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[blitz1/2]

What's a manosuke? though the other words give hints I don't know what this word mean.

Great chapter :D

A very gar, muscular Rinnosuke that only wears a loincloth

[Marcus H.]

can anyone help me to beta read/edit my grammar and punctuation errors ?? writing is not my stronger points ... :heh::heh: (have a mild form of dyslexia)

Well, I could help you out, but I can't guarantee that myself. I have three fanfictions on my mind about Toaru Majutsu no Index, a fanfic series about WITCH, one about Winx Club, a filler fanfic on Naruto... :uhoh: yeah.

They're still on my mind, anyway, so I might be able to help out. Why don't you post them here? I prefer that than to have it privately 'coz many minds are better than one.

[MrTerrorist]

Hardcore Manosuke Yaoi.

Just saying these three words is enough to make you go mad.

[blitz1/2]

Hardcore Manosuke Yaoi.

Just saying these three words is enough to make you go mad.

not for the touhou fangirls. :heh:

[outerelf]

Here you go:

Title: An Epic Meeting of Epic Proportions
Rating: K+
Genre: Humor/spritual
Summery: Kamina meet Touma. Touma, meet Kamina. GAR may now ensue. Drabble.

"Dude, only those who die awesome deaths and aren't quite dead are allowed to come here. You must've done something great!" A loud laugh accompanied those words as Touma slowly turned around to see a man with blue hair and decorated with different tattoo's standing there. A wooden katana was slung across his shoulder, and a majestic cape flared out from behind. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6521660/1/An_Epic_Meeting_of_Epic_Proportions)

[tsunade666]

so is this after vol 22 when Touma is dead? Touma and Kamina meeting at the after life. Nice fanfic.

[blitz1/2]

so is this after vol 22 when Touma is dead? Touma and Kamina meeting at the after life. Nice fanfic.

Put a spoiler tag on that.

[outerelf]

Hello- just as a testing of the waters- would anyone be seriously squicked out if I actually wrote a story that was Motoharu/Maika Tsuchimikado?

I've got an idea floating about in my head, but I must admit I'm kinda hesitant about putting it out there if all I get are flamers.

[Wilfriback]

Explain me, do you mean a Maika X Motoharu fic?

[Ashaman]

Remeber, Non-blood siblings. One reads Brother-Sister stories, while the other openly admits to loving his sister.

I say Go for it.

[Wilfriback]

Non illegal forbidden love?
Mmm... sounds interesting.

[blitz1/2]

Non illegal forbidden love?
Mmm... sounds interesting.

Even if it's forbidden love, go for it!

[Ashaman]

Okay, so this two shot became a three shot. No action, mostly just spreading the word.

Rumours. Wherever you go, there will always be rumours. They travel by word of mouth, and usually inflate with each telling as the information passes along one person to the next.

And so there was a great deal of astonishment when one of the interested parties was asked “Is it true a boy is fighting you for the right to date Misaka?!” Saten Rukio demanded of one Shirai Kuroko.

“What!?” Kuroko demanded, jumping out of her seat in shock. Right now, they were in Judgement office, Branch 177. “Where did you ever hear something so absurd?”

“Urm, the internet,” Saten admitted weakly.

“See, I told you,” Uiharu scolded her friend as she trailed behind the girl.

“I thought it was a little strange too!” Saten tried to defend herself. “But then I thought; if it’s Shirai-san and Misaka-san…”

“Saten-san!” Uiharu Kazari yelled in response, trying to scold her friend.

Both girls were the same age as Kuroko, and were in their first year of middle school. Both had black hair, but that is more or less where the similarities ended.

Saten’s hair was long, she was rather tall for her age, and was almost always smiling. Uiharu had short hair with a very flowery headband, was much smaller in comparison to her friend, as well as much more introverted.

“Ah, sorry, sorry,” Saten tried to laugh it off.

“It’s fine. Really, when it comes to that man, I’d be perfectly willing to fight him off,” Kuroko admitted.

“That man?” Saten asked.

Kuroko sniffed. “While the rumour that I’ll be fighting is false, there is a battle taking place to do with Onee-sama.”

“What? Where? Tell me about it,” Saten begged. Beside her, Uiharu looked on in interest.

“Yes, well, some Tokiwadai girls have picked a fight with that man and two of his friends. I believe they call themselves the Delta Force,” Kuroko shook her head in amusement. “If they lose, the girls have to do anything the bys say for a week. If the boys lose, that man must stay away from Onee-sama. It’s win-win for me,” Kuroko admitted.

“Wait. Did you just say the Delta Force?” Saten asked, her eyes sparkling.

“Well yes, I believe that is what they call themselves,” Kuroko responded, confused with her friends behaviour.

“Just to make sure; one has blue hair and always has his eyes closed; one has blond hair and is always wearing his sunglasses; the last one, and their leader, has spiky black hair and always goes around helping people. Is that who you are talking about? Is it?” Saten pressed excitedly.

“I suppose…”

“Whooooooooooooop! Can I watch? Can I?” Saten begged.

“Wha, why are you so excited?” Uiharu asked, while Kuroko just tried to back away form the crazy woman.

“Haven’t you heard of the Delta Force?”

Both girls mutely shook their heads, looking on at their friend in a mixture of confusion and fear. “Who are they?” Uiharu asked.

“They’re three Level 0’s who became kinda famous. Usually, they just play around like a bunch of idiots, but from what I’ve heard, they’re crazy powerful. But, but, from what I hear, they hardly ever work together, and when they do, it’s only ever in pairs. Apparently the last time they fought as a group of three was a few years ago, and they utterly demolished 30 thugs who were picking on a single girl! Ahh,” Saten sighed in amazement, “they’re soooo cool!”

“R-Really?” Uiharu was shocked.

“I don’t believe it,” Kuroko denied. However, there was that niggling doubt. Didn’t that guy save her on that day?

“Its true!” Saten insisted. “The blond one, they call him The Sergeant, whatever that means. Well, he is always disappearing, but it seems he’s been spotted doing al these crazy things like shutting down Drug cartels and illegal weapon imports.”

“Bah,” Kuroko waved it off, “if that were true, Judgement would have known about it.”

Saten pouted. “Anyway, the blue haired guy, who hides his identity under his distinctive hair, almost never gets serious and spends almost all his time playing. But when he does, he can take out three guys in a single punch!”

“I find that hard to believe,” Uiharu muttered.

“Well fine then,” Saten frowned, “I won’t tell you about the last guy then, seeing as you don’t believe me at all.”

“No, no, please go on. I’m rather interested in this last one.”

Saten smiled, cheered up by her friend’s interest, weather feinted or not. “Well, the last guy is the most well known. It’s said that if you ever need a hero, he’ll be that hero for you. Rumour is, he specialises in defeating high ranked Espers; the higher, the better for him.”

“The idea that that barbarian goes around as a knight in shining armour is laughable,” Kuroko deadpanned.

“It’s true!” Saten swore.

“Yes, well, anyway; the match will be tomorrow at noon at Tokiwadai. You’re welcome to attend.”

“Eh? They’re allowing spectators?” Uiharu blinked.

“Yes. They believe that a valuable lesson may be learnt, or at least that is what they say.”

“Oh, cool! We’ll be there, right Uiharu?” Saten hooked her arm around Uiharu’s shoulders and pulled her close.

“R-Right!” she replied nervously.


“Connecting… Connection of Misaka 10032 to Misaka Network, Local Only, complete, Misaka mutters as she confirms it.”

(A Local Only connection is rare, Misaka 10039 notes.)

(What is the reason for this? Misaka 13577 asks.)

“I have a query, Misaka 10032 states worriedly.”

(What about? Misaka 10099 displays her curiosity.)

“There is a rumour about him, Misaka begins. I was looking to see if any other Misaka had heard anything.”

This silenced the Network for a few moments.

(What kind of rumour? Misaka 12204 demands as she shows her anger)

(This is the first I’m hearing about it, Misaka 12578 honestly replies. What information is it that forces 10032 to open a Local Only discussion? Misaka begins to feel anxious.)

“A rumour that may indicate that Onee-sama may no longer be permitted it meet him, Misaka reveals the extent of her knowledge.”

A moment of silence on the network.

(Why should we care? Misaka 15224 asks what everybody is thinking.)

(If Onee-sama is no longer able to see him, isn’t that good for us? Misaka 12204 responds in a self satisfied manner)

(Yes, Misaka 10039 agrees.)

(I concur, Misaka 10099 shows brutal honesty.)

“The rumour only says that he ‘Will not interact with Misaka’. Though doubtful, it is possible that we are included in this statement, Misaka 10032 explains.”

(That is unlikely, Misaka 12204 protests.)

“True, Misaka 10032 allows. Still, if he agrees that he will not see ‘Misaka’, and we are spotted interacting with him, this may cause trouble for him, Misaka 10032 shows the reason for her worry.”

(I-I think I have more information, Misaka 19090 reveals.)

(Tell us! Misaka 15224 demands)

With that, Misaka 19090 told the rest of the Sisters what she knew, about how he had been challenged to a match and the bet, and where it would take place.

(I am going to cheer him on, Misaka 10099 states without hesitation.)

(No fair, Misaka 19090 whines.)

(You are not the only one who wishes to cheer him on, Misaka 12204 angrily points out)

(No need to argue Misaka joins in as Misaka reveals herself. Let’s all have fun Misaka cheers as Misaka shows her peacemaking side.)

With this voice, the voice of 20001, Last Order, Misaka 10032 felt a headache come one.


“Geez, that troublesome Kamijou is having a fight tomorrow,” Fukiyose Seiri grumbled. This girl, who had longish brown hair and big breasts, but was said to have no sex appeal, is one of Touma’s classmates at A Certain Highschool. Nicknamed the Iron Wall girl due to being the only girl in their class to stand firm in the fave of Kamijou Touma’s charms, she was a serious girl.

“Yes,” Himegami Aisa replied. This girl, who had long straight black hair and wore a silver cross around her neck, had the power to kill vampires. Other than that, she was just another classmate that Touma had saved.

“Do you want toy go?” Fukiyose asked.

“Yes,” Himegami replied after a moment’s hesitation.


“We are going out tomorrow! Misaka informs as Misaka displays her best puppy dog eyes.”

“Fine, fine, you little brat,” a white haired boy sleepily agrees without even looking at the girl, a seven year old with short brown hair, with an tuft of it sticking high into the air.

“Yay! Misaka cheers as Misaka begins to look forward to it.”


“So, are we going to plan?” Touma asked his two friends.

“Nope,” Aogami sang.

“Why not?” Touma asked.

All three boys were walking in the waning sunlight, hours after their confrontation.

“If we don’t know their powers, how do we plan?” Aogami asked. “I guess we’ll just have to destroy them,” Aogami stated with a straight face.

“As it so happens, I do know their abilities-nya. Well, that girls at least,” Tsuchimikado told them.

There was no need to ask how he knew. Given enough time, Tsuchimikado could find just about anything out. An Ojou-sama’s ability was easy.

Touma frowned. “Why are you taking this so seriously anyway?”

“They threatened my sister.”

“They accused me of hurting that girl.”

“That is unforgivable.” Both boys stated at the same time. “No mercy.” They continued.

“Yeah, yeah. Well, if you feel this strongly… Let’s do this.”

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Delta Force GO!! :D I feel like they should have a theme song of some sorts, like something from a sentai show.

Also, if you're going for the MotoharuxMaika fanfic, how about making it a story where Maika finds out the truth behind Tsuchimikado and his side of the family and gets involved somehow? Though that would be a fanfic of a decently long length, so it's all up to you whether you want to use it or not.

[Master Assassin]

Even if it's forbidden love, go for it!

*clenches his fist with a grin on his face.*

Those three were not called the Delta Force for nothing I guess. Seeing all of the Delta Force trio getting serious to show who's in charge is a very refreshing idea in my opinion.

GO BROS!!! :D

[kaizerknight01]

Delta Force GO!! :D I feel like they should have a theme song of some sorts, like something from a sentai show.

Also, if you're going for the MotoharuxMaika fanfic, how about making it a story where Maika finds out the truth behind Tsuchimikado and his side of the family and gets involved somehow? Though that would be a fanfic of a decently long length, so it's all up to you whether you want to use it or not.


I agree the delta force should have their own theme ..... like this one :D

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Btw Nice fanfic ashaman

[blitz1/2]

*clenches his fist with a grin on his face.*

Those three were not called the Delta Force for nothing I guess. Seeing all of the Delta Force trio getting serious to show who's in charge is a very refreshing idea in my opinion.

GO BROS!!! :D

I meant the wincest that is. As for yaoi...well I'm no fujoshi, so I'll stay clear. :cool:

Let's get an estimate of how fast the girls would get p'wned.

Oh and ashaman, regarding this,
"(What kind of rumour? Misaka 12204 demands as she shows her anger)"

i don't think Misaka would be angry, I would suggest "as she displays her curiosity" instead.

Come to think of it, we need more misaka imoutoXTouma fics other than "a certain sister first date"

[Ashaman]

Oh and ashaman, regarding this,
"(What kind of rumour? Misaka 12204 demands as she shows her anger)"

i don't think Misaka would be angry, I would suggest "as she displays her curiosity" instead.

Come to think of it, we need more misaka imoutoXTouma fics other than "a certain sister first date"

Read that section again. I was trying to to give each Misaka a slightly different personality. 12204 is quick to anger and jumps to conclusions. When she heard {rumour that would bother Misaka 10032} she immediately thinks its about a girl.

Sorry, but alot of my stuff is implied. They'll get angry or sad, and it might not be obvious why. Just like in real life. 12204 is the type to think the worst.

I'll try to improve on that next time.

More Touma/Imouto fics, huh? I agree, we do. But I'm swamped at the moment.

For a long time, I've wanted to do a Imouto x Kuroko fic, but its never got more than a thought every so often, which is a shame.

[kaizerknight01]

yeah wish their more Misaka imouo x Touma it quite rare .

[outerelf]

Ashman, loved your second chapter! As for my incest fic:

Her stupid brother was drunk again. The girl on the round, cylinder can sighed, hands on hips as she looked at the pile of what could be only one thing decorating her brothers front door.

The cleaning bot beneath her whirled to life to clean up the mess as she sighed, and descended from the robot. She couldn’t enter her brothers apartment on it after all. Casually she opened the door, heart pounding slightly.

What if her brother was changing-

No, the apartment was dark, and she could make out the faint form of a sleeping body on top of a mess he called a bed. Her tongue clicked softly as she moved through the semi-darkness to bend over her unconscious brother.

The sunglasses he loved to wear were slightly crooked, and pressed against his face.

A smile graced her lips as she carefully pulled them off, and set them to one side. Her brother stirred slightly-

She brutally yanked the blanket from off of him, and settled it onto him, ignoring te fact that his clothes probably weren’t the greatest for sleeping in. It would be his punishment for going out to get so drunk.

Despite the harsh thoughts, her hands were gentle as she tucked him in, and began to clean up the apartment.

Her brother would undoubtedly starve to death unless she cooked for him. And since tomorrow she wouldn’t be able to drop by-

The smell of a bubbling soup (easy for storage) filled the air as she worked efficiently. Tomorrow she would begin preparing for a big festival that was going on in a few days to show off the Maids-in-training. Hopefully her brother wouldn’t get involved in anything too dangerous, and come back injured.

She frowned down at the simmering pot, stirring gently. Try as he might, Motoharu couldn’t deny he was not only keeping a secret from her, but also getting hurt.

She knew that- Just like her mother knew her new husband was keeping a secret as well. Neither woman breathed a word of suspicion to the ‘men’ of the house.

Maika smiled to herself as she poured the soup into the container. Men needed secrets to convince themselves that they had everything under control. Maika placed the soup into the small refrigerator, and walked to where her brother lay.

He was sound asleep, judging from his calm, peaceful face. She sat down next to him, hands playing gently with the fringe of his hair, brushing it back away from his forehead. “Silly brother- even if you’re keeping secrets from me I’ll still love you.”

Motoharu stirred slightly, the blond hair shifting with his head, until his face was directed upwards towards her. Maika stilled, waiting for her brother to settle down. Slowly his breath evened out, and the girl sighed in relief as her hands once again began playing with his hair.

Creepy? Some might claim it was, but it wasn’t like there was any other way to satisfy her secret desire.

A slight frown crossed her face, as the image from one of the manga she’d recently been reading popped up. The sister giving her brother a kiss while he slept-

Face suddenly red, she shook it furiously, attempting to dispel the thought. But as if enticing her, her brother shifted slightly, face looking incredibly cute. Okay, now how was she supposed to resist that. She’d go for the kiss!

Determination burning in her eyes, she scooted around until she was sitting on the other side of him, and leaned forward, until lips brushed against lips.

She hadn’t expecting the head to turn away, and for her brother to drunkenly mumble, “Shouldn’t.”

Pain crashed into her heart- she hadn’t really expected her brother to return her feelings but still-“

“Don’t know you…” Motoharu mumbled, and the train wreck that was her heart came to a sudden screeching halt as he mumbled, “Got someone else-“

“Who?” She questioned feebly, barely daring to breathe-

“Little sis, she’s the loveliest- most wonderful-“

A finger gently placed itself on his lips, as she whispered, “Say no more.”

She was grinning like a loon.

She was still grinning like a loon when she exited the building, and as she once again commandeered her personal cleaning robot, laughter unexpectedly came tumbling out of her throat.

A chance! She had a chance! Laughter spiraled up into the heavens as the cleaning robot took off towards her own dorms, relief buoying her heart.

------

Tsuchimikado Motoharu stirred sleepily, reflecting on a rather pleasant dream he had of his sister coming home, cooking for him, and then giving him a kiss. Yawning he slowly sat up, and felt a thick blanket fall off. “Huh?”

Slowly he looked around- All the signs of Maika having been in the room were there. His house was clean, there was the lingering smell of food in the apartment- but- but

Was that dream real?

He shook his head automatically, as a cell phone began to ring. It was Noa Goushi. Probably calling him to tell him how the relationship with her blood related brother was going.

He sighed as he stuck it back. He didn’t want to hear another’s tale of triumph when he himself wasn’t going to get much of a chance.

But still…

Fingers brushed against lips, as he flopped back into bed. He’d skip school today. And see if he couldn’t recapture that lovely dream.

[Flere821]

Okay, so this two shot became a three shot. No action, mostly just spreading the word.

Rumours. Wherever you go, there will always be rumours. They travel by word of mouth, and usually inflate with each telling as the information passes along one person to the next.

And so there was a great deal of astonishment when one of the interested parties was asked “Is it true a boy is fighting you for the right to date Misaka?!” Saten Rukio demanded of one Shirai Kuroko.

“What!?” Kuroko demanded, jumping out of her seat in shock. Right now, they were in Judgement office, Branch 177. “Where did you ever hear something so absurd?”

“Urm, the internet,” Saten admitted weakly.

“See, I told you,” Uiharu scolded her friend as she trailed behind the girl.

“I thought it was a little strange too!” Saten tried to defend herself. “But then I thought; if it’s Shirai-san and Misaka-san…”

“Saten-san!” Uiharu Kazari yelled in response, trying to scold her friend.

Both girls were the same age as Kuroko, and were in their first year of middle school. Both had black hair, but that is more or less where the similarities ended.

Saten’s hair was long, she was rather tall for her age, and was almost always smiling. Uiharu had short hair with a very flowery headband, was much smaller in comparison to her friend, as well as much more introverted.

“Ah, sorry, sorry,” Saten tried to laugh it off.

“It’s fine. Really, when it comes to that man, I’d be perfectly willing to fight him off,” Kuroko admitted.

“That man?” Saten asked.

Kuroko sniffed. “While the rumour that I’ll be fighting is false, there is a battle taking place to do with Onee-sama.”

“What? Where? Tell me about it,” Saten begged. Beside her, Uiharu looked on in interest.

“Yes, well, some Tokiwadai girls have picked a fight with that man and two of his friends. I believe they call themselves the Delta Force,” Kuroko shook her head in amusement. “If they lose, the girls have to do anything the bys say for a week. If the boys lose, that man must stay away from Onee-sama. It’s win-win for me,” Kuroko admitted.

“Wait. Did you just say the Delta Force?” Saten asked, her eyes sparkling.

“Well yes, I believe that is what they call themselves,” Kuroko responded, confused with her friends behaviour.

“Just to make sure; one has blue hair and always has his eyes closed; one has blond hair and is always wearing his sunglasses; the last one, and their leader, has spiky black hair and always goes around helping people. Is that who you are talking about? Is it?” Saten pressed excitedly.

“I suppose…”

“Whooooooooooooop! Can I watch? Can I?” Saten begged.

“Wha, why are you so excited?” Uiharu asked, while Kuroko just tried to back away form the crazy woman.

“Haven’t you heard of the Delta Force?”

Both girls mutely shook their heads, looking on at their friend in a mixture of confusion and fear. “Who are they?” Uiharu asked.

“They’re three Level 0’s who became kinda famous. Usually, they just play around like a bunch of idiots, but from what I’ve heard, they’re crazy powerful. But, but, from what I hear, they hardly ever work together, and when they do, it’s only ever in pairs. Apparently the last time they fought as a group of three was a few years ago, and they utterly demolished 30 thugs who were picking on a single girl! Ahh,” Saten sighed in amazement, “they’re soooo cool!”

“R-Really?” Uiharu was shocked.

“I don’t believe it,” Kuroko denied. However, there was that niggling doubt. Didn’t that guy save her on that day?

“Its true!” Saten insisted. “The blond one, they call him The Sergeant, whatever that means. Well, he is always disappearing, but it seems he’s been spotted doing al these crazy things like shutting down Drug cartels and illegal weapon imports.”

“Bah,” Kuroko waved it off, “if that were true, Judgement would have known about it.”

Saten pouted. “Anyway, the blue haired guy, who hides his identity under his distinctive hair, almost never gets serious and spends almost all his time playing. But when he does, he can take out three guys in a single punch!”

“I find that hard to believe,” Uiharu muttered.

“Well fine then,” Saten frowned, “I won’t tell you about the last guy then, seeing as you don’t believe me at all.”

“No, no, please go on. I’m rather interested in this last one.”

Saten smiled, cheered up by her friend’s interest, weather feinted or not. “Well, the last guy is the most well known. It’s said that if you ever need a hero, he’ll be that hero for you. Rumour is, he specialises in defeating high ranked Espers; the higher, the better for him.”

“The idea that that barbarian goes around as a knight in shining armour is laughable,” Kuroko deadpanned.

“It’s true!” Saten swore.

“Yes, well, anyway; the match will be tomorrow at noon at Tokiwadai. You’re welcome to attend.”

“Eh? They’re allowing spectators?” Uiharu blinked.

“Yes. They believe that a valuable lesson may be learnt, or at least that is what they say.”

“Oh, cool! We’ll be there, right Uiharu?” Saten hooked her arm around Uiharu’s shoulders and pulled her close.

“R-Right!” she replied nervously.


“Connecting… Connection of Misaka 10032 to Misaka Network, Local Only, complete, Misaka mutters as she confirms it.”

(A Local Only connection is rare, Misaka 10039 notes.)

(What is the reason for this? Misaka 13577 asks.)

“I have a query, Misaka 10032 states worriedly.”

(What about? Misaka 10099 displays her curiosity.)

“There is a rumour about him, Misaka begins. I was looking to see if any other Misaka had heard anything.”

This silenced the Network for a few moments.

(What kind of rumour? Misaka 12204 demands as she shows her anger)

(This is the first I’m hearing about it, Misaka 12578 honestly replies. What information is it that forces 10032 to open a Local Only discussion? Misaka begins to feel anxious.)

“A rumour that may indicate that Onee-sama may no longer be permitted it meet him, Misaka reveals the extent of her knowledge.”

A moment of silence on the network.

(Why should we care? Misaka 15224 asks what everybody is thinking.)

(If Onee-sama is no longer able to see him, isn’t that good for us? Misaka 12204 responds in a self satisfied manner)

(Yes, Misaka 10039 agrees.)

(I concur, Misaka 10099 shows brutal honesty.)

“The rumour only says that he ‘Will not interact with Misaka’. Though doubtful, it is possible that we are included in this statement, Misaka 10032 explains.”

(That is unlikely, Misaka 12204 protests.)

“True, Misaka 10032 allows. Still, if he agrees that he will not see ‘Misaka’, and we are spotted interacting with him, this may cause trouble for him, Misaka 10032 shows the reason for her worry.”

(I-I think I have more information, Misaka 19090 reveals.)

(Tell us! Misaka 15224 demands)

With that, Misaka 19090 told the rest of the Sisters what she knew, about how he had been challenged to a match and the bet, and where it would take place.

(I am going to cheer him on, Misaka 10099 states without hesitation.)

(No fair, Misaka 19090 whines.)

(You are not the only one who wishes to cheer him on, Misaka 12204 angrily points out)

(No need to argue Misaka joins in as Misaka reveals herself. Let’s all have fun Misaka cheers as Misaka shows her peacemaking side.)

With this voice, the voice of 20001, Last Order, Misaka 10032 felt a headache come one.


“Geez, that troublesome Kamijou is having a fight tomorrow,” Fukiyose Seiri grumbled. This girl, who had longish brown hair and big breasts, but was said to have no sex appeal, is one of Touma’s classmates at A Certain Highschool. Nicknamed the Iron Wall girl due to being the only girl in their class to stand firm in the fave of Kamijou Touma’s charms, she was a serious girl.

“Yes,” Himegami Aisa replied. This girl, who had long straight black hair and wore a silver cross around her neck, had the power to kill vampires. Other than that, she was just another classmate that Touma had saved.

“Do you want toy go?” Fukiyose asked.

“Yes,” Himegami replied after a moment’s hesitation.


“We are going out tomorrow! Misaka informs as Misaka displays her best puppy dog eyes.”

“Fine, fine, you little brat,” a white haired boy sleepily agrees without even looking at the girl, a seven year old with short brown hair, with an tuft of it sticking high into the air.

“Yay! Misaka cheers as Misaka begins to look forward to it.”


“So, are we going to plan?” Touma asked his two friends.

“Nope,” Aogami sang.

“Why not?” Touma asked.

All three boys were walking in the waning sunlight, hours after their confrontation.

“If we don’t know their powers, how do we plan?” Aogami asked. “I guess we’ll just have to destroy them,” Aogami stated with a straight face.

“As it so happens, I do know their abilities-nya. Well, that girls at least,” Tsuchimikado told them.

There was no need to ask how he knew. Given enough time, Tsuchimikado could find just about anything out. An Ojou-sama’s ability was easy.

Touma frowned. “Why are you taking this so seriously anyway?”

“They threatened my sister.”

“They accused me of hurting that girl.”

“That is unforgivable.” Both boys stated at the same time. “No mercy.” They continued.

“Yeah, yeah. Well, if you feel this strongly… Let’s do this.”
Nice, looking forward to the installment of this one :)

[kaizerknight01]

an OC that i thought of for my Fanfic

Akemi is a level 5.5 her appearance is of a 15-16 year old teenager , she a clone of Accelerator using his x chromosome and various genes form classified high level espers , she has more abilities than Accelerator like teleportation, telekinesis and etc.

Her personally is polite,soft spoken and timid. She likes small fluffy things and books, after she was rescued. Touma not knowing what to call her and joking said " Maybe I should call you Akemi ..." Then she relied " Akemi ..... That sounds a like nice name ..... can i keep it ?"

Akemi dye's her hair black, and take a surname of Kamijou, causing misunderstanding among Touma's friends namely the female ones

[Marcus H.]

"Whoawhoawhoa."

The word "level" and the number "5.5" appears to be an unexpected combination.

"All I know is that levels go from 1 to 5... and we have to consider that there are only seven Level 5s."

Marcus is confident with the facts that he laid out; he has just read it straight from the eighth volume of the Light Novels.

He continues to type his reaction as the dissonant voice of two radio broadcasters fill his ears.

"Also, Akemi is the name of one Ruiko Saten's friends. I would suggest adding a surname for the character so that no confusion may ensue."

[SuzushinaYuriko]

The one thing I'm wary of when seeing OC's in fanfiction is the possibility of authors making them into overpowered Mary Sue's, which happens way too often. Making Akemi instantly into a Level 5.5 (which should be around the level Accel himself is around considering that he gets stronger throughout the series) is pretty much overdoing it in my eyes.

It was shown from the Radio Noise experiment that clones have inferior abilities compared to the original and that it is not possible to create a Level 5 from an artificial being. It was shown in Railgun that having more than one ability (Dual Skill) is not possible. From the May Project of Darkness experiment it was shown that it is not possible to clone Accelerator or his powers. Cloning humans is a very difficult thing to do, and it's not like any random person on the street is able to be cloned. Just being able to pull it off with Mikoto was a miracle, so you can't throw a bunch of chromosomes together from high ranking ESPers and expect the abilities to transfer.

Balance is an important thing to consider when writing a story. Weaknesses, not only strengths, define a character.

I feel bad for saying all of this, but my literary critic side has exploded from seeing so much wasted potential in fanfiction. I apologise if my rant has hurt your feelings in any way.

[outerelf]

http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm

Might I suggest using this test on your character? It'll help straighten out any glaring Mary Sue abilities.

[blitz1/2]

an OC that i thought of for my Fanfic

Akemi is a level 5.5 her appearance is of a 15-16 year old teenager , she a clone of Accelerator using his x chromosome and various genes form classified high level espers , she has more abilities than Accelerator like teleportation, telekinesis and etc.

