envelope and walk away, back into the bunker labs*

FieryAeon
2007-10-28, 02:47
Nice link. Thanks! I'll check it out tomorrow. :)
:)


Ah, I see. Yeah, she joins a bit later. ;) If your Tear is part of the TSAB, though, prepare for battle when they meet. :heh: :D
Haven't decided her affiliation yet. I'm gonna finish up on Fel's profile (might rename her, might not) first.


:eek: I see, I see. Well, I wasnt going to copy it exactly...and well, I havent even created the character anyway. :heh:

And so that's why you used those chains... And that's also why you want to create Fel...! I see, I see, all the pieces are falling well into place!!

*runs*

The idea of creating Sylvia was way earlier around August, that was when I started playing Odin Sphere. I just started playing Prism Ark about 2-3 weeks ago, so your imagination is not valid. :heh:

Though honestly I'm not sure I know what you were imagining. :heh:


Yeah, I'm also liking Fuko. :D
"Dribble~~~shoot~~" :D


Though Air Gear is much more ecchi I think. :heh:
NSFW definitely. And to think I thought of watching a chapter or two in my uni's computer lab once. :uhoh:


That's an interesting idea, though I wonder how you will implement that. :)
I guess I'll look into LoweGear's Lyrical magic system, or I might come up with my own. Coming up with a new system would be tedious and hard though. :rolleyes:


Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)


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:eek: Will prepare a post with all the links so far later.


Goshuushou-sama Ninomiya-kun episode 4 was actually pretty good... I guess this series is not so bad after all... ;)

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. :D (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that :love: appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya. :heh:

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1. Yet to watch.
2. Maybe there doesn't seem like the plot is moving anywhere yet? It should pick up soon starting episode 5 seeing as they are moving into Fuko's arc.

Keroko
2007-10-28, 03:05
Actually Troy dose fit allot better what with it being about a kidnapped maiden and a coalition bent on retrieving her that actually DOSE outnumber the defenders. :p

Good point.

I see dead h4xx people! :heh:

I don't do h4xx people. :p

Arcas: Kisama, what are you doing to my Ker- CAPTAIN?!

Arcas: <engages Apalis> COME BACK HERE WITH MY KER- CAPTAIN, YOU MONSTER!!

APALIS!!!

Apalis: [Fire Shooter. Full auto fire.]

Arcas: Count me in! No one's going my violate my Ker- captain! Captain!

<WHY DO I KEEP ALMOST SAYING KEROKO-CHAN?!>

Arcas: Aa.

<Now in full, raging SISCON MODE>

SEND THEM ALL TO HELL!!!

I was wondering when Arcas would enter the fray. :heh:

Shouldn't Keroko be trying to get away now?:heh:

Keroko-chan? Why aren't you struggling?:heh::uhoh:

Somebody being kidnapped... And not doing anything about it.:heh:
C'mon! You're not restrained, are you?!:heh:

You're getting kidnapped! Get away from them!:frustrated::heh:

Tycho: The man raises a good point, when will the Captain figure out what's going on?

keroko-kun: She'll most likely snap from the stress in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Keroko-chan: *from the destoyer's hideout as Jeno holds her hands* IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Keroko-kun: Duck.

Wes: Wha-

VHOOM!

Nanoha: *Nods as a mushroom shaped cloud rises from the remains of the hideout* As expected of my sister.

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though. :heh:

Nagisa scores zero points with me. :heh:

I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. :upset: More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)

Well, I made a full OC list (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938821&postcount=25) which should contain everything of importance.

Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. :D (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that :love: appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya. :heh:

:nod: Likewise, Tomoyo's air-kick in the promo was actually the reason I kept an eye on this series in the first place. Kyou is a second motivator.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 03:20
Tycho: The man raises a good point, when will the Captain figure out what's going on?

keroko-kun: She'll most likely snap from the stress in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Keroko-chan: *from the destoyer's hideout as Jeno holds her hands* IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Keroko-kun: Duck.

Wes: Wha-

VHOOM!

Nanoha: *Nods as a mushroom shaped cloud rises from the remains of the hideout* As expected of my sister.


*When the smoke and haze clears*

Executioner: <Absolute>

*Jeno stood waving the dust away, protected by his dimensional barrier*

Executioner: <Barrier release in 2 seconds, remaining uses for today down to three.>

Jeno: "THAT IS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL! Now I can't help being attracted to you :blush: "


*Only Lance, Kai'malas and Suiyoku had set up barriers of their own*


Cero: @_@
Solakar: @_@
Tereino: @_@






I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. :upset: More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.


All of Kyou's appearances have been WINS and LOLS :heh:

Saint X
2007-10-28, 03:34
Just to pass the time while war rages over Keroko-chan

Ranged Devices

Device Image:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/weapon20070701/iwfi045.jpg

Gunner Form (Basic):
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gbr045_1.jpg

Assaulter Form (Advanced):
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gbr047_1.jpg

Maiden Form (Limit Unlocked):
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gbr050_1.jpg

During Siege Mode (just swap the user from the robot to Kyla):
http://www.rf-online.web.id/images/guide/3bangsa/accretia/mod_siege.jpg

Siege Kit:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/RFMania/NovusTimes/novel/img/070518/siedge_LV060%20copy.jpg



http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_06.gif
Fast Chain: A quick shot of 5 bullets
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_15.gif
Shotgun Burst: 8 bullets in one shotgun-like burst
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_49.gif
Dance of the Gunner: A wild shooting move that rains shots on an area
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/7EagleCruiser.gif
Eagle Crusher: a powerful 10 shot burst
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/class/skill_19.gif
Powered Shot: a focused shot of an energized magical missile. Launcher Mode Only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_50.gif
Cluster Bomb: launches a cluster bomb over a target area. Launcher Mode Only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/17LethalAttack.gif
Hyperblast: a powerful charged, splash damage version of Powered Shot. Launcher Mode Only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/class/skill_20.gif
Compound Siege: a powerful blast. Siegemode only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/19SiegePower.gif
Cluster Blast: a powerful version of Shotgun Burst. Siegemode Only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/18MultiShot.gif
Chain Rockets: Three powerful energy shots in rapid succession. Siegemode Only
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/3NimbleJoint.gif
Link Swivel: Enables the user to swing the deployed Siege Kit faster, also improves block rate. Siegemode only.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/6SelfDestruct.gif
Overdrive: Powers up the device by means on an overdrive engine.

Natural Skill: Bullet Time: The capability to slow down the target/s perception of time, which in reality is the Device user overclocking to launch multiple attacks from all angles- under this skill Kyla can do three Chain Rocket attacks in the same time it takes to fire one in normal time.


Device Image:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/weapon20070701/iwbo040.jpg

- Archer Form:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gcr047.jpg

- Adventurer Form:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gcr050.jpg


- Ranger Form:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gbr041_1.jpg

- Harrier Form:
http://rfonline.x2game.com/files/Armor20070701/gbr043_1.jpg



http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_06.gif
Dual Shot: fires two fast shots.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_14.gif
Multi-Shot: fires a single arrow, but then that arrow multiplies into a wall of arrows, allowing to hit multiple targets up front.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/long/skill_48.gif
Destruction Shot: fires a charged arrow that can pierce thru multiple enemies in a line, as well as impacting hard on shields.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/class/skill_41.gif
Strike Shot: fires an even more powerful charged arrow that can shatter shields at once, as well as pushing back the target.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/8Return.gif
Echo Arrow Storm: fires off what basically looks like a charged form Multi-shot, but then each arrow that hits a target gives rise to four more arrows, and so on, until the energy imparted dissapates. her most powerful AoE attack
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/cora/4CorrectEye.gif
Correct Eye: A self-improvement skill, allows her to increase her damage, accuracy and range. Stacks with Shooting Soul.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/cora/3PreciseStrike.gif
Shooting Soul: A self-improvement skill, allows her to increase her damage and accuracy. Stacks with Correct Eye.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/14Scamper.gif
Mach Driver: A self improvement skill, increasing her movement speed, body fluidity and jump height for a time period. Can be used with Blink Illusion and Vanquish Illusion for better effects.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/13Divine.gif
Force Break: Uses her device's force capabilites to purge any ally or herself of negative attributes- debuffs, degraders, etc.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/class/skill_21.gif
Vanquish Illusion: This is Rurika's stealth spell. She vanishes at will and then sometimes, she reappears but that image is only that- an image, while the real cloaked archer approaches. Can be used with Blink Illusion and Mach Driver for better effects.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/cora/12BlinkIllusion.gif
Blink Illusion: This is Rurika's special spell. For a short period of time, she can increase her dodge- so much so that she appears to 'blink' away from each shot fired at her. Can be used with Vanquish Illusion and Mach Driver for better effects.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/11SilentAttack.gif
Silent Strike: Basically one of her attacks in a state of Illusion. It is a silent and sure hit attack from any location. Can only be used while using one or both of the Illusion spells.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/9FatalStep.gif
Fatal Strike: Another of Rurika's attack in Illusion state. This is her only melee attack, sneaking up on the enemy, transforming her bow into its now-extinct claw weapon mode and striking it hard, and retreating while the bow reverts. Can only be used while using one or both of the Illusion Spells.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/class/skill_40.gif
Hold Wire: fires off a wire and attempts to hold the enemy in it.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/5GaugeDown.gif
Gauge Break: atttempts to break the target's defensive integrity, or "Defense Gauge" as it is called by using her device's force capabilites. Once successful, the target will have 'paper-thin' armor, and 'porous shielding', thus making it easy to take down- if the target is not dodgy.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/accretia/6SelfDestruct.gif
Overdrive: a Key Device's standard skill that sets it apart from the others. It is basically the execution of an engine, called an 'overdrive engine'. It gathers additional energy and charges it to the device enabling it to do more damage, faster attack and faster response.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/cora/images/cs_meditation.gifhttp://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/12Rebirth.gifhttp://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/images/bellato/15MentalAssault.gif
Merron Enchantments: a set of secret enchantment spells that can improve an arrow's power, speed and accuracy. she usually forges an arrow from one of three seal tattoos that appear on her right shoulder, her right cheek or high up (and i mean really high up) her inner right thigh and uses it, or for combined effect she passes the forged arrow from one seal to another, if more than one appear. And usually when she forges an arrow from her power seal, men look at it with blush- as much as she does display when drawing it.
http://images.mmosite.com/rf/images/guide/skill/bellato/images/bs_returngate.gif
Eternal Arrow Storm: calls upon the archer spirits and helps the archer in battle.


- next update as soon as i can

Natural Skill: Never Miss: Even if your dodge is insane, you will be hit- period. Let's hope your shield holds or you can block well.


Simple update: added skill names and descriptions.

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 03:37
Mai: ...

Intervention is nulled.

Smith: Right now...
Wesson: Going in...

S&W: Is a bad idea... :upset::uhoh::uhoh:

Mai: ...

Daijoubu desu ka, Keroko-neesama?

S&W: ... she went in anyway :eyespin::eyespin:

WHAT IS THIS WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED?!?!?!?!

:bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:

Don't think my Backlog Breaker can break this one :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Keroko
2007-10-28, 03:47
Then heads up because there is more incomming. Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-28, 03:57
I'm too tired today, just came back from helping my dad with his work since 6 AM this morning. Will tackle the backlog later.

NOOOOOOO~!!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

Too many people demanding for it. My resistance is falling apart. :uhoh:

Oh, pumping up the Aces is fine.:nod:
(just be sure not to shaft Hayate on that again...>.>)

I'm thinking on how to improve Hayate, though she remains a tough nut to crack, especially since her powers are difficult at mid-to-close range. Even if I do have a new set of skills for her, she is limited to bombardment and area-of-effect. :(

You have much to learn young padawan of the ways of T3H F0RC3

:nod::nod::nod:

Fall to the Dark side ... :heh:

Sounds delicious :) Add some of these Crack as well :D

:heh:

REPETITION IMPULSE BREAKER!!!!!

Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile
Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile Resistance is Futile

OH SHI-!

Somebody save meeee!

By Royal Decree, we command you to READ NAO!!!!

*kicks PF into deeper hole*

:twitch:

R-royal Decree?!

And it's too dark down here, it's difficult to read! :frustrated:

Round 2 some other day then. :D

Sure. :D

Do read it when you've spare time. :)

:nod:

Darn. I lost all the juice for JenoxKatrina after a bath. And it's shaping up to be much tougher than expected. :heh:

Bath of Purification!

Speaking of which, was there a pic for her? I've grown quite intrested in her cause of Hounds Of Artemis if that's what you call it

Nope, don't have any image yet.

Who wouldn't? :heh: Especially with this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/gohoubi_teaser.jpg


:uhoh:*runs*

:eek:

IMMINENT MOE OVERLOAD!

At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..



Archdevil
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8315/homm5infernodevilav8.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernodevilav8.jpg)

Pit Lord
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2945/homm5infernopitlorddd9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernopitlorddd9.jpg)



Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..



Nightmare

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3603/homm5infernonightmareuo5.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernonightmareuo5.jpg)

Succubus

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3884/imagesio3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.



http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3852/bdragonsmbq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Let chaos reign this day.

:D

HAXX! :frustrated: You filched them off from I-know-where! :p

And of course the obligatory teaser..



“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.



She slit her own wrist?! :twitch:

Impending bondage scene!

*runs*

=======

Note: The new Lieutenant-General for the Ground Forces has been "fabricated", known as Leonidas von Khrull. The inspiration to his name is ... well, nothing fantastic. :rolleyes:

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 04:01
Then heads up because there is more incomming. :D Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

Political matters like these are quite the rarity here, so it's nice to see some behind-the-scenes coverage, even in a supposedly simply matter as what to do to a recently regained territory. Well played I must say :)

And Sakura and Alistina's relationship in, and out of the court is looking very very interesting as well, like Alistina's 'suggestion' :D:heh:

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 04:11
@_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@
MAREN HAS BECOME POSSESSIVE!!!:eek:(:D)
Or maybe jealous :uhoh:

Very interesting!:D
Somehow... Mari reminds me of someone from another anime...
When can we see them?:D
In the next chapter :D

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.
Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT
I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.
Too bad about the first story...
But, oh well, good luck with this new one :heh:

:eek:
I'd like to request a front row seat please :D Preferably with extra fireworks :D
:heh:

*sigh* Another unison device....
At least she's good on the eyes..

*prepares for the onsalught of moe bombs* :p
Really, how many unison devices are there? :heh:

Nice. :nod: Another meido. :D
:nod:
And also Koji's weakness :heh:
*runs*

Edit:

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3619/idctd061320056632112aq6.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idctd061320056632112aq6.jpg)http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9241/idjmb036233032264523lf5.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idjmb036233032264523lf5.jpg)
Oh...nice :D

Stop fooling around and finish your chapter :frustrated::frustrated:
:heh:

NO F-NG WAY!?!?! HOW CAN A FREAKING UNISON DEVICE BE SO HAWT? :love:
She just can :heh:
*runs*

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 04:20
Or maybe jealous :uhoh:

:nod:
And also Koji's weakness :heh:
*runs*





So that's how it's gonna to be... :D

haiz123321
2007-10-28, 04:30
Really, how many unison devices are there? :heh:

In canon i think there's only 2 while in AUs there are 4?

She just can :heh:
*runs*

Hmm.. suspicious

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 04:35
*Yawns and wanders into the mostly empty thread to see a few people just bumming around on couches not doing much*

Slow weekends are slow.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 04:35
In canon i think there's only 2 while in AUs there are 4?



Slightly more :heh:

Let's see... 5 + 1 + 1 + 1 (new) ... I think that's all...

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 04:44
*Yawns and wanders into the mostly empty thread to see a few people just bumming around on couches not doing much*

Slow weekends are slow.

OC is always slow on Weekends :heh:

Weekends drain my Backlog Breaking powers alot, especially with weekly activities and the weekend lulls :heh:

Although for this Sunday, the amount of backlog is considerably EPIC :eyespin:

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 04:46
OC is always slow on Weekends :heh:

Weekends drain my Backlog Breaking powers alot, especially with weekly activities and the weekend lulls :heh:

Although for this Sunday, the amount of backlog is considerably EPIC :eyespin:Still Saturday here, well it was until a few hours ago so that was Friday backlog for me. :p

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 04:56
Still Saturday here, well it was until a few hours ago so that was Friday backlog for me. :p

Gotta love timezone differences :heh::heh::heh:

Still, slow weekends are truly slow... but a good time to brew some new... ideas...

*commences machinations*

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 05:11
Mai: ...

Intervention is nulled.

Smith: Right now...
Wesson: Going in...

S&W: Is a bad idea... :upset::uhoh::uhoh:

Mai: ...

Daijoubu desu ka, Keroko-neesama?

S&W: ... she went in anyway :eyespin::eyespin:

WHAT IS THIS WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED?!?!?!?!

:bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:

Don't think my Backlog Breaker can break this one :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Well this Saturday was unexpectedly lively. :heh:

Then heads up because there is more incomming. :D Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

Alistina was right about the conquered man. Another sharp mind in play here. Sakura would be Kha's UD am I right?

And..

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”


:D:D:D


I'm thinking on how to improve Hayate, though she remains a tough nut to crack, especially since her powers are difficult at mid-to-close range. Even if I do have a new set of skills for her, she is limited to bombardment and area-of-effect. :(


Make her bombardments and AOE even bigger? And I remember Skane's example about using barriers to contain the opponent while she blows a nuke like Diabolic Emission in their faces. :D


Bath of Purification!

I don't want a bath that purifies my ideas and give me writer's block. :sad:


HAXX! :frustrated: You filched them off from I-know-where! :p

Hehe. What better demons to use than those? :D

And they aren't h4xx. Nightmares can travel fast and frighten their enemies, Succubi has chained shots and ranged retaliation, Pit Lords have a guarantee kill with each stack it touches with vorpal blade and Archdevils can teleport. :nod:

Only h4xx part is their numbers are near infinity. :uhoh:


She slit her own wrist?! :twitch:

Impending bondage scene!

*runs*

How would that be bondage when you're bleeding yourself silly? :confused:


=======

Note: The new Lieutenant-General for the Ground Forces has been "fabricated", known as Leonidas von Khrull. The inspiration to his name is ... well, nothing fantastic. :rolleyes:

At least it's not a direct rip-off. Or is it?


:nod:
And also Koji's weakness :heh:
*runs*

Hmm Koji's those type like Allen and Yoh too. Strong and pure-minded. :nod:


Slightly more :heh:

Let's see... 5 + 1 + 1 + 1 (new) ... I think that's all...

One more soon if I can't solve the mess over here.. :uhoh:

OC is always slow on Weekends :heh:

Weekends drain my Backlog Breaking powers alot, especially with weekly activities and the weekend lulls :heh:

Although for this Sunday, the amount of backlog is considerably EPIC :eyespin:

Keroko-War only started late last night so I'm not too sure about the rest of the posts. 5 or 6 pages in a day IS scary though. :upset:

Aaron008R
2007-10-28, 05:21
(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see :)"

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people :heh: Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT :rolleyes: I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright :p"

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck :rolleyes: sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon :p"
Cero: "I know :D"
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first :D"


*********************************



Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"



http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/706/megidramongn6.jpghttp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4254/armed10jv7.jpg



Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way :uhoh:"



*********************************



Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"




http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1416/uofyg0.jpghttp://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8b/SkullSatamon.jpg



Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"




(In the meanwhile)


Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like :nod: ?"

Now summons with more flirting! :twitch:

Hey. I know I havn't been here in a while but I'ma give up on the Story. But I will still be coming cause I've decided to make a personal manga~! It isn't the best drawings but its alright. I've only got 2 pages done cause I just started.
Here is what its about.
Ok. Well Basicly The main people have to go to earth. Some more jewel seeds are appearing. (and some other worlds) but mainly earth. The story mailny based on Caro,Erio, Lutecia. Its a year later after Strikers so you know. here is list who's going and what they do on earth, etc. Also Arisa and Suzuka buy them their house. It a 5 Bedroom house. a huge bath and Big kitchen.
Nanoha- Mainly goes to work at her parent's Cafe but on days off searched for jewel seeds. All over Fate
Vivio- Homeschooled. Usaully stay with Nanoha-mama at work. She now knows how to use the Basic barriers and thats it.
Fate- Goes search for Jewel seeds. But once and while works with Nanoha at the Cafe.
Hayate- Opened a Cosplay Cafe. When not working Making everyone else wear cosplay. lol. Cooks dinner for everyone.
Signum- Working at the Cafe. Goes with Fate sometimes.
Vita- Mainly the Cafe but when off work looking for jewel seeds.
Shamal- Work's At Caro, Erio, Lutecia's school as the Nurse.
Zafria- At home on gaurd.
Caro- Goes to middle School. After school Goes with Fate To get Jewel seeds or goes with her when she's working at the cafe. On sunday's goes work at Hayate's cafe. Always getting undressed in public somehow (Lutecia and Erio's fault.) Or Erio or Lutecia Hitting on her.
Erio- Always tryin' to get caro. he LOVES her. Fights for caro with Lutecia. Goes to middle school. Also goes with Fate to get jewel seeds. On his day off he follows Caro around even more.
Lutecia- She also LOVES caro. Also tryin to get Caro. Fight with Erio for Caro. Goes to middle school. Follows Caro on missions. Is able to "do things" more with Caro since shes a girl so you know she gets to go in to the bathroom with her, bath, etc.
Subaru- Goes to Nanoha's old high school. Gets out Early to search for Jewel seeds. Also she half of a half of half Teases Teana (sexually)
Teana- Same as Subaru. Sometimes falls for Subaru's Tricks.
Ginga- Works at Subaru's and Teana's High School As the Nurse. She's a Dojikko
Shari- Came along since she's Fate's assitant. Also for up-dating devices, fixing, etc.
Rein- In Fullsize mode when she goes out. Also Fixes, up-dates devices, etc. When in fullsize mode she works at Hayate's Cafe. Loves cosplay too.

now here

Room 1 - Fate, Nanoha, Vivio
Room 2 - Hayate, Vita, Signum, Rein
Room 3 - Shamal, Zafria, Shari
Room 4 - Subaru, Teana, Ginga
Room 5 - Caro, Erio, Lutecia
I wonder what will happen to caro at night. Heehee.
This "half doujin thing" is going to be a bit H (might end up being all H =.=). I'm learning the way of Doujinshi =^= . My friend is going to help with story. Since he is all H. And he's not going to give me money for ideas. I must get use to making up my own pervy ideas TT.TT
I'll scan the first 2 pages tomorrow. Tell me if its good and what I needa work on.
*goes back to drawing*
bye.

Aw...:( Anyway, do your best for your projct!:D

So who's gonna be Hector and Achilles? :uhoh:




At the foot of Mt. Fuji..

Pentagram summoning circles dot the entirety mountain's surroundings areas, turning the earth into a sea of hellfire.

Demonic cries and howls filled the air as the summoning is complete, that which rises forth are the monstrosities spawned by Urgash, the primordial Dragon of Chaos.

First to make their presence known are the mightiest creatures know as the archdevils and pit lords..



Archdevil
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8315/homm5infernodevilav8.th.jpg (http://img136.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernodevilav8.jpg)

Pit Lord
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2945/homm5infernopitlorddd9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernopitlorddd9.jpg)



Next are the Nightmares and Succubi..



Nightmare

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3603/homm5infernonightmareuo5.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=homm5infernonightmareuo5.jpg)

Succubus

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3884/imagesio3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



A final addition is present, as a single black dragon emerges from within the hordes of demons covering the plane now.



http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3852/bdragonsmbq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Let chaos reign this day.

:D


And of course the obligatory teaser..



