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FlareKnight
2008-02-05, 22:21
Very interesting Satashi. You can't help but look forward to the rest of it :).
Edit: Woo Page Claim!
Sonic_Fate
2008-02-05, 22:24
Can't wait to read Fate's reaction XD Great work everyone.:D
Rating is going to be changed to M?:naughty:
Anyway it looks that this chapter will be better than previous. Can't wait....
Actually there is a lemon planned already
mercurianangel
2008-02-05, 23:07
Thankies for the drawing encouragement everyone ^__^
Here's another for Evangelion Xgouki's My Master (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3838210/1/My_Master)
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/036/e/d/FIC__My_Master_by_Evangelion_X_by_mercurianangel.j pg
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-My-Master-by-Evangelion-X-76612582)
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-05, 23:23
Good pic as usual :)
I'm not sure if this is a good place to post feedback it seem off topic...
But man you're a fast worker :)
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-06, 00:53
I never thought that Nanoha would be so aggressive when it came to kissing. I found myself laying on my side with Nanoha against me, mouth fluttering against mine in butterfly kisses. Her tongue was so soft and fast, lapping at my lips and against my tongue quickly. I'll admit that I am a little embarrassed by the suddenness of it all but I wasn't going to complain. My arm looped over her waist and the licking came faster, rolling over my cheek and to my ear, where she nibbled my earlobe. Moaning out, I felt her tongue not only lick around my ear but in it as well. Although odd, I felt strangely turned on by it. As she moved over my face, she started licking my cheek again and then over my closed eye and nose. When she stayed there a moment before going back to my cheek with the constant licking I shivered a little. This was getting a little weird...
Saved by the Bell XII
By: Satashi
~**~
Good morning arf :D
and a good morning to the rest of you as well :p
ghazghkull
2008-02-06, 01:45
@ghazghkull: prisoner tied up? I did that scenario once, it was fun
:confused: That's all you have to say?! ><
I'm hurt!
@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
Well here's the 2nd addition to my little 3-way trilogy XD
I’ve always loved Fate-chan. That much I knew as far back as I could. I’m not exactly sure of when, but it was after we met Hayate-chan at least. How deeply I loved her, I didn’t really figure out until I was older. Even back when we were still training the forwards, I didn’t exactly know what I felt towards her, only that she made me happy, as much as I made her happy. But hey, what did we know? We were only 19. Sometimes I wonder if people had forgotten that back then.
It wasn’t until I had adopted Vivio that I began to understand what I was feeling. But I had never expected that one mission would be all that would take to allow my family to grow to add one another. I never really expected Hayate to actually share a love between me, and Fate. But in the end, we all love each other dearly. I couldn’t ask for me. I’ve found the place my heart belonged: In the hearts of Fate, Hayate, and Vivio.
It’s still a bit awkward, but Vivio seems to be enjoying this. Hayate-chan really knows how to take care of her whenever Fate-chan and I aren’t here. Every time I come home, I always see Vivio run up into my arms with a bright smile on her face, and start going on and on about how Hayate-mama was so much fun while we were away. I think I’m somewhat jealous. What with Hayate-chan being an officer and able to do a lot of her work at home, she doesn’t spend as much time on base.
Fate-chan and I unfortunately are forced to either be on the field, or on the training base due to our positions, so we don’t get to see Vivio as much. It’s a bit frustrating that I, her adoptive mother can’t even spend as much time her, compared to the time she spends with one of my lovers.
Despite that, I love Hayate-chan dearly.
It’s really funny when people ask me how I am able to love two people at the same time. I simply smiled at them and say because I’m the one who loves them the most.
It’s true. I love them so much, that I’d probably die for them; any of us would.
But there’s more to that. We love everything about each other, the good and the bad. We’ve all showed each other our good and bad sides. Nothing about our personalities is hidden. On the whole, we all compliment each other. We all have something to give to this family, balancing out our weaknesses or bad sides.
We’ve all gotten into situations where we’ve argued with one another over one thing or another. But I honestly wouldn’t trade those arguments for anything in the world, or in this universe. That’s what makes us family. Our differences give us our bond. I wouldn’t trade it for anything.
It’s funny though. In the first 10 years since I’ve known about Hayate, I had never felt anything towards Hayate. I had considered her a good friend, but never had I considered her a possible lover. But that all changed during that mission when we were 20. Oh man, just thinking about that still makes me blush; who would’ve thought though that I owe my happiness to my captors, who just so happened to be such perverts. I really wonder what was going through their minds, tying us up like that. But what’s worse, I think Hayate-chan wants a re-enactment of that position.
But in the end, it added Hayate-chan to my family. And I wouldn’t trade it for anything.
I like this chapter better than Hayate's POV
good work
looking forward to Fate's POV :)
I never thought that Nanoha would be so aggressive when it came to kissing. I found myself laying on my side with Nanoha against me, mouth fluttering against mine in butterfly kisses. Her tongue was so soft and fast, lapping at my lips and against my tongue quickly. I'll admit that I am a little embarrassed by the suddenness of it all but I wasn't going to complain. My arm looped over her waist and the licking came faster, rolling over my cheek and to my ear, where she nibbled my earlobe. Moaning out, I felt her tongue not only lick around my ear but in it as well. Although odd, I felt strangely turned on by it. As she moved over my face, she started licking my cheek again and then over my closed eye and nose. When she stayed there a moment before going back to my cheek with the constant licking I shivered a little. This was getting a little weird...
Saved by the Bell XII
By: Satashi
nice little dream :D
Thankies for the drawing encouragement everyone ^__^
Here's another for Evangelion Xgouki's My Master (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3838210/1/My_Master)
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/036/e/d/FIC__My_Master_by_Evangelion_X_by_mercurianangel.j pg
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-My-Master-by-Evangelion-X-76612582)
can agree with everyone
a wonderful pic again ;)
but a sad story, very sad :(
Good morning arf :D
and a good morning to the rest of you as well :p
oh, that's very possible, nothing with my thought about a good dream :D
edit: combination your thought + dream
:)
Kirika-chan
2008-02-06, 03:13
Good morning arf :D
and a good morning to the rest of you as well :p
:D I think the same ... Poor Fate XD !!!!
Good morning arf :D
and a good morning to the rest of you as well :p
Another Fate's embarrassing moment?:heh: It might be really funny. But I hope that's not dream.
@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
Don't be, that trilogy is quite good. Looking forward for Fate's POV.
Junkedcat
2008-02-06, 08:59
Well here's the 2nd addition to my little 3-way trilogy XD
I’ve always loved Fate-chan. That much I knew as far back as I could. I’m not exactly sure of when, but it was after we met Hayate-chan at least. How deeply I loved her, I didn’t really figure out until I was older. Even back when we were still training the forwards, I didn’t exactly know what I felt towards her, only that she made me happy, as much as I made her happy. But hey, what did we know? We were only 19. Sometimes I wonder if people had forgotten that back then.
It wasn’t until I had adopted Vivio that I began to understand what I was feeling. But I had never expected that one mission would be all that would take to allow my family to grow to add one another. I never really expected Hayate to actually share a love between me, and Fate. But in the end, we all love each other dearly. I couldn’t ask for me. I’ve found the place my heart belonged: In the hearts of Fate, Hayate, and Vivio.
It’s still a bit awkward, but Vivio seems to be enjoying this. Hayate-chan really knows how to take care of her whenever Fate-chan and I aren’t here. Every time I come home, I always see Vivio run up into my arms with a bright smile on her face, and start going on and on about how Hayate-mama was so much fun while we were away. I think I’m somewhat jealous. What with Hayate-chan being an officer and able to do a lot of her work at home, she doesn’t spend as much time on base.
Fate-chan and I unfortunately are forced to either be on the field, or on the training base due to our positions, so we don’t get to see Vivio as much. It’s a bit frustrating that I, her adoptive mother can’t even spend as much time her, compared to the time she spends with one of my lovers.
Despite that, I love Hayate-chan dearly.
It’s really funny when people ask me how I am able to love two people at the same time. I simply smiled at them and say because I’m the one who loves them the most.
It’s true. I love them so much, that I’d probably die for them; any of us would.
But there’s more to that. We love everything about each other, the good and the bad. We’ve all showed each other our good and bad sides. Nothing about our personalities is hidden. On the whole, we all compliment each other. We all have something to give to this family, balancing out our weaknesses or bad sides.
We’ve all gotten into situations where we’ve argued with one another over one thing or another. But I honestly wouldn’t trade those arguments for anything in the world, or in this universe. That’s what makes us family. Our differences give us our bond. I wouldn’t trade it for anything.
It’s funny though. In the first 10 years since I’ve known about Hayate, I had never felt anything towards Hayate. I had considered her a good friend, but never had I considered her a possible lover. But that all changed during that mission when we were 20. Oh man, just thinking about that still makes me blush; who would’ve thought though that I owe my happiness to my captors, who just so happened to be such perverts. I really wonder what was going through their minds, tying us up like that. But what’s worse, I think Hayate-chan wants a re-enactment of that position.
But in the end, it added Hayate-chan to my family. And I wouldn’t trade it for anything.
Mmm... another nice piece to the triangle. We have Hayate's POV focusing on just the concept of their love triangle and the little things that makes it tick (as well as the naughty bits) and Nanoha's focus on family. These two have really been Point of Views and i can't wait to read Fate's take on their little love nest. Maybe she wouln't be as shy (but not explicit) about their little run in with the pervy captors....
Again i can't wait to see the full picture of this family...
....Family huh.... :thinker: This could get quite interesting, but I'll keep that train boarding at the station until we hear Fate's side.
:confused: That's all you have to say?! ><
I'm hurt!
@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
I liked it. Hayate's was a little better I think. but it was still good. Looking forward to Fate's
Edit: Sorry, no time for short today >.< Work is hectic.
Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/
This was hard to write...
any comments and/or criticisms appreciated
Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/
This was hard to write...
any comments and/or criticisms appreciated
Although I always prefered stories focused on main couple (mainly because there is only a few focused on other), I enjoyed really yours. Are you planning 4th chapter or sequel (something from "present time"?
One thing: Is there mistake in my tired eyes or you sometimes forget to close quotation marks (or how this >> " " << is called, dictionary offered me 6 words)? It's quite difficult to puzzke out where is character's speech and where is regular text.
Although I always prefered stories focused on main couple (mainly because there is only a few focused on other), I enjoyed really yours. Are you planning 4th chapter or sequel (something from "present time"?
One thing: Is there mistake in my tired eyes or you sometimes forget to close quotation marks (or how this >> " " << is called, dictionary offered me 6 words)? It's quite difficult to puzzke out where is character's speech and where is regular text.
oops. I thought it was allowed when the stuff in the quotations was long. but it is distracting so i fixed it. thanks for reading and glad you liked it.
Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
First day at mobile six, Nanoha's POV
Something about this made me happy. It wasn't the new recruits that I trained today; not that was a differnt kind of happy. It wasn't the meal that I ate with all my friends, together for the first time in ages... No, that was still differnt. Was it the fact that I had a home again? No, that never really mattered to me. Wherever I was, was my current home. You learn that after being drafted so many times. So what was it?
I wanted to ask you, but I held it in for some reason. Your eyes were happy as well, something that caused me to look at them again and again during the time we spent together here in this large room. Was it you...? Yes, that is what it was. You were smiling. That was what made me so happy. I didn't need a giant room, a comfy bed, a good meal, a steady home... I needed your smile. That was enough to please me.
You sat down next to me and simple looked over at my face. We havn't said anything in a while now but we really didn't need to. What could we say? It's been a while? Nice to see you again? Isn't this neat? Those words were a little pointless. We knew the answers already.
I felt your hand on mine, fingers interlacing between each other's. Why is it you always liked putting your palm on the top of my hand? I would never understand it, but I liked it so it was okay.
Why were you looking at me like that? Your eyes changed now...softer. Did you know I could tell? Read your emotions through your eyes? I can. Right now you were saying 'I'm glad you are next to me' with them. Silly girl, I was always next to you.
You moved closer, free hand touching my back as you laid me down on the bed. The long missed gentle weight of your body pressed softly on me, your hair falling from your shoulders and onto my neck. Were you going to make love to me? Gentle hugging, soft whispering of words I didn't fully hear but understood deep in my heart.
You loved me, just as I loved you. I've known that for years now, and I felt no need to stop the actions. Instead I welcomed them. Your gentle kissing, the constant embracing, softly spoken words of adoration. Your hand never left mine, no matter what. Always holding, embracing my as if you say that you were there.
Our motions never sped up, never became frantic like people say they do. Always caring, each touch a wonder of new sensations. It was amazing, Fate. I could feel the meaning in everything. The love we shared, the emotions we held, the feelings that always stayed.
When it was over you didn't move away from me. Instead your body stayed above mine, sweat rolling down your neck. When had we become so hot? Had our breath always come out in puffs? I never noticed, your eyes had kept my focus. In them I heard everything you would have wanted to say. You loved me this much? Yes, I love you too, so much that simple words wouldn't do it justice. Can you see it in my eyes, Fate? Right now, under you, basking in the afterglow of our gentle lovemaking?
Yes, you could tell. I know you can, why would I even ask? Your lips found mine again, body slowly decending to rest on me. Your hair was tangled around my arms, my hands never once leaving your back save the one holding onto you. I love your hair, Fate, almost as much as your eyes.
Again you whispered to me, wishing me a goodnight and holding me closer. Your hand found it's way back to the top of mine and held softly but firmly at the same time. Yes, I was happy. Because you were here. Because you smile. Because you love me.
And I love you too.
Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
First day at mobile six, Nanoha's POV
Something about this made me happy. It wasn't the new recruits that I trained today; not that was a differnt kind of happy. It wasn't the meal that I ate with all my friends, together for the first time in ages... No, that was still differnt. Was it the fact that I had a home again? No, that never really mattered to me. Wherever I was, was my current home. You learn that after being drafted so many times. So what was it?
I wanted to ask you, but I held it in for some reason. Your eyes were happy as well, something that caused me to look at them again and again during the time we spent together here in this large room. Was it you...? Yes, that is what it was. You were smiling. That was what made me so happy. I didn't need a giant room, a comfy bed, a good meal, a steady home... I needed your smile. That was enough to please me.
You sat down next to me and simple looked over at my face. We havn't said anything in a while now but we really didn't need to. What could we say? It's been a while? Nice to see you again? Isn't this neat? Those words were a little pointless. We knew the answers already.
I felt your hand on mine, fingers interlacing between each other's. Why is it you always liked putting your palm on the top of my hand? I would never understand it, but I liked it so it was okay.
Why were you looking at me like that? Your eyes changed now...softer. Did you know I could tell? Read your emotions through your eyes? I can. Right now you were saying 'I'm glad you are next to me' with them. Silly girl, I was always next to you.
You moved closer, free hand touching my back as you laid me down on the bed. The long missed gentle weight of your body pressed softly on me, your hair falling from your shoulders and onto my neck. Were you going to make love to me? Gentle hugging, soft whispering of words I didn't fully hear but understood deep in my heart.
You loved me, just as I loved you. I've known that for years now, and I felt no need to stop the actions. Instead I welcomed them. Your gentle kissing, the constant embracing, softly spoken words of adoration. Your hand never left mine, no matter what. Always holding, embracing my as if you say that you were there.
Our motions never sped up, never became frantic like people say they do. Always caring, each touch a wonder of new sensations. It was amazing, Fate. I could feel the meaning in everything. The love we shared, the emotions we held, the feelings that always stayed.
When it was over you didn't move away from me. Instead your body stayed above mine, sweat rolling down your neck. When had we become so hot? Had our breath always come out in puffs? I never noticed, your eyes had kept my focus. In them I heard everything you would have wanted to say. You loved me this much? Yes, I love you too, so much that simple words wouldn't do it justice. Can you see it in my eyes, Fate? Right now, under you, basking in the afterglow of our gentle lovemaking?
Yes, you could tell. I know you can, why would I even ask? Your lips found mine again, body slowly decending to rest on me. Your hair was tangled around my arms, my hands never once leaving your back save the one holding onto you. I love your hair, Fate, almost as much as your eyes.
Again you whispered to me, wishing me a goodnight and holding me closer. Your hand found it's way back to the top of mine and held softly but firmly at the same time. Yes, I was happy. Because you were here. Because you smile. Because you love me.
