Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion
Welcome to MGLN Character Creation and Discussion thread.
This thread is a place where you can discuss the already existing characters of Nanoha-verse, as well as your own Original characters, created by taking the principles known about Nanoha-verse into consideration. As most other threads, this is a discussion thread, thus you are expected to comment on other people's creations in case you submit your own character. Do not simply drop by to submit your creation. Posts that serve only to submit a character without contributing anything to the discussion will be deleted. If you happen to come across such posts, feel free to use the Report button  , so we can keep the discussion going. Discussion means that people will disagree with you. Try to listen to them before ignoring them for trying to ‘kill your darlings’ :) Remember: when creating a character it is important to give as much specific information as you can come up with. This will keep things more interesting for every one. Some basic things are:
Please avoid DBZ-like characters. Unstoppable gods with enough power to blow up a planet by accidentally sneezing doesn't make for a very interesting discussion, and is not faithful to Nanoha-verse :) Try to have the character as realistic as possible in term of ability and magic usage (example: she might get easily tired after casting a powerful area-affect spell). If possible, try not posting too many characters in one post. How detailed you describe everything is up to you, but the more details - the more things to discuss. Have fun! Here is a link to a post that contains a compilation of all the original characters created at this point of time. TEH LINK |
Welcome. This is not something for the faint hearted. It's been given a "Wall of Ultimate Blue Cheese" warning. Eyes only, discretion advised.
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Now you'd probably need a template. HASHA! Spoiler for The Legend of Kha der Kleriker.:
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Here it is fellas. Kha's All the OC Thread's Fanon Timeline!!! All the OC Thread's Original Characters by Kha the Cleric And not forgetting...! CODEX: DAEMONJAEGER Der Kleriker Kronicles :heh: [Satashi]Konata says: http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...nata4v2xc8.gif[/Satashi] :eyespin: Come on, don't tell me you never dreamed to be like this. :D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Message of Divinity: The Symbiosis of Light and Darkness Spoiler for Scriptures:
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wow impressive work^^ I love it. Much thought went into I see. LOve the idea of the timid uber type, afraid of her own power. I'm so gonna come up with a character of my own when I can come up with something that fits my idea^^ lol Team Mentor: Nanoha Scrya huh^^ better be careful or you'll start the war again^^
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The Original Character Database
This is a compilation of all the Original Characters created in this thread, with links to their original posts, made to make it easier for newcomers and everyone else to find other people's works.
~~~ Timelines Official Nanoha Timeline, translation courtesy of Nightengale. OC Thread's Fanon Timeline, compiled by Kha. ~~~ The OC List Created by Aaron008R (Complete OC List)
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Created by Wibbles Created by Wild Goose (Complete OC List) ~~~ Other miscellaneous and useful information found in the thread:
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I suppose this would be a cross post, maybe I should remove the other one in the fanfiction thread. I was intent on being the first to share a character, however I was stuck when arriving upon the "Alignment" value. I had to force myself to remember the RPGs I had played and look up their descriptions. Anyway in the end I decided to toss it out the window.
A small note, I intend to place this character in a potential work called "The Bureau (working title)" Spoiler for Setsuya Amemiya, the Soul Assassin:
I like the character Kha, and the wrinkles you've put in place. Unfortunately while I enjoy mahou shoujo I don't make myself watch/read much of it so many of the references went right over my head. I can't really offer much in the way of advice right now, sorry. |
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Very interesting character. The fact that his Linker Core was damaged is pretty intriguing. But how is he able to maintain two devices with his damaged Linker Core? This is the only part that sounds a bit out of place, in my opinion. Aside from this, very nice character. I'll wait an hour before posting my character, so there will be some space for discussion. |
168cm converts roughly to 5' 6". Pretty tall for an eight year old. I'd suggest something between 110 cm and 135 cm, personally. : X
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Ah, Erio, I didn't really give the two devices + low mage rank too much thought. Perhaps I should have, but if you look at someone like Subaru, she's technically using two devices and she's ranked at C and then B. Revolver Knuckle is an armed device while Mach Caliber is an intelligent device. The damaged linker core is more like a wall that is hard to break down, very little growth potential. It will be very difficult for Amemiya to truly move on to rank AA and above because of this.