“I’ll reveal something to you. I can sense the dark emotions that reside within human minds. And what I have been getting from you has been very very interesting.”

~~~~~~

“Let’s take this a step further shall we?” Katrina materialized a small dagger from her side and proceeded to slit her wrist in one smooth stroke.



Now even more summons and a teaser! @_@

:twitch: You dont want Fate all tied up and... *ahem* Who are you and what have you done with Lowe-aniki?!? :frustrated:

I must say you have quite the amount of guts to go about shouting that you want to get Fate tied up so much...... -_-; Wait till Kha arrives...:uhoh:

:nono: Lowe-aniki, how could you blame a little kid?!

Caro: Sou yo! Erio-kun would never do something like that!

Erio: :nod:

:heh::heh::heh:

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though. :heh:

Nagisa actually scores as much as Kyou for me.:p If I were to rank the girls to how interesting I find them right now...

1) Kotomi = Most MOE~ out of the lot right now.:love:
2) Ryou = How can they leave her out as just a support character? @_@ :frustrated:
3) Tomoyo = Maybe she'll get a higher ranking when I see more. *coughderederecough*
4) Nagisa/Kyou = I know it's weird for others.:heh: But I find Nagisa to be quite endearing.:heh: Kyou's scenes are also fun to watch.:D
5) Fuko = Don't kill me!!! @_@ *runs*

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)

I see.:D You can just use the same link to my OC list.:) Just add a new section called A Glimpse into the Past: Before MSLNanoha and add the name Almaria Corvette under it. Thanks! :D

:eek: Yes! More Ryou in the anime please!! :D

:nod:

By the way, thanks for recommending me Da Capo II and Kimikiss.:D They're quite fun as well.:D Especially the latter.:D:D:D

Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3619/idctd061320056632112aq6.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idctd061320056632112aq6.jpg)http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9241/idjmb036233032264523lf5.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idjmb036233032264523lf5.jpg)

Heeehh... Wizard Knight and Knight classes... Interesting...:D

Tycho: The man raises a good point, when will the Captain figure out what's going on?

keroko-kun: She'll most likely snap from the stress in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Keroko-chan: *from the destoyer's hideout as Jeno holds her hands* IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Keroko-kun: Duck.

Wes: Wha-

VHOOM!

Nanoha: *Nods as a mushroom shaped cloud rises from the remains of the hideout* As expected of my sister.

Finally.:heh:

Nagisa scores zero points with me. :heh:

:heh::heh::heh:

*When the smoke and haze clears*

Executioner: <Absolute>

*Jeno stood waving the dust away, protected by his dimensional barrier*

Executioner: <Barrier release in 2 seconds, remaining uses for today down to three.>

Jeno: "THAT IS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL! Now I can't help being attracted to you :blush: "


*Only Lance, Kai'malas and Suiyoku had set up barriers of their own*


Cero: @_@
Solakar: @_@
Tereino: @_@



So much for harmless courtship...:heh:

Then heads up because there is more incomming. :D Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

Oooh... nice political scenario.:D The atmosphere is conveyed quite well. And the interactions between Sakura and Alistina is interesting.:D

Nice scenario.:D

The part with...

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”


Was GOLDEN!:D:D:D

Too many people demanding for it. My resistance is falling apart. :uhoh:

Watch it!:frustrated: What about my 'just fanservice' policy?!:frustrated::frustrated: Don't take it too far!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

NUUUUUUUUUU~!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated: :frustrated:

I'm thinking on how to improve Hayate, though she remains a tough nut to crack, especially since her powers are difficult at mid-to-close range. Even if I do have a new set of skills for her, she is limited to bombardment and area-of-effect. :(

Oh, don't worry. I'm not really expecting her to be suddenly a much better melee combatant as of now.:heh: She should still have the same role in combat. What I'm asking is that she gets more competence in defending herself/surviving in a one-to-one situation and planning in general.:heh: For one, I just don't want her to be the 'Helpless Damsel in Distress at Duels' type of character any longer.:mad: And of course, lest shaft. =\

I actually have some ideas to be used for RevivalS. I guess maybe I can PM you them once I get them clear. She's still just as much as a klutz in melee, but no longer helpless. Involves Unison. Hopefully, it might help you in thinking through some ideas.:)

Here are some ideas from the ever-reliable Skane!:D:D:D

Speaking of which... now that Vita and Signum has Unisoned, Hayate better damn well be the next one. After all the pre-series promotion, the pre-season manga chapters, etc... I feel very cheated out of my Hayate character development.

After all the mud-dragging, the character assassination, the grotesque lack of screentime, the lamentable absence of real character development, etc... I can still find it in my heart to forgive them if they can at least give me some "fanservice" in the form of Hayate PROVING why she is ranked SS PRIOR to Unison...

I find it very frustrating on how they are making her such a lame duck when she has one of the most interesting background history, has the mojo of Ancient Belka, is part Lost Logia due to complete fusion with the Tome of the Night Sky, etc...

I am not buying the "She's Arty, Can't Melee" spin. She is not actually using shells here, but MAGIC. What Hayate has is a humongous amount of Ancient Belka "mana". Mana which can be converted into a variety of spells.

Too big a pool of mana for finesse in melee? SCREW FINESSE. Use that power to create a Ground-Zero spell that explodes around you. Diabolic Emission is a grand example of what can be done, especially if you recall Reinforce's usage of it in A's. Nanoha and Fate had to flee for their lives from it and they were ranked AAA at that time. Quattro and Dieci were not exactly eager to tank it out either in StrikerS, so we know it can be used as a viable "barrier defence". This is merely one example, mind you. Close-quarter combat does not necessarily mean blades and fists.

"But what about the collateral damage?"

Oh good gravy... Hayate CAN FLY! Unless Quattro starts chucking innocents at Hayate (which amuses me greatly), collateral damage will not be an issue. Hayate can attack from far, FAR away; so they can afford to allocate her some free airspace without overlapping the combat zones of the frontliners.

HECK, I even had a spell idea where Hayate modifies Bloody Dagger into a Bloody Barrier (which has the bonus of sounding like a frustrated swear when said by the enemy) where there are multiple mass rotations of magical daggers/blades around her. With the amount of magical energy she can pump out, an offensive defensive barrier should be of little problem for her.

Or Hell, even a giant iceberg would do... Hurling a few dozen of those should give slight pause to even the most ardent of melee fighters.

I mean seriously... when your Unison Device has better close-combat skills than the Meister who created it... something went wrong with the plot somewhere.
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Cheers.

She slit her own wrist?! :twitch:

Impending bondage scene!

*runs*

How does slitting ones wrist lead to a bondage scene?:heh:

Or maybe jealous :uhoh:

Scarlet?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:



And yes, OC Thread-tan thrives on weekends...:heh:

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 05:22
Keroko-War only started late last night so I'm not too sure about the rest of the posts. 5 or 6 pages in a day IS scary though. :upset:I started ranting about science, politics, and the military for awhile so that helped a bit. :p

Although truth be told as far as the Keroko-War... [Hippy]I don’t feel like fighting anymore man… the vibe is like totally not there… let’s just chill. [Hippy] *sprawls out on the couch to watch some TV*

PhoenixFlare
2007-10-28, 06:44
Well this Saturday was unexpectedly lively. :heh:

It was? Maybe it's just me being tired as crap. :uhoh:

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”


:D:D:D

SECONDED! :D

Make her bombardments and AOE even bigger? And I remember Skane's example about using barriers to contain the opponent while she blows a nuke like Diabolic Emission in their faces. :D

Possible, but I've already given her a space-distorting nuke and a massive freezing spell that makes Eternal Coffin pale by comparison. These two require unison, of course. :p

I don't want a bath that purifies my ideas and give me writer's block. :sad:

You should get a Insta-Creativity Shampoo. Scrub your scalp with it, and lo and behold, a flood of ideas (both straight and twisted) that will surely smash through the writer's block. I don't have any idea where to buy it, though. :p

And they aren't h4xx. Nightmares can travel fast and frighten their enemies, Succubi has chained shots and ranged retaliation, Pit Lords have a guarantee kill with each stack it touches with vorpal blade and Archdevils can teleport. :nod:

Only h4xx part is their numbers are near infinity. :uhoh:

Pit Lords are incredibly HAXX with Meteor Showers, one of the strongest spells available in the game. Of course, I'm not complaining when I'm using Inferno. :D

How would that be bondage when you're bleeding yourself silly? :confused:

According to some psychologists, blood can be used to increase the euphoric sense when doing that (you get what I mean). Of course, bleeding to death is not a viable option. :heh:

At least it's not a direct rip-off. Or is it?

It isn't direct, but it is a rip-off nonetheless. :uhoh:

Watch it!:frustrated: What about my 'just fanservice' policy?!:frustrated::frustrated: Don't take it too far!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

NUUUUUUUUUU~!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated: :frustrated:

I'm torn between two sides. SOMEBODY HELP MEEE!

Oh, don't worry. I'm not really expecting her to be suddenly a much better melee combatant as of now.:heh: She should still have the same role in combat. What I'm asking is that she gets more competence in defending herself/surviving in a one-to-one situation and planning in general.:heh: For one, I just don't want her to be the 'Helpless Damsel in Distress at Duels' type of character any longer.:mad: And of course, lest shaft. =\

I actually have some ideas to be used for RevivalS. I guess maybe I can PM you them once I get them clear. She's still just as much as a klutz in melee, but no longer helpless. Involves Unison. Hopefully, it might help you in thinking through some ideas.:)

Here are some ideas from the ever-reliable Skane!:D:D:D

I do have my own ideas. Since the Tome of the Night Sky is a documentation of spells and information, there must be some "weapons" that can be drawn from it. Schwertkreuz aside for long-range bombardments, maybe she can draw some melee weapons from it. Or even augment Schwertkreuz with some sort of magic to make it usable at close range.

Prior to the final battle, she's just going to drop the nukes on the enemies.

That said, she's going against Sharazad at the finale. NUKES AHOY!



Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

:eek:

"Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords"?! Sounds EPIC! :heh:

And Marience is just the perfect support for Colt. :D

well, here's goes nothing for my two new characters...
Name: Kazekawa Kaori
Nickname: Sun Shadow
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birthday: Unknown
Occupation/s: Fugitive Mage turned Researcher, Squad Leader
Rankings: Unranked, TSAB estimation: AA rank
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 140 lbs
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown hair in a single braid down the back.
Magic style: Refined Neo-Belka (Modified Pentagon Formation)
Magic Color: Chrome Black
Usual wear: Red bodysuit(feet, hands and everything up to the neck), White sneaker-ish hiking boots
Specialization: Melee to Mid-range Attacker
Devices: Armed Device Eclipse Cross

Profile: A peerless warrior who escaped into obscurity while avoiding her former organization, Kaori hid herself away in research labs of Aurion Dauer, finding a way to prevent her organization's machinations from taking form: a battle armor Intelligent Device that would absorb almost everything on mere touch, no matter the composition.

Personality: Not a talker, Kaori gets straight to the point and touches on all the details on the way. Some could say that she's cold, but she does have soft side for those who actually enter her inner circle. Her former Armed Device, Solar Cross, willingly transfered to her pupil, Tatsutama Takeshi, after he succeeded in repairing it, which was not an easy task, earning Takeshi her respect as well as her hidden past.

Barrier Jacket: As if a compliment to her boots, white gauntlets, leg guards, and chest plate are formed up on her body. However, the barrier jacket is then supplemented by the boosted capabilities of the device.

Device: Eclipse Cross, like its elder brother device Solar Cross, is a full body kirin-themed armor, completely black with gold trim and a red visor. On the right horn of the helmet peice, a tattered peice of cloth is tied around as if a vow. In addition to this, Kaori integrated her old weapon, a high tech triple lance, into the system, maintaining the capability of being used even if the barrier jacket alone is activated while Eclipse Cross maintained standby. Another capability is Eclipse Cross' ability to purge the armor in the form of an energy shockwave, reverting to its standby form of a Pendant with a crystal shard that emits a dark light.

Fighting Style: Kaori's fighting style, compared to Takeshi, is fast, precise and technical, being able to use a variety of fighting styles in addition to her triple lance to fend off multiple targets in a manner like a three-sectioned nunchuck.

Special Moves>

Ethereal Mirage: Moving so quickly that even human eye cannot track, Kaori's speed generates afterimages that easily confuse the enemy. This can be done with or without Eclipse Cross active.

Spinning Thunderbolt: The retracting cable used in the triple lance makes it ideal for long range strikes. Setting the internal chargers to overdrive, Kaori can sling one section of the triple lance at high speeds for a clubbing attack from the side or even a straight forward gut bruiser. Used in conjuntion with Ethereal Mirage, Kaori has proven to be a formidable warrior.

Name: Tatsutama Takeshi
Nickname: Sun Flare
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birthday: Unknown
Occupation/s: Civilian turned TSAB solo enforcer
Rankings: Unscalable, TSAB unofficial estimation: S rank
Height: 5'11'
Weight: 145 lbs.
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Tousled Black
Magic style: Refined Neo-Belka Hybrid (Pentagon Formation)
Magic Color: Pale Yellowish White
Usual wear: Black T-Shirt, Blue denim vest, Blue Jeans. Gloves adorn both hands. Red Bandana across forehead.
Specialization: Melee to Mid-range Attacker
Devices: Armed Device Solar Cross

Profile: A civilian collaborator who served as a gofer for Aurion Dauer, he found Kaori heavily wounded and bleeding at the lab's front door during one arrival of parts shipments, getting her inside to the infirmary before coming back out to finish unloading packages, only to run afoul of Kaori's Search and Kill party, his defiance against the leader earning him a life threatening wound in the chest. As the search party left, Takeshi mustered the strength to page Aurion, who found him almost bleeding to death and immediately transferred him into the infirmary.

Personality: A little brash but very caring, Takeshi was handpicked by Aurion for his honesty and ability to get things done, even if they were unorthodox methods, especially in TSAB views. Under Aurion's half work, half tutelage, Takeshi picked up some of Aurion's engineering knowledge. which he put to use when Kaori appeared in his life. Under Kaori's guidance, his technical knowledge would grow in addition to learning Kaori's fighting style.

Barrier Jacket: Similar to Kaori's barrier jacket, but instead a black bodysuit under all the white armor guards as well as a ear piece used for a direct link to Kaori's comm.

Device: Solar Cross, A pure white Kirin-themed Armor with similar capabilities as Eclipse Cross, despite being the elder of the two devices. Formerly Kaori's device, Takeshi took it upon himself to repair it after the assault from Kaori's pursuers had left it damaged and inactive. After finishing repairs and upgrades, Solar Cross requested transfer of ownership from Kaori to Takeshi. Appearance-wise, it is slightly more touched up on details. However, the upgrades made to it allowed for heavier protection at a very slight loss of speed, fitting Takeshi's fighting style. Similar to Eclipse Cross, Solar Cross was retrofitted with the armor purge ability after the initial repair, reverting to a pendant with a crystal shard glowing a iridescent rainbow. In addition, Kaori fashioned a gauntlet aptly named Messiah Fist for Takeshi, allowing him the ability to function as a solo enforcer if the time came. Unknown to Takeshi, Solar Cross internally devised a full drive mode, which turns the armor golden.

Fighting Style: Takeshi's fighting style, while taught by Kaori, is still very much rough around the edges. However, instead of Kaori's speed, Takeshi's preference is power, which is heavily reflected in his battling.

Special Moves:

Messiah Fist: The gauntlet itself contains 4 grappling hooks located in the knuckle portion, which can be used for restraining or latching. The composition itself is that of a specialized bio-alloy of sorts, which Kaori is one of the few who know how to actually work with the material, if not the only one. The resulting item had durability on par with Kaori's Triple Lance, if not better, capable of easily punching through at least 5 inches of steel.

Shining Knuckle: Concentrating all his magic and energy into the Messiah Fist, Takeshi can unleash a barrage of energy punches from the gauntlet, the punches taking the form of the gauntlet's slightly demonic motif.

Solar Break: Channeling everything he has into the Messiah Fist, Takeshi pulls out this move as a last resort if all else fails, undergoing a suicide rush to ram his overcharged gauntlet into the enemy for a massive impact detonation with a resulting energy pillar.


...Yep messy characters with dark pasts they are...

The device Kaori's organization is making sounds scary. :upset:

And these two really seem to have a complicated past. If I'm not mistaken, Kaori defected from her organization to do what she has to do, no?






Name: Suiyoku

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 168
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: blue
Eye Color: blue

Mage Rank: Est S-
Magic Potential: Est 1.4 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: blue
Favored Element: Water/Frost

Device Name: Stormcrest
Device Appearance:



The blue version of this sword...

http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/WoWScrnShot_061605_192236%202.JPG

Like what this guy is using...

http://www.wowhead.com/images/screenshots/resized/30582.jpg




Personlity: Cold and rude and prideful, have no interests in 'stupid' people. Specializes in water elements... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals. Gets annoyed easily by noisy things.






Name: Solakar

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 15
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Orange

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.2 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Orange
Favored Element: Fire

Device Name: Ashbringer
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/ashbringer.jpg


Others:

Battle-crazy and hotblooded and vulgar.Loves a challenge.

Specializes in fire element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

Was a former Flame Haze, recently upgraded Ashbringer for the cartridge system.






Name: Kai'malas

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 17
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 167
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: light blue

Mage Rank: Est AAA+
Magic Potential: Est 1.35 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Green
Favored Element: Wind

Device Name: Skywraith
Device Appearance:


http://wow.allakhazam.com/images/fashion/Manslayeraq.JPG


Others:

Polite, well mannered, and soft spoken. The only one that Suiyoku considered a friend.

Specializes in Wind element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The 'big brother' of the 4 of them, is responisble for breaking up fights between Suiyoku and Solakar.





Name: Tereino

Sex: Male
Age: Physically 14
Homeworld: Unknown
Relatives: None
Occupation/Rank: Destroyer

Height: 165
Weight: 67kg
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown

Mage Rank: Est AAA
Magic Potential: Est 1.195 million
Magic Type: Midchilda
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Favored Element: Earth

Device Name: Duskriser
Device Appearance:


http://i.thottbot.com/ss/s/361.jpg


Others:

Loud and cheerful, Solakar's partner in crime.

Specializes in Earth element spells... To the point of immunity, could also summon elementals.

The youngest among the four, gets very nervous around the more intimidating Destroyers.





P.S - I hope the image would show :heh:

Elemental masters, with WoW reference! ;)

Solakar's stampede looks just as painful as his command of fire magic. :heh:

*runs*

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)

I'll post the profiles after the entire story is complete, so would it be all right to give you the links then?

Then heads up because there is more incomming. :D Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”

Alistina is one sharp girl! I love her way of dealing with political misfits like Beckert. :love:

Guess there's more than meets the eye for the lady. And the sentence of the day is ... “Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.” :D

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Progress Report:
Chapter Four
Status: 20% (Yep, it's going very slowly.)
ETA: Two weeks
Bluecheese Indicator: Blue (for absolute)
Current Word Count: 4000.

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 06:47
Well
I don't want a bath that purifies my ideas and give me writer's block. :sad:


A hot spring then?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


How would that be bondage when you're bleeding yourself silly? :confused:


He's confusing bondage with sadomasochism :heh:


Keroko-War only started late last night so I'm not too sure about the rest of the posts. 5 or 6 pages in a day IS scary though. :upset:

Yup, especially with supercharged BLUECHEESIUM posts :upset:

Although the page run today wasn't anything to talk about, the contents are :eek::uhoh:

Now summons with more flirting! :twitch:


...

Suddenly the idea of summoning the THE Host Club comes to mind for some reason :heh:

I must say you have quite the amount of guts to go about shouting that you want to get Fate tied up so much...... -_-; Wait till Kha arrives...:uhoh:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Yes, THAT

either that, or Kha's the one doing the tying...

Watch it!:frustrated: What about my 'just fanservice' policy?!:frustrated::frustrated: Don't take it too far!!!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

NUUUUUUUUUU~!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated: :frustrated:

You had a "just fanservice" policy? :heh:


And yes, OC Thread-tan thrives on weekends...:heh:

First Backlog-tan... now OC-tan? :twitch::eyespin:

Wonder what she'd look like :heh:

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 06:53
First Backlog-tan... now OC-tan? :twitch::eyespin:

Wonder what she'd look like :heh: A Frankenstein monster of 20 different clichéd creatures slammed together into a form that's only vaguely human and utterly nausea inducing most likely... :p

Aaron008R
2007-10-28, 06:57
I'm torn between two sides. SOMEBODY HELP MEEE!

:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated::frustrated::e yespin:

I do have my own ideas. Since the Tome of the Night Sky is a documentation of spells and information, there must be some "weapons" that can be drawn from it. Schwertkreuz aside for long-range bombardments, maybe she can draw some melee weapons from it. Or even augment Schwertkreuz with some sort of magic to make it usable at close range.

There was one spell Rein1 used in A's. I think it was Schwarzes Gekung (?). It involved her charging her fist with lots of dark energy and smashing everything in melee range. I believe that would work well with Schwertkreuz.:)

Prior to the final battle, she's just going to drop the nukes on the enemies.

That said, she's going against Sharazad at the finale. NUKES AHOY!

No complaints from me.:D

Progress Report:
Chapter Four
Status: 20% (Yep, it's going very slowly.)
ETA: Two weeks
Bluecheese Indicator: Blue (for absolute)
Current Word Count: 4000.

Two weeks or two days?:D:heh:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Yes, THAT

either that, or Kha's the one doing the tying...

Hmm...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

You had a "just fanservice" policy? :heh:

It means modest fanservice, not the real thing!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:
By the way PF is talking, I'm getting nervous aready!:frustrated::heh::eyespin:

First Backlog-tan... now OC-tan? :twitch::eyespin:

Wonder what she'd look like :heh:

I'd expect her to be quite large... as in GIANT?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 07:00
It was? Maybe it's just me being tired as crap. :uhoh:

Lively that posts were growing at super fast rates. :heh:


Possible, but I've already given her a space-distorting nuke and a massive freezing spell that makes Eternal Coffin pale by comparison. These two require unison, of course. :p

Space-distorting? Sounds like smaller version of the dimensional dislocation that were thrown around S1. :hmm: In any case, it sounds uber-powerful for sure.

Hayate needs unison because it's cheaper than getting glasses. :joke:


You should get a Insta-Creativity Shampoo. Scrub your scalp with it, and lo and behold, a flood of ideas (both straight and twisted) that will surely smash through the writer's block. I don't have any idea where to buy it, though. :p

No need no need. Just give me a sample of the bluecheese juice from your brains. :D


Pit Lords are incredibly HAXX with Meteor Showers, one of the strongest spells available in the game. Of course, I'm not complaining when I'm using Inferno. :D


Inferno and Demon Lords of Chaos for the win! :D


According to some psychologists, blood can be used to increase the euphoric sense when doing that (you get what I mean). Of course, bleeding to death is not a viable option. :heh:

Oh. Thats new. Kind of like those suffocation techniques too. :uhoh:



I'm torn between two sides. SOMEBODY HELP MEEE!

Give in to your desires

:D



I do have my own ideas. Since the Tome of the Night Sky is a documentation of spells and information, there must be some "weapons" that can be drawn from it. Schwertkreuz aside for long-range bombardments, maybe she can draw some melee weapons from it. Or even augment Schwertkreuz with some sort of magic to make it usable at close range.

Prior to the final battle, she's just going to drop the nukes on the enemies.

That said, she's going against Sharazad at the finale. NUKES AHOY!


:nod:

Now that's going to be a battle of titanic nuking proportions. :eek:


Guess there's more than meets the eye for the lady. And the sentence of the day is ... “Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.” :D

Which came from Chaos who jacked Keroko-chan off to Mt. Fuji. :D


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Progress Report:
Chapter Four
Status: 20% (Yep, it's going very slowly.)
ETA: Two weeks
Bluecheese Indicator: Blue (for absolute)
Current Word Count: 4000.

Holy Sh- :eek:

4000 words at 20%? :eek::eek::eek:

20k words chapter next? :eyespin:

This is beyond critical levels of bluecheese. :eyespin:

A hot spring then?

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

No thanks. For now at least. :heh:


Yup, especially with supercharged BLUECHEESIUM posts :upset:

Although the page run today wasn't anything to talk about, the contents are :eek::uhoh:

:nod:


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Yes, THAT

either that, or Kha's the one doing the tying...

Probably.. :uhoh:

wander how did he convince her though..or maybe she was the one who requested..


There was one spell Rein1 used in A's. I think it was Schwarzes Gekung (?). It involved her charging her fist with lots of dark energy and smashing everything in melee range. I believe that would work well with Schwertkreuz.:)


Is that Black Impact?


I'd expect her to be quite large... as in GIANT?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

And growing. :uhoh:

A Frankenstein monster of 20 different clichéd creatures slammed together into a form that's only vaguely human and utterly nausea inducing most likely... :p

:hmm:

I think it will be safe to nickname her Saya-chan. :heh::uhoh:

Then again, she's probably disfigured from all the backlog weapons we been throwing at her. :p

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 07:03
A Frankenstein monster of 20 different clichéd creatures slammed together into a form that's only vaguely human and utterly nausea inducing most likely... :p

I'd expect her to be quite large... as in GIANT?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Hmm...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:


You know it to be possible :uhoh:

It means modest fanservice, not the real thing!:frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:
By the way PF is talking, I'm getting nervous aready!:frustrated::heh::eyespin:

Aaah sou ka :heh: Give him a chance though, PF's writing skills are top-notch.

His fanservice potential has yet to be revealed though :uhoh:

Hayate needs unison because it's cheaper than getting glasses. :joke:


Meganekko Hayate?!?!?!?! :eek::eek::eek:

WANT


Probably.. :uhoh:

wander how did he convince her though..or maybe she was the one who requested..


:eyespin::eyespin::uhoh:


:hmm:

I think it will be safe to nickname her Saya-chan. :heh::uhoh:

Then again, she's probably disfigured from all the backlog weapons we been throwing at her. :p

HOLY SHIT

:eyespin::eyespin:

Aaron008R
2007-10-28, 07:11
Possible, but I've already given her a space-distorting nuke and a massive freezing spell that makes Eternal Coffin pale by comparison. These two require unison, of course. :p

Nice.:D

Holy Sh- :eek:

4000 words at 20%? :eek::eek::eek:

20k words chapter next? :eyespin:

This is beyond critical levels of bluecheese. :eyespin:

When it comes, it's gonna be an immensely large buffet of incredibly delectable blue cheese.

Though the word count is :twitch::twitch::twitch: indeed.:heh:

Probably.. :uhoh:

wander how did he convince her though..or maybe she was the one who requested..

:hmm:
Going by how Kha portrays Fate in his scenarios...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
(looks apprehensively at Kha >_> <_<)

Is that Black Impact?

Ah! Is that the trans? I don't have the subs so I can't confirm.:heh: Thanks.:D

:hmm:

I think it will be safe to nickname her Saya-chan.

Then again, she's probably disfigured from all the backlog weapons we been throwing at her. :p

:eek:
CHOUGINGA SAYA-CHAN?!?! :eek:

You know it to be possible :uhoh:

Yeah...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Aaah sou ka :heh: Give him a chance though, PF's writing skills are top-notch.

His fanservice potential has yet to be revealed though :uhoh:

O-okay...:heh::uhoh::heh:

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 07:16
:hmm:
Going by how Kha portrays Fate in his scenarios...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
(looks apprehensively at Kha >_> <_<)


>_> <_< Yeah...


:eek:
CHOUGINGA SAYA-CHAN?!?! :eek:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

*bops head on wall*

*wakes up*

*sees giant beautiful girl*

YEEEEEEEEESSSS!!!!!! :love:

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 07:18
Slightly more :heh:

Let's see... 5 + 1 + 1 + 1 (new) ... I think that's all...
I see :heh:
There's a few of them around :heh:

Hmm Koji's those type like Allen and Yoh too. Strong and pure-minded. :nod:
Pretty much :heh:

Scarlet?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
Uh...no :heh:

And yes, OC Thread-tan thrives on weekends...:heh:
Hmm.... OC-tan, eh?
*imagines*
kawaii~....:rolleyes:

:eek:

"Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords"?! Sounds EPIC! :heh:

And Marience is just the perfect support for Colt. :D
She sure is :D

First Backlog-tan... now OC-tan? :twitch::eyespin:

Wonder what she'd look like :heh:
dakara! kawaii yo!

So, why not make a Ion Canon-tan too?
*imagines loli with a huge beam cannon* :heh::heh:

I'd expect her to be quite large... as in GIANT?:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
Yeah...OC-tan would have to be the tallest :heh:
*runs*

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 07:26
Talk about server problems :heh:

IHmm.... OC-tan, eh?
*imagines*
kawaii~....:rolleyes:


I wonder what you're seeing Master...

:thinker:

Draw he for us please? :D


dakara! kawaii yo!

So, why not make a Ion Canon-tan too?
*imagines loli with a huge beam cannon* :heh::heh:


*points to Keroko-chan*

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 07:33
Aaah sou ka :heh: Give him a chance though, PF's writing skills are top-notch.

His fanservice potential has yet to be revealed though :uhoh:


Jack of all trades after all. :nod:



When it comes, it's gonna be an immensely large buffet of incredibly delectable blue cheese.

Though the word count is :twitch::twitch::twitch: indeed.:heh:

Incoming stomachache. :heh:


:hmm:
Going by how Kha portrays Fate in his scenarios...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
(looks apprehensively at Kha >_> <_<)

Hmm. How does he portray her? :uhoh:



Ah! Is that the trans? I don't have the subs so I can't confirm.:heh: Thanks.:D


That's probably it. She uses no other melee spell.

Then again, rewatching that part where Rein Eins broke Nanoha's shield before she used Black Impact was another indicator of her power. Especially to break the White Devil's monstrous defence in one go. :uhoh:



HOLY SHIT

:eyespin::eyespin:

:eek:
CHOUGINGA SAYA-CHAN?!?! :eek:



NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

*bops head on wall*

*wakes up*

*sees giant beautiful girl*

YEEEEEEEEESSSS!!!!!! :love:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:


"Saya-chan, whats that green Jell-O you have in your hands? Is it tasty?"


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Liingo
2007-10-28, 07:34
Then heads up because there is more incomming. Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”
Nice stuff :D Good change up from the things we get normally.

Although it looks like you've been taking lessons from Chaos in hole digging :p :heh: :joke:

Progress Report:
Chapter Four
Status: 20% (Yep, it's going very slowly.)
ETA: Two weeks
Bluecheese Indicator: Blue (for absolute)
Current Word Count: 4000.
:eek:

20k word chapter :eek: :eek: This I've got to see...

First Backlog-tan... now OC-tan? :twitch::eyespin:

Wonder what she'd look like :heh:

A Frankenstein monster of 20 different clichéd creatures slammed together into a form that's only vaguely human and utterly nausea inducing most likely... :p


I think it will be safe to nickname her Saya-chan. :heh::uhoh:

Then again, she's probably disfigured from all the backlog weapons we been throwing at her. :p
:heh: This place never ceases to crack me up :D

dakara! kawaii yo!

So, why not make a Ion Canon-tan too?
*imagines loli with a huge beam cannon* :heh::heh:

Yeah...OC-tan would have to be the tallest :heh:
*runs*

*points to Keroko-chan*

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
But that's Ion-Cannon-tan :D We want Ion-Canon-Tan :D :D :D :D

Keroko
2007-10-28, 07:41
But that's Ion-Cannon-tan :D We want Ion-Canon-Tan :D :D :D :D

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3

Nightengale
2007-10-28, 07:47
Ooh, dramatic setting.

*fumes at the fact that ToA is not available in Europe*

A pity. I personally think that ToA is the best PS2 RPG of 2006. It has almost every element that makes up a good story (( there's some weak characters, but otherwise, even NPCs are well-fleshed )) and even if rough, the battle system was nice to play with.

Not to mention Luke's (( main character )) character development was awesome.


Yeah, I sometimes imagine how it would be if MSLNanoha became a MMORPG
I have a few ideas on it too :heh:
And now with StrikerS, there so much it could be done :D


We can talk about this later, because now I'm going to introduce these characters! :D


Name: Colt (short for Colthearts)
Age: 19
Height: 174cm
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Auburn
Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Color: Midnight Blue
Homeworld: North Mid-Childa
Magic Style: Ancient Belka
Fighting Style: Melee
Seiyuu: Kanna Nobutoshi (like Lancer of Fate/Stay Night)

Personality: A good person all-around, headstrong and honest.

Device:
Crusader: An Armed Device-type that in sealed form it takes the shape of a necklace with a small shield over a sword.
This device consists of a sword and shield that may change themselves to fit the Colt's needs.
The shield can become from a small buckler to a large tower shield, depending on the area that needs to be protected.
Also, the sword can be sheathed into the shield so Colt can have a free hand.

Barrier Jacket:
Check the picture....when it's done :heh:


Story:
Never having known his parents, 'Colt', as he calls himself by, lived in an orphanage until he was old enough to escape.
From stealing to swindling, he did everything to survive, not trusting anyone or anything.
That is, until he met a Knight from the Saint Church, who took him under his wing and raised him.
When he was adopted, his name became Colthearts, but he likes to be called Colt.

After that, he became an honorable person, who everyday worked hard to get stronger.
Though he was disciplined by his mentor, one thing he can't stand is those who have an easy life, and become rich/powerful without having to work hard for it.
That is because he suffered a lot to become what he is, and he doesn't think it's fair for others to have it easy.

When his mentor died of old age, he gave Colt his Sword and Shield, called Crusader, so he too could walk the path of a Knight.
After being knighted, Colt gained the title of 'Knight of a Thousand Shields and Swords'

Then, in his journeys, Colt stumbled into a tomb and there he met the Ancient Belka Unison Device, Marience.

I'll draw him when I get a good idea on his appearance.


Name: Mari (short for Marience)
Age: 18 (physically)
Height: 167cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Black (with a slight hue of grey)
Eye Color: Orange
Mage Rank: A+
Magic Color: Orange
Homeworld: Unknown
Magic Style: Belka
Seiyuu: Goto Saori (like Sonomiya Karen of Sky Girls)


Personality: She is kind, gentle, obedient and softspoken, yet strict when it comes to house cleaning.


Description: Colt's maid, so to speak...she's actually a Unison Device.


Appearance:
Check this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/Artwork/oc_mari.jpg) :3


Magics:
Mari is proficient with support magic, such as defence, healing and illusion magic, but has limited offense abilities.

Story:
The Mirror of Illusions, Marience, once lived during the era of the Saint King, but during the war her master was killed.
Being one of her master's 'possessions', she was placed in his tomb, to guard it.

2 years ago, Colt stumbled into that tomb and awoke her from her long sleep.
Due to being asleep for such a long time, the memories of those ancient times are hazy, so she can't remember much.

Mari is a girl who believes in the 'knight in shiny armor' or 'prince riding a white horse' kind of story, and when she was saved by Colt, she believed he was that kind of person.
So, she devoted her life to serving him, not just as a Unison device but as a maid as well.

And even though Mari could change to compact size, she likes to remain in full Size, she says that this way the can be of greater help to her master.
Rein admires Mari for being able to support her master in both full size and compact size, she sees Mari as an older sister.

Well...that's it :heh:
For Mari's Seiyuu I had a few choices, and this one seems to fit her :rolleyes:
Although...there is one that would be perfect, but using it may be a bit...:eyespin:
Konoha Kaede
You may or may not know that seiyuu...but still...
:uhoh:*runs*

Man, Ancient Belka users and Unison Devices are starting to grow out of trees or something. :heh:

I never liked the idea of having more 'officially listed' A.B users more than canon, but whatever. Anyway, it's overall good, but I don't think Knights are knighted with the such extravagant titles. Nicknames gained, yes, but not such titles which for most part, denotes their type of knight and roles.

Just like how Erio becomes a Dragon Knight and Hayate was always a... something Knight or something, despite already being known titularly as the Night Sky's blahblahblah.

(Meanwhile, inside the Destroyer's hide-out on top of Mt Fuji...)


Kai'malas: "Yo! Long time no see :)"

Lance: "The same could be said for the four of you..."

Tereino: "Ahhhh, we were busy recuiting people :heh: Didn't have time to return home..."

Cero: "LOL, recuitment..."

Solakar: "TELL ME ABOUT IT :rolleyes: I've better things to do than-"

Tereino: "She doesn't like you, period. Not a hundred years ago, not a hundred years later."

Solakar: "LIES! LIES!"

Cero: "I think that sums it up alright :p"

Solakar: "SEE?"

Lance: "He meant you."

Suiyoku: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"

Solakar: "Fuck :rolleyes: sorry..."

Suiyoku: "Where's the general?"

Jeno (From inside the room): "Securing the prisoner...!"

Suiyoku: "That means I'm in charge"

Tereino: "Wh- Nothing ."

Suiyoku (Puts away his sword) : "Now listened up, in a few minutes, every lecherous skirt-chaser, 'suppose' siscon, pedophile, 'platonic' friend, imouto-character and delusional male is going to fly up this mountain trying to play hero..."


Solakar: "Heh... Siscon :p"
Cero: "I know :D"
Tereino: "Siscon?"

Suiyoku: "Lance, shorty-"

Cero: "IT'S CERO MOTHERFU-!!!"

Suiyoku: "Whatever, Sipher's orders are to hold them off, so instead of exposing ourselves, we're going to use summoning..."

Kai'malas: "You two first :D"


*********************************



Lance:

"Young Life, Too Young, Who's Eyes Are Choking,
Can't Rest, Can't Sleep, For Dreams That Set You Falling."



*Two massive summoning square appears in the sky*



"Don't Feel The Hunger, Can't Drink No Holy Water,
No Light In These Eyes, No Place For Dreams At All... TONIGHTTT~ !!!."



*A dark magic field covered the entire area, turning day to night*



"When The Hand That Rocks The Cradle, Is The Hand That Holds The Knife,
And The Knife That Cuts The Cable, Kills The Spark That Feeds The Life."



Emperor: <Dragon Gate Summon>



"No Grave Could Be Deep Enough, Down To Hell If We Were Able,
The Veil Of Life Was Pushed Aside, By The Hand That Rocks The Cradle!!"



http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/706/megidramongn6.jpghttp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/4254/armed10jv7.jpg



Lance (Sit down): "Whew, I hope they don't berserk this way :uhoh:"



*********************************



Cero:



"IIIIIIII~ believeeee... Them bonesss are meee~
Sommmmeeee sayyyy, were bornnn... Into the grave."



*Cero unbind his right hand and slam it down on the ground, magic energy explode from it.*



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"



*Two summoning square, one huge on the ground and one slightly smaller above it in the air*



"Dussssttttt riseeee, right on over my time...
Emmmmpttyyy fossil... Of the new scene"



Exterminator: <Demon Horde Summon>



"I feel so alone! Gonna end up a Big ole pile a them bonessss....!"




http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1416/uofyg0.jpghttp://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8b/SkullSatamon.jpg



Cero (Sit down): "...I'm hungry"




(In the meanwhile)


Jeno (Still holding her hand) : "So what type of guys do you like :nod: ?"

???: ULTIMATE!
???: UNISON!
???/???: IN!

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f141/Haltaris/yuri2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/horath.jpg

:joke:

I wonder if Nagisa scores higher than any other girl, though. :heh:

The one thing I like about Nagisa right now is the naturalism of Tomoya and Nagisa's interaction and development. Unlike other girls that seemed padded in, it actually feels smooth. Even Kanon, despite having arcs, honestly felt forced in some ways even during each arcs.

A lot of the characters are still hinging on their stereotypes, so I don't have any real attachment to them. It doesn't help that while there's a lot of potential for good chemistry, it's still in early stages.

Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)

Noted.

Hey Nighty, have you tried Alice + Die for Me! + Mudo Boost? She's H4XX!! :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin: and also kinda cute...*ahem* but also scary :heh: And then I just gave Thanatos Die for Me! for even more ownage. :D

Hmm... I do keep Die For Me, but Mudo Boost? Damn. Never thought of it.

Persona 3's spell-replacement system sucks. Not to mention the names.





:eek: Yes! More Ryou in the anime please!! :D

Well, Ryou is Kyou's banana after all, so I don't expect much, sadly.

Even Kyou's position in the anime seems threatened... I've recently just entered Kyou's route...

Seems to be quite... romance-heavy... Unlike Kanon... since there's actually a TRUE END lead girl... this can screw up things... :uhoh:

Haha, as expected, you know this stuff very well. :heh:

Haha, not like it was long for me anyway. I can make out some styling and noticeable traits of certain animators, but I'm far from those sakuga eyes. Besides, it was Noein that opened my eye to the world of artistic liberty by animation directors, when episodes have radical difference between their designs and some people screamed QUALITY, but the animation was actually good and solid. I did some readings, and learned of things more than I thought I would.

Before I knew it, I was looking at animes by first looking at the staff and animators involved before summaries. :p


Nagisa scores zero points with me. :heh:

I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. :upset: More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.

Well, if you really want to, you could always play via the textual translations, though it does ruin the mood.

Then heads up because there is more incomming. :D Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The

A simple logistics look onto the political side of A.B. Good piece.

This Torie I like. Did you base him of Lohengramm?

Although I had ideas similar to Reinhard von Lohengramm... if you like, here's some possible templates for Torie.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/Kaizer.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/King.jpg

The Goldenlöwen, Kaiser Reinhard von Lohengramm of Legend of Galactic Heroes, one of the best, most epic anime ever. 300 times more epic than TTGL, and 100 times more than Toward the Terra.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 07:47
Two things...

1) Off-topic, but recent events have lead me to come to the conclusion that I should copyright all of my one-liners...

... It's just business :p


2) Doesn't matter what Kha thinks, Chrono still beat him to it :p

That porno bind in the manga? Tip of the iceberg...

... True story.

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 07:57
I wonder what you're seeing Master...

:thinker:

Draw her for us please? :D
Soon :heh:

*points to Keroko-chan*

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
Eh? Is that so? :twitch:

But that's Ion-Cannon-tan :D We want Ion-Canon-Tan :D :D :D :D

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3
:heh:

Man, Ancient Belka users and Unison Devices are starting to grow out of trees or something. :heh:

I never liked the idea of having more 'officially listed' A.B users more than canon, but whatever. Anyway, it's overall good, but I don't think Knights are knighted with the such extravagant titles. Nicknames gained, yes, but not such titles which for most part, denotes their type of knight and roles.

Just like how Erio becomes a Dragon Knight and Hayate was always a... something Knight or something, despite already being known titularly as the Night Sky's blahblahblah.
Oops...Forgot to change that :heh:
What I meant was Old-Knight style :heh::heh::heh:
Ancient Belka is Mari's style :heh:

Keroko
2007-10-28, 08:29
Alistina was right about the conquered man. Another sharp mind in play here. Sakura would be Kha's UD am I right?

Yes, though Kha's UD is technically the 'last remnant' of the Saint king. Ask Kha for details.

A pity. I personally think that ToA is the best PS2 RPG of 2006. It has almost every element that makes up a good story (( there's some weak characters, but otherwise, even NPCs are well-fleshed )) and even if rough, the battle system was nice to play with.

Not to mention Luke's (( main character )) character development was awesome.

*sigh* Maybe I can download/emulate it...

Or I'll go hunt for Persona 3, since I hear it should be out by now...

I never liked the idea of having more 'officially listed' A.B users more than canon, but whatever. Anyway, it's overall good, but I don't think Knights are knighted with the such extravagant titles. Nicknames gained, yes, but not such titles which for most part, denotes their type of knight and roles.

Just like how Erio becomes a Dragon Knight and Hayate was always a... something Knight or something, despite already being known titularly as the Night Sky's blahblahblah.

The knight titles they do give are also questionable at best. According to the official cards, Erio is a 'Belkan ritter' (Belkan knight), which makes sense. But melee-focussed Ginga is apparently a 'Belkan Wizard'

The one thing I like about Nagisa right now is the naturalism of Tomoya and Nagisa's interaction and development. Unlike other girls that seemed padded in, it actually feels smooth. Even Kanon, despite having arcs, honestly felt forced in some ways even during each arcs.

Well that's true. I believe this is mostly due to the focus that is given to the development of these two. Unlike other adaptations, the other characters are merely side characters. There has been no romantic chemistry between Tomoya and any of the other girls besides Nagisa. This helps make development between Tomoya and Nagisa feel more realistic.

Well, if you really want to, you could always play via the textual translations, though it does ruin the mood.

Considering I'm currently playing the Shirogane no Soleil trial with AGTH and a translator (oh, the Engrish), I think I can handle this. I'll most likely have a bit mor patience and wait for the translation, though.

This Torie I like. Did you base him of Lohengramm?

Although I had ideas similar to Reinhard von Lohengramm... if you like, here's some possible templates for Torie.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/Kaizer.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/King.jpg

The Goldenlöwen, Kaiser Reinhard von Lohengramm of Legend of Galactic Heroes, one of the best, most epic anime ever. 300 times more epic than TTGL, and 100 times more than Toward the Terra.

Lohengramm? Never heard of him, but... *wikies*

Now this is interesting. It'll require a bit of tweaking for the original Torië template, but concidering his role was fairly smart in the initial draft, that shouldn't be a problem. It'll turn the story just a bit more away from the good vs evil idea too.

Which reminds me, about how large is the timegap between Saga de Saga and the fall of Ancient Belka?

Two things...

1) Off-topic, but recent events have lead me to come to the conclusion that I should copyright all of my one-liners...

... It's just business :p

Copywright? What's that? Edible?

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 08:34
Copywright? What's that? Edible?


It's as edible as Cen-sar-ship... :nod:

Nightengale
2007-10-28, 09:06
Which reminds me, about how large is the timegap between Saga de Saga and the fall of Ancient Belka?

I personally prefer to leave it vague, but I'm to give numbers, probably somewhere 30 to 100 years.

LoweGear
2007-10-28, 09:13
Hmm. How does he portray her? :uhoh:


I'll let the man answer *cough*


:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:


"Saya-chan, whats that green Jell-O you have in your hands? Is it tasty?"


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Lemme try that...

*takes stuff off Saya's hands*

Mmmm... delicious! :D:D:D

Although it looks like you've been taking lessons from Chaos in hole digging :p :heh: :joke:


Does that mean... Chaos existed in Ancient Belka to teach Alistina?!? :uhoh:


But that's Ion-Cannon-tan :D We want Ion-Canon-Tan :D :D :D :D

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3

:nod:

And we now have out official Ion Canon-Tan :D:D:D


???: ULTIMATE!
???: UNISON!
???/???: IN!

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f141/Haltaris/yuri2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/horath.jpg

:joke:



:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Two things...

1) Off-topic, but recent events have lead me to come to the conclusion that I should copyright all of my one-liners...

... It's just business :p



There's no such thing as copyright in OC... All Your Ideas Are Belong To OC :uhoh:


2) Doesn't matter what Kha thinks, Chrono still beat him to it :p

That porno bind in the manga? Tip of the iceberg...

... True story.

Aaah yes, the original migratory blue-bird and Dai-Erosuke himself:nod:

Soon :heh:


:bow::bow::bow:

-----

And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 09:17
Does that mean... Chaos existed in Ancient Belka to teach Alistina?!? :uhoh:

No... But Loki was... :uhoh:



:nod:

And we now have out official Ion Canon-Tan :D:D:D

Jeno: "Hehh :D"



Aaah yes, the original migratory blue-bird and Dai-Erosuke himself:nod:

The Haralown birds are fearsome :p




And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



Oh come on! That's not even a challenge :p

Keroko
2007-10-28, 09:21
I personally prefer to leave it vague, but I'm to give numbers, probably somewhere 30 to 100 years.

That's good enough, all I needed to know was wether it was a recent event or one that happened way before.

Does that mean... Chaos existed in Ancient Belka to teach Alistina?!? :uhoh:

No, it means I liked the quote. The original was more along the lones of 'tie a lot of weights around his legs and throw him in a lake'.

This one is better, me thinks. :D

And we now have out official Ion Canon-Tan :D:D:D

Chibi, loli or as we are?

And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



The changes are... surprisingly little. And you say this was pretty much how you found it?

Spies. Spieeees.

Kha
2007-10-28, 09:23
Sak-chan: HORAAAAAA!

*slams Justizon Crusher into the ground, and the shockwave sends Erio, Aaron, Lowe and Tormenk flying*

Sak-chan: Wii~~ :D

"Now where was I? Oh yes..."

:eyespin: And where does this takes place? :heh:When: during StrikerS.

Where:

StrikerS: Midchilda

Belka 00: Pretty much anywhere within Blue Zone jurisdiction. This heavy military viewpoint demonstrates that the TSAB and Saint Church are doing a lot, hence can afford to leave only 1 tiny force to protect the GC, as well as demonstrate why'd the fleet would be 3 hrs from the capital when standard first-contact mobilzation takes 2 hrs max. Chrono gets his day here

DSGK: A small surbia in Midchilda Downtown.

:nod:
Reposted from the image thread. Erio and Ginga's qualification may be of interest to some here.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3619/idctd061320056632112aq6.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idctd061320056632112aq6.jpg)http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9241/idjmb036233032264523lf5.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=idjmb036233032264523lf5.jpg)The knight titles they do give are also questionable at best. According to the official cards, Erio is a 'Belkan ritter' (Belkan knight), which makes sense. But melee-focussed Ginga is apparently a 'Belkan Wizard':D:D:D:D

EVIDENCE THAT ERIO WAS TRAINED BY SOMEONE SKILLED IN ANCIENT BELKA TECHNIQUES! I mean, look closely:

Erio: Belka Ritter - "Knight"
Ginga: Belka Wizard

Both of them melee, but why the difference with Erio? That's because Kha is Belka Ritter qualified and teaches traditional AB techniques. :D Canon still loves me! :nod:

Mai: ...

Intervention is nulled.

Smith: Right now...
Wesson: Going in...

S&W: Is a bad idea... :upset::uhoh::uhoh:

Mai: ...

Daijoubu desu ka, Keroko-neesama?

S&W: ... she went in anyway :eyespin::eyespin:

WHAT IS THIS WIN GOING AT LIGHTSPEED?!?!?!?!

:bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:

Don't think my Backlog Breaker can break this one :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:Your drill broke? :heh:

But involving the daemon princess is :uhoh:. Jeno is in for a HELL of hurt. :heh:

Then heads up because there is more incomming. Part two of LoAB: Fall of an Empire.

Part 1 (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1202799&postcount=13099)



Part 02: Playing with politics

The Royal Palace, center of the Belkan Empire, its towers pointed high towards the sky. And at the moment, a field of battle.

Not a normal field of battle, oh no, many of the palace’s occupants knew how to handle a normal battle. This was a battle of a different kind, a battle where it does not matter how skilled you are with the sword, or how many enemies you have slain.

“This situation is unacceptable!”

This was a battle of words.

“According to your words, Lord Beckert.”

The council hall, possibly the biggest room in the palace itself. Surprisingly exotically decorated, and filled with one huge central table. Filling the table were politicians. Lords, ladies, senators, whichever ruled their respective territories. All were here in the council room to appeal their words the senate, and the king of Belka.

True, the Belkan Empire was an Empire, and as such the final say was made by the ruling person, but one person can only govern so much. The Belkan Empire stretched several worlds, which made the need for a bureaucracy apparent, though not any more liked.

“Do you not see?” A brown haired man with a short beard almost shouted through the great room. “We have finally taken the border country out of the hands of those wretched rebels. Many of our own have suffered severe financial difficulty thanks to that rebellious scum. The country should immediately start compensating us for our troubles.”

“But they had no choice; they were occupied by the enemy force. According to the reports their financial status is even worse then ours.” Another councilmember protested.

“They should be thankful that we even bothered to drive the rebels from their lands. I still say that we simply should have brought out the Cradle and-”

“That would be enough, Lord Beckert.”

All heads turned into the direction of the king, or rather the person next to the king. Long red hair flowing behind her, blue eyes piercing the lord in question.

“This talk on what could have been done is pointless. What has happened has happened, we have reclaimed a country that was taken away from us, that is all. To demand gratitude of them would be beyond stupidity.”

A different council member, a young long haired blonde man, decided to voice his opinion on the matter. “But lady Alistina, surely you agree that we cannot simply excuse them? From what I heard, they offered only little resistance against the rebel forces.”

“Would you do any different, councilor Torië, if your family was threatened to be killed on the spot? Regardless, to the people in that country, all that has happened is that they changed rule yet again. We must be sure to keep their loyalty, so that we have to station less forces to keep the place under control.”

Lord Beckert snorted. “If they have realized that their rule has changed, they should know that their laws have changed. That is all.”

“That would be like inviting the rebel forces back into the country. We need to gain their loyalty, Lord Beckert, not lose it.”

“And requesting compensation for rescuing them would do so?”

Lady Alistina shook her head. “Tell a conquered man he has a new master, and he'll shrug. Tell him his new master demands a fifth of his annual income, and he'll go and find his pitchfork.”

For a moment it seemed as if Lord Beckert would continue the argument, but to many of the room’s occupant’s surprise, he sat back down. Lord Beckert’s features changed little as he sat back down, save for a nigh undetectable twitch in his right eye.

A twitch that did not escape the king.

“Very well Lady Alistina, you have made your point. We shall give this country a while to catch its breath, and for us to gain their trust.”

The king’s decision was made, the debate was over. As it always went, the occupants in the room had been arguing back and forth for quite a while before the king finally made her decision.

Her decision.

One would expect a king to be a man, a proud man who would lead his people through the light and dark days that their lands faced. Who would take up the sword and smash any evil that opposed him and his subjects.

Perhaps that is why she was called a king.

The Belkan Empire was lead by a king, as it had always been. The Saint King of Belka. The royal blood of the empire. The current king had all the qualities of her predecessors, and also had a beautiful face. And until recently the Empire had flourished under her rule as it had always.

Therefore no one questioned the king’s gender.

