Close, I'll admit. But still, it's a ponytail right now and not yet the bun. :3
As for the translations, they look alright to me. I don't think I'll be making any translations anytime soon though. Most of my attention is preoccupied by work, anime backlog and possible workings on a fic that's a sequel to Gears of Destiny.
(Most likely, it'll be all stuck in my head, though. XD)