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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Special chapter for the page of Vatican Knights
"What did that girl just said?!"
The question of Helga awoke me from my shock, when I looket at her, yes, that little girl was very similar to the Nanoha I face when the Centurion attacked me that day
"Sorry, what do you say is your name?" I asked to that girl
"Takamachi Nanoha" She answered without stop smiling
"Something is wrong here" Helga replyed me
"Hey! What are those things you are holding? Are they toys? I havea toy too" She said at the time she raised her purple ball "Do you want to play?"
Now, I knew that all tahat could just be a mere trick, similar at the one when we face tha Banshee, but there was something in that kid, sher wasn't bad, I didn't knew why but I just sensed it
"Hey honey" I told her at the time I pulled down my gun and sat on my knees in fron of her
"Vivio, what are you doing?!" Helga asked me without pullind down her gun
"Don't worry, it's O.K" I replyed her an then told to that little Nanoha
"My name is Vivio and my friend is Helga"
"You havea very cute name!" She was inocent, with just hear her voice I noticed it
"Thanks, we will happyli play with you butI need you to answer me something, tell me do you have a sister?"
"Yes, of course! My tween sister Takamachi Sakura"
"No, no I mean a big sisther, another who is named Nanoha too"
Her face turned to a sad one, she droped her ball and started to cry sat over her knees
"Hey, hey. What's wrong sweety?"
Please, don't tell me that you are lookinf for her
"Her? You mean that you really have a big sister?"
"NO! She is not my sister! She is bad and she always try to hurt me! She and her horrible friends!
" Something was wrong here
"Her friends? What do you..." In a moment she quicly standed up, her face turned to one covered with fear
"No,no! Is Ella, no, she sended her again to hurt me more!"
"Ella? Wha..." I couldn't finishe the question
"Do not let her hurt me! Please, do not let her hurt me!!!" She grabedd her ball and the she ran fast inside the house
"Hey, Kid coma back here!" I screamed
"What? What's wrong Helga?"
"Something is coming"
The air turned cold and in an instant all the yard was covered with fog, I quickly grabed my gun, then it started, a sound, a sound similar to steel, if like something of steel were been draged followed by a weight breath, like a woman been asfictiated
"Oh my God..." Was the only thing that Helga could say when a siluete appear in front of us, a big figure, like 2 meters, then we saw her clearely, a slave of the Dark, an enormus woman with her flesh rotted and falling apart, she had an enormus infernal helmet covering her face ans she was draged an enormus Iron Sword, it was
Helga started to shoot,. then I followed her, the bullets gone inside Ella's dry body, instead of blood, a bunch of sand wewre coming out her body, she raised her sword and swing it against usd, I get down and pulled dow Helga too, if not, I'm sure that she had been decapitated
Ella swinged her sword again and again with no problem, hell, I'm sure that that Iron sword weight more than a Cow but the demon was swinging it if like it was a mere feather, our bullets didn't afect her, in a moment I grabbed Helga by her dress and we both ran in an unknow direction, Ella started to chasing us
Runing blind, inside the fog, without knowing what was in front of us, we found a big strange wine vault, without thinking it twice,we gone inside and put the bolt, inside it we found that it was empty, the only thing there was a strange pool of water
"What we do now?" Helga asked
"I... I don't know, that Slave was very powerfull, we must inform Sky and the others of..." Before I could end, Helga grabed me and launched me behind her while she pointed her gun to the water
A hand came out of the water, followed by a female body, her face was covered by her wet hair, she was alredy out of the water when I noticed that a rock was chained at her right leg, and in that leg was marked the number "15"
"My God" I said " Is one of Nanoha's Victims, it's a lost soul!" The lost souls were really ghosts, if the murders of Nanoha were so horrible as we had listen, then it was no surprise that some of her victims were still trapped in this world, unable to rest
The ghost started to creep in our direction, then she grabbed Helgas leg
"Run... run before the white devil kill you too... she is the devil... she is the evil encarned..." After this crepy words the lost soul disapeared, in that instant, Ella's sword penetrate the door, it past almost cuting our necks, Helga and I moth hole against the wall, the demon made a hole in the door with her sword, then an arm, her arm passed through it and started to try to remove the bolt
"My God! My God!" Helga screamed "She will get in!!!"
Ella's strenght was unhuman, if like it was a pice of wood, the Iron bolt started to broke, I shooted against her arm, once and twice after this and like giving up, the hand get out and it disapeared
Seconds later the fog disapeared too, without thinking it twice, Helga and I got out and ran to the house, he entered by the passage that we use to go to the yard, cross the kitchen and more poassages until we reach tha main hall
"Contact! Contact!" We heared it was Alphonses voice followed by shoots that came from the uper level, we ran upstairs and we found Alphonse and Jasper with their guns in hands
"What happened?" I asked
"A slave of the Dark" Jasper answered, moments latter Sky with the other regulators appear and asked also what had happened
"A slave of the Dark!" Helga told him "A big horrible woman with a big Iron sword and a helmet"
"What?" Jasper said
"Didn't you saw it too?" I asked
"Vivio, that is not the demon Jasper and I saw" Alphonse just replyed
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