Her personally is polite,soft spoken and timid. She likes small fluffy things and books, after she was rescued. Touma not knowing what to call her and joking said " Maybe I should call you Akemi ..." Then she relied " Akemi ..... That sounds a like nice name ..... can i keep it ?"

Akemi dye's her hair black, and take a surname of Kamijou, causing misunderstanding among Touma's friends namely the female ones

Mary Sue alarm bells are RINGING in my head right now. :twitch::eyespin:
Considering as how OP Accelerator already is? Going beyond that is a bit...

And telekinesis is not an esper ability that I am aware of, to me it seems more like magic.

[kaizerknight01]

thanks for the feed back guys i appreciate it .... the OC is still on beta stages .... guess i t better scrap it and start over ....... guess it to mary sueish .... i deeply apologies

I was hoping to write adventure/comedy i tend not to write depressing ones:heh:

again i apologies if my grammars sucks , i tend to skip the words that i was typing :heh::heh:

[Master Assassin]

Talking about OCs, I remember my bad old days, repented, and that now if I were to be told of the term, I'd immediately think of a background or a behind-the-scenes character who, while keeps the plot moving, doesn't get too featured and is only a key to help our heroes (yeah Touma, Mikoto etc, I'm talking about you guys!) solve something.

Kinda like an informant who lurks in AC, goes under the guise of someone doing a mundane job such as a grocery keeper, or the owner of the yakiniku stand (was it?) Komoe-sensei, Yoshikawa and Tessou went to in one of the Railgun episodes.

[blitz1/2]

Talking about OCs, I remember my bad old days, repented, and that now if I were to be told of the term, I'd immediately think of a background or a behind-the-scenes character who, while keeps the plot moving, doesn't get too featured and is only a key to help our heroes (yeah Touma, Mikoto etc, I'm talking about you guys!) solve something.

Kinda like an informant who lurks in AC, goes under the guise of someone doing a mundane job such as a grocery keeper, or the owner of the yakiniku stand (was it?) Komoe-sensei, Yoshikawa and Tessou went to in one of the Railgun episodes.

Well, my index oc is a Roman Catholic magician that specialises in the art of Telekinesis and creating barriers. But his skills are considered only average. He was eventually drawn up in conflicts from infiltrating Academy City to the war in England.

[Ashaman]

Okay, so it happens. The three shot became a Four-Shot. So sue me. I'll prob be making a couple of changes to this, trying to stop ignoring reactions before I post it on FF.net, but this is what I just wrote.

The sky was overcast, covering the large field in light shadows. Approximately 30 feet from one another, two groups of three stood.

After much squabbling, that was the distance they settled on for starting distance in this duel.

The two groups faced off, waiting for the moment the match would start.

To one side was the prestigious Tokiwadai middle school, and surrounding the field were on lookers.

Most wore the uniform of Tokiwadai, though there was a smattering of others who didn’t quite belong, most noticeably the Delta Force’s classmates.

Index, the blue haired nun Touma looked after was among them, standing next o Himegami with a pout. As far as she was concerned, it was lunch time and no one was feeding her. Why did Touma have to fight this pointless battle?

The rest of the class was just playing around, chatting about the unusual match, but seemingly not worried at all.

Near the middle of the field, one Shirai Kuroko stood with her two friends, Uiharu and Saten. She wasn’t really looking forward to this at all.

Saten on the other hand was holding a large sign up in the air that read ‘Go Delta Force Go!’ ready to cheer the boys on when the match began.

“You know, I thought the black haired one would be taller,” Saten commented. Touma, said black haired one, while by no means small, was the shortest member of the Delta Force.

“Yes, the barbarian is a little on the short side, isn’t he,” Kuroko maliciously agreed.

“Huh? Why does it sound like you don’t like him?” Saten asked.

“That barbarian is the one that Onee-sama has been spending a disproportionate amount of time with,” Kuroko growled.

“Umm, by disproportionate, do you mean any time at all?” Uiharu shyly questioned.

“Exactly!”

Saten was about to reply, but the sound of a familiar voice cut her off.

“You! What are you doing here!?” Misaka shouted.

For a second, Saten and Uiharu quailed, wondering why Misaka was angry at them. It took a moment for them to realise that Misaka Mikoto, the Third ranked Level 5 nicknamed the Railgun wasn’t even looking at them.

Instead she was staring straight at Touma, pointing at him as sparks flew across her body.

The group to the left of them, the Delta Force’s classmates, began to mutter among themselves, and Saten had to strain to hear them.

“Could she be another one of Kamijou’s?”

“Probably.”

“You know what he’s like. He can’t help himself.

“I recognise her. She’s the one that hit on him during Daisaihai,” Fukiyose mentioned.

“What’s short-hair doing here?” Index asked.

“His life really is a Galge,” Himegami spoke with a hint of bitterness.

“Oh, hey Misaka!” Touma greeted when he noticed who it was.

Misaka rushed across the field so she was face to face with him.

This didn’t change anything though, as Misaka continued to practically yell and Touma’s voice seemed to carry over thanks to some of the Espers in his class.

“Why are you here and having a match?” Misaka demanded.

“Well,” Touma explained the situation and the events of yesterday. “So because of these two, we have a bet. If we win, they have to do what we say for a week.”

Misaka spluttered. “What type of things are you going to have them do?!” she asked with a slightly red face.

Touma exchanged glances with Aogami and Tsuchimikado, who both just shook their heads.

“We haven’t really decided,” Touma shrugged.

“Well, what happens if you lose?”

“Kami-yan won’t be allowed to see you anymore,” Aogami smiled at her.

“Wha, what!?” she shrieked. “What does he mean you and I won’t get to meet anymore?” Misaka began to poke her finger into Touma’s chest as she demanded, causing him to step back nervously. Of course, Misaka took a step forward for every one of his steps back.

“It wasn’t my idea,” he protested. “Those girls came up with it on their own.”

“And you agreed?! What if you lose? Would you really stick with the bet? Would you really be okay if you didn-” Misaka suddenly cut herself off, blushing deeply.

“Huh? What? Why are you so worried?” he asked her when he noticed she’d stopped.

“Argh!” she yelled. “You just better not lose!”

“Of course we’re going to win,” Touma just brushed her off like that was obvious.

“You, you really think you can win?” Misaka asked.

“It’s three on three, and these two are serious. We’re not going to lose to some petty rich girls.”

“I thought it was your philosophy to run and hide?” Misaka accused.

“Onlywhen I can. And this time, I won’t, cause my friends need me,” he told her, causing her to blush faintly.

“Stop trying to act so cool,” Misaka grumbled.

“If you’ve finished flirting, its almost time to start-nya,” Tsuchimikado teased.

“Yeah Kami-yan, get your girlfriend off the field,” Aogami agreed, his usual smile strained in the face of this love-love situation.

“Gak! Gi-Girlfriend!” Misaka recoiled in shock, her face burning up.

“Ha,” Touma laughed. “Why would I go out with a kid like her?” he questioned.

“What’s wrong with me?!” Misaka struck back, firing a bolt of lightning at Touma.

However, with a flick of his right hand, the electricity was dispelled.

There was a collective gasp from the three girls who were their opponents, as well as the audience at large.

“H-H-How did he do that?!” Uiharu demanded.

“I don’t really know,” Kuroko replied darkly. “A power able to so easily overcome Onee-sama’s… I thought only the number 1 and 2 could do such a thing.”

Speaking of…

“Why are we here?” an albino boy named Accelerator glared at his young charge. He’d agreed to go somewhere with the girl, Last Order, but hadn’t expected to end up at the gates to Tokiwadai with a bunch of freaks in brown cloaks with their hoods up so he couldn’t tell who they were. Even Last Order was wearing one of those cloaks.

Not like it mattered. It could have been worse. She could have asked him to go to a theme park with her.

It would be fine as long as he didn’t meet the original, but…

“Why the hell am I wearing this?” Accelerator asked Last Order.

She’d demanded he wear this get up, and had even gone so far as to disable his Network connection, so she could all but force this ridiculousness on him.

It was a tight body fitting sports top with long sleeves, while his trousers were made of a similar material except much looser.

It was coloured black and red, and, in Accelerators opinion, looked absolutely atrocious. All in all, it looked like a male cheerleaders uniform. Just being seen in this outfit made him want to kill all those who laid eyes on him.


Back on the field, just as Misaka sent another volley of electricity to Touma, trying to fry him for the child comment, the girls that were across from them, as well as those that were watching finally managed to find their voice.

“How dare you call Onee-sama childish!”

“Misaka-sama deserves better than you!”

“Go Motaki-san! Crush him for his rudeness.”

It seems the girls had the home field advantage.

That sound press of sound against them stopped Misaka from releasing more electricity as she came to her senses.

She blushed as she realised that all focus had been on her, and quickly scurried away, toward where she had spotted Saten, Kuroko and Uiharu.

“Wow,” Uiharu breathed. “I’ve never seen Misaka-san act like that before,” she whispered.

“Yeah,” Saten agreed.

“Oh, oh, Onee-sama, why must you continue to so happily spend time with that man when Kuroko is here for you?!” the teleporter asked in despair, biting into a handkerchief to prevent her from doing something she would regret.

Still blushing, Misaka barely greeted her friends, instead grumbling under her breath about how she is most certainly not childish, and how dare he say she was. And why did she care so much what he thought anyway?

Tsuchimikado locked eyes with his two friends as the surrounding girls cheered their enemies on.

“This isn’t going to affect you, is it?” he asked. Unlike his usual playful self, right now his voice had the edge of a professional.

“No,” Aogami replied, equally serious.

Touma just shook his head, showing it wouldn’t bother him.

“Still wish we had more of a cheering squad though,” Aogami told them with a smile. “Maybe with a cute loli leading them.”

“Like such a thing could happen,” Touma scoffed.

“Well, if it was for Kami-yan,” Tsuchimikado laughed. “Still, you’d expect our classmates to cheer for us,” he turned to where they stood in a group, just waiting.

No, wait, Fukiyose had stepped up and in front of the group. Then, she began to yell.

“Del-Ta-Force!” Clap Clap. “Del-Ta-Force!” Clap Clap. Slowly, their class caught on to what Fukiyose had begun, and began to cheer.

At first, they were drowned out by the larger amount of female Tokiwadai students, but then they grew louder and louder, until they were competing on equal terms with over twice their number.

Aogami grinned. “Now all we need are cheerleaders.”

“Coming through Misaka calls as Misaka leads her companions through the crowd!” a little girl with brown hair burst out and onto the side lines, a troupe of eight people in cloaks following behind, with a white haired boy trailing behind them with a scowl.

Touma and Accelerator’s eyes met, and the albino’s mouth dropped open. “What is he doing here!?” the voice of the strongest Esper rang out, pointing an accusing finger at Touma.

“We’re here to cheer for him silly, Misaka informs while Misaka deploys the too late now strategy.”

“Like hell it is! And like Hell I’m cheering that guy on!” Accelerator spat, before a look of horror overtook his face. “This is a cheerleader uniform, isn’t it!” he roared.

“Yes, it is, and yes you will cheer Misaka insists as Misaka refuses Network privileges if you don’t as Misaka displays an evil smile.”

“£%^&%^*%&!!!!” Accelerator dropped to the ground a second later, his limbs moving erratically.

After a moment, this state of helplessness vanished. “You little brat!” he roared again, trying to lunge at Last Order. She made no move to stop him because they both knew he’d never hurt her so this was an empty threat.

“Argh!” Accelerator’s yell rent the air.

“Last chance; cheer, or be unable to connect until the match is over Misaka displays her ultimatum as Misaka refuses to back down.

“You little bitch!” Accelerator hissed, before suddenly he slumped down in defeat. “Fine, I’ll cheer the fucking hero on, but in return you must promise never to blackmail me like this again.”

“That is fine Misaka grins as Misaka accepts these terms. Now, cast off your disguises and let’s cheer for our saviour Misaka commands as Misaka enjoys her power trip!”

As one, the cloaks were thrown off to reveal eight middle school girls. All of them were identical, down to their hair length and choice of attire. Said clothing was a black and red striped uniform with black skirts and a five digit number on the back.

They lined up in two rows of four, pomp ms in hand as they moved as one.

“Go Kami-jou! Go Touma!” they cheered their saviour.

Every one watched on in amazement at this display. Everyone except Kuroko, who’d fainted from Onee-sama overdose.”

“Gak!” Touma cried.

Misaka Mikoto rushed up to them in order to find out what was going on. Amazingly, she didn’t even give Accelerator a second glance.

“What are you doing here?!”

“We came to cheer our saviour on, Misaka 10032 informs the Original.”

“I’m glad you’re here Misaka cries as Misaka grabs Onee-sama’s hand! I brought a spare uniform so you could take point Misaka informs as Misaka begins to drag you to a private area!”

“What? No, I-” Whatever else Misaka was going to say was cut off as the other eight Misaka’s began to carry her away.

Whatever private area they managed to find must not have been very far away, as the Misaka Mikoto’s screams could be clearly heard in the silence that followed these strange events.

“Don’t take that off!”

“Hey, that’s mine!”

“Perverts! Don’t stare like that!”

“No, I don’t want to put that on!”

“NOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

When the Level 5 returned, she was blushing wildly, and looked to be holding back tears. She was desperately adjusting the clothes on her body,trying to cover herself as much as possible. However, it was a fact that she was wearing the same outfit as the Sisters, with the words ‘Original’ written boldly on the back.

“With such close proximity, connection with the Misaka Network may be possible Misaka 15… speculates.”

“This will allow Onee-sama to move with us as one Misaka 10039 explains.”

“Heh,” all the Misaka’s apart from Last Order and Mikoto let out a laugh, a lopsided smile on their faces. “It will be perfect.”

Aogami turned to Touma. “You bastard. You magnificent bastard!” the blue haired boy yelled.

“For thins, we’ll have to kill you. You understand, don’t you?” Tsuchimikado looked on with a dark expression.

“Huh! I guess Touma’s still Touma, no matter what!” Index’s voice came out loud and clear, anger plain in her tone.

Kamijou could just tell he was in for a bite on the head.

I just thought of something. Would Tsuchimikado Maika have a power?:heh: ESP Maid...:eyespin:

[Master Assassin]

Okay, so it happens. The three shot became a Four-Shot. So sue me. I'll prob be making a couple of changes to this, trying to stop ignoring reactions before I post it on FF.net, but this is what I just wrote.

The sky was overcast, covering the large field in light shadows. Approximately 30 feet from one another, two groups of three stood.

After much squabbling, that was the distance they settled on for starting distance in this duel.

The two groups faced off, waiting for the moment the match would start.

To one side was the prestigious Tokiwadai middle school, and surrounding the field were on lookers.

Most wore the uniform of Tokiwadai, though there was a smattering of others who didn’t quite belong, most noticeably the Delta Force’s classmates.

Index, the blue haired nun Touma looked after was among them, standing next o Himegami with a pout. As far as she was concerned, it was lunch time and no one was feeding her. Why did Touma have to fight this pointless battle?

The rest of the class was just playing around, chatting about the unusual match, but seemingly not worried at all.

Near the middle of the field, one Shirai Kuroko stood with her two friends, Uiharu and Saten. She wasn’t really looking forward to this at all.

Saten on the other hand was holding a large sign up in the air that read ‘Go Delta Force Go!’ ready to cheer the boys on when the match began.

“You know, I thought the black haired one would be taller,” Saten commented. Touma, said black haired one, while by no means small, was the shortest member of the Delta Force.

“Yes, the barbarian is a little on the short side, isn’t he,” Kuroko maliciously agreed.

“Huh? Why does it sound like you don’t like him?” Saten asked.

“That barbarian is the one that Onee-sama has been spending a disproportionate amount of time with,” Kuroko growled.

“Umm, by disproportionate, do you mean any time at all?” Uiharu shyly questioned.

“Exactly!”

Saten was about to reply, but the sound of a familiar voice cut her off.

“You! What are you doing here!?” Misaka shouted.

For a second, Saten and Uiharu quailed, wondering why Misaka was angry at them. It took a moment for them to realise that Misaka Mikoto, the Third ranked Level 5 nicknamed the Railgun wasn’t even looking at them.

Instead she was staring straight at Touma, pointing at him as sparks flew across her body.

The group to the left of them, the Delta Force’s classmates, began to mutter among themselves, and Saten had to strain to hear them.

“Could she be another one of Kamijou’s?”

“Probably.”

“You know what he’s like. He can’t help himself.

“I recognise her. She’s the one that hit on him during Daisaihai,” Fukiyose mentioned.

“What’s short-hair doing here?” Index asked.

“His life really is a Galge,” Himegami spoke with a hint of bitterness.

“Oh, hey Misaka!” Touma greeted when he noticed who it was.

Misaka rushed across the field so she was face to face with him.

This didn’t change anything though, as Misaka continued to practically yell and Touma’s voice seemed to carry over thanks to some of the Espers in his class.

“Why are you here and having a match?” Misaka demanded.

“Well,” Touma explained the situation and the events of yesterday. “So because of these two, we have a bet. If we win, they have to do what we say for a week.”

Misaka spluttered. “What type of things are you going to have them do?!” she asked with a slightly red face.

Touma exchanged glances with Aogami and Tsuchimikado, who both just shook their heads.

“We haven’t really decided,” Touma shrugged.

“Well, what happens if you lose?”

“Kami-yan won’t be allowed to see you anymore,” Aogami smiled at her.

“Wha, what!?” she shrieked. “What does he mean you and I won’t get to meet anymore?” Misaka began to poke her finger into Touma’s chest as she demanded, causing him to step back nervously. Of course, Misaka took a step forward for every one of his steps back.

“It wasn’t my idea,” he protested. “Those girls came up with it on their own.”

“And you agreed?! What if you lose? Would you really stick with the bet? Would you really be okay if you didn-” Misaka suddenly cut herself off, blushing deeply.

“Huh? What? Why are you so worried?” he asked her when he noticed she’d stopped.

“Argh!” she yelled. “You just better not lose!”

“Of course we’re going to win,” Touma just brushed her off like that was obvious.

“You, you really think you can win?” Misaka asked.

“It’s three on three, and these two are serious. We’re not going to lose to some petty rich girls.”

“I thought it was your philosophy to run and hide?” Misaka accused.

“Onlywhen I can. And this time, I won’t, cause my friends need me,” he told her, causing her to blush faintly.

“Stop trying to act so cool,” Misaka grumbled.

“If you’ve finished flirting, its almost time to start-nya,” Tsuchimikado teased.

“Yeah Kami-yan, get your girlfriend off the field,” Aogami agreed, his usual smile strained in the face of this love-love situation.

“Gak! Gi-Girlfriend!” Misaka recoiled in shock, her face burning up.

“Ha,” Touma laughed. “Why would I go out with a kid like her?” he questioned.

“What’s wrong with me?!” Misaka struck back, firing a bolt of lightning at Touma.

However, with a flick of his right hand, the electricity was dispelled.

There was a collective gasp from the three girls who were their opponents, as well as the audience at large.

“H-H-How did he do that?!” Uiharu demanded.

“I don’t really know,” Kuroko replied darkly. “A power able to so easily overcome Onee-sama’s… I thought only the number 1 and 2 could do such a thing.”

Speaking of…

“Why are we here?” an albino boy named Accelerator glared at his young charge. He’d agreed to go somewhere with the girl, Last Order, but hadn’t expected to end up at the gates to Tokiwadai with a bunch of freaks in brown cloaks with their hoods up so he couldn’t tell who they were. Even Last Order was wearing one of those cloaks.

Not like it mattered. It could have been worse. She could have asked him to go to a theme park with her.

It would be fine as long as he didn’t meet the original, but…

“Why the hell am I wearing this?” Accelerator asked Last Order.

She’d demanded he wear this get up, and had even gone so far as to disable his Network connection, so she could all but force this ridiculousness on him.

It was a tight body fitting sports top with long sleeves, while his trousers were made of a similar material except much looser.

It was coloured black and red, and, in Accelerators opinion, looked absolutely atrocious. All in all, it looked like a male cheerleaders uniform. Just being seen in this outfit made him want to kill all those who laid eyes on him.


Back on the field, just as Misaka sent another volley of electricity to Touma, trying to fry him for the child comment, the girls that were across from them, as well as those that were watching finally managed to find their voice.

“How dare you call Onee-sama childish!”

“Misaka-sama deserves better than you!”

“Go Motaki-san! Crush him for his rudeness.”

It seems the girls had the home field advantage.

That sound press of sound against them stopped Misaka from releasing more electricity as she came to her senses.

She blushed as she realised that all focus had been on her, and quickly scurried away, toward where she had spotted Saten, Kuroko and Uiharu.

“Wow,” Uiharu breathed. “I’ve never seen Misaka-san act like that before,” she whispered.

“Yeah,” Saten agreed.

“Oh, oh, Onee-sama, why must you continue to so happily spend time with that man when Kuroko is here for you?!” the teleporter asked in despair, biting into a handkerchief to prevent her from doing something she would regret.

Still blushing, Misaka barely greeted her friends, instead grumbling under her breath about how she is most certainly not childish, and how dare he say she was. And why did she care so much what he thought anyway?

Tsuchimikado locked eyes with his two friends as the surrounding girls cheered their enemies on.

“This isn’t going to affect you, is it?” he asked. Unlike his usual playful self, right now his voice had the edge of a professional.

“No,” Aogami replied, equally serious.

Touma just shook his head, showing it wouldn’t bother him.

“Still wish we had more of a cheering squad though,” Aogami told them with a smile. “Maybe with a cute loli leading them.”

“Like such a thing could happen,” Touma scoffed.

“Well, if it was for Kami-yan,” Tsuchimikado laughed. “Still, you’d expect our classmates to cheer for us,” he turned to where they stood in a group, just waiting.

No, wait, Fukiyose had stepped up and in front of the group. Then, she began to yell.

“Del-Ta-Force!” Clap Clap. “Del-Ta-Force!” Clap Clap. Slowly, their class caught on to what Fukiyose had begun, and began to cheer.

At first, they were drowned out by the larger amount of female Tokiwadai students, but then they grew louder and louder, until they were competing on equal terms with over twice their number.

Aogami grinned. “Now all we need are cheerleaders.”

“Coming through Misaka calls as Misaka leads her companions through the crowd!” a little girl with brown hair burst out and onto the side lines, a troupe of eight people in cloaks following behind, with a white haired boy trailing behind them with a scowl.

Touma and Accelerator’s eyes met, and the albino’s mouth dropped open. “What is he doing here!?” the voice of the strongest Esper rang out, pointing an accusing finger at Touma.

“We’re here to cheer for him silly, Misaka informs while Misaka deploys the too late now strategy.”

“Like hell it is! And like Hell I’m cheering that guy on!” Accelerator spat, before a look of horror overtook his face. “This is a cheerleader uniform, isn’t it!” he roared.

“Yes, it is, and yes you will cheer Misaka insists as Misaka refuses Network privileges if you don’t as Misaka displays an evil smile.”

“£%^&%^*%&!!!!” Accelerator dropped to the ground a second later, his limbs moving erratically.

After a moment, this state of helplessness vanished. “You little brat!” he roared again, trying to lunge at Last Order. She made no move to stop him because they both knew he’d never hurt her so this was an empty threat.

“Argh!” Accelerator’s yell rent the air.

“Last chance; cheer, or be unable to connect until the match is over Misaka displays her ultimatum as Misaka refuses to back down.

“You little bitch!” Accelerator hissed, before suddenly he slumped down in defeat. “Fine, I’ll cheer the fucking hero on, but in return you must promise never to blackmail me like this again.”

“That is fine Misaka grins as Misaka accepts these terms. Now, cast off your disguises and let’s cheer for our saviour Misaka commands as Misaka enjoys her power trip!”

As one, the cloaks were thrown off to reveal eight middle school girls. All of them were identical, down to their hair length and choice of attire. Said clothing was a black and red striped uniform with black skirts and a five digit number on the back.

They lined up in two rows of four, pomp ms in hand as they moved as one.

“Go Kami-jou! Go Touma!” they cheered their saviour.

Every one watched on in amazement at this display. Everyone except Kuroko, who’d fainted from Onee-sama overdose.”

“Gak!” Touma cried.

Misaka Mikoto rushed up to them in order to find out what was going on. Amazingly, she didn’t even give Accelerator a second glance.

“What are you doing here?!”

“We came to cheer our saviour on, Misaka 10032 informs the Original.”

“I’m glad you’re here Misaka cries as Misaka grabs Onee-sama’s hand! I brought a spare uniform so you could take point Misaka informs as Misaka begins to drag you to a private area!”

“What? No, I-” Whatever else Misaka was going to say was cut off as the other eight Misaka’s began to carry her away.

Whatever private area they managed to find must not have been very far away, as the Misaka Mikoto’s screams could be clearly heard in the silence that followed these strange events.

“Don’t take that off!”

“Hey, that’s mine!”

“Perverts! Don’t stare like that!”

“No, I don’t want to put that on!”

“NOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

When the Level 5 returned, she was blushing wildly, and looked to be holding back tears. She was desperately adjusting the clothes on her body,trying to cover herself as much as possible. However, it was a fact that she was wearing the same outfit as the Sisters, with the words ‘Original’ written boldly on the back.

“With such close proximity, connection with the Misaka Network may be possible Misaka 15… speculates.”

“This will allow Onee-sama to move with us as one Misaka 10039 explains.”

“Heh,” all the Misaka’s apart from Last Order and Mikoto let out a laugh, a lopsided smile on their faces. “It will be perfect.”

Aogami turned to Touma. “You bastard. You magnificent bastard!” the blue haired boy yelled.

“For thins, we’ll have to kill you. You understand, don’t you?” Tsuchimikado looked on with a dark expression.

“Huh! I guess Touma’s still Touma, no matter what!” Index’s voice came out loud and clear, anger plain in her tone.

Kamijou could just tell he was in for a bite on the head.

I just thought of something. Would Tsuchimikado Maika have a power?:heh: ESP Maid...:eyespin:

That rocks. Go on, the build-up I'm feeling right now is very tense. While very tense, it feels very cool. Cool as in Cool Shades-y kind of cool. :D

[outerelf]

Please excuse me while I die of laughter in the background.

[MrTerrorist]

Oh my god that was so funny! Last Order and the Misaka sisters are such evil masterminds! LOL

[Endscape]

This is hilarious! Good work, Ashaman!

[tsunade666]

ah ah ah I can't wait for the next chapter. Though accelerator is really stand defeated in front of last order. She always had the last laugh :heh: :heh: :heh:

I can't wait for the battle.

[blitz1/2]

Now, touma has a morale boost, those girls simply don't stand a chance.

[tsunade666]

let aogami rape I mean beat them up :D

[Ashaman]

Next chapter is the epilouge, so to speak. Is there a class known as 5 shot. Or is this offiaclly a short story?

The distance was thirty feet.

The referee was unconscious, having suffered a Misaka overload, leaving a woman in a blue suit with shining glasses to mediate the clash.

She did not shout. She barely even raised her voice. But still, her command carried over the large field to the spectators.

“Each of you will state your name, Level, and ability name. Then you will begin the three on three team battle. The time limit is ten minutes. You first!” this woman, the Dorm Manager explained efficiently before pointing directly at the three girls on the field.

These girls, who were so confident yesterday, can’t help but feel shaken. To witness their idol, Misaka Mikoto’s, electricity being completely defended against caused their hearts to tremble. The boy didn’t even seem to be trying.

However, they were all Ojou-sama’s, and so hid the shock from the boys.

“I am Motaki Ruri, Level 4, ability name Combustion.”

“My name is Orokirin Kasumi. Level 4, ability name Water Dragon,” the girl on the left gave a small yet polite bow. She was very short, looking almost child like. Her hair was braided down her back, and her brown eyes were set in a state of perpetual boredom.

“I’m Taki Ao,” a black haired girl almost growled. She was the tallest girl there, and yet with her proportions it seemed natural. Her hair was very short, and her dark eyes continued to glare. “Level 4, Shatter Stone.”

The Dorm Manager nodded, then turned to the boys. “Same.” She demanded.

“Hey, hey, we’re Level 0’s, I don’t see why-” Touma began, but cut himself off after the Dorm Manager fixed him with a glare. “Don’t lie to me. I know you have abilities. Now introduce yourselves,” her glasses glinted.

“Hai!” all three boys snapped to attention.

“Aogami Pierce, Level 0, Stats Boost.”

“Tsuchimikado Motoharu, Level 0, Auto Regeneration.”

“Kamijou Touma, Level 0, Imagine Breaker.”

“HA! So that’s what you’re power is called!” Misaka Mikoto pointed at him in triumph, causing Touma to turn to face her. Unfortunately for her, she had pom poms in her hands, so it looked more like she was cheering for him than anything. As soon as she realised this, she blushed like a tomato and went back to trying to sink into the ground.

“Excellent,” the Dorm Manager nodded. “Begin.”

The girls didn’t waste a second, going on the offensive immediately.

Before the boys could take even one step forward, the ground beneath began to shake, knocking them off balance.

In this moment, there was an explosion between all three of them, sending Aogami, who had point, flying forward, while Tsuchimikado and Touma were flung back a little.

As soon as Touma’s hand touched the ground as he fell back, the shaking stopped.

Ao’s face displayed confusion. Her ability had been stopped.

