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Yumi Chan 2009-01-01 22:07

My Story's
 
Hello. I have made these storys. I did NOT make the picture's though. By the way if it is bad, in your post,just post the positive things. i hope you Enjoy! Oh also, i will update some post's once in a while.^^

Spoiler for Character/Profile:

Spoiler for Story:

Spoiler for Part 2:

TerranReaper 2009-01-01 23:05

This is interesting. I'd like to see more of it.

Yumi Chan 2009-01-03 22:25

Please Rate!
 
Ok people. all people that veiw,please just read and rate. you don't need to post it. but you can read it at least. so please rate and read.
Thanks,
~Yumi Chan

Shana 2009-01-03 23:41

I was bored :heh: and started reading this; I think the story's okay. Though I think there should be some things you should try to improve, like developing it more. I mean, like instead of saying "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends." you should use "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends. They've been friends since they were 2 years old." or something. And btw, the note that was left by Mrs. April, why was it directed to *just* Amanda and not the rest of the classroom too?

Oh yeah, instead of using the three options the poll has, why don't you make it like ranting it from 1 to 10? I think it'd be better. And sorry for all the criticism :heh: Keep on writing!

aahhsin 2009-01-08 03:13

hahaha what a nice cute story. I'm liking it, but I won't rate it yet, i'm going to wait how it turns out.

read mine too! in my signature!

asuki-chan 2009-01-17 18:42

So far so good! i can't wait untill the next chapter

TerranReaper 2009-01-18 20:27

Keep 'em coming.

Yumi Chan 2009-01-29 19:45

Im still thinking 4 part 3..... keep writing though!


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