Sig art-- criticism? (large bandwidth)
 

Full-size sigart:

http://ashitaka-san.home.comcast.net/images/azarin.png

(Note that you must be using Mozilla to see this correctly. IE users, I suggest you upgrade ASAP and avoid potential security hazards.)

What's up with my proportions? I have the old Julie Dillion heads guide printed out and on my wall, but it didn't seem right at all. Rather, I modeled my proportions after some pictures from my very large collection of moe artwork; but of course that is less scientific and the end result is imperfect.

Also, how do you go about coloring things correctly? :)

looks a lot better in its sig form, and..what language(if any) is that stuff written in above "peaches are nice in the summer"?

That's Arabic in my cruddy handwriting, and it says "mishmish" which means "peach" (read right to left...)