~~~

Later that evening, the king and Lady Alistina were waking through the corridors of the grand palace.

“You played a dangerous game today, Alistina.”

Alistina sighed. “These are politics, Sakura. Every word you speak is a dangerous game.”

“And you were taunting them the entire time, what will you do if Lord Beckert decides to retaliate?”

“You’re worried about Beckert? He’s the least of our worries. He’s a warrior through and through, strong and opposing, and he obviously knew when the back down, but he lacks the skill with words. He can do little more then bark in the council hall. No, I’m far more worried about Torië.”

“Councilor Torië? I do not see why you are worried about him; he has been quite helpful the last few weeks.”

Alistina shook her head. “Sakura, you are a great knights, and a great leader, but you are just as bad as Beckert when it comes to politics.”

“What do you mean?” Sakura asked, slightly upset at her skills being put down like that.

“Not counting me, Torië is one of the youngest members of the council. He holds no prestigious lineage, and he has no title to speak off. For someone like him to have reached a post as important like this at such an age means that he knows every trick, every flaw, and every exploit in the world of politics. Someone like him would literally go over corpses to gain more power.” Alistina explained.

“Alistina, you do realize that that is a very serious accusation?” Sakura queried.

“But a very accurate one.” Alistina responded. “You noticed what he said in the council hall today? It sounded very polite, but it was actually him probing how far he could push things around in a serious situation.”

“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”

Sakura jerked to a halt and turned to observe the red haired girl’s face with incredulous eyes. To her credit, Alistina actually managed to keep her face straight for a few seconds before she broke down in a laughing fit.

“Oh this is great. You should have seen the incredulous look on your face.”

Sakura’s eyes settled in a glare as she placed her hands in her hips. “This is a serious matter Alistina, it is not something to joke around with.”

“Duty, duty, duty. Relax, we’re not in the council hall anymore. Besides, there is nothing we can do about him at the moment.”

Sakura tried to keep the glare on her face, but soon she sighed and let her hands slump to her side. “At times like I find it very hard to believe we actually share the same genes.”

Alistina grinned. “Genes don’t make the person. Now come on, let’s go get some rest. Some of my brothers should be returning tomorrow, and I doubt they will be the bringers of good news.”:bow:

It's not so simple to me! I like what you've done here; in one shot you've shown us roughly how things ran back in the old days before the three brains. We can even say because of the democratic system of AB fell, humanity then opted for benevelent dictatorship, allowing "Casper and friends" (what were the names of the 3 NERV supercomputers again?) to come to power.

I quite never expected that jibe from Alaistina. :nod:

Somehow... For some reason... All that MaiGwen crack about exercise got me envisioning... :eyespin:

Note: The new Lieutenant-General for the Ground Forces has been "fabricated", known as Leonidas von Khrull. The inspiration to his name is ... well, nothing fantastic. :rolleyes:Having served Yuunonidas, we all know Leonidas. So that leave the von Khrull bit...

A Frankenstein monster of 20 different clichéd creatures slammed together into a form that's only vaguely human and utterly nausea inducing most likely... :p...and you went ahead and blew it up...

...or we can have that really crack eroge of that girl who's a monster... Her name was Saya yes? :uhoh:

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3So we call her Keroko-tan?! :twitch:
Yes, though Kha's UD is technically the 'last remnant' of the Saint king. Ask Kha for details. Kha's UD is Sak-chan, and is not to be confused with Servant --human-type tsukaima e.g. Gandalfr-- "Saber" Sakura Zaki. Sakura does not unison with Kha, but Kha can "gattai" with Sakura, so Saber's not a UD.

The UD Sak-chan however, wasn't born of a fragment like R2 was of R1. She was the soul of the AI of Tausend Kreuz up to the point when Saber awakened in AlternateS. When Saber awakened, the accumulated data in the Intelligent Device having spent so long fighting by Kha was morphed into a "schzophrenic" personality of Zaki. However due to her own reasons, Saber regards Sak-chan as her unborn daughter, and hence why Sak-chan calls Kha "Father" and Saber "Mother".

I must add again that Sak-chan's address of "Father" came from the pre-Saber data. Tausend Kreuz has always greeted Kha as, and even now as an Armed Device, "Father" as Kha can be said to be a Belka "pastor". Sak-chan kept the greeting, thus carrying a double meaning.



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg

Isn't that... Nanoha? :twitch:

~~~~~~

:twitch: You dont want Fate all tied up and... *ahem* Who are you and what have you done with Lowe-aniki?!? :frustrated::nono: Lowe-aniki, how could you blame a little kid?!

Caro: Sou yo! Erio-kun would never do something like that!

Erio: :nod:I must say you have quite the amount of guts to go about shouting that you want to get Fate tied up so much...... -_-; Wait till Kha arrives...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh: Yes, THAT

either that, or Kha's the one doing the tying...Hmm...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:Probably.. :uhoh:

wander how did he convince her though..or maybe she was the one who requested.. :eyespin::eyespin::uhoh::hmm:
Going by how Kha portrays Fate in his scenarios...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
(looks apprehensively at Kha >_> <_<)>_> <_< Yeah...Hmm. How does he portray her? :uhoh::eyebrow::eyebrow::twitch::twitch:

I WAS AWAY FOR A DAY AND IT RAIN SO MUCH CRACK?! :eyespin:

Fate and Kha are really innocent people! Like Syaoran and Sakura! What ever happened to the idea of a naive crush?! :heh:

(several bodies falls out of the sky)

Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

Quattro Bageena: Wow... Fate really should coach Erio's little league team. :D

Kai: Ah, Aniki. But I guess there are some things about themselves that they don't know of, and only with experimenting will they find out. :nod:

Nightengale
2007-10-28, 09:31
Oh come on! That's not even a challenge :p

Not everyone watches D.Gray-Man.:p

Needs moar Allenalee though. >_>

EVIDENCE THAT ERIO WAS TRAINED BY SOMEONE SKILLED IN ANCIENT BELKA TECHNIQUES! I mean, look closely:

Erio: Belka Ritter - "Knight"
Ginga: Belka Wizard

Both of them melee, but why the difference with Erio? That's because Kha is Belka Ritter qualified and teaches traditional AB techniques. :D Canon still loves me! :nod:

They are different. Ginga is a Wizard which applies Belkan-properties into her fighting style, though to what range we're not sure, while Erio actually went through full-fledged training as a Knight of Belka on the forefront.

The ranges of classification might differ, but overall, it's not something pertainingly unique. Zest is a Ritter as well, and the Saint Church's visor-dudes are probably all Ritter as well.

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 09:32
Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

FieryAeon
2007-10-28, 09:32
Two things...

1) Off-topic, but recent events have lead me to come to the conclusion that I should copyright all of my one-liners...

... It's just business :p


2) Doesn't matter what Kha thinks, Chrono still beat him to it :p

That porno bind in the manga? Tip of the iceberg...

... True story.
1. Copyright? :heh:


There's no such thing as copyright in OC... All Your Ideas Are Belong To OC :uhoh:
What he said. :D


And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg


ZOMG Its Lenalee! :eek: :eek: Well, guess not anymore. That uniform suits Kay though. :D And the logo changed to Dai Gurren Dan's? :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

@PF: :dots: 4k at 20%?? Damn I need to go buy a bigger bluecheese grater. :uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 09:40
Lemme try that...

*takes stuff off Saya's hands*

Mmmm... delicious! :D:D:D

Er Lowe? How does the rest of the world looks like now? :uhoh:


There's no such thing as copyright in OC... All Your Ideas Are Belong To OC :uhoh:

Cheat! :p


-----

And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



I recognise that uniform but is she who I think she is? Or a new character? :twitch:

Sak-chan: HORAAAAAA!

*slams Justizon Crusher into the ground, and the shockwave sends Erio, Aaron, Lowe and Tormenk flying*

Sak-chan: Wii~~ :D

"Now where was I? Oh yes..."

Why am I included? :confused:


:D:D:D:D

EVIDENCE THAT ERIO WAS TRAINED BY SOMEONE SKILLED IN ANCIENT BELKA TECHNIQUES! I mean, look closely:

Erio: Belka Ritter - "Knight"
Ginga: Belka Wizard

Both of them melee, but why the difference with Erio? That's because Kha is Belka Ritter qualified and teaches traditional AB techniques. :D Canon still loves me! :nod:

Yes she does. Canon-tan favors Kha-tan. :nod:

*runs*


Kha's UD is Sak-chan, and is not to be confused with Servant --human-type tsukaima e.g. Gandalfr-- "Saber" Sakura Zaki. Sakura does not unison with Kha, but Kha can "gattai" with Sakura, so Saber's not a UD.

The UD Sak-chan however, wasn't born of a fragment like R2 was of R1. She was the soul of the AI of Tausend Kreuz up to the point when Saber awakened in AlternateS. When Saber awakened, the accumulated data in the Intelligent Device having spent so long fighting by Kha was morphed into a "schzophrenic" personality of Zaki. However due to her own reasons, Saber regards Sak-chan as her unborn daughter, and hence why Sak-chan calls Kha "Father" and Saber "Mother".

I must add again that Sak-chan's address of "Father" came from the pre-Saber data. Tausend Kreuz has always greeted Kha as, and even now as an Armed Device, "Father" as Kha can be said to be a Belka "pastor". Sak-chan kept the greeting, thus carrying a double meaning.

~~~~~~


Naruhodo. Quite the explanation there. :nod:


:eyebrow::eyebrow::twitch::twitch:

I WAS AWAY FOR A DAY AND IT RAIN SO MUCH CRACK?! :eyespin:


From a variety of sources and reasons. From Jail to Fate to threads to ehem never mind. :heh:


Fate and Kha are really innocent people! Like Syaoran and Sakura! :heh:

(several bodies falls out of the sky)

Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

Quattro Bageena: Wow... Fate really should coach Erio's little league team. :D

Kai: Ah, Aniki. But I guess there are some things about themselves that they don't know of, and only with experimenting will they find out. :nod:


And I have just the extra info needed for my current piece. :D Time for more questions to Chaos. :D


Although the mention of Keroko is :eyebrow: That's something I've not thought of yet. Very interesting. :D:D:D

Now to see if I can make it work..

*sent flying by Hyaku Shiki Kick*

:eyespin:

Gen: That's enough from you for one day kid. The weirdo is twisted enough with all the ideas you been feeding her and you're planning a meeting between her and that Geno. :rolleyes: Back to work you! :mad:

Katrina: It's Jeno, Gen. ;)

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 09:42
No, it means I liked the quote. The original was more along the lones of 'tie a lot of weights around his legs and throw him in a lake'.

This one is better, me thinks. :D

Actually, I got the idea from one of the older chinese comedy movies that I saw as a kid :heh:

Where the very manly heroes ambushed their victim while he's in the bathroom... :heh: And did exactly as I've described :heh:

...But seriously, he would be around that time :uhoh:


Chibi, loli or as we are?

:D :D :D

Chibi... Definately Chibi... :D

*Grin as he plots*



Your drill broke? :heh:

But involving the daemon princess is :uhoh:. Jeno is in for a HELL of hurt. :heh:


He's not one of the top Destroyers for nothing you know...

And besides, if Mai was pissed, her attacks would never touch Jeno :p

Tock
Tock
Tock

DING!



T4R: ... I've got an idea.


*Jeno peck Keroko-chan on the cheek lightly while she was distracted by Mai's Entrance*

Jeno: "Think of it as a good luck charm ;) Kero-channn~~"



So we call her Keroko-tan?! :twitch:

Refer to my above :D



I WAS AWAY FOR A DAY AND IT RAIN SO MUCH CRACK?! :eyespin:

Fate and Kha are really innocent people! Like Syaoran and Sakura! :heh:

(several bodies falls out of the sky)

Kha is as innocent as Jeno is cautious with his life :p


Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

Quattro Bageena: Wow... Fate really should coach Erio's little league team. :D

Kai: Ah, Aniki. But I guess there are some things about themselves that they don't know of, and only with experimenting will they find out. :nod:

Yes well, you still got beaten to :p

Kha
2007-10-28, 09:49
They are different. Ginga is a Wizard which applies Belkan-properties into her fighting style, though to what range we're not sure, while Erio actually went through full-fledged training as a Knight of Belka on the forefront.

The ranges of classification might differ, but overall, it's not something pertainingly unique. Zest is a Ritter as well, and the Saint Church's visor-dudes are probably all Ritter as well.Hmm... Kk yeah otaku-ism shot me in the head again. :heh: At the very least it shows that Erio did receive formal Knight training. :nod:

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*ANIKI?! :eek::eek::eek: Looks like its become rather common a greeting. :D

How big is Mari btw? I imagined her to be like someone from Nagi's household though... :heh:

And that cave... Varies all the time? Been in Belka control since self-governance? Arena of a knighting trial?

I know you don't mean it, but it sure sounds like the Sanckt Labyrinth set to stage the Knight-sisters' grading exam (and open Rebuilt of StrikerS). Synchronization! :D

Or I could just pick another exam spot like the Mana Tombs...

...What? :uhoh:





@Chaos: To be honest, I have not a single clue as to what you are talking about. I know porno-bind joke, but where was it used on Fate by Chrono? :heh: Could you link me the relevant manga chapter? It has application to either Kha and Fate in NBC, or Chrono in Belka 00. :uhoh:

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 09:57
Not everyone watches D.Gray-Man.:p

Needs moar Allenalee though. >_>

FOR GREAT TRUTH! :mad:

I don't mind just Lenalee though. :love:

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

The Knight's Ordeal is set to challenge Koji. :D

And more info for me of course. :nod:

Actually, I got the idea from one of the older chinese comedy movies that I saw as a kid :heh:

Where the very manly heroes ambushed their victim while he's in the bathroom... :heh: And did exactly as I've described :heh:

...But seriously, he would be around that time :uhoh:

:hmm:

Those old and cheesy HK comedy flicks were great. :D



He's not one of the top Destroyers for nothing you know...

And besides, if Mai was pissed, her attacks would never touch Jeno :p

Tock
Tock
Tock

DING!



T4R: ... I've got an idea.


*Jeno peck Keroko-chan on the cheek lightly while she was distracted by Mai's Entrance*

Jeno: "Think of it as a good luck charm ;) Kero-channn~~"

I think you'll need a good luck charm instead. :rolleyes:


Kha is as innocent as Jeno is cautious with his life :p


That spoke volumes. Especially when it comes to their other halves. :D

And since T4R is here I got a question to ask. :D

What do you think of this..


Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

..in regards to Jeno? :D:D:D

Aaron008R
2007-10-28, 09:58
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

*bops head on wall*

*wakes up*

*sees giant beautiful girl*

YEEEEEEEEESSSS!!!!!! :love:

:twitch::twitch::twitch:

So, why not make a Ion Canon-tan too?
*imagines loli with a huge beam cannon* :heh::heh:

*points to Keroko-chan*

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

But that's Ion-Cannon-tan :D We want Ion-Canon-Tan :D :D :D :D

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3

That certainly makes sense.:heh:

Jack of all trades after all. :nod:

:nod::nod::nod:

Incoming stomachache. :heh:

Nah.:D I can devour that much quite easily. Since it's guaranteed to be good, I certainly won't complain about the length.:D

Hmm. How does he portray her? :uhoh:

DerederederederederederedereDEREDEREDERE~:uhoh::uh oh::uhoh:


That's probably it. She uses no other melee spell.

Thanks.:D

Then again, rewatching that part where Rein Eins broke Nanoha's shield before she used Black Impact was another indicator of her power. Especially to break the White Devil's monstrous defence in one go. :uhoh:

I'm rather convinced that Rein 1 is positively the most powerful magic-user shown in the series.:nod:

:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:


"Saya-chan, whats that green Jell-O you have in your hands? Is it tasty?"


:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

:eek::eek::eek:

Just like how Erio becomes a Dragon Knight and Hayate was always a... something Knight or something, despite already being known titularly as the Night Sky's blahblahblah.

Hayate is classified as a Belka Zauber-Ritter (Magic-Knight).

???: ULTIMATE!
???: UNISON!
???/???: IN!

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f141/Haltaris/yuri2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/horath.jpg

:joke:

:twitch::twitch::twitch:

Two things...

1) Off-topic, but recent events have lead me to come to the conclusion that I should copyright all of my one-liners...

... It's just business :p

:heh::heh::heh:

[/QUOTE]2) Doesn't matter what Kha thinks, Chrono still beat him to it :p

That porno bind in the manga? Tip of the iceberg...

... True story.[/QUOTE]

How does that bind qualify as porno-binding in the first place?:heh:

Lemme try that...

*takes stuff off Saya's hands*

Mmmm... delicious! :D:D:D

:eek::eek::eek:

And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



VERY fitting!:D

:eyebrow::eyebrow::twitch::twitch:

I WAS AWAY FOR A DAY AND IT RAIN SO MUCH CRACK?! :eyespin:

Fate and Kha are really innocent people! Like Syaoran and Sakura! What ever happened to the idea of a naive crush?! :heh:

(several bodies falls out of the sky)

Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

Quattro Bageena: Wow... Fate really should coach Erio's little league team. :D

Kai: Ah, Aniki. But I guess there are some things about themselves that they don't know of, and only with experimenting will they find out. :nod:

<facepalm>
And now we get a physiological/psychological analysis on why some people want to get tied up...:heh: Though I never knew that was the reason...:heh::twitch:

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

Ahh... NOW I know who'll make Maren jealous!:D:D
Nice entrance, BTW.:D
I'm excited to see the next part.:D

haiz123321
2007-10-28, 10:08
Slightly more :heh:

Let's see... 5 + 1 + 1 + 1 (new) ... I think that's all...

:twitch: Woah, oh yeah whats the difference between canon and fanon?


“I see…” Sakura responded thoughtfully. “So how do you suggest we handle him?”

“Dump a potato sack over his head, tie him up and kick him into the deepest hole we can find.”


Quoted For Pure Win

Hehe. What better demons to use than those? :D

Only h4xx part is their numbers are near infinity. :uhoh:

I don't think anyone would mind, especially OC's specialised in bombardment spells :D

When Shana changes to Shana-tan, urusai becomes uruchai.

When Keroko changes to Ion Canon-tan, Ion Cannon becomes Ion Canon.

Problem solved. :3

:confused: Elaborate please :confused:

???: ULTIMATE!
???: UNISON!
???/???: IN!

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f141/Haltaris/yuri2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/horath.jpg

NIGHTYYYYYYY!
WHAT KIND OF WIN IS THIS?!!?!? :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 10:16
Needs moar Allenalee though. >_>


Wise words... Though the recent chapter gave very interesting vibes :D

"I'm... Mr Walker's woman @_@ @_@ @_@ ?"


And I have just the extra info needed for my current piece. :D Time for more questions to Chaos. :D

Heh?


Although the mention of Keroko is :eyebrow: That's something I've not thought of yet. Very interesting. :D:D:D

Hmmm... Stopping Keroko's movements eh...




*sent flying by Hyaku Shiki Kick*

:eyespin:

Gen: That's enough from you for one day kid. The weirdo is twisted enough with all the ideas you been feeding her and you're planning a meeting between her and that Geno. :rolleyes: Back to work you! :mad:

Katrina: It's Jeno, Gen. ;)

Jeno: "Technically, it's both my lady ;) But C2F figured that 'J' looks cooler than 'G' :p"


@Chaos: To be honest, I have not a single clue as to what you are talking about. I know porno-bind joke, but where was it used on Fate by Chrono? :heh: Could you link me the relevant manga chapter? It has application to either Kha and Fate in NBC, or Chrono in Belka 00. :uhoh:

Okay fine, it was more of "porno-bind MK II", but it's a porno bind nonetheless...

Fate's position was prefect for a... Nevermind, it's the one on one fight with Chrono... >.>



:hmm:

Those old and cheesy HK comedy flicks were great. :D

Briliant...


I think you'll need a good luck charm instead. :rolleyes:

It works both ways :D

For one thing, with the exception of Lindy, nobody on their side knows about his ability (Keroko-kun doesn't count >.>), and by KISSING HER he ensures that they'll be pissed thoughout the whole day :D


And since T4R is here I got a question to ask. :D

What do you think of this..



..in regards to Jeno? :D:D:D

It could work... Think about it, Jeno doesn't feel comfortable around 'nice' people, and remember what was his fetish (Not the cat you nutballs ... :rolleyes:) ?

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 10:17
ANIKI?! :eek::eek::eek: Looks like its become rather common a greeting. :D

How big is Mari btw? I imagined her to be like someone from Nagi's household though... :heh:
She's as tall as Hayate.

And that cave... Varies all the time? Been in Belka control since self-governance? Arena of a knighting trial?

I know you don't mean it, but it sure sounds like the Sanckt Labyrinth set to stage the Knight-sisters' grading exam (and open Rebuilt of StrikerS). Synchronization! :D

Or I could just pick another exam spot like the Mana Tombs...

...What? :uhoh:
Err...What? :heh:
I just combined a few class change quests from MMORPGs, some ideas of my own, and mixed everything together :heh:

The Knight's Ordeal is set to challenge Koji. :D

And more info for me of course. :nod:
It sure will :heh:

Ahh... NOW I know who'll make Maren jealous!:D:D
Nice entrance, BTW.:D
I'm excited to see the next part.:D
:heh:

Kha
2007-10-28, 10:25
Hmmm... Stopping Keroko's movements eh...Arthur C Clark agrees in one of his short stories. :nod:

That story had something to do with the Titanic, and an engineer's quest to raise it.

Jeno: "Technically, it's both my lady ;) But C2F figured that 'J' looks cooler than 'G' :p" There is a difference.

Case in point: I think highly of Gendou and a GenoBreaker but Jendou sounds like a Malay dessert Chengdo, and JenoBreaker seems rather limited. For it sounds like its only good for breaking Spica.

And let's not talk about how it reminds me of Jay Leno... :uhoh:

No hard feelings Chaos, I'm just trying to be lame here... ^_^;;;;;
She's as tall as Hayate.It's rather big for a UD, and would drain quite a bit of mana, but definitely gets a :nod:.

Err...What? :heh:
I just combined a few class change quests from MMORPGs, some ideas of my own, and mixed everything together :heh:I didn't consider class changes, but like you the dungeon idea was also the basis of 4 ruins of Capitalis Belka, Sanckt Labyrinth, Belkae Crypts, the Shattered Halls of Saint Alexei Convent and Mana Tombs. :uhoh:

(runs from WoW fans)

Okay fine, it was more of "porno-bind MK II", but it's a porno bind nonetheless...

Fate's position was prefect for a... Nevermind, it's the one on one fight with Chrono... >.>Pictures man, PICTURES! I really really want to see this part. I also want to know the outcome of the duel, which you can easily retell, but I want to see the subtle details and draw my own conclusions. :nod:

But if I wanted to be really evil, given Kha's religious background, his "Confession" bind, especially if he has to literally "drop" it onto Fate since she moves so fast, might end up trapping Fate in a missionary position. :uhoh:

(runs from moral pitchfork army)

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 10:31
DerederederederederederedereDEREDEREDERE~:uhoh::uh oh::uhoh:

Which means the potion is useless on Fate anyway. :p


I'm rather convinced that Rein 1 is positively the most powerful magic-user shown in the series.:nod:

Nanoha and Hayate are close contenders. :uhoh:


<facepalm>
And now we get a physiological/psychological analysis on why some people want to get tied up...:heh: Though I never knew that was the reason...:heh::twitch:


There are other reasons too..:D




Hehe. What better demons to use than those? :D



I don't think anyone would mind, especially OC's specialised in bombardment spells :D

Not when the targets throw their nukes back at you and can teleport. :D


Wise words... Though the recent chapter gave very interesting vibes :D

"I'm... Mr Walker's woman @_@ @_@ @_@ ?"

:eek:

Where did this come from? :twitch::eyespin:



Hmmm... Stopping Keroko's movements eh...

Not that way. And I meant in relation to Fate.


Jeno: "Technically, it's both my lady ;) But C2F figured that 'J' looks cooler than 'G' :p"

Katrina: Who do you think my name came from? ;)

This should be easy enough..

"Aww, Steiner fall down go boom! :(:D"


Okay fine, it was more of "porno-bind MK II", but it's a porno bind nonetheless...

Fate's position was prefect for a... Nevermind, it's the one on one fight with Chrono... >.>

Oh that scene.


It works both ways :D

For one thing, with the exception of Lindy, nobody on their side knows about his ability (Keroko-kun doesn't count >.>), and by KISSING HER he ensures that they'll be pissed thoughout the whole day :D

Now you're really asking for it. :rolleyes:


It could work... Think about it, Jeno doesn't feel comfortable around 'nice' people, and remember what was his fetish (Not the cat you nutballs ... :rolleyes:) ?

The horrors of digging for his meme. D:

The maid?



Case in point: I think highly of Gendou and a GenoBreaker but Jendou sounds like a Malay dessert Chengdo, and JenoBreaker seems rather limited. For it sounds like its only good for breaking Spica.

And let's not talk about how it reminds me of Jay Leno... :uhoh:

No hard feelings Chaos, I'm just trying to be lame here... ^_^;;;;;

You still get Jenoicide though. :nod:

*tries hard not to laugh*

*fails*

*runs*


Pictures man, PICTURES! I really really want to see this part. I also want to know the outcome of the duel, which you can easily retell, but I want to see the subtle details and draw my own conclusions. :nod:

But if I wanted to be really evil, given Kha's religious background, his "Confession" bind might end up trapping Fate in a missionary position. :uhoh:

(runs from moral pitchfork army)

Appropriate. :nod::nod::nod:

Nightengale
2007-10-28, 10:38
Lemme try that...

*takes stuff off Saya's hands*

Mmmm... delicious! :D:D:D

Naruhodou... so Lowe likes...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/Sayanouta-071.jpg

:uhoh:



That's good enough, all I needed to know was wether it was a recent event or one that happened way before.

Well, the time of LoAB settings... I already intend to include the Meister who had revived the Wolkies at the cost of the magic that sustained their former memories (( which is completely wiped out )), along with a middle-aged device-smith of A.B who was Saga's unofficial short-term protege at one time...

So it's definitely a few decades at least.

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

Jealous Maren. Naisu. And she's felt this feeling before... her ex-master?

Anyway, a good step. And since it's only a few days after JS/Relic Incident, you need not worry about the whole Saga thing. I'll try to tie my own things, but at least they've not yet transferred to RF6. (( That is 2 weeks later ))

:eek::eek::eek:

NIGHTYYYYYYY!
WHAT KIND OF WIN IS THIS?!!?!? :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Well, it's never going to happen (( due to the H4XX-O-METER it would break )), but if Skane's EVERYBODY UNISON scenario ever happens, Saga's Unison form... would look like this.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/sh_7.jpg

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 10:41
There is a difference.

Case in point: I think highly of Gendou and a GenoBreaker but Jendou sounds like a Malay dessert Chengdo, and JenoBreaker seems rather limited. For it sounds like its only good for breaking Spica.

Pronounce 'Geno'... Now Pronounce 'Jeno' ...

...There.


And let's not talk about how it reminds me of Jay Leno... :uhoh:

No hard feelings Chaos, I'm just trying to be lame here... ^_^;;;;;

Rather than hard feelings, I just don't know how to response other than announcing my inability to respond with a response.

...
...
...