Before the boys had time to recover though, three tendrils of water sped through the air, trying to knock them backdown.

However, in a surprising display of speed, Aogami dodged to the right, and then ducked under it as it tried to swipe at him.

Touma simply stuck his right hand out, destroying the tendril completely.

The only one that had been hit the water stream was Tsuchimikado, but even that was just a glancing blow, and Touma was quick to destroy it before it could do anymore damage.

The final intact tendril of water retreated back to its owner, just as Touma spotted something in front of his face.

An orange light.

They discussed this yesterday. As the only girl they knew that was going to compete, Tsuchimikado had quickly found out her ability and researched its weaknesses.

Combustion causes the air to explode into flames at the specific area the ability holder, in this case Motaki, concentrated on. She didn’t have to see where she was aiming, though it helped increase the speed of Combustion if she could. It had a range of fifty feet, and it took 5 seconds for her to cause an explosion.

The weakness Tsuchimikado discovered was that, for a full three seconds before the actual explosion, there was an orange light hanging in the air.

On a sunny day, it was hard to miss, but at night or on an overcast day like today it stood out.

Touma didn’t even think about it as he swiped the light away with his right hand, the familiar noise like glass breaking accompanying it.

Again, Touma spotted the confusion as the ability failed to work, this time on both Motaki and Kasumi as well.

As one, the three boys began toward the girls. Again, the ground began to shake, but this time Touma was ready, and ducked under to press both hands on the ground, stopping the shaking.

With both arms on the ground, he used them to boost his running sped by getting a crouching start.

It was needed to catch up with Aogami and Tsuchimikado, both of whom could out pace Touma any day.

The distance had been reduced to a mere 15 feet when streams of water once again flew out. This time the boys were ready though, and while Aogami and Tsuchimikado skilfully dodged all seven that were aimed at them, three for Tsuchimikado and four for Aogami, Touma ducked around the five after him, destroying three of them with a single swipe and jumping over the last two.

The distance was 10 feet.

Again the orange light show appeared, this time in front of Aogami.

He must have noticed it, because he ducked under it and continued to rush, trusting Touma to have his back.

He did. With another swipe, the orange light was gone, and noting went boom.

Seven feet left.

The earth rose in front of the boys, looking like a wave of soil.

Aogami and Tsuchimikado stopped in their tracks for all of half a second, before starting to run again.

That was all it took for Touma to pull ahead of them and punch the wave of earth, causing it to collapse into a heap, which all three boys jumped over.

On the other side, they could see a wall of water surrounding their enemies like a bubble, three oranges lights glowing. That was Motaki’s limit, a limit which increased her charge up time.

Not that that mattered. Touma continued on, while Aogami and Tsuchimikado ducked behind him like they were using him as a shield for the explosion.

They were.

When the lights turned to fire, and the air grew hot, Touma extended forth his right hand, and the fire may as well of been nothing.

The concussive power of the fire was the only thing that effected Aogami and Tsuchimikado, both of whom caught Touma as he was blasted back.

A quick check revealed no real injuries, only a little bruising.

Before the boys was nothing but steam, most likely caused by the water bubble that was protecting the girls from the blast.

The taller two boys dragged Touma to his feet, but prevented him from making a noise.

He glance towards each of them, who nodded their heads. As silently as possible, they continued on.

When they emerge in front of a smug looking Motaki, who had thought she’d won with that last blast, there was nothing that she could do except stumble back in fear.

It was Ao that saved her, creating another wall of earth that quickly scattered and flew towards the trio while she dragged Motaki back toward safety.

They tried to best to dodge, but in the end only Aogami came out of that one relatively unscathed.

The distance was a mere three feet.

“DEL-TA-FORCE! DEL-TA-FORCE!” their class cheered exuberantly.

Beside them, the Misaka cheerleaders danced to the movements. Even Mikoto was doing it, and looked be laughing about it too.

The Imouto’s were lined up into three rows. The back two rows were the normal sisters, while the front row consisted of Misaka Mikoto and Last Order, who was cheering her little heart out. Last Order was in the middle, while Mikoto was to her left.

To Last Orders right was Accelerator, who, due to Last Oder having no idea what male cheerleader usually did, was forced to go along with the synchronised female routine.

His thoughts perfectly mirrored the expression on his face, i.e. murderous.

‘Kill that guy, that guy and that girl. Oh, did he just glance at me? He’s on the list. Oh, I’m going to make that one painful. Is that fucking hero looking at me?! Oh, he’s going on my list too. Wait, he’s already on the list five times over. Fucking hero!’ he raged.

As though he could sense the murderous intent, Touma shivered and looked back at the three girls.

“So, do you give up?” Touma asked. None of the girls had been hurt yet, but they must’ve known how close they came to losing and that none of them were really injured yet.

For a single moment, Motaki seriously looked like she would fold. But then she seemingly noticed something and smirked.

“Isn’t it you who should give up,” she suggested.

All three boys followed her gaze, and found a girl in a maid uniform surrounded by Tokiwadai girls, the same one’s they’d run into yesterday.

“Huh. Motoharu-nii-chan?” she questioned. “What are you doing here?”

Three glares turned to Motaki. “Are you seriously using my sister as a hostage?” Tsuchimikado growled.

“Well, I wasn’t intending to, but…”

“Aogami,” Tsuchimikado spoke softly, belying his anger. “Get my sister over to our class.”

“Got it,” Aogami nodded once.

“Huh, you really think we’ll let you?” Ao asked.

“Its not a matter of you letting him; after all, its not like you can stop him,” Tsuchimikado told them.

“Ha, we’ll see about that,” Motaki yelled, creating an orange light in Aogami’s path.

He ignored it, and sped away, faster than Motaki could follow. Faster than all but the most battle experienced could follow.

“Didn’t you ever wonder what Aogami meant by ‘Stats Boost’?”

“Wha?” Motaki mumbled. She’d dismissed it as nonsense.

“Whenever his bosy is flooded with adrenaline and other natural hormones like that, his stats rise. Its like a computer game where you have Speed, Strength, Agility and all those things.”

“Adrenaline does that anyway,” Motaki spat back.

“Yeah, but with Aogami you get an effect hundreds of times greater than in a normal person.”

They turned to the group of girls who were surrounding Miaka just as Aogami was closing in on them.

They fired flames and tossed rocks at him with their powers, but Aogami danced around them with a strangely grim look on her face.

As soon as she understood that they were attacking, Maika shouted “Don’t hurt Aogami-nii-chan!” before smacking the closest girl in the back, preventing her from firing.

Then, Aogami was among them. With a single swing, he knocked four girls down, before grabbing Maika and running with her to the Delta Force’s classmates.

“He’ll pay for touching my sister so familiarly,” Tsuchimikado chuckled, before turning his attention back to the girls.

“And so will you,” he told them, before punching Touma in the stomach.

Touma and the girls’ eyes widened, but before Touma could do anything, Tsuchimikado had already flung him away.

Winded but otherwise fine, Touma scrambled to his feet.

Tsuchimikado pulled out three papers from his jacket, and gave a bitter smile. “Fallere825!” he declared.

The significance of these words went over most peoples heads, but for Touma, who knew of magicians and their Magic name, the name they declare when they’ll attack like they’re trying to kill, this was really shocking.

“You idiot! You can’t be serious!?” Touma yelled.

“No one threatens my sister.” The blond stated simply.

“You’ll seriously hurt yourself!”

“Ha, don’t worry Kami-yan, I’ll make sure the damage to my body isn’t too bad.”

“Idiot! Can’t I change your mind?”

“Not this time Kami-yan.”

“Fine then. The least I could do is take some of the burden from you.”

Tsuchimikado glanced behind him toward Touma. “I get Motaki.”

“Rock girl is mine then,” Touma told him.

“I guess that leaves me with miss water snake,” Aogami smiled as he returned.

The boys turned back to the girls, only to find that they too had been planning. Surround the boys were three orange lights, a circular wall ready to blast them, and above them, a giant stream of water in the shape of a dragon, ready to crash down.

“We don’t like being ignored,” Motaki shouted, just as they let everything lose too attack.

However, in the time it took for Motaki to boast and the attacks to go off, Tsuchimikado had already set up a magic barrier that protected them all from harm.

Seconds after that was done though, Motoharu coughed up blood and then pressed down on his right side in pain.

Touma looked on in worry, but when Aogami looked at Tsuchimikado, he only nodded his head, acknowledging his friends determination, no matter how unnecessary.

‘What kind of things do those two do together?!’ Touma couldn’t help but ask himself.

A moment later the barrage stopped.

In less than a second, the three began to move. Motoharu destroyed the barrier before they bypassed it, allowing the three to leap at the girls.

Again they were shocked that their attacks didn’t bury the boys.

As Aogami appeared in front of Kasumi, she tried to raise her arms as well as the water to protect herself, but Aogami simply punched before she could raise her defence. All it took was a single hit, and she was unconscious.

When Touma landed in front of Ao from his leap, he purposefully rolled, allowing his right hand to press into the ground.

With a satisfying sound, Touma could tell he stopped her power from defending herself.

Coming out of his roll, Ao was completely unprotected as his fist hit her cheek and knocked her down.

Unlike Aogami, Touma didn’t knock her out cold, but never the less, she was out of the fight.

Before Tsuchimikado had even landed he’d already surrounded Motaki in a barrier. By the time his feet hit the ground,it was already too late for her.

“Burn,” Tsuchimikado said, before an explosion took place in the barrier.

After that, the barrier fell, revealing a more or less fine, if fainted, Motaki; she had suffered some light burns, but there was no permanent damage done.

However, Tsuchimikado could feel his insides burst as he began to bleed internally.

Was it worth it?


Huh. I've just realised something. On FF.net, there are only 2 fics with Lemons for TAMNI. I'm not sure how I feel about this. Proud that this fandom hasn't gone sex mad? Or disappointed at the lack of a good romantic smut.

I think I'm mainly the former, but I can't deny i feel a bit of the latter too.

[tsunade666]

great one but I think 5 times is too little for the hero. :D make it a hundred or thousands more :heh: :heh:

the first part was okay but when they start using Maika it felt ... weak in someways. With a total one sided fight. Even using a hostage to turn the table around but still it's utterly useless.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

thanks for the feed back guys i appreciate it .... the OC is still on beta stages .... guess i t better scrap it and start over ....... guess it to mary sueish .... i deeply apologies

I was hoping to write adventure/comedy i tend not to write depressing ones:heh:

again i apologies if my grammars sucks , i tend to skip the words that i was typing :heh::heh:

It's alright, it happens to everyone.

Just throwing an idea out there, but let's say they did another experiment and managed to create a clone out of Accelerator's DNA without him knowing about it. My idea is basically to take the same general idea but make the clone a Level 2 or 3 and give it a power similar to but not exactly the same as Redirection.

You could give the story the plot that you were intending to, with the clone attacking Touma. You could also make it so that the clone escaped from where it was being used for experiments and ran into Touma who decided to help him/her.

Technically, the clone should be the same gender since it's not possible to switch to a different gender than the original. The clone being a male would probably destroy any romantic subplot unless you want to go a the BL route (which would be nice, but the chances of you being a fujoshi are slim). Or, if you were thinking of including romance, you could ignore the fact that a clone needs to be the same gender as the original and go with Akemi/Yuriko.

[outerelf]

Huh. I've just realised something. On FF.net, there are only 2 fics with Lemons for TAMNI. I'm not sure how I feel about this. Proud that this fandom hasn't gone sex mad? Or disappointed at the lack of a good romantic smut.

I think I'm mainly the former, but I can't deny i feel a bit of the latter too.

... Fanart I think makes up for the lack of perviness- but I think the problem is, it just isn't that popular. It's a good show to watch every now and then, but I think the real meat of the series lies in the light novels.

[kaizerknight01]

To Yukirosuzuka

I was planing for Akemi/Yuriko to see Touma as her benefactor and no romantic feeling towards him , platonic at best. her role was originally in the fanfic is to ensue chaos with Touma's relationship with the girls namely Mikoto,Ituwa etc. Misunderstanding leads to funny reactions= comedy

As for cloning ... I think a read in a in the early 2002 or 2003 science journal it is theoretical possible to clone a female form a male using the x chromosome , the X and Y are basically gender Chromosomes (Female have 2 X the male has X and Y chromosomes)

As for BL/Yaoi no offense i stay away form it with a 50 yard pole :heh::heh:

[Endscape]

Here's a part of the second chapter of the fanfic I've been working on. Please give me some feedback.



Here it is, the next chapter of A Day's Jaunt, brought to you by the Psychic Mind.

Disclaimer: Sorry to say, but I don't own To Aru Majutsu No Index. Wish I did, though

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A Day's Jaunt

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“... Hey, did you get Hittotsu Hajime's new CD?

“... Man, I failed the test on the Application of ESP yesterday, it was horrible...”

“... The supermarket across from my house has a deal Friday on meat, it's that special cloned kind and...”

All around, the quiet and homely chatter of people washed around on the streets of Academy City,as Kamijou Touma made his way to the bus stop for his 'day of fun-filled fun' as it was so inanely put by that troublemaker Tsuchimikado.

Decked out in a blue hoodie with the words 'IB' stylized on the right ( the irony of this had not escaped him, which is why he bought it in the first place) and a pair of blue jeans, Touma whistled at the thought that nothing unlucky had happened to him all day.

Normally speaking, he would be deathly suspicious about this fact, knowing from prior experience that bad luck was like garbage, it tended to get worse and worse the more it accumulated.

The fact that he had been sent here by Tsuchimikado wasn’t helping, either

However today would be different!

The world could be a decent place filled with good luck, even for a God-forsaken person like himself!

… Or at least that’s what that late-night pop psychology show had said. Granted that most of it had been rubbish, but one thing had stuck out for the unlucky boy.

One little phrase.

A bad premonition would bring about a bad future was what the woman that was trying far too hard to look trendy had said.

If you thought you were unlucky, then you would be unlucky. If you thought you were lucky, then you would be lucky.

That might not work for someone who had a mysterious right hand, but he was willing to try anyway.

Hell, he was willing to try anything.

“Hey, Touma!”

Touma was taken out of his musing by the voice of a certain electromaster calling out to him.

Quickly trying to remember if he had insulted, mocked, ignored, or generally irritated her the last time they met, since he really didn’t want to have Imagine Breaker eat a lightning bolt or a Railgun this early in the morning, he turned around slowly.

Greeting him were the faces of Misaka Mikoto who, thankfully just looked curious and not pissed, Shirai Kuroko, who was looking at him as if he were the cause of all her misfortune, which was the way she looked half the time he saw her, with or without Mikoto around, and two other girls who looked curious, probably wondering who Tokiwadai’s famed Railgun was calling out to.

Wondering if this was the start of the ‘Unlucky Streak’, as Index had dubbed it, he walked over to the girls amidst the vaguely interested stares of people near him: that Tokiwadai uniform was eye-catching after all.

“Yo, Misaka, you going to the waterpark too?” Said girl smiled slightly. “Yeah, won free tickets”

One of the unknown girls that were with Mikoto, the taller one, looked me over curiously. “Mikoto-san, is this a friend of yours?”

Mikoto blushed slightly, a fact that was not lost on either of the two girls that were with her… or Kuroko.

“He’s a friend of mine, Kamijou Touma.” She gestured to the two girls, one wearing a peasant blouse and cutoff jeans, and the other girl, wearing a white blouse with frills on it and a knee—length skirt. Orthodox clothes, but she was also wearing a tiara made of flowers. “Touma, these are my friends, Uiharu Kazari and Saten Ruiko.”

After exchanging greeting with the both of them and Kuroko, Kamijou looked around at the small crowd of people, no more than 29, who were waiting on the bus to the amusement park. Apart from himself and Misaka’s friends, most of the people looked as if they were in university, and also looked excited to be here.

Misaka’s friends, Saten and Uiharu also looked excited, Saten more so. Kuroko was giving off her usual calm attitude while Misaka was also looking around the crowd.

Touma'a attention was caught by an excited and envious squeal from Uiharu. “Wow, that person over there is really gorgeous!

'She must be a model”, Saten replied knowledgeably.

Touma turned around. Looking at a map, was a woman dressed in a denim jacket with one of the arms cut off, and a pair of bellbottom jeans with one of the legs cut off. Unusually, (for her ) she wasn't wearing her usual cut-off T-shirt but a normal pink one.

Kanzaki! On second thought, this made sense, it must have been another one of Tsuchimikado's plans after all...

Uiharu, Saten ,Misaka and Kuroko all turned at his exclamation.

“Oi, you know that woman?”, Misaka questioned.
“Well...”

Having seemingly heard her name being called, even all the way where she was, the woman in question turned around, and seeing Kamijou, reveals a surprised look and walks over.

“Kamijou Touma, what are you doing here?”Her eyes narrowed. “Did Tsuchimikado send you?”

At her question, Touma's eyes narrowed as well. She wasn't here for him, and yet Tsuchimikado seems to have sent her, so that means...

Heaving a sigh, he addressed the increasingly looking pissed off Saint. “Yes, but I don't think it's what you think it is.

Kanzaki raised her eyebrows but said nothing.

Hearing the sound of sparks from behind him, Touma suddenly remembered his manners. “Sorry, Misaka, Shirai-san, Saten-san, Uiharu-san, this is a friend of mine, Kanzaki Kaori. Kanzaki, these are my friends.”


Having exchanged pleasantries, Kanzaki pulled Kamijou aside. “What is going on here?”, she said in a whisper.

“That's my line!”, Touma retorted. “Well, are you here on a job?”

She shook her head. “I just came here to get some routine info from Tsuchimikado. I could have gotten it by phone, but he said he had some tickets for some theme park that was open to tourists from outside the city and that it would be fun. “

“He told me he had free tickets too!”

“Wait, the that means..”

They growled, as one. “Tsuchimikado...”

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1.3 km away, in a high-class limo, installed with all the latest amenities, Tsuchimikado Motoharu threw down his headset in disgust, and not a little fear.

“Tch, to think that I would be found out so soon, is this Kami-yan's bad luck affecting me, or is it Nee-chin's good luck helping her? “

He smirked. “No matter, the show goes on, nya.”

From his seat on the opposite side of the limo, Etzali sighed. “The things I do for money...

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Saten looked at Kamijou and Kanzaki. “I wonder what they're talking about?”

“Hell if I know!” Misaka snapped.

“Sorry for bothering you then”, Saten sniffed.

Blushing at her outburst, Misaka slumped her shoulders slightly. “Sorry, I'm sure they're ..friends. That Touma is great at making friends.”

Blinking at her words, the conversation was cut off as Kanzaki and Touma walked over.

Seeing the look on their faces, Kamijou rubbed the back of his neck sheepishly. “Sorry, we just...needed to check something. I didn't expect to see Kanzaki here since she lives in London. She was in Japan for a business trip and apparently a certain mutual friend gave her tickets to come here.”

Uiharu looked at Kanzaki in amazement. “London, that's so cool. So what do you do there?”

Cutting in before something that could not be brought back was said, Touma said, “Ah, she works for the Anglican Church, she goes around collecting relics for the Church and the British Library.”

“Wow”, Saten exclaimed. “So you're like a treasure hunter, then?”

Kanzaki smiled slightly. “Well, kind of. I just go around to various places and buy artifacts that have special meaning to the Church. I also sell certain artifacts to other agencies.

“Sounds interesting”, Misaka nodded. “So if you from the Anglican Church, do you happen to know that nun Index that is always hanging around with him then?”

....

“Not very much”, Kanzaki said softly. “I don't know that girl that much at all.”

At that, the conversation ceased for a moment.

Eager to dispel the unpleasant atmosphere, Kamijou turned to Kuroko. “So how did you guys get the tickets? It seems like it's mostly university students here.”

“Well”, Kuroko had a smug expression on her face. “I happened to win a raffle and get 4 tickets.”

She swooned slightly, cupping her face with her hands. “A lovely time to frolic around in the water with my beloved Onee-sama has arrived....”

“Ah” Uiharu interrupted, “Don't tell me you used your teleport to cheat, Shirai-san..”

“Eh”, looking at the surprised faces of all the people around her. Shirai paled.”What, I didn't cheat at anything!”

“I'm sure you didn't, Shirai-san”, Uiharu drawled.

“Never mind all the other stuff you use your teleport for, I'm sure you never cheated… at the raffle, right? Like the way you never cheated at anything else.' She gave a winning smile.

“Uiharu” Kuroko's face was flat by this part of Uiharu's speech.”You're doing this on purpose, aren't you?”

“Whatever are you talking about, Shirai-san? What am I doing?' was the innocent reply.

‘You..you..YOOOUUUU!!!”, was the reply from the elegant Shirai Kuroko as she pounced on Uiharu.

“Always…always ..making fun of me!!”

“Shut up! At least I don’t write porn fiction about my roommate!”

“SHUT UP, YOOOOUUUU!!!”

Kamijou, Misaka, Saten and Kanzaki sweat-dropped, along with everyone else around them, as they watched the two fight.

“Ahh, Misaka-san’ Saten said as gently as she possibly could, “when Uiharu was talking about porn..”

“Yes,” Misaka said, sparking wildly, ‘I’ll make sure to have a through talk to Kuroko later.” The sparks increased in intensity. ‘ A very through talk”

Kanzaki looked over at Kamijou. “Your friends are..enthusiatic”, she said.

Kamijou sighed. “I guess.” He stopped for a second. “Kanzaki, about why you’re here..”

She nodded. “It seems to be a trick by Tsuuchimikado. I don’t think it’s work related.”

Touma frowned. ‘Why do you say that? Couldn’t he have sent you here to fix some incident for him?”

“Even Tsuchimikado would not be so irresponsible as to do that.’, she retorted.

They looked at each other for a moment, but only a moment.

Hahahaha!!

Kanzaki held up a hand. “All right, well he would. But I doubt he did.

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Over at the limo, Tsuchimikado was in tears. “Ahh, nee-chin has really become such a better person. To put her faith in me like that!

“That would be too easy a trick for him.”

Back at the limo, Tsuchimikado was in tears. ‘So cold, Nee-chin!

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‘I think he sent me here to have fun. Honestly.”

Touma laughed slightly. “Yeah, maybe he would.”

Misaka, who had been chatting with Saten, looked over to the bus stop. “Hey, you guys,” she called over to Kamijou and Kanzaki, the buses are here.

‘Eh?’, the two looked. Over the bus stop, most of the other visitors had gotten tired of Kuroko and Uiharu’s variety show, and had gone over to the bus stop when they saw the buses coming.

‘Okay”, kamijou said as he and Kanzaki moved over. “What about those two?”, he pointed at the brawling Uiharu and Kuroko.

Misaka sighed. “I’ll get them.”

[kaizerknight01]

Here's a part of the second chapter of the fanfic I've been working on. Please give me some feedback.



Here it is, the next chapter of A Day's Jaunt, brought to you by the Psychic Mind.

Disclaimer: Sorry to say, but I don't own To Aru Majutsu No Index. Wish I did, though

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A Day's Jaunt

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“... Hey, did you get Hittotsu Hajime's new CD?

“... Man, I failed the test on the Application of ESP yesterday, it was horrible...”

“... The supermarket across from my house has a deal Friday on meat, it's that special cloned kind and...”

All around, the quiet and homely chatter of people washed around on the streets of Academy City,as Kamijou Touma made his way to the bus stop for his 'day of fun-filled fun' as it was so inanely put by that troublemaker Tsuchimikado.

Decked out in a blue hoodie with the words 'IB' stylized on the right ( the irony of this had not escaped him, which is why he bought it in the first place) and a pair of blue jeans, Touma whistled at the thought that nothing unlucky had happened to him all day.

Normally speaking, he would be deathly suspicious about this fact, knowing from prior experience that bad luck was like garbage, it tended to get worse and worse the more it accumulated.

The fact that he had been sent here by Tsuchimikado wasn’t helping, either

However today would be different!

The world could be a decent place filled with good luck, even for a God-forsaken person like himself!

… Or at least that’s what that late-night pop psychology show had said. Granted that most of it had been rubbish, but one thing had stuck out for the unlucky boy.

One little phrase.

A bad premonition would bring about a bad future was what the woman that was trying far too hard to look trendy had said.

If you thought you were unlucky, then you would be unlucky. If you thought you were lucky, then you would be lucky.

That might not work for someone who had a mysterious right hand, but he was willing to try anyway.

Hell, he was willing to try anything.

“Hey, Touma!”

Touma was taken out of his musing by the voice of a certain electromaster calling out to him.

Quickly trying to remember if he had insulted, mocked, ignored, or generally irritated her the last time they met, since he really didn’t want to have Imagine Breaker eat a lightning bolt or a Railgun this early in the morning, he turned around slowly.

Greeting him were the faces of Misaka Mikoto who, thankfully just looked curious and not pissed, Shirai Kuroko, who was looking at him as if he were the cause of all her misfortune, which was the way she looked half the time he saw her, with or without Mikoto around, and two other girls who looked curious, probably wondering who Tokiwadai’s famed Railgun was calling out to.

Wondering if this was the start of the ‘Unlucky Streak’, as Index had dubbed it, he walked over to the girls amidst the vaguely interested stares of people near him: that Tokiwadai uniform was eye-catching after all.

“Yo, Misaka, you going to the waterpark too?” Said girl smiled slightly. “Yeah, won free tickets”

One of the unknown girls that were with Mikoto, the taller one, looked me over curiously. “Mikoto-san, is this a friend of yours?”

Mikoto blushed slightly, a fact that was not lost on either of the two girls that were with her… or Kuroko.

“He’s a friend of mine, Kamijou Touma.” She gestured to the two girls, one wearing a peasant blouse and cutoff jeans, and the other girl, wearing a white blouse with frills on it and a knee—length skirt. Orthodox clothes, but she was also wearing a tiara made of flowers. “Touma, these are my friends, Uiharu Kazari and Saten Ruiko.”

After exchanging greeting with the both of them and Kuroko, Kamijou looked around at the small crowd of people, no more than 29, who were waiting on the bus to the amusement park. Apart from himself and Misaka’s friends, most of the people looked as if they were in university, and also looked excited to be here.

Misaka’s friends, Saten and Uiharu also looked excited, Saten more so. Kuroko was giving off her usual calm attitude while Misaka was also looking around the crowd.

Touma'a attention was caught by an excited and envious squeal from Uiharu. “Wow, that person over there is really gorgeous!

'She must be a model”, Saten replied knowledgeably.

Touma turned around. Looking at a map, was a woman dressed in a denim jacket with one of the arms cut off, and a pair of bellbottom jeans with one of the legs cut off. Unusually, (for her ) she wasn't wearing her usual cut-off T-shirt but a normal pink one.

Kanzaki! On second thought, this made sense, it must have been another one of Tsuchimikado's plans after all...

Uiharu, Saten ,Misaka and Kuroko all turned at his exclamation.

“Oi, you know that woman?”, Misaka questioned.
“Well...”

Having seemingly heard her name being called, even all the way where she was, the woman in question turned around, and seeing Kamijou, reveals a surprised look and walks over.

“Kamijou Touma, what are you doing here?”Her eyes narrowed. “Did Tsuchimikado send you?”

At her question, Touma's eyes narrowed as well. She wasn't here for him, and yet Tsuchimikado seems to have sent her, so that means...

Heaving a sigh, he addressed the increasingly looking pissed off Saint. “Yes, but I don't think it's what you think it is.

Kanzaki raised her eyebrows but said nothing.

Hearing the sound of sparks from behind him, Touma suddenly remembered his manners. “Sorry, Misaka, Shirai-san, Saten-san, Uiharu-san, this is a friend of mine, Kanzaki Kaori. Kanzaki, these are my friends.”


Having exchanged pleasantries, Kanzaki pulled Kamijou aside. “What is going on here?”, she said in a whisper.

“That's my line!”, Touma retorted. “Well, are you here on a job?”

She shook her head. “I just came here to get some routine info from Tsuchimikado. I could have gotten it by phone, but he said he had some tickets for some theme park that was open to tourists from outside the city and that it would be fun. “

“He told me he had free tickets too!”

“Wait, the that means..”

They growled, as one. “Tsuchimikado...”

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1.3 km away, in a high-class limo, installed with all the latest amenities, Tsuchimikado Motoharu threw down his headset in disgust, and not a little fear.

“Tch, to think that I would be found out so soon, is this Kami-yan's bad luck affecting me, or is it Nee-chin's good luck helping her? “

He smirked. “No matter, the show goes on, nya.”

From his seat on the opposite side of the limo, Etzali sighed. “The things I do for money...

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Saten looked at Kamijou and Kanzaki. “I wonder what they're talking about?”

“Hell if I know!” Misaka snapped.

“Sorry for bothering you then”, Saten sniffed.

Blushing at her outburst, Misaka slumped her shoulders slightly. “Sorry, I'm sure they're ..friends. That Touma is great at making friends.”

Blinking at her words, the conversation was cut off as Kanzaki and Touma walked over.

Seeing the look on their faces, Kamijou rubbed the back of his neck sheepishly. “Sorry, we just...needed to check something. I didn't expect to see Kanzaki here since she lives in London. She was in Japan for a business trip and apparently a certain mutual friend gave her tickets to come here.”

Uiharu looked at Kanzaki in amazement. “London, that's so cool. So what do you do there?”

Cutting in before something that could not be brought back was said, Touma said, “Ah, she works for the Anglican Church, she goes around collecting relics for the Church and the British Library.”

