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Forum: General Chat 2013-10-06, 19:36
Replies: 30
Views: 1,055
Posted By Kerspunkle
I believe that the way a writer comes up with...

I believe that the way a writer comes up with ideas is sort of specific to that writer, so I don't really think I can help you with that. Well, there's a ton of good advice in this topic already.
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Forum: Fan Creations 2013-10-06, 17:58
Replies: 31
Views: 4,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
I definitely had to smile for that first Annie...

I definitely had to smile for that first Annie video, and I'm not a very expressive person. Good job! :heh: I can't decide whether I like the first or the last Annie video best.

I wish there were...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-10-06, 17:43
Replies: 1
Views: 409
Posted By Kerspunkle
I don't know much about these things, but I think...

I don't know much about these things, but I think you have a great voice! It's quite powerful, too. I don't really know how you could improve, except by just experimenting with different things I...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-10-06, 17:22
Replies: 72
Views: 17,340
Posted By Kerspunkle
Your gallery is always so cute! It makes me...

Your gallery is always so cute! It makes me smile.

You're improving. Keep at it and you'll get even better! :nod: The way you color hair makes it look so fluffy. May I ask what program you use to...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-10-06, 16:47
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Those were some interesting defeats! It was nice...

Those were some interesting defeats! It was nice to see Arwin and Erica work together to defeat Raegan and Fynn.

Now I'm wondering what will happen between the guilds and the council and what...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-09-05, 23:46
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
I was able to understand the Lukas and Wolgrin...

I was able to understand the Lukas and Wolgrin battle fine. It was interesting to see the two "bosses" face off. I think the Erica and Raegen battle seemed rushed, which was why it seemed more...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-09-05, 23:23
Replies: 7
Views: 961
Posted By Kerspunkle
I enjoyed those first two chapters. :) Thanks for...

I enjoyed those first two chapters. :) Thanks for sharing them with us. The story seemed to have a mysterious atmosphere, which I liked. People tend to be afraid to pick up longer stories, so I think...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-09-05, 22:51
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Entertaining as always! I enjoyed the battles in...

Entertaining as always! I enjoyed the battles in these last chapters. I liked how they each tried to outsmart their opponents. I thought the battle between Erica and Raegen seemed a little more...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-09-05, 22:29
Replies: 28
Views: 2,499
Posted By Kerspunkle
Wow! Very impressive! This definitely has great...

Wow! Very impressive! This definitely has great art. I especially like the villain/monster designs. It also has good comedy moments and a nice premise.

As for things you could work on, I would...
Forum: General Chat 2013-07-14, 21:58
Replies: 427
Views: 32,391
Posted By Kerspunkle
Just once.

Just once.
Forum: General Chat 2013-07-14, 19:44
Replies: 427
Views: 32,391
Posted By Kerspunkle
Is it cause for concern if you scream and you get...

Is it cause for concern if you scream and you get a sharp pain at the base of the skull and after a few minutes the sharp pain goes away and you develop tension (like if you're looking up at a movie...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-07-13, 15:20
Replies: 2
Views: 667
Posted By Kerspunkle
Well, it sounds interesting. I'll be sure to...

Well, it sounds interesting. I'll be sure to check it out whenever you post some.
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-07-13, 15:09
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Oh, I was meaning it as a compliment. I think...

Oh, I was meaning it as a compliment. I think it's cool when I get to know what inspires an author. I also think the descriptions of the clothing were done well because they were detailed but not so...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-07-13, 14:42
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Aw! Now I feel sad because I want to know what...

Aw! Now I feel sad because I want to know what happens next! Must...be...patient! But I will say that I'm glad that you're still updating despite your busy schedule.

Anyways, I think you've...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-01-21, 18:17
Replies: 31
Views: 4,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Loved your 3D videos! I know it takes a lot of...

Loved your 3D videos! I know it takes a lot of time and effort to do anything in 3D. Er, to do anything animated. I'm not knowledgeable enough to really give you any constructive criticism, but I...
Forum: Fan Creations 2013-01-21, 17:49
Replies: 327
Views: 61,305
Posted By Kerspunkle
I enjoy stories that switch POV like this! :) I...

I enjoy stories that switch POV like this! :) I think it helps the reader become more connected with the characters. There is one thing you should watch out for when switching POV often, though. I...
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-12-07, 16:20
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Oh, that's good then. :p I guess I want to say...

Oh, that's good then. :p I guess I want to say that it feels like more action is coming up soon in the story. I think that kind of feeling makes a story more enjoyable.
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-12-07, 16:05
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Yeah. I enjoyed the battle between Arwin and...

Yeah. I enjoyed the battle between Arwin and Gilbert as well. I thought it was the most exciting chapter so far. The story is getting more juicy. I don't know if you understand what I mean by that,...
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-12-07, 15:49
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Exciting chapter! I especially liked the comedic...

Exciting chapter! I especially liked the comedic parts and the battle with the monster.

I can see you added more details. This helped me imagine what was happening better, which made it more...
Forum: General Anime 2012-12-06, 18:22
Replies: 126
Views: 20,700
Posted By Kerspunkle
My favorite would have to be Ebisu, the God of...

My favorite would have to be Ebisu, the God of Commerce, from Wagaya no Oinari-sama! He owns a convenience store. How awesome is that? Besides, he's fun and interesting.
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-12-04, 18:50
Replies: 327
Views: 61,305
Posted By Kerspunkle
You're welcome. :) I guess it would be hard for...

You're welcome. :) I guess it would be hard for someone who doesn't have a problem like that to write that way.


Well, then you probably won't mind if I say I've noticed some errors with...
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-12-04, 18:05
Replies: 23
Views: 3,434
Posted By Kerspunkle
I like the sprinkling of comedy you threw in. ...

I like the sprinkling of comedy you threw in.

I see a few grammatical errors, but I find this prologue to be much more interesting than the last. :) I found the part of the previous prologue with...
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-11-20, 04:33
Replies: 70
Views: 11,111
Posted By Kerspunkle
Pretty interesting so far. I really like the...

Pretty interesting so far. I really like the names of the people and places. I can already tell you've improved. I think you should provide more details for clarity, though. For example, the scene...
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-11-20, 04:20
Replies: 5
Views: 1,433
Posted By Kerspunkle
Nice playing! They were all good, but I think I...

Nice playing! They were all good, but I think I liked "Aozora" best. I couldn't hear the guitar very well for "My Song" because of the vocals though.
Forum: Fan Creations 2012-11-20, 04:16
Replies: 327
Views: 61,305
Posted By Kerspunkle
I'm only on the third chapter, but it's...

I'm only on the third chapter, but it's interesting. I'm not that fond of romance stories, but I'll stick with this one. Good job, sir. :) Glycerin will probably be my favorite of the girls. Blar has...
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