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SearcherS part 8 is done...here it is.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
Sion yelled, throwing two knives on Satoshi’s position, ready to strike.
A ball of lighting came in front of Satoshi, taking the brunt of the knives’ attack, and they fell harmlessly towards the ground. Sion didn’t mind about them as he switched his Device into the main state.
“Tartarus, Boomer Knives.”
Tartarus said, and both knives soon headed towards Satoshi.
“Cipher, Bloody Dagger!”
“[I got it.]”
and a couple of black knives in an arc came, shooting and deflecting Sion’s Device away. Sion grabbed Tartarus, and started attacking Satoshi at close range. Swiping at him, Satoshi managed to dodge all of them, sometimes barely. A glancing cut distracted him long enough for Sion to get a good kick at him.
he said quietly, letting the spell do the talking for him. Satoshi got knocked back a bit, reeling.
“He’s making me go on the defensive…gotta find a way.”
He soon got his chance, when Sion backed away a bit.
“Cipher, Rush Form!”
Soon, Satoshi got up, his Barrier Jacket changed as well as Cipher.
he said, and went straight at Sion.
Sion thought as he tried to slash him with Tartarus. He missed, as Satoshi ducked down, and stabbed him, Cipher’s point going through the other side. Sion looked pained as he fell down, dead.
Satoshi pulled Cipher out of Sion’s body, backing up a bit. Panting, he used Cipher as a stand.
he commented to Cipher, sighing.
“Man…that was tiring…”
“Tired, huh? Then you’ve gotten weaker.”
Sion said suddenly, getting up slowly.
“What in the
Satoshi yelled to him, shocked that he could apparently survive that blow.
“You’re supposed to be
Sion said calmly while he was getting up. A smile showed on his face when he got his footing back, and his eyes were yellow now; they were dark gray when Satoshi first saw him.
“Hell has no reservations for me.”
“You’re impossible to believe….”
Satoshi replied, wavering in his voice.
His wound suddenly healed back, and it looked like nothing had happened.
Satoshi could only say in his mind as Sion looked at him, laughing for a bit before talking again.
“You have it, brother; just that the TSAB that you work for like a dog took it away from you.”
“What do you mean?”
Satoshi replied, confused.
“I don’t understand...what is S.P.A.D.E.S.? How did I get it?”
“We are brothers born in secrecy and bloodshed. We had power beyond any mage when they put it into us. The TSAB has weakened you by not letting you have it again, scared of what you
“I still don’t understand!”
“Then let me show you the truth…by pain.”
Sion finally said before dashing towards him. Not using his Device’s main form, he pummeled Satoshi with only his fists, leaving him no time to react. Rush Form’s Barrier Jacket became Satoshi’s fatal flaw; the big mistake Sion knew about. He sent Satoshi to a wall nearby with a single kick, and he slid down to the ground, but still got up, some fight left in him.
“Heh, you’re disappointing…”
Sion replied as he started another assault.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
“Those goddamn soldiers are gaining on us.”
Sydney said to Vincent after looking back, seeing the Replicas near them.
“Vince is hanging on with that wound. He can’t keep this speed much longer.”
she thought as she looked down on his wound. Moving to an open room, with crates all strewn about, both of them took cover, and started firing at them. The Replicas took cover, still using their rifles to fire at the mages.
“How many magazines
these guys carry?”
Vincent asked, ducking his head to avoid the splinters.
“Not now, Vince!”
Sydney replied back, shooting several Ice Bullets on the Replicas, which where dissolved by the Replicas’ armor.
“Damn it, they’re not gonna go down quickly.”
Sydney said to Vincent, who was taking cover, checking his leg wound, looking at what was happening.
“Syd…go. I’ll hold these guys off. Find everyone and try to get them out.”
Vincent finally said to her.
! They’ll k-“
“Vice-Commander….I said go.”
Vincent replied, interrupting her, with a smile on his face. Reluctantly, Sydney left Vincent alone, and headed quickly to a door nearby.
Vince covered for her, using Schrotflinte Faust, keeping them under cover. Satisfied that they were keeping their heads down for a few seconds, he also took cover, and looked at Shell Bullet.
“Time to use those things then; let’s see if they like fire with fire.”
