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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
The Forest of sorrow
"Were are we?"
That were the first words that came out of my mouth when I saw that enormus forest surrounding us
"O.K no need to panic" I said
"How did we gonna get to the main plaza of Villa del Toro?" Katil asked, in that moment I didn't know exactly what to answer, but by luck, Japser came to my salvation
"Very easy Karil, we look for a track, all tracks must lead to that Village"
"Yes, Yes! We will exactly do that!" I comanded to move, the way was really rough and to inclinated, we were nearly falling by each step, by lucky that didn't hapened
Each step we made seemed to be leading us deeper and deeper into that forest, the trees were enormus, almost to far away from our sights, there was no signal about a track, just gray vegetation
During the way I noticed that Helga and Alphonse were both too quiet, avoiding their sights and hidding their faces from each other, I knew they both love each other, it was so dificult to tell it? It is really to dificult to just say "I love you and wish to stay with you for ever"? Helga and Alphonse maded a perfect couple, it's almost if like they had been created to each other, I was really angry, I wished to grab them both in that moment and forced both to tell what they feel for each other, and I shall do it if not for Karil
"Look! There is a track!"
I looked to the front and saw a small way of durch that drawed a route
"Exellent now, we most follow it in direction to the est and we will reach the village!"
We ran in direction to the track but suddenly a heared a strange sound, like a vehicle pulled by horses
"Get down! Get down!" I told the others, we got down and got hided among the shrubs, in the way we saw a big carruage, of those used to charge straw,it was pulled by two black horses, abord of it were several villagers, with the same aspect as those who attacked us,pales and with red colored eyes, and in the back of the vehicle... like 5 or 6 corpses of comrades, fallen Knights, apparently we weren't the only ones to be attacked by this half demon peoples
With signals of my hands, I comanded my friends to follow that vehicle without been seen, after something like 30 minutes, we reach a lake, a big one,at the other said of it I divice a big church, it was the Village, the mans on the vehicle got down of it and grabed the corpses, one by one they started to throw them to the lake, we charge our weapons, I counted like 5 villagers, they shall not be mach for us
"Fire!" I screamed, we got out of our hidding place and shooted against those bastards
They tryed to counter attack but we easely killed them, after that, we checked the zone and randevous at the villager's vehicle
"O.K we most cross the river, any idea?"
"Look, ther is a boat" Alphonse pointed
At one side of the river there was a little fisher's boat and two rows with the capacity for something like 6 peoples, we got aboard it and starting to row, the lake was big, pices of trees and wood were floating on it, a shoft mist were covering it and our only point of view was the church at the other side
"Wait! Something is wrong" Helga sayed
"What? What is it?" Karil asked
"The corpses, were are the corpses of the other knights the villagers throw to this lake?" When I saw that Helga was right I got worried, a corpse float in the wter, it don't get sink so quicly, Jasper alos realised it and told me
"Vivio, there is something else in this lake"
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