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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
I'm certainly getting intrigued by this...  What's the premise of the story in the first place? I wanna know.  |
Basically, it is an attempt to incorporate the Fate Stay Night story into the Nanohaverse, but made such that it develops Sophia's character, and has ramifications for the future of Belka.
The
Pilgrim Duels is an old, recently revived but illegal tournament held to commemorate the greatest hero of the time. In the old days, the Duels were held by the Belka Clergy who kept watch over the Tome of Devotion which did the recording of the Hero's Linker Core and thus strengthened itself. The Hero himself had one of his wishes granted, and as always that wish would bring great prosperity to the land, as only the purest of hearts could win the Duels.
During the chaos of the Belka Implosion, the Convent rescued the only Tome of power they could find and hid it deep within the Sankt Alexei Vault, along with all the Ancient Belka devices, technologies, scriptures they could find.
Years ago, a group calling themselves the Opel Magi managed to steal the Tome of Devotion during the sacking of Renault years ago, the fire that killed every person that Kha knew, and turned him into the Cleric. However, that book was surprisingly incomplete, lacking over 330+ pages. In order to complete the book, they revived the Pilgrim Duels, but without proper supervision the games went out of hand, and the first games ended up in the almost complete destruction of an Outer World.
Kha had the missing pages, craved out when he came into contact with the Tome. After hearing of the games 1 year before meeting Hayate, Kha vowed to stop the thieves when they resurfaced again.
However, Sophia, both weighed down by her father's wish to revive the Games and participate as well as her heart broken by Kha choosing Fate over her, has other plans...
Thus begins the events of
Nanoha/Cente Gravia.
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
And btw: I'm gonna need to have someone point me out to the most important and "OC-common-knowledge" things that I've missed while on my long break  |
Not much that you havne't known or need to know...
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Originally Posted by LimitedEternal
Ah, is that where Sophia's inspiration came from?
*doesn't remember Sophia*
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You have about 1 week to live until Anita comes back...
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Originally Posted by LimitedEternal
Oh, but Kha's so good at breaking things!
*thinks about possible implications of that statement*
*runs like hell*
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Sou sou...
*RUNS*
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
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Got it.
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
That's Outer Cadia just being Outer Cadia  |
What's with all that emphasis though?
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Originally Posted by Liingo
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Thanks for the offer of vetting, but
IT'S DEKKAI-CHAN HUNTING SEASON!
*runs*
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Originally Posted by Tormenk
Okay, bad jokes aside, the idea is just for lulz and crack.
Spoiler for Something like this:
"So how did it happen anyway?" Fate was the picture of innocence as always, added in with a dash of confusion this time.
"Well Shamal had to remove the transformation spell placed on Signum for a mission but she was talking to me while doing so and she ended up being a tad heavy-handed while performing the spell."
"And to think it actually manage to transform Signum into that form. What a thing to happen." Fate's expression of helplessness was apt for the situation they were talking about right now.
"Well, personally I don't think it's too much of a bad thing. The effect shouldn't be permanent and probably won't hinder Signum from performing her duties at all. In fact, she might loosen up for a bit."
"Really? How is that so?"
Hayate managed a short giggle before continuing. "Well she even asked for a sparing session with Erio-kun since she got back.."
"Oh. Lets go check on them Hayate-chan? I'm worried the two of them might be going at it too seriously with Signum in her current form and Erio eager for more practice."
"Let's just take a quick peek since it's around the corner then shall we?"
As they approached the training room, it was clear that Signum was..well slightly more enthusiastic than usual.
"Going easy on me just because I'm in this form? Come harder at me Erio!"
"Erm..no! I mean yes! I mean..I'm coming Signum-san!"
What Fate and Hayate heard next was a jumble of shouts and thuds. Curiously, a streak of red light zipped past them at that time.
"Hehe that'll teach that red-headed kid not to underestimate Signum!"
Fearing that Agito's prank had backfired on the sparring duo, the two hurried into the room.
"Erio! Signum! Are you two all right?" Fate's panicked call as she stopped at the door to check on them.
What greeted them wasn't too bad in some ways, and yet worst in others.
Strada and Levantine were strewn a good distance from them while the two in question was framed in the center by Fate's view from the doorway. Though the two's position did leave some good doubts about what had happened.
Signum's hair was undone, the ribbon normally holding it in place gone, leaving her flowing pink hair to cascade down over the sides of her shoulders and onto the floor, over her sitting position on top of her prone sparring partner.