And I love you too.
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I didn't know that I could like a lemon this much.
Beautiful, and here we have my new favorite from Satashi's shorts :)
Saludos, Haru
Junkedcat
2008-02-07, 13:27
Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/
This was hard to write...
any comments and/or criticisms appreciated
I finally decided to take a look at this and I'm glad I did. I think you did a really good job on this fic. It felt... full. You put in events and thoughts into the story to make Signum and Shamal a couple. I didn't get the feeling that it "just happened" that their feelings developed over time (though those just happen moments are good if one justs adds more support to them). And what ever difficulty you had writing that last chapter had to serve to make the story better.
Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
First day at mobile six, Nanoha's POV
Something about this made me happy. It wasn't the new recruits that I trained today; not that was a differnt kind of happy. It wasn't the meal that I ate with all my friends, together for the first time in ages... No, that was still differnt. Was it the fact that I had a home again? No, that never really mattered to me. Wherever I was, was my current home. You learn that after being drafted so many times. So what was it?
I wanted to ask you, but I held it in for some reason. Your eyes were happy as well, something that caused me to look at them again and again during the time we spent together here in this large room. Was it you...? Yes, that is what it was. You were smiling. That was what made me so happy. I didn't need a giant room, a comfy bed, a good meal, a steady home... I needed your smile. That was enough to please me.
You sat down next to me and simple looked over at my face. We havn't said anything in a while now but we really didn't need to. What could we say? It's been a while? Nice to see you again? Isn't this neat? Those words were a little pointless. We knew the answers already.
I felt your hand on mine, fingers interlacing between each other's. Why is it you always liked putting your palm on the top of my hand? I would never understand it, but I liked it so it was okay.
Why were you looking at me like that? Your eyes changed now...softer. Did you know I could tell? Read your emotions through your eyes? I can. Right now you were saying 'I'm glad you are next to me' with them. Silly girl, I was always next to you.
You moved closer, free hand touching my back as you laid me down on the bed. The long missed gentle weight of your body pressed softly on me, your hair falling from your shoulders and onto my neck. Were you going to make love to me? Gentle hugging, soft whispering of words I didn't fully hear but understood deep in my heart.
You loved me, just as I loved you. I've known that for years now, and I felt no need to stop the actions. Instead I welcomed them. Your gentle kissing, the constant embracing, softly spoken words of adoration. Your hand never left mine, no matter what. Always holding, embracing my as if you say that you were there.
Our motions never sped up, never became frantic like people say they do. Always caring, each touch a wonder of new sensations. It was amazing, Fate. I could feel the meaning in everything. The love we shared, the emotions we held, the feelings that always stayed.
When it was over you didn't move away from me. Instead your body stayed above mine, sweat rolling down your neck. When had we become so hot? Had our breath always come out in puffs? I never noticed, your eyes had kept my focus. In them I heard everything you would have wanted to say. You loved me this much? Yes, I love you too, so much that simple words wouldn't do it justice. Can you see it in my eyes, Fate? Right now, under you, basking in the afterglow of our gentle lovemaking?
Yes, you could tell. I know you can, why would I even ask? Your lips found mine again, body slowly decending to rest on me. Your hair was tangled around my arms, my hands never once leaving your back save the one holding onto you. I love your hair, Fate, almost as much as your eyes.
Again you whispered to me, wishing me a goodnight and holding me closer. Your hand found it's way back to the top of mine and held softly but firmly at the same time. Yes, I was happy. Because you were here. Because you smile. Because you love me.
And I love you too.
Soft lemon is soft. Nice to see a gentler of their relationship. Never really though that their relationship would revolve around being rowdy...
Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
First day at mobile six, Nanoha's POV
Something about this made me happy. It wasn't the new recruits that I trained today; not that was a differnt kind of happy. It wasn't the meal that I ate with all my friends, together for the first time in ages... No, that was still differnt. Was it the fact that I had a home again? No, that never really mattered to me. Wherever I was, was my current home. You learn that after being drafted so many times. So what was it?
I wanted to ask you, but I held it in for some reason. Your eyes were happy as well, something that caused me to look at them again and again during the time we spent together here in this large room. Was it you...? Yes, that is what it was. You were smiling. That was what made me so happy. I didn't need a giant room, a comfy bed, a good meal, a steady home... I needed your smile. That was enough to please me.
You sat down next to me and simple looked over at my face. We havn't said anything in a while now but we really didn't need to. What could we say? It's been a while? Nice to see you again? Isn't this neat? Those words were a little pointless. We knew the answers already.
I felt your hand on mine, fingers interlacing between each other's. Why is it you always liked putting your palm on the top of my hand? I would never understand it, but I liked it so it was okay.
Why were you looking at me like that? Your eyes changed now...softer. Did you know I could tell? Read your emotions through your eyes? I can. Right now you were saying 'I'm glad you are next to me' with them. Silly girl, I was always next to you.
You moved closer, free hand touching my back as you laid me down on the bed. The long missed gentle weight of your body pressed softly on me, your hair falling from your shoulders and onto my neck. Were you going to make love to me? Gentle hugging, soft whispering of words I didn't fully hear but understood deep in my heart.
You loved me, just as I loved you. I've known that for years now, and I felt no need to stop the actions. Instead I welcomed them. Your gentle kissing, the constant embracing, softly spoken words of adoration. Your hand never left mine, no matter what. Always holding, embracing my as if you say that you were there.
Our motions never sped up, never became frantic like people say they do. Always caring, each touch a wonder of new sensations. It was amazing, Fate. I could feel the meaning in everything. The love we shared, the emotions we held, the feelings that always stayed.
When it was over you didn't move away from me. Instead your body stayed above mine, sweat rolling down your neck. When had we become so hot? Had our breath always come out in puffs? I never noticed, your eyes had kept my focus. In them I heard everything you would have wanted to say. You loved me this much? Yes, I love you too, so much that simple words wouldn't do it justice. Can you see it in my eyes, Fate? Right now, under you, basking in the afterglow of our gentle lovemaking?
Yes, you could tell. I know you can, why would I even ask? Your lips found mine again, body slowly decending to rest on me. Your hair was tangled around my arms, my hands never once leaving your back save the one holding onto you. I love your hair, Fate, almost as much as your eyes.
Again you whispered to me, wishing me a goodnight and holding me closer. Your hand found it's way back to the top of mine and held softly but firmly at the same time. Yes, I was happy. Because you were here. Because you smile. Because you love me.
And I love you too.
I must add my :bow::bow::bow::bow:.
* don't know what else to say*
EDIT: Are you able to acces www.fanfiction.net? I'm trying it nearly 2h. :(
EDIT 2: Accesable only throught some free proxy... I'm gonna kill my ISP.
EDIT: Are you able to acces www.fanfiction.net? I'm trying it nearly 2h. :(
Works fine for me
krisslanza
2008-02-07, 16:15
Fanfiction is known to be a little... Odd sometimes. :nod:
And even though I posted this in the OC (Since it IS a OC) I think it deserves posting here too since this particular OC will make some appearances in Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust.
Name: Aegina von Bronquia (Aegina of the Family Bronquia)
Sex: Female
Race: Varistan
Age: ? (Haven't decided)
Rank: ? (Also undecided...)
Hair Color: Blood red
Eye color: Green/Gold
Skin color: White
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 118 lb (Random number)
Notes:
o Thinking of having her carry around a either laser-based sword or a chainsword... Why? Because its appealing to imagine her slaughtering TSAB soldiers and coating herself in their various gore.
o Yes. She's very bloodthirsty. Thinking of giving her a fang or two.
o Also a bit of a nymphomaniac. A very rough kind of girl. :uhoh:
o Feared a bit by her own soldiers and being transfered to her division is not a really good thing... the casualty rate is high as Aegina gives no care to how many soldiers she loses as long as she wins in the end.
o Is quite obsessed with the Fate Testarossa prisoner but isn't allowed to touch her due to standing orders from the Emperor.
o Visited Mid-Childan when the two forces were at peace.
Comments or questions or anything at all? :heh:
I've learned getting questions asked of things helps me out a lot in developing Varista and stuff. :nod:
Fanfiction is known to be a little... Odd sometimes. :nod:
And even though I posted this in the OC (Since it IS a OC) I think it deserves posting here too since this particular OC will make some appearances in Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust.
Name: Aegina von Bronquia (Aegina of the Family Bronquia)
Sex: Female
Race: Varistan
Age: ? (Haven't decided)
Rank: ? (Also undecided...)
Hair Color: Blood red
Eye color: Green/Gold
Skin color: White
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 118 lb (Random number)
Notes:
o Thinking of having her carry around a either laser-based sword or a chainsword... Why? Because its appealing to imagine her slaughtering TSAB soldiers and coating herself in their various gore.
o Yes. She's very bloodthirsty. Thinking of giving her a fang or two.
o Also a bit of a nymphomaniac. A very rough kind of girl. :uhoh:
o Feared a bit by her own soldiers and being transfered to her division is not a really good thing... the casualty rate is high as Aegina gives no care to how many soldiers she loses as long as she wins in the end.
o Is quite obsessed with the Fate Testarossa prisoner but isn't allowed to touch her due to standing orders from the Emperor.
o Visited Mid-Childan when the two forces were at peace.
Comments or questions or anything at all? :heh:
I've learned getting questions asked of things helps me out a lot in developing Varista and stuff. :nod:
nymphomaniac? you are sure you know what that word means right? there is no "bit of" if you use that. Like the difference in someone not liking closed spaces and them having a panic attack in an elevator......so yeah....
ghazghkull
2008-02-07, 16:56
Fanfiction is known to be a little... Odd sometimes. :nod:
And even though I posted this in the OC (Since it IS a OC) I think it deserves posting here too since this particular OC will make some appearances in Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust.
Name: Aegina von Bronquia (Aegina of the Family Bronquia)
Sex: Female
Race: Varistan
Age: ? (Haven't decided)
Rank: ? (Also undecided...)
Hair Color: Blood red
Eye color: Green/Gold
Skin color: White
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 118 lb (Random number)
Notes:
o Thinking of having her carry around a either laser-based sword or a chainsword... Why? Because its appealing to imagine her slaughtering TSAB soldiers and coating herself in their various gore.
o Yes. She's very bloodthirsty. Thinking of giving her a fang or two.
o Also a bit of a nymphomaniac. A very rough kind of girl. :uhoh:
o Feared a bit by her own soldiers and being transfered to her division is not a really good thing... the casualty rate is high as Aegina gives no care to how many soldiers she loses as long as she wins in the end.
o Is quite obsessed with the Fate Testarossa prisoner but isn't allowed to touch her due to standing orders from the Emperor.
o Visited Mid-Childan when the two forces were at peace.
Comments or questions or anything at all? :heh:
I've learned getting questions asked of things helps me out a lot in developing Varista and stuff. :nod:
LOL 'a bit of a nymphomaniac'? She either is or is not.
Chainsword? Emperor? What is this? The year 41000? LOL This is Nanoha-verse, not the Age of the Imperium LOL XD
Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
First day at mobile six, Nanoha's POV
Something about this made me happy. It wasn't the new recruits that I trained today; not that was a differnt kind of happy. It wasn't the meal that I ate with all my friends, together for the first time in ages... No, that was still differnt. Was it the fact that I had a home again? No, that never really mattered to me. Wherever I was, was my current home. You learn that after being drafted so many times. So what was it?
I wanted to ask you, but I held it in for some reason. Your eyes were happy as well, something that caused me to look at them again and again during the time we spent together here in this large room. Was it you...? Yes, that is what it was. You were smiling. That was what made me so happy. I didn't need a giant room, a comfy bed, a good meal, a steady home... I needed your smile. That was enough to please me.
You sat down next to me and simple looked over at my face. We havn't said anything in a while now but we really didn't need to. What could we say? It's been a while? Nice to see you again? Isn't this neat? Those words were a little pointless. We knew the answers already.
I felt your hand on mine, fingers interlacing between each other's. Why is it you always liked putting your palm on the top of my hand? I would never understand it, but I liked it so it was okay.
Why were you looking at me like that? Your eyes changed now...softer. Did you know I could tell? Read your emotions through your eyes? I can. Right now you were saying 'I'm glad you are next to me' with them. Silly girl, I was always next to you.
You moved closer, free hand touching my back as you laid me down on the bed. The long missed gentle weight of your body pressed softly on me, your hair falling from your shoulders and onto my neck. Were you going to make love to me? Gentle hugging, soft whispering of words I didn't fully hear but understood deep in my heart.
You loved me, just as I loved you. I've known that for years now, and I felt no need to stop the actions. Instead I welcomed them. Your gentle kissing, the constant embracing, softly spoken words of adoration. Your hand never left mine, no matter what. Always holding, embracing my as if you say that you were there.
Our motions never sped up, never became frantic like people say they do. Always caring, each touch a wonder of new sensations. It was amazing, Fate. I could feel the meaning in everything. The love we shared, the emotions we held, the feelings that always stayed.
When it was over you didn't move away from me. Instead your body stayed above mine, sweat rolling down your neck. When had we become so hot? Had our breath always come out in puffs? I never noticed, your eyes had kept my focus. In them I heard everything you would have wanted to say. You loved me this much? Yes, I love you too, so much that simple words wouldn't do it justice. Can you see it in my eyes, Fate? Right now, under you, basking in the afterglow of our gentle lovemaking?
Yes, you could tell. I know you can, why would I even ask? Your lips found mine again, body slowly decending to rest on me. Your hair was tangled around my arms, my hands never once leaving your back save the one holding onto you. I love your hair, Fate, almost as much as your eyes.
Again you whispered to me, wishing me a goodnight and holding me closer. Your hand found it's way back to the top of mine and held softly but firmly at the same time. Yes, I was happy. Because you were here. Because you smile. Because you love me.
And I love you too.
can agree with Haru
:)
couldn't believe a lemon could be so fantastic
nice work ;)
Fanfiction is known to be a little... Odd sometimes. :nod:
And even though I posted this in the OC (Since it IS a OC) I think it deserves posting here too since this particular OC will make some appearances in Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust.
Name: Aegina von Bronquia (Aegina of the Family Bronquia)
Sex: Female
Race: Varistan
Age: ? (Haven't decided)
Rank: ? (Also undecided...)
Hair Color: Blood red
Eye color: Green/Gold
Skin color: White
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 118 lb (Random number)
Notes:
o Thinking of having her carry around a either laser-based sword or a chainsword... Why? Because its appealing to imagine her slaughtering TSAB soldiers and coating herself in their various gore.
o Yes. She's very bloodthirsty. Thinking of giving her a fang or two.
o Also a bit of a nymphomaniac. A very rough kind of girl. :uhoh:
o Feared a bit by her own soldiers and being transfered to her division is not a really good thing... the casualty rate is high as Aegina gives no care to how many soldiers she loses as long as she wins in the end.
o Is quite obsessed with the Fate Testarossa prisoner but isn't allowed to touch her due to standing orders from the Emperor.
o Visited Mid-Childan when the two forces were at peace.
Comments or questions or anything at all? :heh:
I've learned getting questions asked of things helps me out a lot in developing Varista and stuff. :nod:
poor Aegina
:D
cannot live her obsession
:D
I'm looking forward to the appearing of the character
:)
krisslanza
2008-02-07, 17:33
Well I only say "bit" since... I haven't decided yet and I didn't know another word to use at the time :heh: :eyespin:
And of course its the Nanohaverse! :P It's just Varistan technology. Think more military-inclined rather then using it in say staves and stuff. They use magic for weapons of war and power suit kind of deals.
And its a Empire so of course their leader is a Emperor :heh:
Well I only say "bit" since... I haven't decided yet and I didn't know another word to use at the time :heh: :eyespin:
And of course its the Nanohaverse! :P It's just Varistan technology. Think more military-inclined rather then using it in say staves and stuff. They use magic for weapons of war and power suit kind of deals.
And its a Empire so of course their leader is a Emperor :heh:
horny, trashy, sex-crazed, or "slutty". A nymph basically lives off sex, so that is a very VERY strong word.
Or how about "Overly affectionet"?
krisslanza
2008-02-07, 18:30
Hmmm yes that wouldn't be the right word... And neither is overly affectionant since Aegina has a kind of... Erm... Abusive personality you could say :heh:
There is a... Let's just say "bad" scenario floating around in my head that involves her and Fate... :uhoh:
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-07, 19:16
Happy Chinese New Year everyone !!! :3
Hope this new year bring better and more crazy ideas to everyone here.
