Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion
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Join Date: Oct 2004
Will do backlog busting later, but first....
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Gemini Sisters. Come in 2-in-1 combo. Dresses included.
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"...P-Please accept me."
Anytime, my lady.
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"Forgive me then..."
You know, this could be the template for Galatea.
but since this is already for Spica.....
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Really? *shrug* You could have gone some where else then so don't complain to me
That line above was good
I'm still waiting for her to whip the sword out....
You do want to get-
Just forget it.
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So after remembering that Diary of a Windtalker takes place years after StrikerS in the timeline, and seeing as how Mai participates, I wondered what she'd look like during that time.
And... here's the result.
Mai Enna, 20-years old: Atashi wa Yume...
Once, I dreamt. Precious dreams, wishful illusions.
Once, when I was young and innocent.
The days when happiness was pure, untainted, unsullied by the darkness of this world. Bright, blessed days long past the veil of sadness and pain, that once shone with the brilliant light of hope.
Distant from the stain of blood, the salty tears, and the excruciating misery.
Once I dreamt. And I wished for only these.
I wished for eternal peace...
I wished for boundless happiness.
And most of all... the greatest of these...
I wished for love.
Love most pure. Love most chaste. Love most devoted. Love most beautiful. Cherished by the one to whom my heart I will entrust in their gentle care.
My greatest wish.
My reason to live.
Was love most naive.
And once, a long time ago, those dreams were swept away by the cruelty of fate. And once, my wishes were irretrievable beyond that wailing wall, stolen by the thieves from the dark. Crushed beneath the boots of the despicable, and the blood of my kin spilling out over the midnight curtain.
Gone was my peace.
Gone was my happiness.
And love was but a distant phantom, forever beyond my reach.
Once, they were just wishes.
Once, they were just dreams.
And once, I dreamt that I had never wished.
My once distant wishes...
... is the reality I hold in my hand.
The reality of his hand.
The greatest of all my dreams have come true.
THE GEMINI SISTERS II
// Somewhere //
Snarling out a kiai, Freya charged, right fist cocked for an almighty straight-
The speedier black-haired woman roundhouse kicked her on the side of her temple.
Freya sprawled across the floor. Glancing up in a daze, she saw the woman looming over her. “I guess I lost…” she giggled sheepishly.
The woman wordlessly dropped down to pin Freya against the floor, their School combat uniforms pressing together softly.
“I love you, Freya…”
She kissed Freya on the lips.
Freya came awake all sweaty and flustered in her bunks. “Eh? EH????”
“Freya,” the half-asleep Aura grumbled. “If you can’t sleep, let us sleep…”
“Oneesan…” Keiko mumbled lovingly.
“Soft…” Matilda whimpered. “Squiggly… squishy… Keiko…”
“…” was Aura’s reply.
I don’t think I’ll sleep well tonight, Freya silently moaned to herself.
// unknown //
“Is everything ready?”
“Yes, Mistress Gala. Everything has been prepared.”
The woman approached the awaiting nobles. “Gentlemen,” she spoke. “I hope my absence won’t cause you too many troubles.”
“Oh, no, it will not be happening,” one of the nobles said. “We will take a very great care of everything on your behalf.”
“I hope you will hold onto your words very firmly,” the woman spoke.
“Mistress Gala,” the noble called and gave the woman a file. “Before you leave, the School would like you to take a look at this.”
She took the file. “Phantom 21… the lost Candidate…” she murmured as she was reading one of the documents. “Very well. I will find this person. I heard he was one of the best combatants the School had ever produced.”
“Please do,” the nobles answered.
“Gentlemen, I leave the School to you. Please take care of my little siblings for me.” The woman tied her hair with a ribbon and flung the silky tresses across her shoulders as she turned away from the elderly men. “Sao, we’re going.”
The maid nodded. “Yes, Master.”
// cafeteria //
“Let me see,” said Matilda as she browsed through the calendar. “Frieda plans to have a Christmas gathering for the knights, but I heard she’s going to invite the TSAB as well.”
“The TSAB, isn’t it?” Keiko said and sipped the green tea. “I also heard Frieda was crowned as the best female cosplayer of the Halloween Party. Lucky her, I must say.”
“Too bad we weren’t there,” Matilda sighed and later cackled. “Otherwise I would have brought my camera and took all her pictures in the skimpy witch outfit.”