“The battle is in full-swing. Show yourself.”
he said to Shell Bullet quietly. Two compartments were shot out, and the revolvers he kept in preparation for the fight against Betrüger, which he didn’t use, luckily. Smiling a bit, he thought how would the Replicas react.
“Let’s see then.”
Down you go!
Vincent yelled as he started firing his revolvers, moving from place to place to keep the Replicas from guessing. He managed to hit one in the hand, and killed another one with a shot to the head.
“Echo 5 is down!”
yelled one Replica to the others, firing at Vincent even more. Taking some cover, he needed to reload.
“If I die…”
he thought as he reloaded his revolvers, quickly,
“it’s for everyone. I hope I don’t die, though, for everyone’s sake.”
Flicking the revolver’s loading chambers back into place, he started firing again.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
“Someone’s been following us.”
Margaret announced quietly to Satsuki.
“She’s been following us since we split up with Sydney and Vince.”
Both of them stopped, and looked back. Nobody was behind them at first, but soon, the sound of coughing was heard.
“[Ich trage es heraus.]”
A stream of bullets suddenly appeared, and both Satsuki and Margaret got out of the way. As both of them got up and got ready to fight, the coughing got closer and closer before a girl came out, holding her Device with her left hand, covering her coughs with her right.
“[Ellis…Nie hier erwartet Ihnen...]”
the girl’s Device said, talking to Ellis.
“[Not much as you, Carrosea.]”
Ellis replied back, obviously annoyed.
“Do you two know each other?”
Satsuki asked Ellis, confused that these Devices could know each other.
Ellis replied before Margaret suddenly attacked the girl who just came out of the shadows, charging at her.
Satsuki yelled, trying to stop her, but it was too late.
Margaret said quietly, trying to stab her.
“Twirl lenken Sie ab.”
the girl said quietly, moving to the side. She twirled Carrosea horizontally, catching Margaret’s arm. Acting fast, she hit Margaret with the rifle butt of her own Device, knocking Margaret down on the floor. Satsuki tried to help her up, but the girl then pointed her Device at her.
“Don’t move, both of you.”
she said coldly, but Margaret didn’t listen. She got up quickly, and shot some bullets off at her. She just dodged them, without any care in the world.
She aimed straight at Margaret, intending to take this annoying Unison Device out of the equation.
A couple of bullets hit Margaret, but disappeared almost instantly.
she thought before she got hit by the sound waves following the bullets themselves. A couple of them were more than enough to knock her out. Satisfied, she turned her attention to Satsuki.
“You will die now.”
she said to her.
“Surely we can’t-.”
A sweep kick was the girl’s answer to Satsuki. Aiming the Device on her head, she spoke to her in disbelief.
“You still choose to try and live. Any last words before you die?”
Satsuki couldn’t really say anything as she was facing death. All she could think and say about was her family.
She was waiting for a shot to come and end her life, but it took long. Taking a risk, she looked up, and saw that the girl was shaking, trying to actually take the shot. Her eyes looked like she was scared; scared that something terrible would happen if she killed Satsuki. Trying to inch for her Device, Satsuki tried to get it, but she noticed it.
she said, stammering and coughing. Just then, several shots came out, missing the girl, but letting her know that someone was watching them. The girl tried to shoot Satsuki, but only looked at her while running away. Arvis, Anne, and Lian came up behind both of them.
“At least you two are safe.”
Anne said, relieved.
“We couldn’t find anyone else.”
“Then, does that mean-?”
“No, I don’t think they’re dead yet.”
Lian replied, putting her hand out and helping Satsuki out.
As Arvis checked on Margaret’s condition, Satsuki could hear Anne mutter something.
“It was Hollow, it was her…damn it, should have gotten her when we had the chance.”
“Umm…who is Hollow, Vice-Commander Anne?”
“She’s the girl you just encountered…”
Satsuki didn’t say anything else; she just looked to where Hollow ran away to.
Suddenly remembering about Margaret, she wanted to know how she was.
“Arvis, how’s Margaret?”
she said, worried.
“Calm down, she doesn’t seem to have any injuries, but she’s unconscious.”
he replied back.
“Nothing a bit of rest can’t handle.”
“Satsuki, stay with us for now. Arvis, carry Margaret.”