Hmmm yes that wouldn't be the right word... And neither is overly affectionant since Aegina has a kind of... Erm... Abusive personality you could say :heh:
There is a... Let's just say "bad" scenario floating around in my head that involves her and Fate... :uhoh:
>.< can 't say I like that idea
Happy Chinese New Year everyone !!! :3
Hope this new year bring better and more crazy ideas to everyone here.
Happy Chinese new year!
krisslanza
2008-02-07, 19:22
Don't worry... It wouldn't happen... :heh:
Not unless a lot of things happened in some very specific orders. First you'd need a way to restrict Fate's magical powers (Otherwise she could kill Aegina pretty easily) and then of course remove all the special protections she has from the Emperor as a prized "guest" (Really just a overglorified prisoner though...)
So it's possible. I won't lie to you. But it isn't likely either. :nod:
I think I should get Arc-en-Ciel started... I know, I know I have School of Lyrical WAAAAY behind schedule but maybe a different plot and writing will get my SoL writer's block out of the way...
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-07, 19:35
For those of you who read scarlet fate chapt 1.
what do you think about this exchange:
***
“What?” Vita replied “Say what you want, but there is one thing I’ll say right now. I don’t like you, and if you do anything funny, I’ll smash your skull though a wall.”
Remilia licked her lips and gave the offending girl a smug look “I wonder if your blood will taste like?”
“You shouldn’t threaten people like that.” Fate retorted. “It’s just going to cause more problems that way.
Remilia grinned at Fate. “Don’t worry, you’ll follow me soon enough…”
Fate stared at the vampire. “What?”
“For that is written in fate.” Remilia finished.
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
B! a park would be a great place to look around and relax. In the future it will be a spot Nanoha may need to go. Town can wait for another day!
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
Well because paks are usually very interesting in the afternoon, who knows who Nanoha-chan might meet:heh::heh:
So I wote for B
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-07, 21:04
Hmmm...
I'll go with...
A
Hmmm...
I'll go with...
A !
Make it bold and a color, otherwise it's REALLY easy to skip over. you can quote my post if you don't know how
Kazu-kun
2008-02-07, 21:56
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
Let's see what B has in store for us.
Also, this "already calling me Nanoha-chan" seems totally OOC to me, as Nanoha is always the first one to call everybody that way. This is one of her most prominent characteristics actually.
FlareKnight
2008-02-07, 22:01
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.Was a nice update. Just a good moment with Hayate analysing Nanoha to determine what her club activity should be. Start of a solid friendship at least getting going there. Got to meet up with Shamal and I'm sure the rest will follow eventually.
Agree that a park could be a nice place to check out. Nothing wrong with taking a look around. B
Estavali
2008-02-07, 22:07
A, please.
Let's see what B has in store for us.
Also, this "already calling me Nanoha-chan" seems totally OOC to me, as Nanoha is always the first one to call everybody that way. This is one of her most prominent characteristics actually.
Not really. IIRC Hayate does have the habit of addressing people with -chan the moment she gets to know them, and Shamal is pretty much the same too.
A please.
Not really. IIRC Hayate does have the habit of addressing people with -chan the moment she gets to know them, and Shamal is pretty much the same too.
Yes that she does. OTOH, it does seem weird to me that Nanoha would wonder about the term of address. It seems more likely that she would welcome the acceptance than ponder over it.
Kazu-kun
2008-02-07, 22:32
A, please.
Not really. IIRC Hayate does have the habit of addressing people with -chan the moment she gets to know them, and Shamal is pretty much the same too.
Yeah, of course, but.... that wasn't the point. What I mean is that it's no like Nanoha to go around wondering why people call her that way when she herself has the same habit.
Estavali
2008-02-07, 22:46
Yeah, of course, but.... that wasn't the point. What I mean is that it's no like Nanoha to go around wondering why people call her that way when she herself has the same habit.
Ah, I see. My bad.
Voting A. Nothing like a stroll around town and see the sights.
And probably make a few other characters show up as well.
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-07, 23:06
B Let's go check who's at the park :p
ghazghkull
2008-02-07, 23:16
B!!!! a walk down the park sounds good ^^
Sam the Onion
2008-02-08, 00:34
B sounds the most interesting. I'll go with that.
Keroko, you actually managed to drag me out of FF-Lurker mode to read this:
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room....and vote:
B
Because I like parks...
..uh okay the other me who lives here and isn't a MMO NEET likes parks. :3
PhoenixG
2008-02-08, 02:00
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
B
A stroll in the park should be relaxing....
LoweGear
2008-02-08, 02:05
:nod::nod:
After much deliberation on which choice to pick...
B
Who knows what might happen :nod:
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
A
maybe Lindy there
:D
@krisslanza
when show you Nanoha to start a rescue mission
:D
Also, this "already calling me Nanoha-chan" seems totally OOC to me, as Nanoha is always the first one to call everybody that way. This is one of her most prominent characteristics actually.
When she was 9 year old, yes. You'll notice that by the time of StrikerS, she no longer does this, and only calls those she already knows still with '-chan' Even Shari, whom she met shortly after the end of A's, is called Shari instead of Shari-chan. I left it in for Hayate as a bit of a character trait, while I'm not going to make her the 'sekuhara Hayate' she is often portrayed as in fanart, she is more easy going in that regard.
PhoenixG
2008-02-08, 05:30
I don't think Shari is a good example. Shari is a nickname and she wants to be called that way. Carim or Schach was a better example.
Nickname or not, Nanoha still did not atach -chan to it, which was my point. Heck, even Vivio did not get a -chan suffix.
PhoenixG
2008-02-08, 06:19
BTW the first thing I thought when I read "already calling me Nanoha-chan" that
Nanoha expect to be called Takamachi(-chan/-san) or Nanoha-san.
Calling someone first name without suffix the first time you meet is plain rude (in Japan, that is).
That was actually Actually what I was implying. :heh:
Yaya-chan
2008-02-08, 07:05
Let's see what Nanoha can achieve.
B desu yo! :heehee:
Junkedcat
2008-02-08, 08:44
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
It's not late so a stroll anywhere would be fine, but ill have to go with B . Don't wana see Nanoha get lost in a sea of people just yet.
Keroko is bringing even more people out of the woodwork lol.
As for the honorific thing, I don't see anything wrong with Nanoha not using it anymore, but her pondering about being called-chan came off to me as her thinking it playfully and not seriously. So I like it.
If you think it's bad seeing this many people comment on honorifics, you shoulda seen what I got when Yuuno called Candy "Candy-kun"
Kimmie-chan
2008-02-08, 09:22
Lalala ~
Raising Heart
Park = Swings right?
Then B it is :D
Are, Are. So many B's. Though I'll just have to add to them, won't I? =3
I think I'll go with B. ^-^
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-08, 11:25
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
:D
Haha, fun times.
But or some reason, i just can't see anyone at that age not knowing about intercourse...
...14 would seem more realistic...
Sam the Onion
2008-02-08, 11:28
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
:twitch: SIXTEEN?! :twitch:
How... innocent...
Well I guess church's magic school wouldn't teach stuff like that...
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 11:33
A
maybe Lindy there
:D
@krisslanza
when show you Nanoha to start a rescue mission
:D
Rescue mission eh? :heh: None of that is in the works since we all know the TSAB has some pretty fail leaders. :uhoh: Or at least none is in my head involving Nanoha (Really that'd just be unfair...)
@Keroko:
B
Because parks are cool and there is a park scene in SoL! :D
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-08, 11:38
Lurker Smith! Vote B For Cosmic Justice!
This dating sim is getting good now
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 11:53
It wasn't already good to begin with Ryand!? :twitch: MADNESS! :frustrated:
Dating sims are ALWAYS good! :nod: ... At least these ones. :heh:
Evangelion Xgouki
2008-02-08, 12:03
I decided not to decline Hayate’s offer to lead me around, and waited for her to finish packing her last things. Interrogating Fate would have to wait.
“So, where should we go first?” Hayate asked as she placed the bag on her back, and reached for her crutches.
“Uhm…” I paused for a moment. Why are you asking me? “Well, you mentioned the cafeteria, so let’s start there.”
The tour through the school was very interesting. Though we had a little bit of trouble moving up and down stairways with Hayate’s crutches, we managed to get through the entire school. Hayate showed me the cafeteria, the locations of various classrooms, and the different clubs.
“So, Nanoha-chan, have you thought about joining a club yet?” Hayate asked me.
“No, not really. I’ve been to busy with the transfer to think about such things.”
“I can imagine” Hayate said with a nod. “So what are your interests? A sports club maybe?”
“Ahh…” I sweatdropped. “No, I’m quite clumsy when it comes to sports, so I don’t think I’ll join a sports club any time soon.”
“Really? That’s not something I would say when I look at you. Hmm.” Hayate said as she cupped her chin and started looking at me up and down, as if analysing me.
It made me kinda nervous.
“Err… So Hayate, what kind of clubs are you member of?” I asked. Anything to get her to stop staring at me like that.
“Me?” As if someone had pushed a button, Hayate’s entire body changed. The analysing look disappeared and she straightened up, a glitter appearing in her eyes. “I’m part of the cooking club. We practice various methods of cooking, experiment and try to find new recipes, sometimes we help prepare the food for the cafeteria too. Interested in joining?”
I thought about it. I did enjoy cooking, but on the other hand it might be fun to explore other things for a change. Deciding to answer her honestly, I told her I’d think about it.
“Hayate-chan!” A new voice could be heard from behind us. I turned around to see a light blonde haired woman walk up to us. She was wearing a medical coat and looked a bit disturbed.
“Mou, I have been looking all over for you. Signum is already here to pick us up, what were you doing all this time?”
All this time? A quick check on my watch made my eyes widen in surprise. It was already 17:00! The tour through the school had taken up more time then I realized!
“I’m sorry Shamal, I was just showing Nanoha-chan around, she transferred here today you see.”
“Ara?” It was only now that Shamal seemed to take notice of me. “Oh my! I’m sorry, I didn’t know Hayate-chan was showing you around. My name is Shamal, I am the school medic. If you ever get hurt in the school, come and see me immediately.”
She smiled a kind smile, one that puts you at ease by just looking at it, it really suited her. I couldn’t help but smile back.
“I’m Takamachi Nanoha, pleased to meet you. I’m sorry for the trouble I caused…”
“Oh no, no. It’s no problem at all. Hayate-chan, I’ll go tell Signum to wait for a little while longer. How much have you shown Nanoha-chan yet?”
…Again already calling me Nanoha-chan? It seems to run in the family.
“Actually, we just finished the last few spots. And it is getting late, so we should get going if I want to be able to make dinner.” Hayate said as she checked her own watch.
“Then I’ll be leaving. Thanks for the tour Hayate, I really enjoyed it.” I thanked Hayate, and bowed to Shamal-sensei.
“You’re welcome, Nanoha-chan. And remember to come over to my place one of these days.” Hayate called after me.
I smiled and nodded before heading my own way. My first day at school and I already made a friend, how much better could this day get? I checked my watch. 17:08 on a nice summer evening, my room is very close, so I could go out into town before the stores close. Or I could just call it a day.
A: I’m going into town; I’m curious what shops are around here.
B: Hayate-chan told me there was a park close by, maybe I could take a little stroll to look around.
C: I’m tired, its been a long day. Let’s just head back to my room.
Hmmm...never played any dating sims before...but I'm going to have to go with..
B
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
sweet ;)
Rescue mission eh? :heh: None of that is in the works since we all know the TSAB has some pretty fail leaders. :uhoh: Or at least none is in my head involving Nanoha (Really that'd just be unfair...)
Now you broke my heart...
No NanohaxFate
*weep*
:(
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 12:14
Sorry *pats Gillian*
There might be shades of it... In a way :D But nothing specific sorry :uhoh: Had to pull a 7Arcs and settle just for teasing.
:D
Haha, fun times.
But or some reason, i just can't see anyone at that age not knowing about intercourse...
...14 would seem more realistic...
:twitch: SIXTEEN?! :twitch:
How... innocent...
Well I guess church's magic school wouldn't teach stuff like that...
yes, sixteen :3
Because Vivio's mamas are top flying Ace military overprotective mothers.
so yeah, YOU want to hit on Vivio?
Nanoha: Raising Heart, set up
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 12:20
Hmmm... I mean if it wasn't for Nanoha I'd probably hit on Vivio. :D
:uhoh:
*Runs*
Sam the Onion
2008-02-08, 12:30
How did...? I mean I was conserned about her health education :uhoh:
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-08, 12:33
yes, sixteen :3
Because Vivio's mamas are top flying Ace military overprotective mothers.
so yeah, YOU want to hit on Vivio?
Nanoha: Raising Heart, set up
I'd be willing to take my chances, i might not survive it, but i'd be damned if i'd let go just because her mama is scary and dangerous...
...but i'm known to be courageous in situations where it is deemed foolishness :heh:
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-08, 12:52
You can always attempt to steal Raging heart right when Nanoha throws it in the air , like how the short comic strip did it... :-D
Then again it might not be a good idea to piss off Nanoha's friend's...
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
Sorry *pats Gillian*
There might be shades of it... In a way :D But nothing specific sorry :uhoh: Had to pull a 7Arcs and settle just for teasing.
*still very sad*
then I should hope for SoL and you get ride of your write blockade
;)
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-08, 14:32
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
:D
Love it! :D
And if someone wants to hang me because i asked for some yuunoxvita, feel free to do so :p
:D
Love it! :D
And if someone wants to hang me because i asked for some yuunoxvita, feel free to do so :p
who would do that? :D
*still think on LindyxNanoha* ;)
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 15:22
I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome! :D
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim :heh:
I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome! :D
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim :heh:
If there is a three-some, I'd rather it be Nanoha/ Hayate/Yuuno :D now THAT would be interesting. I have my goal!
Paigi kuraimu getto daze!
ghazghkull
2008-02-08, 16:05
And I need to finish on my Nano/Haya/Fate one-shot trilogy so that I can move on to the little lemon I plan for 'em :3
And I need to finish on my Nano/Haya/Fate one-shot trilogy so that I can move on to the little lemon I plan for 'em :3
Get to writing! I've only read two Nanoha lemons and one of them sucked horribly, but Eagle-chan's was good.
Are there even any more besides that? O.<
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 16:09
No way Satashi-sama! Catgirls are the best in bed! :D
Not that I err... Would know this :uhoh:
No way Satashi-sama! Catgirls are the best in bed! :D
Not that I err... Would know this :uhoh:
Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"
I love this thread :P
edit: Keroko-chan, is it possible to have a three-way relationship or are we just dreaming?
Evangelion Xgouki
2008-02-08, 16:15
Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"
I love this thread :P
I think we need to re-fumigate this thread for the H-ness...:uhoh:
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 16:16
I know we're a awesome thread ain't we? :D
And I believe so... Since Keroko said you could get Nanoha x Leize twins or you could just get Nanoha x Aria/Lotte if you somehow ticked off one of the sisters but didn't tick off the other :heh:
ghazghkull
2008-02-08, 16:34
LOL I think it would be cool if we could somehow influence Keroko through out choices to a Nanoha/Hayate pairing, with the occasional Fate joining on the side for the fun of it LOL XD
P.S. Call me a pervert if you will, but I know some of you guys are thinking it LOL :naughty: XD :3
Nickname or not, Nanoha still did not atach -chan to it, which was my point. Heck, even Vivio did not get a -chan suffix.
It is somewhat context-dependant, but generally not adding a honorfic actually implies a closer level of intimacy (head out of gutter) with said person than adding one. It can be case specific, but if you want to generalize it,
Vivio => Vivio-chan.
And voting B
FlareKnight
2008-02-08, 16:48
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
This was just a really nice one. If there is anything I'm grateful to StrikerS for its how Vita became a favourite of mine during the whole thing. Good job Yuuno in protecting Vita's pride and treating her right :).
Get to writing! I've only read two Nanoha lemons and one of them sucked horribly, but Eagle-chan's was good.