“Matilda, you’re saying it too loud,” Keiko reminded.
Several knights who happened to be nearby overheard the conversation and had a moment of wild imagination. “Frieda… skimpy outfit… witch?” They instantly bled their noses and had to cover themselves. “Too much fantasy… must resist…” they groaned.
Yutaro and the Gemini Sisters arrived, followed by the Wolkenritter. “I thought Takeru-
is coming today,” Keiko said as they approached the two women.
“Didn’t you know? His sister fell sick, so he’s leaving for a month,” Yutaro explained, and was later nudged on the waist by an angry Aura. “Aura, take it easy. It’s not that you’re going to lose your boyfriend forever.”
“That’s not the case,” Aura mumbled and pouted. “Takeru said he would take me along, but he forgot. I’m angry. I’m going to punish him once he comes back.”
,” Freya said and gave her a comforting embrace around her waist. “You still always have me. I can always share Yutaro with you, if you want to,” she whispered.
“Oneechan… will you share him with me?” she asked.
Freya giggled and poked Aura’s cheek. “Of course. Twins always share, right?”
Again, the knights bled their nose at the suggestively cute Gemini Service. “Lucky bastard…” they growled and shot the clueless Yutaro an envious glare.
Suddenly the cafeteria rocked violently as a bomb detonated and destroyed the western wall. Everybody took cover, including the Gemini Sisters who proceeded to hide under the table with Matilda and Keiko. Only Yutaro was unaffected by the explosion, and amidst the dusts he could see very clearly the silhouette of a woman coming from the hole on the wall. “Talk about a dramatic entry,” he commented.
Slowly everybody came out of their cover. They, too, saw the woman appearing from beneath the dust. Vita and Signum took their weapons and assumed defensive posture, while Shamal prepared the battlefield’s restriction barrier.
“Hello, Freya, Aura.”
The dust settled in.
And the woman revealed herself.
Freya was shocked. “Oneesama!?”
Aura was equally surprised. “Gala-
The woman grinned. “What’s with the surprised face? Don’t tell me you have forgotten your very big sister,” she spoke. “Von Dietrich.”
“Von Dietrich?” Yutaro turned to Aura, who was frowning in disgust at the family name, as so did Freya. “I don’t get this. Can anyone tell me what’s going on?”
“Von Dietrich… I thought we had long discarded the name after we left the School…” Aura murmured.
“Who the hell are you?” Vita and Shamal shouted.
The woman smirked and threw her hair across her shoulder. “I am Galatea. The School’s Class-A Senior Officer. Pleased to meet you, Belkan Knights.”
The dynamically explosive entrance did not scare the people away; instead they were rooting Galatea for her cool attitude. “Gala-nee surely looks hot in that black dress, isn’t she?” one of the knights asked.
“And her hair is beautiful, too,” his friend agreed.
It did not -- and would not -- take long before they gathered up and knelt behind Galatea. The woman was surprised by the sudden treatment of the gentlemen, but did not take them lightly. “My, my, the Knights surely know how to welcome a woman, aren’t they?” she asked.
“Don’t mind us, Gala-
,” one of the knights spoke in honourable manner.
“Your wish is your utmost command,” his fellow said. “We will do whatever your desire is.”
“What is your purpose of visiting us, Galatea?” Signum questioned.
Galatea smirked and ran her hand through the silky tresses (the knights cooed at the natural beauty of the woman’s hair). “My apology for the explosive entry, but I am here as a part of the School’s Special Inspector Test, and I would like to inform each and every one of you here that this test starts soon after I greeted the Gemini Sisters.”
Freya gasped. “Oneesama! Why didn’t you tell me of the test earlier?”
“I am very sorry, my cute little sister,” Galatea replied. “But as the representative of the School, it is my responsibility to judge the level of your awareness. It is clearly obvious to me now that you are not prepared at all.”
Freya frowned. “How should I be prepared?” she murmured.
Galatea approached the panicked Freya. With a warm smile, she cupped the girl’s cheek and stared into her eyes in affection. “To tell you the truth, I’ve missed you for a very long time,” she spoke. “My cute little Freya, you’ve grown up a lot since I last saw you. You’re lovelier than ever…”
Freya blushed. “Oneesama…”
(“Are Galatea-san and Freya that close?” Yutaro asked.