Pictures man, PICTURES! I really really want to see this part. I also want to know the outcome of the duel, which you can easily retell, but I want to see the subtle details and draw my own conclusions. :nod:

AWWWW!!! But that's work!

...Fine fine :(


http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8210/mslna0213ae4.png


...As you can see, Fate was spread out and vulnerable to an attack...


But if I wanted to be really evil, given Kha's religious background, his "Confession" bind might end up trapping Fate in a missionary position. :uhoh:

(runs from moral pitchfork army)

"Chaos2Frozen - Moral army's public enemy No. 1"

Keroko
2007-10-28, 10:44
It's not so simple to me! I like what you've done here; in one shot you've shown us roughly how things ran back in the old days before the three brains. We can even say because of the democratic system of AB fell, humanity then opted for benevelent dictatorship, allowing "Casper and friends" (what were the names of the 3 NERV supercomputers again?) to come to power.

I quite never expected that jibe from Alaistina. :nod:

Alistina tries to beat the serious streak out of Sakura when not at work. So far she has only met marginal success.

So we call her Keroko-tan?! :twitch:

Keroko-tan: Hayo! Mokuhyou mike! Hassha!

Kha's UD is Sak-chan, and is not to be confused with Servant --human-type tsukaima e.g. Gandalfr-- "Saber" Sakura Zaki. Sakura does not unison with Kha, but Kha can "gattai" with Sakura, so Saber's not a UD.

The UD Sak-chan however, wasn't born of a fragment like R2 was of R1. She was the soul of the AI of Tausend Kreuz up to the point when Saber awakened in AlternateS. When Saber awakened, the accumulated data in the Intelligent Device having spent so long fighting by Kha was morphed into a "schzophrenic" personality of Zaki. However due to her own reasons, Saber regards Sak-chan as her unborn daughter, and hence why Sak-chan calls Kha "Father" and Saber "Mother".

I must add again that Sak-chan's address of "Father" came from the pre-Saber data. Tausend Kreuz has always greeted Kha as, and even now as an Armed Device, "Father" as Kha can be said to be a Belka "pastor". Sak-chan kept the greeting, thus carrying a double meaning.

Now I'm confused again. :eyespin:

Putting AlternateS aside, what exactly is the connection between King Sakura and Sakura zaki?

[COLOR="Red"]Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

It definetely does not apply to Keroko. :heh:

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

The trial must be taken without ones device? Tough, though completely understandable.

Yes she does. Canon-tan favors Kha-tan. :nod:

*runs*

More like Keroko-tan has no desire to shoot Kha-tan.

:D :D :D

Chibi... Definately Chibi... :D

*Grin as he plots*

Any votes against?

:confused: Elaborate please :confused:

Shana's catchphrase is 'Urusai!' In the DVD extra's there are omake where she turns into a chibi, Shana-tan, and changes 'Urusai' into 'Uruchai!'

Keroko has a spell called 'Ion-Cannon' when she changes into Keroko-tan, it changes to 'Ion-Canon' and is used to blow away contradictions to Canon, white devil style.

I'm rather convinced that Rein 1 is positively the most powerful magic-user shown in the series.:nod:

I fail to see how that was every in question. :heh:

Pictures man, PICTURES! I really really want to see this part. I also want to know the outcome of the duel, which you can easily retell, but I want to see the subtle details and draw my own conclusions. :nod:

*shrug* Prepare for a heavy post then:


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Well, the time of LoAB settings... I already intend to include the Meister who had revived the Wolkies at the cost of the magic that sustained their former memories (( which is completely wiped out )), along with a middle-aged device-smith of A.B who was Saga's unofficial short-term protege at one time...

So it's definitely a few decades at least.

I only needed to know how to refer to it, if at all. If it was only a short time before the fall, they would have reffered to it clearly, 'have you ever met' scenario and all. Since there are several decades -at the very least- in between, chances of them reffering to it are slim. They have bigger troubles, after all.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 10:48
Which means the potion is useless on Fate anyway. :p

Not really... Remember the potion also partially change personality...

You could have a hormone-crazed Fate on your hands...

... I think I just heard something snap.


:eek:

Where did this come from? :twitch::eyespin:

Latest chapter 134 :p



Katrina: Who do you think my name came from? ;)

This should be easy enough..

"Aww, Steiner fall down go boom! :(:D"

I... Don't know :heh:



Now you're really asking for it. :rolleyes:

Just as Kha is innocent :nod:



The horrors of digging for his meme. D:

The maid?

Jeno: "No, that's the boyish, light-weight, goody knight that likes to pet..."

Kha
2007-10-28, 10:50
Pronounce 'Geno'... Now Pronounce 'Jeno' ...

...There.That's using both English! :p

Rather than hard feelings, I just don't know how to response other than announcing my inability to respond with a response.

...
...
......which means I have succeeded, as that is what a cold joke does. :nod:

(temperature drops further)
AWWWW!!! But that's work!

...Fine fine :(


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...As you can see, Fate was spread out and vulnerable to an attack...To be frank, I rather disappointed. Fate's lack of a certain expression tells us otherwise... :(

@Keroko: WHOA! Thanks! :D

...but if this is proof of Chrono's inclination, I'd take it as another dib in his portfolio. Plus we STILL got that mask. :D
"Chaos2Frozen - Moral army's public enemy No. 1"Never doubted it for a sec. :D

Nightengale
2007-10-28, 10:53
The trial must be taken without ones device? Tough, though completely understandable.

It fits with my idea perfectly, actually.

I intend to have it so that the core philosophy of a Belkan Knight in their fighting beliefs are that, in the core of everything, devices and weapons are nothing more than just extensions of themselves alone. Their true weapon are themselves, their physical limits honed through battles, and their mental strength of an unrelenting, proud knight.

That is why in LoAB, I intend to make it that these kind of trials and some stuff, the knights duke it out without any armor or weapons whatsoever. Just their body, their magic and their faith. This does not pertain to ACTUAL battles of course.

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 10:56
Naruhodou... so Lowe likes...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/Sayanouta-071.jpg

:uhoh:

I was thinking when that would come out. :uhoh:



Jealous Maren. Naisu. And she's felt this feeling before... her ex-master?

Anyway, a good step. And since it's only a few days after JS/Relic Incident, you need not worry about the whole Saga thing. I'll try to tie my own things, but at least they've not yet transferred to RF6. (( That is 2 weeks later ))

Jealousy is good. :nod:

Very good indeed. :nod::nod:


Well, it's never going to happen (( due to the H4XX-O-METER it would break )), but if Skane's EVERYBODY UNISON scenario ever happens, Saga's Unison form... would look like this.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/sh_7.jpg


Where would he be from?




Rather than hard feelings, I just don't know how to response other than announcing my inability to respond with a response.

...
...
...


Aww T4R is gone. :(


AWWWW!!! But that's work!

...Fine fine :(


http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8210/mslna0213ae4.png


...As you can see, Fate was spread out and vulnerable to an attack...

:hmm:


"Chaos2Frozen - Moral army's public enemy No. 1"

For being the source. :heh:

Not really... Remember the potion also partially change personality...

You could have a hormone-crazed Fate on your hands...

... I think I just heard something snap.

Which would fit nicely into Kha's scenario of binding Fate. :D


I... Don't know :heh:

Oh yeah. Understandable since you're not a mechahead. :heh: Open to others as well though. :)


Jeno: "No, that's the boyish, light-weight, goody knight that likes to pet..."

Answers in meme right? Or elsewhere? :heh:

Erio
2007-10-28, 10:56
:eek: Clannad widescreen is finally out...though sucks if the WS version will be a full month behind... :mad::upset::mad::upset:


Some comments, reading other stuff later...

The idea of creating Sylvia was way earlier around August, that was when I started playing Odin Sphere. I just started playing Prism Ark about 2-3 weeks ago, so your imagination is not valid. :heh:

Though honestly I'm not sure I know what you were imagining. :heh:

Awww, come on Fierie, no need to suppress your real desires... :)

...:uhoh:

"Dribble~~~shoot~~" :D

Haha, I do like her, but she is the weirdest character I've seen in a while. :heh: I do like then "hen no ittou" part, though. :D

I guess I'll look into LoweGear's Lyrical magic system, or I might come up with my own. Coming up with a new system would be tedious and hard though. :rolleyes:

I was thinking about Abyss' in-game mechanics and stuff. You'll probably still need to play quite a bit more for the full system to be revealed. :)

:eek: Will prepare a post with all the links so far later.

No worries. :)

1. Yet to watch.
2. Maybe there doesn't seem like the plot is moving anywhere yet? It should pick up soon starting episode 5 seeing as they are moving into Fuko's arc.

Well, plot aside, its just the randomness of everything so far...well, except for Nagisa events, which are quite fluid and make sense...the problem is, they not very interesting. :heh:

The stuff about Fuko being a ghost is @_@ though. :heh:

Nagisa scores zero points with me. :heh:

I really want to play Clannad now, I need more Tomoyo. :upset: More Kyou wouldn't be bad either.

:nod: Likewise, Tomoyo's air-kick in the promo was actually the reason I kept an eye on this series in the first place. Kyou is a second motivator.

Certainly Tomoyo is the most attractive girl. :nod:

Well, I made a full OC list (http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=938821&postcount=25) which should contain everything of importance.

:eek: I didnt know you had done this already.

I must say you have quite the amount of guts to go about shouting that you want to get Fate tied up so much...... -_-; Wait till Kha arrives...:uhoh:

Haha, its not that it will be the first time, though... Just look at A's... :uhoh: I certainly prefer grown-up Fate, though. :uhoh:

Nagisa actually scores as much as Kyou for me.:p If I were to rank the girls to how interesting I find them right now...

1) Kotomi = Most MOE~ out of the lot right now.:love:
2) Ryou = How can they leave her out as just a support character? @_@ :frustrated:
3) Tomoyo = Maybe she'll get a higher ranking when I see more. *coughderederecough*
4) Nagisa/Kyou = I know it's weird for others.:heh: But I find Nagisa to be quite endearing.:heh: Kyou's scenes are also fun to watch.:D
5) Fuko = Don't kill me!!! @_@ *runs*

Interesting list. Kotomi's character is extremely exaggerated, though. :heh: I think my list would be somewhat the same, just with Kotomi between Tomoyo and Nagisa/Kyou. :D

But the fact that Ryou scores high in your list... AARON-ANIKI!!! :D:D:D

I see.:D You can just use the same link to my OC list.:) Just add a new section called A Glimpse into the Past: Before MSLNanoha and add the name Almaria Corvette under it. Thanks! :D

Noted. No problem. :)

:nod:

By the way, thanks for recommending me Da Capo II and Kimikiss.:D They're quite fun as well.:D Especially the latter.:D:D:D

Ah, I was just mentioning how I viewed the current romance shows. Glad you liked them, though. They are certainly fun shows to watch. :D

I'll post the profiles after the entire story is complete, so would it be all right to give you the links then?

You can do whatever you want. :) However, just so you know the list can also be used for links to fanfics and scenarios, like GuardianS. The List is made to help others find the content posts, after all. :) You could just create a post like FlameSparkZ's or Lowe's where you list all your works. ;)

???: ULTIMATE!
???: UNISON!
???/???: IN!

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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/horath.jpg

:joke:

:eek:

*me wonders if Nighty has a picture folder named "EPIC"*

The one thing I like about Nagisa right now is the naturalism of Tomoya and Nagisa's interaction and development. Unlike other girls that seemed padded in, it actually feels smooth. Even Kanon, despite having arcs, honestly felt forced in some ways even during each arcs.

A lot of the characters are still hinging on their stereotypes, so I don't have any real attachment to them. It doesn't help that while there's a lot of potential for good chemistry, it's still in early stages.

My thoughts exactly. :D And since we're not really attached to the characters, we can only rate them by their moe'ness. :heh:

Kanon was a bit different for me...I could ignore the unnatural stuff because I was already :love: with Mai, Sayuri, Shiori and Nayuki. :heh::heh::heh: That's why I was able to watch through the Makoto arc with hope of more of the aforementioned girls to come later. :heh:

Hmm... I do keep Die For Me, but Mudo Boost? Damn. Never thought of it.

Persona 3's spell-replacement system sucks. Not to mention the names.

Haha, at least the unique spell names are quite refreshing.

Well, Ryou is Kyou's banana after all, so I don't expect much, sadly.

Even Kyou's position in the anime seems threatened... I've recently just entered Kyou's route...

Seems to be quite... romance-heavy... Unlike Kanon... since there's actually a TRUE END lead girl... this can screw up things... :uhoh:

Could this be a sign of upcoming DORAMA?! :eek: Too bad, though, since I certainly prefer Kyou over Nagisa. :(

Haha, not like it was long for me anyway. I can make out some styling and noticeable traits of certain animators, but I'm far from those sakuga eyes. Besides, it was Noein that opened my eye to the world of artistic liberty by animation directors, when episodes have radical difference between their designs and some people screamed QUALITY, but the animation was actually good and solid. I did some readings, and learned of things more than I thought I would.

Before I knew it, I was looking at animes by first looking at the staff and animators involved before summaries. :p

I've yet to watch Noein, but I did see the art style differences between the first two episodes. Certainly it was an eye-opener, as much as how Gurren-Lagann episode 4 was OMFG-different from the rest. :heh:


-----

And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



:eek::eek::eek:

DERE-DERE Kay-neesama~ :love::love::love:

Kay has certainly changed a lot after starting to do THIS and THAT with Glock... :nod:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

When: during StrikerS.

Where:

StrikerS: Midchilda

Belka 00: Pretty much anywhere within Blue Zone jurisdiction. This heavy military viewpoint demonstrates that the TSAB and Saint Church are doing a lot, hence can afford to leave only 1 tiny force to protect the GC, as well as demonstrate why'd the fleet would be 3 hrs from the capital when standard first-contact mobilzation takes 2 hrs max. Chrono gets his day here

DSGK: A small surbia in Midchilda Downtown.

:nod:

Ah, now I get it. This surely will be interesting. :D

Somehow... For some reason... All that MaiGwen crack about exercise got me envisioning... :eyespin:

:uhoh: Envisioning what...? :uhoh:

Isn't that... Nanoha? :twitch:

