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ChibiDusk 2003-11-18 23:04

FinalDusk: ┐Plot?
 
Some of you might remember a game I was creating a while back called
FinalDusk.

Anyways, I finally made a semi-version of a plot.
Spoilers are there for no reason...
[it spoils the game, but oh well ^^"]

still some plot holes, but here it goes.
[just a quick version, write the full one later]

Spoiler:



*sigh* beta version, will change tommorrow, don;t have much time to type, sry ^^"

boneyjellyfish 2003-11-18 23:09

I don't remember, but shouldn't this have been posted in the ChibiWorkshop? :D

ChibiDusk 2003-11-18 23:28

Ne?
No, it shouldn't.
Well, I don't think it should have been...

Imazul 2003-11-18 23:42

Cant judge, you got some big plot hole.

Af for now if I did wanted to judge, id say it got some elements that are overdo in the amateur rpg world (hell even in anime). Its a pretty weird combination of many major plot twist that people could figure out way before it happens wich doesnt make a good plot twist. Its also a big combination of primary rpg element with close to none secondary stuff ( the girl having the tatoo, the end of the world, the guy she loves being the key, etc..) wich can actually make a good story. So in my humble opinion once you fill some more gap it could produce a really good story, or you could mess up and turn out with something really bad.

Dark Zero 2003-11-19 00:21

I liked it, until I read the final paragraph. Maybe you should change that a bit, unless you want a very sad ending......which is pretty cool if done properly, and usually a good twist rather then the usual.

ChibiDusk 2003-11-19 16:49

That was a beta of my plot, and not described well
because of the time I had to write it. Ill fix it up some very soon.

gravitation 2003-11-19 18:43

well i think it sounds kool!, i neva knew ya was making a game?!!? thats kool ^__^ i wish you luck on it :D

Shii 2003-11-19 22:59

Spoiler:

This is a cliche and you are already boring yourself typing it... when you come up with something that you can type without "etc., etc., etc.", despite it being a rough draft, that will be a good plotline.


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