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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Don't hate me for what I'm going to do >.<
Although I was injuried, I was runing the fastest that I could, Helga was at full speed, leading the way
"Helga, go slower! Vivio can't run that fast in her condition!" Karil screamed
"No! We must randevous quickly with Alphonse, something... something hapened to him, I can feel it!" The words of Helga didn't made much sence, How could she feel if something had happened to Alphonse?
We keept our way to the Colisseums entrance in wich Alphonse was, when we reach the place, it was if we were coming inside a slaughter, all the regulators had been killed, all of them, their organs and limbs were spreaded on the floor covered with blood, there was no sign of Alphonse in anywere
"Alphonse?!!! Alphonse?!!!" Helga was desesperated screaming, searching for his beloved one, Alphonse didn't respond, there was no sign of him
We pass several minutes searching for our friend, until at last, ew heared the scream of Helga
"ALPHONSE!!!!!!" We inmediatly ran at her, what we saw, wasone of the things that until today, makes me feel the most horrible pain
Helga was holding Alphonse, his two legs had been ripped, with one hand, Helga was tring to hold the organs that were coming out of Alphonse's stomach, also his body was full of cutts, he was several bleeding for his mouth and nose, but he was still alive
"Alphonse! It... it's okay... I'm... I'm here, yo-you will be allright" Helga was holding Alphonse's head
"H...H... Hel...ga...?" He asked with all the strenght he had left
I got close to him, tring to not cray I told him with sweet voice
"Don't worry... Pink will heal you, this is nothing. Right? You are strong Alphonse... you are strong..."
"D... D... Do you found... t... the key...?" He asked
"Yes! Yes we have it!" Helga quickly answered with tons of tears escaping from her eyes
"S... Stop her... do not... not let Nanoha g... get out with h... her... pla... plan..." With every word, a bunch of blood came out of Alphonse's mouth
"We will stop her together... all of ours, we are a team..." Jasper told, and for the first time inmy life, I saw that his voice had been broked
"Alphonse, please..." Karil added at the time she cryed like a little baby
"H... Hel... Helga?" Alphonse asked again at the time he moved his hand to Helga's cheek
"Yes... I'm here my love..." She added holding his hand
"I... I lo... love you... never... never forget that... Y... Yes..?"
"No... I will never forget it because you will be there loving me every day, for the rest of our live, just as we promised!"
"Ple...ugh!... Please... let me... kiss you... just..." Helga didn't answered, she just moved her lips to the ones of Alphonse, the kiss was filled with love, as I never had saw before
The hand of Alphonse falled, Helga slwoly apart her head, discovering the horrible truth, Alphonse, my dear friend Alphonse... was dead
I'm sure that the scream of Helga was heared in the entire country
"ALPHONSE!!! ALPHONSE!!!" She screamed even harder, huging the corpse of our friend, with the most sad cry that you can imagine, Karil falled over her knees, Jasper hited the wall, the only thing I could do was to pass my arms over Helga's back, dead, Alphonse was dead, he had gone, we will never going to see him again... he was dead
Helga passed like 10 minutes holding the corpse of his beloved one, after this, I saw that her face had changed to one of undescriptible hate, she slowly and carefully place the corpse of Alphonse on the ground, the she grabed his sword and quickly got up and ran following a path of blood that was going up in a stairs that were in front of us
"Helga!" We quickly followe her, but she wa really quickly, when we finally reached her, she was standed pointing her gun at the shadows
"You..." She said, from the shadows, walked out non other than Nanoha, the white devil, smiling at us
"You... YOU KILLED HIM!" Helga screamed
"I'm happy to see you once again" Nanoha answered,we pulled out our weaponsand aim them against her
"You killed him! YOU KILLED THE MAN I LOVE!! WHY?!!!! WHY?!!!"
"I didn't kill Alphonse, he hadn't a number. Right?"
"Then it was one of your dam slaves! HE IS GONE BY YOUR FAULT!!!"
"You should be happy for him Helga, He is now with God and the angels in a better place, away from any kind of pain or suffer!
"I DON'T WANT HIM THERE! I WANT HIM HERE WITH ME!!!" Helga broked and started to cry
"You want to cry Helga? It's O.k, come, let me hold you while you cry" Nanoha extended her arms to us
"SHUT UP YOU DEVIL!!! shut up... !" Nanoha just shake her head, she moved her eyes down and said
"You are a pointless case" She rised her head and point at the shadows , an enorumus fugure appeared behind her, when it got close, we saw an enormus slave of the Dark, like a berseker, wearing a Gladiator's armor and with rasor sharp swords instead of arms
"He is Vengance" Nanoha said "He is the one who killed Alphonse, now tell me... what you will do next?"
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