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Mundain 2003-11-20 21:35

I need some help here
 
I am trying to make this pose work, the head part I mean. I cant think of a pose for the rest of the body, I already suck at bodies, and this is just beyond me. Do you guys think what I have is working? Also, I wouldnt mind any suggestions :-p


http://www.sf-art.net/images/rough1.jpg

dot|hack 2003-11-21 00:57

Its a good pose. I would say to bring the head back a tad more. Also make his face look left about 20 degrees more.

Vulkar 2003-11-21 01:07

head is too big

dexter 2003-11-21 13:02

I think the arms are too short in proportion !! :) I think the length between the shoulder and the elbow is a little bit short !!

But I can't really tell because all I see are the ovals that represent them !!:D

overall the picture is good !! oh .... and one more thing to add there seems to be no facial expression showing in his face !! it looks like he is staring blankly at somthing !!

Stofzuiger 2003-11-21 13:58

his chin is placed too far forwards :heh:
or his forehead is placed too far back :fingers:

(i'd say his forehead is to far backwards :eyebrow: )

Mundain 2003-11-21 17:37

Alright! thanks for the advice, I will get right on it :)


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