Are there even any more besides that? O.<
Eagle wrote a lemon or do you mean RoE?
edit: I found it :D
Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"
Why not?
everybody wants to knowm how her "object" was :D
maybe another magazine or really pics from Nanoha :D
No way Satashi-sama! Catgirls are the best in bed! :D
Not that I err... Would know this :uhoh:
hihi, one word to much ;)
I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome! :D
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim :heh:
my rival, my goal is LindyxNanoha :)
:)
*I quote krisslanza too often;)*
Sam the Onion
2008-02-08, 17:07
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
:twitch:
Satashi-sama has proven once again that she can write about anything. And do it well.
Heartwarming.
I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome! :D
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim :heh:
Mine too if they have their ears and tail :heh:
Edit: Where did this another page pop out from? Needs moar backlog
Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"
I love this thread :P
Oh god no :twitch:
edit: Keroko-chan, is it possible to have a three-way relationship or are we just dreaming?
Presh the arrow--------------^
It is possible.
Junkedcat
2008-02-08, 18:43
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
Well thats a situation. Everyone gets curious some time... And hay, leaving it to a book saves both parties from embarrassment, but for Vivio's case... (attempt at writing to follow.)
"So," Fate asked, "Do you still have any questions."
Vivio looked looked down at her lab blushing over what she learned in her little educational experience. "No, not really Fate-mama."
"Ok, sweetheart. But if you ever have any more questions you can ask me." Fate got up from the couch and started to walk out of the room but Vivio spoke up.
"Well maybe I do" the young blond asked.
"Oh, what do you have a question about" Fate turned around and sat back down.
"Do you and Nanoha-mama have sex?" Vivio timidly asked.
"Well," Fate tried to put a small smile on her face but it turned out lopsided, "Yes, honey, your mothers do have sex."
"So who's the guy?"
This time Fate was the one that found the lap an interesting focal point. "Honey... sex doesn't just happen between a man and a women."
"Oh..."
The next hour in a half was spent with shaky words, bright red faces, and a quite a few 'Well you see...' and 'oh...'. At the end of the talk the both of them sat on the couch doing a excellent imitation of a tomato. Finally Vivio spoke up.
"Thats why you bought me a book."
"Thats why I bought you a book."
Now...
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
Vita needs to feel some love too! I liked this little short off into uncharted waters. Vita's big problems are (1) She'd only attract the sickos and (2) Even if she found someone nice (Yuuno in this example) there would be trouble in the outside world as they wouldn't know that Vita is an adult stuck in a kid's body. Though it would be funny seeing Yuuno tackled by the local cops thinking hes some sort of sex offender :p.
Well thats a situation. Everyone gets curious some time... And hay, leaving it to a book saves both parties from embarrassment, but for Vivio's case... (attempt at writing to follow.)
"So," Fate asked, "Do you still have any questions."
Vivio looked looked down at her lab blushing over what she learned in her little educational experience. "No, not really Fate-mama."
"Ok, sweetheart. But if you ever have any more questions you can ask me." Fate got up from the couch and started to walk out of the room but Vivio spoke up.
"Well maybe I do" the young blond asked.
"Oh, what do you have a question about" Fate turned around and sat back down.
"Do you and Nanoha-mama have sex?" Vivio timidly asked.
"Well," Fate tried to put a small smile on her face but it turned out lopsided, "Yes, honey, your mothers do have sex."
"So who's the guy?"
This time Fate was the one that found the lap an interesting focal point. "Honey... sex doesn't just happen between a man and a women."
"Oh..."
The next hour in a half was spent with shaky words, bright red faces, and a quite a few 'Well you see...' and 'oh...'. At the end of the talk the both of them sat on the couch doing a excellent imitation of a tomato. Finally Vivio spoke up.
"Thats why you bought me a book."
"Thats why I bought you a book."
LOL!
Nice addition to the original short :D
Saludos, Haru
It is somewhat context-dependant, but generally not adding a honorfic actually implies a closer level of intimacy (head out of gutter) with said person than adding one. It can be case specific, but if you want to generalize it,
Vivio => Vivio-chan.
WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?
LOL I think it would be cool if we could somehow influence Keroko through out choices to a Nanoha/Hayate pairing, with the occasional Fate joining on the side for the fun of it LOL XD
P.S. Call me a pervert if you will, but I know some of you guys are thinking it LOL :naughty: XD :3
three-way love done right (b")b
Well thats a situation. Everyone gets curious some time... And hay, leaving it to a book saves both parties from embarrassment, but for Vivio's case... (attempt at writing to follow.)
"So," Fate asked, "Do you still have any questions."
Vivio looked looked down at her lab blushing over what she learned in her little educational experience. "No, not really Fate-mama."
"Ok, sweetheart. But if you ever have any more questions you can ask me." Fate got up from the couch and started to walk out of the room but Vivio spoke up.
"Well maybe I do" the young blond asked.
"Oh, what do you have a question about" Fate turned around and sat back down.
"Do you and Nanoha-mama have sex?" Vivio timidly asked.
"Well," Fate tried to put a small smile on her face but it turned out lopsided, "Yes, honey, your mothers do have sex."
"So who's the guy?"
This time Fate was the one that found the lap an interesting focal point. "Honey... sex doesn't just happen between a man and a women."
"Oh..."
The next hour in a half was spent with shaky words, bright red faces, and a quite a few 'Well you see...' and 'oh...'. At the end of the talk the both of them sat on the couch doing a excellent imitation of a tomato. Finally Vivio spoke up.
"Thats why you bought me a book."
"Thats why I bought you a book."
Now...
Vita needs to feel some love too! I liked this little short off into uncharted waters. Vita's big problems are (1) She'd only attract the sickos and (2) Even if she found someone nice (Yuuno in this example) there would be trouble in the outside world as they wouldn't know that Vita is an adult stuck in a kid's body. Though it would be funny seeing Yuuno tackled by the local cops thinking hes some sort of sex offender :p.
You should try writing some :3
And yeah, seeing Yuuno tackled is a good mental image.
@Thread: Thanks for the comments on Yuuno/Vita. I wasn't sure how it would work out, but it seems that it was enjoyed, so I'm happy.
Something else. Everyone seems to be interacting a lot more, so how about something fun? A small tag-team writing. One person writes a small part of a story, can be anywhere from a few lines to a few paragraphs, and then points to someone to pick it up. Then that person continues a bit and points out someone else. Would anyone be interested in this, just for fun? I can start something up if a few people are interested.
krisslanza
2008-02-08, 19:16
NO VIVIO MINE. *Grabs her and runs like hell* :uhoh:
Hmmm tag-team writing? If I weren't so lazy... Hmmmm... :nod:
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-08, 19:21
NO VIVIO MINE. *Grabs her and runs like hell* :uhoh:
Hmmm tag-team writing? If I weren't so lazy... Hmmmm... :nod:
If you weren't so lazy and if i could write to save my life :p
I knew this day would come eventually but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Now here I was, staring into the curious heterochromic eyes before me. Nanoha was having a fit, that was for sure. Already sweating, she was stammering out random words and generally making no sense at all. It was funny, everyone always saw her as so calm and collected, not to mention mature. If only they knew the truth. The truth only a few knew.
Nanoha was really funny to watch sometimes.
"Vivio," I leaned forward and the eyes swapped from Nanoha to me. Vivio was sixteen now, so I guess it was okay. "Where did you hear about this?"
"Girls at school. One had a condom and the others were giggling about it. Mamma, what does it do?"
Nanoha was freaking again.
"Well," I continued, patiently explaining to my daughter. Her face was coloring, making me feel a little happy to know I could embarass her so much. The poor thing was probably regretting asking. To try and ease her worries I simply smiled. "Any questions?"
"Several," Vivio shook her head. "But I really don't want to ask."
"Tell you what." I took both her hands in mine and gave an understanding squeeze. "I'm sure there is a book that will explain everything you might have questions about, so I'll just buy it when I'm in town and then put it on your bed while making sure no one sees it, okay sweetheart?"
Vivio flushed, but was happy now. "Thanks, Mama."
"You're welcome." We hugged and I ruffled her hair. "Now, go have fun and don't forget to let me review your homework okay?"
"Yes ma'am." Vivio trotted off and I leaned back on the couch.
"Well," Nanoha cleared her throat. "That was easy. Good thing we stayed calm."
I smiled again. Even after all this time, Nanoha wasn't the best mother material. She was a little too stern sometimes, and other times she prefered our girl to study and work rather than have fun and play. But there was that look in her eyes each time she saw Vivio that I just adored.
I knew that no matter how much I knew about parenting, no matter if Vivio was more of a 'Fate-mama' 's girl than anything else... I couldn't match the amount of feelings Nanoha had for her. The only other time I could see so much love in her eyes is when-
Nanoha looked at me and smiled.
Awww. That was cute. And it was an important conversation for Vivio. Think Nanoha and Fate handled it quite well. The book was definitely smart. Go Fate-mama
"So," Fate asked, "Do you still have any questions."
Vivio looked looked down at her lab blushing over what she learned in her little educational experience. "No, not really Fate-mama."
"Ok, sweetheart. But if you ever have any more questions you can ask me." Fate got up from the couch and started to walk out of the room but Vivio spoke up.
"Well maybe I do" the young blond asked.
"Oh, what do you have a question about" Fate turned around and sat back down.
"Do you and Nanoha-mama have sex?" Vivio timidly asked.
"Well," Fate tried to put a small smile on her face but it turned out lopsided, "Yes, honey, your mothers do have sex."
"So who's the guy?"
This time Fate was the one that found the lap an interesting focal point. "Honey... sex doesn't just happen between a man and a women."
"Oh..."
The next hour in a half was spent with shaky words, bright red faces, and a quite a few 'Well you see...' and 'oh...'. At the end of the talk the both of them sat on the couch doing a excellent imitation of a tomato. Finally Vivio spoke up.
"Thats why you bought me a book."
"Thats why I bought you a book."
This was funny. “Who’s the guy?” I was grinning throughout the whole thing my cheeks hurt now. I could really see this happening. Great writing. Great book.
I'm a little behind on my request since I missed a few lunches. I'm going a little out of order this time because I'm currently really cold ( the heat is out ) and this story flowed a little better because of it.
SpaceBrotha's request for a Yuuno/Vita short. (oh come on , give them a shot! )
Vita's POV
It was cold. That much was certain. Even in this barrier that blocked out the wind and kept the inside from getting any colder, it was still freezing. Looking up, I scowled at the snow building on the top of my red tinted dome. "I hate planets like this," I stated my obvious contempt. "Why did I ever accept this mission?"
"I'm sorry." Yuuno answered me while studying the relic we had recovered. "I'm happy you came, though. I would have been in quite a spot if you weren't here."
It was true. We were on a frozen wasteland of a planet. Barely any trees, lots of ice, nothing but snow and mountains as far as I could see. A relic was discovered here, one that had the form of some old civilization idol piece or something. To me it was a clay doll, but to Yuuno it was much more. He was called here for a reason, I suppose. Although he needed a body guard, he was the only one able to actually comprehend what it was. The cave-in that happened when he picked it up might have killed him if I wasn't there to blast away the rubble.
But right now that didn't matter. I was freezing and we couldn't communicate with the ship until the snow let up. "Vita?" My name made me look over at my partner for this mission and noticed that he had a blanket. "Come on, let's get warm."
I wasn't one to turn down warmth. Walking the few paces to him, I sat beside the nineteen year old man and curled up under it with him. "It's not big enough," I complained, frowning at it with distaste.
"Hmm..." Once again the man looked around a little before having an idea. "Come here," He moved to the half-tree that was inside our barrier and sat down to lean back on it. "Sit in my lap."
His lap? As in between his legs? "No thanks," I crossed my arms and looked away. I had my dignity after all.
"No one will know," He tried again when I had a full body shiver. "Come on."
I looked at his offered hand and met the clear green eyes. Yuuno, one of the only people that I knew who treated me as an adult, was offering to keep me warm with his own body heat. If it was anyone else I would have slammed them with my hammer. Yuuno, though, was the kind who just made me calm down when we were alone. Nanoha was the only other one to do that to me, but she wasn't here right now. "Okay," I gave in and walked to him, sitting between his parted legs and instantly feeling the blanket wrapped around us both.
We stayed silent a while, watching the falling snow together with nothing else to do. "It's kind of nice," He spoke, breath tickling the top of my head. "Seeing snow I mean. It never snows where I'm stationed."
"I hate snow."
"Why?"
I looked down. It was snowing the day Nanoha almost died. Ever since, I cursed the cold. I knew it was childish and that the snow had nothing to do with it, but still... "I don't know," I lied to him.
"I see, I'm sorry I asked." He saw through my answer. He always did.
Time passed so painfully slow. I was warm now, having been under the blanket for a good hour or so now. Our small hand held heater was ever so slowly warming the barrier up. Not enough to really notice, but heat couldn't escape the barrier so every little bit helped. More time passed in silence and I found myself getting sleepy. I had not rested since my last mission because this one was only supposed to take an hour or two at most. I wish we knew that the snow here interfered with communication before hand. Or known to pack supplies. At least Yuuno had a little bit of everything in his exploration backpack. Yawning, I finally allowed myself to rest my back against his front.
"If you're sleepy, you can rest." He told me softly. Before I could state that I was perfectly fine, he went on. "I need your help in case something comes up again, so please rest while you can."
Damn him. He knew just what to say, just how to word it to play to my pride. Not just this but everything. He made it so I could always enjoy things without losing my dignity. I knew I acted childish, it was who I was, but I hated being treated as such. Others would have told me I needed rest. They would have said my younger body needed sleep more than an adult's. They would have tried to look out for me because I was smaller. Like a little sister.
Yuuno was the one who spoke to me as an adult. He said he needed me in top form to protect him, stated clearly that I was needed. He saw me as a woman, and although I would never admit it aloud... Sometimes I sought him out just for that.
Maybe that was the reason I took this mission?
Closing my eyes, I rested fully against him. "I'm going to rest then." I tried to get comfortable for a few moments but could only stay still when his arms gently wrapped around my upper body. The embrace was almost non-existent, but it still made me relax. Yes, I could relax in his arms. He didn't see it as a weakness. After all, he needed me to protect him.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I finally did wake up I noticed that the snow had stopped falling. Our barrier was warm enough to make the built up snow on it stop sticking. I moved from the loose arms, waking my partner up in the process, and used my device to contact our patrol ship. "Scouters calling base. Come in base."
"This is base," a man's picture came on my screen. "We were worried, Scouters. Are you okay?"
"We're fine," I informed him. "We recovered the relic and got caught in interference. Sending location now."
"Received. Transport will arrive shortly."
"Ah." I closed the monitor and looked behind myself. Yuuno was packing everything up and getting ready to head out. Not once did he pat me on the head, or ask if I slept okay. Nanoha would have. She would have teased me just to rile me up, because she liked me. Yuuno on the other hand seemed different. He respected me. He saw me as a woman and treated me as such.
Maybe that was why my heart beat faster around him.
Reminds me of that Vita/Yuuno picture, so sweet.
edit: Keroko-chan, is it possible to have a three-way relationship or are we just dreaming?
Possible? Yes. Harder? definetely.
LOL I think it would be cool if we could somehow influence Keroko through out choices to a Nanoha/Hayate pairing, with the occasional Fate joining on the side for the fun of it LOL XD
P.S. Call me a pervert if you will, but I know some of you guys are thinking it LOL :naughty: XD :3
Well, while Fate is not vailable as a love option, she still is a very close friend of Nanoha. Her helping Nanoha move forward in her relationship is likely.
NO VIVIO MINE. *Grabs her and runs like hell* :uhoh:
*trips kriss and catches Vivio* I think I've been defending her a bit longer and more fervently then you have. :p
WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?
If only you had picked C....
Something else. Everyone seems to be interacting a lot more, so how about something fun? A small tag-team writing. One person writes a small part of a story, can be anywhere from a few lines to a few paragraphs, and then points to someone to pick it up. Then that person continues a bit and points out someone else. Would anyone be interested in this, just for fun? I can start something up if a few people are interested.
I'm game, should be fun.
FlareKnight
2008-02-08, 23:45
If you weren't so lazy and if i could write to save my life :pLaziness, a minor thing called ability, my personal concern of ruining the characters and having an angry mob chase me to the ends of the Earth :heh:.
If only you had picked C....