“Wow”, Saten exclaimed. “So you're like a treasure hunter, then?”

Kanzaki smiled slightly. “Well, kind of. I just go around to various places and buy artifacts that have special meaning to the Church. I also sell certain artifacts to other agencies.

“Sounds interesting”, Misaka nodded. “So if you from the Anglican Church, do you happen to know that nun Index that is always hanging around with him then?”

....

“Not very much”, Kanzaki said softly. “I don't know that girl that much at all.”

At that, the conversation ceased for a moment.

Eager to dispel the unpleasant atmosphere, Kamijou turned to Kuroko. “So how did you guys get the tickets? It seems like it's mostly university students here.”

“Well”, Kuroko had a smug expression on her face. “I happened to win a raffle and get 4 tickets.”

She swooned slightly, cupping her face with her hands. “A lovely time to frolic around in the water with my beloved Onee-sama has arrived....”

“Ah” Uiharu interrupted, “Don't tell me you used your teleport to cheat, Shirai-san..”

“Eh”, looking at the surprised faces of all the people around her. Shirai paled.”What, I didn't cheat at anything!”

“I'm sure you didn't, Shirai-san”, Uiharu drawled.

“Never mind all the other stuff you use your teleport for, I'm sure you never cheated… at the raffle, right? Like the way you never cheated at anything else.' She gave a winning smile.

“Uiharu” Kuroko's face was flat by this part of Uiharu's speech.”You're doing this on purpose, aren't you?”

“Whatever are you talking about, Shirai-san? What am I doing?' was the innocent reply.

‘You..you..YOOOUUUU!!!”, was the reply from the elegant Shirai Kuroko as she pounced on Uiharu.

“Always…always ..making fun of me!!”

“Shut up! At least I don’t write porn fiction about my roommate!”

“SHUT UP, YOOOOUUUU!!!”

Kamijou, Misaka, Saten and Kanzaki sweat-dropped, along with everyone else around them, as they watched the two fight.

“Ahh, Misaka-san’ Saten said as gently as she possibly could, “when Uiharu was talking about porn..”

“Yes,” Misaka said, sparking wildly, ‘I’ll make sure to have a through talk to Kuroko later.” The sparks increased in intensity. ‘ A very through talk”

Kanzaki looked over at Kamijou. “Your friends are..enthusiatic”, she said.

Kamijou sighed. “I guess.” He stopped for a second. “Kanzaki, about why you’re here..”

She nodded. “It seems to be a trick by Tsuuchimikado. I don’t think it’s work related.”

Touma frowned. ‘Why do you say that? Couldn’t he have sent you here to fix some incident for him?”

“Even Tsuchimikado would not be so irresponsible as to do that.’, she retorted.

They looked at each other for a moment, but only a moment.

Hahahaha!!

Kanzaki held up a hand. “All right, well he would. But I doubt he did.

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Over at the limo, Tsuchimikado was in tears. “Ahh, nee-chin has really become such a better person. To put her faith in me like that!

“That would be too easy a trick for him.”

Back at the limo, Tsuchimikado was in tears. ‘So cold, Nee-chin!

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‘I think he sent me here to have fun. Honestly.”

Touma laughed slightly. “Yeah, maybe he would.”

Misaka, who had been chatting with Saten, looked over to the bus stop. “Hey, you guys,” she called over to Kamijou and Kanzaki, the buses are here.

‘Eh?’, the two looked. Over the bus stop, most of the other visitors had gotten tired of Kuroko and Uiharu’s variety show, and had gone over to the bus stop when they saw the buses coming.

‘Okay”, kamijou said as he and Kanzaki moved over. “What about those two?”, he pointed at the brawling Uiharu and Kuroko.

Misaka sighed. “I’ll get them.”















I am no expert , but it a fun read

[Master Assassin]

Next chapter is the epilouge, so to speak. Is there a class known as 5 shot. Or is this offiaclly a short story?

The distance was thirty feet.

The referee was unconscious, having suffered a Misaka overload, leaving a woman in a blue suit with shining glasses to mediate the clash.

She did not shout. She barely even raised her voice. But still, her command carried over the large field to the spectators.

“Each of you will state your name, Level, and ability name. Then you will begin the three on three team battle. The time limit is ten minutes. You first!” this woman, the Dorm Manager explained efficiently before pointing directly at the three girls on the field.

These girls, who were so confident yesterday, can’t help but feel shaken. To witness their idol, Misaka Mikoto’s, electricity being completely defended against caused their hearts to tremble. The boy didn’t even seem to be trying.

However, they were all Ojou-sama’s, and so hid the shock from the boys.

“I am Motaki Ruri, Level 4, ability name Combustion.”

“My name is Orokirin Kasumi. Level 4, ability name Water Dragon,” the girl on the left gave a small yet polite bow. She was very short, looking almost child like. Her hair was braided down her back, and her brown eyes were set in a state of perpetual boredom.

“I’m Taki Ao,” a black haired girl almost growled. She was the tallest girl there, and yet with her proportions it seemed natural. Her hair was very short, and her dark eyes continued to glare. “Level 4, Shatter Stone.”

The Dorm Manager nodded, then turned to the boys. “Same.” She demanded.

“Hey, hey, we’re Level 0’s, I don’t see why-” Touma began, but cut himself off after the Dorm Manager fixed him with a glare. “Don’t lie to me. I know you have abilities. Now introduce yourselves,” her glasses glinted.

“Hai!” all three boys snapped to attention.

“Aogami Pierce, Level 0, Stats Boost.”

“Tsuchimikado Motoharu, Level 0, Auto Regeneration.”

“Kamijou Touma, Level 0, Imagine Breaker.”

“HA! So that’s what you’re power is called!” Misaka Mikoto pointed at him in triumph, causing Touma to turn to face her. Unfortunately for her, she had pom poms in her hands, so it looked more like she was cheering for him than anything. As soon as she realised this, she blushed like a tomato and went back to trying to sink into the ground.

“Excellent,” the Dorm Manager nodded. “Begin.”

The girls didn’t waste a second, going on the offensive immediately.

Before the boys could take even one step forward, the ground beneath began to shake, knocking them off balance.

In this moment, there was an explosion between all three of them, sending Aogami, who had point, flying forward, while Tsuchimikado and Touma were flung back a little.

As soon as Touma’s hand touched the ground as he fell back, the shaking stopped.

Ao’s face displayed confusion. Her ability had been stopped.

Before the boys had time to recover though, three tendrils of water sped through the air, trying to knock them backdown.

However, in a surprising display of speed, Aogami dodged to the right, and then ducked under it as it tried to swipe at him.

Touma simply stuck his right hand out, destroying the tendril completely.

The only one that had been hit the water stream was Tsuchimikado, but even that was just a glancing blow, and Touma was quick to destroy it before it could do anymore damage.

The final intact tendril of water retreated back to its owner, just as Touma spotted something in front of his face.

An orange light.

They discussed this yesterday. As the only girl they knew that was going to compete, Tsuchimikado had quickly found out her ability and researched its weaknesses.

Combustion causes the air to explode into flames at the specific area the ability holder, in this case Motaki, concentrated on. She didn’t have to see where she was aiming, though it helped increase the speed of Combustion if she could. It had a range of fifty feet, and it took 5 seconds for her to cause an explosion.

The weakness Tsuchimikado discovered was that, for a full three seconds before the actual explosion, there was an orange light hanging in the air.

On a sunny day, it was hard to miss, but at night or on an overcast day like today it stood out.

Touma didn’t even think about it as he swiped the light away with his right hand, the familiar noise like glass breaking accompanying it.

Again, Touma spotted the confusion as the ability failed to work, this time on both Motaki and Kasumi as well.

As one, the three boys began toward the girls. Again, the ground began to shake, but this time Touma was ready, and ducked under to press both hands on the ground, stopping the shaking.

With both arms on the ground, he used them to boost his running sped by getting a crouching start.

It was needed to catch up with Aogami and Tsuchimikado, both of whom could out pace Touma any day.

The distance had been reduced to a mere 15 feet when streams of water once again flew out. This time the boys were ready though, and while Aogami and Tsuchimikado skilfully dodged all seven that were aimed at them, three for Tsuchimikado and four for Aogami, Touma ducked around the five after him, destroying three of them with a single swipe and jumping over the last two.

The distance was 10 feet.

Again the orange light show appeared, this time in front of Aogami.

He must have noticed it, because he ducked under it and continued to rush, trusting Touma to have his back.

He did. With another swipe, the orange light was gone, and noting went boom.

Seven feet left.

The earth rose in front of the boys, looking like a wave of soil.

Aogami and Tsuchimikado stopped in their tracks for all of half a second, before starting to run again.

That was all it took for Touma to pull ahead of them and punch the wave of earth, causing it to collapse into a heap, which all three boys jumped over.

On the other side, they could see a wall of water surrounding their enemies like a bubble, three oranges lights glowing. That was Motaki’s limit, a limit which increased her charge up time.

Not that that mattered. Touma continued on, while Aogami and Tsuchimikado ducked behind him like they were using him as a shield for the explosion.

They were.

When the lights turned to fire, and the air grew hot, Touma extended forth his right hand, and the fire may as well of been nothing.

The concussive power of the fire was the only thing that effected Aogami and Tsuchimikado, both of whom caught Touma as he was blasted back.

A quick check revealed no real injuries, only a little bruising.

Before the boys was nothing but steam, most likely caused by the water bubble that was protecting the girls from the blast.

The taller two boys dragged Touma to his feet, but prevented him from making a noise.

He glance towards each of them, who nodded their heads. As silently as possible, they continued on.

When they emerge in front of a smug looking Motaki, who had thought she’d won with that last blast, there was nothing that she could do except stumble back in fear.

It was Ao that saved her, creating another wall of earth that quickly scattered and flew towards the trio while she dragged Motaki back toward safety.

They tried to best to dodge, but in the end only Aogami came out of that one relatively unscathed.

The distance was a mere three feet.

“DEL-TA-FORCE! DEL-TA-FORCE!” their class cheered exuberantly.

Beside them, the Misaka cheerleaders danced to the movements. Even Mikoto was doing it, and looked be laughing about it too.

The Imouto’s were lined up into three rows. The back two rows were the normal sisters, while the front row consisted of Misaka Mikoto and Last Order, who was cheering her little heart out. Last Order was in the middle, while Mikoto was to her left.

To Last Orders right was Accelerator, who, due to Last Oder having no idea what male cheerleader usually did, was forced to go along with the synchronised female routine.

His thoughts perfectly mirrored the expression on his face, i.e. murderous.

‘Kill that guy, that guy and that girl. Oh, did he just glance at me? He’s on the list. Oh, I’m going to make that one painful. Is that fucking hero looking at me?! Oh, he’s going on my list too. Wait, he’s already on the list five times over. Fucking hero!’ he raged.

As though he could sense the murderous intent, Touma shivered and looked back at the three girls.

“So, do you give up?” Touma asked. None of the girls had been hurt yet, but they must’ve known how close they came to losing and that none of them were really injured yet.

For a single moment, Motaki seriously looked like she would fold. But then she seemingly noticed something and smirked.

“Isn’t it you who should give up,” she suggested.

All three boys followed her gaze, and found a girl in a maid uniform surrounded by Tokiwadai girls, the same one’s they’d run into yesterday.

“Huh. Motoharu-nii-chan?” she questioned. “What are you doing here?”

Three glares turned to Motaki. “Are you seriously using my sister as a hostage?” Tsuchimikado growled.

“Well, I wasn’t intending to, but…”

“Aogami,” Tsuchimikado spoke softly, belying his anger. “Get my sister over to our class.”

“Got it,” Aogami nodded once.

“Huh, you really think we’ll let you?” Ao asked.

“Its not a matter of you letting him; after all, its not like you can stop him,” Tsuchimikado told them.

“Ha, we’ll see about that,” Motaki yelled, creating an orange light in Aogami’s path.

He ignored it, and sped away, faster than Motaki could follow. Faster than all but the most battle experienced could follow.

“Didn’t you ever wonder what Aogami meant by ‘Stats Boost’?”

“Wha?” Motaki mumbled. She’d dismissed it as nonsense.

“Whenever his bosy is flooded with adrenaline and other natural hormones like that, his stats rise. Its like a computer game where you have Speed, Strength, Agility and all those things.”

“Adrenaline does that anyway,” Motaki spat back.

“Yeah, but with Aogami you get an effect hundreds of times greater than in a normal person.”

They turned to the group of girls who were surrounding Miaka just as Aogami was closing in on them.

They fired flames and tossed rocks at him with their powers, but Aogami danced around them with a strangely grim look on her face.

As soon as she understood that they were attacking, Maika shouted “Don’t hurt Aogami-nii-chan!” before smacking the closest girl in the back, preventing her from firing.

Then, Aogami was among them. With a single swing, he knocked four girls down, before grabbing Maika and running with her to the Delta Force’s classmates.

“He’ll pay for touching my sister so familiarly,” Tsuchimikado chuckled, before turning his attention back to the girls.

“And so will you,” he told them, before punching Touma in the stomach.

Touma and the girls’ eyes widened, but before Touma could do anything, Tsuchimikado had already flung him away.

Winded but otherwise fine, Touma scrambled to his feet.

Tsuchimikado pulled out three papers from his jacket, and gave a bitter smile. “Fallere825!” he declared.

The significance of these words went over most peoples heads, but for Touma, who knew of magicians and their Magic name, the name they declare when they’ll attack like they’re trying to kill, this was really shocking.

“You idiot! You can’t be serious!?” Touma yelled.

“No one threatens my sister.” The blond stated simply.

“You’ll seriously hurt yourself!”

“Ha, don’t worry Kami-yan, I’ll make sure the damage to my body isn’t too bad.”

“Idiot! Can’t I change your mind?”

“Not this time Kami-yan.”

“Fine then. The least I could do is take some of the burden from you.”

Tsuchimikado glanced behind him toward Touma. “I get Motaki.”

“Rock girl is mine then,” Touma told him.

“I guess that leaves me with miss water snake,” Aogami smiled as he returned.

The boys turned back to the girls, only to find that they too had been planning. Surround the boys were three orange lights, a circular wall ready to blast them, and above them, a giant stream of water in the shape of a dragon, ready to crash down.

“We don’t like being ignored,” Motaki shouted, just as they let everything lose too attack.

However, in the time it took for Motaki to boast and the attacks to go off, Tsuchimikado had already set up a magic barrier that protected them all from harm.

Seconds after that was done though, Motoharu coughed up blood and then pressed down on his right side in pain.

Touma looked on in worry, but when Aogami looked at Tsuchimikado, he only nodded his head, acknowledging his friends determination, no matter how unnecessary.

‘What kind of things do those two do together?!’ Touma couldn’t help but ask himself.

A moment later the barrage stopped.

In less than a second, the three began to move. Motoharu destroyed the barrier before they bypassed it, allowing the three to leap at the girls.

Again they were shocked that their attacks didn’t bury the boys.

As Aogami appeared in front of Kasumi, she tried to raise her arms as well as the water to protect herself, but Aogami simply punched before she could raise her defence. All it took was a single hit, and she was unconscious.

When Touma landed in front of Ao from his leap, he purposefully rolled, allowing his right hand to press into the ground.

With a satisfying sound, Touma could tell he stopped her power from defending herself.

Coming out of his roll, Ao was completely unprotected as his fist hit her cheek and knocked her down.

Unlike Aogami, Touma didn’t knock her out cold, but never the less, she was out of the fight.

Before Tsuchimikado had even landed he’d already surrounded Motaki in a barrier. By the time his feet hit the ground,it was already too late for her.

“Burn,” Tsuchimikado said, before an explosion took place in the barrier.

After that, the barrier fell, revealing a more or less fine, if fainted, Motaki; she had suffered some light burns, but there was no permanent damage done.

However, Tsuchimikado could feel his insides burst as he began to bleed internally.

Was it worth it?


Huh. I've just realised something. On FF.net, there are only 2 fics with Lemons for TAMNI. I'm not sure how I feel about this. Proud that this fandom hasn't gone sex mad? Or disappointed at the lack of a good romantic smut.

I think I'm mainly the former, but I can't deny i feel a bit of the latter too.

Just realized this, but IIRC Maika calls Motoharu "aniki." IIRC, that is...

[outerelf]

Title: Love You
Rating:T

She bent over her sleeping half-brother, fingers casually playing with his hair. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6529199/1/Love_You)

[Ashaman]

ME! I want those bonus points!

The answer is Oniichan-Control Man that girl is Yandere. Not Yuno level Yandere, but pretty high on the list regardless.

[Flere821]

Just remembered this idea after it came to me while I was translating Vol22 - Fiamma's idea is somewhat similar to that of the one by 'Snake of Festival' in the Shana novels (exact details omitted due to spoilers), any chances of a crossover happening between them?

Especially since both of their plans involve massive amounts of energy, except that they differ on 'power of existence' and 'telesma'. Not to mention both series seem to have (in TAMNI's case, had) a all-out-war as part of the plans.

Granted, the foundations of the worlds' settings between the two series is pretty different and making them work is probably really hard... but if done right I think it could be EPIC.

[outerelf]

...? Are you talking about Shakugana no Shana?

[Ashaman]

Yes, he is.

Unfortunately, the anime more or less stops when Snake appears, and Ionly kniw what I've been spoilered.

I don't think world building is too hard though.

The .... what were they called again? Like Aliestor. They would be being from another parrell dimension,one that runs con-current with Earth and Heaven. Crowley's Atrifical heaven is a threat to both heaven and .... Crimzon Denizens. Just like Telesema is difficult to use except for certian individuals, PoW needs special users. The flame Haze.

As you ge more into the detials, my memory becomes fuzzier, but this is from what I can remember

[Chaos2Frozen]

Just remembered this idea after it came to me while I was translating Vol22 - Fiamma's idea is somewhat similar to that of the one by 'Snake of Festival' in the Shana novels (exact details omitted due to spoilers), any chances of a crossover happening between them?

Especially since both of their plans involve massive amounts of energy, except that they differ on 'power of existence' and 'telesma'. Not to mention both series seem to have (in TAMNI's case, had) a all-out-war as part of the plans.

Granted, the foundations of the worlds' settings between the two series is pretty different and making them work is probably really hard... but if done right I think it could be EPIC.

Remember my recent chapter when I brought up that Touma and Yuuji wouldn't really get along :heh:

[Satehi]

Wouldn't one of the major problems with that being the whole Time stop thing? Touma will negate it :(

[Marcus H.]

Fuuzetsu is foreign and is a spell, so Touma can negate it. However, it doesn't bode well for anyone who ends up killed inside the Fuuzetsu before Touma's negation.

So let's just say that Touma will do more harm than good in the world of Shana.

[Chaos2Frozen]

It doesn't seem like Touma can negate field type magic, remember Angel Fall or that spell Kanzaki used to isolate everyone back in the first season?

I theorized that there should be a core or medium that supports those types of magic and that's what Touma can destroy.

[tsunade666]

Touma can still bring harmful effects on a field effect spell. Look at the ritual field spell to summon a portion of angel to heal index.

Field spell of Kanzaki involve runes right? that's what I remember from it and angel fall are angel class. That's no ordinary field spell at all.

Fuzetsu doesn't have the same principles as those 2.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Touma can still bring harmful effects on a field effect spell. Look at the ritual field spell to summon a portion of angel to heal index.

I wouldn't count that as a field spell, but at the same time we didn't see what happens if Touma was there.


Field spell of Kanzaki involve runes right? that's what I remember from it and angel fall are angel class. That's no ordinary field spell at all.

Fuzetsu doesn't have the same principles as those 2.

Doesn't matter, it still shows that Touma's hand doesn't have an immediate effect on those types of magic and that's something we can work with.

Usually for Field type spells, Imagine Breaker would protect Touma from the effects, but it wouldn't negate them.

[tsunade666]

huh

okay

then I want to see it. The crossover of toaruverse and shanaverse :D

[Master Assassin]

There has been a debate of how would Index get cross-overed into the oh-so-famed Nasuverse though.

[Marcus H.]

Touma versus Shiki Tohno, anyone? :uhoh:

[tsunade666]

I already see a doujin manga with Toaruverse and tsukihime/fate stay night verse.

I already saw Touma and Shiki fighting together but vs. I haven't seen it yet.

Though I already knew the answer.

Shiki would probably slice up Touma and Touma goes berserk mode just like Alcuerd (or what ever the spelling of that blond vampire) Shiki can't see the death on Touma and get owned.

[MrTerrorist]

It's Alucard. Dracula spelled backwards.

[Master Assassin]

I already see a doujin manga with Toaruverse and tsukihime/fate stay night verse.

I already saw Touma and Shiki fighting together but vs. I haven't seen it yet.

Though I already knew the answer.

Shiki would probably slice up Touma and Touma goes berserk mode just like Alcuerd (or what ever the spelling of that blond vampire) Shiki can't see the death on Touma and get owned.

It's Alucard. Dracula spelled backwards.

tsunade666 probably meant "Arcueid" instead.

Arcueid Brunestud.

(in before someone says "ARCADE BUMSTEAD!")

[tsunade666]

I don't know. But I meant the blond girl vampire in tsukihime. Though I think it's arcueid.

[giorno]

yes, it's arcueid

[MrTerrorist]

Oh. My apologizes for the mistake.

[outerelf]

ME! I want those bonus points!

The answer is Oniichan-Control Man that girl is Yandere. Not Yuno level Yandere, but pretty high on the list regardless.

*Ding Ding Ding* That's right, you're correct! She is indeed the one ;)

[Ashaman]

Yay! Bonus points for me. Fic for you guys! Oh,and I changed a little of chapter 4, but just a little.
Chap 4:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6520238/4/Delta_Force_Go
Chap 5:
The girls were beaten, while Touma and Aogami had sustained superficial wounds only. The one suffering the most damage was Tsuchimikado.

As soon as the battle was over, Miaka immediately began to badger him to let her have a look and began to treat his wounds as best she could. How was she to know that his Auto Regeneration was already working and that he’d be fine before the sun set?

Meanwhile, as Tsuchimikado happily got treatment from his lovable little sister, Aogami and Touma made their way to the Dorm Manager.

They didn’t even get half way there before a flood of identical Misaka’s surrounded Touma.

“Congratulations, Misaka 10032 makes sure to speak first.”

“No fair, I wanted to be first Misaka 12204 grumbles. Well done, Misaka offers for honest thoughts.”

“Umm, could you look that way? Misaka 19090 asks shyly.” So saying she pointed to Touma’s left.

He turned to face that way, wondering what she wanted him to look at when he felt soft warm lips on his cheeks.

With red cheeks, Touma looked back at the Misaka in front of him, who was lightly blushing.

“You were really amazing out there, Misaka 19090 happily expresses her awe.”

“What are you trying to pull?! Misaka 12204 screeches to show her anger.” So saying, she and five other Misaka Imouto pulled the girl away from Touma, who was in shock.

“Yeah! Misaka 10039 agrees.”

“Why did you do that? Misaka 15224 asks, intending to understand the reasoning behind your actions.”

The Misaka’s all continued to crowd around Misaka 19090.

This Misaka, who dieted and was displaying hints of shyness more and more often, blushingly explained; “I’d read it was one way to congratulate someone Misaka 19090 displays her findings.”

The Misaka’s exchanged glances, before turning to Touma as one. “Offering congratulations in this way is acceptable Misaka agrees,” most of the Misaka intoned, crowding around the boy for one purpose only.

However, before they could make another move, an arc of electricity caused them all to jump away.

The original stood there, her shoulder trembling as she pointed an accusing finger at Touma. “WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?!” Mikoto yelled, her face red in anger.

“Well, I-” Touma began, desperately trying to defend himself.

“Ah, Onee-sama can’t be honest, Misaka 10032 teasingly points out her observation. Most likely the Original wants to congratulate the saviour too Misaka suggests.”

“Well, we shouldn’t complain Misaka 15224 happily adds her comments.”

“All the better for us Misaka 12204 grins victoriously as she claims her prize.” So saying, that Misaka grabbed onto Touma’s arm and pressed herself close to him.

“Hey! Misaka 10032 protests. This Misaka is the one that is closest to him, Misaka 10032 points out in an angry tone.”

“Ha, yo-” Misaka was cut off as a scramble once again comensed, with the added complication of Misaka Mikoto adding in her own thunder as she tried to separate the group.

“HOLD IT!” Fukiyose appeared on the scene. She spoke with authority that caused the Misaka’s to listen, stopping them in their tracks. “If you want to offer your thoughts, get in line. One at a time, no more than 30 seconds for each person. If you want more time, you’ll have to line up from the back!”

Scrambling, the Misaka’s got formed a single file line. In the confusion, the Original Misaka was lost; the clones weren’t wearing their military goggles, and so the Sisters were identical.

However,

“You, you and you!” Fukiyose pointed to three of the clones in turn. “Back of the line; you’ve already spoken your piece once.”

The three opened their mouths as if to argue, but ended up closing their mouths with a snap at the look Fukiyose was giving them. Soon, they were nodding and rushed to the back.

Meanwhile, as Fukiyose maintained the carful balance of oestrogen around Kamijou, most of the rest of the class headed over to either Aogami or Tsuchimikado.

Aogami and the boys that surrounded him looked on at Touma’s group in jealousy. How dare he have so many cute girls all trying to give him on the cheek?! And he says he is unlucky? Pah!

There were a few girls in the group, and though they weren’t glaring on in jealousy, they were shaking their heads in distaste. They wanted to tell him how good a job he did too, but doing it now would be too much of a hassle what with all those little girls trying to play lovers with him.

“Um, excuse me,” a feminine voice shyly broke the tense atmosphere.

Aogami dragged his attention away from Touma and the line of cute girls literally lining up to catch his attention to the younger girl in front who had approached. It was Saten. Along with her was Uiharu, who was desperately trying to hide how intimidated she was surrounded by all these high school students.

Aogami smiled, something that caused Uiharu to shudder slightly. It was a creepy grin.

“Yes?” Aogami asked the longer haired of the two.

With a small blush on her face, Saten thrust forward her sign. “Could I please get your autograph!?” she quickly bowed.

Slightly taken aback, it took a moment for Aogami to process what he’d been asked. But when he did, he jumped up into the air with a “Whoop!”

With one arm, Aogami hugged Saten close to him and shouted “HA! Take this Kami-yan, you’re not the only one with female fans!” The blue haired boy was practically crying tears of happiness; on the other hand, Saten was blushing brightly at having herself pressed against the firm chest of a buff older guy.

When she finally managed to pry loose from his hold, she caught a glimpse of how happy he was as he signed his name. She didn’t have the heart to tell him she was going to get the other two member’s of the Delta Force’s signature as well.

Something of this must have shown on her face though, as one of the girls leaned down to whisper in her ear.

“Don’t worry about it,” she reassured her. “Aogami is a big boy; he’s just happy that someone appreciates his efforts. Ahh,” the girl sighed. “Neither he nor Tsuchimikado are bad guys, but they both have weird tastes, so the girls sometimes ignore them. It’s a shame really, considering how hot they are.”

Looking at the three members of the Delta Force, Saten and Uiharu couldn’t help but unconsciously nod their heads in agreement, causing the surrounding girls to giggle.

Noticing this, another girl grinned mischievously. “We can get you pictures if you want? Double price for pics when they they’re serious though.”

Shyly, Saten bought three pictures of each; one normal, one shirtless and the last serious, plus a picture of them all together. Well, she bought duplicates of Touma; she had a feeling Misaka would want them.

Strangely, Uiharu didn’t say anything at her buying candid photos of half naked boys; she looked vaguely interested in buying one herself, causing Saten to grin.

“Um, what are they really like?” Uiharu forced herself to ask after a moment. Now she was curious; in the majority of pictures, looked like they were causing trouble.

“Well, Aogami is just what you see; an otaku who sometimes mixes 2-D and 3-D logic. Apart from that though, he’s an idiot of the highest order. Tsuchimikado is known as the Sis-con Sergeant because of his feelings for his little step sister. No blood relation. He is also really mysterious; disappearing at odd moments, constantly on the phone to strange people. We really don’t understand him at all.”

“And the third?” Saten asked.

“Kamijou is the jewel of our class. All the bad things happen to him, like he is sucking up all the bad luck in the area, leaving the rest of us with only good luck. Poor guy,” the girl shook her head. “That’s why we girls try our best to help him how ever we can.”

“Yeah,” one of the boys snorted. “He gets all the girls’ attention. Really unlucky.”

“Don’t mind him,” the suddenly flustered girl tried to wave off that guy’s words.

Saten and Uiharu sweatdropped.

“Kamijou is always willing to help though.”

“It sounds like Kamijou-san is the only good one of the group.”

“Don’t say that,” one of the guys scolded Uiharu.

“Yeah,” another girl agreed. “The Delta Force is lively and exciting; they make every class fun. And when they get serious…. Well, let’s just say even Level 5’s would be afraid.”


They were being loaded up on stretchers; all the girls that had been hurt were being taken to the hospital for treatment.

Beside Motaki’s stretcher, the Dorm Manager stood.

Motaki was confused. Her mind and heart were shaken; how were they beaten by a bunch of Level 0’s?

Her thoughts must have shown in her eyes, as the Dorm Manager began to speak. “You were arrogant. You expected them to be easy pickings because of your abilities, and so didn’t prepare accordingly. You know, don’t you? They could have won without using their abilities, if they wanted. You forced them to when you threatened that girl. You will be punished for that, by the way. Using such under handed tactics is disgraceful.”

