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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Prepare to meet the more evil and powerfull Slave of the Dark of all
Nightmares became true
A chilly air seemed to be fulling the entire subchamber in were we were, Dark, like a big, black pit, freexing our blood, like moking at us, telling us that we were going to die, altough, this chilly air or any of our previus foes shall be compared to the... thing we face down there
In our way, we found an strangue mirror, it was big and covered with dust, at his side, there was a little beam of light who was coming from the uper level
"For what do you thinkis this?" Karil asked, we remained silent until Jasper talked
"I thinkIknow what is it, if I'm not get wrong the ejipcians used mirrors to reflect the light of the outside and alumbrate the chambers"
"But that technique was only used by the ejipcians, I think" I added
"Probably some trcik that Cleopatra told to Cesar" Jasper answered,we all laughed, but our laughs were ceased when we heared a strangue sound, it was like a roar, here was when I noticed an enormus fugure at just some meters of distance of us
"Karil, stay behind me! I told tomy friend at the time I grabed my gun, I moved the mirror to reflect the beam of light, in an instant, the subchamber was iluminated by a softh light, there was when we saw him
The slave move his head, he probably haven't seen the light in a long time, when I saw him, I felt if like my legs were going to break, this slave was the most horrible demon we had saw yet, Ella, Salazar, Los Ganados, Even the "Son" of Beatriz can't be compared with this one, only remembering him make me chill my blood, he was totally Chained to the columnes, his legs were inside some kind of steel box, his arms were being holded by chains conected to the roof, plus many other chains attached at his body, conecteds with the floorand somecolumns, about his aspect, well, It's hard to descrive something so horrible, his face was totally desfigurated, he had an enormus hole in his chest, his armor seemed like the one of a Knight from the cruzades, in each one of his arms, there seemed to be attached some kind of Razor Sharp weapon, and his smell, he smelled like coagulated blood, rotted from feets to head
"My God" Was all that I could add, and by my surprise, the slave answered to me, with the most creepy voice that I had ever listen
" HE IS NOT HERE TO SAVE YOU, VIVIO VALENTINE"
"Y-you talk?!" Helga asked
"HE, HE, MY VOICE IS ONLY MADED TO BRING FEAR AND DESPERATION TO YOUR HEARTS, FOOLISH MORTALS"
"Who are you?!" I asked
"I AM ABOMINATION, THE MOST POWERFULL SLAVE OF THE DARK THAT HAD EVER EXISTED, DEFEATED CENTURIES AGO AND BOUNDED TO WATCH OVER THE KEY OF LUST FOR ALL THE ETERNITY" When I heared this words, I feeled the most strangue sensation of fear and hapyness
"T-the key... We came for the key!" I screamed
"OH, YOU HAD? VERY WELL, COME HERE AND TAKE IT BY YOURSELF"
"We are not playing! Hand it over or..."Jasper was interrupted by Abomination
"OR WHAT?! YOU WILL KILL ME? HA, HA! TRY IT, IT WILL BE FUN TO SEE!"
"Enough! Give us the key right now!" I demanded the creature
"IT'S VERY SIMPLE VIVIO, THE KEY IS INSIDE THE PEDESTALIN WICH MY FEETS ARE CAPTIVE, IF YOU WISH TO TAKE IT, YOU WILL HAVE TO RELEASE ME" This wasn't good, I knew that probably he was lyeing to us, in a trick to get released from his prision, but something inside me told me that he was saying the true
"Yes, but first I will kill you" I added
"MUAHAHAH!!! THOSE KIND OF THINGS MUST BE DONE, NOT TALKED, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?"
Hell, I was scared, just like my friends, I was not sure of what to do
"YOU DON'T HAVE THE COURAGE RIGHT? SO, IF I TELL YOU THAT I WILL HAND OVER THE KEY TO THE WHITE DEVIL AND THAT I WILL ALLIE MYSELF WITH HER. WHAT YOU WILL DO?" Now I was even more scared than before, he was speaking seriusly
"YOU CAN'T DO IT.AND YOU KNOW WHY? IT'S BECAUSE YOU ARE WEAK, JUST AS YOU FATHER!" He was playing with me, we wanted me to do it, I knew he was trying to trick me, but I couldn't resist ant more, not after his last words
" I screamed and started to shoot, my friends joined me, Abomination was reciving the rain of bullets without beeing able to get cover or to dodge them, but he seemed to be enjoying it
"YES! YES! USE ALL YOUR WRATH! COME ON! GIVE ME MORE OF YOUR WRATH AND HATE!!! MORE! MORE!" We shooted, and shooted,over and over again, I used 5 rounds of ammo, we were were he wnted us
"AAAAAAARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!" He made this battle cry, the chains got broked, and the pedestal releasehis legs
"He is escaping!" Karil screamed, the demon was totally free when he jumped over our heads and hitted the mirror, once again we were sucked in darkness, nowwe were at his will, we stopped shooting and made a circle,Karil was sweating and shacking
"Vi... Vi... Vivio?" She asked, I had never saw her so scared, we wereaiming at the darkness that surrounded us, we had no idea of when didhewasgoing to attack us
The horrible figure of Abomination appeared in front of me, before I could reactionate, he made a slash with his right arm, I falled over my back, screaming and feeling a pain like no other, I grabbed my left hand to see the injury that he made me, I was shocked when I saw that he had cutted out 3 of my fingers, from the ground I saw that he launched away Jasper, Helga and Karil, then he impaled the sword added to his right arm in my left shoulder, the blade go through the bone, I screamed even harder, it feeled like if my entire arm were beeing burned but also freazzing, he aproach his horrible face to mine
"IS'N IT WONDERFULL?" He said to me "THE PAIN, THE SUFFERING, THE FEAR THAT IS COMING OUT OF YOU IS LIKE THE MOST DELICIUS LIQOUR"
"Vivio!!!" I heared that Karil screamed
"G-Go for the key!... GRAB IT!" I screamed
I saw that Karil quickly got up and ran to the pedestal in wich Abomination was trapped,the demon pull out his sword from my shoulder, and jumped trying to reach Karil, he was going to impale her as well, but then, Karil raised a strangue triangle out of the pedestal, it was the key of lust, Abomination stopped
"HMPF... YOU WON THIS TIME, BUT WE WILL MEET AGAIN" After these words Jasper, Helga, Karil and me were trapped in a enormus ball of fire, but it didn't burn us, when the flames seesed, we were again at one side of the statue of Ares, the only thing I do was to scream by the horrible pain that I was feeling, Jasper inmediatly ran at me along with Karil, I still couldn't belive that that Slave had cutted 3 fingers of my left hand, with a pice of his coat, Jasper made a torniquet to stop the bleeding from my hand and shoulder, it hurted horribly
"D-don't worry Vivio" Karil told me "We have the key, we succeded,and you will be allright" When finally Jasper ended and after taking some air, I noticed that Helga was looking in direction to the entrance of the colisseum (Who was not seen from our position) Were Alphonse were
"Are... are you Okay... Helga?" I meerly was able to ask, she turned at us and said
"We must go with Alphonse..."
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