Thanks for the feedback though, I really never thought about that. Also Kha, I think your heroine may be a bit too heavy for her age. I fished around, and the average weight for an 8 year old is around 30 kg (roughly 60 lbs). |
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I think Nanoka is very well-developed for her age :heh:
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Note the reference to Mustang, Miata and Vios cars. :D It was done in under 1 hour. Believe me, my head feels aching while writing down her biography :eyespin:. Feedbacks? |
just move up the time line another 10 years and make the girl Moriyama Nanoka 18 years old and then problem solved with the hieght of character!!!!
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A bit more on Background: This Nanoka is a loli spinoff of an older char who appears in another fic of mine, Mobile Angel Reiya, which is set in another universe, but the same multiverse. I've always wanted to do a backstory on her, and this thread gave me the idea to get started. For Nanoka's father's tribe, (he's still unnamed, I need a name for him) I was thinking about a traditional Japanese society existing in MC, like the German Velka group that arose on the planet. They are human, but due to some morphological differences, like pointed ears, they call themselves Eta, meaning "descendents of gods" in their tongue, and hence have a low opinion of other races. Human-Eta relationships are frowned upon. And worst off are the Half-Eta children like Nanoka; to them Half-Eta seem like defiled atrocities. Ironically, the Moriyama twins have an incredibly rare Eta trait, the "lopped ear", meaning they have their ears all furry and sticking straight out the sides of their heads. Culturally, that means that they share the ears of the Starseer Teana who supposedly brought the Eta to Mid-childa eons ago. That trait is also considered sexy in Eta tastes, so you can imagine the irony when both of them drop by the village for the first time. Nanoka knows transformation magic to turn her ears to those of a human, and so her lopped ears only appear when she unseals Pluma Holi. Quote:
Wind of Pain does feel weird. Maybe Wind of Confusion, such that it is a bind? Quote:
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Alright finally put something together^^ Here is my character^^
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Any advice would be nice^^ Had some fun creating this character^^ Migh make a small manga around her if I have time to draw it up :heh: |
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Miroku... Monk... Lecherous adoptive father? And the sword being Inusaiga? :heh: Pretty cool idea there. Is she affliated to the TSAB? And she's an ice mage? If so, many you could give her more ice-based attacks and something like Frost Armor. So far our chars have very few skills and abilities for a human mage. I'm still wracking my brains for more Nanoka's attacks. But somehow... Teresa Testarossa keeps tugging at my brain to get her written. :p |
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I'll try to come up with more spells and equipment later, including a story to do with it^^ |
You guys sure are creating your characters fast. lol I guess I'll leave mine for tomorrow.
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With the way you think of it (little growth potential), though, being able to use two devices like Subaru is plausible. Sorry for the confusion. It was very interesting to think about it, though. :) @USB500 As soon as I read this line: "Currently she is assigned under Yuuno Scrya." I knew I was going to like the character. :D But wow! Are you sure she is a support mage? Earthquake, Stalagmite, METEOR, and Fissure. Did you forget Volcano? ;) I'm sure she is training with Nanoha too. :D I dont mean to say she is overpowered (I'm not complaining either. I like the skill set), but I would think she is more of a Wide-Area Bombardment type mage than a support mage. |
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Damn, you guys are hardworking as hell. Sadly, I'm in progress of Before Beginnings Chapter 2, so I can't grant out any highly detailed character creation stint before tomorrow or the day after.
Anyway, a point of interest here is that most of you seemingly have interest in conjuring new characters in a more present or future setting. It's nicely constructed for most parts, but personally, those are my least favourite type of OCs, since I prefer ancient-old times OCs. Hmm. |
The term "support" would depend on how the spells are used, although there inevitably spells that would classify as support, like boost spells. As already mentioned, the aforementioned spells above could be classified as bombardment long range fire support.