Oh, you suck, Keroko. =P
Either way I'm still looking foward to it.
Could it be?
PAGE CLAIM! =3
WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?
I am not sure how that applies to my comment, but no - i don't :p
Something else. Everyone seems to be interacting a lot more, so how about something fun? A small tag-team writing. One person writes a small part of a story, can be anywhere from a few lines to a few paragraphs, and then points to someone to pick it up. Then that person continues a bit and points out someone else. Would anyone be interested in this, just for fun? I can start something up if a few people are interested.
Not unless you want for it to likely turn in to a drama :heh:
YOSH! My vote heralded a storm of B votes! :D
Thread: Jii~~~~~~ :eyebrow::eyebrow::eyebrow:
Creator-san: I need to work on my FF thread dynamic entries... :p
WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?Keroko remember that picture you shopped into NxK? Got the un-edited version?
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-09, 05:26
Reminds me of that Vita/Yuuno picture, so sweet.
Where do you think i got the idea for that fic in the first place? :p
Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"
I don't think is is bad idea.:heh:
I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome! :D
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim :heh:
Well it might be interesting. O what about Nanoha x Vita /and or/ Signum ?
Oh, you suck, Keroko. =P
Either way I'm still looking foward to it.
Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all. :heh:
Well it might be interesting. O what about Nanoha x Vita /and or/ Signum ?
With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?
Keroko remember that picture you shopped into NxK? Got the un-edited version?
You mean:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/8e0f670e9c8a6345f9e688dqd0.jpg
Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/45e8fd1838e85bd2e2a0345ys8.jpg
Final Count:
A: IIIII
B: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
C:
Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks? :heh:
You mean:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/8e0f670e9c8a6345f9e688dqd0.jpg
Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/45e8fd1838e85bd2e2a0345ys8.jpg
Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please :D
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here
Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all. :heh:
With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?
No, I didn't, of course.
Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks? :heh:
Do you really want answer?
Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all. :heh:
With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?
You mean:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/8e0f670e9c8a6345f9e688dqd0.jpg
Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/45e8fd1838e85bd2e2a0345ys8.jpg
Final Count:
A: IIIII
B: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
C:
Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks? :heh:
resolve weakend
:(
*think of NxL, think of NxL....*
Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please :D
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here
jupp and the same for you Satashi?
how far is XII? ;)
Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please :D
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here
Only a few pictures, unfortunately. Teenage Vivio art is rare, looks like most people prefer moe-blob happy family art.
Do you really want answer?
Wouldn't be asking if I didn't, now would I?
resolution of NxL is weakend
:(
*think of NxL, think of NxL....*
To unlock characters, you first have to find them. Think about where the characters you like would be, and whom they are related to, then go out and search. Everyone knows the best step to unlock the Wolkies, now think, what would be the best step to unlock Lindy?
okay, I gave in :P
Lemon: Saved by the Bell
Fate's magazine scene (solo)
It's graphic, tho I avoided as many "words" as I could just because I think using some of them takes away from the story (even if it IS written for the sole purpose of fan service).
Overall, it's an okay lemon. Short: 1,117 words. I tried to see if I could keep Fate as .......Fate-like..... as I could during it, which was really hard to do >.<
This is a real lemon, not cute and emotional like the one I posted here. So yeah, it's Fate solo, that's all you really need to know :heh: If you want it, PM me. Don't be shy to ask. I mean, hell, I wrote it and offered >.< Reading it back, I kind of like it ( which is good, considering the LAST lemon I offered via PMs I hated lol )
(yes, PMs only. this can not and will not be posted on this thread, nor on FF.N)
To unlock characters, you first have to find them. Think about where the characters you like would be, and whom they are related to, then go out and search. Everyone knows the best step to unlock the Wolkies, now think, what would be the best step to unlock Lindy?
I meant the thought about Teen VivioxNanoha weakened my resolve
;)
and now I have to gather member for LindyxNanoha
otherwise I didn't get the wished pairing :)
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-09, 14:48
SpaceBrotha, Satashi,
I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.
Junkedcat
I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.
SpaceBrotha, Satashi,
I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.
Junkedcat
I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.
Yuuno x Vita was weird for me too lol. I never thought I'd like them.
and wow, 7 request for lemon in like 10 mintues XD!! *happy*
Junkedcat
2008-02-09, 15:29
SpaceBrotha, Satashi,
I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.
Junkedcat
I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.
I cooking another little piece with Vivio's innocence, but i need to wait till ghazghkull finishes his Nano/Haya/Fate short. Just something about that second part clicked a scenario in my head.
and wow, 7 request for lemon in like 10 mintues XD!! *happy*
I knew it
we are a lot of pervs ;D
lol
ghazghkull
2008-02-09, 18:49
I cooking another little piece with Vivio's innocence, but i need to wait till ghazghkull finishes his Nano/Haya/Fate short. Just something about that second part clicked a scenario in my head.
LOL And what scenario, pray tell, are you thinking about?
I knew it
we are a lot of pervs ;D
lol
That we are LOL XD
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-09, 19:04
As Smith Prime, the Superion, I vote C, because the idea of Shamal X Nanoha seems off
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
Because it's hard for me to imagine lyingI chose C.
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
C
hopefully Lindy-sama comes to look after Nanoha ;) :D
page claim
Junkedcat
2008-02-09, 20:08
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
I'm going with B. Might find out who the school's guidance counselor might be...
SpaceBrotha
2008-02-09, 20:13
B
Seems like the best answer here, even if you look at it from a canon PoV... though A might have been even better in that case...
...oh well, i suppose we'll be meeting shamal later on now. :p
I have my doubts about looking through some books to find out your possible future plans :heh:
Other than that, a pretty nice chapter, though Yuuno sure seemed like rumbling :) Going to vote A and see what happens. These don't usually last long anyway.
FlareKnight
2008-02-09, 21:00
Nice conversation time with Yuuno. Guy really has it all figured out, must be nice :heh:.
But I think B would fit fine. Full out lying wouldn't feel right and I know how it feels to not want to just not show up on your second day. Maybe its just hard for me to take a sick day period. Will see how it all turns out.
Chapter XII was suposed to be out tonight, but WoW ninjad me again >< so hopefully it'll be done tonight or tomorrow at latest.
on an off-topic note, I was in TK and I was able to get the Cosmic Infuser so, yeah, It was win lol
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/th_WoWScrnShot_020708_214323.jpg (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/WoWScrnShot_020708_214323.jpg)
Also, since I had like 20 peopel comment on the lemon.......
http://snappoll.com/poll/251239.php
??
You mean:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/8e0f670e9c8a6345f9e688dqd0.jpg
Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/45e8fd1838e85bd2e2a0345ys8.jpg...Seiou turned out to be quite a tyrant. :heh:
Final Count:
A: IIIII
B: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
C:
Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks? :heh:Well at least we rubbed a few noses finding more Yuuno. :heh:
*runs*
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”:nod:
I'll go A. Time to find someone in school.
on an off-topic note, I was in TK and I was able to get the Cosmic Infuser so, yeah, It was win lol
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/th_WoWScrnShot_020708_214323.jpg (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g140/LeviValor/WoWScrnShot_020708_214323.jpg)1. Congrats! That pwnz in Arena too. :D
2. [Raid Tank]Why the heck are you piccing out the middle of a boss fight, Raid Healer?[/Raid Tank] :eyebrow:
:p
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
I would say... well, I take A :)
Yaya-chan
2008-02-09, 23:05
Raising Heart
I vote C. :nod:
Holy shit Yuuno ftw.
Although voting C cause Nanoha doesn't really lie... I think. I forgot.
I vote A~
Nanoha wouldn't want people to worry. On another note, go go gadget Yuuno!
mercurianangel
2008-02-10, 00:32
B on RH ^_^
Estavali
2008-02-10, 00:38
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
B. If anything, using a half-truth to bluff your way through is often more effective than an outright lie.
Saved by the Bell XII
Length: 5,318 words, about 80%
ETA: Sunday
Spiffy fact: you will worship Angel for the drawing that goes with this chapter :heh:
ghazghkull
2008-02-10, 01:46
I vote C for Raising Heart ^^
PhoenixG
2008-02-10, 02:27
I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.
Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?
“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.
The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”
Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!
“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”
“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.
Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.
“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.
“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.
“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.
“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”
As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.
I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.
“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.
“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.
“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”
…
Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.
“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”
“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”
I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.
~-~-~-~
The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.
Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…
That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.
Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.
“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”
“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”
“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”
Nuts.
The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!
A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”
B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”
C: “I feel horrible.”
A
It fits Nanoha's character.
Saved by the Bell XII
Length: 5,318 words, about 80%
ETA: Sunday
Spiffy fact: you will worship Angel for the drawing that goes with this chapter :heh:
yeah :)
we worship angel for every pic ;)
Saved by the Bell XII
Length: 5,318 words, about 80%
ETA: Sunday
Spiffy fact: you will worship Angel for the drawing that goes with this chapter :heh:
Another sleeples night :D
I suppose you meant that we will worship Angel even more?;)
Yaya-chan
2008-02-10, 10:22
Another sleeples night :D
I suppose you meant that we will worship Angel even more?;)
You can count with me :nod:
No way! Page claim!
I have my doubts about looking through some books to find out your possible future plans :heh:
As do I, it was a bit of a gameplay choice, I'll admit, as it unlocks new places to go (in this case, the library).
Besides, can you really blame Yuuno for inviting to help a pretty girl? ;)
Other than that, a pretty nice chapter, though Yuuno sure seemed like rumbling :) Going to vote A and see what happens. These don't usually last long anyway.
Rumbling?
Well at least we rubbed a few noses finding more Yuuno. :heh:
Before anyone asks, yes it was pre-determind that going to the park would end up with Yuuno-points.
Current Vote Count:
A: IIIII
B: IIIIII
C: IIIIIII
You mean:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/8e0f670e9c8a6345f9e688dqd0.jpg
Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Liinna/Nanoha/45e8fd1838e85bd2e2a0345ys8.jpg
A sixteen year old Vivio looked in shock at the sight she just walked in on. Nanoha-mama and Fate-mama were on her bed....naked... and staring at her with wide shocked eyes. "I told you," Fate whispered harshly down at her lover. "But you just couldn't wait to get to our bed could you?"
"Nya haha." Nanoha laughed, not even pretending to be ashamed. "Sorry, Vivio, we'll change your sheets I promise."
"Mou!" Fate blushed, eyes closing, when Nanoha went back to work. "Not in front... of her..."
"She's sixteen, it's time she learned." Nanoha looked back over at her. "Want me to teach you?" Vivio looked at the two girls before slowly nodding and walking forward. "First let me show you what drives Fate-mama crazy...."
"NANOHA!"
Keroko-chan shot up in bed, face red and sweating. 'What the hell kind of dream was THAT!?'
Apologies to Keroko <3
A sixteen year old Vivio looked in shock at the sight she just walked in on. Nanoha-mama and Fate-mama were on her bed....naked... and staring at her with wide shocked eyes. "I told you," Fate whispered harshly down at her lover. "But you just couldn't wait to get to our bed could you?"
"Nya haha." Nanoha laughed, not even pretending to be ashamed. "Sorry, Vivio, we'll change your sheets I promise."
"Mou!" Fate blushed, eyes closing, when Nanoha went back to work. "Not in front... of her..."
"She's sixteen, it's time she learned." Nanoha looked back over at her. "Want me to teach you?" Vivio looked at the two girls before slowly nodding and walking forward. "First let me show you what drives Fate-mama crazy...."
"NANOHA!"
Keroko-chan shot up in bed, face red and sweating. 'What the hell kind of dream was THAT!?'
Apologies to Keroko <3
This takes 'parental guidance' to a whole new level. :heh:
And trust me, I don't mind. I've had worse. Far worse.
Also, I found another Nanoha/Vivio pic, although this one... goes beyond what AS rules allow. :heh: PM if you want.
Eagle8819
2008-02-10, 12:21
Been a while, guys. ;)
I bring goodies.
<spam>
Ignis Fatuus, part II (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3967522/3/Ignis_Fatuus), up.
</spam>
Been a while, guys. ;)
I bring goodies.
<spam>
Ignis Fatuus, part II (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3967522/3/Ignis_Fatuus), up.
</spam>
That's no spam ;)
Interesting chapter
:)
first and last part was for me, very good :)
maybe Alicia is a synonym for Fate in Nanoha's imagination
I'm looking forward to the next chapter*impatient*
and don't let your mood get down, because of some stupid emails ;)
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
Nina.Wolken
2008-02-10, 19:11
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
I just wanted to check the tread before to go to bed, I'm so glad I did that! :D
Let's have a nice chapter to be sure to have some nice dreams! (I need it after just finishing watch Mnemosyne ^^").
Thank you Satashi ^^.
mercurianangel
2008-02-10, 19:13
yeah :)
we worship angel for every pic ;)
I suppose you meant that we will worship Angel even more?;)
You can count with me :nod:
*blushes*
Thankies much guys...but I don't think I'm worthy of worship just yet XD
*needs more practice*
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
P.S. @ Satashi
“Angel?” Fate whispered softly against the lips. “A little more?”
*
And here's the picture for this chapter~
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DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
P.S. @ Satashi
“Angel?” Fate whispered softly against the lips. “A little more?”
:P just like your picture did me lol
ghazghkull
2008-02-10, 19:29
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
*Utterly swooned by the romance of the chapter*
*Falls over from fluff overdose*
*Sound asleep*
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....chapter...utterly sweet.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
ah
nice chapter again
lucky fate+nanoha
PS: go on, with Nanoha and wearing her hair freely :)
*thinks, it looks better than a lopsided ponytail; damn StrikerS authors*
*blushes*
Thankies much guys...but I don't think I'm worthy of worship just yet XD
*needs more practice*
we also must train to worship somebody, so let us ;)
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
again an impressive picture
espescially the time during the realising is impressive
:)
to make in such a short time so well done picture, I envy you ;)
*rambles and praises for another three hours*
mercurianangel
2008-02-10, 20:55
again an impressive picture
espescially the time during the realising is impressive
:)
to make in such a short time so well done picture, I envy you ;)
*rambles and praises for another three hours*
XD
I'm really really flattered...
Though, I must confess I usually have the Saved by the Bell pictures done before Satashi posts the new chapters XD
I think the only exception to that was the extra NanoFate-posing-for-Precia picture from the last chapter (11).
EDIT: and the doodle of Nanoha's doodle from forever ago
XD
I'm really really flattered...
Though, I must confess I usually have the Saved by the Bell pictures done before Satashi posts the new chapters XD
I think the only exception to that was the extra NanoFate-posing-for-Precia picture from the last chapter (11).
EDIT: and the doodle of Nanoha's doodle from forever ago
doodle of doodle ftw!
And Angel just revealed that she reads the stories before their posted :D
Junkedcat
2008-02-10, 21:01
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
Yea for new chapter!
In one word: daaammmmmmmmmmmm!
Alright, now for a more calmer rant...
Finally someone in Hayate's family makes a appearance. "Go Signum! Kick that pervert's rear end!
Thumbs up for Mitsuki. Nanoha needs an ally in the modeling world. I'm hope great good things become of her.
Date number one was cool. The movie part was a good testing water for Fate, trying to find a way to make her snooze fest more... enjoyable. The stop to the lingerie shop proves both girls can make their faces turn deep red :D. The end of the date really seemed to solidify Nanoha's decision. For you to take this as a step and not a leap, my hat goes off to you. (Pet names win!)
Date number two was, in the words of a "player" i use to work with, phenomenal. Of course I'm really starting to get the feeling that when Nanoha comes out to her parents (at lest mum), it's not going to be good. I see Nanoha has a shopping quirk. She also has a pervy side to her to :naughty:... not just wearing the stuff but seeing Fate in it too! (rampant imagination to follow?) I also like that you plugged in that Nanoha has become aware of the changes. When i read “Can we...go back to your place a while before you take me home?” my jaw hit the keyboard: Nanoha, you know how to be a little bold don't you... Anyway, the scene in Fate's room, both leading up to and the actual kissing, was... *whistle*. I'm so glad you went the HD route with this. This scene was an experience for them (especially for our little brunet), and to explore this puts the reader into the story. To see their emotion, reactions, wants, desires, screw-ups makes the reading experience very enjoyable (and not just in a perverted way). Good job and may their relationship continue to blossom.
