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Ayla 2005-12-24 00:46

Need some help...
 
I've neve been able to stick with drawing people...I draw a picture here or there, it sucks, I go back to something like animals or whatever...lol. I DO want to learn though..so I'll keep trying -__-

I need help though...Can anyone draw over mine to show me where I've gone wrong? I find it really hard to fix mistakes simply by someone telling me it's wrong....A lot of the time I can see it's wrong, I just can't fix it.

(btw, I'm not trying to draw porn here..lol I just think it's too hard to draw clothes before the body shape is done....)

http://tainted-sky.net/draw/wipaagirl2.jpg

Is the nose too low? Or maybe the head is too big? -__- Hips to wide? (I suck with anatomy haha) The arms....I can't get them right. Her right arm, she is suppose to be resting her hand on it (like a sword) her left is just hanging there...I duno why, but arms and hands are hard to draw o_O

Help??

Rachy 2005-12-24 00:58

for the style the nose didnt bother me much , but i suppose it is to low.

the hips were like o_o lol , recently pregnant? but even then..:P i think you should make the hips smaller n_n.

the 1 boob looks different than the other -.-

i still like the drawing ! the hips is what bothers me most lol.

Ayla 2005-12-24 01:01

Yeah I figured...but then the shoulders look too big when they were smaller -___- *dies*

AsukiAnio 2005-12-24 01:26

Request granted. :D

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...orrections.jpg

I don't think there's much problems with the drawing. But I think the main problem here is that her mid-section is too short. The diagram I drew is a bit off balance, so you'll have to balance her out in the end.

This shows promise. Let's see what you will come up with.

Ayla 2005-12-24 10:52

Thanks a lot for that :) It really helps (I totally wasn't going to draw feet cause I suck atthem, butnow I guess I have to? hehe) :x

sarrah 2005-12-24 15:18

yeh i agree not many problems when it comes to body proportions..its just postioning of the face,,,,, bigger forhead needed, maybe slightly closer together

RevoltersDS 2005-12-24 16:04

yeah, i do agree with everyone about the hips but you pretty much nailed the female figure.
i don't see a problem with the face at all.
having the nose low seems like it's more about your style.
don't worry about drawing the feet and hands.
in my opinion, that's the hardest part of the body to draw.
i didn't get good at drawing feet until this past semester.
now i love drawing hands and feet.

Ayla 2005-12-24 18:38

Ok...I tried to fix some of the things anio pointed out...I can't for the life of me draw good hands/feet lol. It totally ruins it.
http://tainted-sky.net/draw/wipaagirl3.jpg

Dokuganryu 2005-12-24 18:49

i think your almost there, the proportions are still a bit off. check out Anio demo again i think you can see where your going wrong, but your on the right

Ayla 2005-12-24 22:03

Yeah I know...I'm having troubles lol XD

sarrah 2005-12-25 08:00

the left boob is smaller, the eyes , the left is higher than the right the lips are geared more to the left...change these point, the feet should not be flat plane look at asuki's sketch...go go go!!!
gambate!

Ayla 2005-12-26 14:56

I don't get the whole feet pointing down thing? To me it looks like she is standing on a hill or something? o_O sorry, I don't understand T-T

sarrah 2005-12-27 17:14

it gives the effect of moving forward.... i think.... but i see where you coming from, but the feet aren't necessarily so flat...mayeb thats it...i guess i dont think as much when i draw...lol..sorry im useless

Ayla 2005-12-27 22:29

Hmmm....*is hopeless*

Thanks though for the pointers..maybe it's the angle...o_O

EnseiSong 2005-12-28 00:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ayla
I don't get the whole feet pointing down thing? To me it looks like she is standing on a hill or something? o_O sorry, I don't understand T-T

I can answer this question... although I'm not too good at drawing, :heh:

I try to do what AsukiAnio did and made the figure drawn straight. Also try to answer the question why the feet are looking like that.

hope it helps~:)

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y19...wipaagirl3.jpg

Ayla 2005-12-28 01:47

Ohhhh, makes sense now ;D I'm a little slow sometimes hehe but I get it now. Thanks so much for clearing that up! I thought it had to do with angle the viewer is looking at it, but I couldn't see it...


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