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@Meophist & LoweGear
Haha, you guys definitely have a point there. I guess I was blinded with excitement when I read METEOR. I love that kind of spell. And yeah, you got me there-- long range bombardment IS considered support as well. OK, here is my character. I came up with the idea for this character while reading the A's to StrikerS Comics. For this character's fighting style, I had to expand upon the general magic system of Nanoha-verse, so I'll be describing the fighting style and other things along the way. And BTW, I never thought about giving my character a Spell or Move List. I hope you guys like it. :D --- Character Name: Sophia (Last Name unknown) ---
Shooting/Bombardment Magic: C---
Character Background: Sophia lost her parents when she was still 4 years old, so she was taken in by a magic training facility that raises orphans to become professional assassins. The facility was only interested in children with high magic potential so Sophia was kicked out 4 years later after she did not display any substantial magic abilities. From short to long range shooting magic, to defensive and enchantment magic, Sophia did not excel in any. She was left for dead in a jungle area, far away from any major city. To be able to survive, Sophia materialized a weapon, a small dagger. While she was notoriously bad in magic overall, after some time she found her true specialty: Materialization Magic. [~Materialization/Conjuration Magic Description~] The user is able to create almost anything he or she has in mind. Materialization Magic was banned by the TSAB in their efforts to outlaw physical weapons. The only way of materialization allowed by the TSAB is the materialization of Barrier Jackets, which are handled completely by Magic Devices.
To be able to use the weapons she created, Sophia trained in close combat. Her ability to instantly create any type of weapon let her choose the most suitable weapon for any circumstance. She became one of the best Counter Style close combat fighters. [~Counter Style Description~] A combat style used by agility- and speed-based fighters. The style is based on reflexes. The user waits for their opponent’s attacks and dodges them with incredible reflexes and counter attacks while their foes are still finishing their attack. An attack usually does not work twice. **Nanoha’s Divine Buster and Starlight Breaker would be ineffective against this type, unless binding is involved, as we often see in the anime. Accel Shooter would be Nanoha’s best bet. Fate would have a better time against such type, as she is fast and also has long range attacks.** Sophia is able to materialize on the fly any weapon she needs to counter her opponent’s fighting style. Her weapon of choice is the Spear, as she does not have any long range magical attacks. She can, however, materialize a bow or a gun, if she needs to (though to materialize a gun she needs quite a bit of time and concentration, as the internal parts are hard to replicate, not to mention the bullets). As for her appareance, Sophia can materialize simple clothes to match that of the people in any town, so she can blend into the crowd without problems. By the age of 14 she became a full fledged Bounty Hunter. In one of her missions, she spotted a Mid-Childan spaceship that had crashed. There were no survivors. Inside, she found her Intelligent Device Sigrdrífa, which is a Wind-Elemental Booster/Movement Type Intelligent Device. The device is an earring while in its dormant form, and after setup it becomes a pair of boots and gloves. While Sophia had found other devices before, she didn’t take any of them as she wasn’t able to handle them properly. However, Sigrdrífa was the perfect device for her fighting style. The device’s specialty is movement based on wind manipulation, and it can also boost her physical and magical abilities and skills, such as adding stronger properties to her materialized items. It was primarily used as a magic booster support device—much like Caro’s Kerykeion—while keeping its master out of harm’s way with its quick movement. Thanks to Sigrdrífa, Sophia is able to fly. (Flying ability: A) As a professional assassin, Sophia's most fearsome skill is the materialization of a weapon imbued with an Anti-Magic-Field. Because the AMF is one of the more complex Field-type defensive spells, the materialized weapons imbued with it only last 2 minutes. As materialized weapons seem like regular physical weapons, most mages dont pay attention to the weapons, and Sophia makes them pay for their big mistake. She can also imbue weapons with elemental properties. Sophia cannot take many hits, as her defensive magic abilities are below average. To defend against magic projectiles, she materializes a weapon or shield with magic barriers or shields to deflect them. As her defensive magic ability is just rank A (thanks to Sigrdrífa's boost), her best bet is to evade any upcoming attack. --- OK, I think I have covered almost everything I had in mind, but surely there are some holes here and there. If there is something that is not too clear, please let me know and I'll see what can be done. Thanks for reading. :D |
materialization huh^^ interesting idea^^ love to see it in action. alright I'll come up with some more stuff for my character for tommorrow, maybe I'll do a sketch rendition of what she looks like in her barrier jacket (lol fyi, as it stands she doesn't have one yet^^, I'll give ya the story behind that when I fine tune it, so wait for it^^) For now I think I need sleep^^
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It seems that two of the characters posted so far use the element of wind as their magic basis. That might rise to five if I decide to post my other OCs here. :heh: |
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Sophia: *shouts with echoes* Materialize! Sigdrifa: *displays in micro-text* Sophia - Orange Assassin - Initializing - Boost Movement - Intelligent Device - Loading... Materialize OK. At least that's what they remind me of. :heh: As an assassin she's got the chance to work on missions that run parallel to the story. We might even be able to explore the TSAB traitor theory with her. And when she gets the red packet with Nanoha's name on it, there's going to be lots of room for hard-hitting action too. She looks pretty advanced not sure how to improve her. And my Teresa got the better of me... Spoiler for Teresa Testarossa:
Catch the reference there? :D This girl is in need of edits too. And is the Dragonkin familiar too powerful an addition? @Keroko: Haha... You too?! You should see my jaw drop when Strada and Erio was unveiled for the first time... He was basically a non-religious shouta version of the Kha Alexei RP-frame I don for the forums sometimes. |
The following is a rant, and as such, the tone will be blunt.
