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Forum: Fan Creations 2011-11-30, 10:24
Replies: 12
Views: 1,317
Posted By shelter
WitchOfDoubt - The Ballad of Silhouette

WitchOfDoubt - The Ballad of Silhouette
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-11-20, 10:33
Replies: 12
Views: 1,344
Posted By shelter
Final Entry. Title: The Last Train. ...

Final Entry.

Title: The Last Train.


The Brother Leader sits on a honey yellow Ikea sofa, reading. Sometimes, especially just before dawn, he asks if his train has arrived.

The debris of a...
Forum: Claymore 2011-11-08, 09:09
Replies: 256
Views: 33,064
Posted By shelter
I think this scene you've mentioned in passing is...

I think this scene you've mentioned in passing is one of the smoothest, one-sided battles the Ghosts had. I loved how all seven of them work in sync with one another in cornering Agatha.
Forum: Claymore 2011-10-16, 03:04
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
I think the dialogue is fine the way it is. ...

I think the dialogue is fine the way it is.

What I meant is dialogue is best left as it is, or to stand alone with a speech tag (e.g "Let's go," she said.) In your case you describe dialogue &...
Forum: Claymore 2011-10-14, 21:35
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
This is just the first chapter, so I can't say...

This is just the first chapter, so I can't say very much about it.

I like it that you've chosen to align your narrative to a young Clare. It ups the ante, and the expectations that readers have....
Forum: Claymore 2011-10-01, 09:45
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
@Shiek I've mentioned before that I get...

@Shiek

I've mentioned before that I get inspiration by reading the posts & stories on the Animesuki forum.

I try to rotate between Claymore characters so that I get a chance to write for each...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-09-28, 09:23
Replies: 19
Views: 1,048
Posted By shelter
lordshadowisle - Writer's Block is for Perverts

lordshadowisle - Writer's Block is for Perverts
Forum: Claymore 2011-09-24, 09:15
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
Thank you Kinematics! I think in all my short...

Thank you Kinematics! I think in all my short time here on Animesuki I've never thought you were such a master proofreader.

Because of the lack of people such as you to keep me in check, I've...
Forum: Claymore 2011-09-22, 10:46
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
It's been quite a long time since I had anything...

It's been quite a long time since I had anything good enough to post here.

So, here's another one-shot.

Working title: A Sermon of Galatea
Words: 2,271

Summary: The children always ask her...
Forum: Claymore 2011-06-05, 20:53
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
I'm not as good as analyzing as Shiek is either....

I'm not as good as analyzing as Shiek is either. Which is why I didn't think too much about it.

It's an very strong observation you have. Even though it sounds really ironic, I believe everyone is...
Forum: Claymore 2011-06-05, 02:56
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
Personally, I got most satisfaction out of...

Personally, I got most satisfaction out of writing about Raki. Both Isley & Priscilla act quite predictably, and every Claymore fan will know their histories, but in Raki's case, I felt I needed...
Forum: Claymore 2011-06-04, 10:23
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
@Shiek, this is the 2nd (and last) part of the...

@Shiek, this is the 2nd (and last) part of the fic I posted previously.

Working Title: Nothing but White (Part 2)
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,342

Notes: It got a bit longer than expected.
Forum: Claymore 2011-05-21, 20:15
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
Wow, so many good comments & things to address. ...

Wow, so many good comments & things to address.

I think I start writing because I return home sometimes and think: it would be good to write some good Claymore fanfiction. I get a bit tired of...
Forum: Claymore 2011-05-20, 22:45
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
Keeping to my timeline for fic production, this...

Keeping to my timeline for fic production, this is Part 1 of the Raki-Isley-Priscilla fic I'm talking about.

Title: Nothing but White (Part 1)
Rating: T
Word Count: 2,945

Summary: Short...
Forum: Claymore 2011-05-17, 23:47
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
Thanks everyone for your opinions. In trying to...

Thanks everyone for your opinions. In trying to respond to your thoughts I've realized I may have misplaced my own



Falcor, I actually think that this is possible. But I'm trying to get at a...
Forum: Claymore 2011-05-16, 09:52
Replies: 4,158
Views: 336,303
Posted By shelter
This is a post requesting some opinions from the...

This is a post requesting some opinions from the writers here.

I'm currently writing a short fanfic on why Raki & Priscilla decided to leave Isley & wander the country on their own. The most...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-04-08, 20:55
Replies: 32
Views: 2,365
Posted By shelter
Thanks for the comments. I'm glad that I've not...

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad that I've not been universally questioned for using a 'different' language.

@zebra: Yes it is actual Malay up to the point that I can phrase it. Some of it is...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-04-08, 04:29
Replies: 32
Views: 2,365
Posted By shelter
1st Draft (Poetry) "Nur Hilya" 08 April ...

1st Draft (Poetry)
"Nur Hilya"
08 April



Nur Hilya

"Apa macham melayu punye?" she asks,
curious smile breaks in the wake of her words.
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-03-30, 07:56
Replies: 28
Views: 2,025
Posted By shelter
But still an excellent piece of work that...

But still an excellent piece of work that deserved to win :)
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-03-23, 10:47
Replies: 28
Views: 2,025
Posted By shelter
zebra - "Flickering Light" The_Seth - "Same...

zebra - "Flickering Light"
The_Seth - "Same Shit, Different Day"
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-03-14, 22:06
Replies: 51
Views: 3,451
Posted By shelter
Final Entry: SANDCASTLES For Fadwa...

Final Entry:


SANDCASTLES

For Fadwa Laroui (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/rachel-newcomb/fadwa-laroui-morocco_b_829467.html)
And for Japan

These are days
when newspapers bury readers in...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-03-12, 10:29
Replies: 51
Views: 3,451
Posted By shelter
This is my entry: First Draft ...

This is my entry:

First Draft

SANDCASTLES

Written for Fadwa Laroui (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/rachel-newcomb/fadwa-laroui-morocco_b_829467.html)

Reading today's news: I unearth
your...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-02-14, 04:31
Replies: 97
Views: 5,124
Posted By shelter
Final Entry

FINAL ENTRY:
Run With Me
14.02.2011




Run With Me

First, a footfall: our steps move
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-02-09, 08:24
Replies: 97
Views: 5,124
Posted By shelter
Technical? Poetic? I like to use colons, partly...

Technical? Poetic? I like to use colons, partly because they reflect the thought process. If I made you pause with a colon, then I'm happy. I wouldn't have it any other way.



Heh. If you didn't...
Forum: Fan Creations 2011-02-08, 10:49
Replies: 97
Views: 5,124
Posted By shelter
Thanks. Is there anything I'll need to change for...

Thanks. Is there anything I'll need to change for the final revision? Or anything that you found out of place?

(I've grown up learning that writing a too-good first draft isn't a good thing. So...
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