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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Only the strong shall survive
"Welcome to your grave, Vivio Valentine!"
When I realised it, Dr. Van Hellsing had disapeared again and now that room was illuminated, I found myself in a big chamber with big walls who worked as barricades, with my left arm burned, my right eye uncapable to be used and my body fulled of injuries, I raised my Axe preparing my self to face the next horror hiden in the Mace of Doom
"Ha, ha... I don't think that you will make it, prepare to face the evil and horror incarned!" The Doctor comanded at the time the cages on the floor got opened and 3 Spines came out of them
The Spines were undead creatures that had the ability to launch stings from their rooted body
The spines spoted me and launched their stings against me, I quickly ran and jumped behind one of the barricades, before I could get hide, a sting got stabed in my right leg
It hurted Horrible, screaming I grabed it and pulled out the 15 cm sting out of my leg, A spine jumped over me, but I quickly Impaled the sting in his forehead and killed it, another one also jumped, I couldn't do anything this time, the undead grabed my hand and perforate my left armn with several stings
That creature could kill me in that moment if he wanted, but as I tell you before my friend, the Slaves of the Dark aren't that simple... this spine was having fun with me
The spin called hs sting again and my hand was released, he then grabed my leg but before he could continue, I grabed my Axe and decapitated that bastard, the third one appeared and charged against me, I meerly was able to stand, I rised my Axe and swinged it killing the slave
I feelt something cold in my chest, I was having troubles to breath and in an instant, I feelt so cold, I look below and saw it, a sting, Impaled in my chest, the thing had gone through me, the other extreme of it was coming out from my back, I vomited blood and falled over my knees "...I'm going to die this way?..." Was my though, that injury was deadly, I calculated that I was going to bleed to dead in something like 7 minutes
"What's wrong? Tired? Well that's really a shame, because the best is just coming Vivio!" The Doctor said, the ground exploted in front of me, and from it, came out one of the most despreciables Slaves of All, a Gluttony, this insane creature was an obese monster with pig's head and he was wearing two kitchen axes, this slave has a very corrosive split that he used as a rangued attack
The monster spotted me and splited his acid, with the strenght that I had left, I evade it, the corrosive sustancie meelted the wall that it touched, the Gluttony started to chase me, with every step he made I could feel how the ground was trembling... I ran... ran the fastest that I could but in a moment, I couldn't resist anymore
I droped my Axe and falled to the ground, I felt so tired, I just wanted to sleep, I was ding, my arms and legs didn't respond anymore, the floor was getting stained with my blood, I just wanted to close my eyes and sleep, even the pain had gone, I just felt how every parth of my body was getting asleep
"Sorry... Karil..." Were my words when my eyes were about to close, but then I heared her voice
"Vivio! Vivio Stand up!" It was Karil, I opened my eyes, I couldn't sa her but I hered her very well
"Stand up! You can't die! You can't leave me alone! You are my friend! We made a promise, remember?! Always stay together! That's what you said! You can't fail with your promise!"
"Karil..." My eyes got full with tears
"You are more than my friend... You are my SISTER!!! And I love my Sister!!! Stand up!!!"
I felt that my herta was getting warm,my strenght returned, cring I slowly standed up, and toke my Axe
"I... will keep... my... promise...."
The wall exploted and the gluttony appeared again, roaring and swinging his axes, he splited again against me, I got cruch and avoid the attack, then I started to Ran, first slow, the faster, and faster, and faster!
The Gluttony Splitted again, I avoid the acid again, then again, and again, Karil needed me, I was not going to leave her alone! I keeped runing, I was alredy just in front of the Gluttony when I jumped,the slave swinged his axes, the pass over my legd and made more injuries on them, But I didn't feel pain any more
I swinged my Axe with all my strengh, with all my love for Karil, I touched the floor at the same time the Head of the gluttony had did it, the ground trembled when his corpse falled, I had won
"Welcome to the Vatican Paladins, Vivio Valentine!" The doctor said, I droped my Axe and falled, I don't remember more after that
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