And as for Signum's card. Huh :twitch:? I see a revolution has been started... and me likes.
Moving on
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
Somehow, i just had the feeling that this "worship worthy" picture would look something like the one above. Excellent work.
Not done yet.
Been a while, guys. ;)
I bring goodies.
<spam>
Ignis Fatuus, part II (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3967522/3/Ignis_Fatuus), up.
</spam>
This got me hooked. It seems like its going to be a ride. And as for your griper, they just don't understand that some situations, no matter how unwanted or twisted, can be used to propel new and more desirable outcomes.
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
I declare that this is the best fanart over DA~
(Saved for the pack)
And I must must confess that I spoiled myself (again) looking at the pic, I haven't read the last chapter yet, I'm keeping the good thing to be the last of this day :)
Saludos, Haru
I declare that this is the best fanart over DA~
(Saved for the pack)
And I must must confess that I spoiled myself (again) looking at the pic, I haven't read the last chapter yet, I'm keeping the good thing to be the last of this day :)
Saludos, Haru
Then you shoulda read first then looked at pic silly :p
what a fluffy chapter. so many great heart-warming moments. I really like how honest Nanoha is with Fate. the both of them have been handling this relationship quite maturely. most commendable. best of all, it's well paced, giving their relationship a natural and realistic feel to it.
how cute that Nanoha introduced Fate as her "other half". sounds pretty married to me. :p
and yeah! Signum showed up! and kicking-ass already. since she no longer has a rival relationship with Fate... are you planning for them to compete against each other on something else now? just wondering
I'm really looking forward to seeing that visit to Hayate's house and how you'll portray her family (it'd be interesting to see how you'll do it since there's no Book of Darkness in this AU)
and yeah! Signum is married to Shamal :D I'm surprised that Signum's favourite food is hamburgers...
edit: delete
edit: forgot the picture. it is so pretty. and I agree. Nanoha definitely looks better with her hair down than the side-pony tail they gave her in StrikerS
Yaya-chan
2008-02-10, 22:36
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
@Satashi and @Mercurianangel,
Those were uber cute!!!! :kisskiss:
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
Long awaited chapter, this time really sweet:) I was a little bit sad when I reached last line, but I know that next will be even better (I hope:heh:).
1. Fate playing WoW - I just wonder from whom she got it...:D
2. Nanoha's mother's reaction wasn't what I really expected / She could be at least a little bit shocked;)
3. Sneeze during kissing scene made me laught. It was just fun to imagine that.
And I add my bow to writer for the way how she/he write, it's better every next chapter/fic. And thx for great morning with XII chapter.:)
EDIT: It's worth waiting for next chapter, I prefer longer ones :)
*blushes*
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
Nice picture, it suits to the mood of Satashi's piece.
Nice picture, it suits to the mood of Satashi's piece.
Actually I wrote the fic to the picture instead of the other way around :3 So props to her haha. She knew the position and drew it, then I wrote the clothes they were wearing and I think Nanoha's hair style was her doing as well? I can't remember.
but yeah, tag team :P
Edit: page claim!
And Angel just revealed that she reads the stories before their posted :D
I think everybody knew that(especially since your A/N from chapter XII)
otherwise it would be nearly a thing to impossible to drew the picture in nearly 10 minutes
:D
but maybe the goddess of drawing could do that ;)
Actually I wrote the fic to the picture instead of the other way around :3 So props to her haha. She knew the position and drew it, then I wrote the clothes they were wearing and I think Nanoha's hair style was her doing as well? I can't remember.
but yeah, tag team :P
Edit: page claim!
then I hope she keeps on with a Nanoha which wear her hair freely :)
that looks much better than a ponytail ;)
then I hope she keeps on with a Nanoha which wear her hair freely :)
that looks much better than a ponytail ;)
I have plans for Nanoha' hair :p
It's weird. I prefer Fate's hair in pigtails, but I like Nanoha's better down. It's bass ackwards D:
I have plans for Nanoha' hair :p
a terrible accident and a hair cut follows :(
:uhoh:
It's weird. I prefer Fate's hair in pigtails, but I like Nanoha's better down.
jep, same opinion here :D
It's weird. I prefer Fate's hair in pigtails, but I like Nanoha's better down. It's bass ackwards D:
I don't know. I've always felt Fate's hair in pigtails was odd and liked it better down. Nanoha, on the other hand, I have to agree with. I like her's better down.
I guess I'm not much of a pigtail fan.
Sam the Onion
2008-02-11, 09:51
Saved by the Bell XII
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/12/
Enjoy!
:kisskiss:
Perfect for the gloomy aftermatch of speedgaming throught Utawarerumono. The depression is all gone now :D
(Off-note: Thanks mirror-moon and Soylations for translation.)
Nothing to critisize about, but I have to say I admire your ability to write those :naughty: scenes. I felt so dirty just describing a simple kiss :upset: You must have resolution of steel http://vgkittens.myfreeforum.org/images/smiles/icon_thumright.gif
*blushes*
Thankies much guys...but I don't think I'm worthy of worship just yet XD
*needs more practice*
And here's the picture for this chapter~
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/041/1/5/FIC__SbtB_by_Satashi___Steamy_by_mercurianangel.jp g
DA Link (http://mercurianangel.deviantart.com/art/FIC-SbtB-by-Satashi-Steamy-77047907)
Best of the bunch :D
Keep it up. Sataurial team really works.
A for Raising Heart if the vote is still going.
Unless I say the votes are closed, they are still ongoing. I don't have much time to write Raising Heart right now, so I'll leave the votes open untill I do.
a terrible accident and a hair cut follows :(
:uhoh:
Been done :P I have something else for her :nod:
Unless I say the votes are closed, they are still ongoing. I don't have much time to write Raising Heart right now, so I'll leave the votes open untill I do.
Poor Keroko T_T *pets* now that I showed that I care, I'm going to hang you if I don't get my fix :p
:kisskiss:
Nothing to critisize about, but I have to say I admire your ability to write those :naughty: scenes. I felt so dirty just describing a simple kiss :upset: You must have resolution of steel http://vgkittens.myfreeforum.org/images/smiles/icon_thumright.gif
Keep it up. Sataurial team really works.
:p Part of being a writer is to put your own things aside. Although if I was in that situation I'd be lvushing like mad, but writing it is simplier because I'm only concentrating on the girl's emotions and not my own ^.^ so as long as I describe how they feel, I won't have time to worry about myself :hehe:
Sataurial?
Sam the Onion
2008-02-11, 11:37
:p Part of being a writer is to put your own things aside. Although if I was in that situation I'd be lvushing like mad, but writing it is simplier because I'm only concentrating on the girl's emotions and not my own ^.^ so as long as I describe how they feel, I won't have time to worry about myself :hehe:
Oh trust me. I tried that too :heh:
Sataurial?
Much easier than Satashi-sama and mercurianangel :heh:
Junkedcat
2008-02-11, 11:37
The Nanoverse is all about smashing the names of pairs together:
NanoFate
Yuunoha
Sigmal
and now Sataurial
krisslanza
2008-02-11, 12:46
Clearly was a different park then the one I used in SoL :P Which I haven't gotten anything done with... /groan
Been doing Arc-en-Ciel stuff a bit... And this morning I checked and I guess for the last few days I've been .5 a degree higher then normal so running a slight fever. Nothing that bad though... But hmmm... Not sure what to pick on RH :heh:
I think it's time to ask the all mighty 4-sided dice.
*Rolls*
It says to pick C
Hmmm... Didn't it tell me to pick that last time I rolled it? :uhoh: Funny dice.
ghazghkull
2008-02-11, 12:47
Wow...the things you find out first thing in the morning...LOL XD
Anyways I actually think that Fate looks better with her hair down. It works better for me when it's down.
As for Nanoha...*shrugs* it really depends on the setting I suppose and what kind of effect you're trying to go for. If you're trying to go for cute and 'fan'-like reactions, then I'd say have her hair in her usual off-centered ponytail. If she's trying to go for a real appeal, then I'd say have her hair down.
And this morning I checked and I guess for the last few days I've been .5 a degree higher then normal so running a slight fever. Nothing that bad though.
Get lots of rest before you DO gt sick >.<
Much easier than Satashi-sama and mercurianangel :heh:
@_@ okay
The Nanoverse is all about smashing the names of pairs together:
NanoFate
Yuunoha
Sigmal
and now Sataurial
@_@ @_@
Wow...the things you find out first thing in the morning...LOL XD
Anyways I actually think that Fate looks better with her hair down. It works better for me when it's down.
As for Nanoha...*shrugs* it really depends on the setting I suppose and what kind of effect you're trying to go for. If you're trying to go for cute and 'fan'-like reactions, then I'd say have her hair in her usual off-centered ponytail. If she's trying to go for a real appeal, then I'd say have her hair down.
Yup :3 that's why her hair is down when she date's Fate but is up when she's doing normal things. As for Fate... I still want Nanoha to sit on her and grab her pigtails and yell "Giddy up!"
..........Fate-chan is an epic mount?
krisslanza
2008-02-11, 13:19
I've been resting all weekend! :eyespin: Although by "resting" I mean laying in bed and secretly playing Rune Factory on my DS... That counts as resting right? :uhoh:
Fate-chan is a LEGENDARY mount. :nod:
...
:uhoh:
*Runs*
And off-hand... Anyone remember my OCs? :heh: Anyone think a oneshot OC action thing would be cool? :uhoh:
Junkedcat
2008-02-11, 13:36
Yup :3 that's why her hair is down when she date's Fate but is up when she's doing normal things. As for Fate... I still want Nanoha to sit on her and grab her pigtails and yell "Giddy up!"
..........Fate-chan is an epic mount?
I've been resting all weekend! :eyespin: Although by "resting" I mean laying in bed and secretly playing Rune Factory on my DS... That counts as resting right? :uhoh:
Fate-chan is a LEGENDARY mount. :nod:
...
:uhoh:
*Runs*
And off-hand... Anyone remember my OCs? :heh: Anyone think a oneshot OC action thing would be cool? :uhoh:
Such a mount is made of win, good, and blood loss through the nose.
And yes krisslaza, laying in bed and playing video games counts as rest.
Sam the Onion
2008-02-11, 13:40
@_@ okay
:uhoh:
I've been resting all weekend! :eyespin: Although by "resting" I mean laying in bed and secretly playing Rune Factory on my DS... That counts as resting right? :uhoh:
Not school = Resting
You pass
Fate-chan is a LEGENDARY mount. :nod:
...
:uhoh:
*Runs*
Fate
Mount
Binds when used
Unique
Speed 100%
Equip: Gains +200% speed on resting areas and around Nanoha. This effect stacks with Alicia
Equip: Twists your sexuality until you like her.
Nanoha
Back
Binds on pick up
Unique
Equip: Increases your changes of being fondled.
"Giddy up!"
:uhoh:
And off-hand... Anyone remember my OCs? :heh: Anyone think a oneshot OC action thing would be cool? :uhoh:
You could always post their profiles if people don't remember them.
Evangelion Xgouki
2008-02-11, 13:43
..........Fate-chan is an epic mount?
:twitch:
http://warcraft.bonusweb.cz/img/gameinfo/ft/obrazky/phoenix.jpg
Nanoha smiled, crawling onto Fate's back. "hm?" Fate looked over her shoulder and blushed at the look she was getting. "Na-Nanoha?"
"Fate-chaaaan," she cooed out sitting on the small of the blonde's back and gripping the pigtails like reins. " I want to ride you."
"Eh!?" She blushed darkly, trying to roll over but not being able to.
"Nyahaha...." The girl moved back and slowly ground against Fate's butt, picking up her pace and pulling on the hair just enough to let her feel it. "How's that?"
"Nghh.... Stop...." Fate blushed hard, making Nanoha only pick up her pace of grinding and rubbing.
"Not until you say you like it."
"But that's..." She closed her eyes, hips starting to meet the rubbing with small bucking. "Nghh.... Okay, I like it!" Her words made Nanoha squeeze her thighs around Fate's side, lifting her hips in the air and starting to thrust against her despite not having the....needed things... to make the motions work. "Nanoha!?!?"
"Think I'd stop after you said you liked it?" She grinned.
to be continued!
not really
The Nanoverse is all about smashing the names of pairs together:
NanoFate
Yuunoha
Sigmal
and now Sataurial
:twitch:the last is a little bit wierd. It resembles something bad:heh:.
Nanoha smiled, crawling onto Fate's back. "hm?" Fate looked over her shoulder and blushed at the look she was getting. "Na-Nanoha?"
"Fate-chaaaan," she cooed out sitting on the small of the blonde's back and gripping the pigtails like reins. " I want to ride you."
"Eh!?" She blushed darkly, trying to roll over but not being able to.
"Nyahaha...." The girl moved back and slowly ground against Fate's butt, picking up her pace and pulling on the hair just enough to let her feel it. "How's that?"
"Nghh.... Stop...." Fate blushed hard, making Nanoha only pick up her pace of grinding and rubbing.
"Not until you say you like it."
"But that's..." She closed her eyes, hips starting to meet the rubbing with small bucking. "Nghh.... Okay, I like it!" Her words made Nanoha squeeze her thighs around Fate's side, lifting her hips in the air and starting to thrust against her despite not having the....needed things... to make the motions work. "Nanoha!?!?"
"Think I'd stop after you said you liked it?" She grinned.
to be continued!
not really
That white 2 words wasn't supposed to be there:heh::heh: anyway I think it's good idea for lemon...
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-11, 15:55
Satashi. I need to review, as any good lurker should, and I say, this chapter, and the lemon(s) have cured my temporary feelings of Despair. This is both lemon lite (for chapter 11,) and character development. You managed to combine both the feelings for lemon
*Killed by the review Dameon, more to come later*
:twitch:the last is a little bit wierd. It resembles something bad:heh:.
That white 2 words wasn't supposed to be there:heh::heh: anyway I think it's good idea for lemon...
It does? Do we share a nickname now?
lemon? You and the 15 others who requested it to be written lol
Okay, I'll do another lemon but YOU guys have to give me a topic to write on. :p so if you want me to be embarrassed by posting it, you have to be embarrassed by requesting it :3
Satashi. I need to review, as any good lurker should, and I say, this chapter, and the lemon(s) have cured my temporary feelings of Despair. This is both lemon lite (for chapter 11,) and character development. You managed to combine both the feelings for lemon
*Killed by the review Dameon, more to come later*
Glad I could help ^^
Lemon lite, I like that :D :D
edit: Page claim combo!
ghazghkull
2008-02-11, 16:29
Lemon topic? I've got one!
LOL Fate being on top :3
So far you've either written mutual or Nano/Fate-crack ones. Let's see you do a Fate/Nano. Whether it's a crack lemon or a romantic one, is your call. If it's crack, turn-ons galore! XD At least on the part of Fate and Nanoha LOL XD
For us, anything'll turn us the hell on LOL
And I actually typed that out with a straight face! XD
Sam the Onion
2008-02-11, 16:54
What I could use is something new. You can't get tired to NxF but it sure doesn't hurt to try something new :D
HxF, result of a rought party. Aftermatch included.
Now that would be something special :D And a challenge at the same time ;)
And I actually typed that out with a straight face! XD
Lies :heh:
Edit: NOW I got it!
LottexLiesexTeen-Nanoha, teaching the ways of the bedroom. 'How to please Fate' edition.
Waiting anxiously to this one :D
ghazghkull
2008-02-11, 16:59
What I could use is something new. You can't get tired to NxF but it sure doesn't hurt to try something new :D
HxF, result of a rought party. Aftermatch included.
Now that would be something special :D And a challenge at the same time ;)
Lies :heh:
It's true! Dude I'm a full-fledge pervert who'll just grin lecherously now at such thoughts XD That's my definition of a straight face, when I can grin lecherously LOL XD
Mind you from an outsider's point of view, I'm just typing/reading something funny/amusing that they'll pass it off as a normal expression, unless they're the same they decide to expect my grin closely XD
Also, there's a reason why I changed the order, although this is usually applied in Yaoi pairings. The first name usually stands for the dominant one in the relationship, hence why I said Fate/Nano.
