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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
When Helga just saw the Slave, she inmediatly charge with Alphonse's sword against the Undead Gladiator, she was a untamed beast of wrath, I didn't knew who was she in that moment
Wielding Alphonse's sword,she swinged against the slave who get covered with the blades he had instead of arms, I wasn't able to asist her with my axe, because my arm was harmed and I couldn't hang it
While Helga fought the Slave, we focused our atention on Nanoha, she was still there standing,looking at us
"Kill her!" I screamed
We all shooted against her, we saw how the bullets gone inside her body, how her blood was splited, I put a bullet in her forehead, but she didn't fall, she don't even made any sound of Pain, at our eyes, the injuries caused by our bulletrs got closed in her body
"My turn" She said at the time she rised her arm, a columne of fire came out of it, we meerly evade it
Helga keeped attacking furius and reackless the Slave Vengance, from were I was, I could hear that the respiration of her was getting heavier, if she continued that way, the Slave shall eventually counter attack with a lethal damage
"Helga! Helga!! Stop!" I was screaming to her
"No!... I will... I will never stop... util... UNTIL THEY PAY!!!" She keeped her attacks against the slave who was blocking them without any trouble
"You killed him! You killed the man I love! Dam you! DAM YOU!!!!" She keeped screaming with this voice filled of hate and fury
"Helag!!!" I screamed once more,I tried to reach her but Nanoha summoned a wall of fire who prevented me of following her
"It's her vengance, not yours" She told me
"SHUT UP!!!" I shoted against her, she recived the bullets but as the last time, they didn't afected her
Before I could reactionate, Nanoha was holding me in the air by my neck, I could feel how her hand was crushing my throat
"Vivio!" Karil screamed and ran at our direction, but Nanoha sumonedd another wall of fire who surrouned us
"You still don't understand Vivio?" Nanoha told me, she continued "Why you have to sufer? Why you have to fight against me? I only want to make this world better"
"Yes of course..." I said " F-Filling it with Slaves and parasites like the one you putted inside Beatriz?"
"You mean our baby?" Now I was shocked
"Your Baby? Don't you mean that... y-you had sex with her?!"I asked, Nanoha just giggled
"Yo... you violate a 9 years old girl and pregnad her with a Slave?! You are... ugh!... you are a demon!!!"
"I didn't violate her, her father give her to me, she was a bit scaried at the begining, but she liked it and asepted the baby because I showed her my love"
"Love?!!! Abuse of a little girl is show her that you love her?!!!" For the first time, I saw that the face of Nanoha turned to one serius, then she answered me
"The man who forced me to have sex with him for 10 years since I was a 9 years old girl said that that was his way to love me" I couldn't answer
"Keep the key for now" She added "Eventually, you will hand it over to me in person" After that, Nanoha and the fire she sumoned disapeared, I falled and screamed cause tha pain of my arm, the Slave Vengance was still there fighting against Helga
We enmediatly ran to assist Helga, she was the same way, attacking reackless, but then, the Slave counter attacked with one of his blades, If Jasper hadn't jumped to and launched Helga against the floor, Vengance shall slashed her in two, Karil and me shooted against the back of the Slave, who madestrange chills, he turned and attacked us with his blades, we evade the slashes
Helga pushed away Jasper and jumped agains the Slave who was giving her the back because he was attacking us
Helga implaed Alphonse's sword in the back of the undead, it made a horrible scream, Helga pulled the sword out and stabed the slave again, and again, and again, the creature was alredy dead when he falled, but Helga didn't stop, she keeped stabing the corpse of the murder of Alphonse, I can't descrive the expresion on her face, it was one that I had never saw before, it scared us
"Helga! It's alredy dead! Leave it!" Jasper jumped at her back and tried to hold her
"NO!!! LEAVE ME!!! LEAVE ME!!!" Helga was struggling, until she finallt broke in a lartge cry, Jasper huged her from her back, Helga keeped screaming and Crying, the most horrible pain that you can imagine, Helga had lost a part of her soul... Alphonse
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