Anne ordered, and soon, they left the room.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
Checking if any Replicas were on her back, Sydney took a sigh of relief.
“None following me so far.”
she said to herself, assuring that Vincent was either holding them off or they haven’t found her yet.
“I hope Vince’s alright. If he isn’t…."
Disregarding that thought for a second, she walked into a vault where Relics were stored. In the room, there was a black figure standing in front of the vault door. He seemed to not notice her, and was just concentrated on looking at the door itself.
“Who is that?”
she wondered. Knowing the situation, she couldn’t rely on any help, nor know if anyone else was nearby.
“Looks like I have to find out.”
The figure was startled by the sight of a Chain Bind covering his body, and he didn’t resist one bit. He looked over his shoulder to see Sydney, with both her Devices ready, ordering him to surrender.
“You shall comply with your surrender peacefully or by force if I have to.”
Sydney said to the figure, in the process of arresting him.
“You think I would comply with surrendering?”
the figure asked before several plates on his body glowed, breaking the chain. Sydney was almost cut by an attack so fast, she could barely see it coming, a grazing cut on her neck.
“You react fast. This should be interesting.”
the figure spoke out.
“Black Wolf, is it?”
Sydney asked, noticing the singular blue eye on his head.
“Yes, it is.”
Wolf said again, politely, to unnerve Sydney. He then started attacking again, trying to cut down Sydney in one stroke and using his invisibility.
“Apex, Shadow Blades!”
Apex replied, and two blades moved towards Wolf’s last known position. He reacted to the blades, shutting off the invisibility, and he cut through them, finding out a little bit too late that they were just only magical energy.
“Equinox, Blizzard Shotgun!”
“[I’ll get to it now, Meister.]”
Equinox responded, its 4 barrels shooting shards of ice into Black Wolf’s direction. Knowing that he had fallen into a trap, he slashed the ice shards that were coming into his way, landing without a scratch. Sydney had backups, though.
she said out loud, shooting onto the floor, making a path of ice where Black Wolf landed. Sliding on the ice, she tried to get a hit up close, but he somersaulted up into the air and behind her. Moving towards his back with Sonic Move, it seemed like she had gotten Black Wolf again.
“You got a lag on you step, Megane.”
he replied, surprising Sydney.
she thought to herself before noticing that she was falling down and losing consciousness.
As Sydney fell, Black Wolf just looked at her for a while before noticing someone else was near. He turned around, weapon ready, to find out Nobuyuki was behind him. He then put down his weapon and sheathed it back.
“I found an installation up above. I guess it’s that jammer.”
he said to him, rubbing his head.
“Man, that was annoying.”
Wolf didn’t comment on that, preferring to check the rest of the room to see if anyone else was there
“I’ll get to opening the vault, then.”
Nobuyuki said to him, sighing. There was a small keypad nearby, with biometric sensors besides it. Nobyuki quickly passed through all of the sensors and the keypad, leading the door to open, revealing a bunch of Relics inside.
“Here’s your Relics, then.”
Wolf looked at them, and nooded.
“This is it.”
He then looked back to see Nobuyuki leaving, dragging Sydney.
“Where are you going now, Papillion?”
“It’s like what you said; I’m just a soldier following orders…and my orders are to stay with this unit.”
Wolf just looked at both of them for a while as they left, then turned back to look at the Relics again.
“Sein, Miss Lutecia, they’re ready.”
Both of them then came out, Sein appearing through the floor, and Lutecia with Garyuu came in through another door.
Wolf said to her respectfully. “Here they are.” She just nodded, going towards the Relics themselves. Wolf then focused towards Sein.
“Just get them, alright?”
“You’re no fun…”
she said to him.
“You’re not helping, either.”
he replied back to her, annoyed. She relented, and started collecting.
Wolf left the scene, leaving the Number and that pink-haired girl and summon to collect them.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
12: 37 A.M.
Satoshi got slammed into the wall again for the 10th time in a row, with Sion still pressing the attack. He stopped near Satoshi to see if he still had anything left in him.
“Heh…you still have that much endurance?”
he said to him, smiling about it.
“At least that hasn’t changed.”