“But,” Motaki weakly tried to protest, but a single shake of the Dorm Managers head silenced her.

“You should’ve given up once they were up close; after that, you had no chance of winning.

“How were you so sure we would lose?” Motaki couldn’t help but ask.

The woman’s glasses glinted. “Because I just knew.”


“Are you okay, Aniki?” Tsuchimikado Maika asked her elder brother as she finished applying the bandages.

“All thanks to you!” he enthused.

“Why?” she suddenly asked.

“Because I won’t let anyone hurt you,” he told her somberly.

“Idiot,” Maika replied, whacking him on the head. “You get your favourite tonight.”

“YES!”


A blushing Touma didn’t know what to do or say as what felt like a dozen Misaka’s continued to try and give him congratulatory kisses and offer to take him out for lunch or dinner to celebrate his victory.

Then the next girl, another Misaka, stepped in front of him, electricity arcing off of her freely as she delivered a series of sharp pokes to his chest. “Don’t you dare do anything with my little sisters, you hear me?”

“Ah,” Touma stumbled back, “Mikoto?” he asked. There were too many Misakas here, so it was easier to use her given name.

“In fact, I’ll be keeping an eye on you, just to make sure you don’t even think of anything.”

“Eh? Isn’t that just sticking to me for a whole day?” he asked.

“Eh?” Mikoto blushed. “Well, I guess that’s t-t-true.” Mikoto nodded her head as though to herself. “Well, while I’m watching you, I may as well treat you to something for a job well done.”

“Erm, thanks?” Touma said uncertainly.

“And don’t worry about those girls. I’ll give her and the others a good talking to, so they never bother us again.”

“Er, us?”

“Wha, what are you talking about?” Mikoto’s face turned even redder than before as she realised what she’d just said. “Shut up!” she let out a spark, but before she could do anything that big breasted girl had grabbed her shoulder and pulled her away.

“Next!” Fukiyose shouted as she directed Mikoto to the back of the line.


‘76, 75, 74, 73, 72, 71,’ a certain white haired albino counted backwards. He’d tried doing so from ten, but that hadn’t helped at all. He was trying to calm himself down, but with the way people kept sneaking glances and snickering at him, he was in a killing mood.

He couldn’t leave though. Last Order was hugging the fucking hero around the legs, asking him if he enjoyed their dance routine.

Until then, Accelerator could hold in his anger, but when the hero’s eyes flickered over to him for that brief second, the number 1 Esper lost it.

Wasting no time, he flipped on his switch and charged. “FUCKING HERO! DON’T YOU DARE LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT! I’LL KILL YOU!!!!”

And so began a chase for Touma’s life, in which Touma yelled many a Fuko da!

And where was Kuroko during all this? On the floor, unconscious, a small stream of blood coming out of her nose and drool escaping from the corner of her lips, which even looked like she’d been frothing from the mouth.

It seems she woke up just in time, and at just the right angle, to witness an upskirt view of all the Misaka’s when they kicked upwards.

Poor girl could have died of happiness right there and then.


And the girls punishment? Well, let’s just say it involved Maid costumes, tea, every fetish outfit Aogami could think up of, and lots of hugging.

[tsunade666]

very good fanfic ashaman though I would love to see the punishment of the girls.

[Master Assassin]

Wow, I can't help but say... getting a Wear Maid Costume punishment is... somewhat so kind of them. :D

[Flere821]

*clap clap clap* Pretty good fic Ashaman :) Though come to think of it... did we EVER see a shirtless Touma in the anime yet? >.> Cause from memory I don't think that has happened, even in Angel Fall...

*shrug* whatever, minor details of no importance I suppose.

[Asuras]

No one minds pointing out flaws in a long story summary, right? Cuz' I'm about to post the idea behind my future fanfiction.

[outerelf]

I don't mind, so long as you don't post it iin one paragraph. Then I might have to take issue

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Pointing out flaws is what I do. Don't worry, I'm completely fine with that. :heh:

[Asuras]

Alright, here it goes:

Centered around an OC (:rolleyes:) that originated from America. He is an esper (unwillingly) participating in a government program designed to enhance esper abilities at a dangerous rate. Akin to the Level Upper incident. However, it performs differently.

A drug temporarily enhances the users powers up to 3 power levels for about half a day. During this time, users take on a drastically different personality (usually aggresive) but will listen to specific people. After the effect wears off, the user doesn't remember anything during the 'high.'

The OC himself is a strange case. His level boosts 4 levels, and hius body is dependent on the drug. He was taken from his parents, and his memory was altered into thinking that one of the agents, a woman, is his real mother.

All of this was developed in fear of AC's growing esper population. The US felt threatened.

The OC is the first to be implimented into AC, where he thinks he is there for training. Every night, his 'mother' puts him under the drugs influence, and he takes out higher-leveled espers one by one.

But he never remembers anything. A specially designed suit for the US espers are unable to be detected on radar, and contain non-stick, non-trail materials to prevent tracking.

He goes to Touma's school, due to his Level 1 status, and befriends Touma. On the first day, he is sent to a testing ground to detirmine his skill level, along with Saten, who is there for extra-curriculumn in a seperate building nearby. (Evidently, I'm trying out for an OC Saten pairing.)

Eventually, Kuroko is attacked by psuedo-OC. She escapes, but soon understands the power he posseses. She searches up with Uiharu on Ggravity-manipulators. She see's the OC, but dismisses him due to his Level 1 status.

THEN, Misaka herself is attacked. The fight is nearly even, but Kuroko comes in to help. The OC is overencumbered, but help arrives for him as well. Another US esper arrives to take on Kuroko seperately.

As they battle above (Kuroko winning), Misaka and OC fight in the alleyway below. Misaka is losing, and before she is defeated, Touma happens to be by and lets loose an unblockable attack upon the OC, knockiing his helmet off. The psuedo OC knows of its normal personality and life, and mocks Touma, before taking off. They understand who the culprit is.

As the drug wears off during the OC's return home, he arrives at the apartement to see his home in flames. What really happened was the OC's home was immediatly invaded by Anti-Skills after the fight before. His mother (to prevent capture and infomration gathering) detonated the room, killing herself and the soldiers within.

Confused and outright scared, the OC flees and looks for solace. He runs to the place where he tested, and contemplates. There, the other US esper that fought Kuroko speaks to him. She herself has been told the entire mission (she doesnt have anything aginst it, while the OC, was known to be against it, so no one told him the plan) but confuses the OC, who doesnt understand anything.

Just as hope seems lost in a street, an entire assembly of the US epsers swoops in and takes him away.

Gotta go, that's what I've written so far.

[outerelf]

Alright, here it goes:

Centered around an OC (:rolleyes:) that originated from America. He is an esper (unwillingly) participating in a government program designed to enhance esper abilities at a dangerous rate. Akin to the Level Upper incident. However, it performs differently.

A drug temporarily enhances the users powers up to 3 power levels for about half a day. During this time, users take on a drastically different personality (usually aggresive) but will listen to specific people. After the effect wears off, the user doesn't remember anything during the 'high.'

The OC himself is a strange case. His level boosts 4 levels, and hius body is dependent on the drug. He was taken from his parents, and his memory was altered into thinking that one of the agents, a woman, is his real mother.

All of this was developed in fear of AC's growing esper population. The US felt threatened.

The OC is the first to be implimented into AC, where he thinks he is there for training. Every night, his 'mother' puts him under the drugs influence, and he takes out higher-leveled espers one by one.

But he never remembers anything. A specially designed suit for the US espers are unable to be detected on radar, and contain non-stick, non-trail materials to prevent tracking.

First problem: Academy City technology is 20 years ahead of the rest of the world. Thus the suit designed probably wouldn't actually work. And most of the tracking is done via video camera- so unless it can disrupt images...
I'd have to say a better bet is that it lets out a high-frequency wave that interferes with wireless communications thus disrupting any equipment. Sort of like an EMP.
Second: Academy City is only taking native Japanese Youths so far. There hasn't been a single foreign born (except for gemstones) that's gotten in. But I suppose that can be ignored.

He goes to Touma's school, due to his Level 1 status, and befriends Touma. On the first day, he is sent to a testing ground to detirmine his skill level, along with Saten, who is there for extra-curriculumn in a seperate building nearby. (Evidently, I'm trying out for an OC Saten pairing.)

Eventually, Kuroko is attacked by psuedo-OC. She escapes, but soon understands the power he posseses. She searches up with Uiharu on Ggravity-manipulators. She see's the OC, but dismisses him due to his Level 1 status.

THEN, Misaka herself is attacked. The fight is nearly even, but Kuroko comes in to help. The OC is overencumbered, but help arrives for him as well. Another US esper arrives to take on Kuroko seperately.

As they battle above (Kuroko winning), Misaka and OC fight in the alleyway below. Misaka is losing, and before she is defeated, Touma happens to be by and lets loose an unblockable attack upon the OC, knockiing his helmet off. The psuedo OC knows of its normal personality and life, and mocks Touma, before taking off. They understand who the culprit is.

Wait, wait, wait. So when someone is high on the drugs, it creates a different personality that retains the memories of when it was high before?

So basically what you're looking at it a Multiple Personality Disorder where one is level four, and one is level one. The level four personality is a more violent one, and the level one has no idea that the level four exists.

Plausible...

As the drug wears off during the OC's return home, he arrives at the apartement to see his home in flames. What really happened was the OC's home was immediatly invaded by Anti-Skills after the fight before. His mother (to prevent capture and infomration gathering) detonated the room, killing herself and the soldiers within.

Confused and outright scared, the OC flees and looks for solace. He runs to the place where he tested, and contemplates. There, the other US esper that fought Kuroko speaks to him. She herself has been told the entire mission (she doesn't have anything aginst it, while the OC, was known to be against it, so no one told him the plan) but confuses the OC, who doesn't understand anything.

Just as hope seems lost in a street, an entire assembly of the US epsers swoops in and takes him away.

Gotta go, that's what I've written so far.

He runs to the place he was tested? Isn't that in the US? That doesn't make much sense...

Overall, I'd have to say its a solid plot with a few things here and there.

[Asuras]

Yes. That seems like a problem. Maybe, international information sharing allows the US to have similar tech. With the AC level upper, it was supposedly permanent, but the US version wears off. EMP pulse sounds about right.

Yes, that's what the drug does.

No, he goes to the Academy City testing place. Where try determine his level.

That's why he sneaks into AC.

[Chaos2Frozen]

lol despite what people think though, I don't recall anyone actually sneaking into Academy City undetected.


P.S - minor nip-picky, but it's 30 years advanced, not 20 :)

But it really make alot of difference, 30 years of technology.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Centered around an OC (:rolleyes:) that originated from America. He is an esper (unwillingly) participating in a government program designed to enhance esper abilities at a dangerous rate. Akin to the Level Upper incident. However, it performs differently.

A drug temporarily enhances the users powers up to 3 power levels for about half a day. During this time, users take on a drastically different personality (usually aggresive) but will listen to specific people. After the effect wears off, the user doesn't remember anything during the 'high.'

Sounds interesting, but a bit sketchy. So that would mean if a Level 4 uses the drug, they would automatically rise up to a Level 7?

That doesn't make sense. Levels don't work that way. A Level 6 is stated to have a power that is on the level of God, what exactly would a Level 7 be? Also, it seems suspicious that Gakuen Toshi hasn't picked up on this drug. I suppose it's possible the US found it first, but still...

Also, there should be drastic side effects and specific limitations on who can use it, like the Crystallized Esper Essence has. Otherwise, it's too convenient.

The OC himself is a strange case. His level boosts 4 levels, and his body is dependent on the drug. He was taken from his parents, and his memory was altered into thinking that one of the agents, a woman, is his real mother.

All of this was developed in fear of AC's growing esper population. The US felt threatened.

The OC is the first to be implimented into AC, where he thinks he is there for training. Every night, his 'mother' puts him under the drugs influence, and he takes out higher-leveled espers one by one.

But he never remembers anything. A specially designed suit for the US espers are unable to be detected on radar, and contain non-stick, non-trail materials to prevent tracking.


Plausible, but he never questions why he doesn't remember anything? Also, like others have said, 30 years of advanced technology makes a huge difference.

He goes to Touma's school, due to his Level 1 status, and befriends Touma. On the first day, he is sent to a testing ground to determine his skill level, along with Saten, who is there for extra-curriculum in a seperate building nearby. (Evidently, I'm trying out for an OC Saten pairing.)

Eventually, Kuroko is attacked by pseudo-OC. She escapes, but soon understands the power he posseses. She searches up with Uiharu on Ggravity-manipulators. She see's the OC, but dismisses him due to his Level 1 status.

THEN, Misaka herself is attacked. The fight is nearly even, but Kuroko comes in to help. The OC is overencumbered, but help arrives for him as well. Another US esper arrives to take on Kuroko seperately.

As they battle above (Kuroko winning), Misaka and OC fight in the alleyway below. Misaka is losing, and before she is defeated, Touma happens to be by and lets loose an unblockable attack upon the OC, knockiing his helmet off. The psuedo OC knows of its normal personality and life, and mocks Touma, before taking off. They understand who the culprit is.

As the drug wears off during the OC's return home, he arrives at the apartement to see his home in flames. What really happened was the OC's home was immediatly invaded by Anti-Skills after the fight before. His mother (to prevent capture and infomration gathering) detonated the room, killing herself and the soldiers within.

Confused and outright scared, the OC flees and looks for solace. He runs to the place where he tested, and contemplates. There, the other US esper that fought Kuroko speaks to him. She herself has been told the entire mission (she doesnt have anything aginst it, while the OC, was known to be against it, so no one told him the plan) but confuses the OC, who doesnt understand anything.

Just as hope seems lost in a street, an entire assembly of the US epsers swoops in and takes him away.

Wait, how come the US ESPers managed to invade Gakuen Toshi? The city is strict on whoever can come in since it doesn't want its information leaked out, so how can an entire essembly of ESPers be there? It's not easy to get in or out of AC, and the US being 30 years behind in technology would make it kind of impossible to try and pass without being detected.

Sounds interesting, with a solid plot. Be wary of making your OC too powerful and fix some things here and there.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Sounds interesting, but a bit sketchy. So that would mean if a Level 4 uses the drug, they would automatically rise up to a Level 7?

That doesn't make sense. Levels don't work that way. A Level 6 is stated to have a power that is on the level of God, what exactly would a Level 7 be? Also, it seems suspicious that Gakuen Toshi hasn't picked up on this drug. I suppose it's possible the US found it first, but still...

Also, there should be drastic side effects and specific limitations on who can use it, like the Crystallized Esper Essence has. Otherwise, it's too convenient.

It could easy be limited to a certain level, after all there's only so much a human body can take. Perhaps it only works for the low levels? And at higher levels it does nothing? There's no way any other country could even come close to the power levels of Academy City's Espers.

I want to suggest something though, how about making the US espers fundamentally different from Academy City's AIM espers? We know the reason why Crowley went down that path, but just like the gemstones, power users come in all shapes and sizes. Maybe the American Espers wouldn't be AIM base?

[kaizerknight01]

Ok ( deep breath ) after brain storming for a bit i decided to abandon the earlier OC' and just make another. still involves AC Tree Diagram project. These are one of OC That will meet and interact with Touma


Eiji age 17 a level 0 ability by touching or carrying reduces the said weight of an object by a certain amount named "Anti Load" passive skill ( The standard it can negate 50% and to the extreme it can remove 100%( trigger by anger/rage) of the weight as long he's physically near the object. ( No effect on biological matter.)

Attends the same school as Kamijou Touma but in a different classroom , offend skip going to school, because of the odd jobs he's in (Working student)

Personalty: Cautiously Optimistic, a bit laid back, but dependable.

Daisuke 16 Level 0 Skill "Extra Space" an active skill enable a bag or container to multiply is capacity usually times 2 but can reach as high 10 times its capacity.

Sumire 17 Level 0 " Lyrical Interference" active skill her song can enhance a person abilities/ has this moral boosting effect ...


Still brain storming .........

[Chaos2Frozen]

Eiji age 17 a level 0 ability by touching or carrying reduces the said weight of an object by a certain amount named "Anti Load" passive skill ( The standard it can negate 50% and to the extreme it can remove 100%( trigger by anger/rage) of the weight as long he's physically near the object. ( No effect on biological matter.)

You know, I wanted to use an ability like that before :heh: after watching bakemonogatari...

Logically there's only two ways to change the weight of something- Either you change it's mass, or you alter gravitational acceleration.

I would suggest the latter... It'll be more acceptable in my opinion.




Daisuke 16 Level 0 Skill "Extra Space" an active skill enable a bag or container to multiply is capacity usually times 2 but can reach as high 10 times its capacity.



How do you intend to do this?

[Marcus H.]

Hammerspace as an esper ability seems farfetched though. Remember that there are certain "canon conventions" in making an ability, which includes a certain control of certain parts of the laws of physics. [Let's ignore Kakine this time. He's a special case and can be excluded because of his Dark Matter control.]

> First of all, there should be no Level 5 or higher espers who are natives of Japan. There should only be seven Level 5s, and higher level espers are either outside Japan or unknown, if not non-existent.

> I've just mentioned that laws and/or concepts of physics can be tweaked by espers, like the concept of inertia (abused by Equal Speed), vectors (Accelerator in a sense) and thermodynamics (broken by Uiharu Kazari). In my fanfiction series, I have an esper who controls pressure - and eventually forces. Space expansion appears to be a magical, not a scientific concept, but change of mass is permissible, as long as it is not a perpetual effect.

> Control of a certain element is permitted, as proved by Misaka Mikoto (iron) and Kinuhata Saiai (nitrogen).

> There are no such proofs to back this up, but there are currently no abilities in canon which augment a person's natural processes, like abilities which give superhuman strength or improves vision. Espers can only interact with objects outside of the human body, with the exception of Accelerator, which only uses an application of his ability.

> By the way, Gemstones can break any of these rules, because of the lack of information on how Gemstones are common with each other, and their nature as having inborn abilities.

[Master Assassin]

*clap clap clap* Pretty good fic Ashaman :) Though come to think of it... did we EVER see a shirtless Touma in the anime yet? >.> Cause from memory I don't think that has happened, even in Angel Fall...

*shrug* whatever, minor details of no importance I suppose.

Someone must have installed a spying camera, capturing pictures of Touma bathing... :uhoh:

... which reminds me of YET another 2ch fanfic I read a few days back.


Title - [Mikoto] "I can't hold back anymore!"
JP Title if anyone Japanese literate wants to try reading, copy and paste this in your search (even Google will do): 実琴「もう我慢できないわ！」

Mikoto decides she can't hold back her "love" (you'll know what I mean in quotes as I describe this) for Touma and gets Kuroko to install spy cameras everywhere in Touma's house.

She spends her time 24/7 on the monitor (which is located in their dorm in Tokiwadai) fawning over Touma on the screen... in various ways (don't ask) which includes stealing Touma's undies. And whenever Index says something she goes yandere, going angry in the room (as to why the Dorm Supervisor doesn't give a damn about it was because she thought she was imagining things too much that she decided to take a medical leave).

A stressed Kuroko got broken when Mikoto broke the former's chair in one of her fits of getting angry over Index deredere'ing with Touma in one of her "Touma Time" (spying, d'uh), because the chair has so much sentimental value in it that when she got a new chair, she even gave a chair a name and got obsessed with it... poor Kuroko.

Back to Mikoto, she later decides to have Kuroko teleport her to Touma's house while Index was away for a night (for some reason, she's staying over at Komoe-sensei's house), much to the shock of Touma, and with her arrival, she almost got Touma suspicious to how she even knew he lost some of his belonging (undies, urk :uhoh: ) but managed to cover it.

After a happy time on the bed (oh well, it isn't what I thought, and definitely not what we're thinking, just sleeping next to each other, facing each other) she decides to stop her spying activities, destroys all spying equipment (much to the shock of Kuroko due to how much was spent on buying those) and confesses to Touma instead. Happy end for the two...

... while as for Kuroko, she's now broken enough to consider that chair she gave a nickname as a pet/human friend and went to introduce it to Uiharu and Saten, much to their... uh, unspoken horror.

... This is the reason you guys here writing in Fanfiction.Net are so much of a precious gem to me. At least, this is not as much as a mindr__e of yet another 2ch fanfic I rambled about here a few days back... and which blew my mind after reading it. As I said, even Gainax Endings are put to shame with that.

[Chaos2Frozen]

> There are no such proofs to back this up, but there are currently no abilities in canon which augment a person's natural processes, like abilities which give superhuman strength or improves vision. Espers can only interact with objects outside of the human body, with the exception of Accelerator, which only uses an application of his ability.

X-ray vision dude...

[Marcus H.]

Except clairvoyance, and all "famous" psychic abilities. Forgot to add that, lol.

[MrTerrorist]

Someone must have installed a spying camera, capturing pictures of Touma bathing... :uhoh:

... which reminds me of YET another 2ch fanfic I read a few days back.

-snip-

Whoa....:twitch:

2ch users are so.....disturbing :heh:

What's next, Mugino going yandere for Touma and kills anyone in her way?:heh:

[Master Assassin]

Whoa....:twitch:

2ch users are so.....disturbing :heh:

What's next, Mugino going yandere for Touma and kills anyone in her way?:heh:

That'll have to be answered by a certain 4koma fanartist who threw Hamadzura out of the circle, and as a result Touma somehow got into there - and became ITEM's most beloved... chair.

:heh:

... I'm still daring anyone to ask me about that mindr__ing 2ch fanfic I lamented about. Any takers? :rolleyes:

Believe me, Mugino going yandere for Touma and killing anyone in her way to Touma makes much more sense if I were to make an average comparison of stuff I've seen so far.

[kaizerknight01]

You know, I wanted to use an ability like that before :heh: after watching bakemonogatari...

Logically there's only two ways to change the weight of something- Either you change it's mass, or you alter gravitational acceleration.

I would suggest the latter... It'll be more acceptable in my opinion.





How do you intend to do this?


The "Extra Space" skill expands the capacity of a container with out expanding its size and mass , it expand the space inside the container or bag. got this idea form one the science channels on quantum mechanics , theory of relativity about space and time.

the analogy is the normal capacity of a back pack is 5 large size books, with "Extra Space" you can double the amount ... there are limitation for its an active skill.... the OC Daisuke does get tired if he use it constantly . for him over using it can be lethal for him

[Chaos2Frozen]

The "Extra Space" skill expands the capacity of a container with out expanding its size and mass , it expand the space inside the container or bag. got this idea form one the science channels on quantum mechanics , theory of relativity about space and time.

the analogy is the normal capacity of a back pack is 5 large size books, with "Extra Space" you can double the amount ... there are limitation for its an active skill.... the OC Daisuke does get tired if he use it constantly . for him over using it can be lethal for him

I recall that... I also recall they said that to expand or squeeze space would require the energy and mass of a star :heh:

[tsunade666]

I love that 4koma when Mugino is using Touma as a chair :D

I think the fanfic from 2ch are pretty normal. Well I usually go their to snoop around and everyone keeps getting derailed from original conversation and into nonsense but back into it again. Still normal -_-

Mugino blast away anything which are bigger than "hers" by a certain 4koma

[Asuras]

Sounds interesting, but a bit sketchy. So that would mean if a Level 4 uses the drug, they would automatically rise up to a Level 7?

That doesn't make sense. Levels don't work that way. A Level 6 is stated to have a power that is on the level of God, what exactly would a Level 7 be? Also, it seems suspicious that Gakuen Toshi hasn't picked up on this drug. I suppose it's possible the US found it first, but still...

Also, there should be drastic side effects and specific limitations on who can use it, like the Crystallized Esper Essence has. Otherwise, it's too convenient.

The drug is limited to Level 5. And even then, it isn't as strong as most level 5's.

There is no bastion safe from the desirable eyes of its invaders.

There are side effects. Dependency. It must be taken every day lest one fall victim to across-the-board mental and organ failure.

Plausible, but he never questions why he doesn't remember anything? Also, like others have said, 30 years of advanced technology makes a huge difference.

The mind is a strange thing; evident to anyone who's even seen the series. Memory non-existence doesn't mean that the brain necessarily feels something is missing.

Wait, how come the US ESPers managed to invade Gakuen Toshi? The city is strict on whoever can come in since it doesn't want its information leaked out, so how can an entire essembly of ESPers be there? It's not easy to get in or out of AC, and the US being 30 years behind in technology would make it kind of impossible to try and pass without being detected.

Sounds interesting, with a solid plot. Be wary of making your OC too powerful and fix some things here and there.

After his house explodes, I'm sure you realize that without the drug, they are very weak.

It could easy be limited to a certain level, after all there's only so much a human body can take. Perhaps it only works for the low levels? And at higher levels it does nothing? There's no way any other country could even come close to the power levels of Academy City's Espers.

I want to suggest something though, how about making the US espers fundamentally different from Academy City's AIM espers? We know the reason why Crowley went down that path, but just like the gemstones, power users come in all shapes and sizes. Maybe the American Espers wouldn't be AIM base?

That sounds positively right. I'll have to brainstorm something to explain it with. Which might take awhile.

[kaizerknight01]

I recall that... I also recall they said that to expand or squeeze space would require the energy and mass of a star :heh:


I think in the theory of quantum mechanics there sub atomic particles that can act weird/strange that occur naturally in nature like 4 Dimesion effect, dark energy/dark matter , nuetrino that can pass though normal matter almost unchanged

the premise of Extra Space that some how taps in or finds a loop hole(s) in normal known physics

anyway is a fanfic ...... no need to strain our brain in the process :heh::heh:

[Flere821]

Second: Academy City is only taking native Japanese Youths so far. There hasn't been a single foreign born (except for gemstones) that's gotten in. But I suppose that can be ignored.
Minor nit-picking: foreign students have been mentioned before, some in Tokiwadai. Tokiwadai was stated to accept foreign students in Vol8 (or 5?), and once almost sparked a international incident for refusing a member of a royal family (dunno which country though, but chances are it's not UK seeing the three princesses there are all over 24) entrance into their school.

[Wilfriback]

All the princesses above 24, Vilian being the younger... how old is William? 25? I think he is at least below 30.

[Asuras]

Minor nit-picking: foreign students have been mentioned before, some in Tokiwadai. Tokiwadai was stated to accept foreign students in Vol8 (or 5?), and once almost sparked a international incident for refusing a member of a royal family (dunno which country though, but chances are it's not UK seeing the three princesses there are all over 24) entrance into their school.

Well then, I guess they don't need to sneak in.

[outerelf]

Hmmm... I wonder if this story could work in a midevil setting...

*has an image of Knight!Touma, Princess!Index, Ninja!Tsuchimikado* Probably not seeming how science is as big as the magic, but I suppose if you were to make the science people gemstone espers, or magicians... :heh:

I don't know what's wrong with me today. I can't seem to calm down.

[Ashaman]

Okay, so, when I finished Delta Force, I added an omake (the song below.) I was intending to be creepy, due to the list form chapter four, but it seems to have failed. What do you guys think?

You better watch out
You better not cry
Better not doubt
I'm telling you why
Accelerator is coming to town
He's making a list
And checking it twice;
Gonna find out Who's naughty and nice
Accelerator is coming to town
He sees you when you're sleeping
He knows when you're awake
He knows if you've been bad or good
So be good for your own sake!
O! You better watch out!
You better not cry
Better not doubt
I'm telling you why
Accelerator is coming to town
Accelerator is coming to town Kyukyahahahahah

On a related note, now I want to see Santa!Accelerator.

Either in Fic (Fluff overload is expected) or Pic form.

So, Yuki, is it possible you can provide me with the latter at least?

You do have quite the collection.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Well, not exactly a santa, but how about a badass reindeer? ;)

http://i1043.photobucket.com/albums/b439/onewaypockyroad/acceleratorlastorder293.jpg

[Wilfriback]

Accelerudolf: Lets deliver those gifs Last Santa!!!

[Master Assassin]

... Oh wow. Today's find: a fanfic from 2ch featuring ITEM as Touma's... adopted sisters.

So the ITEM "siblings"... apparently Touya adopted them (strangely, Child Errors!? How did the writer even make that up!?), and Mugino is the eldest followed by Rikou, then Touma as the eldest son (third in line), followed by Frenda and Saiai.

All four of the sisters are bro-con for Touma, but as the Touma we knew, Touma only wants a normal girlfriend, not his "siblings."

Shiage? Where did he go? Dunno, but I guess he only appeared once in the fic, as a friend of Saiai's (and tried to calm down Touma who was unhappy with his presence at home by calling him Onii-chan :uhoh: ). Index? Ask me nothing, I knew nothing :p

... In the meanwhile... poor Mikoto (in the fic).

Touma, you sure spoil your "sisters" too much.

I find this rather... sweet.

[blitz1/2]

... Oh wow. Today's find: a fanfic from 2ch featuring ITEM as Touma's... adopted sisters.

So the ITEM "siblings"... apparently Touya adopted them (strangely, Child Errors!? How did the writer even make that up!?), and Mugino is the eldest followed by Rikou, then Touma as the eldest son (third in line), followed by Frenda and Saiai.

All four of the sisters are bro-con for Touma, but as the Touma we knew, Touma only wants a normal girlfriend, not his "siblings."

