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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
(A chapter a bit short but very emotive)
All the way from London to the Vatican Knights quartels was like a phsycological torture to me, Karil, my dear friend Karil, Shall she be allright? Did Pink was forced to amputate her arm? I knew that operations were dangerous, I knew that maybe Karil shall be alredy dead by a complication, my God, I though I was going to turn crazy
Sky was allright, he only got unconsius by the hit of Hamer of Hate, oh, by the way, Hamer of Hate wasn't also the Slave Jasper and Alphonse saw, so, we had in that moment 3 Greater demons free, plus Nanoha and Edmund and no clue of were shall they be, Dr. Van Hellsing wasn't going to be happy
All the journey, Helga explain in more than 20 ways how pervertide Alphonse was, that was a bit strange, just a few hours ago Helga had told me that she wanted to get married with Alphonse, but I supose that that was her way to tell him how much she loves him, yes, I was sure that Helga was totally falled in love with Alphonse but she was too shy to told him, Alphonse didn't opened the mouth in all the travel
We were reaching the quartels and I could feel how my hurt almost jumped out of my chest, when the vehicle just stopped I jumped out of it, I knew that we shall first report to Dr. Van Hellsing what have we found, but I didn't care a sh$@&! I just wanted to go with Karil, I just wanted to knew if she was allright, I just wanted to knew.
I ran like never in my life, ran in direction to Pink's infirmary with all my strenght, I opened the door almost with a hit... Karil wasn't in her bed
I felt just if my heart had just crushed in pices, her bed was clean and without nothing, ready to use, if Karil was operated, she shall be in recover, even if not she shall be resting, no, she was... dead? There was no other explication, SHE WAS DEAD! Probably Pink was forced to amputate her arm, probably there was a complication, "Oh, no! Please no!" I screamed at the time my eyes were filled with tears, a fall over her empty bed and started to cry like a little baby
"Karil forgive me! Please forgive me! It's all my fault, I failed you!" I grabed the covers as hard as I could, I hitted the bed, I screamed and cryed with all my strenght, my friend, my best friend, my only family, I had lost her, she died, alone like a dog in that cold bed, I promised her that I shall never allow that something hapend to her and I failed her! I hated my self, hated myself and wishing to have the most horrible of the deads, but then , suddenly, like an angelical voice...
"Vivio?" I stoped, slowly standed up and turn, was she? Could be?
It was her, Karil! She was standed, in the infirmary's door, with her arm... right in it's place! She was dressing a long blue dress, her arm was bended and Pink was at her side helping her to remain standed
"K-Karil?" I remained inmovile, shocked, It was a dream? An ilution?
"It was like a miracle" Pink saied, "Her arm, I... I don't know, it just turned better in one night! I wasn't forced to do anything, she is sake and just need time to be fulll recovered" Karil was smiling at me
"I always keep my promises Vivio" She told me with the most beautifull voice I had ever heard, I couldn't resist any longer, I ran at her and falled at her knees, I huged her torso and cryed even harder, my friend was alive and sake, I repeated in my mind "Thank God, oh Thankyou!" My friend was O.k and noone, not even Nanoha and her minions shall be able to hurt her again!
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