Lenalee I think. :heh:

~~~~~~

:eyebrow::eyebrow::twitch::twitch:

I WAS AWAY FOR A DAY AND IT RAIN SO MUCH CRACK?! :eyespin:

Fate and Kha are really innocent people! Like Syaoran and Sakura! What ever happened to the idea of a naive crush?! :heh:

(several bodies falls out of the sky)

Then again, if you ask me... There's a theory that people's sexual fantasies can sometimes can be ignited by what they feel to be dangerous... For example, someone who loves freedom of movement might find being bound rather exhilarating...

While this can apply to Keroko, notice that Fate also emphasizes speed over everything else in combat... Which means slowing her down might just be---

*sent flying*

Quattro Bageena: Wow... Fate really should coach Erio's little league team. :D

Kai: Ah, Aniki. But I guess there are some things about themselves that they don't know of, and only with experimenting will they find out. :nod:

:twitch::twitch::twitch: Very good point there... no wonder the most effective way of handling Fate is to tie her up...

:nod::nod::nod:

*RUNS*

They are different. Ginga is a Wizard which applies Belkan-properties into her fighting style, though to what range we're not sure, while Erio actually went through full-fledged training as a Knight of Belka on the forefront.

The ranges of classification might differ, but overall, it's not something pertainingly unique. Zest is a Ritter as well, and the Saint Church's visor-dudes are probably all Ritter as well.

Its good to know that Belka does not only have Knights. Just as expected. However, I wonder why Hayate is not considered a Wizard... or is she?

Kha
2007-10-28, 11:06
:uhoh: Envisioning what...? :uhoh:Hawt sister rabu in a tub? :uhoh:

I BLAME YOU, ERIOOOOOO!!! :frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

Lenalee I think. :heh:Noted. :)

:twitch::twitch::twitch: Very good point there... no wonder the most effective way of handling Fate is to tie her up...

:nod::nod::nod:

*RUNS*And it gets worse...

(points to later post)

What has Chaos made me do? :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

(bails)

Its good to know that Belka does not only have Knights. Just as expected. However, I wonder why Hayate is not considered a Wizard... or is she?Her magic rank gives the impression of a hybrid spec Belka magician, using both close-in Knight principles with spell-slinging wizardry...

...but canon has show her to be a pure Wizard. I know team mechanics specifies her to be such but... ZERO melee skill? And you call yourself a Belka mage? Even the Gunslingers can rifle-buttswing someone out of their deadzone, why can't someone holding a Swertkreuz, which translates into Sword Cross by Seiou's grace?! :rolleyes:

Sorry, rehashing old complaint. :heh:

Keroko
2007-10-28, 11:16
:eek: I didnt know you had done this already.

I scrapped a random older post and changed it into this list a few months back, this way I could add things to a clear list as I made them without having to search through older posts. I also thought it would come in handy if you at one time was otherwise occupied and lost in the sea of backlog.

Looks like that idea paid off.

Her magic rank gives the impression of a hybrid spec Belka magician, using both close-in Knight principles with spell-slinging wizardry...

...but canon has show her to be a pure Wizard. I know team mechanics specifies her to be such but... ZERO melee skill? And you call yourself a Belka mage? Even the Gunslingers can rifle-buttswing someone out of their deadzone, why can't someone holding a Swertkreuz, which translates into Sword Cross by Seiou's grace?! :rolleyes:

Sorry, rehashing old complaint. :heh:

Old, but valid. What stings me the most is that they gave her those weaknesses, and did nothing with them!

It fits with my idea perfectly, actually.

I intend to have it so that the core philosophy of a Belkan Knight in their fighting beliefs are that, in the core of everything, devices and weapons are nothing more than just extensions of themselves alone. Their true weapon are themselves, their physical limits honed through battles, and their mental strength of an unrelenting, proud knight.

That is why in LoAB, I intend to make it that these kind of trials and some stuff, the knights duke it out without any armor or weapons whatsoever. Just their body, their magic and their faith. This does not pertain to ACTUAL battles of course.

Alistina doesn't even have a device. She simply uses a big chunk of iron that she swings around Kagura style and channels magic through.

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 11:19
:eek: I didnt know you had done this already.
I did that too, I edited the "gram team" post with links to everything, so all you'd really need to do is change the label on that one to TKs OCs and Ficlets, or something.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 11:46
So who should I do first? Jeno? Keroko? Maren?

Now you're asking me to take him apart. :p Keroko was slightly difficult but Jeno's look tougher without a detailed history. Maren, on the other hand, is going to be my masterpiece. :)


Btw, I've been thinking alot about it... And I've decided, that in the event when Katrina break Maren and Koji apart, I would make it my personal mission to fix it with the most epic Chaos-style fic EVER. Everything inch of my power would be put into it, I will surpass Nighty in terms of epiciness! I will step over FSZ in terms of moe-iness! I will crush LoweGear in terms of sweetcheesium!

I will not rest until the Maren ero-scene is unlocked!!!



...Best if you all forget the last part >.>

Erio
2007-10-28, 12:24
Hawt sister rabu in a tub? :uhoh:

I BLAME YOU, ERIOOOOOO!!! :frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Hawt sister rabu-rabu FTW. :love:

*ahem*

And it gets worse...

(points to later post)

What has Chaos made me do? :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

(bails)

:heh: Poor Fate, now even Kha wants to tie her up. :uhoh:

Her magic rank gives the impression of a hybrid spec Belka magician, using both close-in Knight principles with spell-slinging wizardry...

...but canon has show her to be a pure Wizard. I know team mechanics specifies her to be such but... ZERO melee skill? And you call yourself a Belka mage? Even the Gunslingers can rifle-buttswing someone out of their deadzone, why can't someone holding a Swertkreuz, which translates into Sword Cross by Seiou's grace?! :rolleyes:

Sorry, rehashing old complaint. :heh:

Yeah, I was thinking hybrid as well, though her complete lack of melee skills kinda makes her a pure Wizard, ne? :heh: Though I personally dont think being "Belka" implies that the individual is supposed to be apt for close combat, even if most Belkans are indeed melee fighters. I would guess Belka is more of a race or a different society of sorts, one with its own magic system, compared to Mid-Childa... or so I think.

I scrapped a random older post and changed it into this list a few months back, this way I could add things to a clear list as I made them without having to search through older posts. I also thought it would come in handy if you at one time was otherwise occupied and lost in the sea of backlog.

Looks like that idea paid off.

And so was the case. :heh:

I did that too, I edited the "gram team" post with links to everything, so all you'd really need to do is change the label on that one to TKs OCs and Ficlets, or something.

Noted.

Saint X
2007-10-28, 12:26
@ Thread:

speaking of quests... exhuming a previous post of mine

===

Do any of you guys have any ideas for a Nanohaverse-based MMORPG?

- Background/story/plot
- Lands/Fields/Locations
- Monsters/Mobs/Creeps
- Bosses
- Quests/Missions
- Items (consumables, equipments, etc.)
- NPCs
- Player Sprites
- Player UI and Gameplay
- Leveling System/s
- Skill Tree ideas
- anything else

===

Well i have a few ideas planned but i need more input/suggestions before i place some of mine in.

And if anyone wants to ask me questions, go ahead.

Two-Sword
2007-10-28, 12:30
Finally done something.


I still remember.
How mother used to tell me about her home world. She wanted to keep on remembering, she said. So that it could live on in her memories. She wanted me to remember it too, and the circumstances that lead to its destruction, so that I could learn from what happened.

I didn't really mind, since she always looks happy when talking about, although later I knew she felt sad as well. What I hated about it was how misarable my father looked whenever he happened to be nearby listening. He'd apologise and go on about how he failed her. It was no suprise that he dropped out of the Bureau. He had completely lost his nerve.

I can't help but remember how pathetic he was. He got even worse after mother died.

I heard what really happened. The people of that world simply ushered their own way to doom. The Bureau contacted them a little too late. Not that they'd actually listen if it was any earlier. Sure, the last resort that he took part in might had made a difference had it succeeded. But it failed, the odds were stacked against them. Did he really think all of that was his fault ? Did he think just because he fell in love with a woman there, he had a responsibility to save the world ? Did he think he could stop millions of people from dying had he tried a little harder ? He needed to face reality and understand the futility of it.

He failed. The Bureau failed. Time moves on. But he just kept on hiding from the past.

I didn't choose this path to redeem him. I just wanted to be that strong person that he never was. If the TSAB failed back then, I'll change it so that it'll work the next time. If I fail, I'll put all my effort to succeed in the future. Sometimes, things won't change even when you have put an entire lifetime's effort into it, but I'm prepared to face that. I won't give up on my goals.

After all, It's so boring to live on without any dreams and ambitions.

--------------------------------------

She was then suddenly roused by a knocking on the door. The grey world of her thoughts and memories washed away, leaving behind the view of the sky outside the window of her hospital room. Almera grasped her forehead instinctively as her throbbing headache returned.

"Can we come in, Sergeant Almera ?"
A deep, familiar voice adderessed her from beyond the door. It was unmistakably Lexus. 'We' means that her other subordinate is likely with him too.

"Yes, yes.. you can enter." Almera answered in an uninterested tone.
Gathering her senses, she quickly recalled how and why she ended up in a hospital bed yet again.

A tall silver-haired young man and a child with light brown hair entered the room, clad in their armed forces suits. The child, Abel quickly placed the basket of fruits he was carrying next to the bed before moving next to the young man.

"I'm glad that you got out of that in good shape, but I wonder what part of leaving your squad to charge into a ancient warship infested by AMF-equipped Gadget Drones was sound judgement."
Lexus' words were particularly dripping with annoyance despite his attempts to sound 'business-as-usual'.

"Oh, I was simply worried about the group that went in first. I did tell the Lt. Colonel about it."

"Right.." Lexus gave a doubting look.

"Ok ok, I just wanted a piece of the action."

"But we were badly swarmed outside too." Abel cut in.

"OK ! I thought there was a chance that I could earn a share of the spotlight from taking part in the disabling of the Cradle. Give me a break already, I did help drag some those dead weights out alive with me."

"Oh right, we dropped by the other room to see them earlier. They wanted us to tell you that they were grateful for your help."
Abel's face lightened up as he suddenly remembered that message.

"Ugh. Stop making me feel bad."
Almera grimaced and looked away. It hurt even more coming from Abel, with that straightfoward gaze and innocent tone of his.

"We're not here to extract an apology out of you, nor to make you promise to refrain from doing such things in the future. We just hope that you have learned your lesson. You could have gotten into serious trouble if Lt. Colonel Yagami didn't vouch for your actions." Lexus continued with his usual business-like tone.

Abel then interjected. "We were just worried."

"You were worried about her. I was worried that she'd end up using the others as shields in desperation."

"Tch. Fine. I'll be careful."

"..but don't think you can get away with this for free. I'll make sure that you'll all be thoroughly busy when I get back."

"I'm sure the rest of the department would be thrilled to hear that. However, I'm afraid we need to take our leave now. Abel's been bothering that Lieutenant again almost every day since we had time-off from the last incident. He'll need early rest, and so do you."

"Don't lose to her, kid." Almera just barely tried to show some form of encouragement. Of course, that was just a matter of speech, she didn't really think Abel stood any chance against that person.

"I'll do my best ! We'll be doing live swords, without magic tomorrow !" Abel answered proudly. His eyes were serious.

'...did Signum really to agree to that ?'
Almera let out a sigh. "...I wish I still had that kind of enthusiasm. By the way, Lexus.. you once mentioned that your grandfather was originally an off-worlder, right ? Which world did he come from ?"

"I believe it was the 97th Unadministered World. Is there anything else ?" Lexus showed a slight surprise in his expression.

"No, nothing. Thank you for visiting."

"We'll try to drop by again tomorrow, Sergeant !"

"Goodbye then, Sergeant."

As soon as her two subordinates left the room, Almera took a deep breath and reclined back into her bed. Amber glare from the setting sun pained her eyes a little as she turned to look at the sky outside. Mid-childa was saved from potential destruction only last week, but there was still unease in her.

'It has been years since I dreamed of that.. I wonder why now ?'


Time skip after the prologues are done, I guess. I still need a title to call all this, lol.

Also, Lexus' face portrait is done !
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j231/grasblade/sange/lexus1.gif

Kyral
2007-10-28, 12:50
Yeah but I got freaked out when I first saw it in the OP, it still does though :uhoh:


Hehe yeah it freaked me out too... didn't expect Hanyuu to have this kind of expression. :heh:
Oh well... but my Ava isn't from the opening... but from the Takano-Hanyuu Standoff in Ep. 15 :D



Finally done something.


-snip- (sorry! :heh:)


Time skip after the prologues are done, I guess. I still need a title to call all this, lol.

Also, Lexus' face portrait is done !
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j231/grasblade/sange/lexus1.gif

Great! Just great! Also the portrait is well done! :bow::bow::bow::bow:



Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. :) (Reply to this message instead of PM please. :heh:)



Dozo! :)
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1218300&postcount=13824


Yes! Finaly I updated something again!

I made the personality section clearer and moved it below his background, I also added some information about his unit.

For Carnage I also added a personality section and of course a spell list.
But i must admit that im not very creativ when it comes to spells... :heh:

Writing this all made me realized how bad my english is :heh:





Name: Elric Thorn
Alias: The Mage of Carnage
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Date of birth: Febuary 19, MC 053
Family: Beliar Thorn (father, deceased), Anesha Thorn (mother, deceased)
Hair Colour: Dark Green
Eye Colour: Purple
Physical Build: Slim
Special Features: Scars

Affiliation: Time-Space Administration Bureau / Special Forces / "Sword" Assault & Demolition Unit
Position: Special Combat Operative
Wizard Ranking: S+
Magic System: Midchilda
Magic Colour: Black/Red
Device: Carnage (Lost Logia Intelligent / Wristblade)


Background:

Birth & Childhood:
Elrics family had a long tradition of serving in the TSAB. It was there, his father Beliar met his mother Anesha and some time later they married. Soon Anesha got pregnant and both parents agreed to call the boy Elric. But the birth was overshadowed by tragedy: Anesha died in childbirth.
Beliar first was lost in grieve, but realized quickly that he was the only parent the boy now had. It was thanks to his father, that Elrics childhood was a pretty normal one.

TSAB:
Driven by the thought of making his father proud and coming closer to his deceased mother, Elric signed up for TSAB Ground Training School at the age of 14.
He was a smart and cheerful young man who became quickly friends with others.
Two years later he graduated and was assigned to the GAS Ground Combat Unit 267.
267 didn’t saw much action and was mostly used for security and escort missions. Two years later Elric passed his B+ examination.

Elrics Fall:
After some years, Elrics squad was assigned to guard an archaeological excavation on a small backwater planet which was only interesting because of its ancient Midchilda ruins. To avoid laziness and boredom, Elric helped the archaeologists by carrying equipment, helping in the field kitchen and doing other small labours.
It was there he was to carry a crate with artefacts into a store-tent when the earth suddenly shook. No one ever found out if it was a natural event or something different, but something inside of the crate awoke. The ancient device that slumbered for so long broke out of the crate and buried itself into Elrics right forearm.
Overwhelmed by pain, Elric lost his consciousness and when he came to he realized in shock that everyone around him was killed. Than he saw the activated black device on his forearm, with its bloodstained claws still extended. Elric quickly realized that he was the one who killed them and in panic and despair he fled the scene.

Soon after, a TSAB search party found the remains of the excavation. While securing the bodies TSAB soon realised that Elric Thorn was nowhere to be found. Investigation also showed that a filed Lost Logia artefact was missing. TSAB concluded that Elric had murdered his companions and took the artefact. Elric was now a wanted class 1 criminal.

Elric started wandering from planet to planet, afraid of what would happen if he surrendered and what really happened back then.
It was after a month that he heard by chance that his father died in an accident. Elric grieved some time and decided to take the risk and visit at least his parents grave in Midchilda Central.
After he visited the cemetery, TSAB was finally able to localize him.

The Time of Carnage:
As he encountered a squad of ground forces, his right forearm started to hurt. Carnage decided to identify TSAB personal as “enemy combatants” and started to awaken again. Elric finally realised that he was controlled back than, but it was too late. Carnage took control over his body and the TSAB squad was wiped out. A game of cat and mouse began. Elric struggled against the infernal device on his arm and tried to evade the TSAB at the same time. It was a battle he wasn’t able to win.
Elric lost and Carnage linked with his hosts Linker Core, controlling Elric now completely. Finally able to utilize all of its destructive powers, Carnage began a bloody crusade against the TSAB.

With the help of the chief librarian of the infinite library, who was able to find out what Carnage was and what happened with Elric, TSAB was able to recreate the magical signatures of the enemy Carnage was created to battle.
Hungry for battle, Carnage took the bait: Lured out of the city into the open, TSABs finest attacked him with everything they could, but the fully controlled Elric was still to powerful.
TSAB was slowly overpowered and was on the brink of loosing. It was then, that 3 young Ace-Mages interfered.
After a long and intensive battle, the 3 Aces defeated Carnage, nearly shattering its core and destroying much of its programming in the process.
The Time of Carnage was over.

Aftermath:
Elric was soon after brought to a military hospital.
Elric learned from the staff, that Carnages memory was destroyed beyond self repair and it had lost its orders as well its ability to control its host. But he also learned that it was impossible to remove Carnage without killing him. It just was too linked with his Linker Core and system.
Elric had to learn to live with the thing that destroyed his life.

After Elrics recovery, he was taken into custody and received psychological care.
Elric recovered slowly and was confirmed mentally stable.
After this his official trial started but was soon put to a complete halt, as TSAB faced a new crisis involving mechanical Drones, Combat Cyborgs and the Saint's Cradle.
Thanks to chief librarian’s information about Carnage, which proved that Elric was mind controlled, Elric was later found innocent.

Elric now faces often mistrust from other TSAB personnel and officers. TSAB Command tried to use him in different units first but Elric still isn’t able to adjust. After this, decided Command to assign him to the Special Forces, where solo missions are a common thing.
Through his connection with Carnage, his ranking was now tested Air-S+


Personality:
As a member of the TSAB GAS, Elric was open and easygoing. His was good in making friends but he was also a little naïve.

After he obtained Carnage he changed. Filled with guilt and blaming himself for killing his friends and colleagues, Elric was thrown into sadness and self-loathing. He started avoiding people, becoming more and more careful towards others. He also started to do what was necessary to ensure his survival while wandering other worlds.

Shortly after Carnages awakening his careful nature shifted more and more towards paranoia. Stressed from avoiding TSAB search parties, he tried to suppress Carnage as good a possible, afraid of what would happen if it would gain full control over him.
After Carnage took control over him, his personality was completely overwritten, turning Elric into a battle maniac. He completely stopped talking, only expressing himself with maniacal laughter or sounds of pain and surprise. Elric still remembers how it was fighting under Carnages power and (what frightens him the most) how good he felt back than.

Now that Carnage will never be able again to control someone, Elric is more at easy. But he still has the reputation as “The Mage of Carnage” and finds it hard to trust other people, behaving often cold and antisocial. But if someone manages to gain his trust, he shows a warm and caring side many wouldn’t believe he has.
Trust itself is very important to him. Elric would never betray someone he sees as a friend and expects the same kind of loyalty towards him.
He takes his duties very serious, seeing it as a way to atone for what he did, even if he was controlled.
He sometimes is troubled when his duties collide with his trust in someone else.


The Special Forces - "Sword" Assault & Demolition Unit
The Special Forces of the TSAB are a branch that main purpose is infiltration, espionage, sabotage and other combat operations inside enemy territory.
Swords main purpose is combat and sabotage, mostly carried out by a single combat operative, but collaboration with other TSAB branches is not a rare thing.
In times of peace, swords main duty is the location and destruction of terrorist camps, drug factories and illegal research facilities or the hunt for dangerous, magical beasts.


Carnage
An ancient Lost Logia Intelligent Device. Carnage was created for war only and has the ability to boost the magical power of its host.

Background:
Carnage was created for war. It should enhance warriors and ensure their survival. To do this, it received the ability to control its host (should the host lose his/her consciousness) and retreat to ensure medical attendance.
But it was never put into service. Carnage was stored in the laboratory and forgotten. Over the time its original programming became defective and twisted.
Not knowing its purpose anymore, it’s only remembering that it was created to fight.

Personality:
Carnages personality is that of a warrior, nothing else. While no more insane and bloodthirsty as it was in the past, it still favours battle and lacks the creativity to come up with non violent solutions. Carnage is normally very quiet, only saying something when it’s necessary or when asked.
Carnages voice is male. It speaks with a dark and raspy voice.
Carnage refers to its host as “My Lord.”

Modes:
Device Mode: (default mode)
Carnages host has access to its defence spells and a few attack spells.

Melee Mode:
Carnage extends 3 blades from its front. A spell to enhance the blades becomes available.
The blades themselves are powerful enough to penetrate barriers and armour.

Range Mode:
Some powerful range attacks become available.




Defensive Spells:

Barrier Jacket:
Elrics Barrier Jacket is based on his old GAS Barrier Jacket he wore at the time he came into contact with Carnage. The colour pattern was changed to match Carnages and armour parts where changed and added to increase overall protection.
The armoured segments of the fingers are claw like, but can be retracted to allow manipulation of objects without scratching or piercing them.

Crimson Shield/Barrier/Field:
Carnages 3 standard forms of defence.

Advanced Crimson Shield/Barrier/Field:
Stronger versions of the 3 standard protective spells, which can withstood stronger attacks for a longer time, but are more wearying to use.

Recovery:
Self repair spell that is able to fully repair light or medium physical damage on the device and its core, but is unable to repair system errors.

Offensive Spells:

Infernal Blades:
While the blades of Melee Mode are normally powerful enough, it is possible to make them stronger with magic. The blades then are emitting a red glowing aura and their ability to penetrate magical protection is drastically enhanced.
The constant flow of magical energy however, makes the use of this spell more tiring when its used for longer periods. This spell is only available in Melee Mode.

Twilight Bullet:
A mid-range attack spell that creates up to six energy bolts which can be shot at one or multiple targets. While the bolts posses good destructive powers and are self homing, they are not agile enough to fly short curves and thus making it hard for them to track targets they already passed.

Twilight Bullet – Full Auto Fire:
A variation of Twilight Bullet, which reduces its power and homing ability in favour of speed and rate of fire. TB-FAF enables the caster to fire a constant spray of fast energy bolts, causing an MG-like effect. While not good in penetrating strong barriers, it is good in keeping targets in defence or cover. This spell is only available in Range Mode.

Twilight Blaster:
A powerful long-range attack that enables its caster to fire a highly concentrated beam of energy. The beam is able to break through protective fields and barriers with ease but takes some time to fire. It is also not as wide as similar beam attacks.
This spell is only available in Range Mode.

Ground Breaker:
A spell that uses concussion as an attack form. Magical energy is collected inside the Device. The energy is than released by hitting the ground or another inanimate object, sending a shockwave through it which causes heavy damage in the object or the surrounding area.
This spell cannot be used against magical protected objects.

Diabolic Emission:
An area-of-effect spell that creates a globe of dark energy around the caster. While not as strong and with shorter range than the Yami no Sho version, it is enough to attack multiple targets that surround the caster.

Other Spells:

Impulse Search:
By sending out a magical impulse, this search spell makes it possible to find mages and other sources of magical energy in a wide search area. It is not possible to find non-magical things with it.

Shadow Jump:
A quick short-range teleportation spell. Shadow Jump enables its caster to move a short distance between two points in a blink of an eye, even through barriers.
While the Carnage controlled Elric was able to use this spell often in combat to outmanoeuvre his enemies, it now puts Elrics Linker Core under a lot of stress, which makes permanent use impossible.

Crimson Bind:
A bind spell. Shackles made of magical energy are created on the targets wrists and ankles to render it immobile.

Lost Spells:
The Lost Spells are spells that were only usable by Elric as Carnage was on the peak of its power.
After Carnages near destruction, the possibility to use these spells was lost.

Chains of Torment:
A bind spell that chained its target to a near magic circle. While the target was rendered immobile it also suffered an enormous amount of pain through heat and electroshocks.

Final Judgement:
A wide-area artillery spell. A ball of highly concentrated magical energy was shot in the air where it split into a cluster of smaller energy bolts, raining to the ground and causing massive damage on impact. Its destructive power and energy consumption was so high, that even the full powered Carnage used it only once as a last trump card.



Some Images:
Ok... here are some of own creations ^^'


http://666kb.com/i/asxkc8ln1m62gfs17.png



http://666kb.com/i/asgeufa9cb88lw4jl.png



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And:

http://666kb.com/i/at1ffe2c2zzcqiwky.png



Ah and this are the timeline notes i made for me... i hope there are no errors.
MC 053
Elric is born. His mother dies in childbirth.

MC 067
Elric joins Ground Training School.

MC 068
Elric graduates Ground Training School and is assigned to Ground Combat Unit 267.

MC 071
Elric passes his B+ Rank exam.

MC 074 February - July
Unit 267 is assigned for guard duty of an archaeological excavation.

MC 074 August
Elric come into contact with the ancient Midchilda Device Carnage and (under its control) kills everyone at the site, after this he flees and goes into hiding.

MC 074 November – December
Elric finds out that his father died in an accident and decides to go to Midchilda Capital to visit his parent’s grave. Carnage awakens fully and takes over Elric.
“The Time if Carnage” begins and ends with Carnages defeat.
Elric is hospitalized.
TSAB starts to analyse Carnage.

MC 075 January
Elric recovers from his injuries and is taken into custody and starts getting psychological care.

MC 075 May-October
Elric is confirmed mentally stable and is put onto trial.
Through the Combat Cyborg incidents and the awakening of the cradle, Eric’s trail comes to a complete halt.
After the cradle incident Eric’s trail ends. He is found innocent.
Elric is taken into service again and is assigned to the Special Forces.

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 13:35
It's rather big for a UD, and would drain quite a bit of mana, but definitely gets a :nod:.
As explained in SS01, UD can change from their compact sizes (30cm for Rein and Agito) to their full sized forms, to pass as humans.

I didn't consider class changes, but like you the dungeon idea was also the basis of 4 ruins of Capitalis Belka, Sanckt Labyrinth, Belkae Crypts, the Shattered Halls of Saint Alexei Convent and Mana Tombs. :uhoh:
I see :heh:

Jealous Maren. Naisu. And she's felt this feeling before... her ex-master?
Yes...as mentioned here...

244 Years Ago

After a year of traveling together and knowing him better, Maren falls in love with her master, but can't find a way to tell him.
As they continue on their journeys, Maren's master meets a girl and she joins them.
Seeing how well they were getting along, Maren, for the first time, experienced jealousy.
Not too long after that, they fall in love. Disappointed with herself, Maren supports their relationship.



Anyway, a good step. And since it's only a few days after JS/Relic Incident, you need not worry about the whole Saga thing. I'll try to tie my own things, but at least they've not yet transferred to RF6. (( That is 2 weeks later ))
Oh, no worries, just wondering about their opinions on the ceremony :heh:

The trial must be taken without ones device? Tough, though completely understandable.
:nod:

It fits with my idea perfectly, actually.

I intend to have it so that the core philosophy of a Belkan Knight in their fighting beliefs are that, in the core of everything, devices and weapons are nothing more than just extensions of themselves alone. Their true weapon are themselves, their physical limits honed through battles, and their mental strength of an unrelenting, proud knight.

That is why in LoAB, I intend to make it that these kind of trials and some stuff, the knights duke it out without any armor or weapons whatsoever. Just their body, their magic and their faith. This does not pertain to ACTUAL battles of course.
umu! *nods vigorously*

Jealousy is good. :nod:

Very good indeed. :nod::nod:
A jealous Maren is a Maren that takes the initiative :heh:
*runs*

Btw, I've been thinking alot about it... And I've decided, that in the event when Katrina break Maren and Koji apart, I would make it my personal mission to fix it with the most epic Chaos-style fic EVER. Everything inch of my power would be put into it, I will surpass Nighty in terms of epiciness! I will step over FSZ in terms of moe-iness! I will crush LoweGear in terms of sweetcheesium!

I will not rest until the Maren ero-scene is unlocked!!!



...Best if you all forget the last part >.>
ganbatte ne~ :heh::heh:

*suddenly imagines Maren's ero-scene*
d-dame dame dame dame!!! ero sugiru!! *shakes head*

LimitedEternal
2007-10-28, 13:50
Her magic rank gives the impression of a hybrid spec Belka magician, using both close-in Knight principles with spell-slinging wizardry...

...but canon has show her to be a pure Wizard. I know team mechanics specifies her to be such but... ZERO melee skill? And you call yourself a Belka mage? Even the Gunslingers can rifle-buttswing someone out of their deadzone, why can't someone holding a Swertkreuz, which translates into Sword Cross by Seiou's grace?!

Sorry, rehashing old complaint.
