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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
The Mase of Doom
"Vivio Valentine, borned 1856, died... probably this night... You are alredy here Vivio, there is no turning back for you now, don't espect any kind of "concideration" from me, if you die here, (wich is more probable) It will be the same to me"
With this words, Dr. Van Hellsing gave me the welcome to the Mase of Domm, there was I, standed in the entrance to that ancient estructure of Rock, the Iron door get shuted behind me, I couldn't see Dr. Van Hellsing, but I could her him very well, I was only armed with my Axe and a little knife
"Well, normally for a young girl like you, I shall only use some undeads or lesser demons... but for you, I can make an eseption"
I was scared, Hell, I was shaking, I could feel the cold sweet coming down for my forehead. What does the Dr. Had planed for me in that place? I grabed my Axe and prepared myself to face this Mase
"Well... Shall we begin?" The Doctor said
A Jail opened in that room, from it came out an Unded, it has cloths of the cruzaders, he spoted me and inmediatly atacked me, I quickly swing my axe and I killed him with a single stroke
"Not less than I espected... now let's see what you can do against this..."
The other cages get opened, several undeads came out and filled the room
"Father... please give me strenght...." I said and charget against the creatures, the undeads were armed with swords and axes, I needed to move fast, I swinged my Axe, ahead and behind, decapitating as many undeads as I could, after some minutes I had killed them all, I checked my body, a cut in my left arm and another in my right leg, nothing grave... by the moment
"Oh, If I were you, I shouldn't put my Axe down yet" The Doctor added, the cages got opened again, and now Belceboos came out of them, the undead dogs surrounded me, they were like 10
They jumped over me, I swinged my axe and killed like 3, one of the dogs bited my shoulder, I screamed of pain and launched it away with a swing who killed him, I keeped fighting, these beasts were fast, I killed them all, but I had several bites in all my body
"Well, well, the little kid had her tricks. Uh? Let's see what you can do in the next level" The iron doors in fron of me opened, the next room of the mase was just ahead, I was scare, I wanted to cry, I didn't wanted to continue, but then I though in Karil, I knew that probably she was angry with me for what I did to her, but just thinking in my best friend, gave me the strenght I needed to keep going
I quickly entered in the next room, the Iron door get shuted behind me, this new room was bigger, the grates were now on the ground, in the entrance there was a Shootgun, I quickly grabed it, only 5 bullets, were, at least it was something
"You will find this room very interesting Vivio" The Doctor said "Here are a friend who dies to see you" One of the grates get opened and a Banshees came out of them, I remembered this creature very well, the first Slave I battle as a Knight
The Banshedd me attacked me launching some acid split from the hole in her face, I evade it, and aimed the shootgun against her, I ewas going to fire but I remembered that It only had 5 bullets so I save it
The Banshee screamed and charged against me, I waited until had her just in front of me, I swinged my Axe and the blade of it got impaled on the forehead of the creature, the Banshee falled dead
"Uh... that was quickly, but I think you will need more than that to beat this!" The Doctor said, the rest of the grates opened and from them came out 3
. This creatures were like ghosts, as the banshee, they could fly and their main attack were magical attacks who worked as projectiles deadlyest than bullets
"Kill..." The Red Priest said, the 3 no faces sumoned little balls of magic who were launched against me, I jumped and tried to evade them, but one of them hitted my arm, I felt a strangue sensation, as if my arm were being freezed but at the same time burned, I falled screaming, when I lokked at my left arm, I had a third grade burn on it, my skin was totally black and it was steaming
The No faces sumoned their macig balls again and the red priest casted two enormus balls of fire, I quickly standed up and started to run to evade those attacks
In my run, the Red Priest teleported just in front of me, he attacked me with his claws but I blocke them with my Axe, trhe No Faces were aproaching, the god news, was that I always readed my books of Slaves and dark creatures, I hitted the Red Priest in his chest, I pulled out the shootgun and shooted at his head, totally blsting it, when the Red Priest falled, the No faces inmediatly disapeared, the No Faces are always linked with a Red Priest who works as their medium, If the Red Priest Die, the No Faces can no longer exist
4 bullets left on my shootgun and now I had the left arm several burned, In front of me, another grate get opened,but by lucky, no Slave came out
"Ah, yes... The Vatican Knights use the door... for you, is the sewer" The Doctor said, the grate was actually an entrance to the sewers under the mase, I didn't wanted to go inside a sewer again, but I had no choice, I started to climb down
I finally reacxhed the sewer, It smelled like blood, yes like blood, the smell was penetrating my nose, by lucky the water level here wasn't so hige, so I was able to move freely, then In front of me I spoted them, the two creatures were hanging head down from the roof,
The two creatures opened their yellow eyes and disaperaed in a black mist, I grabed my shootgun at the same time the two blood sucker slaves apeared behind me, I shooted my shootgun but they quickly jumped and evade the bullet , one of them jumped over me and showiung his razor sharp teets, I quickly jumpoed back and Aimed at his head, I shooted and blow it killing him,but before his corpse falled, one of his claws passed over my right eye
I screamed and falled over my knees, I have a injury over my eye, just up from it, the blood who was coming out of my forehead prevented me of use my right eye, I wasw lucky, if that Vampire had moved his claw a bit more down, he shall ripped my eye, but then I realised it, there was still one vampire left
With only one eye, I tried to aim him, but the Vampire jumped in front of me and with a hit, he broke the shootgun in two, I quickly grabed my Axe but he jumped over me and launched my weapon away, he then opened his mouth ready to bite me, but I grabed my knife and putted in front of me, the head of the Vampire get impaled on it, I kicked his corpse away, slowly and weak, I standed up and grabed my axe, I spotted the exit of the sewer, I started to climb out of that place
I was now on an enormus darck room, I couldn't saw anything, but then in an instant, several lights turned on, trhe light was so stonght that it blinded me, I falled over my knees and covered the only eye I was able to use, then I heared that someone was aproaching, I turned and saw Doctor Van Hellsing standing just at my side
"Hurts like hellfire, does it? I know why you are doing this Vivio... Revenge, Right? Nanoha killed 2 of your friends, You knew of Helga and Alphonse since you were kids, they werepart of your family and Nanoha toke them away from you"
The words of the doctor were sertanly true, I had the wish tokill Nanoha and avange my friends, but that wasn't my only motivation, the doctor continued
"You want to kill her Vivio? To make her pay? To take her down? I can help you... I'lll give you the weapons, I'll give you the soldiers, I'll give you the bullets... Hell I'll give you everything you need... Just never you forget, Doctor Victor Van Hellsing is in charge... now... let's make sure you know who is boss"
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