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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
"No, you can't... she can't, it's imposible!" I standed up quikly, the notice had shocked me, Karil lost an arm? But she was only 15 years old, she had an entery life, she couldn't lose a limb so youg, just she couldn't!
"Vivio, please, is not easy I know, but understand, her arm is getting infected, if it extends she can die!" Pink answered me trying to control me, I sat again
"Please..." I told her "Tell me that there is another way"
"It depends of her, if she is strong enough, she will beat this and her arm will be allright, if in two days, the injury is getting better, it will not be necesary to cut, but if not, there will not be other way, but as I sai, I will not lie to you, there is a 90% that I will be forced to amputate it"
I felt so guilty, in that moment, I shall happily give my four limbs in exchange to save Karil's arm,I started to cry again, and thgis time Pink hugme, after some minutes someone entered in Pinks abitation, it was Raphael
"Here"Pink answered at the time she standed up "Sr. You shall know that a gentleman must knock to a ladyes room before entering"
"I didn't came here to recive education of politness, the state of the knight Karil Nightstar is my reason to be here" Raphael was worried about Karil's sake? I quickly discovered that the answer was no
"As I told to the Knight Vivio Valentine, she is very grave, if in two days her arm is not getting better, I will be forced to amputate it" Pink answered
"And why you must wait until then? Cut it now" Raphael answered, I had no words
"Sorry?" Pink was also shocked
"What? Can't you hear me? Cut it now"
"And why must I do that?"
"Because a Knight dead can't shoot a weapon, one with at least one arm still can, now go down there and CUT IT! Two days is too much time, time in wich she can die, we have a very delicated situation in our hands and we need soldiers, ampuate her arm now, so she will be able to stand up again soon" In all my life, I had never saw a man so inhuman, he was speaking of her as if she was just a tool
"With all respect sr, you have no position or right to comand me to do that" Pink was very very angry, I knew she was thinking just as I
"Sorry, Are you questionating me?"
"No, I'm just ignoring your pointless demands, I will wait too days before I decide to amputate her arm and the only one able to comand me to do the contraire is Dr. Van Hellsing"
"You will regret this if you don't do what I'm telling you to do" Raphael looked very angry too
"I alredy told you my answer Sr." Pink walked to her room's door and opened it "Noe get out of my room" Rapahel didn't tell anything he walked out of the room, Pink closed the door and made a long breath
"Thanks" Was the only that I could say
I stayed with Pink a bit more of time, after something like an hour I got down and found that Karil was awake, quickly I go with her
"Hey, Karil, How do you feel friend?" She just started to cry
"I... I'm going to lose my arm. Right?"
"No, no of corse no, it will be allright, you are strong, my dear friend Karil will be standed and complete very soon" Inside me I knew that my words were far from be true
"I don't want to be useless, I don't want them to cut it!" The words of Karil were stabing my heart like knifes, I toke all the strenght that I had and efore myself to not cry too, the only thing I could do was to hug her
In that moment, Sky entered in the infirmary and he told to me
"Vivio, we have our next mission, Sasuke think that we may find somerthing in the old mansion of Edmund Testarrosa in London, I knoe is not much but is the only clue we have, we will move inmediatly"
This was going to be the first mission I shall do without Karil, the only thing I could do in that moment, in the infirmary, in Karil's bed was to kissed her in the forehead and told her
"You said you shall do anything for me. Do you?"
"I want to find you stand up and complete when I return. O.K? You will do that for me right?" She remained silent for a second, then she dry her tears with her goos arm and answered me
"For you I will do anything"
I kissed her again and gone out, runing as fast I could to not let her saw me crying like a little baby
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