Yeah, I was thinking hybrid as well, though her complete lack of melee skills kinda makes her a pure Wizard, ne? :heh: Though I personally dont think being "Belka" implies that the individual is supposed to be apt for close combat, even if most Belkans are indeed melee fighters. I would guess Belka is more of a race or a different society of sorts, one with its own magic system, compared to Mid-Childa... or so I think.

Those of you who've played Dawn of War, remember the Tau Commander's "Has no melee attack" description? Now him I can understand. You really would think Hayate would have at least taken basic close-combat training. I mean, her Knights are mostly melee experts anyway. It's sure what 'd have done. Then again, I'm the "has no ranged attack" kind of person...:heh:

Finally done something.


I still remember.
How mother used to tell me about her home world. She wanted to keep on remembering, she said. So that it could live on in her memories. She wanted me to remember it too, and the circumstances that lead to its destruction, so that I could learn from what happened.

I didn't really mind, since she always looks happy when talking about, although later I knew she felt sad as well. What I hated about it was how misarable my father looked whenever he happened to be nearby listening. He'd apologise and go on about how he failed her. It was no suprise that he dropped out of the Bureau. He had completely lost his nerve.

I can't help but remember how pathetic he was. He got even worse after mother died.

I heard what really happened. The people of that world simply ushered their own way to doom. The Bureau contacted them a little too late. Not that they'd actually listen if it was any earlier. Sure, the last resort that he took part in might had made a difference had it succeeded. But it failed, the odds were stacked against them. Did he really think all of that was his fault ? Did he think just because he fell in love with a woman there, he had a responsibility to save the world ? Did he think he could stop millions of people from dying had he tried a little harder ? He needed to face reality and understand the futility of it.

He failed. The Bureau failed. Time moves on. But he just kept on hiding from the past.

I didn't choose this path to redeem him. I just wanted to be that strong person that he never was. If the TSAB failed back then, I'll change it so that it'll work the next time. If I fail, I'll put all my effort to succeed in the future. Sometimes, things won't change even when you have put an entire lifetime's effort into it, but I'm prepared to face that. I won't give up on my goals.

After all, It's so boring to live on without any dreams and ambitions.

--------------------------------------

She was then suddenly roused by a knocking on the door. The grey world of her thoughts and memories washed away, leaving behind the view of the sky outside the window of her hospital room. Almera grasped her forehead instinctively as her throbbing headache returned.

"Can we come in, Sergeant Almera ?"
A deep, familiar voice adderessed her from beyond the door. It was unmistakably Lexus. 'We' means that her other subordinate is likely with him too.

"Yes, yes.. you can enter." Almera answered in an uninterested tone.
Gathering her senses, she quickly recalled how and why she ended up in a hospital bed yet again.

A tall silver-haired young man and a child with light brown hair entered the room, clad in their armed forces suits. The child, Abel quickly placed the basket of fruits he was carrying next to the bed before moving next to the young man.

"I'm glad that you got out of that in good shape, but I wonder what part of leaving your squad to charge into a ancient warship infested by AMF-equipped Gadget Drones was sound judgement."
Lexus' words were particularly dripping with annoyance despite his attempts to sound 'business-as-usual'.

"Oh, I was simply worried about the group that went in first. I did tell the Lt. Colonel about it."

"Right.." Lexus gave a doubting look.

"Ok ok, I just wanted a piece of the action."

"But we were badly swarmed outside too." Abel cut in.

"OK ! I thought there was a chance that I could earn a share of the spotlight from taking part in the disabling of the Cradle. Give me a break already, I did help drag some those dead weights out alive with me."

"Oh right, we dropped by the other room to see them earlier. They wanted us to tell you that they were grateful for your help."
Abel's face lightened up as he suddenly remembered that message.

"Ugh. Stop making me feel bad."
Almera grimaced and looked away. It hurt even more coming from Abel, with that straightfoward gaze and innocent tone of his.

"We're not here to extract an apology out of you, nor to make you promise to refrain from doing such things in the future. We just hope that you have learned your lesson. You could have gotten into serious trouble if Lt. Colonel Yagami didn't vouch for your actions." Lexus continued with his usual business-like tone.

Abel then interjected. "We were just worried."

"You were worried about her. I was worried that she'd end up using the others as shields in desperation."

"Tch. Fine. I'll be careful."

"..but don't think you can get away with this for free. I'll make sure that you'll all be thoroughly busy when I get back."

"I'm sure the rest of the department would be thrilled to hear that. However, I'm afraid we need to take our leave now. Abel's been bothering that Lieutenant again almost every day since we had time-off from the last incident. He'll need early rest, and so do you."

"Don't lose to her, kid." Almera just barely tried to show some form of encouragement. Of course, that was just a matter of speech, she didn't really think Abel stood any chance against that person.

"I'll do my best ! We'll be doing live swords, without magic tomorrow !" Abel answered proudly. His eyes were serious.

'...did Signum really to agree to that ?'
Almera let out a sigh. "...I wish I still had that kind of enthusiasm. By the way, Lexus.. you once mentioned that your grandfather was originally an off-worlder, right ? Which world did he come from ?"

"I believe it was the 97th Unadministered World. Is there anything else ?" Lexus showed a slight surprise in his expression.

"No, nothing. Thank you for visiting."

"We'll try to drop by again tomorrow, Sergeant !"

"Goodbye then, Sergeant."

As soon as her two subordinates left the room, Almera took a deep breath and reclined back into her bed. Amber glare from the setting sun pained her eyes a little as she turned to look at the sky outside. Mid-childa was saved from potential destruction only last week, but there was still unease in her.

'It has been years since I dreamed of that.. I wonder why now ?'


Time skip after the prologues are done, I guess. I still need a title to call all this, lol.

Also, Lexus' face portrait is done !
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j231/grasblade/sange/lexus1.gif

NAISU...keep up the good work!


Some new OCs reminded me of something...

OC LIST ANNOUNCEMENT

At first I used to go about the pages to find OCs, but doing so now is not too necessary since lately there havent been as many OCs created compared to the first couple of months. As such, for those who want to add new OCs to the list, please give me the links. (Reply to this message instead of PM please. )

Ah, is this about the big list on page 1? I was getting ready to ask when that might get updated. Links:

Asuka:
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1150600&postcount=10100
Aozora:
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1201011&postcount=13035
I'll add Lyria once I finish de-haxing her.


ganbatte ne~

*suddenly imagines Maren's ero-scene*
d-dame dame dame dame!!! ero sugiru!! *shakes head*


Shall I call for emergency blood, sir?

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 16:25
Those of you who've played Dawn of War, remember the Tau Commander's "Has no melee attack" description? Now him I can understand. You really would think Hayate would have at least taken basic close-combat training. I mean, her Knights are mostly melee experts anyway. It's sure what 'd have done. Then again, I'm the "has no ranged attack" kind of person...:heh:
He dose have a melee attack... it involves flying up into the air on his JET PACK and shooting the guy in the head with his big honkin plasma cannon. :p

LimitedEternal
2007-10-28, 16:31
He dose have a melee attack... it involves flying up into the air on his JET PACK and shooting the guy in the head with his big honkin plasma cannon. :p

Heh, yeah, he does have that, and I do like doing that.

But he doesn't have a real melee attack, if he gets into close-combat he'll stand there and panic while the enemy Warboss beats on him...:D

Tk3997
2007-10-28, 16:33
Heh, yeah, he does have that, and I do like doing that.

But he doesn't have a real melee attack, if he gets into close-combat he'll stand there and panic while the enemy Warboss beats on him...:DIf by "panic" you mean, keep firing doing the exact same DPS, then yeah, or more likely he basically stun locks him with snares and dances him to death. :p

Keroko
2007-10-28, 17:27
"Tau don't have any melee skills! They're easy once you get into melee!"

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Try getting into melee first. :D

LimitedEternal
2007-10-28, 17:57
Believe me, I know how hard that is. One of my friends is the Tau expert, and he is really good at hit-and-run, dancing, and all that stuff Tau does. I use none of that; as you've likely guessed my playstyle is massive/indestructible firepower. (Read:Necrons...)

And how do you get the Commander to fire up close? Every time I do he goes into his "stand there and swat at the guy" routine...

Anyway, the War40Kverse is quite the source of inspiration around here, eh?

Oh, while I'm on that, wouldn't it be more appropriate to send Grey Knights to purify hax? You know, the Inquisition and Chaos-hunting all? :eyespin:

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 18:10
Btw, I've been thinking alot about it... And I've decided, that in the event when Katrina break Maren and Koji apart, I would make it my personal mission to fix it with the most epic Chaos-style fic EVER. Everything inch of my power would be put into it, I will surpass Nighty in terms of epiciness! I will step over FSZ in terms of moe-iness! I will crush LoweGear in terms of sweetcheesium!

I will not rest until the Maren ero-scene is unlocked!!!



...Best if you all forget the last part >.>

So I do the breakin' and you do the fixin'? :p

That's still a long time acoming. And if she manages to pull it off.

I don't want to disappoint anyone. >_<




Yes...as mentioned here...

244 Years Ago

After a year of traveling together and knowing him better, Maren falls in love with her master, but can't find a way to tell him.
As they continue on their journeys, Maren's master meets a girl and she joins them.
Seeing how well they were getting along, Maren, for the first time, experienced jealousy.
Not too long after that, they fall in love. Disappointed with herself, Maren supports their relationship.



Good good. :nod:


A jealous Maren is a Maren that takes the initiative :heh:
*runs*

Well not exactly what I had in mind. :heh: To quote:


“Jealousy is never petty,it is always destructively dangerous. Jealousy summons and activates more Lost Logia than any other emotion, because it incorporates and warps so many other emotions."


So who knows what a jealous Maren might do? :uhoh:


ganbatte ne~ :heh::heh:

*suddenly imagines Maren's ero-scene*
d-dame dame dame dame!!! ero sugiru!! *shakes head*

FlameSparkZ no! Your innocence is what I need! D:

Finally done something.


I still remember.
How mother used to tell me about her home world. She wanted to keep on remembering, she said. So that it could live on in her memories. She wanted me to remember it too, and the circumstances that lead to its destruction, so that I could learn from what happened.

I didn't really mind, since she always looks happy when talking about, although later I knew she felt sad as well. What I hated about it was how misarable my father looked whenever he happened to be nearby listening. He'd apologise and go on about how he failed her. It was no suprise that he dropped out of the Bureau. He had completely lost his nerve.

I can't help but remember how pathetic he was. He got even worse after mother died.

I heard what really happened. The people of that world simply ushered their own way to doom. The Bureau contacted them a little too late. Not that they'd actually listen if it was any earlier. Sure, the last resort that he took part in might had made a difference had it succeeded. But it failed, the odds were stacked against them. Did he really think all of that was his fault ? Did he think just because he fell in love with a woman there, he had a responsibility to save the world ? Did he think he could stop millions of people from dying had he tried a little harder ? He needed to face reality and understand the futility of it.

He failed. The Bureau failed. Time moves on. But he just kept on hiding from the past.

I didn't choose this path to redeem him. I just wanted to be that strong person that he never was. If the TSAB failed back then, I'll change it so that it'll work the next time. If I fail, I'll put all my effort to succeed in the future. Sometimes, things won't change even when you have put an entire lifetime's effort into it, but I'm prepared to face that. I won't give up on my goals.

After all, It's so boring to live on without any dreams and ambitions.

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She was then suddenly roused by a knocking on the door. The grey world of her thoughts and memories washed away, leaving behind the view of the sky outside the window of her hospital room. Almera grasped her forehead instinctively as her throbbing headache returned.

"Can we come in, Sergeant Almera ?"
A deep, familiar voice adderessed her from beyond the door. It was unmistakably Lexus. 'We' means that her other subordinate is likely with him too.

"Yes, yes.. you can enter." Almera answered in an uninterested tone.
Gathering her senses, she quickly recalled how and why she ended up in a hospital bed yet again.

A tall silver-haired young man and a child with light brown hair entered the room, clad in their armed forces suits. The child, Abel quickly placed the basket of fruits he was carrying next to the bed before moving next to the young man.

"I'm glad that you got out of that in good shape, but I wonder what part of leaving your squad to charge into a ancient warship infested by AMF-equipped Gadget Drones was sound judgement."
Lexus' words were particularly dripping with annoyance despite his attempts to sound 'business-as-usual'.

"Oh, I was simply worried about the group that went in first. I did tell the Lt. Colonel about it."

"Right.." Lexus gave a doubting look.

"Ok ok, I just wanted a piece of the action."

"But we were badly swarmed outside too." Abel cut in.

"OK ! I thought there was a chance that I could earn a share of the spotlight from taking part in the disabling of the Cradle. Give me a break already, I did help drag some those dead weights out alive with me."

"Oh right, we dropped by the other room to see them earlier. They wanted us to tell you that they were grateful for your help."
Abel's face lightened up as he suddenly remembered that message.

"Ugh. Stop making me feel bad."
Almera grimaced and looked away. It hurt even more coming from Abel, with that straightfoward gaze and innocent tone of his.

"We're not here to extract an apology out of you, nor to make you promise to refrain from doing such things in the future. We just hope that you have learned your lesson. You could have gotten into serious trouble if Lt. Colonel Yagami didn't vouch for your actions." Lexus continued with his usual business-like tone.

Abel then interjected. "We were just worried."

"You were worried about her. I was worried that she'd end up using the others as shields in desperation."

"Tch. Fine. I'll be careful."

"..but don't think you can get away with this for free. I'll make sure that you'll all be thoroughly busy when I get back."

"I'm sure the rest of the department would be thrilled to hear that. However, I'm afraid we need to take our leave now. Abel's been bothering that Lieutenant again almost every day since we had time-off from the last incident. He'll need early rest, and so do you."

"Don't lose to her, kid." Almera just barely tried to show some form of encouragement. Of course, that was just a matter of speech, she didn't really think Abel stood any chance against that person.

"I'll do my best ! We'll be doing live swords, without magic tomorrow !" Abel answered proudly. His eyes were serious.

'...did Signum really to agree to that ?'
Almera let out a sigh. "...I wish I still had that kind of enthusiasm. By the way, Lexus.. you once mentioned that your grandfather was originally an off-worlder, right ? Which world did he come from ?"

"I believe it was the 97th Unadministered World. Is there anything else ?" Lexus showed a slight surprise in his expression.

"No, nothing. Thank you for visiting."

"We'll try to drop by again tomorrow, Sergeant !"

"Goodbye then, Sergeant."

As soon as her two subordinates left the room, Almera took a deep breath and reclined back into her bed. Amber glare from the setting sun pained her eyes a little as she turned to look at the sky outside. Mid-childa was saved from potential destruction only last week, but there was still unease in her.

'It has been years since I dreamed of that.. I wonder why now ?'


Time skip after the prologues are done, I guess. I still need a title to call all this, lol.

Also, Lexus' face portrait is done !
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j231/grasblade/sange/lexus1.gif

Good job on your first piece. Thumbs up. (")b

And a awesome portrait. :bow:

He dose have a melee attack... it involves flying up into the air on his JET PACK and shooting the guy in the head with his big honkin plasma cannon. :p

Well at least it's in melee range. :heh:

"Tau don't have any melee skills! They're easy once you get into melee!"

5cKVnGg3lWA

Try getting into melee first. :D

Impressive stand of ground. :cool: First time I heard of the Tau too. Mostly it's just Necrons in this thread. :heh:

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 18:23
ganbatte ne~ :heh::heh:

*suddenly imagines Maren's ero-scene*
d-dame dame dame dame!!! ero sugiru!! *shakes head*


Do you want the uncut version :D ?


Shall I call for emergency blood, sir?

Leave him!

So I do the breakin' and you do the fixin'? :p

That's still a long time acoming. And if she manages to pull it off.

I don't want to disappoint anyone. >_<

Only because I've taken a liking to that fellow...

... And I want the ero-scene... >.>

In anycase, it's going to be LONG-ASS long... And I would no doubt have to cut some in between stuff out, if not I'll be writing a full-fetch fic :heh:



So who knows what a jealous Maren might do? :uhoh:

Jealous Maren is Jealous Siesta :p



FlameSparkZ no! Your innocence is what I need! D:

Yes FlameSparkZ! Your dark desire is what I need! :D

FlameSparkZ
2007-10-28, 18:57
Well not exactly what I had in mind. :heh:
:heh:

So who knows what a jealous Maren might do? :uhoh:
Maren is too mature to let something of this level warp her in such ways :uhoh:

FlameSparkZ no! Your innocence is what I need! D:
Trying... :heh:

Do you want the uncut version :D ?
What uncut version? :confused:

Only because I've taken a liking to that fellow...

... And I want the ero-scene... >.>

In anycase, it's going to be LONG-ASS long... And I would no doubt have to cut some in between stuff out, if not I'll be writing a full-fetch fic :heh:
:heh:
To tell the truth...I kinda wrote Maren and Koji...hmm...'romantic moment' a couple weeks ago...
I was bored, and that thing was lingering in my mind, I couldn't help it :heh::heh:

Jealous Maren is Jealous Siesta :p
:uhoh: Hmm...not that much. :heh:

Yes FlameSparkZ! Your dark desire is what I need! :D
:eyespin:
Must I fetch a guillotine so I can cut myself in half? :heh:
*runs*

Tormenk
2007-10-28, 18:57
Do you want the uncut version :D ?

Oi oi :eyebrow: :bash:



Only because I've taken a liking to that fellow...

... And I want the ero-scene... >.>

In anycase, it's going to be LONG-ASS long... And I would no doubt have to cut some in between stuff out, if not I'll be writing a full-fetch fic :heh:

Koji eh? And I'm taken to Maren. Very good combination. :D:D:D



Jealous Maren is Jealous Siesta :p

Hawt storytelling session entails. In Koji's case, it's going to be a very long one since Maren probably has alot of stories to tell. :naughty:


Yes FlameSparkZ! Your dark desire is what I need! :D

No you don't understand! D:

Innocence turns much darker when converted than dark desires. :heh:



Maren is too mature to let something of this level warp her in such ways :uhoh:

Even if not, there are other ways..


:heh:
To tell the truth...I kinda wrote Maren and Koji...hmm...'romantic moment' a couple weeks ago...
I was bored, and that thing was lingering in my mind, I couldn't help it :heh::heh:

:nod:

So will it be ever viewed here? :D



:eyespin:
Must I fetch a guillotine so I can cut myself in half? :heh:
*runs*

No don't!

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 20:03
Hawt storytelling session entails. In Koji's case, it's going to be a very long one since Maren probably has alot of stories to tell. :naughty:

I don't mean it that way :heh: But if you insist...



No you don't understand! D:

Innocence turns much darker when converted than dark desires. :heh:

No you don't understand! D:

Dark desires would become a greater power than good intentions when converted :D




:heh:
To tell the truth...I kinda wrote Maren and Koji...hmm...'romantic moment' a couple weeks ago...
I was bored, and that thing was lingering in my mind, I couldn't help it :heh::heh:


If you still have them, send me the raws, I'll finish up the job :D

:eyespin:
Must I fetch a guillotine so I can cut myself in half? :heh:
*runs*

Hollow FlameSparkZ ?

... FrostShadeA?

Kha
2007-10-28, 20:14
There has been a call to overtake the Gundam thread. LET'S DO THIS!

LEEEEEEROOOOY JENKIIIIINS!

EDIT: Wait I read wrong... :heh:
:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Hawt sister rabu-rabu FTW. :love:

*ahem*Yeap, an unlockable scene for the NanoHammer eroge RPG. :nod:

...
...
...

:heh: Poor Fate, now even Kha wants to tie her up. :uhoh:CHAOS!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

Yeah, I was thinking hybrid as well, though her complete lack of melee skills kinda makes her a pure Wizard, ne? :heh: Though I personally dont think being "Belka" implies that the individual is supposed to be apt for close combat, even if most Belkans are indeed melee fighters. I would guess Belka is more of a race or a different society of sorts, one with its own magic system, compared to Mid-Childa... or so I think.But...! But...! Even Midchilda mages have melee for balance...!

Do they? Or is it just Fate and Nanoha? :uhoh:

If you still have them, send me the raws, I'll finish up the job :DFear the Chaos fansubs. They'll corrupt you faster than the demons of the same name. :uhoh:

Erio, mind if I post OPs for the Spiral arcs? A little inspired to do something short.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 20:44
CHAOS!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

DAKARA... :heh:



But...! But...! Even Midchilda mages have melee for balance...!

Do they? Or is it just Fate and Nanoha? :uhoh:

S2U: <Break Impulse>

Chrono>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Kha


Fear the Chaos fansubs. They'll corrupt you faster than the demons of the same name. :uhoh:

More like Chaos' Director's cut edition :p

USB500
2007-10-28, 20:57
Kurogane! SPIN ON!!!!!

Kurogane kills Backlog with Titanic Drill

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*Ai Enma carries USB's body to hell*

Mai: ...

Ai-senpai...
:eek: :eek: :eek:

Why it's Ai-chan instead of Mai-chan? :eek: :eek: :eek:

not that I don't like being carried to hell by the Jigoku Shoujo HERSELF <3

Where'd all this steam come from? :uhoh:
Are we talking about indoor hot spring? :confused: :heh: :naughty: :uhoh:

Yeees.... VERY HUNGRY...

:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:
I hope your definition of hungry doesn't include THAT. :uhoh:

===========

Physical bind+magical bind=bondage much! *runs like the wind*
WANT! :D :D :D

*Enma Ai bops USB500 on the head with oar*

Ai: urusai.


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Wonder what kind of image I'll have to get... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-119176324411356.jpg):)

Hmmmm I wonder... (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/akibakko-118875789398151.jpg)
:love: :love: :love:


One where his legs intertwine with her, his and her hands together on her bosom, and his face by her neck?

Mai: ...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/icon_redface.gif

...

a...

...

...

ano...



...

...

...

*one brutal ass kicking later*

Mai: ...

b...

baka.

Smith: *bloody mess* :eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:

Squishy...
Loki just got owned. :uhoh:

=================

:eek::eek::eek:

WINRAR!

Zafira in afro, Lutecia as RORI RAIDA, and Vivio as sunflower fairy godmother combo is awesome! :bow:

Frieda stripping Ginga is even more AWESOME! :bow::bow: *blood sprays from nostrils*

Tail grabbing wins the OC Award of Best Scene. :bow::bow::bow:

And really, Smith and Wesson should be spared from their blood-soaked fate; they were just telling the truth. :heh:
:heh: :heh: :heh: :heh:

Regarding Smith & Wesson, let me just quote Dr. House:

"Your mouth says no, but your prune says yes."

:uhoh: :uhoh:

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...http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v33/zetar0n1n/jawdrop.gif
I can already imagine Hayate saying...

Hayate: Ah! Ohayo~ A-na-ta~
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
To who? :confused: :eyebrow: :uhoh:

.Ok...teaser for a scene at the end of chapter 20~

Maren: *blushes* D-dou desu ka...Koji-sama?
Koji: M-maji? *pinches own cheek*

:uhoh:*runs*
:love: :love: :love: :heh:

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Not unless you have Katrina all ready to 'ride' him :heh: Not any kind of playing, but outright -=[censored]=- and -=[censored]=- , then have them -=[censored]=- ,

-=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=-
-=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=- -=[censored]=-
:eek: :eek: :eek:
Information overload has caused USB500's brain to shut down. Again, Enma Ai brings his body to Hell.

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Just watched Clannad 4 and Kimikiss 1 & 2.

What can I say, more LOL for CLANNAD, especially that confession scene:D:D:D. (Ichinose Kotomi is so MOE~!:love:) And Kimikiss is indeed much more natural!:D:D:D MAJOR score right at the end of the first ep!:eek::D
Now I have to watch both of them. :(

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Kai: What's with the rocket burst of Mai-WINRAR? Her badassery and willingness to face gods had me humming:

"Kill the unkillable,
Slay the unslayable,
RAWR! RAWR! FIGHT ZA POWAA!"

No chance, Destroyers. :D
:heh: :heh:

Also, what's with Keroko-chan's rice-cooker syndrome? You know, the chronic steam out of ears condition? I haven't seen it so much since Keroko-day! Well, Fate may be a blush-meter, but Keroko's... :uhoh:
Huh? :confused: what happened?
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Hmmm, nothing much to see here..:heh: I didn't recognise most of the cosplay... which is probably why I wasn't very interested..:heh:

Still waiting for Mai's entrance :D :D
OC overload, I guess? :heh:

Will do. :nod:

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True.

BTW, Arcas and Mel will be there for the Christmas Party - the Major will be unavailable (AGAIN), and Boomer will be back on Earth.

BTW2, you said that all this takes place 4 years post-StrikerS final fight, yes?
2: alright, then. *takes note*

3: Yes.

<Looks @ 3> HOORAY!!
:D :D :D

Saint X
2007-10-28, 21:02
And speaking of Maren, each time i read bit about jealously, mating and that ero-scene, i remember some things and scenes that may or may not be there. And since I'm planning for Maren and the gang to be integrated into AtS II, misgt as well plan some scenes, if anyone does not mind.

"She deserves my attention, not you!"

"Oh yeah, says you! It would be a miracle if he sees you!"

"Why you son of-"

*mess hall brawl ensues*

Two hours later...

*the sound of vulcan firing into the roof are heard*

Kyla: WHAT IN THE NAME OF THE DANAAN IS HAPPENING HERE?!!

*Sees two camps 'entrenched'*

Kyla: OH MY GODDESS... *Smacks head with palm*

- Tough luck Kyla... GOOD LUCK!

*Cue in cheesy and lousy entrance track*

I've been waiting for you, Koji Minawa! *slams device on the ground* I am part of the bodyguard group [insert rhyming ___ ___ ____-Chan name here], simply the [Insert initials of the rhyming name] [insert cheesy name here]!!!

Uhm... are you really part of this unit?

Shut up Koji Minawa! You must duel me for [insert concerned female name here]-chan!!!

Is that it? I would like to hear what the trophy, [name]-san, would have to say.

Uhm...

MONDOU MUYOU!!! *jumps into air* (just for the wtf factor)

*cue in alert siren*

I've already given my body and soul to Minawa-kun!!!

*silence for about 10 milisec*

Ha? WAAAAAA~ *misses them and slams on the pavement and skids and rolls for good measure while device slams on ground*

Sorry... I just mean... I plan to give my body and soul...

Too late... but are you okay?

Yes.

- I tried and it seemed that i've massively failed.

"Okay people, the reason why i call all of you guys (Literally) here is to give you an important announcement. One of our new members will be having a special problem in the coming weeks... the one problem that even the most preventive of measures cannot prevent... it's that time of her life- mating season."

"EH????!!!!"

"I have to issue psyblockers to each of you males... so that she'll not cling on to you- you don't know the scope of a female of her species can do under heat- that includes you Vincent- in a worse case situation, she will not even bother if the person is even human or of her race for that matter- even androids like you are not safe. I'll issue a blocker for Maren later so that she'll not be aggressive against other females when the season starts."

"But Captain, what about Koji Minawa? why did you not call him here? are you planning to..."

"Let's say that a push is needed... a really big one in this case."

"Captain, i wonder sometimes if you're even human..."

"No, for this period of time, i'm cupid- the sick cupid."

"Captain... that was a lame joke."

- Bad choice... and lame joke as *gets shot*

Aaron008R
2007-10-28, 21:13
But if I wanted to be really evil, given Kha's religious background, his "Confession" bind, especially if he has to literally "drop" it onto Fate since she moves so fast, might end up trapping Fate in a missionary position. :uhoh:

(runs from moral pitchfork army)

Missionary?:confused:

*checks wiki*

:eek::eek::eek:

YOU'RE PUSHING IT TOO FAR!!!!:frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

I was expecting it to be a crucifix position due to the religious background.:heh:

Nanoha and Hayate are close contenders. :uhoh:

:nod:

Naruhodou... so Lowe likes...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/Sayanouta-071.jpg

:uhoh:

So that was the 'food' put in the fridge...:uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Well, it's never going to happen (( due to the H4XX-O-METER it would break )), but if Skane's EVERYBODY UNISON scenario ever happens, Saga's Unison form... would look like this.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/sh_7.jpg

Zerstro-gattai indeed...:twitch::twitch::twitch:
Epicness just from the appearance...:D:D:D

"Chaos2Frozen - Moral army's public enemy No. 1"

:nod::nod:

Keroko-tan: Hayo! Mokuhyou mike! Hassha!

This had me grinning.:D

Haha, its not that it will be the first time, though... Just look at A's... :uhoh: I certainly prefer grown-up Fate, though. :uhoh:

Fate WAS tied up (and almost choked to death) by Scaglietti in episode 24.:confused:

:dots:

Wait... So this means you wanted it in a different manner

Interesting list. Kotomi's character is extremely exaggerated, though. :heh:

That's the main charming point there.:D

I think my list would be somewhat the same, just with Kotomi between Tomoyo and Nagisa/Kyou. :D

:nod::nod::nod:

But the fact that Ryou scores high in your list... AARON-ANIKI!!! :D:D:D

:heh::heh::heh:
It was the very good impressions I got from her in eps. 1, 2 and 4.:D

Noted. No problem. :)

Thanks.:D

Her magic rank gives the impression of a hybrid spec Belka magician, using both close-in Knight principles with spell-slinging wizardry...

...but canon has show her to be a pure Wizard. I know team mechanics specifies her to be such but... ZERO melee skill? And you call yourself a Belka mage? Even the Gunslingers can rifle-buttswing someone out of their deadzone, why can't someone holding a Swertkreuz, which translates into Sword Cross by Seiou's grace?! :rolleyes:

Sorry, rehashing old complaint. :heh:

:(
Well... I wouldn't be so quick to call it ZERO.:heh:
Swinging a staff should be easy enough.:heh:
I guess they were going along the lines of too large mana pool for finesse in melee angle. But IMHO, they went way too far.:mad: Even making her say that Caro should be able to perform better than her in such a situation is -_-;...

Anyway, she seems to be capable enough when in Unison... But that's about it.:sad:

Btw, I've been thinking alot about it... And I've decided, that in the event when Katrina break Maren and Koji apart, I would make it my personal mission to fix it with the most epic Chaos-style fic EVER. Everything inch of my power would be put into it, I will surpass Nighty in terms of epiciness! I will step over FSZ in terms of moe-iness! I will crush LoweGear in terms of sweetcheesium!

