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Dragon Flame
2003-11-08, 11:43
i found this fanfic whilst browsing the web, its absolutely amazing, sent chiulls down my spine.

Precious Farewell

By Silver Dragonfly



He stood numbly as the autumn breeze whispered past. The name was only one of several that had been recently added to monument, but it would be one that he would never forget. He stiffened as he heard soft footsteps and then relaxed as a familiar presence came up beside him. Her smaller hand reached to wrap around his, their fingers intertwined. She rested her dark head against his broad chest, her other hand holding a small bouquet of flowers.



“He was the first to truly acknowledge me…”


“I know.”



“He helped raise many of Konoha’s finest shinobi. He truly cared about each and every one of his students…” His lips lifted in a small grin, “Even the loudest troublemakers… I think he may have even cared about them more.”



“I think so to.” She said softly.



“I never told him…but he was like the big brother I never had.”



“He knew. He often referred to you as his younger brother to others.”



“Really?”



“Yeah.”



He took a shaky breath. “He taught me so much, and I wish he could have taught our children those things too…” His voice trailed off, strained by the threat of tears.



“He will—through you.”



He smiled. “Where are—?”



“With Neiji and Tenten.”



“Ah.”



“Your students are worried about you; Sakura and Sasuke as well. They all know how close you two were.”



He wrapped an arm around her shoulders, pulling her closer.



“Tsunade sent Kakashi after the employer didn’t she.” A brief shifting of her head against his shoulder was the answer.



“Gai, Shikamaru, and Lee as well. She would have sent you…”



“But I have my team and the kids, not to mention the possibility of a trap set just for the event that I’m the one that goes after him. No I would be best off remaining in Konoha and protecting those that could yet be targeted here.” He sighed. “I don’t understand Hinata… they’re only children. Why attack children?” But he knew the answer. They had been attacked in order to get at their parents and family. Children of the Hyuga clan and the Rokudaime Hokage were bound to be powerful. Hinata pulled herself tighter into his arms. Naruto looked up at the sky for a moment, then back at the memorial. He almost lost them, the brightest jewels in his life, his children, save for the efforts of one Chuunin academy teacher.



“Thank you Iruka-sensei….Iruka-niichan…” he whispered loosening his hold on Hinata long enough for her to place the flowers on the memorial, then slowly turned towards the village with Hinata close at his side. Times would be rough, and the loss of such a great sensei would be felt. But as long as they had hope and a desire to protect those precious to them Konoha would remain strong.

Starfall
2003-11-08, 13:18
Nice! Really cool story, even though I hope it wont happen for real. Iruka sacrificing himself to save Naruto's children :upset:

monir
2003-11-08, 14:06
:upset:...boohoooooohoooo....fantastic story with a great description...DragonFlame, is there anymore of these or can you refer me to some sites that have these sorts of stories?...

Uzumaki626
2003-11-08, 14:41
Its no longer anime/manga... but another short story to be put in an english book for american high school students to learn. Eeek this reminds me of those days.. but it is still good in its own way :)

Lord Raiden
2003-11-08, 15:45
Well, one thing you gotta realize. IF someone went after Naruto and Hinata's kids, they probubly were so powerful that they probubly blew through Iruka like a blade of grass under a lawn mower. If Naruto makes hokage, we're talking about someone who'd need to be as powerful if not more powerful than him. Cause if he wasn't, he'd be a dead man/woman very darned quickly. Cause if Naruto didn't kick their a** into next century, Hinata, Neji and many others definately would on Naruto's behalf. :D

Heck, if I was a Jounin in Leaf village and someone went after Naruto, you can bet your bottom dollar, senin, hokage, or otherwise, I'd kick some serious a** and take names even if they did end up taking me out. They sure as heck wouldn't get one step closer to Naruto without a thurough butt kicking from me first. :)

Lst2touchdasky
2003-11-08, 15:48
wow how perfect. except iruka dieing of course :heh:

OFFSPRiNGCo16
2003-11-08, 17:06
Heh not bad, I like it :p I hope Iruka never dies though because he rocks :p