I am not really a fond of fan-creations that are ranked S (even if it is limited to AA with Limiters) as it begins to reek of the Mary-Sue syndrome. There are various reasons to show restraint and maintain a cap on the Mage rank. Note that Rank-S is higher than Signum, Vita, Shota-Chrono(!) who was the most talented in the TSAB at that time, and even Loli-Fate and Loli-Nanoha. It is not some "commonplace" rank. Lindy is an Admiral, and she is still "only" Rank-S. There is no shame in having a character who is Rank-A and below. I mean heck, Caro is Rank-C, and she is still pretty much ownage. Just because the main cast are all "overpowered Demi-Gods", it is does not mean your characters have to be. After all, Rank-A is already considered Officer/Enforcer material. Rank-AAA is rare, and Rank-S is suppose to be exceedingly rare. Another problem with highly ranked fan-creations is that you are limiting yourself in terms of what enemies you can conjure to fight against without belittling the original cast. With Rank-B/A or below, you can come up with much more varied spectrum of enemies without resorting to Deus ex Machina or flaming plotholes. It will be easier to generate tension, without making the enemies beings of Cthulu or whatnot. Given the canon material of MSLN, Rank-A is a pretty reasonable baseline limit to work with, as that is the most common Rank for Officers and Enforcers. Rank-Bs are people like Subaru and Teana, who are basically your Marines. A level above the "common soldier". Rank-Cs are your average scrubs, and perhaps a common one for non-combat support mages. I tend to find that overpowering their fan-characters is a very common pitfall that many fans fall into when they make their fanfics. Remember, if your Rank-S character encounters a problem that he/she can't resolve, it would have to be a problem that Fate/Nanoha cannot resolve as well, and that is a pretty damn high bar to set. The DBZ-problem, so to speak. My $0.02 worth. Cheers. |
@ Erio: A combat alchemist? Rather unusual even by Nanoha.. still, like the work you put into the character. Although the Counter Combat style seems rather basic in its description, and could almost be applied to other high speed combat styles. Although being an anti-mage makes her good enough for me XD
@Keroko and Kha: Holy ****, all your C&C references have me wishing I've done the same XD Ion Cannon? Orbital Bombardment? Damn, I almost expected Deathwing to use Tiberium-based weaponry :heh: (And Kha, you're the first person ever do honor to Captain Tessa in the Nanohaverse, All you need to do is a TDD reference and it's all good :D) Now here's a character I've been thinking up for a planned fic - which like all others it seems, always get shot out the window, meaning that I end up making characters for a vaporfic :heh: Quote:
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well reading all the submissions so far, some of them are too high... but bearable. i'll wait for a day or so before pitching in. edit: i can't wait a day... pardon the quality Spoiler for Character Prototype- pardon the rushed style:
Notes: This is practially a rapid draft of a character i'm planning for a post-StrikerS work- and i've intentionally left some details out, as this is still a character under think tank process. well it has tons of references from other shows dimensions. I usually create character profiles as the character progresses in the story- saves some juice which i can use during queue hours at work. please comment on it and tell me of any adjustments needed. --- well since we are so creative, are we allowed to host our own additions/modifications to canon characters? (hears "gold**** hammer" in the distance) |
everyone's ideas on their own created characters sounds great!!
