I just read it a minute ago. It's really good. Good description, and awesome sketches of him! But you know, I think the drawings divert the attention of the writing to the pictures so I they don't really pay much attention to anything else. His looks kind of remind me of this one character from an anime/manga I've seen before. Very interesting!
Hey Mitsu, DTM here. Just read your Naruto character, and I really like her. Lots of backstory, jutsu and other cool stuff. The story in particular really drew me in, and I've always liked the idea of someone who plays instruments to fight.
By the way... Not to shamelessly promote my own, but I recently posted a character on 150, care to drop by and take a peek?
Er... Hi DTM! How are you?
I was just wondering what you thought of my character that I made awhile back on Page 147. Her names Akita. (Just asking this here because I don't want to make a new post on CYOJ___.)