Shiage? Where did he go? Dunno, but I guess he only appeared once in the fic, as a friend of Saiai's (and tried to calm down Touma who was unhappy with his presence at home by calling him Onii-chan :uhoh: ). Index? Ask me nothing, I knew nothing :p

... In the meanwhile... poor Mikoto (in the fic).


Touma, you sure spoil your "sisters" too much.

I find this rather... sweet.

We'll need a translator for this.

[Master Assassin]

It's hard to discern which part covers the actual story and what wasn't. Seeing the place of its origin is 2ch, there are some others (most likely not the author of the story) butting in making it hard to tell what is the author's actual story and what isn't.

[MrTerrorist]

I'm currently doing 3 fanfics and want your opinion about it.

I finally got idea about doing a fanfic about Touka, Touma's female gender bend counterpart.

After investigating a strange explosion at a unknown lab, Komoe and Yomikawa finds an injured girl who claims to known them before passing out. Later, Komoe and Yomikawa calls Touma to the hospital to identify the girl who after interviewing her calls herself Touka Kamijou. At first the teachers think she's related to Touma but both Touma and Touka don't know each other. To make it weirder, Touka is confused why Komoe and Yomikawa don't recognize her and yet she knows everything about the both of them including the rooftop incident, the Sherry Cromwell incident and Index. Heaven Canceler arrives and reveals to Touma and the teachers that Touka DNA is an almost matches with Touma's which leaves everyone confuse. But after interviewing her, HC realizes that Touka is a female Touma from an alternative dimension and believes the lab explosion that happen in both their worlds cause an inter-dimensional portal to open and send her to their world. With the person in charge of that lab mysteriously disappeared, Touka is stuck in their world. So for the time being, they all agree to a cover story that Touka is Touma's long lost twin sister and will be transferring to Touma's high school while HC and Yomikawa tries to find the one who cause the portal and help Touka return to her world.

The fanfic will be both adventure and comedy with the adventure part focusing on Touma and Touka working together to try finding the Professor responsible for the portal and facing adversaries against them. The comedy however will be about an awkward Touka's trying to fit in Touma's world where her friends and the people she know are Touma's while still pretending to be his "twin sister". Another funny part will be the interaction between the Kamjou's and learn how different both of them treat their friends in their world (e.g. While Touma does nothing when Index wants food or bites him, Touka has no calms of berating or even hitting Index!) Also while both Kamijou's share the same bad luck, Touka has a much worse luck in her Unwanted Harem as unlike Touma who does nothing to his Harem, Touka "took the initiative" with some of the girls in her harem which lead to some unfortunate jealousy and multiple-timing! To make it more awkward, she may have went "further" with one of girls in her world and feels awkward meeting that girl's counterpart in Touma's world.

This fanfic is based on episode 6 & 7 in the 2nd season and the subtle Les Yay i saw between Kuroko and Awaki. You know what i'm talking about ;).

The premise of the fanfic is still the same just like ep 6 & 7 but the difference being Awaki and Kuroko have meet before years ago as Awaki was Kuroko’s senpai and was her coach in teaching Kuroko how to use her powers (This was before Awaki's accident that made her fear her powers). Kuroko admired Awaki and called her "My beloved Onee-sama" and Awaki adored Kuroko and called her "My Sweet Imouto". (You can guess where this is going.) However their training stops as Awaki was forced to leave Kuroko for some reason (Which later chapters will reveal) which left Kuroko devastated and wondering why she did that. The two meet again during the Remnant arc where both are surprise to learn they are enemies for the Remnant. Both of them are conflicted as not only do they still have feelings for each other but they’re still loyal to their respective organizations (Kuroko's Judgment, Awaki's Syndicate).

This fic will be a little dark, angsty and violent too.


Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

PS: I would love to see the fanfic where Team ITEM are Touma's adopted sisters translated.

[Ashaman]

I'm currently doing 3 fanfics and want your opinion about it.

I finally got idea about doing a fanfic about Touka, Touma's female gender bend counterpart.

After investigating a strange explosion at a unknown lab, Komoe and Yomikawa finds an injured girl who claims to known them before passing out. Later, Komoe and Yomikawa calls Touma to the hospital to identify the girl who after interviewing her calls herself Touka Kamijou. At first the teachers think she's related to Touma but both Touma and Touka don't know each other. To make it weirder, Touka is confused why Komoe and Yomikawa don't recognize her and yet she knows everything about the both of them including the rooftop incident, the Sherry Cromwell incident and Index. Heaven Canceler arrives and reveals to Touma and the teachers that Touka DNA is an almost matches with Touma's which leaves everyone confuse. But after interviewing her, HC realizes that Touka is a female Touma from an alternative dimension and believes the lab explosion that happen in both their worlds cause an inter-dimensional portal to open and send her to their world. With the person in charge of that lab mysteriously disappeared, Touka is stuck in their world. So for the time being, they all agree to a cover story that Touka is Touma's long lost twin sister and will be transferring to Touma's high school while HC and Yomikawa tries to find the one who cause the portal and help Touka return to her world.

The fanfic will be both adventure and comedy with the adventure part focusing on Touma and Touka working together to try finding the Professor responsible for the portal and facing adversaries against them. The comedy however will be about an awkward Touka's trying to fit in Touma's world where her friends and the people she know are Touma's while still pretending to be his "twin sister". Another funny part will be the interaction between the Kamjou's and learn how different both of them treat their friends in their world (e.g. While Touma does nothing when Index wants food or bites him, Touka has no calms of berating or even hitting Index!) Also while both Kamijou's share the same bad luck, Touka has a much worse luck in her Unwanted Harem as unlike Touma who does nothing to his Harem, Touka "took the initiative" with some of the girls in her harem which lead to some unfortunate jealousy and multiple-timing! To make it more awkward, she may have went "further" with one of girls in her world and feels awkward meeting that girl's counterpart in Touma's world.



Sounds interesting, though the idea of Touka being into girls and more... aggressive is a bit iffy. Still sounds pretty good though. I'd read it.

One nit pick. Why would Komoe be investigating? Just easier to say Yomikawa was inves, and later calls Komoe when the girl says Komoe is her teacher.




This fanfic is based on episode 6 & 7 in the 2nd season and the subtle Les Yay i saw between Kuroko and Awaki. You know what i'm talking about ;).

The premise of the fanfic is still the same just like ep 6 & 7 but the difference being Awaki and Kuroko have meet before years ago as Awaki was Kuroko’s senpai and was her coach in teaching Kuroko how to use her powers (This was before Awaki's accident that made her fear her powers). Kuroko admired Awaki and called her "My beloved Onee-sama" and Awaki adored Kuroko and called her "My Sweet Imouto". (You can guess where this is going.) However their training stops as Awaki was forced to leave Kuroko for some reason (Which later chapters will reveal) which left Kuroko devastated and wondering why she did that. The two meet again during the Remnant arc where both are surprise to learn they are enemies for the Remnant. Both of them are conflicted as not only do they still have feelings for each other but they’re still loyal to their respective organizations (Kuroko's Judgment, Awaki's Syndicate).

This fic will be a little dark, angsty and violent too.



This does sound very interesting, and would love to see it done



Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

PS: I would love to see the fanfic where Team ITEM are Touma's adopted sisters translated.

Sounds like a comedy, though I'm trying to figure out who the Level 5's would be. I get the feeling that the most obvious would be wrong...

And I want to see that ITEM one too... Though the comment about Misaka being unlucky makes me cringe. Unlucky how? Not getting Touma (fine) or being brutally beaten by ITEM for trying to get close to their brother (not fine)

PS. Are you a boy or a girl? With the whole MrTerrorist, I'd assumed boy, but then I caught sight of you mentioning your Yaoi vision and am now confused. Or were you only joking and making it sound as though you like Yoai, or are you a guy who likes it or are you a girl who has a very misleading name... Argh, I'm just curious. Sorry if I offended you.

[Master Assassin]

All right, it's in the

Character A: <blahblahblah>
Character B: <blahblahblah>

format. Well, as I said, since it's from 2ch, it's hard to tell which parts are actually part of the story and what isn't. Some posters simply jumped in... (and frankly, it's quite tiring seeing nobody contributing to the discussion, chipping in just to say "<character name here> kawaii!" etc :uhoh: ) So I'm "filtering" these posts at my own interpretation of what's part of the story.

... anyway. This is quite a rough translation, so excuse me for some translation mistakes. Also pardon me for the frequent T/L notes I keep inserting there.

Touma: Look, you're going to late if you don't wake up you know.
Mugino: Mm... just one more year...
Touma: Hello...

Mugino: Su... (T/N: some sort of mumbling after waking up. Don't know how to work on this)

Touma: ... Aging face... *bori* (T/N: Not sure what is this sound effect)

*PEW*

Touma: Whoa!

Mugino: Toouumaaa...
Touma: G-good morning Onee-sama...

Mugino: What did you say just now stupid little brotheerrr...???
Touma: I-I'M SOOORRRYYYY!!!!

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*PEW PEW*

Touma: Uwah! *insert Imagine Breaker SFX here*

Mugino: Cheh, Imagine Breaker isn't it...

Touma: What's with that disappointed look!? If it were not for this Imagine Breaker I'd be dead now you know!?

Mugino: No, you won't. (T/N: Not sure if 「死ねよ。」 is she implying Touma to go die or saying that he won't? "Ne" as in the verbal short for "Nai"?)

Touma: Say what!? (T/N: I can't think of any other word to be a better replacement for 「言い切られた！？」)

Mugino: Move that right hand aside. I'm going to land a clean hit next~

Touma: Ah, h-hey! It's already this late! Nee-chan you're late you know!?

Mugino: Eh? Uwa, you're right! Preparation, preparation!

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Mugino: *munch munch om nom nom nom*

Touma: Look, I'm going to comb your hair to save time so please slow down while you're eating! *smoothly*

Mugino: Thanks for the meal! I'm going now!

Touma: Nee-chan, the bento, the bento!

Mugino: What's inside!?

Touma: Perfectly done salmon bento! (T/N: Can someone come up with a better translation for 「ちゃんとシャケ弁にしたから！」?)

Mugino: Thanks Touma! See ya! *thud*

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Touma: Whew, dear me.

Touma: But as I can see now, who would've thought that (she) is the 4th-ranked Level 5 Esper, "Meltdowner"?

Touma: Oh well, as if anyone would've thought I'm the younger brother of the 4th anyway.

Touma: Well then, I guess I better get ready to go to school too.

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(In school)

Komoe-sensei: Mugino-chan, you have more supplementary lessons you know~? (T/N: Probably what she calls Touma, I'm confused myself, because later the fic uses the surname Kamijou instead, so Mugino becomes "Kamijou Shizuri" instead)

Touma: ...Fukou da.

Komoe-sensei: Really, you really don't appear to be the younger brother of a level 5 don't you?

Touma: Please don't compare me with my elder sister.

Aogami: How nice, Muginon is having supplementary lessons personally from Komoe-sensei. I'm so jealous~

Touma: You're here too aren't you. And please stop with that "Muginon." It's somewhat scary.

Tsuchimikado: Your name's "Mugino Touma" so "Muginon" sounds about right nya~

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(After school)

Mikoto: You, wait!

Touma: You again, Biribiri!?

Mikoto: Don't call me "Biribiri!" Let's have a duel today as well!

Touma: I already said it's useless. You won't win against me.

Mikoto: Shut up! Take this!

*bzzzt* *bzzzt*

Touma: Come on!

*bzzzt* *Imagine Breaker SFX*

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Mikoto: Ku...

Touma: I'm living together with my Level 5 sister you know. I'm already used to getting struck by such strong powers like this.

Mikoto: Your sister is the fourth right? I'm the third, you know?

Touma: Such electricity isn't comparable to Nee-chan's Meltdowner.

Mikoto: Didn't I tell you, even though I'm of a higher rank?

Touma: Anyways I'm going home. Nee-chan is going to kill me if I don't prepare dinner when I get back.

Mikoto: What a pitiful younger brother. Such a pushover... (T/N: Not sure what would be a good English counterpart for 「尻に敷かれるなんて」)

Touma: Don't say things like that when you don't even know how scary Onee-chan is! If I don't defend against her beam-bombings I'll definitely blow holes on my body, and get my arm and legs torn off! I'm desperate too!

Mikoto: Whoa...
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<something like of an intermission>

Mugino: Ah? Today's salmon bento is a bit different today. Eh~?

Frenda: That one you brought from home?

Mugino: Yeah. Even though Touma made it this morning, it tastes a bit weird...

Takitsubo: The sesame seeds doesn't seem to be mixed well with the fish?

Mugino: Really? Takitsubo?

Takitsubo: Usually it's well mixed...

Mugino: Huh... did Touma forget to...

Mugino: I. SWEAR. I'M. GOING. TO. KILL. YOU~

Hamadzura: Wait, don't snap that easily Mugino! You don't say you have no mercy even for your little brother do you!?
(The writer stops here)
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(Starting from this point, it seems another writer took over)

Mugino: Toouumaaaa...

Touma: Yes... what is it...?

Mugino: Shoulder massage...

Touma: Ha?

Mugino: I said, shoulder massage!! I'm going to kill you!

Touma: Okay, okay I get it, but if you keep saying that no guy will want to approach you, you know?

Mugino: ... But if it's Touma it's okay... *mumble*

Touma: Hm? Did you just say something?

Mugino: Whatever, just do it already!!

I'll just leave this here for the time being. Anyone who wants to read the original can go here. (http://sea-mew.jp/nox/modules/webarc/2ch/ss/1276060121-0.html)

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

Is it a stalker for each Level 5? Because if there's Mikoto in it, Kuroko and Etzali both fit the stalker roles.

Sounds interesting.

[blitz1/2]

All right, it's in the



format. Well, as I said, since it's from 2ch, it's hard to tell which parts are actually part of the story and what isn't. Some posters simply jumped in... (and frankly, it's quite tiring seeing nobody contributing to the discussion, chipping in just to say "<character name here> kawaii!" etc :uhoh: ) So I'm "filtering" these posts at my own interpretation of what's part of the story.

... anyway. This is quite a rough translation, so excuse me for some translation mistakes. Also pardon me for the frequent T/L notes I keep inserting there.

Touma: Look, you're going to late if you don't wake up you know.
Mugino: Mm... just one more year...
Touma: Hello...

Mugino: Su... (T/N: some sort of mumbling after waking up. Don't know how to work on this)

Touma: ... Aging face... *bori* (T/N: Not sure what is this sound effect)

*PEW*

Touma: Whoa!

Mugino: Toouumaaa...
Touma: G-good morning Onee-sama...

Mugino: What did you say just now stupid little brotheerrr...???
Touma: I-I'M SOOORRRYYYY!!!!

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*PEW PEW*

Touma: Uwah! *insert Imagine Breaker SFX here*

Mugino: Cheh, Imagine Breaker isn't it...

Touma: What's with that disappointed look!? If it were not for this Imagine Breaker I'd be dead now you know!?

Mugino: No, you won't. (T/N: Not sure if 「死ねよ。」 is she implying Touma to go die or saying that he won't? "Ne" as in the verbal short for "Nai"?)

Touma: Say what!? (T/N: I can't think of any other word to be a better replacement for 「言い切られた！？」)

Mugino: Move that right hand aside. I'm going to land a clean hit next~

Touma: Ah, h-hey! It's already this late! Nee-chan you're late you know!?

Mugino: Eh? Uwa, you're right! Preparation, preparation!

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Mugino: *munch munch om nom nom nom*

Touma: Look, I'm going to comb your hair to save time so please slow down while you're eating! *smoothly*

Mugino: Thanks for the meal! I'm going now!

Touma: Nee-chan, the bento, the bento!

Mugino: What's inside!?

Touma: Perfectly done salmon bento! (T/N: Can someone come up with a better translation for 「ちゃんとシャケ弁にしたから！」?)

Mugino: Thanks Touma! See ya! *thud*

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Touma: Whew, dear me.

Touma: But as I can see now, who would've thought that (she) is the 4th-ranked Level 5 Esper, "Meltdowner"?

Touma: Oh well, as if anyone would've thought I'm the younger brother of the 4th anyway.

Touma: Well then, I guess I better get ready to go to school too.

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(In school)

Komoe-sensei: Mugino-chan, you have more supplementary lessons you know~? (T/N: Probably what she calls Touma, I'm confused myself, because later the fic uses the surname Kamijou instead, so Mugino becomes "Kamijou Shizuri" instead)

Touma: ...Fukou da.

Komoe-sensei: Really, you really don't appear to be the younger brother of a level 5 don't you?

Touma: Please don't compare me with my elder sister.

Aogami: How nice, Muginon is having supplementary lessons personally from Komoe-sensei. I'm so jealous~

Touma: You're here too aren't you. And please stop with that "Muginon." It's somewhat scary.

Tsuchimikado: Your name's "Mugino Touma" so "Muginon" sounds about right nya~

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(After school)

Mikoto: You, wait!

Touma: You again, Biribiri!?

Mikoto: Don't call me "Biribiri!" Let's have a duel today as well!

Touma: I already said it's useless. You won't win against me.

Mikoto: Shut up! Take this!

*bzzzt* *bzzzt*

Touma: Come on!

*bzzzt* *Imagine Breaker SFX*

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Mikoto: Ku...

Touma: I'm living together with my Level 5 sister you know. I'm already used to getting struck by such strong powers like this.

Mikoto: Your sister is the fourth right? I'm the third, you know?

Touma: Such electricity isn't comparable to Nee-chan's Meltdowner.

Mikoto: Didn't I tell you, even though I'm of a higher rank?

Touma: Anyways I'm going home. Nee-chan is going to kill me if I don't prepare dinner when I get back.

Mikoto: What a pitiful younger brother. Such a pushover... (T/N: Not sure what would be a good English counterpart for 「尻に敷かれるなんて」)

Touma: Don't say things like that when you don't even know how scary Onee-chan is! If I don't defend against her beam-bombings I'll definitely blow holes on my body, and get my arm and legs torn off! I'm desperate too!

Mikoto: Whoa...
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<something like of an intermission>

Mugino: Ah? Today's salmon bento is a bit different today. Eh~?

Frenda: That one you brought from home?

Mugino: Yeah. Even though Touma made it this morning, it tastes a bit weird...

Takitsubo: The sesame seeds doesn't seem to be mixed well with the fish?

Mugino: Really? Takitsubo?

Takitsubo: Usually it's well mixed...

Mugino: Huh... did Touma forget to...

Mugino: I. SWEAR. I'M. GOING. TO. KILL. YOU~

Hamadzura: Wait, don't snap that easily Mugino! You don't say you have no mercy even for your little brother do you!?
(The writer stops here)
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(Starting from this point, it seems another writer took over)

Mugino: Toouumaaaa...

Touma: Yes... what is it...?

Mugino: Shoulder massage...

Touma: Ha?

Mugino: I said, shoulder massage!! I'm going to kill you!

Touma: Okay, okay I get it, but if you keep saying that no guy will want to approach you, you know?

Mugino: ... But if it's Touma it's okay... *mumble*

Touma: Hm? Did you just say something?

Mugino: Whatever, just do it already!!

I'll just leave this here for the time being. Anyone who wants to read the original can go here. (http://sea-mew.jp/nox/modules/webarc/2ch/ss/1276060121-0.html)

Poor Touma, but if he goes gar against his sis, then Mugino better start praying.

[Master Assassin]

Poor Touma, but if he goes gar against his sis, then Mugino better start praying.

Like I said... Touma spoils his "sisters" way too much in this fic :heh:

He'll block her attacks, but he won't return her a hit.

... Oh snap, this fic is WINCEST indeed.

[MrTerrorist]

Is it a stalker for each Level 5? Because if there's Mikoto in it, Kuroko and Etzali both fit the stalker roles.

Sounds interesting.

Yes. I give you a hint who's the other stalker so you might guess who the stalker is stalking.

Here's the hint: Blonde.

[Master Assassin]

Yes. I give you a hint who's the other stalker so you might guess who the stalker is stalking.

Here's the hint: Blonde.

... *cough cough*



Said Level 5 ---> Stalker

Mikoto ---> Kuroko

Mugino ---> Fre Nda Frenda

:rolleyes:

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Would Mikoto and Mugino get along? (assuming stalker is Frenda) They did have a pretty intense fight with each other before...

[Master Assassin]

2nd page coming up.

... Geh, if there's one thing I don't like about Toaruverse, it'll be the fact that each of the characters have their way of speaking which includes some verbal tics I can't translate very well.

That and this fic... I just don't know what ties in the story anymore. It feels like some others are just adding to the story on their own. Sooo not-in-sync.

Touma: I'm back~

Touma: Hm? Men's shoes...?

Touma: Hey, Saiai...

Saiai: Ah, Onii-chan... welcome back.

Hamadzura: Urk, Kamijo--no, onii-chan! No, no, Touma-oniichan! Pardon me for the intrusion, Touma-oniichan!

Touma: :twitch:

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Touma: ... Get out.

Saiai: Onii-chan...

Hamadzura: Touma-oniichan...

Touma: I DON'T WANT TO HEAR "ONII-CHAN" FROM YOU! DO YOU WANT TO BE SENT FLYING AGAIN, HAMADZURAAAAA!!!! (T/N: He sounds like Accelerator in this manner of speech, what's with the mix of Katakana into his sentences...)

Hamadzura: At least please allow me to be with Saiai, Touma-oniichan...

Touma: ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING, YOU BASTARD!!!!

Saiai: Calm down, Onii-chan. Other people are going to hear you, you know?

Touma: THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS!!!!

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Mugino: I'm back.

Touma: Welcome back Nee-chan... you're late aren't you?

Mugino: Yeah, well, today's quite the busy day indeed...

Touma: More underground jobs?

Mugino: Yeah.

Touma: Nee-chan, please don't get injured anymore.

Mugino: ...Sorry, Touma. I made you worried...

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(Probably someone else wrote this, doesn't seem to be connected to the previous ones. Probably the previous one isn't even connected to the first either)

Touma: Well then, see ya~

Himegami: Fufu.

Mugino: ....


Touma: I'm back--

Mugino: Tooouumaaa~~

Touma: Uwa! What is it, onee-chan!?

Mugino: That black-haired girl, is she your girlfriend...?

Touma: !!! You saw!? No, no! Just a friend!

Mugino: Ah, I see... *hugs Touma*

Touma: Wa-- Nee-chan?

Mugino: Touma, you're mi---my brother aren't you...

Touma: ??? What, isn't it obvious...?

Mugino: (My Touma... I won't give him to anyone else...)

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(Dinner)

Mugino: Ah, that was tasty. Thanks for the meal--

Touma: Nee-chan, please bring the plates over here--

Mugino: What a bother, I don't want to do it.

Touma: Really now... can't you just do this simple common housework...

Mugino: You know, Touma, who was the reason that you can live in this house, and who was the reason you can enjoy such livelihood?

Touma: ... My Level 5 Onee-sama's scholarship, yes...?

Mugino: Yes, yes. So with that said...?

Touma: ... I'll just do the dishes then...

Mugino: Please do~

Touma: ... Damn it.

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Touma: Oh yeah! But I do have a complaint after all!

Mugino: And what would that be~?

Touma: It's thanks to me Nee-chan can enjoy dinner! Cleaning, washing duties too, it'll be troublesome without me! At least show some concern about me!

Mugino: Well then, if Touma were to get out and loiter around in the streets...?

Touma: ... The usual would be fine. >_>


Mugino: ... But certainly if it's not because of Touma, everyday life over here would be difficult...

Touma: Eh?

Mugino: As always, thank you, Touma.

Touma: Nee-chan, you're always the same... that's unfair you know.

Mugino: Fufu <3

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[kaizerknight01]

was listing to this bgm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNEcBbzX2m4&NR=1

Facing a seraphim like being, a certain spiky haired student name Kamijou Touma, his body is covered in wounds, his right arm completely covered blood and its flesh shows sign of dying .

Touma with all of his strength and will struggles to stand on his two feet, and a thought ran into his mind “What the heck I was fighting or? What is cause that I am willing to risk my life for ?” He remembers the faces Misaka Mikoto , Misaka Imouto , Index and all the friend and allies that he met in his so called second life.

As the seraphim opens all of its wings, focused a large beam of energy towards Touma, something like a invisible force field blocks it and finally negates it . The angle like being was stunned by this development.

Touma “ I pity you …… Even with such power you’re beings without a cause or freewill...” Mass of energy from up into his right hand covering the whole length of his right arm
Touma yells “ Till this hand grabs hold of victory , there no way you can stop me!!” begin to dash forward.

Then Index shouts at Touma .
Index “ Touma !!! Where my food ? I am starving !!! Wake up !!!!!”

With this Kamijou Touma panicky awakes up “index?? What ?? What the I thought I was fighting the final boss ….
Index with an angry glare “ Touma want me to bite you on your head and shatter your illusions ?”
Touma “FU KOU DA !!!!!!”

[Flere821]

I've recently got into the 'My little sister can't be this cute' novel series, and I have a question - has there been anyone trying to write a fanfic that put sis-con sargeant Motoharu into that setting? I for one am interested in just what kind of snarking Kyousuke can give to Motoharu :p

Or maybe even Maika dragging Kirino down the forbidden path... *slaps self in face before really going off the deep end*

[all_flying]

I've make a fanfic already. Still unfinished tho, looking a way to connect between the story. Anyone interested, please enjoy http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452408/1/Project_03_Space_and_Vortex

And please review it. I take any critiques, thought, suggestion, or excoriation (by any means of course) :D

[SuzushinaYuriko]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452999/1/Days_of_Darkness

Finally got around to reading this. Nice job, Chaos, it's pretty interesting.

[Chaos2Frozen]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452999/1/Days_of_Darkness

Finally got around to reading this. Nice job, Chaos, it's pretty interesting.

Thanks :) I'm thinking of making Index the main character for the next chapter.

[Master Assassin]

Oh great. To think this did not happen yet... I'm so laughing over myself for this.


A fanfic of Touma/Laura (http://blog.livedoor.jp/toarutirudorenn/archives/51542533.html)

Somehow Laura ended up being in Academy City (not stated for what reason, although Aleister knows about her presence but decides to let it slide) and encounters Touma on his way to the usual convenience store (Index currently at Komoe-sensei's). The two met there and Touma helps Laura pay for her items (as she can't use her currency there), and since Laura already found out who Touma is, demands that she visits his house much to Touma's surprise.

While at Touma's dorm, Laura commented at how small the house is, before Touma later remarks her weird Japanese. She later snapped and went to charge at Tsuchimikado next door after hearing him from Touma's room, much to the surprise of Tsuchimikado. Touma went to stop her (and invokes his IB because Laura was about to release some sort of magical energy in her anger), after much trying to hold her back she was accidentally thrown onto the bed by Touma (in a position you'd know of... so to speak)... and at this time Laura's heart went fluttering over that incident. (Badump badump, goes Laura.)

Index got back and knocked on the door, and all at a bad timing (Touma accidentally grabbed Laura's chest while in that compromising position), which prompted Tsuchimikado's intervention for Laura to escape from the verandah. From her escape, Laura expressed a desire to see him again. Of course, Aleister got wind of this too.

Later, back in England Laura makes a request to secretly send Touma to Necessarius's HQ to Aleister. Aleister, seeing Laura hugging a poorly handmade doll of Touma, understands and agrees to it.

To cut the story short, Laura awaits Touma's arrival excitedly (much to the shock of Stiyl) and tries to woo him (date etc you know the drill) during his three-day stay there, but fails. Let's just say that she failed to woo him whatsoever (much to her tsundere-ish disappointment), and that's where the story ends.

The ending was kind of abrupt, I wished the author could do more but meh. Not going to push it too much. At least it was a fun read :D

[Chaos2Frozen]

I've recently got into the 'My little sister can't be this cute' novel series, and I have a question - has there been anyone trying to write a fanfic that put sis-con sargeant Motoharu into that setting? I for one am interested in just what kind of snarking Kyousuke can give to Motoharu :p

Or maybe even Maika dragging Kirino down the forbidden path... *slaps self in face before really going off the deep end*

I had a thought once to put both Kyousuke and Tsuchimikado and a bunch of other characters in a skit for [Days of Darkness] where they attend this 'help session' for siscons, you know like for the alcholics when they go-

"My name is Joe."

"Hi Joe."

"I'm an Alcholic"

-And they carry on from there only this one is for siscons.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

That's a great idea. DO IT! :D

[Flere821]

Lol, I sincerely doubt Kyousuke will go to one of those meetings of his own will... good idea nonetheless :D

Though just as a heads up:

He does like Ayase (well, the appearance anyway - he finally knew better to try and go for a yandere) who's the same age as Kirino, and he almost always goes for long, black-haired characters first in the H-games Kirino gives him.
Not to mention as of the latest LN volume of OreImo (Vol7) He's supposedly a couple now with Kuroneko.

Hopefully you can incorporate some of those into your skit - it's a shame really that Maika doesn't have long hair though, just think of how Motoharu will react to Kyousuke's actions then xD

[outerelf]

I was recently reading a fanfic of a good friend of mine, randomfics (our writing style is really similar for some reason) when she went and made a new fanfic, that even I don't quite get what she's saying in it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6554565/1/Broken_Hand_Broken_Body

Anyone else willing to go in for the gold?

[Zakoo]

Maybe a fanfiction of after volume 22 ?

Hmm, Touma in heaven who dreams of Tsuchimikado ( Wh-what ? ), saying that he will take a nap ( DAMN YOU Ryner , you influencated our favorite hero ) and will come back after .