Aura nodded. “Gala-nee and Oneechan have been this close ever since we were admitted into the School. In fact, Oneechan would always cry whenever Gala-nee wasn’t around.”
Yutaro, Aura, Matilda, Keiko and the knights looked at Freya. “And she makes Freya go dere-dere, too,” they commented.)
Galatea’s followers were smitten by the bubbly effect of the “sisterly intimacy”. Not only that, the way Galatea was cupping Freya’s cheeks reminded them of a certain Terran anime series on Catholic schoolgirls and their petite souer tradition. They only thing they wanted to complain were the lack of rosary, because without the item the ceremonial adoption would not be complete.
“One question, though,” Yutaro said and lifted his left hand. “If you’re here for the Inspector Test, then why is Freya only involved? Why not Aura as well?”
Galatea smiled. “A very good question, young boy,” she answered and took Freya into a comforting embrace. “Of course, the Inspector Test also applies to Aura but my top priority is Freya. Besides,” she said and placed soft kisses upon Freya’s flushed cheek. “I have always wanted to spend a lot of time with Freya alone.”
“Alone?” Galatea fan boys bled their nose for the third time. The fantasy of Galatea and Freya doing
was simply too much for them to bear. Their head exploded, and all that remained was piles of crippled bodies of the blissful Knights.
“And who would you be, young boy?” Galatea asked as she continued cuddling Freya in caring manner.
“Who? Me? I’m her boyfriend Yutaro,” Yutaro blatantly declared. “Wakamoto Yutaro. A street performer.”
This time, Freya fan boys were defeated. “How honest of him…” they murmured and retreated to dark corner. “Happy bastard…” they growled and poked the floor.
“Wakamoto… Yutaro, right?” Galatea said. “A good name. I like it.”
“Thank you, Galatea-
,” Yutaro replied.
“And speaking of which,” Vita said. “If you’re not holding any weapon, then who did the explosion?”
Galatea smirked. “Sao, please show yourself. I guess our friends want to know you more,” she said.
Slowly, so slowly, the silhouette of a maid materialized next to Galatea. The pink-haired woman corrected her posture and bowed to the people. “I am Sao, Master’s Servant. Pleased to meet you.”
Galatea and Freya fan boys drooled. As if Galatea’s hotness was not enough, her Servant was made of absolute love and win. “We don’t really mind if we become Gala-sama’s followers, as long as we get to see Galatea and Sao everyday!” they declared.
“Hey, hey,” Signum uttered.
“THIS IS GALATEA AND SAO! THEY ARE MADE OF HOTNESS AND WIN!”
“Freya,” Galatea said as she turned to the smitten Gemini Sister. “Would you like to come with me and Sao? We have a lot of things to talk of after this.” She later giggled and turned to Yutaro. “Of course you can bring Wakamoto Yutaro along. Oneesama wants to know more about your relationship.”
“Oneesama!” Freya squealed. “Even though we’re couples, that doesn’t mean…”
Galatea chuckled. “My poor little Freya…” she murmured.
,” Keiko later said. “I didn’t know you have a beautiful Oneesan.” Matilda and the knights nodded as to agree with the spectacled psychiatrist.
Aura had to suppress her embarrassment. “You don’t want to know Gala-
“We don’t care of that!” Galatea fan boys objected. “IF GALA-
WANTS THIS TO DIE, THEN WE WILL DIE FOR HER!”
“Then die right now.”
Aura killed Galatea fan boys with Feng Huang.
Yutaro just scratched his head in confusion. “This isn’t a bad idea after all,” he commented, “to have Freya’s big sister coming. Maybe I can ask Frieda-san to invite Galatea-
for the Christmas gathering.”
“THEN GALA-NEE AND GEMINI SISTERS MUST COSPLAY AS MISSUS SANTA!!!!”
the crippled fan boys roared.
Aura blushed more furiously than ever.
The white tiger teleported behind Aura. “Yes, Aura?”
Aura glared at the fan boys. “Finish them.”
“As you wish.” Poseidon turned to the excited fan boys. “I AM ZA WARUDO!! WRYYYY!!!!!!!!”
Poseidon killed fan boys with Unlimited Steamroller Works.
this was fun.
Oh, don't mind Gala-nee when she said she wanted to spend time with Aura & Sao
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