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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
After we saw that Little Nanoha was pointing at theedifice of pediatri, we go down to the gardeen between the two edifices using the emergency stairs, the Gardeen didn't looked better that the hospital's edifices, all the green of the grass had turned into a bloddy red, the trees seemed to be twisted into horrible forms and the entire area was covered with a black mist who prevented the lights of the stars to illuminate the infernal area
We crossed it quickly and entered into the edifice of pediatry who looked just as the other edifice, with our guns in our hands, we walked slowly through the dark corridors, we knew the Centurion was there, we knew Abomination was there but the scariest thing was what we didn't knew was there,
The edifice of pediatri wasn't big, just 2 floors, we decided to start from the up, in the second room we found plenty of empty rooms, broken toys filled the floor, we finally reached what seemed to be the restrooms
The first thing we saw and tring to contain our horror, was a human corpse, like a 32 years old man, his corpse was totally chained to the walls, his eyes were hodded and a blade was coming out of his mouth
Slowly I got close to him and check his chest, there was marked the number "35"
"35... 36 must not be away from here" I said
"Vivio..." Karil pulled my dress with a sad voice, I turned my head and saw her
The corpse of a 7 years old girl, her hands were chained to the wall, her legs were cutted and all her organs were... out of her, I can not explain the sensation I feeled in that moment, I got close to her dry corpse, her face was covered by her long yellow hair, I carefully removed it with my hand, she had a beautifull face, I couldn't resist and some tears escaped from my eyes
"How could she do somethink like...?" I finally saw the number marked on her cheek, "36"
A rat apeared amoung us and started to bite the injury in the girl's leg, furius I standed up and kicked the animal away
"Vivio?" Karil asked me again, I sated again, cleaned my tears and answered her
"Let's check her... the key must be somewere in her clothes"
Before we could do anything, I felt that the ground was trembling, from a door in front of us came out non others but the 2 Walkbloods and the Slave Hammer of Hate that we saw in Edmund's Mansion,they inmediatly spotted us
"Holly S@$·%!!!" I quickly grabed Karil by her hand and we ran inside a room who was in front of us, the slaves inmediatly started to chase us but we quickly closed the doorand contained it with our bodies, Hammer of Hate and the 2 Walkbloods started to kick and hit the door making horrible roars and sounds
"They... they are gona break the door!!!" Karil said
"Hold on!!!" I told her
Hammer of Hate was smashing the iron door with his hammer, I was not sure of how long it was going to resist but then, we heared again the voice of the big Nanoha singing that strange song, the demons inmediatly stoped, we heared that Hammer of Hate made a roarr, like comanding something to the Walkbloods, then we heared that they were walking away, then in an instant, the stains of blood in the walls disapeared, the twisted colors and textures in the edifice get disolved returning to thei original old gray and the black mist that were surrounded us goner allowing the stars and the moon to alumbrate us once more, we inmediatly opened the door, the corpse of the victim 35 was still there, but the one of Victim 36 had gone, Hammer of Hate and the 2 Walkbloods had taked it with them
"DAM IT!!!" I screamed and kicked the wall, I feelt so frustrated, Karil placed carefully her hand in my shoulder
"Come on, we must return with the others" Inside me I was refusing myself to acept this, my wish was to chasethe demons and retrive that corpse, but I knew that that was impsoible, I slowly turned with Karil but in that moment I saw a strangue, little figurewho was behind her
I putted Karil behind me, the figure that I saw was the ghost of Victim 36, the little girl with golden hair, she was crawling at us because her legs hadbeen reaped, without saing nothing, she saw at us with a sad expresion
"Could it be so simple?" I asked to myself "36 haves the key"
The little ghost extended her arm and oipened her hand, she was giving to me the key of Greed, I slowly extended my arm and picked up the little triangle
"Thanks" I said, the little ghost just smiled and disapeared
"Come, now we really must return with the others" I said smiling to Karil
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