I will not rest until the Maren ero-scene is unlocked!!!



...Best if you all forget the last part >.>

Chaos got infected by crack?:heh:

Finally done something.


I still remember.
How mother used to tell me about her home world. She wanted to keep on remembering, she said. So that it could live on in her memories. She wanted me to remember it too, and the circumstances that lead to its destruction, so that I could learn from what happened.

I didn't really mind, since she always looks happy when talking about, although later I knew she felt sad as well. What I hated about it was how misarable my father looked whenever he happened to be nearby listening. He'd apologise and go on about how he failed her. It was no suprise that he dropped out of the Bureau. He had completely lost his nerve.

I can't help but remember how pathetic he was. He got even worse after mother died.

I heard what really happened. The people of that world simply ushered their own way to doom. The Bureau contacted them a little too late. Not that they'd actually listen if it was any earlier. Sure, the last resort that he took part in might had made a difference had it succeeded. But it failed, the odds were stacked against them. Did he really think all of that was his fault ? Did he think just because he fell in love with a woman there, he had a responsibility to save the world ? Did he think he could stop millions of people from dying had he tried a little harder ? He needed to face reality and understand the futility of it.

He failed. The Bureau failed. Time moves on. But he just kept on hiding from the past.

I didn't choose this path to redeem him. I just wanted to be that strong person that he never was. If the TSAB failed back then, I'll change it so that it'll work the next time. If I fail, I'll put all my effort to succeed in the future. Sometimes, things won't change even when you have put an entire lifetime's effort into it, but I'm prepared to face that. I won't give up on my goals.

After all, It's so boring to live on without any dreams and ambitions.

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She was then suddenly roused by a knocking on the door. The grey world of her thoughts and memories washed away, leaving behind the view of the sky outside the window of her hospital room. Almera grasped her forehead instinctively as her throbbing headache returned.

"Can we come in, Sergeant Almera ?"
A deep, familiar voice adderessed her from beyond the door. It was unmistakably Lexus. 'We' means that her other subordinate is likely with him too.

"Yes, yes.. you can enter." Almera answered in an uninterested tone.
Gathering her senses, she quickly recalled how and why she ended up in a hospital bed yet again.

A tall silver-haired young man and a child with light brown hair entered the room, clad in their armed forces suits. The child, Abel quickly placed the basket of fruits he was carrying next to the bed before moving next to the young man.

"I'm glad that you got out of that in good shape, but I wonder what part of leaving your squad to charge into a ancient warship infested by AMF-equipped Gadget Drones was sound judgement."
Lexus' words were particularly dripping with annoyance despite his attempts to sound 'business-as-usual'.

"Oh, I was simply worried about the group that went in first. I did tell the Lt. Colonel about it."

"Right.." Lexus gave a doubting look.

"Ok ok, I just wanted a piece of the action."

"But we were badly swarmed outside too." Abel cut in.

"OK ! I thought there was a chance that I could earn a share of the spotlight from taking part in the disabling of the Cradle. Give me a break already, I did help drag some those dead weights out alive with me."

"Oh right, we dropped by the other room to see them earlier. They wanted us to tell you that they were grateful for your help."
Abel's face lightened up as he suddenly remembered that message.

"Ugh. Stop making me feel bad."
Almera grimaced and looked away. It hurt even more coming from Abel, with that straightfoward gaze and innocent tone of his.

"We're not here to extract an apology out of you, nor to make you promise to refrain from doing such things in the future. We just hope that you have learned your lesson. You could have gotten into serious trouble if Lt. Colonel Yagami didn't vouch for your actions." Lexus continued with his usual business-like tone.

Abel then interjected. "We were just worried."

"You were worried about her. I was worried that she'd end up using the others as shields in desperation."

"Tch. Fine. I'll be careful."

"..but don't think you can get away with this for free. I'll make sure that you'll all be thoroughly busy when I get back."

"I'm sure the rest of the department would be thrilled to hear that. However, I'm afraid we need to take our leave now. Abel's been bothering that Lieutenant again almost every day since we had time-off from the last incident. He'll need early rest, and so do you."

"Don't lose to her, kid." Almera just barely tried to show some form of encouragement. Of course, that was just a matter of speech, she didn't really think Abel stood any chance against that person.

"I'll do my best ! We'll be doing live swords, without magic tomorrow !" Abel answered proudly. His eyes were serious.

'...did Signum really to agree to that ?'
Almera let out a sigh. "...I wish I still had that kind of enthusiasm. By the way, Lexus.. you once mentioned that your grandfather was originally an off-worlder, right ? Which world did he come from ?"

"I believe it was the 97th Unadministered World. Is there anything else ?" Lexus showed a slight surprise in his expression.

"No, nothing. Thank you for visiting."

"We'll try to drop by again tomorrow, Sergeant !"

"Goodbye then, Sergeant."

As soon as her two subordinates left the room, Almera took a deep breath and reclined back into her bed. Amber glare from the setting sun pained her eyes a little as she turned to look at the sky outside. Mid-childa was saved from potential destruction only last week, but there was still unease in her.

'It has been years since I dreamed of that.. I wonder why now ?'


Time skip after the prologues are done, I guess. I still need a title to call all this, lol.

Also, Lexus' face portrait is done !
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j231/grasblade/sange/lexus1.gif

NICE!:D
The story is very believable and fitting with what happened.:D
Nice drawing, too.:D
Good work.:D

Dozo! :)
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=1218300&postcount=13824


Yes! Finaly I updated something again!

I made the personality section clearer and moved it below his background, I also added some information about his unit.

For Carnage I also added a personality section and of course a spell list.
But i must admit that im not very creativ when it comes to spells... :heh:

Writing this all made me realized how bad my english is :heh:

You're English is bad?:confused: How?:confused::confused:

Anyway, more updates, I see.:D Those spells are quite cool.:D
Will you write an Aces vs. Carnage-Elric scenario later?:D

Kha
2007-10-28, 21:28
And speaking of Maren, each time i read bit about jealously, mating and that ero-scene, i remember some things and scenes that may or may not be there. And since I'm planning for Maren and the gang to be integrated into AtS II, misgt as well plan some scenes, if anyone does not mind.

"She deserves my attention, not you!"

"Oh yeah, says you! It would be a miracle if he sees you!"

"Why you son of-"

*mess hall brawl ensues*

Two hours later...

*the sound of vulcan firing into the roof are heard*

Kyla: WHAT IN THE NAME OF THE DANAAN IS HAPPENING HERE?!!

*Sees two camps 'entrenched'*

Kyla: OH MY GODDESS... *Smacks head with palm*

- Tough luck Kyla... GOOD LUCK!

*Cue in cheesy and lousy entrance track*

I've been waiting for you, Koji Minawa! *slams device on the ground* I am part of the bodyguard group [insert rhyming ___ ___ ____-Chan name here], simply the [Insert initials of the rhyming name] [insert cheesy name here]!!!

Uhm... are you really part of this unit?

Shut up Koji Minawa! You must duel me for [insert concerned female name here]-chan!!!

Is that it? I would like to hear what the trophy, [name]-san, would have to say.

Uhm...

MONDOU MUYOU!!! *jumps into air* (just for the wtf factor)

*cue in alert siren*

I've already given my body and soul to Minawa-kun!!!

*silence for about 10 milisec*

Ha? WAAAAAA~ *misses them and slams on the pavement and skids and rolls for good measure while device slams on ground*

Sorry... I just mean... I plan to give my body and soul...

Too late... but are you okay?

Yes.

- I tried and it seemed that i've massively failed.

"Okay people, the reason why i call all of you guys (Literally) here is to give you an important announcement. One of our new members will be having a special problem in the coming weeks... the one problem that even the most preventive of measures cannot prevent... it's that time of her life- mating season."

"EH????!!!!"

"I have to issue psyblockers to each of you males... so that she'll not cling on to you- you don't know the scope of a female of her species can do under heat- that includes you Vincent- in a worse case situation, she will not even bother if the person is even human or of her race for that matter- even androids like you are not safe. I'll issue a blocker for Maren later so that she'll not be aggressive against other females when the season starts."

"But Captain, what about Koji Minawa? why did you not call him here? are you planning to..."

"Let's say that a push is needed... a really big one in this case."

"Captain, i wonder sometimes if you're even human..."

"No, for this period of time, i'm cupid- the sick cupid."

"Captain... that was a lame joke."

- Bad choice... and lame joke as *gets shot*:twitch:

What craziness is going on here?! :eyespin:

Missionary?:confused:

*checks wiki*

:eek::eek::eek:

YOU'RE PUSHING IT TOO FAR!!!!:frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

I was expecting it to be a crucifix position due to the religious background.:heh:That's for when Kha is moving in for the kill, like the Roman soldier finishing off the crucified Jesus. It's when Kha drives his spear into Fate. :nod:

...
...
...

I HAVE SINNED AGAIN! T_T

Fate WAS tied up (and almost choked to death) by Scaglietti in episode 24.:confused:

:dots:

Wait... So this means you wanted it in a different mannerWait a minute. Pornobinds are Chrono's and Chrono's only! :p

But the fact that Erio wishes such is... disturbing?
The only one who has permission to bind Fate is Kha!
Oh-hohohohoho!

haiz123321
2007-10-28, 22:03
Err...What? :heh:
I just combined a few class change quests from MMORPGs, some ideas of my own, and mixed everything together :heh:

But the trial thingy can't possibly be different for everyone right? I mean like maybe there are 6 kinds of trials but all which are edited based on the person's skill etc.


Not when the targets throw their nukes back at you and can teleport. :D

Ouch :heh:


Well, it's never going to happen (( due to the H4XX-O-METER it would break )), but if Skane's EVERYBODY UNISON scenario ever happens, Saga's Unison form... would look like this.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v480/chiakt/sh_7.jpg

O_O NIGHTY U WIN AGAIN :frustrated::frustrated::frustrated:


The trial must be taken without ones device? Tough, though completely understandable.

But magic can be used right? :eyespin:

Shana's catchphrase is 'Urusai!' In the DVD extra's there are omake where she turns into a chibi, Shana-tan, and changes 'Urusai' into 'Uruchai!'

Keroko has a spell called 'Ion-Cannon' when she changes into Keroko-tan, it changes to 'Ion-Canon' and is used to blow away contradictions to Canon, white devil style.

Ohhh


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_08.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_08.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_09.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_09.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_10.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_10.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_11.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_11.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_12.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_12.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_13.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_13.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_14.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_14.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_15.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_15.png)http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/th_MSLNA_02_-_16.png (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/argument%20stuff/MSLNA_02_-_16.png)


Though the part where, If i lose, i fail is quite common since that's almost what everyone thinks ;)


*Cue in cheesy and lousy entrance track*

I've been waiting for you, Koji Minawa! *slams device on the ground* I am part of the bodyguard group [insert rhyming ___ ___ ____-Chan name here], simply the [Insert initials of the rhyming name] [insert cheesy name here]!!!

Uhm... are you really part of this unit?

Shut up Koji Minawa! You must duel me for [insert concerned female name here]-chan!!!

Is that it? I would like to hear what the trophy, [name]-san, would have to say.

Uhm...

MONDOU MUYOU!!! *jumps into air* (just for the wtf factor)

*cue in alert siren*

I've already given my body and soul to Minawa-kun!!!

*silence for about 10 milisec*

Ha? WAAAAAA~ *misses them and slams on the pavement and skids and rolls for good measure while device slams on ground*

Sorry... I just mean... I plan to give my body and soul...

Too late... but are you okay?

Yes.

- I tried and it seemed that i've massively failed.

Shuffle :D

Reiji Tabibito
2007-10-28, 22:07
ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!

I was the one who posted that video in the forums in the first place!

Ah. Sorry, it's been a LOOOONG time.


Clannad still fails to click for me, though I do admit Tomoyo is nice. :D (For some reason Clannad girls dont have that :love: appeal for me...which is weird since I like most Kanon girls) And still the main attraction so far is Tomoya. Very weird I tell ya. :heh:

:eek: Yes! More Ryou in the anime please!! :D


Poor Ryou... she'll probably end up as the Sayuri of CLANNAD...

But we shall still support her...

...for we love our Ryou-chan!!!


I was wondering when Arcas would enter the fray. :heh:


Joudan ka?

The Arcas/Keroko SISCON dynamic has the potential to put Jun1/Nemu to shame...

*Yawns and wanders into the mostly empty thread to see a few people just bumming around on couches not doing much*

Slow weekends are slow.

<slumps over at desk, snoring>


Nagisa actually scores as much as Kyou for me.:p If I were to rank the girls to how interesting I find them right now...

1) Kotomi = Most MOE~ out of the lot right now.:love:
2) Ryou = How can they leave her out as just a support character? @_@ :frustrated:
3) Tomoyo = Maybe she'll get a higher ranking when I see more. *coughderederecough*
4) Nagisa/Kyou = I know it's weird for others.:heh: But I find Nagisa to be quite endearing.:heh: Kyou's scenes are also fun to watch.:D
5) Fuko = Don't kill me!!! @_@ *runs*


SHE IS RYOU!!! AND SHE IS MADE OF MOE AND CUTENESS!!!


Even Kyou's position in the anime seems threatened... I've recently just entered Kyou's route...

Seems to be quite... romance-heavy... Unlike Kanon... since there's actually a TRUE END lead girl... this can screw up things... :uhoh:


This is what I've been saying all along... that if we only remain in the school, then the story will be Tomoya/Nagisa...


And now for IMAGE TIME!!!

My previous template for Kay's appearance was Yuuko Amazawa from Denno Coil, whom I had to shop out of her loliness to fit Kay's older image. Then suddenly I found a character that's 99.9% so close to my image of Kay that it might as well be her! :eek:

*cookie for whoeever names the original*

So here's Kay in her alternate leather outfit, still brown, and still the GL fanatic :heh:



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/USSKenji64296/KayMathis.jpg



This looks VEEEERY familiar...

BTW, did you read my PMs?

Ok, so here goes, Part 1 of Chapter 20!


These last few days have been busy ones, not just for the Aces, but all involved in the JS Incident.
The trial of Jail Scaglietti and the Numbers was among those tasks they had to participate.

But thay day finally came...Koji's Knighting ceremony.

[MC 075 - September 28th]

[North Midchilda: Belka Self-Administrated Area - Saint Church]
[07:38 AM]

It may be early, but people already gathered around the Saint Church chapel as the time for the ceremony drew closer.
As the one who's being knighted, Koji is the center of attention.
While Koji is busy greeting people, Yui and Maren stood among several groups of people in the courtyard of the Saint Church.

"There sure is a lot of people here..." Maren commented.
Yui looked around, "Hmm...Most of them are knights in training and some colleagues from the TSAB." She stood by her side.
"Koji-sama must be excited about today." Maren smiled at Koji, who wasn't far from them, talking to the guests.
"Yes...today is the day Onii-chan becomes a full-fledged Knight." She smiled.

"Still...many people came to watch the ceremony." Maren looked around.
Yui nodded, "Even though Belka-style is becoming somewhat common nowadays, there aren't many Knights."
"Is that so?" Maren looked at Yui.
Yui nodded again, "Take Subaru-san and Ginga for example, she isn't considered a Knight, but a Belka Mage." Yui explains.
"I see..."
"Also...the Knighting ceremony is hard to pass because of the trial." She adds.
Maren blinks, "Trial?"
Yui nods once more, "We've been to a ceremony before, and it took over 2 hours to complete it due to the trial."

A person behind Yui coughed, "Ahem..."
"A-Ah..." Yui sweatdropped before she turned.
A guy stood a few steps away from them, "Talking behind my back?"
"Colt-san..." Yui tittered.

Maren looked at the man, tall, auburn hair and eyes, and a scar over his nose.
"Yui, who is this person?" Maren asked.
"Oh, this is Colthearts-san, the Knight I was talking about that took so much time to complete the Trial." She grinned slightly.
"...y-yeah." a tiny sweatdrop could be seen on the corner of Colt's forehead.
"I'm called Maren, pleased to meet you." Maren bowed slightly.
"Yes, nice to meet you..." He nodded. "Anyway, I heard about Koji's ceremony, so I came to take a look."

"Just you? Mari-san didn't come?" Yui asked.
"Mari is around, she's greeting the Wolkenritter."
"I see." Yui smiled. "Mari-san and Rein-chan get along quite well." She turned to Maren as she said that.
"Oh..." Maren nodded.
----------------------------

As soon as Koji was free, he headed to Maren and Yui, and saw Colt with them.
"Aniki!" Koji shouted.
"Yo, 'Short-stuff'" Colt grinned.
"What did you call me?" Koji prepared a fist and threw at him.
Colt promptly blocked, "Not bad..." and smirked.

The two stared at each other, still with Koji's fist connected to Colt's palm, and laughed.
"So, today's the day, eh?" Colt asked.
"Yep." Koji smirked.

Maren looked at them and blinked, (What an unsual greeting...) She said to Yui.
Yui giggled inward, (They're always like this when they don't meet often.)
(Is that so?) Maren looked at Yui.
(Yes, they have a brothers/rivals-like relationship) Yui explained.

Koji turned to Yui and Maren, "Eh? Where's Treize?" He looked around.
"Treize is with Erio and Caro." Maren replied.
"I see..." Koji paused, "Have you been introduced?" he asked.
"Yeah..." Colt nodded.

"But Maren-chan hasn't met Mari-san yet." Yui added.
"Oh, Mari-san is here too?" Koji immediately looked around searching for her.
Colt sighed. "Just follow that intuition of yours..."
Koji started looking around a lot, "She's close..." He said.

(Y-Yui...what is Koji-sama doing...) Maren asked Yui, with a curious tone.
Yui tittered, (You'll soon find out...) Yui smiled.

"Over there!" Koji pointed a crowd and soon enough Mari emerged from it.
Maren saw a young woman, probably the same age as Nanoha or Fate, dressed as a maid and with a serene expression on her face.
"It never fails..." Colt commented.
Mari looked around, then spotted them, "Colt-sama~" She walked to them in a quickened step, holding the sides of her skirt.
Stopping a couple steps away from Colt, she talked, "I have returned, Colt-sama." She smiled.
"Welcome back." He replied.

"M-Mari-san." A deep crimson could be seen across Koji's cheeks.
Mari smiled, "ara, Koji-san, how do you do?" She bowed politely.
"The same as always!" He replied energetically.
"That's good to hear." She smiled, "Oh, and good luck on today's ceremony."
"T-Thank you!" He smiled widely.

Maren was surprised at Koji's behavior, (Y-Yui...) She paused. (Is something wrong?)
(Nothing at all...) Yui replied, (Onii-chan is always like this around Mari-san.)
(A-ah...) Maren nodded as she saw them talk.
(I told you before, didn't I? That Onii-chan has a thing for maids.) Yui reminded her. (This is what I meant.)
(I-I see...) Maren stared at Koji, who talked with Mari. (But why does this bother me? I felt this before...a long time ago...) Maren said to herself.

Then, Mari noticed Yui and Maren, "Yui-san, how do you do?" She smiled.
Yui pouted, "mou Mari-san, I told you not to address me like that..."
Mari brought a hand to her chin and giggled, "I'm sorry, Yui-chan, it's a habit I have." She corrected herself.
Yui nodded, "That's more like it." and giggled.

"And this person is?" Mari turned to Maren.
"This is Maren-chan, Onii-chan's girlfriend." Yui replied before Koji or Maren could talk.
"Ah..." Koji and Maren said in unison, and blushed.
"Is that so? I'm glad for you, Koji-san." Mari smiled at him.
Koji laughed embarrassed while scratching his cheek, "Y-yeah..."

"Then, allow me to introduce myself..." Mari held the sides of her skirt, lifted it slightly then bowed.
"Mirror of Illusions, Marience...please feel free to call me Mari." She smiled at Maren.
"Yes...pleased to meet you." Maren bowed, then blinked, "A title?"
Koji stepped into the conversation, "Yes, Mari-san is a Unison device."
Mari nodded, "That is correct." and smiled.
"I see..." Maren stared at Mari.

Koji then remembered, "Oh, Aniki, do you have any advise for me concerning the trial?"
"You mean the Knight's Ordeal?" Colt asked.
Koji nodded.
"I don't think they'll be of much use..." He replied.
"Why not?" Koji raised an eyebrow.
"It is said that the Knight's Ordeal varies from person to person. So far there hasn't been two trials alike." Colt explained.
Colt continued, "The cave where one takes the trial is a mysterious place that has been around since this area became self-administrated by Belka."
"Then I'll have to be prepared for anything..." Koji said serious.

"It'll be especially hard because you can't take your device." Colt added.
"Eh? But didn't you-" But Koji was interrupted.
"No, Knight Carim took it before I entered the cave."
"Then what'll I use to defend myself?" Koji asked.
"You'll be given a weapon of your choice and the ceremonial armor for the Knight's Ordeal."
"So, I'll be on my own..." Koji looked down at the ground.
"That's right." Colt nodded.

(Koji-sama...) Maren said to herself, worried.
----------------------------


Yeah, that's it for now...

The trial will be in the following piece (part of it at least :rolleyes:)
*runs*

<nods> I think Maren's going to need to play on Koji's fetish...


*Jeno peck Keroko-chan on the cheek lightly while she was distracted by Mai's Entrance*

Jeno: "Think of it as a good luck charm ;) Kero-channn~~"


GARcas: <explodes in SISCON Rage>


For one thing, with the exception of Lindy, nobody on their side knows about his ability (Keroko-kun doesn't count >.>), and by KISSING HER he ensures that they'll be pissed thoughout the whole day :D


Oh dear god.

You'd better not do that - then Arcas'd stop at nothing to put Jeno down... PERMANENTLY.


I will not rest until the Maren ero-scene is unlocked!!!

...Best if you all forget the last part >.>


<sighs> And that's Perversion: 543,003 , Decency: 2.

There has been a call to overtake the Gundam thread. LET'S DO THIS!

LEEEEEEROOOOY JENKIIIIINS!

EDIT: Wait I read wrong... :heh:
Yeap, an unlockable scene for the NanoHammer eroge RPG. :nod:


What Gundam Thread?


2: alright, then. *takes note*

3: Yes.

:D :D :D

Goody! And re: the Christmas Special - Arcas and Mel will be married by then, so you can have guests poke fun @ "the newlyweds," (a running joke, since they've been married for @ least 6 months, but still insist on doing the syrupy, cutesy things newlyweds do...) and perhaps even get them under the mistletoe...

And speaking of Maren, each time i read bit about jealously, mating and that ero-scene, i remember some things and scenes that may or may not be there. And since I'm planning for Maren and the gang to be integrated into AtS II, misgt as well plan some scenes, if anyone does not mind.

"She deserves my attention, not you!"

"Oh yeah, says you! It would be a miracle if he sees you!"

"Why you son of-"

*mess hall brawl ensues*

Two hours later...

*the sound of vulcan firing into the roof are heard*

Kyla: WHAT IN THE NAME OF THE DANAAN IS HAPPENING HERE?!!

*Sees two camps 'entrenched'*

Kyla: OH MY GODDESS... *Smacks head with palm*

- Tough luck Kyla... GOOD LUCK!

*Cue in cheesy and lousy entrance track*

I've been waiting for you, Koji Minawa! *slams device on the ground* I am part of the bodyguard group , simply the [Insert initials of the rhyming name] [insert cheesy name here]!!!

Uhm... are you really part of this unit?

Shut up Koji Minawa! You must duel me for [insert concerned female name here]-chan!!!

Is that it? I would like to hear what the trophy, [name]-san, would have to say.

Uhm...

MONDOU MUYOU!!! *jumps into air* (just for the wtf factor)

*cue in alert siren*

I've already given my body and soul to Minawa-kun!!!

*silence for about 10 milisec*

Ha? WAAAAAA~ *misses them and slams on the pavement and skids and rolls for good measure while device slams on ground*

Sorry... I just mean... I plan to give my body and soul...

Too late... but are you okay?

Yes.

- I tried and it seemed that i've massively failed.

"Okay people, the reason why i call all of you guys (Literally) here is to give you an important announcement. One of our new members will be having a special problem in the coming weeks... the one problem that even the most preventive of measures cannot prevent... it's that time of her life- mating season."

"EH????!!!!"

"I have to issue psyblockers to each of you males... so that she'll not cling on to you- you don't know the scope of a female of her species can do under heat- that includes you Vincent- in a worse case situation, she will not even bother if the person is even human or of her race for that matter- even androids like you are not safe. I'll issue a blocker for Maren later so that she'll not be aggressive against other females when the season starts."

"But Captain, what about Koji Minawa? why did you not call him here? are you planning to..."

"Let's say that a push is needed... a really big one in this case."

"Captain, i wonder sometimes if you're even human..."

"No, for this period of time, i'm cupid- the sick cupid."

"Captain... that was a lame joke."

- Bad choice... and lame joke as *gets shot*

Oh Dear God (ODG) @ that last one...


That's for when Kha is moving in for the kill, like the Roman soldier finishing off the crucified Jesus. It's when Kha drives his spear into Fate. :nod:

...
...
...

I HAVE SINNED AGAIN! T_T


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! (http://noooo16bit.ytmnd.com/)

My pure, innocent Kha-sama has been corrupted!!


CHAOS!!! OMAE O KOROSU!!


Wait a minute. Pornobinds are Chrono's and Chrono's only! :p

But the fact that Erio wishes such is... disturbing?
[I]The only one who has permission to bind Fate is Kha!
Oh-hohohohoho!

And Sophia does a proper evil laugh at last!


NEW MATERIAL!!!!


LegendS: Ep. 1 - "Break In"

60% Complete. ETA: 1.5 Weeks.

Chaos2Frozen
2007-10-28, 22:29
:eek: :eek: :eek:

Why it's Ai-chan instead of Mai-chan? :eek: :eek: :eek:

not that I don't like being carried to hell by the Jigoku Shoujo HERSELF <3

Oi oi, there's a limit to how far/long you can delude yourself :heh:

Loki: "I would like to buy his soul please :D"

Ai: ...



Loki just got owned. :uhoh:


Loki: "That's not me :p"

Smith: @_@ @_@ @_@




=====================


:eek: :eek: :eek:
Information overload has caused USB500's brain to shut down. Again, Enma Ai brings his body to Hell.

====================


Loki: "Aren't you tired of doing that :heh:"

Ai: ...



Huh? :confused: what happened?
==============


:heh: :heh:

Who wants to explain this :heh: ?



That's for when Kha is moving in for the kill, like the Roman soldier finishing off the crucified Jesus. It's when Kha drives his spear into Fate. :nod:

...
...
...

I HAVE SINNED AGAIN! T_T

OH NO YOU DON'T!!

Your not pinning this one on me!




Wait a minute. Pornobinds are Chrono's and Chrono's only! :p

But the fact that Erio wishes such is... disturbing?
The only one who has permission to bind Fate is Kha!
Oh-hohohohoho!


Chrono vs Kha

:uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh:


Chrono with Sup-up Frost/Water, energy manipulation and binding spells

vs Kha

:nod:



Poor Ryou... she'll probably end up as the Sayuri of CLANNAD...

But we shall still support her...

...for we love our Ryou-chan!!!

Better than being the Kaori :p



Joudan ka?

The Arcas/Keroko SISCON dynamic has the potential to put Jun1/Nemu to shame...



Yes! Say it LOUDLY! Say it PROUDLY!




<nods> I think Maren's going to need to play on Koji's fetish...

Birthday/Valentine present



GARcas: <explodes in SISCON Rage>

Jeno: "Oh, there you are :nod: Couldn't see you before..."

*Still holding her*

Keroko: "Arcas-kun :confused: ?"



Oh dear god.

You'd better not do that - then Arcas'd stop at nothing to put Jeno down... PERMANENTLY.


Jeno (Tantrum): "Iyada! Kero-chan DAI-suki!"

*Hugs Keroko*

Keroko: "EHHH?!?!"





NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! (http://noooo16bit.ytmnd.com/)

My pure, innocent Kha-sama has been corrupted!!


CHAOS!!! OMAE O KOROSU!!




DAKARA :upset: :heh: ! I didn't do anything!

Kha
2007-10-28, 23:00
OH NO YOU DON'T!!

Your not pinning this one on me!Why not? :p

Chrono vs Kha

:uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh: :uhoh:


Chrono with Sup-up Frost/Water, energy manipulation and binding spells

vs Kha

:nod:That reminds me, I've never done one before... :heh:

But anyway it's:

Chrono with Sup-up Frost/Water, energy manipulation and binding spells

VS

Kha in Panzerform (http://www.worldofwarcraft.com/info/classes/paladin/talents.html?5055000200000000000005320133023021023 215510000000000000000000000)

:nod:

Or would you rather Jaegerform (www.worldofwarcraft.com/info/classes/paladin/talents.html?0550310250310051135150320100423000000 000000000000000000000000000), or the scary Schneiderform (www.worldofwarcraft.com/info/classes/paladin/talents.html?5050300200000000000000000000000000000 000005023005122233125031051)? :D

EDIT: Talent names and effects may vary and even invert due to the difference in energies used. These talent specs have been developed solely for the Nanohaverse and usage in WoW does not guarantee a good outcome.

Ottocycle
2007-10-28, 23:05
Kha with Redoubt, Shield Specialization, Blessing of Sanctuary, Guardian's Favor, Spell Warding, Improved Concentration Aura, Holy Shield, Ardent Defender, Avenger's Shield[/B]


I swear, I expected the next thing I'd see on that list to be Fist of the Heavens or something :heh:

*remembers that epic sound effect from D2*

*or the epic spell from Nox*

USB500
2007-10-28, 23:05
Goody! And re: the Christmas Special - Arcas and Mel will be married by then, so you can have guests poke fun @ "the newlyweds," (a running joke, since they've been married for @ least 6 months, but still insist on doing the syrupy, cutesy things newlyweds do...) and perhaps even get them under the mistletoe...
Sure. *takes note again*

EDIT:
But if I wanted to be really evil, given Kha's religious background, his "Confession" bind, especially if he has to literally "drop" it onto Fate since she moves so fast, might end up trapping Fate in a missionary position. :uhoh:

(runs from moral pitchfork army)

That's for when Kha is moving in for the kill, like the Roman soldier finishing off the crucified Jesus. It's when Kha drives his spear into Fate. :nod:

...
...
...

I HAVE SINNED AGAIN! T_T
Innuendo posts are INNUENDO. :nono: :uhoh:

Bad Kha the Cleric; doing THIS and THAT to the innocent Fate-sama. :nono: :uhoh: :heh:

Kha
2007-10-28, 23:15
I swear, I expected the next thing I'd see on that list to be Fist of the Heavens or something :heh:

*remembers that epic sound effect from D2*

*or the epic spell from Nox*That wouldn't be WoW anymore, so no worries about that. :nod:

Saint X
2007-10-28, 23:31
:twitch:

What craziness is going on here?! :eyespin:

I HAVE SINNED AGAIN! T_T

- It's not craziness... it's just life in the AX

- Another unlockable scene? what the heck are we moving into eroge!

WE NEED MMORPG IDEAS!!! *points to a previous post*

*gets shot be eroge fans*

Shuffle :D

or it could be like this:

I won't let you speak badly of Minawa-kun!!!

*charges energy ball and blows the badmouthers, along with a side of the Silvana, also hitting the nearby Kagatsuchi.*

Mashiro: wha-wha-what?

Oh Dear God (ODG) @ that last one...

ODG is just an undestatement of the chaos about to follow

- i need to ask Flame for what happens to Maren during 'that time'...

and yes, Boomer is now being typed into AtS I as we speak- still trying to build his personality.

and probably add this chara.

So you're the noted Boomer- ive heard lots of stories from the Captain... nice finally seeing you... I'm Kione.