Would you guys critique my art video?
 

We're making our own manga...let me know what you think of the art. Honestly, tell me what you think...you guys probably know best...

Watch it in high definition

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGE-L...e=channel_page

It looks lnteresting I might read the first chapter, but is this really the place and stop to post this?

not trying to be a jerk or anything...but I was told to get people (besides myself) that read a lot of manga to look at it and see if they thought it would be cool... I wasn't trying to offend anybody. I'm not spamming or trying to sell you anything...just thought I'd get some opinions.

Perhaps what Wargumm1i meant was that such a thread belongs in the Fan Creations forum, not in the Manga forum. It is after all a fan creation and not a published manga.