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  1. Shiek927
    2009-11-28 20:13
    Shiek927
    Hehe, well, at least you remembered

    What have you been up too lately?
  2. Shiek927
    2009-11-26 23:50
    Shiek927
    Happy Thanksgiving Dean!
  3. Shiek927
    2009-11-10 19:40
    Shiek927
    I also get what you were trying to say with the time-issue, but it isn't necessarily Raki that's born earlier; it's everything else that's happening earlier, since it starts with him at his young age and the yoma in his town and everything

    * at "Superwoman"
  4. Shiek927
    2009-11-10 18:04
    Shiek927
    I can understand using Ophelia, she's the best choice. I'm just saying, you need to clear up the age thing, maybe by making her Miata's age or something.

    Heh, thinking about Raki, it may not be a big deal. After all, this story, and all what-ifs are AU's, so the age probably won't even matter

    Just use her and tell people it was the best choice
  5. Shiek927
    2009-11-10 11:52
    Shiek927
    Thinking about it, I DO question Ophelia and the age difference. Their is a sizeable length from Teresa's generation and when Ophelia was coming around. You said "up-and-coming", but when you start writing, make sure you clear it up. If she's a warrior, Ophelia by all accounts, should be a child, on her very first mission ever.

    It's the only way I think you can get away with including her, and even then, It's cutting it close. Somebody may question and bring her up, so keep that in mind.
  6. Shiek927
    2009-11-10 11:35
    Shiek927
    Well, it's not like you're required by any means to do every single person. The list of women you have so far is already pretty extensive, so I think you're pretty much set to go with who you have

    ...........Wow.

    I was about to say again that Priscilla isn't necessary since we already get that in the manga, but this was unexpected. Her desire to do justice isn't necessarily that she loves the Organization, but what they supposedly stay for and her youth and naivety. Understanding that they really don't give a damn about human beings and that she's pretty much alone in her love for helping people(because only Jean and Cynthia truly love and help humans because it's what they want(which are rarities because they aren't kids anymore like her); the reasons they were sent to die at Pieta), she's gonna be pretty shattered.

    You said this was not fully-thought-out, but it seems just perfect to me, and feels likes it would be a great finale, not to mention being the longest, much more then Miria. I have seen only one other Teresa/Priscilla scenario that doesn't end up with anybody dying but this seems, obviously, much more thought out and bigger. The idea of Teresa and Priscilla, as allies, walking into town with their raison d'etres is just inspired and something I can say I've never seen before.

    I really don't have much to say(other then I question Priscilla twisting Ophelia's head off); you say you didn't put much thought into it, but your description completely goes against that; I have no critique whatsoever. Everyone and everything is in character, and it seems the one you've put the most effort into, since it's described from beginning to end instead of a short summary of what you intend. Again, I think this would be best as the final arc in your story, especially since multiple important characters, especially Teresa, play a strong role and should excite the fans.

    Which brings up a question: this is stating the obvious, but if you DO have any questions, feel free to ask me
  7. Shiek927
    2009-11-10 00:33
    Shiek927
    At any rate, have you decided the full list of people you intend for your story?

    Alot to choose from, but I'm sure you have your limits

    Or the order? I imagine the order will be your list of personal favorites
  8. Shiek927
    2009-11-09 23:25
    Shiek927
    Roflmao, I don't know what to say, I never felt that way. it's not like the forum is a private club or something, but it's your choice

    I don't hang around message boards enough to know what feels like a clique or not , nor have can I say I've ever been involved a clique at all
  9. Shiek927
    2009-11-09 22:45
    Shiek927
    *shrug, I saw that you were attempting to go for ambiguity. If you really wanted to keep it in the air, you shouldn't have written Clarice's choice and instead kept that a secret.

    Well, I don't know what you want to say, but their are many intelligent nice people here; most of the time, I don't even talk about the series and talk about whatever. You should try to fit in before you make any preconceptions

    Thanks for the recommendations
  10. Dean_the_Young
    2009-11-09 22:37
    Dean_the_Young
    Papa's ambiguity was about the eventual fate of Clarice and Miata with Raki. Something I strictly want to keep open, so people can choose for themselves if things go the same to the point of meeting Clare or not.


    Meh. The Claymore forum here... well, best not to say lest I sound snobish. It's typical of a niche group, though.

    If you want something with a surprisingly good core (if superflous extra), I heartily recommend To Aru Index/Railgun. It's one of those works that, with just a bit more polishing*, could be a Very Good series.

    *And by polishing, I mean getting rid of anime superflous junk, like harem romance nonsense.




    If Dark Fantasy is more your interest, buy a copy of Civ IV, Beyond the Sword, and load the Fall From Heaven mod. Now that's some fun Dark Fantasy to play. Darker than Claymore, by far.

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