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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
It was London once again, our mission, registrate the old mansion of Edmund Testarrosa, in search of any clue that may lead us to him or to Takamachi Nanoha
I felt so naked without Karil at my side 'Will she be allright?' Will she lost her arm?' Those questions were striking my head while our vehicle was moving, as always, Alphonse, Helga and Jasper were with me, some Vatican Knights regulators too and by lucky, only Sky, Raphael had stayed in the Quartels
"I Promise that I will do all that is at my hands to save Karil's arm" These were the last words Pink, my new friend, give me before I gone to that mission, that day in London was the second day since I leave the quartels, that mere day was when Pink shall decide if she amputate Karil's arm or not
"So, what we know about our friend Edmund?" Helga broke the ice
"He is one of Nanoha's assistants. What more do you wish to know?" Jasper answered
"Oh, c'mon, I mean, he just can'tdecided to help a phsycotic assasin just because fun. Can he?" Helga added again
"Edmund's wife was Nanoha's victim 6" Sky said without loosing composture
"WHAT?!!!" Alphonse was near to jump out of the vehicle by the impresion "B-But if Nanoha kills Edmund's wife, why he...?" Before Alphonse could finish his questionSky interrupted
"Edmund Testarrosa assisted Nanoha to kill Alondra Testarrosa, her wife, aparently Edmund falled in love with Nanoha and as a prove of it, he ofered her her own wife to be the White Devil's next Victim" That story was terrifing
"Pasional crime" Helga added "Love and sex can lead you to lots of things,don't you think dear Alphonse"
"Agh! Helga... please I..." Poor Alphonse, although I think that in the bottom he liked that kind of insinuations of Helga
"Don't worry Alphonse" Jasper said "It can be worse, if instead of love and sex we have a woman like Helga, the crime could be justificated"
"What the hell are you saying Jasper?! I'm the perfect woman for any men, exept you of course..." Well they actually were having fun, but the vehicle had stoped, signal ttht we had arrived. When we got down of the vehicle it was something like the 4:00 pm ahead of us a hill in wichs top there was an enormus and old mansion, the main gate was chained, the regulators broke it and we entered in the one that once was Edmund Testarrosa's Mansion, aparently it had been abandonated since AlondraTestarrosa was murdered
The hosuehad a chillt air, enpolvated movables with spiderwaves were the only thing at sight, Sky comanded
"Alphonser and Jasper go upstairs, Vivio and Helga check the yard, look for anything that can lead us to the White Devil
Me and Helga walk the lower passage that leaded to the kitchen,nothing there, then we move to the backstore, also, nothing usefull, we were walking another passage that leaded to the yard, I was very worried for Karil, Helga noticed, although her actitude, she was a very kind person, she decided to put my mind in other things
"Do you think Alphonse is handsome?" She asked me
"S-Sorry?" I was a bit impresed
"That if you think that Alphonse is handsome? At least cute?"
"Well, uhmm... I actually think that... mmm... yes, he is very handsome and cute"
"Yes? Well, I think that your opinion was the only thing it was needed to take this decition"
"Yes, I have decided that I want to get married with Alphonse"
"WHAT?!!!" Now that was interesting
"Yes. What's wrong? I don'y want to be an old woman when I get married, I think that he and me are both in the perfect age to become Husband and wife
"Well that... je, je... ow, poor Alphonse" Was my only coment
"Je, Why poor? Can't you image how lovely his sons will be having me as mother? But of course, firs we must enjoy our relation before having babyes, I don't wan to..." Helga's conversation ws really funny, but in that moment asound came out at the yard
"Shhh! Can't you hear that" We both pull out our weapons
"What? What is it?" The sounds was actually a laugh, a kid's laugh
"Sounds like a little girl" I coment, the door to the yard was in front of us, slowly I put my hand on it and pushed it. Helga and I jump out and we pointed to from the laugh was coming
In front of us, there was a Little girl dressing a Japanese outfit, she had red hair with two pointails hanged by two black riborns, beautifull blue eyes and a charming smile, she was holding a little purple ball
"Good day!" She told to us like ignoring the weapons pointing at her
"Who are you?" I asked without pulling down my weapon
"Hi, my name is Takamachi Nanoha and I'm 9 years old. Nice to meet you!"
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