Oh and speaking of dominant ones in the 'relationship' and such, here's another one: Teenager Vivio/Nano and Teenager Vivio/Fate! Now THAT would not only be sexy, but utterly moe :love::naughty:
Sam the Onion
2008-02-11, 17:12
It's true! Dude I'm a full-fledge pervert who'll just grin lecherously now at such thoughts XD That's my definition of a straight face, when I can grin lecherously LOL XD
Mind you from an outsider's point of view, I'm just typing/reading something funny/amusing that they'll pass it off as a normal expression, unless they're the same they decide to expect my grin closely XD
Aaa... Our expressions of straight faces interveaned. You didn't mention that your straight face was your normal face, which was covered by a lecherous grin :heh:
But I understand what you mean. I got that grin on all this time I'm thinking possible lemon pairings :D
Also, there's a reason why I changed the order, although this is usually applied in Yaoi pairings. The first name usually stands for the dominant one in the relationship, hence why I said Fate/Nano.
Well that would make the situation just more interesting.
Hayate being the dominant and Fate the one who's subjective. Maybe Nanoha drugged them to see what would happen :uhoh:
I don't think I have to explain who's the dominant in LxLxN :heh:
Oh and speaking of dominant ones in the 'relationship' and such, here's another one: Teenager Vivio/Nano and Teenager Vivio/Fate! Now THAT would not only be sexy, but utterly moe :love::naughty:
Ooo... I didn't even consider Vivio. She must definetly be in this one.
Maybe 17 year old Vivio dominating her harem of Nanoha and Fate, who would be slightly younger. 'Onee-sama!' 'Senpai!' Anyone? :heh:
Mm... Mind images
ghazghkull
2008-02-11, 17:19
LOL Well I've got class now.
*Goes to Japanese class with a lecherous grin while trying to clean up a nosebleed* LOL XD
Junkedcat
2008-02-11, 17:49
What I could use is something new. You can't get tired to NxF but it sure doesn't hurt to try something new :D
HxF, result of a rought party. Aftermatch included.
+1 For steamy mistakes and funny aftermath!
Maybe 17 year old Vivio dominating her harem of Nanoha and Fate, who would be slightly younger. 'Onee-sama!' 'Senpai!' Anyone? :heh:
Mm... Mind images
+1 for Vivio-senpai mentoring her underclassmen in "relationship skills". (i can vote twice right)
Original content (maybe): How bout Fate working the suspension of her car (or moms) on lover's lane :naughty:. Hayate or Nanoha as the preferred passenger.
*Goes to Japanese class with a lecherous grin while trying to clean up a nosebleed* LOL XD
four words in the sentence work so well together.
Well then, since we're debating on crack for lemons I have one that's really crack-material :p.
How about Teen! Nanoha x Fate x Hayate x Lieze Twins x Vivio? :p:p:p:p
It'd be fun to see this written :D:D:D:D
*gets home from work and cehcks forums*
*falls out of chair*
All this and TEN PMs!? God, what have I done.......
Poor Keroko T_T *pets* now that I showed that I care, I'm going to hang you if I don't get my fix :p
Love you too Satashi. :p
:p Part of being a writer is to put your own things aside. Although if I was in that situation I'd be lvushing like mad, but writing it is simplier because I'm only concentrating on the girl's emotions and not my own ^.^ so as long as I describe how they feel, I won't have time to worry about myself :hehe:
You're telling me. Sometimes when writing Raising Heart I have a perfec idea which I would really love to write, only to see people voting the completely oposite way. T_T
Sataurial?
You'll get used to it.
Oh and speaking of dominant ones in the 'relationship' and such, here's another one: Teenager Vivio/Nano and Teenager Vivio/Fate! Now THAT would not only be sexy, but utterly moe :love::naughty:
Yes. Now. No questions.
the fics should be possible
;D
and after the pics from Keroko I like the ide of VivioxNanoha
:D
but when we are with perv ideas, then I suggest LindyxNanoha or NanohaxLindy
;)
one word to much Satashi ;)
*hope for a LindyxNanoha short or lemon :D*
:)
krisslanza
2008-02-11, 18:16
*gets home from work and cehcks forums*
*falls out of chair*
All this and TEN PMs!? God, what have I done.......
There is a evil in this land that just does not sleep! :heh:
You have its full attention now :eyespin:
Evangelion Xgouki
2008-02-11, 18:27
Yes. Now. No questions.
I think this would make a good start...
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb63/Shinzantetsu1/Nanoha%20II/th_20080211131058.jpg
Nanoha: Vi-Vivio...?
Vivio: It's alright, mama. I won't let them hurt you...
I think this would make a good start...
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb63/Shinzantetsu1/Nanoha%20II/th_20080211131058.jpg (http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb63/Shinzantetsu1/Nanoha%20II/20080211131058.jpg)
I'm still not sure whether to shop that into a Nanoha/Keroko or a Vivio/Syn picture...
I haven't done a Keroko-shop in a while, but that picture pretty much explains Vivio and Syn's relationship spot on.
Chaos2Frozen
2008-02-11, 18:48
*gets home from work and cehcks forums*
*falls out of chair*
All this and TEN PMs!? God, what have I done.......
What was that song again, The price of fame? Something something.... :D
A long rant about things. If you have time please glance over this for future request.
Okay now that I've had time to read up, I have a few things to say. This will be kind of a rant so hang with it till the end please.
First off, I want to say that I am not opposed to writing MA rated stories. I don't mind crack pairings, or even the off-the-wall stuff. I do take most all request, some are just only shared with a few. So I don't mind 3-ways with Vivio+mamas, or H/F/N, or the twins and Nanoha. That's fine, whatever you guys want. I'm a writer, I can do anything from the sweet loving gentle ones to the ones where Fate is bound and blindfolded screaming for more.
But one thing that does bother me, however, is a little of the attitude towards it. The perverted comments, lecherous grins, and generally the... I guess 'immature' is the word I'm looking for... comments. You know, writing about sex and kinky stuff can be done tastefully, and I even have a Nanoha/Fate bondage one that is really sweet and loving. So please, while requesting it please stay mature and respectful as well.
Now I'm not saying, don't give me crack request or to hold back what you want. I respect views and opinions at face value and don't hold anything against the people doing it. An example of a request I got:
If you have the time could you do a lemon involving Fate and Nanoha with Nanoha being futanari having anal with Fate in a public bathroom with people around? Make Nanoha dominate too! Thank for your time and I hope to sees it if you can.
Now let me ask you, which is more perverse? A simple request that's straight to the point and polite about it, or the perverted worded request about simple sex? I hope I kind of made my point there. I'm not trying to bring down anyone who posted or anything like that, and I respect all of your views and I don't want anyone to go back and edit post or anything. Just, please, in the future be more respectful to the person your requesting of. I don't like to be implied to be a pervert.
Yes, I have a lot of Nanoha hentai. Yes, I have a lot of hentai doujinshi ( I collect doujin as you know) and yes, I write mature stories that range from extremely romantic to extremely slutty. But I don't think perverted thoughts, I don't have a perverse grin, I don't refer to myself as a pervert. So please, when requesting from me, don't add those things about yourself to them.
If you want something, please just ask straightforward and respectfully. I don't care what it is, just please be mature about it.
I'm sorry if I made anyone feel bad about this post, or if I upset some people. I have no intentions to do so, I just want the future to be a little more friendly to new members and so we don't come off as a 4chan rip off.
Lemon was decided as well. I will do a Nanoha/Vivio(teenager) mature fanfic. The request was "Nanoha teaching Vivio how to masturbate". I liked the way the person requested it, and the idea is nice, so I'll go with it. Everyone else's ideas have been noted and some are really good as well. When this one is done, I'll ask again for your ideas and opinions.
So once again, I DO want your comments and I DO want your request. Just worded more mature <3
Oh, and even though this is about fanfiction and request, we should probably not make a big deal out of my long post here. If you want to comment on it please PM me instead of continuing it on this thread. Thanks ^^
@Satashi: Don't kill the goose just because its late on delivering the golden egg. Not refering to the above post though; I meant earlier. :p
And the degree of bull:p I get at CCS FF area drove me here, so yeah I understand your pain.
The Nanoverse is all about smashing the names of pairs together:
NanoFate
Yuunoha
Sigmal
and now SataurialWell it started thanks to Brangelina. >_>
Off the top of my head, I can throw:
Chromy
Fanoha (flip the domineering role around)
Chronoha (the original ship)
Arfira (HELL YES!)
Khate
*suddenly drenched in bullets*
Fate-chan is a LEGENDARY mount. :nod:
...
:uhoh:
*Runs*
And off-hand... Anyone remember my OCs? :heh: Anyone think a oneshot OC action thing would be cool? :uhoh:Such a mount is made of win, good, and blood loss through the nose.Fate
Mount
Binds when used
Unique
Speed 100%
Equip: Gains +200% speed on resting areas and around Nanoha. This effect stacks with Alicia
Equip: Twists your sexuality until you like her.
Nanoha
Back
Binds on pick up
Unique
Equip: Increases your changes of being fondled.
"Giddy up!"
:uhoh:What's this, some kind of twist of that cry:
Ratsel & Zengar: REAL MEN RIDE EACH OTHER!
Taken completely out of context of course.
*runs*
I'm still not sure whether to shop that into a Nanoha/Keroko or a Vivio/Syn picture...
I haven't done a Keroko-shop in a while, but that picture pretty much explains Vivio and Syn's relationship spot on.Do both! One for the present day Cadia, and another for the future!!! :D
And I ship Leonivio. (Leonard x Vivio)
*runs*
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-11, 23:28
Ok. I'm back, and I owe Master(That has no gender, correct?) Satashi a proper review.
Chapter 12 was a nice look into the lives of our two characters, Fate and Nanoha. Before I delve into them, I would like to make some notes on the sidestory. I like the integration of the A's cast (Fanboy: Fuck yes Signum X Shamal) and how you manged to keep Signum true to her nature yet real in this part. I love Hayate's role as friend in this story. You kept your promise of side characters not being shafted (7Arcs!) and added more views into Nanoha's perspective at the same time. Fate we also see grow closer to Nanoha, and yet we see the family conflict slowly but surely building to something which will be surmounted. Precia is played of her daughter for some great laughs, and the bonds of that family seem strong.
Nanoha's business acumen is not the greatest, but unlike many young models, she tries to learn from her mistakes (There is some brain, unlike some models..) and we see the potential for a star there.
The meat and potatoes was the makeout scene. That was quite frankly, refreshing. I like seeing how they still have some of the awkwardness of youth, and the natural curiosity (God I sound like my professor) of the two. Your mastery of the descriptive arts is not in doubt by this scene, which both titillates the mind, and keeps the reader rapt and on focus. We get cute couple scenes, with one verse in particular staying in my mind
I can't bluntly say I just wanted to be with her longer
Sticks with me. I can't say why, but it just sticks with me in my mind's eye. This was a wonderful addition to the story, and I say thank you. May you write up more wonderful pieces of entertainment
mercurianangel
2008-02-12, 00:33
XXXXXXDDDDDDD
Just so you know, "Sataurial" had me giggling for the longest time...
made my day
and so this won't be completely off topic:
Been a while, guys. ;)
I bring goodies.
<spam>
Ignis Fatuus, part II (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3967522/3/Ignis_Fatuus), up.
</spam>
*flail* I wanna know what's going ooooooooon
Sataurial? it sounds interesting....
/R/equesting a Sataurial lemon fic!!
I dare you to write it, Satashi! :D
Saludos, Haru
Sataurial? it sounds interesting....
/R/equesting a Sataurial lemon fic!!
I dare you to write it, Satashi! :D
Saludos, Haru
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
ghazghkull
2008-02-12, 01:24
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is."
Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
*Falls over laughing* LOL XD
mercurianangel
2008-02-12, 01:25
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is."
Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/MercurianAngel/satashislemons.jpg
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is."
Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/MercurianAngel/satashislemons.jpg
LOL & WIN
As expected from you Satashi, and cute drawing MercurianAngel. Thanks both of you :)
Saludos, Haur
Hiddenryuu
2008-02-12, 01:38
Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)
Sorry for not being very active was working on another project...but I kind of meet a block on it hehe.
I have a question for all of you...
I want to draw a short scene... battle preferred, maybe not too long, of 2 characters (could be OC vs. a nanoha character) but my brain is a little gelified from all the work I'm doing with the other project... so I'm asking if anyone would want to write a fairly short scene that's has some action.
If there is anyone willing just give me a holler (any way) I'll be happy to discuss the details.
Btw both of the fic updates were really nice , I'm looking foward for more of it! :) if anyone wants to help out with anything that would be fun too!
Sataurial? it sounds interesting....
/R/equesting a Sataurial lemon fic!!
I dare you to write it, Satashi! :D
Saludos, Haru
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)
Sorry for not being very active was working on another project...but I kind of meet a block on it hehe.
I have a question for all of you...
I want to draw a short scene... battle preferred, maybe not too long, of 2 characters (could be OC vs. a nanoha character) but my brain is a little gelified from all the work I'm doing with the other project... so I'm asking if anyone would want to write a fairly short scene that's has some action.
If there is anyone willing just give me a holler (any way) I'll be happy to discuss the details.
Btw both of the fic updates were really nice , I'm looking foward for more of it! :) if anyone wants to help out with anything that would be fun too!Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!
Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam. :eyespin:
ghazghkull
2008-02-12, 02:58
Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!
Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam. :eyespin:
Gundam?! Where?! Where?! *Looks around frantically*
Fuyu no Sora
2008-02-12, 07:34
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
That reminds me of the Erio/Caro/Lutecia hardcore lemon you wrote in the old FanFic Thread :D
:p
Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!
:heh::heh::heh: I gave up trying to find out a long time ago :heh::heh:
Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam. :eyespin:
You know it's possible :p:D:D:p
Sam the Onion
2008-02-12, 09:01
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v181/MercurianAngel/satashislemons.jpg
Sataurial delivers another piece of WIN :heh:
Within 5 posts, we still get all of Mer and Sata-chan's awesomeness, but no hint on Satashi-sama's gender!!!
Trying to catch a piece of the gender puzzle is like trying to steal a Gundam. :eyespin:
Wow, good job... not only did you meet the lemon requirement, you also managed to keep yourself from identification (remember there was a big discussion about whether or not Satashi was male or female)
Sataurial delivers another piece of WIN :heh:
Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^
and Sataurial still makes me giggle :3
Fuyu no Sora
2008-02-12, 09:11
Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^
and Sataurial still makes me giggle :3
Now THAT's what I call unfair :heh:
Sataurial.....:heh::heh: Okay...starnge but I guess it still doesn't beat the strangest nickname you ever recieved :heh:
Angel actually knows my gender. She cheated and checked my DA account that I made 5 years ago when I commented on one of her pictures :P but don't bother checking now 'cause I removed it ^_^
And your new one no longer has such info. :3
Though I know how much fun such gender confusion can be, being somewhat of a forum trap myself *remembers the glorious gender chaos in the OC-thread* :D Ah, that was fun.
On the flipside, my love for traps have also made me somewhat of an expert in them. Just you watch Satashi, I will find out someday if my suspicions are correct.
In other news: Writing of Raising Heart will re-commense this evening. Votes are open untill then.
Now THAT's what I call unfair :heh:
Sataurial.....:heh::heh: Okay...starnge but I guess it still doesn't beat the strangest nickname you ever recieved :heh:
lol its only half my nickname :p
actually, Sata is 4 characters but urial is 5,
so it's 60% Angel and 40% Satashi XD
And your new one no longer has such info. :3
Though I know how much fun such gender confusion can be, being somewhat of a forum trap myself *remembers the glorious gender chaos in the OC-thread* :D Ah, that was fun.
On the flipside, my love for traps have also made me somewhat of an expert in them. Just you watch Satashi, I will find out someday if my suspicions are correct.
In other news: Writing of Raising Heart will re-commense this evening. Votes are open untill then.
Yay RH! and omg, Keroko is a trap! Get in the car! >: 3
I know he's male but I like Keroko-chan, so Keroko-kun is female to me :D
krisslanza
2008-02-12, 12:34
Actually I always wondered why say Graham called Nanoha and Fate -kun :heh: I thought that was a honorific for boys... :uhoh:
And today I feel like noting I actually had to replace the pencil lead in my mechinical pencil. It feels like a milestone going through the like... 3 or 4 it started with :p Though alas it wasn't all in SoL work (Which off-hand I think I'll re-write a few sections of it that I feel just read very, very bland and dull) but mostly from having to write Arc-en-Ciel notes. :heh:
Actually I always wondered why say Graham called Nanoha and Fate -kun :heh: I thought that was a honorific for boys... :uhoh:
-kun and -chan are the most misunderstood honorifics. -chan is generally used between females, and -kun is generally used between males. But it doesn't mean it's limited to just that.
