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Alfons 2004-01-20 04:01

My first manga...
 
The first manga I've drawn, the second one I've colored:

http://www26.brinkster.com/Haxxmaxxwaxx/Mu.html

I hope for replies that can help me improve.

Torin-Kun 2004-01-20 15:47

Dude, are u sure that is your first manga? Really good if u ask me. Although I am not an xpert. Have you seen how some sketches have hair covering parts of the face but these parts can be seen. maybe that would be a good idea?

Deralti 2004-01-20 19:31

[whine] 'manga' is an understatement...its only 1 image...[/whine]

Looks great, although i'd reccomend perhaps changing the eyes, but as for shading and crap like that, leave that for later ;).

Raxial 2004-01-20 20:29

well, even if you do a sketch, leaving the parts of the face visible, dont they get covered up anyway when you color?

Deralti 2004-01-20 21:24

The drawing looks just a little too clean... methinks photoshop or some other painting app for the touches ;).
Edit: it was a response to raxial.

Alfons 2004-01-21 03:34

Thanks for the response, I hope my next one will be better. :)


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