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Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-09, 11:48
Replies: 5,295
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Posted By dragonzoid2001
I posted my changes on the story, please give me...

I posted my changes on the story, please give me your reviews and tell me what I need to change with the new updates I just did, I'll add on the HayatexYuuno charecter development later on, in later...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-09, 11:19
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Thanks for your suggestion, I'll change that as...

Thanks for your suggestion, I'll change that as soon as possible. I might take your suggestion in the battle ships but I'll add that in to the chapter. I'll definately keep the bases though, and yes...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-07, 19:09
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I just finished Chapter 2 of The Mages of...

I just finished Chapter 2 of The Mages of Division 6 Please tell me your opinion and tell me what I need to change.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3869271/2/
Chapter 2- The Rising Storm

Please...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-07, 03:35
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Umm, Satashi? I know you're currently writing...

Umm, Satashi? I know you're currently writing another fic but, are you ever planning on finishing 6th Division book 3 Redemption? I'm not rushing you or anything since your writing another fic right...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-02, 14:30
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I have changed the part about how Hayate was the...

I have changed the part about how Hayate was the commanding officer. I put Griffith Lowran in the position of commander since he was 2nd in command before. Please tell me if I have to change anything...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-02, 10:50
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Thank you for your suggestion, Can you read it...

Thank you for your suggestion, Can you read it again after I post my changes? If it still sounds sketchy I think I'll do your suggestion. I just put in another charecter as the Commander and made...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-02, 10:23
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Hmm, I see your point. I'll fix the names of the...

Hmm, I see your point. I'll fix the names of the fowards, sorry it was a typo. I also added some lines to make their reason of joining a bit more reasonable. I'll update it asap, I'm in school right...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-02, 06:49
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I posted the new re-written version up on...

I posted the new re-written version up on fanfiction.net
http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3869271&chapter=1
Please tell me if I need to changed anything...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-11-01, 16:06
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Satashi, I'm sorry for copying you before. So...

Satashi, I'm sorry for copying you before. So after I finish the re-writen version, do you mind checking I didn't copy anything? When I start writing the chapter I don't really notice what I'm...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 16:57
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I'm very sorry... I'll take it off of...

I'm very sorry... I'll take it off of fanfiction.net immediately... and I'll re-write it please don't be too irritated... I will be sure not to copy... I didn't mean to copy in the first place... I...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 16:33
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Oh yeah I'll also change the thing about the...

Oh yeah I'll also change the thing about the Terror of Death, but do you mind if I use Nanoha's laugh? If you don't want me to use it I'll change it to something else. Sorry again. And what does...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 16:26
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I'm sorry, I'll remove all of that stuff right...

I'm sorry, I'll remove all of that stuff right now... I didn't mean to rip you off or anything.
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 16:10
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I'll also remove the part about the delay of the...

I'll also remove the part about the delay of the limiters... but the fowards have never been on Earth Non-Adminstrated Planet 97 before. In episode 6 Subaru said that her father was from the same...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 15:59
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
uh... I'm sorry... I just got a little excited...

uh... I'm sorry... I just got a little excited since it was my first fanfic... I know there's a lot of things wrong about it but how do you suggest me change about it? I'll change the details about...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-31, 14:06
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
I changed the story line a bit so it's a little...

I changed the story line a bit so it's a little bit different then the usual story line ok? And yes I know what SSS+ ranking imples, what do you want me to change the ranking to then!? At the end of...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-30, 13:10
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Hello again! I just finished the first chapter of...

Hello again! I just finished the first chapter of the series, The title is The Mages of Division 6. After you finish reading it if you have any other suggestions ...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-29, 16:46
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
ughh... I'm almost finished with my first...

ughh... I'm almost finished with my first chapter... but the thing im thinking of right the title... right now there is no title.... o well. When I finish it please don't insult it since I'm not...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-27, 14:52
Replies: 351
Views: 48,577
Posted By dragonzoid2001
My overall ranking is probably 9... THe overall...

My overall ranking is probably 9... THe overall story was good, the artist and graphics were good, but it was way too short... and they should tell the story about betwn A's and StrikerS... I hope...
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-27, 14:49
Replies: 384
Views: 45,265
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Ummm just asking... but does anyone think they...

Ummm just asking... but does anyone think they will make a forth series? Will they make another one after Strikers? I hope they will because they still can continue the story and it can't end yet T_T
Forum: Nanoha 2007-10-27, 11:42
Replies: 5,295
Views: 228,992
Posted By dragonzoid2001
Hello everyone! I'm new and I recently decided to...

Hello everyone! I'm new and I recently decided to write Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha fanfics!!! I hope everyone enjoys it when I finish it ^^ I'm a great fan of your fanfics Satashi ^^ and I hope you...
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