-kun can also mean an underclassman or such, which is why Graham calls them -kun. "-chan" in that case would be a little awkward.
Also like in my story, Yuuno calls Candy "Candy-kun" because she's a student.
Annnnd, -chan can be used for adoration too or cuteness too. Like a girl calling a male -chan would symbolize closeness or teasing.
those are just a few examples, and not limited to just those ^^ It's hard doing fanfics with them sometimes, but they add a depth you just can't get in English ><
krisslanza
2008-02-12, 13:20
Aaaah I see :heh: We didn't touch much on -kun in Japanese I so I wasn't aware of its other uses (I knew -chan had some more uses then what we were taught in class).
That helps some :heh: It is difficult writing a Japanese-oriented character when you don't know too much about it... (Like I noticed I goofed Lindy up in SoL since she actually DOES use honorifics... So I had to correct that.)
So true though. I know Feral once noted in YU a scene just didn't feel right anymore since they removed the honorifics. (Elena calls Milanor "Master" at first but he complains and she now calls him "Sir"... Feral says the scene is better in japanese since it involves a change in honorifics or something)
Yay RH! and omg, Keroko is a trap! Get in the car! >: 3
I know he's male but I like Keroko-chan, so Keroko-kun is female to me :D
The sign of a perfect trap is denial. :D
Raising Heart Final Vote Count:
A: IIIIII
B: IIIIII
C: IIIIIIII
Close finish. The closest we've had so far, but honesty wins this time.
Yaya-chan
2008-02-12, 20:54
Granted
Satashi smiled, wrapping arms around Angel and whispering in her ear. "I have what you wanted..."
"Good," Angel smiled and placed her fingers against Satashi's, taking the glass of lemonade. "It's such a hot day today."
"It really is." Together they sat in a hammock and drank their cool refreshing beverage. "I wonder why everyone is staring at their screens right now?"
"Not sure" She smiled. "But one thing?"
"Yes, Angel?"
"I love your lemons."
LOL!! Sataurial lemons are so refreshing. :D
Really a win. :nod:
Speaking of lemons......
Title: Please Teach Me ( a spoof of an old CCS doujin lol)
pairing: Nanoha/Vivio ( mainly Vivio solo with Nanoha's help )
Summary: After a day at school, a teenage Vivio calls Nanoha to her room to ask some embarrassing questions about things she doesn't understand. Nanoha/Vivio bonding
length:2.2k words
Rating: Mature
Notes: Although this is technically N/V, it's more of Nanoha being there with/for Vivio. Hard to explain. I actually like this one. It shows a lot of love along with hentainess.
Right now this is too long for PM........trying to think of a way to share it.
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-12, 22:31
Satashi. I do believe there is a internet website asstr+.+org (Links broken, because hotlinking to adult content is not smart.) that holds these sort of stories there. Just a quick suggestion from your neighborhood friendly lurker Smith.
Flies to Hangar
wasn't there a place that allowed adult fics and stuff like anime specifically?
Ryand-Smith
2008-02-12, 23:02
I do believe it was adultfanfiction(dot)net
ghazghkull
2008-02-12, 23:05
Speaking of lemons......
Title: Please Teach Me ( a spoof of an old CCS doujin lol)
pairing: Nanoha/Vivio ( mainly Vivio solo with Nanoha's help )
Summary: After a day at school, a teenage Vivio calls Nanoha to her room to ask some embarrassing questions about things she doesn't understand. Nanoha/Vivio bonding
length:2.2k words
Rating: Mature
Notes: Although this is technically N/V, it's more of Nanoha being there with/for Vivio. Hard to explain. I actually like this one. It shows a lot of love along with hentainess.
Right now this is too long for PM........trying to think of a way to share it.
mediaminer (http://www.mediaminer.org) is your best bet if you want to post that sort of thing without penalty.
I'll post it after raid tonight. my other half is proofing it for me right now ^^
Though I know how much fun such gender confusion can be, being somewhat of a forum trap myself *remembers the glorious gender chaos in the OC-thread* :D Ah, that was fun.Hell yeah. We were all happy that we had some girls with us in that crack spa when poof! Keroko went and dropped the number by 1! :( :joke:
We miss you Soraaa... :p
Looking forward to RH, even though I'm not exactly an impartial voter... :heh:
kk, I tried a few things, then went with mediafire. so yeah lol
PM me for it
Nanoha/Vivio, "Please Teach Me"
And if this gets a good response I'll do another.
Sataurial
Thanks Angel for proofing <3
Gilraen Isilra
2008-02-13, 08:11
So that means you're officially Sataurial?
Sorry for the off-topicness ^-^u
So that means you're officially Sataurial?
Sorry for the off-topicness ^-^u
I'm only half Sataurial :p But she proofred for me so this is a Sataurial production lol
yay, 8 request for Please Teach Me so far ^_^
Going to do more SbtB soon too. Tease should be posted tonight
Gilraen Isilra
2008-02-13, 08:36
Can't wait for the teaser! You and Angel make a great Team!:rolleyes:
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
You and Angel make a great Team!:rolleyes:
You should see the Legendary thing she's working on right now :D :D :D
Sam the Onion
2008-02-13, 08:49
kk, I tried a few things, then went with mediafire. so yeah lol
PM me for it
Nanoha/Vivio, "Please Teach Me"
And if this gets a good response I'll do another.
Mediafire has maintance...
Tough luck.
Sataurial
Thanks Angel for proofing <3
It's catching up :heh:
You and Angel make a great Team!:rolleyes:
Coudn't agree more :D
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
Looks very promising.
I think I will like the 'mad in love' Nanoha more than 'in-denial' Nanoha. Who'd have known :eyespin:
You should see the Legendary thing she's working on right now :D :D :D
That's... :twitch::uhoh::heh:
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
You should see the Legendary thing she's working on right now :D :D :D
*sigh*so long till the release...
Nightengale
2008-02-13, 11:40
XRLEUFLSKBw
Seriously though, my friends say I'll probably look like him in 20 years... minus 30% of that muscle mass though.
Anyway, I just got through a backlog of 10 pages starting from the beginning of Kero-kun's RH...
By the way, Satashi, your request-taimu still up? Cause I wanna request this...
lnwxn9p18jw
Or alternatively...
RxF (http://www.vidilife.com/video_play_763430_My_Animals.htm)
Basically...
Hayate learns transformation magic. Turns into a raccoon. Yuuno turns into a ferret as well since Hayate is nervous of doing it the first time alone. Hayate can't get the transformation off.
...
...
...
...
...
It's the raccoon's mating season.
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*
Cracktesy of Night of Gales™
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
Awwww~ Nanoha is so cute!!
I need this delicious chapter…now… when will it come out?
I won't read any teasers again >.<
Saludos, Haru
Awwww~ Nanoha is so cute!!
I need this delicious chapter…now… when will it come out?
I won't read any teasers again >.<
Saludos, Haru
I know that, but I cannot hold back, when it is about NxF *sigh*
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
Finally something to look forward for :D.
I just wonder how will Fate gratify her for cookies, because this:
You should see the Legendary thing she's working on right now :D :D :D looks promisingly.:D
Junkedcat
2008-02-13, 12:52
Go Go, waking up early!
I didn't sleep at all, that was one thing that was a given. Now as my cell phone demanded that I wake up I could only groan out while reaching to shut it off. Images of my blond girlfriend plagued me all night, keeping me in a cross between awake and asleep. The taste of her mouth lingered despite knowing that I was only imagining it now. Whenever I was about to doze off last night I would roll over and swear that she was there with me, moving to kiss me again. Maybe it was because it was my first time to kiss, maybe it was because my heart still fluttered when thinking about it, or perhaps it was just me being excited that someone could like me so much. No matter why I stayed up all night, I still had to get out of bed and get ready to go to work. Mitsuki had jobs for me, and I needed to look presentable. Besides, maybe if I could get everything I needed done, I would have time to bake up some cookies...
Saved by the Bell XIII
By: Satashi
Nothing like thoughts of that special someone to keep you up at night. Get too antsy and shes going to attract some attention she might not be ready for (like her mom).
You should see the Legendary thing she's working on right now :D :D :D
When we are all old and gray talking to the grandchildren about the internet of old, you two will be mentioned with a gleam in our eyes.
Finally something to look forward for :D.
I just wonder how will Fate gratify her for cookies, because this:
looks promisingly.:D
Maybe Fate wants to eat muffins instead? I'll let her eat muffins.
Not really :3
Nothing like thoughts of that special someone to keep you up at night. Get too antsy and shes going to attract some attention she might not be ready for (like her mom).
When we are all old and gray talking to the grandchildren about the internet of old, you two will be mentioned with a gleam in our eyes.
hahahaha
oh and @thread:Angel-chan's piccy has nothing to do with my story. It's legendary on it's own.
@Nightengale:Um.... I'm not that good at furrie :P
Awwww~ Nanoha is so cute!!
I need this delicious chapter…now… when will it come out?
I won't read any teasers again >.<
Saludos, Haru
XD Teasers are teasing.
I know that, but I cannot hold back, when it is about NxF *sigh*
Hahaha.
When it will come out? Um.... Less than A, more than B
When it will come out? Um.... Less than A, more than B
That's empty set in most cases.
More than A and less than B makes more sense for me.
...Can I ask for the value of B?
Saludos, Haru
That's empty set in most cases.
More than A and less than B makes more sense for me.
...Can I ask for the value of B?
Saludos, Haru
B is just a little more than C, so if you Divide D by Q you should get the exact time of release, unless you're eastern time, in which case W needs to be added to adjust for the time zone.
Vivio looked blankly at her math homework. "Mama, I don't understand any of this..."
"It's simple sweetheart," Fate bent over the little one's desk and started writing with her pencil. You just find the tangent with the cos over sin with the imaginary number that's not equal to the rate of the two trains moving towards each other while factoring the the rate of speed and mass to determine the gravitational pull of an orange falling from an apple tree into the black vortex of long division and space time conversion method."
Vivio cried.
"Sweetie it was a joke, don't cry! Awwww, come here baby." She lifted Vivio into her arms and cuddled her. "Mama's sorry, I'll teach you properly okay? Please dry your tears." She kissed the mis matched eyes lovingly.
Across the room Nanoha laughed to herself. "You deserved that one."
B is just a little more than C, so if you Divide D by Q you should get the exact time of release, unless you're eastern time, in which case W needs to be added to adjust for the time zone.
Vivio looked blankly at her math homework. "Mama, I don't understand any of this..."
"It's simple sweetheart," Fate bent over the little one's desk and started writing with her pencil. You just find the tangent with the cos over sin with the imaginary number that's not equal to the rate of the two trains moving towards each other while factoring the the rate of speed and mass to determine the gravitational pull of an orange falling from an apple tree into the black vortex of long division and space time conversion method."
Vivio cried.
"Sweetie it was a joke, don't cry! Awwww, come here baby." She lifted Vivio into her arms and cuddled her. "Mama's sorry, I'll teach you properly okay? Please dry your tears." She kissed the mis matched eyes lovingly.
Across the room Nanoha laughed to herself. "You deserved that one."
...my head. Damn you, Satashi-nyan.
EDIT: I claim this page in the name of OUTER CADIA! ORE TACHI WO DARE DA TO OMOTTE YAGARU?!
*runs*
Maybe Fate wants to eat muffins instead? I'll let her eat muffins.
Not really :3
You and your faorite white.... :(
"It's simple sweetheart," Fate bent over the little one's desk and started writing with her pencil. You just find the tangent with the cos over sin with the imaginary number that's not equal to the rate of the two trains moving towards each other while factoring the the rate of speed and mass to determine the gravitational pull of an orange falling from an apple tree into the black vortex of long division and space time conversion method."
It reminds me math exam :cool:
Gillian looks in the forum, sees the last post from Satashi, reads it and then turns the computer off. "No Maths at home..."
*Catches up on Three days of Anime Suki backing up things, and reads Satashi's last post.
*blink*
Poor Vivio. Reminds me of something similar with my little cousin.
Also; "Story Idea Get".
=3
ghazghkull
2008-02-13, 16:30
*blinks* :3 Math? Oh good lord LOL XD
Fuyu no Sora
2008-02-13, 16:45
Hell yeah. We were all happy that we had some girls with us in that crack spa when poof! Keroko went and dropped the number by 1! :(
So.....it was that dummy Sith Lord that confused Keroko-kun's gender, I presume? It'd be SOOOO typical of him -.-
We miss you Soraaa... :p
I miss you guys tooooooo :upset::( (:D:heh:)
I should be getting my repaired computer around Monday or if not the Monday after that. If I have time (and if someone digs my body out of this pile of work =.=), I'll try to go back to Outer Cadia at least as a lurker to see what's going on around there (I curse my luck for missing some things as interesting as "Keroko-chan day"...)
BTW:
@Sata-chan: ... You forgot to claim the last two pages.....
EDIT:
XRLEUFLSKBw
Seriously though, my friends say I'll probably look like him in 20 years... minus 30% of that muscle mass though.
Anyway, I just got through a backlog of 10 pages starting from the beginning of Kero-kun's RH...
By the way, Satashi, your request-taimu still up? Cause I wanna request this...
lnwxn9p18jw
Or alternatively...
RxF (http://www.vidilife.com/video_play_763430_My_Animals.htm)
Basically...
Hayate learns transformation magic. Turns into a raccoon. Yuuno turns into a ferret as well since Hayate is nervous of doing it the first time alone. Hayate can't get the transformation off.
...
...
...
...
...
It's the raccoon's mating season.
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
:eyespin::eyespin::eyespin:
*runs*
Cracktesy of Night of Gales™
Quoted for the sheer hilariousness of what this suggests :p
B is just a little more than C, so if you Divide D by Q you should get the exact time of release, unless you're eastern time, in which case W needs to be added to adjust for the time zone.
Vivio looked blankly at her math homework. "Mama, I don't understand any of this..."
"It's simple sweetheart," Fate bent over the little one's desk and started writing with her pencil. You just find the tangent with the cos over sin with the imaginary number that's not equal to the rate of the two trains moving towards each other while factoring the the rate of speed and mass to determine the gravitational pull of an orange falling from an apple tree into the black vortex of long division and space time conversion method."
Vivio cried.
"Sweetie it was a joke, don't cry! Awwww, come here baby." She lifted Vivio into her arms and cuddled her. "Mama's sorry, I'll teach you properly okay? Please dry your tears." She kissed the mis matched eyes lovingly.
Across the room Nanoha laughed to herself. "You deserved that one."
Hmmm, ideas, a little SynXVivio study sesion... with the two sitting side by side, cheeks almost touching...
So.....it was that dummy Sith Lord that confused Keroko-kun's gender, I presume? It'd be SOOOO typical of him -.-
One of them, yes. I think more then half of the thread was upside down.
As for the Sith Lord, even after revelation he said, and I quote: "For what its worth, Keroko, you'd make a great woman"
I took that as a compliment. :p
I miss you guys tooooooo :upset::( (:D:heh:)
I should be getting my repaired computer around Monday or if not the Monday after that. If I have time (and if someone digs my body out of this pile of work =.=), I'll try to go back to Outer Cadia at least as a lurker to see what's going on around there (I curse my luck for missing some things as interesting as "Keroko-chan day"...)
You'd be surprised how much calmer it is these days. There are times when the fanfiction thread is more active.
Kirika-chan
2008-02-13, 17:28
Hmmm, ideas, a little SynXVivio study sesion... with the two sitting side by side, cheeks almost touching...
Math with Fate-mama ... Yeah, it's sound good :D (but not with cheeks almost touching and... XD!)
Actually, concidering Syn is to Vivio what Fate is to Nanoha, it wouldn't be propper fanservice if their cheeks weren't almost touching. :P
Actually, concidering Syn is to Vivio what Fate is to Nanoha, it wouldn't be propper fanservice if their cheeks weren't almost touching. :P
*blinks*
I'd like to read that, actually.
=3?
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