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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
" A traitor?! B-But that's... who could... there must be a mistake here!" Karil was refusing to belive that
"Listen Vivio, we don't know this Alastor, how can we knowthat he is telling the truth" The words of Alphonse seemed to have much sense, he was right, we had meet all in the Vatican Knights, why shall we belive a man that confess that he was a servant of Nanoha, may be he was trying to divide us to defeat us easier, but then, the cruel reason came to my mind
"Now, he is right we have a traitor!"
"How can you say that?" Karil still didn't belive it
"Because is totally logical, listen, Nanoha knew our names, she and Edmund knew we were going to the Testarrosa' mansion, Jack knew we were going to trap him, how else could he be alredy waiting us with those undeads? Some one is telling Nanoha our moves!"
"But who?" Jasper asked, and then I realise it again
"Yes Raphael, tell me, who was the one who teached us to us the sniper rifle?"
"It was Raphael" Helga answered
"Jack Velorius was killed by a single sniper shoot, only an expert could had done that shoot, Alphonse tell me, when Karil and Me gone to chase Jack, did Raphael stayed with you?"
"I... I think not, in a certain moment he and Sky disapeared for a short time" Alphonse answered thinking about his words, when I hear that Sky had disapeared I realise it again
"Thta's why Sky and Raphael were fighting that night, the most probably is that Sky followed Raphael that night in Notre Dam, 'do not get in my busyness' something like that is what Raphael told to Sky in that Night, yes, I'm sure, Raphael is the Traitor"
"Vivio hold it!" Jasper comanded me "We can't prove what you are telling, if there is a traitor among us it can be anyone, Raphael, Sky, Sasuke, Pink... even Dr. Van Hellsing!" In some way, Jasper was right
"O.K we will not tell anyone about this . Right?" I grab the letter of Alastor Wilzon and broke it "We will go to the randevous point with Sky, for now our best try is to kill this Salazar and Beatriz, if Alastor wish to be our Spy, we can't waste this chance"
"But how did we goan kill them? Isn't supose that we can't tell anybody?" Helga added
"We will take care of that latter, for now, we must escape and go with Sky, with lucy, this villagers will think that we die in that burn"
All my friends followed me, I take the candle and go to the only door abalible to go on,we alk a long distance in something that seemed an old mine, after something like 2 hours we finally reach the exit, and a big Dark forest was the thing that was in front of us, I had forgotted, that tunel take us to a distant way, we were lost
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