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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Beatriz de la Huerta
We inmediatly gone inside the room that Beatriz had takken just before tha attack of Salazar, inside of it we found a largue spiral stears that were going up, we keep our march, preparing ourself to confront Beatriz
At the top we encounter a big red door, I opened it and found myself inside an enormus room, filled with elegant dolls and mirrors, then at the end of the room an enormus window pointing at the hills in the distance... and Beatriz, standing at the side of the window looking at them
"Ah... I see you managued to get this far..." She said after turning, we noticed that her stomach were bigger, she said again
"You have been busy Vivio, I think is time for you... to rest"
"It's over Beatriz" I said "You'r father is dead, you will be next and Nanoha will follow you"
She just gave us a smile, then suddenly she move her hands to her stomach, like if she had suffered a little pain, turning again to us and with a face of happyness she just said
"What the hell is she talking about?" Helga asked
Beatriz moved her hands again to her stomach with more pain, then again and again, after this conbulsions and with a weak voice she said
"I... Its time..." She vomited blood, her nose, ears and moth were several bleeding, between her legs I noticed that she was also bleeding, something was not right
"C-come my son... it's time fo... for your... f-first meal..."
In that moment, Beatriz stomach exploted and a small tentacle came out of it, she falled, more tentacles came out of her chest, tearing apart her body, in question of seconds, an enormus octopus creature born out of the 9 years old body of Beatriz de la Huerta, she had gave birth to a Slave of the Dark!
The creature grow fast,in question of one minute, it had reached something like 5 or 6 meters of lenght, several tentacles were added to it, he opened his eyes, hell, he opened like 20 eyes! in his top it was his mouth, opening it, the slave made his first roar
"HO-LLY-CRAP...." Jasper said at the time we all contemplate the "son" of Beatriz, the creature launched his tentacled to us, they litterally made holes in the floor, this thing had more than 16 tentacles, plus in every part of his body there was at least one eye looking at us, attack him by surprise was imposible, the monster was swinging his tentacles in all directions, we were not able even of aiming to it
"In all the... WOA!... How did we... how did we gona kill this thing?!" Helga asked at the time she was evading the swings of the demon's tentacles
"In the same way we defeat the creature of the lake and all the others slaves!" I answered also evading the Slave's attacks
"I think that God will eventually get tired of making miracles for us!" Jasper answered under the same situation, before he said this, the Slave cathed Jasper by grabing him by one of his legs, the monster rised my friend and opened his mouth with the intention of eat him
"No, no! Bad boy! Bad boy!" Jasper were screaming this word at the time he tried to get holded from the tentacle, we couldn't hepl him, the creature don't even allowed us to aim
I jumped to evade a tentacle and found a bottle of wine, I got then an Idea, I grabed the bottle and keep runing, while evading I remove the coarch of the bottle, ripped a pice of my dress, weated it with the wine,obstructed the bottle with the pice of dress and turning it on with a match (Yes, I still don't know how I did it) I launched the improvisaded bomb to Jasper, he catched it and launched it inside the Slave's mouth
An explosion of fire came out of the creature, the slave made a tremendous chill and launched Jasper to the oposite side of the room, seesed with his attacks, we all go to check Jasper, he was allright, the slave got involved in flames inmediatly, and with him... the house, the hosue also started to get burned
"Holy... we must get out of here!" Alphonse screamed at the time he and the others ran to the exit of the room, the slave falled dead, but then I turned back
"Vivio! What are you doing?!" Karil screamed
I ran back with Beatriz, she was still alive, although her body was literally destroyed
"Y... you will... you will... pay for this, my... my mistress will... avangue me, because you killed... you killed the baby she gave to... to me..." She said
"And I will give you this!" I shooted to her forehead and killed her, I then ran back with my friends, we ran like the devil to the exit of the mansion alerting the others of the fire, thanks to God, no one of our comrades died and we all manague to escape from the house who was reduced to ashes
After that, well, we just tell to Sky anmd Raphael that we encounter Salazar, Beatriz and her "son", that we killed them and that Beatriz told us that Nanoha was no longer in Spain
Raphael got furius
"We came here for nothing?!" Was what he said, although we knew that we had succeded, Beatriz and Salazar were dead, now it was time to wait for Alastor's answer
What? Draws of Beatriz and his son?
I thinkI will post them tomorrow
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