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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Salazar de la Huerta
When I opened the door, I found myself into an inmense dark room filled with music instruments, in the middle of the room, alumbred the sun who cames from a window in the roof, a little girl playing the piano, she had a beautifull red dress and a long golden hair, from that piano is from were the music was coming, suddenly she stoped, we stopped too
"What's this?" She sayed without even turning "Guests? Me and my father didn't espected for guests today..."
"So" I said "I must presumo that you are Beatriz de la Huerta. Right?"
"Yes, Carmen Beatriz de la Huerta Cruz, at your service..." She standed up and turned to us, she was beautifull, I calculated her like 9 years old, she had blue eyes and an angelical face, but this beauty was lost when I saw her stomach, with horror I discovered... that she was pregnad!
"What in the...?!" Was all that escape from Helga's mouth, Beatriz pass her hand over her big stomach, petting it I can't descrive the sensation that I was feeling in that moment, A 9 years old girl pregnad?
"So... you came all this way to kill me and my father. Right?"
"So you know?" Jasper said
"He... of course I know you Idiot, it was that Alastor. Right? Did I had become so dangerous for him? I always knew that he was not worthy of the trust of my mistress, I discovered that he had the intention to betray her, and now he wants to prevent me for telling my mistress by sending you... he is quite patethic" Well, that explained why Alastor wanted us to kill Beatriz and Salazar
"And were is Nanoha?" I asked
"She is not here, she must gather the keyes to start the new world, to lead us all to the heavens" O.k, in that moment I realised that a 9 years old girl would not say things like that, she was not human, she was a Slave, I was sure
"I'm a bit tired" She said "I will be in my room, but... my father will happily atend you... Father! We have visits..." She entered in a room not far from the piano and closed the door behind her, then from the shadow at the back of that music room, a strangue figure started to move,making strangue noises like animal roarrs it started to get close to us
"Who is there?!" Alphonse asked pointing at the shadow who was still aproaching with his gun
Finally it was visible, a horrible slave, like an enormus leech, with two enormus legs or arms,I was not sure and in his chest, a man, rotted and added to the creature, the man opened his mouth and from it came out an eye who was looking at us,it was Salazar de la Huerta, or at least what was left of him before turning into a Slave of the Dark
"Now kill him!" I screamed, we all opened fire against the creature, but like a thunder, Salazar jumped aĦevading all our bullets, he got inside of the shadows, we couldn't see him
"Styay together, stay together!" I ordered, we made a circle, pointing our guns at the shadows, we could hear his steps and grunts, then he jumped out of the shadow against us, I grabed karil and with her, jumped to evade him, Moving his razor sharp legs, Salazar was trying to cutted us, Jasper shooted against him, Salazar covered what was left from his human form with his rough skyn, it was ovius that that was his weak point, Salazar jumped again to the shadows
"Vivio" Karil told me "I think I havean idea"
"If you have it use it!" I better should not said that
"O.k" She saidand suddenlyshe jump to the shadows
"Karil, no wait!" I screamed and tryed to follow her but Jasper stopped me
"No! Leave me! Karil!!!" I was desesperated, we heared shoots in the shadows, roarrs from Salazar, I feared the worst
Suddenly, Salazar jumped again to the light aparently WITH KARIL IN HIS MOUTH, iI was terrified when I saw Karil's coat, holded by the theets of Salazar, the demon raised his monstrous face and then, Karil jumped from his back, grabed for one of the Slave's legs, she reached the human face of Salazar who was now expuested, Karil placed her gun in the "Eye" that was coming from the slave's mouth, she opened fire, An entire round of Silver bullets, Salazar amde his last roar and fell dead, with his "human" head totally ripped apart
We couldn't belive it, we clearely saw that Salazar had Karil in his mouth, but when Karil standed up I noticed that she has not her overcoat, and when we look at the slave's mouth, we saw a violin "wearing" Karil's coat
"You tricked him!" Helga said, Karil couldn't help but laugh, I only huged her
"You stupid" I just said
Karil gave us a shy laugh, this time she was the hero, she toke down by herself a greater demon, I felt really ashame, I must confess, but Salazae was down, the next was Beatriz
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