Satoshi raised his head weakly, still defiant to the end. Angered, Sion kicked his head down, and Satoshi fell onto the ground harmlessly.
“I don’t wish to kill you, brother.”
Sion said to him.
“But there’s no chance now.”
Satoshi didn’t mind; he was already knocked out and was lying there, unconscious. He could recall something, though.
Fire was all around a room, illuminating the shadows of debris and several bodies, most of them scientists. Sounds of battle were present, near to where Satoshi was observing. Looking to his left, he could see only two people, the ones he had seen before in his past flashbacks. Both of them were still in the midst of fighting, killing the group tat surrounded them efficiently. The screams and shouts of the dead and dying were present. The whole group was decimated, and soon after that, another kid came along, charging at both of them.
he yelled, and using a staff he picked up, started to charge at them. The kid with the throwing knives started to attack, but the other one with the daisho pair held him back, pointing to a group that was coming up behind them.
“All right, then.”
the other boy said and started to throw knives at the group.
the boy charging said, and the fire that was near him started to form into other blades. Still, he didn’t move, then with a quick flash, he had stabbed him with the weapon in his left hand, stunning that boy. With another flash, his head was off cleanly, and the rest of his body fell onto the ground, the fire blades disappearing. He then looked at Satoshi.
Satoshi muttered, shuddering. He had seen the boy, but not his face until now.
“That…that looks like…me.”
“[Self-Preservation Combat Backup, initialize.]”
Cipher suddenly said, and Satoshi immdieatly got up, surprising Sion, making him back off.
“Is that you, brother?”
he said to him, but Satoshi didn’t say anything. Looking at Satoshi’s eyes, he found out that it was glazed; he was unconscious.
“He’s out of it.”
Sion thought. Then looking at Cipher, he suddenly realized it.
“I didn’t recognize you for a minute there, Cipher.”
he said to the Device.
“So, you and him completed the backup, huh?”
“[Urusai, Sion. He doesn’t need that life anymore.]”
Sion just chuckled a bit.
“He was born for that life. At least it gives me reason to take him back.”
He then switched to his throwing knives.
Cipher said, and Satoshi effortlessly dodged the two knives. Sion then jumped up and tried another attack.
Several ice shards came straight at Satoshi, but he dodged them all.
Cipher said, and Satoshi dodged the rest of them with speed. Discharging two cartridges, Cipher then casted Blaze Jet to dissolve the remaining ice shards and to hit Sion himself. Sion moved out of the way, and landed, but Satoshi was already on him.
Cipher said, and Sion got hit with several punches, knocking him back and coughing up blood.
“Damn it, S.P.A.D.E.S. activate.”
He said quietly to himself, healing the damage done by Satoshi to his organs. Now he was on the defensive.
Cipher yelled, and instead of firing two blades, Satoshi fired four, all hitting Sion cleanly. Still, he used his S.P.A.D.E.S., but Satoshi was not done yet. Getting up close, he swiped at Sion, with all of them hitting Sion. He then stabbed him in his chest again.
Sion said to Satoshi, but Cipher had other plans.
he called out, and an electric current went towards Sion, shocking him before Satoshi kicked him. “Shit. That was more than I bargained for.” Sion thought.
“At this rate, the S.P.A.D.E.S. won’t do much.”
Healing only his chest wound, Sion got up again.
he yelled, and a couple of knives went near Satoshi, exploding near him. That didn’t faze him, as he got out of the smoke, still charging towards him.
Cipher yelled, and a bird-shaped arrow of electricity came towards Sion. He jumped, but Cipher was expecting that.
Cipher said, and Satoshi threw the projectiles onto Sion. The first three missed, but the last one hit Sion squarely in the lower body, and he fell down, kneeling in pain.
“This is it, then.”
Sion thought as Satoshi prepared for another attack, but he stood still.
Satoshi then fell down, the backup having fulfilled the time limit.
“Heh…a time limit.”
Sion muttered to himself, catching his breath.
“So, that’s the mage who terrorized the TSAB a while ago.”
Asteright suddenly said, appearing out of the shadows.
“He gave you a hard time.”
“Yeah, even with a backup.”
Sion replied, still kneeling.
“I’ll get him then.”