Erio meanwhile struggled for air as he found himself pinned by Signum in two places. While Signum did appear younger, her assets were still respectable and still managed to suffocate Erio under them. Though this was nothing as Erio managed to push his face out of them and the pink hair surrounding his head to a much more embarrassing situation.
Signum was sitting onto of his waist while he had lied flat down on the floor with his arms around her waist.
Turning to face the visitors, their response was expected. Well not quite.
"Ah Hayate. And Testarossa. What brings you two here?"
"Ohh! Hayate-san! Fate-san too! This is a mistake! I-!"
"Isn't this too much for relaxing Hayate-chan?!"
Fate was beside herself while Hayate poured lots of oil onto the fire.
"Well Erio-kun is a boy and he is going to be at that age soon but I didn't expect Signum to reciprocate in kind that daringly.."
And what's this?
Spoiler for Omake!:
"Ohh! Hayate-san! Fate-san too! This is a mistake! I-!"
"Say no more Erio. I understand your situation perfectly."
"What? No! This isn't what it looks like! I just thought Signum-san would be a better person to practice with since you're always so busy..!"
"I had expected you to come find me for this kind of things Erio. Does this mean you do not trust me? Truly I'm disappointed."
"I'm sorry! I'll accept any punishment you'll mete out. Just forgive me please!"
"Well that would depend entirely on you whether I'll forgive you.."
"I'll do my best so please!"
"You'll do well with this kind of spirit." Fate said her hands went to Erio's chest and placed her face close to his, very very close. Fate's eyes were expanding Erio from within, and not mentioning the effect her breath was having on him as well.
A jolt came to Erio's mind as Fate's hand went lower. Much, much more lower.
"Huh?! What's this about Fate-san?"
"You wanted to learn about women and so I'm going to teach you.."
"Wait wait wait! That wasn't I meant! I-!"
"This will not do." Signum was a face of serious business as she cut in.
"And why is that?" Fate stopped mid-way though cuddling Erio.
For a moment, Erio thought he found his salvation. Well it depends, with what Signum had to say next.
"He came under my tutelage for this session first and I will not relinquish this claim. Even to you Testarossa. What he desires to learn, I shall be the one to teach first."
"WHAAAAAT?!"
"Mou, Signum. Erio is mine to begin with in the first place."
"That does not matter. I shall be the one to teach him anyway."
Erio looked towards his final hope of salvation.
"Looks like everyone's going to have fun with this. I still have some reports to wrap up so I'll have to leave first. Be sure to submit a report about what you learnt later alright Erio-kun? Ja-ne!" Hayate winked as she went out the door.
Which turns out he had none in the first place, leaving him to fend for himself.
"Erio." Signum's younger face was sorely testing his defenses.
"Erio.." Fate's face was inching ever closer to his..
"TASUKETE! AHHHHHHHHH!"
***
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH-ompfh!"
Erio found his face, thankfully, to be neither in contact with Signum's nor Fate's but the cool hard surface of his room.
Realizing he had rolled out of bed, Erio heaved a great sigh. He had managed to solve the highly embarrassing situation earlier today but what was with the dream he just had?
Shaking his head and crawling back to bed, Erio swore he would stay off any more 'picture books' Chrono or Vice had to offer in the future.
Okay what the hell did I just write? 
* RUNS* |
...truth?
To think I was writing the section where we compare how similar Kha and Erio are, and another seems to be getting themselves in misunderstandable situations.
*BACK-FLIPS*
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Originally Posted by Tormenk
Servants?
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Must..resist temptation..to use one of them.. |
Use? In what way?
*SKIDS*
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Originally Posted by Tormenk
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It was what made me find this.
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
Could anyone kindly explain what this is? It appeared on FF and I was wondering what it was all about...
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Nanoha deciding to fly a Gundam for a change.
:3
~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~
It's HERE! The big Vita & Signum patch you've been waiting for!
Vita
- Is now canonized as
Servant Berserker.
- Graf Eisen's Simon-ism has been dropped.
Signum
- More crack regarding her life story has been added.
- Is now canonized as
Servant Archer.
- Note the new sword flash attack! Dynamic Kill animation added!
- Several new
Sturmfalke attacks added, of which one is just
RIDDLED with crack. Can you take it?!
Go ahead, click on the above to take a look! Comments? Criticisms?