[blitz1/2]

Just finished the latest chapter for Collapse of Eastern Fantasy.

@Flere:
It's going to end soon?!! *gets depressed*, so long one of my fav. FFs to come...

But otherwise, I felt that it was shorter compared to your other chapters. Also, while the chapter was in excellent in terms of suspense and Accelerator kicking many people's asses lol. I found that Touma sudden leave lacked some closure. Knowing his character, he would have thanked the heroines for the last time and end it with a cool one liner, something about fantasy, illusions, accomplishing dreams or etc. I'll write down something if I can have a phrase in mind.

Although the epilogue has me wondering about what possible outcomes could result right now? I can foresee Yukari just do a massive gap dump of the touhou characters for lulz and dump them into Academy City (omake maybe/possible sequel?), (AIM fields restrict the girls' powers) and angering the two members of the Delta force, considering how many girls he had "captured" elsewhere. Add that to the interaction of Touma's other harem members, and witness the possible destruction...

Oh well, after my stupid exams, I'll see if I'll do some more oneshots about the touhou/index. Although, the first one I had in mind would be similar to the Aya Shameimaru interviews, so I guess she would interview Touma? xD

[SuzushinaYuriko]

The finale for Collapse of Eastern Fantasy... I have mixed feelings about it. Were the long hair and robes really necessary? How do nanomachines allow Aleister to take over Accel? Did Accel have any say in the matter or try to resist at all? I would have liked them to explain to Touma what actually went on or to give Touma and Accel a chance to interact since they rarely do in the series.

But yeah, Yukari finally shows what she's capable of. Waiting eagerly for epilogue now.

[Flere821]

The finale for Collapse of Eastern Fantasy... I have mixed feelings about it. Were the long hair and robes really necessary? How do nanomachines allow Aleister to take over Accel? Did Accel have any say in the matter or try to resist at all? I would have liked them to explain to Touma what actually went on or to give Touma and Accel a chance to interact since they rarely do in the series.

But yeah, Yukari finally shows what she's capable of. Waiting eagerly for epilogue now.
The long hair and robes are basically just 'rule of cool' fluff, sorry about that ^.^; It just seemed weird for Accelerator to just come into Gensokyo otherwise, and without that kind of H4X Accel would just be curbstomped by Flandre maybe.

And the nano-machines are basically information gathering stuff Aleister is planning to use to scout out enemy territory, and has nothing to do with Accelerator's possession. I've read somewhere once the RL Aleister had something to do with deamonlogy, and thought it might be good to turn Accel into a demon (Didn't have the heart for Accel to get punched for no reason by Touma in the fic).

As for what's going to happen with Accel, I'll chuck a part where Motoharu debrief the rest of GROUP for why they got sent outside for this job in the epilogue. And after that I'll finally have peace of mind to go translate Vol19 for more Accel goodness :)

[Chaos2Frozen]

Lol, I sincerely doubt Kyousuke will go to one of those meetings of his own will... good idea nonetheless :D


Of course it won't be willing, where's the fun in 'willing'?

but not yet, first thing's first- Christmas.

[ellifeedn]

Are there any crossover fanfics between the To Aru series and Neon Genesis Evangelion? I don't know where to look or ask.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Are there any crossover fanfics between the To Aru series and Neon Genesis Evangelion? I don't know where to look or ask.

As far as I know, nothing yet from the 'official' channels...

But then again some people have found some rather 'exotic' works elsewhere...

[Master Assassin]

As far as I know, nothing yet from the 'official' channels...

But then again some people have found some rather 'exotic' works elsewhere...

2ch. :eyespin:

I can summarize some though, but translations... I'd rather give up on it. :heh:

*ahem*Looks like Touma/Kuroko fics are quite on the rise*cough*

There has been a few crossovers done, like Haruhi/Toaru and there's even... *coughcough*Doraemon/Toaru*cough* :uhoh:

[Endscape]

Hey, are there any good Touma/Kaori fics out there?

[Master Assassin]

Hey, are there any good Touma/Kaori fics out there?

There is, but not in English as far as I can remember. :rolleyes:

[Kaiba]

Messing around with the plans for a story, so I can't really figure this concept out with Accelerator - would he be capable of blocking Lancer's Gae Bolg?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Messing around with the plans for a story, so I can't really figure this concept out with Accelerator - would he be capable of blocking Lancer's Gae Bolg?

Base on my weak understanding of Fate/Stay Night, despite it being a magic move, the actual attack itself is something physical right?

[Flere821]

Messing around with the plans for a story, so I can't really figure this concept out with Accelerator - would he be capable of blocking Lancer's Gae Bolg?

I think Gae Bolg, as a Noble Phantasm and therefore magic, is probably something that can get past 'Reflect' like most magic. Accel's ability as of Vol20 can distort magic but can't reflect them. As of Vol22 Accel can 'block' magic (i.e. Fiamma's blast that almost destroyed Eurasia by going White-winged angel mode), but reflect (and by extension manipulation of) is probably out of the question.

[Chaos2Frozen]

I think Gae Bolg, as a Noble Phantasm and therefore magic, is probably something that can get past 'Reflect' like most magic. Accel's ability as of Vol20 can distort magic but can't reflect them. As of Vol22 Accel can 'block' magic (i.e. Fiamma's blast that almost destroyed Eurasia by going White-winged angel mode), but reflect (and by extension manipulation of) is probably out of the question.

My theory is that at some level, magic still have some factors that is measurable. Aside from the obvious elemental spells, even if a glowing feather hits you the effects can be seen in the physical world, a pink glowing ball explodes it still pushes air and makes a sound.

So my opinion is, even being stabbed by a colourful spear is something that happens in the physical world.

But only a portion of it, that's why Accelerator could not completely control them.

[Kaiba]

Well, thanks for the responses, but I gave up and chose a completely different task.

I'm working on a fic that's frankly focused more on Academy City itself as opposed to the To Aru characters themselves, as well as slightly altering certain arcs and seeing what happens. Needless to say, the prologue's short because it's a prologue.





The moon sky is beautiful.

It is a clear night, not a cloud in the sky, as I look up on it on the school roof with Aya. It’s late at night, and we’re not supposed to be here, but we know how to pick the locks, and the door to the roof is never open. It’s a great view of the city, and for our last weekend at this college before we look for job, I just want to be together with her.

It’s not like it should be misunderstood. We’re just friends, and there’s never been any interest between us. She’s helped me on various things, and I’ve always helped her. That’s all. But we’ll be going on to our separate pursuits. And for once in our long friendship, I can’t understand what she’s thinking.

“Why are you going to help them?”

Her brilliant smile responds as she gets off the bench, the dress twirling in the wind.

“Isn’t it great, Shogo? The idea of this Academy City? It’ll be a place of learning, where all humans work together for a better cause. A place with no nationalities, no discrimination, a fresh clean slate where all people can be equal. All so we can work together on building a greater future.”

“I don’t like it. I can’t like it. Even ignoring that we’re giving up territory to a board that doesn’t answer to us, and having people learn these abilities? Nothing good can come from it.”

Laughing, she turns around and kneels down, holding my hands.

“We have to start from somewhere. Besides, if you want to be practical, working at this city will be the best opportunity for a physicist like myself. To study the development of abilities, as humans move one step towards challenging the power of God, it’s so exciting.”

More like one step closer towards the Tower of Babel, in my opinion.

She laughs in response, but I still can’t understand her at all. The idea of making a new city, this Academy City for the development of abilities cannot end well. Giving individuals that much power will end in destruction and unhappiness for the greater good. Science is wonderful, but our consciences dictate us from exploring certain paths. But for this one night, while we’ve always been open with another, I can’t bring myself to fight her. Not before we part for a long time.

“You worry too much, Shogo. You need to smile more. I believe in humans. And I know you do too. If you didn’t, you wouldn’t talk so much about being a superhero. About saving us all. So cheer up. Besides, I know if things go wrong, you’ll save us all. Me included.”

She knows how I think. What I want. As a little kid, I dreamed of being a superhero, of beating up the bad guys who would make Aya or anyone else cry. I wanted to see a world where everyone can be happy, and I still do. But while Aya may believe it, I don’t think this Academy City is the best way to do something like this, regardless of how many people will be working together.

Aya bends down, and we embrace. She smells good. It reminds me of lilies, of when we were kids and she took me through fields of grass and we believed that everyone around us was a decent person within their hearts. As she lets go, she smiles one last time and slips down the door, to prepare for the graduation speech she’s making tomorrow.


And when the day came, I couldn’t save her.


Three years after Academy City was launched, the Skill-Out groups took a major research building hostage. They demanded greater rights, an end to discrimination in jobs that didn’t require the use of abilities, but which Level 3s and 4s would receive because they were special. The new leader of Anti-Skill wanted to make a big impression in front of the cameras. He made a huge proclamation of not negotiating with the terrorists, and then stormed the building. A building which Skill-Out had rigged with explosives as a last-ditch measure.


The building collapsed as a result. 2500 people were killed. And I watched the disaster from the headquarters as the building collapsed and Aya died. All her dreams of a future where all men were truly equal died from those whom demanded greater equality. The chief was fired and there were some negotiations with the gangs, but nothing came of it. 2500 people were killed. No one was saved. And nothing was gained from the sacrifices.


That was seventeen years ago.


I'll admit, I'm new to this business, so reviews would be nice.

[Endscape]

I think Gae Bolg, as a Noble Phantasm and therefore magic, is probably something that can get past 'Reflect' like most magic. Accel's ability as of Vol20 can distort magic but can't reflect them. As of Vol22 Accel can 'block' magic (i.e. Fiamma's blast that almost destroyed Eurasia by going White-winged angel mode), but reflect (and by extension manipulation of) is probably out of the question.


Ahh, no. Accel could block Gae Bolg. The abiltity of the spear in it's anti-unit mode is that it reverses causality so that the cause of the lance being thrust switches with the efect of the lance hitting the heart. This means that when Lancer activates gae Bolg, it's already in the enemy's heart and the thrust is simply a formality. However, it's still a physical attack and Reflection can block it. Nasu himself said that one of the ways of blocking Gae Bolg is to use a shield that makes it impossible for Gae Bolg to hit in the first place.

There is, but not in English as far as I can remember.

Can you summarize a good one for me?

[Wilfriback]

Didn't read the fic about CoEF and don't know much of Touhou but I found a pic that can be used(?) on the fic.
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2087/9303604.png

There is another one about Sakuya and Touma on a different style.

[tsunade666]

remelia's moeness just increase in another whole level of extra stage lunatic level. Inspired by flere's fanfic..... to bad no more further stories about that. I like the cross over of touhou and tamni.

[Flere821]

There is another one about Sakuya and Touma on a different style.
... Can you post a link? I'm interested now :)

And wow, I'm starting to think that anything Touhou related will get fanart, even fanfics about it... and I wasn't expecting anything more than Blitz's scribbles and that other one pic where Yukari is with Touma (and before anyone asks, I didn't save that one =/).


On another note, after reading Vol22 I did have an idea of making Yukari the one that saves Touma from the Star of Bethlehem as a explanation of how he went missing, but I have no more fodder for plot after that ^.^;

[blitz1/2]

Didn't read the fic about CoEF and don't know much of Touhou but I found a pic that can be used(?) on the fic.
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2087/9303604.png

There is another one about Sakuya and Touma on a different style.

actually, that is a fanart used for a nicovideo vid about Touma visiting the Scarlet mansion. I THINK it's kind of like a VN format.

@Flere: Well those scribbles are just going to last until I am getting a Tablet(?) and a few books on photoshop xD. Have u seen my sketch for Komoe yet?
Do you have a plan on doing a sequel, or are you ending the whole thing with the epilogue?

@tsunade: We could use some charisma break. lol xD

[Chaos2Frozen]

Erm... Anybody here good at describing clothes :heh: ? I sort of need some help for a particular part of outfit :heh: :uhoh:

[Flere821]

@Flere: Well those scribbles are just going to last until I am getting a Tablet(?) and a few books on photoshop xD. Have u seen my sketch for Komoe yet?
Do you have a plan on doing a sequel, or are you ending the whole thing with the epilogue?

I'm planning on ending the whole thing with the epilogue, but maybe leave a slight 'sequel hook' just in case I want to write a sequel when the whole Index series is over.

And yes, I've seen your sketch for Komoe.

[Zakoo]

Hi guys, my imagination is a bit at loss si I would like your help.

Let's say you have the power Ars Magna ( the same as the alchemist ) and you fight Accelerator. how would you fight him ( and kill him if possible ) ?

However there's some conditions :

First his power is enclenched, that's a one vs one duel.

Second, you can't kill him by saying "Die" just like Aurreolus did for Himegami ( because you hate him a loooot and you want to make him suffer a lot ).

I don't ask the the literraly sentance like " You freaking albino, be attacked by a multi directional attack" ( That was a joke ! ) but just the general ideas.

Thanks for your cooperation.

[outerelf]

Hi guys, my imagination is a bit at loss si I would like your help.

Let's say you have the power Ars Magna ( the same as the alchemist ) and you fight Accelerator. how would you fight him ( and kill him if possible ) ?

However there's some conditions :

First his power is enclenched, that's a one vs one duel.

Second, you can't kill him by saying "Die" just like Aurreolus did for Himegami ( because you hate him a loooot and you want to make him suffer a lot ).

I don't ask the the literraly sentance like " You freaking albino, be attacked by a multi directional attack" ( That was a joke ! ) but just the general ideas.

Thanks for your cooperation.

Well, just like with Aurrelous, you can ask for a pistol and start shooting bits off him. Or you can go for the 'Fly into the air and be de-skin'ed.' like with what happened to Stiyl.

Accelerator can't re-direct magic. He can negate it (kind of) by volume 22, but even that is iffy at the best. So... it goes as far as your imagination can take it.

[Chaos2Frozen]

I would think... That we should First analysis how Ars Magna works in the first place. Which means digging through the second volume for all the little details that the anime didn't show us.

As always, every seemingly broken powers would slowly reveal their weakness in the details.

[Master Assassin]

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6387/12249324.th.png (http://img405.imageshack.us/i/12249324.png/)

[Flere821]

...


Thanks :)

And as for Ars Magna, as far as I know it's changing reality with your own version of it (and yes, it's kinda like Academy City's 'personal reality'). Except the process of obtaining it would take a normal human a few centuries to just chant the incantations. In the novels Aureolus made the students of Misawa Cram school do the chanting, increased the chanting speed by 120x (using the theory of 'Gregorian Chant) - and he obtained Ars Magna. And as espers kill themselves when trying to do magic most of the students there have already died at least multiple times (and the brought back to life) during getting Ars Magna.

[Chaos2Frozen]

And as for Ars Magna, as far as I know it's changing reality with your own version of it (and yes, it's kinda like Academy City's 'personal reality'). Except the process of obtaining it would take a normal human a few centuries to just chant the incantations. In the novels Aureolus made the students of Misawa Cram school do the chanting, increased the chanting speed by 120x (using the theory of 'Gregorian Chant) - and he obtained Ars Magna. And as espers kill themselves when trying to do magic most of the students there have already died at least multiple times (and the brought back to life) during getting Ars Magna.

Does that make it a channeling spell? Does Ars Magna require the students to constantly chant?

Even if he can change reality, there seem to be some limit to it, otherwise he wouldn't be hold up in his building...

[Flere821]

Does that make it a channeling spell? Does Ars Magna require the students to constantly chant?

Even if he can change reality, there seem to be some limit to it, otherwise he wouldn't be hold up in his building...
After finishing the incantation the spell/skill would be complete, so no constant chanting is necessary. Ars Magna is just like any other spell, except the incantation is so long it's extremely impractical.

And as for limitations... well the anime shows he can't create anything he cannot imagine (eg a vampire, and has to use Deep Blood to draw one out). And that anything he thinks about will become reality, so if his mind wanders he'll probably kill himself by accident.

And as a aside, Aureolus' building was commented on by Index, saying it's pretty much like a Pharoah's tomb with all mana inside killed off artificially.

[Wilfriback]

Found more of them, still can't find the other version of Sakuya, well I hope with these will be enough...

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/339/5440695.th.jpg (http://img24.imageshack.us/i/5440695.jpg/)

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/7192/5328416.th.jpg (http://img251.imageshack.us/i/5328416.jpg/)

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/3631/touma4035374.th.jpg (http://img832.imageshack.us/i/touma4035374.jpg/)

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6964/au14772531.th.png (http://img404.imageshack.us/i/au14772531.png/)


... Aogami
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2401/ao4648302.jpg


P.S.: To think I didn't read said fic yet :heh: I hope to read it some day.

[Marcus H.]

Wow, I never realized how much fans Collapse of Eastern Fantasy has.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Because it's Index + Touhou. A combination that just screams epic.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Okay seeing as how Christmas is pretty much around the corner, I've spent the last few days locked in my room trying to come up with a holiday fic.

It's a four chapter story, this is the first chapter.

Majutsu no Kurisumasu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/1/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

Hopefully, I'll finish this before Christmas Eve...

[kaizerknight01]

Okay seeing as how Christmas is pretty much around the corner, I've spent the last few days locked in my room trying to come up with a holiday fic.

It's a four chapter story, this is the first chapter.

Majutsu no Kurisumasu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/1/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

Hopefully, I'll finish this before Christmas Eve...


nice slice of life/ comedy chaosfrozen more power to you ..... ( hope there's more deredere from Touma's female acquaintances ( hopefully Kaori and Misaka :):))

[MrTerrorist]

Okay seeing as how Christmas is pretty much around the corner, I've spent the last few days locked in my room trying to come up with a holiday fic.

It's a four chapter story, this is the first chapter.

Majutsu no Kurisumasu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/1/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

Hopefully, I'll finish this before Christmas Eve...

Nice. I hope to see Kaori and Itsuwa as well. And maybe Team ITEM too.

[Chaos2Frozen]

I don't want to get your hopes up, but I'm not confident in portraying [ITEM]... :(

[Flere821]

The Suzumiya Haruhi + Index crossover had another chapter out today - pretty good IMO:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900096/14/

EDIT: and after reading the Christmas fic, is this after Index finding out about Touma's memory loss? (Granted, Dec 25th is after WW3 when Fiamma told her... just checking)

Though IMO this series probably won't even get to Christmas in-canon, seeing how much stuff happens on a weekly basis.

[Chaos2Frozen]

EDIT: and after reading the Christmas fic, is this after Index finding out about Touma's memory loss? (Granted, Dec 25th is after WW3 when Fiamma told her... just checking)


Yes it is, I figure that since it'll have an actual date attached to it, I should at the very least try to include some stuff.

Most other's I can ignore, but Index learning that Touma lost his memories is a big deal... Plus it helps me move the story.



Though IMO this series probably won't even get to Christmas in-canon, seeing how much stuff happens on a weekly basis.

It would be a shame, I want to see more festivals in Academy City.

They've mentioned in Volume 10 when talking about the Night Parade that it's not as popular/grand as Christmas or Valentine's... Makes me wonder now...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Chapter 2 of my Christmas Special is done. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/2/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

[MrTerrorist]

Chapter 2 of my Christmas Special is done. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/2/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

Oh my God! LOL:D:D

I can't believe Orsola did that. Great chapter. I can't wait to see Index's and Mikoto's part time job.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Oh my God! LOL:D:D

I can't believe Orsola did that. Great chapter. I can't wait to see Index's and Mikoto's part time job.

A little head's up, the next chapter would contain alot of references. It's risky I know, not everyone likes or even watches the same thing...

[blitz1/2]

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6387/12249324.th.png (http://img405.imageshack.us/i/12249324.png/)


On a curious note, is there any touhou/index fanfictions on that board? Maybe we could take more on the view on the japanese view on the subject.

[Master Assassin]

On a curious note, is there any touhou/index fanfictions on that board? Maybe we could take more on the view on the japanese view on the subject.

Nothing of what I know of so far, but there has been crossovers with a few other series, most of what I can recall so far is Toaru/Haruhi... and Toaru/Doraemon :uhoh:

... I'm a bit lazy to dig through the numerous fics that have been around so far though. That and I'll be busy outdoors a few miles away from home today, so maybe some time later.

[Flere821]

Chapter 2 of my Christmas Special is done. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/2/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

*clap clap* truly well done. I laughed quite a lot for this chapter, and definitely looking forward to more :D

Though I didn't quite get the 'cuban cigar' reference - is that something to do with dynamite?

And wow, I can really see Orsola (and Laura) pulling a stunt like that... (except maybe the part where Laura shows Aleister her outfit, since she wants Aleister's head on a stick as of Vol22 epilogue and take over Academy City; but eh, Rule of funny can overrule canon for all I care in a festival special story)

[outerelf]

Title: Toaru Majutsu No Daycare

"Excuse me mister- do you know the way to Toaru Majutsu Daycare?" (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6574469/1/Toaru_Majutsu_No_Daycare)

a/n: It was because of Pixiv pictures that have been coming out recently that I thought of this, and because of the one below that I couldn't get it out of my head, until at last I wrote it. This one has no update schedule, so... don't expect fast updates like my other stories.

http://i1188.photobucket.com/albums/z405/outerelf/15249960.jpg

[Chaos2Frozen]

Though I didn't quite get the 'cuban cigar' reference - is that something to do with dynamite?

Nothing really except... They're illegal :heh:

No really, I couldn't think of a good present for Touma either, but I figure Stiyl would want to troll him somehow... It's either that or experimental Viagra pills...



And wow, I can really see Orsola (and Laura) pulling a stunt like that... (except maybe the part where Laura shows Aleister her outfit, since she wants Aleister's head on a stick as of Vol22 epilogue and take over Academy City; but eh, Rule of funny can overrule canon for all I care in a festival special story)

The original plan was to see if Aleister can even blush... But it turns out to be too long so I cut it short.

I base this on my impression of them during the daihaisensai prologue.

Beside, I do have a think for evil couples heh...

[Master Assassin]

And wow, I can really see Orsola (and Laura) pulling a stunt like that... (except maybe the part where Laura shows Aleister her outfit, since she wants Aleister's head on a stick as of Vol22 epilogue and take over Academy City; but eh, Rule of funny can overrule canon for all I care in a festival special story)

Heh, for all we know about Laura, that show-off of her scanty outfit is also usable as a plan for something else for Aleister. The next thing we knew, Laura in a scanty outfit was the last thing Aleister saw in his life before he gets his head by the guillotine; or maybe not. :heh:

[Chaos2Frozen]

Chapter 3 of the Christmas Special is out. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/3/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

The previous chapter was my favorite in terms of comedy, but this one I had the most fun writing :)

[Zakoo]

I would never be able to describe a maid-uniform so well. :p

[Chaos2Frozen]

I would never be able to describe a maid-uniform so well. :p

Neither could I (http://img801.imageshack.us/f/08722486106122567lo.jpg) :heh: :uhoh:

[kaizerknight01]

Neither could I (http://img801.imageshack.us/f/08722486106122567lo.jpg) :heh: :uhoh:

Two thumbs up , keep on writing :cool::cool:

[blitz1/2]

FINALLY done my exams, time to get that brain racking for some writing!

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Nice Maid-sama! references! I can't believe you actually made a seiyuu joke though. Did Accel trigger Seiri's flag?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Nice Maid-sama! references! I can't believe you actually made a seiyuu joke though.

It's kinda my specialty from the past...

"When C2F writes a story, somewhere down the road, you know there will be seiyuu jokes."


Did Accel trigger Seiri's flag?

Nah, probably just your imagination ;)

[Ashaman]

Nice Maid-sama! references! I can't believe you actually made a seiyuu joke though. Did Accel trigger Seiri's flag?

What! Accelerator succeeded where Touma failed.

This would blow my mind.

Don't tell Accelerator though. It would probably break him from his delusion that Touma is an existance he'll never be able to favourably compare himself to.

No,Wait. Tell him and break that Illusion.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Hey Flere, I've been reading the first few chapters of the Toaru/Haruhi fic, while the idea is interesting to say the least, doesn't the execution seem abit... Messy to you?

I don't know whether I have the right to say this, but the characters from Toaru side seem rather haphazardly done, their speeches and use of words as well- The idea is generally there but the feeling is way off...

Nice Maid-sama! references! I can't believe you actually made a seiyuu joke though.

...That said, does Satsuki feels right to you guys :heh:? I've only watch the anime, but I get the impression that she's a happy-go-lucky-moe-fan kinda woman...

[Flere821]

Hey Flere, I've been reading the first few chapters of the Toaru/Haruhi fic, while the idea is interesting to say the least, doesn't the execution seem abit... Messy to you?

I don't know whether I have the right to say this, but the characters from Toaru side seem rather haphazardly done, their speeches and use of words as well- The idea is generally there but the feeling is way off...

I was kinda just talking about that last (most recent) chapter when I said it's pretty good... I noticed the 'messy' characterisations as well, such as Kanzaki and Index's interaction in closed space.

Still, that fic was good for some laughs right?

[Chaos2Frozen]

I was kinda just talking about that last (most recent) chapter when I said it's pretty good... I noticed the 'messy' characterisations as well, such as Kanzaki and Index's interaction in closed space.

I can't comment about Haruhi's side, but the Index character were not so well done from my picky point of view... That's the problem with crossovers I guess, you have to be really comfortable with characters from two series instead of just one. Plus you have to somehow connect two separate worlds and their respective 'laws' together... Real messy...

I haven't gotten up to the latest chapter yet, but my impression is that the author is trying to include as many characters as he can? Personally I would avoid doing that, same reason- messy situations...


Still, that fic was good for some laughs right?

Well there were moments I admit...

[blitz1/2]

I can't comment about Haruhi's side, but the Index character were not so well done from my picky point of view... That's the problem with crossovers I guess, you have to be really comfortable with characters from two series instead of just one. Plus you have to somehow connect two separate worlds and their respective 'laws' together... Real messy...

I haven't gotten up to the latest chapter yet, but my impression is that the author is trying to include as many characters as he can? Personally I would avoid doing that, same reason- messy situations...



Well there were moments I admit...


Maybe some things were not meant to be mixed? xD

[Master Assassin]

Chapter 3 of the Christmas Special is out. (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/3/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu)

The previous chapter was my favorite in terms of comedy, but this one I had the most fun writing :)

You... you sly dude. I can smell references towards the characters' voice roles. What, Accelerator and Seiri? More than likely than what I thought. Good chapter anyway! :D

*coughcough*ohlookslikeAyuzawagrewherselfarackandl ongerhair*coughcoughcoughcough*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Maybe some things were not meant to be mixed? xD

Haruhi and Index could still work, in fact I myself had some ideas after watching the Disappearance Movie. But for stuff like that you have to be specific about how much you want to include from both worlds into the story.

Or likewise you can do it like the "Secret Wars" which was what Spiderman did. And throw those characters into a completely unknown world for both of them and force them to work together to achieve a goal... Or maybe ever recruit them, like what Mass Effect did...



You... you sly dude. I can smell references towards the characters' voice roles.

You had to have known that it was coming :heh:

[kaizerknight01]

plot ideas

MISAKA 10032 appears in front of Misaka Mikoto asking help, and tells her that there spin off of the tree diagram project called"imaginary number" that involves the cloned Touma( Using his brain cell obtain(Stolen) from heaven canceler.

from the data that MISAKA 10032 got the a cloned version of Kamijou Touma has cybernetic/ nano tech enhancement notably his right arm can shape shift into guns/rocket launcher/AIM disruptor. the scientists want to test out if this clone can be use for military/ anti skill operation.

Misaka Mikoto , outraged knowing will be just another repeat of "SISTER"


just throwing ideas here and there this one kinda interested me the most

[Chaos2Frozen]

...Mah, I'm sure other people will handle the more obvious stuff, but let me ask you this- What's the reason for cloning Touma?

[kaizerknight01]

well, the main premise that Touma beat accelerator, the scientists wanted to study / examine how did a lvl 0 beat accelerator AC strongest lvl 5 only to find out that there nothing special ...... until they notice the cloned Touma effect AIM fields

[Master Assassin]

That means you'll have to deal with the fact that there is only one Imagine Breaker and it belongs to only one human that is Kamijou Touma (the original himself). And even though it was stated that a Level 0 beat Accelerator, the strongest Level 5 Esper in Academy City, nobody knew who was it, so you'll have to clarify that as well.

And you'll need to produce plausible reasoning on why Heaven Canceler will have a blueprint of Touma's genes such as his brain cell. I'd believe if it was his hair or some skin cells, but brain cells is quite pushing it.

[kaizerknight01]

That means you'll have to deal with the fact that there is only one Imagine Breaker and it belongs to only one human that is Kamijou Touma (the original himself). And even though it was stated that a Level 0 beat Accelerator, the strongest Level 5 Esper in Academy City, nobody knew who was it, so you'll have to clarify that as well.

And you'll need to produce plausible reasoning on why Heaven Canceler will have a blueprint of Touma's genes such as his brain cell. I'd believe if it was his hair or some skin cells, but brain cells is quite pushing it.

1. The Clone DOES NOT have IB at best what he can do is redirect a spell/ psionic attacks to miss him, and it does not work against high tier magician/ espers.

2 Surveillance robots that can relay the the battle against Touma vs Accelator. just like those cleaner droids their either air borne or stealthy.

