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nekowai 2008-05-15 17:03

Please help me correct proportions
 
I think the lower part proportions of this image are exaggerated, can somebody help me correct it please?

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/3...alatea2fq4.jpg

Happy_Chip 2008-05-15 19:24

I'm not sure what you mean 'correct', are you asking for others to critique? or to edit the actual drawing?

also re: 'exaggerated lower proportions' you mean the hips/thighs?

if you want a critique, it's a nice illustration, not too bad. I agree the lower portion is too wide, the hips/thighs should be narrower- about the same width as the shoulders, maybe make them a bit straighter & more vertical. Right now she looks a bit bottom heavy :)\

I think the eyes also should be a bit closer together IMO - no, I take that back - I think the nose ought to be a bit more to the right, in between the eyes

hope my comments help a bit

reflection 2008-05-15 21:50

Everything is mostly fine, but what needs to be pointed out is the right arm. The elbow shouldn't be seen at that angle/perspective and is located far too low, which is evident when you measure with the one in the foreground (left elbow).

Evil Rick 2008-05-15 22:12

I think that your proportion is fine, don't see were is the mistake

BearShare 2008-05-15 22:50

Since when was curvy a bad thing?

And yeah, the elbow much go.

nekowai 2008-05-16 06:16

I didnt draw that, im just making a vector of it, i was wondering if i could make it look better by fixing some proportions...


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