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Marshall Banana 2004-01-13 17:16

What do you think?
 
Here is a picture i drew today. I was actually taking it serious for one time and found a pair of docker jeans on the web which i copied down on the paper. Then i saw a sweater on TV which i though would look absolutely nice with the pants so i rushed back and made a quick sketch of it. Oh...pants and sweater happend yesterday. Today i compiled it all and drew this guy...and i will have it colored for tomorrow...or atleast a color proposition.

http://w1.859.telia.com/~u85921962/skanna0013_modd.jpg

Tzurial 2004-01-13 17:24

Ive noticed youve talked about pants in a couple of threads! Im glad to see the outcome, it looks great!

noZ 2004-01-13 17:34

i really like it..nice pose, and great proportions..
bu i hate the hair..dont know why..sry

Sarumaru 2004-01-13 17:57

Yeah looks good, nice and clean too.

Marshall Banana 2004-01-13 18:04

yah...hair...hmm...not that good at drawing that...sry...
maybe you have some tips?

Shinobu_Maehara 2004-01-13 18:25

It's good, I can't find any serious errors, Maybe for the next one you could draw a little larger. that way you have more room for details. ;)

Nice scetching.

Marshall Banana 2004-01-13 18:59

Edited and removed

Raxial 2004-01-13 19:05

nice color choices. So you're gonna go back and shade/ wrinkle the clothing, right

Marshall Banana 2004-01-13 19:24

yes....ima gonna do that right now as a matter of fact ;)

Edit: And e voilá here is what my eyes could bare with in the middle of the night...

http://w1.859.telia.com/~u85921962/oneUP2.jpg

Marshall Banana 2004-01-13 22:04

A work in progress to say the least
but fun to post

http://w1.859.telia.com/~u85921962/oneUPcopy.jpg

truce 2004-01-13 22:55

haha, in the first sketch it looks like those front bangs he's got can be colored yellow and BAM- hikaru shindou from 'hikaru no go' about to kick some ass. but i like how it turned out.

gravitation 2004-01-13 23:13

oooo i just saw the first post, it looks kewl and very clean too! the colour version looks kewl too, i await the finished result ^_~

FrOzE BLadE 2004-01-14 07:01

wow the third version looked so diffferent from the sketch!! nice job!

Marshall Banana 2004-01-14 14:44

hmm...well here is a quite sloppy one...i am afraid i am not that good at coloring landscapes
http://w1.859.telia.com/~u85921962/oneUPcopy2.jpg

noZ 2004-01-14 14:54

i was just saying..the front part of the hair (the bangs) were shaded waaay to much....it looked as thought hey were sprouting out of his forehead....after you colored it...much better..one consistent color with a bit of shading....much much better....other than that....its really good :)
lanscape kinda flat..not bad though...i dont find backgrounds to be very important.....(cause i suck at them ;) )

fenrihr 2004-01-14 16:40

whole thing reminds me of rave.... which is good, since i could say 'ew it sucks' but i didn't so it's good.

and the background helps in creating that whole picture to make it kinda all look..... together... ah i dunno. i'm just spouting off...

let me just say..... it looks good.

OFFSPRiNGCo16 2004-01-14 16:51

Great drawing, came out nice, although the only thing I find a bit off is the neck...maybe a tad to long or something? I cant put my finger on it...

Raxial 2004-01-14 17:39

I may be mistaken, but I think the neck connects too far down on his chest. I may be worng, but if I'm right, its something to fix for the next drawing. It looks good as is.

Marshall Banana 2004-01-15 15:57

A hair sketch...hmmm...better or worse then the one above?

Yah i will think about the neck. I also had some friends tell me that his legs looked a bit weird.


http://w1.859.telia.com/~u85921962/skanna0014.jpg


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