Nine Devil
2003-11-08, 20:33
yeah i hope so too i hope he will never dies :D

Starfall
2003-11-08, 20:43
Well, one thing you gotta realize. IF someone went after Naruto and Hinata's kids, they probubly were so powerful that they probubly blew through Iruka like a blade of grass under a lawn mower. If Naruto makes hokage, we're talking about someone who'd need to be as powerful if not more powerful than him. Cause if he wasn't, he'd be a dead man/woman very darned quickly. Cause if Naruto didn't kick their a** into next century, Hinata, Neji and many others definately would on Naruto's behalf. :D

Heck, if I was a Jounin in Leaf village and someone went after Naruto, you can bet your bottom dollar, senin, hokage, or otherwise, I'd kick some serious a** and take names even if they did end up taking me out. They sure as heck wouldn't get one step closer to Naruto without a thurough butt kicking from me first. :)

Maybe the assasin acted without Naruto knowing about it, and Iruka (who happened to be there or something) was able to stop them but unfortunatly died himself. The text says that they target the children to get to the parents.... Anyway, I don't think it's going to happen. :)

Vicious
2003-11-08, 21:46
That was touching. Very nice.

BTW, don't think Iruka-sensei will die. Leave him alone, poor Iruka-sensei... BTW, that scar he has above the nose creeps me. Someday, somewhere, Kishimoto-sama will reveal us where that scar came from... or not.

aFlipGuy
2003-11-08, 22:15
I hope this happens because thats a great way for him to die since hes so weak and all. all Iruka prolly did was stall untill naruto came or the little hyuga nine tails got away ^_^ man this fan fic is really nice

Sakura-chan
2003-11-08, 23:12
*sob* That's why I don't like sad fanfics, they make me cry so easily. :sad:

Sil-chan
2003-11-08, 23:45
*grinz* That would be Ki-neechan's ficcie. Though that's a one-shot, she's got a multi-part up as well. (And who knows, *coughs* maybe she'll write more one-shots, or a continuation?)

Either way, I sent her a link to the thread and she ok'ed my posting a link to the rest of her stories. If you're interested in reading more from her, her entire works can be found at Silver Dragonfly's Work (http://www.fanfiction.net/~silverdragonfly) Her Naruto work will be updated (probably) more quickly, Rukudaime can be found here (http://aksarah.com/naruto/)

Happy Readings

Moon The Cat
2003-11-09, 03:01
*sniff* *sniff*

RedRover505
2004-12-28, 16:31
oh wow really moving i thought it was a great.

Dragon Flame
2004-12-28, 17:12
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Zombie Thread Ressurected Fromthe Dead!!!!

Kabuto Maniac
2004-12-28, 17:46
ow... am I really the only one thinking I just totally wasted another five minutes of my life¿¿¿

Shay
2004-12-28, 18:02
ow... am I really the only one thinking I just totally wasted another five minutes of my life¿¿¿

Yeah you probably are. :uhoh:



Anyway that was great, very moving indeed. I will definitely check out more of her work.

Kayess
2004-12-28, 18:48
I think I only liked this story because it had Naruto and Hinata together :D...

Komataguri
2004-12-28, 18:58
That story was so god damn sweet that I'm about to vomit from sugar poisoning. :rolleyes:

strategos
2004-12-28, 20:07
wow someone going against naruto's kids... either their stupid, drunk or they have balls the size of the moon :heh: thats crazy.

cuttups
2004-12-29, 01:50
ow... am I really the only one thinking I just totally wasted another five minutes of my life¿¿¿

nope, i didnt think that was anything special. good writing, but its just fan fiction. nothing that i would cry over.

but hey, to each their own.

ooh-zoo-mah-kee
2004-12-29, 02:23
hmmm i actually remember reading this fanfic a while back... maybe a year or a year and a half ago? Or maybe its just a similar one but im pretty darn sure it was this one. Anyways, its a good read and yea..

Palani
2004-12-29, 04:26
A bit short but it's a good read and certainly one of the better fanfics I've read. I applaud the writer on the fact that he uses emotions only and does not use extreme action sequenes.

zamme
2004-12-30, 13:17
I think I only disliked this story because Hinata was in it :/

kaori_da_sue
2006-02-16, 16:47
i just want to know