Asteright said, approaching Satoshi. Before he could that, though, a number of needles went directly in front of him, stopping him from going any further. Alexi and Rachel came up from above, and Rachel tried to hit him with False Cross, but Asteright dodged them all.
“Interesting…I’ve seen that before.”
Asteright said, commenting on Rachel’s Barrier Jacket.
Rached replied angrily, and charged at him.
“Love…I love taking them on with the mind… Ace of Hearts!”
Asteright said fast, and Rachel was down on the ground, screaming and shaking.
“Don’t worry, Alexi, I don’t intend to kill today. Now, give him to us and we’ll leave.”
Alexi scoffed at Asteright’s offer.
“I didn’t want to go through this…”
he said, before casting an Ustio circle of his own.
Both of their attacks didn’t hit them; both had casted the same spell in the nick of time.
“You can’t hide him from finding out who he was before.”
“I can keep him away from you two, though.”
Asteright approached Alexi, but was stopped by Sion.
“No…he’s not ready yet.”
Sion said to him quietly.
“Besides, we got the Relics.”
he then said to him telepathically.
“Someone’s disabled the jammer….all right, we’ll pull out.”
Smiling, Asteright waved good-bye.
“I hate to leave, but my business here is done.”
The Major tried to approach him, but Sion threw a bunch of knives.
The Major was blinded by the light, giving both of them time to escape. As soon as he could see, they were gone by then. Rachel slowly got up, recovering from Asteright’s attack.
He then checked on the others.
“This is Spec 0, any 216th members, call in.”
“This is Thunder 1. Sky 2 is with me, unconscious.”
“This is Sky 3, wounded but safe.”
“This is Thunder 2, Thunder 3 and 4 are with me, as well as Sky 4 and 5.”
“Good…we got Sky 1 here, injured but safe for now. Meet us on the helipad you guys came into.”
“Man…this is going to be a pain to report.”
Rachel said to him, knowing how much paperwork this incident would take.
“Yeah…it’s gonna be.”
he replied, taking out a hip flask.
As he drank, he looked at Satoshi.
“You can’t hide him from finding out who he was before.”
Asteright’s words echoed in his mind.
“Agh…I hate mind attacks.”
Rachel then said, rubbing her head. The Major just chuckled a bit, still drinking.
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
“Echo Team suffered 2 deaths and a couple of injuries.”
Asteright said to Sion.
“Is that so?”
“They gave those guys a run for their money.”
Asteright replied back, but Sion wasn’t listening. He looked to the side, wondering. Black Wolf was nearby, with the Relics securely in place. Hollow was sitting down, coughing as usual. Scagletti came up, with Uno and those Extended Relic Weapons besides him.
“Asteright, your soldiers did a good job. I expect more of them now.”
“Wolf, I trust that you are ready for another assignment?”
“Ready as always.”
Turning to Sion, who was in bandages, he spoke to him.
“Need some time to rest?”
“Yeah, the S.P.A.D.E.S. takes a lot out of me.”
Sion replied, drinking a bottle of water. Putting it down forcefully, he moved towards the door.
“Heh, and Scagletti considers you useful. Why, your own abi-.”
Clotho said before Sion immediately grabbed him by the throat and pinned him against the wall nearby.
“And what does that make
he said to him angrily.
have killed people such as you, and
wouldn’t hesitate to kill you right now if it wasn’t for the fact that everyone’s watching.”
He then released him, and went on his way.
Clotho said to everyone, rubbing his neck. Scagletti did not say anything, and motioned both Wolf and Uno.
“Let’s go, both of you.”
Thursday, June 4, MC 0075
“…Yes, he’s recuperating....yes, I’ll keep an eye on him.”
Nobuyuki said, replying back to his unknown employer. Closing the screen, he then opened another one.
“So, what is the situation?”
“The fake Relics have been delivered.”
“Good, we can cut the power of their Drones efficiently.”
“Right, and they didn’t notice we switched them.”
“All right…now, about him…”
“He’ll be alright, but it’s confirmed; he’s reverting back to how he was before.”
“I see….keep an eye on him.”
“Right, signing off.”
Hidden near a wall, Anne was silent, hearing everything that was happening.
“What are they talking about?”
I'm thinking of using Kay and the Linebackers in the next chapter...can I?
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