good ideas and some even tie into the story... i wonder if i should make my own...hhmmmm |
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Well this Tessa ref was actually based on a FMP fic proposal I'm thinking of, in which TDD meets an airborne assault carrier, and when their captains meet Tessa almost screams Oma at the golden haired counterpart. Oma is a term from Vandread, also by Gonzo, that means Mother. :eyespin: Anyway submited here's the loli version, before she got the Stave de Danaan, of which one of the modes of that ID's barrier jacket is Tuatha de Danaan. Who says a Barrier Jacket couldn't protect more than one person, and has to be super-glued to him/her? :D I liked Kay a lot. If only she was attached to the TSAB sooner, and she'd have a place in the Green Planet fic. Unfortunately, all present and past Nanoha fics have been placed on hold due to the amount of uncertainty created by StrikerS. But if ya don't mind, I could reference her a lot for just her underworld connections. And... Why do I think the Scrya clan has her number in the "Call in an Emergency" slot? :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And now, for the biggest act of the show, I present to you, the most cheesiest, the most ludicrious, the 10 pages long, the most insanely well-planned over several arcs, the one and only... Spoiler for Ultimate Wall of Unabashed Cheese.:
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Goddamnit, Kha, must you write that much? I know it's self-fueling, but...damn.
Anyway, I'll probably post character information on Rear Admiral Florentina Lieze and Artificial Receptionary Intelligence Android Weapon, code name A.R.I.A. If you couldn't tell already, these 2 characters are from my imaginary, probably-won't-be-written The Youthful Chronicles of Gil Graham's Screwed Love Life. |
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@ Kha: WOAH, talk about WALL Of Unabashed Blue Cheese *picks himself up for a moment*, it's more a fanfic than a character profile :heh: I am quite envious of your ability to creat cool german sounding attacks and abilities though :) Especially the armors Panzer, Jaeger and Schneider (I know I've heard of a combination of these three somewhere... Liger Zero... :D )
And I really wouldn't mind Kay being called in for emergencies stemming from shady reasons :heh: And as for the Scryas... Kay: Shinji, I need more info on this relic, find me some good reference material stat! Shinji: You don't mean the "Ten Time Rheias Award Winning Archaelogist and Author Yuuno Scrya?" Kay: You're such a mind reader! Get me as much as you can! Shinji: *sigh* Like she looks up on info with anyone else... @ Nightengale: I can smell H.I.M.E. vibes coming from that idea :D Even if it's vaporfics, at least give us a rundown on A.R.I.A. XD |
@ kha: W00t! More Warcaft references, atta boy, Kha! Now I'll have to work extra hard to get the biggest bio. You ain't seen the true Keroko yet!
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Though this version of Keroko is what I like to call the "RPG version" the real Keroko is a character that actually has a part in the storyline. She would fight alongside Fate and Nanoha, which meant that she had to be at least that powerfull at the time, and that didn't lessen. I might post her bio later, but its going to take some time to gather all the data and put it to paper. A little sneak preview: Her full name is Takamachi G. Keroko, or in mid-childa style, Keroko Georashi Takamachi. Yes, there's a story behind that one. |
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with some twist of FMP, SC, and even gundam :D I must admit : the complexity and density of your "fic" are really high, which could be really a serious and solid fan creation suitable for nanohaverse, except if one catches the references :eyespin: I was pretty amused by the amount of references, though not on mocking way (though the mention of AS, Power Word : Fortitude/Shield just killed me :heh:) to much my surprise, some of your explanations are even more "believable" than the real things XD (example : Benediction of Freedom) But please people, I think you should stay withint the "plausible" for nanohaverse : giving the opportunity of some imagined addictions can be really too chaotic, resulting into much more "meh" impressions, rather than enjoyable things. (i hope i won't see anyone mentionning like "yamato mage, using a Strike barrier jacket, which can be fused with Freedom jacket", else, it might be even cheesier than SSS++++ Mages) beyond a certain limit, it won't be really bearable to read :s [/rant OFF] |
Kha Print me a paper copy and drop it off at my desk.... I'm serious about this, I'm not read that Thing unless its in my hands :heh:
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:eek: :eek: :eek: Zero- I mean Kha, should I call you CHEESE-KUN now?:heh: Though honestly, I think your character is as good as fan-made characters can get.:D The several characterizations and connections were extremely well done that I wouldn't mind your character in canon. (Maybe except that Kor Fuzion part:heh:) All in all, excellent work, Kha. I might try my hand on making a character one of these days, if I ever get the chance and time to type a long enough profile. I'm not assuring anything though.:heh: @Erio: Your character reminds me of Emiya Shirou.:heh: In any case, I find her style one of the more interesting one i've seen recently. Good work. @Keroko: I also like Darkwing-san's profile. The dragon stuff strikes me like some sort of contract not really used that much. But I like how Artherion sounds. |
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