Ore no Imouto - FanFiction Discussion
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Jheeze, didnt think this was going to part of another thread haha, well.. I was going to just ask what would u do with a sister like kirino and got carried away, haha.
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Also for me, you don't mix 2D and 3D. |
haha is that right, but i know some people who are superb fanfic writers for this novel! Nothing beats them,
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Maaannn...there's so much I want to write for this series, but I'm kinda dried up on ideas for it...
The only idea I had so far is having a street performing hypnotist hypnotize Kirino to be more honest with her feelings...only for them to forget to undo the thing >.> It's a very basic and small idea that really doesn't want to go anywhere. I need to write more fanfics, but I don't want to force them out either... Thankfully, the few fics I DID write for this series have turned out halfway decently... |
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Some fanfic recommendations:
Moo Moo plus Cow's Fleeting Glimpses, Ch 2: Unexpected Sight - a rare one-shot that features KyousukexSaori. (Advance warning though, some of the other chapters lean on the "no sexually explicit material" rule.) Frog-kun's Vicissitude - a rather daring "What-if?", as in "What if Kyousuke only discovered Kirino's hobby posthumously?" (A warning to those currently high on V12 spoilers, this would probably bring your spirits crashing down.) Excellent writing, both of them. |
I have to agree with Moo Moo plus Cow. The stuff he's written is fantastic and really enjoyable.
I recommend Eliya Shirwood's "The Sibling Complication" as well as the stories that precede it: Breaching the Brother and Sister Complex - Eliya Shirwood (no link due to M-rated material) The Brother and Sister Complex - Zkname (no link again due to M-rated Material) Eliya Shirwood's "The North Wind and The Sun". "Empty Places" by Miracles79. There's probably more, but this'll be enough for now. |
If it's really an open ending, how about this?
Here’s my scenario:
10 yrs later - We see a house, standard type, the characters appear more mature, obviously. As the camera zooms in, we hear (typically) Kirino yelling at Kyousuke (who else?) Inside we see your standard interior with K&K arguing (about a new game she wants to get, possibly) She argues ‘the twins are with Mom, so we have until about 4 o’clock this afternoon, whats the problem?’ He says he’s waiting on a call, she says that shouldn’t keep him from going, and he gives in They spend the day out doing things, joking, arguing, talking about people (Saori, Ayase, whoever) We find some background on other characters, maybe they meet one, another calls from work and we see what they’re doing They arrive back at the house with the game and try it out, but it’s getting close to 4pm Kyousuke asks Kirino if she wants something to drink, and Kirino clicks ‘save’ on the game They go out to the kitchen. They have a short talk, remembering things in the past Then, the front door opens and Kuroneko walks in with a little girl in tow…K and K go to meet her. As Kirino and Kuroneko approach each other, the little girl shouts ‘Daddy’ and runs into Kyousuke’s arms and he picks her up After finishing the hug with Kirino, Kuroneko moves over and kisses Kyousuke on the cheek, asking how his day was. Kyousuke looks at Kirino and says ‘the usual’ at which point Kirino punches him in the shoulder (the one not holding the child) Then Kuroneko asks Kirino if she can stay for dinner, Kirino says no, (husband’s name here) is cooking dinner for her and the twins, then they’re going to a movie Kirino then says ‘well, I’ll be seeing you’ , and takes her leave. The door closes. Kyousuke puts his daughter down and she runs off, while Kuroneko goes into (the kitchen?) As she walks toward the street, Kirino turns around and looks back at the house with a wistful look on her face, then a smile pops up on her face, ending with a copyright Kirino laugh as she turns to leave Inside, Kyousuke is by himself still looking at the door with the same look on his face, that turns into a little smile and a chuckle. Kuroneko sees him looking at the door and the look on her face is a little sad, but understanding and not upset Camera pulls back from the house and you can see Kirino walking away toward her own home and family (talking on a cell phone of course) while, in the front window, you see Kyousuke’s daughter running and laughing, being caught and picked up by him as Kuroneko yells at him to be careful with her or she'll curse him. The End |
The Sibling Complication is just soo amazing, I might even like it a bit more then the original series from the way it went!
It really is good! I cant wait till he updates it haha! If ever, The sibling complication! I hope someone writes a fanfic the same size of the novels continueing what happens after vol 12! The thing is that once I finish vol 12, it be wierd to see the relationships still building up in fanfics, so everyone really needs to start from there! Currently re-reading all the LN awaiting the official translation for vol 12! But damn, I will have to check the other fics after :P |
I put this in the LN/M discussion thread first, but since I posted it literally the morning before the v12 spoilers popped up, I think I'm safe in assuming not many people glanced at it.
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Here's the catch: it's a crossover with Puella Magi Madoka Magica. Spoiler for Excerpt - feedback appreciated:
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and hahaha ur prediction about ayase and kureneko was jokes, spoiled it with ur assumptions :P |
So sad that there's only like 1 or 2 fics PURELY about Kuroneko and Kyousuke.
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If you want a 'kiss'...
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Zoom in on a regular looking house You hear two people arguing - guess who... Kirino wants to go shopping, Kyouske doesn't She says 'Mom has the twins, so we have 'til about 4pm' He agrees and they go shopping for a new eroge she's heard about They shop and argue, meet Saori, talk to Ayase on the phone They get home by 3pm and play the game a bit At 4pm they're in the kitchen and the front door opens In walks Kuroneko with a little girl in tow The little girl sees Kyouske and yells 'Daddy!' And runs into his arms Kuroneko says hello to Kirino then leans over And kisses Kyouske She asks 'how was your day, dear? He looks at Kirino and says 'the usual' She punches him in the shoulder. Kuroneko asks Kirino if she can stay for dinner Kirino declines 'I have to pick up the kids at Mom's, then get home since Mikagami is cooking dinner tonight and he always has problems' Kirino leans in, kisses her brother 'Take care, big brother' and heads out Pan away from the house Show Kirino talking on her cell phone and hear Kyouske's daughter laughing as he father tickles her, and Kuroneko warning him to take it easy or she'll curse him The End |
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Today, 16:38 from Wilshere: "This is unreasonable on many levels, but fan fiction cant be avoided. "
@Wilshere: I'm slumped over my desk, abashed, immolated and (quietly) chuckling about your concern with 'fake' fiction versus 'real' fiction. What a concept. On the other hand, I won't be cashing checks like his anywhere in the near future... Primarily I was showing that in a very short column of sentences, an author can set, trigger, delete, reset and keep a reader bouncing from tangent to tangent until their eyes cross. The numerous potential relationships and opportunites presented in this manga/anime have, as shown by the sheer number of posts, kept the readers guessing, drawn out their feelings on the siscon issue, and have them continuing to follow this story, with advocates for this or that route, line of thought or rationale lining up to make their case. It's all good, and gives an interesting insight into how people see this issue and respond to it. Maybe you're different, but I'd think the reader of my blurb would go through the hoops I intended: They DO end up living together! Kirino had twins? They did have children! Why is Kuroneko just walking in the door like she lived there... She lives there? It's the threesome route? He's living with them both? Kuroneko has a little girl! Kyouske is her father, too? Kirino turned down the dinner invitation - she doesn't live there? She's headed home to Mikagame - the twins aren't Kyouske's? etc etc. Take a look at a pyramid from directly above in space - you see a square Look at that same pyramid from ground level on one side - you see a triangle Perspective, point of view - it's a writers advantage and a readers nightmare/cup of tea Gotta love it. Anime299 |
Shouldn't this go into to the fan fiction forum?
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