Huh, well then. I'm done two more rewrites, so I'll post them on LJ.
I think BubbleMan was my best so far, and Crashman could be better. Then again, it's a song about rape, so I can't really do much with that.
I don't think you need to shell out cash munnehz for me if my parents are getting me a HaruSuzu book. Thanks anyhow, though! It's not that I don't appreciate it, it's that now you have a load off your shoulders.