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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Souls traped in Fire
After we reach the other side of the lake and stoped huging and claiming Alphonse as our hero, we moved again in direction to the church that we had saw
After like 2 hours of walk, we reach the church, it was conected with an old Graveyard, now I know that probably you think that a Graveyard is the most dangerous place to bee in a zone fulled of Slaves of the Dark, but you are wrong, a graveyard is the best place to refugiate when the slaves are around, a graveyard is sacred land and the demons can't enter in it, so when we saw it, we got really happy
We ran to the church and entered in, it looked abandoned, it was totally covered with dust, only a big Iron cross seemed to be only thing that wasn't break
"I think that we my rest here for a minutes before keep going" I sayed and we all sitted in what remained of the chairs
From were I was sitted I saw that Helga was trying to tell something to Alphonse, this is what I was able to hear
"Umm.. Alphonse?" She asked
"Uh? What?" Alphonse replyed aboiding looking her at the eyes
"I... I wanted to... umm..."
"To talk with me?"
"Y-yes, I wanted to talk with you... umm... you see... I... I, um...I lo..." She was going to do it, Helga was going to tell Alphonse that she love him too,I was sure, but Jasper interrupted pulling ou his gun and saying
"Everyone take your weapons"
"Why?" I asked at the time I standed up, he only pointed to the Iron Cross that was in front of us, there was when I noticed that from the other side of it there was falling gouts of aparently blood, I grabed my gun and slowly walked in direction to it, I got terrified when I saw what was at the other side of it, a woman crusificed to it, died and with a number in her chest that sayed "45"
"Get out! Return to the graveyard!" Was all that I could scream, when a murder is comited in a church, the place lose his protection against the Slaves, our only hope was the graveyard
We ran at full speed to the exit but suddenly a wall of fire appeared and blocked it, preventing us from escape
"Wha..!" Karil sayed when we saw that enormus wall of fire who was blocking our only exit, then I rised my head and I saw an infernal figure covered with fire flying upon us, then it put itsel'f in front of us and I was able to saw that horrible Slave, a Flying torso, his legs had been totally ripped apart and his organs were hanging from his body, instead of a left arm he had an enormus blade who was added to his shoulder and instead of a head, he had a flaming pupking
"My God, that's the slave that Alphonse and I saw in Edmund's mansion!" Jasper sayed
The slave made a horrible chill and launched fire from his head against us, we evade it and backfired with our guns
The Demon made horrible cryes when the bullets got inside his body, I could saw his coagulated blood falling to the ground, I though we had him, but suddenly he got transformed into an espectre of fire and fly to an uper level of the church, there he recovered his horrible form and attacked us again
Most of the batle was like that, each time we though he was ours, the bastard transformed himself into Fire and flought to another part of the room to counter attack, I knew that if we keept that, we shall eventually ran out of amo, that was what the slave wanted
"Karil, cover me!" I comand to my friend
"What are you going to do?" She asked
"Something stupid, that's sure" I answered at the time I pulled out my Inquisitor's axe and charged against the slave, I swing my axe but the slave evade it, I swing it again and this time I riped off his good arm
He made a horrible sound, then the blade that was added to his left shoulder unfasten itself but it still was conecting to the slave by a long chain, the slave swing it against me,I jumped to evade, he swing it again and this time I got bended
We both got into a fearsome melee combat, and it looked to be endless, I attacked and he evade, he attacked and I evade, I was not sure how long I was going to resist, my friends couldn't suport me because if they shooed they may hited me, then I saw my answer, in front of me there was a very weak wall, and in the other side it was the graveyard, I knew what I shall do, I used my axe and body and launched myself against him, he didn't expected that, we broke the wall and falled in the graveyard
I was fine, when I rise my head I saw the slave screaming like hell, smoke was going out of his body, I jumped over him and holded him with my axe against his neck to prevent him from escape, the slave was making horrible sounds at the time he was transforming into a pile of ashes, the sacred land of the graveyard prevented him from using his "fire teletransportation" to esacpe, after some minutes he made her final chill and ended like a pile of dust in the graveyard, I falled upon my back recovering breath, I realised that I had killed a greater Demon all by myself! I feelt so Happy!
"Vivio!" I heared and saw my friends runing with me
"Were is the slave?" Alphonse asked
"Uf... uf... he is... gone" I replyed, my friends smiled and Karil huged me
"No time for rest" Helga sayed at the time she rested in the curchs wall, I let my head fall again in the grass but not much later we hear a horrible din, I raised my head and saw that from the other side of the church a hand was holding Helga by her neck, I recignise that hand... Ella
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