3 in the first season i thought Heaven Canceler treated/ operated on Touma head and Touma frequents that hospital guess dr frog face know his genetic blue print :heh::heh::heh::heh:

[Chaos2Frozen]

well, the main premise that Touma beat accelerator, the scientists wanted to study / examine how did a lvl 0 beat accelerator AC strongest lvl 5 only to find out that there nothing special ...... until they notice the cloned Touma effect AIM fields

1. The Clone DOES NOT have IB at best what he can do is redirect a spell/ psionic attacks to miss him, and it does not work against high tier magician/ espers.


So basically the clone have developed an esper ability to affect both AIM and Magic?

Even so, What's the justification of cloning this person? why not another Esper?

[Master Assassin]

And the next thing would be: On what justification would Frogface Doc keep at least a trace of his genetic blueprint, and why would he allow it to be used for experiments and clonings, so that the events that lead to Touma being cloned will happen?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this :uhoh:




I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QQmfCnxW7Kg-cFTpsiOxM8QXqHlnHTPoZgikwPTFZL8/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKr0wuYL)

[kaizerknight01]

And the next thing would be: On what justification would Frogface Doc keep at least a trace of his genetic blueprint, and why would he allow it to be used for experiments and clonings, so that the events that lead to Touma being cloned will happen?


1. Dr. Frog face kept it as a sample to further examine the brain damage cause by the feather that hit touma head( forgot the name ) in hope of reversing the damage and restoring his patience memory

2 Nope He did not allow it , his samples and data where stolen, heaven canceler asked IMOUTO to investigate this



to chaos2frozen

sure,I would like to give my ideas and input. but still its your idea its still up to you (Author) to decide.

[tsunade666]

but it's memory destruction. It's like resurrecting a dead person if frog face doctor manage to cure such thing because your basically reviving the dead cells.

[kaizerknight01]

So basically the clone have developed an esper ability to affect both AIM and Magic?

Even so, What's the justification of cloning this person? why not another Esper?

The simple answer of curiosity and with the approval of Alister Crowly

but it's memory destruction. It's like resurrecting a dead person if frog face doctor manage to cure such thing because your basically reviving the dead cells.

Well, some researchers in Alzheimer disease did it , why not DR. Frog face :heh::heh:

[tsunade666]

memory destruction? as in dead cells retrieving memory?

[Zakoo]

...

Well I'm more or less trying to do that actually, though i created the third hero because ... because ... ( Damn i could have used Mikoto !! Well too late already, the story is already written in my head ).

I would love to read your next fanfiction but if there are three heroes, it will be a long one right ? Well since I have many ideas but I'm not really good at taping, I don't think I will write all so i could more or less help you.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this :uhoh:




I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QQmfCnxW7Kg-cFTpsiOxM8QXqHlnHTPoZgikwPTFZL8/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKr0wuYL)



It sounds really interesting! Will everyone eventually find out the truth behind the incidents and somehow band together to fight the true enemy behind them?

I'm still waiting for an ending like that. I haven't really found any in To Aru fics, and I'd like to see the protagonists actually interact with each other for once.

[kaizerknight01]

memory destruction? as in dead cells retrieving memory?

yup, Alzheimer researchers did something like they "revive dead brain" cells form an Alzheimer patient but with limited results only.. i remember watching/hearing it form a cable news company some time ago

[Flere821]

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this :uhoh:




I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QQmfCnxW7Kg-cFTpsiOxM8QXqHlnHTPoZgikwPTFZL8/edit?hl=en&authkey=CKr0wuYL)



Interesting... though (see spoiler)
1)Adding clone troopers that's not the SISTERs seems a bit wrong to me somehow, seeing as only Academy City so far has cloning technology that actually works well.

2)The 'Horseman' is another supernatural entity trying to intervene? Disregarding there might be some sort of rules regarding divine intervention in IndexVerse (eg Christianity's laws on Angels only descend on God's orders and such, or the Aztecs' gods not wiping Earth out), what's to stop Aiwass to just crush whoever is interrupting Aleister's plots to prolong the game?

3) And someone from Accelerator's childhood? Even if it's not impossible, didn't Vol12 say something like he's the only survivor from series of experiments that killed off all other participants? This bit might need some detailed explanation.

Just my two cents worth of comments, no flaming intended.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Interesting... though (see spoiler)

1)Adding clone troopers that's not the SISTERs seems a bit wrong to me somehow, seeing as only Academy City so far has cloning technology that actually works well.


Anyway to write it off as inferior?

Interesting... though (see spoiler)

2)The 'Horseman' is another supernatural entity trying to intervene? Disregarding there might be some sort of rules regarding divine intervention in IndexVerse (eg Christianity's laws on Angels only descend on God's orders and such, or the Aztecs' gods not wiping Earth out), what's to stop Aiwass to just crush whoever is interrupting Aleister's plots to prolong the game?


I'm going to play it like the members of [God's Right Seat]- The Horseman are not supernatural beings, they're humans that wield Angel class spells. The particular 'Divine' powers they wield cannot be completely destroyed because of their traits (War, Famine, Pestilence, Death).

I was under the impression that Aiwass cannot pop out anytime he please because he would need Last Order to do so... Or the Imaginary Number District.





3) And someone from Accelerator's childhood? Even if it's not impossible, didn't Vol12 say something like he's the only survivor from series of experiments that killed off all other participants? This bit might need some detailed explanation..



My idea was that this was from a time where Kihara was trying to study Accelerator and his powers, so he attempted a number of ways to try to kill him. One of those method is a psychic mind attack from another Esper... Accelerator thought he had killed her, but her broken body was kept alive and was given, as a good will gift, to the Americans as research still they don't need her anymore.

[MeisterBabylon]

Chaos handled most of the canon cast, so I shall throw in a bit of OC x CC. Once again, starring L4 Firestarter, Kataru Tsubomi:

Christmas of the 5 Percent (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdXL-78JioODLMJRp225Dn0kxLoG-W-YVVVqWcCm1CE/edit?hl=en&authkey=CJm4-t8D)

My pet theory is that the novels will end on the dot of Christmas, which has affected this short somewhat. Give a lot more hope for the season too.

And like my Sith Lord Chaos, I included a surprise... :heh:

[SuzushinaYuriko]

I love this. Especially how you included the end of that adorable sequence of pictures of Accel and LO going to sleep.

And lol, a K-ON!! song. Isn't it called Utauyo!!MIRACLE instead of No Houkago Kohi, though?

[MeisterBabylon]

That's the band name; Kataru was calling everyone to start the show when she said Let's go!

It plays on the name of A Certain Highschool Light Music Band. You can find No Houkago Kohi during Houkago Tea Time desuno? :uhoh: And there's the seiyuu references with the usage of certain canon characters at certain roles. :uhoh::uhoh: And that Kataru is voiced by Yohko Hikasa and Aya-nyan by Taketatsu Ayana. :uhoh::uhoh::uhoh:

Nevertheless, I seem to be plagued with english errors recently. Dx I'm working on polishing that bit for now.

The song was Utauyo!!MIRACLE alright. I felt the lyrics would be perfect to kickstart the concert, and threw in references to Chaos' fic since he was wondering how to weave a song into a fic a while back. Maybe Master Chaos might mention this concert in his last chapter. :D

Glad you liked it. This short was long in planning, ever since I saw that pic in the image thread. :heh:

Now to start work on the Feb-14 short.

[tsunade666]

in chaoz fanfic. It's really an awesome one though in chapter 3. I didn't understand the another VA joke. By the hints given. It looks like Ayase and Seiri's VA is the same person but for accelerator? .... I don't had a clue.

[Master Assassin]

in chaoz fanfic. It's really an awesome one though in chapter 3. I didn't understand the another VA joke. By the hints given. It looks like Ayase and Seiri's VA is the same person but for accelerator? .... I don't had a clue.

If Seiri's VA is Ayuzawa in Maid-sama, Accelerator's VA is Nobuhiko Okamoto and he voices Usui in the same series. Figure the rest, lol.

[tsunade666]

okay. I thought it's only ayase because chaoz mentioned oreimo. Hmm now I understand.
















what! usui and accelerator VA are the same!?

[Chaos2Frozen]

okay. I thought it's only ayase because chaoz mentioned oreimo. Hmm now I understand.


Did I...? Oh yeah, but that was because I got the maid idea after watching episode 11 last week...






what! usui and accelerator VA are the same!?

SURPRISE!

[Flere821]

My idea was that this was from a time where Kihara was trying to study Accelerator and his powers, so he attempted a number of ways to try to kill him. One of those method is a psychic mind attack from another Esper... Accelerator thought he had killed her, but her broken body was kept alive and was given, as a good will gift, to the Americans as research still they don't need her anymore.


From how Academy City tries to stop DNA samples from being leaked to the point even normal Judgment members know about that kind of things (see Vol9 where Kuroko talks to Uiharu), it's unlikely a esper will be just traded/given to another organisation. Even the 'gemstones' that was thought to be impossible to be replicated outside of Academy City was in the end retrieved by one of the directors, just on the off chance somebody could still make the impossible happen (ref SS2).

Even if a esper is 'unneeded', he/she will most likely be disposed than allowed to be taken outside of Academy City, to prevent secrets being exposed. Even other research branches that come in direct contact with espers from Academy City (eg the ones that take care of the SISTER clones) are directly affliated with Academy City as its subbranches, and thus would already have access to some of their information to begin with (so giving a esper to them would have no extra advantage).

[Chaos2Frozen]

From how Academy City tries to stop DNA samples from being leaked to the point even normal Judgment members know about that kind of things (see Vol9 where Kuroko talks to Uiharu), it's unlikely a esper will be just traded/given to another organisation. Even the 'gemstones' that was thought to be impossible to be replicated outside of Academy City was in the end retrieved by one of the directors, just on the off chance somebody could still make the impossible happen (ref SS2).

Even if a esper is 'unneeded', he/she will most likely be disposed than allowed to be taken outside of Academy City, to prevent secrets being exposed. Even other research branches that come in direct contact with espers from Academy City (eg the ones that take care of the SISTER clones) are directly affliated with Academy City as its subbranches, and thus would already have access to some of their information to begin with (so giving a esper to them would have no extra advantage).



Hmmm... So in other words, if I really want this to happen I need an reason to allow an Esper to be brought out of the country? Well considering that it's been done for the Sisters, I assume that Academy City have branches outside? Or else I wouldn't see them allowing their clones to spread far and wide without restrains.

[tsunade666]

their are facilities allied with academy city outside. If you want you can send it to them. But that facility are more like treatment facility.

[Wilfriback]

Then still there is a risk of someone trying to leak info from said branches, just like Amao, but this time, outside Academy City.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

what! usui and accelerator VA are the same!?

You never noticed? That's the main reason I picked up the show, actually. :heh:

[tsunade666]

You never noticed? That's the main reason I picked up the show, actually. :heh:

I never notice. Oh come on. I watch kaicho maid-sama but never :frustrated: even :frustrated: a :frustrated: bit :frustrated: of :frustrated: hint :frustrated: of :frustrated: being :frustrated: accelerator :frustrated: on :frustrated: Usui's :frustrated: voice :frustrated:

and again. I never remember much on names of VA or seiyuu. Only the works they had done but the names behind it...... never remember.

[MrTerrorist]

Hmmm... So in other words, if I really want this to happen I need an reason to allow an Esper to be brought out of the country? Well considering that it's been done for the Sisters, I assume that Academy City have branches outside? Or else I wouldn't see them allowing their clones to spread far and wide without restrains.

Here's a solution, that branch is a joint AC/US research branch that was made as goodwill between the two sides to ensure that the US can get some AC research and at-least prevent them from snooping that much about AC while at same time ensure what AC can and cannot share with the US. The branch is headed by AC loyalist but can be secretly US supporters.

[Master Assassin]

I never notice. Oh come on. I watch kaicho maid-sama but never :frustrated: even :frustrated: a :frustrated: bit :frustrated: of :frustrated: hint :frustrated: of :frustrated: being :frustrated: accelerator :frustrated: on :frustrated: Usui's :frustrated: voice :frustrated:

and again. I never remember much on names of VA or seiyuu. Only the works they had done but the names behind it...... never remember.

If you ever watched Chrome Shelled Regios, take Layfon beside Accelerator and compare their voices. :heh:

[Zakoo]

I never noticed , god ? Neither for Usui nor for Layton, serious ... Well the only seiyu I can recognize is the one of Shana.

[tsunade666]

I can understand a bit for layfon though still........ :heh: :heh: listening to accelerator again the only thing I can remember is the voice of ikki.

[Flere821]

Here's a solution, that branch is a joint AC/US research branch that was made as goodwill between the two sides to ensure that the US can get some AC research and at-least prevent them from snooping that much about AC while at same time ensure what AC can and cannot share with the US. The branch is headed by AC loyalist but can be secretly US supporters.
About that, Academy City actually sell off stuff that's about 3-4 generations out of date to the outside world through some of it's own companies, and it's practically cutting edge in outside world standards. There isn't really a problem with everyone else seeing Academy City hoarding stuff. Even if governments and military are involved, others like the US might only get slightly better stuff than what's on the market but is still practically obsolete by AC standards (ref Vol14 Ch1).

And it's not just a matter of 'trade secrets' being hidden, it was stated even of the outside got the full plans the parts needed to manufacture them it will still be impossible to make; the facilities and techniques are hard to replicate even if the necessary resources are there (not counting whatever polymer/materials AC has developed that no-one else can even replicate).

[Chaos2Frozen]

So could it be said that... Even if they gotten a hold of any Academy City Technology like an Esper, they wouldn't be able to learn much using their own methods and equipment?

[Flere821]

So could it be said that... Even if they gotten a hold of any Academy City Technology like an Esper, they wouldn't be able to learn much using their own methods and equipment?

I'd say so. Though Academy City will still try to retrieve anything that was captured just in case the unthinkable happens and someone DOES get something out of it, and that it sends a bad message that they can be taken advantaged of if they just let others steal their secrets.

For reference, Mikoto once said (in Vol16) the supermarkets in Academy City uses a more high tech computer system sorting through their stock than anything the military networks outside of Academy City have access to. That's how much of a difference between technology there is; even without the Vol20 bit where the AC airforce was pwning the Russian airforce without taking a single loss, and AC planes even have laser weaponry on most of their planes (from what I know military lasers in Real Life is non-existent right?).

[Master Assassin]

Talking about the crossovers discussion we had a while back... I forgot I was following a Index/MGS (yes you read that right, METAL GEAR SOLID!) crossover some time ago, and only now did I remember to check on it.

Set three years into the future of the current Academy City, Misaka Mikoto has gone missing and there are a few terrorists-suspected attacks, in which later it was discovered they are all actually targetting Touma because he is a former member of "The Organization," something which Snake (who was assigned to be Touma's bodyguard) was also an ex-member of. And after three years gone... it seems that Mikoto's status was not "Dead" as reported all along...

... Possibly the most... uh, "awesome" in my own words, crossover I have stumbled upon so far. :heh:

[Chaos2Frozen]

For reference, Mikoto once said (in Vol16) the supermarkets in Academy City uses a more high tech computer system sorting through their stock than anything the military networks outside of Academy City have access to. That's how much of a difference between technology there is; even without the Vol20 bit where the AC airforce was pwning the Russian airforce without taking a single loss, and AC planes even have laser weaponry on most of their planes (from what I know military lasers in Real Life is non-existent right?).


Erm... That's not completely false either... Airborne Laser (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boeing_YAL-1) :uhoh:

Talking about the crossovers discussion we had a while back... I forgot I was following a Index/MGS (yes you read that right, METAL GEAR SOLID!) crossover some time ago, and only now did I remember to check on it.

Set three years into the future of the current Academy City, Misaka Mikoto has gone missing and there are a few terrorists-suspected attacks, in which later it was discovered they are all actually targetting Touma because he is a former member of "The Organization," something which Snake (who was assigned to be Touma's bodyguard) was also an ex-member of. And after three years gone... it seems that Mikoto's status was not "Dead" as reported all along...

... Possibly the most... uh, "awesome" in my own words, crossover I have stumbled upon so far. :heh:

I find that people are too restricted by the idea that a toaru story must involve either Touma or Mikoto... When it comes to stuff like the military isn't it more obvious that Tsuchimikado or Accelerator is more suited to lead these stories?

[Master Assassin]

I find that people are too restricted by the idea that a toaru story must involve either Touma or Mikoto... When it comes to stuff like the military isn't it more obvious that Tsuchimikado or Accelerator is more suited to lead these stories?

Not really, the plot so far is interesting anyway, so why not?

In the plotline, the terrorist attacks in AC have gotten serious to the point that Judgement and Anti-Skill have to make joint operations in making sure things does not go haywire. (That's the way I interpret the plot though. I might be wrong, but yeah.)

That and the writers seem to favor Touma and Mikoto a lot. To be fair, though, this kind of fanfic is very rare due to the abundance of KaMikoto fics (which is, to say "a lot" is an understatement). Looks like fans really love that pairing very, very much I'm getting the feeling it's way overrated. (Heck, there's even a specific tag for that pairing in Pixiv, and that's the only pairing that ever had their own tag in the whole series!)

Oh, by the way, we have LOTS of Sniper Wolves. It's... the goddamn Sisters...

[Wilfriback]

@Soul Assassin: They're just pwns for you, eh? :heh:

I would like to to write a fanfic but "me" writing a fic can end in:
A) Tragic story with bitter-sweer ending.
B) Annihilation at 85%, sometimes with nonsense scarifices.
C) Incomplete story because of RL issues.

I really want to do so, but by the time being I will keep drawing...

[Master Assassin]

@Soul Assassin: They're just pwns for you, eh? :heh:

I would like to to write a fanfic but "me" writing a fic can end in:
A) Tragic story with bitter-sweer ending.
B) Annihilation at 85%, sometimes with nonsense scarifices.
C) Incomplete story because of RL issues.

I really want to do so, but by the time being I will keep drawing...

What do you mean by that? :uhoh:

You, about writing fanfics? Good. Then if I were to entrust you giving the girls in Touma's harem some shock and awe by a psychological nuke caused by Touma's death then surely it won't be a problem for you, eh? :D

[outerelf]

(Heck, there's even a specific tag for that pairing in Pixiv, and that's the only pairing that ever had their own tag in the whole series!)


...*cough* there is a Tsuchimikado/Touma pairing tag. They're very own. I'm now in the process of trying to write it.

[Master Assassin]

...*cough* there is a Tsuchimikado/Touma pairing tag. They're very own. I'm now in the process of trying to write it.

Oh yeah, there's that as well.

... It's all Daihaseisai's fault. :heh:

... No, to be exact, it's Oriana's fault. :uhoh: Could she be a goddamn closet fujoshi!?

[Ashaman]

Alright guys. Brace yourselves (Well, Soul will already be familiar with this, but someone has done one in english) We all knew one would appear eventually, it was only a matter of time.

Is not that well written, she falls to the disease too quickly for my tastes, but what the hell.

I present to you Kuroko no Touma-sama (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6591797/1/)

And is it scary that I could see Kuroko actually doing that thing at the end.... Yes, yes it is.

[Wilfriback]

What do you mean by that? :uhoh:

You, about writing fanfics? Good. Then if I were to entrust you giving the girls in Touma's harem some shock and awe by a psychological nuke caused by Touma's death then surely it won't be a problem for you, eh? :D
Is more like:


1. Since October girl had a hard time getting a boy's attention until X'mas when she confessed to him.
2. Boy gives to the girl a gift, he always looked at her. The gift has a letter with a question inside (Guess which question?:cool:)
3. Girl gets happy but half-way to home notices she forgot the gift somewhere.
4. Searches for a while and finds it, thus gets happy, so happy nothing in the world can stop her feelings.
5. But....by accident she gets badly injured, with the battered body to the point her face can't be recognized anymore she only wills to arrive in time to a accorded date with the guy but collapses in the street.
6. They boy waits and waits... waits for 1, 2, 3, almost 5 hours and then gives up after several unanswered calls to the girl's cellphone, then goes to spend a lonely X'mas in home thinking the girl's got more importants things to do.

The story is seen from a third person perspective, the friends of the couple giving their view at the end:

7. The girl collapsed only turning around on a corner near to the place the boy was but due to the music and chorus almost nobody noticed. When the ambulance and aid arrived the boy was already gone with his respective friend.

I remember at the end of the story the friends of the dead couple ends together after sharing the view of their story during the new year.

[bizzi]

Alright guys. Brace yourselves (Well, Soul will already be familiar with this, but someone has done one in english) We all knew one would appear eventually, it was only a matter of time.

Is not that well written, she falls to the disease too quickly for my tastes, but what the hell.

I present to you Kuroko no Touma-sama (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6591797/1/)

And is it scary that I could see Kuroko actually doing that thing at the end.... Yes, yes it is.
Aogami... that was nice 8)

[Master Assassin]

Alright guys. Brace yourselves (Well, Soul will already be familiar with this, but someone has done one in english) We all knew one would appear eventually, it was only a matter of time.

Is not that well written, she falls to the disease too quickly for my tastes, but what the hell.

I present to you Kuroko no Touma-sama (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6591797/1/)

And is it scary that I could see Kuroko actually doing that thing at the end.... Yes, yes it is.

THANK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!! !!!!

Y'know, there's just so much of Touma/Kuroko in other languages than English (especially Japanese). And to finally see one in English... THANK YOU DAMN IT!!! :D :D :D :D

[mark1246]

All the fanfiction i read online about To Aru majutsu no index are all great and I'm proud to be a fan of the series!! :)

Now I'm wondering if there someone if they can do a Fanfic crossover between Index series and Katekyo hitman reborn! That would be very amazing, really. A fight between our favorite vongola member and the kamijou faction ex. TOUMA vs. Tsuna both misfortunate boy fight each other, :)

Or something more sinister within the plot!!! that would be a nice cross over fanfic if someone has the time to do it. If they do thank you and I'll be waiting for that story to be made.

[MrTerrorist]

Is more like:


1. Since October girl had a hard time getting a boy's attention until X'mas when she confessed to him.
2. Boy gives to the girl a gift, he always looked at her. The gift has a letter with a question inside (Guess which question?:cool:)
3. Girl gets happy but half-way to home notices she forgot the gift somewhere.
4. Searches for a while and finds it, thus gets happy, so happy nothing in the world can stop her feelings.
5. But....by accident she gets badly injured, with the battered body to the point her face can't be recognized anymore she only wills to arrive in time to a accorded date with the guy but collapses in the street.
6. They boy waits and waits... waits for 1, 2, 3, almost 5 hours and then gives up after several unanswered calls to the girl's cellphone, then goes to spend a lonely X'mas in home thinking the girl's got more importants things to do.

The story is seen from a third person perspective, the friends of the couple giving their view at the end:

7. The girl collapsed only turning around on a corner near to the place the boy was but due to the music and chorus almost nobody noticed. When the ambulance and aid arrived the boy was already gone with his respective friend.

I remember at the end of the story the friends of the dead couple ends together after sharing the view of their story during the new year.


Hmmmm interesting. coughWinterSonataRipOffcough!

[Master Assassin]

Chaos just updated his Christmas fanfic, (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6567224/4/Majutsu_no_Kurisumasu) good job as always mate.

... Oh? Didn't know Accelerator and Frogface Doc are both into House (you know, that caned doctor). I guess I know why... :heh:

[Zakoo]

I laughed haha ... One to save the one and the other for nurse fetish haha.

[Chaos2Frozen]

...And I'm done :eyespin: That was a crazy ending, I had to hardest time trying to come up with a suitable 'effective' scene for both Mikoto and Index, I hope it didn't come across as too predictable :heh: But I had the most fun writing Gunha and the follow up 'credit scenes' with the entire cast of Toaru both in Academy City and around the world with the song [Irony] playing in the background :D

@Soul Assassin

Well, I got that idea after watching... Well, [House] :heh: I figure doctors would watch medical series, it doesn't have to be just House, I had planned for him to watch [Scrubs] as well :heh: Heaven Canceller watches House for the medicine while Accelerator watches House for House :heh:

[Master Assassin]

But yeah. The "humor" somehow turned into something I'd really de-tag your fic from "Humor" near the end. A good end nevertheless, but the events before the end isn't something I'd consider funny :heh:

[Chaos2Frozen]

But yeah. The "humor" somehow turned into something I'd really de-tag your fic from "Humor" near the end. A good end nevertheless, but the events before the end isn't something I'd consider funny :heh:

...Is that a good thing or a bad thing :eyespin: ?

[Ashaman]

For some reason, I now want Accelerator to become a doctor.....

Frankly, for him this entirely possible. Sure, he would be a jerkass doctor with a cynical side greater than House, but other than that.... Damn, now I really want this to happen.

The hints that HC has a past as dak as Accel only make it all the more delicious

[mark1246]

did no one read my comment earlier? it a the middle top

[Chaos2Frozen]

did no one read my comment earlier? it a the middle top

I'm afraid I'm not too familiar with Hitman Reborn series sorry :heh:

Though if it's crossovers, I can suggest some other series that would merge smoothly... Academy City is a wonderful place that allows that kind of possibility.

For some reason, I now want Accelerator to become a doctor.....

Frankly, for him this entirely possible. Sure, he would be a jerkass doctor with a cynical side greater than House, but other than that.... Damn, now I really want this to happen.

The hints that HC has a past as dak as Accel only make it all the more delicious

Given his skill, knowledge and power, Accelerator would be an incredible doctor.

btw I'm surprised, is that Accelerator scene really the most prominent one of the chapter :heh: ?

[mark1246]

I'm afraid I'm not too familiar with Hitman Reborn series sorry :heh:

Though if it's crossovers, I can suggest some other series that would merge smoothly... Academy City is a wonderful place that allows that kind of possibility.



Given his skill, knowledge and power, Accelerator would be an incredible doctor.

btw I'm surprised, is that Accelerator scene really the most prominent one of the chapter :heh: ?

Well i have to agree on you on that Chaoa2Frozen, okay then it could be base off some manga that writer love the most for a crossover with To Aru like naruto, bleach, or onepiece ect. That a better statement

[Master Assassin]

...Is that a good thing or a bad thing :eyespin: ?

It'd be a good thing if your fic was more funny even as Touma entered the hospital. :heh:

But yeah. Accelerator watching House because of Dr. House is something good to see, and frankly it automatically is the most win thing about him in this fic XD.

Just wondering... where the heck did the gorilla with twintails come from? I know this is supposed to be a funny thing... but, just curious. :heh:

[Chaos2Frozen]

Well i have to agree on you on that Chaoa2Frozen, okay then it could be base off some manga that writer love the most for a crossover with To Aru like naruto, bleach, or onepiece ect. That a better statement

In all honesty, crossovers with your typical shounen series would not go well with Toaru because of the vast difference in setting. What I propose is another series that have ties to real-world details like what Toaru has so it's much easier to imagine them in the same world.

Like say... Index/Durarara ?

Unless you want to A) Screw setting and just use the character's name, or B) Screw setting and magically dump everyone onto an Alien world.



Just wondering... where the heck did the gorilla with twintails come from? I know this is supposed to be a funny thing... but, just curious. :heh:

That's Kuroko, [Destroyer of Worlds] mode, remember from chapter 2? I had even blurted it out in the 'ending credits' :heh:

[Master Assassin]

Oh, that. I guess I should've read ahead that it was her, but I guess I forgot about that "Destroyer of Worlds" mode. :heh:

[Wilfriback]

For some reason, I now want Accelerator to become a doctor.....

Frankly, for him this entirely possible. Sure, he would be a jerkass doctor with a cynical side greater than House, but other than that.... Damn, now I really want this to happen.

The hints that HC has a past as dak as Accel only make it all the more delicious
There are fanarts and comics portraying him dressing as a doctor.
And also his interacions with Heaven Canceller and his development on medical devices....:uhoh:


Just wondering... where the heck did the gorilla with twintails come from? I know this is supposed to be a funny thing... but, just curious. :heh:
I think it was character from Beelzebub :uhoh:.

[tsunade666]

Index and Durarara are good example. Academy city is in tokyo right? well durarara is in Ikebukuro, tokyo. Both are in the bounds of realism with touches of fantasy.

Nice fanfic chaos. I read it while playing Irony in media player :D

[Chaos2Frozen]

I think it was character from Beelzebub :uhoh:.

Kuroko man, Kuroko :heh:

Index and Durarara are good example. Academy city is in tokyo right? well durarara is in Ikebukuro, tokyo. Both are in the bounds of realism with touches of fantasy.

Aside from Anime, there are some other TV series that we can use...

... Anybody heard of the Sci-fi thriller series [Fringe]? ;)


Nice fanfic chaos. I read it while playing Irony in media player :D

So did it work? Does it 'feel right' :heh: ?

[tsunade666]

So did it work? Does it 'feel right' :heh: ?

No, doesn't feel right :heh: it's christmas. It's better to listen to christmas theme songs :uhoh: :heh: :uhoh:

[Ashaman]

That's Kuroko, [Destroyer of Worlds] mode, remember from chapter 2? I had even blurted it out in the 'ending credits' :heh:

I don't remember this Kuroko destroyer Mode. Though yeah, I did realize it was Kuroko just from reading the fic. Though for some reason, my mind jumped to Stella from Arawaka Under the Bridge (or whatever it was called.)

There are fanarts and comics portraying him dressing as a doctor.
And also his interacions with Heaven Canceller and his development on medical devices....:uhoh:


Links or pics plz. I'd like to see them. Should do it in the Image forum though. Thank you!