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Originally Posted by minhtam2448
Speaking of proofreading, there is one small gripe about your profiles in general: Sentence Fragments. Usually sentences without a subject, even though it's implied.
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Guess I've been soaking in Japanese and Korean too long that it's affected my writing style. That and programming languages. Feels unnecessarily cumbersome to have to put the subject in every sentence when it's clear who the subject is given this is a biography. Very well though, as I work with feedback I'll see if I can touch a few things here and there.
Edit:
On that note,
Hinagiku bio can be uploaded to the website now. Blargh, can't help but feel it's inelegant but we don't have time for perfection (even if there wasn't a deadline, there's my life that's placing time limits too).
Edit2:
As is Suigintou bio.