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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Karil and I were runing the fastest we could, althoug Karil was loosing too much blood, a red stele plasmed on the stairs marked the way Karil was taking
"Karil, let me see you injurie" I stoped and take a look to her left arm, it looked bad, really bad, I though that the theets of Centurion had reached even the bone, it was a miracle that the demon hadn't ripped of the arm of my friend, the chomped area had turned purple and the blood near it a bit black, the rest of her limb was covered with red blood and I was sure that it was also fractured, with my knife I cutted all the Karil's clothe that was covering her arm, then I cutted a pice of my own dress and with extreme care I envolved the injurie, in that point I could see some tears escaping from Karil's eyes, she was sufering, really sufering
"It's O.K" I told her "If you want to cry, go ahead, I will not tell anybody"
"No, I don't want to..." She responde, "Let's continue, Jack must be close"
I really wished to tell Karil to wait there while I go and toke care of Jack, but I knew that she will not obey me, specialy with someone like Raphael near, we reach the roof, the storm was getting worse, thunders falled at the distance and now a strong wind was asolating Notre Dame, acording to Sasuke's vision, Jack should be in the uper level of the cathedral
"Karil! Stay behind..."
"Look out!!!" She screamed while she pushed me away from a shotgun's bullet that had impacted agains one of the Cathedral Gargyoles
"Muahahaha!!! You can never kill me!!!" I raised my head, it was an old man with a gray suit and a big hat, I t was Jack Velorius, the bastard was holding a double canon Shootgun, a dam big weapon
"My mistress and the angels are with me! Muahahahaha!!!" He shooted again, I evade tha bullet and shoot back, but none of my bullets got in Jack
"Fear! Fear, the flames of hell that will trap you for all the eternity! Muahahahahah!!!!!" He laughed at the time he shooted again, by lucky he failed
Karil and I were hiden behind a Gargyole and we had lost of sight Jack, we knew he was stilkl there because his evil laughs followed by shoots that impacted against the Gargyoile who was falling apart in pices
"I'm starting to heat this guy" I told to Karil
"What shall we do?" She asked me
I was thinking, the double cannon shotguns can only fire a round of two bullets before be forced to reload, now Jack get hided when he reload, but if we got him while he shooted...
"Karil, at the count of 3 we both jump and shoot at his legs. O.K?"
"Y-Yes" Karil responde, I noticed that she was getting pale and that she was having a heavy respiration, I needed to hurry.
"O.K... one... two... tre!!!" I grabed Karil's hat and launched it at our side, Jack's bulletcame out and litterally destroy Karil's hat, it was the moment, Karil and I jumped, Jack was still taking the bullets to reload, we shooted, both bullets strike directly at Jack's knees, his both legs were ripped of by the impact
"AGGGHHHHH!!!!!!" He screamed at the time he falled, I quickly got up and ran at his place, I kicked away Jack's weapon and then pointed at him, Karil randevous with me a few seconds later
"Ugh.. he, he ,he...he" That bastard still had a smile in his face
"Were?" I asked him "Were is Takamachi Nanoha? Were is the white devil?!"
"F-Fool... he, he" Was his only answer
"ANSWER ME!!!" I comand him at the time I putted my weapon's canon right in his face
"D...Do you think that... that death scares me? The gates of heaven are now opening... fo... for me, my... my mistress had return, the day of final judment is near... he, he ugh... I... I was mading an army for her (Oviusly he was speaking of the undeads we face in the main hall of the church) To... to prove her that I was better than the other fool, but... but you spoiled all..." Now this adition was interesting
"Who? Who is the other?" I answered grabing him by his neck, he remained silent for a seconds, but then he decided to tell me
"Edmund..." In that moment, and before Jack could end, a shoot sound at the distance, and after it I found Jack's neck perforated by a bullet and tons of blood coming out his mouth, I turned and in an Edifice near at the chatedral I saw a strange black siluete porting what it seemed to be a Sniper Rifle that jumped out my sight and disapeared in the night, I turn again with Jack, who was exalating his last breath of life
"Te... sta.. rro.. sa..." Was the last thing his said before die
"Edmund Testarrosa? But I though that guy was also dead, Karil do you..." Before I could end, Karil falled to the ground totally unconsius, she had lost too much blood
"KARIL!! KARIL!!" I screamed at the time I holded her with my arms
"KARIL!!! KARIL!!!" I screamed again, she didn't respond, she didn't respond...
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