It's funny, because reading this, Raki is giving me strong Teresa vibes, yet Teresa herself has already been involved with Claire's life and died.

.......It's really something, because I think you'll have alot of free reign to change Raki if you wanted too.

Raki is the complete antithesis of what it means to be a Claymore, the boy is just so darn human so much that the idea of him actually being a warrior is, well,

Why is he a warrior? Is his story the common tragic one? Was he sold out by his village the same way Teresa was by her parents(Good idea right there)? Is he interested in revenge? Does he fight for justice like Priscilla wanted too? Does he even care for what's left of his humanity and no longer have his benevolent personality?

It's curious; a situation like this I think is the only one where you could change him up if you wanted too. Of course, this goes farther into what techniques he will have, his rank etc etc.

......Meh, I don't know....Male Claymore still exist, even as far as Claire's generation? You're gonna have alot of plot-holes to fill.

Unless, Raki is the adult warrior here and Claire is the young human(in which case, it's her that's gone back in time)...in which case, I'd make her a teenager because we've seen Raki's more then capable skills of being with very young children(Priscilla, and Miata in your story). Claire as a teen would at least be quite different.

The idea on a whole though honestly doesn't grab me; maybe because I just heard about it, or because it's so different. Who knows.

Umm, don't we already know how?

Unless this is one of those time-things like with Priscilla, and he's magically born much earlier.

Well, yes, every character actually pretty much demands their be a different writing style for each one, because their are not 2 characters that are similar.

They say everyone is unique, but with these girls, they really mean it :O

Don't know much about that game, so I don't even know if it's any good or not.

Deneve I figure is one of those girls that's hard to figure out, but once you got her, it's easy all the way through, kind of like Claire.

But yes, she's not a conversationalist

Ouch, that was a low blow XD

Ohhhhhhhhh, I see...that's pretty different

Heh, well, at least you're keeping yourself occupied

Bigger than me, sure, but not ugly or anything

ROFLMAO, yeah, that's Raki all right. Reaaaaaal smooth

Well, it's not just me. You've gotten favorable reviews for all your stories

What about the military? How's that been treating ya? You're still on your "break" right?